第一篇：雅思寫(xiě)作考試常用35組句型分析

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一、~~~ the + ~ est + 名詞 +(that)+ 主詞 + have ever + seen(known/heard/had/read, etc)

~~~ the most + 形容詞 + 名詞 +(that)+ 主詞 + have ever + seen(known/heard/had/read, etc)

Lack of interpersonal skills is one of the most serious defects that we have ever known about today’s college students.缺乏人際交往技能是我們迄今所知的當(dāng)今大學(xué)生的最大缺陷。

二、Nothing is + ~~~ er than to + V

Nothing is + more + 形容詞 + than to + V

例句：For parents, nothing is more important than to educate children in a proper way.沒(méi)有比以一種正確方式教育孩子更重要的事情了。

三、~~~ cannot emphasize the importance of ~~~ too much.(再怎么強(qiáng)調(diào)...的重要性也不為過(guò)。)

例句：We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting celebrities’ privacy too much.我們?cè)僭趺磸?qiáng)調(diào)保護(hù)名人隱私的也不為過(guò)。

四、There is no denying that + S + V...(不可否認(rèn)的...)

例句：There is no denying that the practicality of our higher education has gone from bad to worse.不可否認(rèn)的，我們高等教育的實(shí)用性已經(jīng)每況愈下。

五、It is universally acknowledged that + 句子~~(全世界都知道...)

例句：It is universally acknowledged that it is the doctor’s duty and obligation to heal the wounded and rescue the dying.全世界都知道救死扶傷是醫(yī)生的天職。

六、There is no doubt that + 句子~~(毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)的...)

例句：There is no doubt that the Internet is far more convenient and efficient than the written word or other conventional means of conveying meaning.毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)因特網(wǎng)比書(shū)面文字更方便、快捷。

七、An advantage of ~~~ is that + 句子(...的優(yōu)點(diǎn)是...)

例句：An advantage of children’s participating in some paid work is that this practice can cultivate their independence, self-determination and sense of responsibility.孩子參加有償勞動(dòng)的一個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)是這種實(shí)踐可以培養(yǎng)小孩的獨(dú)立性、自主性和責(zé)任感。

八、The reason why + 句子 ~~~ is that + 句子(...的原因是...)

例句：The reason why a large number of customs have altered a great deal is that most of them are connected with some superstitious beliefs, and they cannot fit in this world with highly-developed technology.多數(shù)舊風(fēng)俗習(xí)慣都產(chǎn)生了巨大的改變的原因是它們大多與封建迷信有關(guān)，與現(xiàn)代社會(huì)格格不入。

九、So + 形容詞 + be + 主詞 + that + 句子(如此...以致于...)

例句：So pervasive are advertisements that no one can avoid being influenced by them.廣告是如此盛行，每個(gè)人都難免不受它們的影響。

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1十、Adj + as + Subject(主詞)+ be, S + V~~~(雖然...)

例句：Lovely as pets are, it is by no means appropriate for city dwellers to keep them in their houses.{by no means = in no way = on no account 一點(diǎn)也不}

雖然寵物很可愛(ài)，但市民在家中飼養(yǎng)是絲毫不妥的。

十一、The + ~er + S + V, ~~~ the + ~er + S + V ~~~

The + more + Adj + S + V, ~~~ the + more + Adj + S + V ~~~(愈...愈...)

The more children are encouraged to get in touch with various aspects of society, the more comprehensive their knowledge will be.越鼓勵(lì)孩子接觸社會(huì)的各個(gè)方面，他們學(xué)習(xí)的知識(shí)會(huì)更全面。

十二、By +Ving, ~~ can ~~(借著...，..能夠..)

例句：By putting the responsibility into the government’s hand, citizens can enjoy a higher level of assurance in quality.借著將這種職責(zé)放在政府手中，市民在質(zhì)量上能夠享有更高程度的保障。

十三、~~~ enable + Object(受詞)+ to + V(..使..能夠..)

例句：Community service programs enable the government to relieve the strain on its limited budget.社區(qū)服務(wù)計(jì)劃有助于減輕政府財(cái)政負(fù)擔(dān)。

十四、On no account can we + V ~~~(我們絕對(duì)不能...)

例句：On no account can we ignore the significance of education.我們絕對(duì)不能忽略教育的重要性。

十五、It is time + S + 過(guò)去式(該是...的時(shí)候了)

例句：It is time we evaluated the roles that modern technology plays in our life from more balanced and objective perspectives.該是我們從更加公正和客觀的角度來(lái)評(píng)價(jià)現(xiàn)代科技在我們的生活中所發(fā)揮的作用的時(shí)候了。

十六、Those who ~~~(...的人...)

例句：Those who think otherwise contend that computers are designed and programmed by human beings to do all the translation work in a comparatively mechanical manner.那些持反對(duì)意見(jiàn)的人爭(zhēng)論到電腦是由人設(shè)計(jì)和編程的，因此只能是較機(jī)械地進(jìn)行語(yǔ)言翻譯。

十七、There is no one but ~~~(沒(méi)有人不...)

例句：There is no one but longs to display the best self and impress others.沒(méi)有人不渴望展現(xiàn)最好的自我以給他人留下深刻印象。

十八、be + forced/compelled/obliged + to + V(不得不...)

例句：Only in a peaceful environment can people lay emphasis on sports events.The Olympic Games is a convincing example because it has been compelled to be cancelled several times in its history due to wars..只有在和平的環(huán)境里，人們才有精力去重視體育賽事。奧運(yùn)會(huì)就是一個(gè)很有說(shuō)服力的例子，因?yàn)樵跉v史上它由于戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)而數(shù)次被迫取消。

十九、It is conceivable that + 句子(可想而知的)

It is obvious that + 句子(明顯的)

It is apparent that + 句子(顯然的)

例句：It is conceivable that with the rapid development in society and economy, competition is becoming increasingly fierce and acute.可想而知，隨著社會(huì)經(jīng)濟(jì)的發(fā)展，競(jìng)爭(zhēng)將更加劇烈。

二十、That is the reason why ~~~(那就是...的原因)

例句：It costs an astronomical sum of fund to lock up so many criminals and that’s the reason why imprisonment has imposed a great strain on the budget of a nation.把如此多的罪犯關(guān)押起來(lái)需要耗費(fèi)大量資金，那就是為什么監(jiān)禁已經(jīng)大大增加了國(guó)家負(fù)擔(dān)的原因。

二十一、For the past + 時(shí)間，S + 現(xiàn)在完成式...(過(guò)去...年來(lái)，...一直...)

例句：For the past decade or so, practical courses, such as computer and business, have gained tremendous popularity on college campuses.過(guò)去十年來(lái)，實(shí)用性課程諸如電腦和商科在大學(xué)中普遍盛行。

二十二、Since + S + 過(guò)去式，S + 現(xiàn)在完成式。

例句：Since the advent of modern urbanization, people have been confronted with the dilemma whether or not they should demolish old houses and buildings that seem to have spoilt the cityscape.自從現(xiàn)代城市化的進(jìn)程開(kāi)始之后，人們一直面臨著這樣一種兩難的境地：他們是否應(yīng)該拆除那些是否有損市容的舊房屋和建筑物。

二十三、It pays to + V ~~~(...是值得的。)

例句：It pays to create a fair atmosphere in which both males and females cooperate and compete on an equal footing.創(chuàng)造一個(gè)讓男女平等合作競(jìng)爭(zhēng)的良好環(huán)境是值得的。

二十四、be based on(以...為基礎(chǔ))

例句：The progress of thee society is based on harmony.社會(huì)的進(jìn)步是以和諧為基礎(chǔ)的。

二十五、Spare no effort to + V(不遺余力的)

Developed nations should spare no effort to finance their economically disadvantaged counterparts.發(fā)達(dá)國(guó)家應(yīng)該不遺余力地資助貧國(guó)。

二十六、bring home to + 人 + 事(讓...明白...事)

例句：We should bring home to the masses the significance of space research.我們應(yīng)該讓人們明白太空研究的重要性所在。

二十七、be closely related to ~~(與...息息相關(guān))

例句：Expanding population and influx of migrant workers are closely related to the problem.人口激增與外來(lái)民工大量涌入與交通問(wèn)題息息相關(guān)。

二十八、There exists the possibility of + Ving(存在...的可能性)

There exists the possibility of wronging an innocent person

有可能冤枉無(wú)辜的人。

二十九、Due to/Owing to/Thanks to + N/Ving, ~~~(因?yàn)?..)

例句： Thanks to coeducation system, benign competition and cooperation between male and female students are rightly encouraged.由于男女共校的教育體制，異性同學(xué)間的良性競(jìng)爭(zhēng)和友好合作精神得到了發(fā)揚(yáng)。三

十、Only...can(只有...才能)

例句：Only in cities can children be well prepared for their future life and keep up with the trend of the world.只有在城市里孩子們才能為他們未來(lái)的生活作好準(zhǔn)備并與世界趨勢(shì)同步。

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十一、Leave much to be desired(令人不滿(mǎn)意)

例句：The condition of our traffic leaves much to be desired.我們的交通狀況令人不滿(mǎn)意。

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十二、Have(exert, impose)a great influence on ~~~(對(duì)...有很大的影響)例句：Quality of citizens has a great influence on a nation’s prosperity.國(guó)民的素質(zhì)對(duì)于國(guó)家的繁榮有重大的影響。

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十三、do good to(對(duì)...有益)，do harm to(對(duì)...有害)

例句：Reading does good to our minds.讀書(shū)對(duì)心靈有益。

Overwork does harm to health.工作過(guò)度對(duì)健康有害。

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十四、Pose a great threat to ~~(對(duì)...造成一大威脅)

例句：abortion poses a great threat to both women’s physical and mental health.墮胎對(duì)于婦女的身心健康都會(huì)造成巨大威脅。

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十五、do one‘s utmost to + V = do one‘s best(盡全力去...)

例句：schools should do their utmost to ensure the students’ sound growth.學(xué)校應(yīng)盡全力去確保學(xué)生的健康成長(zhǎng)。

第二篇：雅思寫(xiě)作考試的注意事項(xiàng)

雅思寫(xiě)作考試的七大注意事項(xiàng)

雅思寫(xiě)作是一種綜合語(yǔ)言能力的考查，這個(gè)能力包括考生對(duì)文章結(jié)構(gòu)、內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言的把握。除此之外，考生還要注意以下幾點(diǎn)：

一，時(shí)間安排

雅思寫(xiě)作要求考生在一個(gè)小時(shí)之內(nèi)完成一篇至少150個(gè)單詞的說(shuō)明文或信件(20分鐘)和一篇至少250個(gè)單詞的議論文(40分鐘)。考生需合理安排時(shí)間。

疑問(wèn)：先寫(xiě)Task1還是Task 2?

建議考生先簡(jiǎn)后難，Task 1盡量控制在20分鐘內(nèi)完成，然后安心寫(xiě)Task 2。所以考生在考前一定要多練多寫(xiě)，掌握時(shí)間。

二，字?jǐn)?shù)

雅思寫(xiě)作字?jǐn)?shù)是有下限的，但沒(méi)有上限，所以很多考生都有疑問(wèn)，到底多少單詞的文章可以拿到高分。當(dāng)然這沒(méi)有絕對(duì)的限制，但據(jù)統(tǒng)計(jì)看來(lái)，大多數(shù)的高分小作文字?jǐn)?shù)都在180左右，而大作文也在280左右。

疑問(wèn)：字?jǐn)?shù)不夠怎么辦?

就Task 1 而言，說(shuō)明該考生對(duì)圖表的分析能力還有待提高，多練習(xí)看圖審題構(gòu)思。如果Task 2字?jǐn)?shù)不夠，說(shuō)明考生思路不開(kāi)闊，論據(jù)無(wú)法擴(kuò)展，考生需增加閱讀量，多看和雅思寫(xiě)作話(huà)題相近的文章和精讀雅思范文來(lái)掌握論據(jù)擴(kuò)展方法。

三，標(biāo)題與格式

雅思的大小作文都不需要題目。雅思寫(xiě)作有兩種格式：一是空行不空格式，即文章每段開(kāi)頭頂格寫(xiě)，段與段之間空一行;二是空格不空行，即除首段頂格外，文章每段開(kāi)頭空五個(gè)字符，段與段之間不空行。

四，機(jī)經(jīng)

雅思考試是非常系統(tǒng)而且專(zhuān)業(yè)的語(yǔ)言水平測(cè)試，它有著龐大的題庫(kù)，有些題目也會(huì)重復(fù)出現(xiàn)，所以考生可以通過(guò)以往考題，即機(jī)經(jīng)充分把握寫(xiě)作題型，話(huà)題等，為考生做好充分準(zhǔn)備。

疑問(wèn)：要不要背范文?

背范文對(duì)提高考生的英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言水平有很大幫助，但考生要明確背范文的目的是吸收其中的精華，如觀點(diǎn)、語(yǔ)言、結(jié)構(gòu)等，而不是在考生時(shí)遇到相同題目全盤(pán)照搬，否則被考官發(fā)現(xiàn)，將影響最后的得分。

五，評(píng)分。

通過(guò)第二節(jié)我們已經(jīng)掌握了雅思大小作文的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。大小作文在寫(xiě)作中所占比例大約是6比4?？梢?jiàn)Task 2 在最后寫(xiě)作得分中所占比重較大，但也不能忽略Task 1。疑問(wèn)：卷面不整潔會(huì)否扣分?

潦草的字跡和不整潔的卷面將在一定程度上影響考官理解文章內(nèi)容，影響評(píng)卷心情，從而影響得分。

六，時(shí)態(tài)

圖表作文通常會(huì)給出特定的時(shí)間，考生要根據(jù)此時(shí)間決定文章的時(shí)態(tài)。通常情況下有以下三種情況：過(guò)去時(shí)間用一般過(guò)去式，現(xiàn)在時(shí)間或沒(méi)給出時(shí)間用一般現(xiàn)在式，預(yù)測(cè)用一般將來(lái)式。議論文根據(jù)內(nèi)容確定時(shí)態(tài)。

七，學(xué)術(shù)類(lèi)文章的一些文體注意事項(xiàng)

讓我們通過(guò)具體的例子來(lái)了解此類(lèi)文章書(shū)寫(xiě)和文體的特點(diǎn)

1.N2O wasn’t produced until 1990, after which, its production grew rapidly.雅思文章為正式文體，所以盡量不要出現(xiàn)縮寫(xiě)，wasn’t 建議寫(xiě)成was not。

2.The bottles are first divided by color into clear, brown and clear ones which are then washed by high-pressurised water.拼寫(xiě)出現(xiàn)問(wèn)題。在雅思寫(xiě)作中，英式和美式拼寫(xiě)都接受，但我們還是盡量做到兩者不混淆。如or 和our, se和 ze。or 和ze 為美式拼寫(xiě)，而our 和se為英式拼寫(xiě)。

3.Nowadays, more and more people have private cars.more and more 詞匯過(guò)于簡(jiǎn)單，我們可以用an increasing number of 來(lái)替代。

4.Let all of us make great efforts to construct a more civilised China!

此句子喊口號(hào)，抒發(fā)情感。雅思大作文為議論文，不需要任何形式的情感抒發(fā)和口號(hào)，所以這句話(huà)不適合這樣的語(yǔ)言環(huán)境。

第三篇：雅思寫(xiě)作5.5分考試答案

Task 1 Underground Railways Systems

The table shows some details about underground railway systems in six cities, namely, London, Pairs, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto and Los Angeles.London was the first city that opened underground railways systems in 1863, while Los Angels was the last one in 2001.As for the other four countries, all of them opened the underground railways in 1900s.The route in London is also the largest, approximately 400 kilometers.Those of Pairs, Tokyo and Washington DC are between 100 and 200 kilometers.The lengths of underground railways are short in Kyoto and Los Angeles(11 kilometers and 28 kilometers respectively).Tokyo with 155 kilometers of route has the largest amount of passengers(1927 millions).It is followed by that of Pairs, London and Washington DC.Passengers in Kyoto and Los Angeles are similar, around 50 millions.In conclusion, the underground railway system in London is the oldest and the longest, while that in Tokyo serves the largest number of people.By contrast, Kyoto and Los Angeles have new and small size systems.Task 2 Family relationship is not as close as before.Along with the development of the society, more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that families are not as close as before.To my mind, this is one of the side-effects brought about by the modern world.There are a number of reasons for this phenomenon.Firstly, with social advance, people are now more integrated with the society and thus less dependent on their families.Apart from their families, they can easily get help from their friends in a shorter time than before, and it is much easier to make more friends now as a result of rapid improvement in telecommunications.Secondly, the outside world is becoming more charming and fascinating, and people tend to share more time with their friends, colleagues or business partners in their leisure time instead of their families.Thirdly, in the modern society, social competition is getting increasingly fierce;consequently, people have to devote more time and energy to their career.They also feel the urgent need to broaden their scope and knowledge and upgrade themselves so as not to lag behind others.Since family is the basic unit of a society, this issue should be well taken into consideration.As to how to bring families closer, people put forward various suggestions.First of all, the most important approach is through education.Parents should not only set a good example but also instill into their children from their childhood family concept so that they value family in their whole life.Secondly, all family members should try to squeeze some time for family activities such as a regular family dinner together.Dinner time is indeed a perfect time and opportunity for people to exchange their feelings and ideas, which is quite conducive to a more harmonious family relationship.Furthermore, the government should organize some public activities to promote the time-honored concept of family, to call on people to treasure the basic bonds of human life and give awards to some happy families in recognition of their strive for a better family relationship.In order to enjoy a harmonious family life, our government and ordinary citizens should join hands in the efforts to create an atmosphere in which domestic peace is highly valued.Only in this way can we further ensure the harmony of our whole society.

第四篇：雅思寫(xiě)作

翻開(kāi)劍橋系列教材后面考官所給的范文評(píng)析，大家會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)考官的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)一般都從如下四個(gè)方面展開(kāi)：內(nèi)容(content)、組織結(jié)構(gòu)(organization)、詞匯(vocabulary)和句式(sentence structure)。同時(shí)，據(jù)筆者的長(zhǎng)期觀察，高分雅思作文無(wú)一例外地在這四方面有好的演繹才能獲得考官親睞。“好的作文大都是相似的，而不幸的作文卻各有各的不幸?！毕旅?，筆者將從以上四方面一一闡述烤鴨們寫(xiě)作時(shí)存在的盲點(diǎn)所在并提出相應(yīng)的建議。

一、內(nèi)容(content)：切中主題，自圓其說(shuō)

盲點(diǎn)1：無(wú)話(huà)可說(shuō)

這類(lèi)考生在看到題目時(shí)，最初的感覺(jué)是腦袋中一片空白。雅思作文題材廣泛，包括科技、教育、健康、環(huán)保、犯罪、文化傳統(tǒng)、時(shí)尚、體育運(yùn)動(dòng)、動(dòng)物保護(hù)等。而且由于文化差異以及學(xué)習(xí)工作的緣故，日常生活中考生極少接觸到這類(lèi)話(huà)題，更不用說(shuō)對(duì)它有什么想法了。

盲點(diǎn)1擊破：四多原則

多看范文；多關(guān)注時(shí)事，觀察生活；多與人交流；多記錄自己的想法。比較極端的做法是花三天三夜沉浸在范文書(shū)當(dāng)中，分領(lǐng)域熟悉雅思考題及其觀點(diǎn)。當(dāng)感覺(jué)自己腦袋中涌現(xiàn)出無(wú)數(shù)ideas時(shí)，關(guān)上書(shū)，寫(xiě)出自己能夠想出來(lái)的各個(gè)領(lǐng)域的觀點(diǎn)，如果某個(gè)領(lǐng) 域發(fā)生短路，翻開(kāi)書(shū)重新閱讀，直至能夠?qū)懗鰜?lái)為止。

盲點(diǎn)2：千言萬(wàn)語(yǔ)

這類(lèi)考生往往見(jiàn)多識(shí)廣，看到話(huà)題時(shí)感到倚馬千言?？墒怯捎谠~匯量和邏輯方面有所欠缺。往往面臨“滿(mǎn)腹的心里話(huà)不知怎么說(shuō)”的尷尬。

盲點(diǎn)2擊破：詞以類(lèi)記原則

此類(lèi)考生要分領(lǐng)域積累雅思寫(xiě)作詞匯，如在寫(xiě)肥胖問(wèn)題時(shí)，考生需要積累(obese, overweight, coronary heart disease, stroke, heredity, inheritance, junk food, carnivorous, excessive drinking and smoking, couch potato, diabetes, a balanced diet, vegetarian等。)

盲點(diǎn)3：標(biāo)新立異

這類(lèi)考生認(rèn)為論點(diǎn)或論據(jù)越新穎越好，力求與眾不同。

盲點(diǎn)3擊破：自圓其說(shuō)原則

雅思考試畢竟是語(yǔ)言能力測(cè)試，詞匯、語(yǔ)法和句式才是測(cè)試重點(diǎn)。況且，考官閱卷數(shù)載，見(jiàn)多識(shí)廣，你的觀點(diǎn)很有可能已經(jīng)無(wú)法構(gòu)成他的興奮點(diǎn)，所以我們講究論點(diǎn)論據(jù)

言之有理，能夠自圓其說(shuō)即可。

盲點(diǎn)4：真情流露

這類(lèi)考生和“千言萬(wàn)語(yǔ)”型考生神似，唯一的不同便是他們英文表達(dá)暢通無(wú)阻，寫(xiě)作時(shí)有“黃河之水，延綿不絕”之勢(shì)。但興奮之時(shí)，有些忘乎所以，與主題漸行漸遠(yuǎn)。

盲點(diǎn)4擊破：切中主題原則

這類(lèi)考生必須建立自己的一套邏輯框架，并嚴(yán)格執(zhí)行。如在寫(xiě)argumentation類(lèi)題型時(shí)，全文四段：“第一段為背景介紹和提出論點(diǎn)段；第二段為己方觀點(diǎn)論證段；第三段為讓步段；第四段總結(jié)段。切忌任何與主題無(wú)關(guān)或相悖的雞肋出現(xiàn)。

二、組織結(jié)構(gòu)(organization)：起承轉(zhuǎn)合，行云流水

盲點(diǎn)1：天馬行空

這類(lèi)考生和“千言萬(wàn)語(yǔ)”型考生神似，寫(xiě)作時(shí)缺乏自己的一套寫(xiě)作框架。有時(shí)，盡管有全文框架，段落框架又缺失，通常表現(xiàn)為主體段內(nèi)部的分論點(diǎn)或分論據(jù)存在邏輯上的重復(fù)或沖突。

盲點(diǎn)1擊破：起承轉(zhuǎn)合原則

除了段落之間應(yīng)存在“第一段(起)為背景介紹和提出論點(diǎn)段；第二段(承)為己方觀點(diǎn)論證段；第三段(轉(zhuǎn))為讓步段；第四段(合)總結(jié)段?！钡倪壿嬁蚣苤?，段落內(nèi)部每一句也需要有這樣的邏輯框架來(lái)約束，如讓步段中：“some people may argue that ?(起);because they maintain that ?。(承);However ,they are oversimplifying the situation, in fact ?.。(轉(zhuǎn));Therefore , I believe ?。(合)

盲點(diǎn)2：?jiǎn)尉溆坞x

這類(lèi)烤鴨寫(xiě)出來(lái)的句子與句子之間沒(méi)有連接詞，有時(shí)就算有，邏輯連詞也使用錯(cuò)誤?；蛘呤菢?biāo)點(diǎn)不注意。最常見(jiàn)使用錯(cuò)誤諸如on the other hand。它連接的是轉(zhuǎn)折，卻無(wú)數(shù)次被誤解成遞進(jìn)。

盲點(diǎn)2擊破：行云流水原則

考生應(yīng)準(zhǔn)確記憶并正確使用各種邏輯關(guān)系詞，力求做到行云流水，常見(jiàn)的邏輯連詞有：

因果關(guān)系：

因：As since due to owning to

果：hence thus therefore as a consequence as a result

表目的：thereby

舉例關(guān)系：Take for example, For instance, To illustrate, As an apt illustration ,對(duì)比關(guān)系：While ,whilst, whereas, by contrast。

讓步關(guān)系：despite ,in spite of , not with standing , nonetheless, even though,Provided that , if

三、詞匯(vocabulary)：同義改寫(xiě)，百花齊放

盲點(diǎn)1 ： 遭遇生詞

大部分考生苦惱的地方莫過(guò)于此，寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中無(wú)數(shù)次由于生詞的關(guān)系而短路。

盲點(diǎn)1擊破：同義改寫(xiě)原則

其實(shí)考生對(duì)不認(rèn)識(shí)的詞完全可以paraphrase，如望子成龍，望女成鳳完全可以寫(xiě)成：All parents expect their children to have a promising further。

注意：對(duì)于各個(gè)領(lǐng)域內(nèi)的專(zhuān)有名詞我們鼓勵(lì)大家履行詞以類(lèi)記原則，畢竟只有語(yǔ)言水平較高的烤鴨才可能做到用簡(jiǎn)單的詞匯解釋難詞。如有同學(xué)在解釋寄生蟲(chóng)(parasite)在他筆下成了” something that is very tiny and lives on my skin and sucks my blood without doing any work”！這樣的paraphrase 只能讓考官啼笑皆非。

盲點(diǎn)2：同義重現(xiàn)

如在discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the internet時(shí)，有考生作文中曾出現(xiàn)了不下10次的advantages and disadvantages。這會(huì)讓考官出現(xiàn)極嚴(yán)重的審美疲勞，分?jǐn)?shù)自然不高。

盲點(diǎn)2擊破： 百花齊放原則

其實(shí)考生在平時(shí)的習(xí)作中應(yīng)注意近義詞、反義詞、衍生詞的積累，并不斷練習(xí)。如上面的advantages的同義詞為benefits gains merits pros等；disadvantages的同義詞有downsides ,weakness, drawbacks cons等。

盲點(diǎn)3：大詞連篇

很多考生認(rèn)為大詞生僻詞匯用得越多，得分就越高。

盲點(diǎn)3擊破：整體協(xié)調(diào)原則

看到劍橋系列教材大家會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)，考官給出的范文大詞生詞寥寥可數(shù)，真正有說(shuō)服力的是你用的詞能夠準(zhǔn)確無(wú)誤的表達(dá)你的思想。試想一個(gè)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤連篇的考生盲目地使用各種生僻詞匯來(lái)堆砌文章，這無(wú)疑給考官造成一種“暴發(fā)戶(hù)”般的強(qiáng)烈視覺(jué)沖擊，最后只能適得其反。所以，用詞上我們講究與內(nèi)容以及句式結(jié)構(gòu)整體協(xié)調(diào)的原則。

三、句式(sentence structure)：長(zhǎng)短結(jié)合，錯(cuò)落有致

盲點(diǎn)1：長(zhǎng)篇累牘

和用詞上的大詞連篇一樣，部分考生以能使用各種復(fù)雜的長(zhǎng)難句為榮。

盲點(diǎn)1擊破：長(zhǎng)短結(jié)合原則

事實(shí)上，如果大家有看劍橋后面的范文的話(huà)，會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)長(zhǎng)難句并不象絕大多數(shù)同學(xué)想象得那般高深。通常的情況是長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合使用，而且論點(diǎn)通常用短句，而論據(jù)則長(zhǎng)句居多。

盲點(diǎn)2：短小精悍

和長(zhǎng)篇累牘型考生相反的是短小精悍型考生，為了保險(xiǎn)起見(jiàn)，這類(lèi)考生作文中充滿(mǎn)了簡(jiǎn)單的is/am/are的主系表和主謂賓句型。

盲點(diǎn)2擊破：靈活多變?cè)瓌t

這類(lèi)考生如果能稍稍變得aggressive一些，他們將是考場(chǎng)上最大的“黑馬”。如以Parents and teachers often link children’s score to their academic ability這個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句為例，通過(guò)強(qiáng)調(diào)句型的包裝我們得到：

It is children’s score that parents and teachers often link to their academic ability rather than other qualifications。

通過(guò)倒裝句的包裝我們可以得到：

So important is children’s score that parents and teachers often link them to children’s academic ability。

通過(guò)插入語(yǔ)的包裝我們可以得到：

Scores , as is known to everyone ,are often linked to children’s academic ability by teachers and parents。

通過(guò)分詞短語(yǔ)的包裝我們可以得到：

Based on the conception that scores tells everything, parents and teachers often link children’s score to their academic ability。

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通過(guò)如此靈活的加工和包裝，你會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)，簡(jiǎn)單句經(jīng)過(guò)稍稍潤(rùn)色原來(lái)也可以如此光彩照人，這要比無(wú)數(shù)大詞生僻詞堆砌形成的長(zhǎng)難句更加贏得考官的青睞。

總之，掌握了如上原則，再加上持之以恒的練習(xí)，考生一定能在Task 2中獲得自己滿(mǎn)意的分?jǐn)?shù)。（編

第五篇：雅思寫(xiě)作

雅思寫(xiě)作范文

Many old building are protected by law because they are part of a nation's history.However，some people think knocked down to make way for new ones because people need houses and offices.How important is it to maintain old buildings？ Should history stand in the way of progress？Old buildings sometimes conflicts with social advancement.Appealing as it is in the eyes of business people，tearing down old architect to make room for real-estate development is not a wise idea in many ways.The primarily reason is that old buildings，like our native language，forms our cultural identity and keep a unique record the history of a country.From this aspect，old buildings are considered very valuable as one of the symbols of the culture of a nation.For instance，the traditional Chinese residence in Beijing，Siheyuan，are once seen as the remains of the Old World，and were destroyed by people shortly after the founding of People's Republic of China.Until recently did the people and policy makers as well realize that it is an inexcusable and stupid idea to commit such a terrible deed because old buildings，once gone，are not restorable.But their economic values and aesthetic appeals have just caught the attention of Chinese people.Moreover，old buildings，if planed and preserved properly，could coexist with modern real-estate development.In France，aged buildings bring millions of dollars of revenue for the government and amazed thousands of tourists.Yet no one thinks the high-rising office buildings and apartment buildings make the old architect a sore of the eye.By contrast，the new learn from the old，a fact that makes them more attractive.We admit that not all old buildings should be treated equally and some of them do need to be torn down for various reasons such as safety and new buildings.However，we should not be too blind to see their value too.If only the real and practical factors are being considered，the country will be sorry for its loss in years to come.As we have discussed，old buildings are part of a country's history and are valuable in many ways.We should plan well and be wise enough to see their value.But the same time，we should also do our best to find solutions to make the old and the new coexist in harmony.