第一篇:2017年考研英語(yǔ)作文分度分析
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2017年考研英語(yǔ)作文分度分析
一、英語(yǔ)科目考試難度有所下降,作文不易跑題,但只評(píng)語(yǔ)言精彩難獲高分
凱程考研老師表示,從我的寫(xiě)作一直到最后的3小時(shí)直播作文,如果大家把所有的寫(xiě)作課程都放在一塊的話,你就會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)今天的出題從作文這個(gè)板塊來(lái)說(shuō),與去年以及大前年、前年相比,難度都有所下降。所有的方向都是單調(diào)的,不會(huì)有一些雙向的,正反對(duì)比的話題,比如我們很早08年考入的,既要從近的角度,遠(yuǎn)的角度,呼應(yīng)漫畫(huà)當(dāng)中“遠(yuǎn)”那個(gè)字,最后的網(wǎng)絡(luò)從這副漫畫(huà)所體現(xiàn)的是一個(gè)負(fù)面的消極的狀態(tài),最后引入這個(gè)板塊。
今年的作文題拿到之后,方向很清晰,也就是說(shuō),今年的作文不容易走題,以前總是說(shuō)每年光北京地區(qū),被評(píng)為全文走題和部分走題的試卷占了三成,這就意味著寫(xiě)作語(yǔ)言即使很精彩依然拿不到非常好的分?jǐn)?shù)。
二、英語(yǔ)一大看圖作文,從家庭關(guān)系、子女與父母關(guān)系入手組織觀點(diǎn)
凱程考研老師:最讓我感動(dòng)的是英語(yǔ)一的作文,左邊這副圖是媽媽牽著女兒,緊接著女兒長(zhǎng)大了,媽媽變老了,無(wú)非說(shuō)的是家庭關(guān)系,子女父母的關(guān)系。最后的三小時(shí),凱程考研在線的最后直播三小時(shí)分析過(guò)了,為什么我們要照顧老人,中國(guó)目前的社會(huì)福利保障制度不夠,中國(guó)的人口比例。養(yǎng)老足球賽,是從反面說(shuō),要尊老,這幅圖媽媽是從正面來(lái)寫(xiě),告訴我們要照顧母親。我的小黃書(shū)當(dāng)中的大作文的模板,正面話題直接可以套,添幾個(gè)單詞就可以了。整個(gè)這篇寫(xiě)作,如果大家回憶一下寫(xiě)作精講課,最后一段,父母與子女是否住在一塊?我記得原題叫做老年父母是否跟成年后的子女住在一塊?這個(gè)文章給過(guò)一段結(jié)尾,我支持住在一塊,你可以把它作為整個(gè)的結(jié)尾,如果不住在一塊,你的理由是什么?住在一塊的理由是可以給人一種歸屬感,不僅是老年人,我們自己都有一種歸屬感,建立四世同堂大家庭的氛圍。
三、英語(yǔ)一小作文,寫(xiě)建議信,提醒大家要從三個(gè)角度入手
凱程考研老師:英語(yǔ)一小作文,關(guān)鍵落在哪個(gè)詞?叫做問(wèn)問(wèn)這個(gè)校長(zhǎng),提出一些建議,你要向校長(zhǎng)提建議,如何改進(jìn)學(xué)生的“身體狀態(tài)(健康狀況)”這個(gè)詞。
寫(xiě)作精講課程當(dāng)中,我講過(guò)舉例子的幾個(gè)案例,提到體育運(yùn)動(dòng)與身體健康,促進(jìn)發(fā)展之間的關(guān)系。那個(gè)舉例有三個(gè)變量,體育鍛煉身體好,身體好了之后可以在工作當(dāng)中表現(xiàn)出更好的狀態(tài),促進(jìn)個(gè)人和公司的發(fā)展,最終推動(dòng)世界發(fā)展。當(dāng)時(shí)舉了一個(gè)馬拉松比賽的例子,如果沒(méi)有健康的體魄,就不能怎樣怎樣,那一個(gè)例子就有四五十個(gè)單詞。其次,再次回到最后三小時(shí)直播課堂,整個(gè)的高輔課。小作文必須練建議信。今年很多人提問(wèn),朱老師你怎么又進(jìn)入到了建議信,建議信是必須要寫(xiě)的,總有一部分讓你提出一些想法,提出建議,怎么提高身體鍛煉,無(wú)非從我們所講的三個(gè)角度入手。學(xué)校要制訂政策,緊接著到最后,改變我們的觀念,不要認(rèn)為學(xué)生階段的任務(wù)就是學(xué)習(xí),身體鍛煉也是學(xué)生重要的時(shí)刻,最后可以比創(chuàng)業(yè)經(jīng)歷,創(chuàng)業(yè)需要體力,可以舉俞敏洪[微博]的例子。
四、英語(yǔ)二大作文,以柱狀圖形式考察城鎮(zhèn)人口與鄉(xiāng)村人口比例,難度不大
今年英語(yǔ)二的大作文,城鎮(zhèn)人口和鄉(xiāng)村人口的比例,是柱圖形式。如果細(xì)細(xì)去看,一定要用一個(gè)更加貼切的說(shuō)法,凱程考研,為學(xué)員服務(wù),為學(xué)生引路!
城鎮(zhèn)人口在直線上升,鄉(xiāng)村人口的數(shù)量在直線下跌,大家如果寫(xiě)出我們
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天考,因?yàn)橐欢〞?huì)考。
2017年要考研同學(xué)動(dòng)起來(lái),抓住基礎(chǔ)。每年考完英語(yǔ)之后所有人都在說(shuō)英語(yǔ)很難,絕大部分的人都覺(jué)得英語(yǔ)難。但有些聽(tīng)了我課的,認(rèn)認(rèn)真真練習(xí)寫(xiě)作的,就不會(huì)有難的感覺(jué),就是因?yàn)樗麄兟?tīng)我的。前提是系統(tǒng)地學(xué)習(xí),打好了堅(jiān)實(shí)的基本功,腦子里積累了很多的素材。少一些功力主義的追求,真真正正打好基本功,考研英語(yǔ)真的不難,祝福大家!感謝大家來(lái)到凱程考研在線考研英語(yǔ)的課堂!
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第二篇:2017年考研英語(yǔ)作文備考方法分析
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2017年考研英語(yǔ)作文備考方法分析
英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是大多考研學(xué)生的短板,為幫助2017考研學(xué)生提升英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平,凱程老師從考研大綱要求出發(fā),直擊重點(diǎn)詞匯、句型,引導(dǎo)同學(xué)們正確把握英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作走向,使同學(xué)們正式考試時(shí)面對(duì)作文題目“有話可說(shuō)”,“有料可抖”。
英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作大綱要求
考研英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作分為大作文和小作文兩部分。大作文主要以情景、圖表、圖畫(huà)等短文寫(xiě)作為主,字?jǐn)?shù)要求一般為:英語(yǔ)一在160~220字之間,英語(yǔ)二在150字以上。而小作文一般以私人和公務(wù)信函、備忘錄、摘要、報(bào)告等應(yīng)用文為主,且英語(yǔ)一和英語(yǔ)二都要求字?jǐn)?shù)在100字左右。
考研學(xué)生想要提高英語(yǔ)作文成績(jī),必須達(dá)到最基本的要求:首先語(yǔ)法、拼寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確,用詞恰當(dāng);其次要遵循文章的特定文體格式,不能一團(tuán)麻往上鋪;此外,合理組織文章結(jié)構(gòu),使文章內(nèi)容銜接、連貫;同時(shí)根據(jù)寫(xiě)作目的和特定讀者,選擇恰當(dāng)語(yǔ)域。
小作文段落構(gòu)建
小作文一般也就是應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作,大致包括建議信、申請(qǐng)信、致歉信、咨詢信、感謝信、投訴信、邀請(qǐng)信、推薦信等。
小作文在正文創(chuàng)作時(shí),最好分三個(gè)環(huán)節(jié)構(gòu)建。首先,用2~3句開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山,表達(dá)意圖 ;然后用8~9句陳述內(nèi)容 ;最后再用1~2句點(diǎn)明主題即可,這里可以使用常見(jiàn)的“套話”。
需要注意的是,正文創(chuàng)作時(shí)字?jǐn)?shù)必須達(dá)到100字左右,不能太長(zhǎng)也不能太短,否則容易被扣分。此外文章必須切題,明確要求了推薦就要寫(xiě)推薦,感謝就要感謝,切勿胡亂抄襲所謂的“模板”。同時(shí)語(yǔ)域要合適,正式要用正式語(yǔ)言和詞匯,不能動(dòng)不動(dòng)就使用類(lèi)似“hi”這種,會(huì)讓閱卷老師覺(jué)得太過(guò)隨意。
大作文段落構(gòu)建考研大作文一般主要以情景、圖表、圖畫(huà)等短文寫(xiě)作為主。
圖表類(lèi)短文主要包括餅圖、表格、柱形、曲線等。情景和圖畫(huà)類(lèi)則多以話題形式出現(xiàn),比如2009年網(wǎng)絡(luò)的遠(yuǎn)與近,2010年的火鍋文化,2015年的手機(jī)影響等等。因此,提醒同學(xué)們平時(shí)多關(guān)注社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)以及與社會(huì)發(fā)展相關(guān)的話題。
大作文正文部分,建議采用如下圖所示的三段式構(gòu)建。
大作文寫(xiě)作需要注意的事項(xiàng)包括:語(yǔ)域要合適,正式要用正式語(yǔ)言,像詞匯、口語(yǔ)及縮略形式就不得在文中出現(xiàn)。對(duì)于圖畫(huà)作文一般為說(shuō)明文和議論文,必須做到有理有據(jù),邏輯清晰。此外,避免過(guò)多使用小單句,盡量使用長(zhǎng)句或者從句;詞匯句式做到多樣,切記不要使用題干給出的提示詞,這樣很容易被扣分;盡量采用“總分總”格式,并正確使用邏輯連接詞。
句式詞匯推薦 圖表描述:
數(shù)據(jù)圖表a data graph/chart/diagram/illustration/table 餅圖用pie chart 直方圖或柱形圖用bar chart/histogram 趨勢(shì)曲線圖用line chart/curve diagram 表格圖用table 折線統(tǒng)計(jì)圖 broken line graph 流程圖或過(guò)程圖用flow chart / sequence diagram
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程序圖用processing/procedures diagram 固定不變 fixed in time 百分比 accounts for ??% of the tota,l takes up ??% in the whole chart 一系列的時(shí)間段中轉(zhuǎn)變用changes over time 波動(dòng)用fluctuate/rebound/undulate/wave 穩(wěn)定用remain stable / stabilize / level off,As can be seen from the table/chart/diagram/graph/figures 上升/下降/平穩(wěn):
increase,to go up, rise, jump, leap, shoot,an increase,a growth, an upward trend, a jump, reach to 1000, increase to the peak of 1000.climb to 1000...to fall, decrease , decline drop, collapse, go down, a drop ,a decline, a slide ,a fall decline to 200, drop to the bottom of 200...drop to 200....have little change, hardly change,remain steady/constant, stay the same 時(shí)間表達(dá):
from??to??,between??and??,during??and??,at the start of ??,by the end of ??,at the end of ??,throughout ??
對(duì)比:
comparing with, make a comparison with ,in contrast , on the contrary.......英語(yǔ)作為考研公共課,每一位同學(xué)都在劫難逃。通過(guò)今天的分享,希望能幫助同學(xué)們提高詞匯儲(chǔ)備,積累高分模板,在正式考試時(shí)創(chuàng)作出優(yōu)秀的且可以得高分的美文!
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第三篇:考研英語(yǔ)書(shū)信類(lèi)小作文分析
信函從類(lèi)別上分類(lèi)包括以下幾種類(lèi)型:建議信、投訴信、求職信、辭職信、感謝信、道歉信、表?yè)P(yáng)信、詢問(wèn)信等。從信函對(duì)象來(lái)分的話,包括私人信函和公務(wù)信函。
一、英文書(shū)信格式
縮進(jìn)式:稱(chēng)呼頂格寫(xiě),正文每段第一行向后縮進(jìn)4個(gè)字母,段與段之間不空行,落款位于中間偏右的位置。
齊頭式:稱(chēng)呼、正文和落款均頂格寫(xiě)。正文中,段與段之間空一行。
考研(微博)應(yīng)用文萬(wàn)學(xué)海文英語(yǔ)考研輔導(dǎo)老師們建議大家采用縮進(jìn)式格式。★ 稱(chēng)呼
書(shū)信寫(xiě)作的稱(chēng)呼語(yǔ)大致分為兩種情況:
書(shū)信的情況
1)寫(xiě)給團(tuán)
體、組織或
機(jī)構(gòu)的負(fù)
責(zé)人 稱(chēng)呼語(yǔ) ①給不認(rèn)識(shí)的人 Dear Sir or Madam,/ To Whom It Many Concern ②給認(rèn)識(shí)的人 性別+姓:Dear Mr.Wang 性別+職務(wù):Dear Mr./Ms.President/Professor/Manager
職務(wù)+姓名:Dear President(James)Wang
2)寫(xiě)給個(gè)
人 ①認(rèn)識(shí),但關(guān)系同1)中的② 不太親密
②熟人或親屬 直呼其名:Dear Mary, Dear John
注:president的含義:總統(tǒng)、董事長(zhǎng)、總裁、大學(xué)校長(zhǎng)、會(huì)長(zhǎng)、主席等。
★ 正文
考研應(yīng)用文一般有三點(diǎn)提綱,即三個(gè)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。因此,考生應(yīng)嚴(yán)格按照大綱要求寫(xiě)成三句,每句表達(dá)一個(gè)提綱要點(diǎn),順序不要打亂,做到文字條理清晰,簡(jiǎn)明準(zhǔn)確。書(shū)信作文一般7~8句,使用3~5個(gè)關(guān)聯(lián)詞,3~5個(gè)從句,首尾兩段可套用一些固定句型。
★ 落款
a)落款包括結(jié)束語(yǔ)和署名兩部分。
b)結(jié)束語(yǔ)是表示禮節(jié)的套語(yǔ),寫(xiě)在正文下面兩三行處的右側(cè),從中間寫(xiě)起,第一個(gè)詞的開(kāi)頭字母要大寫(xiě),末尾用逗號(hào)。一般為“Yours sincerely/truly,”,根據(jù)考研大綱,署名一致為L(zhǎng)i Ming,注意不能寫(xiě)自己的真實(shí)姓名。另外,考研書(shū)信類(lèi)不要求寫(xiě)日期。
二、英語(yǔ)書(shū)信模板
1,建議信
Dear___,I am quite delighted to learn that_寫(xiě)信的原因.according to my point of view,表述建議內(nèi)容.On the one hand,提出建議的理由一.On the other hand,建議的理由二,With regard to 具體到某一方面的建議, I suggest建議的具體內(nèi)容.If 供被建議人的選擇.it is unnecessary for you to建議內(nèi)容的另一方面.What is more, 其它的建議.I am sure對(duì)建議內(nèi)容所作的承諾.Please inform me期望被建議人作出的回應(yīng).Sincerely yours,Signature
2,投訴、批評(píng)、抱怨信
Dear___,I am寫(xiě)信人的身份.I venture to write you a letter concerning抱怨的內(nèi)容.The focal point of the complaint is抱怨的中心點(diǎn).for one thing,抱怨內(nèi)容的一個(gè)方面.for another,_抱怨內(nèi)容的另一個(gè)方面_.honestly speaking,客觀的評(píng)論.but抱怨產(chǎn)生的原因
All in all, there is still much room for improvement.Before I take any further action, it is my hope表達(dá)本人的愿望.Thank you for your time and kind consideration.Sincerely yours,signature
3,道歉信
Dear ___,I am tremendously sorry to tell you that闡述道歉的理由.now, I am writing you this letter of apology to show my deep regret.please accept my sincere apology.I hope you will understand me and excuse me for請(qǐng)求對(duì)方給予原諒的理由.The reason for my absence was due to 造成過(guò)失的原因.I had no way out because自己當(dāng)時(shí)的處境和情況.Therefore it is not in my power to過(guò)失產(chǎn)生的結(jié)果.Naturally, I want to suggest建議下次再實(shí)現(xiàn)的愿望.I shall be obliged if you商定下次見(jiàn)面的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn).We may meet again and I hope to see you soonSincerely yours,Signature.4,感謝信
Dear___,I am now writing these few lines to express my sincere thanks for感謝的原因.I would like to know how much your對(duì)方所給予的幫助等meant to me.you have a positive genius for對(duì)收信人某方面的贊譽(yù).I not only enjoyed對(duì)收信人給予幫助等的反應(yīng)一,but also對(duì)收信人給予幫助等的反應(yīng)二.I shall ever remember ___as one of the most___ in my life.I hope to have the opportunity of reciprocating.I will feel very honored and pleased if you表達(dá)自己回報(bào)的心愿.I am looking forward to seeing you next time!
I repeat my thanks again for your___.please give my kind regards to your___.Yours truly,signature
5,求職申請(qǐng)信
Dear___,I am applying for the position of想申請(qǐng)的職務(wù) advertised in___.I major in所學(xué)的專(zhuān)業(yè),my training in所接受過(guò)的培訓(xùn)definitely meets your qualifications.my complete resume is attached.I will graduate in畢業(yè)時(shí)間from畢業(yè)院校.in addition to the required courses of my major, I have選修課程.I also have some experience in社會(huì)工作經(jīng)驗(yàn).May I have a personal interview at your convenience? I can be reached by telephone聯(lián)系方式.Sincerely yours,signature
6,祝賀信
Dear___,I have learnt with delight that you祝賀的理由, I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on被祝賀人所取得的成就.You must be祝賀他很棒.And I feel very happy for you.被祝賀人所取得的成績(jī)is quite exciting news!I know this is surely owing to 被祝賀人做出的努力.Kindly let me know when you詢問(wèn)對(duì)方何時(shí)有空.I hope表達(dá)愿望my best wishes for your___.Sincerely yours,Signature
7,邀請(qǐng)信
Dear___
開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山提出事件活動(dòng),地點(diǎn),時(shí)間,It would be pleasant/honored to have you here.During the party time/conference, we will have lots of activities/points you will be interested in.First,舉行活動(dòng)之一.second舉行活動(dòng)之二.I know/believe you will be very interested in對(duì)這次活動(dòng)感興趣.first/for one thing,受邀請(qǐng)人參加的理由之一.second/for another, 受邀請(qǐng)人參加的理由之二.the
conference/the party would not be complete without you.The party/conference will begin at舉行時(shí)間and we do hope you can come.Sincerely yours,signature
8,推薦信
Dear___,It affords me much pleasure to recommend所要推薦的人to you.during his/her graduate years he/she was被推薦人在學(xué)校擔(dān)任的職務(wù).As his/her和被推薦人的關(guān)系I found him/he被推薦人的優(yōu)點(diǎn)his/her performance in the school years was outstanding.first, he/she had been優(yōu)點(diǎn)之一and showed great talents in優(yōu)點(diǎn)表現(xiàn)的方面.in addition, he/she has a very pleasant personality.He/she has developed a strong sense of被推薦人的性格特征,and working with him/her is always和被推薦人一起時(shí)候的感覺(jué).I can state that he/she has all the qualities of being所具備的特征.Therefore, I here recommend him/her to you with all my heart.Should you favor him/her with a position in your company? I am sure that his/her future conduct will prove worthy of your confidence.Sincerely yours,Signature
Best wishes to___.11,辭職信
Dear___,I am writing to inform you about my decision to resign from my current position.I plan to leave my job here辭職的工作.There are several reasons involved, first of all, 辭職的原因之一,in addition, _辭職的原因之二__.most importantly, 辭職的原因之三.therefore, I would like to為什么選擇辭職.Please let me take this chance to thank you for the rewarding experience I have enjoyed during my employment.I am sorry for any inconvenience caused to you.my best wishes for the company’s continued growth.Sincerely yours,Signature
總之,以上萬(wàn)學(xué)海文英語(yǔ)考研輔導(dǎo)老師們總結(jié)了英語(yǔ)二小作文的模板,2012年的考生在復(fù)習(xí)的時(shí)候可以套用這些模板,與此同時(shí),要注意小作文的格式和要求。
第四篇:考研英語(yǔ)作文
2014年考研作文萬(wàn)能模板
英語(yǔ)大作文一共分為三種。
積極類(lèi),比如文化融合,合作,點(diǎn)一盞心燈等等,都可以用積極類(lèi)的模板。另一種是消極類(lèi)的,比如11年的環(huán)境污染,溫室花朵,過(guò)量捕魚(yú)這是一類(lèi)。還有一類(lèi)就是中性類(lèi),自信啊,網(wǎng)絡(luò)利與弊啊,這類(lèi)的。
但是這三種模板的三段謀篇布局是一樣一樣的。描述圖片+解釋圖片+我們?cè)撛趺崔k。有時(shí)候他會(huì)讓你舉一個(gè)人物的例子,這就更簡(jiǎn)單了,都是提前準(zhǔn)備好的。別著急,后面都會(huì)說(shuō)到,先說(shuō)說(shuō)這第一段。
第一段的話,80%的作文書(shū),第一句準(zhǔn)是as vividly+你看到圖中的東西,都用爛了的,咱們不用,咱們的宗旨就是與眾不同。第一句怎么寫(xiě),咱們先不說(shuō),先說(shuō)第二句。第二句一般會(huì)寫(xiě),這個(gè)東西對(duì)我們的生活產(chǎn)生深遠(yuǎn)的影響。例子,1、正如圖片中生動(dòng)形象的描畫(huà)了一個(gè)文化火鍋,里邊有莎士比亞、佛bulabula~~(后半句用非限定性定語(yǔ)從句,這個(gè)待會(huì)講)。
2、文化對(duì)人們的生活產(chǎn)生了深遠(yuǎn)的影響。所以金翅給出的第一段第2句(一、2用此表示,下同)的表達(dá)方法。
Multi-culture does exert such a profound effect on our life that it revolutionizes the way of people’s living and thinking.多元文化的確對(duì)我們的生活產(chǎn)生了深刻的影響,這種影響使我們生活和思考的方式發(fā)生了變革。大家想一
想,是不是把多元文化替換成,網(wǎng)絡(luò)、環(huán)境問(wèn)題、合作、自信都很通順呢,而且用does強(qiáng)調(diào)動(dòng)詞 exert,讓人眼前一亮。這樣咱們的一、2就完事了?,F(xiàn)在說(shuō)
一、1,先上模板。As is subtly revealed in the portrayal,there is a hot-pot,which involves Shakespeare and Buddha.這句話的亮點(diǎn)在于非限定性定語(yǔ)從句,把兩句話合二為一。有同學(xué)說(shuō)了,這不還是as系列的么?這就需要變通啊,句子是死的人是活的呀。咱們的策略是把第一句和第二句調(diào)換一下位置,別讓老師一看就是as,吐都吐死了。
綜上所述第一段前兩句是:
一、1:Multi-culture does exert such a profound effect on our life that it revolutionizes the way of people’s living and thinking.一、2 As is subtly revealed in the portrayal,there is a hot-pot,which involves Shakespeare and Buddha.多元文化對(duì)我們的生活產(chǎn)生了深刻的影響,這種影響使我們生活和思考的方式發(fā)生了變革。正如這幅圖片所描繪的,這里有一個(gè)火鍋,它包括莎士比亞和佛。是不是感覺(jué)“正如”用的有承上啟下的作用呢?是不是很傳神呢?11年的環(huán)境作文中,金翅用的此法,從最后結(jié)果來(lái)看,分?jǐn)?shù)還是灰常讓我滿意的。
第一段第三句就很簡(jiǎn)單了,一般一張pp下邊會(huì)有一句話或者一個(gè)注釋?zhuān)蹃?lái)個(gè)中譯英就行了,前邊要加上修飾的模板。
一、3:And below the cartoon,there is a topic which says:the cultural hotpot is both delicious and nutritious.要是沒(méi)
有配文字怎么辦呢?咱也有辦法。用一個(gè)感嘆句搞定,What a meaningful hotpot!有人說(shuō)就一個(gè)感嘆句四個(gè)詞,后邊會(huì)不會(huì)湊不齊字?jǐn)?shù)呢?前邊不是說(shuō)過(guò)了么,文思如尿崩,思如泉涌,不必?fù)?dān)心字?jǐn)?shù)。額,最好還是擔(dān)心一下,字?jǐn)?shù)別寫(xiě)不下了。當(dāng)時(shí)11考場(chǎng)上寫(xiě)到最后一段,結(jié)果還剩三行,無(wú)奈最后一段草草收尾的。第一段的三句話,咱們就都介紹完了。
第二段一般是要介紹這個(gè)PP的深遠(yuǎn)意義或者產(chǎn)生的原因,寫(xiě)三條。第二段一共五句話,第一句說(shuō)這個(gè)主題很有意義,2~4句闡述意義或者解釋原因,第五句一個(gè)總結(jié)搞定。模板來(lái)啦,看官注意啦~~
二、1:The thought-provoking drawing mirrors a common phenomenon in contemporary society that there is the positive influence of cultural blending.(用了一個(gè)同位語(yǔ)從句,要是消極類(lèi)的就用negative)
二、2~
二、4分別寫(xiě)三條理由意義,可以用First and foremost,What is more,Last but not least來(lái)連接,也可以不用,這個(gè)看個(gè)人習(xí)慣。我不太習(xí)慣用連接詞,原因有二。一是顯得很生硬,二是這三條理由的句式本來(lái)就很復(fù)雜,再加上First and foremost顯得句式灰常的混亂。這個(gè)還是看個(gè)人習(xí)慣。
又有同學(xué)會(huì)說(shuō)了,這個(gè)理由和意義,我們沒(méi)話說(shuō)。這也是我這個(gè)帖子最精華的所在,就是傳說(shuō)中華麗麗的萬(wàn)能積極理由,萬(wàn)能消極理由。是金翅從備考四級(jí),六級(jí),考研的過(guò)程中,精選又精選的萬(wàn)能句子,所謂萬(wàn)能理由,就是能自圓其說(shuō)
就行,在四六級(jí)和考研中屢試不爽。閑話少敘,直接上句子。萬(wàn)能積極理由(10條):
1、*** can broaden our horizon ,enlarge our scope of knowledge and enrich our spiritual civilization.(***拓寬我們的視野,擴(kuò)大我們的知識(shí)面,豐富我們的精神文明。積極類(lèi)的王牌理由,適合很多題材,網(wǎng)絡(luò),文化,讀書(shū),而且用到了罕有的修辭——排比。氣勢(shì)磅礴,大開(kāi)大合,老師眼前一亮)
2、*** provides us with convenience.(最萬(wàn)能的理由,凡是有優(yōu)點(diǎn)的,都能給我們提供方便,你就想吧,是不是?)
3、*** meet such kind of need in physical and psycholegical aspests.(滿足我們的身心健康,短小精悍)
4、Of all the ingredients of success,*** seems to be the first within our control.(在成功的所有元素中,***看似是我們最能把我的。是個(gè)意志品質(zhì)類(lèi)的話題,自信,合作都可以拿來(lái)直接用,而且相當(dāng)?shù)娜A麗)
5、*** win the appreciation of the public.(***贏得了公眾的共識(shí),有重要的用處,后邊說(shuō)。)
6、*** is a kind of lubricant for interpersonal relationships.(***是一種人際關(guān)系的催化劑。網(wǎng)絡(luò)、多元文化,愛(ài)心,適合很多題材。)
7、stimulate one’s interest and tap one’s potential.(刺激我們的興趣,激發(fā)
我們的潛能)
8、Nothing,except***,can play a more indispensable role in the cultivation of one’s personality.(華麗的句式多變,湊字?jǐn)?shù)的佳句啊)
9、*** is an essential element of success.(沒(méi)詞時(shí)救場(chǎng)用的)
10、*** is the immortal theme of harmonious development.(沒(méi)詞時(shí)救場(chǎng)用的)
萬(wàn)能消極理由(4條):
1、the goal of achieving a harmonious society may fall through under the negative influence of ***.(超萬(wàn)能,所有的消極的東西,不論是環(huán)境污染,網(wǎng)絡(luò)問(wèn)題,溫室花朵,過(guò)分捕魚(yú),交通擁擠,都會(huì)引起社會(huì)的不和諧,或許僅僅是在某一小方面??佳凶魑拿?,沾邊就對(duì),不要太計(jì)較細(xì)節(jié),老師也沒(méi)時(shí)間細(xì)想,放心的用吧。)
2、*** bring great loss to both the individual and the whole society.(***對(duì)個(gè)人和社會(huì)帶來(lái)?yè)p失)
3、*** kill a great mass of time.(浪費(fèi)大量的時(shí)間)
4、It is a epitome of the disharmonious relation between the society and human being in a specific aspect of ***(這是一個(gè)人類(lèi)和社會(huì)在***方面不和諧的縮影,五星級(jí)的華麗句子,***可以是環(huán)境,可以是網(wǎng)絡(luò),可以是交通)
有同學(xué)又說(shuō)了,我總看到作文中讓舉例子。憋了半天寫(xiě)出來(lái)一個(gè)LiMing怎么怎么樣。李明太累了,讓他歇一會(huì)吧。例子就要用名人的例子,一般讓舉例子的作文題材,都是意志品質(zhì)類(lèi)的文章,像合作,自信什么的。既然是萬(wàn)能例子就要找具有各種優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)的人,什么人呢,成功人士。咱們就說(shuō)兩個(gè),比爾蓋茨和劉翔。一般有的優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)他們都有。怎么把例子變成句子呢?比爾蓋茨很自信?要這樣寫(xiě)的話,寫(xiě)比爾蓋茨和寫(xiě)李明就沒(méi)有本質(zhì)的區(qū)別了。所以咱們要突出他的特性。Bill Gates,for instance,who is the CEO of Microsoft,won the champion of Forbes’World’s Richest People in 2009.It is ***that makes his company successful.比爾蓋茨是09年“福布斯”排行榜的第一名
LiuXiang,for instance,who is a famous athlete,won the champion of the 110-meter-hurdle race of the Athens Olympic Games.It is ***that makes him successful.劉翔雅典奧運(yùn)會(huì)110米欄的冠軍。
這兩個(gè)例子足夠把所有的意志品質(zhì)類(lèi)的包含進(jìn)去,可以放心使用。前文交待,第二段一共5句話。
二、1已經(jīng)說(shuō)過(guò)寫(xiě)法了,2~4句從上文的理由中挑3條就行了。但是我們還覺(jué)得不夠華麗,所以我們把第4句改的更華麗,并且把第5句引出來(lái)。23句繼續(xù)用萬(wàn)能理由沒(méi)問(wèn)題。
我們第四句用的一個(gè)小技巧就是科學(xué)統(tǒng)計(jì)法,直接上句子,再講解。The recent statistic conducted by CASS——Chinese Academy of Social
Science,the past decade has witnessed a sharp increase in the percentage of people who supports multiculture from 21% to 78%.(根據(jù)中國(guó)社科院最近的統(tǒng)計(jì)數(shù)據(jù),過(guò)去的十年里有一個(gè)飛速的增長(zhǎng)——支持多元文化的人從21%增長(zhǎng)到了78%)
這句話很講究,首先引入CASS,字母大寫(xiě)吸引老師的眼球,茫茫多的小寫(xiě)字母中,四個(gè)連續(xù)的大寫(xiě),肯定能吸引住老師,恰好這句話又是華麗麗的給力,那么這句話就差不多達(dá)到目的了。那個(gè)——后邊的解釋?zhuān)f(shuō)實(shí)話是湊字?jǐn)?shù)的,要是你的字?jǐn)?shù)太多了,可以把CASS換成CCTV或者China Daily,然后就不用解釋了。其次用sharp,很與眾不同。再結(jié)合witness被動(dòng)用法,足夠讓老師震撼。但我們覺(jué)得讓老師就這樣給分不滿足,然后用兩個(gè)數(shù)字把老師徹底征服了。根據(jù)心理學(xué)的統(tǒng)計(jì),0~9十個(gè)數(shù)字中,7是人們最喜歡的數(shù)字(武當(dāng)七俠,江南七怪,全真七子等等吧,這是題外話),所以咱們自己編的兩個(gè)數(shù)字里盡量要有7。第一個(gè)數(shù)3*7=21,而且三七二十一是句俗語(yǔ),應(yīng)該是個(gè)常見(jiàn)的數(shù)字,第一個(gè)數(shù)用暗7。第二個(gè)數(shù)用明7,而且8是個(gè)人間人見(jiàn)人愛(ài)的數(shù)字,78這個(gè)數(shù)就出來(lái)了。積極類(lèi)的數(shù)字可以隨便編,消極類(lèi)的數(shù)字要謹(jǐn)慎點(diǎn)編,別太離譜了。此時(shí)老師已經(jīng)順利落入咱們預(yù)先設(shè)計(jì)的圈套中,如果不給15+,他會(huì)感覺(jué)這次判卷生涯不完美的。閑話少說(shuō),咱們繼續(xù)。
第四句出來(lái)了,怎么接第五句呢?前文說(shuō)這個(gè)數(shù)字增長(zhǎng)得很快。如果是好的東西增長(zhǎng)的很快,比如支持文化融合的人越來(lái)越多了,那么后邊接萬(wàn)能積極理由5:
That is to say,multiculture win the appreciation of the public.如果是壞的東西越來(lái)越多了,比如污染面積從**%增長(zhǎng)到**%That is to say,This problem is getting worse and worse.有同學(xué)覺(jué)得這句話沒(méi)說(shuō)完,變得越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重了,然后呢?這就正好引出咱們的第三段,建議措施段。
第三段很簡(jiǎn)單了,基本上全是模板上去就行了,但是要華麗麗的模板,拒絕千篇一律的垃圾模板。對(duì)于積極類(lèi)的,我們要怎么讓他做得更好;消極類(lèi)的,我們?cè)趺锤淖冞@一現(xiàn)狀。
It is high time that we+動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去式,是一個(gè)虛擬語(yǔ)氣的結(jié)構(gòu),千萬(wàn)要注意。
積極類(lèi):強(qiáng)調(diào)好的東西對(duì)我們的重要。
It is high time that we highlighted the significance of ***(如multiculture)and cultivated the citizens’awareness that ***(如multiculture)is essential to us.消極類(lèi):因?yàn)榍拔恼f(shuō)的壞的東西增長(zhǎng)的很快,所以接下來(lái)我們就要控制這種增長(zhǎng)的趨勢(shì)。然后就政府和個(gè)人兩個(gè)方面來(lái)說(shuō)明做法。
It is high time that we took effective measures to curb this trend.As far as
the government is concerned,it should set down corresponding legislations and regulations.As for us,we should arouse the awareness of public towards ***(如Interenet).中性類(lèi)的最后一段,在消極類(lèi)的基礎(chǔ)上加一句話。說(shuō)明這個(gè)東西本身沒(méi)有好壞之分,我們需要掌握一個(gè)度,比如還是網(wǎng)絡(luò)問(wèn)題。句子如下:
I cherish a belief that *** themselves are not good or bad and we can benefit a lot from *** as long as we take a good control over them.不要覺(jué)得good bad這樣的小學(xué)詞匯就不屑于用,咱們都華麗了三段了,也要緩解一下老師激動(dòng)興奮的情緒,肥肉吃多了還嫌膩呢~~哈哈~~
這樣最后一段就差不多完事了,但是最好再來(lái)一個(gè)完美的總結(jié)。三種類(lèi)型都通用的總結(jié),如下:
Only by enforcing these measures into practice, can our society be more harmonious ,our economy be more prosperous,and we,as individuals,embrace more promising perspective.(只有我們把這些措施付諸實(shí)施,社會(huì)才能更加和諧,經(jīng)濟(jì)才能更加繁榮,我們作為個(gè)人才能擁抱一個(gè)更加有希望的未來(lái)。氣勢(shì)磅礴的排比句,給你的作文畫(huà)上一個(gè)圓滿的句號(hào))
到此為止,咱們的大作文就說(shuō)的差不多了,應(yīng)該是能把所有的情況都涵蓋進(jìn)去了。這篇模板不算萬(wàn)能理由一共132個(gè)詞,距離最低160字?jǐn)?shù)只差28個(gè)字,隨便
挑兩個(gè)萬(wàn)能理由寫(xiě)上去就ok了。所以說(shuō)不要怕寫(xiě)英語(yǔ)作文。其實(shí)作文還要慢慢練的,最重要的是總結(jié)自己的模板,結(jié)合真題或者模擬題來(lái)不斷地來(lái)默寫(xiě)模板,要對(duì)模板做到了然于胸,知道每句話要說(shuō)什么內(nèi)容。(金翅掠影)
第五篇:考研英語(yǔ)作文
熱點(diǎn):就業(yè)壓力
題目:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic College Students’ Job Hunting.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.1.近幾年出現(xiàn)了大學(xué)生就業(yè)難的現(xiàn)象
2.產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因(如大學(xué)生追求的目標(biāo)過(guò)高,專(zhuān)業(yè)不對(duì)口等)
3.如何解決這一問(wèn)題(改變就業(yè)觀念,大學(xué)生再培訓(xùn)等)
參考范文:
College Students’ Job Hunting
In recent years, college students find it increasingly difficult to get a job.It sounds strange since young college students are usually intelligent, well-educated phenomenon, aspirant and eager to bring their talent into full play.Then what underlies the strange phenomenon?
There are several reasons for this.To begin with, nowadays college students aim too high.All they want are “good” jobs which could offer good salary, comfortable working conditions, high social status among others.Consequently, most college students are unwilling to accept vacant jobs they consider not “good” enough.Another reason is that there is a big gap between the majors some students study in school and the demands of vacant jobs.So companies think some students are not fit for the jobs.Solution to the problem requires efforts on both the society and the students.The companies should value the students, talent and knowledge while the latter
should not merely aim at material gains.They should be down-to–earth in building up their career.Furthermore, they should face their weak points so as to improve themselves and be more competent.熱點(diǎn):城市交通
題目:
Directions: Should governments spend more money on improving roads and highways, or should governments spend more money on improving public transportation(buses, trains, subways)? Why? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition, in which you should write at least 120 words.參考范文:
Urban Transportation
Good transportation is very important to the success of both individuals and a city.Without efficient means of transportation, people will waste a great deal of time going to and from work.This will make them tired and less productive in their jobs.People may rely on either private or public transportation to get them to and from work.If a choice has to be made between spending money on improving the roads for private vehicles or improving public transportation, I would choose the latter for the following reasons.First of all, better public transportation systems, including buses, trains and subways, will encourage more people to use them rather than drive their own cars.This will reduce the total amount of traffic on the roads and make travel quicker for everyone.Second, using public transportation saves energy.A bus which carries 60 people is a far more efficient use of fuel than 60 individual cars driving the same route.And last but not least, greater use of public transportation causes less pollution and will keep the environment cleaner.There are many reasons to support spending money on public transportation.Good transportation systems make a city cleaner, more efficient and more convenient.This improves everyone's quality of life and can make the city more prosperous.Therefore, I support spending money on public transportation systems rather than improving roads.熱點(diǎn):運(yùn)動(dòng)與健康
題目:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Exercise and Health? You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
參考范文:
Exercise and Health
For thousands of years, physical activity has been associated with health.Today, science has confirmed their link, with overwhelming evidence that people who lead active lfestyles are less likely to die early, or to experience major illnesses such as heart disease, diabetes and colon cancer.Exercise benefits every part of the body, including the mind.Exercising causes
the body to produce endorphins, chemicals that lead a person to feel peaceful and happy.Exercise can help some people sleep better.It can also help with mental health issues such as mild depression and self-esteem.Plus, exercise can give people a real sense of accomplishment and pride at having achieved a certain goal.Exercising can help you look better, too.People who exercise burn calories and look more toned than those who don't.In fact, exercise is one of the most important parts of keeping your body at a healthy weight.When you exercise, you burn food calories as fuel.If a person eats more calories than he or she burns, the body stores them away as fat.Exercise can help burn these stored calories.Finally, exercising to maintain a healthy weight also decreases a person's risk of developing certain diseases, including diabetes and high blood pressure.2012年MPACC聯(lián)考:英譯漢重要短語(yǔ)及句型
(1)、、、not so much、、、、、、as(but)、、、與其說(shuō)……還不如說(shuō)……
(2)、、、not so much that、、、、、as(but)that、、、、、、與其說(shuō)……還不如說(shuō)……
(3)、、、not so much as、、、、、(=not even)甚至于不……,連……也不……
(4)、、、might as well、、、as、、、、、與其說(shuō)……還不如說(shuō)……
例1:He is not so much a teacher as a scholar、譯文:與其說(shuō)他是老師,還不如說(shuō)是學(xué)者。(注意翻譯時(shí)動(dòng)作的對(duì)象)
例2:It wasn't so much his appearance I liked as his personality、譯文:與其說(shuō)我喜歡他的外表,不如說(shuō)我喜歡他的品格。
例3:It's not so much that I don't want to come but I just haven't got the time、譯文:倒不是因?yàn)槲也幌雭?lái),而是我根本沒(méi)有時(shí)間。
例4:He didn't so much as say thank you after all we'd done for him、譯文:我們?yōu)樗闪四敲炊嗍?,他甚至連謝謝都沒(méi)有說(shuō)一聲。
例5:You might as well throw your money into the sea as lend it to him、譯文:與其將錢(qián)借給他,還不如把錢(qián)丟進(jìn)大海。(注意翻譯時(shí)動(dòng)作的對(duì)象)
[注意]:more、、、than、、、1)she is more beautiful than her sister、她比她姐姐漂亮。
2)George is more intelligent than aggressive、與其說(shuō)喬治言行放肆,不如說(shuō)他聰穎過(guò)人??荚嚧?/p>
以上第1句是more、、、than結(jié)構(gòu)的一般用法,即在兩個(gè)不同的事物之間就同一方面作比較;而第2句是就同一個(gè)人的兩個(gè)不同方面作比較。因此要譯成“與其說(shuō)……還不如說(shuō)……”。
more、、、than結(jié)構(gòu)在上述1)2)兩句中的用法也適用于less、、、than結(jié)構(gòu),得出相反的含義:
例如:
1)John is less daring than quick-witted、與其說(shuō)約翰膽大,不如說(shuō)他腦子靈活。
2)George was less intelligent than aggressive、與其說(shuō)喬治聰穎過(guò)人,不如說(shuō)他言行放肆
幾個(gè)不定代詞的固定搭配:
have none of:不參加;不準(zhǔn);不接受
I will have none of your stupid ideas!我才不接受你那愚蠢的想法!
He was offered a job but he said he’d have none of it、他有一個(gè)工作機(jī)會(huì),但他說(shuō)他不接受。
none but(=nothing but):只有(=only)
None but the brave deserves the fair、只有英雄才配得上美人。
She chose none but the best、她只選最好的。
She is nothing but a child、她只不過(guò)是個(gè)孩子。
none other than:(表示驚訝)不是別人,正是……(= no one else but)
It’s none other than Tom!We thought you were in Africa、none the +比較級(jí)詞+ for:毫不,一點(diǎn)也不
He spent 2 weeks in hospital but he’s none the better for it、他在醫(yī)院里待了兩個(gè)星期,但一點(diǎn)也沒(méi)好轉(zhuǎn)。
My car is none the worse for wear、我的車(chē)子一點(diǎn)也沒(méi)有損耗。
none the wiser:不知情
If we take only one piece of cake, mother will be none the wiser、如果我們只拿一小塊蛋糕,母親是不會(huì)知道的。
none too:(在形容詞或副詞前)不太;一點(diǎn)都不
The service in this restaurant is none too fast、這家旅館的服務(wù)一點(diǎn)效率都沒(méi)有。anything but:①除---之外什么都(此處的but等于except)②決不(=not at all)I eat anything but(except)fish、除了魚(yú),我什么都吃。
She is anything but a good cook、她決不是個(gè)好廚師。(即:除了好廚師,她什么都是。)
anything of:①(疑問(wèn)句/條件句)一點(diǎn)點(diǎn);②(否定句)一點(diǎn)也(沒(méi)有)
Is he anything of a poet? 他有一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)詩(shī)人的樣子嗎?
I haven’t seen anything of him lately、最近我沒(méi)有見(jiàn)過(guò)他。