第一篇:雅思寫作大作文的14個(gè)誤解
雅思寫作大作文的14個(gè)誤解,你有沒有?
No.1雅思作文還要加標(biāo)題
英語考試有一個(gè)國際慣例(common practice):寫作文時(shí)不需要加標(biāo)題,直接寫正文就行。加標(biāo)題屬于浪費(fèi)感情,浪費(fèi)表情。而且,這個(gè)標(biāo)題可能太大,一篇250字的文章不能承擔(dān)標(biāo)題之重;這個(gè)標(biāo)題可能太小,只照顧到你這篇文章的一小部分;這個(gè)標(biāo)題可能加錯(cuò)了,意思與文章相反,反而會(huì)誤導(dǎo)雅思考官。總之,不需要加任何標(biāo)題。
No.2留給大作文的時(shí)間太短
雅思考官明確提出,Task 2 carries more weights(大作文占的分量要比小作文大),而且考官在改作文的時(shí)候確實(shí)以大作文為主。但是考生在考試的時(shí)候,小作文控制不住時(shí)間,寫得過于詳細(xì),最后留給大作文的時(shí)間只有半個(gè)小時(shí)不到,這樣做就死定了。所以,我們建議小作文的時(shí)間控制在20分鐘以內(nèi),超過20分鐘沒寫完也不要再寫了,而寫大作文的時(shí)間一定要大于等于40分鐘。No.3大作文字?jǐn)?shù)收不住
記?。貉潘伎荚嚢l(fā)的作文紙留給大作文只有一面而已,洋洋灑灑收不住的結(jié)果是得分不會(huì)超過6分,因?yàn)檫@至少會(huì)造成三種惡果:1)結(jié)尾段沒地方?jīng)]時(shí)間寫,死定了;2)文章整個(gè)兒一意識(shí)流,考官看暈;3)考官改作文時(shí)有權(quán)利不看超過250字的部分,game over!一個(gè)合適的數(shù)字是大作文控制在280字左右,15-16句話左右。
No.4大作文真沒有時(shí)間打草稿
雅思考試說到底是考我們對英語的熟練程度(proficiency),就是看各位能不能在短時(shí)間內(nèi)(40 mins)寫出一篇長文(280 words),所以打草稿不是一個(gè)明智之舉??荚嚂r(shí)發(fā)的那個(gè)草稿紙,只是讓各位在brainstorm時(shí)寫出主要觀點(diǎn)的,絕不是一個(gè)字一個(gè)字打出一個(gè)草稿的。記住,我們永遠(yuǎn)都是在run against the time(與時(shí)間賽跑)。
No.5開頭段使用模板太多
雅思考官對模板深惡痛絕的程度可能超過很多考生的想象,而且,如果考生在第一段還使用大量惡俗的模板,還在第一句說with the development of society,那他會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)他的成績單上的作文得分會(huì)在4分左右。其實(shí),翻翻雅思考官的范文,我們會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn),考官在第一段只干了兩件事情:引出背景+表明觀點(diǎn),甚至很多考官只干了第一件事情(引出背景),僅此而已。但是,考官的首段會(huì)很具體,會(huì)和文章特定場合掛鉤。(請參照劍5的165頁,以及劍7的163頁)No.6開頭段與主體段混為一談
上面說過,開頭段只完成兩件事情:引出背景+表明觀點(diǎn),可千萬不要在說完I agree或者I disagree…后面就開始寫第一個(gè)原因,這會(huì)給考官一個(gè)印象:你思路不清楚,結(jié)構(gòu)不清楚,然后順手給你一個(gè)5分。記?。喝绻阏Z言功底一般,那千萬要做到結(jié)構(gòu)清楚,一二三清清爽爽,這是保命的底線。
No.7雅思大作文只寫三段
現(xiàn)在雅思大作文只寫三段的人應(yīng)該比恐龍還少,但也有人考場上頭腦發(fā)熱,只寫三段。劍橋系列4、5、6、7后面的范文已經(jīng)清楚地告訴我們:雅思考官的大作文一般都是寫四段,而且實(shí)踐證明四段折中式寫作是考生在考場上最好操作的格式。
No.8不會(huì)使用四段論等于慢性自殺
很多考生對四段論的框架貌似了解,一談起作文段落安排就會(huì)滔滔不絕:第一段引出主題,第二段陳述支持的理由,第三段陳述反對的理由,最后一段總結(jié)。這其實(shí)是一個(gè)非常害人、沒有任何說服力的段落安排,如果翻開劍橋雅思考官給出的滿分范文,幾乎每篇文章都在告訴我們這樣一個(gè)真實(shí)有用的段落安排:第一段引出主題及拓展 + 第二段反面論證及支持理由 + 第三段對方觀點(diǎn)及駁論 +
第四段總結(jié)及補(bǔ)充說明。而且,段落之間的巧妙銜接也增強(qiáng)了文章的論證能力。建議考生多多研讀考官范文,真的能看出門道出來,而不是沉浸在自己似是而非的理解里。(請參照劍5的165頁)
No.9何處安放整篇文章的主題句?
雅思大作文要寫主題句已經(jīng)路人皆知,但問題是:放哪兒?。课覀冞€是看看劍橋考官的范文,他們都有一個(gè)習(xí)慣:把主題句放在最后一段的開頭句。這樣是很好,但是我還是建議大家最好把主題句放在首段的最后一句,因?yàn)?)考官的文章是讓大家學(xué)習(xí)的,他可以有耐心讓我們?nèi)フ抑黝}句在哪兒?而我們的文章是要讓考官在兩分鐘之內(nèi)改完的,他可能沒有耐心去找;2)主題句出現(xiàn)在首段的最后一句,這也是國外論文寫作的一個(gè)常識(shí)。總之,放這兒肯定不會(huì)出錯(cuò),別忘了,首段寫作只需要滿足兩個(gè)任務(wù):引出主題+表明觀點(diǎn)。
No.10主體段每段第一句話不是主題句
大家可能不知道考官怎么改我們的作文的,他們通常只花3分鐘左右的時(shí)間看一份作文(甚至更少),這就決定他們不可能逐字逐句看,通常,他們會(huì)重點(diǎn)看以下3處:1)每段話的第一句;2)首段的最后一句;3)末段的最后一句。如果看完他就知道你這篇文章的大致內(nèi)容,他會(huì)感覺很爽。所以,再次奉勸各位主體段一定要做到主題句一馬當(dāng)先,這樣是大作文達(dá)到6.5分的基本保證。No.11主體段論證時(shí)沒有論據(jù)支持
雅思作文和四六級作文不一樣,四六級可以允許我們把幾個(gè)分論點(diǎn)簡單羅列出來,但雅思肯定不行??脊倜鞔_規(guī)定,大作文要想拿分,有兩點(diǎn)我們繞不過去:1)
觀點(diǎn)明確(clear standpoint)2)論據(jù)充分(sufficient evidences)。所以,我們最好在每一個(gè)分論點(diǎn)后面問自己三個(gè)問題:Why? What? How? 這樣就把抽象概括的分論點(diǎn)拆解成三個(gè)具體的細(xì)節(jié)。如果覺得字?jǐn)?shù)和論證還不夠充分的話,那就在后面再舉個(gè)例子,或者再來個(gè)正反論證,不就夠了嗎?
No.12從來不知道“駁論”為何物?
如果你還不知道雅思大作文要寫“駁論”,那你就真“后知后覺”了。中國學(xué)生經(jīng)常忽略了這個(gè)強(qiáng)大的論證段落,而考官經(jīng)常在他們的范文里使用這個(gè)武器(具體請見劍5的P165,劍6的P164,劍7的P173)。其實(shí),這個(gè)強(qiáng)大的武器很好操作,第一步:先把對方主張的觀點(diǎn),或者是對方對我的批評擺出來,加一個(gè)簡單的理由(這很好找吧);第二步:加一個(gè)轉(zhuǎn)折,通常會(huì)說“但是,他們太簡單化了”;第三步:先寫一個(gè)in fact,再寫我針鋒相對的觀點(diǎn),或駁斥對方的觀點(diǎn)。這樣就輕松搞定了一個(gè)段落。建議大家回頭研究一下這個(gè)強(qiáng)大的武器,用正確了可以増分不少。
No.13尾段開始描繪藍(lán)圖
中國學(xué)生喜歡在最后一段發(fā)出感慨,呼吁各方攜手為美好的明天努力。這種結(jié)尾寫法已經(jīng)被考官唾棄久矣,因?yàn)樵谒麄兛磥?,大作文的尾段只需要滿足三點(diǎn):1)重申總論點(diǎn);2)針對對立面的讓步;3)重申一個(gè)或兩個(gè)主要分論點(diǎn)。大家寫到最后一段,不要再發(fā)揮了,趕緊收住就OK了。
No.14過分依賴作文預(yù)測
我們很多考生上培訓(xùn)班的目的很大程度上是想從培訓(xùn)班中獲得考試的預(yù)測和老師的“打題”,然后根據(jù)這個(gè)預(yù)測背幾篇范文了事,其實(shí)培訓(xùn)班的作用在于是教給學(xué)生一種“以不變應(yīng)萬變”的能力。面對千變?nèi)f化的作文題目,只要心里知道作文框架和話題詞匯,然后用巧妙的銜接把思路串起來,大作文就沒有問題了。所以,考生與其上網(wǎng)不斷搜尋諸多“專家”“名師”眾說紛紜的預(yù)測,倒不如靜下心來進(jìn)行針對性的練習(xí)。雅思寫作考題雖然多變,但不會(huì)出教育、環(huán)保、科技、政府、文化等常見話題范圍。在前兩個(gè)階段的準(zhǔn)備之后,建議考生至少要在三個(gè)月內(nèi)大作文準(zhǔn)備15-20篇習(xí)作,小作文準(zhǔn)備10篇習(xí)作,才能有資格越過寫作6-6.5分的門檻??忌谟薪?jīng)驗(yàn)的培訓(xùn)師帶領(lǐng)下,挑出一些常見高頻的話題和題材,不在乎寫作數(shù)量的多寡,而要在意每篇寫作時(shí)的用心和寫作后的批改,從劍橋考官的滿分范文里尋找靈感和成熟句型表達(dá)。針對性訓(xùn)練后的手感會(huì)讓考生的寫作水平逐步攀升。
第二篇:雅思大作文寫作
大作文:
注:A類G類可以通用。重點(diǎn)預(yù)測題:
1、Nowadays, there is a trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive developments.Some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society.To what extent do you agree or disagree?(近似命中11.7澳洲A類大作文)
2、Some people think that robots are very important to human’s future development.Others think that they are dangerous and have negative effects on society.Discuss both opinions and give your personal view.3、Do you think how important it is for people to want success in life ? Is ambition a positive or negative characteristic?
4、In modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animals for food or use animal products, for instance, clothing and medicines.To what extent do you agree or disagree? //Some people think it is necessary to use animals for testing medicines intended for human use.Others, however, think it is cruel to do that.Discuss both of these views and give you own opinion.//Some people think that it is acceptable to use animals for the benefit of humans.Others, however, believe that it is wrong to exploit animals for human purposes.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.5、Many people believe that teachers should take the responsibility for the students to judge what is right and wrong and behave well, others feel that teachers should only teach academic subjects.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.(命中10.24北美A類大作文一字不差)
6、Students from rural areas often find it difficult to access university education.Some people think that universities should make it easier for them to access higher education.To what extent do you agree or disagree?(10.26新增)
6、Many people believe that the human society has developed into a throw-away society, which is filled with plastic bags and rubbish.What are the causes and solutions?(命中9.26國內(nèi)A類原題變形)
6、The government money should be invested in teaching science rather than other subjects so as to help a country make progress and develop.To what extent do you agree or disagree?(9.28新增)
7、Some people think that the government should decide the subject for students to study in university.Others believe that students should be allowed to apply for the subject they prefer.Discuss both views and give your opinion.8、Nowadays,full-time university students tend to focus on their studying.Some people think it is essential for university students to be involved in other activities.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
9、There are many advertisements directed at children, such as snacks, toys and other goods.Parents argue that children are under pressure.Advertisers claim that the advertisements provide useful information.Discuss the both sides and give your own opinion.Some people think that advertising aimed at children should be banned.To what extent do you agree or disagree?(12.7更新)
10、The spread of multinational companies and resulting increase of globalization produces positive effects for everyone.To what extent to you agree or disagree?
11、Some people think that the main purpose of schools is to teach children to be a good citizen or worker rather than to benefit them as individuals.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
12、Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries.What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on the society?
13、Most of the urgent problems can only be solved with international cooperation.To what extent do you agree or disagree?(命中10.8澳洲A類原題,一字不差)
13、As countries develop, their populations tend to live individually or in small family units.In your opinion, what is this cause and what are the effects on society.(10.12新增)
14、Some people think that social skills are as important as academic qualifications.To what extent do you agree or disagree?(幾乎命中10.10北美A類原題,再次近似命中11.21國內(nèi)A類大作文)
14、Some people believe that studying in a college or university is the best way for students to prepare for their future career.Others think they should leave school as soon as possible to develop their career through work experience.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.(11.7國內(nèi)A類考了讀大學(xué)前找工作的利弊)
14、A long-distance flight consumes the same amount of fuel and causes the same amount of pollution as a car does in several years.Some people think that to reduce environmental problems, we should discourage non-essential flights, such as tourist air travel, instead of limiting the use of cars.To what extent do you agree or disagree?(11.23新增)
15、Advertising encourage people to buy in quantity rather than promoting its quality.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
16、Some teachers say students should be organized into groups to study.Others argue students should be made to study alone.What is your opinion?(命中10.31北美A類大作文原題,一字不差?。?/p>
18、In many countries, there are 24-hour TV programs.Is it a positive or negative development?
19、Some people say that governments should spend money on measures to save languages that are used by few speakers, while others believe it's a waste of financial resources.Discuss both views and give your opinion.20、In most countries,prison is an effective solution to the problem of crime.Some people think it is a more effective solution to provide education for those who violate the law.To what extent do you agree or disagree?//Some people think that all the lawbreakers should be taken into the prison, while others believe that there are better alternatives,(for example, doing some work or learning some skills in the community).Discuss both views and give your opinion.(9.3國內(nèi)A類考了是否能通過措施防止犯罪,9.26香港A類考了罪犯是否應(yīng)該在監(jiān)獄里接受教育)
20、Anyone can post information on the Internet.Some people say most of what we read on the Internent is inaccurate.To what extent do you agree or disagree?(9.28新增)
21Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment.Only governments and large companies can make a difference.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?(10.10國內(nèi)A類考了政府是否應(yīng)該解決環(huán)境污染和住房問題)
22、Some people say watching TV is bad for children in all ways, others say it is good for children to get knowledge.Discuss both views and give your opinion.(將 watching TV替換為computer games便基本是10.24國內(nèi)A類大作文原題)
23、Some children think that some subjects such as mathematics and philosophy are too difficult for them to study at school, so they should be made optional rather than compulsory.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
24、In countries where there is a high rate of unemployment, most pupils should be offered only primary education.There is no point in offering secondary education to those who have no hope of finding a job.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?//A large number of young people are leaving shool and can not find a job.what problems will youth unemployment cause in individual and for society?what measures should be taken to reduce the level of unemployment among young people?
25、Some people think that men and women have different qualities.Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
26、More and more people want to buy famous brands with clothes, cars and other items.what are the reasons? Doyou think it is a positive or negative development?
27、Some people think that parents have a great influence on their children, others believe that the media is a bigger influence.Discuss both views and give your opinion.28、Advertising encourages in quantity not in quality.To what degree you agree or not agree?
29、Some people think that schools should select pupils according to their academic abilities, while others believe that it is better to have pupils with different abilities study together.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.30、In some countries, young people are not only richer but also safer and healthier than ever before.However, they are less happy.What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?//
Some people think personal happiness is directly related to economic success, while others believe this depends on other factors.Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.(基本命中11.14澳洲A類原題)
31、If a product is good and can meet people’s needs, people will buy it.Advertising in the media is no more than a form of entertainment.Do you agree or disagree?(11.16新增)
32、In the past, buildings often reflected the culture of a society but today all modern
buildings look alike and cities throughout the world are becoming increasingly similar.What do you think is the reason for this? And is it a good thing or a bad thing?
33、Every year several languages die out.This is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.To what extent do you agree or disagree?(11.23變更)
34、Governments should spend money on the repairs and maintenance of old buildings.Do you agree or disagree?
35、Governments should control the amount of violence in the media.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
次重點(diǎn)預(yù)測題:
1、Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer.Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
2、More and more companies are allowing employees to work at home.Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
3、Some animal species such as dinosaurs and dodos become extinct because of natural processes.So, it is not necessary to try and prevent this from happening.Do you agree or disagree?There are many extinct species in the world nowadays.Some people say we should protect these animals from dying out,while others say we should concentrate more on problems of human beings.Discuss both opinions and give your personal view.4、In many countries prices of airplane tickets have dropped.Is it positive or negative situation? Write about your personal experience or knowledge.Air travel is cheap these days, allowing ordinary people to travel further.Some people say that airfare should be increased because this leads to environmental problems.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.International travel is cheaper and more convenient than ever.Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?(12.7更新)
5、Nowadays the trend of human beings to copy from one another is shown in the popularity of fashion in clothes and other consumer goods.To what extend do you agree or disagree?
6、Many developing countries are currently expanding their tourist industries Why is this the case? Is it a positive development?
7、Nowadays many parents are sending their kids abroad to acquire good education.Discuss the advantages and the disadvantages of this trend.Give your own opinion.(9.19澳洲A類考了國際交換生的利弊,近似命中)
8、Team activities can teach more skills for life than those activities which are played alone.To what extent do you agree or disagree?(近似命中11.14國內(nèi)A類A卷大作文)
8、More and more people are moving from rural areas to cities in search of a better life, but city life has its own problems.What are these problems? Suggest some solutions.(11.16新增)
9、In some countries boarding schools are getting more popular.Is it a positive or negative development? What are the reasons behind it?
10、In many cities, planners have separated schools, homes, shops, offices in specific areas which were widely separated from each other.Do you think advantages of this policy overweigh disadvantages to the city residents?
11、It is believed that secondary school children should study international news as one of their school subjects.Others think that this is a waste of valuable school time.Discuss both views and give your opinions.(命中9.26澳洲A類原題變形)
12、Some believe advertisement is useful and informative.Others think it is false and only helps to raise prices.Discuss both views and give your opinion.13、In multi-cultural societies, people of different cultural backgrounds live and work together.Do you think the advantages of multi-cultural societies outweigh the disadvantages?(12.7更新)
14、Some people think news has no connection to people's lives, so it is a waste of time to read the news on the newspaper and watch television news programs.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
15、Some people think the main benefit of international cooperation is in protection of the environment, while others think that the main benefit is in the world business.Discuss both views and give your opinion.Solving environmental problems should be responsibility of one international organization instead of state or national governments.Do you agree or disagree?(12.5歐洲考了個(gè)人和國家解決不了環(huán)境問題,是不是要國際上來解決?幾乎命中原題?。?/p>
16、some people think male leaders always lead us to violence and conflict, but female leaders are better than male leaders to give us the better governed and more peaceful society.Do you agree or disagree?
17、Advertising industry has a huge influence on the society.Do you think positive effects of advertising outweigh negative effects?(幾乎命中國內(nèi)12.5雅思A類原題?。?/p>
17、Some people think traveling abroad is a valuable experience for young people.Othersthink it wastes too much time and expense.Discuss both views and give your opinion.(12.7更新)
18、Professional workers like doctors, nurses and teachers make a greater contribution to society and so should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
19、Some people think we should keep all the money we earn and not pay tax to the state.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 20、The number of people who watch foreign films is much more than people who watch local films, describ the reasons and should the government provide financial support to the local film industries?
21、Some people give more importance to artists(painter,writers, musicians)in the current age of rapidly developing technology and science.What do you think? Do people prefer arts to technology in your view?(10.31國內(nèi)A類考了是否應(yīng)該資助藝術(shù)家)
21、Many parents today do not spend enough time with their children.What are the causes of this? Suggest some solutions.(11.2新增)
22、Some people think parents should read or tell stories to their children, others say it is not important and can be replaced by watching TV and movies instead.Discuss both views and give your opinion.23、Competition versus cooperation and group work for students.Do the disadvantages outweigh the advantages?//Competitiveness is seen as a positive feature by manymodern societies.What impact does it have on an individual? Is it a positive or a negative quality?
24、More and more people are becoming seriously overweight.Some people say that the price increase of fattening foods will solve this problem.To what extent do you agree or disagree?(9.19國內(nèi)考了素食主義,近似命中)
25、Most of the schools are planning to replace sports and exercise classes with more academic sessions.What is your opinion on this change? How is this change will affect children’s life in your view?
26、The exposure of international media such as films, TV and magazines has impacts on local culture.What do you think of the impacts have been? Do you agree that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
27、Nowadays, children play less with others and this has an impact on their development.What are the reasons for this? Does it have a good or a bad effect on children?
28、Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies.To what extent do you think are consumers influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them?
29、Some people think the foreign visitors should be charged more than the local visitors when they visit the cultural and historical attractions in another country.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 30、Since money for postgraduate research is limited, some people think financial support from the government should be only provided for scientific research rather
than the research for less useful subjects.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
31、We live in cities or towns which have museums displaying objects of artistic, historic and cultural value, but people do not visit them.How do you think people do not visit museums in their local areas? What is the importance of museums to the society?
32、Leisure is a growing industry.People no longer entertain themselves as they used to because the use of modern technology has made them less creative.Do you agree or disagree?(近似命中10.10澳洲A類原題)
33、Some people think that national teams and individual men and women should be financially supported by government.However others argue that national teams and individual men and women should be funded by non-government sources(business, companies).Discuss both of the views and give your own opinion.34、It’s better for students to study at university rather than study at home with their parents.Do you agree or disagree?
35、Lifestyles and culture in many countries is becoming similar,is it positive or negative?
36、In some countries,the parents expect children to spend long time in studying both in and after school and have less free time.Do you think it has positive or negative effects on children and the society?
37、Many people think the government of the country should decide which subjects the students should study, when others think students should be able to apply to the subject they preferred.Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.38、In many countries, average life expectancy has been increasing.What problems will this cause for individuals and for society as a whole? Suggest some solutions.(10.26新增)
已命中題(未改變原題序號):
34、Some people believe that the government spends too much money on developing space exploration technology.There are many others financial needs that the government should address instead.To what extent do you agree or disagree?(530北美A類考了太空探索影響人們的生活)
35、Many people believe that university students should pay tuition fees in full themselves, because they gain education for their own benefit and not for the society.To what extent do you agree or disagree?(命中澳洲613A類大作文原題一字不差)
1、Some people think planning future is a waste of time and people should focus on the present.To what extent do you agree or disagree?(命中430澳洲區(qū)A類大作文,430澳洲和國內(nèi)大作文不一樣)
1、Today, the qualities of life of people in big cities are worse.What are the causes of this problem? Any measures should be taken to solve it?(國內(nèi)613A類考了由于城市交通和住房問題鼓勵(lì)企業(yè)搬往郊區(qū),與此題相通)
6、In some countries old people are highly valued, while in some cultures young people are highly valued.Discuss both views and give your opinion.(1.10A類考了年輕人和老年人誰當(dāng)領(lǐng)導(dǎo),4.11A類大作文考了老年人和年輕人競爭產(chǎn)生的問題和解決辦法,6.18澳洲A類考了是否應(yīng)該回歸家庭和社區(qū)的老傳統(tǒng)價(jià)值觀,9.12澳洲A類大作文原題)
8、News media are important in modern society.Why are they so important? Are their influences generally positive or negative?(命中歐洲考區(qū)4.25A類大作文原題,一字不差)
9、In the future,there will be a higher proportion of older people than younger people.Is it a positive or negative development?//In many countries, the proportion of old people is steadily increasing.Does this have more positive or negative effects on the society?(命中8.1澳洲A類原題)
10、Some countries and individuals try to deal with the problem of animal extinction.Others think it is more important to deal with problems of human beings.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.(命中歐洲區(qū)4.18A類大作文原題,一字不差)
10、Some people believe that some unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes(e.g.working in a charity, improving the relationship of neighbourhood or teaching sports to children)To what extent do you agree or disagree?(近似命中7.4國內(nèi)A類大作文原題)30、With the increase in the use of mobile phones and computers, fewer people are writing letters.Some people think that the traditional skill of writing letters will disappear completely.To what extent do you agree or disagree? How important do you think is letter-writing?(3.28考了電腦和手機(jī)對青少年讀寫能力的影響,10.24歐洲A類考了越來越少的人手寫)
12、Some people think the technology makes life complex, so we should make the life simpler without using the technology.To what extent do you agree or disagree?(2.7G類考了電腦對生活的利弊分析)
12、People aim to achieve the balance between their work and lives.But few people achieve it.What are the causes of the problems? How to overcome it?(命中321北美雅思A類大作文原題一字不差,9.3澳洲A類亦考了本題一字不差!)
12、As part of education ,students should spend a period of time studying and living in a different county to learn language and culture.Do you agree or disagree?(8.13國內(nèi)A類考了如何提高對其他國家文化的理解)
14、Some people think that young people should follow traditions of their society, and others think young people should be free to behave as they will.Discuss both views and give your opinion.(6.18澳洲A類考了是否應(yīng)該回歸家庭和社區(qū)的老傳統(tǒng)價(jià)值觀,7.4澳洲A類考了老傳統(tǒng)對現(xiàn)代年輕人生活的影響)
18、Some people believe that governments should make investment in building public libraries in every town, while others think it is a waste of money because we have access to information via Internet.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.(7.11北美考了因?yàn)閳D書館能提供書籍,所以人們不應(yīng)該浪費(fèi)有限的資金來提供昂貴的計(jì)算機(jī)媒體,命中原題變形)
19、Some people think developing countries should invite foreign companies to open
branches, offices and factories to promote their economies.Others say that they should keep the foreign companies out and depend more on their own local companies.Describe both views and give your opinion.(命中北美725A類大作文原題一字不差!)
25、Some people think that older school children should learn wide range subjects and develop knowledge, but other people think that they should only learn a small number of subjects in details.Discuss both views and give your opinion.(命中歐洲613A類大作文原題,10.8國內(nèi)A類再中原題)
32、People can perform everyday tasks, such as shopping and banking as well as business transactions, without meeting other people face-to-face.What are the effects of this on an individual and the society as a whole?(近似命中澳洲723A類大作文)
28、In the last, lecture lectures were used as a way of teaching large numbers of student, but now with the development of technology for education, many people think there is no justification for attending lectures.To what extent do you agree or disagree?(命中530歐洲區(qū)A類大作文原題,一字不差!530澳洲A類考的是學(xué)校教學(xué)重要還是網(wǎng)絡(luò)教學(xué)重要,近似命中。)
2、People continue to commit crimes even after being punished for it.Why do you think this happens? How can crime be stopped?(命中5.16澳洲A類加試大作文原題,一字不差)
4、Schools don’t give proper health education to young people.Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion and examples based on your experience.(命中430澳洲區(qū)G類大作文,430澳洲和國內(nèi)大作文不一樣)
6、Young people who commit serious crimes, such as a rubbery or a violent attack should be punished in the same way as adults.To what extent do you agree or disagree?(命中4.25雅思A類大作文原題,而且本題在4.24晚10點(diǎn)于哥的新浪微博@人人網(wǎng)雅思哥 作為突擊題發(fā)布,6.18加試國內(nèi)A類考的是青少年犯罪的原因和處罰)
13、In some countries young people at the age of eighteen are considered adults and can drive a car, vote and get married, while other countries don’t allow it.What age do you think is the best to be considered an adult? Give reasons and examples from your own knowledge and experience.(2.12A類考了是否認(rèn)同提高年齡底限來讓駕駛更安全,近似命中)
14、Some people believe that cell phones should be for personal use only;others, however, feel cell phones should be used mostly for work.Discuss both views and give your opinion.(2.14A類考了在某些特定區(qū)域禁止使用手機(jī),近似命中,10.24澳洲A類再次考到本題,稍有變化)
16、Nowadays companies and other organizations are requiring their employees to wear a uniform.Think about jobs where uniform is important.What are the advantages and disadvantages of wearing a uniform?(命中澳洲723G類大作文原題,一字不差?。?/p>
17、Tourism brings benefits to a country but it also may have harmful effects.How can a country ensure that tourism benefits its development?(命中530國內(nèi)雅思A類原題變形)
21、Television has had a significant influence on the culture of many societies.To what extent do you think it has positively or negatively affected cultural development?(4.11G類大作文電視是否讓生活變得有趣,近似命中)
27、People are eating a variety of foods these days which encourages the flow of food from every corner of the world to a local supermarket.Do you think this is negative or positive development? Why?(命中8.8北美A類大作文原題變形)
29、Sports help to a greater extent to build peace in world.Do you agree or disagree? Give some examples and include relevant experiences in your response.(近似命中澳洲725A類大作文)
第三篇:雅思寫作大作文
雅思英語大作文寫作模板
一、辯論型作文
1.對稱式寫法
With the increasingly rapid economic globalization and urbanization, more problems are brought to our attention.Quite a few people hold the opinion that… On the other hand, there are also a majority of people who firmly take the view that… In this essay, I will attempt to present both sides of this argument in order to establish my position on this issue of / that…
Those people who strongly believe that… have cogent reasons for it.First of all, … Secondly, … Finally, …
People rarely reach an absolute consensus on such a controversial issue.The other side of the coin has voiced strong opposition, saying that… To begin with, … Next, … , Furthermore, … From what has been mentioned above, we may see that there is some truth in both arguments.Personally, I side with the latter opinion that…
2.一邊倒寫法
With the increasingly rapid economic globalization and urbanization, more problems are brought to our attention.Quite a few people hold the opinion that… On the other hand, there are also a majority of people who firmly take the view that… There is probably a little bit of truth in both arguments.For my mart, I totally agree with the latter ones.There are numerous reasons why I hold this opinion, and I would explore a few of the most important ones here.In term of substantive level, the reason mentioned below seems to be advisable and deserve more consideration…
What is also worth noticing is that …
Finally, the incomparable advantage of this view is that …
Taking into account all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that …
二、解決型作文
In recent years, much more attention than ever before has been paid to… It is crucial that we analyze the causes of this disturbing issue and explore the effective solutions.From my own perspective, the causes are multiple.Some of the most common factors will be discussed below, followed by some responsible solutions.In terms of substantive level, the reason mentioned below seems to be advisable and deserve more consideration.…
There is a further more subtle point we must consider.…
What is more, …
Given the severity of this phenomena, we have no alternative but to take prompt steps to address this situation.The most important approach is that … In the second place, … In addition, …
第四篇:雅思寫作
翻開劍橋系列教材后面考官所給的范文評析,大家會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)考官的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)一般都從如下四個(gè)方面展開:內(nèi)容(content)、組織結(jié)構(gòu)(organization)、詞匯(vocabulary)和句式(sentence structure)。同時(shí),據(jù)筆者的長期觀察,高分雅思作文無一例外地在這四方面有好的演繹才能獲得考官親睞。“好的作文大都是相似的,而不幸的作文卻各有各的不幸?!毕旅?,筆者將從以上四方面一一闡述烤鴨們寫作時(shí)存在的盲點(diǎn)所在并提出相應(yīng)的建議。
一、內(nèi)容(content):切中主題,自圓其說
盲點(diǎn)1:無話可說
這類考生在看到題目時(shí),最初的感覺是腦袋中一片空白。雅思作文題材廣泛,包括科技、教育、健康、環(huán)保、犯罪、文化傳統(tǒng)、時(shí)尚、體育運(yùn)動(dòng)、動(dòng)物保護(hù)等。而且由于文化差異以及學(xué)習(xí)工作的緣故,日常生活中考生極少接觸到這類話題,更不用說對它有什么想法了。
盲點(diǎn)1擊破:四多原則
多看范文;多關(guān)注時(shí)事,觀察生活;多與人交流;多記錄自己的想法。比較極端的做法是花三天三夜沉浸在范文書當(dāng)中,分領(lǐng)域熟悉雅思考題及其觀點(diǎn)。當(dāng)感覺自己腦袋中涌現(xiàn)出無數(shù)ideas時(shí),關(guān)上書,寫出自己能夠想出來的各個(gè)領(lǐng)域的觀點(diǎn),如果某個(gè)領(lǐng) 域發(fā)生短路,翻開書重新閱讀,直至能夠?qū)懗鰜頌橹埂?/p>
盲點(diǎn)2:千言萬語
這類考生往往見多識(shí)廣,看到話題時(shí)感到倚馬千言??墒怯捎谠~匯量和邏輯方面有所欠缺。往往面臨“滿腹的心里話不知怎么說”的尷尬。
盲點(diǎn)2擊破:詞以類記原則
此類考生要分領(lǐng)域積累雅思寫作詞匯,如在寫肥胖問題時(shí),考生需要積累(obese, overweight, coronary heart disease, stroke, heredity, inheritance, junk food, carnivorous, excessive drinking and smoking, couch potato, diabetes, a balanced diet, vegetarian等。)
盲點(diǎn)3:標(biāo)新立異
這類考生認(rèn)為論點(diǎn)或論據(jù)越新穎越好,力求與眾不同。
盲點(diǎn)3擊破:自圓其說原則
雅思考試畢竟是語言能力測試,詞匯、語法和句式才是測試重點(diǎn)。況且,考官閱卷數(shù)載,見多識(shí)廣,你的觀點(diǎn)很有可能已經(jīng)無法構(gòu)成他的興奮點(diǎn),所以我們講究論點(diǎn)論據(jù)
言之有理,能夠自圓其說即可。
盲點(diǎn)4:真情流露
這類考生和“千言萬語”型考生神似,唯一的不同便是他們英文表達(dá)暢通無阻,寫作時(shí)有“黃河之水,延綿不絕”之勢。但興奮之時(shí),有些忘乎所以,與主題漸行漸遠(yuǎn)。
盲點(diǎn)4擊破:切中主題原則
這類考生必須建立自己的一套邏輯框架,并嚴(yán)格執(zhí)行。如在寫argumentation類題型時(shí),全文四段:“第一段為背景介紹和提出論點(diǎn)段;第二段為己方觀點(diǎn)論證段;第三段為讓步段;第四段總結(jié)段。切忌任何與主題無關(guān)或相悖的雞肋出現(xiàn)。
二、組織結(jié)構(gòu)(organization):起承轉(zhuǎn)合,行云流水
盲點(diǎn)1:天馬行空
這類考生和“千言萬語”型考生神似,寫作時(shí)缺乏自己的一套寫作框架。有時(shí),盡管有全文框架,段落框架又缺失,通常表現(xiàn)為主體段內(nèi)部的分論點(diǎn)或分論據(jù)存在邏輯上的重復(fù)或沖突。
盲點(diǎn)1擊破:起承轉(zhuǎn)合原則
除了段落之間應(yīng)存在“第一段(起)為背景介紹和提出論點(diǎn)段;第二段(承)為己方觀點(diǎn)論證段;第三段(轉(zhuǎn))為讓步段;第四段(合)總結(jié)段?!钡倪壿嬁蚣苤?,段落內(nèi)部每一句也需要有這樣的邏輯框架來約束,如讓步段中:“some people may argue that ?(起);because they maintain that ?。(承);However ,they are oversimplifying the situation, in fact ?.。(轉(zhuǎn));Therefore , I believe ?。(合)
盲點(diǎn)2:單句游離
這類烤鴨寫出來的句子與句子之間沒有連接詞,有時(shí)就算有,邏輯連詞也使用錯(cuò)誤。或者是標(biāo)點(diǎn)不注意。最常見使用錯(cuò)誤諸如on the other hand。它連接的是轉(zhuǎn)折,卻無數(shù)次被誤解成遞進(jìn)。
盲點(diǎn)2擊破:行云流水原則
考生應(yīng)準(zhǔn)確記憶并正確使用各種邏輯關(guān)系詞,力求做到行云流水,常見的邏輯連詞有:
因果關(guān)系:
因:As since due to owning to
果:hence thus therefore as a consequence as a result
表目的:thereby
舉例關(guān)系:Take for example, For instance, To illustrate, As an apt illustration ,對比關(guān)系:While ,whilst, whereas, by contrast。
讓步關(guān)系:despite ,in spite of , not with standing , nonetheless, even though,Provided that , if
三、詞匯(vocabulary):同義改寫,百花齊放
盲點(diǎn)1 : 遭遇生詞
大部分考生苦惱的地方莫過于此,寫作過程中無數(shù)次由于生詞的關(guān)系而短路。
盲點(diǎn)1擊破:同義改寫原則
其實(shí)考生對不認(rèn)識(shí)的詞完全可以paraphrase,如望子成龍,望女成鳳完全可以寫成:All parents expect their children to have a promising further。
注意:對于各個(gè)領(lǐng)域內(nèi)的專有名詞我們鼓勵(lì)大家履行詞以類記原則,畢竟只有語言水平較高的烤鴨才可能做到用簡單的詞匯解釋難詞。如有同學(xué)在解釋寄生蟲(parasite)在他筆下成了” something that is very tiny and lives on my skin and sucks my blood without doing any work”!這樣的paraphrase 只能讓考官啼笑皆非。
盲點(diǎn)2:同義重現(xiàn)
如在discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the internet時(shí),有考生作文中曾出現(xiàn)了不下10次的advantages and disadvantages。這會(huì)讓考官出現(xiàn)極嚴(yán)重的審美疲勞,分?jǐn)?shù)自然不高。
盲點(diǎn)2擊破: 百花齊放原則
其實(shí)考生在平時(shí)的習(xí)作中應(yīng)注意近義詞、反義詞、衍生詞的積累,并不斷練習(xí)。如上面的advantages的同義詞為benefits gains merits pros等;disadvantages的同義詞有downsides ,weakness, drawbacks cons等。
盲點(diǎn)3:大詞連篇
很多考生認(rèn)為大詞生僻詞匯用得越多,得分就越高。
盲點(diǎn)3擊破:整體協(xié)調(diào)原則
看到劍橋系列教材大家會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn),考官給出的范文大詞生詞寥寥可數(shù),真正有說服力的是你用的詞能夠準(zhǔn)確無誤的表達(dá)你的思想。試想一個(gè)語法錯(cuò)誤連篇的考生盲目地使用各種生僻詞匯來堆砌文章,這無疑給考官造成一種“暴發(fā)戶”般的強(qiáng)烈視覺沖擊,最后只能適得其反。所以,用詞上我們講究與內(nèi)容以及句式結(jié)構(gòu)整體協(xié)調(diào)的原則。
三、句式(sentence structure):長短結(jié)合,錯(cuò)落有致
盲點(diǎn)1:長篇累牘
和用詞上的大詞連篇一樣,部分考生以能使用各種復(fù)雜的長難句為榮。
盲點(diǎn)1擊破:長短結(jié)合原則
事實(shí)上,如果大家有看劍橋后面的范文的話,會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)長難句并不象絕大多數(shù)同學(xué)想象得那般高深。通常的情況是長短句結(jié)合使用,而且論點(diǎn)通常用短句,而論據(jù)則長句居多。
盲點(diǎn)2:短小精悍
和長篇累牘型考生相反的是短小精悍型考生,為了保險(xiǎn)起見,這類考生作文中充滿了簡單的is/am/are的主系表和主謂賓句型。
盲點(diǎn)2擊破:靈活多變原則
這類考生如果能稍稍變得aggressive一些,他們將是考場上最大的“黑馬”。如以Parents and teachers often link children’s score to their academic ability這個(gè)簡單句為例,通過強(qiáng)調(diào)句型的包裝我們得到:
It is children’s score that parents and teachers often link to their academic ability rather than other qualifications。
通過倒裝句的包裝我們可以得到:
So important is children’s score that parents and teachers often link them to children’s academic ability。
通過插入語的包裝我們可以得到:
Scores , as is known to everyone ,are often linked to children’s academic ability by teachers and parents。
通過分詞短語的包裝我們可以得到:
Based on the conception that scores tells everything, parents and teachers often link children’s score to their academic ability。
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通過如此靈活的加工和包裝,你會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn),簡單句經(jīng)過稍稍潤色原來也可以如此光彩照人,這要比無數(shù)大詞生僻詞堆砌形成的長難句更加贏得考官的青睞。
總之,掌握了如上原則,再加上持之以恒的練習(xí),考生一定能在Task 2中獲得自己滿意的分?jǐn)?shù)。(編
第五篇:雅思寫作
雅思寫作范文
Many old building are protected by law because they are part of a nation's history.However,some people think knocked down to make way for new ones because people need houses and offices.How important is it to maintain old buildings? Should history stand in the way of progress?Old buildings sometimes conflicts with social advancement.Appealing as it is in the eyes of business people,tearing down old architect to make room for real-estate development is not a wise idea in many ways.The primarily reason is that old buildings,like our native language,forms our cultural identity and keep a unique record the history of a country.From this aspect,old buildings are considered very valuable as one of the symbols of the culture of a nation.For instance,the traditional Chinese residence in Beijing,Siheyuan,are once seen as the remains of the Old World,and were destroyed by people shortly after the founding of People's Republic of China.Until recently did the people and policy makers as well realize that it is an inexcusable and stupid idea to commit such a terrible deed because old buildings,once gone,are not restorable.But their economic values and aesthetic appeals have just caught the attention of Chinese people.Moreover,old buildings,if planed and preserved properly,could coexist with modern real-estate development.In France,aged buildings bring millions of dollars of revenue for the government and amazed thousands of tourists.Yet no one thinks the high-rising office buildings and apartment buildings make the old architect a sore of the eye.By contrast,the new learn from the old,a fact that makes them more attractive.We admit that not all old buildings should be treated equally and some of them do need to be torn down for various reasons such as safety and new buildings.However,we should not be too blind to see their value too.If only the real and practical factors are being considered,the country will be sorry for its loss in years to come.As we have discussed,old buildings are part of a country's history and are valuable in many ways.We should plan well and be wise enough to see their value.But the same time,we should also do our best to find solutions to make the old and the new coexist in harmony.