第一篇：高考英語作文范例(二)

（二）時(shí)代熱點(diǎn)和社會(huì)生活相關(guān)話題的作文

一.題目：隨著我國經(jīng)濟(jì)的快速發(fā)展，越來越多的家庭擁有了小汽車。大量私家車的出現(xiàn)，造成了嚴(yán)重的交通擁擠和環(huán)境污染。2010年中秋節(jié)前一天交通高峰期，北京、上海等全國各太中城市均發(fā)生了嚴(yán)重的堵車現(xiàn)象。請(qǐng)你從此現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因、帶來的危害入手，就改進(jìn)措施方面寫一篇英語短文參加全市舉辦的英語征文比賽。

詞數(shù)：120左右。

---------------------------寫作思路：

本話題為當(dāng)今城市生活最為關(guān)注的話題 — 堵車成為了許多大中城市的常態(tài)。隨著我國人民生活水平的提高和汽車工業(yè)的發(fā)展，越來越多的汽車進(jìn)入家庭，在提高人民水平和便利的同時(shí)也造成了嚴(yán)重的交通擁擠和環(huán)境污染。此話題能引發(fā)考生關(guān)心時(shí)事，關(guān)注社會(huì)，在考查考生語言能力和創(chuàng)造性思維能力的同時(shí)，也增強(qiáng)學(xué)生的社會(huì)責(zé)任感。

本題為半開放式作文，所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)較為簡(jiǎn)潔，留給考生更多的發(fā)揮空間，要求考生自己收集處理信息，提出解決問題的途徑，有利于考查學(xué)生的發(fā)散思維能力和語言組織能力。從題目要求可知，本題的重點(diǎn)是改進(jìn)措施。寫作時(shí)，首先可以根據(jù)自己原有的知識(shí)選擇內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，再選擇合適的英文表達(dá)方式，然后再連詞成篇，并合理地使用連接性詞語，使整篇文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。

內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)提示：

原因：經(jīng)濟(jì)快速發(fā)展，生活水平提高，買車的人越來越多。危害：交通擁擠，危害環(huán)境，經(jīng)濟(jì)損失。措施：

（1）限制買車的數(shù)量，提高購車成本。（2）限制外地車輛進(jìn)入市中心（3）發(fā)展公共交通

（4）設(shè)計(jì)合理的交通系統(tǒng)

參考范文：（One possible version）

With the rapid development of our country’s economy, more and more cars are coming into families, which causes serious traffic jams, environmental pollution as well as loss of economy.As far as I am concerned, the solutions to this problem are as follows: First of all, the governments are supposed to restrict the amount of car-buying, and meanwhile raise the costs of owning private cars.Besides, vehicles from other places should be banned from entering downtown areas.In addition, the governments should improve the public transport

and design the reasonable traffic systems of their own cities.In a word, the traffic jams have increasingly affected aspects of our social life.Therefore, we must spare no effort to solve this problem to keep up our country’s economic rise.本文選自學(xué)生雙語報(bào)

第二篇：高考英語作文模版推薦二

高考英語作文模版推薦二

解決方法題型

要求考生列舉出解決問題的多種途徑

１． 問題現(xiàn)狀

２． 怎樣解決(解決方案的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn))

In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious.First,------------(說明Ａ的現(xiàn)狀)．Second,---------------(舉例進(jìn)一步說明現(xiàn)狀)

Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing,---------------(解決方法一).For another-------------(解決方法二).Finally,--------------(解決方法三).Personally, I believe that-------------(我的解決方法).Consequently, I'm confident that a bright future is awaiting us because--------------(帶來的好處).說明利弊題型

這種題型往往要求先說明一下現(xiàn)狀，再對(duì)比事物本身的利弊，有時(shí)也會(huì)單從一個(gè)角度（利或弊）出發(fā)，最后往往要求考生表明自己的態(tài)度（或?qū)κ挛锴熬疤岢鲱A(yù)測(cè)）

１． 說明事物現(xiàn)狀

２． 事物本身的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)（或一方面）

３． 你對(duì)現(xiàn)狀（或前景）的看法

Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.First----------------(Ａ的優(yōu)點(diǎn)之一).Besides-------------------（Ａ的優(yōu)點(diǎn)之二）.But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that----------------(Ａ的第一個(gè)缺點(diǎn))．To make matters worse,------------------(Ａ的第二個(gè)缺點(diǎn))．

...Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.Therefore, I would like to---------------(我的看法)．

(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in.Only by this way,---------------(對(duì)前景的預(yù)測(cè))．)

議論文的框架

(1)不同觀點(diǎn)列舉型（選擇型）

There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文題目_____.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that _ 觀點(diǎn)一________.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____.So it goes without saying that ___觀點(diǎn)一_____.People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that ___觀點(diǎn)二_______.In their point of view, on the one hand，___原因一_______.On the other hand, ____原因二_____.Therefore, there is no doubt that ___觀點(diǎn)二______.As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __觀點(diǎn)一或二______.It is not only because ________, but also because _________.The more _______, the more ________.（2）利弊型的議論文

Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)___作文題目______.In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __題目議題_____.Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly, ___優(yōu)點(diǎn)一______.And secondly ___優(yōu)點(diǎn)二_____.Just As a popular saying goes, “every coin has two sides”, __討論議題______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects.To begin with, ___缺點(diǎn)一______.In addition, ____缺點(diǎn)二______.To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __討論議題____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____討論議題___....(3)答題性議論文

Currently, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)__作文題目_______.It is really an important concern to every one of us.As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem.First of all, __途徑一______.In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving problem is ___途徑二_____.Above all, to solve the problem of ___作文題目______, we should find a number of various ways.But as far as I am concerned, I would prefer to solve the problem in this way, that is to say, ____方法_____.(4)諺語警句性議論文

It is well know to us that the proverb: “ ___諺語_______” has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study.It means ____諺語的含義_______.The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows.(also theoretically)

A case in point is ___例子一______.Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb ____諺語_____.With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: ____諺語_____.The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job..圖表作文的框架

as is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the table(graph/picture/pie/chart), ___作文題目的議題_____ has been on rise/ decrease(goesup/increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from______ in _______ to ______ in _____.From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that ________.There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______.On the one hand, ________.On the other hand, _______ is due to the fact that ________.In addition, ________ is

...responsible for _______.Maybe there are some other reasons to show ________.But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______.I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.實(shí)用性寫作（申請(qǐng)信)

Your address

Month, Date, year

Receiver's address

Dear...，I am extremely pleased to hear from you./ to see your advertisement for the position in....And I would like to write a letter to tell you that.../ I am confident that I am suitable for the kind of the job you are advertising..../ I feel I am competent to meet the requirements you have listed.On the one hand,....On the other hand,....I am enclosing my resume for your kind consideration and reference.I shall be much obliged if you will offer me a precious opportunity to an interview.I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience/ I am looking forward to your replies at your earliest convenience.Best regards for your health and success.Sincerely yours，X X X

現(xiàn)象說明文

Recently _______,what amazes us most is______________,it is ture that__________.There are many reasons explaining__________________________.The main reason is____________________....what is more_________________________.thirdly__________________________.As a result_______________.Considering all there,________________________.For one thing_____________________,for another________

____.In Conclusion____________________.一種事物或現(xiàn)象（負(fù)面意義傾向）

關(guān)于A的話題,早已引起了廣泛的社會(huì)關(guān)注。如今在電視、報(bào)紙、日常生活的很多角落，都有越來越多的關(guān)于A的議論。

給A一個(gè)精確恒定的定義并非易事，因?yàn)樗母拍钌婕傲丝茖W(xué)、人性、思想、經(jīng)濟(jì)、社會(huì)、自然等廣闊的領(lǐng)域。一般而言，我們可以這樣描述A…

A能成為公眾關(guān)注的焦點(diǎn)，主要是由于它對(duì)個(gè)人、集體乃至整個(gè)世界都有著不容忽視的不良影響。

認(rèn)真分析后我們可以看到，A對(duì)社會(huì)/世界 /健康的不利有很多。首先，從最直觀的角度來看，A的出現(xiàn)直接損害了（這里加入一句針對(duì)性的話，如人類的身體健康和環(huán)境的平衡）。（舉例）。其次，從更深一層次上講，它為人類的精神文明蒙上了一層陰影。更可怕的是，由于A所產(chǎn)生微小利益，卻促成了許多可悲的人們?yōu)槠渫跛?，破壞了人類生存的法則和空間。

事實(shí)上，A的出現(xiàn)是社會(huì)發(fā)展和人類進(jìn)步的產(chǎn)物，A所帶來的危害是人類進(jìn)化過程中付出的代價(jià)。同時(shí)，A的產(chǎn)生來源于部分人們的自私和趨利性，他們看到的是膚淺和片面的利益，而從未從整個(gè)全局和人類整體的利益出發(fā)去認(rèn)識(shí)和分析它。這使得A始終揮之不去。對(duì)此，我奉勸他們，跳出狹小的角落，用長(zhǎng)遠(yuǎn)和全局的眼光去重新審視A。

而如今，我們已深受其害，要想消除它的危害，我們必須從根源上杜絕它的產(chǎn)生，我們每一個(gè)人都應(yīng)給予A高度的重視，用系統(tǒng)的和科學(xué)的方法去解決，唯有這樣，避免它帶來更多損失，我們?nèi)祟惽斑M(jìn)的腳步才會(huì)更加平穩(wěn)，更加歡快的邁向輝煌的明天。

One object or phenomenon(negative significance inclination.)

A has attracted extensive attention of the society.Nowadays, increasingly more argumentations about A can be found in TV programs, newspapers, ugogo and marry aspects of our everyday life.Since its concept covers vast fields, such as science, humanity, ideology, economy, society and nature, A is difficult to be defined，...precisely and fixedly.Generally speaking ,we can describe A as follows:…….A's status as the focus of public concern mainly results from its in negligible but harmful influence on individuals, collective, and even the whole world.It seems to have a strange power to drive some individuals or organizations to act wrongly.The essence of these wrong actions is:

(1)to gain personal, short-term and partial individual interest at the expense of damaging others' long-term and overall interest;

(2)to adopt improper means to win more rewards with less input.Situating under the shadow of A, individuals /organizations and violate natural law merely to obtain temporary, or even illusory interests.However, the result may turn out to be loss of really important and valuable resource or ability.We must keep highly alert of the problems evoked by A, because once the harmful influence accumulates to a certain degree and then spread, it will surely threaten the development of the whole society.Though with various reasons and forms, from the perspective of the essence, the problems brought by A originates from the fundamental principle of human ideology and material production.Thus, we should seek the solutions through setting foot on this principle.Due to the depth and width of A's harmful influence, we should draft our solutiogogotematically on the basis of deep analysis of A problem.We must acquire our power from technology, management, law and culture terrorm, effectively eliminate the shadow of A, and ensures ourselves a bright future

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第三篇：高考英語二模作文

You have to accept the fact that graduation date is just around the corner and we have to say goodbye to classmates who we share happiness and sorrow with during the three-year study.To leave a deeper impression on us, I have made a project for our final class meeting.The theme of our final class meeting will be “reviewing and previewing”.As its name indicates , the class meeting will include two parts.The teacher will show the pictures we have taken in the past three years, which is definitely interesting and meaningful.And then all of us will be invited to tell the whole class what we are willing to do in the future as well as what kind of person we would like to be.Simple as it may sounds, I think that it will be the most unforgettable class meeting in my memory, undoubtedly.Never will we study together like today, so it is the farewell party for us to some extent.What I hope to see is that everyone in my class buries our friendship deep in heart through the class meeting, neglecting what may come across after graduation.The class meeting will be a completely new start more than the final.

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（二）F.議論文

(1)最近，你校同學(xué)正在參加某英文報(bào)組織的一場(chǎng)討論。討論的主題是：公園要不要收門票?請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所提供的信息，給報(bào)社寫一封信，客觀地介紹討論情況。

60%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為:

1.不應(yīng)該收門票公園是公眾休閑的地方

3.如收門票，需建大門、圍墻，會(huì)影響城市形象

40%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為: 1.應(yīng)收門票，但票價(jià)不要太高

2.支付園林工人工資 3.購新花木

注意：1.信的開頭已為你寫好。

2.詞數(shù)：100左右。3.參考詞匯：門票---entrance fee

Dear editor,I?m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.60% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee do not meet people?s expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either at home or at work.If an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls.In the end a city will take on a bad look.40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive.The money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees.With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protect a park.Do we share the sameopinion, dear editor?

Yours truly,Li Hua

Dear editor,I?m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.Sixty percent of my schoolmates are for the idea that an entrance fee should not be forced on the public.They believe parks are the place where the public enjoy themselves at their leisure.They think that a gate and wails are to be built if an entrance fee is to be charged.The city will not look so beautiful as it should have.Forty percent of my schoolmates are for the idea that an entrance fee is OK, but it shouldn?t be out of control.Entrance fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new types of flowers and trees.For myself, I?d like to say that if we all work hard to build our city into a flower garden, who cares about the entrance fee for parks?

Dear Editor,I'm writing to tell you about the discussion on whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.Opinions vary from person to person on this issue.50% of the students disagree with the idea of entrance fees.In their opinion, parks are public places where all the people can have a rest and enjoy themselves.So if an entrance fee is charged, some people will surely be kept away from the park.Besides, in order to charge entrance fees, gates and walls must be built.They think that it will do harm to the appearance of a city.40% of the students agree with the idea of entrance fees, because the gardeners need to be paid and new plants and flowers need to be bought.But fees should be charged reasonably.Yours truly,XXX

Dear Editor,I'm writing to tell you about the discussion on whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.Opinions vary from person to person on this issue.60% of the students oppose the idea of entrance fees.They believe

everyone can go to parks for rest and fun because parks are public places.But an entrance fee may keep some people away from the park.Besides, in order to charge entrance fees, it is necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.40% of the students approve of the idea of entrance fees, because money is needed to pay the gardeners and to buy new plants and flowers.But fees should be charged reasonably.Yours truly,(2)

Dear Headmaster,As the minister of students' life in the Student Union, I am writing to you to reflect something about our canteen.To our satisfaction, the canteen supplies us with various kinds of food.This gives us many choices.At the same time the price for the food is low and the food is tasty.And the surroundings for having a meal have been improved.The canteen has become clean.And when we are eating, we can watch TV.But something unsatisfactory exists, too.For example, the quantity of a helping is less than it should be.This is unfair.And in the canteen, the seats are not enough.Some students have to stand while eating.We hope that the school will consider adding more seats for us.Finally we hope that they can improve the quality of the food and their service.We will be very happy if our advice is taken.Yours respectfully,(3)On Money

Money is indeed important, but money cannot buy everything.A miser may think that “money talks,” but if you only give your attention to making money, you may lose many things, such as health, friendship and love.I don't think we should regard money as everything.Money is just a tool that can help us solve problems or enable us to live a comfortable life.What we should do is to use it appropriately and not become misers.This way, all of us can lead a happier lives.(4)假設(shè)今天你上網(wǎng),點(diǎn)擊進(jìn)入“今日話題”網(wǎng)站.看到一則有關(guān)禁止學(xué)生在校園內(nèi)使用手機(jī)的報(bào)道.網(wǎng)友們對(duì)此各抒己見.作為一名高中生,你對(duì)此頗感興趣,就在該欄目下發(fā)帖,客觀反映周圍同學(xué)們對(duì)此的不同看法.并簡(jiǎn)單談?wù)勀愕目捶?(100字左右)

以下為同學(xué)們的看法:

贊同: 便于聯(lián)系, 有安全感, 功能(function)多樣

不贊同: 便于聯(lián)系非必需，因有IC卡電話, 玩游戲，發(fā)短信(e--massage), 耗時(shí)費(fèi)錢

你的觀點(diǎn)

Just now, I entered the website—“Topic for Today”.I feel interested in the report on banning the use of the cell-phone on campus in middle schools.One possible version:

Just now, I entered the website--“Topic for Today”.I feel interested in the report on banning the use of cell-phones on campus in middle schools.In fact, more students now come to school with cell-phones.My schoolmates have different opinions.Some think it is convenient to get in touch with others with the cell-phone, which also makes you feel safe especially in time of trouble.Besides, it is nice to enjoy various functions of different cell-phones.Others think differently.First, the cellphone in not a must in school, as there are some IC phones there, making it easy to call others.Second, many often play e-games and send e-massages with their cell-phones, even in class, which will surely have bad effects on their study.Worse is to come, it will result in a great waste of time and money.In my opinion, the cell-phone is a useful tool in our daily life.But it doesn't mean we can use freely in school.(5)三班的學(xué)生進(jìn)行了一場(chǎng)有關(guān)大學(xué)生是否應(yīng)該打工的討論。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面表中的提示

寫一篇英語短文，介紹討論的情況。

一些同學(xué)認(rèn)為

另一些同學(xué)認(rèn)為

打工會(huì)影響大學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí);改變正確的人生觀;甚至?xí)顾麄兂绨萁疱X

打工可以減輕父母的負(fù)擔(dān);同時(shí)使大學(xué)生獲得社會(huì)經(jīng)驗(yàn);發(fā)展個(gè)人能力;豐富學(xué)習(xí)生活

注意：1.字?jǐn)?shù)：100左右;2.不必逐條翻譯，可進(jìn)行合理發(fā)揮。

3.參考詞匯：打工lake a part-time job 人生觀life view 負(fù)擔(dān)load

The students of Class 3 had a discussion about whether college students should take part-time jobs.Some students think it is advantage for college students to take part-time jobs.Because, by doing part-time jobs, they can earn money on their own so that they don?t need to ask their parents for money, and in this way, they reduce their parents? load.Besides, taking part-time jobs can help them gain social experience, develop personal abilities and make their life enjoyable.One the other hand, some students have a disagreement.In their opinion, the students? main task is to study, while taking part-time jobs has a bad effect on their study.And also, it may make college students change their life views and they may think too much of money.(6)面對(duì)中學(xué)生“出國熱”，社會(huì)對(duì)此有不同的看法。請(qǐng)你以Studying Abroad為題，根據(jù)以下提供的信息，談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā?/p>

Advantages:

1.良好的語言環(huán)境，更利于語言學(xué)習(xí)。

2.拓寬視野，學(xué)習(xí)國外先進(jìn)的科學(xué)技術(shù)。

3.傳播各民族間的不同文化。

Disadvantages: 1.年紀(jì)小，缺乏生活經(jīng)驗(yàn)，自理能力差。

2.情感孤獨(dú)，思鄉(xiāng)。3.生活學(xué)習(xí)費(fèi)用高。

注意：1)第一句已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。2)詞數(shù)100 左右。

3)參考詞匯：媒介，中間人 mediator

Studying Abroad

In recent years, studying abroad has been popular.Tens of thousands of Chinese students have gone to foreign

countries to study.Many people are trying their best to apply to go abroad.There are many advantages in attending schools abroad.First, students who have studied abroad can act as mediators between people of different cultures.Second, we can learn much more advanced knowledge of science and technology from foreign countries.Third, we can learn foreign languages more quickly.However, there are some disadvantages.Most of the students are too young to live by themselves without any living

experience.Besides, being far away from their home country, they may feel lonely and homesick.Of course the costs are much.(7)On net bars

With the development of the Internet, the net bar plays an important role in people's life.More and more people, especially students, like to go to net bars.They are absorbed in playing video games, making bad friends and having a chat with “Meimei” on the net in the bar.Some students often go on playing late into the night in the net bar.As a result, not only does it do harm to their health but also produces a bad effect on their studies.Now a lot of net bars have been shut down in Beijing.But some students go by bus to the net bars at suburbs to play.Fortunately, more and more parents and schools have realized it.Recently, more than six thousand students ensured that they would be far away from net bars in Jinzhou city, Liaoning Province.It is quite necessary for the students to get rid of the bad habit.Recently, more and more students would like to go to net bars, especially students.It has become quite common to go there.They waste too much precious time on playing video games in the net bar.As a result, not only does it do harm to their health but also produces a bad effect on their studies.Their health becomes worse and worse and their studies are neglected.Now a lot of net bars have been shut down in Beijing.But some students go to the net bars at suburbs to play.Fortunately, more and more parents and schools have realized it.Recently, more than six thousand students ensured that they would be far away from net bars in Jinzhou city, Liaoning Province.Most students are making full use of their time and devoting themselves to their studies.It is a good thing.F.看圖作文：

(1)假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國筆友Bob將于九月到你所在城市的建新華文學(xué)校學(xué)中文，來信請(qǐng)你在學(xué)校附近為他找一套住房。

請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖畫提供的信息，寫信介紹住房的情況，并告知住房面積為25平方米，月租500元。

注意：1.詞數(shù)：100左右：

2.參考詞匯：房租—Tent(n.).I?m very happy to receive your letter, and I?m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here.I have already found a fiat for you.It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School.Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School.The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen.There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small flat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month.Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I?ll try my best to meet your needs.If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.Hope you will come here soon!

All the best!

Yours,Li Hua

滿分理由

本文格式正確，意思表述完整，行文流暢自然。作者在寫作過程中注意長(zhǎng)短句并用，還使用了以?which，?引導(dǎo)的非限定性定語從句，從而使文章層次分明，富于變化，不愧為考場(chǎng)佳作。

Dear Bob,Welcome to China!You wrote to me to find a place for you.I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School.It is on the third floor and there?re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom.There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom.The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.Also from this house you can get to your school easily.Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building.It is only one stop.At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I?U be able to meet you at the airport, see you.Best wishes!

Yours,Li Hua

滿分理由

本文格式正確，內(nèi)容完整，表述清楚，銜接緊密流暢，時(shí)態(tài)語態(tài)使用準(zhǔn)確，特別是結(jié)尾末段適度的發(fā)揮，既充實(shí)了內(nèi)容，又符合邏輯，成為本文與眾不同的亮點(diǎn)。

Dear Bob,How are you these days?

I?m so glad to know that you?ll come to our city to learn Chinese.You asked me to find a place for you.Now I?ve found one which I think is pretty good.The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop.It?s just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom.Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable.By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month.I hope you?ll like it.If not, I?ll try to find another place for you.Yours,Li Hua

滿分理由

本文內(nèi)在邏輯性很強(qiáng)，由遠(yuǎn)及近。由外及內(nèi)，層次分明，錯(cuò)落有致。同時(shí)讓步狀語從句運(yùn)用得恰到好處，很出彩，再則結(jié)構(gòu)完整，從開頭的問候語到結(jié)尾都很完備。

(2)請(qǐng)看下面的這幅漫畫，再聯(lián)想實(shí)際生活，寫一篇短文，詞數(shù)120左右。題目：Don?t Waste Water

Don't Waste Water

A man is washing his clothes ,regardless of the notice above “Save the Water Please.”

As we see ,water is the source of life.But there is very limited available water resources in our world.So we shouldn't waste it.Of course, we have to use it to drink, cook, wash, clean and etc.But we must remember not to use it extravagantly.If we didn't stop such

wasteful habits, we would cut off the development of the world and the human life.G:其他：

(1)Companionship of Books

A man may usually be known by the books he reads as well as by the company he keeps: for there is a companionship of books as well as of men;and one should always live in the best company, whether it be of books or of men.A good book may be among the best of friends.It is the same today that it always was, and it will never change.It is the most patient and cheerful of companions.It does not turn its back upon us in times of trouble or distress.It always receives us with the same kindness, amusing and instructing us in youth, and comforting us in age.Books possess an extract having the fundamental properties of immortality.They are by far the most lasting products of human effort.Temples and statues decay, but books survive.Time is of no account with great thoughts, which are as fresh today as when they first passed through their author's minds ages ago.The only effect of time has been to sift out the bad products, for nothing in literature can long survive but what is really good.Books introduce us into the best society: they bring us into the presence of the greatest minds that have ever lived.We hear what they said and did.we see them as if they were really alive;we sympathize with them, enjoy with them, hurt with them;their experience becomes ours, and we feel as if we were, in a measure, actors with them in the scenes which they describe.The great and good do not die even in this world.Embalmed in books, their spirits walk abroad.The book is a living voice.It is an intellect to which one still listens.Hence we ever remain under the influence of the great men of old.The great intellects of the world are as much alive now as they were ages ago.(2)How to Keep Healthy

Nowadays more and more people are concerned about their health.But how to keep healthy? Different people may give different answers to this question.In my opinion, it is essential to do the following.First, it is absolutely necessary to take some exercise every day.Research shows that getting plenty of exercise make the heart beat faster and the lungs work harder.This strengthens the heart, reduces the chance of heart attack, and helps lower blood pressure.That's why more and more people are becoming active in various kinds of sports and exercises.Every morning many people get up early and take much exercise.Some practice shadowboxing and swordplay while others run, jog, walk or dance to music.In the afternoon, there are also many people keen on sports.Some play basketball or volleyball or table tennis, others go in for gymnastics or track events.Through sports and exercise, people become healthier and stronger.Medical researchers have proved that what people eat affects their health.They advise people to eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat such as beef and pork because meat contains more fat than poultry and fish.Fat can build up in the arteries, block the flow of blood, and cause a heart attack or stroke.Getting rid of bad habits like smoking and drinking alcohol is also an important way to keep healthy.Smoking and drinking alcohol injure one's health a great deal, and therefore should be given up.Unfortunately few people follow this advice.If people follow these three ways of keeping fit, they greatly improve their health.(3)Children and Television

Television has been changing the way people live for thirty years.It influences nearly every aspect of modern life.how people use leisure time, how news is reported, how information is learned, and how people think and feel.Children are particularly susceptible to the effects of television because their minds are growing, developing, and learning much faster than those of adults.Whereas television could be used as an educational tool for children, more often simple entertaining cartoons with little or no educational value are shown.Social scientists, teachers, and parents are troubled by the kinds of television programs children choose to watch.These groups of people are concerned about the media's impact on young.children.They are worried about the effects of televised violence on society as well as commercials for sugarcoated food.Most importantly, however, they feel television is one factor that causes declining math and reading scores among schoolchildren.Because of the excessive time spent in watching TV, children are spending less time readingand thinking independently.Experts are concerned about the view of the world that youngsters are learning from television.Parents, schools, and churches have traditionally been the social models and teachers for children.However, because television influences children's attitudes and

behavior, its role in society is becoming increasingly more powerful--it is much more than a simple recreational activity.Exposure to excessive violence is another influence of television.According to several studies, televised violence may cause children to become more aggressive.Also, because so much violence is seen by children on television, they become more used to it as the only solution to difficult situations.Children who watch a great deal of violence on television may become apathetic toward actual aggression.One study has shown that, compared to a control group, fifth-graders who watched an aggressive television broadcast were slower to ask for adult help when a fight broke out among younger children.

第五篇：高考英語作文的評(píng)析 二

高考英語作文的評(píng)析 二

根據(jù)下列內(nèi)容寫一篇描寫Jenny的短文。

Jenny是我們班個(gè)子最高的女生。她的眼睛大而明亮，頭發(fā)像黑色的波浪，鼻子高高的，牙齒雪白。我們選她為班長(zhǎng)，并不是因?yàn)樗莻€(gè)美麗的姑娘，而是因?yàn)樗龑W(xué)習(xí)好，樂于助人，很有禮貌，并且從不與別人爭(zhēng)吵。在運(yùn)動(dòng)場(chǎng)上，她奔跑起來卻像個(gè)男生。

詞數(shù)：100左右。

參考詞匯：qualities素質(zhì)，quarrel爭(zhēng)吵，naughty調(diào)皮的 學(xué)生原文：

Those who study with Jenny in the same class will remember her as an excellent girl.She is the tallest girl in our class.Her eyes are big(1)。Her hair makes you think of black sea(2)。She has a high nose and her white teeth are as snow(3)。We made her our monitor not only for her fine looks，but also(4)for her good qualities.So(5)she is good at her lessons and ready to help others.She never quarrels with everyone(6)about small things.She is good-mannered.But sometimes(7)she is exactly like a naughty boy.How can one forget her if he or she has been with her for quite some time?

習(xí)作點(diǎn)評(píng)：

(1)要點(diǎn)遺漏，應(yīng)是“大而亮”。

(2)此處用詞不當(dāng)，應(yīng)改為waves.(3)改為Her teeth are as white as snow.as … as 像……一樣。

(4)連詞錯(cuò)誤，用not only …but also與寫作要求不符。

(5)上下文無因果關(guān)系，So是多余的。

(6)語法錯(cuò)誤，句中的never表示否定，此處用anyone更貼切。

(7)表達(dá)不具體，讀后覺得與前文不符，加上地點(diǎn)狀語On the sports ground后，才能表示出她的活潑向上的性格。

本篇習(xí)作語言流暢，句型使用熟練且富于變化。特別是作者注意到了短文的首尾呼應(yīng)，使短文連貫、完整。在習(xí)作中如果能注意推敲文中詞句，短文會(huì)更加完美。

精品范文：

Those who study with Jenny in the same class will remember her as an excellent girl.She is the tallest girl in our class.Her eyes are big and bright.She has a high nose and her teeth are as white as snow.We made her our monitor not for her fine looks，but for her good qualities.She is good at her lessons and ready to help others.She never quarrels with anyone about small things.She is good-mannered.But on the playground she is like a naughty boy.How can one forget her if he or she has been with her for quite some time?