第一篇：精彩求職信點(diǎn)評

您好！我是一名即將畢業(yè)的中山大學(xué)本科生，非常高興在網(wǎng)站上看到中國移動廣東分公司的招聘信息，特別是看到廣州和中山分公司都在其中，如果能在自己的家鄉(xiāng)加入移動，對我這個(gè)喜愛移動喜愛廣州的人來說是絕妙的。(點(diǎn)評：第一段，既告訴對方自己如何得知招聘信息，同時(shí)表達(dá)了自己的熱誠。)

但是您一定有疑慮，因?yàn)槲疫@個(gè)學(xué)旅游酒店管理的人卻想應(yīng)聘市場營銷！關(guān)于這個(gè)問題，我想進(jìn)行如下說明：

(1)在學(xué)科知識上我并不遜于市場營銷專業(yè)。我們的專業(yè)除了學(xué)習(xí)市場營銷的一系列課程外，還專注于消費(fèi)者心理的研究，正如移動所說“溝通從心開始”，把握消費(fèi)者心理對于營銷策劃更為重要。另外，我還廣泛閱讀了從《定位》到《忠誠的價(jià)值》等眾多營銷論著。

(2)市場營銷中許多具有藝術(shù)性、技巧性和因地制宜的東西，都不是可以從書上學(xué)到的，大衛(wèi).奧格威在成為廣告教父之前是一個(gè)被牛津退學(xué)的郁悶廚子，策劃狂人史玉柱也不過是一個(gè)整天計(jì)算數(shù)學(xué)方程式的四眼學(xué)生。在這點(diǎn)上，我已經(jīng)證明了我的天賦，我的營銷案例分析課程是全院最高分95分，而且從簡歷中您能夠看到，我曾經(jīng)成功地參與了企業(yè)的策劃活動。

(點(diǎn)評：第二段，把自己最大的優(yōu)點(diǎn)呈現(xiàn)出來，既然是校園招聘，最有利的證據(jù)就是自己的學(xué)分，而且是比別的同學(xué)都高的學(xué)分。事實(shí)上，該職位對專業(yè)本身并無限制，但鄭明明主動地“自暴其短”，說明自己的專業(yè)不是市場營銷，實(shí)際上是想以先抑后揚(yáng)的手法起到“后來居上”的效果，意思是說，你看，我專業(yè)不對口，可是我的知識結(jié)構(gòu)和那些專業(yè)對口的學(xué)生相比絲毫也不遜色，而這則變相地說明了她的學(xué)習(xí)能力更強(qiáng)。)

在廣西移動的業(yè)務(wù)當(dāng)中，我很中意12580移動秘書服務(wù)，我覺得這是一個(gè)設(shè)計(jì)得非常好的增值服務(wù)，工作人士以及象我們這樣正在找工作的大學(xué)生就非常需要此項(xiàng)服務(wù)。最關(guān)鍵的問題是如何推廣給顧客！假如我有幸能夠加入移動，我會采取如下的方法進(jìn)行推廣：

(1)在大學(xué)校園設(shè)立咨詢臺進(jìn)行推廣。我們可以聯(lián)系學(xué)校的就業(yè)輔導(dǎo)中心，強(qiáng)調(diào)我們這項(xiàng)服務(wù)可以幫助大學(xué)生不錯(cuò)過任何一家企業(yè)的面試通知，那么很可能學(xué)校會免費(fèi)提供場地讓我們做宣傳。

(2)免費(fèi)免操作為顧客提供半個(gè)月的12580移動秘書服務(wù)，所謂免操作，是指顧客不需要到營業(yè)廳辦理，不需要自己打1860開通，也不需要設(shè)立密碼，一切都和短信息一樣，是自行開通的！顧客對于任何一項(xiàng)服務(wù)都是非常非常怕麻煩的，所以我們要把服務(wù)做到0麻煩！當(dāng)顧客已經(jīng)習(xí)慣這項(xiàng)服務(wù)時(shí)，我們就可以要求顧客打電話開通此項(xiàng)業(yè)務(wù)了！

(點(diǎn)評：第三段，以模擬工作的方法來展現(xiàn)自己對該職位的理解，盡管方案未必能夠行得通，但是充分地展示了自己對移動的關(guān)注和熱誠。)

當(dāng)然，目前我對于移動的業(yè)務(wù)完全是門外漢，您可能會對我的幼稚啞然失笑，不過，我只是想讓您了解我對通訊業(yè)務(wù)的熱情和喜愛！同時(shí)我相信自己能夠?yàn)閺V西移動的壯大添磚加瓦，和全球通的新廣告詞一樣，“我能”！

感謝您的閱讀，忠心期待您的回復(fù)。同時(shí)祝您身體健康，一切順意！

(點(diǎn)評：第四段，再次表示出熱誠，以祝福對方的形式收尾，很好！)

XXX

2011年6月1日

第二篇：精彩求職信

Your Contact Information

Address

City, State, Zip Code

Phone Number

Cell Phone Number

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Employer Contact Information

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Dear Mr./Ms.LastName,I am very interested in the entry-level position that is available at ABC Investment Partners.I recently graduated from XYZ University College and am actively seeking employment with firms in the San Francisco area.My courses in investments, finance and business have given me a solid base upon which I plan to build to build my career.During my college internships, I dealt with a variety of budgets and conducted market research while handling numerous administrative duties.The experience allowed me to learn important skills and to develop the confidence needed to succeed in a competitive environment.I have enclosed my resume for your review.Thank you for your time and consideration.It would be a pleasure to interview with you and I look forward to hearing from you soon.Sincerely,Your Signature

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Cover Letter Format

Your Contact Information

Name

Address

City, State, Zip Code

Phone Number

Email Address

Date

Employer Contact Information(if you have it)

Name

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Company

Address

City, State, Zip Code

Salutation

Dear Mr./Ms.Last Name,(leave out if you don't have a contact)Body of Cover Letter

The body of your cover letter lets the employer know what position you are applying for, why the employer should select you for an interview, and how you will follow-up.First Paragraph

The first paragraph of your letter should include information on why you are writing.Mention the position you are applying for and where you found the job listing.Include the name of a mutual contact, if you have one.Middle Paragraph(s)

The next section of your cover letter should describe what you have to offer the employer.Mention specifically how your qualifications match the job you are applying for.Remember, you are interpreting your resume, not repeating it.Final Paragraph

Conclude your cover letter by thanking the employer for considering you for the position.Include information on how you will follow-up.Complimentary Close

Respectfully yours,Signature

Handwritten Signature(for a mailed letter)

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Cover Letter Template

Contact Information

The first section of your cover letter should include information on how the employer can contact you.If you have contact information for the employer, include that.Otherwise, just list your information.Your Name

Your Address

Your City, State, Zip Code

Your Phone Number

Your Email Address

Date

Employer Contact Information

Name

Title

Company

Address

City, State, Zip Code

Salutation

Dear Mr./Ms.Last Name:

Body of Cover Letter

The body of your cover letter lets the employer know what position you are applying for, why the employer should select you for an interview, and how you will follow-up.First Paragraph:

The first paragraph of your letter should include information on why you are writing.Mention the position you are applying for.Include the name of a mutual contact, if you have one.Be clear and concise regarding your request.Middle Paragraphs:

The next section of your cover letter should describe what you have to offer the employer.Convince the reader that they should grant the interview or appointment you requested in the first paragraph.Make strong connections between your abilities and their needs.Mention specifically how your skills and experience match the job you are applying for.Remember, you are interpreting your resume, not repeating it.Try to support each statement you make with a piece of evidence.Use several shorter paragraphs or bullets rather than one large block of text.Final Paragraph:

Conclude your cover letter by thanking the employer for considering you for the position.Include information on how you will follow-up.State that you will do so and indicate when(one week's time is typical).You may want to reduce

the time between sending out your resume and follow up if you fax or e-mail it.Complimentary Close:

Respectfully yours,Signature:

Handwritten Signature(for a mailed letter)

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How to write a cover letter for a job application.Difficulty: Average

Time Required: One Hour

Here's How:

1.Write a targeted cover letter for each employer:

how to write targeted cover letters

2.State why you are writing:

what to include in your cover letter

3.Indicate where you learned of the position and the title of the position you are applying for.4.Explain the reasons for your interest in the organization.5.Express your enthusiasm for the job.6.Identify your most relevant skills and experiences.7.Refer to the qualifications for the position and illustrate how your abilities relate.8.Communicate your interest, motivation and strengths.9.Emphasize your achievements.10.Indicate how you will follow-up, typically with a phone call.11.Review sample cover letters: cover letter samples

Tips:

1.Avoid cliches and meaningless or wordy expressions.2.Your cover letter should complement, not duplicate your resume.3.Your cover letter is often the first contact with an employer, make sure it creates a good impression.4.Take the time to target your cover letter to the job you are applying forHow To Write Resume in English

Writing a resume in English can be very different than in your native tongue.The following how to outlines a standard resume format.Difficulty Level: Hard Time Required: 2 hours

Here's How:

1.First, take notes on your work experiencethese are the most important points for your resume.5.Begin resume by writing your full name, address, telephone number, fax and email at the top of the resume.6.Write an objective.The objective is a short sentence describing what type of work you hope to obtain.7.Begin work experience with your most recent job.Include the company specifics and your responsibilities-focus on the skills you have identified as transferable.8.Continue to list all of your work experience job by job progressing backwards in time.Remember to focus on skills that are transferable.9.Summarize your education, including important facts(degree type, specific courses studied)that are applicable to the job you are applying for.10.Include other relevant information such as languages spoken, computer programming knowledge etc.under the heading: Additional Skills

11.Finish with the phrase: REFERENCES Available upon request

12.Your entire resume should ideally not be any longer than one page.If you have had a number of years of experience specific to the job you are applying for, two pages are also acceptable.13.Spacing: ADDRESS(center of page in bold)OBJECTIVE double space EXPERIENCE double space EDUCATION double space ADDITIONAL SKILLS double space REFERENCES.Left align everything except name/address.Tips:

1.Use dynamic action verbs such as: accomplished, collaborated, encouraged, established, facilitated, founded, managed, etc.2.Do NOT use the subject “I”, use tenses in the past.Except for your present job.Example: Conducted routine inspections of on site equipment.

第三篇：英文求職信點(diǎn)評

求職信英文版

時(shí)光飛逝，大學(xué)生活即將結(jié)束。隨之要面臨的是如何找一份稱心工作的問題。找工作，得從求職信開始…

Job Application

May 22nd

Dear Mr.Cavendish，I saw your advertisement in the local paper this evening，and I wonder if you would consider me for a job as a waiter this summer.I am seventeen years old and at present I am studying English and economics.When I leave school, I hope to take a course in hotel management.During the school holidays last summer, I worked as a waiter at the Central Hotel.The headwaiter there, Mr.Macintosh, will be pleased to send you a recommendation for me.I would prefer to work in your hotel in Filey because it is near my home.However, if there isn’t any job there for me, perhaps you could consider me for the Scarborough Hotel.I would be pleased if you will send me information about the pay and conditions of the job to be offered.I will be free to begin work in the fourth week of July when the school holidays start

Yours sincerely，peter Tuck

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行文點(diǎn)評

這是一封典型的求職信。第一段開門見山，表明寫信的目的是求職。同時(shí)，也注明了消息來源和應(yīng)聘職位。第二段開始介紹求職者的情況，(注意：所寫的情況最好能體現(xiàn)出你十分適合所應(yīng)聘的職位)。信中第三段特別陳述了一個(gè)不情之請并說明原因。最后一段表明自己希望得到回復(fù)，并說明自己可以開始工作的具體時(shí)間。

這封信符合求職信的結(jié)構(gòu)要求，語言簡潔，語氣禮貌大方。

好文妙譯

求職信

親愛的卡文迪斯先生：

我在今晚的地方報(bào)紙上看到了你們的廣告，我想在這個(gè)夏天做一份服務(wù)生的工作，敬請考慮。

我十七歲，現(xiàn)在正在學(xué)習(xí)英文和經(jīng)濟(jì)學(xué)。畢業(yè)后，我希望能夠?qū)W習(xí)酒店管理課程。去年暑假時(shí)，我在中央酒店作服務(wù)生。那兒的領(lǐng)班麥金托什先生會很樂意向您寄交一封關(guān)于我的推薦信。

我比較喜歡在您的費(fèi)雷酒店工作，因?yàn)槟莾弘x我家不遠(yuǎn)。但如果那兒沒有我的工作機(jī)會，也許您可以考慮讓我去斯卡伯勒酒店。

如果您能寄給我有關(guān)這份工作的薪水和工作環(huán)境的一些信息，我會非常高興。我可以從七月的第四個(gè)星期開始工作，那時(shí)學(xué)校開始放假了。

彼得·塔克

5月22日

詞匯斟酌

recommendation n.推薦，介紹

思如泉涌

Will, work and wait are the pyramidal cornerstones for success.意志、工作和等待是成功的基石。

A good beginning makes a good ending.善始者必善其終。

第四篇：英語公開課精彩點(diǎn)評

英語公開課精彩點(diǎn)評

激發(fā)興趣 凸顯主體 努力打造高效課堂

-----評英語課《Mock′s birthday》

尊敬的各位領(lǐng)導(dǎo)、各位老師：

大家下午好！

對英語我是門外漢，對英語教學(xué)更是知之甚少，今天，有幸坐在這里點(diǎn)評xx老師執(zhí)教的課，既感到十分榮幸，又感到非常緊張，點(diǎn)評有不當(dāng)之處敬請各位同仁批評指正。

xx老師的這節(jié)課，容量大、節(jié)奏快、效率高，充分體現(xiàn)了以教師為主導(dǎo)，以訓(xùn)練為主線，體現(xiàn)了六種要求進(jìn)課堂，體現(xiàn)了教師教學(xué)方式與學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)方式的轉(zhuǎn)變。使課堂成為情感的課堂，喚醒了學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)欲望；成為互動的課堂，學(xué)生主動參與，自主學(xué)習(xí)，師生共同探討。本節(jié)課張老師讓學(xué)生多了一分靈動，讓學(xué)習(xí)更為主動；多了一分活潑，讓教學(xué)充滿活力；更多了一分趣味和尊重，營造了一種身心解放、思維開放、個(gè)性奔放的教學(xué)場景，建構(gòu)起一種互動、體驗(yàn)、快樂的多元課堂。

一、激發(fā)學(xué)習(xí)興趣，讓學(xué)生想學(xué)。

“知之者不如好之者 好之者不如樂之者，”興趣是最好的老師。真正的課堂是學(xué)生在快樂中學(xué)習(xí)，在幸福中成長，在學(xué)習(xí)中感受快樂，在成長中收獲著幸福。本節(jié)課教師主要通過以下方法激發(fā)學(xué)生興趣，調(diào)動學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)的積極性。

1．導(dǎo)入激趣。

轉(zhuǎn)軸撥弦三兩聲，未成曲調(diào)先有情。一個(gè)好的課堂導(dǎo)入，是建立師生感情的第一座橋梁，可以使學(xué)生自然而然地進(jìn)入學(xué)習(xí)新知識的情境，并能激發(fā)學(xué)生的興趣和強(qiáng)烈的求知欲，在最短的時(shí)間內(nèi)，使學(xué)生進(jìn)入最佳的學(xué)習(xí)狀態(tài)。課堂伊始，張老師通過講自己的生日故事，播放生日蛋糕，讓學(xué)生回答有關(guān)問題，復(fù)習(xí)舊單詞等拉近了師生距離，并且為下文學(xué)習(xí)打下了堅(jiān)實(shí)的基礎(chǔ)。

2．情景激趣。

本節(jié)課張老師運(yùn)用信息技術(shù)為學(xué)生創(chuàng)設(shè)生動真實(shí)的教學(xué)情景，同時(shí)新穎美觀的生日圖片、優(yōu)美動聽的音樂，讓學(xué)生有身臨其景的感覺，讓學(xué)生感到英語就在身邊，大大地激發(fā)了學(xué)習(xí)興趣，調(diào)動了學(xué)生的參與積極性，同時(shí)也節(jié)省了時(shí)間，培養(yǎng)了學(xué)生敢于探索和創(chuàng)造的精神，促進(jìn)了英語高效課堂的形成。

3、氛圍激趣。

教學(xué)過程中最活躍的是師生關(guān)系，而良好的師生關(guān)系對提供課堂教學(xué)效率起著積極的促進(jìn)作用。教學(xué)中，張老師真心地走進(jìn)學(xué)生，真情地親近學(xué)生，深入地了解學(xué)生，尊重學(xué)生的個(gè)人經(jīng)驗(yàn)、感情或意見。積極構(gòu)建融洽、民主、平等、和諧的師生關(guān)系，給學(xué)生一種親和力，形成民主、和諧的教學(xué)氣氛，使學(xué)生能在一個(gè)歡樂、和諧、寬松的良好氛圍里學(xué)習(xí)。從而激發(fā)他們的興趣和動機(jī)。這樣學(xué)生才能放開手腳，人人參與，積極展示，學(xué)會交流，學(xué)會研究，善于傾聽，營造陽光、和諧、高效的課堂。

二、凸顯學(xué)生主體地位，促進(jìn)學(xué)生自主學(xué)習(xí)。

新課程明確指出，教師是課堂教學(xué)的指導(dǎo)者、組織者，學(xué)生是課堂真正的主人。作為一名英語教師要千方百計(jì)把時(shí)間、把空間讓給學(xué)生，引領(lǐng)他們?nèi)バ蕾p教材的大好風(fēng)光。

1、多讀細(xì)品，讓學(xué)生在自主讀中去學(xué)習(xí)新知。

自主學(xué)習(xí)是新課標(biāo)進(jìn)入課堂的一把標(biāo)尺。本節(jié)課張老師巧妙的引導(dǎo)學(xué)生通過多種閱讀，讓學(xué)生在反復(fù)的讀中去體味，去思考，去感悟，去理解。聽錄音讀，速讀、個(gè)人讀、小組讀、齊讀，多種形式的讀，使學(xué)習(xí)書生朗朗，興趣昂然，使課堂充滿生機(jī)。

2．進(jìn)行學(xué)法指導(dǎo)，讓學(xué)生會主動學(xué)習(xí)。

學(xué)外語不僅要“愿”學(xué)，而且要“善”學(xué)，要講究學(xué)習(xí)方法。本節(jié)課在課堂教學(xué)中，張老師巧妙的指導(dǎo)學(xué)生解題的方法，讓學(xué)生知道考試中如果遇到閱讀題應(yīng)該怎么做。讓學(xué)生平時(shí)養(yǎng)成良好的解題習(xí)慣，從而達(dá)到學(xué)生善學(xué)的目的。

3、精講多練，讓學(xué)生在多種練習(xí)中，鞏固新知。

紙上得來終覺淺，絕知此事要躬行。本節(jié)課，教師根據(jù)學(xué)生的實(shí)際，對短文中學(xué)生不理解的短語、句子Look at One by one It had the mouths of the year進(jìn)行了適時(shí)點(diǎn)撥，重點(diǎn)講解，是精講落到了實(shí)處。同時(shí)，本節(jié)課張老師以訓(xùn)練為主線，設(shè)計(jì)了多種練習(xí)，課堂開始的問答題，課堂結(jié)束的判斷題、選擇題等，題題緊扣目標(biāo)，題題鍛煉能力。多種形式的練習(xí)，讓學(xué)生鞏固了新知，開闊了視野，掌握了做題方法。有效的培養(yǎng)了學(xué)生的聽說讀寫能力。

三、多鼓勵(lì) 令學(xué)生收獲成功的喜悅。

贊揚(yáng)如陽光，批評如利劍。數(shù)生十過，不如獎(jiǎng)生一功。作為一名教師，要欣賞學(xué)生，真誠的贊揚(yáng)學(xué)生，要把愛化為涓涓細(xì)流，灌注到每個(gè)教學(xué)細(xì)節(jié)中，從而使每一個(gè)學(xué)生精神細(xì)胞里多一份高貴。本節(jié)課張老師讓肯定和贊揚(yáng)的聲音貫穿了整個(gè)課堂，Good、Very good、Great、學(xué)生的掌聲等激勵(lì)貫穿整個(gè)課堂，既給千里馬以陽光，又給丑小鴨以雨露。讓學(xué)生在欣賞中體驗(yàn)到成功的快樂，體驗(yàn)到學(xué)習(xí)英語的興趣，從而以更加飽滿地精神狀態(tài)積極地投入到學(xué)習(xí)中。

四、存在問題：

學(xué)生自主讀書時(shí)間稍有點(diǎn)少。

總之，本節(jié)課是比較成功的，中心校在工作比較繁忙的情況下，組織了這次活動，凸顯出中心校領(lǐng)導(dǎo)對英語教學(xué)的重視，我們相信，在中心校領(lǐng)導(dǎo)的正確領(lǐng)導(dǎo)下，在我們?nèi)w英語教師的共同努力下，涅陽的這朵英語教學(xué)之花會開得更紅更艷。

加強(qiáng)管理 共同努力 提高英語教學(xué)質(zhì)量

1、營造一種氛圍。營造一種當(dāng)英語教師自豪，學(xué)好英語驕傲的氛圍，培養(yǎng)教師的職業(yè)榮譽(yù)感，培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的成就感。

2、轉(zhuǎn)變一個(gè)觀念。轉(zhuǎn)變英語教學(xué)只是英語教師的事。形成人人都來關(guān)心英語教學(xué)，人人都來支持英語教學(xué)的局面。

3、扣主一個(gè)中心。英語教師緊緊抓住課堂教學(xué)這個(gè)中心，認(rèn)真?zhèn)湔n，認(rèn)真上課，認(rèn)真批改，認(rèn)真輔導(dǎo)，把工夫下在課外，把力量用在課內(nèi)，把補(bǔ)弱加在課后，向課堂要質(zhì)量。

4、抓住一個(gè)關(guān)鍵。抓住組織教學(xué)這個(gè)關(guān)鍵，采用多種方式使課堂秩序井然有序。

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