第一篇:2011年廣東省高考英語作文預測復習11
英語書面表達·要點式(格式與范例)
(1)3月15日,你班全體同學去了一家老人院?;匦:?,班主任要你寫一份材料向校長匯報。匯報材料包括以下內(nèi)容:
1.時間:早上8:00從學校出發(fā);
2.活動內(nèi)容:幫老人們洗衣、打掃房間,表演節(jié)目等; 3.向老人們贈送了一些禮品;
4.受到了老人們的表揚,下午4:30回校。注意:
1.不能逐條翻譯,可以適當增加細節(jié),使短文連貫; 2.詞數(shù):100左右;
3.短文的開頭已為你寫好。
Today, we went to a home for the elderly.____________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【參考答案一】
Today, we went to a home for the elderly.We started at 8:00 at school.Half an hour later, we arrived.As soon as we got there, we first gave some gifts to the old men.And then part of us did washing for them, some of us clean the rooms and the yard.After finishing the work, we put on a show.The old men gave us a lot of applause.The old men praised us greatly.So we felt very happy.At 4:30, we left the old men with a big silk banner.How joyful we were!【參考答案二】
Today, we went to a home for the elderly.And we got there by the school bus.No sooner had we arrived than we did the work as we planed.The girl students as well as the boy students did some washing and cleaning.We also took out their beddings in the sun.At last, we had a party.Although we felt tired, we were happy in the heart.At 4:30, we left the yard for school.The old men gave us a lot of applause and a big silk banner in return.
第二篇:2011年廣東省高考英語作文預測復習10
高考英語書面表達寫作技巧·致辭(指導與范例)
一、寫作指導
在一些正式場合接待客人時,主人一般總是要說一些熱情友好的話,表示歡迎,使客人感到“賓至如歸”,這就叫歡迎致詞;當客人在你處逗留
一段時間準備離開時,主人設宴會歡送,賓主歡聚一堂,并致祝愿,這時主人說的一些話就叫歡送致詞。做好這類題目關鍵要注意兩點:一是像做其他類型書面表達題一樣,把握好提示十分重要。歡迎詞,必須交待清楚歡迎誰,客人的主要身份,同時把客人介紹給大家。歡送詞則要說清歡送哪一位,該客人什么時候離開,客人在逗留期間進行了哪些活動等。二是要熟練掌握一些習慣表達法,即一些客套話語,做這類題目時就不會感到無從下手。
二、實例與范文(01)
請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示寫一篇歡迎詞
假定英國客人瓊斯(Jones)夫婦將到你校參觀訪問,他們將把一批圖書和電腦作為禮物送給你們。你們將送一幅中國畫送給他們?,F(xiàn)在要你準備一篇歡迎詞(speech),內(nèi)容包括以下幾點:(1)歡迎英國客人來參觀我校;(2)感謝他們送的禮物;
(3)簡單介紹你們學校的情況:學校有90年的歷史,現(xiàn)在有兩座教學樓,一座辦公樓,一座實驗樓,一個圖書館,和一個大運動場。教師工作認真,學生學習努力;(4)歡迎客人在參觀后提建議,以改進學校工作。注意:90—120詞。
Ladies and gentlemen,teachers and students,I have the honour to make a speech to welcome the respected British guests — Mr Jones and Mrs Jones.Thank you very much for your gifts — a 1ot of books and computers.In return we’ll send you a famous Chinese picture as a present.Our school is a big one.It is 90 years since it was built.Now it has been equipped with two teaching buildings, a laboratory building, a library, and a playground.The teachers are strict in their work and students study hard.After you have been shown around our school, we hope you’ll give us advice on how to improve our work so that we can run our school better.Wish you to have a good time in Our school.Thank you!
第三篇:廣東省高考英語作文
寫作(共兩節(jié),滿分40分)
第一節(jié) 基礎寫作(共1小題,滿分15分)
假設你是李華,你的一位美國朋友Jane在中國學習中文兩年,即將回國,你們準備為她舉辦歡送會。請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容,給她寫一封e-mail:
【寫作內(nèi)容】
1.祝賀她順利通過考試,她的學習進步很大,為她驕傲;
2.感謝她幫助你們學習英語;
3.邀請她參加歡送會,并告知歡送會相關事宜。
1)時間:星期六晚六點;
2)地點:陽光俱樂部(The Sun Club)302房間;
3)路線:在她所住賓館門口乘坐332路公共汽車可直達。
*參考詞匯:歡送會 farewell party
【寫作要求】
只能使用5個句子表達全部的內(nèi)容;e-mail的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總句數(shù)。
【評分標準】
句子結(jié)構(gòu)的準確性和復雜度;信息內(nèi)容的完整性和連貫性。
Dear Jane, Congratulations on your passing all the exams.____________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I wish you success and fulfillment in the years ahead.Yours faithfully, Li Hua
第二節(jié)讀寫任務(共1小題,滿分25分)
閱讀下面的短文,然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。
In my last semester in university, we must take the graduation exams.The last exam was the English linguistics.Many of my classmates would cheat in exams.I hadn’t done it before.For this, sometimes my friends were surprised and laughed at me.When I felt it very difficult to remember the phonetics form, I finally gave up reviewing it and decided to try to cheat in this exam.I was too lazy to write it down on smaller paper.Therefore I directly cut the phonetics form away from the handouts.At the very beginning of the exam, I was so sad to find that there were 30–point questions about the phonetics form on the exam paper but suddenly I felt lucky because the phonetics form was just hidden in my pocket.I first finished other questions.To be honest, I was very timid and felt so bad to take out the phonetics form from my pocket.I felt so conflicted.I finally pinched the small paper into my left hand.However, I hadn’t opened the left hand to look at the form till the exam was over.I just guessed the remaining questions to finish the exam.Fortunately, I passed the exams with 75 points.But now I feel good for my failed cheating.[寫作內(nèi)容]
1.以約30個詞概括這段短文的內(nèi)容;
2.然后以約120個詞對學生考試作弊現(xiàn)象進行議論,內(nèi)容包括:
(1)學生考試作弊的原因;
(2)你對考試作弊的看法;
(3)你認為學校怎樣才能杜絕考試作弊現(xiàn)象。
[寫作要求]
1.在作文中可以使用自己親身的經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事,也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱。
[評分標準]
概括準確,語言規(guī)范,內(nèi)容合適,篇章連貫。
基礎寫作(共1小題,每小題15分)Dear Jane,Congratulations on your passing all the exams.I am delighted you have really made great progress in your two years of studying in China.We are proud of you and we all appreciate your help with our English.It’s a pity that you have to go back soon, so a farewell party for you will be held in Room 302 in the Sun Club at 6:00 pm this Saturday evening.We sincerely hope you will come and I’m sure we will have a good time together.By the way, you may take Bus No.332 in front of your hotel and it will take you directly to the club.I wish you success and fulfillment in the years ahead.Yours faithfully, Li Hua
讀寫任務(共1小題,每小題25分)
Being afraid of failing an English exam and influenced by her classmates, the author decided to cheat.She hid some paper in her pocket but gave up cheating finally, which made her feel good.Nowadays, cheating in exams is popular among some students.There are various reasons for this.Some students are lazy and don’t work hard at their lessons.Some want to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired.Others cheat in order to win a scholarship or enter a key school.However, this phenomenon will have a very bad effect on middle school students’ habit of study.Those who usually cheat in exams will never treat study seriously again because they believe they will always get good marks without working hard.Those who never cheat in exams will consider it’s unfair for them, thinking studying hard is no more necessary.In order to get rid of the bad effects, the school authority should take effective measures to help the students know how important honesty is.Meanwhile, a strict discipline for exams should be carried out.Whoever cheats should be severely punished.
第四篇:高考英語作文預測
I am a 15-year-old student in junior Grade 3.Though I am occupied with my study(被…占滿了時間,…很忙), I would like to spend time on my hobbies, such as playing the piano, surfing the Internet.One of my favourite hobby is reading.Reading has been in my life for many years,since I began to learn characters.It can not only kill the time(打發(fā)時間), but also, more importantly, help improve my comprehension ability.When reading, I can learn a lot.Reading Shakespear’s works, I know how Hamlet looks like.Reading Socrates, I can see how great ancient Greek philosophers are.Reading Lu Xu, I come back to the old time of China.Reading really affect my life.2、Different people, different hobbies.What hobbies do you have?
My hobby is singing.It’s a great hobby!It’s fun and it makes me feel proud.Singing can be used to relieve(解除)my fatigues(疲勞), and can help me improve my accent(腔調(diào)).Singing makes me happy when I“m sad.Singing songs can make you clever.I am always singing at home to share each other’s joys and sorrow(悲痛)in our life and to learn many songs.I really enjoy singing.It goes without saying that(毫無疑問)there are many different kinds of hobbies and they can not only(不僅)broaden(拓寬)our minds(智力)but also(而且)add more fun to our life.3、我的愛好(My hobby)
Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it.Tell the magazine readers.?What exactly your hobby is;
?When and how you became interested in this hobby;
?Why you enjoy your hobby;
?About your hopes and plans for the future.I enjoy reading books very much, because there are lots of interesting things in them.Two years ago, I didn't like reading very much.I had plenty of time, but I spent lots of time on playing with computers.When I was very young, I didn't think reading book was interesting, because I found nothing more interesting than the computer games.I've changed now.I enjoy reading novels, because there're lots of interesting stories.I love to read Harry Potter.That's a good novel.I know that it is one of the best-sellers in England.I'm always lose myself in the interesting stories.I hate the words like ”to be continued“ in a novel.That makes me very sad, because I don't know the end of the story.I also hate the words like ”the end", because I want to read more.Some of my friends think that I'm strange.Maybe you can find the interesting things in a book, so don't waste your time in the computers any more.If you read very much, you抣l get lots of knowledge.護環(huán)境的英語作文
How to protect our environment There are many ways for us to reduce waste ,We can do something in our daily life.First,we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere and draw anything on the wall.Second, we should clean up the classroom carefully everyday.Third,stop littering and put the batteries in special boxes.Finally, we must plant more trees.It can make our world more and more beatiful.I think these are some ways to protect the environment.Good environment depends on everyone in the earth.限塑令”英語作文
關于“限塑令”的高考英語書面表達參考范文兩篇: 根據(jù)國務院的“限塑令”,自2008年6月1日起,在所有超市、商場實行塑料購物袋有償使用制度。廣大市民對于“限塑令”有不同的看法。請針對此話題,根據(jù)下表用英語寫一篇短文。
絕大多數(shù)贊成 少數(shù)反對 我的觀點及理由
1.減少了塑料袋的使用
2.提高公眾的環(huán)保意識
3.優(yōu)化我們賴以生存的生態(tài)環(huán)境
?? 1.給購物者帶來了不便,如無法把買好的東西搬回家,或沒有零錢買商場的環(huán)保袋
2.可以通過其他的方式,如研究出分解塑料袋的方法等來保護環(huán)境
?? ???
要求:1.詞數(shù):100—120 2.不要逐條翻譯,可以適當發(fā)揮,使上下文連貫
3.參考詞匯:分解 break up 環(huán)保袋 environmentally friendly bags From June1, 2008, shops and supermarkets are forbidden from offering free plastic bags to customers, according to a new law.A nation-wide campaign against plastic bags has been launched.Nowadays, Chinese people use up to three billion plastic bags a day.While being very convenient to shoppers, plastic bags also cause serious white pollution” and waste resources.Though the ban may cause some inconvenience to shoppers, it can help reduce the use of plastic bags when people have to pay for them.Besides, the ban, in away, can promote public awareness of environmental protection.So I think it necessary to forbid shops and supermarkets from offering free plastic bags.When shopping, we can use cloth bags or baskets instead of plastic bags as we used to.環(huán)境日英語作文:Water(水)Water is very important for living things.Without water there can be no life on earth.All animals and plants need water.Man also needs water.Water is found atmosteverywhere.Even in the driest part of the world there is some water in the air.As we all have found out,water may be a solid,or a liquid or a gas.When it isa solid,it may be as hard as brick,When itis a liquid,you can pour it out of a container.When it is a gas,you cannot see or feel it.Although about 70 percent of the earth's surface is covered with water,there are many places in the world still running out of water.So we should make good use of water on earth.Protecting the Forests(保護森林)Now in some places of our country,a number of people have been cutting down the trees in the forests because they need wood and more farmland.The areas of forests are getting smaller and smaller.Some scientists say that there will be no vast forests in 20 or 30 years.It is really a terrible thing.Where the forests disappear,dust storms will occur occasionally.The weather will get hot and dry.The whole earth will become a big desert.A lot of plants and animals will disappear.Crops will not grow anywhere.Life will be difficult for everyone.The human beings will be punished for their forest-destroying activities.Therefore,we should realize the importance of taking care of our forests.We should do our best to protect our living environment and keep our mountains green,the water clean,and the sky blue.Preserving Natural Resources(保護自然資源)
Thrdugh the changes'in the ways Of making a living in a family over several gen,erations,man has been warned against waste of natural resources and emphasizing the urgent need to preserve these resources.Ever since man appeared on the earth,man's survival has been heavily relied on nature.Almost everything we use in our everyday life comes fromm'notate,ranging from the food we eat,the water we drink,to the wood which is tm'ned into furniture.With the development of technology and population growth,the amount and range of materials used has increased at an alarming rate.However,natural resources are not inexhaustible.Some reserves are already on the brink of exhaustion and there is no hope of replacing them.The widespread water shortage is an example in point.If man continued to squander natural resources with no thought for the future,the later generations would be in danger.It is up to us to take effective measures before the situation gets out of hand.據(jù)中文提示和英文書信內(nèi)容,寫一封意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于60詞的回信,信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,其字數(shù)不計入所完成的回信內(nèi)。
假如你叫Zhang Fang,是美國中學生Lucy的筆友,你收到了她的電子郵件。請根據(jù)她來信的內(nèi)容寫一封回信。針對她的困惑,談談你的看法,同時提出一些建議,并表達對她的祝愿。Dear Zhang Fang,I have been in this school for two years.My school’s not too bad.But I haven’t got used to it.Some of the teachers are very good,especially my science teachers.They try to make lessons interesting.I like to have their classes and spend much time on it.So I usually get ‘A’ in science exams.But I don’t like having English and history classes.There are too many things to memorize and they’re so boring.Besides,it seems that the teachers can only read again and again.They don’t try to make lessons interesting.Whenever the lessons start,I feel sleepy.I often get ‘C’ in the exams,sometimes ‘D’。
The final exam of this term is coming.What shall I do? Could you give me some advice?
Yours,Lucy
Dear Lucy,I’m very happy to hear from you.Don’t worry too much.Many students have the same problem like you.I think it’s very common for students to dislike memorizing.Here’s my advice.But in fact English and history are not as boring as you think.If you try the following things,you may find they are interesting and you will not feel sleepy in class again.First you had better learn the new lessons by yourself and write down the difficult points before lessons.It can make you become interested in what the take your advice,just keep silent and give her a smile.I hope what I say here can help you a lot.Han Mei
據(jù)中文提示和英文書信內(nèi)容,寫一封意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于60詞的回信。(信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,其字數(shù)不計入所完成的回信內(nèi))。請不要寫出你的校名和姓名。
75.中學生學習時間長、大力大,專家建議學生每天課后應采取適當?shù)姆绞椒潘勺约?。為此,不同的同學有不同的放松方式,有的愛看電視,有的聽音樂,有的做運動?請你談談你通過哪些方式放松自己并說說原因,談談你的感受。
提示詞語:relax,TV,music,think
The Senior High School Entrance Examination is coming.In order to make a success in the exam I think it’s high time for us to relax a little.Or we’ll be too nervous to work well in the exam.In order to relax ourselves,we can turn to some of our hobbies,different students have different ways---Some watch TV,some listen to music? But for me I enjoy taking exercise most.Whenever I feel tired,I always spend an hour(in)walking or jogging in the park.Besides,I also play table tennis with my friends after class.In my opinion,taking exercise can not only rest our brains and eyes but also help build our bodies.I think it’s really helpful to both my health and my study.I hope all of my classmates can join me in getting relaxed.I wish you all every success in the coming examination!
第五篇:廣東省高考英語作文評分標準
廣東省高考英語作文評分標準
小作文的批改是看:
1、有沒有把題目所提供的信息點都寫齊
2、是否按照所規(guī)定的用5個句子完成
3、語法的錯誤
小作文的批改顯然不是看關鍵句的大作文的批改是看:
1、內(nèi)容要點的概括(這里就要看關鍵句子了,踩中點子和語法沒有什么問題才得分。在內(nèi)容概括中,我建議你不要超過40字,40字以上也許會扣分)
2、考生所寫的內(nèi)容和所舉的例子是否切題)
3、語法是否出現(xiàn)錯誤
4、是否有閃光點(就是寫得特別出眾的句子)
你平時的作文大概寫多少行字,在高考上面按照平時的習慣寫就可以,不用去數(shù)字數(shù),一來浪費時間,二來沒有這個必要。只要不是通過老師的目測就知道你超出字數(shù)的情況下,是不會扣分的老師批改作文的速度雖快,但并不等于他只看關鍵句。如果你抱著這種想法去寫作文的話,是不可取的。畢竟這是作文,而不是主觀題,老師不可能在批改作文的時候像按照批改綜合科主觀題那樣,只看關鍵詞然后按點給分。