第一篇：雅思關(guān)于環(huán)境的寫作

題目

Environmental problems are serious in many countries.It means that the only possible way to protect the environment is at an international level.To what extent do you agree or disagree on this hypothesis? 作文

Environmental protection is one of the most challenges almost every country is facing nowadays.However, whether the way to protect environment is only international standard is a controversial issue.My view is that protect the environment must emphasis person, government and company’s effect.First, it is obvious that the environment pollution caused by human activities through history.Preserving the environment is a long process, just protect environment by an international level can not meet the challenge.So, every citizen should continuously participate in the activities of protecting environment.Moreover, the person’s decision can affect the government or the company’s choosing.For example, if everyone does not use throw-away products in daily life, the companies will exploit renewable and green products while the government can encourage low carbon lifestyle and enact relevant environmental protection laws.This is not to say that we should not conserve environment by an international standard.Of course, if the global reach an agreement about environmental protection, we can protect environment effectively and efficiently.But they also need every citizen’s appreciation and support to bring good results.In sum, no effort is too small when we are protecting the environment!Meanwhile, the local government and companies must shoulder the responsibility to lead low carbon lifestyle.Only by doing so we can assure that we can have a beautiful planet in next years and our generation can live happily.

第二篇：雅思寫作改善環(huán)境話題

環(huán)境問題成為全球關(guān)注的焦點，上海環(huán)球雅思就改善環(huán)境為考生提供一篇雅思寫作范文改善環(huán)境的話題——Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment;only governments and large companies can make a difference.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

范文：

Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about environmental protection and regard it as one of the most important challenges.However, whether only governments and big firms have resources and powers to preserve our environment is a controversial issue.My view is that every single citizen could also make a huge difference.In the first place, it is clear that it is human activities that have the greatest impact throughout the history.Both environment contamination and conservation are the long-term process, and no single government or big company can meet this challenge alone.So whoever created the problem should be responsible for solving it;environment protection needs every one of us to continuously participate in.Moreover, the public’s wills and behaviors have critical influence on government’s policies and companies’ strategies.For example, if everyone says “no” to plastic shopping bags and paper cups, the companies that manufacture such products will switch to environmental-friendly substitutes in order to survive in the market.However, that is not to say that governments and large companies cannot positively contribute.Indeed, governments can enact laws and introduce programs to raise the public’s low-carbon awareness;companies can promote green products to change the public’s consuming habits.But they also need every citizen’s appreciation and support to bring good results.In sum, no effort is too small when we are protecting the environment.Meanwhile, local authorities and organizations must shoulder their responsibility to develop low-carbon economy at the macro level.Only by doing so can we assure that we could hand this beautiful planet to our next generation and the next generation after.

第三篇：雅思寫作：環(huán)境類詞匯

環(huán)境類詞匯

低碳

low carbon 環(huán)保的 environmental 生態(tài)系統(tǒng)

ecosystem 環(huán)境保護

environmental protection/ conservation 保護

protect/ preserve/ safeguard 可持續(xù)發(fā)展

sustainable development

耗盡自然資源

run out of/ impoverish natural resources exploit 留下一個碳化足跡 leaving a carbonized imprint 向環(huán)境排放污染物 release pollutants into the environment 溫室效應(yīng) greenhouse effect 全球變暖 global warming 有毒的toxic 污染 pollution 惡化，降級 deteriorate 缺乏，缺少，不足

lack of/ be lacking in 抵制氣候變化

restrain the climate change 改善空氣質(zhì)量

improve air quality 節(jié)約能源

energy conservation 可再生能源，例如風(fēng)能、水能和太陽能

renewable sources, such as wind, water and solar energy 燃油高效汽車

fuel-efficient vehicles

乘坐公共交通工具，拼車或騎自行車

Taking public transport, carpool or ride a bicycle 避免使用一次性產(chǎn)品 avoid using disposable products 環(huán)保產(chǎn)品 green products 生態(tài)友好的替代品

environmental-friendly substitution/ alternatives 生活垃圾分類

domestic waste sorting

少消耗多回收 Less consumption more recycling 可供選擇的手段 Alternative means 無價的，極其寶貴的 priceless, precious 大批滅絕

exterminate in a large scale 不可補救的傷害 irremediable damage 過度捕撈

overfishing 野生動物 wild animal 頻臨滅絕

be endangered 生物多樣化

biological diversity 新能源、更安全的能源 more safer new energy 緩解能源危機

relieve energy crisis 循環(huán)利用能源 recycling

能源短缺

energy shortage

放射性物質(zhì)

radioactive substances 沙漠化

desertification

持續(xù)發(fā)展

develop sustainably 淡水

fresh water 濫用水 water abusing

節(jié)水的生活方式 water-saving life style 一次性物品

disposable 不可降解的non-degradable

工業(yè)廢水

industrial effluent 有意識的保護者

conscious guardian

第四篇：雅思寫作

翻開劍橋系列教材后面考官所給的范文評析，大家會發(fā)現(xiàn)考官的評分標準一般都從如下四個方面展開：內(nèi)容(content)、組織結(jié)構(gòu)(organization)、詞匯(vocabulary)和句式(sentence structure)。同時，據(jù)筆者的長期觀察，高分雅思作文無一例外地在這四方面有好的演繹才能獲得考官親睞?！昂玫淖魑拇蠖际窍嗨频模恍业淖魑膮s各有各的不幸。”下面，筆者將從以上四方面一一闡述烤鴨們寫作時存在的盲點所在并提出相應(yīng)的建議。

一、內(nèi)容(content)：切中主題，自圓其說

盲點1：無話可說

這類考生在看到題目時，最初的感覺是腦袋中一片空白。雅思作文題材廣泛，包括科技、教育、健康、環(huán)保、犯罪、文化傳統(tǒng)、時尚、體育運動、動物保護等。而且由于文化差異以及學(xué)習(xí)工作的緣故，日常生活中考生極少接觸到這類話題，更不用說對它有什么想法了。

盲點1擊破：四多原則

多看范文；多關(guān)注時事，觀察生活；多與人交流；多記錄自己的想法。比較極端的做法是花三天三夜沉浸在范文書當中，分領(lǐng)域熟悉雅思考題及其觀點。當感覺自己腦袋中涌現(xiàn)出無數(shù)ideas時，關(guān)上書，寫出自己能夠想出來的各個領(lǐng)域的觀點，如果某個領(lǐng) 域發(fā)生短路，翻開書重新閱讀，直至能夠?qū)懗鰜頌橹埂?/p>

盲點2：千言萬語

這類考生往往見多識廣，看到話題時感到倚馬千言?？墒怯捎谠~匯量和邏輯方面有所欠缺。往往面臨“滿腹的心里話不知怎么說”的尷尬。

盲點2擊破：詞以類記原則

此類考生要分領(lǐng)域積累雅思寫作詞匯，如在寫肥胖問題時，考生需要積累(obese, overweight, coronary heart disease, stroke, heredity, inheritance, junk food, carnivorous, excessive drinking and smoking, couch potato, diabetes, a balanced diet, vegetarian等。)

盲點3：標新立異

這類考生認為論點或論據(jù)越新穎越好，力求與眾不同。

盲點3擊破：自圓其說原則

雅思考試畢竟是語言能力測試，詞匯、語法和句式才是測試重點。況且，考官閱卷數(shù)載，見多識廣，你的觀點很有可能已經(jīng)無法構(gòu)成他的興奮點，所以我們講究論點論據(jù)

言之有理，能夠自圓其說即可。

盲點4：真情流露

這類考生和“千言萬語”型考生神似，唯一的不同便是他們英文表達暢通無阻，寫作時有“黃河之水，延綿不絕”之勢。但興奮之時，有些忘乎所以，與主題漸行漸遠。

盲點4擊破：切中主題原則

這類考生必須建立自己的一套邏輯框架，并嚴格執(zhí)行。如在寫argumentation類題型時，全文四段：“第一段為背景介紹和提出論點段；第二段為己方觀點論證段；第三段為讓步段；第四段總結(jié)段。切忌任何與主題無關(guān)或相悖的雞肋出現(xiàn)。

二、組織結(jié)構(gòu)(organization)：起承轉(zhuǎn)合，行云流水

盲點1：天馬行空

這類考生和“千言萬語”型考生神似，寫作時缺乏自己的一套寫作框架。有時，盡管有全文框架，段落框架又缺失，通常表現(xiàn)為主體段內(nèi)部的分論點或分論據(jù)存在邏輯上的重復(fù)或沖突。

盲點1擊破：起承轉(zhuǎn)合原則

除了段落之間應(yīng)存在“第一段(起)為背景介紹和提出論點段；第二段(承)為己方觀點論證段；第三段(轉(zhuǎn))為讓步段；第四段(合)總結(jié)段?！钡倪壿嬁蚣苤?，段落內(nèi)部每一句也需要有這樣的邏輯框架來約束，如讓步段中：“some people may argue that ?(起);because they maintain that ?。(承);However ,they are oversimplifying the situation, in fact ?.。(轉(zhuǎn));Therefore , I believe ?。(合)

盲點2：單句游離

這類烤鴨寫出來的句子與句子之間沒有連接詞，有時就算有，邏輯連詞也使用錯誤?；蛘呤菢它c不注意。最常見使用錯誤諸如on the other hand。它連接的是轉(zhuǎn)折，卻無數(shù)次被誤解成遞進。

盲點2擊破：行云流水原則

考生應(yīng)準確記憶并正確使用各種邏輯關(guān)系詞，力求做到行云流水，常見的邏輯連詞有：

因果關(guān)系：

因：As since due to owning to

果：hence thus therefore as a consequence as a result

表目的：thereby

舉例關(guān)系：Take for example, For instance, To illustrate, As an apt illustration ,對比關(guān)系：While ,whilst, whereas, by contrast。

讓步關(guān)系：despite ,in spite of , not with standing , nonetheless, even though,Provided that , if

三、詞匯(vocabulary)：同義改寫，百花齊放

盲點1 ： 遭遇生詞

大部分考生苦惱的地方莫過于此，寫作過程中無數(shù)次由于生詞的關(guān)系而短路。

盲點1擊破：同義改寫原則

其實考生對不認識的詞完全可以paraphrase，如望子成龍，望女成鳳完全可以寫成：All parents expect their children to have a promising further。

注意：對于各個領(lǐng)域內(nèi)的專有名詞我們鼓勵大家履行詞以類記原則，畢竟只有語言水平較高的烤鴨才可能做到用簡單的詞匯解釋難詞。如有同學(xué)在解釋寄生蟲(parasite)在他筆下成了” something that is very tiny and lives on my skin and sucks my blood without doing any work”！這樣的paraphrase 只能讓考官啼笑皆非。

盲點2：同義重現(xiàn)

如在discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the internet時，有考生作文中曾出現(xiàn)了不下10次的advantages and disadvantages。這會讓考官出現(xiàn)極嚴重的審美疲勞，分數(shù)自然不高。

盲點2擊破： 百花齊放原則

其實考生在平時的習(xí)作中應(yīng)注意近義詞、反義詞、衍生詞的積累，并不斷練習(xí)。如上面的advantages的同義詞為benefits gains merits pros等；disadvantages的同義詞有downsides ,weakness, drawbacks cons等。

盲點3：大詞連篇

很多考生認為大詞生僻詞匯用得越多，得分就越高。

盲點3擊破：整體協(xié)調(diào)原則

看到劍橋系列教材大家會發(fā)現(xiàn)，考官給出的范文大詞生詞寥寥可數(shù)，真正有說服力的是你用的詞能夠準確無誤的表達你的思想。試想一個語法錯誤連篇的考生盲目地使用各種生僻詞匯來堆砌文章，這無疑給考官造成一種“暴發(fā)戶”般的強烈視覺沖擊，最后只能適得其反。所以，用詞上我們講究與內(nèi)容以及句式結(jié)構(gòu)整體協(xié)調(diào)的原則。

三、句式(sentence structure)：長短結(jié)合，錯落有致

盲點1：長篇累牘

和用詞上的大詞連篇一樣，部分考生以能使用各種復(fù)雜的長難句為榮。

盲點1擊破：長短結(jié)合原則

事實上，如果大家有看劍橋后面的范文的話，會發(fā)現(xiàn)長難句并不象絕大多數(shù)同學(xué)想象得那般高深。通常的情況是長短句結(jié)合使用，而且論點通常用短句，而論據(jù)則長句居多。

盲點2：短小精悍

和長篇累牘型考生相反的是短小精悍型考生，為了保險起見，這類考生作文中充滿了簡單的is/am/are的主系表和主謂賓句型。

盲點2擊破：靈活多變原則

這類考生如果能稍稍變得aggressive一些，他們將是考場上最大的“黑馬”。如以Parents and teachers often link children’s score to their academic ability這個簡單句為例，通過強調(diào)句型的包裝我們得到：

It is children’s score that parents and teachers often link to their academic ability rather than other qualifications。

通過倒裝句的包裝我們可以得到：

So important is children’s score that parents and teachers often link them to children’s academic ability。

通過插入語的包裝我們可以得到：

Scores , as is known to everyone ,are often linked to children’s academic ability by teachers and parents。

通過分詞短語的包裝我們可以得到：

Based on the conception that scores tells everything, parents and teachers often link children’s score to their academic ability。

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通過如此靈活的加工和包裝，你會發(fā)現(xiàn)，簡單句經(jīng)過稍稍潤色原來也可以如此光彩照人，這要比無數(shù)大詞生僻詞堆砌形成的長難句更加贏得考官的青睞。

總之，掌握了如上原則，再加上持之以恒的練習(xí)，考生一定能在Task 2中獲得自己滿意的分數(shù)。（編

第五篇：雅思寫作

雅思寫作范文

Many old building are protected by law because they are part of a nation's history.However，some people think knocked down to make way for new ones because people need houses and offices.How important is it to maintain old buildings？ Should history stand in the way of progress？Old buildings sometimes conflicts with social advancement.Appealing as it is in the eyes of business people，tearing down old architect to make room for real-estate development is not a wise idea in many ways.The primarily reason is that old buildings，like our native language，forms our cultural identity and keep a unique record the history of a country.From this aspect，old buildings are considered very valuable as one of the symbols of the culture of a nation.For instance，the traditional Chinese residence in Beijing，Siheyuan，are once seen as the remains of the Old World，and were destroyed by people shortly after the founding of People's Republic of China.Until recently did the people and policy makers as well realize that it is an inexcusable and stupid idea to commit such a terrible deed because old buildings，once gone，are not restorable.But their economic values and aesthetic appeals have just caught the attention of Chinese people.Moreover，old buildings，if planed and preserved properly，could coexist with modern real-estate development.In France，aged buildings bring millions of dollars of revenue for the government and amazed thousands of tourists.Yet no one thinks the high-rising office buildings and apartment buildings make the old architect a sore of the eye.By contrast，the new learn from the old，a fact that makes them more attractive.We admit that not all old buildings should be treated equally and some of them do need to be torn down for various reasons such as safety and new buildings.However，we should not be too blind to see their value too.If only the real and practical factors are being considered，the country will be sorry for its loss in years to come.As we have discussed，old buildings are part of a country's history and are valuable in many ways.We should plan well and be wise enough to see their value.But the same time，we should also do our best to find solutions to make the old and the new coexist in harmony.