第一篇：MBA MPA考試聯(lián)考英語小作文大作文萬能

一、建議信

1、模板：

Para1 S1 寫信目的Para2 S1 處境現(xiàn)狀（嚴(yán)重）。S2 有建議。S3 建議1。S4 建議2。（S5 建議3。）Para3 S1 感謝。S2 期待。

2、說明：（?）部分可省略；（/?）部分可以替換；【?】部分是提示實(shí)際不要。

3、范文：

Dear Sir or Madam,(/To whom if may concern / To those concerned,)

【P1S1】I am writing this letter for the purpose of making some suggestions to improve the service of our library.【P2S1】Although our library functions positively(積極的)in enriching the students’ campus life, its service goes far from being desired.【P2S2】In my eyes, the following measures need to be taken as soon as possible.【P2S3】In the first place, why not arrange an inquiry desk at the circulation hall? 【P2S4】In addition, the students should have access to the latest issues of foreign magazines.(【P2S5】Lastly, you should(/ had)better maintain strict order at the reading room.)

【P3S1】Thank you for spending time(in)reading this letter(/I sincerely hope that you will take my advice into consideration).【P3S2】I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience(方便;合宜)(/I am looking forward to seeing some new changes in the service).Yours sincerely(/ Sincerely yours), Zhang Wei

二、感謝信

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Para1 S1 寫信目的（感謝）

Para2 S1 原因1。S2 原因2。S3 感謝方式（邀請對方）。Para3 S1 再次感謝。S2 祝福對方。

2、說明：（?）部分可省略；（/?）部分可以替換；【?】部分是提示實(shí)際不要。

3、范文：

Dear Jack(/ Tom / Judy)，【P1S1】I am writing this letter for the purpose of expressing(/extending /conveying)my sincere thanks(/gratitude)to you for your warm reception(/hospitality)while I was in America(/While I participated(參加，參與)in the exchange program in America).【P2S1】Your generous(慷慨的, 大方的,慷慨給予的)help made it possible that I had a pleasant stay and a chance to know America culture better.【P2S2】Besides, I consider it an honor for me to made friends with you and I will cherish(珍愛, 珍視, 愛護(hù)，鐘愛)the goodwill(友誼)you showed to me wherever I go.【P2S3】I do(/genuinely /sincerely)hope that you would(/will)visit China in due course(適當(dāng)?shù)臅r(shí)候)so that I could enjoy the opportunity to repay yours kinds and refresh our friendship(加深友誼).【P3S1】Once again, please accept my heartfelt gratitude(由衷感謝).【P3S2】Wish you all the best.Yours sincerely(/ Sincerely yours), Zhang Wei

三、祝賀信

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Para1 S1 寫信目的 Para2 S1 艱辛（你）。S2 激動(dòng)（你）。S3 值得（你）。S4 鼓舞（我）。S5 驕傲（我）。

Para3 S1 再次祝賀。S2 期待更大成功。

2、說明：（?）部分可省略；（/?）部分可以替換；【?】部分是提示實(shí)際不要。

3、范文：

Dear Jack(/ Tom / Judy)，【P1S1】I am writing this letter for the purpose of expressing(/extending /conveying)my warmest congratulations on your graduation from the Graduate School(/your promotion to general manager of the company(榮升公司總經(jīng)理)).【P2S1】I know how hard you have worked to attain(（通常經(jīng)過努力）實(shí)現(xiàn), 達(dá)到, 獲得，得到)this goal.【P2S2】Therefore, I can imagine your excitement when you realized such an ambition(after all these years of painstaking efforts(艱苦努力)).【P2S3】Indeed, no one could have been more deserving than you.【P2S4】On the other hand, for me, it will be a real encouragement to see your efforts rewarded(看到你的能力得到回報(bào)).【P2S5】In short, I take great pride in your current achievements.【P3S1】Once again, please accept my heartfelt(/sincere/genuine)congratulations on your success.【P3S2】I wish you will farther success(更大的成功).Yours sincerely(/ Sincerely yours), Zhang Wei

四、推薦信

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Para1 S1 寫信目的Para2 S1（其）現(xiàn)狀。S2（其）目的。S3（其）困難。S4（其）愿望。S5（己）期待。

Para3 S1 感謝。S2 期待（套語）。

2、說明：（?）部分可省略；（/?）部分可以替換；【?】部分是提示實(shí)際不要。

3、范文：

Dear Jack(/Judy)，【P1S1】I am writing this letter for the purpose of introducing(/recommending)to you Li Ming, one of my best friends(/colleagues/students/classmates).【P2S1】Presently(/At present)he(/she)is studying at Sichuan University.【P2S2】He(/She)will go to Harvard University in your place for farther study.【P2S3】As it will be the first time for him to study abroad, he will most likely encounter（碰到）a variety of problems(通用句).【P2S4】He(/She)hopes to obtain your guidance in many ways.【P2S5】I would be grateful if you could can kindly offer help(通用句).【P3S1】Thank you for your due attention to this letter(/Thank you for spending time(in)reading this letter).【P3S2】I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.Yours sincerely(/ Sincerely yours), Zhang Wei

五、辭職信

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Para1 S1 寫信目的Para2 S1 有因。S2 原因（工作性質(zhì)）1。S3 原因2。S4 強(qiáng)調(diào)目的（辭職）。Para3 S1 感謝（曾經(jīng)提供機(jī)會(huì)）。S2 期待批準(zhǔn)。（S3 致歉損失。）

2、說明：（?）部分可省略；（/?）部分可以替換；【?】部分是提示實(shí)際不要。

3、范文：

Dear Mr.Wang，【P1S1】I am writing this letter for the purpose of informing you of my decision to(通用句)resign(/resigning)from my current position.【P2S1】After two months of work, I find it inappropriate(不合適的)for me to take the position as an editor for the following reasons.【P2S2】Firstly(/In the first place / First and foremost), I ever expected the job to be challenging and rewarding(挑戰(zhàn)與回報(bào)), which has turned out to be the opposite.【P2S3】Besides, the salary has proved to be much lower than you originally promised and I have a large family to spport.【P2S4】Therefore I have made up my mind quit after much deliberation(深思熟慮;研究).【P3S1】Thanks(/Thank you)for having offered me the splendid(/golden)opportunity to work with the outstanding staff(優(yōu)秀員工)here.【P3S2】I genuinely(/sincerely)do hope that you will approve of my resignation.(【P3S3】I am genuinely sorry for any inconvenience caused.)

Yours faithfully(忠實(shí)地), Zhang Wei

六、求職信

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Para1（S1 自我介紹。）S2 寫信目的。Para2 S1 有資質(zhì)（條件）。S2 條件1（教育背景）。S3 條件2（工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)）。（S4 條件3（自身素質(zhì)）。）S4 其它詳細(xì)見簡歷。

Para3 S1 感謝。S2 期待。

2、說明：（?）部分可省略；（/?）部分可以替換；【?】部分是提示實(shí)際不要。

3、范文：

Dear Sir or Madam,(/To whom if may concern / To those concerned,)

【P1S1】I am writing this letter for the purpose of applying for the position as advertised in China Daily(/the local newspaper / on TV).【P1S2】I am an undergraduate from Sichuan University.【P2S1】My qualifications are as follows(/My qualification, I believe, amply meet your requirements).【P2S2】In the first place, my specialty(/specialty / major), English education(/marking), ensures(/guarantees(保證;商品保證))that my educational background is right(/perfectly)in line with(跟?一致)this job.【P2S3】In second, my previous experience as a middle school English teacher(/a sales manager(?/assistant))has helped lay a solid foundation(堅(jiān)實(shí)的基礎(chǔ))for the work here.(【P2S4】In the third, I a good team player, self-motivated and eager to learn.)【P2S5】Please refer to my attached my resume for more details.【P3S1】I would appreciate it very much if you could schedule an interview.【P3S2】Looking(/I am looking)forward to your reply(to hear from you)at your earliest convenience(方便;合宜).Yours sincerely(/ Sincerely yours), Zhang Wei

七、邀請信（公函）

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Para1 S1 自我介紹。S2 目的。

Para2 S1 活動(dòng)1。S2（套語）邀請。S3 活動(dòng)2。S4（套語）邀請。Para3 S1 再次邀請。S2 期待（回復(fù)/來否）。

2、說明：（?）部分可省略；（/?）部分可以替換；【?】部分是提示實(shí)際不要。

3、范文：

Dear Sir or Madam，【P1S1】I am head(/director)of the Household Electric Appliance Plant, which is a leading manufacturer of high-quality recording equipment.【P1S2】I am writing this letter for the purpose of inviting you to an exclusive(發(fā)布會(huì))presentation of our new models of Digital Recorders.【P2S1】The occasion(活動(dòng))(/presentation)will take place at Noble Hotel on the third of January.【P2S2】I would feel it a great honor if you could come.【P2S3】There will also be a reception at two P.M.【P2S4】I hope you will attend too.【P3S1】Since your presence(參加)is so important to this presentation, I do(/sincerely / sincerely)hope you can make it(由衷希望您想法設(shè)法前來參加).【P3S2】We are looking forward to seeing on the day.Yours sincerely(/ Sincerely yours), Zhang Wei

八、道歉信

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Para1 S1 寫信目的Para2 S1 致歉（具體原因）。S2 深深歉意。S3 解決辦法1。S4 問題解決。Para3 S1 再次歉意。S2 期待諒解。

2、說明：（?）部分可省略；（/?）部分可以替換；【?】部分是提示實(shí)際不要。

3、范文：

Dear Bob，【P1S1】I am writing this letter for the purpose of making an apology to you for my carelessness(粗心大意)(/expressing / conveying / extending my sincere apologies to you for my carelessness).【P2S1】When I arrived(/returned)home, I found(that)I had forgotten to return the music CD that you were so kind to lend me.【P2S2】I feel badly(/awfully)sorry for it.【P2S3】As I understand this CD is one of your favorites, I’ll try my best to send it back as soon as possible.【P2S4】According to the regulations concerned, it will take almost a week to reach Canada.【P3S1】Once again, please accept my heartfelt apology.【P3S2】I sincerely hope that we can keep corresponding with each other.(/ 【P3S1】Once again, I am sorry to my inconvenience caused.【P3S2】I sincerely hope you can accept my apology.)

Yours sincerely(/ Sincerely yours), Zhang Wei

九、投訴信（complaint）

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Para1 S1 寫信目的 Para2 S1 原因（總述）。S2 原因1。S3 原因2。S4 處境。Para3 S1 要求。S2 期待解決。

2、說明：（?）部分可省略；（/?）部分可以替換；【?】部分是提示實(shí)際不要。

3、范文：

To whom if may concern(/ To those concerned,)

【P1S1】I am writing this letter for the purpose of making a complain about the laptop I bought last week.【P2S1】The reason for my dissatisfaction(/complaint)is that a few problems occurred in the use.【P2S2】To begin with, the system often broke down for no reason and some important data were lost.【P2S3】More over(/ in addition), the color of the screen was abnormal, and could not be adjusted.【P2S4】Considering these(鑒于以上原因), I find it difficult to go on with my work.【P3S1】I believe that you will take this matter into serious consideration and gibe a satisfactory reply.【P3S2】At the same time(/In the meantime / meanwhile), I sincerely hope to see improvement in your products(/service / management).Yours sincerely(/ Sincerely yours), Zhang Wei

十、請求信

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Para1 S1 寫信目的Para2 S1 有要求。S2 要求1。S3 要求2。S4 要求3。S5 我的計(jì)劃。Para3 S1 再次請求。S2 感謝/期待。

2、說明：（?）部分可省略；（/?）部分可以替換；【?】部分是提示實(shí)際不要。

3、范文：

Dear Sir or Madam,(/To whom if may concern / To those concerned,)

【P1S1】I am writing this letter for the purpose of finding a child in a remote area to offer financial aid(/contributing to “Project Hope” by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area).【P2S1】My requirement are as follows(/The candidate should amply meet the following requirements).【P2S2】In the first place, he must be very poor and truly in need of help.【P2S3】Besides, he must be self-motivated and eager to learn.【P2S4】Last but not the least, he must be willing to return to his home town after graduation from university.(【P2S5】And I would send him a certain sum of money each semester term from this year on until he finishes his higher education.【P3S1】I would be most grateful if you could help me in this matter.【P3S2】Your prompt reply would be highly appreciated.(通用句)

Yours sincerely(/ Sincerely yours), Zhang Wei

十一、通知

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Para1 S1 緣由。S2 主題。S3 要求（總述）。S4 要求1。S5 要求2。S6時(shí)間/地點(diǎn)。S7希望/歡迎。

2、說明：（?）部分可省略；（/?）部分可以替換；【?】部分是提示實(shí)際不要。

3、范文：

Notice 【P1S1】To improve the student’ ability and enrich campus life(/extracurricular activities(課外活動(dòng))), the Postgraduates’ Association is recruiting volunteers for an international conference on globalization.【P1S2】The qualifications for the applicants are as follows.【P1S3】To begin with, the candidates should have outstanding skills at English.【P1S4】In addition, they must have a strong professional sprit, cheerful personality and be aged under 35.【P1S5】Last but not the least, the students with relevant working experience are preferred.【P1S6】Those who are interested in this activity may sign up with the monitor of their classes before February 1,2011.【P1S7】Everybody is welcome to join in it.【署通知單位】Postgraduates’ Association

【通知時(shí)間】January 15, 2011

十二、備忘錄

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Para1 S1 緣由+主題。S2 內(nèi)容（有）。S3 要求1。S4 要求2。S5 報(bào)名時(shí)間地點(diǎn)。S6期望。(時(shí)間+收發(fā)人+事由)

2、說明：（?）部分可省略；（/?）部分可以替換；【?】部分是提示實(shí)際不要。

3、范文：

Data: January 15, 2011

To: All students of the English Department From: Class Monitor, Zhang Wei Subject: Spring Excursion(正文Message:)

【P1S1】As spring arrives and the weather turns to be agreeable(怡人的)，the department has decided to organize a spring excursion in a suburban county(Huairou District).【P1S2】The activities include mountain-climbing and picnic(爬山和野餐).【P1S3】All the students of the English Department anr encouraged to participate.【P1S4】We remind(提醒)you of the necessity(必要)of bringing some food and water as well as wearing comfortable shoes.【P1S5】Those who are interested in this activity(/excursion)may sign up with the monitor of their classed before April 1, 2011.【P1S6】Everybody is welcome to join in it.十三、報(bào)告

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Para1 S1 目的Para2 S1 主要活動(dòng)（總述）。S2 活動(dòng)1。S3 活動(dòng)2。S4 活動(dòng)3。Para3 S1 接下來。S2 期望/展望。

2、說明：（?）部分可省略；（/?）部分可以替換；【?】部分是提示實(shí)際不要。

3、范文：

To: Professor Barbara From: James Green Data: January 15, 2011

Subject: First progress report on graduation thesis(畢業(yè)論文)(正文Message:)略。

十四、大作文

1、模板：【4|5|2陣型】

Para1 【己點(diǎn)】S1 有現(xiàn)象+具體現(xiàn)象。S2 有不同“點(diǎn)”。S3 正點(diǎn)+反點(diǎn)。S4 己點(diǎn)。

Para2 【己據(jù)】S1 有據(jù)（總）。S2 據(jù)1。S3 例1。S4 據(jù)2。S5 據(jù)3（換句話說To put it in another way）。

Para3 【己據(jù)】S1 強(qiáng)化己點(diǎn)。S2 預(yù)測（評論）。

2、說明：（?）部分可省略；（/?）部分可以替換；【?】部分是提示實(shí)際不要。

3、范文：【2010年1月MBA 作文】

【P1S1】In this chart, it can be seen that the subscription number of mobile phones in developed countries had a steady but slight increase from 2000 to 2007 and has remained constant since then.【P1S2】Meanwhile, the subscriptions in developing countries have witnessed a dramatic increase, especially from 2004 to 2008.【P2S1】It’s no difficult job to come up with some possible factors to account for this phenomenon.【P2S2】At the top of the list is the recent huge improvement of people’s living standards in developing countries.【P2S3】It is reported that, with the rapid economic growth of these counties, mobile phones have become a life necessity overnight rather than a luxury.【P2S4】Besides we must admit that developing countries have a far larger population and accordingly a larger demand for mobile phone services than developed countries.【P2S5】Finally, what is responsible for the situation is that the mobile phone service in developing countries has been increasingly cheaper these years.【P2S6】In developed countries, however, the speed of the mobile phone service had been more efficient and therefore the market was soon saturated.【P3S1】As discussed above, it is no surprise to see this difference..【P3S2】And I firmly believe that this established trend will continue for quite a while in the forthcoming years.========================

【P1S1】These days, there is an increasingly hot topic among the general public which concerns the phenomenon that a growing number of college students are willing to work as a nurse after graduation.【P1S2】Whenever it comes to this issue, there will spring up a wide variety of voices.【P1S3】Some people view it as beneficial, while still some others consider that it is not suitable or acceptable for a developing country like China.【P1S4】So far as I am concerned, I am inclined to support the former view.【P2S1】It is of no difficulty for me to put forward some arguments to illustrate my standpoint.【P2S2】At the top of the list, with the rapid development of Chinese economy and the steady improvement of living standard, there is an increasing demand for high quality nurses.【P2S3】Based upon a recent Internet survey, about 56% of Chinese families in big cities are in need of this kind of highly educated workforce.【P2S4】What’s more, we must admit that there is a fierce competition in the current Chinese employment market.【P2S5】Last but not the least, the fact cannot be ignored that, in the long run, as an emerging profession in China, highly educated nurses will be widely recognized and respected.【P3S1】There is no denying the fact that people will have diverse views on the same issue, but my standpoint is clear and well founded in the foregoing discussions.【P3S2】Therefore, I believe, the current trend should be encouraged rather than discouraged or even banned.

第二篇：MBA聯(lián)考英語作文

投訴信

日期 Dear sir,(第一段)I am sorry to inform you that I am unhappy about__________________，so I regret to have to complain _____________（提出投訴，表示遺憾）(第二段)There are ________________(問題1)，______________(造成的影響)；___________________(問題2)，_________________(造成的影響)；（該段主要用于陳述不滿的原因）。（第三段）

I would appreciate it very much if your company could look into the matter and arrange for a replacement of the faulty goods promptly.So I propose that you___________________________________________, I am looking forward to your earliest reply.（該段主要提出補(bǔ)救的建議）

Sincerely yours XXX

常見詞和關(guān)鍵詞：late delivery，cause，fulfill order，on checking the goods receive(當(dāng)驗(yàn)貨時(shí))，I found that, since the late delivery has caused dissatisfaction among our customers, I considering, discount, I suggest that, I propose that, recently, refuse, as you known, after-sales service, breakdown, immediate, shipment, delay，道歉信

日期 Dear sir，（第一段）

Thank you for your letter of ______（時(shí)間）.I am very sorry to hear about your problems with my faulty.I had no idea that you were in any way dissatisfied.(感謝對方告知實(shí)情，并表示道歉)（第二段）

If you had let me know earlier, I could have investigated this immediately.Please allow

me

to

explain

what happened.__________________________________(解釋原因)； ————————————（提出解決方案）；if you experience any difficulties, please call me or fax me at once and I will take immediate action.（該段用于解釋原因并提出解決方案）（第三段）

Please let me apologize to express how sorry I am.I will make efforts to prevent a recurrence.(我們將盡力防止此事再次發(fā)生)

Sincerely yours XXX

常見詞和關(guān)鍵詞：excellent,apologize

感謝信

日期 Dear Sir,（第一段）

I am writing this letter to express my gratitude for your warm reception while I ______________________。（告之感謝對方什么）（第二段）

Your sincerity was most impressive.Without your help, things would not have gone so smoothly.___________;_____________;______________(l列舉對方如何幫助我們)。It is hard to imagine what my life have been like without your care and help.（恭維對方，描述如何幫助我們）（第三段）

I am anticipating further cooperation.In return for your hospitality, I would like to invite you to ____________（邀請來做什么），I am looking forward to seeing you again at that time.（對未來關(guān)系展望）

Sincerely yours XXX

常見詞和關(guān)鍵詞：hospitality，warm reception,heartfelt thanks,colleagues

邀請函

日期 Dear XXX，（第一段）

I am delighted to invite you and your delegation of 10 people to pay a working visit to china for a week in September or October 2011.the propose of visit is_____________________(邀請來做什么事情)；（第二段）

I highly appreciate our undergoing the discussion on_____________(在什么地方的討論)，and expect a have fruitful meeting with you in China.By the way, your group’s board,lodging and all other expenses will be coverd by us.Should you have some questions, please do not hesitate to contact me.Very truly yours XXX

圖表作文

（第一段）

The chart gives us an overall picture of the ____________（圖表主題）。The first thing we notice is that_____________（圖表最大特點(diǎn)）/the changes in the number of _____over the period from______to_____.This means that as ___________________（進(jìn)一步描述）。(該段描述圖表的性質(zhì)，簡單闡述其特點(diǎn))

（第二段）

As can see from the above chart, _____________（圖表細(xì)節(jié)一）。After ving_________（細(xì)節(jié)一的變化），the ____________（緊跟著的變化）。The figures also tells us that___________________圖表細(xì)節(jié)二）。In the secondary，we can see that ______________accounts for _________（進(jìn)一步描述）。

A number of factors may have contributed to this situation.Above all,________________（原因1）,second,_________________(原因2),A major reason is that_________________________（原因3）。（該段對圖表的數(shù)據(jù)進(jìn)行說明，并闡述原因）

（第三段）

Judging from this chart，we can draw the conclusion that___________（結(jié)論）。It is high time that we ______________（發(fā)出倡議）。/there is every reason to believe that the trend will continue in the foreseeable future.總結(jié) 關(guān)鍵詞匯：

increase,decrease,fell,decline,sharply,dramatically,significantly,rapidly,steadily,slightly,remained unchanged, rise gradually, peaked at, low level, reached the peak, three-fold increase, A increase gradually while B decrease, A and B are closely related, table，對比觀點(diǎn)型

（第一段）

In recent years, there has been a heated debate over the relative importance of _________versus_______.Whereas some people hold that __________is more important than _________, others argue that the reverse is true.(對全文進(jìn)行概述)（第二段）

Those who take the first view assume that ___________(對觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行介紹),in contrast, the second opinion is based on the assumption that_________________(對觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行介紹).（第三段）

As for me, I advocate the first view point.The reasons are as follows: Firstly, _____________________________________________________ Secondly, ___________________________________________________ Finally, _________________________(闡述自己選擇的觀點(diǎn)的理由)In my opinion, it does not make sense to generalize about which is more important, ___________ or ____________.Their relative importance depends on specific contexts.So the debate is essentially a chicken-and egg problem.關(guān)鍵詞：nowadays, for example，問題解決型

（第一段）

In recent years, there has been a lot of debate over____________（問題）/ scandal was disclosed, people and government and international communities were shocked.It is reported that________________(寫一個(gè)報(bào)道內(nèi)容)，this situation calls for close attention from the general public.(該段對問題進(jìn)行描述)（第二段）

A number of factors have contributed to the emergence of this problem.Firstly, _________________________________________________ Secondly, ________________________________________________ Thirdly, ________________________________________________ Another factors worth mentioning is that_____________________(該段要寫問題產(chǎn)生的原因或者影響)（第三段）

To solve the problem, several measures can be taken.Premerily, ____________________________________________ Secondly,_________________________________________ The most significant measure is___________________________(該段要寫解決問題的方法)關(guān)鍵詞匯：positive effect , negative effect, to reduce the negative effect, A large number of ,the situation is associated with several factors, incident，accident, is likely to harm the reputation of , address, issue, It is necessary to, domestic-brand, distributor, fundamental，對立觀點(diǎn)型

（第一段）

Across the world throughout history, it often happens that different people perceive the same objective thing differently.For example, two typical points of view have been expressed concerning_____________________(引出文章討論的對象)(第二段)Some people think that ________________, they cite the following as major reasons: firstly, ______________,secondly,__________________.（介紹第一種觀點(diǎn)，并解釋原因）(第三段)Others argue that _________________.they base this argument mainly on The following grounds: first, _______________.second,_____________.（介紹第二種觀點(diǎn)，并解釋原因）

For my point, I advocate the first viewpoint.My reasons are as follow: First,_______________.second,______________.third,____________.(發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)并說明原因)或者都不同意，自己提出新觀點(diǎn)：

I do not agree with other of the view.In my opinion,_______________, The reason why_______________________________________ 關(guān)鍵詞匯：disagreement, whereas, different people have different view, thereby，獨(dú)立觀點(diǎn)型

(第一段)In recent years, more and more people tend to______________________ /there has been a growing trend among___________________________ /with the development of economic globalization, more and more people___________________。This phenomenon is receiving more and more attention from the general public.(該段要求對事實(shí)進(jìn)行描述)（第二段）

I think we should take a positive/negative attitude towards it.The reasons are as follows.First, _________________, second,_________________.Finally,_______________.(該段表明自己的觀點(diǎn)，并說明原因)（第三段）

From the above analysis, we can see that _____________________.there is every reasons that this trend will continue and even grow stronger in the future, because_____________________./I firmly believe that_____________________(該段總結(jié)展望)關(guān)鍵詞匯：

opportunity, personally, oppose, convinction, rethink, strategy, owing to, appeal, on the practical side, as well as, benefit from this sort of, not only…but also, obviously,

第三篇：2014年1月MBAMPA聯(lián)考數(shù)學(xué)真題(完整版)

2014年1月MBA/MPA/MPAcc聯(lián)考數(shù)學(xué)真題（完整版）

（天學(xué)考研）

一、問題求解：第1～15小題，每小題3分，共45分。下列每題給出的A、B、C、D、E

五個(gè)選項(xiàng)中，有一項(xiàng)是符合試題要求的。請?jiān)诖痤}卡上將所選項(xiàng)的字母涂黑。

1.某部門在一次聯(lián)歡活動(dòng)中共設(shè)了26個(gè)獎(jiǎng)，獎(jiǎng)品均價(jià)為280元，其中一等獎(jiǎng)單價(jià)為400元，其他獎(jiǎng)品均價(jià)為270元，一等獎(jiǎng)的個(gè)數(shù)為

（A）6（B）5（C）4（D）3（E）2

2.某單位進(jìn)行辦公室裝修，若甲、乙兩個(gè)裝修公司合做，需10周完成，工時(shí)費(fèi)為100萬元；

甲公司單獨(dú)做6周后由乙公司接著做18周完成，工時(shí)費(fèi)為96萬元.甲公司每周的工時(shí)費(fèi)為

（A）7.5萬元（B）7萬元（C）6.5萬元（D）6萬元（E）5.5萬元

3.如圖1，已知AE=3AB，BF=2BC.若ΔABC的面積是2，則ΔAEF的面積為

（A）14（B）12（C）10（D）8（E）6

4.某公司投資一個(gè)項(xiàng)目.已知上半年完成了預(yù)算的，下半年完成了剩余部分的，此時(shí)還有8

千萬元投資未完成，則該項(xiàng)目的預(yù)算為

（A）3億元（B）3.6億元（C）3.9億元（D）4.5億元（E）5.1億元

5.如圖2，圓A與圓B的半徑均為1，則陰影部分的面積為

（A）2π/3（B）√3/2（C）π/3-√3/4（D）2π/3-√3/4（E）2π/3-√3/2

6.某容器中裝滿了濃度為90%的酒精，倒出1升后用水后又倒出1升，再用水將容器注滿，已知此時(shí)的酒精濃度為40%，則該容器的容積是

（A）2.5升（B）3升（C）3.5升（D）4升（E）4.5升

7.已知為等差數(shù)列，且，則

（A）27（B）45（C）54（D）81（E）162

8.甲、乙兩人上午8：00分別自A,B出發(fā)相向而行，9：00第一次相遇，之后速度均提高了

1.5公里/小時(shí)，甲到B，乙到A后都立刻沿原路返回.若兩人在10：30第二次相遇，則A,B

兩地的距離為

（A）5.6公里（B）7公里（C）8公里（D）9公里（E）9.5公里

9.擲一枚均勻的硬幣若干次，當(dāng)正面向上次數(shù)大于反面向上次數(shù)時(shí)停止，則在4次之內(nèi)停止的概率為

（A）1/8（B）3/8（C）5/8（D）3/16（E）5/16

10.若幾個(gè)質(zhì)數(shù)（素?cái)?shù)）的乘積為770，則它們的和為

（A）85（B）84（C）28（D）26（E）25

11.已知直線l是圓x2+y2=5在點(diǎn)（1，2）處的切線，則l在y軸上的截距為

(A)2/5(B)2/3(C)3/2(D)5/2(E)5

12.如圖3，正方體ABCD-A′B′C′D′的棱長為2, F是棱C′D′的中點(diǎn)，則AF的長為

(A)3(B)5(C)√5(D)2√2(E)2√3

13.某項(xiàng)活動(dòng)中，將3男3女6名志愿者隨機(jī)地分成甲、乙、丙三組，每組2人，則每組志

愿者都是異性的概率為

（A）1/90（B）1/15（C）1/10

（D）1/5（E）2/5

14.某工廠在半徑為5cm的球形工藝品上鍍一層裝飾金屬，厚度為0.01cm.已知裝飾金屬的原材料是棱長為20cm的正方體錠子，則加工10 000個(gè)該工藝品需要的錠子數(shù)最少為（不考慮加工損耗，）

（A）2（B）3（C）4（D）5（E）20

15.某單位決定對4個(gè)部門的經(jīng)理進(jìn)行輪崗，要求每位經(jīng)理必須輪換到4個(gè)部門中的其他部門任職，則不同的輪崗方案有

（A）3種（B）6種（C）8種（D）9種（E）10種

二、條件充分性判斷：第16~25小題，每小題3分，共30分。要求判斷每題給出的條件（1）和條件（2）能否充分支持題干所陳述的結(jié)論。A、B、C、D、E五個(gè)選項(xiàng)為判斷結(jié)果，請選擇一項(xiàng)符合試題要求的判斷，在答題卡上將所選項(xiàng)的字母涂黑。

（A）條件（1）充分，但條件（2）不充分.（B）條件（2）充分，但條件（1）不充分.（C）條件（1）和（2）單獨(dú)都不充分，但條件（1）和條件（2）聯(lián)合起來充分.（D）條件（1）充分，條件（2）也不充分.（E）條件（1）和（2）單獨(dú)都不充分，條件（1）和條件（2）聯(lián)合起來也不充分.16.已知曲線l:y=a+bx-6x2+x3.則(a+b-5)(a-b-5)=0.（1）曲線l過點(diǎn)（1，0）.（2）曲線l過點(diǎn)（-1，0）.17.不等式|x2+2x+a|≤1的解集為空集.（1）a<0.（2）a>2.18.甲、乙、丙三人的年齡相同.（1）甲、乙、丙的年齡成等差數(shù)列.（2）甲、乙、丙的年齡成等比數(shù)列.19.設(shè)x是非零實(shí)數(shù).則x3+=18.（1）x+=3.（2）x2+=7.20.如圖4,O是半圓的圓心，C是半圓上的一點(diǎn)，OD⊥AC,則能確定OD的長.（1）已知BC的長.（2）已知AO的長.21.方程x2+2(a+b)x+c2=0有實(shí)根.（1）a,b,c是一個(gè)三角形的三邊長.（2）實(shí)數(shù)a,c,b成等差數(shù)列.22.已知二次函數(shù)f(x)=ax2+bx+c.則能確定a,b,c的值.（1）曲線y=f(x)經(jīng)過點(diǎn)(0,0)和點(diǎn)(1,1).（2）曲線y=f(x)與直線y=a+b相切.23.已知袋中裝有紅、黑、白三種顏色的球若干個(gè).則紅球最多.（1）隨機(jī)取出的一球是白球的概率為.（2）隨機(jī)取出的兩球中至少有一個(gè)黑球的概率小于.24.已知M={a,b,c,d,e}是一個(gè)整數(shù)集合.則能確定集合M.（1）a,b,c,d,e的平均值為10.（2）a,b,c,d,e的方差為2.25.已知x,y為實(shí)數(shù).則x2+y2≥1.（1）4y-3x≥5.（2）(x-1)2+(y-1)2≥5.（天學(xué)網(wǎng)整理）

第四篇：考試英語作文

Dear Mary,I hope you would come to visit China soon.The differences between good manners in China and in the West are sometimes great.Chinese people attach importance to good manners.There is no doubt that you should absorb some Chinese culture and know something about good manners in China.The first I want to tell you is greeting.When you meet someone,you are supposed to stop and nod your head.You must shake your hands and smile all the time.There are some differences between tipping systems in China and in the West.It’s unnecessary to pay tips in China.You don't need to get confused.Talking of table manners,you should say thanks if the host and hostess invite you to the dinners.Becouse of their hospitality,you had better tell them you really can’t eat more when you are full.In my point of view,if you show your understand and respect,everyone will treat you as their old friends!

Yours,Li Ming

第五篇：英語小作文

1、A Happy Day

2、A Little Wish

3、A Pen and a Pencil

4、Fly Kites

5、Four Seasons

6、Have a fun holiday

7、I Like My Village

8、My Bedroom

9、My Best Friend

10、My Best Friends

11、My Dog

12、My Dream

13、My English Teacher

14、My Family 1

15、My Family 2

16、My Family 3

17、My Favourite Sport

18、My Favourite stamp

19、My Good Friend 1 20、My Good Friend 2

21、My Grandfather's Garden

22、My Hometown.23、My Little Cat

24、My Lovely Home

25、My School

26、My Uncle

27、My Winter Holiday

28、Myself

29、Spring

A Happy Day The weather is getting hotter and hotter.The summer holiday is coming.What a happy day!Birds are singing in the trees.Butterflies are dancing in the garden.Children are playing in the park.Some boys are playing on the slide(滑梯).Some boys are listening to music.Other boys are reading under the big tree.Some girls are drawing pictures.Other girls are playing on the swings(秋千).I like roller-skating(滑旱冰)in the square.And my classmates are playing football.We are very happy!

點(diǎn)評臺(tái)：這篇文章描寫了同學(xué)們和自己在假期里快樂的一天，表達(dá)了他們對假期的喜愛以及在假期里自由自在、放松自我的心情。讀后有種很想加入他們當(dāng)中，與他們分享快樂的愿望。整篇文章用詞準(zhǔn)確，語言生動(dòng)，中心明確、突出，是一篇很成功的文章。文章級(jí)別：A。

A Little Wish Look!What's that? It is our homeland's spaceship.The spaceship is as bright as the stars.It can move.I am proud of our astronaut because I have a wish.I want to be an astronaut.In space, there are many materials.If I were an astronaut, I will be able to know more about space.I think the scene will be very great.On the one hand, I am going to enjoy the scene of the earth.On the other hand, I am going to see some stars.This is my wish.I hope my wish will come true!

點(diǎn)評中心：文章題材新穎，標(biāo)新立意，讓我們了解到雖然只是一個(gè)小小的愿望但卻包含了對探索宇宙的好奇及對我們地球家園的熱愛，同時(shí)也感受到小作者立志成為一名宇航員的偉大理想。最后希望小作者能夠再接再勵(lì)，寫出更多、更優(yōu)秀的小文章，同時(shí)也祝愿你夢想成真！

A Pen and a Pencil

I have a pen and a pencil.The pen is very nice, but the pencil is so dirty.One day, the pen met the pencil.The pen said to the pencil:“ What a dirty pencil!” The pencil said :“Yes.I'm dirty.But I can write words.” “I can write words，too.Now,let's see who can write more words.”

They began to write.They wrote and wrote.The pen wrote lots of words on the paper.The pencil wrote lots of words on the paper, too.After a long time ,the pen hadn't any ink(鋼筆水)left(剩下).The pencil became short, but he could still write.At last ,the pencil won.The pencil said :“Ha ha...ha ha...Who won, you or me ?”The pen drooped(低下)his head.Then he said to the pencil :“I shouldn't laught at(嘲笑)you.You are good, too.”

點(diǎn)評臺(tái)：這是一篇很成功的文章。文章不僅立意新穎，更重要的是寓意深刻。同時(shí)，也能看出小作者有著豐富的想象力。希望在今后的學(xué)習(xí)中充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，寫出更多、更好的文章。文章級(jí)別：A。

Fly Kites Today is a shining day, the sky is blue, the wind is strong.My grandfather and I are going to the park to fly kites.My grandfather takes me to the People's Park.We fly my “Rocket”.“The wind is too strong, the kite can't fly!” I say.My grandfather looks and says, “Let me try!” “Sure!” So my grandfather catches the string and I hold the kite.“Follow me, one, two, three, run!” I run with my grandfather quickly.Oh!It's so wonderful!The kite is flying up with the wind.I am so happy and ask my grandfather, “Why can't I fly it up, but you can?” My grandfather says with a smile on his face, “Because you fly the kite against the wind.” “Oh, I see.” I nod my head happily.We play in the park until late.We enjoy ourselves.點(diǎn)評中心：小作者用平實(shí)的語言描述了風(fēng)箏從飛不上天到飛上天的過程，特別生動(dòng)、形象，同時(shí)又結(jié)合小作者與爺爺?shù)膶υ挘屓丝赐暌院笥蟹N身臨其境的感覺，仿佛放風(fēng)箏的活動(dòng)歷歷在目。

Four Seasons

Spring is green.Do you know why? It is because when spring is here, the plants and the trees sprout new leaves and turn green.The flowers start to blossom.It is so beautiful and green everywhere.Summer is bright.Can you guess the reason? It is because when summer arrives, the sun is shining.For the very strong sunlight, everything is bright.How beautiful and bright it is!Autumn is golden.Why is this? It's because when autumn comes, the wind blows through the golden trees and carries the golden leaves away, flowing slowly down to the ground one after another and thickly covering the ground.It is golden everywhere.Winter is white.Why? It's because when winter reaches us, the white snowflakes fly slowly down, so pure and white.The wide fields and the great high mountains all wear white coats.Oh!The four seasons are all beautiful and charming.I like spring, summer, autumn and winter, but spring, the best!For spring is full of life.點(diǎn)評中心:小作者以“四季”為題目,開篇直接切入四個(gè)季節(jié),以闡述四季的不同為主線,分別進(jìn)行描述.文章用詞準(zhǔn)確,語言豐富、生動(dòng),語法基本正確.希望繼續(xù)努力,成為未來的作家。

Have a fun holiday!Come to Shenzhen and have a fun holiday.Shenzhen is a new and modern city.The weather here is very pleasant.The trees and grass are green every season.In spring, the weather is warm.You can go hiking.In summer, the weather is hot, but you can go to the beautiful beach.You can swim there.You can make a sandcastle(沙堆城堡), too.In autumn.the weather is cool, but not dry.You can fly kites in the parks.In winter, it's not cold.You don't need to put on more clothes.You can play sports then.There is lots of delicious food here.You can drink morning tea and afternoon tea.You can eat seafood(海鮮), too.In Shenzhen there are many famous places.You can go to the Window of the World.You can go to Happy Valley, too.Don't wait.Come to Shenzhen and have fun, fun and fun!點(diǎn)評中心:通過對深圳四季的描寫,給我們展現(xiàn)出了一幅四季如春的美麗畫面。在深圳,可以到海邊堆沙堡, 可以吃海鮮, 還可以去美麗的世界之窗游玩…… 所有這些都深深地吸引著小讀者們,不愧為一篇成功的小作文。

I Like My Village Hello,dear friends!Welcome to my village.It's big and beautiful!I like it very much.Look!There are many houses in the village.They are small.There are many high and beautiful mountains near the houses.There is a big forest behind the houses.There are many big trees in it.There are many rivers in front of the houses.The water is clean.There are many fish in the rivers.There are many bridges over the rivers.There are many big trees on the river banks.And there is grass and flowers on it.The grass is green.The flowers are colourful and beautiful.There is a lake in the village.There are many ducks in the lake.The sky is blue.The rivers flow.The air is fresh and clean.My village is very beautiful!I like it very much!

點(diǎn)評中心：I Like My Village。本篇文章采用生動(dòng)、細(xì)致的描寫方法，勾勒出一幅美麗、和諧的鄉(xiāng)村圖畫。文章在用詞方面比較準(zhǔn)確，多處采用There be句型。但有些地方可用連詞連接，無需再重復(fù)使用There be句型。

My Bedroom My name is Mike.I have a comfortable bedroom.There is a desk, a bookshelf and a bed in my bedroom.I do my homework in my bedroom every evening.The desk is in front of the bookshelf.There are many textbooks, English books and story books on the shelf.My bed is near the windows.There are some flowers on the windowsill.The curtain and the sheets of my bedroom are blue.Because my favourite colour is blue, too.Dear friend, do you like my bedroom? 點(diǎn)評中心：My Bedroom針對自己臥室里的幾件物品進(jìn)行了介紹，為同學(xué)們展示了一個(gè)干凈舒適的小天地，值得一提的是文中使用了一些生詞，使文章增色不少。在這里建議其他同學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)，努力多掌握些單詞，從而寫出更加精彩的英語作文?！癡ery Good!”。

My Best Friend Ma Qi is my best friend.She is a girl.she is ten years old.She has short black hair and big eyes.she likes to sing.Ma Qi and I are in the same class.We always study, draw pictures and play ping-pong together.After the school, we often go to the park.We often play a game of Hide And Seek there.We have a good time.點(diǎn)評臺(tái): My Best Friend語言流暢，敘述清楚，描述了自己與好朋友一起學(xué)習(xí)、生活的快樂時(shí)光，如果小作者能夠運(yùn)用已學(xué)過的知識(shí)再對好朋友的外貌特征和衣著作一番細(xì)致地描寫的話，相信文章內(nèi)容就會(huì)更加充實(shí)。“Good!”。千萬不要驕傲呀，還要繼續(xù)練習(xí)寫作，使自己能夠?qū)懗龈玫奈恼隆?/p>

My Best Friends

Jim and Kim are my best friends.Jim is short, thin and quiet.But Kim is tall and strong ,but not fat.After class, Jim is different from Kim and I.Kim and I like to play soccer.We often kick the ball on the playground.But Jim doesn't play with us.He likes to read books in the library.Sometimes he likes to listen to music.In the evening, Jim often helps Kim and me with our English.We talk a lot and laugh a lot.We are best friends.點(diǎn)評臺(tái)：向大家介紹了自己的兩個(gè)好朋友。語言流暢，用詞準(zhǔn)確，沒有語法錯(cuò)誤，字里行間能體會(huì)到小作者與兩位好朋友之間的深厚友情。另外，從整篇文章中也可以看出小作者的英語基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)掌握得很牢。希望今后的學(xué)習(xí)中寫出更多，更好的文章。文章級(jí)別：A。

My Dog Hello, everyone!I am Wang Ze.My English name is Mike.I have a cat and a dog.I like my cat, but I like my dog better than my cat.My dog is two years old.It has two black eyes, a black nose and a small mouth.Its body is white.It is as white as snow.My dog is very lovely.I like my dog very much.點(diǎn)評臺(tái)：文章My Dog首先向讀者問候，并簡單介紹了自己，隨后通過簡略的描寫使一只可愛的小狗形象躍然紙上，能夠吸引讀者的注意力。對于初學(xué)者而言，能寫出這樣的習(xí)作確實(shí)不容易，值得大家學(xué)習(xí)?！癎ood！”，繼續(xù)加油??！

My Dream I am a handsome boyl.My name is Mike.I like drawing.My dream is to have a white house with a white wall, a white roof, a white floor.I can draw a red car on the wall, and I can drive the car around the world.I can draw a plane on the roof, and I want to take the plane to the sky.i can draw a sailing-boat on the floor, and I want to take the sailing-boat across the sea.點(diǎn)評臺(tái):這篇作文“My Dream”，形式新穎，風(fēng)格獨(dú)特，用詞得當(dāng)，語句通順。此文章充分地體現(xiàn)了小作者豐富的想象力和較強(qiáng)的寫作能力，是一篇成功的文章。同時(shí)，希望張燦小朋友能堅(jiān)持練習(xí)英文寫作，相信你一定會(huì)寫出更好的英語作文?！癡ery good!”。

My English Teacher Miss Shan is my English teacher.She has two big eyes.She is thin and short.Her hair is very long.She is very beautiful.Her English is very good.She always play games with us in English class.So her class is very interesting and shi is kind to us.She like us and we like her too.I like my English teacher.How about you? 點(diǎn)評中心: 文章寫得比較簡單,詞語使用準(zhǔn)確, 語言樸實(shí)無華,字里行間表達(dá)了小作者對英語老師的喜愛之情, 但不夠具體, 如果能指出老師的愛好、習(xí)慣等，文章會(huì)更加充實(shí)，希望你繼續(xù)努力,寫出更加優(yōu)秀的文章來。

My Family I have a happy family.There are six people in my family.They are grandpa, grandma, father, mother, elder sister and I.My name is Yang Yuan.I am a pupil, I'm in Grade 5.I like English very much, I read them every morning.I often listen to the English tape.My grandpa is an accountant(會(huì)計(jì)).He is very busy.My grandma is a farmer.She does the housework.My mother is a farmer, too.She cooks every day.My father is a worker.In the evening he likes watching TV.While he is watching TV, he often tells us not to talk.My elder sister is a middle school student, she isn't good at English, but she likes maths very much.All of them love me, and I love them, too.I have a happy family.I love my family.點(diǎn)評中心:這篇文章主要描寫了家庭成員的職業(yè)，My Family更適合做這篇文章的標(biāo)題，整篇文章條理清楚，語言簡練，用詞準(zhǔn)確，沒有語法錯(cuò)誤，可見小作者的英語語言基本功很好，希望楊園同學(xué)在今后的學(xué)習(xí)中繼續(xù)發(fā)揚(yáng)這個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)，不要驕傲，寫出更多的好文章。文章級(jí)別:B。

My Family Hello, everyone!Today I am going to talk about my family.My name is Mike.I am in Class 1, Grade 4.l like English very much.I like hamburgers.I have a happy family.There are three people in my family.Look, this is my father.He has two brown eyes, a big nose and a small mouth.He is an engineer.He is very handsome.Look, that is my mother.She has two big eyes.She is an engineer too.She is very pretty and kind.My family is not big, but we have many friends.We are happy.I love them very much and they love me too.講評中心：文章寫得比較簡煉，詞語使用準(zhǔn)確，語言生動(dòng)，字里行間表達(dá)了小作者對家人的愛。但不要驕傲，繼續(xù)努力??！文章級(jí)別：A。

My Family There are three people in my family, my father, my mother and I.My father is a driver.He is 37 years old.He like eating oranges.My mother is a worker.She like eating apples.My name is Mike.I am 9 years old.I am in Class 3, Grade 3.l like eating hamburgers.I am good at English.I study hard every day.點(diǎn)評中心：My Family 語言流暢，描寫得當(dāng)，用平實(shí)的語言向讀者介紹了家庭中的每一位成員的基本情況，美中不足之處就是缺乏對家人之間和睦關(guān)系的描述，使文章略顯平淡了一些。“Good！”,還要繼續(xù)努力啊

My Favourite Sport My favourite sport is swimming.I often swim in the pool.I swim twice a week.When I am swimming in the pool, I am very happy.I look like a lovely fish in the pond.I enjoy swimming, because swimming can make me strong and healthy.It can also bring me a lot of happiness.Of course, I like watching this sport.I hope I will become a swimmer in the future.點(diǎn)評中心:這篇小文章語言精煉、準(zhǔn)確,短短幾句便勾畫出了一幅生動(dòng)、活潑的畫面。

My Favourite stamp I have a lot of stamps and my favourite stamp is an animal stamp.Look, there is a chick in this stamp.The chick has a red cockscomb, two bright eyes, a long neck and a short tail.Its feathers are yellow and brown.This stamp is very beautiful.I like this stamp very much.Miss Wang點(diǎn)評臺(tái)集郵不僅可以增長我們的見識(shí)，同時(shí)也可以陶冶我們的情操。本文的小作者就是一個(gè)集郵愛好者，看小作者所描述的小雞郵票多么可愛呀！感興趣的小朋友可以試著收集郵票啊！Miss Wang要獎(jiǎng)給姚晗小朋友一個(gè)“Very Good!”,繼續(xù)加油啊！

My Good Friend Hello!My name is Maggie.I have a good friend.Her Chinese name is Wang Qi.Her English name is Mary.She likes fruit very much.Her favourite color is blue.She is very beautiful.She has small eyes and wears a pair of glasses.She has two small ears, a small nose and a lovely mouse.She is very tall.She likes swimming and playing football.She is a good student.We are in the same school and the same class.But we are not in the same row.I like her very much.We always play together.講評中心：文章比較詳盡、完整地描述了她的好朋友的特征，包括了好朋友的外貌、喜好等，文章詞語使用準(zhǔn)確、語法正確、主題突出，“Good!”，不要驕傲，繼續(xù)努力啊！

My Good Friend I have a good friend.Her name is Zhang Hong.She is 9 years old.She is a pretty girl.She has long hair and big beautiful eyes.They look like stars.Her favourite colour is pink.Her favourite animals are cats and rabbits.She likes to play badminton very much.Her favourite class is English.She studies very hard.She is a good student.I love her very much.I will learn from her.本文圍繞My Good Friend這一主題，運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)，針對好朋友的外貌、愛好進(jìn)行介紹，為讀者展示了一個(gè)活潑、可愛的小女孩形象。Miss Wang要獎(jiǎng)給孟婷婷同學(xué)一個(gè)“Very Good！”。同時(shí)，孟婷婷同學(xué)也要繼續(xù)努力練習(xí)英文寫作呀！My Grandfather's Garden

My grandfather has a small garden.There are many flowers in it.I think all the flowers are beautiful.My grandfather gets up early every mor-ning.First, he goes to his garden to have a look at the flowers.Then, he waters them.When he waters the flowers, he feels very happy.My sister and I like the garden very much.We often play in it.Sometimes we water the flowers and catch worms for them.One day, my brother picked a flower.My grandfather was very angry and sad.He said to my brother, “My child, don't pick the flowers.That's not a good deed(行為).” My brother felt very sorry for that.And we all didn't pick flowers from then on.The flowers in my grandfather's garden are more and more beautiful now.I like my grandfather's garden.點(diǎn)評臺(tái)：向大家描寫了爺爺?shù)幕▓@，雖沒有太多華麗的詞語，但能使讀者感受到花園的美麗和花兒的芳香。通過描寫爺爺對花園的精心料理以及對弟弟的教育，能看出本篇文章不僅僅是寫爺爺?shù)幕▓@，也從字里行間中看出了小作者對爺爺?shù)木磁逯?。文章條理清楚、意思連貫，沒有語法錯(cuò)誤，是一篇很成功的文章，希望再接再勵(lì)！文章級(jí)別：A。

My Hometown My hometown-Kaiping is a very beautiful city.It is located(座落)in the southwest(西南)part of Guangdong Province(省).My hometown is famous for Diaolous.Ruishi Tower is one of the Diaolous(Please look at the picture.).It was built in 1923.The top of the tower looks like the Italy stronghold(堡壘).It is tall and magnificent(雄偉的).People praise(贊揚(yáng))it for “the No.1 Tower” of Kaiping.I like my hometown.點(diǎn)評臺(tái)：小作者的My Hometown主要描寫了家鄉(xiāng)著名的碉樓，其中重點(diǎn)向大家介紹了“開平第一樓”--瑞石樓，抒發(fā)了自己對家鄉(xiāng)的熱愛之情。整篇文章語句連貫，沒有語法錯(cuò)誤。文章中出現(xiàn)了一些生詞，可見小作者是用心查字典了，希望小作者繼續(xù)發(fā)揚(yáng)這個(gè)好習(xí)慣，并寫出更多的好文章與大家分享。文章級(jí)別：A。

My Little Cat Hello!I'm Becky.This is my little cat.I like it very much.Its name is Do Re Mi.It's very beautiful.It's gray.It has triangular(三角形的)ears, round eyes,a black nose and a small mouth.My mother calls it “Little Baby”.When I'm at home,it often follows me in and out.My little cat loves to eat fish and sleep a lot.It's very fat,but it's nimble(機(jī)敏的).One day,I saw it run fast in the sitting room.I thought it might find a mouse.It was running after the mouse.They looked like playing hide-and-seek.About three minutes later,it brought me the mouse.I was happy.So I touched it with a smile.“You have done a good job,Little Baby.” I said.Then it jumped up and down and ran away.Do you like my little cat?Tell me, please.點(diǎn)評中心:向大家介紹了小貓的外貌，還主要描寫了小貓?jiān)谀骋惶熳嚼鲜蟮那榫?。整篇文章主次分明，語言簡煉、生動(dòng)，沒有語法錯(cuò)誤。同時(shí)，字里行間能使讀者感受到小作者對小貓的喜愛之情。

My Lovely Home I live in a small village named Fengyi.I live in an old building.It was built in 1999.It has three floors.On the first floor, there is a big living room, a kitchen and a bathroom.On the second floor, there are altogether three bedrooms.One for my grandma, one for my parents, another for me.On the third floor, there is an attic.It's my study, it's quiet.I like to study there.When I am tired, I can rest in the balcony.There is some beautiful old furniture, it's tidy.My parents clean it every day.I can also do some housework.My friends, do you love my home?

點(diǎn)評中心：My Lovely Home開篇直接切入本文主題，首先從房子的結(jié)構(gòu)開始介紹，句子簡潔、通順，接著又重點(diǎn)描述了與自己有關(guān)的幾個(gè)房間，語言生動(dòng)、貼切，最后又抒發(fā)了自己對家的熱愛。

My School Hello, friends!Welcome to my school.My school is beautiful and very big.There are many rooms in the school building.My classroom is on the sixth floor.There are sixty-nine students in my class.You can see many desks, chairs, a blackboard, three fans, two windows, four lights and a teacher's desk.My seat is near the door.The computer room is on the third floor.There are many computers in it.I like playing computer games very much!The canteen(食堂)is on the first floor.We have lunch there.Look!This is the playground.We often play games on it.There are many flowers in the garden, some are red, some are yellow...I have a good time every day in my school.I like my school very much.點(diǎn)評臺(tái)：文章向大家描述了他學(xué)校的教室，食堂，微機(jī)室以及操場，其中重點(diǎn)描寫了自己的班級(jí)，主次分明，層次清晰，正確地運(yùn)用了There be句型和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)時(shí)態(tài)，是一篇很成功的文章，文章級(jí)別：A。

My Uncle My uncle is a professor.His name is Chen Hao.He teaches Chinese in a university.He is tall and thin.He wears a pair of glasses.He likes reading.He has a big study at home.It's very bright.There are many books in his study.He often reads and writes in his study.He is kind to his students, so his students like him very much.He is very kind to me, too.He often sends me books.I like him, too.點(diǎn)評中心：本篇小文章描寫的是小作者的叔叔，首先從她叔叔的職業(yè)、外貌開始描寫，接著又描寫了她叔叔的愛好--讀書與寫作。表達(dá)了小作者對其叔叔的崇拜與敬仰之情。文章條理清晰，用詞準(zhǔn)確，無語法錯(cuò)誤，是一篇較優(yōu)秀的文章。

My Winter Holiday This winter holiday, I went to Kunming with my family.Kunming is a very beautiful city, I think.The sky is blue and the air is clean.You can see many kinds of nice flowers everywhere.The weather there is great.It's never too hot or too cold all the year round, so people always call it “Spring City”.Kunming is surrounded(圍繞)by beautiful scenery.And one of the most famous views is “The Stone Forest”.It is really scenic(自然風(fēng)景的).We just stayed in Kunming for six days, but I felt very happy, and I like Kunming very much.點(diǎn)評中心：寒假雖然已經(jīng)過去一個(gè)多月了，但是在這個(gè)假期所發(fā)生的事大家是否還都銘記在心呢？作者就把她的這份心情用筆記錄了下來。小作者通過在寒假期間去美麗的春城--昆明游玩，抒發(fā)了對美好自然風(fēng)光的熱愛。文章生動(dòng)、形象，用詞準(zhǔn)確。

Myself Look at this photo.A little boy is climbing a tree.Who is the boy? Guess, please!Yes, it's me.My name is Zhu Shaoyu.I'm ten years old.I'm very naughty and smart.I have big eyes and short black hair.I'm thin and tall.I'm a student.I'm in Xia Zhuang Primary School, Qing Zhou City.I'm in Class One, Grade Five.My favourite subject is English.I study English very hard.I think nothing is difficult, if I put my heart into it.Now I can speak English well.I obtained the First Award in the 2003 National English Competition for Primary School Students.I will study harder in future.My favourite master of ceremonies is Li Yong, because he is very funny.My favourite newspaper is English Coaching Paper, because it gives me a lot of knowledge.It makes me learn English better.My favourite food is hamburger, because it is very delicious.I like its taste.Do you like me? Would you like to make friends with me?

點(diǎn)評臺(tái)：幾乎每個(gè)人都很了解自己，所以要是介紹自己，可寫的內(nèi)容很多。但小作者并沒有平均分配筆墨，而是重點(diǎn)描寫了自己的幾個(gè)“最喜歡”。整篇文章條理清楚、重點(diǎn)突出、語言流暢、用詞準(zhǔn)確，可以說寫得很成功。希望同學(xué)們向朱劭宇同學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)，寫出一篇篇精彩的文章與大家共同分享。文章級(jí)別：A。

Spring I like spring because spring is beautiful.Many flowers are very lovely.Some grass and trees turn green.Look!A little girl is flying a kite with her father.She likes to fly kites.Her father is smiling.It's very warm today.So there're a lot of birds flying in the sky.They're playing together.They look very happy.A breeze is blowing over the land.The sunlight is soft.A clear river is flowing.How beautiful the spring is!點(diǎn)評臺(tái):這篇文章篇幅雖短卻寫出了春天的生機(jī)與活力.特別是小作者著重描寫了春天里的某一天,使整篇文章的中心更加明確.用詞準(zhǔn)確、生動(dòng),沒有語法錯(cuò)誤也是這篇文章的另一優(yōu)點(diǎn).文章級(jí)別:A.29