第一篇：2014考研英語(yǔ)作文套話總結(jié)

常用于開(kāi)頭的短語(yǔ)、句式

1．With the(rapidly)growing popularity of(computers/private cars/Jazz/football /basket ball/golf/tennis/classical music/pianos/American rock'n'roll/disco/frozen food/fast food/coca cola/coffee/telephones/mobile phones/house interior decoration/ horticulture/going abroad to study/traveling/beauty salons/insurance/credit cards/

second job/supermarkets/pets)inChina，the quality of our lives have been considerably changed.2.With the(rapid)growth of(our economy/population/private enterprises/light

industry/housing industry,)many problems such as(water shortages, traffic jams and industrial pollution/waste of energy, lack of professionals and chaotic management)are beginning to surface.3.With the development of(science and technology/market economy,/electronics industry/women liberation movement/high education)more and more people come to realize that...4.Currently, there is a widespread concern over(illegal publication/drug abuse/

alcohol abuse/drunk driving/high school dropouts/teenage pregnancy/corruption of civil servants/state owned companies in deficit/unemployment/high criminal rate/high inflation rate/sexual discrimination/smoking/children with a single parent/traffic accidents/fake products/pornography/disregard of public properties/grain production/ environmental pollution/acid rains/wildlife extinction/children abuse/food shortage/ water shortage/excessive use of chemical fertilizers/traffic jam/rapid urbanization/ overpopulation/tax frauds/fire hazards around us/waste of food/waste of energy/ negative influence of western cultures/violence/decrease of farmland).5.Currently, there is a serious concern that(many state owned companies are in deficit.../quite a few Chinese cities face the problems of water shortages, industrial pollution and waste of energy).6.The government is/We are seriously concerned with(overpopulation/high inflation rate/drug abuse.)

7.In the last two decades/In the past tell years, millions of(private

enterprises/supermarkets/beauty salons/fast food restaurants/garages/private schools)have mushroomed all over China.8.In recent years, many Chinese families have owned(cars/telephones/video cameras/computers...)

9.Nowadays, a heated debate/discussion about...is under way in China.Some people believe that....whereas others argue that...10.There are some reasons for owning(private cars/personal computers).To begin with....Next....Last....There are, on the other hand, many reasons against it.First....Second....Finally....11.There are many advantages and :disadvantages in(owning a car)

12.Now an increasing number of people come to realize that..13.There is no doubt that...14.There are some basic differences between(the large and small enterprises)In the small enterprise you....In the large enterprise you...15.There are various/at least three ways/possible techniques/problems/methods)to do something.16.Smoking/Alcoholic beverage should be banned from college campuses for two reasons.The first reason is that...The second reason is that...(On the one hand....On the other hand....)

17.The possible solutions of(the energy crisis/water shortages/these social problems)depend an three factors...18.Thetwo major reasons responsible for(the rapid economic growth/the widespread of fake products)are...19.Different people have different attitudes towards...Some are in favor of...while others are against...20.When it comes to(private cars/trade protection/abortion/human right/

urbanization/market economy/recycling/banning fireworks etc,)most people believe that...;but other people argue that...(二)常用于結(jié)尾的短語(yǔ)、句式

(Phrases and Sentences Used to End an Essay)在結(jié)尾段中還可以考慮下面的表達(dá)方法 如進(jìn)行預(yù)見(jiàn)，提出建議，做出評(píng)議，發(fā)出號(hào)召或指出解

決方法等

1.It is hoped that we should place much emphasis on/pay more attention to

2.To conclude, we can see that(the best way/the possible solution)is...3.In short,(shortage of water, decrease of fertile fields and environmental pollution)are the major problems to be solved to(increase grain production.)

4.In order to make our world a better place in which to live we should make great efforts to....5.In a word, there are three suggestions we must follow, only in this way can we(achieve a great success).6.It is time for us to take an active part in...7.Let us work hand in hand to(solve these social problems.)

8.It goes without saying that....9.I wont to(be a teacher/do sth)not only because...but also because...10.Who is to say that(you will not be the victim of fake products again and again/ our scientists may not provide a better theory)

第二篇：2014考研英語(yǔ)作文套話總結(jié)

常用于開(kāi)頭的短語(yǔ)、句式

1．With the(rapidly)growing popularity of(computers/private cars/Jazz/football/basket ball/golf/tennis/classical music/pianos/American rock'n'roll/disco/frozenfood/fast food/coca cola/coffee/telephones/mobile phones/house interior decoration/horticulture/going abroad to study/traveling/beauty salons/insurance/credit cards/

second job/supermarkets/pets)inChina，the quality of our lives have been considerablychanged.2.With the(rapid)growth of(our economy/population/private enterprises/light

industry/housing industry,)many problems such as(water shortages, traffic jams andindustrial pollution/waste of energy, lack of professionals and chaotic management)arebeginning to surface.3.With the development of(science and technology/market economy,/electronicsindustry/women liberation movement/high education)more and more people come torealize that...4.Currently, there is a widespread concern over(illegal publication/drug abuse/

alcohol abuse/drunk driving/high school dropouts/teenage pregnancy/corruption of civilservants/state owned companies in deficit/unemployment/high criminal rate/highinflation rate/sexual discrimination/smoking/children with a single parent/trafficaccidents/fake products/pornography/disregard of public properties/grain production/environmental pollution/acid rains/wildlife extinction/children abuse/food shortage/water shortage/excessive use of chemical fertilizers/traffic jam/rapid urbanization/overpopulation/tax frauds/fire hazards around us/waste of food/waste of energy/negative influence of western cultures/violence/decrease of farmland).5.Currently, there is a serious concern that(many state owned companies are indeficit.../quite a few Chinese cities face the problems of water shortages, industrialpollution and waste of energy).6.The government is/We are seriously concerned with(overpopulation/highinflation rate/drug abuse.)

7.In the last two decades/In the past tell years, millions of(private

enterprises/supermarkets/beauty salons/fast food restaurants/garages/privateschools)have mushroomed all over China.8.In recent years, many Chinese families have owned(cars/telephones/videocameras/computers...)

9.Nowadays, a heated debate/discussion about...is under way in China.Somepeople believe that....whereas others argue that...10.There are some reasons for owning(private cars/personal computers).To beginwith....Next....Last....There are, on the other hand, many reasons against

it.First....Second....Finally....11.There are many advantages and :disadvantages in(owning a car)

12.Now an increasing number of people come to realize that..13.There is no doubt that...14.There are some basic differences between(the large and small enterprises)

In the small enterprise you....In the large enterprise you...15.There are various/at least three ways/possible techniques/problems/methods)todo something.16.Smoking/Alcoholic beverage should be banned from college campuses for tworeasons.The first reason is that...The second reason is that...(On the one hand....On the other hand....)

17.The possible solutions of(the energy crisis/water shortages/these social

problems)depend an three factors...18.Thetwo major reasons responsible for(the rapid economic growth/the widespreadof fake products)are...19.Different people have different attitudes towards...Some are in favor of...while others are against...20.When it comes to(private cars/trade protection/abortion/human right/

urbanization/market economy/recycling/banning fireworks etc,)most people believe that...;but other people argue that...(二)常用于結(jié)尾的短語(yǔ)、句式

(Phrases and Sentences Used to End an Essay)在結(jié)尾段中還可以考慮下面的表達(dá)方法 如進(jìn)行預(yù)見(jiàn)，提出建議，做出評(píng)議，發(fā)出號(hào)召或指出解

決方法等

1.It is hoped that we should place much emphasis on/pay more attention to

2.To conclude, we can see that(the best way/the possible solution)is...3.In short,(shortage of water, decrease of fertile fields and environmentalpollution)are the major problems to be solved to(increase grain production.)

4.In order to make our world a better place in which to live we should make greatefforts to....5.In a word, there are three suggestions we must follow, only in this way can we(achieve a great success).6.It is time for us to take an active part in...7.Let us work hand in hand to(solve these social problems.)

8.It goes without saying that....9.I wont to(be a teacher/do sth)not only because...but also because...10.Who is to say that(you will not be the victim of fake products again and again/our scientists may not provide a better theory)

第三篇：考研英語(yǔ)作文總結(jié)句

1.Any gov which is blind to this point may pay a heavy price.任何政府忽略這一

點(diǎn)將付出，巨大的代價(jià)

2.Nowdays 當(dāng)前

3.at the mere mention of 一提到

4.In view of the seriousness of this problem,effective measures should be taken

before things get worse.考慮到問(wèn)題的嚴(yán)重性，在事態(tài)進(jìn)一步惡化之前，必須采取有效地措施

5.It is disputable that 無(wú)可爭(zhēng)辯

6.Although this view is widely held ,this is little evidence that...7.In fact, ve to admit the face that… 事實(shí)上，我們不承認(rèn)…這個(gè)事實(shí)

8.We should spare no effort to the …我們應(yīng)該不余力地

9.This is a matter of ld death-a matter no country can afford to ignore.這是一個(gè)關(guān)

系國(guó)家生死的問(wèn)題，任何國(guó)家都不能忽視

10.This view is now beintioned by more and more people.這一觀點(diǎn)越來(lái)越多的質(zhì)

疑

11.Despite many obvious antages of …,it is not without its problem.12.Many experts point out that,along with the development of modern society,it is an

inevitable resulr and ts no way to adviod it.許多專家指代社會(huì)發(fā)展的必然結(jié)果，無(wú)法避免

13.Keep a favorable pon in… 保勢(shì)

14.As for me,I’m firmly convinced that 就我而言，我堅(jiān)定地認(rèn)為

15.In the first place首先

16.But is it really case？

17.Negative impact 負(fù)面響

18.Sth have worsened sth…使…惡化

19.It is suggested that governmeht to make efforts to 建議政府應(yīng)該努力…

20.In conclusion,we ke into account toblem rationally and place more emphasize

on… 總之，我們應(yīng)該理智考慮這一問(wèn)題，重視…

21.Need sth more ever 比任何時(shí)候需要

22.Sth have gone bad to worse 每況愈下

23.So precious is te that wn’t affort to waste it.時(shí)間如此珍貴，我們不能浪費(fèi)它

24.There is no one but longs to 人們都希望

25.Around the c迫在眉睫

26.We should bring to people the value of doing sth 我們應(yīng)該讓人們知道…的價(jià)

值

27.As a popular goes,”everything has two sides”.28.Moderni program 現(xiàn)代化建設(shè)

29.Be linked to …與…有關(guān)

30.Quite a相當(dāng)多

31.No inventis received more praise and abuse than Internet.沒(méi)有一項(xiàng)發(fā)明像互聯(lián)

網(wǎng)一樣同時(shí)受的贊揚(yáng)和批評(píng)

第四篇：考研英語(yǔ)總結(jié)

研英寫(xiě)作常用100句精選

1．隨著經(jīng)濟(jì)的快速發(fā)展with the rapid development of economy

2．人民生活水平的顯著提高 / 穩(wěn)步增長(zhǎng)

the remarkable improvement / steady growth of people’s living standard

3．先進(jìn)的科學(xué)技術(shù) advanced science and technology

4．面臨新的機(jī)遇和挑戰(zhàn) be faced with new opportunities and challenges

5．人們普遍認(rèn)為 It is commonly believed / recognized that…

6．社會(huì)發(fā)展的必然結(jié)果 the inevitable result of social development

7．引起了廣泛的公眾關(guān)注 arouse wide public concern / draw public attention

8．不可否認(rèn) It is undeniable that… / There is no denying that…

9．熱烈的討論 / 爭(zhēng)論 a heated discussion / debate

10.有爭(zhēng)議性的問(wèn)題 a controversial issue

11．完全不同的觀點(diǎn) a totally different argument

12．一些人 …而另外一些人 … Some people… while others…

13.就我而言 / 就個(gè)人而言 As far as I am concerned, / Personally，14．就…達(dá)到絕對(duì)的一致 reach an absolute consensus on…

15．有充分的理由支持 be supported by sound reasons

16．雙方的論點(diǎn) argument on both sides

17．發(fā)揮著日益重要的作用 play an increasingly important role in…

18．對(duì)…必不可少 be indispensable to …

19．正如諺語(yǔ)所說(shuō) As the proverb goes:

20．…也不例外 …be no exception

21．對(duì)…產(chǎn)生有利 / 不利的影響 exert positive / negative effects on…

22．利遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)大于弊 the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages.23．導(dǎo)致，引起 lead to / give rise to / contribute to / result in

24．復(fù)雜的社會(huì)現(xiàn)象 a complicated social phenomenon

25．責(zé)任感 / 成就感 sense of responsibility / sense of achievement 26.競(jìng)爭(zhēng)與合作精神 sense of competition and cooperation

27.開(kāi)闊眼界 widen one’s horizon / broaden one’s vision

28．學(xué)習(xí)知識(shí)和技能 acquire knowledge and skills

29．經(jīng)濟(jì) / 心理負(fù)擔(dān) financial burden / psychological burden

30．考慮到諸多因素 take many factors into account / consideration

31.從另一個(gè)角度 from another perspective

32．做出共同努力 make joint efforts

33.對(duì)…有益 be beneficial / conducive to…

34．為社會(huì)做貢獻(xiàn) make contributions to the society

35．打下堅(jiān)實(shí)的基礎(chǔ) lay a solid foundation for…

36．綜合素質(zhì) comprehensive quality

37．無(wú)可非議 blameless / beyond reproach

39．致力于 / 投身于 be committed / devoted to…

40.應(yīng)當(dāng)承認(rèn) Admittedly，41．不可推卸的義務(wù) unshakable duty

42.滿足需求 satisfy / meet the needs of…

43．可靠的信息源 a reliable source of information

44．寶貴的自然資源 valuable natural resources

45．因特網(wǎng) the Internet（一定要有冠詞，字母 I 大寫(xiě)）

46．方便快捷 convenient and efficient

47．在人類生活的方方面面 in all aspects of human life

48．環(huán)保（的）environmental protection / environmentally friendly

49．社會(huì)進(jìn)步的體現(xiàn) a symbol of society progress

50．科技的飛速更新 the ever-accelerated updating of science and technology 51．對(duì)這一問(wèn)題持有不同態(tài)度 hold different attitudes towards this issue

52．支持前 / 后種觀點(diǎn)的人 people / those in fovor of the former / latteropinion

53．有 / 提供如下理由/ 證據(jù) have / provide the following reasons / evidence

54．在一定程度上 to some extent / degree / in some way

55.理論和實(shí)踐相結(jié)合 integrate theory with practice

56.…必然趨勢(shì) an irresistible trend of…

57．日益激烈的社會(huì)競(jìng)爭(zhēng) the increasingly fierce social competition

58．眼前利益 immediate interest / short-term interest

59．長(zhǎng)遠(yuǎn)利益.interest in the long run

60．…有其自身的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn) … has its merits and demerits / advantages and disadvantages

61．揚(yáng)長(zhǎng)避短 Exploit to the full one’s favorable conditions and avoid unfavorable ones

62．取其精髓，取其糟粕 Take the essence and discard the dregs.63．對(duì)…有害 do harm to / be harmful to / be detrimental to

64．交流思想 / 情感 / 信息 exchange ideas / emotions / information

65．跟上…的最新發(fā)展 keep pace with / catch up with/ keep abreast with the latest development of …

66．采取有效措施來(lái)… take effective measures to do sth.67．…的健康發(fā)展 the healthy development of …

68．有利有弊 Every coin has its two sides.No garden without weeds.69．對(duì)…觀點(diǎn)因人而異 Views on …vary from person to person.70．重視 attach great importance to…

71．社會(huì)地位 social status

72．把時(shí)間和精力放在…上 focus time and energy on…

73．?dāng)U大知識(shí)面 expand one’s scope of knowledge

74．身心兩方面 both physically and mentally

75．有直接 /間接關(guān)系 be directly / indirectly related to…

76.提出折中提議 set forth a compromise proposal

77.可以取代 “think”的詞 believe, claim, maintain, argue, insist, hold the opinion / belief that

78．緩解壓力 / 減輕負(fù)擔(dān) relieve stress / burden

79．優(yōu)先考慮 / 發(fā)展… give(top)priority to sth.80．與…比較 compared with… / in comparison with

81.相反 in contrast / on the contrary.82．代替 replace / substitute / take the place of

83．經(jīng)不起推敲 cannot bear closer analysis / cannot hold water

84．提供就業(yè)機(jī)會(huì) offer job opportunities

85.社會(huì)進(jìn)步的反映 mirror of social progress

86．毫無(wú)疑問(wèn) Undoubtedly, / There is no doubt that…

87．增進(jìn)相互了解 enhance / promote mutual understanding

88．充分利用 make full use of / take advantage of

89．承受更大的工作壓力 suffer from heavier work pressure

90．保障社會(huì)的穩(wěn)定和繁榮 guarantee the stability and prosperity of our society

91．更多地強(qiáng)調(diào) put more emphasis on…

92．適應(yīng)社會(huì)發(fā)展 adapt oneself to the development of society

93．實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想 realize one’s dream / make one’s dream come true

94.主要理由列舉如下 The main reasons are listed as follows:

95.首先 First，F(xiàn)irstly，In the first place, To begin with

96．其次 Second, Secondly, In the second place

97.再次 Besides，In addition, Additionally, Moreover, Furthermore

98.最后 Finally, Last but not the least, Above all, Lastly，99.總而言之 All in all, To sum up, In summary, In a word，100．我們還有很長(zhǎng)的路要走 We still have a long way to go.考研英語(yǔ)作文八類常用高頻詞匯

第一篇：詞匯篇

1、經(jīng)濟(jì)：

economic globalization（經(jīng)濟(jì)全球化）sustainable development（可持續(xù)發(fā)展）unfair competition（不正當(dāng)競(jìng)爭(zhēng)）

crack down on fake commodities（打假）boom（繁榮）

fierce competition（激烈競(jìng)爭(zhēng)）credit crisis（信用危機(jī)）stabilize prices（穩(wěn)定物價(jià)）

2、文化：

great and profound（博大精深的）integration and interaction（融合交匯）crash（碰撞）

charming（極具魅力的）splendid（壯麗輝煌的）English fever（英語(yǔ)熱）

3、環(huán)保：

environment-friendly（生態(tài)型的，環(huán)保的）threat of global warming（全球變暖的威脅）

promote fundamental shifts in the economic system and mode of economic growth（促進(jìn)經(jīng)濟(jì)體制和經(jīng)濟(jì)增長(zhǎng)方式的轉(zhuǎn)變）

curb environmental pollution/ bring the pollution under control（治理環(huán)境污染）develop renewable resources（開(kāi)發(fā)可再生資源）a low-carbon economy（低碳經(jīng)濟(jì)）

4、科技：

science and technology（科學(xué)技術(shù)）web-addiction（沉迷網(wǎng)絡(luò)）computer crime（電腦犯罪）e-commerce（電子商務(wù)）virtual life（虛擬生活）information era（信息時(shí)代）cyber romance（網(wǎng)戀）surf the Internet（網(wǎng)上沖浪）

5、就業(yè)：

applicant（申請(qǐng)人）

position available/ vacant position（空缺職位）competent（能勝任的）be qualified for（合格的）proficiency（熟練程度）

job arrangement and benefit（工作待遇和福利）promotion(晉升)gender-biased（性別歧視的）appearance-biased（相貌歧視的）

6、大學(xué)生活/教育：

cultivate（培養(yǎng)）

further one’s study（深造）quality education（素質(zhì)教育）foster abilities（培養(yǎng)能力）

relieve the burden on students（減輕學(xué)生負(fù)擔(dān)）be occupied with so much schoolwork（忙于功課）place emphasis on（以…為重心）comprehensive（全面的，廣泛的）practical capability（實(shí)際能力）duck-stuffing（填鴨式）

7、社會(huì)現(xiàn)象：

enlightening（富有啟發(fā)的）

cause alarm and attention（引起了警惕和重視）set good example for（為…樹(shù)立榜樣）dedicate（做貢獻(xiàn)）take action（采取行動(dòng)）

ensure implementing activities（確保執(zhí)行）vulnerable（易誘惑的，易受影響的）be supposed to（應(yīng)該）

8、人物特征、情感描寫(xiě)：

strong-minded（堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的）industrious（勤奮的）promising（有前途的）dynamic（有生氣的）responsible（有責(zé)任心的）influential（有影響力的）profound（淵博精深的）devoted（忠實(shí)的，投入的）warm-hearted（熱心的）第二篇：句型 詞組搭配

1.隨著經(jīng)濟(jì)的繁榮 with the booming of the economy 2.隨著人民生活水平的顯著提高 with the remarkable improvement of people's living standard 3.先進(jìn)的科學(xué)技術(shù) advanced science and technology 4.為我們?nèi)粘Ｉ钤鎏砹饲槿?add much spice / flavor to our daily life 5.人們普遍認(rèn)為 It is commonly believed that…

6.我同意前者（后者）觀點(diǎn) I give my vote to the former / latter opinion.7.引起了廣泛的公眾關(guān)注 sth.has aroused wide public concern./ sth has drawn great public attention.8.利遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)大于弊 The advantages far outweigh the disadvantages.9.開(kāi)闊眼界 widen one's horizon / broaden one's vision 10.考慮到諸多因素 take many factors into consideration 11.從另一個(gè)角度 from another perspective 12.致力于/ 投身于 be committed / devoted to…

13.日益激烈的社會(huì)競(jìng)爭(zhēng) the increasingly keen social competition 14.…有其自身的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn) … has its own merits and demerits / pros and cons 15.對(duì)…有害 do harm to / be harmful to / be detrimental to 16.交流思想/ 情感/ 信息 exchange ideas / emotions / information 17.跟上…的最新發(fā)展 keep pace with / keep abreast with the latest development of… 18.…的健康發(fā)展 the healthy development of…

19.把時(shí)間和精力放在…上 focus one's time and energy on… 20.導(dǎo)致很多問(wèn)題 give rise to / lead to / spell various problems 21.可以替代think的詞 believe, claim, maintain, argue, insist, hold the opinion / belief / view that 22.優(yōu)先考慮/發(fā)展… give(top)priority to sth.23.與…比較 compared with…/ in comparison with 24.提供就業(yè)機(jī)會(huì) offer job opportunities

36句諺語(yǔ)考研寫(xiě)作

1.Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。

2.God helps those who help themselves.天助自助者。3.Easier said than done.說(shuō)起來(lái)容易做起來(lái)難。4.Where there is a will,there is a way.有志者事竟成。5.One false step will make a great difference.失之毫厘，謬之千里。

6.Slow and steady wins the race.穩(wěn)扎穩(wěn)打無(wú)往而不勝。7.A fall into the pit,a gain in your wit.吃一塹，長(zhǎng)一智。8.Experience is the mother of wisdom.實(shí)踐出真知。9.All work and no play makes jack a dull boy.只工作不休息，聰明孩子也變傻。

10.Beauty without virtue is a rose without fragrance.無(wú)德之美猶如沒(méi)有香味的玫瑰，徒有其表。11.More hasty,less speed.欲速則不達(dá)。12.It’s never too old to learn.活到老，學(xué)到老。13.All that glitters is not gold.閃光的未必都是金子。14.A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.千里之行始于足下。

15.Look before you leap.三思而后行。

16.Rome was not built in a day.偉業(yè)非一日之功。17.Great minds think alike.英雄所見(jiàn)略同。18.well begun,half done.好的開(kāi)始等于成功的一半。19.It is hard to please all.眾口難調(diào)。

20.Out of sight,out of mind.眼不見(jiàn)，心不念。21.Facts speak plainer than words.事實(shí)勝于雄辯。22.Call back white and white back.顛倒黑白。23.First things first.凡事有輕重緩急。24.Ill news travels fast.壞事傳千里。

25.A friend in need is a friend indeed.患難見(jiàn)真情。26.live not to eat,but eat to live.活著不是為了吃飯，吃飯為了活著。

27.Action speaks louder than words.行動(dòng)勝過(guò)語(yǔ)言。28.East or west,home is the best.金窩銀窩不如自家草窩。29.It’s not the gay coat that makes the gentleman.君子在德不在衣。

30.Beauty will buy no beef.漂亮不能當(dāng)飯吃。31.Like and like make good friends.趣味相投。32.The older, the wiser.姜是老的辣。33.Do as Romans do in Rome.入鄉(xiāng)隨俗。

34.An idle youth,a needy age.少壯不努力，老大徒傷悲。35.AS the tree,so the fruit.種瓜得瓜，種豆得豆。

36.To live is to learn,to learn is to better live.活著為了學(xué)習(xí)，學(xué)習(xí)為了更好的活著。

第五篇：關(guān)于套話作文

關(guān)于套話作文

“套話”作文有這樣幾個(gè)特點(diǎn)，第一，題材總是選用歷史文化(文學(xué))名人；第二，文章結(jié)構(gòu)表現(xiàn)為“穿靴戴帽三段論”，即用三段左右的歷史文化名人的事跡為作文主體，再加上一個(gè)開(kāi)頭和一個(gè)結(jié)尾；第三，作文的主題總是局限在一個(gè)淺顯的平面上而不做深入開(kāi)拓。也就是說(shuō)，作文的材料熟爛、結(jié)構(gòu)模式化和主題平面化構(gòu)成了“套話作文”的三要素。根據(jù)我們幾年來(lái)閱卷的不完全統(tǒng)計(jì)，出現(xiàn)在這類“套話”作文中的歷史文化名人，以屈原、陶淵明、蘇軾為最多，可稱為“套話”作文中的“三巨頭”。其他常見(jiàn)的還有莊子、項(xiàng)羽、司馬遷、嵇康、王維、李白、杜甫、柳宗元、李商隱、陸游、李清照、曹雪芹。不管你出的題涉及愛(ài)國(guó)主義還是環(huán)境保護(hù)，關(guān)懷底層大眾還是建設(shè)精神文明，他們都可以用上述這些材料敷衍。當(dāng)然，我們指出“套話作文”的典型表現(xiàn)，并不意味只要使用了歷史文化名人材料就一定是“套話作文”了。閱卷者要根據(jù)上述三要素，對(duì)作文進(jìn)行綜合判斷。

這種“套話作文”的壞作用是顯而易見(jiàn)的。第一，它使高考作文遴選考生的區(qū)分度受到嚴(yán)重影響，寫(xiě)作能力高的考生與寫(xiě)作能力低的學(xué)生得分趨近：

第二，更為嚴(yán)重的是，“套話作文”背后的中學(xué)作文教學(xué)機(jī)制影響一代人的寫(xiě)作能力甚至思維能力的提高。

為了體現(xiàn)高考公平公正的原則，準(zhǔn)確引導(dǎo)中學(xué)作文教學(xué)，我們從去年開(kāi)始對(duì)“套話作文”的打分執(zhí)行從嚴(yán)的政策。一般情況下，這類“套話作文”最高分不超過(guò)50分。如果語(yǔ)言比較流暢，思路清晰，可打在43-44分的基準(zhǔn)分左右。表達(dá)特別突出的，也可突破50分，但不宜進(jìn)入一類卷。而表達(dá)能力較差的，也可打在40分以下。行走在消逝中（44-45）

光陰似箭，歲月如梭，我們正行走在消逝中，積極、樂(lè)觀?? ——題記

“還記得年少時(shí)的夢(mèng)嗎？像一朵不凋零的花??”不知怎的，我每聽(tīng)到這首歌時(shí)，總會(huì)思緒萬(wàn)千，時(shí)間總是那樣吝嗇，不多給人一分一秒，就那樣悄無(wú)聲息地從人們指尖劃過(guò)。雖然我們正在這消逝中行走，但不必悲傷，保持好的心態(tài)，前方的道路將更明亮、寬敞。

我們行走在消逝中。但童年的記憶一直存留在我們的腦海中。雖然隨著年齡的增長(zhǎng)和思想的成熟，那些美麗的夢(mèng)想、單純的快樂(lè)似乎在一步步離我們遠(yuǎn)去，學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)的繁重更是讓我們無(wú)法再像孩時(shí)那樣無(wú)拘無(wú)束的玩耍，但是在閑遐之余，慢慢回味童年時(shí)和小伙伴一起玩捉迷藏、老鷹捉小雞??的游戲時(shí)，也能讓我們的心在瞬間感到無(wú)比輕松、舒暢。或許美好的童年的確已經(jīng)消逝了，但行走在消逝中的我們?nèi)钥梢员３帜穷w純真的心，讓快樂(lè)永遠(yuǎn)伴隨我們左右。

社會(huì)行走在消逝中。但一顆奉獻(xiàn)的心，和諧的人際關(guān)系不會(huì)隨時(shí)間消逝。還記得2006感動(dòng)中國(guó)的英雄人物——叢飛嗎？他把一生都投入到了慈善事業(yè)，他為了捐助貧困山區(qū) 的孩子而公義演出400余場(chǎng)，自己卻過(guò)著檢仆的生活。叢飛用舞臺(tái)構(gòu)造了課堂，用歌聲點(diǎn)亮了希望。他的行動(dòng)告訴了人們，即使社會(huì)正行走在消逝中，處于這個(gè)大社會(huì)的人們都應(yīng)保持那份善良，那份助人為樂(lè)的精神，我們每一個(gè)人都應(yīng)為構(gòu)建和諧社會(huì)盡自己的一份力量。

國(guó)家行走在消逝中。但科技的發(fā)達(dá)使我國(guó)在消逝中進(jìn)步。時(shí)間是在消逝，但我國(guó)的科學(xué)技術(shù)卻沒(méi)有隨時(shí)間的消逝而退步，相反，它正在突飛猛進(jìn)。就在我國(guó)航天員楊利偉乘載著太空飛船飛上宇宙的一瞬間，標(biāo)志著我國(guó)的科技又進(jìn)步了，我國(guó)千年的“飛天”夢(mèng)想終于實(shí)現(xiàn)了，就在這消逝中，我國(guó)卻實(shí)現(xiàn)了一次跨越，這足以證明了，抱以積極、樂(lè)觀的心態(tài)行走在消逝中，我們終將有所收獲，相信我們民族會(huì)取得更輝煌的成就。行走在消逝中，既有“流水落花春去也”的惆悵，也有“誰(shuí)道人生無(wú)再少”的曠達(dá)??但不管怎樣，請(qǐng)相信，只要我們保持積極、樂(lè)觀的心態(tài)，美好的明天必將在前方不遠(yuǎn)處等待著我們！

昨夜西風(fēng)凋碧樹(shù)

昨夜西風(fēng)凋碧樹(shù)，獨(dú)上高樓、望斷天涯路?！}記

一、李白

是誰(shuí)？是黃沙漫天，北風(fēng)吹雁中騎驢高歌的歌者么？是以霓為線，以虹為鉤的海上釣鰲客么？是遍訪青山綠水、且歌且行的游者么？在那個(gè)煙花三月的時(shí)代，人們對(duì)你的期望是歌功頌德，取悅帝王換取高官厚祿；而你，偏偏要獨(dú)上高樓，在朝要高力士脫靴磨墨，在野要放白鹿于青崖之間。你傲然，“鐘鼓饌玉不足貴，但愿長(zhǎng)醉不復(fù)醒”。于是你注定要孤獨(dú)，“舉杯邀明月，對(duì)飲成三人”。

是的，你的執(zhí)傲使得原來(lái)你該有的高官厚祿都消逝了，然而你并沒(méi)有因?yàn)檫@一消逝而一無(wú)所有，相反，當(dāng)我們回望當(dāng)朝，站在盛唐中間的不是帝王，而是你！

二、蘇東坡

是誰(shuí)？是揀盡寒枝終不肯棲的寒鴉么？是舉杯邀明月的飲者么？是穿越了十年生死痛苦一場(chǎng)的癡漢么？在那個(gè)“群星薈萃”的時(shí)代，人們對(duì)你的期望本是韜光養(yǎng)晦，游戲筆墨罷了，而你卻偏偏選擇竹枝芒鞋，踏遍天涯路，嘆“大江東去，浪滔盡，千古風(fēng)流人物”，感“人生到處之何似，恰似飛鴻踏雪泥”，你不為“蝸角虛名，蠅頭微利”所動(dòng)容，只愿“青山綠水泛秋浪”而超脫。

三、魯迅

是誰(shuí)？是為國(guó)民麻木，國(guó)家不前的彷徨嗎？是為一代又一代有志青年的站起而高呼的吶喊者嗎？是為不能為國(guó)家多做一件事而悲痛的傷心者嗎？在那個(gè)醫(yī)術(shù)落后，貧苦的年代，人們對(duì)你的期望本是留學(xué)深造，在醫(yī)術(shù)上有超高造詣，而你卻偏偏放棄美好的前途，執(zhí)意回國(guó)，并棄醫(yī)從文，為劉和珍君而吶喊，呼“忍看朋輩成新鬼”。你的筆尖直刺向敵人的心臟。是的，你義無(wú)反顧使你承受敵人潑來(lái)的污水，使你失去了光明前景，然你卻在這消逝中得到了尊重，得到了國(guó)人的景仰，得到了民族的肯定。

六朝舊事隨流水，但煙衰草凝綠。這些行走在消逝中的偉人，在無(wú)盡的消逝中得到永生。專家組評(píng)價(jià)：

這份試卷把“套話作文”的格式做到了極致。而且，里面的大量文字是抄襲的。這樣一篇作文，也有人給了49分。經(jīng)人檢舉，我們?cè)诰W(wǎng)上查對(duì)后，確定它為大部分抄襲卷，現(xiàn)給分?jǐn)?shù)為22分。印發(fā)給諸位老師，作評(píng)分的樣卷。提醒大家注意辨別。

二、關(guān)于真情實(shí)感的文章 鄰窗靠墻（55分）

學(xué)習(xí)生活總在忙忙碌碌中度過(guò)一天又一天。看似單調(diào)的生活，卻時(shí)常充滿著樂(lè)趣。班級(jí)里熱鬧的事莫過(guò)于調(diào)換座位。每次調(diào)換總能打破班里原有的平靜。有時(shí)候大組輪換，有時(shí)候個(gè)別調(diào)動(dòng)，但總會(huì)有些人怨聲載道，有些人欣喜若狂。

慢慢地我總結(jié)出了一個(gè)規(guī)律：坐在中間兩大組的同學(xué)總不愿換成鄰窗或者靠墻的位置。因?yàn)槟莾弘x黑板太遠(yuǎn)。而每當(dāng)我被換到鄰窗或是靠墻的地方時(shí)，我心里總有說(shuō)不出的快樂(lè)。坐在靠窗的位置，光線是最充足的。教室在四樓，樓下有一棵千年古松，枝頭一直長(zhǎng)到了窗口。我總喜歡伸手去觸摸它，當(dāng)微風(fēng)拂過(guò)，枝葉劃過(guò)手心時(shí)癢癢的感覺(jué)很舒服。下課后，教室里亂成一團(tuán)，而我這兒卻十分清靜。因?yàn)猷彺昂苌儆腥藭?huì)來(lái)打撓。我會(huì)趴在窗邊，閉上雙眼，讓陽(yáng)光撫摸。那暖暖的陽(yáng)光驅(qū)散了我身心的疲憊。偶爾會(huì)有一只調(diào)皮的鳥(niǎo)兒順著樹(shù)枝飛進(jìn)教室。教室里頓時(shí)沸騰起來(lái)。有些女生嚇得躲到了桌子底下。有些愛(ài)玩的男生則會(huì)用掃帚去打它?？蓱z的小鳥(niǎo)只得驚慌失措地逃出窗外。我看著它遠(yuǎn)去的身影，不禁笑了起來(lái)。坐在靠墻的位置，雖然少了一些生機(jī)與活力。但是墻可了我最大的依靠。累了的時(shí)候就靠在墻上，仿佛一切煩惱都消失了。我可以暫時(shí)不去思考，只求片刻的安心。雪白的墻上留下了我的身溫，是那么親切與溫暖。

鄰窗靠墻的日子總在不停地輪換。每當(dāng)我被換到那兒時(shí)，臉上總有藏不住的笑容，同學(xué)們都很驚訝，他們?cè)趺磿?huì)明白我對(duì)它們的衷愛(ài)呢？

人來(lái)到世上是來(lái)經(jīng)歷磨難的。我不這么認(rèn)為。人來(lái)到世上是來(lái)感受世間的多姿多彩。人的一生總在辛勤的工作，因此人應(yīng)該學(xué)會(huì)忙中偷閑。所謂生有所息，物有所止。短暫的休息為的是換來(lái)更多的力量再次投入工作。

作為學(xué)生的我們，一刻不停地學(xué)習(xí)讓我們精疲力盡。如同一根緊繃的弦，一撥就斷。試著讓自己放松調(diào)到適當(dāng)?shù)奈恢茫桓袕椥缘南也拍軌驕惓鰞?yōu)美悅耳的旋律。

鄰窗靠墻的日子是我學(xué)習(xí)之外的快樂(lè)之源?！霸赣兴ⅰ蔽覍?duì)自己說(shuō)?？戳丝创巴?，一道道明媚的陽(yáng)光正照射進(jìn)來(lái)打在了雪白的墻上，劃出了一段段優(yōu)美動(dòng)聽(tīng)的青春樂(lè)章。

老南瓜之思（55分）

子在川上曰：“逝者如斯夫，不舍晝夜?！睔q月與流水“嘩嘩嘩”的流淌，氣勢(shì)洶洶卻又沉郁頓錯(cuò)。

然而記憶里已然發(fā)黃的瓜田里，那個(gè)我魂?duì)繅?mèng)縈的老南瓜依舊不動(dòng)聲色的散發(fā)陣陣醇想。兒時(shí)，借居三嬸家，日子清苦卻也無(wú)憂，小孩子孫對(duì)美味總是連一點(diǎn)招架之力都沒(méi)的，于是心里最常掛念的便是三嬸家瓜田里那個(gè)已經(jīng)發(fā)黃的老南瓜。心中暗暗祈盼了好些日子，才終于盼到三嬸那句：“去把那瓜摘來(lái)吧?！蹦樕线珠_(kāi)大大的笑意，連應(yīng)聲好都怕耽擱時(shí)間，便徑直奔向瓜田。

懷抱著瓜，從鄉(xiāng)間路上走回來(lái)的我，只覺(jué)得滿心歡喜，倒是老南瓜的樣子已經(jīng)記不清，只記得燉爛后入口的觸覺(jué)是軟滑酥膩，冰甜清香。那甜在心頭，香在鼻間的滋味卻是永遠(yuǎn)封存于記憶中了。

然而現(xiàn)在，再也沒(méi)有吃到看到過(guò)老南瓜了。那記憶中的醇香已隨時(shí)間流逝。

極力想挽留，卻挽留不下的便是流逝了吧，流逝出了傷感，流逝出了悵惘。如同“落花有意隨流水，流水無(wú)意逝落花”的無(wú)奈與凄婉。這流逝，怎一個(gè)“慟”字了得？！然而，古人又說(shuō)：“不蹇不流，不止不行?！毕雭?lái)“逝去”并非一個(gè)完全消極的名詞，在“消逝”之后，延伸出來(lái)的將是一個(gè)新紀(jì)元的生命勃發(fā)。因?yàn)榉暧曷┧牟菸轁u漸消逝，才有巍峨城堡的堅(jiān)不可摧；因?yàn)椤昂V篤”馬蹄聲的消逝，才有火車轟鳴而過(guò)的尖嘯；因?yàn)橐靶U斗爭(zhēng)的消逝，才有和諧社會(huì)的新貌。垂垂老矣的鳳凰浴火涅磐，重生出新一代王者霸氣。也許消逝只是一種手段，為進(jìn)步而生的手段。

消逝與進(jìn)步，似輪轉(zhuǎn)的日月，攜手共舞曼妙的桑巴，而后成就天地宇宙之玄秘。因其玄秘，仁者悵惘，智者曠達(dá)。因其玄秘，吾以為倒不若悵惘其所逝，歡欣其所進(jìn)，全宇宙之造化，全余心之所感。

我依然在路上走著，卻已不是鄉(xiāng)間路，懷抱的也已不是老南瓜，而是高速運(yùn)轉(zhuǎn)的筆記本，卻依然聞到老南瓜的醇香。

原來(lái)，消逝的只是物質(zhì)，留傳的卻是情意，而快樂(lè)的是悠遠(yuǎn)的文明。

夢(mèng)里的明暗憂傷 ——銘記消逝的古老

行走在消逝中，我們不該忘記那些古老，歷史應(yīng)該被銘記，為那一刻絢爛奪目的文明。——題記

夢(mèng)里，湖邊信步。隱約聽(tīng)到你低低的呻吟，吟唱那只屬于你的詩(shī)篇。我猛然回頭，卻沒(méi)有發(fā)現(xiàn)燈火闌珊處的你，四處張望，亦不能尋到那一處似鈴般的落吟。其實(shí)那條古弄，并不長(zhǎng)。

其實(shí)那片樹(shù)林，并不大。

其實(shí)那口老井，并不深。

只是童年的歡聲笑語(yǔ)都和這片自然古樸融在了一起，只是還沒(méi)有懵懂就已經(jīng)和這里連成了一體。

只是每天清晨就連庸懶的雛貓都會(huì)爭(zhēng)著惺忪的睡眼在那條清石板路上蹣跚前行，只是每當(dāng)夏夜就連吵嚷的蟬兒也會(huì)靜下心來(lái)聽(tīng)那林間的鳥(niǎo)鳴。

只是每當(dāng)黎明推開(kāi)那扇敦實(shí)的木門就會(huì)看到爺爺磨的豆?jié){，只是每當(dāng)仲夏總有奶奶的蒲扇輕輕搖著送小孫女進(jìn)入甜美的夢(mèng)鄉(xiāng)。

于是弄堂也就成了天然的屏障，連接卻也隔離著喧鬧與靜謐。

于是樹(shù)林也就成了美麗的避風(fēng)港，如大隱于市的文人墨客，叫人得一處精神的寄托和歸宿。

于是，弄堂，樹(shù)林，井，老屋，人，成了一幅唯美的畫(huà)面，一個(gè)世外的桃源。

在孫女還小的時(shí)候，她總以為，這里，會(huì)是她一輩子的樂(lè)園。而“消逝”，于她，真的太過(guò)陌生了。

然而童年，只是懵懂的童年，該面對(duì)的，任誰(shuí)都不能逃避。

爺爺長(zhǎng)滿老繭的雙手和沉重的水桶碰到一起時(shí)的蒼老第一次讓小孫女感到了心疼；奶奶蹣跚的步伐第一次讓孫女覺(jué)得自己虧欠了他們太多太多。

孫女開(kāi)始動(dòng)搖自己的決定。走吧，爺爺奶奶，去住那套不用自己打水磨豆?jié){的新房子，去住那個(gè)不用自己搖蒲扇不用自己去河邊洗衣服的新房子。勞累了大半輩子，是該歇歇讓我們來(lái)照顧你們的時(shí)候了。孫女不止一次這樣說(shuō)了。去住那個(gè)沒(méi)有生氣鳥(niǎo)籠一樣的小盒子嗎？爺爺每次都這樣反問(wèn)。

是啊，這里的建筑帶著古老的印記見(jiàn)證著時(shí)代的滄桑，這里的一切帶著最原始的古樸出現(xiàn)在現(xiàn)代文明的路上。離開(kāi)，讓它消逝，又怎么舍得？然而這一次，再倔強(qiáng)也沒(méi)有用了，拆遷辦的通知下來(lái)了，它給了這里一個(gè)合理的消逝理由——這里，屬于舊城改造的勢(shì)力范圍。最后一次，小孫女喝著甘甜的井水，輕輕說(shuō)一句：再見(jiàn)，我會(huì)想你；最后一次，小孫女和每一棵陪她長(zhǎng)大的樹(shù)告別，默默念一句：再見(jiàn)，我會(huì)記得你；最后一次，小孫女安靜地躺在奶奶的懷里，在蒲扇的輕搖下沉沉地進(jìn)入了夢(mèng)鄉(xiāng)??老屋，消逝了；古井，消逝了；老林，消逝了??小鎮(zhèn)上僅存的古老，在文明的行走中，消逝了。逝去的，似夢(mèng)，但多了幾分殘酷，文明在消逝中行走，在行走中進(jìn)步，這是歷史的必然，是我們。而我們有理由銘記，那些消逝的古老、單純與美好；有理由銘記，在那一刻絢爛奪目的文明。談幾點(diǎn)看法：

1.要鼓勵(lì)指導(dǎo)學(xué)生寫(xiě)自己對(duì)生活的感受，寫(xiě)自己對(duì)社會(huì)現(xiàn)象的看法。力求寫(xiě)出自己的與眾不同的看法。

2.要幫助學(xué)生正確把握寫(xiě)“真情實(shí)感”。寫(xiě)“真情實(shí)感”主要是要寫(xiě)自己，但不是全部。可以寫(xiě)別人、古人及洋人

3.三段論式的用古人做事例的文章盡量不要寫(xiě)，要寫(xiě)要用新鮮的事例。

4.指導(dǎo)學(xué)生作文時(shí)不要去背別人的好文章。要學(xué)別人的立意、結(jié)構(gòu)、選材、語(yǔ)言等。5.要幫助學(xué)生建立自己的作文材料庫(kù)（事例材料與思想材料）。