第一篇:如何看待雅思作文模版
寫寫幫文秘助手(004km.cn)之如何看待雅思作文模版
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手中無(wú)劍心中有劍,無(wú)招勝有招,返樸歸真,直臻化境。不容易,咱還得用烤架放一把屠龍刀再加倚天劍,我不夠聰明,沒(méi)能找到里面的九陰真經(jīng)和武穆遺書來(lái)橫行天下。
最先我一直覺得作文拿7分是奢望,想想5分應(yīng)該沒(méi)啥問(wèn)題,因而也就沒(méi)怎么上心,移民需要的兩門7分的目標(biāo)就放在聽和讀上,主要時(shí)間也就相應(yīng)花在聽讀尤其是聽上,后來(lái)看完insight into ielts兩本書和focus on ielts技能篇和讀寫篇后,覺得對(duì)雅思作文有了一定認(rèn)識(shí),況且自感無(wú)論是中文還是英文寫起文章來(lái)還是能耍兩下的,于是就參照網(wǎng)上有的作文高分者的推薦準(zhǔn)備模板的意見,結(jié)合我前面所說(shuō)的,即摘抄英語(yǔ)原文的好詞好句,好開頭好結(jié)尾,并總結(jié)各種連接詞等,打算在考前整理出幾個(gè)模板來(lái)。現(xiàn)在想來(lái),這么做下去,考試時(shí)分題型把準(zhǔn)備好的開頭結(jié)尾往上一套,來(lái)個(gè)八股式文章,既能節(jié)約時(shí)間來(lái)潤(rùn)色詞句,又能靠地道的開頭或結(jié)尾來(lái)搏取考官的好感,也許真的就能弄到7分。我上強(qiáng)化班時(shí)知道原先手下有個(gè)業(yè)務(wù)員2004年作文考了個(gè)8分,很是懷疑,我想他肯定就是這么準(zhǔn)備的,事先準(zhǔn)備好開頭結(jié)尾和一些高分連接手段什么的,考試時(shí)按照題型不同,選擇性地抄上相應(yīng)模板,多點(diǎn)時(shí)間再潤(rùn)色詞句,檢查并避免拼寫和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤,若考試考到練習(xí)過(guò)的題目,那高分就更沒(méi)跑。我考試時(shí)沒(méi)敢這么做,把已經(jīng)寫好的模板還擦了,原因前面說(shuō)過(guò)一個(gè),就是怕被判抄襲而得不償失,批改欄確實(shí)與以前網(wǎng)上下載的不同了,除了評(píng)分欄還多出幾欄,其中一欄標(biāo)題就是嚇人的 “memorised words”;另一個(gè)原因,恐怕要因此被你們嘲笑,就是我當(dāng)時(shí)尾巴翹上天,以為已經(jīng)到了無(wú)招勝有招的境界了,用宋丹丹的詞匯說(shuō)就是“相當(dāng)”自信,可以信手拈來(lái)皆成文章,結(jié)果這一來(lái),學(xué)gz只學(xué)了個(gè)皮毛,成了邯鄲學(xué)步,也就失去了我現(xiàn)在反思的認(rèn)為最重要的文章的流暢感,正如我上面說(shuō)的,我還沒(méi)能按照九陰真經(jīng)練到所謂返樸歸真,直臻化境的地步??吹骄W(wǎng)上有人已經(jīng)總結(jié)如何準(zhǔn)備模板的經(jīng)驗(yàn),我就不多費(fèi)話了。
簡(jiǎn)言之,我認(rèn)為一篇ielts好文章,行文當(dāng)注重:結(jié)構(gòu)與內(nèi)容,銜接與遞進(jìn),詞匯與語(yǔ)法。大家就自己體會(huì)這三者的含義吧,在此基礎(chǔ)上適當(dāng)準(zhǔn)備附合自己行文特點(diǎn)的模板,也就是別楞穿褲頭配西裝打領(lǐng)帶的意思,那樣對(duì)考試的貢獻(xiàn)還是很大的。
我這里為大家附上1月21日g類task2我寫的6分文章吧,還有一篇我考前寫的ielts老師批改過(guò)的文章,部分應(yīng)用了那本英國(guó)人寫的詞匯自測(cè)書上的內(nèi)容,自認(rèn)為且批改老師也認(rèn)為是7分以上的水平,另外還有我整理的部分筆記,有一些錯(cuò)誤我當(dāng)時(shí)未予修改,供大家參考,建議大家平常準(zhǔn)備就養(yǎng)成記筆記的習(xí)慣并能在練習(xí)作文時(shí)靈活應(yīng)用。別忘了我們小時(shí)常聽大人們說(shuō)的一句教導(dǎo):熟記唐詩(shī)三百首,不會(huì)作詩(shī)也會(huì)吟。
2006年1月21日g類task 2
people now think that spending a lot of money is a waste of money.but others believe that these parties are important to the individuals and society.discuss both views and give your own opinions.while the social and economic developments are significantly achieved, people get paid much more than ever before.as a result, they would like to spend a lot of money on their wedding or birthday ceremonies.what can we think about such a social phenomena?
opponents claim that it is explicitly to not only squander money, but these expensive events would also give rise to negative impact on the community.as a developing country, we still need to rely on a kind of cost-effective lifestyle.in addition, these ceremonies would adversely affect the others in society.however, advocate
第二篇:雅思寫作:如何看待媒體
雅思寫作范文:如何看待媒體
本文由新航道雅思整理發(fā)布
在備考雅思寫作中的考生們,大多會(huì)參考雅思寫作范文來(lái)進(jìn)行參考練習(xí)。一是可以從中找到高分詞匯,二是可以通過(guò)范文的寫作思路來(lái)拓展自己的寫作靈感。今天為大家整理了關(guān)于如何看待媒體的雅思寫作范文,供大家參考。
Do the negative effects of some international media such as TV and magazine for example overweigh the positive effects?
International media such as TV network and magazine always gives people in an information age mixed feelings.Like many other things, media is double-edged.As primary channels of information, TV and magazine are convenient and economic sources of information for knowledge, entertainment, and shopping.Interestingly , sometimes the same piece of information varies considerably in its influences on audiences of different age.For example, in a TV commercial, a beautiful lady promotes a certain brand of perfume , which supposablely makes girls more attractive to boys.For potential grown up buyers, the ad is useful because they might be spending time searching for such products.We save time in shopping and making decision by making use of such advertisements.However, a teenage girl might get the wrong idea about the concept of perfume.She could get money from her parents to buy the advertised product.Worse yet, she might use the sex appeal strategy employed in the commercial to get ahead in the future.This is classic bad influence of media for young people’s overspending and inappropriate behaviors.However, we find it very difficult to weight between merits and problems of media because they are often closely incorporated.For instance, violent scenes in movies are believed to be partially responsible for violence-related crimes, particularly those committed by young people.But on the contrary, such movies also give people a channel to release their anger, anxiety, and pressure.Moreover, these movies show us bad and evil as well as punishments for wrong doings.Imagine we live in a world whose media is completely clean in such sense.The dark side of media does not disappear just because we do not talk about it.Nevertheless certain kinds of information such as porn are better kept away from young people.In conclusion, media should not be seen simply as bad or good because we need to use information properly to the best of our ability.But for certain segments of viewers, we should be very careful with regard to the content of information and take measures to keep viewers from possible harmful influences of media.以上就是這篇關(guān)于如何看待媒體的雅思寫作范文的全文,可以看出這篇雅思寫作經(jīng)典范文采用的是分總文章結(jié)構(gòu),同時(shí)長(zhǎng)短句的搭配是值得借鑒的,同時(shí)一些小詞組和詞匯都用的很靈活和有深度。
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第三篇:雅思寫作大作文18:如何看待舊建筑
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雅思寫作大作文范文18:如何看待舊建筑
雅思寫作中大作文占的比重頗高,話題涵蓋學(xué)術(shù)、生活等各個(gè)領(lǐng)域。100教育小編為你整理了雅思寫作大作文范文,以下是關(guān)于文化-如何看待舊建筑,希望對(duì)考生們有所幫助!
簡(jiǎn)單地說(shuō),文化是指社會(huì)或者社會(huì)人群的生活方式和生活習(xí)慣。文化雖然是很抽象的概念,但它的影響卻無(wú)處不在,包括以下一些方面:
? 服飾:每一種文化都有自己特殊的服裝。中國(guó)是一個(gè)典型的例子:中國(guó)作為一個(gè)多民族國(guó)家,每個(gè)民族都有自己的特色服裝,其中服裝的樣式、顏色和其他特點(diǎn)都反映了民族的文化、習(xí)俗、生活習(xí)慣以及審美觀點(diǎn)。然而,由于西方文化的盛行,西裝已在世界各國(guó)普遍流行并為人們廣泛接受;
? 飲食習(xí)慣:每一種文化都有自己特殊的飲食習(xí)慣。中國(guó)、日本、韓國(guó)、泰國(guó)以及墨西哥等地的民族食物風(fēng)靡世界,美國(guó)快餐文化影響了很多國(guó)家的飲食習(xí)慣,這都是雅思作文考試中經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)的話題。飲食習(xí)慣的不同也體現(xiàn)在飲食的工具(筷子和刀叉的區(qū)別)、飲食的場(chǎng)合(中國(guó)人更喜歡聚餐,而西方人喜歡自助)、飲食的環(huán)境(中國(guó)的餐桌一般是圓的,而且比較大,而外國(guó)的餐桌一般是方的,兩人桌居多)等;
? 語(yǔ)言:每一種文化都有自己特殊的語(yǔ)言,而每一種語(yǔ)言又有它特殊的文化背景。全球化影響了文化的多樣性,同時(shí)也影響了語(yǔ)言的多樣性。語(yǔ)言學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)常要和文化結(jié)合在一起;
? 禮儀:每一種文化都有自己特殊的禮儀。禮儀主要體現(xiàn)在社交、節(jié)日和慶祝方式方面。比如,中國(guó)有中秋節(jié),而西方國(guó)家則沒(méi)有這個(gè)節(jié)日。此外,生日聚會(huì)、婚禮、葬禮等等,也都體現(xiàn)了文化的差異;
? 宗教信仰、思維方式、價(jià)值觀:中同人家庭觀念和集體觀念較強(qiáng),而外國(guó)
人個(gè)人意識(shí)較強(qiáng);中國(guó)人喜歡儲(chǔ)蓄、講究孝道,而外國(guó)人則沒(méi)有這種習(xí)慣和意識(shí);
? 行為習(xí)慣:西方人同性之間比較忌諱勾肩搭背,交流中忌諱打聽對(duì)方衣服的價(jià)格和工資;中國(guó)人喜歡比較商品價(jià)格和家庭收人,交談時(shí)喜歡靠近對(duì)方,以表示對(duì)對(duì)方的信任和對(duì)話題的重視。
文化的重要性:
? 使人們了解自己的特點(diǎn)、文化背景,具有較強(qiáng)的身份感(sense of
identify);
? 對(duì)于整個(gè)人類社會(huì)而言,文化的多元性可以保證人們用不同的方式看待問(wèn)題;
? 和生物多樣性類似,文化多樣性對(duì)人類的長(zhǎng)期存在有深遠(yuǎn)影響(the
long-term survival of humanity)。
Topic: People think that old buildings should be knocked down and give way to the new buildings.Do you agree or disagree? How important are old buildings to us?
相關(guān)觀點(diǎn):
保護(hù)老建筑的必要性:
? 建筑是一個(gè)地區(qū)社會(huì)習(xí)俗和歷史的標(biāo)志(symbol of the social customs and history of a place),也是一種文化資源(cultural resource)。保護(hù)老建筑(old architectural works)實(shí)際上是保護(hù)文化(preserve cultural values),讓一個(gè)地區(qū)擁有豐富的建筑遺產(chǎn)(a rich variety of architectural heritages),有助于突出或者塑造一個(gè)地區(qū)的形象(create its identify)。老建筑是連接現(xiàn)在和過(guò)去的橋梁(bridge the present and the past history),拆毀老建筑會(huì)造成不可彌補(bǔ)的損失;
? 從美學(xué)角度講,老建筑可以保持建筑的多樣性(establish some
variations among the buildings), 獨(dú)特性(rarity)和歷史地位(historical roles)。雖然,建造宏偉的高層建筑(grand high-rising structures)是必須的,但是保持多樣性(variety }也很重要;
? 一些歷史建筑(historic buildings)或古建筑(archeological sites)應(yīng)該修復(fù)成原來(lái)的狀態(tài)(restored to its original/ authentic state of existence),這些建筑物具有觀光價(jià)值;
? 建筑費(fèi)用的增加使老建筑具備一定的經(jīng)濟(jì)價(jià)值(of economic values)。保護(hù)老建筑的不利之處:
? 老建筑(aged buildings)的維護(hù)與經(jīng)濟(jì)的發(fā)展有沖突(an antithesis of development),缺乏經(jīng)濟(jì)價(jià)值(lack of economic values);
?老建筑的維護(hù)需要特別的技藝(craftsmanship),也需要大量的金錢和時(shí)間(commitment of time and money);
? 一些老建筑已經(jīng)破爛不堪(worn out),不具備應(yīng)用價(jià)值(not in a usable state),甚至可能危及生命。
范文:
Every item of property has its own lifespan.So does every building.City planners are very often confronted with a debate concealing whether an old building should be deconstructed or maintained.In my opinion, it depends on whether the targeted building can satisfy the needs of the city.There is no denying that some old buildings are of aesthetic,archaeological or architectural values.They might be either integral to a culture as a symbol of a city or country or unique in the domain of architecture.Demolition of such buildings will inflict damage to
cultural heritage and prevent architects from drawing their inspiration from their predecessors.Because of their uniqueness, old buildings are very likely to provide a source of tourism income, if maintained well.It is fair to say that old buildings of this kind are much more important than any new building and performing more functions than any new building does.With regard to other old buildings, possessing no specific value while becoming dilapidated, entire destruction is an acceptable and
understandable decision.Low in quality and poor in conditions, some old
buildings are actually posing a danger on users and pedestrians.They might stand in the way of a new road line or impede other forms of urban development.Whether they have been renovated or not, these buildings blemish the landscape and provide no justification for continued
maintenance.Replacing old buildings with new ones meets the renewed needs of the city.In summary, whether to conserve or pull down old buildings is a question that can only be answered on a case-by-case basis.People involved should carefully weigh up the pros and cons of new developments before reaching a conclusion.近義詞表:evaluate = compare = estimate = weigh up = assess 衡量,評(píng)估,估量improved = renewed = changed 更新的,提高的renovate = restored = refnrbish = revamp 修補(bǔ),重新裝修damage = spoil = ruin = blemish 破壞,損壞pulling down-knocking down = desrtuction = demolition 破壞,毀壞decaying = wrecked = dilapidate 破爛的,荒廢的cause = impose = inflict 導(dǎo)致,引起domain = area = field 領(lǐng)域artistic = aesthetic 藝術(shù)的,審美的lifespan = lifetime = natural life 壽命,生命周期
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第四篇:雅思作文
雅思大作文——關(guān)于電視的利弊國(guó)課班 張穎杰romy
Television as an indispensable household electrical appliances which make human beings far-reaching effects in our daily life.Nowadays,both positive aspects and negative aspects in television become more and more popular topic.Different people hold different views on it.Some people insist that the television act as an important role in all of the medium,it is a best way to broaden people’s horizon.Others argue that lots of people addict to the televison and forget do nothing.For my part, I take the former side for the following reasons.Firstly,television can enrich our daily life.Its one of the important mode of the civilian entertainment.Television also offer people a various of performs and programmes which can release person mentality and physical effective,as well as active human beings’s thought.people can watch television in anywhere if they could.As for them,television possess magic powder to impulse them in front of it.Especially in cleck ,they will become a brand new person who ownfull of energic to get down to work after watching television.Secondly,televison is an educational tool that the person who thisty seek an efficiently method in learing.The learner don’t need to attending a lecture or go to school ,they can study a curriculum by watching
television.This way may save learner a large amount of money andtheir precious time.So the television is the best way to choose.Last but not least,televison is an offer a good platform to make human beings acquaint themselves with the whole world directly.Television give the lalest news to the person who concerned about the issues around the global from different angles.These angle including current hot spots ,the critical artcles and ground report in each country.As the old saying goes,television make our earth more and more smaller than before.From mentioned above, there are obviously more positive aspects of television than negative aspects.Television bring more benefits in mainly three aspects as following: an pathway of entertainment,an educational tool to learner and a good platform which make people know the world.Television make person’s life become more and more colourful than few years ago.
第五篇:雅思作文
Should countries undertake space research?
Recently, there is a growing tendency that more and more countries give priority to space research, such as exploring the universe with space shuttle, satellite and space station.As far as I am concerned, this trend may bring both advantages and disadvantages.First of all, it is universally acknowledged that aerospace technology promotes the pace of space research.In addition, the development of aerospace technology makes contribution to the progress of fundamental science fields, for instance, materials engineering, nuclear physics, engineering mechanics and so forth.As a consequence, the modern industry will gradually improve, which is beneficial to the whole society.What is more, doing space research such as exploring new planets, universe space analysis and observing the black holes, will give us a opportunity to get knowledge of more information about the universe.The moment found we a new planet which is similar with the earth, maybe we would solve the problems about inadequate resouces.However, space research also has some unfavorable effects.So large is the cost in that researching which is invested by the government that the budgeting in other aspects, education and public welfare for instance, will be decreased relatively.Provided these money were spent into public welfare, the life standard of people would more or less increase.Further more, to explore the universe, we need to send a variety of
satellites and space shuttles constantly.And yet, all those machines have certain working lives.Consequently, they will fall into the seas or float in the outer pace after they finish their missions, which leads to sea and outer space pollution.In conclusion, we should think about both the merits and the demerits of space research and make this technology been applied correctly and reasonably.Many newspapers and magazines feature stories about the private lives of famous people.We know what they eat, where they buy their clothes and who they love.We also often see pictures of them in private situations.Is it appropriate for a magazine or newspaper to give this kind of private information about people?
Nowadays, there are a increasing number of celebrities in all walk of life.They are the top runners in their specialized fields and most of them own outstanding characters and personalities.And thus, the mass media give priority on all their details of life.Some paparazzi follow the famous people and take photos in special ways to yield the curiosity of the public.Personally, I would state my objection to this issue after analyzing the following three reasons.First of all, everyone owns the right to enjoy their spare time and private time even if they are famous people.After finishing their work, they could spend their time with their family and friends, go shopping, travel and do sports for instance.People need private space to deal with personal stuffs which do not want to be disturbed.So numerous are contributes the celebrities have made to our society that they deserve to be respected but not try to expose their details of personal lives.What is more, the growing curiosity to privacies of famous people leads to a phenomenon that a new kind of journalist which is named Paparazzi comes into being.All those people need to do is track the celebrities stealthily using whatever ways.As far as I am concerned, they lose the main spirit of a journalist that is to report the event and significant things to public.To some extent, they infringe the privacy right of famous people, which can not be acceptable.In conclusion, I maintain that it is not appropriate for a magazine or newspaper to report the private information of celebrities.We fans should support them via normal ways.Unlike other countries the police in the UK do not carry guns.Some think this leaves citizens unprotected, while others consider it reduces the overall level of violence in society.Give reasons for both sides of argument and state your own opinion.Recently, it becomes a controversial issue that whether or not the police in the UK should carry guns.Some people assert that the police could protect the residents better with taking guns.Nevertheless, others hold the view that it may avoid the violence accidents without bringing guns, to some extent.Generally speaking, I prefer to the former side.On one hand, despite of the fact that the crime rate is on the decrease these years, it does not mean entire disappearance of crimes.The police should take the responsibility to deal with them, such as murder, rape and robbery cases.Provided they had guns on hand, it could be relatively successful to arrest the criminals.For instance, if the criminal takes a hostage and he is extremely aggressive, the sniper who takes a special gun within a certain distance could shoot him to death.So that the police are able to protect the citizens effectively.On the other hand, some people insist that carrying no guns contributes to the decrease of violence in society.For one thing, when criminals see the policeman putting a gun to them, they may become desperate and out
of mind, and even do anything without considering the result, which may result in unexpected innocent hurts.This would not happen if policeman does not carry a gun.For another, no one can guarantee that a policeman does not shoot the passerby by mistake when he is hurriedly chasing a criminal.As far as I am concerned, in the condition of no abuse or misuse of guns, policeman should be well trained and carry guns so that they could do their best to protect the residents efficiently and successfully.Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime.Others, however, argue that the circumstance of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.Recently, it becomes a controversial issue that whether or not the uniform punishments should be applied for every sort of crime.Some people insist that it is wise to fulfill this policy, whereas others maintain that considering the circumstance of a certain crime and its motivation before making a decision of punishment is more reasonable.As far as I
am concerned, I am inclined to be on the side of the latter one.For one thing, the initiating and surroundings of a crime, which have a variety of types, usually lead to different levels of crimes.And thus taking each factor into consideration is necessary and helpful to establish and ensure justice and equity.Provided that we treated every crime with the same punishment, there would be a large of number of innocent people involved.For instance, if a hobo steals bread in a shopping center due to hunger, it would be sorrowful that he is forced into serious punishment.For another, if we handle individual crime with considering each aspect, it is significant to establish complete relative laws and regulations, which has rules and example cases we can obey, so that each crime could be treated fairly and equitably.In addition, our society will be beneficial from that and will make a progress steadily.Nevertheless, to some extent, fixed punishments may also have positive effects on the security of the society.For example, if individuals get knowledge of that they will receive a certain severe punishment, they may think over before they commit a crime, which maybe contributes to decrease the crime rate.In conclusion, fixed punishments own some merits indeed, while it is fairly more appreciate to give criminals the punishments they deserve with taking every factor into account and obeying the laws and regulations.