第一篇：攻克英語半壁江山 滿分作文技巧鑒賞之六 從全國歷屆英語高考滿分作文中獲益(2006年)
攻克英語半壁江山
滿分作文技巧鑒賞之六
從全國歷屆英語高考滿分作文中獲益（2006年）
（全國卷I）
【試題回放】
假定你是李華，亞洲冬季運(yùn)動會將在你居住的地方舉辦，現(xiàn)正在招募志愿者，你希望成為其中一員。請按要求用英文給組委會寫一封信。內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：1.個(gè)人情況：年齡，性別，學(xué)歷 2.個(gè)人條件：英語好，愛好體育，善于交際，樂于助人，熟悉本地情況 3.承諾：提供最佳服務(wù)
注意：詞數(shù)100左右，開頭語已為你寫好;可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫;生詞：申請—apply(v.), application(n.)，志愿者—volunteer Dear Sir / Madam:
I was quite excited when I heard the Asian Winter Games will be held in the city I live.My name is Li Hua.I am an 18-year-old boy student in a senior middle school.And I want to be a volunteer for the games.I like English and sports very much.I like making friends and I am ready to help others.I can be a good interpreter in every sports during the time.Hope the games will be a great success.Hope I will be chosen to be one.Yours faithfully，Li Hua
[名師點(diǎn)評]
這篇文章寫得非常流暢，把握了所有要點(diǎn)，同時(shí)以“我”為中心，詳細(xì)說明了自己對志愿者工作的結(jié)合，以此來表達(dá)自己的決心。由于用詞恰當(dāng)，這種表現(xiàn)就比較充分，具備一定的說服力。詞匯和語句的運(yùn)用也不錯。
（全國卷II）
【試題回放】
假定你是李華。應(yīng)英國朋友Bob的要求，寫一封短信介紹你校圖書館的基本情況。內(nèi)容須包括下面兩幅圖中的相關(guān)信息。
注意：
1、字?jǐn)?shù)100左右
2、可以適當(dāng)增減細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫
3、開頭語已為你寫好 Dear Bob，Thank you for your last letter asking about our library.Our library locates between the teaching building and our garden.The shape of it seems to be a book to welcome our students.it’s open from Monday to Friday ,and we can borrow the books from 9:00a.m.to 7:00p.m.There are many books available in our library ,dealing with almost every subject.Not only the books, but also the magazines can be read here.You may borrow up to five books at a time, and keep them for at most ten days.Due to the library , we are offered a place to gain as much knowledge as we can.If you are interested in it, welcome to our school, and I’ll show you around.Yours sincerely，Li hua
[名師點(diǎn)評]
本文最大的特點(diǎn)是描繪仔細(xì)而生動，意思表達(dá)十分契合。文章以短句為主，兼以長句讀起來輕快。文章的體系結(jié)構(gòu)也是常用的三段式，作者極力推薦自己的圖書館，這么好的圖書館怎么不打動他的外國朋友呢?
（安徽卷）
【試題回放】
假設(shè)你是李華，作為選派的交流學(xué)生在美國某中學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)了一年，寄住在Mr.Brown家里，剛回到國內(nèi)?；貒螅惆l(fā)現(xiàn)自己的一本英語詞典遺忘在他家，因此給他寫了一封信，請他幫助寄回詞典。信的主要內(nèi)容如下：
感謝在美國期間他所提供的幫助
一本英語詞典忘記帶回
詞典是美國老師送的，非常珍貴
詞典很可能丟在臥室的書架上
郵資自己付
注意：
1、詞數(shù)100左右;信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好。
2、可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫
2、參考詞匯：郵資-postage Dear Mr.Brown，I have been back, and write this letter to show my thanks.As the exchange student, you make me feel warm.Welcome to my country ,I’ll show you around in turn.However , there exists a problem that I have left my dictionary at your home.I like it very much , for it was a precious gift from my teacher who comes from the U.S.I guess that my book may stay on your shelf in the bedroom.Do you mind if you send my dictionary to me? I will pay for the postage and I’ll be very grateful if you show your warmness again.I’m eager to receive your reply.Yours，Li hua
[名師點(diǎn)評]
本文作為信件，首先其格式是正確的。既然是應(yīng)用文，那么文章的意圖就要明確表示出來，本文在表達(dá)作者寫作意圖的時(shí)候，情真意切，用詞委婉而合理。文章不但使用了定語從句，還采用了疑問句，讓句式變化而不呆板。
（重慶卷）
【試題回放】
加拿大高中生David在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)Internet上登出啟事notice，希望結(jié)識一位中國朋友，以便學(xué)習(xí)中國的語言，文化culture。
假設(shè)你是李華，請?jiān)诳吹竭@則啟事后，用英文給David發(fā)一封電子郵件，主要內(nèi)容包括：
你怎樣得知David的愿望
你愿意成為他的朋友
你打算如何幫助他
你盼望他的回復(fù)
注意：
1、電子郵件的格式已為你寫好
2、字?jǐn)?shù)：100詞左右
3、在答題卡上作答 Dear David，I’m a student from China and have noticed your requirement on line.You would like to search for a Chinese friend to help you get to know China and its culture.Maybe I’m your good choice.China is a country that has a long history of 5,000 years.Not only our history ,but also our culture is the access to understand us better.There are so much that I want to know, if you are interested.I’ll be looking forward to your reply.I’ll show you around our great China if you come to China.Yours sincerely ，Li hua
[名師點(diǎn)評]
本文的語言非常流暢，我們可以看到，本文雖沒有華麗的辭藻，但是語言的組織和層次感很強(qiáng)。同時(shí)連詞的使用，如not only, but also ,讓文章的重點(diǎn)突出，同時(shí)也起到了強(qiáng)調(diào)和吸引注意的目的。
佳品傳奇.美文欣賞（輯）
第二篇：攻克英語半壁江山 滿分作文技巧鑒賞之四 從全國歷屆英語高考滿分作文中獲益(2008年)
攻克英語半壁江山
英語滿分作文技巧鑒賞之四
從全國歷屆英語高考滿分作文中獲益（2008年）
（全國卷）
【試題回放】假定你是李華，從小喜愛大熊貓(panda),一直通過有關(guān)網(wǎng)站(website)關(guān)注三年前在美國圣迭哥動物園出生的大熊貓“蘇琳”和她的母親“白云”?，F(xiàn)在蘇琳即將三歲。請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給動物園工作人員寫一封信：
1、自我介紹;
2、祝賀蘇琳生日;
3、感謝工作人員;
4、索取蘇琳三歲生日照。
注意：
1、詞數(shù)100左右;
2、可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫;
3、開頭語已為你寫好。
例文： Dear Sir/Madam，Greetings from China!
I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan.I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child.About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website,.Now she’s going to be three.I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.Yours truly，Li Hua
【名師點(diǎn)評】本文寫作的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：
1.自我介紹;2.信息來源;3.祝賀生日;4.感謝照顧;5.索取照片;6.合適的結(jié)尾。
這封信格式正確，行文規(guī)范，描述有條不紊，稱呼、正文中的開頭及結(jié)尾、結(jié)束語均表達(dá)到位。文章行文活潑，感情真摯，語言表述準(zhǔn)確，洋溢著作者因大熊貓得到精心照顧而對美方人員的感激之情，以及希望自己愿望成真，得到照片的希冀之情。長短句運(yùn)用合理，結(jié)合了簡單句和復(fù)合句，流暢自然，不露痕跡，的確是一篇佳作。
積累卡片英漢互譯
好詞1.delighted adj.欣喜的，快樂的 2.express v.表達(dá) 3.give birth to v.產(chǎn)生，生育
好句I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.我祝福它生日快樂并且對你們的辛勤工作表達(dá)我的感激之情，正是你們的努力工作讓蘇琳和它的父母在美國過著幸福和健康的生活。
評析：定語從句的使用。
（北京卷）
【試題回放】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三一班的學(xué)生李華，為?？⒄Z園地寫一篇題為“Our Spring Outing” 的英文稿件。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，敘述上周你們班從準(zhǔn)備春游到春游結(jié)束的完整過程。
注意： 詞數(shù)不少于60.提示詞： 游樂園 amusement park 垃圾箱 bin
Last Thursday, we had a class meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing.We came up with several choices such as going boating, climbing a mountain, and going to an amusement park.Finally, we decided to go mountain climbing.The next day, we set off early in the morning.While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view.However, when we reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and banana peels.Then we started to pick up the litter and put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively.We were tired but happy.【名師點(diǎn)評】
本情景作文的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1.討論;2.爬山;3.檢拾別人的垃圾;4.投放垃圾。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)可用不同方式表達(dá)。本文覆蓋了所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，較好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。其中，寫作主題突出，詳略得當(dāng)，應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯，而且有效的使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文機(jī)構(gòu)緊湊。本文敘述清楚，描寫細(xì)致，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用了很多富有表現(xiàn)力的詞和句型，例如：“set off early”，“enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view”, ”were shocked to see litter here and there “等，將活動的情形很形象地描述了出來。
積累卡片英漢互譯
好詞1 set off 出發(fā) 2.litter n.廢棄物 3.respectively adv.分別地
好句1.While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view.在爬山時(shí)，我們享受著溫暖的陽光和美麗的風(fēng)景。
1.However, when we reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and banana peels.然而，當(dāng)我們登上山頂，被眼前的一幕驚呆了：瓶子和香蕉皮這樣的廢棄物到處都是。
評析：細(xì)節(jié)描寫，生動形象?！皊hock”一詞也用得生動傳神。
（江蘇卷）
【試題回放】實(shí)現(xiàn)有效的溝通，建立良好的人際關(guān)系，不僅要善于言表，更要學(xué)會傾聽。請你根據(jù)下表中所提供的信息，寫一篇題為 “Being a Good Listener” 的英文演講稿。
為何傾聽表示尊重，增進(jìn)理解，建立良好的人際關(guān)系
誰來傾聽家長傾聽孩子理解孩子，消除代溝，……
老師傾聽學(xué)生了解學(xué)生，滿足需求，……
同學(xué)相互傾聽增進(jìn)友誼，互幫互學(xué)，……
怎樣傾聽(請考生聯(lián)系自己擬定內(nèi)容，列舉兩至三點(diǎn)。)
注意：
1、對所給要點(diǎn)，逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。
2、詞數(shù)150左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
3、演講稿中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校及本人姓名。
Good afternoon, everyone.The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”.Good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship.Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap;teachers should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a good relationship with their students;students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others.Show your respect and never stop others till they finish their talk;show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile;be open-minded to different opinions even though you don’t like them.In a word, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other.Thank you for your listening!
【名師點(diǎn)評】
這是一篇感情真摯、熱情洋溢的演講稿，文中大量運(yùn)用排比句型，不但準(zhǔn)確流暢地表達(dá)出題目中所提供的信息，而且體現(xiàn)出作者熟練運(yùn)用英語的能力以及不俗的文采。第三段中所使用的相同結(jié)構(gòu)的復(fù)合句式，將傾聽的對象及其作用闡述得淋漓盡致;而第四段中用一系列的祈使句議論應(yīng)如何傾聽，則更進(jìn)一步地增強(qiáng)了這篇演說稿的說服力。
積累卡片英漢互譯
好詞1.promote v.促進(jìn) 2.interpersonal adj.人際的3.generation gap.代溝
4.open-minded adj.虛心的
好句1.students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.同學(xué)之間應(yīng)該互相傾聽，這樣他們可以互相學(xué)習(xí)和幫助，也會形成友誼。
評析：復(fù)雜句的組合，被動句的使用。
2.What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others.我想強(qiáng)調(diào)的是我們每個(gè)人都應(yīng)該更多的傾聽他人。
評析：復(fù)合句的使用。
（湖北卷）
【試題回放】假設(shè)你是卜曼宜，你購買了一部某外國公司生產(chǎn)的手機(jī)，因有質(zhì)量問題，要求該公司更換。請根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)，用英文寫一封電子郵件。
要點(diǎn)：1.問題：手機(jī)不響鈴，不能發(fā)短信;該產(chǎn)品已售完，無法更換;型號新，無配件，無法維修。2.要求：公司應(yīng)盡快予以更換。
注意：1.詞數(shù)為100左右;
2.參考詞匯：配件—— spare part;
3.電子郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好(不計(jì)入你所寫詞數(shù));
4.已給出的電子郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾不得抄入答題卡。Dear Sir，I am writing to you for the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20th Apr.2008 at Tele Mall in Wuhan, P.R.China.Ten days after that, it didn’t ring and send short messages.Then I took it to the seller, but was told that the model had been sold out and I had to wait at least three months for a new one.I had no choice but to go to the repairman.To my disappointment ,he said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts.I was so desperate on hearing that for I can not wait that long.Therefore, I have to require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month.Thank you for your consideration.Sincerely yours，Bu Manyi
【名師點(diǎn)評】
本文內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)齊全，語言豐富，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，如頭兩句說明了購買手機(jī)后發(fā)現(xiàn)故障的情況，中間部分說明了無法維修而必須讓公司更換手機(jī)的原委，最后明確提出自己的要求，明白流暢，將題目所提出的要點(diǎn)全部表達(dá)清楚，較好的完成了任務(wù)。全文以一般過去時(shí)為基調(diào)，結(jié)合主動語態(tài)與被動語態(tài)，并使用了so, but, therefore 等連接詞，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整嚴(yán)密。固定短語，如be sold out ,at least, had no choice but to go, to my disappointment, on hearing that 等的使用，使文章的語言顯得地道而精煉。
積累卡片英漢互譯
好詞1.disappointment n.失望 2.desperate adj.絕望的3.consideration n.體諒
好句To my disappointment ,he said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts.令我失望的是，他說因?yàn)樵谥袊切驴钍謾C(jī)，所以沒有配件來修理。
評析：復(fù)雜句的組織;to my disappointment, 常用短語。
佳品傳奇.美文欣賞（輯）
第三篇：高考英語滿分作文技巧
高考英語滿分作文技巧
在高考英語試卷中，25分的作文分說多不多，說少不少，但是在作文上拿到高分也可以彌補(bǔ)其他方面丟失的分?jǐn)?shù)，下面來看看高考英語滿分作文技巧。高考英語滿分作文技巧
1.首先要認(rèn)真審題。讀懂題目所給信息，初步確定要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，并可用序號標(biāo)出以免遺忘。
2.列題綱使內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)條理化，有序化，統(tǒng)籌安排布局。
3.勿要直譯，需意譯。尤其對看圖情景作文要構(gòu)建完整故事結(jié)構(gòu)，不可逐句羅列了事。
4.要刻意把好語言關(guān)。要用自己最熟悉的句型結(jié)構(gòu)和詞語，力求文理通順，語言準(zhǔn)確。沒有把握的詞句不要寫，確有把握的的可以錦上添花。注意句式的變化，力求在語言表達(dá)正確的基礎(chǔ)上追求句式變換，全品高考網(wǎng)確保語言表達(dá)的高級性。
5.遇到一時(shí)想不起的詞語，需變通?？梢杂猛x近義詞代替，也可以用否定詞加反義詞來表達(dá)，亦可變換句式。不可鉆牛角尖，更不能生造詞語，漢化表達(dá)。
6.注意文章的長度?？淳唧w內(nèi)容而定，如果內(nèi)容多應(yīng)多用復(fù)雜句式，如果內(nèi)容不多，為了達(dá)到詞的限數(shù)應(yīng)多用簡單句式，并適當(dāng)增補(bǔ)合理內(nèi)容。
7.注意保持卷面整潔，書寫工整清楚，書寫的好壞會直接影響閱卷老師的情緒。
8.最后應(yīng)注意復(fù)查全文?？磧?nèi)容要點(diǎn)有無遺漏，標(biāo)點(diǎn)、格式、大小寫是否規(guī)范，是否有語病等。
高考英語滿分作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)
1.完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。
2.覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。
3.應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯。
4.語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面有些許錯誤，但為盡力使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級詞匯所致;具備較強(qiáng)的語言運(yùn)用能力。
5.有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。
6.完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。
高考英語滿分作文范文
【真題再現(xiàn)】
II.Guided Writing
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given in Chinese.上海博物館擬舉辦一次名畫展，現(xiàn)就展出場所(博物館還是社區(qū)圖書館)征集公眾意見，假設(shè)你是王敏，給上海博物館寫一封信表達(dá)你的想法。你的信必須滿足以下要求：
1.簡述你寫信的目的及你對場所的選擇;
2.說明你的理由(從便利性，專業(yè)性等方面對這兩個(gè)場所進(jìn)行對比)
【作文范文】
Dear Sir/ Madam,I’ve just learned that Shanghai Museum will hold a famous painting exhibition and you’re responsible for collecting public suggestions about the best location to hold it.I’m writing this letter to share with you my opinions.As far as I’m concerned, it is more reasonable to hold thepainting exhibition in Shanghai Museum than in community libraries.My reasons are as follows.On the one hand, it is more convenient for people to reach Shanghai Museum, located in the center of the city.Visitors can go there by subway, by bus and so on.What’s more, Shanghai Museum is much more extensive than community libraries, providing visitors with a more comfortable environmenttoappreciate the famous paintings.On the other hand, Shanghai Museum, a well-known and distinguished museum both at home and abroad, is more professional in holding paintingexhibitions.What’s of great significance is that not only does it provide advanced facilities and high-tech monitors but also offers professional security
guards to protect those famous paintings from being damaged or stolen in the process of exhibition.Consequently, I strongly propose that the painting exhibition is to be held in the Shanghai Museum.Yours,Wang Min
第四篇：高考英語作文滿分技巧-看圖作文
寫作指導(dǎo)(3)看圖作文
看圖作文也叫做圖畫式作文，是一種常見的高考題型。它是指根據(jù)圖畫所提供的信息寫一篇短文，或敘述一件事，或通過幾幅相關(guān)的圖畫說明某個(gè)問題或得出某個(gè)結(jié)論。一般性圖畫式作文都包含六個(gè)要點(diǎn)：時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件、過程、結(jié)果。這些要點(diǎn)往往是缺一不可的，否則整篇文章就不完整。
看圖作文要求考生將畫面所包含的有效信息直接運(yùn)用英語思維轉(zhuǎn)換成英語語言文字，再根據(jù)這些要點(diǎn)謀篇布局。
一、看圖作文的考查特點(diǎn) 1．命制思路特點(diǎn)
看圖作文的主要考查特點(diǎn)是生動、形象、直觀、圖文并茂。它要求行文時(shí)做到：主題明確，即文章能概括圖畫所反映的中心思想；圖文一致，即文章能體現(xiàn)圖畫中所反映的主要內(nèi)容。
2．能力表現(xiàn)特點(diǎn)
看圖作文要求考生具有敏銳的觀察力，豐富的想像力、嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)?shù)倪壿嬎季S能力、冷靜的分析能力，以及最終將以上能力綜合體現(xiàn)出來的良好的書面表達(dá)能力。3．語言表達(dá)特點(diǎn)
表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，過渡自然。看圖作文行文時(shí)要注意詞匯與句型的精心選擇，準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)。表達(dá)過程中要注意圖畫信息的連接方式，尤其要注意句與句，段與段之間的意思連貫。為此，考生應(yīng)學(xué)會靈活使用連接詞、指示代詞等，適當(dāng)?shù)馗鶕?jù)自己的需要和文章的進(jìn)展調(diào)整信息出現(xiàn)的順序。
二、看圖作文的寫作步驟 1．仔細(xì)審題，確定要點(diǎn) 2．緊扣要點(diǎn)，組句成篇 3．表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，過渡自然 4．規(guī)范書寫，檢查潤色
美國中學(xué)生Jeff將要到你所在的紅星中學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)中文，經(jīng)協(xié)商安排住在你家。假設(shè)你是李華，請給
Jeff寫一封信，按照下圖順序介紹他來中國后的生活安排。
注意：1.信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好； 2．詞數(shù)不少于60。
Dear Jeff，My name is Li Hua.I’m from Beijing Hongxing Middle School.I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing.________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes.Yours，Li Hua 案例分析⊙
1．認(rèn)真審題，確定人稱和時(shí)態(tài)
通過閱讀題目，我們可以確定：此文的體裁是說明文，須用
together by bike
④have lunch at the school dining hall；talk with friends over lunch
⑤finish classes at 4 in the afternoon
⑥join other students in playing ball games or swimming
3．選用句式，連詞成句巧成文
根據(jù)文章體裁的不同適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、目的、方式、原因、結(jié)果等細(xì)節(jié)擴(kuò)展句式；恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂靡恍┚哂谐猩蠁⑾伦饔玫倪^渡性詞匯或過渡句；適當(dāng)調(diào)整句子順序，使文章語言簡練、連貫、流暢。
(1)We will provide you with a room of your own with a bed，a desk，a couple of chairs and a TV.(2)Our school is quite close to our home.We could go to school together by bike.(3)We will have lunch at the school dining hall.(4)You will like the delicious Chinese food and enjoy talking with friends over lunch.(5)Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon.(6)You can then join other students in playing ball
games or swimming.(7)We’ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.4．認(rèn)真核查，注意語言的連貫和得體 要做到“四查”：
(1)查句式。看句子成分是否完整、語序是否正確等。
(2)查動詞。看謂語動詞的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)是否正確，主謂是否一致，非謂語動詞形式是否正確等。(3)查習(xí)語、搭配?？词欠穹嫌⒄Z表達(dá)習(xí)慣。(4)查拼寫、詞數(shù)?？雌磳懯欠裼姓`、詞數(shù)是否合適。
Dear Jeff，My name is Li Hua.I’m from Beijing Hongxing Middle School.I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing.While you are here，we’ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed，a desk，a couple of chairs
and a TV set.You’ll also have your own bathroom.Our school is quite close to our home，so we could go to school together by bike.At noon we’ll have lunch at the school dining hall.I’m sure you’ll like the delicious Chinese food and enjoy talking with friends over lunch.Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon.You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming.It’ll be a lot of fun.If you have any questions or requests，please let me know.We’ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.Best wishes.Yours，Li Hua
你們學(xué)校在征集改善道路交通狀況的文章，請你根據(jù)題目要求及下面圖畫的內(nèi)容提示，為學(xué)校的壁報(bào)寫一篇稿件，談?wù)勀銓煌顩r的思考。注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于120；
2．應(yīng)包括圖畫中的全部內(nèi)容： 3．標(biāo)題與開頭已為你寫好；
4．參考詞匯：行人 pedestrian；人行橫道 zebra crossing；隔離護(hù)欄 divider。
What’s Wrong with Them?
Take a look at the road conditions of today.Something must be wrong with today’s people.________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
【參考答案】
What’s Wrong with Them?
Take a look at the road conditions of today.Something must be wrong with today’s people.Quite a few pedestrians and cyclists behave as if there were no traffic rules at all.They cross roads anywhere as they like，even though there are zebra crossings just a few yards away.Some even put themselves at risk taking short cuts by climbing dividers in the middle of roads.Many drivers act like F1 racers on the
highways.They drive at considerable speeds without care.They usually speed through zebra crossings，even when pedestrians are there.When there is a red light at an intersection，pedestrians or cyclists never tend to pause or stop.They all forget where they are.Sometimes there are some crazy people driving on the roads without driving licenses，or worse，drink and drive，which can make the road into a bloody battle field.Why do such things happen? In my opinion，it is just due to their lack of moral duty that people
ignore various traffic rules，road safety，or even the lives of others.This leads to their bad and reckless behavior，which makes the traffic conditions go from bad to worse.It is believed that something should be done to improve the whole situation.Then road safety won’t be a problem and traffic conditions won’t be a bother to us anymore.
第五篇：全國高考英語滿分作文賞析
李老師滿分課堂 免費(fèi)答疑解題熱線 0531-86969606 QQ：1044738198 希望更多老師加入到公益教學(xué)中
一.用詞準(zhǔn)確;表達(dá)地道
【北京卷】
【試題回放】
李老師滿分課堂 免費(fèi)答疑解題熱線 0531-86969606 QQ：1044738198 希望更多老師加入到公益教學(xué)中
【名師點(diǎn)評】
這是一篇滿分作文。由于這篇作文的出現(xiàn)，導(dǎo)致了安徽省該年的英語作文分?jǐn)?shù)普遍偏低。仔細(xì)分析了這篇文章，寫的的確是好，很地道的美式英語，一些詞語的大膽使用，讓人不得不猜測此人或者是家人可能有過國外生活的經(jīng)歷，否則這么地道標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的英語，可不是一朝一夕所能寫出來的。比如說：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大膽運(yùn)用，list, can't wait to 簡直是perfect!況且文章中沒有一個(gè)錯誤，不管是書寫還是語法。英語能夠?qū)W到這種程度，不可謂不讓人佩服。二.非謂語動詞為作文添彩
【北京卷】
【試題回放】情景作文
假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三一班的學(xué)生李華，為響應(yīng)綠化祖國的號召，你班四月十二日去郊區(qū)植樹，請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，介紹植樹活動的全過程，給某英文雜志的“綠色行動”專欄寫一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”為題的英文稿件。
注意：詞數(shù)不少于60
提示詞：郊區(qū) suburbs
April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day.In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way.Upon arrival, we began to work immediately.Some were digging holes.Some were carrying and planting young trees.Others were watering.After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees.Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action.Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement.We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.【名師點(diǎn)評】
本文是設(shè)計(jì)巧妙的提綱要點(diǎn)式作文，與環(huán)保結(jié)合，立意較好。文章思路清晰，要點(diǎn)連貫，在語言的表達(dá)上選詞新穎，同時(shí)運(yùn)用了分詞短語作狀語等較好的句式表達(dá)。
【北京卷】
【試題回放】開放作文
請根據(jù)下面提示，寫一篇短文，詞數(shù)不少于50
In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture.You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.What an interesting picture!A western young man, sitting at a table, is ready to eat a bowl of noodles.He is holding two forks the same way as we Chinese hold chopsticks.He is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a lot.At first glance, I think it’s a bit funny, for we Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles.The man in the picture is trying to copy us.Obviously he is doing it the hard way.Maybe using one fork will do a better job, In my opinion, we don’t need to copy others’ ways of thinking.Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.【名師點(diǎn)評】
本文是開放性作文，要求考生把握好圖畫內(nèi)容，發(fā)散表達(dá)。考生重點(diǎn)要看出這個(gè)人是卷發(fā)高鼻的外國人，要體會到西式刀叉對中式食物的矛盾性。行文結(jié)構(gòu)十分明晰，同時(shí)句式使用得熟練而準(zhǔn)確。三.復(fù)合句為寫作增色
【全國卷】
【試題回放】
假定你是李華，從小喜愛大熊貓(panda),一直通過有關(guān)網(wǎng)站(website)關(guān)注三年前在美國圣迭哥動物園出生的大熊貓“蘇琳”和她的母親“白云”?，F(xiàn)在蘇琳即將三歲。請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給動物園工作人員寫一封信：
李老師滿分課堂 免費(fèi)答疑解題熱線 0531-86969606 QQ：1044738198 希望更多老師加入到公益教學(xué)中
1、自我介紹;
2、祝賀蘇琳生日;
3、感謝工作人員;
4、索取蘇琳三歲生日照。
注意：
1、詞數(shù)100左右;
2、可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫;
3、開頭語已為你寫好。
例文：
Dear Sir/Madam，Greetings from China!
I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan.I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child.About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website,.Now she’s going to be three.I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.Yours truly，Li Hua
【名師點(diǎn)評】本文寫作的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：
1.自我介紹;2.信息來源;3.祝賀生日;4.感謝照顧;5.索取照片;6.合適的結(jié)尾。
這封信格式正確，行文規(guī)范，描述有條不紊，稱呼、正文中的開頭及結(jié)尾、結(jié)束語均表達(dá)到位。文章行文活潑，感情真摯，語言表述準(zhǔn)確，洋溢著作者因大熊貓得到精心照顧而對美方人員的感激之情，以及希望自己愿望成真，得到照片的希冀之情。長短句運(yùn)用合理，結(jié)合了簡單句和復(fù)合句，流暢自然，不露痕跡，的確是一篇佳作。
積累卡片英漢互譯
好詞1.delighted adj.欣喜的，快樂的 2.express v.表達(dá) 3.give birth to v.產(chǎn)生，生育
好句I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.我祝福它生日快樂并且對你們的辛勤工作表達(dá)我的感激之情，正是你們的努力工作讓蘇琳和它的父母在美國過著幸福和健康的生活。
【全國卷II】【試題回放】
一家賓館新開業(yè)，為吸引外國賓客，希望在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上進(jìn)行宣傳。請你用英語為其 寫一篇文字介紹。主要內(nèi)容包括：
1.地點(diǎn)：距白山入口處500米;
2.房間及價(jià)格：單人間(共20間)，100元/天;雙人間(共15間)，150元/天;熱水淋浴;3.餐飲：餐廳(中、西餐)，咖啡廳(茶、咖啡);4.游泳池：全天免費(fèi)開放;5.歡迎預(yù)定。
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右，開頭語已為你寫好;2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!
Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides singleperson room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day.It also provides hot water bath service.You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe.The swimming pool is open for free the whole day.All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable.So come to enjoy yourself!
Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.李老師滿分課堂 免費(fèi)答疑解題熱線 0531-86969606 QQ：1044738198 希望更多老師加入到公益教學(xué)中
【名師點(diǎn)評】
本文開門見山，首先點(diǎn)明了主旨。本文最大的特點(diǎn)是應(yīng)用了很多比較復(fù)雜的句式，使文章比較出彩。開頭使用了獨(dú)立結(jié)構(gòu)交代賓館位置。which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句的使用也很正確。總地來說，文章句式精煉，是篇不錯的滿分作文。
積累卡片英漢互譯
好詞 1.provide v.提供2.convenience n.便利
好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and are
very enjoyable.所有這些服務(wù)都會給你帶來便利，并且非常的愉快。評析：bring great convenience，帶來便利。
【重慶卷】
【試題回放】
據(jù)報(bào)道，7歲的美國女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung cancer)后處于極度的痛苦之中，美國抗癌協(xié)會(ACS)決定，每當(dāng)Amy收到一封慰問信，就給她增加3美分的治療款。
假如你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，請你用英文給Amy寫一封慰問信，主要內(nèi)容包括：
自我介紹
得知的情況
表示鼓勵
打算為她做什么
祝她早日康復(fù)
注意：
1.信的格式已為你寫好
2.信中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)情況。
3.詞數(shù)100左右。
4.請?jiān)诖痤}卡上作答。
Dear Amy，I’m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of China.I’m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brought you great pain.But you should realize that you are young and have a promising great future.So, stand up and fight against the disease!I’m sure you will win.It is reported that the America anti-cancer association will donate three cents upon every comfort letter you receive.So I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to you.In that way, you will get enough money for you to be cured.Hope you can be well soon.Yours，Li Hua
[名師點(diǎn)評]
本文依照要求，涵蓋了所有要點(diǎn)。文章使用了高中常見的句式，如I’m sorry to hear that..., It is reported that...等，都比較好。作者對定語從句的使用恰到好處地修飾了文章，行文自然而通順，值得學(xué)習(xí)。
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好詞1.realize v.意識到2.promise v.允諾3.donate v.捐贈
好句1.Im sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brings you great pain.我很遺憾地得知你身患肺癌，給你帶來了巨大的痛苦。好處：which引導(dǎo)限制性定語從句。
2.So, stand up and fight against the disease!因此，堅(jiān)強(qiáng)地與疾病做斗爭吧!
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好處：擲地有聲，語言準(zhǔn)確。
四.結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,句式準(zhǔn)確
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2007年4月29日上午10點(diǎn)到11點(diǎn)，全國億萬學(xué)生陽光體育活動在各地大中小學(xué)校同時(shí)進(jìn)行，江蘇省1，100萬學(xué)生積極參與了這項(xiàng)活動。
教育部倡導(dǎo)學(xué)生：
u 每天鍛煉一小時(shí)
u 健康工作五十年
u 幸福生活一輩子
請你根據(jù)以上提示，用英語準(zhǔn)備一份發(fā)言稿，向同學(xué)們講述一下陽光體育活動的有關(guān)情況，并就高三學(xué)生是否需要每天花一小時(shí)鍛煉，談?wù)勀愕目捶袄碛伞?/p>
注意：
1、發(fā)言稿應(yīng)包括以上所有信息，要有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
2、詞數(shù)：120左右。發(fā)言稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
3、參考詞匯：陽光體育活動——a national student sports program;
教育部——the Ministry of Education
Good afternoon, everyone，The national student sports program, waged by the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10：00a.m.~11:00a.m.on April 29，2007 in many primary and middle schools all over China.Almost 11 million students in Jiangsu province participated in this program.The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years.Our whole life will be very enjoyable.In my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is limited.Health is a basic condition for our study.If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records.So every one of you, join the program now!
Thank you!
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本文的結(jié)構(gòu)十分明晰，同時(shí)句式使用得熟練而準(zhǔn)確。本文分為三段，前兩段敘述，后一段發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)，典型的作文結(jié)構(gòu)。在句式使用上，作者用法多樣，使用了獨(dú)立結(jié)構(gòu)和虛擬語氣，十分出彩。復(fù)雜的句式是本文的特點(diǎn)之一。
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好詞1.wage v.發(fā)動2.aim v.瞄準(zhǔn)3.advocate v.提倡
好句1.The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years.教育部提倡我們每天做一個(gè)小時(shí)的運(yùn)動，能夠健康地活50年。
評析：advocate，其后接虛擬語氣，可以省略情態(tài)動詞。
好句2.If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records.如果我們不進(jìn)行運(yùn)動，我們的學(xué)習(xí)成績就不會很好。
評析：虛擬語氣。
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1、這山望著那山高 The grass is always greener on the other hill.人都是這山望著那山高，對自己的狀況沒有滿意的時(shí)候。
Almost all people see that the grass is greener on the other hill.They never feel satisfied with what they’ve already got.2、上癮get into one’s blood
說來也怪，很多不好的事往往會使人上癮。
It’s astoundingly funny that many harmful things usually get into our blood.3、發(fā)牢騷 beef 他坐在那里什么事也不干，總是發(fā)牢騷，真煩死人。
I’m really bored stiff with his sitting there doing nothing but beefing.4、等不及了 champ at the bit 咱們快點(diǎn)吧，孩子們都等不及了。
Let’s shake the leg.The kids are champing at the bit.5、點(diǎn)頭哈腰bow and scrape 從她在老板前點(diǎn)頭哈腰地那個(gè)模樣，你就知道她是個(gè)什么人了。
From the way she’s bowing and scraping in front of the boss, you’ll know what sort of person she is.6、瘋瘋癲癲go gaga 對他的話不要太在意了，他總是瘋瘋癲癲的。
Don’t take what he says so seriously.He’s always going gaga.李老師滿分課堂 免費(fèi)答疑解題熱線 0531-86969606 QQ：1044738198 希望更多老師加入到公益教學(xué)中
7、說話不算數(shù)go back on one’s words 他那個(gè)人說話從不算數(shù),我們可不能依靠他。
We cannot account on him.He always goes back on his words.8、廢話連篇beat one’s gums 誰喜歡坐在那里聽你的廢話連篇？
Who would enjoy sitting there listening to your beating your gums?
9、恩將仇報(bào) bite the hand that feeds one 你難道不知道她是個(gè)恩將仇報(bào)的人？
Don’t you know she’s the one that would bite the hand that feeds her?
10、不忍心not have the heart to do 如果我是你，我可不忍心把孩子們就在家里沒人照看
If I were you, I wouldn’t have the heart to leave the kids at home uncared for.11、勤快an eager beaver 他特別勤快，從來沒有閑著的時(shí)候。
He’s an eager beaver, never staying idle
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