第一篇：雅思寫作：如何拓展中間段（寫寫幫推薦）

如何寫開頭段

Sentence 1 Background(general statement)Sentence 2 Rephrase the topic(thesis statement)Sentence 3 personal opinion or brief description of main body 如何寫背景句

確定題目討論哪個方面的問題，然后以這個問題為中心，寫一句介紹性的話。例題1：

Some people who have been successful in the society don’t attribute their success to the theoretical knowledge they learned from their university.Do you agree or disagree?

People have long been interested in identifying the forces that contribute to personal achievement.The importance of theoretical knowledge to one’s success is a matter for debate.例題2.The advertising is discouraging people from being different individuals and makes people to be or seem to be the same.Do you agree or disagree?

The influence of advertising on our buying behaviours is a subject matter.In recent years, much more attention than ever before has been paid to the influence of advertising on our buying behaviors.如何改寫題目 1.不要抄襲題目 2.句子不要過長

例題1.Do you think it is better to send criminals to jail or let them receive education or job training? Sentence1 The treatment of criminals has been open to debate in recent years.Sentence2.1)加上常用句型：There is much controversy over whether to send criminals to jails or to let them receive education or job training.2)改變句子成分的順序：Some people think that to send criminals to jails is better than to let them receive education or job training.3)改變句子成分：Some people think that imprisonment is better than education or job training in treating criminals.例題2.Police in Britain do not carry guns.Some people believe that it will make citizens unprotected, but some suggest that it would reduce violence in society.Discuss those two views.Sentence 1.In some countries, such as Britain, it is a convention that police do not carry guns.Sentence 2.1)加常用句型：There is a perception that it will make citizens unprotected, while a counter-argument is that it would reduce violence in society.2)改變句子成分的順序：Some people think that citizens would be unprotected, while some suggest that violence could be reduced.3)改變句子成分：Some people think that it fails to protect citizens while some suggest that it would minimize violence in society.如何寫第三句話：

1.一種是闡明自己的立場

2.一種是不闡明自己的立場，只是簡單的說文章會討論些什么內(nèi)容。

例題1.Children in secondary school study international news as a subject, but some think that’s a waste of time.Discuss both views and give your opinion.Sentence 1 International news represents one of the main sources of information from which we discover what is happening around the world.Sentence 2 However, when it comes to including it in the curriculum at secondary school, there is an ongoing debate.Sentence 3 1)闡明立場法

支持：My personal view is that studying international news is of benefits to students.反對：I am not convinced that it is necessary.2)不明確表示自己支持哪一方面，而是指明文章會討論一個事物的兩個方面 There are some points in both sides.例題2.Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and use up the world’s resources.Do you agree or disagree Sentence 1 There is little room for doubt about the convenience brought by air travel.Sentence 2 However, when it comes to its impact on the environment, no conclusion has been arrived at.Sentence 3 1)表明立場

支持：As far as I know, its benefits are far more overt than its down sides.反對：My personal view is that its benefits cannot justify its harmful effects.2)不標(biāo)明立場

This essay will compare and contrast its benefits and downsides.問題類題目的開頭段

例題1.What are the causes and solutions of the problem of the scarcity of water resource?

Sentence 1 Water shortage is one of the most challenging issues to address in many countries.Sentence 2.(不要說有人爭議水資源缺乏的問題，而是直接關(guān)注它的原因)There are some factors leading to this problem.Sentence 3(說清楚文章要討論的內(nèi)容)Some of the most factors will be discussed below, followed by some responsible solutions.例題2.There is a gap between living in the city and living in the countryside.What are the reasons in your country and how can the difference be reduced?

如何拓展中間段

Topic sentence(one sentence only): highlight the central point of this paragraph, serve to support an argument.Supporting sentences: sentences for the extension, explanation and justification of the topic sentence(3 sentences if the main body is composed of 3 paragraphs, and 4to 5 sentences if 2paragraphs)

例題1 Do the positive effects of advertising outweigh its negative effects? A 社會類題目

1.經(jīng)濟角度：社會的經(jīng)濟利益，經(jīng)濟發(fā)展，發(fā)展經(jīng)濟的契機等

2.科技角度：科技發(fā)展帶來的機遇和危機，工業(yè)生產(chǎn)，高科技設(shè)備，媒體，電腦，自動化，數(shù)字化等

3.社會角度：社會的整體良性發(fā)展，環(huán)境問題，社區(qū)安全，執(zhí)法系統(tǒng)，衛(wèi)生情況，醫(yī)療建設(shè)，公共設(shè)施，文化藝術(shù)，旅游觀光，城市風(fēng)貌

4.公眾角度：公共利益，個人的利益和便利（衣食住行）

B 教育類題目

1.社會能力和工作能力：年輕人在社會上的生存能力，交際能力，交流能力，實踐能力，工作能力

2.學(xué)校表現(xiàn)和學(xué)習(xí)能力：學(xué)生在理論知識方面的掌握和學(xué)習(xí)能力的提高，學(xué)校的課程安排，設(shè)施配置，教學(xué)方法和社會要求的接軌，重視理論還是實踐，教學(xué)質(zhì)量，課堂氣氛，教師素質(zhì)，教學(xué)方法的革新

3.性格和感情的健康：學(xué)生是否有健康的業(yè)余愛好和課后活動，性格是否開朗和積極，行為是否端正，中小學(xué)生在社會上遇到的問題，暴力，色情，媒體，社區(qū)安全，犯罪率的上升，家庭背景，父母教育，對兒女行為的約束，家庭暴力，家庭問題，單身家庭，家庭的貧困問題，父母行為對子女的影響。

4.身體健康：學(xué)生是否參與體育活動，養(yǎng)成好的生活習(xí)慣，常見的問題是青少年過分使用電腦，不注意體育鍛煉，生活習(xí)慣不好。

經(jīng)濟角度： 廣告宣傳產(chǎn)品，促進(jìn)消費，推動經(jīng)濟

公眾角度1：廣告讓消費者了解商品信息，比較商品優(yōu)缺點，購買到比較適合自己的產(chǎn)品。公眾角度2：廣告有時會夸大其詞，誤導(dǎo)消費者，讓消費者購買自己并不需要的產(chǎn)品。

注意：1.最有說服力的觀點應(yīng)該放在第一段，第二段的觀點次之，第三點的觀點最弱

2.觀點不要標(biāo)新立異，最常見的觀點往往是最安全的和最有說服力的

1.One of the main functions of advertising is to assist consumers to find and buy suitable products.2.Meanwhile, advertising serves to stimulate consumption and contributes to economic development.3.Despite its importance, there is no denying that every now and then, advertising leads consumers into an impulsive purchase, thereby causing wasteful spending.支持句的寫法

Explanation: 解釋和說明中心句的意思或原因

Extension： 將中心句或?qū)⒔忉屩行木涞木渥油卣挂幌拢U述它的影響 Example：

在需要的時候，舉例說明，有助于更加形象地描述事情 Sorting：

當(dāng)一個中心句有幾個分論點支持時，可以將論點分類說明 Contrasting: 描述相反的情形，在無法落筆的時候特別有用。

1.1.One of the main functions of advertising is to assist consumers to find and buy suitable products.1)Common knowledge is that advertising refers to presenting information, relating to a product or service by a variety of media, such as television, radio, newspapers, magazines, brochures and so forth.2)With the presence of advertising, a consumer is able to acquire the latest information in the market, such as properties of a product or service, and thereby make a wiser buying decision.3)By contrast, without advertising, a consumer is at the risk of purchasing, a product that fails to meet all of his or her needs, because of lack of knowledge of better alternatives in the market.2.Meanwhile, advertising serves to stimulate consumption and contributes to economic development.1)As said before, advertising is responsible to introduce a product, but in reality, it does more than that.2)Advertising describes a product in such an impressive way and with adding so many visual appeals that it always succeeds in attracting the eye of the audience and driving them into a final purchase.3)Besides, advertising reminds intended customers of their existing needs or creates fresh needs, keeping them aware that only by purchasing a product can their needs be met.4)By these two approaches, advertising encourages spending and contributes to economic development.3.Despite its importance, there is no denying that every now and then, advertising leads consumers into an impulsive purchase, thereby causing wasteful spending.1)It is a shared convention in the advertising industry that some properties of a product are highlighted while the others are simplified.2)A product, when prompted well, will be highly desired by many, as customers are misguided to ignore the products’ downsides.3)It accounts for why many shoppers regret their buying decisions before long, observing that what they have brought is not what they actually need or fails to live up to their expectations.4)Cosmetics and dietary supplements are among those standard examples, costing individual buyers a lot but not achieving desirable outcomes.如何寫結(jié)論段

1.重新總結(jié)主體部分討論過的要點 2.重新闡述你的立場和觀點

3.不要加入新的內(nèi)容，尤其是主體部分沒有討論過的內(nèi)容。

In conclusion, advertising plays an essential role in society, not only making consumers well-informed buyers but also fostering economic development.However, consumers should beware of the misleading nature of advertising.注意事項：

1.不要用不熟悉的詞 2.避免過度使用從句 3.少用名言 4.杜絕中國諺語

5.少用第一或第二人稱 6.避免口語化的詞語

7.盡量避免使用問號和感嘆號 8.不要用所寫 9.不要用比喻

10.不要少于規(guī)定數(shù)字

第二篇：12中間段寫作-思路拓展

圖畫作文中間段的思路拓展

除了論證手法之外，在大作文寫作的過程中，論證的思路拓展也是必不可少的復(fù)習(xí)環(huán)節(jié)，這一點針對的就是寫作中無從下手，不知從何說起論證素材的棘手問題的解決方案，總體的思路拓展就是下面的口訣，這一講主要針對拓展的口訣的思路進(jìn)行有效地詞匯擴充，讓考生能夠做到有詞可用，有話可說。

方法一：萬能理由法

口訣：教科文組織應(yīng)該以人為本，注意環(huán)保與經(jīng)濟發(fā)展

教育：

輟學(xué)drop-out學(xué)術(shù)氛圍academic atmosphere剽竊plagiarism

減輕學(xué)生負(fù)擔(dān)relieve the burden on students教育理念notion of education教書育人impart knowledge and educate people網(wǎng)絡(luò)教育 online education

培養(yǎng)創(chuàng)新精神cultivate spirit of innovation激發(fā)學(xué)生潛能stimulate students' potential促進(jìn)性格養(yǎng)成facilitate development of personality傳授知識impart knowledge

學(xué)位degree 文憑diploma 證書certification 資格證qualification 素質(zhì)教育quality education 應(yīng)試教育 exam-oriented education畢業(yè)典禮 commencement

以學(xué)生為中心的教學(xué) student-centered education 職業(yè)教育 vocational education 以老師為中心的教學(xué)teacher-centered education 畢業(yè)旅行 after-graduation trip 托兒所 nursery 幼兒園kindergarten 義務(wù)教育compulsory education

小學(xué) primary school 中等教育 secondary school 高等教育 higher education科技：

科技創(chuàng)新innovation of technology造福人類benefit human beings

提高效率improve efficiency 網(wǎng)絡(luò)的普及popularity of internet

有限網(wǎng)絡(luò)cable 太陽能 solar energy 新能源new energy

在高科技時代in the era of high-tech發(fā)明創(chuàng)造invention and creation

信息技術(shù)information technology 尖端科技cutting-edge technology

高科技在醫(yī)療方面的應(yīng)用 application of high-tech in medical treatment

文化：

文化沖撞culture shock思維方式way of thinking價值觀value

求異思維divergent thinking習(xí)俗custom/convention文化融合culture blending

增進(jìn)了解enhance understanding文化多樣性culture diversity

全球一體化globalization文明civilization文化遺產(chǎn)culture heritage

文化交流culture communication文化底蘊：the rich cultural deposit

國學(xué) national study 刮痧 skin scraping 拔火罐 cupping 針灸 acupuncture 書法 calligraph 組織：

制定具體措施 work out concrete solutions

頒布相關(guān)法規(guī) enact related laws and regulations食品安全 food security

加強strengthen-enhance-foster-consolidateinfrastructure基礎(chǔ)設(shè)施

社會不穩(wěn)定social instability-social disorder/chaos，合作去解決這個問題 collaborate on this issue

向公眾呼吁做某事 appeal to the public to do sth

假冒偽劣產(chǎn)品 fake and inferior product

以人為本：（安全——交往——認(rèn)可——自我實現(xiàn)）

來自同輩的壓力peer pressure情深意重的兄弟姐妹loving siblings

老齡化社會aging society退休金pension晚年twilight year

感謝父母be indebted to parents含辛茹苦的父母nurturing parents

逃避贍養(yǎng)老人的責(zé)任shun the responsibility of taking care of the elder

害怕承擔(dān)責(zé)任：be afraid of taking responsibility

見義勇為never hesitate to do what is right傳統(tǒng)美德time-honored virtue

幫助弱勢群體 offer aid to the underprivileged

慈善事業(yè) cause of charity義工 voluntary work

勢利的snobbish冷漠indifferent/ unconcerned缺乏道德：be devoid of morality 廉租房low rent housing經(jīng)適房 affordable housing房奴車奴 mortgage slave 環(huán)保：

可持續(xù)發(fā)展 sustainable development生態(tài)旅游 ecotourism

degradation惡化=deterioration: environmental degradation環(huán)境惡化

一次性產(chǎn)品disposable products垃圾 litter臭氧層Ozone layer

交通堵塞 traffic congestion機動車 motorized vehicle

不懈努力 unremitting efforts多方努力 joint effort/endeavor

深入人心 be embedded in one's heart

經(jīng)濟：

經(jīng)濟衰退economic recession經(jīng)濟惡化 economic deterioration

通貨膨脹inflation通貨緊縮deflation物價飛漲 the price is soaring

升值 appreciation貶值 depreciation/ devaluation增加收入augment income

合同contract 企業(yè)enterprise個人所得稅 income tax國家稅收 revenue

關(guān)稅 tariff / duty進(jìn)口 import出口 export日用品 daily commodity

巨大的利益exorbitant/enormous profits

城鄉(xiāng)收入差距：income gap between urban and rural areas

遏制惡化的現(xiàn)狀 curb the deteriorating situation

發(fā)展：

利大于弊 advantages exceed disadvantages不擇手段 do things by hook and crook對...有威懾的影響have a deterring effect on起輔助作用play an auxiliary role in相互排斥的mutually exclusive利益沖突conflict of interest

下層社會的，貧窮的underprivileged/poor逆境unfavorable circumstance

兼容的be compatible with

Can economic development be compatible with environmental protection?

方法二：宏觀-微觀兩分法

總體說來，該方法是結(jié)合方法一和上一講中的寫作手法來綜合運用的，以上的萬能理由都可以從個人和國家兩個層面分別思考論述，考研英語大作文其寫作精華就是“以小見大，聯(lián)系自身”的過程，其結(jié)果必然是“微觀-宏觀-微觀”的回歸型思路體現(xiàn)。

三、中間段寫作高分作文賞析

【環(huán)境保護(hù)】

Conceived in this cartoon is a motto that no one can shrug off: “to take care of our environment is to tend ourselves and our descendants”.In other words, as natural resources are actually limited, we are supposed to exploit sensibly / reasonably for our long-term benefit.However, acts against this principle are prevailing.It is not unfamiliar that some folks shoot wild animals for fun, cook them for food, and sell them for profit.It is also not uncommon to see

some guys over-mining with geographic disasters recurring.Therefore, the common sense should be born in mind by us that never sacrifice long term benefit for temporary satisfaction.What does this cartoon convey? Obviously, it renders us with the notion that what we do with the nature is to be answered for.Any examples? Haven’t you ever met some folks over-hunting for huge profit, with some species endangered? Haven’t you ever found some enterprises letting out polluted water, threatening the fishery industry and eco-balance along rivers, lakes and even oceans? Where have their insight gone? Where have their wisdom gone? Where have their senses of social responsibility gone?

【個人品質(zhì)】

{互助}

What does this cartoon imply? Obviously, it renders us with the notion that a harmonious family, community, society, or world requires mutual assistance among individuals.Any examples? Haven’t you ever met a warm-hearted neighbor keeping taking care of a paralyzed granny next door? Haven’t you ever found most citizens donating part of their incomes for charity? Why are they so generous? Why are they so unselfish? Why are they so warm-hearted? Aren’t they motivated by the idea that every of us may ask for help from time to time, so has the duty to offer assistance when necessary?

This motto is born in every mind of us, “l(fā)abor shapes human, while mutual assistance shapes human life.” Or, put another way, anyone, without support from others, cannot lead a normal life.Will there be any other cases more convincing than the following ones to illustrate this point? It is not unfamiliar that only with mutual assistance and cooperation did primitive men survive thousands of disasters and deliver their descendants, leaving our ancestors to develop their life of descent quality with mutual assistance and exchange, and eventually urging us to build a better world with combined effort.Indeed, we all have the awareness that mutual support is the basis of the normal life and a path towards happiness and harmony.Traditionally, people are considered to be selfish.But is that the truth in current world? Cases to criticize this mis-belief are abundant.It is not surprising to see a seat-lender in a bus helping a blind lady or an elder-tender in a hospital treating a paralyzed granny.It is also not uncommon that the amount of charity funds has doubled during last 6 months, according to a report in China Daily.Obviously, an increasing number of citizens, motivated by the notion that a harmonious world requires mutual help, are willing to assist others.{猶豫}

This motto is born in every mind of us, “better trying than crying” Or, put another way, hesitation, or indecisiveness, is the largest barrier in one’s overall development.Will there be any other cases more convincing than the following ones to illustrate this point? It is not unfamiliar that some students always ponder, after graduation, to hunt a job or to further his education.It is also not uncommon that some white-collars, even if not satisfied with their current, endlessly hesitate, daring not step toward a new one.Indeed, they all should have the awareness that they should not be so pessimistic that count choices – largely opportunities – as predicaments.{誠實}

It is accepted by most average people that no other groups can be more honest than college students.But is that the case anymore? Cases to criticize this improper view are within easy reach.From the point of college examinations alone, haven’t you ever seen some candidates delivering notes or making gestures during the exams? Or, haven’t you ever noticed that some of them take advantage of cell phones to forward keys? Obviously, an increasing number of youngsters, either for fierce competition or because of their own laziness, no longer cherish the virtue of honesty.{誠信}

The extended meaning echoed by this cartoon can be summarized as a philosophic topic in our daily life: never easily let go of the basic rights of consumers, and any personnel in any industry should never shrug off his duty in face of financial rewards.Although this doctrine is

accepted by most of us, conducts against this principle are prevailing.It is not unfamiliar that, for their own benefit, bank clerks persuade customers into buying unnecessary money management services, to say nothing of misdeeds among other public services.They are so profit-oriented that can sacrifice the benefits and rights of a consumer, exerting heavy financial pressure and discomfort on him, for their own temporary rewards.

第三篇：雅思小作文中間段經(jīng)典句子

雅思小作文中間段經(jīng)典句子

1.The most obvious reason for this phenomenon is that ______________.Consequently, ______________.2.No matter you like it or not, AAA has become more and more popular and there are many reason for it.3.Its an urgent task for us to change this unfavorable situation: ______________.4.The picture can reminds you of some strange, yet familiar phenomena existing in our society.5.A great number of solutions are being offered.Some people suggest that ______________.Others argue that ______________.6.Confronted with AAA, we should take a serious of effective measures to cope with the situation.7.However, ______________ may cause some problems.First, it is ______________.Second, ______________.Finally, _____________修改文章_.So, it is clear that ______________ has its advantages and disadvantages.8.Although ______________ has a great advantage of ______________, it cant compete with ______________ in ______________.9.______________ may be preferable to ______________, but ______________ suffers from the disadvantages that ______________.10.The advantages of ______________ are much greater that those of ______________.For instance, ______________.11.______________ may be preferable to ______________, but it also suffers from the disadvantages that ______________.

第四篇：托福寫作中間段怎么寫

官方網(wǎng)站：

托福寫作中間段怎么寫？

托福寫作中間段怎么寫？如何打造托福寫作的中間環(huán)節(jié)呢?在托福作文的中間部分，應(yīng)該如何安排內(nèi)容已達(dá)到整體的作文效果。下面，小編給大家一些建議，供廣大同學(xué)們參考。

技巧

一、.Q：一定需要三大段論點理由展開來證明開頭觀點嗎?

A：No.中間段可以有一個論點展開，也可以拿到滿分。同學(xué)們可以參看ETS的第三版p202頁的官方范文5分和4分賞析。

技巧

二、Q： 托福寫作備考中的獨立寫作中間段結(jié)構(gòu)是什么?

A： 論點Main point Sentence+論據(jù)Details.盡量不要突兀地寫for example，需要指明例子之前的論點句。

技巧

三、Q： 怎么展開一個中間段落才能做到評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)5分要求呢?

A： 其實有很多方法將論點展開Details，比如：我強化班會重點介紹的幾種：Specific personal example 少而精;General example 多而簡;compare& contrast對比反差;Study &Survey 調(diào)查數(shù)據(jù);Famous people權(quán)威名人;Quotation名言諺語;等。

技巧

四、Q： 以上是不是每種方法都要在獨立寫作中間段用上?

A： 這幾種方法都是平行關(guān)系，可以挑選一種方法即可展開一個論點句。當(dāng)然，也可以挑選其中兩三種方法使得一個段落展開地非常細(xì)致。

技巧

五、Q： 獨立寫作是不是中間段字?jǐn)?shù)越多越好?

A： 展開的Details的語言部分非常重要，比如由電腦自動評分E-rater主要評判Grammar，Usage，Style，lexical complexity等方面。

技巧

六、Q： 獨立寫作的中間段是不是一定需要所謂的“辨證式/反證式/讓步式”寫法?

A： 有這種辯證式思路文章會寫得更全面，但是這不是必要的。因為ETS的官方指南和評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)告訴大家： 托福寫作考的并不是該同學(xué)對一個觀點分析有多么深刻，主要是語言的表達(dá)和內(nèi)容的清晰。

第五篇：雅思大作文主體段寫作安排

雅思大作文主體段寫作安排

朗閣雅思考試研究中心

一般情況下，英語寫作考試的開頭跟結(jié)尾是沒什么什么難度的，重點就是主體段結(jié)構(gòu)內(nèi)容的寫作安排，在段落分配方面，很多的老師經(jīng)過多年的教學(xué)經(jīng)驗和學(xué)生的考試過程一般是建議五段式的寫作方法。與傳統(tǒng)的四段式寫法相比而言，主要的區(qū)別就是五段式的寫作將正反的兩個論點分成了兩個自然段來寫，這樣思路更加清晰，但同時對考生的英語寫作要求相對來說也是有所提升。不管你是四段還是五段來寫，其實對考生作文最終的結(jié)果是沒有什么大的影響。不過，英語水平相對較低的同學(xué)，特別是在寫雅思作文過程中經(jīng)常遇到?jīng)]有什么思路的情況的學(xué)生來說，建議還是使用傳統(tǒng)的四段式為好。

雖然很多考生在一開始構(gòu)思的時候想好的兩個分論點思路，有時候?qū)懼鴮懼鶗兴x，這樣就很有可能導(dǎo)致的最終情況就是一個觀點想到了很多內(nèi)容，而當(dāng)寫到第二個支持的分論點時就很難想出觀點，然后就重新想第一分論點的內(nèi)容，這樣不僅浪費了時間還會打斷文章的整體思路就不好了。一般來說寫一個分論點的時候要寫作100多個單詞，寫到第二個論點的時候就會出現(xiàn)反反復(fù)復(fù)疊加同義詞的情況出現(xiàn)，就會給人頭重腳輕的感覺了。所以除非你的英語基礎(chǔ)能力非常好，一般的考生們還是選擇四段式的方法來進(jìn)行雅思作文的寫作為好。

雅思作文當(dāng)中的第一個主體段需要支持自己的總觀點。在這個段落里，考生總共需要想出兩個分論點從而寫出一百多字的文章。按照一般學(xué)生的英語表現(xiàn)水平，這個段落總共需要十句話。那么基本上來說就是一句話十到十二個單詞左右。按照兩個分論點平均分配的原則（這個并不一定，要視題目而定。如果第一個分論點比較大的話，考生可以適當(dāng)縮小第二個分論點的內(nèi)容），平均每個分論點需要五句話?；旧蟻碚f，第一句話都需要將分論點做一個概括，然后后面四句話提供支持和展開。

根據(jù)往年的教學(xué)經(jīng)驗來看，這四句話就是困擾烤鴨們的最大的一個難點。很多學(xué)生總是覺得無話可說，從而導(dǎo)致文章寫不完或者字?jǐn)?shù)不夠。究其原因，考生的最大問題是并不清楚這四句話的目的和作用是什么。其實，這四句話的證明無非就是起到以下列出的兩個作用：

1.證明分論點的正確性：很多考生在主體段的寫作時，通常抱有一種錯誤的態(tài)度，那就是自己認(rèn)為自己的分論點是正確的，沒有什么爭議的。但事實上，自己的分論點往往是值得推敲的。所以，考生在后四句話展開的首要任務(wù)就是證明自己的分論點是正確的。比如說題目是問車有哪些好處？很多考生看到這個題目的第一反應(yīng)就是車很方便。大多數(shù)人對車能帶來方便這個觀點所持有的態(tài)度是take for granted.但真的是如此嗎？現(xiàn)在停車位已經(jīng)越來越難找；交通事故越來越多；交通堵塞已經(jīng)變成了家常便飯。所以，車并不見得能給人帶來方便。那么，在這個部分，就需要考生進(jìn)行一定的支持和論證。

2.舉例說明和論證。議論文的論證需要有例子來進(jìn)行支撐。很多學(xué)生都喜歡用例子來充實自己的主體段。但事實證明，考生們并不清楚使用例子的目的和作用。其實，議論文當(dāng)中穿插例子是用來證明分論點的準(zhǔn)確性和說服力的。很多考生在寫作時是為了舉例而舉例，很多例子跟這個分論點毫無關(guān)系，甚至說是相違背的。如果是這樣的話，那就起不到支撐的作用了。所以，例子必須要為分論點而服務(wù)。還有很多考生會犯的錯誤就是喜歡枚舉很多例子。其實，這樣做反而適得其反?？忌乃季S是說的越多越好；而雅思考官的想法則是要么就別說，要說就說的詳細(xì)，仔細(xì)，具體。所以，這里朗閣雅思考試研究中心建議考生每個分論點只舉一個例子，但是要說詳細(xì)。

下面我們就進(jìn)入到了第二個主體段。這個段落的主要意圖是要考慮反方的觀點?？赡芎芏嗫忌鷷{悶，為什么要考慮反方觀點？其實道理很簡單?？忌谧h論文的論證中最重要的就是要體現(xiàn)出思想的成熟度。換句話說，就是要從多個不同的角度考慮問題。如果考生的論證只是從一方面出發(fā)，那就說明考生的思維很片面，并不能完整的考慮一個argument.所以考生在這個段落中引出反方的分論點以及反方的論證。整個段落大約只需70-80個單詞左右。

最后是結(jié)尾段。一般來說，考生到了這個部分，已經(jīng)將要臨近尾聲了。即便是這個部分有再多的內(nèi)容要寫，恐怕時間也已經(jīng)不允許了。所以，朗閣雅思考試研究中心的專家們提出了以下構(gòu)成結(jié)尾段的兩個部分：1.總觀點概括，做到前后呼應(yīng)。2.展望未來。在最后一個部分，只要考生就這個話題在未來的發(fā)展情況作出一個預(yù)測，或者是展望都可以。結(jié)尾控制在30-40個單詞即可。

以上就是雅思大作文觀點類話題的文章的行文結(jié)構(gòu)，可以說這個結(jié)構(gòu)基本把一篇議論文分割到了最小的單位。只要考生按照這樣的結(jié)構(gòu)一步一步的進(jìn)行練習(xí)，相信拿到自己想要的雅思寫作分?jǐn)?shù)將不是問題。

（本文來自朗閣教育托福考試教研組，供廣大考生學(xué)習(xí)使用，轉(zhuǎn)載請注明出處）