第一篇：四、六級(jí)作文心得

四、六級(jí)作文心得

慎用套詞！現(xiàn)在很多老師都建議學(xué)生在臨考前背一些范文、重點(diǎn)句式，幾乎所有的作文參考書上也羅列了一大堆此類范文、重點(diǎn)句式。在應(yīng)試作文中，這些句式“放之四海而皆準(zhǔn)”，曾經(jīng)讓無數(shù)考生從中嘗到了甜頭。但是請(qǐng)大家注意了，時(shí)光已經(jīng)走到了公元2004年，閱卷老師的觀念也正在“與時(shí)俱進(jìn)”?，F(xiàn)在那些閱卷老師普遍對(duì)那些套詞恨之入骨。這也不奇怪，雖然有的句子很好，但是如果用的人多了，也就失去了新鮮，甚至?xí)獾椒锤?。如果一篇圖表或圖畫作文，一上來就是：“Simple as the picture(table/photo/cartoon/drawing/)is，the symbolic meaning it conveys is deep and profound。”很好的句子，不知是哪位傳授的，但其影響之大，受眾之廣，讓閱卷老師始料不及。閱卷老師一看就知道是套詞，所有的看圖作文都能用，于是就當(dāng)考生沒寫這句話。再看到這句話，開始反感，覺得考生水平不高，就會(huì)用別人的話，反而會(huì)留下不好的印象，自然不會(huì)給高分；換了份卷子，怎么還是這句話？！直接就給你打入冷宮。這也不奇怪，就算是滿漢全席也有吃厭的時(shí)候，更何況一個(gè)十分鐘能見八回的句子？這樣出彩的句子尚且如此，更別提那些俗上加俗、倒人胃口的套詞了：how interesting the picture is！As can be seen from the picture等等。最讓人深惡痛絕的一句是as far as I am concerned…撇開其用法不確切不說，你讀一下，算算用了幾秒？[a：] [e:] 都是長音，老師在一個(gè)段落上不會(huì)耗費(fèi)超過3秒的時(shí)間，你想讓他看些什么呢？如果你覺得I think 太俗，可以選些不太常用但是語法上毫無錯(cuò)誤的表達(dá)方法來發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)。如：I`m convinced that，I strongly believe that，總之，既然你想發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)，就直接說明，讓老師盡快了解，讓他1秒鐘之內(nèi)就能判斷出你沒有跑題就是最成功之處！切記：慎用套詞！

長度適中！要求150字左右(四級(jí)120字)，不要寫太短，免得字?jǐn)?shù)不夠，降兩檔處理。我估計(jì)字?jǐn)?shù)大家都不會(huì)成問題，我在這里要強(qiáng)調(diào)的是：字?jǐn)?shù)可千萬別寫太多了。要知道，應(yīng)試作文，按照要求去做是最實(shí)惠的，人家要求150字，你為什么偏要奔著200去呢？記住：寫得越多，錯(cuò)的必然也就越多！老師閱卷的過程，不就是一個(gè)給你作文挑錯(cuò)的過程么？既然如此，何必自討苦吃呢？

第二篇：六級(jí)作文訓(xùn)練(四)

Self-Protection Awareness

培養(yǎng)自我保護(hù)意識(shí)

Recently, a large number of affairs about sexual assault were disclosed and reported by mass media.As far as I am concerned, people should get some enlightenment from these affairs, such as enhancing and strengthening education in self-protection awareness, especially for children and students.最近，有很多關(guān)于性侵的事件媒體揭露和報(bào)道。我認(rèn)為人們應(yīng)該從這些事件中得到一些啟示，比如，提高和加強(qiáng)自我保護(hù)意識(shí)教育，特別是對(duì)于兒童和學(xué)生。

Children and students are hurt most in this kind of affairs.As a result, to enhance and strengthen their self-protection awareness is indispensable.In addition, to strengthen the awareness of defending danger is also important.If they can realize the potential danger from someone or something before it happens, they can make some preparations to avoid the danger and reduce the rate of being hurt.因這類事件傷害最大的是兒童和學(xué)生。因此，提高和加強(qiáng)自我保護(hù)意識(shí)是必須的。此外，加強(qiáng)防范危險(xiǎn)的意識(shí)也是很重要的。如果他們能在事情發(fā)生前意識(shí)到某人或某事的潛在危險(xiǎn)，他們就可以做一些準(zhǔn)備來以避免和減少受傷率。

Therefore, I advocate that parents should help their children develop self-protection awareness from birth, such as designing some situation for them to cope with.In addition, parents should teach their children to recognize the danger and how to avoid and reduce the danger from outside.Besides, children also need to develop an excellent ability of observation.因此，我認(rèn)為父母應(yīng)該幫助他們的孩子從出生開始就培養(yǎng)自我保護(hù)意識(shí)，比如，設(shè)計(jì)一些情況來讓他們應(yīng)付。父母還應(yīng)該教導(dǎo)孩子認(rèn)識(shí)危險(xiǎn)，如何避免和減少來自外界的危險(xiǎn)。此外，孩子也需要培養(yǎng)優(yōu)秀的觀察能力。

In a word, to protect children needs both the effort of parents and children

themselves.總之，保護(hù)兒童需要家長和孩子他們自己的努力。

第三篇：四、六級(jí)寫作精華

關(guān)于四級(jí)寫作

2009年9月13日

評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：

? 2分-條理不清，思路紊亂，語言支離破碎或大部分句子有錯(cuò)，且多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤； ? 5分-基本切題。表達(dá)思想不清楚，連貫性差。有較多的嚴(yán)重語言錯(cuò)誤； ? 8分-基本切題。有些地方表達(dá)不夠清楚，文字勉強(qiáng)連貫。語言錯(cuò)誤較多，其中有少量的嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。? 11分-切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字連貫，但是少量語言錯(cuò)誤。? 14分-切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字通順，連貫性較好，基本上無語言錯(cuò)誤，僅有個(gè)別小錯(cuò)誤。

注：英語作文一般不少于三段，分開頭部分，擴(kuò)展部分，結(jié)尾部分。

開頭部分

按作文題目的不同大約可以分為六種：一般性作文（或要性作文），正反作文，引經(jīng)據(jù)典式作文（或名人名言作文）,題目為疑問句的作文，圖表作文，應(yīng)用文。

第一種：一般性作文（或要性作文）格式：引子（引出主題）+謙語+論點(diǎn)+啟下

以Reading widely為例

引子：Nowadays,there exists an increasingly hot topic among the _______(especially on __________),which is ___________.例如：Nowadays,there exists an increasingly hot topic among the students, especially on college campus,which is reading widely.謙語;as far as I know, as far as I am concerned,in my opinion,from my viewpoint

論點(diǎn)：________have positive effects on___*__, 例如：reading widely have positive effects on your nowlege extension and horizion broaden, 啟下：以上*號(hào)處,which results from the reansons as follows.從而可得整篇開頭如下：

Reading widely

Nowadays,there exists an increasingly hot topic among the students, especially on college campus,which is reading widely.from my viewpoint

reading widely have positive effects on your nowlege extension and horizion broaden, which results from the reansons as follows.注意:以后在各種問題中，引子，謙語，啟下，都不變。

第二種：正反作文

格式：引子（引出主題）+謙語+觀點(diǎn)+啟下

以Private car為例

引子:As an old ssaying goes ,every coin has 2 sides,which applies to private car as well.謙語: from my viewpoint 1 private car have both advantage and 觀點(diǎn):○shortcoming on our daily life, private car have both positive and ○negative effects on our daily life，啟下: which results from the reansons as follows.從而可得整篇開頭如下：

Private car As an old ssaying goes ,every coin has 2 sides,which applies to private car as well.from my viewpoint, private car have both positive and negative effects on our daily life, which results from the reansons as follows.第三種：引經(jīng)據(jù)典式作文（或名人名言作文）格式：引子+It means+解釋（轉(zhuǎn)述）+啟下

以No pains,no gains為例

引子：No pains,no gains(抄題)，which derives from the valuable experience of our forefathers,but it still has its realistic significance even today.解釋：It means your success,to some extent,depends on your hardwork , 啟下：which results from the reansons as follows.從而可得整篇開頭如下：

No pains,no gains No pains,no gains，which derives from the valuable experience of our forefathers,but it still has its realistic significance even today.It means your success,to some extent,depends on your hardwork , which results from the reansons as follows.第四種：題目為疑問句的作文

可分為一般疑問句，選擇疑問句，特殊疑問句 一

題目為一般疑問句 ○格式：引子+抄題+簡短回答+謙詞+轉(zhuǎn)述（立論）+啟下

簡短回答：of course+主語+助動(dòng)詞 Of course not It all depends 以Should students be abroad studying at the

younger age ?為例

Nowadays,there exists an increasing heated discussion in matters of middle school students’ studying abroad.Then should they be abroad studying at the younger age ? It all depends.From my viewpoint,studying abroad for middle school students has both positive and negtaive effects on their future,which results from the reasons as follows.二 題目為選擇疑問句 ○格式:引子+抄題(一定要補(bǔ)全)+簡短回答+謙語+轉(zhuǎn)述+啟下

簡短回答：I prefer to former to later

或It all denpends

以Reading selectively or widely ?為例 Nowadays,there existsan increasingly heated discussion in matters of the content of reading,especially for college students.Then should we read reading selectively or widely ? I prefer to latter.From my viewpiont,reading widely serves as an indispensable part to our study,which results from the reasons as follows.三 題目為特殊疑問句 ○格式：引子（傳統(tǒng)）+抄題+回答（立論）+啟下

以What could we do for the 2008 olympics?為例

Nowadays,2008 olympic games to be held in Beijing has become a hot topic among the Chinese home and abroad.Then as a college student,what could we do for her ? From my viewpoint,doing what we could from slight detail is of great importance, which results from the reasons as follows.第五種:圖表作文

格式:引子+現(xiàn)象結(jié)論+描圖+論點(diǎn)

引子：An obvious conclusion could easily be drawn from the chart above,*******************.現(xiàn)象結(jié)論：*號(hào)處。可用詞changed dramatically.描圖：對(duì)圖表進(jìn)行整體大致描述。例如：圖表略。

{An obvious conclusion could easily be drawn from the chart above,}引子。{the number of computers owned by every 1000 people has changed dramatically in the past 20 years.}`現(xiàn)象結(jié)論。{In 1987,only 3%。of the people can work or play on computers ；While the number soared to 80% in 2007.}描圖。{From my viewpoint,computers are being more and more widely used in our daily work and life.}論點(diǎn)。

第六種：應(yīng)用文

應(yīng)用文包括感謝信，投訴信，求職信 開頭：I’m writing the letter to: 1 apply for position in your company.○2 1.complain ○about the bad quality of the goods I bought the other day.2.complain about the bad service I received.3 express my heart-felt gratitude to sb ○for sth.擴(kuò)展部分

一般性作文都可用以下格式： first and foremost,………

○2 what is more,………

○3the last but not the least important,………

○對(duì)于兩面作文：on the one hand ……… On the other hand………

結(jié)尾部分

結(jié)尾的寫法大致可以分為四種：印證主題式，呼吁社 會(huì)式，正反對(duì)照式，名人名言式?？梢愿鶕?jù)自己的題 材選擇適當(dāng)?shù)慕Y(jié)尾方式。第一種：印證主題式

格式：After pondering this issue on many occasions,it seems not difficult to draw the conclusion that_______________.以part-time jobs為例

After pondering this issue on many occasions,it seems not difficult to draw the conclusion that part-time jobs for college students have both positive and negative effects on their study and future.Inconsequence,we should have a correct attitude to when confronted with it.第二種：呼吁社會(huì)式

格式: In a word,the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ______________.Only in this way ,we can _________in the future.以Private car為例

In a word,the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of private car.Only in this way ,we can enjoy life in the future.第三種：正反對(duì)照式

格式：In my opinion,both sides are partly right.When we _______________,we should take into consideration all aspects of the problems,and then make the right choice.以Private car為例

In my opinion,both sides are partly right.When we want to have a private car,we should take into consideration all aspects of the problems,and then make the right choice.第四種：名人名言式結(jié)尾

格式：Whatever you do,please remember the saying____________.If you understand it and apply it to study or work,you will definitely benefit a lot from it.以No pains no gains為例

Whatever you do,please remember the saying no pains no gains.If you understand it and apply it to study or work,you will definitely benefit a lot from it.

第四篇：如何攻克四、六級(jí)

如何突破四、六級(jí)

有些大學(xué)四六級(jí)通關(guān)率特別低，下面我就自己通過四六級(jí)的一些復(fù)習(xí)策略與大家分享一下。

一、聽力

聽力占有很大的分值，因此我們需要好好攻克此部分。平時(shí)，我們可以看一些美國大片，學(xué)習(xí)他們的的發(fā)音。在看電影時(shí)我們需要反復(fù)看同一部電影，直到不用看字幕就能聽懂為止。若要在短時(shí)間內(nèi)攻克部分，我們需要采取以下措施:做歷年真題，第一遍僅僅是做出選項(xiàng)；第二遍邊聽邊寫，需要反復(fù)聽，直到把句子寫出來為止；第三遍：將自己陌生的詞匯、習(xí)語記錄下來；第四遍：重新做一遍題。需要提醒的是，將自己記錄下來的哪些詞匯、習(xí)語要經(jīng)常翻看，直到牢記在心。

二：閱讀

平時(shí)我們可以擴(kuò)大自己的閱讀，剛開始可以看一些簡單的英文雜志，到后面可以涉獵一些較難的英文書籍。若要短時(shí)間突破四六級(jí)，需要狠下功夫，采取以下措施：做歷年真題，同樣第一遍僅僅需要在限定時(shí)間內(nèi)做完題目；第二遍查看自己出錯(cuò)的原因；第三遍閱讀整篇文章，弄懂生詞，且把出現(xiàn)頻率高的詞匯做一記錄；第四遍掌握文章中的難一點(diǎn)的句子結(jié)構(gòu);第五遍：要是文章比較優(yōu)美，可以花費(fèi)一定時(shí)間背誦下來。

三：作文

平時(shí)一定要練習(xí)寫作，最好養(yǎng)成每天寫一篇英文作文的習(xí)慣。多背一些好的文章，好的句子，這樣寫起來會(huì)得心應(yīng)手。遇到寫作，先不急于下筆，構(gòu)思一下文章的大體輪廓，再下筆。寫作的時(shí)候需要條理清晰，字跡整齊，卷面干凈。

四：新題型

談?wù)勛鲂骂}型的技巧：先看題目，找出每個(gè)題目中的關(guān)鍵詞1-3個(gè)，一般是名詞；然后快速瀏覽文章，若一段中有3個(gè)詞與關(guān)鍵詞相同，那么那句的對(duì)應(yīng)段落就是該段。

五：翻譯

翻譯最重要的我感覺是整個(gè)段落的聯(lián)絡(luò)性和恰當(dāng)?shù)木渥咏Y(jié)構(gòu)，要把握好這兩點(diǎn)。

第五篇：新東方教師四、六級(jí)作文指導(dǎo)

新東方教師四、六級(jí)作文指導(dǎo)

大學(xué)英語四六級(jí)考試中寫作說明部分提到“要從內(nèi)容和語言兩個(gè)方面對(duì)作文進(jìn)行綜合評(píng)判。內(nèi)容和語言是一個(gè)統(tǒng)一體。作文應(yīng)表達(dá)題目所規(guī)定的內(nèi)容，而內(nèi)容要通過語言來表達(dá)。要考慮作文是否切題，是否充分表達(dá)思想，也要考慮是否用英語清楚而恰當(dāng)?shù)乇磉_(dá)思想，也就是要考慮語言上的錯(cuò)誤是否會(huì)造成理解上的障礙?！睆闹形覀兛梢钥闯觯牧?jí)應(yīng)試作文中需要表達(dá)的思想和內(nèi)容是有限的、有規(guī)律的。而掌握表達(dá)這些思想和內(nèi)容的英語并不需要很長時(shí)間。因此，同學(xué)們?cè)趥淇妓牧?jí)寫作的時(shí)候，應(yīng)該把重點(diǎn)放在選詞，造句和段落這三個(gè)常犯錯(cuò)誤的方面。

關(guān)于詞匯的選擇，總體原則是合適的地方用到合適的詞匯。要做到這點(diǎn)其實(shí)并不難。我們要習(xí)慣于用英語的思維去理解記憶但是，而不是只記住某個(gè)單詞的漢語意思。因?yàn)橛⒄Z和漢語是兩種完全不同的語言。這兩種語言之間并沒有一一對(duì)等的關(guān)系。解決這個(gè)問題，要借助一些工具書和別人的智慧，因?yàn)樽约旱腻e(cuò)誤被別人糾正就很難忘記。工具書的選擇，推薦同學(xué)們使用英語解釋英語的詞典來培養(yǎng)我們用英語思維的感覺。在這里我們不做贅述。下面我重點(diǎn)要講的是英語的造句和段落問題。

同學(xué)們?cè)趯懽鞯臅r(shí)候往往會(huì)想到這樣的問題：寫作文時(shí)寫長句子好還是短句子好，或者是多用從句好還是多用簡單句好？那么正確的回答應(yīng)該是長短句子搭配使用。換句話說就是，好的作文不僅要用詞豐富，句式表達(dá)也要多變。但這是大的多數(shù)同學(xué)都做不到的。同學(xué)們?cè)趯懢渥訒r(shí)往往會(huì)犯的錯(cuò)誤就是句子過于啰嗦，而且句式非常單調(diào)。只有簡單句和從句都運(yùn)用的恰到好處，作文才能得到一個(gè)滿意的分?jǐn)?shù)。如果要用兩句話甚至三句話表達(dá)，但用從句之后只需一個(gè)句子就能表達(dá)，那就說明從句用的好。如果一個(gè)意思完全可以用簡單句表達(dá)的時(shí)候卻用了從句，那從句的使用就有一定的問題。以簡潔為標(biāo)準(zhǔn)寫作文，字?jǐn)?shù)會(huì)減少。于是許多同學(xué)擔(dān)心這樣會(huì)字?jǐn)?shù)不夠。但是用啰嗦的表達(dá)方式，尤其是既羅嗦又不標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的表達(dá)方式來湊字?jǐn)?shù)是不可取的。語言簡化后用該用例子、例證來豐富我們的觀點(diǎn)，這才是正確的方法。

請(qǐng)看下面從句用的不好的例子。原稿：Once in a time , people consider this world as vast and mystery , because of the limitation of vehicle.此處用used to 更簡潔，“認(rèn)為某人或某物具有某種特征”應(yīng)該直接在賓語后面加形容詞。改正后：People used to consider the world vast and mysterious.原稿： As people are getting busier and busier today , they rarely have chance to move their bodies.改正后 ： People today are often too busy to exercise.too …to 這個(gè)句型大家其實(shí)是掌握的，但在寫作中很少使用。再如：The students have to make a critical decision – the priority is given to specific universities or specific majors ? For this problem , opinions are divided.改正后為： Opinions are divided among students whether to give priority to a specific university or major.改正后用了從句，但比原稿簡潔的多。

《新概念英語》三冊(cè)中充滿了大量的四六級(jí)寫作句型：第25課出現(xiàn)了考研和六級(jí)中常出現(xiàn)的句型，比如：毫無疑問地，近視在我國的年輕人中是一個(gè)嚴(yán)重的問題。這個(gè)句型在第25課出現(xiàn)There is no doubt that near-sightedness is a serious problem.又如：你一定要意識(shí)到建立在美色之上的愛情，會(huì)像美色一樣很快消逝。這出現(xiàn)在27課You must be aware / conscious that love built on beauties, soon as beauty dies.在第31課，類似句型出現(xiàn)：人們繼續(xù)破壞著環(huán)境，并沒有意識(shí)到他們正在為此付出代價(jià)。People keep on polluting the environment without being conscious that they are paying the price for it.新概念英語第三冊(cè)的一些美文，就為大家提供了相當(dāng)好的寫作方法和經(jīng)典范文。

我們?cè)賮砜匆幌滤牧?jí)考試中的段落結(jié)構(gòu)問題。四六級(jí)作文一般要求寫三段，并且要求超過100詞，因此每一段有三五句話就可以了。雖然字?jǐn)?shù)少，但是段落總體的質(zhì)量取決于一定的構(gòu)思和組織能力，必須要在每一段落里有條理地、有依據(jù)地表達(dá)一個(gè)中心思想。段落的結(jié)構(gòu)應(yīng)當(dāng)符合一定的模式和具有某些基本特征，并遵循一定的發(fā)展方向。段落的條理關(guān)鍵在于掌握主題句和擴(kuò)展句的關(guān)系，這樣的條理對(duì)議論文尤其重要。一個(gè)段落在結(jié)構(gòu)上有三個(gè)主要的組成部分：主題句(topic sentence)、擴(kuò)展句(supporting sentence)和結(jié)尾句(conclusion)，其中結(jié)尾句并不是絕對(duì)要求的。這幾個(gè)句子時(shí)相互關(guān)聯(lián)的，其中主題句是表達(dá)段落主題的句子，它闡明一個(gè)段落的中心思想，是段落的核心，段落中的其他各句子都與它緊密相連并圍繞它展開。英語寫作中每一個(gè)段落只能有一個(gè)中心思想，并且要由一個(gè)主題句提出。中心思想提出后，作者接下來的任務(wù)就是解釋或者說明這個(gè)中心思想，擴(kuò)展句起的就是這個(gè)作用。這幾個(gè)句子包括證據(jù)（evidence）、事例(examples)或者是邏輯論證（further arguments）。

主題句通常由主題和作者的觀點(diǎn)兩部分組成。它必須是一個(gè)完整的句子，而且要包含一個(gè)完整的主題思想。請(qǐng)看下面幾個(gè)從歷年考題的作文中摘取的句子：

The benefits of participating in sports are numerous.My favorite program is “ Friend ”.I enjoy the programs about real people and real experience.其中 sports , Friend , programs about real people and real experience 都是主題。（have）numerous benefits ,(are)my favorite , I enjoy 則都是用來表達(dá)作者的觀點(diǎn)或意見的。

主題句要由概括性，擴(kuò)展句要具體。主題句是起提示作用的，因此它要具備一定的概括性，不能太具體。而擴(kuò)展句的功能是詳細(xì)解釋和論證，因此必須要具體。例如：Each program will focus on a particular friend who can be either a celebrity or an everyday person.這句話是說一個(gè)電視節(jié)目的特點(diǎn)：每次專注于一個(gè)人物，而這個(gè)人可能有名氣，也可能知識(shí)一般人。這句話很具體，適合做擴(kuò)展句?！癋riend” is a very interesting talk show.這句話就可以當(dāng)主題句。這句話的意思很完整，但它沒有說訪談節(jié)目為什么有意思。具體的原因應(yīng)該用擴(kuò)展句去說明。

主題句在多數(shù)情況下位于段落的開端，它開門見山地點(diǎn)出主題，使作者自始至終緊扣主題，也使讀者一開始就能抓住整個(gè)段落的主題思想，比如：Drug use is so widespread that it is part of the daily life of almost every person.From birth to death , drugs ease our pain and suffering.For many , drugs serve such utilitarian purposes as keeping us awake , helping us sleep , or eliminating our stress.主題句說明藥物的廣泛使用是日常生活的一部分。隨后的擴(kuò)展句通過日常生活中人們使用藥物的場合和情景—止痛、催眠、興奮以及助興娛樂—來證實(shí)主題句提出的論點(diǎn)。主題句也可以在句尾，其特點(diǎn)是可以幫助讀者總結(jié)全段的內(nèi)容，從而加深讀者對(duì)段落內(nèi)容的印象。We are constantly being spoken to , by teachers , salesmen , public officials , and motion picture sound tracks.The cries of advertisers pursue us into our very homes.Our daily papers amount to thirty to fifty pages of print.We visit bookstores and libraries in search of even more text.Words fill our lives.前面講的是事實(shí)，是例證，最后才點(diǎn)名主題。按照這樣的思路，我們用《新概念英語》第三冊(cè)第12課《荒島生活》來肢解一下2007年6月六級(jí)寫作真題。

新三12課第一段 Most of us have formed an unrealistic picture of life on a desert island.（主題句）We sometimes imagine a desert island to be a sort of paradise where the sun always shines.（擴(kuò)展句）Life there is simple and good.Ripe fruit falls from the trees and you never have to work.（支持句：用例子支撐觀點(diǎn)。例子可以選擇典故、名人名言等等）The other side of the picture is quite the opposite.（轉(zhuǎn)折句：兩個(gè)不同的觀點(diǎn)之間需要用到轉(zhuǎn)折）Life on a desert island is wretched.（對(duì)主題句的另一方面解釋）You either starve to death or live like Robinson Crusoe, waiting for a boat which never comes.（支持句：用到了魯賓遜克魯索的例子）Perhaps there is an element of truth in both these pictures, but few us have had the opportunity to find out.（回頭句：總結(jié)全文的句子，對(duì)觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)一步升華）

2007年6月6級(jí)寫作真題

Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed?

A great many people presume upon a reward when doing a good deed.（主題句）First and foremost, there is a natural tendency to equate doing good deeds with a certain amount of reward, and reward with a certain amount of money.What is more, they maintain that since the basis of contemporary society is money, one of the major means of earning money is getting reward by doing good deeds.（擴(kuò)展句）

On the contrary,（轉(zhuǎn)折句）the vast majority of people assume that doing a good deed should be based on people’s personal interests.（主題句）Hence, doing a good deed is fulfilling itself and reward is of minimal significance.Numerous examples can be given, but this will suffice.（擴(kuò)展句）Mr.Leifeng（名人效應(yīng)）lived a simple life dedicated to doing good deeds without expecting any reward and helping people from all walks of life, yet he was remembered as one of the most successful hero of our time.（支持句）

Generally speaking, it is my view that we should not expect a reward when doing a good deed.We do this for enjoyment, fulfillment and other spiritual enhancement, not for the purpose of reward.（回頭句）不難看出，同學(xué)們?cè)趥淇妓牧?jí)寫作時(shí)只要方法得當(dāng)、用詞準(zhǔn)確，得到一個(gè)理想的分?jǐn)?shù)是很容易的。