第一篇：背熟這20篇 2017中考英語作文輕松得滿分

背熟這20篇范文 2017中考英語作文輕松得滿分

這20篇英語范文涵蓋了初中三年涉及到的所有英語寫作話題，包括學(xué)習(xí)、健康、網(wǎng)絡(luò)、生活、環(huán)保、禮儀等，會為你的英語寫作提供清晰的思路和豐富的素材，多看、多記、多思，2017中考英語考場上你一定能夠像這些小作者一樣，寫出優(yōu)秀滿分英語作文的！

（一）為了交流學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)驗，提高學(xué)習(xí)效率，《中學(xué)生英語輔導(dǎo)報》舉行了一次以How to be a good learner？為題的征文比賽活動，請寫一篇80詞左右的短文談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?/p>

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How to be a good learner？

As a good learner，we should have good habits and ways of learning。

We need to get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class。It?s good to study in groups and help each other。We should do more reading in our free time。If we have some problems，we?d better ask others for help。As a student，working hard is important，but don?t forget to do sports and keep healthy。

I think all these above will be helpful to us。

（二）親愛的同學(xué)，你的初中學(xué)習(xí)生活馬上就要結(jié)束了，請你以“My English Study”為題，談一下三年以來學(xué)習(xí)英語的心得體會。

要求：1。要點包括你在英語學(xué)習(xí)中所遇到的困難、解決的方法以及學(xué)習(xí)感悟；2。詞數(shù)80左右。

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My English Study

How time flies！My three-year middle school life will be over soon。Looking back，I have many memories of my English study。

When I entered the middle school，I had so many difficulties with my English。I was not able to understand the teacher in class，and I couldn?t master the words and phrases。For a time I wanted to give it up。Later，with the help of the teacher and my classmates，I listened to the teacher carefully in class，kept on reading English every day and spoke as much as possible。Step by step I made great progress in English。

In a word，only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well。

（三）父親節(jié)馬上就要到了，但是有些同學(xué)不知道送什么禮物給父親。請根據(jù)下面的提示進行適當(dāng)擴展，并向同學(xué)們提出一些建議。80詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾以給出（不計入總詞數(shù)）。

提示：1。如果有足夠的零花錢，可以為父親買一些使用單不貴的東西，如領(lǐng)帶等：

2。還可以為父親做些力所能及的事情（do something that you can do），如為父親準(zhǔn)備一杯茶等他下班后飲用等。

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Father?s Day is coming and you must be thinking of giving a present to your father。Different people like different kinds of gifts。

If you have enough pocket money，you can buy a useful but not expensive thing，like a tie。I think your father will like it。But if you don?t have enough pocket money，you can do something that you can do，for example，you can prepare a cup of tea。When your father comes back from work，he can drink it。

No matter what you do，the most important thing is to make your father happy on Father?s Day。Don?t you think so？

（四）請根據(jù)提示以“The Spring Festival”為題，寫一篇不少于80詞的英語短文。

提示：1。春節(jié)是中國最重要的節(jié)日；

2。人們大多回家過年，家庭成員團聚；

3。家人一起吃團年飯、看電視、拜訪親朋好友（friends and relatives）；

4。孩子們喜歡春節(jié)。

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The Spring Festival

The Spring Festival comes in February or January。It is the most important traditional festival in China。

People usually go home to spend the festival with their family。They have a big family get-together。The Chinese people have big meals and watch TV during the Spring Festival。They also visit their friends and relatives。

Children like the Spring Festival very much because they needn?t go to school and they have a lot of time to play。

（五）假設(shè)Linda是你的好朋友，你們兩年沒有見面了。上個星期她從國外留學(xué)回來，你們很高興見到彼此。請根據(jù)提示，簡要介紹Linda的變化。

提示：1。外貌：以前個子矮，短發(fā)；現(xiàn)在個子高多了，長發(fā)。

2。愛好：以前喜歡打乒乓球、看電視和聊天；現(xiàn)在喜歡彈鋼琴、看書和散步。

3。性格：以前外向；現(xiàn)在有些內(nèi)向。

要求：1。不要逐字翻譯，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2。層次清晰，語言流暢；

3.80詞左右。

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Linda is my best friend。She has changed o lot in the past two years。

She used to be short and have short hair。However，now she is much taller than before。She has long hair。She used to like playing ping-pong，watching TV and chatting with friends。But she likes playing the piano，reading books and taking a walk now。She used to be outgoing。Now she is a little quite。

I think people sure change as time goes by。Even though she has changed a lot，we will be the best friends all the time。

（六）背景設(shè)定：最近，康敏的加拿大朋友Michael給他發(fā)來電子郵件，想了解康明家鄉(xiāng)的變化。假如你是康敏，請根據(jù)以下提示，給Michael回一封電子郵件。

過去 現(xiàn)在 生活條件差，道路狹窄，車輛少，住不好，吃不飽，聯(lián)系不便。。。生活條件優(yōu)越，道路寬，車輛多，住得舒適，手機普及。。。

要求：1。圍繞以上內(nèi)容進行合理表述；

2。所表述的內(nèi)容必須包含表中的所有方面；

3。詞數(shù)80詞左右，開頭語以給出（不計入詞數(shù)）。

參考詞匯：living conditions，narrow，be crowded into，communications（通訊），telegram，thanks to，rapidly，mobile phone，policy

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Dear Michael，You want to know the changes about my hometown。You know，great changes have taken place since 60 years ago。

In the past，the living conditions were very poor。There were not many buses or cars，and the roads were narrow。Usually，a big family was crowed into a small，dark house。Most families couldn?t get enough food。The communications were simple and slow。People kept in touch with their friends and relatives far away mainly by letter or telegram。

Thanks to the government，our hometown has developed rapidly in recent years。The living conditions are much better and more comfortable。The roads are wide。Some people have their own cars。Most of the people have lived in big new houses。Quite a few adults have mobile phones。Because of many good policies，I think our lives will become better and better。

Sincerely

Kang Min

（七）隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的發(fā)展，人們消費觀念轉(zhuǎn)變，購物方式也在悄然地發(fā)生變化?！熬W(wǎng)購”成為一種時尚，越來越多的學(xué)生也正加入到網(wǎng)購群體中。請你根據(jù)以下表格的提示，寫一篇網(wǎng)上購物的文章。優(yōu)點 1。

足不出戶；節(jié)約時間；避免擁擠、勞累。2。

價格通常比較便宜。3。

可供選擇的范圍廣，品種多。

缺點 1。

只能看到圖片，看不到商品本身。2。

容易購買大量不太需要的東西，造成浪費。

注意：1。所表述的內(nèi)容必須包含表格中的所有方面；

2.80詞左右，開頭文章已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：網(wǎng)購 shopping online； 避免做某事 avoid doing sth； 商品 goods； 導(dǎo)致 cause

[優(yōu)秀滿分范文]

With the development of the Internet，many people are used to shopping online。It has become a fashion in our daily life。Some of us students also join the group。

Shopping online has many advantages。Just by a click of the mouse，you can buy what you?re interested in without going outdoors。You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowded people and cars and save time。When shopping online，you can choose from more varieties of goods，whose prices are generally lower。

Every coin has two sides。Its disadvantages are obvious，too。On the one hand，it?s very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you see on the Internet。On the other hand，shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed。That?s a waste of money。

All in all，I love shopping online。

（八）假如你是李華，今年上初三了，現(xiàn)在的生活和以前大不一樣了。請你根據(jù)自身的情況寫一篇文章介紹一下自己的變化。詞數(shù)：60-80。

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I am Li Hua。I am in Grade Nine this year。My life has changed a lot in the past few weeks。

I used to get up at seven in the morning。But now I get up at six and read English for half an hour every morning。I used to watch TV and go to bed at 9：30 in the evening。But now I have to keep doing homework until 11：00 in the evening。I used to play tennis in my free time。But now I have to spend all my free time studying。

I really miss my old days。

（九）某英文報社正就青少年與父母關(guān)系這一話題開展題為How to keep a good relationship with parents的征文活動。請你根據(jù)以下要點，寫一篇英語短文參加此次活動。

要點：1。父母規(guī)矩太多，過于強調(diào)學(xué)習(xí)成績，不理解自己等問題；

2。你對這些問題的看法；

3。你與父母保持良好關(guān)系的做法。

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How to keep a good relationship with parents

In my opinion，I have too many rules at home。My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night。They don?t allow me to choose my own clothes，either。And they pay too much attention to my exam results。I think my parents don?t quite understand me。

However，I try my best to understand them。Although they don?t allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much pressure，I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a bright future。

In order to keep a good relationship with my parents，I study hard and listen to them。I talk with them as friends，and always tell them my troubles。I also help them do some housework。

（十）今天是母親節(jié)。假定你是李華，請給你的美國筆友John寫一封電子郵件，談?wù)勀銓⑷绾闻c母親一起度過這個特別的日子。要點如下：

1。表述你與母親間的情感；

2。為母親制作一張卡片；

3。幫助母親做點事；

4。陪母親散步等。

注意：1。詞數(shù)80左右；

2。請不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

3。郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

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Dear John，It?s Mother?s Day today。It?s a special day，isn?t it？

I think we should do something to show our love to our mothers on this special day。My mother and I are good friends。Whenever I meet with difficulties，she is always there，ready to help me。

Today I will make a beautiful card for her，with my thanks and best wishes on it。Then I will help her wash the car this afternoon and cook her favourite food in the evening。Besides，I?ll take a walk with her after dinner and then play chess with her，for she likes it very much。I?m sure she?ll be very happy。

What?s your plan for Mother?s Day？ I?m looking forward to hearing from you。

Yours，Li Hua

（十一）英語課代表分發(fā)試卷的時候發(fā)現(xiàn)了一份沒有署名的試卷，成績?yōu)闈M分。請你幫助課代表分析它會時誰的。

要求：1。設(shè)想當(dāng)時的情景，適當(dāng)擴展細節(jié)；

2。書寫工整，100詞左右。

參考詞匯：top student優(yōu)等生；handwriting筆跡；full marks滿分

[優(yōu)秀滿分范文]

we had an exam yesterday and now the papers are being handed out。There?s a paper without a name on it and that student got full marks。

Whom can it belong to？ It can?t be a boy?s，because none of them in class can be so good and tidy。The paper must belong to a girl because its handwriting is very tidy。There are only three girls who are good at handwriting — Rose，Mary and Lucy。It might belong to Rose，but I?m not sure because she is not so good at English。

It can?t be Mary?s。Although she is a top student in English，she has already had hers in hand。So it must belong to Lucy。Today she is ill at home and she does well in English，too。Well，it must belong to her。

（十二）現(xiàn)在很多中學(xué)生都喜歡流行歌曲。請你根據(jù)下面的調(diào)查結(jié)果，寫一篇80詞左右的短文。

kind

quiet music

reason

make them feel comfortable

many musicians who can write their own lyrics

most music that they can dance to

full of energy cool a few

[優(yōu)秀滿分范文]

Nowadays more and more middle school students like pop songs。

A few of them like quiet music because they think quiet music makes them feel comfortable。Many of the students like musicians who can write their own lyrics。Why？ They think it?s cool to express their own feelings。Most of the students like music that they can dance to。They think the music is full of energy。When they are tired or bored，they can dance to the music。

（十三）假如你是郭佳，你的美國筆友Linda給你寫了一封信，說她想給自己的漢語老師送一份禮物來表達自己的感激之情，但是她不知道中國的送禮習(xí)俗，所以請你給她一些建議。請根據(jù)下面的提示，用英語寫一封回信給她。

提示：1。要根據(jù)個人喜好選擇禮物；

2。禮物的包裝不要使用白色或者黑色包裝紙（wrapping paper）；

3。不要送鐘、鞋或者梨。

要求：1。語意通順，條理清楚；

2.80詞左右。（信的格式和開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）

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Dear Linda，I am glad to give you advice on the customs of giving gifts in my country。

Firstly，I think you need to find out what your Chinese teacher likes。Choosing the gift that your teacher is interested in is a good idea。Secondly，don?t pack the gift with black or white wrapping paper，because black and white aren?t considered to be lucky colors。Thirdly，don?t buy your teacher a clock，a pair of shoes，or some pears because these have bad meanings in Chinese when giving a gift。

I hope my advice can help you。

Yours，Guo Jia

（十四）剛到中國來學(xué)習(xí)不久的John應(yīng)漢語老師的邀請去他家里做客，因此John 向Bob請教相關(guān)禮儀。假設(shè)你是Bob，請你給John回一封電子郵件，告訴他一些注意事項。80詞左右，開頭已給出（不計入總詞數(shù)）。

[優(yōu)秀滿分范文]

Dear John，I know that you will visit your Chinese teacher?s home。If you do the following，I don?t think you will feel uncomfortable。

First，you should arrive a little earlier。Being late is impolite。Second，it?s also good to bring a gift such as some flowers or fruit。Third，you will probably use chopsticks to have dinner。Remember not to stick your chopsticks into your food。You?d better say that the food is delicious while you are eating。Finally，after dinner，showing thanks is also necessary。And you are not supposed to stay long after dinner。

Good luck！

Yours，Bob

（十五）假設(shè)上周六晚上，你們?nèi)以谝患绎埖昃筒?。請你根?jù)以下要點提示，用英語寫一篇短文，描述事情發(fā)生的經(jīng)過，并適當(dāng)加以評論。

要點提示：

1。鄰桌年輕人大聲說話、吸煙。

2。你請他們不要那樣做。

3。他們不聽，反而嘲笑你。

4。你認(rèn)為：①他們在公共場所那樣做是不對的。

②年輕人是祖國的未來，應(yīng)該。。。

參考詞匯：嘲笑laugh at

要求：

1。詞數(shù)80左右，短文開頭已給出（不計入總詞數(shù)）。

2。要點齊全，行為連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

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Last Saturday evening，all my family had dinner in a restaurant。

We enjoyed ourselves while we were at table。However，some teenagers sitting beside our table began to talk and laugh loudly。What?s worse，they began to smoke in the restaurant，which made us angry。After a while，I stood up and advised them to stop smoking and behave themselves。To my surprise，they didn?t follow my suggestions。Instead，they laughed at me，saying that I was too young and too naive。

In my opinion，it?s wrong to do that in public。The future of our country lies in teenagers，who should not only obey the rules in public but also make contributions to the society。

（十六）健康對我們來說非常重要，我們可以用很多方法來保持身體健康。請根據(jù)下面表格的提示，以“Good Ways to Keep Healthy”為題，寫一篇80詞左右的短文，倡議“健康生活”，從三個方面說明如何保持健康。短文首句已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2 3 food exercise happiness a balanced diet，vegetables，fruit，less meat。。do more exercise，take a walk，play ball games。。keep happy，make friends，smile。。

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Good Ways to Keep Healthy

It is very important for us to keep healthy。But do you know the ways to keep us healthy？

First，we need to have healthy eating habits，we can eat a lot of vegetables and fresh fruit，but we?d better eat less meat。Different kinds of food are necessary，it?s also important to eat a balanced diet。

Then，playing sports every day can also help us keep fit。We can take walks after dinner，we can walk to school instead of taking a bus，after school we can spend hours playing basketball or soccer with our friends。We should try to do more exercise every day。

Happiness is another way to keep healthy。When we are lonely or unhappy，try to make friends。It is a good way to keep us happy。If you smile often，you also feel happy。So，be happy to be healthy。

（十七）健康一直是人們關(guān)注的問題，我校要舉行以“關(guān)愛健康”為主題的主題班會，請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?/p>

1。保持健康的重要性；

2。保持健康的方法：多吃水果蔬菜；每天鍛煉一小時；早睡早起；勤洗手；

3。自己的看法（至少一條）。

注意：1。文中不能出現(xiàn)校名和自己的姓名；2。內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)擴展。3。字?jǐn)?shù)60-80詞；4。文章開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。

[優(yōu)秀滿分范文]

Boys and girls，It is very important for us students to keep healthy。

There are many ways to be healthy。We?d better eat more fruits and vegetables。Take exercise for at least one hour every day。We need enough sleep and rest so it is important to go to bed early and get up early。Besides，we should wash our hands as often as possible。In my opinion，we mustn?t drink wine or smoke。They are bad for our health。

Thank you。

（十八）近20年來，各方面的調(diào)查表明：青少年的體質(zhì)不斷下降。請你以“How to keep healthy”為題，寫一篇80詞左右的短文，說說你的看法和建議。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

主要內(nèi)容包括：

1。體質(zhì)下降的原因。如：eat too much junk food，have too much homework。。

2。合理的健康建議。如：should do more exercise，eat a balanced diet（飲食平衡），enough sleep。。

[優(yōu)秀滿分范文]

How to keep healthy

Nowadays students? physical fitness is declining year by year。I think there are some reasons。

Students have too much homework to do，so they have little time to have sports。Some students eat too much junk food。That?s also bad for their health。

Then，how to keep healthy？ Here is some useful advice。First，students should do more exercise。

Second，students should eat a balanced diet。They should eat more vegetables and fruits，and try to eat less junk food。Finally，enough sleep is also very important。

（十九）節(jié)約資源，保護環(huán)境，從身邊的小事做起。作為一名學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該怎樣看待“低碳”生活？請以“My low — carbon life”為題寫一篇短文，簡述自己對“低碳”生活的理解及看法。80詞左右。

提示：1。步行或騎自行車上學(xué)；

2。節(jié)約用水；

3。不用塑料袋；

4。節(jié)約用電；

5。充分使用紙張。

參考詞匯：on foot，turn off，recycle，make full use of，plastic bag，tap

[優(yōu)秀滿分范文]

My low-carbon life

Now the human living environment is becoming worse and worse。So a new lifestyle called low-carbon life is spreading to every part of our country。As middle school students，how can we have a low-carbon life？

Firstly，we can go to school on foot or by bike。Secondly，we shouldn?t waste water or electricity。Do remember to turn off the lights when we leave the room and turn off the tap in time after using it。Thirdly，we should use cloth bags in our daily life instead of plastic ones。Fourthly，we should also make full use of paper。We?d better recycle some of our textbooks。

It?s important for us to live a low-carbon life to protect the environment。

（二十）為配合我市“禮儀宜賓（Charm Yibin）”活動的開展，某學(xué)校開展以“How to behave well”為主題的英語作文，請你以一名中學(xué)生的身份寫一篇60-80詞的短文參賽。

內(nèi)容包括：1。守時，不說臟話；2。禮貌待人，熱心助人；3。遵守交通規(guī)則，不亂扔垃圾；4。。

注意：1。文中不能出現(xiàn)校名和自己的姓名；2。內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)擴充。

[優(yōu)秀滿分范文]

How to behave well

As a student in Yibin，we should behave well。

First，I think it?s very important to do everything on time and keep promises。Never lie to others or say dirty words。Next we should be polite to others and ready to help people in need。Then we?d better not talk loudly in public。Don?t throw litter or spit about。And remember to obey traffic rules。

Finally，learn to work with others。We need good team work in our life。

第二篇：這篇歷年中考滿分作文

這篇歷年中考滿分作文范文：邁過那道坎，是無憂考網(wǎng)特地為大家整理的，希望對大家有所幫助！

歷年中考滿分作文范文：邁過那道坎

以前,每每看見別人在泳池里游泳真的好羨慕!真希望自己有朝一日,也能在那池“藍天”里馳騁.前不久，在我的強烈要求下,媽媽為我花了2000元在新鳳城游泳館報了為期兩個月的自游泳培訓(xùn)班。原本以為夢想將從這里啟航.可誰料,磨難，從此開始。

記得進培訓(xùn)班的第一天，教練就扯著嗓門，板著臉,神情嚴(yán)肅地對我們說：“我是你們這期培訓(xùn)班的教練，我只給你們兩個月的時間。兩個月以后每位學(xué)員必須通過自由泳的考試，大家聽到了嗎?”天呢!兩個月!這對從未下過水的我來說簡直是天方夜譚.“聽，聽??,聽到了.”我的心不禁打起顫來.我意識到，我遇到了人生道路上的一道坎，但既然選擇了它,我就必須跨過去!

當(dāng)天，教練就教我們練習(xí)悶水。只見教練深吸一口氣后，潛入水里，過了好一會兒才上來。接下來，他要求我們自己練習(xí)。由于我小時候洗頭時曾被水嗆著過，因此，看著這一池的水，我愣是不敢下去。最后是教練硬把我推下了水。還扯著我的腦袋把我往水里按。我使勁地搖晃著，就像一匹烈馬想掙脫繩索的束縛.可我區(qū)區(qū)一個孩子，怎能敵的過幾個回合下來，不僅沒有半點效果,還嗆了好幾口水.。我難受極了，使勁地咳嗽。但教練似乎沒有人性，像監(jiān)工一樣死死地看住我，“潛入水里，不要吸氣，要呼氣!呼氣!”他那破銅鑼般的嗓音一次次響起。10秒，30秒，50秒，70秒??15天以后，我終于掌握了悶水的技巧。

接下來的日子，教練叫我們在岸上練習(xí)自由泳地劃水姿勢，自以為練得很不錯我，不知怎么的，只要一“下”水，手腳就不聽使喚。我只得再“爬”上岸老老實實的.一遍又一遍的重復(fù)著枯糙而又乏味的動作。一個月以后，我終于駕馭了它。

最后一關(guān)也是最難---的-------------___“換氣”。它得把前面學(xué)的幾個環(huán)節(jié)來個“三合一”。光“一”和“二”，已經(jīng)耗去了一個半月，再來“三合一”，談何容易啊!可我又轉(zhuǎn)念一想,咱不能氣餒，你都過了兩關(guān)了，怎么能在這第三關(guān)敗下陣來?”我暗暗咬緊牙關(guān)，按照教練叫我們的口訣，一遍又一遍的在水中練習(xí)著。

真是功夫不負有心人，半個月以后，當(dāng)我聽到教練“篤”的一聲哨響，縱身“躍”入了水中的那一刻,我知道,這道坎,我跨過了!

其實，人生的道路從來都不平坦，誰都會遭遇各種各樣的坎。要像劉翔那樣勇往直前，你就能飛躍一道又一道坎，你的人生就充滿燦爛和喜悅。

第三篇：2018中考英語寫作輕松拿滿分!

背熟這20篇經(jīng)典范文，2018中考英語寫作輕松拿滿分！

這20篇英語范文涵蓋了初中三年涉及到的所有英語寫作話題，包括學(xué)習(xí)、健康、網(wǎng)絡(luò)、生活、環(huán)保、禮儀等，會為你的英語寫作提供清晰的思路和豐富的素材，多看、多記、多思，2018中考英語考場上你一定能夠像這些小作者一樣，寫出優(yōu)秀滿分英語作文的！

（一）為了交流學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)驗，提高學(xué)習(xí)效率，《中學(xué)生英語輔導(dǎo)報》舉行了一次以How to be a good learner?為題的征文比賽活動，請寫一篇80詞左右的短文談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?/p>

How to be a good learner? As a good learner, we should have good habits and ways of learning.We need to get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class.It’s good to study in groups and help each other.We should do more reading in our free time.If we have some problems, we’d better ask others for help.As a student, working hard is important, but don’t forget to do sports and keep healthy.I think all these above will be helpful to us.（二）

親愛的同學(xué)，你的初中學(xué)習(xí)生活馬上就要結(jié)束了，請你以“My English Study”為題，談一下三年以來學(xué)習(xí)英語的心得體會。

要求：1.要點包括你在英語學(xué)習(xí)中所遇到的困難、解決的方法以及學(xué)習(xí)感悟；2.詞數(shù)80左右?！緝?yōu)秀滿分范文】 My English Study How time flies!My three-year middle school life will be over soon.Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.When I entered the middle school, I had so many difficulties with my English.I was not able to understand the teacher in class, and I couldn’t master the words and phrases.For a time I wanted to give it up.Later, with the help of the teacher and my classmates, I listened to the teacher carefully in class, kept on reading English every day and spoke as much as possible.Step by step I made great progress in English.In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well.（三）父親節(jié)馬上就要到了，但是有些同學(xué)不知道送什么禮物給父親。請根據(jù)下面的提示進行適當(dāng)擴展，并向同學(xué)們提出一些建議。80詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾以給出（不計入總詞數(shù)）。

提示：1.如果有足夠的零花錢，可以為父親買一些使用單不貴的東西，如領(lǐng)帶等： 2.還可以為父親做些力所能及的事情（do something that you can do）,如為父親準(zhǔn)備一杯茶等他下班后飲用等?！緝?yōu)秀滿分范文】

Father’s Day is coming and you must be thinking of giving a present to your father.Different people like different kinds of gifts.If you have enough pocket money, you can buy a useful but not expensive thing, like a tie.I think your father will like it.But if you don’t have enough pocket money, you can do something that you can do, for example, you can prepare a cup of tea.When your father comes back from work, he can drink it.No matter what you do, the most important thing is to make your father happy on Father’s Day.Don’t you think so?

（四）請根據(jù)提示以“The Spring Festival”為題，寫一篇不少于80詞的英語短文。提示：1.春節(jié)是中國最重要的節(jié)日； 2.人們大多回家過年，家庭成員團聚；

3.家人一起吃團年飯、看電視、拜訪親朋好友（friends and relatives）;4.孩子們喜歡春節(jié)?！緝?yōu)秀滿分范文】

The Spring Festival The Spring Festival comes in wenter.It is the most important traditional festival in China.People usually go home to spend the festival with their family.They have a big family get-together.The Chinese people have big meals and watch TV during the Spring Festival.They also visit their friends and relatives.Children like the Spring Festival very much because they needn’t go to school and they have a lot of time to play.（五）

假設(shè)Linda是你的好朋友，你們兩年沒有見面了。上個星期她從國外留學(xué)回來，你們很高興見到彼此。請根據(jù)提示，簡要介紹Linda的變化。提示：1.外貌：以前個子矮，短發(fā)；現(xiàn)在個子高多了，長發(fā)。

2.愛好：以前喜歡打乒乓球、看電視和聊天；現(xiàn)在喜歡彈鋼琴、看書和散步。3.性格：以前外向；現(xiàn)在有些內(nèi)向。要求：1.不要逐字翻譯，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 2.層次清晰，語言流暢； 3.80詞左右?！緝?yōu)秀滿分范文】

Linda is my best friend.She has changed o lot in the past two years.She used to be short and have short hair.However, now she is much taller than before.She has long hair.She used to like playing ping-pong, watching TV and chatting with friends.But she likes playing the piano, reading books and taking a walk now.She used to be outgoing.Now she is a little quite.I think people sure change as time goes by.Even though she has changed a lot, we will be the best friends all the time.（六）

背景設(shè)定：最近，康敏的加拿大朋友Michael給他發(fā)來電子郵件，想了解康明家鄉(xiāng)的變化。假如你是康敏，請根據(jù)以下提示，給Miachael回一封電子郵件。過去 生活條件差，道路狹窄，車輛少，住不好，吃不飽，聯(lián)系不便......現(xiàn)在 生活條件優(yōu)越，道路寬，車輛多，住得舒適，手機普及......要求：1.圍繞以上內(nèi)容進行合理表述； 2.所表述的內(nèi)容必須包含表中的所有方面；

3.詞數(shù)80詞左右，開頭語以給出（不計入詞數(shù)）。參考詞匯：living conditions, narrow, be crowded into, communications(通訊)，telegram, thanks to, rapidly, mobile phone, policy Dear Michael, You want to know sthe changes about my hometown.You know, great changes have taken place since 60 years ago.In the past, the living conditions were very poor.There were not many buses or cars, and the roads were narrow.Usually, a big family was crowed into a small, dark house.Most families couldn’t get enough food.The communications were simple and slow.People kept in touch with their friends and relatives far away mainly by letter or telegram.Thanks to the government, our hometown has developed rapidly in recent years.The living conditions are much better and more comfortable.The roads are wide.Some people have their own cars.Most of the people have lived in big new houses.Quite a few adults have mobile phones.Because of many good policies, I think our lives will become better and better.Sincerely Kang Min

（七）隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的發(fā)展，人們消費觀念轉(zhuǎn)變，購物方式也在悄然地發(fā)生變化?！熬W(wǎng)購”成為一種時尚，越來越多的學(xué)生也正加入到網(wǎng)購群體中。請你根據(jù)以下表格的提示，寫一篇網(wǎng)上購物的文章。

1.足不出戶；節(jié)約時間；避免擁擠、勞累。

優(yōu)點 2.價格通常比較便宜。

3.可供選擇的范圍廣，品種多。1.只能看到圖片，看不到商品本身。

缺點

2.容易購買大量不太需要的東西，造成浪費。

注意：1.所表述的內(nèi)容必須包含表格中的所有方面； 2.80詞左右，開頭文章已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：網(wǎng)購 shopping online;避免做某事 avoid doing sth;商品 goods;導(dǎo)致 cause 【優(yōu)秀滿分范文】

With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online.It has become a fashion in our daily life.Some of us students also join the group.Shopping online has many advantages.Just by a click of the mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors.You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowded people and cars and save time.When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.Every coin has two sides.Its disadvantages are obvious, too.On the one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you see on the Internert.On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed.That’s a waste of money.All in all, I love shopping online.（八）

假如你是李華，今年上初三了，現(xiàn)在的生活和以前大不一樣了。請你根據(jù)自身的情況寫一篇文章介紹一下自己的變化。詞數(shù)：60-80?！緝?yōu)秀滿分范文】

I am Li Hua.I am in Grade Nine this year.My life has changed a lot in the past few weeks.I used to get up at seven in the morning.But now I get up at six and read English for half an hour every morning.I used to watch TV and go to bed at 9:30 in the evening.But now I have to keep doing homework until 11:00 in the evening.I used to play tennis in my free time.But now I have to spend all my free time studying.I really miss my old days.（九）

某英文報社正就青少年與父母關(guān)系這一話題開展題為How to keep a good relationship with parents的征文活動。請你根據(jù)以下要點，寫一篇英語短文參加此次活動。

要點：1.父母規(guī)矩太多，過于強調(diào)學(xué)習(xí)成績，不理解自己等問題； 2.你對這些問題的看法； 3.你與父母保持良好關(guān)系的做法?！緝?yōu)秀滿分范文】

How to keep a good relationship with parents In my opinion, I have too many rules at home.My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night.They don’t allow me to choose my own clothes, either.And they pay too much attention to my exam results.I think my parents don’t quite understand me.However, I try my best to understand them.Although they don’t allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much presure, I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a bright future.In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I study hard and listen to them.I talk with them as friends, and always tell them my troubles.I also help them do some housework.（十）

今天是母親節(jié)。假定你是李華，請給你的美國筆友John寫一封電子郵件，談?wù)勀銓⑷绾闻c母親一起度過這個特別的日子。要點如下： 1.表述你與母親間的情感； 2.為母親制作一張卡片； 3.幫助母親做點事； 4.陪母親散步等。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右； 2.請不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

3.郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。【優(yōu)秀滿分范文】 Dear John, It’s Mother’s Day today.It’s a special day, isn’t it?

I think we should do something to show our love to our mothers on this special day.My mother and I are good friends.Whenever I meet with difficulties, she is always there, ready to help me.Today I will make a beautiful card for her, with my thanks and best wishes on it.Then I will help her wash the car this afternoon and cook her favourite food in the evening.Besides, I’ll take a walk with her after dinner and then play chess with her, for she likes it very much.I’m sure she’ll be very happy.What’s your plan for Mother’s Day? I’m looking forward to hearing from you.Yours, Li Hua

（十一）英語課代表分發(fā)試卷的時候發(fā)現(xiàn)了一份沒有署名的試卷，成績?yōu)闈M分。請你幫助課代表分析它會時誰的。

要求：1.設(shè)想當(dāng)時的情景，適當(dāng)擴展細節(jié)； 2.書寫工整，100詞左右。

參考詞匯：top student優(yōu)等生；handwriting筆跡；full marks滿分 【優(yōu)秀滿分范文】

we had an exam yesterday and now the papers are being handed out.There’s a paper without a name on it and that student got full marks.Whom can it belong to? It can’t be a boy’s, because none of them in class can be so good and tidy.The paper must belong to a girl because its handwriting is very tidy.There are only three girls who are good at handwriting — Rose, Mary and Lucy.It might belong to Rose, but I’m not sure because she is not so good at English.It can’t be Mary’s.Although she is a top student in English, she has already had hers in hand.So it must belong to Lucy.Today she is ill at home and she does well in English, too.Well, it must belong to her.（十二）

現(xiàn)在很多中學(xué)生都喜歡流行歌曲。請你根據(jù)下面的調(diào)查結(jié)果，寫一篇80詞左右的短文。

kind reason

make them feel comfortable a few quiet music

many musicians who can write their own lyrics

music that they can dance to

cool

most full of energy

【優(yōu)秀滿分范文】

Nowadays more and more middle school students like pop songs.A few of them like quiet music because they think quiet music makes them feel comfortable.Many of the students like musicians who can write their own lyrics.Why? They think it’s cool to express their own feelings.Most of the students like music that they can dance to.They think the music is full of energy.When they are tired or bored, they can dance to the music.（十三）假如你是郭佳，你的美國筆友Linda給你寫了一封信，說她想給自己的漢語老師送一份禮物來表達自己的感激之情，但是她不知道中國的送禮習(xí)俗，所以請你給她一些建議。請根據(jù)下面的提示，用英語寫一封回信給她。提示：1.要根據(jù)個人喜好選擇禮物；

2.禮物的包裝不要使用白色或者黑色包裝紙（wrapping paper）； 3.不要送鐘、鞋或者梨。要求：1.語意通順，條理清楚；

2.80詞左右。（信的格式和開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）【優(yōu)秀滿分范文】 Dear Linda, I am glad to give you advice on the customs of giving gifts in my country.Firstly, I think you need to find out what your Chinese teacher likes.Choosing the gift that your teacher is interested in is a good idea.Secondly, don’t pack the gift with black or white wrapping paper, because black and white aren’t considered to be lucky colors.Thirdly, don’t buy your teacher a clock, a pair of shoes, or some pears because these have bad meanings in Chinese when giving a gift.I hope my advice can help you.Yours, Guo Jia

（十四）剛到中國來學(xué)習(xí)不久的John應(yīng)漢語老師的邀請去他家里做客，因此John 向Bob請教相關(guān)禮儀。假設(shè)你是Bob,請你給John回一封電子郵件，告訴他一些注意事項。80詞左右，開頭已給出（不計入總詞數(shù)）?！緝?yōu)秀滿分范文】 Dear John, I know that you will visit your Chinese teacher’s home.If you do the following, I don’t think you will feel uncomfortable.First, you should arrive a little earlier.Being late is impolite.Second, it’s also good to bring a gift such as some flowers or fruit.Third, you will probably use chopsticks to have dinner.Remember not to stick your chopsticks into your food.You’d better say that the food is delicious while you are eating.Finally, after dinner, showing thanks is also necessary.And you are not supposed to stay long after dinner.Good luck!

Yours, Bob

（十五）假設(shè)上周六晚上，你們?nèi)以谝患绎埖昃筒?。請你根?jù)以下要點提示，用英語寫一篇短文，描述事情發(fā)生的經(jīng)過，并適當(dāng)加以評論。要點提示：

1.鄰桌年輕人大聲說話、吸煙。2.你請他們不要那樣做。3.他們不聽，反而嘲笑你。4.你認(rèn)為：①他們在公共場所那樣做是不對的。②年輕人是祖國的未來，應(yīng)該......參考詞匯：嘲笑laugh at 要求：

1.詞數(shù)80左右，短文開頭已給出（不計入總詞數(shù)）。2.要點齊全，行為連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮?！緝?yōu)秀滿分范文】

Last Saturday evening, all my family had dinner in a resturant.We enjoyed ourselves while we were at table.However, some teenagers sitting beside our table began to talk and laugh loudly.What’s worse, they began to smoke in the restaurant, which made us angry.After a while, I stood up and advised them to stop smoking and behave themselves.To my surprise, they didn’t follow my suggestions.Instead, they laughed at me, saying that I was too young and too naive.In my opinion, it’s wrong to do that in public.The future of our courtry lies in teenagers, who should not only obey the rules in public but also make contributions to the society.（十六）

健康對我們來說非常重要，我們可以用很多方法來保持身體健康。請根據(jù)下面表格的提示，以“Good Ways to Keep Healthy”為題，寫一篇80詞左右的短文，倡議“健康生活”，從三個方面說明如何保持健康。短文首句已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。1 2 3 food exercise happiness

a balanced diet, vegetables, fruit, less meat...do more exercise, take a walk, play ball games...keep happy, make friends, smile...Good Ways to Keep Healthy It is very important for us to keep healthy.But do you know the ways to keep us healthy? First, we need to have healthy eating habits, we can eat a lot of vegetables and fresh fruit, but we’d better eat less meat.Different kinds of food are necessary, it’s also important to eat a balanced diet.Then, playing sports every day can also help us keep fit.We can take walks after dinner, we can walk to school instead of taking a bus, after school we can spend hours playing basketball or soccer with our friends.We should try to do more exercise every day.Happiness is another way to keep healthy.When we are lonely or unhappy, try to make friends.It is a good way to keep us happy.If you smile often, you also feel happy.So, be happy to be healthy.（十七）

健康一直是人們關(guān)注的問題，我校要舉行以“關(guān)愛健康”為主題的主題班會，請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?.保持健康的重要性；

2.保持健康的方法：多吃水果蔬菜；每天鍛煉一小時；早睡早起；勤洗手； 3.自己的看法（至少一條）。

注意：1.文中不能出現(xiàn)校名和自己的姓名；2.內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)擴展。3.字?jǐn)?shù)60-80詞；4.文章開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)?！緝?yōu)秀滿分范文】 Boys and girls, It is very important for us students to keep healthy.There are many ways to be healthy.We’d better eat more fruits and vegetables.Take exercise for at least one hour every day.We need enough sleep and rest so it is important to go to bed early and get up early.Besides, we should wash our hands as often as possible.In my opinion, we mustn't drink wine or smoke.They are bad for our health.Thank you.（十八）

近20年來，各方面的調(diào)查表明：青少年的體質(zhì)不斷下降。請你以“How to keep healty”為題，寫一篇80詞左右的短文，說說你的看法和建議。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。主要內(nèi)容包括：

1.體質(zhì)下降的原因。如：eat too much junk food, have too much homework...2.合理的健康建議。如：should do more exercise, eat a balanced diet(飲食平衡), enough sleep...【優(yōu)秀滿分范文】

How to keep healthy Nowadays students’ physical fitness is declining year by year.I think there are some reasons.Students have too much homework to do, so they have little time to have sports.Some students eat too much junk food.That’s also bad for their health.Then, how to keep healthy? Here is some useful advice.First, students should do more exercise.Second, students should eat a balanced diet.They should eat more vegetables and fruits, and try to eat less junk food.Finally, enough sleep is also very important.（十九）

節(jié)約資源，保護環(huán)境，從身邊的小事做起。作為一名學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該怎樣看待“低碳”生活？請以“My low — carbon life”為題寫一篇短文，簡述自己對“低碳”生活的理解及看法。80詞左右。提示：1.步行或騎自行車上學(xué)； 2.節(jié)約用水； 3.不用塑料袋； 4.節(jié)約用電； 5.充分使用紙張。

參考詞匯：on foot, turn off, recycle, make full use of, plastic bag, tap 【優(yōu)秀滿分范文】

My low-carbon life Now the human living environment is becoming worse and worse.So a new lifestyle called low-carbon life is spreading to every part of our country.As middle school students, how can we have a low-carbon life? Firstly, we can go to school on foot or by bike.Secondly, we shouldn’t waste water or electricity.Do remember to turn off the lights when we leave the room and turn off the tap in time after using it.Thirdly, we should use colth bags in our daily life instead of plastic ones.Fourthly, we should also make full use of paper.We’d better recycle some of our textbooks.It’s important for us to live a low-carbon life to protect the environment.（二十）

為配合我市“禮儀宜賓（Charm Yibin）”活動的開展，某學(xué)校開展以“How to behave well”為主題的英語作文，請你以一名中學(xué)生的身份寫一篇60-80詞的短文參賽。

內(nèi)容包括：1.守時，不說臟話；2.禮貌待人，熱心助人；3.遵守交通規(guī)則，不亂扔垃圾；4...注意：1.文中不能出現(xiàn)校名和自己的姓名；2.內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)擴充。【優(yōu)秀滿分范文】

How to behave well As a student in Yibin, we should behave well.First, I think it’s very important to do everything on time and keep promises.Never lie to others or say dirty words.Next we should be polite to others and ready to help people in need.Then we’d better not talk loudly in public.Don’t throw litter or spit about.And remember to obey traffic rules.Finally, learn to work with others.We need good team work in our life.

第四篇：這篇關(guān)于2013年中考滿分作文記敘文

這篇關(guān)于2013年中考滿分作文記敘文：媽媽，其實我懂你

具體是何時，我已經(jīng)記不清了，但是，那個在燈光下忙碌的身影卻深深地留在了我的腦海中，永遠也無法忘記。

媽媽這個詞，似乎是一切溫暖的代名詞，因為它很溫和，很柔美。但是，在我看來我的媽媽卻恰恰相反。

媽媽對我很嚴(yán)厲，有時我做作業(yè)不認(rèn)真、吃飯不洗手、或者不小心打碎個盤子，她就會把我一頓臭罵，所以我常常對她避而遠之。

天越來越冷了，我經(jīng)不住寒冷的考驗，向媽媽提出一個并不過分的要求，讓她給我買件棉衣。誰知，我話音剛落，媽媽就沖我吼叫：“要什么要，家里哪有那么多錢??！好好學(xué)你的習(xí)就不冷了！”.委屈的淚水從我臉頰滑落，我哭著跑進了自己的臥室，反鎖了門。

門外，媽媽向爸爸抱怨：“這孩子越來越不像話了，就知道臭美！”.我在門后哼了一聲，用被子蒙住頭，倒頭就睡。晚上，我出門到客廳喝了口水，隱約看到媽媽房間的燈還亮著，便偷偷地走了過去，從門縫中，我看見媽媽正坐在縫紉機前，一針一線的為我縫一件粉紅色的棉襖，稀疏的銀發(fā)在燈下隱隱發(fā)光，媽媽時不時的用手去捶下她那微駝的背。

我又哭了，但這次的淚水中包含的大多是慚愧，原來，我一直都沒有發(fā)現(xiàn)媽媽的好??！天亮了，媽媽關(guān)上了燈，打開門，看見我站在門外，說：“你這死丫頭，怎么不去睡覺呀！”.我笑笑說：“我不想睡，相陪下你，你不也沒有睡嗎？”.媽媽一驚，脫下了她的偽裝，剩下的只有她那迷人的微笑。

媽媽，不要再偽裝了，其實我知道，我懂你，你想天下所有母親一樣，只是不會表達你那沉重的母愛而已。

第五篇：(中考滿分作文)得作文者得語文（范文模版）

“得作文者得語文”，作文分?jǐn)?shù)占了語文試卷的半壁江山，同學(xué)們需要引起足夠的重視。學(xué)習(xí)作文范文是提高作文分?jǐn)?shù)的一個重要手段。考試吧中考頻道匯總了全國部分地區(qū)的中考作文范文，下面是2015年重慶中考滿分作文，希望對大家有所幫助。

第一篇：我們攜手走進青春

到中流擊水，浪遏飛舟?！}記

青春，是一座橋，一座幼稚單純通向睿智堅強的橋。恰同學(xué)少年，風(fēng)華正茂，盡是追求，盡是拼搏，讓我們與老師、與同學(xué)攜手走進青春感受這奮進昂揚的美好時光。

師生斗智求真知

陽光潑灑在窗欞，數(shù)學(xué)老師正在給我們手舞足蹈講課。“正多邊形對稱軸是它每一個邊的中垂線，條數(shù)是它的邊數(shù)!”這洪亮的聲音充滿威嚴(yán)，讓人覺那仿佛是不容置疑的真理?？墒牵唤z思維的火花在腦中閃過：“正方形的兩條對角線也是對稱軸呀!所有的正偶數(shù)邊形都有與對角線重疊的對稱軸”。老師顯然錯了!課后，我立即追上他，告訴他我的想法，他遲疑片刻說：“你畫圖沒有，幾何畫圖就明白了!教書幾十年，我心中有數(shù)!”他的語氣堅定自信，又語重心長。一旁的同學(xué)說：“老師是大數(shù)學(xué)家，你一個學(xué)生就不要和專家爭了?！崩蠋熜α诵?，起身想離開。我不甘心，立即用筆畫圖給他看。老師抬抬眼鏡，疑惑地看著圖形上的線條——正方形的確有與對角線重合的對稱軸!他顯得驚訝，緊鎖著眉頭，手摸下頦，看了良久。終于，他舒展眉毛，對我說：“哎呀，老師還真弄錯了……正偶數(shù)邊形還有與對角線重合的對稱軸!”大家會心地笑了。

讓我們與老師一起追求知識和真理，攜手走進青春!

同窗助威展風(fēng)彩

雨絲落在操場，可比賽仍在繼續(xù)。我正與對手們站在800米賽道的起點線上，哨聲一響，箭一般沖了出去。加油聲在耳畔，不斷響起，似松濤!似雷鳴!迎著風(fēng)，冒著雨，快步向前，對手們一個個從身邊閃過，前方的身影越來越少，我暫時領(lǐng)先為第一!400、300……到最后沖刺的200米，加油的人群中傳來一個焦急的聲音：“來了!來了!右邊，快啊!”余光中，右邊的確有了黑影，對手幾乎與我持平，這最后競爭的關(guān)鍵時刻來了。“快啊!快啊!……加油!加油!……同學(xué)助威聲越來越烈，似急促的戰(zhàn)鼓，沖鋒的號角，我迫使自己的每個細胞都與氧氣結(jié)合，迸發(fā)出奇?zhèn)サ哪芰?，在同學(xué)的鼓勵聲中，我忘情了，沒命了，發(fā)狠了，超越對手，險勝奪冠!

讓我們與同學(xué)一起為榮譽和勝利拼搏，攜手走進青春!

青春歲月，來匆匆，去匆匆。曾記否!到中流擊水，浪遏飛舟。讓我們，永遠攜手走進青春，收獲知識，收獲成長，收獲無悔青春。

【解讀】

抓住與教師、與同學(xué)追求奮斗的兩幅畫面寫青春校園，貼近生活，喚醒了同學(xué)的生活積淀，鼓勵作文多多發(fā)現(xiàn)生活的精彩瞬間。文章環(huán)境渲染，細節(jié)刻畫，排比抒情，細致入微，酣暢淋漓，藝術(shù)之美起于生活的細節(jié)，細節(jié)描寫又讓生活更美。從結(jié)構(gòu)上看，全文結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)而張弛有度，讓人眼前一亮，頗具新意，本文被評為一類卷當(dāng)之無愧。

第二篇：微笑的味道

我的同學(xué)這次考試失利了,我安慰她說:“盡力而為就好?！?/p>

她很嚴(yán)肅地盯著我的眼睛,說:“不是盡力就好,盡力只是為犯錯誤找借口。”她盯著我,臉色越來越沉,我感到火苗已經(jīng)燒到我的頭發(fā)了,得趕緊滅火,于是我妥協(xié)了。她這才放過我。稍候,她調(diào)節(jié)了一下情緒,開始給我講她小時候的一件事。

“那時候,我上三年級,老師總是布置好多作業(yè),后來我就想了一個取巧的辦法,我跟老師說:?我盡力了,但不會做,沒辦法。?老師無奈地搖搖頭。我的這個辦法成功了,于是很快這個辦法就在班里傳開了,所有同學(xué)都用這方法。后來,換了個老師,老師針對這一現(xiàn)象開了一次班會。班會上,老師講了一個故事,是關(guān)于豹子的。他說:?有一只小豹子出生三個月后,豹媽媽讓它去打獵,它嫌苦嫌累,便在外面游蕩了一會兒,回去對媽媽說,我盡力,可抓不到。豹媽媽心疼孩子, 說:孩子,盡力就行了,我去打獵吧。豹媽媽讓小豹子休息。日子一天天就這樣過去了,終于有一天,豹媽媽老了,再也打不了獵了,可是小豹子早已過了最佳學(xué)習(xí)時期,爪子和奔跑能力早已退化。?”

“老師對我們說:?如果不是一句盡力就好,小豹子和豹媽媽會有這樣的結(jié)果嗎?盡力而為只是借口,你捫心自問,你們真的不能做得更好嗎??”

“從那以后,我再也沒有用盡力這個借口搪塞他人,搪塞自己?！?/p>

她看了我一會兒,繼續(xù)說:“你知道盡力而為的下一句是什么嗎?盡力而為,命中注定。當(dāng)然,這是我加的?？墒?實際上,真的什么都是命中注定的嗎?不可更改了嗎?人生下來就已經(jīng)注定了結(jié)果,關(guān)鍵是從開始到結(jié)束的過程,這一過程中遇到的困難、挫折數(shù)不勝數(shù),不能站在山腳下,想像一下自己可能爬不上去,轉(zhuǎn)過身就對自己說,我爬不上去,我盡力了。愛拼才會贏,并不是僅僅盡力而為就好。”

我一直都知道,我這個同學(xué)有很多值得我學(xué)習(xí)的地方,我對她說:“我明白了,盡力是達到身體或心理的極限,所以,我們要拼搏。”

“不錯,接受新思想,挺快嘛?！彼凉M意地點點頭。

人生中遇到的挫折有很多,可是盡力只是借口,要努力拼搏,愛拼才會贏,不是僅僅盡力而為就好了。

點評：

采用逆向思維的方法,借同學(xué)之口,提出了一個新穎而獨到的觀點:“不是盡力就好,盡力只是為犯錯誤找借口?！蔽恼乱詫υ挼男问秸归_,重心部分是同學(xué)向“ 我”講述的她小時候的一個關(guān)于學(xué)習(xí)的小故事--同學(xué)曾以“我盡力了,但不會做,沒辦法”的借口來搪塞老師,逃避作業(yè);但后來一位新老師講述的關(guān)于“小豹子”的故事,使得同學(xué)改變了“只要盡力就好”的觀念,懂得了“愛拼才會贏”的道理,“我”從同學(xué)的故事中也頓悟到“盡力是達到身體或心理的極限”的人生哲理。

亮點在于：反彈琵琶,立意獨到,主旨新穎;思想深刻,說理透辟。

逆向思維是人的一種思維方式,主要的特點是從話題的反面進行思考,通過反詰、質(zhì)疑從而提出自己的見解。特點是出其不意,與眾不同,讓人耳目一新。上文的小就是利用了這種思維寫作,獲得了滿分。我們今后在寫作中也不妨一試。但我們要注意反彈不是亂彈,且不具有普遍性。如“尊老愛幼”就不能反彈為“欺老騙幼”。大家可以從下面的成語開始鍛煉一下這種思維。班門弄斧、良藥苦口利于病、沒有規(guī)矩不成方圓、當(dāng)一天和尚撞一天鐘、墻倒眾人推、東施效顰、杞人憂天、藝高人膽大、開卷有益等。