第一篇：2007年高考英語滿分作文及名師評(píng)析文檔

【全國卷II】

【試題回放】

一家賓館新開業(yè)，為吸引外國賓客，希望在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上進(jìn)行宣傳。請(qǐng)你用英語為其 寫一篇文字介紹。主要內(nèi)容包括：

1.地點(diǎn)：距白山入口處500米;

2.房間及價(jià)格：單人間(共20間)，100元/天;雙人間(共15間)，150元/天;熱水淋浴;3.餐飲：餐廳(中、西餐)，咖啡廳(茶、咖啡);4.游泳池：全天免費(fèi)開放;5.歡迎預(yù)定。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右，開頭語已為你寫好;2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!

Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides single person room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day.It also provides hot water bath service.You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the

restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe.The swimming pool is open for free the whole day.All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable.So come to enjoy yourself!

Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】

本文開門見山，首先點(diǎn)明了主旨。本文最大的特點(diǎn)是應(yīng)用了很多比較復(fù)雜的句式，使文章比較出彩。開頭使用了獨(dú)立結(jié)構(gòu)交代賓館位置。which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句的使用也很正確?？偟貋碚f，文章句式精煉，是篇不錯(cuò)的滿分作文。

積累卡片英漢互譯

好詞1.provide v.提供2.convenience n.便利

好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and are

very enjoyable.所有這些服務(wù)都會(huì)給你帶來便利，并且非常的愉快。

評(píng)析：bring great convenience，帶來便利。

【安徽卷】

【試題回放】

假如你是李華，美國一所友好學(xué)校準(zhǔn)備與你們學(xué)校共同創(chuàng)辦一份中學(xué)生英文刊物，該校格林先生來信詢問有關(guān)情況。請(qǐng)你給她寫封回信，假如你是李華，美國一所友好學(xué)校準(zhǔn)備與你們學(xué)校共同創(chuàng)辦一份中學(xué)生英文刊物，該校格林先生來信詢問有關(guān)情況。請(qǐng)你給她寫封回信，主要內(nèi)容如下：

l 表示贊成。l 提出你喜歡的欄目。l 簡要說明理由。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右。2.新的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好。3.適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。4.參考欄目：欄目—column

Dear Mr.Green,I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together.That sounds great!And I definitely agree with you on that.Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea.Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world.Since

people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each other.This will offer a wonderful chance.Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English.Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool!The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can’t miss it!Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.Well, I can’t list more.I really can’t wait to read that magazine!

Yours faithfully,Li Hua

【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】

這是一篇滿分作文。由于這篇作文的出現(xiàn)，導(dǎo)致了安徽省今年的英語作文分?jǐn)?shù)普遍偏低。仔細(xì)分析了這篇文章，寫的的確是好，很地道的美式英語，一些詞語的大膽使用，讓人不得不猜測此人或者是家人可能有過國外生活的經(jīng)歷，否則這么地道標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的英語，可不是一朝一夕所能寫出來的。

比如說：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大膽運(yùn)用，list, can't wait to 簡直是perfect!況且文章中沒有一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤，不管是書寫還是語法。英語能夠?qū)W到這種程度，不可謂不讓人佩服。

【江蘇卷】

【試題回放】

2007年4月29日上午10點(diǎn)到11點(diǎn)，全國億萬學(xué)生陽光體育活動(dòng)在各地大中小學(xué)校同時(shí)進(jìn)行，江蘇省1，100萬學(xué)生積極參與了這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)。

教育部倡導(dǎo)學(xué)生：

每天鍛煉一小時(shí)

健康工作五十年

幸福生活一輩子

請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以上提示，用英語準(zhǔn)備一份發(fā)言稿，向同學(xué)們講述一下陽光體育活動(dòng)的有關(guān)情況，并就高三學(xué)生是否需要每天花一小時(shí)鍛煉，談?wù)勀愕目捶袄碛伞?/p>

注意：

1、發(fā)言稿應(yīng)包括以上所有信息，要有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

2、詞數(shù)：120左右。發(fā)言稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

3、參考詞匯：陽光體育活動(dòng)——a national student sports program;

教育部——the Ministry of Education

Good afternoon, everyone,The national student sports program, waged by the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10：00a.m.~11:00a.m.on April 29，2007 in many primary and middle schools all over China.Almost 11 million students in Jiangsu province participated in this program.The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years.Our whole life will be very enjoyable.In my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is limited.Health is a basic condition for our study.If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records.So every one of you, join the program now!

Thank you!

【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】

本文的結(jié)構(gòu)十分明晰，同時(shí)句式使用得熟練而準(zhǔn)確。本文分為三段，前兩段敘述，后一段發(fā)

表觀點(diǎn)，典型的作文結(jié)構(gòu)。在句式使用上，作者用法多樣，使用了獨(dú)立結(jié)構(gòu)和虛擬語氣，十分出彩。復(fù)雜的句式是本文的特點(diǎn)之一。

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好詞1.wage v.發(fā)動(dòng)2.aim v.瞄準(zhǔn)3.advocate v.提倡

好句1.The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years.教育部提倡我們每天做一個(gè)小時(shí)的運(yùn)動(dòng)，能夠健康地活50年。

評(píng)析：advocate，其后接虛擬語氣，可以省略情態(tài)動(dòng)詞。

2.If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records.如果我們不進(jìn)行運(yùn)動(dòng)，我們的學(xué)習(xí)成績就不會(huì)很好。

評(píng)析：虛擬語氣。

【重慶卷】

【試題回放】

據(jù)報(bào)道，7歲的美國女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung cancer)后處于極度的痛苦之中，美國抗癌協(xié)會(huì)(ACS)決定，每當(dāng)Amy收到一封慰問信，就給她增加3美分的治療款。假如你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，請(qǐng)你用英文給Amy寫一封慰問信，主要內(nèi)容包括： 自我介紹

得知的情況

表示鼓勵(lì)

打算為她做什么

祝她早日康復(fù)

注意：

1.信的格式已為你寫好

2.信中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)情況。

3.詞數(shù)100左右。

4.請(qǐng)?jiān)诖痤}卡上作答。

Dear Amy,I’m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of China.I’m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brought you great pain.But you should realize that you are young and have a promising great future.So, stand up and fight against the disease!I’m sure you will win.It is reported that the America anti-cancer

association will donate three cents upon every comfort letter you receive.So I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to you.In that way, you will get enough money for you to be cured.Hope you can be well soon.Yours,Li Hua

[名師點(diǎn)評(píng)]

本文依照要求，涵蓋了所有要點(diǎn)。文章使用了高中常見的句式，如Im sorry to hear that..., It is reported that...等，都比較好。作者對(duì)定語從句的使用恰到好處地修飾了文章，行文自然而通順，值得學(xué)習(xí)。

積累卡片

好詞1.realize v.意識(shí)到2.promise v.允諾3.donate v.捐贈(zèng)

好句1.I am sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brings you great pain.我很遺憾地得知你身患肺癌，給你帶來了巨大的痛苦。

好處：which引導(dǎo)限制性定語從句。

2.So, stand up and fight against the disease!

因此，堅(jiān)強(qiáng)地與疾病做斗爭吧!

好處：擲地有聲，語言準(zhǔn)確。

第二篇：2007年高考英語滿分作文及名師評(píng)析

2007年高考英語滿分作文及名師評(píng)析

2007高考英語滿分作文

【全國卷II】

【試題回放】

一家賓館新開業(yè)，為吸引外國賓客，希望在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上進(jìn)行宣傳。請(qǐng)你用英語為其 寫一篇文字介紹。主要內(nèi)容包括：

1.地點(diǎn)：距白山入口處500米;

2.房間及價(jià)格：單人間(共20間)，100元/天;雙人間(共15間)，150元/天;熱水淋浴;3.餐飲：餐廳(中、西餐)，咖啡廳(茶、咖啡);4.游泳池：全天免費(fèi)開放;5.歡迎預(yù)定。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右，開頭語已為你寫好;2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!

Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides single?person room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double? person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day.It also provides hot water bath service.You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe.The swimming pool is open for free the whole day.All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable.So come to enjoy yourself!

Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】

本文開門見山，首先點(diǎn)明了主旨。本文最大的特點(diǎn)是應(yīng)用了很多比較復(fù)雜的句式，使文章比較出彩。開頭使用了獨(dú)立結(jié)構(gòu)交代賓館位置。which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句的使用也很正確。總地來說，文章句式精煉，是篇不錯(cuò)的滿分作文。

積累卡片英漢互譯

好詞 1.provide v.提供2.convenience n.便利

...好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and are

very enjoyable.所有這些服務(wù)都會(huì)給你帶來便利，并且非常的愉快。

評(píng)析：bring great convenience，帶來便利。

【安徽卷】

【試題回放】

假如你是李華，美國一所友好學(xué)校準(zhǔn)備與你們學(xué)校共同創(chuàng)辦一份中學(xué)生英文刊物，該校格林先生來信詢問有關(guān)情況。請(qǐng)你給她寫封回信，假如你是李華，美國一所友好學(xué)校準(zhǔn)備與你們學(xué)校共同創(chuàng)辦一份中學(xué)生英文刊物，該校格林先生來信詢問有關(guān)情況。請(qǐng)你給她寫封回信，主要內(nèi)容如下：

l 表示贊成。

l 提出你喜歡的欄目。

l 簡要說明理由。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右。

2.新的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好。

3.適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

4.參考欄目：欄目column

Dear Mr.Green，I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together.That sounds great!And I definitely agree with you on that.Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea.Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world.Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it's necessary to learn from each other.This will offer a wonderful chance.Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English.Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool!The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can't miss it!Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things....Well, I can't list more.I really can't wait to read that magazine!

Yours faithfully，Li Hua

【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】

這是一篇滿分作文。由于這篇作文的出現(xiàn)，導(dǎo)致了安徽省今年的英語作文分?jǐn)?shù)普遍偏低。仔細(xì)分析了這篇文章，寫的的確是好，很地道的美式英語，一些詞語的大膽使用，讓人不得不猜測此人或者是家人可能有過國外生活的經(jīng)歷，否則這么地道標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的英語，可不是一朝一夕所能寫出來的。

比如說：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大膽運(yùn)用，list, can't wait to 簡直是perfect!況且文章中沒有一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤，不管是書寫還是語法。英語能夠?qū)W到這種程度，不可謂不讓人佩服。

【江蘇卷】

【試題回放】2007年4月29日上午10點(diǎn)到11點(diǎn)，全國億萬學(xué)生陽光體育活動(dòng)在各地大中小學(xué)校同時(shí)進(jìn)行，江蘇省1，100萬學(xué)生積極參與了這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)。

教育部倡導(dǎo)學(xué)生：

u 每天鍛煉一小時(shí)

u 健康工作五十年

u 幸福生活一輩子

請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以上提示，用英語準(zhǔn)備一份發(fā)言稿，向同學(xué)們講述一下陽光體育活動(dòng)的有關(guān)情況，并就高三學(xué)生是否需要每天花一小時(shí)鍛煉，談?wù)勀愕目捶袄碛伞?/p>

注意：

1、發(fā)言稿應(yīng)包括以上所有信息，要有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

2、詞數(shù)：120左右。發(fā)言稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

3、參考詞匯：陽光體育活動(dòng)a national student sports program;

教育部the Ministry of Education

Good afternoon, everyone，...The national student sports program, waged by the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10：00a.m.~11:00a.m.on April 29，2007 in many primary and middle schools all over China.Almost 11 million students in Jiangsu province participated in this program.The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years.Our whole life will be very enjoyable.In my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is limited.Health is a basic condition for our study.If we did not do exercises, we wouldn't be able to get good study records.So every one of you, join the program now!

Thank you!

【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】

本文的結(jié)構(gòu)十分明晰，同時(shí)句式使用得熟練而準(zhǔn)確。本文分為三段，前兩段敘述，后一段發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)，典型的作文結(jié)構(gòu)。在句式使用上，作者用法多樣，使用了獨(dú)立結(jié)構(gòu)和虛擬語氣，十分出彩。復(fù)雜的句式是本文的特點(diǎn)之一。

積累卡片

好詞1.wage v.發(fā)動(dòng)2.aim v.瞄準(zhǔn)3.advocate v.提倡

好句1.The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years.教育部提倡我們每天做一個(gè)小時(shí)的運(yùn)動(dòng)，能夠健康地活50年。

評(píng)析：advocate，其后接虛擬語氣，可以省略情態(tài)動(dòng)詞。

2.If we did not do exercises, we wouldn't be able to get good study records.如果我們不進(jìn)行運(yùn)動(dòng)，我們的學(xué)習(xí)成績就不會(huì)很好。

評(píng)析：虛擬語氣。

【重慶卷】

【試題回放】

...據(jù)報(bào)道，7歲的美國女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung cancer)后處于極度的痛苦之中，美國抗癌協(xié)會(huì)(ACS)決定，每當(dāng)Amy收到一封慰問信，就給她增加3美分的治療款。

假如你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，請(qǐng)你用英文給Amy寫一封慰問信，主要內(nèi)容包括：

自我介紹

得知的情況

表示鼓勵(lì)

打算為她做什么

祝她早日康復(fù)

注意：

1.信的格式已為你寫好

2.信中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)情況。

3.詞數(shù)100左右。

4.請(qǐng)?jiān)诖痤}卡上作答。

Dear Amy，I'm Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of China.I'm sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brought you great pain.But you should realize that you are young and have a promising great future.So, stand up and fight against the disease!I'm sure you will win.It is reported that the America anti-cancer association will donate three cents upon every comfort letter you receive.So I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to you.In that way, you will get enough money for you to be cured.Hope you can be well soon.Yours，Li Hua

[名師點(diǎn)評(píng)]

...本文依照要求，涵蓋了所有要點(diǎn)。文章使用了高中常見的句式，如I?m sorry to hear that..., It is reported that...等，都比較好。作者對(duì)定語從句的使用恰到好處地修飾了文章，行文自然而通順，值得學(xué)習(xí)。

積累卡片

好詞1.realize v.意識(shí)到2.promise v.允諾3.donate v.捐贈(zèng)

好句1.I?m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brings you great pain.我很遺憾地得知你身患肺癌，給你帶來了巨大的痛苦。

好處：which引導(dǎo)限制性定語從句。

2.So, stand up and fight against the disease!

因此，堅(jiān)強(qiáng)地與疾病做斗爭吧!

好處：擲地有聲，語言準(zhǔn)確。

...

第三篇：2011年高考英語滿分作文及名師評(píng)析文檔

作文題目

假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國筆友Bob將于九月到你所在城市的建新華文學(xué)校學(xué)中文，來信請(qǐng)你在學(xué)校附近為他找一套住房。請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖畫提供的信息，寫信介紹住房的情況，并告知住房面積為25平方米，月租500元。

注意：

1．詞數(shù)：100左右：

2．參考詞匯：房租—Tent(n.).I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here.I have already found a fiat for you.It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School.Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School.The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen.There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month.Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs.If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.Hope you will come here soon!

All the best!

Yours, Li Hua

滿分理由

本文格式正確，意思表述完整，行文流暢自然。作者在寫作過程中注意長短句并用，還使用了以'which，’引導(dǎo)的非限定性定語從句，從而使文章層次分明，富于變化，不愧為考場佳作。

Dear Bob,Welcome to China!You wrote to me to find a place for you.I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese

School.It is on the third floor and there’re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom.There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom.The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.Also from this house you can get to your school easily.Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building.It is only one stop.At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I’U be able to meet you at the airport, see you.Best wishes!

Yours, Li Hua

滿分理由

本文格式正確，內(nèi)容完整，表述清楚，銜接緊密流暢，時(shí)態(tài)語態(tài)使用準(zhǔn)確，特別是結(jié)尾末段適度的發(fā)揮，既充實(shí)了內(nèi)容，又符合邏輯，成為本文與眾不同的亮點(diǎn)。Dear Bob,How are you these days?

I’m so glad to know that you’ll come to our city to learn Chinese.You asked me to find a place for you.Now I’ve found one which I think is pretty good.The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop.It’s just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom.Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable.By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month.I hope you’ll like it.If not, I’ll try to find another place for you.Yours,Li Hua

滿分理由

本文內(nèi)在邏輯性很強(qiáng)，由遠(yuǎn)及近。由外及內(nèi)，層次分明，錯(cuò)落有致。同時(shí)讓步狀語從句運(yùn)用得恰到好處，很出彩，再則結(jié)構(gòu)完整，從開頭的問候語到結(jié)尾都很完備。Dear Bob,I’m so glad that you are coming to learn Chinese here.I’ve already found you a house near our school.I’d like to tell you something about it.You may get on No.ll bus at Fang Cao Street and the next stop is just Jian Xin Chinese School.The house is near the school.It is about 25 square metres.In the bedroom, there is a bed, a sofa standing against the wall and a table near the window.You may find a light on the table and a chair next to it.There are two other rooms connecting the bedroom.The left one is a bathroom and the right one is a kitchen.So you may cook by yourself.The rent for the house is 500 yuan per month.Hope you’ll enjoy staying here!

Yours,Li Hua

滿分理由

本文內(nèi)容具體，詳略得當(dāng)，表述方式很有創(chuàng)造力和新意，長短句并用，語言結(jié)構(gòu)富于變化，錯(cuò)落有致，順暢圓潤，尤其是情態(tài)動(dòng)詞和分詞的運(yùn)用很獨(dú)到，為文章增色不少。

Dear Bob,I’m glad to hear from you.Welcome to our city in september.I’ve found a suitable house for you.The house is on Fang Cao Street, not far from the Jianxin Chinese School.If you take the No.11 bus, it is just one stop.It is a flat on the third floor of a building.It has three rooms, a

living-room, a bathroom and a kitchen.You can cook yourself.The mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you.In the living-room, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with chair.The desk is next to the

window.It will be good for study.The total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month.Yours,Li Hua

第四篇：2006年高考英語滿分作文及名師評(píng)析

2006年高考英語滿分作文及名師評(píng)析

2006高考英語滿分作文

【全國卷I】

【試題回放】

假定你是李華，亞洲冬季運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)將在你居住的地方舉辦，現(xiàn)正在招募志愿者，你希望成為其中一員。請(qǐng)按要求用英文給組委會(huì)寫一封信。內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：1.個(gè)人情況：年齡，性別，學(xué)歷 2.個(gè)人條件：英語好，愛好體育，善于交際，樂于助人，熟悉本地情況 3.承諾：提供最佳服務(wù)

注意：詞數(shù)100左右，開頭語已為你寫好;可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫;生詞：申請(qǐng)apply(v.), application(n.)，志愿者volunteer

Dear Sir / Madam:

I was quite excited when I heard the Asian Winter Games will be held in the city I live.My name is Li Hua.I am an 18-year-old boy student in a senior middle school.And I want to be a volunteer for the games.I like English and sports very much.I like making friends and I am ready to help others.I can be a good interpreter in every sports during the time.Hope the games will be a great success.Hope I will be chosen to be one.Yours faithfully，Li Hua

[名師點(diǎn)評(píng)]

這篇文章寫得非常流暢，把握了所有要點(diǎn)，同時(shí)以“我”為中心，詳細(xì)說明了自己對(duì)志愿者工作的結(jié)合，以此來表達(dá)自己的決心。由于用詞恰當(dāng)，這種表現(xiàn)就比較充分，具備一定的說服力。詞匯和語句的運(yùn)用也不錯(cuò)。

[全國卷II]

【試題回放】

假定你是李華。應(yīng)英國朋友Bob的要求，寫一封短信介紹你校圖書館的基本情況。內(nèi)容須包括下面兩幅圖中的相關(guān)信息。

注意：

1、字?jǐn)?shù)100左右

2、可以適當(dāng)增減細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫

3、開頭語已為你寫好

Dear Bob，Thank you for your last letter asking about our library.Our library locates between the teaching building and our garden.The shape of it seems to be a book to welcome our students.it's open from Monday to Friday ,and we can borrow the books from 9:00a.m.to 7:00p.m.There are many books available in our library ,dealing with almost every subject.Not only the books, but also the magazines can be read here.You may borrow up to five books at a time, and keep them for at most ten days.Due to the library , we are offered a place to gain as much knowledge as we can.If you are interested in it, welcome to our school, and I'll show you around.Yours sincerely，Li hua

[名師點(diǎn)評(píng)]

本文最大的特點(diǎn)是描繪仔細(xì)而生動(dòng)，意思表達(dá)十分契合。文章以短句為主，兼以長句讀起來輕快。文章的體系結(jié)構(gòu)也是常用的三段式，作者極力推薦自己的圖書館，這么好的圖書館怎么不打動(dòng)他的外國朋友呢?

【安徽卷】

【試題回放】

假設(shè)你是李華，作為選派的交流學(xué)生在美國某中學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)了一年，寄住在Mr.Brown家里，剛回到國內(nèi)?；貒?，你發(fā)現(xiàn)自己的一本英語詞典遺忘在他家，因此給他寫了一封信，請(qǐng)他幫助寄回詞典。信的主要內(nèi)容如下：

感謝在美國期間他所提供的幫助

一本英語詞典忘記帶回

詞典是美國老師送的，非常珍貴

詞典很可能丟在臥室的書架上

郵資自己付

注意：

1、詞數(shù)100左右;信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好。

2、可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫

2、參考詞匯：郵資-postage

Dear Mr.Brown，I have been back, and write this letter to show my thanks.As the exchange student, you make me feel warm.Welcome to my country ,I'll show you around in turn.However , there exists a problem that I have left my dictionary at your home.I like it very much , for it was a precious gift from my teacher who comes from the U.S.I guess that my book may stay on your shelf in the bedroom.Do you mind if you send my dictionary to me? I will pay for the postage and I'll be very grateful if you show your warmness again.I'm eager to receive your reply.Yours，Li hua

[名師點(diǎn)評(píng)]

本文作為信件，首先其格式是正確的。既然是應(yīng)用文，那么文章的意圖就要明確表示出來，本文在表達(dá)作者寫作意圖的時(shí)候，情真意切，用詞委婉而合理。文章不但使用了定語從句，還采用了疑問句，讓句式變化而不呆板。

【重慶卷】

【試題回放】

加拿大高中生David在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)Internet上登出啟事notice，希望結(jié)識(shí)一位中國朋友，以便學(xué)習(xí)中國的語言，文化culture。

假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)?jiān)诳吹竭@則啟事后，用英文給David發(fā)一封電子郵件，主要內(nèi)容包括：

你怎樣得知David的愿望

你愿意成為他的朋友

你打算如何幫助他

你盼望他的回復(fù)

注意：

1、電子郵件的格式已為你寫好

2、字?jǐn)?shù)：100詞左右

3、在答題卡上作答

Dear David，I'm a student from China and have noticed your requirement on line.You would like to search for a Chinese friend to help you get to know China and its culture.Maybe I'm your good choice.China is a country that has a long history of 5,000 years.Not only our history ,but also our culture is the access to understand us better.There are so much that I want to know, if you are interested.I'll be looking forward to your reply.I'll show you around our great China if you come to China.Yours sincerely ，Li hua

[名師點(diǎn)評(píng)]

本文的語言非常流暢，我們可以看到，本文雖沒有華麗的辭藻，但是語言的組織和層次感很強(qiáng)。同時(shí)連詞的使用，如not only, but also ,讓文章的重點(diǎn)突出，同時(shí)也起到了強(qiáng)調(diào)和吸引注意的目的。

第五篇：高考英語滿分作文

2010范文

范文1

Grasping the knowledge of those youngsters with na?ve faces raising their hands high and expecting to inform their teachers of their novel answers from the picture, I could not help envying them, since our childhood was considerably different from theirs.Once we entered the primary school, we were instructed by teachers to keep both our hands on our backs and were forbidden to talk or move hands freely when they were speaking, which led to our uneasiness in class and deprived us of similar smiles on the picture.The divergence, I believe, should be attributed to the different educational system and concept between China and western countries.While they are encouraged to give full play to their creativity and curiosity, not willing to learn and instilled with a large amount of knowledge in order to obtain the admission letters from established universities and companies.Thus we are cultivated into identical “top-students” instead of creative individuals.Therefore, I eventually conclude that the next generation of our nation should be granted with more freedom to fully tap their potential and become all-round people.范文2

As we all can see, the lovely students in the picture are so active that they all put their hands high, hoping to express their own opinions.It is obvious that the atmosphere is relaxing and everyone enjoys it.That’s great, isn’t it?

The picture also reminds me of the time when I was a fresh student who was too shy to speak in public.Just like me, during my class, our classmates just listened to class, and everyone was watching me!I even prayed that my name would never come to my teacher’s mind.But as time goes by, I grow up, so as my mind.I realized that the situation show in the picture was far better.Children are all curious about everything, and knowledge will only be acquired by an inquiring mind.Those who dare not to speak out will never know anything new.The childhood without asking is not a real childhood.We should also keep the curiosity now, and forever.That will benefit you in the rest of your life.范文3

From the picture, it can be easily seen that four primary students are raising their hands to answer the questions.So happy and excited are they that I see their eagerness for knowledge, which is powerful in all our life.Therefore, unlimited as knowledge is, we should keep our enthusiasm to learn.When it comes to my first day in my primary school, I felt curious about everything.When my teacher asked questions, all of us raised our hands including some to answer them … wonderful moments in my life because although we were little kids, we carried our passion for learning new knowledge, which is beautiful and mysterious in our hearts.We were just like the children in the picture, active and creative.It was at that time that knowledge appealed to me.Just as Bacon wrote in 1597, knowledge is power.I reckon that all of us should keep out enthusiasm to explore in the known and unknown worlds.Time-consuming and painstaking as it might be, nothing can stop a willing and curious heart.Only by living knowledge can we strive to learn.And only by gaining more knowledge can we become powerful, thus achieving our success and living out our values!

There is no one but can resist the charm of knowledge, just like these students.Having an active heart and persevering in learning, the day we succeed will surely come!

范文4

When I first saw the picture, I was deeply moved.In the picture, foreign pupils are having a lesson.Although they have just entered the elementary school, they are quite outgoing and energetic.They all raise their hands and want to take an active part in the lesson.The smile wearing on their faces indicates the confidence in their heart.I am moved by their enthusiastic attitude towards study, school life and even future.However, it reminds me of my personal experience when I was at their age.Since I was a Chinese pupil, I as well as others was required to obey the strict rules of school.We sat quietly or even silently in the classroom and listened to the teacher’s words.There were not many live discussions and the “teacher talking, students listening” was the most common pattern.I am shocked by such astonishing differences between Chinese education and foreign education.However, I gradually realize that the key factor leading to the difference lies in the culture background.Both of them have their advantages and shortcomings.Students like me who belong to Chinese classroom can learn to develop a sense of obeying rules which is essential for us to be good citizens.However less involvement in class may make students less creative.On the other hand, those pupils in the picture enjoy a relatively more open atmosphere and they can express and learn freely and actively.But their sense of obeying rules becomes weak.So, in my opinion, as both coins have two sides, the two kinds of education can learn from each other to come up with a better one.And this can be beneficial to both the development of students and the communication between cultures.范文5

Holding their hands up, smiling confidently to the teacher and being eager to answer the question, nowadays the new primary students seem to consider a class as an excited adventure.Their shinning eyes are like sweet blossoms which remind me of my golden days in the primary school.Compared with their active attitude, I was always so shy that I tried my best to hide my ideas.Praying not to be chosen to answer the question, worrying about the likely embarrassment, I filled my class time with anxiety.However, with time gone without trace or sound, I gradually realize what precious treasures I have lost.I gave up my confidence which was able to lead me to the paradise of success;I missed valuable experience which could lit the ragged road to the future;I also rejected my right to make mistakes as well as to be corrected.As the saying goes, what we must conquer are not rocky mountains but ourselves.Mistakes are not our opponents, instead they equip us with courage, wisdom and lessons.Do not be afraid to face difficulties, bear it in mind that they train us for the better and that only with the belief in ourselves can we embrace the beauty of life!

Thank you, my dear angels.You bring confidence, smiles and positive attitudes towards life back to me.I hope that you can keep smiling to whatever you may face in the future.I hope that I can hold my hand up like you the next time!