第一篇:雅思小作文寫作技巧:句式變化@皇家留學
雅思小作文寫作技巧:句式變化
句型的豐富度是雅思寫作技巧中非常重要的點,而高分的雅思小作文寫作范文往往也是有著豐富的句型搭配和詞匯運用,下面天道小編就通過實例來講解一下如果在雅思小作文寫作中運用更豐富的句型技巧。雅思小作文主體部分是對圖表進行重點描述的部分,需要大家在備考的時候加以重視。下面為大家整理的是關(guān)于雅思小作文寫作中不同表達方法的總結(jié),非常詳細,對比鮮明,大家一起來看看詳細內(nèi)容吧。一般雅思小作文題目中就有明確要求在文中對所給數(shù)據(jù)進行分析比較,因此要想將主體段完成好肯定少不了“對比,比較,連接”等連接詞以及語句,如while, however, in spite of, in stark contrast等連詞,也包括類似it is clear that等插入語。
當然為了拿到高分,除了一些常用的搭配與表達之外,更地道或是更高級的表示也是必須要掌握的,主體段要想寫的精彩,除了各式用詞之外,也絕對離不開句式的搭配運用,簡單的“淡妝”相信是難不倒考生的,但也必須注意結(jié)合“濃妝”,適當加入高級的表示方法。
如:中國的出生率從1920年至1935年上升,之后下降到1940年的5%左右。運用不同級別的詞匯句式即可寫出如下3種表達方式:
“淡妝”級別:China’s birth rate rose from 1920 to 1935.It then decreased to 1940 at about 5%.(用詞簡單,直接翻譯的簡單句)
“濃抹”級別:China’s birth rate rose from around 10 percent in 1920 to 15 percent in 1935, and then it fell sharply to somewhere at the vicinity of 5 percent in 1940.(用詞調(diào)整的并列句)
考官提供范文中也有類似表達:In spite of some fluctuations in the expected percentages, the proportion of older people will probably continue to increase in the next two decades in the three countries.(劍5 P162 Model Answer)
“煙熏妝”級別:Increasing from approximately 10 percent in 1920 to 15 percent in 1935, China’s birth rate then plunged to a low of just 5 percent in 1940.(首先導入分詞伴隨代替常規(guī)的China’s birth rate開頭,且用詞更高深);
十分建議各位考生可根據(jù)自己的語言功底適當添加此類級別的句子,以增加新鮮感和色彩,從而提高分數(shù)。
當然此類句式也能時常在考官提供的范文中找到:The first potential location is outside the town itself, and is sited just off themain road to the town of Hindon, lying 12 kms to the north-west.(劍5 P166 Model Answer)
從就可以看出來,雅思小作文主體部分的寫作方法是有很多種的,但是復雜一些的寫作方法總是會更容易吸引考官的眼球而且也更容易達到寫作的字數(shù)要求,所以建議大家都向最后一種表達方式靠攏??傊?,豐富的句型能讓你的雅思小作文寫作更出彩,當然也不是通篇都是相當復雜的句型和生僻詞匯就是好事,這樣反而讓考官覺得整篇雅思小作文寫作的表達不夠地道,甚至太過生硬,總之要把握好雅思小作文寫作中復雜句式使用的度。
第二篇:雅思小作文常用句式
Task 1 summarization
First paragraph
translate the subject.words may be used: be made up of…;be composed of… Main part
According to the graph… , more specifacally
It is manifest from the graph that… , to be more exact the greatest increase is in…rising from …to … next came sth.over the same period.word may be used:
go up/increase/grow
jump/shoot up/surge
decline/drop/fall
plunge/plummet(急劇下降)
sharply/rapidly/dramatically
slow/gentle
fluctuate
level off at/level out at
peak at/reach the highest point at
bottom at/reach the bottom at
account for/make up/occupy
about/around/nearly/approximately
respectively(eg:In the 2004 Olympics,China and Russia won x and y gold medals,respectively)
expect/predict(eg:A is expected/predicted to reach…)Last paragraph
Therefore, it can be clearly seen from the graph that…
As a matter of fact, the issue of whether/ the phenomenon that/ the issue that________________________is a complex and controversial(復雜的)one.On one hand, many people may feel that ___1____,and correspondingly(相關(guān)的)____解釋1______;on the other hand, it can be noted that ____2_______and hence(因此)___2的結(jié)果_.There is no universal answer to this question;so different people can hold different opinions due to their distinct backgrounds and values.As far as I am concerned, while I agree that under some circumstances___1____, ___2___, is somehow reasonable, however my opinion is that ____________ and it can be greatly substantiated by the reasons addressed below.B:
1)the speaker asserts that____復述或解釋題目觀點______,Although the speaker’s position is not wholly insupportable, far more compelling arguments can be made for ________自己的觀點___________
2)the issue of whether to ____復述_____ is a complex one, since it involves a conflict between our interest in ___doing___ and a legitimate need to ____do____.In my point of view, the final judgment should depend on a case-by-case analysis of two key factors.TOPIC:
1)Since I _______________, I prefer to ___________________.2)In the past, I have often been pleasantly surprised by_________;therefore, I would rather
____________________.3)While there still exist ___________________,our resources/attention should be focused here not in other place.4)If you define ____題目中你認為不對的觀點_____, then I would gave to agree that today.5)______結(jié)果______is important to me, so I would prefer to _____觀點______.承接性句子
1)My reasons for this view involve the notions of respect and trust.2)
二、中間段
1)first…….Second…….finally
2)firstly…..for example;another opinion…..say,…..;in addition,……
3)Although we may not have conclusive scientific evidence of a cause-effect relationship, ample anecdotal evidence establishes significant correlation.Moreover, both common sense and our experiences inform us that people tend to _________________________________.4)The virtues of ______are undeniable.三、例證
1)Moreover, this approach can be used by anyone---排比性例證
2)XXX,CEO of XXX Company, which is major manufacturer of XXX, once pointed out(and I paraphrase)that _________.This illustrates the point that _________.3)Professor XXX, highly respected and well-know professor at china academy of social science, once pointed out(and I paraphrase)that____.This illustrates the point that ____________
4)As head of XXX department at my university once said(and I paraphrase), “_________”.This illustrates the point that ___________.5)According to a recent survey conducted by the XXX department of XXX University among AAA.NNN percent of AAA CCC.The result of the survey also indicates an increase of over NNN percent within NNN years in the rates of BBB.Researchers of XXX believe that _____.In AAA where not CCC, the occurrence of such problems drops dramatically.四、結(jié)尾段
1)In my estimation the pitfalls of such a technique outweigh any of its potential advantages.2)I think anyone would be hard-pressed to find fault with this advice.3)To conclude, there is no easy solution to such a complex issue, however, taking into account all the dimensions of the issue discussed in the above analysis, might be the first step out of the dilemma.4)In sum, it is very likely that people will be able to arrive at the same conclusion on this controversial issue due to their different experiences, and conflicting values.Nevertheless, public awareness of the various dimensions of the issue discussed above argument will certainly contribute to the thorough understanding of the problem.5)In conclusion, while some people may still remain unconvinced, the reason that I have
analyzed in above argument should at least make them aware of the complexities of the issue under discussion.There is little doubt that more and more people will come to realize that _____________.五、連貫與銜接
第一,首先 first, firstly, first of all , to begin with, in the first place, to start with 一方面,另一方面for one thing…for another;on the one hand…on the other hand 一般來說 generally speaking, in general 起初 in the beginning, at first
目前,現(xiàn)在 at present, now, currently, by this time 最近recently, lately
第二、第三,其次 second, secondly, third, thirdly, for another
…………………………………………………………………………………………..此外,而且,并且,尤其,同樣地,正如,與此同時
Additionally, again, along with, also, and then, as well as, besides, equally, even, further, furthermore, in addition, in other words, just as, likewise, moreover, not only…but also, similarly, to put it another way, to repeat, then, too, what is more
…………………………………………………………………………………………..例如,即
A case in point, after all, as a proof, as an illustration, as an example, for example, for instance, in particular, just as, namely, such, specifically, that is, to illustrate, to demonstrate …………………………………………………………………………………………..此后,后來 afterwards, after that, after a while, after a few days, from now on, later, soon, then
為此 for this purpose 換句話說 in other words
確實 as a matter of fact, certainly, indeed, in fact, , surely, truly, undoubtedly, without doubt …………………………………………………………………………………………..顯然 obviously, in stark/contrast, clearly 不論怎樣 anyway
最重要的是,特別是 most important, above all, in particular 經(jīng)對比 by contrast, in contrast, by comparison, in comparison,相反/相對的 conversely, instead, on the contrary, otherwise, unlike, whereas, while, yet, rather than
…………………………………………………………………………………………..相同的、相同重要的 equally, equally important, in the same way, in the same manner, like, likewise, similarly, all the same 誠然,讓步 admittedly, after all,盡管although, even though, in spite of,…………………………………………………………………………………………..結(jié)果 accordingly, as a result, consequently, for this reason, hence, in this way, so, therefore, thus 結(jié)論 as has been noted/mentioned/stated, at last, finally, in a word, all in all, in brief, in conclusion, in short, in sum, in summary, to conclude, to sum up, to summarize
………………………………………………………………………………………….六、同義詞
Only= sole= exclusive= peerless= best Way= method= means
Make= form= shape= create
Man= human= person= individual= anyone Trustworthy= dependable
Trust= depend= entrust= believe Write up= report
Work out= solve= calculate= exercise Wind up= finish Turn up= discover Turn out= conclude Turn into= transform Stand for= represent
Spell out= state in detail Set up= arrange
Rule out= eliminate(消除)Run across= find accidentally Run into= meet by accident Put off= postpone(推遲)Pick out= select
Put up with= tolerate
Make out= understand with difficulty Make up= invent= compose Bring about= cause Look up to= respect
Look up= located information Look over= examine Keep on= continue
Keep up= remain current Carry on= transact= continue Clear up= clarify Cut down on=reduce Fall though= fail Figure out= discover Go after= follow Go before= precede Go up= increase Go over= review
第三篇:雅思寫作Animal類總結(jié)@皇家留學
雅思寫作Animal類總結(jié)
雅思寫作動物類的題目總會......Animals
1.Animal killing
2.Animal testing
To what extent is the use of animals in scientific research acceptable?
Is animal testing necessary?
Should animals suffer for the benefits of humans?
3.Wild animals preservation/ the Conservation of Endangered Animals
4.Pet keeping
5.Zoos
Are our zoos cruel to wild animals?
Zoos are sometimes seen as necessary but not poor alternatives to a natural
environment.Discuss some of the arguments for and/or against keeping animals inzoos.
第四篇:雅思考試,雅思寫作技巧
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雅思寫作概述
雅思考試,雅思寫作技巧
雅思寫作部分在聽力、閱讀部分之后出現(xiàn),是筆試的最后一項。雅思寫作考試要求在60分鐘內(nèi)完成兩篇作文(Task 1 and Task 2)。寫作中,以移民為主的培訓類(general training)和以留學為主的學術(shù)類(academic)試題類型有所不同。
Task 1要求考生在20分鐘內(nèi)完成一篇150字以上的文章。G類(培訓類)要求考生針對題目要求寫一封信來詢問某方面信息或闡釋某種情況。到目前為止,出現(xiàn)較多的書信種類有投訴信、請求信、建議信、詢問信、邀請信等。而A類(學術(shù)類)則以考察圖表為主??嫉幂^多的圖表有曲線圖、柱狀圖、餅狀圖、表格等。也有可能考到兩種不同種類的圖表。另外,流程圖和示意圖偶爾也會考到。
Task 2要求考生在40分鐘內(nèi)完成一篇不少于250字的議論文。A類和G類對Task 2的要求非常相似。考生可能需要對某個觀點發(fā)表支持或反駁意見,或者討論針鋒相對的一組觀點,或者解釋某種問題出現(xiàn)的原因并提出相應(yīng)的解決辦法。
雅思寫作評分
雅思寫作的評分標準不像四六級或托??荚嚥捎谜w式的評分,而是分項式評分(analytical scoring)。也就是說,考官給考生并不只打一個分數(shù),而是根據(jù)具體的評分細則打分。
雅思評分為9分制??脊俑鶕?jù)以下四個評分標準打分,Task Achievement(for Task
1),Task Response(for Task 2),Coherence and Cohesion,Lexical Resource and Grammatical Range and Accuracy。每個部分分數(shù)比重相同。但考生最后寫作成績并不是Task 1和Task2的簡單平均,而是以Task 2為主。
一般說來,移民火毒語言學校起碼要5分(Modest User)。留學需要6分(Competent User)以上。如果要讀法律、傳媒、管理等名校的研究生,寫作最好達到7分(Good User)。雅思官方報告表明,2005年中國大陸考生雅思寫作平均分為5.26分。這一成績,與許多考生的目標成績有較大差距。如果希望在雅思寫作上有所提高的話,那么首先需要知道獲得每個檔次的分數(shù)需要達到的標準和要求。
5分作文標準:
在完成任務(wù)方面,文章基本符合題目要求,圖表寫作中機械描述細節(jié),缺少清晰的概括,有時可能缺少數(shù)據(jù)支持。書信寫作中寫信目的有時不明確。議論文部分跑題,有立場,但論述不夠清晰,可能缺少結(jié)論;有主要觀點,但觀點有限并且論證不夠充分;用于論證的部分細節(jié)與文章主題不相關(guān)。
在連貫與銜接方面,內(nèi)容有一定組織結(jié)構(gòu)但缺少總體延續(xù)性;銜接手段不充分,不明確,樂訓國際http://004km.cn/
或過多地使用銜接手段;缺少指代和替換,顯得重復過多;沒有分段,或者分段不充分。
在詞匯資源方面,詞匯量有限,知識在最低層面上滿足題目要求;拼寫和構(gòu)詞法上可能出現(xiàn)明顯錯誤,造成讀者的某些閱讀困難
在語法結(jié)構(gòu)的范圍和準確性方面,只能使用有限的句子結(jié)構(gòu);試圖使用復雜句,但復雜句的使用準確性不如簡單句;語法錯誤較多,標點有的部分誤用,造成讀者的某些閱讀困難。
6分作文標準:
在完成任務(wù)方面,文章符合題目要求,圖表作文進行了概括,信息選擇合理,書信作文寫信目的基本清晰,語氣肯能有不一致之處。內(nèi)容涵蓋不夠完整,但符合題目要求;立場切題,雖然結(jié)論可能不清晰或重復
在連貫與銜接方面,信息和觀點組織連貫;文章有延續(xù)性,銜接手段使用有效,但是句子內(nèi)部和句子之間的銜接可能有誤或者過于機械;指代關(guān)系肯那個不總是清晰、合理;有手段,但不總是有邏輯性
在詞匯資源方面,能夠使用適當范圍的詞匯;試圖使用較不常見的詞匯,但使用有一些不準確;在拼寫和構(gòu)詞法上有錯誤,但這些錯誤不至于影響交流
在語法結(jié)構(gòu)的范圍和準確性方面,能使用簡單和復雜句子結(jié)構(gòu);語法和標點出現(xiàn)一些錯誤,但這些錯誤很少導致交流障礙
7分作文標準:
在成任務(wù)方面,內(nèi)容涵蓋題目要求;圖表作文能夠清晰概括主要趨勢,差別或階段。書信作文能夠清晰地表達寫作目的,語氣一致、得體。議論文能夠涵蓋題目要求,文章立場清晰;文章能提出、引申、并支持主要觀點,但可能有過度概括,分論點不夠緊湊
在連貫與銜接方面,信息和觀點組織有邏輯性;文章從頭至尾有延續(xù)性;銜接手段使用合理,雖然可能有一些使用過少或過多;每個段落都有明確的主題
在詞匯資源方面,詞匯使用豐富、有一定的準確性和靈活性;能使用較不常見詞匯,對語體和搭配有所了解;在詞匯的選擇、拼寫和構(gòu)詞法上偶爾有錯誤
在語法結(jié)構(gòu)的范圍和準確性方面,能使用多種復雜結(jié)構(gòu);多數(shù)語句準確無誤;語法和標點掌握較好。
總的來說,考生需要在幾個方面加以提高:首先內(nèi)容上要認真審題,以使文章符合題目要求;其次結(jié)構(gòu)要清晰,上下文要連貫,使文章成為有機整體,例子和細節(jié)能夠支持文章的主題;語言上要達到用詞和語法使用準確,如果要爭取7分以上的成績,還需要做到用詞豐富的、句子結(jié)構(gòu)有一定的復雜性。
雅思寫作分類:
從內(nèi)容上,雅思作文大致可以分為以下幾類:
教育
老師的責任是教學生知識還是如何為人處事?
學生應(yīng)該走讀還是在校內(nèi)住宿?
大學教育的目的是什么?
學習歷史沒有用處還是可以幫助我們認識現(xiàn)在?
公共圖書館應(yīng)該多花錢買書還是購買軟件DVD等高科技媒介?
科技
科技的發(fā)展是否使我們的創(chuàng)意越來越少?
科技是否使人的健康越來越差?
宇宙探險隊我們影響甚微么?
手機對我們有什么負面影響?
是否應(yīng)該在實驗中使用動物?
社會
青少年犯罪的原因和后果是什么?
罪犯應(yīng)該入獄還是應(yīng)該接受教育和培訓?
老年人比例的增長給社會帶來什么影響?
解決世界環(huán)境問題的最佳方案是不是提高燃油的價格?
應(yīng)該直接捐贈給當事人還是通過慈善機構(gòu)?
文化
文化出國旅游時應(yīng)該入鄉(xiāng)隨俗么?
是否應(yīng)該保護傳統(tǒng)建筑以保持民族特性?
英語作為全球性語言的傳播利大于弊么?
學習語言的同時是否也要學習文化和生活方式?
多元文化社會利大于弊么?
政府職責
醫(yī)療保健和教育方面的費用是否應(yīng)該由政府支付?
政府是否應(yīng)該派新畢業(yè)的教師和醫(yī)生下鄉(xiāng)以減少城鄉(xiāng)差距?
納稅是否是公民的義務(wù)?
國家隊應(yīng)該由政府資助還是應(yīng)該由非政府組織支持?
大城市的住房短缺問題是不是只有靠政府來解決?
從結(jié)構(gòu)上,雅思寫作可以分為以下三大類:
Argument
Argument題型的特點是題目中有兩個針鋒相對的觀點,然后要求discuss both views and give your opinion。考生寫作的時候要注意不能只給出自己的觀點,而是要分析對立雙方觀點的各自理由,然后進行分析并給出自己的觀點。
Point of view
Point of view題型的特點是題目中有一個或兩個關(guān)聯(lián) 而非沖突性觀點,然后問to what extent do you agree or disagree?考生寫作的時候只需要給出自己的觀點并加以論證即可。當然,觀點的給出有多種可能性,可以是同意,可以是不同意;可以是部分同意,也可以是持折中態(tài)度。具體論證的時候可以正面論證為主,也可以通過讓步反駁法來加以論證。
Problem
Problem題型的特點是題目為事實,而非觀點。大部分情況下,要求考生分析這個現(xiàn)象的原因,然后提出解決問題的辦法。但有時候會要求考生分析這一現(xiàn)象可能導致的后果。
四、雅思寫作準備
作文是需要長期準備和積累的。有三個月以上的時間準備比較理想。
寫
要練習雅思真題的寫作??梢月?lián)系練習劍橋雅思系列雅思真題的題目。只有練習了雅思真題,才能對雅思的出題思路和題目構(gòu)成有清晰完整的了解。在練習的時候要注意,應(yīng)該在規(guī)定的時間內(nèi)完成。只有在有時間限制的壓力下練習寫作,考生在考試的時候才能發(fā)揮自如。在練習寫作的時候,也不是一定要練習完成的文章,有時候可以進行段落論證的寫作。比如專門花一些時間練習開頭段和結(jié)尾段的寫作。有時對文章分部分練習寫作更能磨練寫作技巧。有時候也可以練習某種論證手段的使用,甚至對于常用的句型可以進行造句練習。在練習頻率上基本應(yīng)該保持兩天寫一篇以上。
讀
如果只是一味埋頭苦練,那么只能提高寫作速度,而在寫作水平上不一定能有長足的進步,只有看了好的文章,考生才會知道應(yīng)該在哪方面努力,以及自己的文章有什么不足之處。最重要的是,要看考官寫的例文,比如劍橋大學出的Cambridge IELTS 系列??吹臅r候不要只看懂就行,而是要著眼于三個方面:考官范文是如何提出觀點并進行論證的,運用了哪些論證手法;范文是怎樣安排段落的,段落之間以及句子之間是怎樣連接在一起的,運用了哪些銜接手段;范文里有什么精彩的詞、詞組和句型是值得我們模仿的。如果考生能夠舉一反三,仔細思考并適當借鑒的話,那么每一篇都會有所收獲。除了考官范文以外,其他的一些優(yōu)秀范文也可以參考,各種精彩段落包括雅思閱讀文章里的論證方法和游泳表達也可作為學習對象。
改
有時候考生越看范文越覺得沮喪甚至郁悶,因為發(fā)現(xiàn)自己的低水平文章和高分文章之間似乎存在不可以逾越的鴻溝。要想跨越這道鴻溝彌補其中的差距,關(guān)鍵在于多修改。考生應(yīng)該在規(guī)定的時間內(nèi)完成作文然后對照范文,看看自己作文中存在的問題:有沒有審題錯誤?結(jié)構(gòu)是否混亂?有沒有表達不清的地方?然后仔細捉摸一下,范文是怎么展開論述的。看數(shù)遍范文以后可以試著根據(jù)剛才學習范文的體會和收獲來修改自己寫過的文章,把論證不夠充分的地方重新論證一下,關(guān)聯(lián)不當?shù)牡胤叫扪a一下,錯誤表達改正過來。當然如果能有老師的指導效果會更好。這樣,練一篇,看一篇,改一篇,寫一次就會有一次的收獲。詳情請登錄:http://004km.cn/
第五篇:雅思雅思小作文寫作技巧與應(yīng)注意事項
雅思小作文寫作技巧與應(yīng)注意事項
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雅思技巧與注意事項(寫作---小作文)個人總結(jié)分析(謝謝各位51IELTS的幫助)
1。試卷發(fā)下后,請花半分鐘的時間來瀏覽作文的題目,這里包括議論文在內(nèi)。
2。此后,請看第一部分的題目,明確以下幾點
1)屬于什么題型的圖表,是一個曲線圖,一個餅圖,一表格,一個流程圖還是一個物體以及其他類型的圖表
2)是一幅圖還是兩幅或者是以上的圖
3)時間、字數(shù)以及其他的要求
3。用5分鐘的時間分析并形成以下的內(nèi)容
1)注意不同類型圖表的技巧(包括時態(tài)、語態(tài)、關(guān)鍵描述詞語與句型)
2)劃出并分析題目中的關(guān)鍵內(nèi)容,分析圖表中的關(guān)鍵特征點(依據(jù)各種圖表的特點來決定)
3)考慮結(jié)構(gòu)(開頭引言,描述特征,可能總結(jié))注意以下
開頭不能與文章已經(jīng)給出的東西一樣,用自己語言表達;
描述關(guān)鍵以及有代表性的點或者是趨勢;
在語法與句法正確的基礎(chǔ)上,力求用不同的句型組合(如簡單句,復合句,定語/表語/賓語/非謂語從句),用近意詞語;
正確表達文章所給信息;
在可能的情況下做簡單的總結(jié);
不要發(fā)表有個人或者是評論性的句子;
標點符號,單詞的拼寫應(yīng)該正確;
4。書寫的時候注意流利與工整,采用現(xiàn)代式的書寫格式
5。留有時間檢查,保持卷面的整潔
技巧性套句(僅供參考)
開頭句型(用簡單的句子給出盡可能多的信息WHEN,WHAT,WHERE,有特色。)一般有兩種,一種是主動一種是被動。
1)The chart/graph/table/diagram/process(show,reveal,illustrate,demonstrate,depict,describe,indicate)
2)According to/As can be seen from/As shown in/It is clear/apparent from/It can be seen from
結(jié)尾句型(如果沒有可以充分說的,可以不用結(jié)尾。結(jié)尾不要節(jié)外生枝。最好不要出現(xiàn)很明顯有結(jié)尾特征的詞語“in conclusion”)
中間關(guān)鍵句型----☆要注意認真審查題目,弄清楚要描述的數(shù)據(jù)究竟代表什么,單位是什么,用什么方式表達。
OBJECT(描述物體)
注意點:要明確以一定的順序來寫。從左到右或者是從上到下,從內(nèi)到外(根據(jù)物體自己的特點)等等。把題目中給出的部件詳細描述。(如202的自行車)
句型:介紹功能The illustration is of a _______ which is designed to(do something)↓
說明構(gòu)成部分A ______ is made up of /consists of/comprises How many ?A number of parts/sections
↓
描述各個部件功能不要用you ,one可以用we, the operator(單數(shù)個體)First ,(the cyclist)puts his or her _____on the ____
要有一定的順序,不要將每個部分單獨寫出,應(yīng)該將能夠合并的一起結(jié)合,注意用以下句型(被動態(tài),定語從句,非謂語動詞)
要用關(guān)聯(lián)詞
PIE CHART(餅圖)
注意點:1)文字中要表達出總量與分量的關(guān)系,在兩個以上的PIE中,要注意各個PIE間的比較
2)數(shù)據(jù)究竟代表什么應(yīng)清楚
語言點:1)percentage / proportion
2)(v.)make up/ constitute / account for
3)①
the biggest difference between 2 group(A+B)is in...,where A makes up 5% while
B constitutes 67%
the highest percentage of A, which was approximately 12%
②
the percentage of A in.....is more than twice that of B,the ratio is 67% to 45%($% compared to $%)
③in...,while a greater percentage of A than B are found in.......(the former is $% and the latter is $%)
④
there are more A in......,reaching $%,compared with $% of B
⑤
A , which used to be the........,has become less important, which declined(increased)sharply from $% in 1978 to only $% in 1998.⑥
The biggest loss was to某區(qū)域.The biggest gains in A were made by某區(qū)域.FLOW CHART(曲線圖)
注意點:1)抓住“變化”和“趨勢”
2)有兩種情況其一是在不同時間段內(nèi)的數(shù)據(jù)比較,另外是單獨數(shù)據(jù)的全程描述。前者適合于數(shù)據(jù)代表的物體較少且時間界限明確的情況下,后者適合于描述數(shù)據(jù)對象很多且時間劃定不清晰。當然依據(jù)考試中的題目來決定。
語言點:1)變化狀態(tài)幅度詞(要依據(jù)描述的情況決定)
輕微-----slightly, slowly(速度), steadily(平緩)逐漸----gradually
顯著-----significantly , markedly急劇-----rapidly , dramatically , abruptly ,sharply突然---suddenly趨勢---trend inclination tendacy
2)變量幅度詞語
★增加-----increase, jump ,go up ,rise, climb , ascend , level up ,surge,★減少----decrease, drop ,go down ,fall,----, descend, level down ,★水平----keep/stay/remain/maintain stable ,----steady ,be similar to ,there is
little/hardly any/no change
★最高-----reach a highest point/the top/the summit/the peak/the most/peak in,at★最低-----reach a lowest point/the bottom//rock/hit a trough /bottom out★交叉-----correspond with in----year;---crossing the line for-----
3)時間幅度詞語
During the period 1970-1999;From 1970 to 1999;Since the early 1970s;In 1970------then in 1980-----ten years later
4)基本句型
There was變化趨勢in the number of A from 1986-1990(over next.....yeas),which was followed by變化趨勢and then變化趨勢until 1998 when there was變化趨勢for the next....years
From 1990 onwards, there was變化趨勢in the number of A which then變化趨勢at $% in 1994.In 1990,the number reached(was)$%,but 30 years later there was變化趨勢.After變化趨勢from...to...,A begin變化趨勢over the next....years.The number of...increased rapidly from 1988 to 1990 during the five-year period〓
There was a rapid increase from 1988 to 1990 during the five-year period
A has almost/nearly/about/over a quarter/half/twice/one third /as many students as/as much money as /B;A has about/approximately/exactly/precisely the same number/proportion/amount of students/money as.....It has reached something of a plateau,X percent/an average of X percent in the past few years in 1998.in the 3 years spanning from 1995 through 1998...the percentage of...is sightly larger/smaller than that of.....the graphs show a threefold increase in the number of.....decreased year by year while...increased steadily....here is an upward trend in the number of
..(year)witnessed/saw a sharp rise in.....a has something in common with b/ the difference between a and b lies in..柱狀圖(Bar chart)
注意點:1)柱圖主要是陳列的數(shù)據(jù)比較多,不能將所有的信息寫出,只能抓住重點與關(guān)鍵點來寫(這些點可以是最大、小值;最高、低值;差距最大最小點等等)都需要結(jié)合題目來分析,對于一些點的特征具有相似性應(yīng)該采用統(tǒng)一合并的方法,不能每有項都列出。
2)應(yīng)該根據(jù)一定的順序來寫,否則會因邏輯不合理而失分
語言點:1)一般是以比較極與最高級的句子形式出現(xiàn)如
Low income consumed more hamburghers than other group(=more than other /group/ on hamburghers),spending more than twice/ as much as hamburghers than FC and Pizza(both about 40%)
High income favoured pizza,spenting $%,followed by FC at $%,then hamburgher at $%.High income appear to less than other /group/ on hamburghers,pizza remain their most popular fast-food, followed by FC.In 1975,among 3 of the world's largest cities, San Paulo had the highest
population(about 0.5 billion),and......is the second highest(about.....)......had the lowest population(about....).As a result in 1990,the number of....appears the largest population, closely followed by...,then.......at......The table below shows the figures for imprisonment in 3 countries between 1930-1960 in great Britain, the numbers in prison has increased from....in 1930 to....in 1940,apart from in 1950 when the numbers in prison fell by....On the other hand , New Zealand and Australia are the only two countries in which the numbers in prison remain steady from 1930-1960,although there have been slightly fluctuations in this trend.In the period 1975to 1990,all cities showed a growth, Tokyo and Newyork had by far the largest increase(about.....).san Paulo had the smallest growth(about...)There were no figures given for male part-time workers.In unemployed group, men enjoyed more leisure time---over 80%,compared with 40% for women(同一群體的比較), markedly more than women in retired group(不同群體的比較).表格/統(tǒng)計圖(Table chart)
注意點:1)同柱狀一樣對數(shù)據(jù)間的變化與特殊顯著數(shù)據(jù)的描寫要求很高
2)選擇好順序
流程圖(Flow Chart)
注意點:1)與物體、地圖的描述一樣,保持相同的作題原則
2)一定要按照順序來說明
3)明確圖片上要求說明的內(nèi)容是什么,不要隨意編造