第一篇:2011考研英語作文(推薦)
很好,2011年考研英語入學(xué)考試迫在眉睫,很多同學(xué)雖也投入在如火如荼的復(fù)習(xí)進(jìn)程中,但總有些許瞎忙摸不著頭腦的感覺!尤其對于占總分值30%的作文來說,很多同學(xué)更是無從下手,而只能拙劣的選擇背誦一些模板,最后到考試時也只能東拉西扯,草草了事,那么最終的得分慘不忍睹也就可想而知了。究其原因,實(shí)質(zhì)還是對于歷年考研英語寫作真題規(guī)律研究不透徹所致。本文力圖幫助2011年即將考研的學(xué)員在最短的時間內(nèi)找到方向,擬從以下兩方面入手撥開籠罩考研作文之層層迷霧。ok
(一)2011年小作文寫作前瞻
縱觀往年考研小作文(應(yīng)用文)命題,個人認(rèn)為規(guī)律性非常明顯。大綱規(guī)定的應(yīng)用文類型,也就那么幾種,幾乎是一年考一種。我們來看看真題:
2004年大綱第一次增加小作文,所考的第一篇作文來自于2005年1月的辭職信。當(dāng)年這篇作文令很多業(yè)界所謂的預(yù)測大師們感到非常意外,因?yàn)榘凑粘@?,大學(xué)生寫的第一封職業(yè)類郵件應(yīng)該是求職信,考研學(xué)子大多數(shù)都是應(yīng)屆生,還沒學(xué)會寫求職信就先寫辭職信,總感覺不大厚道。結(jié)果,不厚道的事情就是發(fā)生了,隨之而來的就是網(wǎng)上所羅列的大量預(yù)測模板徹底失效,甚至當(dāng)年有人叫囂絕對不可能考辭職信;
緊接著2006年,考了咨詢信,如何向希望工程捐款,此封信考的很常規(guī),只需在考前做過適當(dāng)準(zhǔn)備即可;
2007年,考查的是主動建議信,再次把考生放在了非常主動的地位上,沒人問你意見,你自己跳出來對母校的大學(xué)圖書館管理提建議。這封郵件再次使網(wǎng)絡(luò)上以及很多培訓(xùn)機(jī)構(gòu)的預(yù)測失效,因?yàn)樗麄優(yōu)橥瑢W(xué)們準(zhǔn)備的范文多半是類似于你有一個同學(xué),要去美國讀書,寫信問你到底是讀歷史還是計算機(jī)。實(shí)質(zhì)上,這屬于回復(fù)建議信,它的文章開頭多半是In respond to your question about whether to ? , I would like to present the following recommendations.而主動建議信的開頭卻截然不同,因?yàn)槭侵鲃?,所以收信人多半會感覺比較突然,因此需要寫信人在開頭稍作自我介紹,并不是介紹自己的姓名,而是稍微說明下自己主動提建議的初衷是為對方好,首先取得對方的理解,這才是一封主動建議信所必須具備的,基于此,開頭往往會設(shè)計為,As a warm-hearted and attentiveness-full 的人,I have spent a lot of time caring about the development of
so that I write this letter to display some of my recommendations with regard to
as follows.因此,如果不能準(zhǔn)確使用,則后果會很嚴(yán)重,從第一句話就會暴露你根本沒有審題,得分也就可想而知;
2008年考察的非常巧妙,雜交了兩種類型的郵件:道歉加失物歸還。出國旅行,把國外朋友借給你聽的CD機(jī)一不小心帶回國了。這封郵件再次使很多死板的失物招領(lǐng)信或?qū)の飭⑹滦拍0鍩o用武之地;
2009年,倡議信,倡議大家不要再使用一次性塑料袋,這封信比較常規(guī);
到了最近一次2010年,很多同學(xué)都在驚訝于怎么考了一篇招聘通知,難道郵件時代就此終結(jié)?我認(rèn)為,實(shí)則不然。首先,通知和郵件的格式并無實(shí)質(zhì)差別,考研小作文的注意力從來就不應(yīng)該是放在格式上;其次,2009年上課我反復(fù)給大家講過求職信怎么寫,尤其是得分的關(guān)鍵---第二段,你必須說明自己適合這份工作,因此我給大家設(shè)計了三大自證理由,英文(證書)水準(zhǔn),著名企業(yè)實(shí)習(xí)經(jīng)驗(yàn),適合團(tuán)隊協(xié)作的性格等,而學(xué)習(xí)主動性稍微強(qiáng)一些的同學(xué)只要動點(diǎn)腦筋,就會發(fā)現(xiàn)其實(shí)只要把這三點(diǎn)反過來,變成招聘要求,這篇通知就會迎刃而解。這就是為什么當(dāng)年考完試當(dāng)天就有很多同學(xué)自信的跟我說考得不錯的原因,因?yàn)樗麄冊敢馑伎迹R門一腳還得靠大家自己!
好了,分析了這么多,也就是為了預(yù)測未來。綜上所述,小作文考察的特點(diǎn)主要有:第一,希望把學(xué)生放在一個主動的地位上,比如辭職,主動建議等,都把大家放在了主動方,而這恰恰與很多同學(xué)平時訓(xùn)練應(yīng)用文時喜歡把自己放在被動方的思維相悖,也是大家為什么感覺總押不到題的根源。第二,考研的考察方向依舊是以郵件為主,換句話說,只要把郵件寫好了,即使考別的應(yīng)用文類型,那也不怕!因此,經(jīng)過對2011年考研新大綱的考量,本人有七成把握今年考研會考訂購信(或出售信,一正一反,都要會寫)和投訴信(或回復(fù)投訴信)。
(二)2011年考研英語大作文命題方向前瞻
考研英語大作文的命題范圍雖每年千奇百變,但基于中國國情的基本事實(shí)和命題規(guī)律卻從來沒有改變過,因此命題的方向把握相對就不是太難的事,具體來說,從宏觀角度符合以下兩點(diǎn):
(1)高舉和諧社會大旗(Harmonious Society)
從1998年考研英語大作文命題至今,考題基本鎖定和諧社會的大旗,反復(fù)變換切入點(diǎn),而命題方式,除了1999年的圖表題之外,已經(jīng)基本鎖定在圖畫題,這個規(guī)律已經(jīng)延續(xù)11年未變,具體來看,1998年的誠信(credit)話題,1999年以及2000年連續(xù)兩年的人與自然和諧共處的話題(nature),2001年愛心話題(love),2002年的世界文化融合話題(culture),2003年的個人、企業(yè)獨(dú)立成長話題(self-independence),2004年的人生奮斗無止境話題(it ends today but starts tomorrow),2005年的撫養(yǎng)老人話題(to respect elders),2006年的偶像崇拜話題(idol worship),2007年的自信話題(confidence),2008年的殘疾人合作奮斗自強(qiáng)不息話題(never give up),2009年的網(wǎng)絡(luò)對于人類交流親疏遠(yuǎn)近之影響(interpersonal relationship immersed in Internet era)以及2010年再次重現(xiàn)的中西文化大融合話題。從這些歷年真題中無不察覺出命題者的良苦用心,即完善人格,關(guān)注生活,關(guān)心他人,最終實(shí)現(xiàn)人與人的和諧,個人自身的和諧以及人與自然的和諧。一旦把握此命題思路,在平時的訓(xùn)練時就能真正做到有的放矢,例如,一些陰暗的,過于政治化的話題,就不會成為應(yīng)試范圍,而尚未考察過的一些和諧話題,例如社會責(zé)任(responsibility),樂觀心態(tài)(optimism)亦或平心做人、腳踏實(shí)地(to try to grasp your aspiration step by step)等,就應(yīng)該在平時適當(dāng)進(jìn)行練習(xí),這樣在走進(jìn)考場那一刻才能真正實(shí)現(xiàn)胸有成足,寫作時的素材才會有信手拈來的感覺。
(2)影射當(dāng)年熱點(diǎn)話題(hot spot)
2008年1月19日下午,正值08年考研第一天,我的手機(jī)從當(dāng)天的研究生入學(xué)英語考試結(jié)束之時起就一直響到當(dāng)天晚上21時許,大多數(shù)是來自學(xué)員和同事的祝賀以及感謝,說我押中了08年的考研大作文題。其實(shí),對于押題這個字眼,我內(nèi)心從來都是不太感冒的,因?yàn)橐粋€好的考研者,英文復(fù)習(xí)的重心絕對不應(yīng)該放在押題中,一個好的師者,也不應(yīng)給學(xué)員傳達(dá)押題這樣的信息,而是應(yīng)該幫助學(xué)員實(shí)實(shí)在在找到方向,真正提高寫作水平。但押終歸押到了,雖有些許驚詫,但也很欣慰的發(fā)現(xiàn),自己一直以來對于考研命題的思路探析沒有出錯,起碼與命題組的專家們算是有些契合了!其實(shí)用心觀察的人都會發(fā)現(xiàn),近些年尤其是近5年來考研的命題,除了把握和諧社會這個大方向不變之外,影射當(dāng)年熱點(diǎn)就是另一個最直接有效切中命題的捷徑。讓我們來看看吧,2003年1月考研,正值中國加入WTO第一年,實(shí)為2002年經(jīng)濟(jì)界的一個熱點(diǎn)話題,因此圖畫選擇了“溫室里的花朵經(jīng)不起風(fēng)雨”,影射中國企業(yè)成長繼而引申到個人成長都需要自主獨(dú)立;2005年1月考研,“養(yǎng)老足球賽”,大家查閱2004年全年BBC評選的中國大事記,把當(dāng)年命名為中國的“司法聚焦年”,因此贍養(yǎng)父母這個小的切入點(diǎn)影射的實(shí)為中國當(dāng)年的人際全局面貌;2006年1月考研,“偶像崇拜話題”,更是明顯不過,2005年全年的超級女聲幾乎撼動了整個中國娛樂界;2007年1月的“自信話題”,漫畫中一個守門員,一個射手,正在面臨點(diǎn)球大戰(zhàn)前的心理波動,回應(yīng)的的正是2006年沸騰全球的德國世界杯;再到2008年1月,充分顯示了命題者的智慧,中國正式進(jìn)入奧運(yùn)年,奧運(yùn)所體現(xiàn)的一切精神就是永不放棄,自強(qiáng)不息,但如果直接選擇一幅漫畫就是關(guān)于奧運(yùn),又太過明顯,因此,我當(dāng)時在2007年5月17號的一次考研講座現(xiàn)場就第一次提出了了08年考研的展望,即奧運(yùn)這個熱點(diǎn)過于強(qiáng)大,所以不可能避開,那怎么隱藏??所以只能選擇打“擦邊球”,通過殘奧,影射殘疾人不屈不撓奮斗之話題,因?yàn)槊恳粋€觀看過哪怕任何一場殘疾人運(yùn)動會的人都會為這個特殊群體的精神所震撼,果不其然,最終的結(jié)果如我所料!因此,我們可以大膽的推測,即將到來的11年考研,這個大規(guī)律依舊有很大的可能得到延續(xù)。
(三)2011年考研英語預(yù)測
以下六大話題搜集,是在充分研究2011年全年大事記的前提下,嚴(yán)格遵守以上兩大命題思路所作出的預(yù)測,具體的范文會陸續(xù)在我的元旦押題班中發(fā)布,請大家引起足夠重視!
1.漫畫“瞎子摸到了真象”---影射國際對于中國認(rèn)識的前后變化。
2.漫畫“相互推卸責(zé)任”---影射食品安全事件中的社會責(zé)任感和道德感缺失。
3.漫畫“股市大跌”---影射投機(jī)心態(tài)不可有,腳踏實(shí)地才是出路。
4.漫畫“地震中用自己身軀保護(hù)學(xué)生的好老師”---影射災(zāi)難事件中人性的光輝。關(guān)于災(zāi)難,此命題切入點(diǎn)還有可能為保持樂觀心態(tài)。
5.漫畫“把我整成**明星的樣子”---影射整容現(xiàn)象以及山寨現(xiàn)象
附件一:2011年考研英語大作文權(quán)威預(yù)測一
范文演示:Introduced as a widely known Chinese fable “Blind men and an Elephant”, it tells us never to draw a conclusion from incomplete data.For tremendous years, people outside China could only get narrow and unilateral knowledge about China, leaving a real China far from being unveiled.Nevertheless, the past 2008 Beijing Olympics was the very and perfect time to lift the curse.For most people who are non-Chinese, they tend to have a picture of Chinese who are just Confucius-like, living in a highly polluted place or even having no freedom to speak in public, etc.Reasons behind are usually the following two: one is that westerners are not so eager to learn about China just as our Chinese do about them, the limited information that reached them are mostly outdated or biased one which were more often than not stipulated by a third party with a special interest;the other is that Chinese government were not so open as the one today and did inadequate publicity about its country, thus the image of China is always kind of mysterious to outsiders, then the image depicted above about China, though misleading, is understandable.However, the grand Olympic Games provide an golden opportunity for people around the world to see a complete and “brand-new”China.Therefore, a better world characterized by harmony between China and all the other countries is to come.附件二:2011年考研英語大作文權(quán)威預(yù)測二
重點(diǎn)推薦: the lack of responsibility
范文演示:When the issue of poisonous milk powder gains an overwhelming focus from the public, what are these malefactors doing? As we can see from the depiction, enterprise, milk station, milch cow and even grass are trying to find someone scapegoating for this credit crisis, in my view point, that’s nothing to do with the credit but the problem of responsibility.Responsibility is a keyword that we should never disregard, defined not only as the courage to face every foreseeable risk, but as the braveness to entail every malpractice when it really takes place as well.The causes of the shortage of responsibility or even conscience may be as follows.Firstly, inner cause ascribing probably to the destructive influence emanating from the decay of morality may result in the over-materialism.Furthermore, outerly , deficient supervisal gives rise to the fearless adventurer who is at the risk of anything ,not to say to deviate from his own liability ,to pursue as many as profits.A case in point is the Melamine-laced Milk Incident which almost destroyed the whole of China’s milk industry.It is imperative that drastic measures should be taken to end this thorny situation, such as enacting related law to reinforce our supervisal mechanism to avoid the behavior of kicking the ball when something bad happen and promoting social entities to regain one of Chinese traditional virtues, which is called “who would enter the hell if I wouldn’t”,that means, undoubtedly, to learn to be responsible for the blunder means sensible unflinchingness.附件三:2011年考研英語大作文權(quán)威預(yù)測三
背景介紹:山寨現(xiàn)象
“山寨”一詞源于廣東話,是“小型、小規(guī)?!鄙踔劣悬c(diǎn)“地下工廠”的意思,其主要特點(diǎn)為仿造性、快速化、平民化。如今,網(wǎng)絡(luò)上各種各樣的東西都有山寨版,山寨版明星、山寨版“神七”,山寨版“鳥巢”,山寨版的《紅樓夢》甚至火過新版《紅樓夢》。
從2003年開始出現(xiàn)山寨手機(jī)到各種山寨產(chǎn)品,“山寨”一詞從經(jīng)濟(jì)行為逐漸演變?yōu)橐环N社會文化現(xiàn)象。如今“山寨相機(jī)”、“山寨電影”、“山寨明星”甚至“山寨版的春晚”等諸多帶有模仿性質(zhì)的“山寨現(xiàn)象”層出不窮,形成了獨(dú)有的“山寨文化”。
KEYWORDS: “Shanzhai” or “copycat”(山寨)
MODEL ESSAY:
As is indicated in the illustration given above, one well-known historical notability named Li Kui is being astonished by his another-self, who is standing in the opposite side, with a disgraceful note in his hand announcing “giving you the parallel experience as the original edition could pay”.So, paid for what? Definitely, he would be paid for his special reputation as a so-called “Copycat Big Star” or “Shanzhai Superstar” which is rampant in today’s China.The trend of the variety of human culture is unchangeable even without the action delivered by human beings ascribing to the various individualities themselves, so is this round of culture revolution.The novelties emanating from the “Copycat Culture”---“Shanzhai Movie”, “Shanzhai Camera” and even “Shanzhai Celebration of Spring Festival” have brought a lot of entertainment to the public to some extent, but what we should never be blind to is their negative influence if they go to extremes hypothetically.Just as the exemplification demonstrated in the cartoon goes, “Shanzhai Star” is taking advantage of the fame or profitable value generating from the true superstar, sometimes this kind of behavior is a typical infringement to the intellectual property indeed, which we can never fail to recognize from TV programs or newspapers always.Then, the question goes to another orientation, that is, whether or not should we admit the existence of “Copycat Culture” or to what extent could we make efforts to protect the rights of original authority? It goes with no denying that the engine of the development of a country is subject to the nation’s creative power, which needs the much strongest protection from no matter government or civilian to fight with any behavior ravaging this kind of ecological balance.Fortunately, the first good news has been coming in---“a unique 15-digit code, the International Mobile Equipment Identity(IMEI), is being applied to China’s more than 200 types of registered mobile phones.The effort will combat “Shanzhai” mobile phones, or copycat phones, the Ministry of Industry and Information Technology said recently.”
特別提醒:2011年必背小作文三篇
訂購及銷售信
銷售:
Last year we achieved a 15% increase in the sales of our.we believe that this happy state of affairs can be attributed to two causes.First, we managed to avoid passing on any part of our increased manufacturing costs to our majestic clients.Second, we believe our designs and colors are the most attractive that we have ever produced.And so we are happy to be able to tell you that our new season’s are, if anything, more attractive than last year’s and our prices will compare very favorably with those of any of our competitors.We believe that you will agree that our samples prove the truth of our claims.We look forward for you to favor us an order.訂購:
Could you give us some idea about your price?
Full information as to prices, quality, quantity available and other relative particulars would be highly appreciated.It will be greatly appreciated if you will kindly send us your samples.However, we find that we can obtain a price less by 30% than yours with local firm.投訴信:
你參加了一個公司的面試,結(jié)果在面試過程中考官把你批的顏面全無,根本不顧及你的感受,請寫信給這個公司的領(lǐng)導(dǎo)投訴。
1,說明來信目的 2,具體闡述投訴理由
3,期待的解決方式
點(diǎn)評:這是一封典型的combination(合體式)作文,它既涉及找工作面試用語,又涉及投訴信,代表了考研應(yīng)用文命題的典型思路。
MODEL ESSAY:
Dear Sir or Madam,I, the undersigned, am a job applicant who had participated in the interview held by your company last Wednesday.I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about this jod-striving experience.The reason for my dissatisfaction has nothing to do with the outcome but the tone of your interviewer, Mr Wang.First, when I was about to illuminating my deep thought, he began to blame on my so-called nonsense according to his perspective.Additionally, his cynical eyesight always made me feel that I am a reject , after all, I am a novice who has stepped into this ruthless carrer world for the first time.I appreciate it very much if you could take my letter into consideration, what I really want is just an apology delivered from him,and I would like to have this matter settled by this Friday.Yours,Li Ming
第二篇:考研英語作文
2014年考研作文萬能模板
英語大作文一共分為三種。
積極類,比如文化融合,合作,點(diǎn)一盞心燈等等,都可以用積極類的模板。另一種是消極類的,比如11年的環(huán)境污染,溫室花朵,過量捕魚這是一類。還有一類就是中性類,自信啊,網(wǎng)絡(luò)利與弊啊,這類的。
但是這三種模板的三段謀篇布局是一樣一樣的。描述圖片+解釋圖片+我們該怎么辦。有時候他會讓你舉一個人物的例子,這就更簡單了,都是提前準(zhǔn)備好的。別著急,后面都會說到,先說說這第一段。
第一段的話,80%的作文書,第一句準(zhǔn)是as vividly+你看到圖中的東西,都用爛了的,咱們不用,咱們的宗旨就是與眾不同。第一句怎么寫,咱們先不說,先說第二句。第二句一般會寫,這個東西對我們的生活產(chǎn)生深遠(yuǎn)的影響。例子,1、正如圖片中生動形象的描畫了一個文化火鍋,里邊有莎士比亞、佛bulabula~~(后半句用非限定性定語從句,這個待會講)。
2、文化對人們的生活產(chǎn)生了深遠(yuǎn)的影響。所以金翅給出的第一段第2句(一、2用此表示,下同)的表達(dá)方法。
Multi-culture does exert such a profound effect on our life that it revolutionizes the way of people’s living and thinking.多元文化的確對我們的生活產(chǎn)生了深刻的影響,這種影響使我們生活和思考的方式發(fā)生了變革。大家想一
想,是不是把多元文化替換成,網(wǎng)絡(luò)、環(huán)境問題、合作、自信都很通順呢,而且用does強(qiáng)調(diào)動詞 exert,讓人眼前一亮。這樣咱們的一、2就完事了?,F(xiàn)在說
一、1,先上模板。As is subtly revealed in the portrayal,there is a hot-pot,which involves Shakespeare and Buddha.這句話的亮點(diǎn)在于非限定性定語從句,把兩句話合二為一。有同學(xué)說了,這不還是as系列的么?這就需要變通啊,句子是死的人是活的呀。咱們的策略是把第一句和第二句調(diào)換一下位置,別讓老師一看就是as,吐都吐死了。
綜上所述第一段前兩句是:
一、1:Multi-culture does exert such a profound effect on our life that it revolutionizes the way of people’s living and thinking.一、2 As is subtly revealed in the portrayal,there is a hot-pot,which involves Shakespeare and Buddha.多元文化對我們的生活產(chǎn)生了深刻的影響,這種影響使我們生活和思考的方式發(fā)生了變革。正如這幅圖片所描繪的,這里有一個火鍋,它包括莎士比亞和佛。是不是感覺“正如”用的有承上啟下的作用呢?是不是很傳神呢?11年的環(huán)境作文中,金翅用的此法,從最后結(jié)果來看,分?jǐn)?shù)還是灰常讓我滿意的。
第一段第三句就很簡單了,一般一張pp下邊會有一句話或者一個注釋,咱來個中譯英就行了,前邊要加上修飾的模板。
一、3:And below the cartoon,there is a topic which says:the cultural hotpot is both delicious and nutritious.要是沒
有配文字怎么辦呢?咱也有辦法。用一個感嘆句搞定,What a meaningful hotpot!有人說就一個感嘆句四個詞,后邊會不會湊不齊字?jǐn)?shù)呢?前邊不是說過了么,文思如尿崩,思如泉涌,不必?fù)?dān)心字?jǐn)?shù)。額,最好還是擔(dān)心一下,字?jǐn)?shù)別寫不下了。當(dāng)時11考場上寫到最后一段,結(jié)果還剩三行,無奈最后一段草草收尾的。第一段的三句話,咱們就都介紹完了。
第二段一般是要介紹這個PP的深遠(yuǎn)意義或者產(chǎn)生的原因,寫三條。第二段一共五句話,第一句說這個主題很有意義,2~4句闡述意義或者解釋原因,第五句一個總結(jié)搞定。模板來啦,看官注意啦~~
二、1:The thought-provoking drawing mirrors a common phenomenon in contemporary society that there is the positive influence of cultural blending.(用了一個同位語從句,要是消極類的就用negative)
二、2~
二、4分別寫三條理由意義,可以用First and foremost,What is more,Last but not least來連接,也可以不用,這個看個人習(xí)慣。我不太習(xí)慣用連接詞,原因有二。一是顯得很生硬,二是這三條理由的句式本來就很復(fù)雜,再加上First and foremost顯得句式灰常的混亂。這個還是看個人習(xí)慣。
又有同學(xué)會說了,這個理由和意義,我們沒話說。這也是我這個帖子最精華的所在,就是傳說中華麗麗的萬能積極理由,萬能消極理由。是金翅從備考四級,六級,考研的過程中,精選又精選的萬能句子,所謂萬能理由,就是能自圓其說
就行,在四六級和考研中屢試不爽。閑話少敘,直接上句子。萬能積極理由(10條):
1、*** can broaden our horizon ,enlarge our scope of knowledge and enrich our spiritual civilization.(***拓寬我們的視野,擴(kuò)大我們的知識面,豐富我們的精神文明。積極類的王牌理由,適合很多題材,網(wǎng)絡(luò),文化,讀書,而且用到了罕有的修辭——排比。氣勢磅礴,大開大合,老師眼前一亮)
2、*** provides us with convenience.(最萬能的理由,凡是有優(yōu)點(diǎn)的,都能給我們提供方便,你就想吧,是不是?)
3、*** meet such kind of need in physical and psycholegical aspests.(滿足我們的身心健康,短小精悍)
4、Of all the ingredients of success,*** seems to be the first within our control.(在成功的所有元素中,***看似是我們最能把我的。是個意志品質(zhì)類的話題,自信,合作都可以拿來直接用,而且相當(dāng)?shù)娜A麗)
5、*** win the appreciation of the public.(***贏得了公眾的共識,有重要的用處,后邊說。)
6、*** is a kind of lubricant for interpersonal relationships.(***是一種人際關(guān)系的催化劑。網(wǎng)絡(luò)、多元文化,愛心,適合很多題材。)
7、stimulate one’s interest and tap one’s potential.(刺激我們的興趣,激發(fā)
我們的潛能)
8、Nothing,except***,can play a more indispensable role in the cultivation of one’s personality.(華麗的句式多變,湊字?jǐn)?shù)的佳句啊)
9、*** is an essential element of success.(沒詞時救場用的)
10、*** is the immortal theme of harmonious development.(沒詞時救場用的)
萬能消極理由(4條):
1、the goal of achieving a harmonious society may fall through under the negative influence of ***.(超萬能,所有的消極的東西,不論是環(huán)境污染,網(wǎng)絡(luò)問題,溫室花朵,過分捕魚,交通擁擠,都會引起社會的不和諧,或許僅僅是在某一小方面??佳凶魑拿?,沾邊就對,不要太計較細(xì)節(jié),老師也沒時間細(xì)想,放心的用吧。)
2、*** bring great loss to both the individual and the whole society.(***對個人和社會帶來損失)
3、*** kill a great mass of time.(浪費(fèi)大量的時間)
4、It is a epitome of the disharmonious relation between the society and human being in a specific aspect of ***(這是一個人類和社會在***方面不和諧的縮影,五星級的華麗句子,***可以是環(huán)境,可以是網(wǎng)絡(luò),可以是交通)
有同學(xué)又說了,我總看到作文中讓舉例子。憋了半天寫出來一個LiMing怎么怎么樣。李明太累了,讓他歇一會吧。例子就要用名人的例子,一般讓舉例子的作文題材,都是意志品質(zhì)類的文章,像合作,自信什么的。既然是萬能例子就要找具有各種優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)的人,什么人呢,成功人士。咱們就說兩個,比爾蓋茨和劉翔。一般有的優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)他們都有。怎么把例子變成句子呢?比爾蓋茨很自信?要這樣寫的話,寫比爾蓋茨和寫李明就沒有本質(zhì)的區(qū)別了。所以咱們要突出他的特性。Bill Gates,for instance,who is the CEO of Microsoft,won the champion of Forbes’World’s Richest People in 2009.It is ***that makes his company successful.比爾蓋茨是09年“福布斯”排行榜的第一名
LiuXiang,for instance,who is a famous athlete,won the champion of the 110-meter-hurdle race of the Athens Olympic Games.It is ***that makes him successful.劉翔雅典奧運(yùn)會110米欄的冠軍。
這兩個例子足夠把所有的意志品質(zhì)類的包含進(jìn)去,可以放心使用。前文交待,第二段一共5句話。
二、1已經(jīng)說過寫法了,2~4句從上文的理由中挑3條就行了。但是我們還覺得不夠華麗,所以我們把第4句改的更華麗,并且把第5句引出來。23句繼續(xù)用萬能理由沒問題。
我們第四句用的一個小技巧就是科學(xué)統(tǒng)計法,直接上句子,再講解。The recent statistic conducted by CASS——Chinese Academy of Social
Science,the past decade has witnessed a sharp increase in the percentage of people who supports multiculture from 21% to 78%.(根據(jù)中國社科院最近的統(tǒng)計數(shù)據(jù),過去的十年里有一個飛速的增長——支持多元文化的人從21%增長到了78%)
這句話很講究,首先引入CASS,字母大寫吸引老師的眼球,茫茫多的小寫字母中,四個連續(xù)的大寫,肯定能吸引住老師,恰好這句話又是華麗麗的給力,那么這句話就差不多達(dá)到目的了。那個——后邊的解釋,說實(shí)話是湊字?jǐn)?shù)的,要是你的字?jǐn)?shù)太多了,可以把CASS換成CCTV或者China Daily,然后就不用解釋了。其次用sharp,很與眾不同。再結(jié)合witness被動用法,足夠讓老師震撼。但我們覺得讓老師就這樣給分不滿足,然后用兩個數(shù)字把老師徹底征服了。根據(jù)心理學(xué)的統(tǒng)計,0~9十個數(shù)字中,7是人們最喜歡的數(shù)字(武當(dāng)七俠,江南七怪,全真七子等等吧,這是題外話),所以咱們自己編的兩個數(shù)字里盡量要有7。第一個數(shù)3*7=21,而且三七二十一是句俗語,應(yīng)該是個常見的數(shù)字,第一個數(shù)用暗7。第二個數(shù)用明7,而且8是個人間人見人愛的數(shù)字,78這個數(shù)就出來了。積極類的數(shù)字可以隨便編,消極類的數(shù)字要謹(jǐn)慎點(diǎn)編,別太離譜了。此時老師已經(jīng)順利落入咱們預(yù)先設(shè)計的圈套中,如果不給15+,他會感覺這次判卷生涯不完美的。閑話少說,咱們繼續(xù)。
第四句出來了,怎么接第五句呢?前文說這個數(shù)字增長得很快。如果是好的東西增長的很快,比如支持文化融合的人越來越多了,那么后邊接萬能積極理由5:
That is to say,multiculture win the appreciation of the public.如果是壞的東西越來越多了,比如污染面積從**%增長到**%That is to say,This problem is getting worse and worse.有同學(xué)覺得這句話沒說完,變得越來越嚴(yán)重了,然后呢?這就正好引出咱們的第三段,建議措施段。
第三段很簡單了,基本上全是模板上去就行了,但是要華麗麗的模板,拒絕千篇一律的垃圾模板。對于積極類的,我們要怎么讓他做得更好;消極類的,我們怎么改變這一現(xiàn)狀。
It is high time that we+動詞的過去式,是一個虛擬語氣的結(jié)構(gòu),千萬要注意。
積極類:強(qiáng)調(diào)好的東西對我們的重要。
It is high time that we highlighted the significance of ***(如multiculture)and cultivated the citizens’awareness that ***(如multiculture)is essential to us.消極類:因?yàn)榍拔恼f的壞的東西增長的很快,所以接下來我們就要控制這種增長的趨勢。然后就政府和個人兩個方面來說明做法。
It is high time that we took effective measures to curb this trend.As far as
the government is concerned,it should set down corresponding legislations and regulations.As for us,we should arouse the awareness of public towards ***(如Interenet).中性類的最后一段,在消極類的基礎(chǔ)上加一句話。說明這個東西本身沒有好壞之分,我們需要掌握一個度,比如還是網(wǎng)絡(luò)問題。句子如下:
I cherish a belief that *** themselves are not good or bad and we can benefit a lot from *** as long as we take a good control over them.不要覺得good bad這樣的小學(xué)詞匯就不屑于用,咱們都華麗了三段了,也要緩解一下老師激動興奮的情緒,肥肉吃多了還嫌膩呢~~哈哈~~
這樣最后一段就差不多完事了,但是最好再來一個完美的總結(jié)。三種類型都通用的總結(jié),如下:
Only by enforcing these measures into practice, can our society be more harmonious ,our economy be more prosperous,and we,as individuals,embrace more promising perspective.(只有我們把這些措施付諸實(shí)施,社會才能更加和諧,經(jīng)濟(jì)才能更加繁榮,我們作為個人才能擁抱一個更加有希望的未來。氣勢磅礴的排比句,給你的作文畫上一個圓滿的句號)
到此為止,咱們的大作文就說的差不多了,應(yīng)該是能把所有的情況都涵蓋進(jìn)去了。這篇模板不算萬能理由一共132個詞,距離最低160字?jǐn)?shù)只差28個字,隨便
挑兩個萬能理由寫上去就ok了。所以說不要怕寫英語作文。其實(shí)作文還要慢慢練的,最重要的是總結(jié)自己的模板,結(jié)合真題或者模擬題來不斷地來默寫模板,要對模板做到了然于胸,知道每句話要說什么內(nèi)容。(金翅掠影)
第三篇:考研英語作文
熱點(diǎn):就業(yè)壓力
題目:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic College Students’ Job Hunting.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.1.近幾年出現(xiàn)了大學(xué)生就業(yè)難的現(xiàn)象
2.產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因(如大學(xué)生追求的目標(biāo)過高,專業(yè)不對口等)
3.如何解決這一問題(改變就業(yè)觀念,大學(xué)生再培訓(xùn)等)
參考范文:
College Students’ Job Hunting
In recent years, college students find it increasingly difficult to get a job.It sounds strange since young college students are usually intelligent, well-educated phenomenon, aspirant and eager to bring their talent into full play.Then what underlies the strange phenomenon?
There are several reasons for this.To begin with, nowadays college students aim too high.All they want are “good” jobs which could offer good salary, comfortable working conditions, high social status among others.Consequently, most college students are unwilling to accept vacant jobs they consider not “good” enough.Another reason is that there is a big gap between the majors some students study in school and the demands of vacant jobs.So companies think some students are not fit for the jobs.Solution to the problem requires efforts on both the society and the students.The companies should value the students, talent and knowledge while the latter
should not merely aim at material gains.They should be down-to–earth in building up their career.Furthermore, they should face their weak points so as to improve themselves and be more competent.熱點(diǎn):城市交通
題目:
Directions: Should governments spend more money on improving roads and highways, or should governments spend more money on improving public transportation(buses, trains, subways)? Why? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition, in which you should write at least 120 words.參考范文:
Urban Transportation
Good transportation is very important to the success of both individuals and a city.Without efficient means of transportation, people will waste a great deal of time going to and from work.This will make them tired and less productive in their jobs.People may rely on either private or public transportation to get them to and from work.If a choice has to be made between spending money on improving the roads for private vehicles or improving public transportation, I would choose the latter for the following reasons.First of all, better public transportation systems, including buses, trains and subways, will encourage more people to use them rather than drive their own cars.This will reduce the total amount of traffic on the roads and make travel quicker for everyone.Second, using public transportation saves energy.A bus which carries 60 people is a far more efficient use of fuel than 60 individual cars driving the same route.And last but not least, greater use of public transportation causes less pollution and will keep the environment cleaner.There are many reasons to support spending money on public transportation.Good transportation systems make a city cleaner, more efficient and more convenient.This improves everyone's quality of life and can make the city more prosperous.Therefore, I support spending money on public transportation systems rather than improving roads.熱點(diǎn):運(yùn)動與健康
題目:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Exercise and Health? You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
參考范文:
Exercise and Health
For thousands of years, physical activity has been associated with health.Today, science has confirmed their link, with overwhelming evidence that people who lead active lfestyles are less likely to die early, or to experience major illnesses such as heart disease, diabetes and colon cancer.Exercise benefits every part of the body, including the mind.Exercising causes
the body to produce endorphins, chemicals that lead a person to feel peaceful and happy.Exercise can help some people sleep better.It can also help with mental health issues such as mild depression and self-esteem.Plus, exercise can give people a real sense of accomplishment and pride at having achieved a certain goal.Exercising can help you look better, too.People who exercise burn calories and look more toned than those who don't.In fact, exercise is one of the most important parts of keeping your body at a healthy weight.When you exercise, you burn food calories as fuel.If a person eats more calories than he or she burns, the body stores them away as fat.Exercise can help burn these stored calories.Finally, exercising to maintain a healthy weight also decreases a person's risk of developing certain diseases, including diabetes and high blood pressure.2012年MPACC聯(lián)考:英譯漢重要短語及句型
(1)、、、not so much、、、、、、as(but)、、、與其說……還不如說……
(2)、、、not so much that、、、、、as(but)that、、、、、、與其說……還不如說……
(3)、、、not so much as、、、、、(=not even)甚至于不……,連……也不……
(4)、、、might as well、、、as、、、、、與其說……還不如說……
例1:He is not so much a teacher as a scholar、譯文:與其說他是老師,還不如說是學(xué)者。(注意翻譯時動作的對象)
例2:It wasn't so much his appearance I liked as his personality、譯文:與其說我喜歡他的外表,不如說我喜歡他的品格。
例3:It's not so much that I don't want to come but I just haven't got the time、譯文:倒不是因?yàn)槲也幌雭?,而是我根本沒有時間。
例4:He didn't so much as say thank you after all we'd done for him、譯文:我們?yōu)樗闪四敲炊嗍拢踔吝B謝謝都沒有說一聲。
例5:You might as well throw your money into the sea as lend it to him、譯文:與其將錢借給他,還不如把錢丟進(jìn)大海。(注意翻譯時動作的對象)
[注意]:more、、、than、、、1)she is more beautiful than her sister、她比她姐姐漂亮。
2)George is more intelligent than aggressive、與其說喬治言行放肆,不如說他聰穎過人??荚嚧?/p>
以上第1句是more、、、than結(jié)構(gòu)的一般用法,即在兩個不同的事物之間就同一方面作比較;而第2句是就同一個人的兩個不同方面作比較。因此要譯成“與其說……還不如說……”。
more、、、than結(jié)構(gòu)在上述1)2)兩句中的用法也適用于less、、、than結(jié)構(gòu),得出相反的含義:
例如:
1)John is less daring than quick-witted、與其說約翰膽大,不如說他腦子靈活。
2)George was less intelligent than aggressive、與其說喬治聰穎過人,不如說他言行放肆
幾個不定代詞的固定搭配:
have none of:不參加;不準(zhǔn);不接受
I will have none of your stupid ideas!我才不接受你那愚蠢的想法!
He was offered a job but he said he’d have none of it、他有一個工作機(jī)會,但他說他不接受。
none but(=nothing but):只有(=only)
None but the brave deserves the fair、只有英雄才配得上美人。
She chose none but the best、她只選最好的。
She is nothing but a child、她只不過是個孩子。
none other than:(表示驚訝)不是別人,正是……(= no one else but)
It’s none other than Tom!We thought you were in Africa、none the +比較級詞+ for:毫不,一點(diǎn)也不
He spent 2 weeks in hospital but he’s none the better for it、他在醫(yī)院里待了兩個星期,但一點(diǎn)也沒好轉(zhuǎn)。
My car is none the worse for wear、我的車子一點(diǎn)也沒有損耗。
none the wiser:不知情
If we take only one piece of cake, mother will be none the wiser、如果我們只拿一小塊蛋糕,母親是不會知道的。
none too:(在形容詞或副詞前)不太;一點(diǎn)都不
The service in this restaurant is none too fast、這家旅館的服務(wù)一點(diǎn)效率都沒有。anything but:①除---之外什么都(此處的but等于except)②決不(=not at all)I eat anything but(except)fish、除了魚,我什么都吃。
She is anything but a good cook、她決不是個好廚師。(即:除了好廚師,她什么都是。)
anything of:①(疑問句/條件句)一點(diǎn)點(diǎn);②(否定句)一點(diǎn)也(沒有)
Is he anything of a poet? 他有一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)詩人的樣子嗎?
I haven’t seen anything of him lately、最近我沒有見過他。
第四篇:考研英語作文
As is vividly depicted in the picture,________.________.the most striking feature of the drawing is that____________.(As what it said in the picture)
Clarely,the drawer,through the picture,aims at reavealing to such a opinion that_____.(As it says____).It is generally accepted that nothing is important than to________,________.In addition,there is no doubt that on no account can we ignore the value of_____,_____.More over significantly,so precious is__that we can not afford to let it along,____.what’s more,without__,hardly can we________.For instance,______.Briefly speaking,it effectively clarifies that whatever/wherever/whenever,we should(never)______.Accordingly,as far as I am concerned,it is impetative for us to take some measures to enhance/reverse this situation.What we should do is to bear in mind that____is of great siginificance both our soceity an ourselves For one thing,as a responsible citizens,we are all expected to enhance the awareness that____is vital for young generation,For anther thing,the local and central authorities,in coordination with the press,are obliged to try their best to make it better.Only in this way can we have a promising feature.
第五篇:考研英語作文
(二)四段論黃金萬能模板舉例
What the drawing vividly presents goes far beyond a simple drawing.Instead, it carries important implications: 主旨
As is vividly depicted in the picture, 描寫圖畫或圖表。Odd and funny as it seems to be, such phenomenon is so
widespread that we can’t afford to ignore them.(第三段貶義):To begin with,主題not only results does harm to our physical and mental health but also results in a
frustrating and humiliating life.In addition, nothing is more harmful than主題to contradict with a harmonious society.No better
illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below.According to a survey made by China Daily, 63.93%
of young people who have ever experienced主題will live a dull life or even feel loss of hope about the future.(第三段褒義):First of all, 主題is crucial for every individual.With its seemingly magic power.主題can not only
accelerate better individual’s development ,but serve as an efficient instrument for individuals to change the world.Second,those equipped with 主題are always admired and respected, because 主題may endow them with more competence.changes,self-confidence to overcome diffculties and handle problems.No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example
mentioned below.According to a survey made by China Daily, 63.93% of young people who have ever experienced主題
Just as an ancient Chinese philosophic book concludes“, All that is needed for the prevalence of a mislead is that good people
do nothing.” To begin with, schools and mass media should serve as a counterbalance to the upsetting trend, doing their utmost
to develop worthy values and qualities among people and awakening people of they rowing threat of this phenomenon.What is
more/Besides, the administration should play a dominant role in taking nationwide prompt actions.Fortunately, due attention has
been paid and effective measures have been encouraged.This is a promising start, although there is still a long way for us to go.(三)三段論黃金負(fù)面萬能模板舉例
(偶像崇拜/過渡捕撈/旅游之余/養(yǎng)老問題/誠信/過渡保護(hù))
Poem is loquacious picture, picture is taciturn poem.-Cicero: Rhetoric.As is shown above, 圖畫描述, which seems to be
humorous and ridiculous.The most striking feature that impresses me deeply is that 圖畫描述.Simple as the cartoon is, the
implication is not only instructive, but thought-provoking on second thoughts as well.It, though, may be obscuring an
unrecognized reality: the serious phenomenon of 主題is facing individuals/ families/
society.A little fire can kindle a forest.–The Bible.To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon, several undesirable effects
have been put forward.To begin with, nothing is more harmful than 主題to contradict with a harmonious society.In addition,no issue is as damaging as 主題to increase social/personal burdens, which is a threatening situation we are unwilling to see.Last but not the least, 主題hinders the social/personal development and progress.The latest was a panel form a certain
international organization, to tell us that the tendency of 主題, which they believe is still in its infancy, effectively began and will
no doubt go further.If we can’t take useful measures, we may not tackle this evil trend, and more serious results with it may
come out unexpectedly.Life, I believe, ask a continuous serious of adjustments to reality.–Robert G Allman:
A Ball to Roll Around.What should
we do to prevent 主題? The most imperative effort is that corresponding laws and relevant regulations be carried out to(curb
and harness this urgent problem/prohibit 主題/severely punished those who shun the responsibility of doing).Only in this way
can we hope to witness the ideal scene in which people can enjoy their life to the uttermost.(四)三段論黃金個人積極模板
(樂觀/設(shè)立新目標(biāo)/合作/自信)
Poem is loquacious picture, picture is taciturn poem.-Cicero: Rhetoric.As is shown above, 圖畫描述, which seems to be
humorous and ridiculous.The most striking feature that impresses me deeply is that 圖畫描述.There is no doubt that its
symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration: nothing can be compared with 主題.Generally speaking, there are advantages to advocating the quality of 主題.It is universally acknowledged that 主題is
momentous and fundamental to anyone who undertakes great deeds.Undoubtedly, it is 主題that keep us continually doing
something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty, that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and
competition and that offers us the foundation for maintaining success.No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the
example mentioned below.According to one of the latest survey conducted by China Academy of Social Science, those who 非
主題are particular susceptible to developing depression and disorders compared with those who are(do)not.Life is not crossing a field.–Boris Pasternak: Hamlet.To be sure, self-realization to 主題is very critical, but it is much more
significant for the authorities to launch the nation-wide campaign to enhance the social atmosphere of 主題.However, it is easier
said than done.Practice is the most important factor.Only by doing 主題can you put your capacities into full play and can you
be the winner in the society.(五)三段論黃金宏觀積極模板
(網(wǎng)絡(luò)/愛心是一盞燈/文化交流/文化火鍋)
Poem is loquacious picture, picture is taciturn poem.-Cicero: Rhetoric.As is shown above, 圖畫描述, which seems to be
humorous and ridiculous.The most striking feature that impresses me deeply is that 圖畫描述.Simple as the cartoon is, the
implication is not only instructive, but thought-provoking on second thoughts as well.It, though, may be obscuring an
unrecognized reality: nothing can be compared with 主題
A little fire can kindle a forest.–The Bible.To account for the 主題, several desirable effects have been put forward.To
begin with, nothing is more crucial than 主題to comply with a harmonious society.In addition, no issue is as efficient as 主題to
diminish social/personal burdens, which is a bright situation we are willing to see.Last but not the least, the development of 主題
underlies the progress of the society and the rapid expansion of our national economy.The latest was a panel form a certain
international organization, to tell us that 63.93% of juveniles who agree with that 主題will live a happy life and even feel hope
about future.Were there no 主題, never should we do(taste)the real happiness of life.Life, I believe, ask a continuous serious of adjustments to reality.–Robert G Allman: A Ball to Roll Around.What should we
do to push forward 主題? The most imperative effort is that the central authority be expected to cooperate regionally in
promoting a situation.Only in this way can we hope to witness the ideal scene in which people can enjoy their life to the
uttermost.