第一篇：中考英語作文的幫助與提高

1.關(guān)于學(xué)習(xí)英語的話題:

復(fù)習(xí)要點 Learn English 請你以“How to learn English well?”寫份演講稿80字左右.范文:Dear classmates:

We have been learning English for over 6

years and really love it.English is one of the most important langnages in the world.It’s necessary for us to learn it well.How do you study? Everyone learns English in different ways.I think the best way to improve your English is to improve your English skills.They are/include listening reading and writing.We should practice them every day.we should remember more words and grammar.Reading more English story books or novels Watching more English cartoon TVs or moves.Listening English tapes and repeating after the speaker.Second you are not afraid to make any mistakes you speak English as much as possible.Third you ask the teachers when you don’t understand any knowledge.It’s very good for you if you are interested in Egnlish.You will find studying Egnlish is interesting and helpful.One more thing remember“Practice makes perfect”!I hope everyone makes progress.Thanks!

2.衛(wèi)生健康飲食:健康一直是人們關(guān)注的問題我校要舉行以“關(guān)愛健康”為題的主題班會,請根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容談?wù)勀愕目捶?寫一篇80字左右的演講槁。

保持健康的重要性

保持健康的方法

保持健康的結(jié)論

(你的看法?)

1.多吃水果蔬菜保持飲食平衡避免含糖高脂肪高的食物2.多鍛煉健身強體;3.鄙棄不良習(xí)慣

(你的看法?)

How to stay our health /fit?

范文1: Dear boys and grils :

I’m talking about / Here is my advice about how to keep health/fit? As a middle shool studentfirst you’d better do more exercise such as playing ball games running swimming and jumping rope(繩子).Then you should pay attention to your diet or meals Don’t eat too much meat and suger but more vegetables and fruit.Third you need enough sleep or rest.Nextkeep yourself happy.As people often say smiling makes younger.Last you mustn’t drink wine or smoke.They are bad for your health.That is my advice.I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life.Thank youbye!

范文2:Dear boys and girls:

I’m talking about / Here is my advice about how to keep health/fit?Today many teenagers are unhealthybecause they do less exercise eat more junk foodisn’t enough time to sleep.If we keep fitwe must keep taking exercises every day.Eat lots of fruit and vegetables.Sleep for about 8 hours a night.Stay away from cigarettes/smoking/drugs毒品.Early to bed early to rise/get up.Breathe(呼吸)the fresh air in the open air.Keep happy every day.That is my advice.I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life.3.假如你叫李華,你校初三年級同學(xué)正在開展一場討論,主題是“初三學(xué)生要不要參加體育鍛煉”。請根據(jù)下面所提供的信息,用英語總結(jié)出討論情況。

提示:

70%的學(xué)生

30%的學(xué)生

應(yīng)該每天進行體育鍛煉,但不要時間過長

鍛煉浪費時間、使人疲勞

鍛煉能增強體質(zhì),保持健康

鍛煉以后很興奮,較長時間不能投入學(xué)習(xí)

鍛煉能使大腦休息,使學(xué)習(xí)效果更好

鍛煉中可能會受傷

要求:語句通順,句意連貫;詞數(shù)為80詞左右;發(fā)言稿的開頭已寫好,但不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear classmates:

I’m Li Hua After the discussion we found that 70% of the students think they should take all kinds of exercise every day but not spend too much time.They think exercise builds body and can keep them healthy.Sports also let them have a good rest so that their study will be more effective.On the other hand 30% students believe taking exercise is tiring and it’s a waste of time.They say that after having sports they are too excited for a long time to focus on their lessons.And it’s possible to be hurt while doing sports.4.環(huán)境問題:今天環(huán)境變得越來越糟糕環(huán)境問題影響著人們的工作學(xué)習(xí)生活等而我們的工作生活生產(chǎn)等又使環(huán)境污染越來越嚴重..........如何保護我們的環(huán)境?請以“ How to protect/save our environment/world? ”為題寫一篇短文。提示:存在問題:1.水污染越來越嚴重 2.砍伐森林嚴重 3.大氣污染嚴重 4.白色垃圾 等 要求 : 如何改善/保護環(huán)境?至少:3---4個方面, 80字左右的。

范文: How to protect/save our environment/world?

The environmental pollution is worse and worse /more and more seriously tod

ay.Water is polluted we have no clean water to drink Many trees are cutting down some animals is getting less and less.Some factories is poring dirty air in the sky the population is

increasing faster and faster resources is getting less and less?etc.Not only does it affect our lives and health it also has a great affection in the future.people's health has been greatly affected by air noise and water pollution.Many people died of diseases.In order to live a better life we need protect our world.We should n’t throw away rubbish everywhere.We want to recycle reduce reuse things.Don’t waste things This saves money and reduces pollution.Use things for as long as possible.We don’t use plastic bags.We mus plant more trees and stop the people cutting them.We hope our world is more and more beautiful.5.關(guān)于“人口問題 POPULATION ”

6.關(guān)于中學(xué)生使用手機的優(yōu)缺點,談?wù)勀愕目捶?見2008年初中畢業(yè)寫作專題復(fù)習(xí))。范文:略

7.介紹自己的興趣余愛好(單元四)。

8.春節(jié)習(xí)俗與計劃,如何過2009年的春節(jié),假如你是LINGLING給外國朋友JHON發(fā)一份電子郵件。

The spring Festival

Dear Jhon :

The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China.It is on January 1st according to the Chinese lunar calendar(中國的農(nóng)歷).It’s China’s New Year’s Day.So usually a month before the festival people begin to buy food clothes and decorations(裝飾)for houses.About a week before the festival housewives are busy preparing the new year dinner.And they will do a lot of washing and cleaning in the houses.People who are far away on business are hurrying to return home for the new year’s family reunion(團聚).On New Year Eve each family will gather tighter eating talking and watching TV for almost the whole night.And there will be some interesting programmes on TV.The children are the happiest of all because they can get presents from parents or grandparents.On Lunar New Year’s Day after getting up people will eat dumplings.When they meet their neighbours or friends they’ll say: “Happy New Year!”

I am ready to spend with together my family on the Spring Festival I’am going to see my grandparents and friengs.I ’m going to Diseyland in HONGKONG with my parents I will revise lessinos do exercise every day help the old and ch

ildren.Wellcom to China.Waiting for your e-mail Yours

Lingling

注意:要求要理解背下,能默寫它們!

Happy new year to everyone!

(Mr Yin 2008.12 30)

(從健康飲食,衛(wèi)生習(xí)慣,加強鍛煉等方面:以“How to keep healthy ?”寫一篇 80 字左右的作文)

Health is very important to people.Our health depends on our eating and living habits.In my opinion the kinds of food that we eat are really important so we should be careful while choosing our food.We should eat neither too much sugar chocolate candy or cakes nor junk food like food from KFC or McDonald.Fresh vegetables fruit some meat rice ad noodles are healthy food.Second we should form good eating habits.Three regular meals a day are necessary.We should only eat when we are hungry.Never eat between meals or eat too much at a time./at a meal.Drinking enough water every day and taking enough exercise are needed too.

第二篇：提高中考英語作文復(fù)習(xí)

中考英語作文復(fù)習(xí)：怎樣才能寫出一篇優(yōu)秀作文？

一、寫作要點：

“一審”即審題?！岸憽奔戳芯V?！叭B”即連句成文?！八母摹奔葱薷臐櫳摹忣}：做到三審：

體裁看清楚題目要求，讀懂題目所表達的含義，抓住要點，注意文體是什么 時態(tài)、人稱如果是日記和故事，宜采用過去時態(tài)；介之類的，宜采用現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。列綱：做到三思

詞匯—>短語—>句式

列個提綱，考慮所要選用的單詞、詞組、句型，要能根據(jù)自己的英語水平，盡量揚長避短，避難就易。遇到想不起的詞、句時，就用同（近）義詞或同義句代替，不要使用沒有把握的詞句，并且要綜合考慮所涉及到的情景、場合，語言要地道。

連句成文

根據(jù)短文的內(nèi)容要求，確定先寫什么，后寫什么，按照表述內(nèi)容的情節(jié)發(fā)展和實際需要，重新排列組合已寫成的 句子，劃分必要的段落，一般分成三段。但要注意句式的靈活運用，長、短句，簡單句，復(fù)合句要搭配運用。

文章分3段：

綜述：概括性強，最多2句話引入主題； 正文——主要內(nèi)容：層次性強，一定要有過渡型連接詞。最多展開3個方面，每個方面最多2句話； 結(jié)尾：緊扣主題，2句話內(nèi)結(jié)束，盡量升華。

修改潤色全文做到三查

要點、拼寫、語法是否連貫：

看全文符不符合題目要求，行文是否流暢，有沒有遺漏要點；語法是不是正確，包括單詞的拼寫、大小寫、標點符號、時態(tài)、語態(tài)、單復(fù)數(shù)、主謂一致、冠詞等。

開頭用語：

這幾年的南寧中考題開頭語大都給出，可以略記。但能住最好了。目前請大家先背《決勝新中考作文手冊》P18后的描寫文和應(yīng)用文的范文（先讀熟，理解其大意，然后再自己默寫出來喲?。。?。

關(guān)于上下文銜接連貫句子用詞的問題：

1)表層次

first, firstly, second, secondly, third,thirdly, what is more, last, also, and then, next,besides，At first;at last;in the end…finallythen/next/after that…

On one hand....on the other hand，when/while/as soon as/not… until…

2)表轉(zhuǎn)折；but, however, though, although, after all, in spite of，fortunately，unfortunately，at the same time…

3)表遞近： besides,what`s more

4)因果 because, so, because of, thanks to, since, owing to, as a result(of),5)例證 for example,such as

6)表示利弊的：be good/bad for sb.;be harmful to sb.;do harm to sb.;… affect;have

an effect on sb.;

7）表示喜愛的：love/like/enjoy…;be fond of…;be interested in…;show great interest in…;lose oneself in…;put one’s heart into…;

8)總結(jié) As I see, As for me，As we all know, in general, generally speaking, I think..., in fact ,in a word,in short,.....二、各類作文常用框架（這里僅作參考，同學(xué)們可以多背優(yōu)秀范文）

1、話題作文，演講采用：總-分-總

It’s adj for us to…..On the one hand,…On the other hand,…

What’s more,…

In a word,/In short,….2、寫信，建議用： 總-分-總

I’m adj to hear that you… Here is some advice for you.Firstly,….Secondly,….Finally,….In a word,…If you…, you will…

習(xí)作點評 ：

請給一家學(xué)校雜志寫一篇文章，告訴讀者你的其中一個愛好的情況： 要點：

1、你的愛好是什么？

2、你的愛好的時間、你是怎么對這個愛好感興趣的；

3、愛好的原因；

4、未來你的希望和計劃。

寫作要求：

1.根據(jù)所提供的內(nèi)容，適當拓展想象空間，靈活地將提供的信息體現(xiàn)在文章中。

2.條理清楚，語句通順，書寫清晰、規(guī)范。3.詞數(shù)60-80.[學(xué)生習(xí)作A]

My hobby is read books.When I was seven years old.I became interested in reading books.I like reading books because there are a lot of useful things in books.I can learn a lot of knowledge from books.Books also can teach me how to be a good person.Books even can solve many problems for me.I will read more good books to improve myself.錯點：①改為reading books，動詞作表語時應(yīng)該用動名詞。

②also的位置應(yīng)放在can之后。

[點評]：檔次5-6分。

①要點不全，漏掉最后一個要點。②句子基本無誤，能正確傳遞信息給讀者但文章不流暢，句子與句子之間過渡不自然，給讀者感覺在回答上述問題。③有少量錯誤。

[學(xué)生習(xí)作B]

I always felt they weren’t enough.interesting things all over the world.I read books, I can enjoy the beautiful I can improve my writing.I want to be a writer in the①開門見山、點題。

②真情流露，理由充分。

③文中下劃線連詞使用得恰當，使文章過渡自然、④巧妙使用句型以表決心。

[點評]：檔次9-10分。

①清楚表達寫作目的，要點齊全。

②語言表達靈活多樣，字里行間流露出真情實感，文章有感染力。

③恰當使用連詞和從句，語言流暢，且無錯誤，是一 篇高質(zhì)量的作文。

高分突破

①文體：記敘文。

②要點：what → when →how → why → hope and plan for the future.③時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時，一般過去時，一般將來時的自然變化。

三、提高寫作的方法

1、造句（平時多練習(xí)用詞造句）

2、摘錄好句（平時背范文）、積累名言諺語（能用名言的地方可巧用，給文章增色）附一些諺語：

有關(guān)學(xué)習(xí)的：

A good beginning is half done.良好的開端是成功的一半。

An hour in the morning is worth two in the evening.一日之計在于晨。

Doing is better than saying.與其掛在嘴上，不如落實在行動上。

Every minute counts.分秒必爭。

Easier said than done.說得容易，做得難。

Failure is the mother of success.失敗是成功之母。

It is never too old to learn.活到老，學(xué)到老。

Never say die.永不言敗。

No pains, no gains.沒有付出就沒有收獲。

Nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind to it.世上無難事，只怕有心人。

Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者事竟成。

有關(guān)健康的：

An apple a day keeps the doctor away.一天一蘋果，不用請醫(yī)生。

Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.早睡早起身體好。

Health is better than wealth.健康勝過財富。

Health is happiness.健康就是幸福。

3、句型轉(zhuǎn)換，句式多樣性如：

Tom is a student.He is 16 years old.He likes running

Tom, a 16-year-old student, likes running.4.多使用短語如：

I got up quickly.I got up as quickly as possible.He studies English well.He is good at English.He does well in English.5、學(xué)會擴寫如：

The girl likes reading.The pretty girl likes reading novels.The pretty girl likes reading novels carefully.The pretty girl who I talked to just now likes reading novels carefully.文章連貫、銜接上下文練習(xí)：

In my life, I will thank my mother forever.My mother is busy everyday.she does housework and works hard in the factory.I am in trouble, she always encourages me to overcome difficulties.I am ill, she looks after me carefully.I will thank my mother for giving me life.I willthank her for helping me.I love my mother very much.使用銜接詞以后看看讀起來是不是好很多了？？？

In my life, I will thank my mother forever.My mother is busy everyday.(But)she does housework and works hard in the factory.(When)I am in trouble, she always encourages me to overcome difficulties.(When)I am ill, she looks after me carefully.(In a word), I will(not only)thank my mother for giving me life,(but also)thank her for helping me.(So)I love my mother very much.四、卷面、書寫要注意?。?/p>

建議平時作業(yè)要書寫規(guī)范，有可能還可以專門練習(xí)書寫喲，很多示范學(xué)校中考前的最后一個月都練習(xí)書法的，顯然書寫的重要性不能忽略。

第三篇：與幫助他人有關(guān)的英語作文

英語范文

作文題：1.為什么幫助別人，什么時候？ 2.如何幫助別人？列舉3件具體的的事例。如幫助醫(yī)院里的孩子，清潔街道等等。3.字數(shù)80次左右

第四篇：中考英語作文輔導(dǎo)與

初中英語寫作：

10字原則：結(jié)構(gòu)+要點+邏輯+語法+亮點

初中英語作文分為四等。一等文：13-15分；二等文：9-12分；三等文：5-8分；四等文：0-4分

結(jié)構(gòu)：中考最流行的結(jié)構(gòu)就是三段式，深受各地區(qū)中考英語寫作閱卷老師的喜愛。這種結(jié)構(gòu)十分清晰：“觀點——要點——總結(jié)”讓人一目了然。三段式的第一段：簡單明了，開門見山。第二段：分2-3點說明論點，各論點里舉出詳細例子。第三段：經(jīng)過第二段的論證，可以得出結(jié)論。但請注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升華。也可以提出希望和建議等要點：因為中考英語寫作一般會給出幾個要點，要求必須在文章中有所體現(xiàn)。文章寫的再好，只要缺少要點就會扣分。所以要點，也就是文章的第二段內(nèi)容，要做到全，圍繞中心。邏輯：這里的邏輯實際指的就是邏輯詞。最常用的就是表示遞進的，轉(zhuǎn)折的，總結(jié)的邏輯詞等。遞進：除了first, second, third, finally 等還可以使用高級點的，如first of all(首先)，in addition, what's more, moreover(都是另外的意思)，in a word, all in all（表示總結(jié)的）。轉(zhuǎn)折：but, yet, however等。真正有經(jīng)驗的閱卷老師會很注意這些邏輯連接詞，因為這些詞體現(xiàn)了這個文章的思路。

語法：其他幾點都不是硬性的要求，不那樣做不能說是錯，只能說是不好，但是語法卻是硬性的。如，單詞的使用，時態(tài)等。

亮點：當我們將前八個字都做得很完美的時候也只能得到一個二等文的上。要想得到一等文，最后兩個字，亮點至關(guān)重要。高級一點的詞匯，詞組，句型便是我們得到一等文的最有力的絕招。所以，以后寫英語作文要養(yǎng)成一般詞匯限量用的好習(xí)慣。

開頭經(jīng)典句子

1.不用說…… It goes without saying that …

= It is obvious that ….2.在各種……之中，…… Among various kinds of …, … /= Of all the …, …

3.就我的看法……；我認為……In my opinion, …

= To my mind, ….= As far as I am concerned, …

= I am of the opinion that ….4.隨著人口的增加…… With the increase/growth of the population, …

隨著科技的進步…… With the advance of science and technology, …

5.……是必要的 It is necessary(for sb.)to do / that …

…… 是重要的 It is important/essential(for sb.)to do / that …

…… 是適當?shù)?It is proper(for sb.)to do / that …

……是緊急的 It is urgent(for sb.)to do / that …

6.狀語從句

A)如果你不……，你就會…… If you don’t..., you’ll...B)如此 ……，以至于…… so … that …

C)每當我聽到……我就忍不住感到興奮。Whenever I hear …, I cannot but feel excited.每當我做……我就忍不住感到悲傷。Whenever I do …, I cannot but feel sad.每當我想到……我就忍不住感到緊張。Whenever I think of …, I cannot but feel nervous.每當我遭遇……我就忍不住感到害怕。Whenever I meet with …, I cannot but feel frightened.每當我看到……我就忍不住感到驚訝。Whenever I see …, I cannot but feel surprised.7.賓語從句

我認為，…… / 我認為……不 I think / I don’t think that …

我想知道是否…… I wonder whether …

8.Since +過去式, 現(xiàn)在完成式.9.It’s adj for sb to do 做…對某人來說…

10..… so … that … 如此… 以至于…

… too … to do 太… 而不能…

such … that … 如此… 以至于…

11.not…until… 直到…才…

12.The reason why + 句子 is that + 句子 … 的原因是…

13.It is said that + 句子據(jù)說…

It is reported that + 句子據(jù)報道…

14.There is no doubt that + 句子毫無疑問…

15.There is no need to do沒必要做…

16.There is no point in doing 做某事毫無意義

17.It is my great pleasure to hear from you 很榮幸接到你的來信(回信開頭句)

18.It is highly suggested that you should(not)… 我覺得你應(yīng)該…..19.some people(think, believe)……while others(think, believe)一些人（認為）…而另一些人（認為）

20.…draw public attention/arouse wide public concern 引起廣泛關(guān)注

(Aroused)a heated discussion 引起熱烈的討論

21.As an old saying goes 正如一句老話說的…

As the proverb goes 正如諺語所說…

22.Views on …vary from person to person 對于…的觀點因人而異

23.We ' re often told that......But is this really the case ?

24.People used to......however , things are quite different today.過去，人們習(xí)慣......但,今天的情況有很大的不同。

25.some people think that......Others believe that the opposite is true.There is probably some truth in both sides．But we must realize that......一些人認為......另一些人持相反意見。也許雙方的觀點都有一定道理。但是我們必須認識到......26.Recognizing a problem is the first step in finding a solution.認識到問題是找到解決辦法的第一步。

27.關(guān)于……人們有不同的觀點。一些人認為……

There are different opinions among people as to ____.Some people suggest that ____.28.俗話說（常言道）……，它是我們前輩的經(jīng)歷，但是，即使在今天，它在許多場合仍然適用。

There is an old saying______.Its the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in many cases even today.29.現(xiàn)在，……，它們給我們的日常生活帶來了許多危害。首先，……；其次，……。更為

糟糕的是……。

Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life.First, ____ Second,____.What makes things worse is that______.30.現(xiàn)在，……很普遍，許多人喜歡……，因為……，另外（而且）……。

Nowadays，it is common to ______.Many people like ______ because ______.Besides，______.31.任何事物都是有兩面性，……也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。

Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception，it has both advantages and disadvantages.32.關(guān)于……人們的觀點各不相同，一些人認為（說）……，在他們看來，……

People’s opinions about ______ vary from person to person.Some people say that ______.To them,_____.33.…已成為人的關(guān)注的熱門話題，特別是在年青人當中，將引發(fā)激烈的辯論。

______ has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young andheated debates are right on their way.34…在我們的日常生活中起著越來越重要的作用它給我們帶來了許多好處，但同時也引發(fā)一些嚴重的問題。

______has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it hasbrought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well

35.人類正面臨著一個嚴重的問題…，這個問題變得越來越嚴重。

Man is now facing a big problem ______ which is becoming more and more serious.36.根據(jù)圖表/數(shù)字/統(tǒng)計數(shù)字/表格中的百分比/圖表/條形圖/成形圖可以看出…。很顯然…，但是為什么呢？

According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph，it can be seen that()while.Obviously，______，but why?

37.“如今，人們普遍認為...,但是我懷疑...。

Nowadays，it is generally/commonly believed that..., but I wonder that...38.“如同硬幣的正反面，...也有積極的一面和消極的一面。

Like a coin has two sides, there is a positive aspect and a negative aspect to...39.“近來，...的問題已經(jīng)成為人們注目的焦點。”

Currently, the issue of...has been brought to public attention.40.“隨著...的快速增長，...在日常生活中已經(jīng)變得越來越重要。

Along with the rapid growth of...,...has become increasingly important in our daily life.41.“由汽車(或xx）引起的空氣和噪音污染對我們的健康造成了危害。”

Air pollution and noise pollution caused by automobiles do harm to our health.42.We ' re often told that......But is this really the case ?

我們經(jīng)常被告知......但事實真是這樣嗎？

43..People used to......however , things are quite different today.過去，人們習(xí)慣......但,今天的情況有很大的不同。

第五篇：初中生如何提高中考英語作文不是個難題

標題：初中生如何提高中考英語作文不是個難題

關(guān)鍵詞：如何提高中考英語作文

導(dǎo)讀：現(xiàn)在好像有很多同學(xué)都對英語作文有恐懼感，不少人都問如何提高中考英語作文才好，其實我認為這個問題是很好解決的。我們下面就為大家提供了一些成語素材，都是要記憶的。

1.大開眼界 open one's eyes;broaden one's horizon;be an eye-opener

2.國泰民安 The country flourishes and people live in peace

3.過猶不及 going too far is as bad as not going far enough;beyond is as wrong as falling short;too much is as bad as too little

4.功夫不負有心人 Everything comes to him who waits.5.好了傷疤忘了疼 once on shore, one prays no more

6.好事不出門惡事傳千里 Good news never goes beyond the gate, while bad news spread far and wide.7.和氣生財 Harmony brings wealth.8.活到老學(xué)到老 One is never too old to learn.9.既往不咎 let bygones be bygones

10.金無足赤人無完人 Gold can't be pure and man can't be perfect.11.金玉滿堂 Treasures fill the home.12.腳踏實地 be down-to-earth

13.腳踩兩只船 sit on the fence

14.君子之交淡如水 the friendship between gentlemen is as pure as crystal;a hedge between keeps friendship green

15.老生常談 cut and dried

16.禮尚往來 Courtesy calls for reciprocity.17.留得青山在不怕沒柴燒 Where there is life, there is hope.更多學(xué)習(xí)資料請見美聯(lián)英語學(xué)習(xí)網(wǎng)。