作文素材庫(kù)---導(dǎo)致城市龐大的原因及后果雅思

第一篇：作文素材庫(kù)---導(dǎo)致城市龐大的原因及后果雅思

導(dǎo)致城市龐大的原因及后果雅思范文：

Since cities have changed a lot, the size of the cities has grown enormously.Discuss the causes and consequence of the enormous size of cities.Nowadays, the maps of cities are updated frequently.With the development of city, more and more suburbs

become parts of the city.When the cities in the world are amplifying constantly, people discuss the topic hotly, the causes and consequence of the enormous cities.Different people have different answers by their respective views.In my opinion, the evolution of society and the development of economy result in the growth of the vast size of cities.Since the number of population in every city is increasing continually, people need a large amount of space to live in.With the progress of the technology, the output of crops rises sharply.Fewer and fewer farmers are required, as a result, more and more villages urbanize.The growth of the cities brings us many huge changes.There are more job opportunities in the cities.For instance, China will hold the Olympic Games in Beijing in 2008.The government is amplifying the size of Beijing to build new gyms in order to hold it excellently.Obviously, people in the cities could gain a lot of new jobs.Of course, the enormous size of cities also has bad effects.Pollution is becoming more and more serious all over the world with the amplification of the cities.For example, the poisonous gas sent off by factories and automobiles has made the air unhealthy for people to breathe.Water waste keeps pouring into rivers and lakes;as a result, many water species are dying out.Furthermore, more people the city have, more rubbish we can find.In a word, since each coin has two sides, we should be acquainted clearly with the reasons why the size of the cities has grown enormously and what it will bring us.Thus, we could make full use of the positive effects and overcome the negative effects.（上海新東方名師張馳新）

第二篇：雅思寫作精選：導(dǎo)致城市龐大的原因及后果

雅思寫作雅思托福技巧雅思寫作-美聯(lián)國(guó)際教育雅思寫作范文精選：導(dǎo)致城市龐大的原因及后果

2014-01-16 類別：雅思口語(yǔ)來(lái)源：enguo責(zé)編：meten

雅思寫作通常是中國(guó)考生的弱項(xiàng)，只有通過(guò)在日常生活中多讀些范文，了解雅思寫作中的邏輯思維，才能得到更好的提高。

作文范文：Since cities have changed a lot, the size of the cities has grown enormously.Discuss the causes and consequence of the enormous size of citiesNowadays, the maps of cities are updated frequently.With the development of city, more and more suburbs become parts of the city.When the cities in the world are amplifying constantly, people discuss the topic hotly, the causes and consequence of the enormous cities.Different people have different answers by their respective views.In my opinion, the evolution of society and the development of

economy result in the growth of the vast size of cities.Since the number of population in every city is increasing continually, people need a large

amount of space to live in.With the progress of the technology, the output of crops rises sharply.Fewer and fewer farmers are required, as a result, more and more villages urbanize.The growth of the cities brings us many huge changes.There are more job opportunities in the cities.For instance, China will hold the Olympic Games in Beijing in 2008.The government is amplifying

雅思寫作雅思托福技巧雅思寫作-美聯(lián)國(guó)際教育 the size of Beijing to build new gyms in order to hold it excellently.Obviously, people in the cities could gain a lot of new jobs.Of course, the enormous size of cities also has bad effects.Pollution is becoming more and more serious all over the world with the amplification of the cities.For example, the poisonous gas sent off by factories and

automobiles has made the air unhealthy for people to breathe.Water waste keeps pouring into rivers and lakes;as a result, many water species are dying out.Furthermore, more people the city have, more rubbish we can find.In a word, since each coin has two sides, we should be acquainted

clearly with the reasons why the size of the cities has grown enormously and what it will bring us.Thus, we could make full use of the positive effects and overcome the negative effects.

第三篇：雅思作文素材庫(kù)---應(yīng)該大力發(fā)展旅游業(yè)嗎

應(yīng)該大力發(fā)展旅游業(yè)嗎？

Is it necessary to develop tourism?

Arguments

1.It is necessary to develop the tourist trade, for it contributes a lot to increasing understanding between nations.2.As the saying goes, “Seeing is believing.” Only a trip to an unfamiliar land can help us understand the people and culture there.3.Since tourism helps increase understanding between people, it will finally wipe out prejudice against other nations, and make the world a more peaceful one.4.Tourism contributes significantly to many countries' GNP(Gross National Product).The economy of some nations is based on the tourist industry.5.Tourism helps develop a nation's commerce because tourists are most likely to buy souvenirs wherever they go.6.Tourism provides jobs for many people and helps solve or ease the social problem of unemployment.7.Tourism helps accelerate a city's construction and its embellishment.8.Contact with tourists from 123r widens the horizon of the local people.9.The tourist trade gives people a chance to enjoy the beautiful scenery of the word and the wonders of manki12

10.Tourism will help people learn about different cultures of the world.Counter-arguments

1.Tourism cannot increase understanding between nations because tourists are often trapped in big hotels and only gaze at the natives from a distance.2.Tourism does not wipe out prejudice, but leads to the persistence of national stereotypes because when travelling, you notice only characteristics which confirm your preconceptions.3.It is true that foreign friends can make people understand stereotypes are absurd and harnffnl, but the tourist trade prevents people from making foreign friends.4.Since tourists do not have time to mix with the local people, they cannot have a full view of the local culture.5.Tourism makes some parts of the word too crowded a place to live in.6.Tourism creates pollution and has destroyed many beautiful scenic spots.7.Tourists cannot have a full enjoyment of the beautiful scenery because the places they visit are restricted by organizers.8.As the saying goes, “Travel makes a wise man better, but a fool worse.”

9.Contact with and assimilation~ of other cultures will reduce the uniqueness of one's own culture and make the world less colourful than before.

第四篇：6個(gè)雅思寫作大作文失分原因

6個(gè)雅思寫作大作文失分原因對(duì)于雅思寫作大作文而言，很多考生并不了解為什么會(huì)造成雅思寫作大作文失分，為此青島圣約翰教學(xué)總監(jiān)特收集整理雅思寫作大作文十分原因介紹，分享給大家，希望對(duì)大家有所幫助，文中觀點(diǎn)僅供參考。雅思寫作大作文失分原因1：

開頭冗長(zhǎng)，繞來(lái)繞去，不知所云，擺一堆華麗而沒(méi)有實(shí)質(zhì)內(nèi)容的句子，然后突然寫出自己的觀點(diǎn)。雅思寫作大作文失分原因2：

開頭和主體段的第一段混為一談。有同學(xué)會(huì)直接寫“我同意??觀點(diǎn)因?yàn)??”一句話給出觀點(diǎn)，然后就直接開始寫第一點(diǎn)原因。這樣的文章結(jié)構(gòu)不清晰，在閱卷人眼中馬上被打上結(jié)構(gòu)不清的標(biāo)簽，如果再犯兩個(gè)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，那就別想翻身了。雅思寫作大作文失分原因3：

主體沒(méi)有分段，把所有的原因糅合在一起，讓讀者去自己理清條理。英語(yǔ)和中文不一樣。英語(yǔ)是作者責(zé)任制(writer-responsible),中文是讀者責(zé)任制(reader-responsible)。也就是說(shuō)寫英文，作者需要保證讀者能明白自己寫的是什么，如果讀者不明白，那就是你作者的責(zé)任。而在中文中則正好相反，我想怎么寫就怎么寫，讀不懂是你讀者的問(wèn)題。雅思寫作大作文失分原因4：

主體段每段中沒(méi)有主題句(topic sentence)，或者一個(gè)明顯的主題意思。我經(jīng)?？吹接腥苏f(shuō)了一堆例子，卻不明白他要這些例子說(shuō)明什么。其實(shí)，只要在每個(gè)段落前加一個(gè)很簡(jiǎn)短的句子，告訴別人你在說(shuō)什么，就會(huì)使文章變得很清楚。雅思寫作大作文失分原因5：

主體段有主題句，但是沒(méi)有對(duì)主題句進(jìn)行進(jìn)一步解釋，而是直接擺例子，這樣會(huì)顯得文章非常的唐突。雅思寫作大作文失分原因6：

文章有開頭，但是在開頭作者沒(méi)有給出觀點(diǎn)，而是在結(jié)尾給出觀點(diǎn)。對(duì)于這種寫法，也有爭(zhēng)議，講英語(yǔ)的人也在爭(zhēng)論是不是世界上所有的人都應(yīng)該按照英語(yǔ)的文體寫。一般的結(jié)論是認(rèn)為，這取決于你的讀者，如果你的讀者是英語(yǔ)為母語(yǔ)的人，那么還是按照他們的習(xí)慣寫為好，不要追求什么神秘感，一定要等到最后才給出觀點(diǎn)。對(duì)于托福雅思的作文，還是規(guī)矩點(diǎn)比較好。對(duì)于其他的文章看老師的要求，我的老師就要求我在寫某種論文的時(shí)候不要在開頭給出觀點(diǎn)，而是在結(jié)尾提出觀點(diǎn)。青島新托福培訓(xùn)學(xué)校青島新托福青島新托福培訓(xùn)青島雅思培訓(xùn)青島雅思青島托福青島學(xué)雅思青島雅思培訓(xùn)學(xué)校青島最好雅思

第五篇：雅思大作文點(diǎn)評(píng) 不夠尊重老人的原因

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雅思大作文點(diǎn)評(píng):不夠尊重老人的原因

There is not enough respect for the elderly people.What are the causes and what problems does this phenomenon create?There is a growing tendency nowadays for some people to regard the elderly people as a troublesome group.Gradually, this leads to not revere（這是啥意思？！lead to 后面接 doing！）the elderly people in diverse conditions.Yet in my opinion, instead of contempting every one should treat them as our treasure（這句話本身就有點(diǎn)變扭，感覺很怪?。?But, what causes the promble? Here i give two major reasons（這句太廢話了，把兩個(gè)理由總結(jié)一下，寫出來(lái)會(huì)比較好）.On the one hand, some elder people（第一段用的是 elderly people，這里怎么又變了？?。﹍ive without any income.In addition, they are weak even some of them cannot look after themselves（這分明是兩個(gè)句子，怎么可以寫在一起?。?Thus, they have to be given a hand.A recent statistics（statistics 這里好像應(yīng)該是復(fù)數(shù)吧）shows that 90 percent of the elderly people need to provide（應(yīng)該是被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)吧）the allowance and nurses.It costs 80 billions（billion 不可數(shù)的?。﹜uan every year.So the elderly people become a burden to the society.On the other hand ,the young are to blame.Their consciousness of respecting the elderly people should be promoted.What is worse, they don't regard anyone.Nevertheness（應(yīng)該是 nevertheless）, for the above reasons, we also can take immediate and specific measures to cope with them.Because no one can deny the fact that a person's moral(應(yīng)該是 morality 吧)is the most important aspect of the society.If we lose it,I（人稱不要變來(lái)變?nèi)ィヽan't image,（這里逗號(hào)多余）what may happen to our society.How terrible it is!As is known to everyone, we are all getting old.But, we may not being esteemed.A yeasty world is proceeding.To sum up ,the reasons and problems for respecting the elderly people are many.I have simply pointed out some of the more obvious ones.However, it is certain that if the whole of society pays more attention to the solicitude of the elderly people, the issue will not being a trouble again.語(yǔ)言分析：

1.整篇文章沒(méi)有什么精彩的長(zhǎng)句或復(fù)雜句，所以不太可能上 7 分；

2.低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤或者明顯錯(cuò)誤（紅色部分）很多，所以也就 4-5 分的水平；

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3.錯(cuò)誤歲多，但不影響理解，還是能夠看得懂作者的觀點(diǎn)，所以應(yīng)該是 5 分的水平。

結(jié)構(gòu)分析：這篇文章看似 4 段論的寫法，但是結(jié)構(gòu)并不是很清晰！特別是第 2 段，用了 on the one hand,...On the other hand,...給人感覺應(yīng)該是兩個(gè)分論點(diǎn)，那么最好還是寫成兩段比較好。雖然作者使用了一些連接詞，如 nevertheless, thus, in addition 等，但是由于句子本身的意思寫的不好，所以這些連接詞只是形式上不錯(cuò)，細(xì)看意思并不覺得用得有多好。

內(nèi)容分析：這個(gè)是作者比較欠缺的一部分！可能也是受到英語(yǔ)水平的影響，所寫的內(nèi)容都是很片面的，沒(méi)有對(duì)自己的觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行深入的分析，可以說(shuō)分析得根本就不夠，給人感覺根本沒(méi)寫出什么東西！其實(shí)，雅思作文并一定要想出多少分論點(diǎn)（當(dāng)然分論點(diǎn)多的話，可以根據(jù)自己的能力和偏好選幾個(gè)自己最能發(fā)揮的寫），關(guān)鍵還是要看對(duì)分論點(diǎn)的證明，即 supporting sentences 的質(zhì)量。

總評(píng)：5 分。作者需在句型的正確性上花更多的時(shí)間，一些基本的語(yǔ)態(tài)似乎都掌握得不太好！