第一篇:日記不會(huì)寫?請看這里,超完美總結(jié)!(附)
日記--超完美總結(jié)?。ǜ椒段模?/p>
其實(shí)日記一般分成生活日記、觀察日記和隨感日記三種。
其實(shí)說白了,日記可以是敘事作文、寫景狀物作文、說明文、議論文,有時(shí)候也可以是游記作文、讀后感、觀后感作文,1.生活日記怎么寫
生活日記,就是把自己每天的生活、學(xué)習(xí)、工作情況有選擇地記錄下來。要寫好生活日記必須注意以下幾個(gè)問題:
?(1)內(nèi)容要真實(shí)。生活日記是自己經(jīng)歷的實(shí)在記錄,而且要給自己看的,內(nèi)容真實(shí)才有查考的價(jià)值。生活是七彩的,它多姿多采地呈現(xiàn)在我們每個(gè)人的面前。學(xué)校、家庭、社會(huì),都會(huì)有時(shí)代的浪花飛濺,只要我們能自覺地去觀察生活,觀察周圍的人和事,你就會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)一個(gè)“寶藏”,就會(huì)有源源而來、取之不盡的真實(shí)材料。
?(2)事情要有意義。有的同學(xué)說,日記就是把自己一天中親身經(jīng)歷的,或所見所聞所感的東西記下來,記得越多越詳越好。如有個(gè)同學(xué)寫正月初一的日記,把這一天當(dāng)中所有的事都記下來:早晨起床吃餃子,而后給陳老師拜年,到學(xué)校游園活動(dòng),中午到外婆家吃飯,下午和表弟一起上街,晚上回家看電視,臨睡前寫日記??簡直是眉毛胡子一把抓,成了典型的流水帳。日記的篇幅畢竟是有限的,同學(xué)們不可能把一天中的大事小事芝麻事件件都寫進(jìn)去。一般要選擇印象深刻的,有意義的一兩件事記下來,其他的不寫或略寫。
?(3)語言要簡明、通順。寫生活日記,內(nèi)容可長可短,但語言必須通順明白。
(4)可以給日記加個(gè)題目。日記,一般不要寫題目。有的同學(xué)為了提高概括能力,給自己的每篇日記都加了個(gè)題目。怎樣的題目才是好題目呢?一是題目要準(zhǔn)確,能準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)日記的思想內(nèi)容,不要太大,也不要太小,二是題目要新穎,三是題目要簡潔。題目不能太長,幾個(gè)字就能提挈全文。
2、觀察日記怎么寫
就是把日常生活中的某一側(cè)面,通過有目的的,細(xì)致的觀察,把它記下來??梢詫懥闼榈钠瑪?,不必講究文章結(jié)構(gòu);也可以寫得比較完整,類似一篇記敘文。經(jīng)常寫觀察日記,可以提高觀察能力,養(yǎng)成觀察習(xí)慣,還可以積累寫作素材,提高語言表達(dá)能力,這種日記最適宜我們小學(xué)生記。要寫好觀察日記,必須注意以下幾點(diǎn): ? ?(1)觀察目的要明確,觀察。有多種多樣的目的,或?yàn)榱朔e累寫作素材;或?yàn)榱诉M(jìn)行科學(xué)實(shí)驗(yàn);或?yàn)榱伺宄撤N“奧秘”??只有目的明確,觀察才有方向,才有重點(diǎn)。就是觀察同一對象,由于目的的不同,方法和角度就不同,結(jié)果也就不一樣。
?(2)觀察要全面細(xì)致,全面。就是要對事情發(fā)展的全過程,事物構(gòu)成的各部分,以及事物之間的相互聯(lián)系,觀察清楚;細(xì)致,就是要求觀察深入、徹底,抓俗語事物的特點(diǎn),規(guī)律和本質(zhì)。
?(3)觀察要持之以恒。觀察事物難于一次完成,需要反復(fù)進(jìn)行。這就要同學(xué)們有恒心。
?(4)觀察日記的語言要準(zhǔn)確。觀察日記有很強(qiáng)的科學(xué)性。因此要求使用語言要準(zhǔn)確,不能用“大概、差不多”這類似是而非的詞語。
3、隨感日記怎么寫
這種日記主要是就一篇文章、一本書、一部電影或生活中的某一件事情,抒發(fā)自己的感想。日記中以議論為主,敘述是為了議論,有時(shí)整篇日記都是寫自己的感受。要寫好隨感日記,要注意以下幾點(diǎn):
?(1)重點(diǎn)要寫“感”。隨感,就是在讀了一本書或一篇文章,看了一部電影,經(jīng)歷了某一件事后,自己的感想。因此重點(diǎn)應(yīng)該放在“感”字上。至于書本內(nèi)容,電影情節(jié),事情經(jīng)過,都不能人作為重點(diǎn)來敘述。
?(2)寫“感”要聯(lián)系自己的思想實(shí)際。寫隨感日記不能脫離自己的實(shí)際向空發(fā)議論,只有聯(lián)系自己的實(shí)際,才能寫出真情實(shí)感。
?(3)寫“感”要實(shí)事求是。有的同學(xué)寫“感”,喜歡用表決心或空喊口號(hào)的形式來代替“感”,而且還脫離實(shí)際,任意拔高要求。人家看了很別扭,顯得不真實(shí)。其實(shí)“感”不在高,而在“真”。有什么想法,就寫什么感受,即使是一些暫時(shí)想不通的問題,也可以實(shí)事求是地寫出來。
下面我們說說日記的一般寫法,這也是一個(gè)寫好日記的通用法則 【
一、觀察日記】
說明:把看到的人物、事物、景物、記下來,從細(xì)節(jié)出發(fā),截取一個(gè)側(cè)面,反映一個(gè)中心。范文:
2017年4月3日 星期一 晴
早晨一起來,路過那棵奇怪的樹下,“咦?咋這么香?是什么花香啊?”同學(xué)們都很奇怪,不知道這個(gè)味道是從哪來。
下早自習(xí)后,天已大亮,再次經(jīng)過時(shí),那種清清的淡淡的香味撲鼻而來,“一天都會(huì)清爽了,呵呵。”果真,這一天總是能聞到那股淡淡的香味。爽啊!
2017年4月5日 星期三 晴
香味依舊,但又好似增濃了幾分。站在教室門口,遠(yuǎn)望那棵樹,樹頂上開滿了白色的花兒,一朵一朵的,都有一巴掌那么大了,遠(yuǎn)看真的好可愛,微風(fēng)一吹,花兒像芭蕾舞演員一樣,動(dòng)作輕盈卻美麗。香味像舞劇里的悠悠的音樂,飄向每一個(gè)人。
就是這么精神倍爽!
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二、剪貼日記】
說明:把自己喜愛的郵票、圖畫、照片貼在日記本上,并按圖意寫一句或一段完整的話加以說明。
范文:
星期天下午,我和媽媽一起在客廳做了一幅剪貼畫。
剪貼畫中的太陽是用紅色和黃色的彩紙做的,還有一棵蘋果樹,樹上長滿了紅彤彤的蘋果,有兩個(gè)小朋友一起坐汽車去動(dòng)物園游玩,動(dòng)物園里有兩只小雞正在搶米吃,兩只可愛的小企鵝正在快樂地做游戲,還有一只小綿羊被關(guān)在了柵欄中,這只小綿羊太孤單了,它很想逃出去找朋友,可是怎么逃也逃不出去。
這就是我們做的剪貼畫,漂亮吧!
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三、信息日記】
說明:把看到的、聽到的、有價(jià)值的最新信息記下來。
范文:
2017年7月15日
星期六
晴
7月15日,我參加了叢臺(tái)公園游泳池舉辦的游泳提高培訓(xùn)班。游泳池在我家正南方,距離我家大約有1000米的,我爸爸騎車帶我從家到游泳池大約需要3分鐘,我們的行駛速度大約是330米/分鐘。
培訓(xùn)班一共培訓(xùn)16次,購買學(xué)員票需花費(fèi)160元,另加報(bào)名費(fèi)5元,這樣,平均每次培訓(xùn)需花費(fèi)大約10元。
檢票后,我興沖沖地跑進(jìn)游泳池,哇!主游泳池好大呀,它的長度是50米,寬度是25米,我口算了一下,它的面積是1250平方米。
教練開始教我們游泳動(dòng)作要領(lǐng)了,隨后,我們就下水練習(xí)了。從8:30一直訓(xùn)練到10:00,大約要用1個(gè)半小時(shí),一共培訓(xùn)16次,這樣整個(gè)培訓(xùn)下來,我總共接受培訓(xùn)24個(gè)小時(shí)。
教練還要求我橫游10個(gè)來回,大約有(25×2×10=500m)500米的水程,16次培訓(xùn)下來,我總共游了大約8000米。
經(jīng)過教練的指導(dǎo)和我刻苦的鍛煉,出國留學(xué)網(wǎng)的游泳水平比去年有了很大的提高,我決心明年接著練下去。
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四、氣象日記】
說明:把每天的天氣、溫度、風(fēng)力、風(fēng)向和出現(xiàn)的自然新氣象記下來。
范文:
2017年7 月16日 陰雨
滿天的烏云,灰沉沉地壓下來,樹上的葉子一動(dòng)不動(dòng),蟬一聲也不叫。
忽然,電閃雷鳴,下起了毛毛細(xì)雨。千萬條細(xì)絲,蕩漾在半空中,小雨點(diǎn)兒像飛行員一樣,勇敢地從云朵上跳下來,給綠油油的田野洗了個(gè)涼水澡,麥苗喝足了水,不住地點(diǎn)頭。薔薇花經(jīng)過雨水的沖刷,顯得更加?jì)赡哿?。馬路上濕漉漉的,旁邊骯臟的水溝成了雨點(diǎn)兒們的舞臺(tái),他們唱啊跳啊,跳出了一個(gè)個(gè)晶瑩透亮的泡泡,人們都加快腳步匆匆忙忙地走過。忽然一陣狂風(fēng)吹來,吹得風(fēng)車像停不住似的呼呼地轉(zhuǎn)著。魚缸的玻璃也變模糊了,小魚像見了深水炸彈一樣,拼命地逃竄。
漸漸地,雨變小了,池塘里水滿了,小鳥也探出頭來了。
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五、臺(tái)歷日記】
說明:把周圍實(shí)實(shí)在在發(fā)生的重要事情如實(shí)簡要地記在臺(tái)歷上,少則一句話,多則一段話。
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六、摘錄日記】
說明:把看到或讀名家語錄、格言、座右銘或?qū)懭藸钗锏膬?yōu)美詞句摘錄下來。
范文:
2017年8月9日 星期三
晴 讀《西游記》
1.詩曰:佛即心兮心即佛,心佛從來皆要物。若知無物又無心,便是真如法身佛。法身佛,沒模樣,一顆圓光涵萬象。無體之體即真體,無相之相即實(shí)相。非色非空非不空,不來不向不回向。無異無同無有無,難舍難取難聽望。內(nèi)外靈光到處同,一佛國在一沙中。一粒沙含大千界,一個(gè)身心萬法同。知之須會(huì)無心訣,不染不滯為凈業(yè)。善惡千端無所為,便是南無釋迦葉。
2.遂手托凈瓶,白鸚哥前邊巧囀,孫大圣隨后相從。有詩為證,詩曰:玉毫金象世難論,正是慈悲救苦尊。過去劫逢無垢佛,至今成得有為身。幾生欲海澄清浪,一片心田絕點(diǎn)塵。甘露久經(jīng)真妙法,管教寶樹永長春。
3.他兩個(gè)在洞前,這場好殺!你看那:天王刀砍,妖怪槍迎。刀砍霜光噴烈火,槍迎銳氣迸愁云。一個(gè)是金皘山生成的惡怪,一個(gè)是靈霄殿差下的天神。那一個(gè)因欺禪性施威武,這一個(gè)為救師災(zāi)展大倫。天王使法飛沙石,魔怪爭強(qiáng)播土塵。播土能教天地暗,飛沙善著海江渾。兩家努力爭功績,皆為唐僧拜世尊。
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七、學(xué)習(xí)日記】
說明:把課上學(xué)到的、課外書刊讀、印象較深的心得體會(huì)、聯(lián)想記下來。
范文:
2017年10月26日
星期四
晴
原來一只籃球還可以演繹出這么多技巧與說法,不光光是把籃球丟進(jìn)筐里,而且需要我們掌握一系列的規(guī)則姿勢動(dòng)作。就光運(yùn)球突破一項(xiàng)技術(shù)就有很多說法,還有投籃也非常需要掌握正確的身體姿勢,才能保證投籃的一個(gè)命中率。除此之外,籃球老師還向我們演示了一些籃球比賽的技戰(zhàn)術(shù)配合等知識(shí),同學(xué)們都聽得認(rèn)認(rèn)真真,飽受熏陶。
然而,理想與現(xiàn)實(shí)總是有很大差距的?;@球老師也不忘給我們清醒頭腦的“當(dāng)頭一棒”,告誡我們要學(xué)好籃球,必須腳踏實(shí)地,一步一個(gè)腳印得打好基礎(chǔ)?;@球課的理論部分講解以后,剩下的時(shí)間就給我們來練習(xí)運(yùn)球了。一些特別有天賦的同學(xué)也被老師選去進(jìn)行“三步上籃”的練習(xí)??粗@樣一堂豐富多彩、樂趣滋潤的籃球課在眼前展現(xiàn),我的心里也是喜盈盈得醉了。
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八、活動(dòng)日記】
說明:記下參觀訪問活動(dòng)和少先隊(duì)組織的各項(xiàng)活動(dòng),參加一次記一次,抓住要點(diǎn)寫。
范文:
2017 年9月29日,星期五,天氣:陰
今天,我光榮地加入了少年先鋒隊(duì)
第二節(jié)課,我們站著整齊的隊(duì)伍來到操場上,準(zhǔn)備舉行“入隊(duì)”儀式。
當(dāng)紅領(lǐng)巾帶在我的胸前時(shí),我十分激動(dòng),它是用無數(shù)烈士的鮮血染紅的。我想:“從今天開始我就是一名少先隊(duì)員了,我要好好學(xué)習(xí),讓紅領(lǐng)巾更紅”?!?/p>
九、實(shí)驗(yàn)日記】
說明:如養(yǎng)花、種向日葵或搞科技小制作,把過程、結(jié)果記下來。范文:
2017年11月12日 星期天
晴
今天,我想做一個(gè)小小的實(shí)驗(yàn),這個(gè)實(shí)驗(yàn)可神奇了,我一直都想做這個(gè)實(shí)驗(yàn)。這個(gè)實(shí)驗(yàn)的第一步是先拿一個(gè)放大鏡和一張白紙,然后用鉛筆涂上一塊黑色接著在猛烈太陽的照射下,就可以做這個(gè)實(shí)驗(yàn)了。
我把放大鏡放在太陽底下,照在白紙的黑塊上會(huì)出現(xiàn)一顆小小的亮點(diǎn),我仔細(xì)的觀察,慢慢的,我發(fā)現(xiàn)白紙上的那個(gè)亮點(diǎn)開始冒煙了,我小心的移動(dòng)那個(gè)亮點(diǎn),結(jié)果,白紙被燃燒出了一個(gè)洞,太神奇了。
朋友們,你們知道里面有什么奧秘嗎?仔細(xì)想想吧。
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十、思考日記】
說明:或叫心靈日記、自我教育日記、“道德長跑”日記)把自己對現(xiàn)實(shí)生活中的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)和心理活動(dòng)或道德品質(zhì)成長變化過程摘要記下來。最后一種形式要求較高,宜在高年級中有針對性地指導(dǎo)試用。
【注意:另外,一般的日記只要標(biāo)注好日期、星期幾、天氣情況或者自己的心情狀況就可以了。】
范文:
2017年11 月23日
星期四
陰
今天九點(diǎn)的時(shí)候,我在看書,爸爸在打掃衛(wèi)生,我看的書是《虹貓藍(lán)兔七俠傳》,過了一會(huì)兒,我看完書就幫爸爸打掃衛(wèi)生去了,擦了擦沙發(fā)和迎門柜,雖然我很累,但是今天玩的很開心
2017年11月24日
星期五
陰
今天晚上,媽媽讓我澆花,我用兩個(gè)可比克瓶子澆的花,媽媽說:“大花澆兩瓶,小花澆一瓶,應(yīng)該慢慢澆,因?yàn)榫拖笕撕人粯樱鹊募绷藢ι眢w不好”。
2017年11月25日
星期六
多云
今天下午,我和小伙伴們騎自行車,我們玩的很開心,小杰讓我跟著他后面,還讓小亮跟著我后面,我們一起追趕嬌嬌,我玩的很愉快。
第二篇:超七成的應(yīng)屆生不會(huì)寫簡歷
超七成的應(yīng)屆生不會(huì)寫簡歷
對初入社會(huì)的應(yīng)屆畢業(yè)生,簡歷是求職必不可少的敲門磚?;蛟S對應(yīng)屆生來說,制作簡歷早已不是什么難題,但令他們納悶的是,為什么精心設(shè)計(jì)、花工夫修飾的求職簡歷,往往得不到用人單位的垂青,反而是石沉大海呢?
日前發(fā)布的“應(yīng)屆生求職調(diào)查簡歷篇”的數(shù)據(jù)調(diào)查顯示,超過七成的應(yīng)屆生求職不清楚簡歷中的“死穴”,不知道簡歷中什么是重點(diǎn),求職盲目。
迷茫于簡歷中什么最重要
簡歷最主要的目的是針對應(yīng)聘職位把求職者的專業(yè)技能和優(yōu)勢用最直接的方式展現(xiàn)給面試官。實(shí)習(xí)經(jīng)歷是簡歷中不可缺少的一部分,但并非代表全部。然而此次的調(diào)查中卻有70%的求職者認(rèn)為簡歷中實(shí)習(xí)經(jīng)歷最重要。HR篩選簡歷時(shí)采取的是綜合考評,從多個(gè)角度測評求職者的能力,從多方面挖掘求職者的潛力,而大部分應(yīng)屆生卻忽略了整體的重要性。調(diào)查數(shù)據(jù)顯示,認(rèn)為簡歷中基本信息、自我評價(jià)、求職意向以及教育背景最為重要者所占的比例分別達(dá)到54%、46%、50%和38%。
就業(yè)指導(dǎo)專家指出,簡歷中其實(shí)沒有重點(diǎn)版塊之分,每一項(xiàng)內(nèi)容都需要認(rèn)真填寫,如何把無形的事實(shí)客觀表達(dá)出來,讓面試官信服才是關(guān)鍵。比如說簡歷中采用的語言是不是理性的、客觀的,介紹的內(nèi)容是不是圍繞應(yīng)聘職位而來,你的職業(yè)規(guī)劃以及未來發(fā)展的方向是否清晰等等,都是展現(xiàn)簡歷亮點(diǎn)的要素。
不清楚自我評價(jià)即自我鑒定
大多數(shù)應(yīng)屆生在填寫自我評價(jià)時(shí)都會(huì)介紹個(gè)人的脾氣性格,對自我做一番全盤的表揚(yáng),而沒有真正領(lǐng)會(huì)自我評價(jià)的目的是要求職者進(jìn)行自我鑒定。
調(diào)查數(shù)據(jù)顯示,55%的應(yīng)屆生認(rèn)為自我評價(jià)需要介紹專業(yè)技能和職業(yè)優(yōu)勢,有23%的人認(rèn)為需要進(jìn)行個(gè)人性格介紹,有11%的人認(rèn)為應(yīng)該填寫一些教育經(jīng)歷,還有7%的人選擇了填寫一份完整的求職信。
就業(yè)指導(dǎo)專家表示,自我評價(jià)中需要求職者進(jìn)行自我鑒定,用精煉的語言表達(dá)出能力達(dá)到怎樣的水平,專業(yè)水平的寬度和深度掌握到了哪個(gè)階段,應(yīng)聘期望職位的資本是什么。企業(yè)面試官要依據(jù)以上內(nèi)容來權(quán)衡求職者與崗位之間的匹配度,看應(yīng)聘者能否達(dá)到崗位的需求,滿足企業(yè)發(fā)展的要求。然而,此次調(diào)查有超5成的應(yīng)屆生并不能真正領(lǐng)會(huì)自我評價(jià)的內(nèi)容。
多數(shù)人習(xí)慣過分渲染實(shí)習(xí)經(jīng)歷
實(shí)習(xí)經(jīng)歷對于初涉職場的求職者來說非常珍貴,所以在描述過程中會(huì)詳細(xì)介紹實(shí)習(xí)期間所經(jīng)歷的一切。有40%的被調(diào)查者認(rèn)為,實(shí)習(xí)經(jīng)歷中更多的要表現(xiàn)個(gè)人的魅力、人際交往能力、團(tuán)隊(duì)合作能力以及在校期間參加的校園活動(dòng),用大量的文字進(jìn)行描述,反而忽略了崗位的需求,只有60%的應(yīng)屆生認(rèn)為介紹實(shí)習(xí)經(jīng)歷時(shí)需要圍繞應(yīng)聘職位描述自身勝任崗位需求的理由,以此來爭取一對一面試的機(jī)會(huì)。
就業(yè)指導(dǎo)專家表示,簡歷中之所以需要詳細(xì)介紹之前的實(shí)習(xí)經(jīng)歷是想從中挖掘出你勝任崗位的理由,完全是從職業(yè)的角度思考,并非關(guān)注在校期間的生活經(jīng)歷,求職者要明確簡歷的目的是為了爭取就業(yè)機(jī)會(huì),在介紹實(shí)習(xí)經(jīng)歷時(shí)除了介紹實(shí)習(xí)期間主要負(fù)責(zé)的工作以外,更多的是介紹你在實(shí)習(xí)期間獲得成長以及能力上的提高,全部要圍繞你所應(yīng)聘的職位展開。
教育背景敘述往往跑偏
教育背景已經(jīng)成為應(yīng)屆生的過去,并非求職的關(guān)鍵,調(diào)查數(shù)據(jù)顯示,44%的人認(rèn)為需要介紹專業(yè)培養(yǎng)的目標(biāo)和就業(yè)方向,還有25%的人認(rèn)為需要用自己的語言介紹對本專
業(yè)的理解,只有27%的應(yīng)屆生認(rèn)為教育背景中應(yīng)該主要介紹所學(xué)專業(yè)的主要課程。
就業(yè)指導(dǎo)專家表示,大家對教育背景存在很大的誤解,過去的學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)歷惟一可以借鑒的就是通過在校期間學(xué)習(xí)什么樣的專業(yè)課程,讓你有所進(jìn)步和提高,用求學(xué)階段的表現(xiàn)以及獲得的獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)來證明。其實(shí),介紹教育背景很簡單,面試官只想了解你學(xué)習(xí)過哪些課程,你掌握到什么程度,你的學(xué)習(xí)能力有多強(qiáng)而已,所以只需要清楚介紹你的專業(yè)課以及表現(xiàn)即可。
面試官建議:
在申請大公司的職位時(shí),一定要在簡歷最醒目處,明確表述清楚自己希望工作的“目標(biāo)城市”、“目標(biāo)部門”以及“目標(biāo)崗位”。特別是要重視自己理想的職位是什么,然后從專業(yè)、技能、經(jīng)驗(yàn)、興趣等方面簡單分析你的目標(biāo)職位的由來。絕對忌諱”眉毛胡子一把抓”,而這種對自己職位沒有明確目標(biāo)的申請者,也是最容易被淘汰的對象。當(dāng)然,一份一目了然的簡歷,關(guān)鍵是要把應(yīng)聘者的最大特點(diǎn)放在簡歷最突出的位置。
此外,不管是簡歷的哪個(gè)環(huán)節(jié),哪怕是一處細(xì)小的部分,在書寫這些東西時(shí),都要遵循真實(shí)的原則,并要執(zhí)行好“真實(shí)”這個(gè)原則。在招聘過程中,一旦被用人單位發(fā)現(xiàn)簡歷有造假的現(xiàn)象,應(yīng)聘者的人品、誠信也就會(huì)完全遭到置疑,這也注定該應(yīng)聘者將無法找到優(yōu)秀的雇主。
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第三篇:獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)完美總結(jié)(附習(xí)題)
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獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)的用法說明與注意點(diǎn)
一、有關(guān)獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)的基本概念?
獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)是一個(gè)名詞或代詞(作為邏輯主語),加上一個(gè)形容詞、副詞、介詞短語、分詞、不定式等在句中作狀語。它有以下三個(gè)特點(diǎn):
1.獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)的邏輯主語與句子的主語不同,它獨(dú)立存在。
2.名詞或代詞與后面的形容詞、副詞、介詞短語、分詞、不定式等存在邏輯上的主謂關(guān)系。3.獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)一般用逗號(hào)與主句分開,但與主句之間不能使用任何連接詞。
二、獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)的常見形式
獨(dú)立主格類型1:名詞(代詞)+現(xiàn)在分詞
The question being settled, we went home.問題解決之后,我們就回家了。
We shall play the match tomorrow, weather permitting.明天假設(shè)天氣好,我們就進(jìn)行比賽。The monitor being ill, we’d better put the meeting off.班長病了,我們最好還是延期開會(huì)吧。
獨(dú)立主格類型2:名詞(代詞)+過去分詞
The job finished, we went home.工作結(jié)束后我們就回家了。
The last bus having gone, we had to walk home.最后一班公車已經(jīng)走了,我們必須走路回家。More time given, we should have done the job much better.如果給我們更多的時(shí)間,我們會(huì)把工作做得更好。
獨(dú)立主格類型3:名詞(代詞)+不定式
Nobody to come tomorrow, we will have to put off the meeting till next week.如果明天沒有人來,我們將把會(huì)議推遲到下周。
So many people to help him, he is sure to succeed.有如此多的人來幫助他,他一定會(huì)成功的。
獨(dú)立主格類型4:名詞(代詞)+介詞短語
The soldiers dashed in, rifle in hand.士兵們端著槍沖了進(jìn)來。A girl came in, book in hand.一個(gè)少女進(jìn)來了,手里拿著書。
He was waiting, his eyes on her back.他在等著,眼睛望著她的背影。
獨(dú)立主格類型5:名詞(代詞)+形容詞或副詞
He sat in the front row, his mouth half open.他坐在前排,嘴半開著。
She sat at the table, collar off, head down, and pen in position, ready to begin the long letter.她坐在桌前,衣領(lǐng)已解掉,頭低了下來,拿好鋼筆,準(zhǔn)備開始寫一封長信。
獨(dú)立主格類型6:There being +名詞(代詞)
There being nothing else to do, we went home.沒有別的事可做,我們就回家了。
There being no further business, I declare the meeting closed.沒有再要討論的事了,我宣布散會(huì)。
獨(dú)立主格類型7:It being +名詞(代詞)
It being Christmas, the government offices were closed.由于圣誕節(jié)的緣故,政府機(jī)關(guān)都休息。It being a holiday, all the shops were shut.由于今天是假日,所有商店都關(guān)門了。
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說明:獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)有時(shí)可在其前加上介詞with。如: Don’t sleep with the windows open.別開著窗睡覺。
He stood before his teacher with his head down.他低著頭站在老師面前。He was lying on the bed with all his clothes on.他和衣躺在床上。She came in with a book in her hand.她手里拿著一本書走了進(jìn)來。He fell asleep with the lamp burning.他沒熄燈就睡著了。
I won’t be able to go on holiday with my mother being ill.因?yàn)閶寢層胁?,我無法去度假。He sat there with his eyes closed.他閉目坐在那兒。
All the afternoon he worked with the door locked.整個(gè)下午他都鎖著門在房里工作。I can’t go out with all these clothes to wash.要洗這些衣服,我無法出去了.三、英語獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)的用法
獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)主要表示謂語動(dòng)詞發(fā)生的時(shí)間、原因、條件或伴隨情況等,相當(dāng)于一個(gè)狀語從句或并列句。
1.用作時(shí)間狀語
The work done(=After the work had been done), we went home.工作完成后,我們就回家了。2.用作條件狀語
Weather permitting(=If weather permits), they will go on an outing to the beach tomorrow.如果天氣允許的話,他們將在明天組織一次海濱小游。3.用作原因狀語
An important lecture to be given tomorrow(=As an important lecture will be given tomorrow), the professor has to stay up late into the night.因?yàn)槊魈煲l(fā)表一個(gè)重要的演講,教授不得不熬夜到很晚。
4.用作伴隨狀語
He was lying on the grass, his hands crossed under his head(=and his hands were crossed under his head).他躺在草地上,兩手交叉枕在腦后。5.表示補(bǔ)充說明
A hunter came in, his face red with cold(=and his face was red with cold).一個(gè)獵人走了進(jìn)來,他的臉凍得通紅。
We redoubled our efforts, each man working like two.我們加倍努力,一個(gè)人干兩個(gè)人的活。注:獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)表示時(shí)間、條件或原因時(shí),相當(dāng)于一個(gè)狀語從句,一般放在句首,表示原因時(shí)還可放在句末;表伴隨狀況或補(bǔ)充說明時(shí),相當(dāng)于一個(gè)并列句,通常放于句末。
四、使用獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)的幾點(diǎn)注意
1.當(dāng)狀語從句的主語與主句的主語不是指同一個(gè)對象時(shí),可用獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)取代狀語從句,但不再保留連詞。如:
After class was over(=Class being over / Class over), the students soon left the classroom.下課后,學(xué)生很快離開了課室。
2.在下列兩種情況下,獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)中的being(或having been)不能省略:
(1)獨(dú)立主格的邏輯主語是代詞時(shí)。如:It being Sunday, we went to church.因?yàn)槭切瞧谔?,我們?nèi)チ俗龆Y拜。
(2)在There being+名詞的結(jié)構(gòu)中。如:
There being no bus, we had to go home on foot.因?yàn)闆]有公共汽車,所以我們不得不步行回家。w.w.w.k.s.5.u.c.o.m
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3.在“名詞(或代詞)+介詞短語”構(gòu)成的獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)中,一般不用形容詞性物主代詞和冠詞。如:
Miss Smith entered the classroom, book in hand.史密斯先生走進(jìn)了課室,手里拿著一本書。比較with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu):Miss Smith entered the classroom, with a book in his hand.4.獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)沒有所有格形式。如:
The chief-editor arriving, we began the meeting.主編來了,我們開始開會(huì)。比較動(dòng)名詞復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu):
The chief-editor’s arriving made us very surprised.5.獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)作時(shí)間或原因狀語時(shí),可用完成時(shí),表示該動(dòng)作發(fā)生在謂語之前。如: The listeners having taken their seats, the concert began.聽眾坐好后,音樂會(huì)開始了。
Tom having been late over and over, his boss was very disappointed.由于湯姆一再遲到,他的老板非常失望。
獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)中的非謂語動(dòng)詞用法
獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)的基本形式是“名詞或代詞+形容詞(副詞、介詞短語、非謂語動(dòng)詞等)”。本文主要?dú)w納“名詞或代詞+非謂語動(dòng)詞”這一結(jié)構(gòu)的用法。1.名詞或代詞+不定式
其中的不定式通常表示尚未發(fā)生或即將要發(fā)生的動(dòng)作。如:
Nobody to come tomorrow, we will have to put off the meeting till next week.如果明天沒有人來,我們將把會(huì)議推遲到下周。
So many people to help him, he is sure to succeed.有如此多的人來幫助他,他一定會(huì)成功的。We divided the work, he to dean the window and I to sweep the floor.我們分了工,他擦窗戶,我掃地。
2.名詞或代詞+現(xiàn)在分詞
其中的現(xiàn)在分詞通常表示動(dòng)作正在進(jìn)行(或當(dāng)時(shí)正在進(jìn)行)。如:
She ran up to me, her hair flying in the wind.她向我跑來,秀發(fā)在風(fēng)中飄揚(yáng)著。
We explored the caves, Peter acting as a guide.由彼得作向?qū)?,我們探查了那些洞穴?/p>
We redoubled our efforts, each man working like two.我們加倍努力,一個(gè)人干兩個(gè)人的活。注:有時(shí)現(xiàn)在分詞不表示進(jìn)行,而表示一般情況。如:
Their room was on the third floor, it’s window overlooking the sports ground.他們的房間在三層樓上,窗戶俯視著操場。3.名詞或代詞+過去分詞
其中的過去分詞通常表示被動(dòng)意義。如:
Everyone helped, John not excepted.大家都來幫忙,約翰也不例外。
All our savings gone, we started looking for jobs.積蓄全部用完了,我們就開始找工作。This done, they next set to clean the room.做完這件事之后,他們接下來就開始清理房間。She gazed, her hands clasped to her breast.她凝視著,雙手叉在胸前。
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【現(xiàn)學(xué)現(xiàn)用】1 1.I send you 100 dollars today, the rest _________ in a year.A.follows
B.followed
C.to follow
D.being followed 2.All things _________, I think we ought to give the job to George.A.considered
B.considering
C.to consider
D.being considered 3.The river _________ in the night, the crossing was impossible.A.to rise
B.rose
C.having risen
D.being risen 4.More time _________, we should have done the job much better.A.to give
B.give
C.being given
D.given 5.We shall play the match tomorrow, weather _________.(from 004km.cn)A.permits
B.permitting
C.to permit
D.permitted 6.The monitor _________ ill, we’d better put the meeting off.A.being
B.to be
C.been
D.to have been 7.An important lecture _________ given tomorrow, the professor has to stay up late into the night.A.to be
B.being
C.been
D.to have been 8.He was lying on the grass, his hands _________ under his head.A.to cross
B.crossed
C.crossing
D.to be crossing 9.Tom _________ late over and over, his boss was very disappointed.A.having been
B.been
C.to be
D.to being 10.Other things _________ equal, I would buy the black dress not the white one.A.being
B.to be
C.been
D.having been
【現(xiàn)學(xué)現(xiàn)用】2 1.A new technique _______, the yields as a whole increased by 20 percent.A)working out C)having been worked out
B)having worked out D)to have been worked out
2.All things _______, the planned trip will have to be called off.A)considered B)be considered C)considering D)having considered
3.All flights _______ because of the snowstorm, many passengers could do nothing but take the train.A)had been canceled B)have been canceled C)were canceled D)having been canceled
4.So many directors _______, the board meeting had to be put off.A)were absent B)been absent C)had been absent D)being absent
5.All the tasks _______ ahead of time, they decided to go on holiday for a week.A)been fulfilled B)having been fulfilled C)were fulfilled D)had been fulfilled
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6.All flights _______ because of the terrible weather, they had to go there by train.A)having been canceled
C)having canceled B)had been canceled
D)were canceled
7.The speech _______, a lively discussion started.A)being delivered B)was delivered C)be delivered D)having been delivered
8.Silver is the best conductor of electricity, copper _______ it closely.A)followed B)following C)to follow D)being following
9._______, a man who expresses himself effectively is sure to succeed more rapidly than a man whose command of language is poor.A)Other things being equal C)To be equal to other things B)Were other things equal D)Other things to be equal
10.The sale usually takes place outside the house, with the audience _______ on benches,chairs or boxes.A)having seated B)seating C)seated D)having been seated
11._______ the temperature falling so rapidly, we couldn't go on with the experiment.A)Since B)For C)As D)With
12._______ in the United States, St.Louis has now become the 24th largest city.A)being the fourth biggest city B)It was once the fourth biggest city C)Once the fourth biggest city D)The fourth biggest city it was
【現(xiàn)學(xué)現(xiàn)用】3 1.The meeting____ over, we all left the room.(上海1987)
A.is
B.to be
C.being
D.would be
2.European football is played in 80 countries, it___ the most popular sport in the world.(NMET1998)A.making
B.makes
C.made
D.to make
3.___such heavy pollution already, it may now be too late to clean up the river.(NMET2001)
A.Having suffered
B.Suffering
C.To suffer
D.Suffered
4.The fish____ bad, the children left much of it.A.tasted, untouched
B.tasting, untouched
C.tasting, untouching
D.tasted, untouching w.w.w.k.s.5.u.c.o.m 5.___ from what you say, he ought to succeed.A.Judged
B.Judging
C.When you judged
D.Because you judge
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6.Everything___ into consideration, they ought to have another chance.A.to take
B.taken
C.to be taken
D.taking
7.Walter offered us a lift when he was leaving the office, but our work ______, we didn’taccept the offer.A.not being finished
B.not having finished
C.had not been finished
D.was not finished
8.There are various kinds of metals, each ______ its own properties(特性).A.has
B.had
C.to have
D.having
9.The old man stood under a big tree, ______.A.a pipe in mouth
B.with a pipe in mouth
C.pipe in mouth
D.pipe in his mouth
10.The production ______ steadily, the factory needs an ever-increasing supply of raw material.A.has gone up
B.is going up
C.having gone up
D.being gone up
獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)鞏固練習(xí)1 1.______ no bus, we had to walk home.A.There was
B.There being
C.Because there being
D.There were 2.____, I'll go there with you tomorrow afternoon.A.Time permits
B.If time permitting
C.Time permitting
D.Time's permitting 3._____, we all went home happily.A.Goodbye was said
B.Goodbye had been said
C.Goodbye said
D.When goodbye said 4._____, we all went swimming in high spirits.A.It being fine weather
B.It fine weather C.It was fine weather
D.It being a fine weather 5.____, the bus started at once.A.The signal was given
B.The signal giving C.The signal given
D.When the signal given 6.She stood there, _____ from her cheeks.A.tears' rolling down
B.tears rolled down
C.with tears rolled down
D.tears rolling down 7.____, the leaves are turning green.A.When spring coming on
B.Spring coming on C.Spring came on
D.Spring being come on 8._____, I had to buy a new one.A.My dictionary losing
B.My dictionary having been lost C.My dictionary had been lost
D.Because my dictionary lost 9.I used to sleep with the window _____.A.opened
B.open
C.opening D to open 10.____, the hunter went into the forest.一切為了孩子的未來 6
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A.A gun on shoulder
B.A gun was on his shoulder C.Gun on shoulder
D.A gun being on shoulder
11.____ production up by 60%, the company has had another excellent year.A.As
B.For
C.With
D.Through 12.With a lot of work ____, I have to sit up tonight.A.do
B.doing
C.done
D.to do 13.He stood there silently, his lips_____.A.trembling
B.trembled
C.were trembling
D.were trembling 14._____, her suggestion is of greater value than yours.A.All things considering
B.All things considered
C.All things were considered
D.With all things were considered 15.______, we will surely succeed.A.The teacher helping us
B.The teacher to help us
C.The teacher will help us
D.With the teacher helping
獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)鞏固練習(xí)2 1.The thief stood before the policeman,____ admitting what he had done.A.with his drooping head
B.drooping his head C.raising his head
D.with his head down
2.__________ ,he can't go out for a walk as usual.A.With so much work to do
B.With so much work doing C.With so much work done
D.Without so much work to do
3.It's quite strange that the man sleeps with his mouth _______and his eyes __________.A.closed;open
B.closed;opened C.closing;open
D.closing;opening
4.All things __________ ,the plan trip will have to be called off.A.be considered
B.considered
C.considering
D.having considering
5.__________ ,we have to get down to business right away.A.As there was no time left
B.There is no time left C.There being no time left
D.There to be no time left
6.__________ yesterday,we went out for a walk.A.As a fine day
B.It was a fine day
C.It being a fine day
D.For it was a fine day w.w.w.k.s.5.u.c.o.m
7.The old man stood there,__________.A.with back against the wall
B.with his back against the wall
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C.with back against wall
D.his back against wall
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1.______ no bus, we had to walk home.A.There was
B.There being
C.Because there being 2.____, I'll go there with you tomorrow afternoon.A.Time permits
B.If time permitting
C.Time permitting
D.Time's permitting 3._____, we all went home happily.A.Goodbye was said
B.Goodbye had been said
C.Goodbye said
D.When goodbye said 4._____, we all went swimming in high spirits.A.It being fine weather
B.It fine weather
C.It was fine weather
D.It being a fine weather 5.____, the bus started at once.A.The signal was given
B.The signal giving
C.The signal given
D.When the signal given 6.She stood there, _____ from her cheeks.w.w.w.k.s.5.u.c.o.m
A.tears' rolling down
B.tears rolled down
C.with tears rolled down
D.tears rolling down 7.____, the leaves are turning green.A.When spring coming on
B.Spring coming on
C.Spring came on
D.Spring being come on 8._____, I had to buy a new one.A.My dictionary losing
B.My dictionary having been lost
C.My dictionary had been lost
D.Because my dictionary lost 9.I used to sleep with the window _____.A.opened
B.open
C.opening D to open 10.____, the hunter went into the forest.A.A gun on shoulder
B.A gun was on his shoulder
C.Gun on shoulder
D.A gun being on shoulder 11.____ production up by 60%, the company has had another excellent year.A.As
B.For
C.With
D.Through 12.With a lot of work ____, I have to sit up tonight.A.do
B.doing
C.done
D.to do 13.He stood there silently, his lips_____.A.trembling
B.trembled
C.were trembling
D.were trembling 14._____, her suggestion is of greater value than yours.A.All things considering
B.All things considered
C.All things were considered
D.With all things were considered 15.______, we will surely succeed.A.The teacher helping us
B.The teacher to help us
C.The teacher will help us
D.With the teacher helping
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1.______ no bus, we had to walk home.A.There was
B.There being
C.Because there being
D.There were
2.____, I'll go there with you tomorrow afternoon.A.Time permits
B.If time permitting
C.Time permitting
D.Time's permitting 3._____, we all went home happily.A.Goodbye was said
B.Goodbye had been said
C.Goodbye said
D.When goodbye said 4._____, we all went swimming in high spirits.A.It being fine weather
B.It fine weather
C.It was fine weather
D.It being a fine weather
5.____, the bus started at once.A.The signal was given
B.The signal giving
C.The signal given
D.When the signal given
6.She stood there, _____ from her cheeks.A.tears' rolling down
B.tears rolled down
C.with tears rolled down
D.tears rolling down 7.____, the leaves are turning green.A.When spring coming on
B.Spring coming on C.Spring came on
D.Spring being come on 8._____, I had to buy a new one.w.w.w.k.s.5.u.c.o.m A.My dictionary losing
B.My dictionary having been lost C.My dictionary had been lost
D.Because my dictionary lost 9.I used to sleep with the window _____.A.opened
B.open
C.openingD to open 10.____, the hunter went into the forest.A.A gun on shoulder
B.A gun was on his shoulder C.Gun on shoulder
D.A gun being on shoulder
11.____ production up by 60%, the company has had another excellent year.A.As
B.For
C.With
D.Through
12.With a lot of work ____, I have to sit up tonight.A.do
B.doing
C.done
D.to do 13.He stood there silently, his lips_____.A.trembling
B.trembled
C.were trembling
D.were trembling 14._____, her suggestion is of greater value than yours.A.All things considering
B.All things considered
C.All things were considered
D.With all things were considered 15.______, we will surely succeed.A.The teacher helping us
B.The teacher to help us
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C.The teacher will help us
D.With the teacher helping
【參考答案】1—5 CACDB 6—10 AABAA 答案:CDBDB AABACDC 1.C 2.A 3.A 4.A 5.B 6.7.A,但是最好是not having been finished 8.D 9.C 10.C 答案:
1-5BCCAC
6-10 DBBBC
11-15 CDABB 答案: 1—5 DAABC 6—7 CB 答案:1-5 BCCAC 6-10 DBBBC 11-15 CDABB 答案:1-5 BCCAC 6-10DBBBC 11-15 CDABB 一切為了孩子的未來 10