第一篇:雅思G類小作文備考策略
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雅思考試包括兩類:G類(General Training)目前較多適用于移民;學(xué)術(shù)類(Academic)多用于留學(xué)。這篇文章主要介紹一下G類小作文。
不同于A類的圖表題或流程提,G類小作文中要求考生根據(jù)題目中的問題或者事件寫一封私人信件,形式可為非正式、半正式或正式。文章字?jǐn)?shù)不能少于150字。
書信的主要結(jié)構(gòu),即稱呼,主體部分和署名。
稱呼----開頭段(2句)
主體部分----(8-10句)
信末禮貌語(yǔ)和署名----結(jié)尾段(2句)
關(guān)于不同的稱呼和問候,取決于寫作的對(duì)象,如誰(shuí)是接收人、寫作人與接收人的關(guān)系等??忌鷳?yīng)根據(jù)寫作對(duì)象的不同而選擇適合的寫作形式,以實(shí)現(xiàn)寫作目的,如寫給朋友應(yīng)用非正式的形式、寫給上司應(yīng)用正式的形式。
雖然語(yǔ)句上有所變化,但是在大體的結(jié)構(gòu)上是不變的。
關(guān)于書信的書寫內(nèi)容上,考生需要:
? 咨詢和/或提供一般性的事實(shí)性信息;
? 表達(dá)需求、要求、喜惡等;
? 表達(dá)看法或投訴;
? 提出要求、建議等。
因此,我們將它分為八大類:1.投訴行 2.咨詢信 3.求助信 4.道歉信 5.建議信/提供信息信 6.邀請(qǐng)信 7.感謝信 8.求職信
最后同學(xué)們?cè)谕瓿蒅類小作文的時(shí)候需要注意的幾點(diǎn):1.字?jǐn)?shù)如果達(dá)不到最低要求將被扣分。2.文章內(nèi)容如果偏題或者跑題將被扣分;3.任何抄襲(如抄襲其他來源的內(nèi)容)的作文將被重扣;4.文章如果不完整、內(nèi)容相互沒有關(guān)聯(lián)將被扣分(如在任何部分使用點(diǎn)句或筆記形式)。
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第二篇:雅思G類小作文及翻譯
5.1.2 范例5-1 投訴信
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing to you to complain about the CD Player which I bought in your store in January.After only two days,things started to go wrong.我正寫信給你投訴一月份在你們店里買的CD播放機(jī)。僅僅兩天后,東西就出問題了。
The first problem was the CD drawer,which opened and closed too quickly.I nearly trapped my fingers in it.The next day,I recorded a CD onto a cassette.Everything worked,but the sound quality was very poor.On the following day,the CD Pause button stopped working太快了。我差點(diǎn)把手指卡進(jìn)去。第二天,我將一張CD刻錄到磁帶上。一切都正常,但聲音質(zhì)量很差勁。第二天,CD暫停鍵停止工作。
Naturally,I returned the player to you for repair.Your assistant said I would have to wait only a
week.After two weeks,the necessary spare parts had still not arrived.Eventually,nine weeks later,I collected the stereo.The CD player worked properly,but there was no improvement in the recording quality.自然而然地,我將播放器還給你們返修。你們的助理說我只需要等一個(gè)禮拜。兩周后,必要的配件部分仍然未到。最后,九周后,我將音響組裝起來。CD播放器工作正常,但刻錄質(zhì)量沒有得到改善。I am not satisfied with the equipment nor with the service I have received.I am therefore writing to ask for a full refund.I will return the player to your shop on Monday and I expect to receive a cheque for $250退給我$250。
Yours faithfullyJohns瓊斯
(181 words)
范例5-2 道歉信
Dear Mr./Ms.,親愛的xxx女士/先生,I received your letter yesterday complaining that the central heating system in your new house had not been completed by the date promised.I feel awfully sorry that the problem has been caused by my mistake about the date for completion on referring to our earlier correspondence.我昨天收到關(guān)于您新房中央供暖系統(tǒng)到期未完工的投訴。對(duì)此我感到非常抱歉,這個(gè)問題是由于我參照原來的合同弄錯(cuò)了完工時(shí)間。
I mistook your date of completion for next week due to my inattention,so the working team installed the system according to the wrong date.I realize the inconvenience that our oversight must be causing you and will do everything possible to avoid any further delay.I have already given instructions for the work to have priority and the engineers working on the job to be placed on overtime記錯(cuò)成下周,所以工程隊(duì)根據(jù)錯(cuò)誤的時(shí)間安裝系統(tǒng)。我意識(shí)到我們的疏忽給您帶來的不變,我們會(huì)盡可能地加快進(jìn)程。我已經(jīng)下令將您的事宜優(yōu)先處理,工程師們會(huì)加班完成工作。
I assure you that these arrangements should see the installation completed by next weekend.I hope the settlement of this matter can meet your wishes意。
The fault is entirely mine and I deeply regret that it happened.(159 words)這個(gè)錯(cuò)誤完全在我,我對(duì)該事深感抱歉。
Yours faithfully,您忠誠(chéng)的,Johns
Dear Mr.and Mrs.JohnsI have arrived home safely.I am writing this letter to thank you for your warm hospitality to me during my recent stay in your beautiful home.我已安全到家。我寫信來感謝近期在你家這段時(shí)間對(duì)我的款待。During my stay,I was overwhelmed by the enthusiasm expressed by you and your family.We had interesting discussions on my training program.I have found these discussions very informative and useful.I sincerely hope we could have more exchanges like this one later人所展現(xiàn)的熱情,我受寵若驚。我們?cè)?jīng)就培訓(xùn)計(jì)劃有過愉快的討論。我覺得討論非常有意義。我真心的希望以后還能像上次一樣彼此交換意見。
Moreover,there is one thing I need your help.I left my laptop computer in the bedroom I lived in your home.It is a silver one with the black keyboard.I wonder if you could send it back to me.Enclosed please find a cheque of 25 dollars.I hope it will cover the postage我把筆記本電腦落在你們家臥室了。是銀色鑲黑色鍵盤的。能不能請(qǐng)你們將它寄給我。請(qǐng)附上一張25美元的支票。我希望這夠支付郵費(fèi)。
I am looking forward to your early visit to China when I will be able to pay back some of the hospitality I received during my memorable stay in your beautiful country.我希望您們能早點(diǎn)來中國(guó),好讓我稍微報(bào)答在你們國(guó)家的美麗之旅期間受到的款待。
With kind personal regardsFaithfully yours, Mary
Dear Sir/Madam,親愛的先生/小姐,Your advertisement for a Network Maintenance Engineer in the April 10 Student Daily interested me because the position that you described sounds exactly like the kind of job I am seeking.你們4月10號(hào)在學(xué)生日?qǐng)?bào)上發(fā)布的網(wǎng)絡(luò)維護(hù)工程師這一職位吸引了我,因?yàn)槟銈兠枋龅穆毼宦犉饋碚俏以趯ふ业摹?/p>
According to the advertisement,your position requires a good university degree,Bachelor or above in Computer Science or equivalent field and proficiency in Windows NT 4.0 and Linux System.I feel that I am competent to meet the requirements.I will be graduating from XXX University this year with a MSC.My studies have included courses in computer control and management,and I designed a control simulation system developed with Microsoft Visual and SQL Server.根據(jù)廣告,你們的職位要求有好的大學(xué)文憑,學(xué)士及以上的電腦科學(xué)或者相關(guān)專業(yè),并且熟知Windows NT 4.0 和 Linux 操作系統(tǒng)。我覺得我滿足這些要求。我今年會(huì)從xxx大學(xué)畢業(yè)拿到MSC學(xué)位。我的專業(yè)當(dāng)中包含電腦控制管理課程,并且我用Microsoft Visual 和 SQL Server設(shè)計(jì)了一個(gè)控制模仿系統(tǒng)。
During my education,I have grasped the pinciples of my major subject area and gained practical
skills.Not only have I passed CET-6,but more importantly I can communicate fluently in English.My ability to write and speak English is a good standard.在學(xué)期間,我把握了我的專業(yè)領(lǐng)域并且獲得了實(shí)踐技巧。我不僅通過了大學(xué)六級(jí),而且能用英語(yǔ)流利交流。我的英語(yǔ)口寫能力優(yōu)秀。
I would welcome an opportunity to attend you for an interview.Enclosed is my resume and if there is any additional information you require,please contact me.我希望能得到機(jī)會(huì)面試。附上我的簡(jiǎn)歷,如果你們需要更多信息,請(qǐng)聯(lián)系我。
Yours faithfully, 你忠誠(chéng)的,John瓊斯。
范例5-5咨詢信
Dear Professor Moss, 親愛的摩斯教授,I am Sandy,a junior student of the Department of Electrical and Computer Engineering.I am writing to inquire about your African Literature and Culture course.我是珊蒂,一名電子計(jì)算機(jī)工程學(xué)院的大三學(xué)生。我寫信來咨詢您的非洲文學(xué)文化課程。
Just a few days ago,I found the course when we were asked to choose optional for next semester.The name of African Literature and Culture aroused my great interest.Because of your reputation and my enthusiasm in literature, I hope I could study this course in next semester.Except the name,however,all I know about the course is that it is a two-hour one held on every Thursday afternoon.I want to get more details of the course.First of all,I would like to know the brief outline of the course.Moreover,I wonder if there are some relevant books that you can recommend for me to read before the course.幾天前,當(dāng)我們被要求選修下學(xué)期課程時(shí),我看見了這門課。我對(duì)非洲文學(xué)文化非常感興趣。由于您的聲望和我對(duì)文學(xué)的熱情,我希望下學(xué)期能學(xué)習(xí)這門課程。但是,除了名字,我只知道這門課程每周四下午上課2小時(shí)。我想知道更多的細(xì)節(jié)。首先,我想知道這門課程的大綱。還有,我想您能不能推薦基本參考書讓我在開課之前閱讀。
I also heard that another course of yours,Chinese Literature,is held every Friday afternoon.If the registration of this course hasn’t closed yet,I will be so glad to participate in your class.我還聽說了您的另外一門課,每周五下午上課的中國(guó)文學(xué)。如果這門課的注冊(cè)還未關(guān)閉,我也很想學(xué)習(xí)這門課。
Sorry to bother you.Your help will be greatly appreciated.(191 words)打擾您了。承蒙您的幫助。Sincerely yours,您忠誠(chéng)的,范例5-6
Dear Mr.Clinton,I hope that this unintended letter would not surprise you.I used to study in your school, and this
letter is basically concerned about some courses I had been through.It is too bad some problems
occurred.Otherwise, I was very satisfied with my learning experience there.The management course is generally satisfactory.I have been especially impressed with the books the
lecturer had recommended.However,it has come to my attention that some of your lecturers are so
young that they seem to have deficient experience in the field of management.They should connect
those theories with the real world.I trust that your school can manage to improve this situation.Those
lecturers are undoubtedly aspiring,but I personally suggest that they can undergo more practical
training,and learn more about the application of theories.
Thanks a lot for your concern.I am looking forward to improvement, although I am no longer your student.
Sincerely yours,(192 words)
5-7
Dear Sir/Madam,I am looking for a single-bedroom apartment in London.Please let me know if you have any suitable
vacancies.I would be happy to give you a deposit to hold it.I am about to attend a training course in London during the months of July and August,and St.Atlas
Polytechnic College,the college where I will be studying, is at Queens Street.If possible,I would like to
have an apartment that is within two or three miles of the college.The apartment is preferably spacious,air conditioned with a private bathroom,a telephone line and Internet access.I will appreciate it if it is
quiet,comfortably furnished,because I think it will help me focus on my studies.I am willing to pay up
to £500 a month.
I
would appreciate hearing from you within the next two weeks.My email address is
xiaoyan@xtra.co.cn.Sincerely yours,Johnson Lee
范例5-9
Dear Sir/Madam,I am writing to inform you that I lost my shopping bag in your museum and I would like to ask for your help.我寫信來通知你們我在你們博物館丟了書包,我想向你們求助。
I paid a visit to your museum on May 13,2004.When I visited the hall of modern art and history,I left my handbag in the hall because of my carelessness.It is a black leather bag.There are some important things in it,including my passport,ID card,credit card,some checks and US $1,000.But the most important thing is my business address book,which records all my clients’ phone numbers and
appointment agenda in the following two weeks.我2004.3.13號(hào)去博物館參觀。當(dāng)我游覽現(xiàn)代藝術(shù)歷史展廳時(shí),我由于大意將書包落在那里。是個(gè)黑皮包。里面有些重要東西,包括我的護(hù)照,身份證,一些支票和1000美元。但最重要的是我的通訊錄,里面記錄著我的所有顧客的電話和接下來兩周里我的約會(huì)日程。This bag is very important to me.My friends suggested me that I contact your department to seek help,so I write this letter to you anxiously.I hope you and your staff can help me find my lost bag.Your meticulous and warmhearted help will be greatly appreciated.這個(gè)包對(duì)我來說非常重要。我朋友建議我聯(lián)系你們尋求幫助。我以我焦急地寫信給你們。我希望你和你們員工能幫我找到丟失的包。對(duì)此我將感激不盡。
For more information about my lost thing,please contact me in the following ways:
Mobile phone:XXXXXXXXX Home phone:XXXXXX Office phone:XXXXXX 想知道更多關(guān)于失物的信息,請(qǐng)用以下方式聯(lián)系我:電話xxxxxxx 家庭座機(jī)xxxxxxx 辦公室電話xxxxxxx
Yours faithfully,Eva
范例5-8
Dear Jacky,I am pleased to invite you to join our little celebration which is currently planned to be held on Feb 23rd.So far we have not yet decided the precise time,but there are a collection of choices about
locations,which I want your suggestions.我很高興邀請(qǐng)你參加我們的小聚會(huì),暫定于2.23好舉行。目前為止還沒有確定確切時(shí)間,但有一些地址可供選擇,我需要你們的建議。
Your earliest response will be highly appreciated,and I will definitely take into consideration all suggestions from you or anybody else being invited. The celebration is mainly concerned with my latest promotion.我會(huì)對(duì)您的反饋?zhàn)龀黾皶r(shí)回應(yīng),我會(huì)考慮所有人的建議。慶祝會(huì)是關(guān)于我最近的升遷。Without your thorough support,it is impossible for me to be promoted,as I have been merely working for the company for half a year.Meanwhile,I feel it a precious chance for us,a group of friends,to come together to hold a relaxing talk and have some delicious food.沒有你們的支持,我是不可能升職的,因?yàn)槲也诺焦景肽?。同時(shí),我覺得這是一次珍貴的機(jī)會(huì),讓大家聚在一起聊天享受美食。Please do not bring anything but yourself if you can come over.If you can add some amusements to the celebration,for example,some jokes,I will be greatly pleased.I am looking forward to your reply,and waiting to meet you.聚會(huì)時(shí)只要人來就可以。如果您能為聚會(huì)助興,比如講笑話,我會(huì)很歡迎的。我期待您的反饋,希望您能來。
Yours truly,Mary
第三篇:21天上班族雅思G類備考成功經(jīng)驗(yàn)分享
備考時(shí)間:我是7月25日網(wǎng)上報(bào)名的,當(dāng)時(shí)想用30天突擊復(fù)習(xí)一下。沒想到24日這個(gè)考點(diǎn)沒有G類的考試,最接近的就是8月17日了。再往后拖我覺得容易懈怠所以咬咬牙報(bào)了17號(hào)的,總共復(fù)習(xí)時(shí)間是21天。
之前英語(yǔ)水平:我高考英語(yǔ)130分,大一考過四級(jí),大二考過六級(jí),大學(xué)期間還獲得過省里的大學(xué)生英語(yǔ)競(jìng)賽二等獎(jiǎng),自己一直對(duì)英語(yǔ)很自信。大四自己復(fù)習(xí)過一年考過GRE,成績(jī)不理想,TOFEL還不錯(cuò),不過出國(guó)讀研的夢(mèng)想就破滅了。畢業(yè)后在外企工作,習(xí)慣了英語(yǔ)郵件和客戶溝通。不過工作中遇到一個(gè)考霸,英語(yǔ)居然比我還牛,天天打壓我,氣得我過去的自信都煙消云散了。
備考書籍:此類備考書我知道基本只用一遍所以在淘寶上買了全套25本的復(fù)習(xí)教材,運(yùn)到家差點(diǎn)暈倒,足足有10kg。我覺得時(shí)間肯定不夠都看一遍了,所以仔細(xì)研究挑了其中以下:
1.《劍橋雅思真題》1-9,其中1-3沒有G類的閱讀和寫作,而且題型和難度與后面的有差
距,做了聽力之后就果斷棄之。4-9每套G類的題目都做過,聽力和閱讀在做到一半的時(shí)候覺得突然成績(jī)有了提升,之后就保持住那個(gè)水平,給自己奠定了一些自信。作文有
例文的就寫,然后比照抄一遍例文。有的太簡(jiǎn)單就沒有下手??偣矊懥?3篇作文,以
大作文為主,抄了N篇范文。每次研究人家寫的范文都覺得行云流水,無比佩服??醋?/p>
己的作品總是覺得不盡人意,但是又覺得無處用力-_-||2.《十天突破雅思寫作和口語(yǔ)》喜歡這兩本首先是因?yàn)闀屛矣X得我十天內(nèi)能看完,看
了之后覺得PAT老師的文風(fēng)幽默,邏輯清晰,這兩本書讀起來不費(fèi)力,有興趣,感覺有
所提高。后來才知道烤鴨人手一本,早已是大家的心頭好,我就不再贅述。其余的詞匯啊,真題精解啊,聽力啊全部放棄,當(dāng)時(shí)想如果考一次不過我就好好再讀一
遍…
復(fù)習(xí)過程和心得:
我自從交了報(bào)考費(fèi)就開始進(jìn)入緊張的復(fù)習(xí)過程中。每天都是學(xué)到晚上11點(diǎn),早晨6:30起床,白天在公司上班也時(shí)不時(shí)偷偷看兩頁(yè),在樓下透氣都要聽一段聽力。這對(duì)于現(xiàn)在的我來講簡(jiǎn)直有點(diǎn)不可理喻---睡眠時(shí)間縮短、和時(shí)間賽跑,每天都在給自己打分,自己鼓勵(lì)和尋找問題和解決方法。在這個(gè)過程中我一直對(duì)自己說,如果你能成功,就是對(duì)自己的一個(gè)很大的肯定。當(dāng)然,我很感謝我的家人和領(lǐng)導(dǎo)對(duì)我這21天的支持,沒有他們我肯定沒有這么投入。
【聽力部分】我主要靠做真題,在總結(jié)中提高自己。起初,40個(gè)對(duì)30個(gè),后面就可以對(duì)35個(gè)左右。有時(shí)候錯(cuò)的很不值得,沒有復(fù)數(shù),忘記大寫,拼寫錯(cuò)誤,之后就會(huì)格外注意這些問題,避免丟分。起初覺得填空容易錯(cuò),后來覺得選擇容易錯(cuò)。因?yàn)樘羁罩灰牭搅藢懴聛砭涂梢?,可是選擇要讀題,聽到的又是需要轉(zhuǎn)述才能選出來的,稍微有點(diǎn)偏差就錯(cuò)了。后來就專門用中間停頓時(shí)間去讀題,劃出每個(gè)選項(xiàng)的重點(diǎn),在聽的過程中就集中去理解內(nèi)容,馬上去選,效果還是不錯(cuò)的。還要強(qiáng)調(diào)一點(diǎn),聽力是需要一點(diǎn)淡定的,錯(cuò)過了不要糾結(jié)馬上投入下一題。
【閱讀部分】G類的閱讀簡(jiǎn)單得讓人臉紅,我就不多說了,時(shí)間是充分夠用的。復(fù)習(xí)中途發(fā)現(xiàn)T/F/NG這個(gè)題型有些崩潰,錯(cuò)得覺得沒有什么理由,后來在網(wǎng)上找到一個(gè)挺好的解題思路(雅思閱讀False和Not Given的區(qū)別),總算是過了這個(gè)坎了。
【寫作部分】寫信是要發(fā)揮一下想象力的,只要在題目的前提下發(fā)揮就可以了,所以還是很簡(jiǎn)單的,這個(gè)分一定要拿到。大作文首先要有思路,可以按照PAT的裸奔法去套。然后結(jié)構(gòu)要清晰,段落之間有邏輯關(guān)聯(lián)。段落之間的句子如何組織,句子之間的關(guān)系要緊密,可以用PAT的“國(guó)力對(duì)比順,不設(shè)下限轉(zhuǎn)”來套用。在平時(shí)的研究范文和自己寫作中有意識(shí)地用一些關(guān)系去寫句子,好好體會(huì)。單詞就要靠自己了,我覺得不要去刻意追求“大詞”,用自己熟悉的詞來表達(dá)一定會(huì)錯(cuò)。
【口語(yǔ)部分】我不得不承認(rèn)復(fù)習(xí)的話題啟發(fā)我思考了很多事情,有的話題沒復(fù)習(xí)雅思永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)有人問我,我自己更不會(huì)去主動(dòng)思考。比較生疏的題目我會(huì)準(zhǔn)備一下,明確如果要抽到我要講什么。然后百度啊,google啊,各種準(zhǔn)備。其實(shí)也不要被生僻的題目嚇到,畢竟概率很小,平時(shí)積攢RP是多么的重要啊>_<’
考試當(dāng)天:考場(chǎng)門口跟登機(jī)一樣,還要安檢,每人只能拿著身份證進(jìn)去。我一直懷疑墻上沒有表怎么看時(shí)間,坐下來我發(fā)現(xiàn)自己弱爆了—一個(gè)投影儀清晰地投出一個(gè)碩大的表盤,還有秒針啪啪地走。瞬間覺得自己好小…
我的耳機(jī)還是壞的,換了一個(gè)之后能正常地用了,還好。聽力和閱讀很簡(jiǎn)單,寫作的題目是你喜歡和同齡人還是不同年齡人做朋友。這個(gè)題目我有好多話講,好平易近人的話題哦。一陣寫,現(xiàn)場(chǎng)根本沒時(shí)間關(guān)注語(yǔ)法,邏輯什么的,怕寫錯(cuò)所以寫得也挺慢的,時(shí)間基本剛剛好,連仔細(xì)看2遍的時(shí)間都木有。
我想說早晨千萬(wàn)少喝水,中間不讓上廁所的啊,我欲哭無淚。4個(gè)小時(shí)啊,有沒有人性啊??谡Z(yǔ)考試是第二天中午,筆試完我基本就休息了,沒有再怎么復(fù)習(xí),想想14分鐘的內(nèi)容還能怎么準(zhǔn)備啊。我的考官是個(gè)中年男人,臉跟門夾過一樣窄,戴著眼鏡??谝艉芎茫瑧B(tài)度也不錯(cuò),我當(dāng)天心都快跳出來了,也意識(shí)到自己有點(diǎn)凌亂,但他一直點(diǎn)頭,弄得我更亂了… 我抽到的話題非常簡(jiǎn)單,是關(guān)于兒時(shí)的游戲的。在第三部分他問我兒童和成人游戲有什么區(qū)別的時(shí)候,我有點(diǎn)不知所云了,就在那時(shí)時(shí)間到了…所以我到成績(jī)出來對(duì)自己的表現(xiàn)都沒有底。
成績(jī)出來了: 考完那天我一身輕松,馬上把書送給別人了,當(dāng)然也沒忘記說萬(wàn)一沒過再還給我?之后就是焦慮的等待。有一次夢(mèng)見過自己考了4.5分,有一次夢(mèng)見考得還不錯(cuò)。我考前就說假如我考過我要好好寫一個(gè)心得給后人分享,因?yàn)槲抑安贿@樣做的,只看別人的自己不寫。我知道聽力和閱讀絕對(duì)沒問題的,就想雅思這么科學(xué)的考試,沒見過口語(yǔ)和寫作奇差的,那怎么平衡啊,一直安慰自己。今天中午12點(diǎn)出成績(jī),我瞬間登錄,看到成績(jī)出來了!我之前無數(shù)次登錄試圖早點(diǎn)知道答案,現(xiàn)在出來了我都不敢往下拉。結(jié)果是---總分7.5,其中聽力7.5,閱讀8.5,寫作和口語(yǔ)均為6.5分!馬上淚奔啊,各種欣喜,這么多天的辛苦總算有一個(gè)交代了。各位烤鴨們,祝你們一路順風(fēng),考出自己的水平,有一個(gè)嶄新的未來!
第四篇:雅思G類小作文書信:投訴信
最權(quán)威的國(guó)際教育服務(wù)平臺(tái)
雅思G類小作文書信范文:投訴信(2)
本文是雅思G類小作文書信范文:投訴信(2),供大家參考。相對(duì)于雅思A類寫作而言,雅思G類寫作的復(fù)習(xí)資料較少,希望本文能夠?yàn)橥瑢W(xué)們的雅思備考提供幫助。
題目:
You have recently made a purchase from the local department store.However, when you arrived home, you found a faultwith it.Write a letter to the manager, say what the product is, explain the problem and say what you’d like to be done about it.(投訴信)
范文:
Dear Sir or Madam,I’m writing to complain about the recent purchase of a woolensweater from your department store on Philip Street, on August 25, 2007.親愛的先生、女士:
我寫此信是要就我 2007年8月25日從你們?cè)诜评沾蠼稚系纳痰昀镔?gòu)買的一件羊毛衫進(jìn)行投訴的。
資料來源:教育優(yōu)選 http://004km.cn/
最權(quán)威的國(guó)際教育服務(wù)平臺(tái)
I recently washed the sweater in cool water, as per the instructions on the label.However, when I removed it from the machine, the garment was stretchedout of shape and no longer fits.我最近按照標(biāo)簽上的說明用冷水洗了這件羊毛衫,然而,當(dāng)我將它從洗衣機(jī)里取出時(shí),這件衣服卻變形了,再也不合身了。
I phoned the store last Tuesday(June 21)and spoke to the department manager, a Mr.Morris, who was rather rude on the phone and informed me that I could not get a replacement sweater as it was purchased at a reduced price.I felt really upset, for I have been a loyal customer of your store for many years and until this incident, never have had any complaints.I, therefore, feel disappointed to be treated in such a manner.我上周二(6月21日)打電話到店里,是與一位叫Morris先生的部門經(jīng)理講的,他電話里很是無禮,告知我說因?yàn)檫@件衣服是降價(jià)購(gòu)買的,因此不能退換。對(duì)此,我深感不滿,因?yàn)槲叶嗄陙硪恢笔琴F店的忠實(shí)顧客,在此事件之前,從來沒有過任何投訴。因此,我對(duì)受到如此待遇深感失望。
I would, however, be perfectlysatisfied if you would kindly replace the sweater or refund my money, whichever is more convenient.資料來源:教育優(yōu)選 http://004km.cn/
最權(quán)威的國(guó)際教育服務(wù)平臺(tái)
然而,我的要求并不高。如果你們能夠給我退換一件,或者為我辦理退費(fèi),怎么方便就怎么辦,我都會(huì)非常滿意的。
I look forward to hearing from you soon.Yours truly,Kenny Gao
期盼收到您的答復(fù)。
您真誠(chéng)的
Kenny Gao
資料來源:教育優(yōu)選 http://004km.cn/
第五篇:雅思G類小作文書信:投訴信
最權(quán)威的國(guó)際教育服務(wù)平臺(tái)
雅思G類小作文書信范文:投訴信(1)
本文是雅思G類小作文書信范文:投訴信(1),供大家參考。相對(duì)于雅思A類寫作而言,雅思G類寫作的復(fù)習(xí)資料較少,希望本文能夠?yàn)橥瑢W(xué)們的雅思備考提供幫助。
題目:
A night club just opened near where you live.You are very unhappy about the situation because it disturbs the peace of the neighborhood.Write a letter to your local government official.Say who you are and explain why you are unhappy and suggest what should be done about it.(投訴信)
范文:
Dear Sir or Madam,I’m writing to express my dissatisfaction with the horriblesituation I have been faced with recently.親愛的先生、女士:
我寫此信是要就我最近所面對(duì)的可怕狀況表達(dá)我的不滿。
資料來源:教育優(yōu)選 http://004km.cn/
最權(quán)威的國(guó)際教育服務(wù)平臺(tái)
I’m a resident of Rose Park on St.Johnson Street.I had been enjoying my life since I moved here five years ago.However, a nightclub recently opened right across the street from my apartment block has completelychanged everything.我是圣約翰遜大街玫瑰花園的居民。自我五年前搬到這里,我的生活一直很愉快。然而最近開在我們樓對(duì)面街道上的一家夜總會(huì)卻改變了一切。
To begin with, the club itself is very unsightly.It has blackened windows with sexually explicit pictures displayed on the outside, which I find extremely offensive.Also, the noise level during the early hours of the morning is so intense that it has really disturbedmy sleep.Consequently, I find that I am unable to concentrate fully on my job, as I am often too tired.首先,這家夜總會(huì)本身就很不堪入目。其窗戶搞得黑乎乎的,外面貼著相當(dāng)淫穢的畫,這一點(diǎn)令我感到尤其難以忍受。此外,凌晨時(shí)刻的噪音太高,嚴(yán)重影響了我的睡眠,所造成的結(jié)果是由于太過疲倦,我無法全力專注于工作。
I work as a surgeon in the local hospital;therefore, I am sure you can see the gravity of my complaint.Indeed, the consequencesof my making any mistake due to my lack of sleep can be very serious indeed.資料來源:教育優(yōu)選 http://004km.cn/
最權(quán)威的國(guó)際教育服務(wù)平臺(tái)
我是本地醫(yī)院的外科醫(yī)生,因此,我相信您能夠看到我投訴的嚴(yán)重性。事實(shí)上,由于我缺乏睡眠而造成任何錯(cuò)誤的后果將是十分嚴(yán)重的。
I understand that, as a member of the local government, you have the power to close the club down.Nevertheless, I know very clearly that people need to make a living and I would not like to be responsible for people losing their jobs.Hence, if you could please ensure that the offensive pictures are removed, and the noise level is kept to a minimumlevel, I would be more than satisfied.我深知,作為當(dāng)?shù)卣囊粏T,您有權(quán)關(guān)閉這家俱樂部。然而,我也很清楚:人們都需要謀生,而我也不愿意對(duì)他人失去工作而負(fù)任何責(zé)任,因此,如果您能確保那些令人難受的畫被撤掉、噪音控制在最低水平,我就將十分滿意了。
I look forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Kenny Gao
期盼得到您的答復(fù)。
您真誠(chéng)的
Kenny Gao
資料來源:教育優(yōu)選 http://004km.cn/