第一篇:2011年中考作文預(yù)測(cè)
2011年山西中考預(yù)測(cè)作文
(一)時(shí)間熱點(diǎn):立足“今天”。我們所指的“今天”,不僅僅是指今日這一天,也是指當(dāng)前、現(xiàn)在。在具體表現(xiàn)上,一是文題中直指“今天”的,比如“今天真好”(南京題)、“今夜無(wú)眠”(烏魯木齊題)就聚焦今天,眼望當(dāng)前;二是站在今天回憶過(guò)去的,比如“又是一年風(fēng)起時(shí)”(濟(jì)南題)、“親切的懷戀”(大連題一)、“從那一刻開(kāi)始”(溫州題)、“印象”(寧夏題二)、“感受節(jié)日”(桂林、百色合卷題)等,都需要考生回顧往事,敘寫(xiě)真實(shí)感受;三是站在今天展望、暢想未來(lái)的,比如“假如初三不再補(bǔ)課”(吉林題一)、“中考后,我最想”(南充題二)、“并沒(méi)有結(jié)束”(北京題)等,需要我們寫(xiě)未來(lái)的生活,但是其中必有今天生活的投影和延續(xù)。
(二)地點(diǎn)熱點(diǎn):面向身邊。比如,“喜看家鄉(xiāng)新面貌”(達(dá)州題一)、“這里風(fēng)光好”(眉山題一)、“沉醉在的世界里”(貴陽(yáng)題)、“走在的小路上”(荊州題)、關(guān)于本地留守學(xué)生生活及經(jīng)歷的材料作文(懷化題)等,都是在深入挖掘本地文化和自然資源的基礎(chǔ)上命制出來(lái)的好題,它們鼓勵(lì)考生觀(guān)察生活,表達(dá)真情實(shí)感。這類(lèi)題目,具有較強(qiáng)的人文特色。
(三)人物熱點(diǎn):以“我”為主。大量全命題和半命題作文文題中都出現(xiàn)了“我”這個(gè)字眼。比如,“剎那間,我發(fā)現(xiàn)了自我”(深圳題)、“我發(fā)現(xiàn)了的美”(茂名題)、“在我的世界里,一切都很美好”(陜西題)、“那一刻,我邁上了新臺(tái)階”(蘭州題)、“我們一起走過(guò)”(南通題)、“那次,我和他(她)都是好樣的”(義烏題)、“謝謝你,為我助跑”(麗水題)、“我和一起”(廣東題)、“觸動(dòng)了我”(海南題一)等等,其中有的要求考生站在“我”的角度寫(xiě)“我”,有的要求站在“我”的角度寫(xiě)“他(它)”、寫(xiě)社會(huì),總的特點(diǎn)是聚焦同學(xué)們的日常生活,說(shuō)真話(huà),抒真情。以“我”為命題著眼點(diǎn)的試題,肯定還會(huì)大量存在于2010年的中考作文試題中。
(四)事件熱點(diǎn):聚焦經(jīng)歷。與2008年考前出現(xiàn)的抗擊雪災(zāi)、抗震救災(zāi)、喜迎奧運(yùn)等重大事件不同,2009年中考前出現(xiàn)的抗擊國(guó)際金融危機(jī)、五四運(yùn)動(dòng)九十周年等大多不直接進(jìn)入同學(xué)們的生活。或許正是這樣的原因,像2008年中考出現(xiàn)的“當(dāng)?shù)卣鸢l(fā)生后……”“戰(zhàn)勝自己,堅(jiān)強(qiáng)起來(lái)”等直面時(shí)代熱點(diǎn)的試題,今年相應(yīng)地少了很多。
2009年各地中考作文題,要么是把時(shí)代熱點(diǎn)安排在導(dǎo)語(yǔ)中,比如江蘇泰州試題就用抗擊甲型H1N1流感中的一個(gè)故事引出了全命題作文“懂得責(zé)任”;要么是暗含時(shí)代熱點(diǎn),比如“取暖”(臺(tái)州題)、“伸出自己的手”(濰坊題)、“傳遞”(常州題)、“不走尋常路”(嘉興題)、“春風(fēng)吹又生”(長(zhǎng)沙題二)等,既可以寫(xiě)考生自己的生活經(jīng)歷,也可以從一個(gè)或大或小的角度折射時(shí)代熱點(diǎn)。
而大量試題指向的是考生的人生經(jīng)歷,比如,“生日快樂(lè)”(淄博題)、“難忘的經(jīng)歷”(濟(jì)寧題)、“放假了”(漳州題一)、“我們初中生的故事”(三明題)、“師生之間”(安徽題)等,考生一看就能聯(lián)想到自己的諸多經(jīng)歷,找到大量素材。總之,命題者努力做到最大限度地調(diào)動(dòng)考生的生活積累,便于他們找到得心應(yīng)手的寫(xiě)作素材,鼓勵(lì)他們“說(shuō)真話(huà)、實(shí)話(huà)、心里話(huà),不說(shuō)假話(huà)、空話(huà)、套話(huà)”。
(五)情操熱點(diǎn):健康向上。中考是人生的重要經(jīng)歷,其作文命題在考查畢業(yè)生寫(xiě)作能力的同時(shí)又要引導(dǎo)考生思想和人格的提升,這是命題者的一大追求。所以,命題者在文題內(nèi)容要表現(xiàn)的思想情操方面,必然是健康向上的。比如,“,太棒了!”(山西題)、話(huà)題作文“自信”(荊門(mén)題)等試題,鼓勵(lì)考生自信樂(lè)觀(guān)地面對(duì)生活、面對(duì)他人;“我很幸運(yùn)”(江西題),傳達(dá)出知足、感恩等心理感受;話(huà)題作文“團(tuán)隊(duì)精神”(青島題二)、“伸出自己的手”(濰坊題)等,讓考生懂得與人相處,合作共贏;
“我還缺少什么”(佛山題),勉勵(lì)考生要正確認(rèn)識(shí)自己,不斷進(jìn)取,完善自我;“逆耳忠言助我行”(河南題一)、話(huà)題作文“走出自我小天地”(臨沂題)、材料作文“盡力而為就好”(武漢題)、寫(xiě)信勸慰同學(xué)正確對(duì)待挫折和壓力(天津題)等,著眼的是在解決好生活問(wèn)題的過(guò)程中不斷成長(zhǎng),走向成熟。
以上五大熱點(diǎn),都貫徹了《教育部關(guān)于深入推進(jìn)和進(jìn)一步完善中考改革的意見(jiàn)》中“學(xué)業(yè)考試的命題要嚴(yán)格依據(jù)學(xué)科課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn),加強(qiáng)試題與社會(huì)實(shí)際和學(xué)生經(jīng)驗(yàn)的聯(lián)系”的文件精神,也都落實(shí)了課標(biāo)“寫(xiě)作教學(xué)應(yīng)貼近學(xué)生實(shí)際,讓學(xué)生易于動(dòng)筆,樂(lè)于表達(dá),應(yīng)引導(dǎo)學(xué)生關(guān)注現(xiàn)實(shí),熱愛(ài)生活,表達(dá)真情實(shí)感”的精神。我們可以預(yù)見(jiàn),在未來(lái)的中考中,以上熱點(diǎn)還會(huì)繼續(xù)熱下去。
第二篇:中考預(yù)測(cè)作文
1.Write at least 60 words on the topic “Padsgo into our class”.(南京的21所中學(xué)目前正在推進(jìn)“電子書(shū)包”項(xiàng)目。部分中學(xué)已經(jīng)用Pad代替了課本。以“平板電腦進(jìn)課堂”為題寫(xiě)一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文,標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。)The following is for reference only.(以下問(wèn)題僅供參考)1.What’s your opinion on“Pads go into our class”? 2.Do you agree or not? 3.Give your suggestions on learning on Pads.Padsgo into our class
As is shown above, many schools in America and other countries, including China, are using Pads instead of traditional textbooks in their classes.From my view, they are of great help to the students.Firstly, Pads provide students with various forms of background information.With the help of stories, music, pictures and videos, classes can be great attractions to students.Secondly, Pads make students learn more.When they have their lessons, students can type on Pads to gain more information than what the teachers have taught them.Last but not the least, Pads are so small and light that we can go anywhere with them in our pockets without carrying a large schoolbag full of books.I’m in favour of this move as long as they are not misused in class, especially when it comes to exams.2.Write at least 60 words on the topic “My opinion on online payment”(以“網(wǎng)絡(luò)支付之我見(jiàn)”為題,寫(xiě)一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文,標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格)提示:現(xiàn)在,大家在網(wǎng)上、超市或商場(chǎng)購(gòu)物時(shí),很流行用支付寶、微信錢(qián)包等支付工具,請(qǐng)發(fā)表你對(duì)這種現(xiàn)象的看法和建議。
My opinion on online payment Nowadays, people often use online payment when going shopping online or in the shopping mall.However, it has advantages as well as disadvantages.On one hand, online payment is more convenient and easier than traditional payment.It saves people a huge amount of time ,and this enables them to spend more time on work or other things that they want to do.On the other hand, online payment isn’t as safe as it seems, especially when people lost their phones.As a result, the government should make certain regulations to ensure the safety of online payment.To sum up, we should take everything into consideration, and only in these ways can we use online payment securely.3.為了提高人們的環(huán)保意識(shí),你所在的環(huán)保小組計(jì)劃組織一次環(huán)保宣傳活動(dòng),假如你是組長(zhǎng),請(qǐng)用英文寫(xiě)一篇活動(dòng)倡議,你的倡議必須包含以下內(nèi)容: 1).What kinds of pollution have you noticed in your daily life? 2).What do you think caused the pollution? 3).What can you do to deal with the pollution?(注意:
1、短文字?jǐn)?shù)不少于60個(gè)詞,標(biāo)點(diǎn)符合不占格。
2、短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息,否則不予評(píng)分。)
To be green consumers As is known to us,our environment has been polluted in the past decade.Water, land and air around us are so poisonous that we have developed a variety of diseases, including cancer.Behind the pollution, one major reason is that many people are not aware of the danger we are facing now.(Factories poured the waste water into the river nearby without being treated.Farmers overused the fertilizer and pesticide on the farm, hoping for a higher production.Citizens throw a larger amount of household waste every day.)To solve the problems, we should be green consumers.We can not only persuade others not to throw rubbish into the rivers, but also plant more trees to make the air cleaner.Moreover, we can use paper bags instead of plastic ones when we go shopping.Using public transportation instead of private cars is another choice.Only in these ways can we better our Earth.4.隨著年齡增長(zhǎng),同學(xué)們或多或少都有一些自己的小秘密,當(dāng)你有心里話(huà)的時(shí)候,你會(huì)選擇去和父母、朋友或老師傾訴嗎?寫(xiě)出自己的小秘密或者心里話(huà),去向自己的父母、朋友或老師傾訴。
(注意:
1、短文字?jǐn)?shù)不少于60個(gè)詞,標(biāo)點(diǎn)符合不占格。
2、短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息,否則不予評(píng)分。)
My inner thoughts and feelings to my maths teacher
I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude for your help with my maths study.I will never forget the experience when I began to learn geometry.I work hard on geometry but it’s not my cup of tea.I was in a low spirit and almost gave up.Luckily, your encouragement and help brought me fresh hopes for geometry.You tutored me after classes, and your way to solve thegeometrical problems always
interested me.Step by step, I became brave enough to challenge the hard problems.My confidence came back to me.Unbelievably, I won the second prize in the maths examination.It was the first time that I had experienced the happiness of success in my life.How time flies!Myjunior high school life will come to end.I always remember the profound influence you have made on my studies.5.假如你是李華,你們學(xué)校開(kāi)設(shè)了有關(guān)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化的綜合實(shí)踐課。請(qǐng)你用英文寫(xiě)一篇不少于60字的短文給某英文網(wǎng)站投稿,談?wù)劄槭裁从斜匾_(kāi)這門(mén)課,在課上你通常做什么以及你的感受。
Words for reference(以下短語(yǔ)僅供參考): show ,make tea, paper cutting ,dumpling ,proud Questions for reference(以下問(wèn)題僅供參考)1).Why is it necessary to have classes about traditional Chinese culture? 2).What do you usually do in these classes? 3).How do you feel?
What I have learnt in traditional Chinese culture class We had courses about traditional Chinese culture this term.In my opinion, it is very necessary to have these lessons because not only can we get to know more about Chinese culture but also we can apply what we have learnt to our real life to make our life more colorful.In the classes, I’ve learnt a lot.The teachers showed us how to make tea and told us the history of tea.Paper cutting, a traditional chinese art,was also included and I can cut some beautiful paper flowers now.Making traditional Chinese food is my favorite, so we tried making dumplings and zongzi.It’s really interesting and I firmly believe that other students also love these classes like me.By having these classes, we both learnt a lot and made friends with our teachers.I am proud of being a Chinese.6.這兩年真人秀節(jié)目開(kāi)始走紅,譬如爸爸去哪,(Where are we going, Dad), 奔跑吧兄弟(Running man),我們15個(gè)(We fifteen people)等等一經(jīng)開(kāi)播都得到觀(guān)眾的大力支持,這類(lèi)節(jié)目都是在鼓勵(lì)我們走出自己舒適的生活,去接受一些挑戰(zhàn),做一些自己以前沒(méi)有做過(guò)的事情。
According to this, write at least 60 words on the topic “How to face the challenge?”
(據(jù)此,寫(xiě)出一篇不少于60字的短文,說(shuō)明我們要不要去接受一些挑戰(zhàn),及面對(duì)挑戰(zhàn)時(shí)應(yīng)該以什么樣的心態(tài)處理?標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。)
How to face the challenge Our life is full of chances, but we also face challenges in the course of our growth.I always keep an open mind to face the challenges that I come across.A challenge is a friend.We live our life with its company.When I face a problem, I would rather treat it like a friend that I need to take care than an enemy that I must defeat.Only by keeping a peaceful and active mind can I make it.A challenge is a teacher.He tells me my strength and weakness.It encourages me for a higher aim.The learning and growth process is also a process of overcoming a challenge.It makes me confident and strong by being both a friend and a teacher.7.近兩年流行一檔農(nóng)村孩子和城市孩子互換生活環(huán)境的節(jié)目。如果有這樣一個(gè)體驗(yàn)機(jī)會(huì),作為城市孩子的你,去了農(nóng)村以后,該如何適應(yīng)那里的生活?如何和那邊的“爸爸媽媽”以及農(nóng)村的小伙伴們相處?請(qǐng)以 My life in a countryside 寫(xiě)一篇不少于60個(gè)單詞的作文。
My life in a countryside Born and living in Shanghai, I’m unfamiliar withthe life in the countryside.It is truly challenging and mysterious if I’m given the chance to go through the adventure.As the saying goes, do in Rome as Rome does.On one hand, I have to adapt the life as soon as possible, such as the terrible food and the awful living environment.On the other hand, I will cook some traditional dishes of my own family for “mom” and “dad” there to add a new taste to their table.For the children in the countryside, I hold the view that they are so kind and smart that I will make friends with them soon.I can tell them what the city life is like and share my stories with them.Frankly speaking, it will be my special experience that I never forget in the future.8.中考結(jié)束,你們班同學(xué)約定要舉行一次大聚會(huì)。對(duì)比兩幅圖片,你會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)以前聚會(huì)大家歡聲笑語(yǔ),無(wú)所不談?,F(xiàn)在聚會(huì)朋友們低頭不語(yǔ),只聽(tīng)到各種信息的提示聲。請(qǐng)你以The changes in our way of communication為題寫(xiě)一篇不少于60詞的文章。文章內(nèi)容包括以下幾點(diǎn):
1)對(duì)于兩幅圖中聚會(huì)時(shí)的不同情景,你的態(tài)度是怎樣的?理由是什么?
2)給出改善的建議(至少2條)
The Changes in Our Way of Communication Now people are so keen on electronics that we spend most time on the net-pals instead of friends in front of us.To be frank, I am not for it.Most of us are living a busy life and it is not easy to be together once in a while, thus we’d better value the precious chance.In addition, getting together from time to time enables us to discuss something important that we can not talk about through QQ or Wechat.In order to avoid the same situation at our after-exam party, I’d like to suggest everyone turn our phones off or to silence.It is also a good choice to gather our phones and havesomeone look after them untill the party ends.Without such distraction, we can fully enjoy our time.In brief, I believe parties without phones can also be happy and meaningful.9.端午節(jié)是中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)的節(jié)日,那么端午節(jié)你是怎么度過(guò)的呢?請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇日記來(lái)記錄你端午節(jié)的感受和收獲。
Words for reference(以下短語(yǔ)僅供參考):
the Dragon Boat Festival , activities , presents , celebrate
Thursday, Jun.9th, 2016.Sunny
It is the Dragon Boat Festival today.I got up early because I was asked to prepare for our family get-together with mom.First, we had to get rice and reed leaves for our traditional food, zongzi.Making a zongzi is really a skillful job.I never made it a triangle at first.It was mom’s instruction and encouragement that made me succeed.Then in the afternoon, we went to the park for pleasure.We saw many people in the park.Some were flying kites in different colors and shapes, some were taking photos, others were walking and talking with each other.Everyone was having a great time there.I was busy and tired, but I learnt the secret of success, never giving up.What an interesting and meaningful Dragon Boat Festival we had today!
10.Write at least 60 words on the topic of “Studying from Babyhood”.以“學(xué)習(xí)從嬰兒開(kāi)始抓起”為題,寫(xiě)一篇不少于60字的文章
The following is for reference only.(以下問(wèn)題僅供參考)1.What’s your opinion on studying from babyhood?(談下你對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)從嬰兒開(kāi)始抓起的看法)2.Do you agree or not?(你是否贊同從嬰兒抓起?)
3.Give your suggestions on studying from babyhood?(請(qǐng)談一下你的個(gè)人觀(guān)點(diǎn))
Nowadays more parents hope that their children will enter famous schools.Therefore, it is very important to study from a baby.Personally, I agree with it.As we all know, if our babies study early, her brain will be fully developed, learning things more quickly.Our babies can learn a lot, from musical instruments, Chinese, Maths to English.In this way, they have the chance to enter a good kindergarten.If our babies study late, it will be hard to catch up with others.For all these reasons above, it is necessary to study at an early age.11.Write a letter at least 60 words, according to the given situation(根據(jù)所給的情景寫(xiě)一封不少于60詞的邀請(qǐng)信)Suppose you are Mary, a student of Sunny School.Shanghai Disneyland Park is going to officially open to the public soon.Write a letter to your pen pal Jack and invite him to visit Shanghai Disneyland together.Phrase for reference(以下短語(yǔ)僅供參考)be keen on, officially open, combine with, have chance to do…, the most unforgettable thing,Dear Jack,Glad to write to you!I know you are keen on Mickey Mouse and Disney cartoons.There is great news that Shanghai Disneyland, the sixth one in the world, will be officially open to the public soon, combining Disney cartoon characters with games and adventures.We will have chance to explore six unique and unforgettable lands.We can not only enjoy the famous stage showing the King Lion but also join in many different theme activities especially the parades.In addition, we can go shopping in the Souvenir shop filled with lovely toys.The most unforgettable thing is to see Enchanted Storybook Castle!I’m sure it’ll be a fantastic journey here!
I am looking forward to your reply soon!
Yours sincerely,Mary
12.上海迪士尼度假區(qū)將于2016年06月16日正式開(kāi)門(mén)迎客,并舉辦為期數(shù)日的盛大開(kāi)幕 慶典,屆時(shí),必將會(huì)有很多游客進(jìn)入園區(qū)游玩。作為上海中學(xué)生的一員,你對(duì)即將進(jìn)園游玩的游客,有什么好的建議和意見(jiàn)。請(qǐng)以“My suggestions on visiting Shanghai Disneyland”為題寫(xiě)一篇不少于60詞的短文,標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。Questions for reference(以下問(wèn)題僅供參考)1)Give a brief introduction about Shanghai Disneyland.2)Some suggestions on visiting Shanghai Disneyland.As we all know, Shanghai Disney Park will be open to the public soon.It’s founded by China and the United States.Although it is very expensive to visit Shanghai Disney Park, it’s still popular with a lot of tourists.However, how should we visit it happily and efficiently?
Firstly, we can make some preparations for the visit.For example, we can search for the best route online, and make arrangements that are both effective and comfortable.Secondly, it is also important to wear comfortable clothes and shoes for easy walking.To sum up, I hope these two suggestions will be of great help for you.Wish you a wonderful trip!
13.在生活中,大家經(jīng)常會(huì)遇到意見(jiàn)不一致的時(shí)候。當(dāng)你和他人意見(jiàn)不同時(shí),你會(huì)選擇聽(tīng)取他人的意見(jiàn)還是堅(jiān)持自己的意見(jiàn)或其他。以“Listen to others or not”為題陳述一件你和他人意見(jiàn)不一樣的事件,并寫(xiě)出你的處理方式。
In our life, we may meet different views on the same thing.In my eyes, the best way to deal with the problem is to consider others’ opinions before making the final decisions.Last month, the headmaster asked us to finish a project in pairs.In the beginning, my partner and I held different opinions.Neither he nor I wanted to change our mind.In order to avoid entering a dead end, we decided to discuss it together.Through listening to each other, we found the key points and the task was finished perfectly.I learn that when meeting a problem, try to listen to others and you will get something great!
14.Write at least 60 words about the topic “I bring my happiness to _____”(請(qǐng)以“我給______ 帶來(lái)快樂(lè)”為題,寫(xiě)一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文,標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。)The following is for reference only.(以下問(wèn)題僅供參考)1).Who do you bring your happiness to? 2).What do you bring to your family, friends or strangers? 3).How do you feel?
My favorite proverb is “Happiness is a choice, not a mood”.So I firmly choose to be a happy man who infects others.I hope that I can bring my happiness to people around me, my family, friends and even strangers.To my excitement, I can bring happiness to strangers who live in old people’s home.Grandmas and grandpas are really happy when I as well as my classmates go there and put on performance for them.At that moment, there are big smiles on their faces.In fact, I am really excited and feel that I am the happiest person in the world when bringing happiness to others.How happy it is!
15.2016年1月1日起,上海市頒布了《上海市煙花爆竹安全管理?xiàng)l例》,明確規(guī)定禁止外環(huán)以?xún)?nèi)燃放煙花爆竹。對(duì)此,你有什么看法?你每年都放煙花嗎?寫(xiě)出你的想法和建議?
Setting off firecrackers is a Chinese tradition.It brings us a lot of happiness.So many people do it during the Spring Festival.But I don’t set off firecrackers and I think it should be banned.Firstly, setting firecrackers not only pollutes the air but also makes a lot of noise.They are harmful to our health.What’s more, every year many people are badly injured because of the firecrackers, which make their family sad during the festival.So in order to protect the environment and our safety, I think it is necessary to stop people from setting off firecrackers.
第三篇:2015中考作文預(yù)測(cè)
主題素材專(zhuān)項(xiàng)備考
一一2015年中考作文備考素材關(guān)鍵詞:真情
【2015年中考作文命題分析】
真情,是每一道作文試題的核心命意,感情唯有真實(shí)才可貴,感情唯有真實(shí)才美麗?!靶撵`”“美好”“美麗”“真情”之類(lèi)的字眼高頻出現(xiàn)于各地中考文題之中?!胺窒硎敲利?的“(安順)、“美麗的綻放”(潛江)、“觸動(dòng)心靈的”(遂寧)、“感悟美好”(涼山)等2014年中考作文試題便是這一主題高頻呈現(xiàn)的明證。0 1 4年中考此類(lèi)文題還有:我心靈的甘露(天津),那份不一樣的真情(長(zhǎng)沙),——就在身邊(宜賓),感動(dòng)(雅安),深處(寧波),心泉叮咚(沈陽(yáng)),等等。
讓發(fā)自心靈深處的聲音穿透肺腑停駐于筆頭紙端,讓美麗的真情傾瀉于字里行間,你一定能在這樣美好的真情中看到一個(gè)全新的世界。
按照這一思路,真情類(lèi)作文備考,我們還可關(guān)注以下這類(lèi)相似的文題訓(xùn)練: 情到深處
心靈之花盛開(kāi)的季節(jié) 我___了(從“哭”“笑”“陶醉”“迷惘”“疑惑”“懂(明白)”等詞語(yǔ)中選填一個(gè))不想___(從“住?!薄俺蔀樽鳂I(yè)的機(jī)器”“做籠中的小鳥(niǎo)”“壓抑自己的情緒”等詞語(yǔ)中選填一個(gè))想___的時(shí)候(家、你、母親、父親、玩、旅行??)無(wú)論寫(xiě)怎樣的真情,都離不開(kāi)喜怒哀樂(lè)?!跋病庇邢矏偂⒂鋹偂⑴d奮、沉浸,“怒”有生氣、憤怒、怨恨、憎惡、厭棄,“哀”有悲傷、痛心、悔恨、惋惜,“樂(lè)”有快樂(lè)、陶醉、自豪、得意??只要我們將內(nèi)心潛在的真實(shí)情感發(fā)掘出來(lái),因真實(shí)的生活而自然生發(fā)出真實(shí)的情感,就一定能寫(xiě)出令自己心動(dòng)的文章來(lái)一一如果連自己都感動(dòng)不了,可別指望閱卷者青睞哦。【經(jīng)典素材】 文段一:
他在長(zhǎng)長(zhǎng)的行列里,等候護(hù)照檢驗(yàn);我就站在外面,用眼睛跟著他的背影一寸一寸往前挪。終于輪到他,在海關(guān)窗口停留片刻,然后拿回護(hù)照,閃入一扇門(mén),倏乎不見(jiàn)。
我一直在等候,等候他消失前的回頭一瞥。但是他沒(méi)有,一次都沒(méi)有。
此刻他二十一歲,上的大學(xué),正好是我教課的大學(xué)。但即使是同路,他也不愿搭我的車(chē)。即使同車(chē),他戴上耳機(jī)一一只有一個(gè)人能聽(tīng)的音樂(lè),是一扇緊閉的門(mén)。有時(shí)他在對(duì)街等候公車(chē),我從高樓的窗口往下看:一個(gè)高高瘦瘦的青年,眼睛望向灰色的海;我只能想象,他的內(nèi)在世界和我的一樣波濤深邃,但是,我進(jìn)不去。一會(huì)兒公車(chē)來(lái)了,擋住了他的身影。車(chē)子開(kāi)走,一條空蕩蕩的街,只立著一只郵筒。
我慢慢地、慢慢地了解到,所謂父女母子一場(chǎng),只不過(guò)意味著,你和他的緣分就是今生今世不斷地在目送他的背影漸行漸遠(yuǎn)。你站立在小路的這一端,看著他逐漸消失在小路轉(zhuǎn)彎的地方,而且,他用背影告訴你:不必追。
一一龍應(yīng)臺(tái)《目送》 【運(yùn)用剖析】 “描寫(xiě)+抒情”,是真情表達(dá)最為常用的方式。描寫(xiě),要力求精準(zhǔn)形象;抒情,要盡可能寫(xiě)出真實(shí)的情感。文段從“他”的“等候”“停留片刻”“閃入”“倏乎不見(jiàn)”,“我”的“站”“挪”“等候”等幾個(gè)簡(jiǎn)潔的詞語(yǔ),極為精練地傳達(dá)出人物內(nèi)心真情,并將之前發(fā)生的相關(guān)事件插敘進(jìn)來(lái),使描寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容顯得更為豐富,以便為后文哲理性的抒情鋪墊。這是描寫(xiě)的部分。
之后,作者則從“我”內(nèi)心的真實(shí)情感出發(fā),以抒情的筆觸寫(xiě)及“我”之于事件的思考?!澳克退谋秤皾u行漸遠(yuǎn)”是抒情的核心,“不必追”則真摯而深刻的感悟結(jié)論,也是至為感性的人生啟示。這樣的抒情不是無(wú)本之木無(wú)源之水,它緊緊依托于前文的鋪墊,更因?yàn)槭闱榈摹靶蜗笮浴倍骨楦酗@得更加自然,更加真摯。
敘寫(xiě)真情就該這樣,由人事景物自然生發(fā)情感,讓情感表述更加形象。文段二:
我還記得2002年正月初二的那一天,我和愛(ài)人應(yīng)邀到城西的弟弟家去吃飯,我們沒(méi)有乘車(chē)從城里走,而是上了堤壩,繞著小城步行而去。那天下著雪,落雪的天氣通常是比較溫暖的,好像雪花用它柔弱的身體抵擋了寒流。
堤壩上一個(gè)行人都沒(méi)有,只有我們倆,手挽著手,踏著雪無(wú)言地走著。山巒在雪中看上去模模糊糊的,而堤壩
下的河流,也已隱遁了蹤跡,被厚厚的冰雪覆蓋了。河岸的柳樹(shù)和青楊,在飛雪中看上去影影綽綽的,天與地顯得是如此的蒼茫,又如此的親切。走著走著,我忽然落下了眼淚,明明知道過(guò)年落淚是不吉祥的,可我不能自持,那種無(wú)與倫比的美好滋生了我的傷感情緒。三個(gè)月后,愛(ài)人別我而去,那年的冬天再回到故鄉(xiāng)時(shí),走在白雪茫茫的堤壩上的,就只是我一人了。那時(shí)我恍然明白,那天我為何會(huì)流淚,因?yàn)樘炫c地都在暗示我,那美好的情感將別你而去,你將 被這亙古的蒼涼永遠(yuǎn)環(huán)繞著!
一一遲子建《我的世界下雪了》
【運(yùn)用剖析】
這是一個(gè)以曲折的筆法傳遞真情的范例。
同樣是以描寫(xiě)起筆,作者讓我們 看到了飄灑的雪花,讓人感覺(jué)能抵擋寒流的雪花,看到了那么熟悉而親切的河流。但作者并未就此抒發(fā)內(nèi)心的真摯情感,而是讓“淚”先流了下 來(lái)一一這淚是真實(shí)可觸的,卻讓讀者感覺(jué)有些茫然,為什么明明知道落淚是不吉祥的,還如此抑制不住自己的情感?但當(dāng)我們讀完整個(gè)語(yǔ)段之后,一切便恍然大悟:原來(lái),是“美好的情感將別你而去,你將被這亙古的蒼涼永遠(yuǎn)環(huán)繞”!而這美好的情感,如果你讀了《我的世界下雪了》全文就會(huì)明白,是“我”與“愛(ài)人”間那份相濡以沫的深情。
許多時(shí)候,我們都會(huì)莫名地喜怒哀樂(lè),說(shuō)它“莫名”,只是因?yàn)檠巯逻€沒(méi)能感悟出是怎樣的真情讓自己生發(fā)相應(yīng)的情緒,一旦找到了情感的“觸發(fā)點(diǎn)”,你便恍然明白:原來(lái),是 深埋在心底的某種情感讓自己擁有這樣的舉動(dòng)。
遲子建以她的生花妙筆告訴了我們?nèi)绾蚊鑼?xiě)這種看似“莫名”的情感,相信你也能把類(lèi)似的情感寫(xiě)得真實(shí)而動(dòng)情。
【2015年中考作文試題前瞻】
1.雨,再熟悉不過(guò)的天氣現(xiàn)象。雨,又不僅僅是天氣現(xiàn)象,它或許還與你內(nèi)心的情感有關(guān)。
請(qǐng)以“走過(guò)多情雨季”為題寫(xiě)一篇作文。
要求:①除詩(shī)歌外,文體自選;②結(jié)合自己的生活體驗(yàn)寫(xiě)出真情實(shí)感,且全文不少于600字。2.“百度詞典”對(duì)“心花怒放”一詞的解釋如下:怒放,盛開(kāi)。心里高興得像花兒盛開(kāi)一樣。形容極其高興。請(qǐng)以“心花怒放“為題寫(xiě)一篇文章。
要求:①除詩(shī)歌外,文體自選;②結(jié)合自己的生活體驗(yàn)寫(xiě)出真情實(shí)感,且全文不少于600字。【素材鏈接】
用行動(dòng)傳遞人間真情
爺孫2人因交通意外而不慎落入10米深的河溝里,險(xiǎn)些喪命,山西3名鐵路職工英勇施救卻不留名。一心想要報(bào)恩的爺孫輾轉(zhuǎn)數(shù)日終于找到了救命恩人。
10米深的河溝,常年流淌著1米多深的河水,被困河溝里的小轎車(chē),無(wú)法打開(kāi)的車(chē)門(mén),呼救無(wú)助的老人和不諳世事的女童,手拉手迅速蹬水走來(lái),用木棍用力拉撬車(chē)門(mén)前來(lái)施救的3位好心人,救人英雄樸實(shí)的話(huà)語(yǔ),未留下姓名就已遠(yuǎn)去的背影??一個(gè)個(gè)精彩畫(huà)面的回放,把3名普普通通的山西鐵路職工用愛(ài)譜寫(xiě)的故事呈現(xiàn)在世人面前。
素材運(yùn)用:這件小事再次驗(yàn)證了平凡人身上傳遞的那份真情的力量?!坝錾线@事誰(shuí)都會(huì)伸手相助的”,英雄們樸實(shí)的話(huà)語(yǔ),折射了平凡人身上那道耀眼的光芒?!百?zèng)人玫瑰,手 留余香”,從大家默默而無(wú)私的行動(dòng)中看,素材可運(yùn)用于“幫助”這一話(huà)題;普通人之所以不普通,在于他們的血液里奔流著真情待人的因子,從這個(gè)角度而言,素材可運(yùn)用于“平凡中的偉大”這一話(huà)題。
遷安“老好人”候秀霞
2010年4月,侯秀霞送走了80多歲的奶奶婆。在奶奶婆的靈柩前,侯秀霞痛哭流涕,表示自己一定不辜負(fù)奶奶婆的重托,讓大伯公公安享幸福晚年。大伯公公名叫朱瑞,侯秀霞結(jié)婚后,時(shí)常去照顧他們。奶奶婆去世后,侯秀霞也不負(fù)重托,吃的穿的都可著大伯公公。大伯公公因腦血栓住了4次醫(yī)院,每次都在侯秀霞的精心照料下轉(zhuǎn)危為安。如今,在她的精心照顧下,大伯公公的身體一天天地硬朗起來(lái)。
侯秀霞除了打理好自己家里的事情外,還盡自己所能,幫助周?chē)泥従?。誰(shuí)家有需要,她都會(huì)去幫助;哪家有矛盾,她也會(huì)去勸解;做了什么好吃的,她也常常給鄰居們送一些??就是因?yàn)檫@些小事,侯秀霞“老好人”的外號(hào)傳開(kāi)了。
素材運(yùn)用:真情助人已屬不易,用真情傳遞人間大愛(ài)更顯其可貴,從這個(gè)角度而言,素材可用于“傳遞”這一話(huà)題;侯秀霞本就是個(gè)老人,老人該是這個(gè)社會(huì)的弱勢(shì)群體,但她總感覺(jué)到“奶奶婆”一樣的孤寡老人比自己更弱,將幸運(yùn)者對(duì)不幸者的真情關(guān)懷當(dāng)成了自己的一份責(zé)任,從這個(gè)角度而言,素材可用于“責(zé)任”這一話(huà)題。
【佳作示例】
走過(guò)多情雨季——團(tuán)慈溪市新世紀(jì)實(shí)驗(yàn)學(xué)校陸雨欣 雨,總在不經(jīng)意間給你帶來(lái)些淡淡的傷感。周三晴轉(zhuǎn)暴雨
刺目的日光無(wú)法照徹我忐忑的心,心的陰霾處躲著個(gè)令人煩躁的小預(yù)兆。
和駿、威并排走出食堂,難得的漫步時(shí)光都顯得那么滯笨,拖著碎步,踅進(jìn)了辦公室。因?yàn)榇中拇笠?,因?yàn)閽熘吧婵椎亩x,科學(xué)測(cè)試,我竟折了半壁江山!一向好強(qiáng)的我,一時(shí)之間眼眶微潤(rùn),咽下淚水,匆忙從后門(mén)踅回教室,狠狠地完成試卷的訂正。再一次小偷般踅到辦公室等待老師講解時(shí),同學(xué)們爭(zhēng)相查看成績(jī)的場(chǎng)景,終是讓淚水無(wú)情決了堤,我感覺(jué)得到自己身體微微的戰(zhàn)栗,我聽(tīng)得到自己內(nèi)心的哀傷和悔恨。
逝了熱情的老師和同學(xué)注意到一隅不停抽泣的我,紛紛踱過(guò)來(lái)安慰,哭勢(shì)一時(shí)間得到緩解,小妮種種賣(mài)萌的勸慰更讓我感到溫暖,老師耐心細(xì)致的講解則既讓我明白了細(xì)心才是我最重要的摯友,也讓我因?yàn)槎米约旱某煽?jī)與“粗心”休戚相關(guān)而徒增悔恨?;氐浇淌?,一夜無(wú)語(yǔ)之間,內(nèi)心傳來(lái)的卻是無(wú)助的淚。
是夜,雨滴落于靜寂的夜,我的天空里陰云密布。周四多云轉(zhuǎn)陣雨
一夜仿佛一整個(gè)世紀(jì),悔恨在時(shí)間的打磨之下少了尖銳的棱角,似乎能靜下心來(lái)聽(tīng)老師的講解了,就這樣靜默著直到午餐之后。
獨(dú)自一人邁入辦公室,心若止水:倒數(shù)第五!雖在心理上早有準(zhǔn)備,卻依然被這個(gè)結(jié)局打傻。乖乖地等待老師懲罰,老師卻故作嚴(yán)肅地拋下一句:“教訓(xùn),想必你已經(jīng)記住了?!背良诺男暮粫r(shí)間波濤洶涌。
窗外,那棵永遠(yuǎn)挺拔的雪松,被一陣突如其來(lái)的陣雨擊打得噼啪作響。
周五雨轉(zhuǎn)晴
雨,在中午時(shí)分停了。我的心里,找不著一絲絲回家的熱情。該怎么解釋呢?搖搖頭,嘆息一聲一一又該惹他們生氣了。
媽媽一如既往地站在門(mén)口迎我。夕陽(yáng)染紅門(mén)前綠葉帶上稀疏的幾株衰草,一如我內(nèi)心一般破敗?!翱茖W(xué),考得好差?!辈恢膩?lái)的勇氣,我第一時(shí)間宣布了這個(gè)“噩耗”。一向暴躁的母親出乎意料地沒(méi)有如雷般暴跳,淡淡一笑之間默然不語(yǔ)。
其實(shí),我更愿意母親一如往常般訓(xùn)斥一通。
“看見(jiàn)了嗎?天晴了,連續(xù)下了兩天都晴了。有什么好難過(guò)的?”耳畔傳來(lái)父親的聲音。抬頭望向窗外,夕陽(yáng)染紅了整個(gè)西天。
走過(guò)多情的雨季,呈現(xiàn)于你眼前的必定是溫暖的陽(yáng)光。
同學(xué)微評(píng)
馬駿:似乎,寫(xiě)考試失利的文章很多,雨欣的這篇文章讓敘事與借景抒發(fā)的真情交替出現(xiàn),水乳交融,藝術(shù)效果果然不同凡響。看來(lái),陳酒新瓶,讓真情之花在普通生活的綠地上盡情開(kāi)放,才能讓平凡的素材煥發(fā)出嶄新的生命。
第四篇:中考預(yù)測(cè)作文
假設(shè)你是李華,在得知四川大地震的消息之后,作為校學(xué)生會(huì)主席,你決定給災(zāi)區(qū)的中學(xué)生寫(xiě)一封慰問(wèn)信,主要內(nèi)容包括:
1、得知四川發(fā)生突如其來(lái)的特大地震災(zāi)害,心情非常難過(guò);
2、看到你們表現(xiàn)得非常鎮(zhèn)定、堅(jiān)強(qiáng),感動(dòng)得熱淚盈眶;
3、患難見(jiàn)真情,全校師生向你們表示慰問(wèn)的同時(shí),共計(jì)捐款12萬(wàn)元;
4、美好家園可以重建,希望你們要看到希望、充滿(mǎn)信心。
參考詞匯:捐款 make a donation to
One possible version:
Dear friends,I'm awfully sorry to hear that a horrible and severe earthquake unexpectedly hit your hometown.Faced with such a rarely-seen disaster, you remain so calm and strong-willed that we are all moved to tears.A friend in need is a friend indeed.Thinking about your present situation, we can not wait a minute to make every bit of our effort to help you.I, as the chairman of student union, on behalf of all my schoolmates, express our most sincere pity and care for you.Besides, we make a donation of 120 thousand yuan to you, expecting that it can help you go through the difficulty.A better hometown can be rebuilt.Therefore, never give up whatever happens.Remember we won’t be far away when you need any help!
Yours Sincerely,Li Hua
The Wenchuan Earthquake
May 12, 2008, the Chinese people know about this big news-Wenchuan earthquake.In this earthquake.Many people left this world, so I am sad but I am glad to see that more and more People to help Wenchuan.I hope I can help people in Wenchuan.In the future, Wenchuan building will be better than before.It will be a beautiful city.4月20日四川雅安發(fā)生7.0級(jí)大地震,作為一名中學(xué)生,你有什么樣的感受呢?你有沒(méi)有獻(xiàn)出自己的愛(ài)心呢?下面是你整理的2013年中考英語(yǔ)作文預(yù)測(cè):雅安地震的參考范文。
2013年4月20日,四川省雅安地區(qū)發(fā)生了7.0級(jí)大地震,那里的人們痛失親人和家園。全國(guó)人民眾志成城,抗震救災(zāi)。作為一名中學(xué)生,請(qǐng)你談?wù)勀愕淖龇?/p>
和感受。
要求:文章語(yǔ)言流暢,邏輯清晰,用詞準(zhǔn)確,80—100字左右;詞匯參考:地震 earthquake悲痛 sorrow受到感動(dòng) be deeply moved安慰 comfort重建 rebuild自愿做某事 volunteer to do sth
參考范文:
On April 20th, a big earthquake happened in Ya’an, Sichuan.Many people lost their relatives and their homes.All the Chinese people feel quite sorrow.A lot of people volunteer to help them.Some people raise money for them, some people buy something for them, some people go there to comfort the sad children.Thousands of soldiers help them to save their relatives and rebuild their homes Even foreign friends also give them a hand.I’m deeply moved by these people.So I’ll use my pocket money to buy some food and school things for the children there.I think all of us should try our best to help them to get out of the trouble together.導(dǎo)語(yǔ):雅安地震給災(zāi)區(qū)兒童帶來(lái)了極大的傷害,他們有的失去了親人,有的則受到了心靈上的創(chuàng)傷。請(qǐng)給災(zāi)區(qū)的兒童寫(xiě)一封慰問(wèn)信吧!下面是小編整理的一篇參考范文。
I feel so sorry for your loss, maybe yesterday you're leading a happy life, but this unexpected terrible disaster destoryed all, no one would like that coming.But don't let the earthquake ruin your life and take your sunshine away!I hope you overcome the pain in a short time and get back to school with all your classmates.Hope you always feel be loved and protected, you must believe that there is a lot of nice people in our society and they're all willing to help if you met any difficulties.I believe you are strong in mind.Life is hard, try to turn this memory into consistant power.No matter what happens, as long as we are together, we will never ever ever ever give up!There is always hope and love!
第五篇:2014中考作文預(yù)測(cè)
這篇2014年語(yǔ)文中考作文題目預(yù)測(cè)的文章,是無(wú)憂(yōu)考網(wǎng)特地為大家整理的,希望對(duì)大家有所幫助!
預(yù)測(cè)一:《我的中國(guó)夢(mèng)》、《夢(mèng)中的XXXX》。
推薦理由:十八大以后,中國(guó)夢(mèng)成為一個(gè)熱點(diǎn)名詞。每個(gè)人都有自己的夢(mèng)想,每個(gè)夢(mèng)想都是中國(guó)夢(mèng)的一部分。考生寫(xiě)中國(guó)夢(mèng),不要寫(xiě)得大而廣,抓住自己夢(mèng)想的一個(gè)內(nèi)容,就行了。例如:住房、誠(chéng)信、環(huán)保、平安、醫(yī)療等,圍繞一個(gè)主題,寫(xiě)記敘文,感悟中國(guó)夢(mèng)即可。需要注意的是,寫(xiě)這類(lèi)東西,盡量不要做憤青,不要罵政府和國(guó)家,不要寫(xiě)“遍地貪官”,以免走歪。
預(yù)測(cè)二:《觸動(dòng)心靈的風(fēng)景》
推薦理由:該作文題是寫(xiě)人與寫(xiě)事的結(jié)合,甚至,你可以寫(xiě)成一篇單純的寫(xiě)景作文。風(fēng)景,既可以是看得到的景色,也可以是一類(lèi)現(xiàn)象的象征。寫(xiě)出你身邊的一種感人的場(chǎng)面或景象,抒發(fā)你內(nèi)心的感悟和感慨,提煉出對(duì)成長(zhǎng)有益的價(jià)值,是這篇作文的要求。如:畢業(yè)的離別場(chǎng)面、搶險(xiǎn)救災(zāi)的感人場(chǎng)面、考場(chǎng)外父母陪考的辛苦場(chǎng)面、大雨中警察指揮交通的場(chǎng)面、扶貧濟(jì)困的場(chǎng)面,都是值得你搜集和書(shū)寫(xiě)的素材。
預(yù)測(cè)三:“愛(ài)”“正能量”話(huà)題作文
推薦理由:當(dāng)前,“正能量”這個(gè)詞,見(jiàn)報(bào)率很高。大家要做好準(zhǔn)備。這類(lèi)話(huà)題作文,不能講大話(huà),說(shuō)大道理,必須從小見(jiàn)大。我們身邊的每一種渴望,只要是健康的,與國(guó)家有觀(guān)點(diǎn),就是中國(guó)夢(mèng)的組成部分。對(duì)正義的渴望、對(duì)環(huán)境的保護(hù)、對(duì)住房的期待、對(duì)健康的思考,都是中國(guó)夢(mèng)的組成部分。如果是我,可以寫(xiě)寫(xiě)我家住房多么狹窄,然后期待寬敞明亮的居室——這就是我的中國(guó)夢(mèng)。如果是民工,在勞累的夜晚,有一張容身的床,就這中國(guó)夢(mèng)的組成部分。如果是農(nóng)民,身邊的河流不流淌著污染的臟水,就是中國(guó)夢(mèng)的一部分。寫(xiě)一件事,放大,抒情,就是一篇中國(guó)夢(mèng)的好作文。
“愛(ài)”話(huà)題作文,是寫(xiě)人寫(xiě)事的結(jié)合。愛(ài),既可以是母愛(ài)、父愛(ài)、師愛(ài),也可以引申為“大愛(ài)”,即愛(ài)崗敬業(yè)、無(wú)私奉獻(xiàn)、遵紀(jì)守法等??忌枰牒靡活?lèi),然后敘事,末尾扣題抒情。例如,你可以寫(xiě)風(fēng)雨中交警的堅(jiān)守——愛(ài)是風(fēng)雨中的堅(jiān)守;你可以寫(xiě)母愛(ài)——愛(ài)是清晨餐桌綠洲;你可以寫(xiě)軍人——愛(ài)是路邊那么驚艷的綠色;你可以寫(xiě)扶貧濟(jì)困——愛(ài)是青春無(wú)私的風(fēng)險(xiǎn)。甚至,你還可以筆走偏鋒——愛(ài)是老爸的那記耳光、愛(ài)是老爸深夜的等待。預(yù)測(cè)四:《XXXX的精彩瞬間》
推薦理由:這是寫(xiě)事兒的作文,貌似簡(jiǎn)單,但是寫(xiě)起來(lái)很不容易。因?yàn)?,要求學(xué)生們寫(xiě)的是瞬間,凸出瞬間的精彩,就得有大量的描寫(xiě),末尾還得有扣題和抒情。這對(duì)于習(xí)慣于寫(xiě)大事,寫(xiě)長(zhǎng)故事的學(xué)生而言,把瞬間寫(xiě)大,顯得極具挑戰(zhàn)性。生活中的瞬間很多,你選擇哪個(gè)呢?再就是,怎才算是精彩呢?孩子們需要開(kāi)動(dòng)腦筋。
預(yù)測(cè)五:《與你一起走過(guò)的時(shí)光》
推薦理由:這是寫(xiě)人寫(xiě)事且偏向于寫(xiě)人的作文,具有一定的難度。首先,這是一篇第二人稱(chēng)的作文,孩子們?nèi)菀自谌朔Q(chēng)上發(fā)生混淆。其次,題目中的“你”,既可以是人物,也可以是物品,也可以是一種品質(zhì)。例如,“你”可以是字典,也可以是一種向往,也可以是一
種困難。當(dāng)然,就作文而言,“你”最好是一種看見(jiàn)到摸得見(jiàn)的人物和事物。如果你對(duì)第二人稱(chēng)的作文,掌握得不夠熟練,那就趕緊練練吧。
預(yù)測(cè)六:《在XXXX中成長(zhǎng)》
推薦理由:這是一篇傾向于敘事的作文。就文題本身而言,顯得有點(diǎn)老生常談,但是,這是一篇最為貼近新課標(biāo)要求的作文。建議考生就這篇作文,從不同的角度寫(xiě)出自己的真實(shí)感受。此文的補(bǔ)題技巧,要求也相對(duì)高一些。在校園中成長(zhǎng)、在這座城市里成長(zhǎng)、在溫暖的家庭中成長(zhǎng);在思念中成長(zhǎng)、在一次次跌倒后成長(zhǎng)、在訓(xùn)斥中成長(zhǎng);在霧霾中成長(zhǎng)、在自信中成長(zhǎng)。同學(xué)們一定要有個(gè)別致的補(bǔ)題。這篇作文可以寫(xiě)成“總分總并列段”結(jié)構(gòu),當(dāng)然,也不妨寫(xiě)成小標(biāo)題作文。
預(yù)測(cè)七:《課堂里的XXXX》
推薦理由:既然新課標(biāo)要求孩子們寫(xiě)身邊的真實(shí)體驗(yàn),那么,就拿這個(gè)作文題目練手吧。課堂里肯定發(fā)生過(guò)許多你難忘的事情,或者出現(xiàn)過(guò)很多觸動(dòng)心靈的人物,回憶一下,補(bǔ)全題目,寫(xiě)出你真實(shí)的感受吧。這篇作文需要場(chǎng)面描寫(xiě),也在考驗(yàn)著學(xué)生們的描寫(xiě)能力。不過(guò),這篇作文孩子們不會(huì)感到為難,寫(xiě)生動(dòng)則難了些。在補(bǔ)題的時(shí)候,一定要注意補(bǔ)得別致些、生動(dòng)些。在選材的時(shí)候,最好是生動(dòng)些、詼諧些。
預(yù)測(cè)八:《XXX教給我XXX》
推薦理由:從社會(huì)、他人、景物中,提煉出動(dòng)人心魄的感悟,這是新課標(biāo)對(duì)初中作文的要求。既然這樣,你曾經(jīng)領(lǐng)略出什么,就寫(xiě)出來(lái)吧。雙重補(bǔ)題,留給考生足夠的想象空調(diào)間。前面的補(bǔ)題,既可以是人,也可以是事兒,也可以是景色,還可以是一種現(xiàn)象。如:媽媽教給我堅(jiān)韌、那次事故教給我交通規(guī)則、爛漫花枝教給我珍惜青春、“送禮”教給我自強(qiáng),等等。
預(yù)測(cè)九:《我很XX,但是我很XXX》
推薦理由:成長(zhǎng)中,總有一些不如意的機(jī)遇,但成長(zhǎng)就是克服阻力,在追求中進(jìn)步的。20多年前,就有一首歌《我很丑,但是我很溫柔》,我們寫(xiě)這篇作文,補(bǔ)題的時(shí)候,兩個(gè)補(bǔ)題,要注意形成反差:我很笨,但是我很刻苦;我很累,但是我很堅(jiān)強(qiáng);我很開(kāi)朗,但是我很糾結(jié);我很傻,但是我很被人喜歡;我很想成功,但是我很無(wú)奈。這篇作文,你可以寫(xiě)你成長(zhǎng)的經(jīng)歷,詳略要得當(dāng)。這是一篇容易出彩的作文。練練吧,沒(méi)虧吃。
預(yù)測(cè)十:“害羞”、“慚愧”、“有趣”、“天真”等話(huà)題作文
推薦理由:我們?cè)诔踔袑?xiě)作文寫(xiě)了三年,感動(dòng)、溫暖、財(cái)富、成長(zhǎng)、禮物、思念等話(huà)題作文,早已熟悉有加。但身邊那些看起來(lái)很俗的事情,往往也蘊(yùn)涵著人生的真知和享受。例如,童年里的天真、無(wú)知、趣事,至今回味起來(lái)津津有味。再如,你肯定有過(guò)害羞、慚愧、心跳的經(jīng)歷精力,就像你無(wú)意中跟異性在教室門(mén)口走個(gè)碰頭頂,臉會(huì)變紅。