第一篇:如何寫雅思寫作中的邀請(qǐng)信?
今天上海環(huán)球雅思陳斌老師為大家?guī)?lái)的是雅思寫作中邀請(qǐng)信的解析。雅思寫作中如何寫英語(yǔ)邀請(qǐng)信,英文邀請(qǐng)信怎么寫比較合適、地道,一直是考生犯愁的事情。下面就一起來(lái)看看陳斌老師怎么說(shuō)吧~
邀請(qǐng)信是在形式上不如請(qǐng)柬那樣正規(guī),但也是很考究。形式上大體分為兩種:一種為正規(guī)的格式(formal correspondence),亦稱請(qǐng)柬;一種是非正式格式(informal correspondence), 即一般的邀請(qǐng)信。
書寫時(shí)應(yīng)注意:
邀請(qǐng)信一定要將邀請(qǐng)的時(shí)間(年、月、日、鐘點(diǎn))、地點(diǎn)、場(chǎng)合寫清楚,不能使接信人存在任何疑慮。
例如:“I’d like you and Bob to come to Luncheon next Friday.”
這句話中所指的是哪個(gè)星期五并不明確,所以應(yīng)加上具體日期, “I’d like you and Bob to come to luncheon next Friday, May the fifth.”
邀請(qǐng)朋友共進(jìn)午餐 Inviting a friend to informal luncheon
Dear [Zhang Ying]:
Will you come to luncheon on [Friday, May the fifth], at [twelve o’clock]?
My niece [Mary] is visiting us and I think you will enjoy meeting her.She is a charming, very pretty girl ? and very good company![John and Jane] will be here, and perhaps we can [give a dance] after luncheon.Do say you’ll come!
Affectionately yours,Li Ming
親愛的[張營(yíng)]:
您能在[5月5日星期五中午12點(diǎn)鐘] 來(lái)吃午飯嗎?
我侄女[瑪麗]正在我們家中作客,我想您會(huì)樂于見到她的。她是個(gè)漂亮而聰明的女孩子,??同她在一起是很使人高興的![約翰和簡(jiǎn)]也到這里來(lái),也許在飯后我們能[開個(gè)舞會(huì)],說(shuō)好,一定得來(lái)呀!
第二篇:英語(yǔ)應(yīng)用文寫作匯總--祝賀信及邀請(qǐng)信(中)
祝 賀 信
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1.Introduction 按西方國(guó)家的習(xí)俗,親友之間在重大節(jié)日要寫祝賀信或贈(zèng)禮物,如圣誕節(jié)、新年、婚禮、生日等等。當(dāng)親友晉升、考試成功、畢業(yè)、喬遷新居、獲得工作、新業(yè)開張以及獲獎(jiǎng)等等,也要寫祝賀信。
祝賀信要寫的及時(shí),得到喜訊后應(yīng)立即動(dòng)筆。信中要提到具體的喜事,表達(dá)出寫信人的喜悅心情,并致以衷心的祝賀。總的來(lái)說(shuō),這類書信只需寥寥數(shù)語(yǔ),但用詞必須親切有禮,表達(dá)出真誠(chéng)的喜悅。
2.Commonly used Sentences常用句型
1.With very best wishes for a happy New year!2.May you come into a good fortune!3.Wishing you peace, joy and happiness through Christmas and the coming year.4.Best wishes for a happy birthday and a year of good luck, good health and happiness.5.Please accept my gift for your birthday, not for its own value, but for the sake of the thoughts it represents.請(qǐng)接受我給你的生日禮物,禮物不在于他本身的價(jià)值,而在于它表達(dá)了我對(duì)你的思念。
6.Best wishes and hope you will have nothing but joy and happiness in your life together.7.May you two always be in love!May happiness increase with age.愿你倆永浴愛河,祝你倆幸福與歲俱增!8.I hope your new dwelling will bring you and your family loads of fortune and good heath.謹(jǐn)祝你的新居將為你全家?guī)?lái)鴻運(yùn)和安康!
9.Congratulations on your success in the national college entrance examination.10.Allow me to offer my heartiest congratulations on your new job.11.I would like to add my congratulations to the many you must be receiving on your promotion.在對(duì)你晉升的眾多的祝賀中再增加我一份,以表賀意。
12.I am looking forward to your further promotion.13.How happy you must be to have a beautiful new baby girl.14.I wish you many happy returns of the anniversary.May you have long and joyful life.祝你倆享有許多的結(jié)婚紀(jì)念日。愿你倆白頭偕老,生活愉快!15.I am sending along some flowers and fruit with my love and my sincere wish for your speedy recovery.16.How wonderful it is to hear about your baby!May the precious new life you have brought into the world bring you a world of new joys.得知你的小寶寶出生,非常高興。祝你帶給這個(gè)世界的新生命給你帶來(lái)無(wú)限的幸福。17.Congratulations on your recent promotion.I know that you will make good in your new job because you thrive on responsibility.祝你榮獲提升,你的責(zé)任感將為你帶來(lái)很多的成功!
3.Specimen 樣例
Season’s Greetings 祝賀節(jié)日 Dear Mr.Hoff, There are many things I’d like to speak of friendship, peace and love.I’d to tell you how much I appreciate knowing you.Perhaps the most meaningful way to say all the things is just to say Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.May Christmas and the New Year be filled with happiness for you and yours.Sincerely yours, David Congratulations on Birthday Dear Franz, Congratulations!From now on, you will be a man.You have reached your 18th birthday!I made this small gift by myself.Please accept it, not for its own value, but for the sake of the thoughts it represents.I feel very sorry that I can’t attend your birthday party.Please believe I am praying for you.May you live a long and joyful life, a life full of all the blessings that this would can bestow.Yours Sincerely, Dunkin Congratulations on Engagement Dear Jeanette, I feel quite pleased when hearing that you and James became engaged yesterday, Congratulations!Your engagement is such happy news.It’s a pleasure to express warm and special wishes for your future happiness.May all your hope and plans turn out the way you want them to.And as you go through life together, may all your dreams come true.yours sincerely, Levins
Wedding Congratulations Dear Jackson, Your wedding card brings to me the happy news of your marriage.I congratulate you and trust that your marriage will be a source of blessing and happiness to you both.Please accept this little present with my congratulations upon your happy wedding.Yours Sincerely, Newby
Congratulations for Changing Residence Dear Li Fang, Congratulate you on your moving into your new residence.You’ve finally got such a nice new house that you’ve always been hoping for.I hope your new dwelling will bring you and your family loads of fortune and good health.Wish you plenty of prosperity and good luck in your new house.Yours truly, Ma Ying Congratulations on Passing University Examination Dear Li Ping, We are very happy to learn that you have successfully passed the college entrance examination this year and have been admitted into Hunan University with honor.Allow us to offer our most sincere congratulations on this happy occasion.Wish you greater achievement in your college education.Yours Sincerely, Wang Liang
邀 請(qǐng) 信
1.Introduction 邀請(qǐng)信在日常生活和外事活動(dòng)中使用廣泛,一般分為兩種:一種為正式邀請(qǐng)(invitation card);因?yàn)槠浣Y(jié)構(gòu)非一般信函,在此不作講述。本章只講非正式請(qǐng)?zhí)?,即邀?qǐng)信(letters of invitation)。
邀請(qǐng)信形式上不如請(qǐng)?zhí)菢诱?guī),但也很考究。書寫時(shí)應(yīng)注意一下兩點(diǎn):(1)邀請(qǐng)信一定要將邀請(qǐng)的時(shí)間(年、月、日、鐘點(diǎn))、地點(diǎn)、場(chǎng)合寫清楚,不能讓收信人有任何的疑慮。例如 “ I’d like you and Tom to come to dinner next Monday” 這句話中指的是哪個(gè)星期并不明確,所以要加上具體日期,“I’d like you and Tom to come to dinner next Monday, May the fifth at 6 o’clock.P.m., at the Locus Hotel”。
(2)邀請(qǐng)信的特點(diǎn)是簡(jiǎn)短熱情,形式較為靈活,一般為兩小段,將意思表達(dá)清楚即可。在盛大的場(chǎng)合,請(qǐng)?zhí)麘?yīng)提前三星期發(fā)出,一般場(chǎng)合書寫邀請(qǐng)信,應(yīng)在預(yù)定時(shí)間的前幾天發(fā)出,一邊收信人及早考慮和安排。收到請(qǐng)?zhí)蛐藕?,通常?yīng)立即答復(fù),表明接受謝絕,以示禮貌。
2.Commonly Used Sentences 1)I’d like you to come to our dinner this evening.2)Request the pleasure of … 恭請(qǐng)…
3)The favor of a reply is requested.敬賜復(fù)函。
4)May I have the honor of your company at dinner? 敬備菲酌,恭請(qǐng)光臨。5)Thank you for inviting us to dinner.6)We are delighted to accept your invitation.7)I wish I could be there, but I expect to be away on vacation at that time.8)Please reply to Thirty-five Park Avenue.9)We’ll be awaiting your arrival on the twelfth.10)I hope you are not too busy to come期望你在百忙中光臨。11)I’m looking forward to seeing you.12)We thought it would be pleasant to have some of our friends to celebrate it.13)The reception will be held in …, on…招待會(huì)定于……在……舉行。14)We sincerely hope you can attend.15)We have decided to have a party in honor of the occasion.為此我們決定舉行一次晚會(huì)。
16)Please let me know as soon as possible if you can come and tell me when you will be able to do so.如能來(lái)的話,早日告我,何時(shí)為宜。17)Please confirm your participation at your earliest convenience.是否參加,請(qǐng)?jiān)缛崭嬷?/p>
3.Specimen例文
1.Invitation to a Formal Dinner(宴會(huì))1)A letter of invitation Dear Mrs.Benton, John and I would be very happy if you and Mr.Benton could come to dinner with us on Monday, May the second at six o’clock.We do hope you can Join us.Sincerely yours Ellen Smith
2)A letter of Accepting an Invitation Dear Mrs.Smith, Thank you for inviting us to dinner on Monday, May the second.We are delighted to accept your invitation.Sincerely yours, Lucie Benton
3)A letter of Declining an Invitation Dear Mrs.Smith, Thank you for inviting us to dinner on Monday, May the second.I wish I could be there, but I regret to inform you that owing to being away on vacation, we shall not be able to come.Sincerely yours, Lucie Benton
2.Invitation to a Wedding Dear Aunt Kate, David and I are to be married at the Community Church(區(qū)教堂)on Thursday, June the twelfth, at noon.We want you come to the ceremony, and also to the wedding breakfast(喜宴)afterward at home.We’ll be awaiting your arrival, Aunt Kate, on the twelfth!With love Helen
3.Invitation to a Dance Dear Martha, Next Friday October the first is our national Day, and we thought it would be pleasant to have some of our friends here to celebrate it.Will you and Tom come? We’ll have dancing from seven until twelve.We are all looking forward to seeing you.Students of International business School 4.Invitation to a Reception(招待會(huì))Dear Mr.Hobson, It would give us great pleasure to have your presence at a reception in honor of the Chinese delegation(中國(guó)代表團(tuán)).The reception will be held in the City Hall, on Tuesday, October the fourth.Cocktails(雞尾酒會(huì))will be served promptly at six to be followed by dinner at eight.We sincerely hope you can attend.Let us know as soon as possible if you can come.Sincerely Li He
5.Invitation to an Export Commodities fair(出口商品交易會(huì))Dear Sirs, This is to advise that we are going to hold an Export Commodities fair in Shanghai from May 1st to May 15th,1999.A great variety of samples(品種繁多的樣品), newly designed by our manufacturers, will be on exhibition.We take pleasure in inviting you to the Fair.Please cable(電告)the date of your arrival, enabling us to make the necessary preparations.Yours faithfully
6.Invitation to an Anniversary Celebration of the founding of a School(校慶)Dear prof.Smith, On Monday, September the tenth all the faculty members of Hu Nan University will celebrate the Seventieth Anniversary of the School Founding.We have decided to have a party in honor of the occasion.The place is Teachers’ Reception Hall(教師會(huì)客廳), and the time is Friday evening, September the tenth, at six o’clock.Come and bring your wife or other guest.We look forward to seeing you.In order to make proper reservations, will you send your acceptance to the attention of Professor Chen no later than a week before that day.(為了便于安排,務(wù)請(qǐng)您與宴會(huì)舉行一周以前將您的接受邀請(qǐng)的回執(zhí)寄到陳教授處。)
Cordially,(您真誠(chéng)的)Wang Hua
7.Invitation to Giving Lectures(邀請(qǐng)來(lái)校講學(xué))1)A letter of invitation Dear Prof.Green, I was told by our mutual friend Mr.Wilson that you would visit China next month this year.May I take the opportunity to invite you to come to our college to give the students of our English Department some lectures on “Modern American Literature”? Please let me know as soon as possible if you can come and tell me when you will be able to do so.With warm personal regards, I am,(我個(gè)人謹(jǐn)向您致以熱烈的問候。)Your sincerely, Yan Hai
2)A letter of Accepting an Invitation Dear Prof.Yang, I accept with pleasure your kind invitation to come to your college and give some lectures on “Modern American Literature” to the students of your English Department.I shall arrive at Changsha on 12th October, and will stay at your college for two weeks, giving lectures 3 times a week.I’m looking forward to meeting you and your students.Best wishes.Yours sincerely, Green
8.Invitation to Attending the Academic conference(學(xué)術(shù)會(huì)議)1)A letter of invitation Dear Professor Parley, It would give us great pleasure to have your presence at a meeting of English language teaching scheduled for September the sixth,1998 at the English Department of Beijing University.Your thinking on the subject would contribute greatly to the success of the conference.Do let us know if you can make it.Cordially,(您誠(chéng)摯的)Xia Kai 2)A letter of Accepting an Invitation Dear Professor Xia, Thank you very much for your invitation to join the meeting of English language teaching at Department of Beijing University on September the sixth, 1998.I will be happy to be there at two o’clock that afternoon to take part in the meeting, and look forward to it with pleasure.Cordially, William Parley
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第三篇:寫作練習(xí)-邀請(qǐng)信
寫作練習(xí)---如何寫邀請(qǐng)信
邀請(qǐng)信是寫信人對(duì)收信人的一種盛情邀約。邀請(qǐng)信分為正式邀請(qǐng)信和非正式邀請(qǐng)信。非正式邀請(qǐng)用詞比較隨便;正式邀請(qǐng)信則是向收信人發(fā)出正式邀請(qǐng),用語(yǔ)和格式均比較規(guī)范、嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)。
邀請(qǐng)信通常包括以下幾個(gè)方面的內(nèi)容:發(fā)出邀請(qǐng);說(shuō)明邀請(qǐng)對(duì)方做什么事;說(shuō)明活動(dòng)時(shí)間和地點(diǎn);表達(dá)期待或感謝之情。一 文章結(jié)構(gòu)
1.(自我介紹)活動(dòng)名稱+發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)
2.活動(dòng)具體內(nèi)容和安排
3.參加活動(dòng)能給受邀人(邀請(qǐng)人)帶來(lái)的好處
4.表明期待以及聯(lián)系方式 Tips: 信中要說(shuō)明關(guān)于活動(dòng)的詳細(xì)信息,包括活動(dòng)時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、內(nèi)容,有時(shí)需要說(shuō)明參加活動(dòng)的人員。語(yǔ)氣要熱情真摯,但不要強(qiáng)人所難。
二 萬(wàn)能句型
邀請(qǐng)信開頭及中間部分常用句式
The...will be held on....The activity is in honor of....You can also bring...together with you.May I have the honor of your accompany at dinner? We sincerely/ faithfully hope you can attend...You will be my most respected guest to come to...I wonder if there is any chance for your to come to…
I am writing to ask whether you would be willing to attend...It would be my pleasure to share the important moments with you.There are also arrangements for … which I am sure you will thoroughly enjoy.邀請(qǐng)信結(jié)尾常用句式
I would love for you to attend, so please let me know your decision.Please confirm your participation at your earliest convenience.Please let me know soon if you decide to come.I shall be much obliged by a reply at your convenience.I would feel honored if you could come to...I am looking forward to your participation in...I really hope you can make it.We sincerely hope that you can make it.We would be honored to have you there with us.We would be looking forward to your participation in the party.The honor of your presence is requested.三 模板
示例一:
Dear________,There will a ________________(內(nèi)容)at/in________________(地點(diǎn))on___________(時(shí)間).We would be honored to have you there with us.The occasion will start at ___________(具體時(shí)間).This will be followed by a _______(進(jìn)一步的安排).At around______(時(shí)間)_________________(另一個(gè)安排)
I really hope you can make it before ____________(通知你的最后期限)
Yours sincerely
Li Ming 示例二:
Dear_____________ ,①_____________(開門見山提出事件/活動(dòng)、地點(diǎn)、時(shí)間).②It would be pleasant/honored to have you here.③During the party/conference, we will have lots of activities you will be interested in.④First, ___________(要舉行的活動(dòng)內(nèi)容一).⑤Second, ________(要舉行的活動(dòng)內(nèi)容二).⑥I know/believe that you will be very interested in_____________.⑦For one thing, _____________(受邀請(qǐng)人參加的理由一).⑧For another, _____________(受邀請(qǐng)人參加的理由二).⑨The conference/party would not be complete without you!
⑩The party/conference will begin at 時(shí)間and we do hope you can come.Yours sincerely
Li Ming
范例:(2015全國(guó)卷II)
假如你是李華,計(jì)劃和同學(xué)去敬老院(nursing home)陪老人們過重陽(yáng)節(jié)(the Double Ninth Festival)。請(qǐng)給外教露西寫封郵件,邀她一同前往,內(nèi)容包括:
1.出發(fā)及返回時(shí)間;
2.活動(dòng):包餃子、表演節(jié)目等。
注意:
1.詞數(shù)100左右; 2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫; 3.結(jié)語(yǔ)已為你寫好。
【寫作步驟】
一. 根據(jù)題目要求以及我們上面提到的注意點(diǎn),列出提綱:
第一段:?jiǎn)柡?自我介紹+寫信背景(去敬老院)+寫信目的(邀請(qǐng)同去)
第二段:主題句+拓展句1(出發(fā)及返回時(shí)間)+拓展句2(活動(dòng),such as……)
第三段:我希望(你也能去)。我相信(你會(huì)喜歡這個(gè)活動(dòng))。感謝你(讀我的信)。
請(qǐng)回信(告訴我你的決定)。二. 完成初稿
三. 糾錯(cuò)及潤(rùn)色(重點(diǎn)檢查寫作要點(diǎn)、時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)態(tài)、人稱、格式等)四. 定稿、謄抄【參考答案】
Dear Lucy,I’d like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival.It is the day for the elderly in our culture.We’ll go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there.We’ll also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy.We should be back around 4 o’clock in the afternoon.If you are able to come with us, please let us know and we’ll wait for you at the gate at 9 in the morning.Looking forward to your reply.Yours
Li Hua
【解析】試題分析:本篇書面表達(dá)屬于英文書信,根據(jù)提示信息說(shuō)明邀請(qǐng)Lucy去參加的活動(dòng)和時(shí)間等。寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn):
1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確三個(gè)要點(diǎn):邀請(qǐng)、時(shí)間、具體活動(dòng)。
2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ),按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫。本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)憽?/p>
3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài);就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)。
4、注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明。We’ll also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy.中用了which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句和句式spend time doing。此外,還有if從句以及一些短語(yǔ)如invite you to join us,for a visit to,make dumplings等。
PracticeI 假如你是育才中學(xué)學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華,你校將舉辦一次英語(yǔ)演講比賽,希望附近某大學(xué)外籍教師Smith 女士來(lái)做評(píng)委。請(qǐng)參照以下比賽通知給她寫一封信。
英語(yǔ)演講比賽
主題:人與自然
時(shí)間:6月15日下午2:00-5:00
地點(diǎn):501教室
參賽選手:10名學(xué)生
聯(lián)系人:李華(電話:44876655)Dear Ms.Smith,I am Lihua, the leader of the Students Union of Yucai Middle School.I sincerely hope you can set aside some time for our English Speech Contest and be a judge.The contest, the theme of which is “Man and Nature”, will be held in the Room 501 from 2:00 to 5:00 on the afternoon of June 15.What’s more, there will be ten students taking part in it.I am sure that it will be a great success if you can give us some precious remarks.I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation.My telephone number is 44876655.I am looking forward to your reply.With best wishes,Yours,Li Hua
PracticesII 1.假如你叫李華, 你所在的學(xué)校擬在下個(gè)月舉辦美國(guó)電影節(jié)(American Film Festival)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給你的美國(guó)朋友Peter 寫一封短信,邀請(qǐng)他給學(xué)生做一次講座。信的主要內(nèi)容包括:
1.講座目的: 使學(xué)生對(duì)美國(guó)電影有所了解; 2.講座內(nèi)容: 簡(jiǎn)要介紹美國(guó)電影業(yè)的歷史; 3.講座時(shí)間:1小時(shí)30分鐘左右
注意:1.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),使結(jié)構(gòu)完整;
2.詞數(shù)150左右。
Dear Peter,Our school is planning to hold an American Film Festival next month.I'm writing to ask you to come and give a talk on American films and filmmaking industry.It will help us understand how the industry has developed into big business as it is today.This understanding should go a long way toward increasing their knowledge of American culture in general.Do you think one and a half hours will be enough?Please let me know as soon as possible so that I can make arrangements.
I'm looking forward to seeing you and enjoying the talk.
With best wishes!
Yours,Li Hua
第四篇:雅思寫作中如何表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)
今天上海環(huán)球雅思老師竇攀美為大家?guī)?lái)了雅思寫作中如何表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)的講解。
Expressing Thoughts and Opinions in Task-2 Essays
在雅思議論文中經(jīng)常被Native Speakers 用來(lái)表達(dá)看法與立場(chǎng)的英式短語(yǔ)&句型
在準(zhǔn)備雅思考試的學(xué)習(xí)者們往往更加重視對(duì)于單個(gè)單詞(individual words)的積累與使用,但是普遍并不重視對(duì)英語(yǔ)短語(yǔ)(phrases), 句型(sentence patterns)和固定搭配(collocations)的掌握與探究。以下短語(yǔ)和句型的表達(dá)會(huì)給考生的議論文帶來(lái)兩點(diǎn)的一筆。
lHave mixed views on…(人們)各持不同的看法
例句:It has around fifteen years since the Internet was first introduced into British households but people still have mixed views on whether it is a positive or negative influence on society.它在雅思考試中的常見反義短語(yǔ)和句型
Reach consensus on …(人們)對(duì)某事達(dá)成一致意見
例句:It will be difficult for people to reach a consensus on this issue.lbe a highly charged issue 是一個(gè)引起激辯的話題
Euthanasia(安樂死)is a highly charged issue in many European countries.它在雅思考試中的常見反義短語(yǔ)和句型
be a well-established fact(某事)是為人們所共知的事實(shí)
例句:It is a well-established fact that very young children learn best by rote.lThe tide of opinion is now running steadily against …目前的觀點(diǎn)普遍傾向于反對(duì)… 例句: The tide of opinion is now running steadily against the new traffic law.它在雅思考試中的常見近義詞短語(yǔ)和句型
The majority of people oppose…多數(shù)人反對(duì)…
例句:The majority of people oppose the proposed tax reform.lIt stands to reason that…(某現(xiàn)象)是符合常理的例句:It stands to reason that a child who is constantly criticized will grow up to have no self-confidence.它在雅思考試中的常見近義詞短語(yǔ)和句型
The concerns that …are well-justified.對(duì)于某事的擔(dān)心是完全合理的例句:The concerns that the new law will curtail NGO activities are well-justified.
第五篇:雅思寫作
翻開劍橋系列教材后面考官所給的范文評(píng)析,大家會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)考官的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)一般都從如下四個(gè)方面展開:內(nèi)容(content)、組織結(jié)構(gòu)(organization)、詞匯(vocabulary)和句式(sentence structure)。同時(shí),據(jù)筆者的長(zhǎng)期觀察,高分雅思作文無(wú)一例外地在這四方面有好的演繹才能獲得考官親睞?!昂玫淖魑拇蠖际窍嗨频模恍业淖魑膮s各有各的不幸?!毕旅妫P者將從以上四方面一一闡述烤鴨們寫作時(shí)存在的盲點(diǎn)所在并提出相應(yīng)的建議。
一、內(nèi)容(content):切中主題,自圓其說(shuō)
盲點(diǎn)1:無(wú)話可說(shuō)
這類考生在看到題目時(shí),最初的感覺是腦袋中一片空白。雅思作文題材廣泛,包括科技、教育、健康、環(huán)保、犯罪、文化傳統(tǒng)、時(shí)尚、體育運(yùn)動(dòng)、動(dòng)物保護(hù)等。而且由于文化差異以及學(xué)習(xí)工作的緣故,日常生活中考生極少接觸到這類話題,更不用說(shuō)對(duì)它有什么想法了。
盲點(diǎn)1擊破:四多原則
多看范文;多關(guān)注時(shí)事,觀察生活;多與人交流;多記錄自己的想法。比較極端的做法是花三天三夜沉浸在范文書當(dāng)中,分領(lǐng)域熟悉雅思考題及其觀點(diǎn)。當(dāng)感覺自己腦袋中涌現(xiàn)出無(wú)數(shù)ideas時(shí),關(guān)上書,寫出自己能夠想出來(lái)的各個(gè)領(lǐng)域的觀點(diǎn),如果某個(gè)領(lǐng) 域發(fā)生短路,翻開書重新閱讀,直至能夠?qū)懗鰜?lái)為止。
盲點(diǎn)2:千言萬(wàn)語(yǔ)
這類考生往往見多識(shí)廣,看到話題時(shí)感到倚馬千言。可是由于詞匯量和邏輯方面有所欠缺。往往面臨“滿腹的心里話不知怎么說(shuō)”的尷尬。
盲點(diǎn)2擊破:詞以類記原則
此類考生要分領(lǐng)域積累雅思寫作詞匯,如在寫肥胖問題時(shí),考生需要積累(obese, overweight, coronary heart disease, stroke, heredity, inheritance, junk food, carnivorous, excessive drinking and smoking, couch potato, diabetes, a balanced diet, vegetarian等。)
盲點(diǎn)3:標(biāo)新立異
這類考生認(rèn)為論點(diǎn)或論據(jù)越新穎越好,力求與眾不同。
盲點(diǎn)3擊破:自圓其說(shuō)原則
雅思考試畢竟是語(yǔ)言能力測(cè)試,詞匯、語(yǔ)法和句式才是測(cè)試重點(diǎn)。況且,考官閱卷數(shù)載,見多識(shí)廣,你的觀點(diǎn)很有可能已經(jīng)無(wú)法構(gòu)成他的興奮點(diǎn),所以我們講究論點(diǎn)論據(jù)
言之有理,能夠自圓其說(shuō)即可。
盲點(diǎn)4:真情流露
這類考生和“千言萬(wàn)語(yǔ)”型考生神似,唯一的不同便是他們英文表達(dá)暢通無(wú)阻,寫作時(shí)有“黃河之水,延綿不絕”之勢(shì)。但興奮之時(shí),有些忘乎所以,與主題漸行漸遠(yuǎn)。
盲點(diǎn)4擊破:切中主題原則
這類考生必須建立自己的一套邏輯框架,并嚴(yán)格執(zhí)行。如在寫argumentation類題型時(shí),全文四段:“第一段為背景介紹和提出論點(diǎn)段;第二段為己方觀點(diǎn)論證段;第三段為讓步段;第四段總結(jié)段。切忌任何與主題無(wú)關(guān)或相悖的雞肋出現(xiàn)。
二、組織結(jié)構(gòu)(organization):起承轉(zhuǎn)合,行云流水
盲點(diǎn)1:天馬行空
這類考生和“千言萬(wàn)語(yǔ)”型考生神似,寫作時(shí)缺乏自己的一套寫作框架。有時(shí),盡管有全文框架,段落框架又缺失,通常表現(xiàn)為主體段內(nèi)部的分論點(diǎn)或分論據(jù)存在邏輯上的重復(fù)或沖突。
盲點(diǎn)1擊破:起承轉(zhuǎn)合原則
除了段落之間應(yīng)存在“第一段(起)為背景介紹和提出論點(diǎn)段;第二段(承)為己方觀點(diǎn)論證段;第三段(轉(zhuǎn))為讓步段;第四段(合)總結(jié)段?!钡倪壿嬁蚣苤?,段落內(nèi)部每一句也需要有這樣的邏輯框架來(lái)約束,如讓步段中:“some people may argue that ?(起);because they maintain that ?。(承);However ,they are oversimplifying the situation, in fact ?.。(轉(zhuǎn));Therefore , I believe ?。(合)
盲點(diǎn)2:?jiǎn)尉溆坞x
這類烤鴨寫出來(lái)的句子與句子之間沒有連接詞,有時(shí)就算有,邏輯連詞也使用錯(cuò)誤。或者是標(biāo)點(diǎn)不注意。最常見使用錯(cuò)誤諸如on the other hand。它連接的是轉(zhuǎn)折,卻無(wú)數(shù)次被誤解成遞進(jìn)。
盲點(diǎn)2擊破:行云流水原則
考生應(yīng)準(zhǔn)確記憶并正確使用各種邏輯關(guān)系詞,力求做到行云流水,常見的邏輯連詞有:
因果關(guān)系:
因:As since due to owning to
果:hence thus therefore as a consequence as a result
表目的:thereby
舉例關(guān)系:Take for example, For instance, To illustrate, As an apt illustration ,對(duì)比關(guān)系:While ,whilst, whereas, by contrast。
讓步關(guān)系:despite ,in spite of , not with standing , nonetheless, even though,Provided that , if
三、詞匯(vocabulary):同義改寫,百花齊放
盲點(diǎn)1 : 遭遇生詞
大部分考生苦惱的地方莫過于此,寫作過程中無(wú)數(shù)次由于生詞的關(guān)系而短路。
盲點(diǎn)1擊破:同義改寫原則
其實(shí)考生對(duì)不認(rèn)識(shí)的詞完全可以paraphrase,如望子成龍,望女成鳳完全可以寫成:All parents expect their children to have a promising further。
注意:對(duì)于各個(gè)領(lǐng)域內(nèi)的專有名詞我們鼓勵(lì)大家履行詞以類記原則,畢竟只有語(yǔ)言水平較高的烤鴨才可能做到用簡(jiǎn)單的詞匯解釋難詞。如有同學(xué)在解釋寄生蟲(parasite)在他筆下成了” something that is very tiny and lives on my skin and sucks my blood without doing any work”!這樣的paraphrase 只能讓考官啼笑皆非。
盲點(diǎn)2:同義重現(xiàn)
如在discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the internet時(shí),有考生作文中曾出現(xiàn)了不下10次的advantages and disadvantages。這會(huì)讓考官出現(xiàn)極嚴(yán)重的審美疲勞,分?jǐn)?shù)自然不高。
盲點(diǎn)2擊破: 百花齊放原則
其實(shí)考生在平時(shí)的習(xí)作中應(yīng)注意近義詞、反義詞、衍生詞的積累,并不斷練習(xí)。如上面的advantages的同義詞為benefits gains merits pros等;disadvantages的同義詞有downsides ,weakness, drawbacks cons等。
盲點(diǎn)3:大詞連篇
很多考生認(rèn)為大詞生僻詞匯用得越多,得分就越高。
盲點(diǎn)3擊破:整體協(xié)調(diào)原則
看到劍橋系列教材大家會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn),考官給出的范文大詞生詞寥寥可數(shù),真正有說(shuō)服力的是你用的詞能夠準(zhǔn)確無(wú)誤的表達(dá)你的思想。試想一個(gè)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤連篇的考生盲目地使用各種生僻詞匯來(lái)堆砌文章,這無(wú)疑給考官造成一種“暴發(fā)戶”般的強(qiáng)烈視覺沖擊,最后只能適得其反。所以,用詞上我們講究與內(nèi)容以及句式結(jié)構(gòu)整體協(xié)調(diào)的原則。
三、句式(sentence structure):長(zhǎng)短結(jié)合,錯(cuò)落有致
盲點(diǎn)1:長(zhǎng)篇累牘
和用詞上的大詞連篇一樣,部分考生以能使用各種復(fù)雜的長(zhǎng)難句為榮。
盲點(diǎn)1擊破:長(zhǎng)短結(jié)合原則
事實(shí)上,如果大家有看劍橋后面的范文的話,會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)長(zhǎng)難句并不象絕大多數(shù)同學(xué)想象得那般高深。通常的情況是長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合使用,而且論點(diǎn)通常用短句,而論據(jù)則長(zhǎng)句居多。
盲點(diǎn)2:短小精悍
和長(zhǎng)篇累牘型考生相反的是短小精悍型考生,為了保險(xiǎn)起見,這類考生作文中充滿了簡(jiǎn)單的is/am/are的主系表和主謂賓句型。
盲點(diǎn)2擊破:靈活多變?cè)瓌t
這類考生如果能稍稍變得aggressive一些,他們將是考場(chǎng)上最大的“黑馬”。如以Parents and teachers often link children’s score to their academic ability這個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句為例,通過強(qiáng)調(diào)句型的包裝我們得到:
It is children’s score that parents and teachers often link to their academic ability rather than other qualifications。
通過倒裝句的包裝我們可以得到:
So important is children’s score that parents and teachers often link them to children’s academic ability。
通過插入語(yǔ)的包裝我們可以得到:
Scores , as is known to everyone ,are often linked to children’s academic ability by teachers and parents。
通過分詞短語(yǔ)的包裝我們可以得到:
Based on the conception that scores tells everything, parents and teachers often link children’s score to their academic ability。
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通過如此靈活的加工和包裝,你會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn),簡(jiǎn)單句經(jīng)過稍稍潤(rùn)色原來(lái)也可以如此光彩照人,這要比無(wú)數(shù)大詞生僻詞堆砌形成的長(zhǎng)難句更加贏得考官的青睞。
總之,掌握了如上原則,再加上持之以恒的練習(xí),考生一定能在Task 2中獲得自己滿意的分?jǐn)?shù)。(編