第一篇：高考英語作文五要求

2．從以下五方面進(jìn)行科學(xué)合理的寫作

1．準(zhǔn)確性。

準(zhǔn)確性是要求寫出語法正確的句子，包括時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、用詞、句法和結(jié)構(gòu)等。然而，很多學(xué)生受到漢語思維習(xí)慣的影響，在寫作時(shí)常常不自覺地出現(xiàn)不規(guī)范的表達(dá)。要做到準(zhǔn)確、規(guī)范地表達(dá)。

首先，要牢記一些常用句型和習(xí)慣表達(dá)方式，避免中文式英語。在實(shí)踐中不斷總結(jié)英漢表達(dá)差異，培養(yǎng)用英語來思維的習(xí)慣。

例1.我非常喜歡踢足球。

錯(cuò)誤表達(dá)：I very like play football.應(yīng)修改為：I like playing football very much.例2.工人們熱烈歡迎我們參觀農(nóng)場(chǎng)。

錯(cuò)誤表達(dá)：The workers welcomed us to visit the farm.應(yīng)修改為：The farm workers gave us a warm welcome.其次，要多讀多背，在精讀中吸收知識(shí)?，F(xiàn)代語言學(xué)理論告訴我們：大量的語言輸入為語言的輸出創(chuàng)造了可能性。只有大量信息的輸入，才能在必要時(shí)輸出。閱讀和背誦量增大了，才有助于培養(yǎng)學(xué)生用英語思維的習(xí)慣，幫助他們?cè)鰪?qiáng)語感，能自然地使用一些好的句式和表達(dá)方式。正確牢記這些慣用語，可以增添句子表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確性，減少不必要的錯(cuò)誤，還能提高得分的檔次。

2．條理性。

條理性是指合理布局文章結(jié)構(gòu)，條理要清晰，格式要正確。首先，在文章思路、組織材料、敘述順序等方面要有條理性。如寫一篇記敘文，可以按照事情的發(fā)展的先后順序來寫；若是介紹某一場(chǎng)所的說明文，可按照空間順序來安排行文順序；如果是議論文，可以按“提出問題?邛分析問題?邛解決問題”的順序來安排結(jié)構(gòu)。全文應(yīng)首尾呼應(yīng)，即開頭和結(jié)尾要點(diǎn)題，前后統(tǒng)一。其次，根據(jù)需要安排好段落、層次要分明。每段的開頭結(jié)尾也要重視，開頭往往是起始句，結(jié)尾往往是總結(jié)句。因此，教師在寫作指導(dǎo)中要加強(qiáng)對(duì)學(xué)生的思維條理性、邏輯性的訓(xùn)練。

3．流暢連貫性。

流暢連貫性是指根據(jù)文章表達(dá)的需要，在語句之間采用不同的銜接過渡手段，以使文章層次清晰、行文連貫、表意傳神。關(guān)聯(lián)詞就是常用的連接手段之一，如表示遞進(jìn)、補(bǔ)充關(guān)系用besides，in addition，moreover等；表示對(duì)比、轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系用on one hand…on the other hand，on the contrary, however, in spite of，although，otherwise，while；表示因果關(guān)系用because of，thanks to, therefore, thus, as a result等；表示解釋、說明關(guān)系用 namely, that is to say, in other words等；表示時(shí)間、順序關(guān)系用firstly, secondly, lastly, shortly after等；表示結(jié)論關(guān)系用to conclude, in a word, in brief, to sum up, in short等。這些關(guān)聯(lián)詞的恰當(dāng)使用無疑會(huì)使全文過渡自然，同時(shí)增強(qiáng)了邏輯性和緊湊性，使文章讀起來如行云流水,平實(shí)自然。

4．簡(jiǎn)潔多樣性。

簡(jiǎn)潔多樣性就是要做到語言簡(jiǎn)潔、不重復(fù)，并能隨情景內(nèi)容的變化使用多種句式，語言結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯要豐富。可以采用以下的方式：

（1）使用一些同義詞或詞組替代一些單詞，以增加文采，豐富語句的表現(xiàn)力。如hit 可用 knock down 代替；is under construction 可用來取代 is being built；用 prefer，enjoy 或 be fond of，be interested in 等詞或詞組來替代 like等。

（2）使用不同結(jié)構(gòu)、不同長(zhǎng)度的句子來取代單調(diào)乏味的句式結(jié)構(gòu)，使句型多樣化。可使用定語從句、名詞性從句、狀語從句和并列句等將意義相關(guān)的幾個(gè)句子連接起來，或通過緊縮，去掉多余的成分來避免累贅、松散，使句子凝練、層次清晰，達(dá)到更好的表達(dá)效果。

5．規(guī)范性。

規(guī)范性就是指要按要求規(guī)范作答，包括標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)、英語字母大小寫和卷面整潔等。高考試卷評(píng)分原則中規(guī)定：“如書寫較差，以至影響交際，將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次?！鼻逍旅骼实木碜訒?huì)使人覺得具有美感，并感到考生的態(tài)度是端正的，給評(píng)卷教師增加好印象。因此，要求學(xué)生在平時(shí)要對(duì)自己提出嚴(yán)格要求，逐步達(dá)到標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，尤其是在臨考前的一個(gè)月，要有意識(shí)地進(jìn)行模擬訓(xùn)練，找出問題，及時(shí)糾正，不斷提高。

實(shí)踐證明，如果在寫作訓(xùn)練中教師能夠充分了解學(xué)生在書面表達(dá)中的常見問題，并有針對(duì)性地進(jìn)行寫作指導(dǎo)，就可以讓學(xué)生少出現(xiàn)失誤，從而在高考中獲得高分。

第二篇：高考英語滿分作文精選五(附翻譯)

【例文】

Doing sport builds up our body strength and reduces diseases.Though we lead a better life, our health is becoming worse now.So “EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY，KEEP ILLNESS AWAY” has been raised by the government.At noon or after school we play ball games, swimming and running.Look!The playground seems smaller because lots of students are playing on it.The school life has become colorful and we are energetic.As a result we study harder and better.The Sunny Sports has brought an exciting change to us.Let’s keep on doing it.【翻譯】

做運(yùn)動(dòng)建立了我們的身體力量，減少疾病。

雖然我們過上更好的生活，我們的健康越來越差了。因此，“每天要鍛煉1小時(shí)，保持因病逝世”已經(jīng)提出的政府。

在中午或放學(xué)后，我們玩球，游泳和跑步。瞧！操場(chǎng)似乎較小，因?yàn)楹芏鄬W(xué)生都在操場(chǎng)上后援學(xué)校生活變得豐富多彩，我們energetic.As因此我們努力學(xué)習(xí)，更好。

在陽光體育運(yùn)動(dòng)帶來了一個(gè)令人振奮的變化給我們。讓我們繼續(xù)這樣做。

第三篇：作文評(píng)語五要求

作文評(píng)語五要求

一,具體實(shí)在,確切審慎

作文評(píng)語要具體,實(shí)在,使學(xué)生真正有所收獲,而不要寫那些放之四海皆準(zhǔn)的抽象,空間的套話,廢話.比如,有學(xué)生寫的游記內(nèi)容單薄,如果評(píng)語只寫“內(nèi)容單薄”,學(xué)生就很難準(zhǔn)確把握,不知從哪里去修改.可以這樣寫:“這個(gè)景點(diǎn)不錯(cuò),我很想欣賞那里的風(fēng)光.你能不能具體地告訴我 比如,它與我們本地的名勝古跡有什么不同 你說游玩途中被’宰了一刀’,怎樣被宰的 結(jié)果如何 ”如果一時(shí)很難就學(xué)生的作文作出具體的,恰如其分的,有針對(duì)性的評(píng)語,就寫些鼓勵(lì)學(xué)生上進(jìn)或?qū)ζ錇槿颂幨?日常生活有指導(dǎo)意義的話語.比如我有次布置學(xué)生寫題為《我喜歡的衣著打扮》的作文,有一篇作文寫得內(nèi)容空洞,我就針對(duì)該學(xué)生平時(shí)的衣著打扮進(jìn)行品評(píng),指出了她衣著打扮的特點(diǎn),哪些地方很好,哪些地方不足.評(píng)語看起來似乎與作文本身關(guān)聯(lián)不大,但它既對(duì)學(xué)生的日常生活提供了有益的參考,提高了學(xué)生的審美趣味,又激發(fā)了學(xué)生關(guān)心生活,注重觀察的興致,起到了打開學(xué)生作文之源的應(yīng)答功能.二,人文合評(píng),溝通回應(yīng)

心理學(xué)中有一種“自己人”效應(yīng),它告訴我們要使對(duì)方接受你的觀點(diǎn)與評(píng)價(jià),你必須同對(duì)方保持“同體觀”關(guān)系,即在對(duì)方看來,你是為他好,為他著想,這樣雙方的心理距離就縮小了,寫作文評(píng)語時(shí)也可以利用這種效應(yīng).教師要通過作文了解學(xué)生的心態(tài),將心比心,對(duì)學(xué)生作文中流露出來的情感,意向,興趣,愛好及時(shí)給予回應(yīng);評(píng)語要在字里行間寄予厚望,在一言一語中傳遞愛心;在語言形式上要盡量多用委婉,商量,探討的口吻,少下指令,斷語,杜絕挖苦,嘲諷,讓評(píng)語處處傳遞著老師愛學(xué)生的誠(chéng)摯殷切之情,平等寬容之意,讓學(xué)生從中受到感染與啟發(fā),得到撫慰與交流,獲得信心與力量.如有次我讓學(xué)生自由作文,有個(gè)男生寫了篇《渴望愛情》的文章,文中寫出了自己對(duì)異性的好奇,對(duì)愛情的渴望.應(yīng)該說文章寫得相當(dāng)不錯(cuò),但如果任由他的這種感情發(fā)展下去,勢(shì)必會(huì)陷入早戀的泥潭,影響學(xué)業(yè),有害身心成長(zhǎng).因此,我在給他的評(píng)語中首先肯定了他的作文很有特色,敢于袒露胸懷,感情也真摯,寫出了花季少年的情懷;同時(shí)指出這種情懷雖可理解,但要用理智來駕馭.評(píng)語中寫道:“愛情遲早會(huì)來,但不是現(xiàn)在.如果沒有成熟的心理和一定的基礎(chǔ),早開的愛情之花也會(huì)早謝,為了迎接真正的愛情的到來,我想你會(huì)知道怎么去做.” 三,誠(chéng)于嘉許,寬于稱道

“誠(chéng)于嘉許,寬于稱道”是美國(guó)歷史上第一個(gè)年薪過百萬的管理人員斯瓦伯的管理之道.在記者問及他有什么本事使得老板愿意付給他超過百萬的年薪時(shí),他回答說:“我對(duì)鋼鐵懂的并不多.我最大的本事就是能鼓舞起員工,而鼓舞員工的最好辦法就是贊賞與鼓勵(lì).”“如果說我喜歡什么的話,那就是我誠(chéng)于嘉許,寬于稱道.”企業(yè)管理之道是如此,教育之道又何嘗不是這樣呢 教師寫作文評(píng)語時(shí),也應(yīng)充分挖掘?qū)W生習(xí)作的長(zhǎng)處與優(yōu)點(diǎn),并予以充分的甚至放大的肯定與贊許,讓學(xué)生品嘗到成功的喜悅,從而增強(qiáng)自信心,提高作文興趣.我們也不妨多寫一些激發(fā)學(xué)生寫作信心,調(diào)動(dòng)其寫作熱情的賞識(shí)鼓勵(lì)性評(píng)語,如:“這個(gè)比喻新穎,別致,看得出你費(fèi)了一番心思”等.四,精心修改,妙語賞析

教師的評(píng)語應(yīng)既評(píng)人又評(píng)文,不能忽視學(xué)生作文在寫作形式,寫作技巧方面存在的問題,這方面可以借鑒我國(guó)古代文論家,評(píng)點(diǎn)家的方法和藝術(shù).例如毛宗崗評(píng)點(diǎn)《三國(guó)演義》,增加了卷首詞《臨江仙》(滾滾長(zhǎng)江東逝水),然后又增添了開篇語“話說天下大事,分久必合,合久必分”.又將卷末《古風(fēng)》最后兩句“鼎足三分已成夢(mèng),一統(tǒng)乾坤歸晉朝”改為“鼎足三分已成夢(mèng),后人憑吊空牢騷”.不僅如此,他還就此寫了一段鑒賞性的評(píng)語:“此一篇《古風(fēng)》,將全部事跡隱括其中.而末兩語,以一’夢(mèng)’字,一’空’字結(jié)之,正與卷首詞中之意相合.一部大書,以詞起,以詩(shī)收,絕妙章法.”這種對(duì)原文精修后,又對(duì)修改處賞析的評(píng)語方法,不僅解決了“應(yīng)該怎樣寫”的問題,還指出了“為什么應(yīng)該這樣寫”的理由.如果我們把這種方法運(yùn)用到學(xué)生的作文評(píng)改中,必會(huì)給他們帶來深刻的啟迪和感悟.五,講究文采,張揚(yáng)個(gè)性

作文評(píng)語其實(shí)也是教師的作品,那種文字精美而富有個(gè)性的評(píng)語,那種字字珠璣,擲地有聲的評(píng)語,則能以其獨(dú)特的魅力,給學(xué)生耳目一新的感覺,一種文學(xué)的熏陶,一種精神愉悅的審美享受,令學(xué)生長(zhǎng)久銘記,永志不忘.因此,語文教師要通過評(píng)語讓學(xué)生感受到自己的老師也是一個(gè)文章高手,因?yàn)椤笆痉妒亲詈玫睦蠋煛薄鞍駱拥牧α渴菬o窮的”.另外,可嘗試在評(píng)語的形式和體式上進(jìn)行改進(jìn).如可運(yùn)用古人詩(shī)詞,名人格言,精短寓言,哲理故事,精彩比喻,標(biāo)點(diǎn)圖式等方式來品評(píng),力求活潑新穎,引人入勝,印象深刻.如評(píng)改一篇題為《父愛》的習(xí)作時(shí),我寫了如下評(píng)語:“父愛是人生命深處的根,而這根上的花,果乃至心情無疑是最美麗的,它不但滴露著奮進(jìn)者青春年華的光與影,更流溢著人世間純凈美麗的人倫情感美.有誰能忘記這人世間的真愛呢 ”好的評(píng)語,對(duì)學(xué)生而言,既是示范,更是有形的教育和無形的鞭策.筆端傾真情 精心寫評(píng)語

一,歸納式(概括式)將學(xué)生習(xí)作中的主要內(nèi)容或主要觀點(diǎn),進(jìn)行歸納,提煉,講評(píng)或交流時(shí),便于其他學(xué)生提綱挈領(lǐng),一目了然,迅速地把握文章的主旨.示例一:習(xí)作者讀外國(guó)名著《卑微的神靈》,讀出了書中釀成主人公悲劇命運(yùn)的社會(huì)原因:沉重的封建枷鎖——種族姓氏的歧視;讀出了該書的藝術(shù)特色——“平實(shí)的語言流淌”,“一再被重復(fù)的細(xì)節(jié)”描寫;讀出了該書的悲劇意義——“鏗然的玫瑰開在了沼澤里”;讀出了該書的藝術(shù)感染力——“讀了想笑,卻不自覺地哭”……

二,評(píng)析式

將學(xué)生習(xí)作中的構(gòu)思立意,選材組材,結(jié)構(gòu)安排,語言表達(dá)等方面的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)或成敗得失,作一番較為全面的評(píng)論和分析,使學(xué)生讀后從中受到啟發(fā),獲得借鑒.示例二:本文的特色主要表現(xiàn)在以下三個(gè)方面:一是文章緊扣論題,選用典型的論據(jù)材料,有力地證明了“美麗不一定脆弱”這一論點(diǎn).文中的論據(jù)豐富翔實(shí),古今中外的人物,自然界中的生靈,中國(guó)的女足等材料信手拈來,增添了文章的說服力.二是論述縱橫捭闔,語言淋漓酣暢,邏輯性強(qiáng).三是描寫與說理論證相結(jié)合.例如第2段中簡(jiǎn)明扼要地描述了王昭君出塞時(shí)的情形,突出了她美麗而又堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的性格;第3段中要言不煩地描述了傲然挺立在黃土高坡上高高的白楊樹的英姿,同時(shí)還描述了掉在巖崖峭壁上的種子長(zhǎng)成巨樹的生長(zhǎng)歷程,突出了它們美麗而又堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的特性.所有這些描寫,增添了說理的生動(dòng)性,形象性,成為本文一道道亮麗的風(fēng)景線.三,賞析式

為學(xué)生優(yōu)秀習(xí)作寫上鑒賞和評(píng)析性的文字,目的是供其他學(xué)生閱讀作品時(shí)提高鑒賞的品位.示例三:北大五名學(xué)生攀登希夏邦馬西峰遇難,成為2002年中國(guó)體育十大新聞之一.在這則新聞短評(píng)中,習(xí)作者用悠揚(yáng)而婉轉(zhuǎn)的笛聲,為遇難者吹奏了一曲生命的挽歌和頌歌.在這支曲調(diào)中,習(xí)作者把猥瑣平庸,虛度一生與雖壯志未酬,但轟轟烈烈地為實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想而死這兩種不同的生命價(jià)值進(jìn)行對(duì)比,把平庸與壯烈,卑劣與崇高,區(qū)分得清清楚楚,愛憎褒貶鮮明地融注其中,曲調(diào)時(shí)而深沉委婉,時(shí)而激昂慷慨,婉轉(zhuǎn)動(dòng)聽.歌詞用語準(zhǔn)確,詞匯豐富,內(nèi)容積極健康,曲終抒發(fā)的“啟示”格調(diào)高雅,催人奮進(jìn),一掃文壇某些看客的悲涼之音,令人回腸蕩氣,耳目一新,譜寫了一曲時(shí)代的強(qiáng)音.四,對(duì)照式

就是將學(xué)生習(xí)作中的優(yōu)點(diǎn),缺點(diǎn)或不足之處對(duì)照著寫.學(xué)生習(xí)作中瑕瑜互見的文章往往占多數(shù),撰寫這類評(píng)語時(shí)措詞要婉轉(zhuǎn),意見要中肯,避免挫傷學(xué)生寫作的積極性.示例四:本文針對(duì)美國(guó)微軟公司有意聘用一些曾在衰敗過的公司里工作的經(jīng)理這件事,有感而發(fā),提出了“挫折也是一筆財(cái)富”這個(gè)觀點(diǎn),并指出,“挫折能鍛煉人的心智,提高人的心理承受能力”,是一筆“無法用金錢來衡量的精神財(cái)富”.全文感點(diǎn)集中,審視事物的角度新穎獨(dú)特.略嫌不足的是論述尚不夠完備.倘若能談及經(jīng)歷挫折和失敗后能為取得成功積累經(jīng)驗(yàn)教訓(xùn)等方面的內(nèi)容,則論證會(huì)更全面;倘若指出隱形的精神財(cái)富能創(chuàng)造出無窮的有形的物質(zhì)財(cái)富來,則說理會(huì)顯得更為辯證,論述會(huì)更為深刻些.一,突破“主題第一”的評(píng)價(jià)標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

歷年的高考作文命題都有明顯的思想傾向,試圖以此來檢驗(yàn)學(xué)生的思想道德品質(zhì).為了避免不及格的結(jié)局,學(xué)生在平時(shí)作文訓(xùn)練中就經(jīng)常被灌輸諸如此類的指導(dǎo)思想:立意要積極向上,健康樂觀,不要太偏激,千萬不能流露消極情緒.如2002年全國(guó)卷的高考作文題“心靈的選擇”,要求學(xué)生抒寫生活中觸動(dòng)心靈需作出選擇的事情,雖給考生“立意自定”的寬容,但實(shí)際上考生根本沒有選擇的余地.如果考生選擇的是保全自己,或者選擇時(shí)體現(xiàn)不出“毫不利己,專門利人”的高尚情操,這樣的作文會(huì)不會(huì)得很低的分?jǐn)?shù)呢 我想,答案是肯定的.因?yàn)檫@樣的作文偏離了命題者和閱卷老師早已預(yù)設(shè)的主題--舍己救人.但是他們不曾想,所有的生命都是平等的,都有活下去的權(quán)利,而根據(jù)題目中的情景推斷,為了救助那位凍僵的人,登山者極有可能獻(xiàn)出自己的生命(雖然材料中完全可以虛構(gòu)完滿的結(jié)局).當(dāng)救一個(gè)人會(huì)使另一個(gè)無辜的生命付出時(shí),那么這種高尚行為的意義“我總覺得很寥寥,因?yàn)檫@實(shí)在不過是無謂的犧牲”(魯迅語).美國(guó)對(duì)少年兒童的教育是遇到危險(xiǎn)首先自救,不要給別人添麻煩,這才是對(duì)他人生命的尊重和珍惜;這才是真正尊重每一個(gè)具體的人的生命權(quán)利;這才是人道的,真誠(chéng)的,不知道閱卷老師給了考生這樣選擇的權(quán)利沒有

二,突破“表意顯豁”的評(píng)價(jià)標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

“中心明確”一直是高考作文多年來堅(jiān)挺不倒的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn),“中心不明”的作文只能得到最低一等的分?jǐn)?shù),也即20分以下.如前所述,在語文教師的“積極引導(dǎo)”下,處于絕對(duì)弱勢(shì)的考生為了讓閱卷的老師在短短的90秒鐘內(nèi)看出自己的作文是“中心明確”的,只好放棄一切含蓄的語言,一切精巧的構(gòu)思,而追求直露顯豁的表達(dá),八股文式的結(jié)構(gòu),什么“引,聯(lián),評(píng),結(jié)”之類.多年的積弊使得大多數(shù)學(xué)生對(duì)美文敬而遠(yuǎn)之,無怪乎現(xiàn)在中學(xué)生的作文普遍地表現(xiàn)出嚴(yán)重的文采黯淡,靈性凋敝.2002年高考前筆者所在班級(jí)進(jìn)行了一次模擬考試,作文題是這樣的: 心態(tài),即心理狀態(tài).一個(gè)人的心態(tài)很重要.一個(gè)幸遠(yuǎn)兒,如果心態(tài)不正常的話,可能身在福中不知福;一個(gè)命運(yùn)坎坷的人,如果有良好的心態(tài),照樣可以笑對(duì)人生.評(píng)價(jià)自己,也要有良好的心態(tài),如果把自己看得很高,那就可能拒絕他人指教,陷入孤立;如果把自己看低一些,用一顆謹(jǐn)慎,敬畏的心去對(duì)待周圍的人和事,許多問題也許會(huì)迎刃而解……請(qǐng)以“心態(tài)”為話題,寫一篇文章.立意自定,文體自選,題目自擬,不少于800字.我班有位同學(xué)寫了一篇《蟑螂》.文章寫了一位綽號(hào)為“蟑螂”的同學(xué)以撿醫(yī)院里的廢針筒為生,受到同學(xué)們的蔑視甚至排斥,卻仍然樂觀地面對(duì)艱難的生活.全文構(gòu)思精巧,行文曲折,感情真摯,不失為上等佳作.可這篇作文只得了36分,被閱卷老師批為“不知所云”.是的,找遍文章也尋不到“心態(tài)”兩字,但是文中多次出現(xiàn)的那“傻傻的笑”,不正是那位綽號(hào)為“蟑螂”的同學(xué)面對(duì)生活的艱難,人情的冷漠時(shí)堅(jiān)強(qiáng)樂觀的良好心態(tài)的外在表現(xiàn)嗎 而且這位同學(xué)也已經(jīng)考慮到了目前閱卷中排斥含蓄的傾向,特地在文末加了一個(gè)后記:自然界的蟑螂“無所謂蔑視,拒絕被消滅”,這正是現(xiàn)實(shí)社會(huì)中“蟑螂”頑強(qiáng)樂觀的精神寫照,可謂用心良苦.由佳作“蟑螂”只得36分看,要反思的不應(yīng)是這位學(xué)生,也不應(yīng)是教師的作文指導(dǎo),而應(yīng)是我們傳統(tǒng)的作文評(píng)價(jià)體系.事實(shí)上,學(xué)生的閱讀面越廣,對(duì)生活的觀察和思考越深入,他的思想情感就會(huì)越豐富復(fù)雜,作文的立意也往往有獨(dú)到之處,甚至呈多元化傾向.而且閱讀和寫作經(jīng)驗(yàn)豐富的學(xué)生又往往會(huì)排斥表意的直露化傾向,不自覺地追求表意的含蓄和運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)募记?如果學(xué)生能做到這些,就說明他已經(jīng)達(dá)到或接近創(chuàng)作的境界了,還怕寫不出創(chuàng)新作文嗎

一,少寫評(píng)語打好分?jǐn)?shù)

每接一屆高三,我都把作文教學(xué)分為三個(gè)時(shí)段:第一學(xué)期為一個(gè)寫作時(shí)段,主要是激發(fā)學(xué)生的作文興趣,把握各類文體的寫作規(guī)律,解放手腳,活躍文思;第二學(xué)期又分為兩個(gè)時(shí)段,前期按高考標(biāo)準(zhǔn)繼續(xù)強(qiáng)化,后期則減少作文數(shù)量,重在指導(dǎo).第一學(xué)期至少每周一篇作文,這樣要篇篇批閱幾乎是不可能的.因此筆者采用打分制,用分?jǐn)?shù)給學(xué)生以評(píng)價(jià)鼓勵(lì).第一學(xué)期按百分制,且給分普遍較高,以激發(fā)學(xué)生的寫作欲望.第二學(xué)期按高考給分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)60分記分.這樣,學(xué)生在高考后就能夠比較準(zhǔn)確地估分.每次講評(píng)作文時(shí),筆者都要具體說明每個(gè)分?jǐn)?shù)段的給分依據(jù),從內(nèi)容,選材,構(gòu)思等方面確立分?jǐn)?shù)檔次,同檔次的又以語言表達(dá),書寫好壞等來區(qū)分分?jǐn)?shù)高低.這樣,即使教師沒有寫出評(píng)語,學(xué)生也能意識(shí)到自己作文的成敗,甚至能發(fā)現(xiàn)自己作文中存在的問題.二,善挑毛病個(gè)別指導(dǎo)

對(duì)于高三學(xué)生的作文,過多的贊揚(yáng)鼓勵(lì)已不是當(dāng)務(wù)之急了.學(xué)生固然需要老師的肯定,表?yè)P(yáng),然而,無謂的表?yè)P(yáng)并不能真正解決問題.所以我采取的批閱方法是發(fā)現(xiàn)問題法.通常做法是從兩個(gè)方面指出問題:一是本次作文出現(xiàn)的問題,告訴學(xué)生如何處理比較合適,給學(xué)生指明思維的路徑,同時(shí)盡可能地不把自己的思維習(xí)慣,思維方式強(qiáng)加給學(xué)生,以免束縛學(xué)生的手腳,禁錮學(xué)生的思想.二是總結(jié)發(fā)現(xiàn)學(xué)生作文總的特點(diǎn),指出他作文中最突出的問題.每個(gè)學(xué)生的作文都帶有鮮明的個(gè)性特點(diǎn),有的擅長(zhǎng)記敘,有的擅長(zhǎng)議論,有的擅長(zhǎng)抒情,有的思維活躍一寫便汪洋恣肆,也有的邏輯嚴(yán)密卻拓展不開,這就需要教師指點(diǎn),既要肯定其作文的優(yōu)勢(shì),又要幫助他解決問題,躍上新的臺(tái)階.筆者通常采取面批的方式,把學(xué)生的作文收集3-5篇,放在一起比較分析,問題往往能一目了然,寫法,選材,結(jié)構(gòu),思維等單一的問題,不用教師多說,通過比較,學(xué)生自己也能清楚地發(fā)現(xiàn).三,分類練習(xí)集中評(píng)講

高三作文訓(xùn)練一定要有計(jì)劃,有序列,既要緊跟高考的指揮棒,又要加強(qiáng)基礎(chǔ)訓(xùn)練.只有打好了基礎(chǔ),學(xué)生才能應(yīng)付自如.高考作文大多離不開社會(huì)熱點(diǎn),因此平時(shí)訓(xùn)練,在分專題對(duì)不同文體進(jìn)行訓(xùn)練的基礎(chǔ)上,無論命題作文還是材料作文,都要有一定的前瞻性,都要緊緊把握時(shí)代的脈搏,隨著時(shí)代的旋律跳動(dòng).這樣既能培養(yǎng)學(xué)生觀察社會(huì)了解社會(huì)的能力,使學(xué)生關(guān)注人生關(guān)注社會(huì),也容易使學(xué)生有話可說.因?yàn)榇罅康孽r活的時(shí)代內(nèi)容是學(xué)生取之不盡用之不竭的材料.講評(píng)時(shí)可選用一篇具有一定代表性的作文,印出來人手一份,集中講評(píng).講評(píng)課上重點(diǎn)引導(dǎo)學(xué)生發(fā)現(xiàn)問題,鼓勵(lì)學(xué)生大膽發(fā)表自己的看法,以激發(fā)創(chuàng)新思維,拓展思維的延展空間.四,評(píng)析結(jié)合啟發(fā)文思

每次作文之前,我不作任何指導(dǎo),完全放開由學(xué)生盡情去寫.在講評(píng)時(shí),才發(fā)動(dòng)學(xué)生討論,啟發(fā)學(xué)生發(fā)表自己的見解,提出盡可能多的思想觀點(diǎn),提出盡可能多的寫作思路,從而拓展學(xué)生的思維空間.為配合這一訓(xùn)練,我常常穿插一些典型的巧妙構(gòu)思的例子.如宋代畫院招考畫工,用“踏花歸來馬蹄香”“野渡無人舟自橫”“山中古剎”等類似的題目,以及齊白石構(gòu)思的“蛙聲十里出山泉”等極富創(chuàng)意的構(gòu)思.課堂上穿插分析一些此類的例子,讓學(xué)生更好地理解構(gòu)思對(duì)于作文的意義.作文三:巧用名句作批語

每每看到學(xué)生以不屑的眼光瀏覽過教師煞費(fèi)苦心的批語后,漫不經(jīng)心地將作文本塞進(jìn)抽屜,個(gè)中滋味,只有語文老師才能體會(huì)出來.曾幾何時(shí),我嘗試著用經(jīng)典名句或把其略作修改后給學(xué)生下批語.沒料到,這無意插柳的短小批語竟給學(xué)生帶來了全新的感受,激起了他們對(duì)寫作的極大興趣.于是,在以后的作文批改中,我就盡可能多地用詩(shī)詞名句寫批語,以使學(xué)生更多地關(guān)注批語,從而激發(fā)他們對(duì)寫作產(chǎn)生更大的興趣.寫批語如同看自己的孩子,總要帶著欣賞的眼光,用贊賞激勵(lì)的口吻去寫.當(dāng)看到一篇篇立意高遠(yuǎn),構(gòu)思巧妙,字字珠璣,句句錦繡的佳作時(shí),我會(huì)興奮地來寫上:“春色滿園關(guān)不住!”有些文章,開頭并不怎么好,可越往后讀,越覺得妙,我會(huì)情不自禁地批上:“山窮水盡疑無路,柳暗花明又一村!”有的學(xué)生能及時(shí)發(fā)現(xiàn)并謳歌新人新事新風(fēng)尚,我贊賞地寫下:“春江水暖鴨先知!”而對(duì)一些不同于世俗的高論,我會(huì)獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)一句:“聽唱新翻楊柳枝!”讀到一些語言清新質(zhì)樸的文章,我忍不住送上李白的“清水出芙蓉,天然去雕飾”.就是對(duì)那些整體水平不高但不時(shí)還有三兩句精彩句子的作文,我也會(huì)以欣賞的口吻寫上:“’一枝紅杏出墻來’,多想看’春色滿園關(guān)不住’.”一切景語皆情語,對(duì)于學(xué)生作文中的景物描寫,我多半會(huì)批上“一枝一葉總關(guān)情”.我總是以發(fā)展的眼光來看待學(xué)生作文中的點(diǎn)滴進(jìn)步.每當(dāng)看到學(xué)生在我的激勵(lì)下寫出比較滿意的文章時(shí),我總會(huì)欣賞贊道:“’不知細(xì)葉誰裁出’,用心寫作似春風(fēng)!”或干脆來一句:“’小荷才露尖尖角’,更盼荷花一遍香.”這些贊美,欣賞和激勵(lì)性的批語,使學(xué)生耳目一新,很多學(xué)生都帶著欣喜,帶著驕傲去閱讀,去感受,去欣賞批語,結(jié)果學(xué)生不僅對(duì)詩(shī)詞名句感興趣了,而且對(duì)寫作文也感興趣了.這樣寫作文時(shí)也就更認(rèn)真了.當(dāng)然,批語不只要有激勵(lì)性,還要對(duì)學(xué)生有啟發(fā)性,使學(xué)生從中受到教育.這就需要摘一些富有哲理的名句了.一次活動(dòng)后,我收回學(xué)生的札記,一篇篇散發(fā)著泥土芬芳的文章,使我欣然批上:“問渠哪得清如許,唯有源頭活水來.”活動(dòng)讓學(xué)生明白了“實(shí)踐出真知”的道理,我便寫上陸游的“紙上得來終覺淺,絕知此事要躬行”以示嘉獎(jiǎng).在活動(dòng)中,善于觀察且感悟能力強(qiáng)的學(xué)生總是能從平凡處發(fā)現(xiàn)新的東西,寫出美的感受,于是,我會(huì)贊揚(yáng)他“近水樓臺(tái)先得月,向陽花木易為春”.隨著班級(jí)讀書活動(dòng)的開展和深入,那些過去對(duì)作文一籌莫展的學(xué)生也能寫出洋洋灑灑的四五百字的文章了,這時(shí)我會(huì)驚喜地批上“熟讀唐詩(shī)三百首,不會(huì)寫詩(shī)也會(huì)吟”.書讀多了,學(xué)生的文章就有了文采,我及時(shí)用“讀書破萬卷,下筆如有神”來鼓勵(lì)學(xué)生去讀更多更好的書.積累豐富了,受老師批語的啟發(fā),成績(jī)好的學(xué)生在作文時(shí)也躍躍欲試,套用,借用,引用名人名言和詩(shī)詞名句.有時(shí)一兩句恰當(dāng)?shù)囊貌粌H使文章語言有了神韻,有了文采,而且也增加了文章的內(nèi)涵.每每讀到這樣的美文佳句,我會(huì)情不自禁地寫上“好雨知時(shí)節(jié),當(dāng)春乃發(fā)生.隨風(fēng)潛入夜,潤(rùn)物細(xì)無聲”.隨著讀書活動(dòng)的深入,部分學(xué)生不再滿足于讀一般性的讀物,他們對(duì)書的品位要求越來越高,并在作文中自然地流露出讀高品位書籍所帶來的享受與啟迪,這時(shí),我會(huì)送上一句杜甫的“會(huì)當(dāng)凌絕頂,一覽眾山小”來勉勵(lì).書讀多了,學(xué)生作文已不再滿足于淺層次的模仿與套用.創(chuàng)新的火花開始閃現(xiàn)了.對(duì)此,我也會(huì)不失時(shí)機(jī)地贊賞:“領(lǐng)異標(biāo)于二月花”,“語不驚人死不休”.學(xué)生畢竟是學(xué)生,作文中這樣那樣的錯(cuò)誤在所難免.這就需要教師的批語有針對(duì)性,且含蓄地指出學(xué)生的不足,以督促其改正.此時(shí)不妨尋章摘句來點(diǎn)幽默的批評(píng),高雅的調(diào)侃,讓學(xué)生在開心一笑中有所感悟,有所觸動(dòng).對(duì)堆砌材料,主題不明的文章,不妨來一句“兩個(gè)黃鸝鳴翠柳”;對(duì)開頭扣題較緊,中間枝蔓橫生的文章,點(diǎn)評(píng)一句“一行白鷺上青天”;對(duì)主題模棱兩可的,送一句“難識(shí)廬山真面目”或“當(dāng)局者清 旁觀者迷”;對(duì)入題慢,娓娓道來,到了文中才亮明主題,點(diǎn)明觀點(diǎn)的,批一句“千呼萬喚始出來”;對(duì)觀點(diǎn)曖昧的來一句“猶抱琵琶半遮面”;對(duì)觀點(diǎn)陳舊的批一句“勸君莫奏前朝曲”;對(duì)人云亦云,毫無主見的文章干脆來一句“短人看戲何曾見,都是隨人話短長(zhǎng)”;而對(duì)內(nèi)容平淡,平鋪直敘的文章也不妨點(diǎn)評(píng)一句,“文似看山不喜平”.偶爾也會(huì)遇到一兩位文抄公,直說吧,會(huì)傷其自尊心,不說吧,則等于默許.怎么辦 不妨來一句“似曾相識(shí)燕歸來”,給學(xué)生以巧妙的提醒.當(dāng)然,寫這類批語一定要因人而異,同時(shí)還要把握好分寸,在含蓄委婉的批評(píng)之后,要多給予關(guān)心和鼓勵(lì),在輕松調(diào)侃之后,也要多給一份慰藉,而且這類批語在一次作文中也不可使用太多,否則就失去了新鮮感和刺激力.

第四篇：英語作文五

Chinese name:崔志勇Course: N

English name:Maurice HawkDate: 10/10/2007Student I.D:272081103011

How can I apply these principles to my life?

1st, be grateful for all you have.Life isn’t exactly the way you want it to be.You will have your ups and downs and crosses to bear.You will have opportunities to practice holding your tongue and exercising patience.When you can look forward and be thankful, you can help others do the same.Hold the burning candle from which others can light their candles.2nd, develop your sense of humor.In all areas of life, a quick wit, a hearty laugh, a smile and a warm sense of humor are appreciated.To be a good joke teller, tell jokes often.Always be absolutely sure that your material is clean and non-offensive.3rd, practice forgiveness.As a person of action, everybody will make lots of mistakes.Most will do foolish things.Consider those whom you may have offended or injured and ask for their forgiveness.So practice forgiving the people who do foolish things.4th, live my life by the principles of strength.Be positive and be grave while facing troubles.We have a big goal of our life;any difficulty can be passed and ignored.

第五篇：高考各類英語作文(高考必備)

A． 寫人：

1．Our English Teacher

Our English teacher, Ms Huang, came to our school in 1970.She has been an English teacher for more than 30 years.She works hard and has been a model teacher for many years.She is kind and friendly to us after class, but She is rather strict with us in class.She always encourages us to speak and read more English.She often says, “Practice makes perfect.”

She is good at teaching and tries her best to make every lesson lively and interesting.She often gives us slide shows，teaches us English songs and helps us to put on short English plays.She is not only our teacher but also our friend.We all respect and love her.Tomorrow she is going to attend an important meeting, at which she will be given a medal for her advanced deeds.2．My English Teacher

Our English teacher, Mr.Wang, is a strongly built thirty-year-old man, who is often simply dressed.He has been teaching us English ever since he graduated from the English Department, Beijing Normal University in 1993.He devotes all his time and energy to teaching, often working late into the night preparing his lessons.He is capable of making his lessons lively and interesting, and all of us like his lessons.He is very strict with us but he shows us great concern.He offers us help whenever we need it.We all consider him not only as our good teacher but also as our close friend.We all respect and love him.B．寫物：

3． Our school

Our school is located at the centre of Beijing, It is one of the largest schools in the city with over 2,000 students and

about 200 teachers.Our school subjects include politics, Chinese, English, maths, history, geography, physics, chemistry

and biology and so on.Most of us pay great attention to the study of English, Chinese and maths because they are very

important subjects in the university entrance exam.We take special interest in English.We have spent much time on it, but we still find it difficult to learn the language well.In the afternoon when class is over, we enjoy staying at school for

about one hour for some physical exercises before leaving for home.4． My Home Village

My home village is a small one.It's in Yuxian county of Shanxi Province.Small as it is, it's very beautiful.There are many hills around my home village and they are more beautiful than some big mountains.In spring, we can fly kites which are made by ourselves on the top of the hills.The kites fly very high.In summer, the trees are green and the grass is green, too.It is green everywhere on the hills.There are so many wild apple trees on the hills.The wild apples

are nice to eat.In autumn, the corns under and around the hills are ripe.So we eat them almost every day.In winter, when it snows, all the ground is covered with snow.We can play with snow and sometimes we eat the clean snow with sugar.In my hometown the sky is blue, the air is clean, the water is sweet and the people are very friendly.I love my hometown!

5．Changes in Our Life

Over the past twenty years or so, great changes have taken place in our life.Take my family for example.My parents contacted others mainly by sending them letters in the past.But now we call long distance at home.And once my parents

listened to the radio for news and other information.But now we get the news by watching TV.Another big change is in my living conditions.When they got married about twenty years ago, my parents lived in a small room crowded with furniture.But now we have moved into a big new three-room apartment.In short, our life has become comfortable and convenient.C．日記：

6．A Good Deed

Oct.19th Tuesday

Fine

One afternoon, on my way home, I saw an accident: a car hit an old man!

I shouted to the pedestrians for help, but no one stopped.When the car driver saw this, he quickly closed the window Of the car and drove away.“What shall I do? The old man needs help.” I thought.At that time, a truck stopped and out came the driver.“What's wrong with the old man, boy? What could I do?” the

driver asked me.“Uncle, please help the old man.A car hit him and he is badly injured!”I said.“Well, don't worry.Let me

take him to the hospital.'' the driver said.A few minutes later, the driver took the old man to the hospital and I telephoned the police station.I told the whole story to the police and I also told them the number of the car.The police said to me, ”Well done, boy!Leave it to us.He must be punished!“ Then I went to the hospital to see the old man.When I got home, it was 7:30.I think what I did was fight.D．書信：

(1)你堂兄建華在國(guó)外學(xué)習(xí)，你們經(jīng)常用英文通信。他即將完成學(xué)業(yè)，不久前來信就是否回國(guó)工作征求你的意見。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示回信。

1．建議他回國(guó)。

2．你的理由是：學(xué)有所用，就業(yè)容易；照顧父母。

注意：

1．詞數(shù)100左右；

2．行文應(yīng)連貫，內(nèi)容應(yīng)完整；

3．開頭語已為你寫好。

Dear Jian Hua，I' m very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago.To Jian Hua

Dear Jian Hua，I'm very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago.I' ve been thinking about the question you asked

me.In my opinion, you should come back after you finish your studies abroad.For one reason, what you are studying is

badly needed nowadays in China.It will be quite easy for you to find a good job.In fact, I know a few big companies in our city are hoping to employ people like you.For another reason, I think it will be much more convenient for you to look after

your parents as they are getting old.Therefore, I think it's a good idea for you to return.So what are you waiting for?

Best wishes;

Ming Hua

(2)2005年春季

Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.你叫李宏，你校在為一批來自加拿大的交流學(xué)生征尋為期兩周的住宿家庭。你有意申請(qǐng)，寫封信說明你申請(qǐng)的理由。(包括所具備的條件)。

2005春季范文

Dear sir，I hear that our school will welcome some Canadian students to stay with us for or two weeks.Students who want to

invite them to stay can take part in it.I want to try.First , my parents and I can speak English well.That benefits us to communicate with each other.Second, our house is big enough for he or she to stay.Furthermore , I live near the Huangpu River.It has a good view of Shanghai.Last but not least , in my home, he or she will enjoy much China culture.My grandpa and grandma are good at

handwriting.My grandma also has a good skill in Chinese painting.I think our friendly will give him a both interesting and comfortable experience.Thank you for your reading during your busy work..I hope that you will agree with me.Yours sincerely，Li Hong

(3)假如你是王華，18歲生日后，真的有種長(zhǎng)大成人的感覺。于是你想就父母對(duì)你的關(guān)懷和你今后的打算，以書信形式同爸爸媽媽談?wù)?。信的開頭如下：

Dear Mum and Dad，How are you doing ?

范文

Dear Mum and Dad，How are you doing ?

I?m writing to you about my gratitude for your having brought me up and my future plan.Dear Mum and Dad, I am already 18 years old, which shows that I have grown up.Whenever I am thinking of this, I

can?t help feeling grateful to you.It is you who first give me encouragement when I meet with difficulties, especially when I am not getting along well with my studies.Indeed, your inspiration seems to be a lamp, which offers me light of hope，courage and confidence.And more importantly, you are always teaching me to be good to others, and try to contribute to our society.Dear Mum and Dad, I an now a senior three student , who is facing the competitive national college entrance

examinations, So first of all, I ought to try my best to pass the exams.I am sure that through my great efforts I can and will be able to realize my beautiful dream of being a key university student.Then, I will strive to be an independent youth.The

social situation I will be facing must be more competitive, so I will develop and prepare myself to be a youth with a strong

sense of cooperation and competition.Believe in me, Mum and Dad, I will make a difference.Best regards to you.Yours sincerely，Wang Hua

(4)求職信

Dear Sir or Madam，I have learned from an advertisement that your company is in need of a secretary.I would like you to consider me for the position.My name is Li Min.I am twenty-three years old.I am studying business management in Xiamen University.I will

graduate this summer.I am familiar with computer operation and office softwares, which can help me do the office work

very well.And I have learned English for ten years.In the past two years, I have been an editor for the English Paper of my

department.My grades come out top in my department.What's more, I like office work very much and I also think that I can be competent for the job.If I could have the opportunity to get the job I will be quite appreciative.Thank you for your consideration.I look forward to hearing from you.Yours faithfully

Li Min E．說明文：

How People Spent Their Holidays

As can be seen from the table, great changes took place in the ways that people spent their holidays over the period

from the year 1990 to 1999.The proportion of traveling abroad and camping was increasing steadily, from 12% to 24% and from 10% to 36% separately, while that of staying at home and going to the seaside was decreasing year by year, from 38% to 31% and from 40% to 9% separately.Why were there changes? I think people can nowadays afford traveling.Also, people prefer to pursue a high-quality and colorful life.So we can see that people＇s living standard has been rising greatly.F．議論文

(1)最近，你校同學(xué)正在參加某英文報(bào)組織的一場(chǎng)討論。討論的主題是：公園要不要收門票?請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所提供的信息，給報(bào)社寫一封信，客觀地介紹討論情況。

60％的同學(xué)認(rèn)為:

1．不應(yīng)該收門票 公園是公眾休閑的地方

3.如收門票，需建大門、圍墻，會(huì)影響城市形象

40％的同學(xué)認(rèn)為: 1．應(yīng)收門票，但票價(jià)不要太高

2．支付園林工人工資

3．購(gòu)新花木

注意：1．信的開頭已為你寫好。

2．詞數(shù)：100左右。

3．參考詞匯：門票---entrance fee

Dear editor，I?m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.60% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee do not meet people?s expectations, for a park is considered to be a place

where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either at home or at work.If an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls.In the end a city will take on a bad look.40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive.The money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees.With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protect a park.Do we share the same

opinion, dear editor?

Yours truly, Li Hua

Dear editor，I?m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.Sixty percent of my schoolmates are for the idea that an entrance fee should not be forced on the public.They believe parks are the place where the public enjoy themselves at their leisure.They think that a gate and wails are to be built if an entrance fee

is to be charged.The city will not look so beautiful as it should have.Forty percent of my schoolmates are for the idea that an entrance fee is OK, but it shouldn?t be out of control.Entrance fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new types of

flowers and trees.For myself, I?d like to say that if we all work hard to build our city into a flower garden, who cares about the entrance fee for parks?

Dear Editor，I'm writing to tell you about the discussion on whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.Opinions vary from person to person on this issue.50% of the students disagree with the idea of entrance fees.In their opinion, parks are public places where all the people can have a rest and enjoy themselves.So if an entrance fee is charged, some people will surely be kept away from the park.Besides, in order to charge entrance fees, gates and walls must be built.They think that it will do harm to the appearance of a city.40% of the students agree with the idea of entrance fees, because the gardeners need to be paid and new plants and

flowers need to be bought.But fees should be charged reasonably.Yours truly, XXX

Dear Editor，I'm writing to tell you about the discussion on whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.Opinions vary from person to person on this issue.60% of the students oppose the idea of entrance fees.They believe

everyone can go to parks for rest and fun because parks are public places.But an entrance fee may keep some people away

from the park.Besides, in order to charge entrance fees, it is necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the

appearance of a city.40% of the students approve of the idea of entrance fees, because money is needed to pay the gardeners and to buy new plants and flowers.But fees should be charged reasonably.Yours truly,(2)

Dear Headmaster，As the minister of students' life in the Student Union, I am writing to you to reflect something about our canteen.To our satisfaction, the canteen supplies us with various kinds of food.This gives us many choices.At the same time the price for the food is low and the food is tasty.And the surroundings for having a meal have been improved.The canteen has become clean.And when we are eating, we can watch TV.But something unsatisfactory exists, too.For example, the quantity of a helping is less than it should be.This is unfair.And in the canteen, the seats are not enough.Some students have to stand while eating.We hope that the school will consider adding more seats for us.Finally we hope that they can improve the quality of the food and their service.We will be very happy if our advice is taken.Yours respectfully，(3)On Money

Money is indeed important, but money cannot buy everything.A miser may think that “money talks,” but if you only give your attention to making money, you may lose many things, such as health, friendship and love.I don't think we should regard money as everything.Money is just a tool that can help us solve problems or enable us to live a comfortable life.What we should do is to use it appropriately and not become misers.This way, all of us can lead a happier lives.(4)假設(shè)今天你上網(wǎng),點(diǎn)擊進(jìn)入”今日話題“網(wǎng)站.看到一則有關(guān)禁止學(xué)生在校園內(nèi)使用手機(jī)的報(bào)道.網(wǎng)友們對(duì)此各抒己見.作為一名高中生,你對(duì)此頗感興趣,就在該欄目下發(fā)帖,客觀反映周圍同學(xué)們對(duì)此的不同看法.并簡(jiǎn)單談?wù)勀愕目捶?(100字左右)

以下為同學(xué)們的看法:

贊同: 便于聯(lián)系, 有安全感, 功能(function)多樣

不贊同: 便于聯(lián)系非必需，因有IC卡電話, 玩游戲，發(fā)短信(e--massage), 耗時(shí)費(fèi)錢

你的觀點(diǎn)

Just now, I entered the website—”Topic for Today“.I feel interested in the report on banning the use of the cell-phone on campus in middle schools.One possible version:

Just now, I entered the website--”Topic for Today“.I feel interested in the report on banning the use of cell-phones on campus in middle schools.In fact, more students now come to school with cell-phones.My schoolmates have different opinions.Some think it is convenient to get in touch with others with the cell-phone, which also makes you feel safe especially in time of trouble.Besides, it is nice to enjoy various functions of different cell-phones.Others think differently.First, the cellphone in not a must in school, as there are some IC phones there, making it easy to call others.Second, many often play e-games and send e-massages with their cell-phones, even in class, which will surely have bad effects on their study.Worse is

to

come, it will result in a great waste of time and money.In my opinion, the cell-phone is a useful tool in our daily life.But it doesn't mean we can use freely in school.(5)三班的學(xué)生進(jìn)行了一場(chǎng)有關(guān)大學(xué)生是否應(yīng)該打工的討論。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面表中的提示

寫一篇英語短文，介紹討論的情況。

一些同學(xué)認(rèn)為

另一些同學(xué)認(rèn)為

打工會(huì)影響大學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)；改變正確的人生觀；甚至?xí)顾麄兂绨萁疱X

打工可以減輕父母的負(fù)擔(dān)；同時(shí)使大學(xué)生獲得社會(huì)經(jīng)驗(yàn);發(fā)展個(gè)人能力；豐富學(xué)習(xí)生活

注意：1．字?jǐn)?shù)：100左右；

2．不必逐條翻譯，可進(jìn)行合理發(fā)揮。

3．參考詞匯：打工lake a part-time job 人生觀life view

負(fù)擔(dān)load

The students of Class 3 had a discussion about whether college students should take part-time jobs.Some students think it is advantage for college students to take part-time jobs.Because, by doing part-time jobs, they can earn money on their own so that they don?t need to ask their parents for money, and in this way, they reduce their parents? load.Besides, taking part-time jobs can help them gain social experience, develop personal abilities and make their life enjoyable.One the other hand, some students have a disagreement.In their opinion, the students? main task is to study, while

taking part-time jobs has a bad effect on their study.And also, it may make college students change their life views and they may think too much of money.(6)面對(duì)中學(xué)生“出國(guó)熱”，社會(huì)對(duì)此有不同的看法。請(qǐng)你以Studying Abroad為題，根據(jù)以下提供的信息，談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā?/p>

Advantages:

1.良好的語言環(huán)境，更利于語言學(xué)習(xí)。

2.拓寬視野，學(xué)習(xí)國(guó)外先進(jìn)的科學(xué)技術(shù)。

3.傳播各民族間的不同文化。

Disadvantages: 1.年紀(jì)小，缺乏生活經(jīng)驗(yàn)，自理能力差。

2.情感孤獨(dú)，思鄉(xiāng)。3.生活學(xué)習(xí)費(fèi)用高。

注意：1）第一句已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

2）詞數(shù)100 左右。

3）參考詞匯：媒介，中間人 mediator

Studying Abroad In recent years, studying abroad has been popular.Tens of thousands of Chinese students have gone to foreign

countries to study.Many people are trying their best to apply to go abroad.There are many advantages in attending schools abroad.First, students who have studied abroad can act as mediators between people of different cultures.Second, we can learn much more advanced knowledge of science and technology from foreign countries.Third, we can learn foreign languages more quickly.However, there are some disadvantages.Most of the students are too young to live by themselves without any living

experience.Besides, being far away from their home country, they may feel lonely and homesick.Of course the costs are much.(7)On net bars

With the development of the Internet, the net bar plays an important role in people's life.More and more people, especially students, like to go to net bars.They are absorbed in playing video games, making bad friends and having a chat with ”Meimei“ on the net in the bar.Some students often go on playing late into the night in the net bar.As a result, not only does it do harm to their health but also produces a bad effect on their studies.Now a lot of net bars have been shut down in Beijing.But some students go by bus to the net bars at suburbs to play.Fortunately, more and more parents and schools have realized it.Recently, more than six thousand students ensured that they would be far away from net bars in Jinzhou city, Liaoning Province.It is quite necessary for the students to get rid of the bad habit.Recently, more and more students would like to go to net bars, especially students.It has become quite common to go there.They waste too much precious time on playing video games in the net bar.As a result, not only does it do harm to their health but also produces a bad effect on their studies.Their health becomes worse and worse and their studies are neglected.Now a lot of net bars have been shut down in Beijing.But some students go to the net bars at suburbs to play.Fortunately, more and more parents and schools have realized it.Recently, more than six thousand students ensured that they would be far away from net bars in Jinzhou city, Liaoning Province.Most students are making full use of their time and devoting themselves to their studies.It is a good thing.F．看圖作文：

(1)假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友Bob將于九月到你所在城市的建新華文學(xué)校學(xué)中文，來信請(qǐng)你在學(xué)校附近為他找一套住房。請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖畫提供的信息，寫信介紹住房的情況，并告知住房面積為25平方米，月租500元。

注意：1．詞數(shù)：100左右：

2．參考詞匯：房租—Tent(n.).I?m very happy to receive your letter, and I?m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here.I have already found a fiat for you.It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School.Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School.The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen.There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small flat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month.Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I?ll try my best to meet your needs.If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.Hope you will come here soon!

All the best!Yours，Li Hua

滿分理由

本文格式正確，意思表述完整，行文流暢自然。作者在寫作過程中注意長(zhǎng)短句并用，還使用了以?which，?引導(dǎo)的非限定性定語從句，從而使文章層次分明，富于變化，不愧為考場(chǎng)佳作。

Dear Bob，Welcome to China!You wrote to me to find a place for you.I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School.It is on the third floor and there?re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom.There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom.The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.Also from this house you can get to your school easily.Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building.It is only one stop.At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I?U be able to meet you at the airport，see you.Best wishes!

Yours，Li Hua

滿分理由

本文格式正確，內(nèi)容完整，表述清楚，銜接緊密流暢，時(shí)態(tài)語態(tài)使用準(zhǔn)確，特別是結(jié)尾末段適度的發(fā)揮，既充實(shí)了內(nèi)容，又符合邏輯，成為本文與眾不同的亮點(diǎn)。Dear Bob，How are you these days?

I?m so glad to know that you?ll come to our city to learn Chinese.You asked me to find a place for you.Now I?ve found one which I think is pretty good.The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop.It?s just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom.Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable.By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month.I hope you?ll like it.If not, I?ll try to find another place for you.Yours，Li Hua

滿分理由

本文內(nèi)在邏輯性很強(qiáng)，由遠(yuǎn)及近。由外及內(nèi)，層次分明，錯(cuò)落有致。同時(shí)讓步狀語從句運(yùn)用得恰到好處，很出彩，再則結(jié)構(gòu)完整，從開頭的問候語到結(jié)尾都很完備。

(2)請(qǐng)看下面的這幅漫畫，再聯(lián)想實(shí)際生活，寫一篇短文，詞數(shù)120左右。題目：Don?t Waste Water

Don't Waste Water

A man is washing his clothes ,regardless of the notice above ”Save the Water Please."

As we see ,water is the source of life.But there is very limited available water resources in our world.So we shouldn't waste it.Of course, we have to use it to drink, cook, wash, clean and etc.But we must remember not to use it extravagantly.If we didn't stop such wasteful habits, we would cut off the development of the world and the human life.E．其他：

(1)Companionship of Books

A man may usually be known by the books he reads as well as by the company he keeps: for there is a companionship of books as well as of men;and one should always live in the best company, whether it be of books or of men.A good book may be among the best of friends.It is the same today that it always was, and it will never change.It is the most patient and cheerful of companions.It does not turn its back upon us in times of trouble or distress.It always receives us with the same kindness, amusing and instructing us in youth, and comforting us in age.Books possess an extract having the fundamental properties of immortality.They are by far the most lasting products of human effort.Temples and statues decay, but books survive.Time is of no account with great thoughts, which are as fresh today as when they first passed through their author's minds ages ago.The only effect of time has been to sift out the bad products, for nothing in literature can long survive but what is really good.Books introduce us into the best society: they bring us into the presence of the greatest minds that have ever lived.We hear what they said and did.we see them as if they were really alive;we sympathize with them, enjoy with them, hurt with them;their experience becomes ours, and we feel as if we were, in a measure, actors with them in the scenes which they describe.The great and good do not die even in this world.Embalmed in books, their spirits walk abroad.The book is a living voice.It is an intellect to which one still listens.Hence we ever remain under the influence of the great men of old.The great intellects of the world are as much alive now as they were ages ago.(2)How to Keep Healthy

Nowadays more and more people are concerned about their health.But how to keep healthy? Different people may give different answers to this question.In my opinion, it is essential to do the following.First, it is absolutely necessary to take some exercise every day.Research shows that getting plenty of exercise make the heart beat faster and the lungs work harder.This strengthens the heart, reduces the chance of heart attack, and helps lower blood pressure.That's why more and more people are becoming active in various kinds of sports and exercises.Every morning many people get up early and take much exercise.Some practice shadowboxing and swordplay while others run, jog, walk or dance to music.In the afternoon, there are also many people keen on sports.Some play basketball or volleyball or table tennis, others go in for gymnastics or track events.Through sports and exercise, people become healthier and stronger.Medical researchers have proved that what people eat affects their health.They advise people to eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat such as beef and pork because meat contains more fat than poultry and fish.Fat can build up in the arteries, block the flow of blood, and cause a heart attack or stroke.Getting rid of bad habits like smoking and drinking alcohol is also an important way to keep healthy.Smoking and drinking alcohol injure one's health a great deal, and therefore should be given up.Unfortunately few people follow this advice.If people follow these three ways of keeping fit, they greatly improve their health.(3)Children and Television

Television has been changing the way people live for thirty years.It influences nearly every aspect of modern life.how people use leisure time, how news is reported, how information is learned, and how people think and feel.Children are particularly susceptible to the effects of television because their minds are growing, developing, and learning much faster than those of adults.Whereas television could be used as an educational tool for children, more often simple entertaining cartoons with little or no educational value are shown.Social scientists, teachers, and parents are troubled by the kinds of television programs children choose to watch.These groups of people are concerned about the media's impact on young.children.They are worried about the effects of televised violence on society as well as commercials for sugarcoated food.Most importantly, however, they feel television is one factor that causes declining math and reading scores among schoolchildren.Because of the excessive time spent in watching TV, children are spending less time readingand thinking independently.Experts are concerned about the view of the world that youngsters are learning from television.Parents, schools, and churches have traditionally been the social models and teachers for children.However, because television influences children's attitudes and behavior, its role in society is becoming increasingly more powerful--it is much more than a simple recreational activity.Exposure to excessive violence is another influence of television.According to several studies, televised violence may cause children to become more aggressive.Also, because so much violence is seen by children on television, they become more used to it as the only solution to difficult situations.Children who watch a great deal of violence on television may become apathetic toward actual aggression.One study has shown that, compared to a control group, fifth-graders who watched an aggressive television broadcast were slower to ask for adult help when a fight broke out among younger children.