第一篇:2011年英語四級(jí)寫作常見問題及解決方案
2011年12月英語四級(jí)、英語六級(jí)考試寫作指導(dǎo)
“折戟沉沙鐵為消,自將磨洗認(rèn)前朝?!泵看未髮W(xué)英語四級(jí) 考試,許多考生總會(huì)在這場(chǎng)“無硝煙的戰(zhàn)斗”中飽受煎熬。他們總會(huì)存在這樣一個(gè)問題,四級(jí)考試為什么這么難,什么原因?qū)е伦约嚎偸峭ú贿^四級(jí)考試,又該如何 提高英語成績(jī),如何通過大學(xué)英語四級(jí)考試(CET-4)。特別是對(duì)于很多學(xué)藝術(shù)的同學(xué)而言,能否順利通過四級(jí)考試將直接關(guān)系到他們的保研資格與前途。針對(duì) 以上問題,我特意寫了這篇文章,通過教學(xué)與實(shí)踐,對(duì)考生存在的問題以及解決方法作全面地解剖,希望對(duì)各位考生能夠有所幫助。
四級(jí)考試從1987年以來已經(jīng)走過了23個(gè)年頭。2006年6月實(shí)行新四級(jí)考試,12月份開始全國(guó)將全面推行新四級(jí)考試。對(duì)于新四級(jí)考試,我們可以清楚地看到,雖然考試難度較之以前有所偏易,但是考試本身對(duì)于英語的全面考察卻是加強(qiáng)了。來源:上考試大網(wǎng)校,考試輕松過關(guān)
新四級(jí)考試,題型分為寫作、快速閱讀、聽力、基本閱讀、選詞填空、完型填空和漢譯英。就我個(gè)人而言,寫作、聽力和閱讀(快速閱讀和基礎(chǔ)閱讀)是重點(diǎn),因此考生對(duì)于這三部分的得分多少,將直接決定著其考試分?jǐn)?shù)的高低。
下面就讓我們依次來解析一下。
第一、寫作。
(一)存在問題
1.不會(huì)寫
所謂不會(huì)寫指的是,當(dāng)考試拿過一篇文章不知如何下手,不知如何提筆進(jìn)行寫作。筆者認(rèn)為主要是存在以下兩個(gè)原因:一是考生的確無話可說;二是心里雖然有話,但是拿捏不準(zhǔn)該寫哪句為妙。于是思前想后、猶豫不決,始終不敢提筆進(jìn)行寫作。
2.寫不好
所謂寫不好就是,拿過作文題,沒有明確的寫作思路,不按套路出牌;或是簡(jiǎn)單漢語邏輯思維寫作,不符合英語寫作標(biāo)準(zhǔn),近而沒有文采。原因在于:第一是平時(shí)沒有養(yǎng)成良好的寫作習(xí)慣;第二對(duì)于英語寫作的句式特點(diǎn)以及整體文章結(jié)構(gòu)框架不了解。
(二)解決辦法
第一,首先必須熟悉英語四級(jí)寫作具體要求。英語四級(jí)考試要求考生在30分鐘內(nèi)寫出120字的文章。體材主要有議論文(分為“Topic題型”和 A&B又稱“正反觀點(diǎn)題”)應(yīng)用文(主要是書信)、圖表文等。針對(duì)不同的體裁,寫作思路是不同的。比如,以議論文舉例來說:
1.議論文寫作思路
2.議論文分類:闡述主題型作文(Topic);正反觀點(diǎn)型作文(A&B)
3.闡述主題型作文寫作:(這類題型作文要求從一句話或一個(gè)主題出發(fā),按照提綱的要求進(jìn)行論述)
4.正反觀點(diǎn)型作文(A&B)(這類題型作文通常從正反兩方面來分別論述,最后得出你自己的結(jié)論。采用論點(diǎn)加論據(jù)寫作形式。)
第二,熟悉英語寫作的幾個(gè)重要概念。
1.英語文章段落結(jié)構(gòu)特點(diǎn)
英語文章段落結(jié)構(gòu)一般有三部分構(gòu)成:主題句+擴(kuò)展句+結(jié)尾句
(1)主題句:所謂主題句,就是英語文章段落的中心思想句。它是英語文章段落的靈魂,在英語文章段落中居于主導(dǎo)地位。我們都知道英語文章一般喜歡開門見山,所以主題句一般位于英語文章段落的句首。其他句子都要圍繞它而展開。
(2)擴(kuò)展句:所謂擴(kuò)展句就是為主題句起解釋說明或論證的句子。通常我們寫擴(kuò)展句所采用的方法是舉例子(for example,for instance,such as,a case in point is that---)、列數(shù)據(jù)(according to the recent study/survey,---)等。
(3)結(jié)尾句:所謂結(jié)尾句就是總結(jié)句。英語寫作也類似于漢語寫作,最后再把自己本段落的寫作目的陳述一下。但是在英語寫作中結(jié)尾句畢竟還是少數(shù)。
因此我們通常看到英語的文章段落結(jié)構(gòu) 60%-70%都是由主題句+擴(kuò)展句構(gòu)成。
2.主旨句
作為主旨句就是英語文章的中心思想句。英語文章一般首先用一句話概括一下作者的寫作目的或意圖,我們就把這句話稱之為主旨句。沒有受過寫作訓(xùn)練的考生是不會(huì)寫主旨句的。因此這樣的文章就不能夠稱之為好的英語文章,自然也得不到閱卷人的青睞了。第三,學(xué)會(huì)遣詞造句。
1.遣詞:
(1)詞匯等級(jí)
所謂詞匯的等級(jí)就是,我們?cè)趯懽鞯倪^程中,如果想出一個(gè)基本詞匯來之后,能夠在這個(gè)基本詞匯的基礎(chǔ)上把它在提升一下,也就是我們一般寫作所提倡的用“難 詞”。比如,我們一提到“重要的”,大多數(shù)同學(xué)首先會(huì)想到“important”這個(gè)單詞,那么提升一下的話就可以想到它的如下同義 詞:significant,vital,main,basilica,crucial,momentous etc
(2)詞匯準(zhǔn)確性
所謂詞匯的準(zhǔn)確性是指,我們?cè)谟幸粋€(gè)詞近而想到它的同義詞之后,要結(jié)合語境選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)挠迷~。在這里必須指明的是,并不是詞匯等級(jí)越高越好,必須還要考慮 到適合于不同的語境。比如,眼睛大,這個(gè)“大的”形容詞,我們首先會(huì)想到big,近而想到great,large,huge,vast,titanic,enormous etc。那么是不是用后面的詞就可以了呢?或者說用上enormous等詞更能博得閱卷人的好感呢?答案是否定的。在這里很明顯用后面的詞來修飾眼睛是不 可以,只能用big,因?yàn)槲覀兟犨^一首英文歌曲叫做“I am a big big girl,in a big big world.”big表示眼睛大而迷人可愛的。
2.造句:
(1)詞組
很多考生平時(shí)寫作不太擅長(zhǎng)用詞組,對(duì)于他們而言 最習(xí)慣的就是想到漢語,然后對(duì)應(yīng)漢語思維寫出英語句子,這種寫作只能是單詞的羅列組合,談不上什么技巧文采可言,因此,寫出來的文章必然就是所謂平淡如流 水,沒有英語的味道。如果我們能夠在單詞的基礎(chǔ)上,進(jìn)一步想到與之同義的詞組,那么文章就會(huì)顯得與眾不同,更具有英語的味道。比如上面所說的“重要的”這 個(gè)單詞,當(dāng)我們想到important的時(shí)候,如果從語法角度再稍加考慮一下,我們會(huì)想到“be of importance”。因?yàn)?,語法中規(guī)定:形容詞等于of加這個(gè)形容詞的名詞形式。如果再提升一步,我們還學(xué)過一個(gè)常用的詞組叫做“play an important role in---”。很多同學(xué)說自己的文章湊不夠字?jǐn)?shù)或是沒有文采,那么采用詞組進(jìn)行寫作是不是就可以解決以上問題了呢?
第二篇:英語四級(jí)寫作常見問題及應(yīng)試技巧
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大學(xué)英語四級(jí)考試中,寫作是考生要做的第一道題,足以看出它的重要性。四級(jí)寫作是對(duì)大學(xué)生英語綜合水平和應(yīng)用能力的綜合考察,是四級(jí)考試的重要組成部分。針對(duì)考生在四級(jí)作文中可能出現(xiàn)的問題,提出以下幾點(diǎn)應(yīng)試技巧和備考策略。
一、考生在寫作當(dāng)中經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)的問題
1.基本詞匯和語法不過關(guān)。
主要表現(xiàn)為對(duì)英語語法知識(shí)的掌握不牢靠及對(duì)基本詞匯記憶不清。在語句中,會(huì)出現(xiàn)主謂不一致,單復(fù)數(shù)搞不清楚,時(shí)態(tài)與語態(tài)混亂等現(xiàn)象。除了句子上的語法與結(jié)構(gòu)問題,整篇文章的布局與思路也不流暢,支離破碎,形不成一個(gè)完整的系統(tǒng),讓人看不懂你要說的是什么。
2.語言積累太少,不能寫出相對(duì)復(fù)雜或優(yōu)美的句子。
很多考生在寫作中遇到的困難首先是無從下手,沒有什么可寫的。
考生在提筆想寫出表達(dá)自己思想的句子時(shí),往往遇到單詞不會(huì)或句子結(jié)構(gòu)搞不清而無法繼續(xù)寫下去。為了湊夠字?jǐn)?shù),就只好胡亂拼湊。而且語句全是簡(jiǎn)單的主謂賓,沒有從句及高級(jí)詞匯和詞組。這樣會(huì)大大降低文章的檔次。因此,考生在英語學(xué)習(xí)過程中,應(yīng)高度重視詞匯的學(xué)習(xí)和詞組的積累,熟練掌握教學(xué)大綱中所要求的四級(jí)詞匯。
3.考生寫作中的文章布局問題
很多考生的寫作方法是先想好中文再翻譯成英文,這個(gè)在所難免。因?yàn)榇蠹覍?duì)漢語還是最熟悉的,喜歡用母語來表達(dá)我們的觀點(diǎn)和意見。而且即使對(duì)專業(yè)學(xué)習(xí)英語的人來說,也很難達(dá)到在寫作時(shí)完全用英文思考的狀態(tài)。但是漢語跟英語在語法上有很大的區(qū)別,如果直接翻譯過來,會(huì)出現(xiàn)很大問題,就是地道的漢式英語,讀起來很不舒服。
二、英語四級(jí)考試寫作應(yīng)試技巧及備考策略
1.認(rèn)真審題,準(zhǔn)確立意
從歷次大學(xué)英語四級(jí)考試中我們可以看到,四級(jí)寫作是一種給題目、提示、及指導(dǎo)的短文寫作,因此,緊緊圍繞其題旨是至關(guān)重要的??忌趯忣}的過程應(yīng)當(dāng)認(rèn)真審閱作文的說明要求和所給的材料,比如段首句、提綱、關(guān)鍵詞、圖表等,確定相應(yīng)的體裁,明確自己的中心思想,從而明確作文的寫作范圍和側(cè)重點(diǎn)。審題的目的主要是確定文章的主題思想,一篇文章只能有一個(gè)主題思想,要鮮明、深刻、有新意。另外,考生要善于分析給定的材料,總結(jié)材料包含的主要內(nèi)容,是否含有引申義,這一點(diǎn)也很重要。
2.簡(jiǎn)單列出提綱
英語四級(jí)考試一般要求在30分鐘內(nèi)寫出一篇120個(gè)詞的短文,文章雖說并不是太長(zhǎng),但需要有論有據(jù),有頭有尾。為了防止時(shí)間不足導(dǎo)致質(zhì)量降低甚至不能完成文章,寫作時(shí)一定要安排好時(shí)間。為了在寫作時(shí)有章可循,不跑題,建議最好用5分鐘左右寫下提綱和要點(diǎn),這樣做一是不至于無話可說,二是可以避免虎頭蛇尾。大家只需確定每段要寫什么,圍繞主題展開,大致建立文章框架即可。
3.確立段落主題句
這其實(shí)是對(duì)提綱的細(xì)化。學(xué)生應(yīng)用最精煉的語言概括出段落的主題句。段落主題句就是每段的中心思想,因此,主題句最好放在每段的段首,能讓閱卷人一眼就能明了全段大意。同時(shí),主題句結(jié)構(gòu)要完整,表達(dá)意義要準(zhǔn)確,有高度的概括性,且用詞要精煉生動(dòng)。
4.注意文章的邏輯性
無論是漢語文章還是英語文章,都要注重邏輯性,這樣才能連貫合理。英語句子不像漢語句子,漢語不用連詞也能表達(dá)完整的句子,但英語的句子之間必須用連詞或關(guān)系詞來連接。因此,考試在寫作中,句子之間要用相應(yīng)的連接詞來體現(xiàn)文章的邏輯性。比如:表示舉例或補(bǔ)充說明的關(guān)聯(lián)詞、表示時(shí)間或順序的關(guān)聯(lián)詞、表示轉(zhuǎn)折的關(guān)聯(lián)詞以及表示原因與結(jié)果的關(guān)聯(lián)詞等等,考生在平時(shí)的學(xué)習(xí)中要有意識(shí)的積累這類連接詞。
5.文章修改
考生寫完一篇文章后,若時(shí)間允許,要進(jìn)行修改。考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面入手修改。應(yīng)該先從語篇結(jié)構(gòu)上檢查,這主要是檢查文章的主題是否明確,篇章層次是否明顯,段落銜接是否連貫,內(nèi)容是否切題等。另一方面就是具體檢查每個(gè)段落,這一步主要檢查段落是否完善,中心是否突出,段內(nèi)各句是否銜接緊湊等。最后就是做語法上的檢查,包括用詞是否恰當(dāng),標(biāo)點(diǎn)是否正確,句子結(jié)構(gòu)是否完整,語句是否通順等。
最后,需要提醒廣大考生的是,寫作能力的提高不是一朝一夕可以辦到的,它需要考生平時(shí)的刻苦訓(xùn)練,還要各個(gè)環(huán)節(jié)的密切配合。四級(jí)寫作考察的是考生的英語綜合水平,因此,考生在平時(shí)備考過程中要多練習(xí),多總結(jié),多積累。
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第三篇:學(xué)習(xí)總結(jié):英語四級(jí)寫作常見問題
學(xué)習(xí)總結(jié):英語四級(jí)寫作常見問題
很多同學(xué)提到英語作文痛苦不已,每次提筆都很頭痛。下面總結(jié)基礎(chǔ)較差的同學(xué)易出現(xiàn)的問題進(jìn)行總結(jié),希望能幫忙更多的考生提前做好寫作的復(fù)習(xí)準(zhǔn)備工作。
多年教四級(jí)精講班的閱讀和寫作部分過程中。布置過多次作業(yè),收集學(xué)生寫作案例,也進(jìn)行了相應(yīng)的批改。在批改的過程有,頗多感觸,特成此文,與各位同學(xué)分享。
目前,到培訓(xùn)機(jī)構(gòu)學(xué)習(xí)四級(jí)長(zhǎng)期提高的同學(xué),從總體上來看,可謂是英語學(xué)習(xí)的“重災(zāi)區(qū)”,他們顯示出以下的特點(diǎn):
1.基本的語法概念都有較大的問題,這些語法概念包括時(shí)態(tài)、詞性、主語的性別、被動(dòng)結(jié)構(gòu)等;
2.基本詞匯量極為有限,很難表達(dá)清楚自己的觀點(diǎn);
3.在英語寫作的過程中,暴露出中文寫作能力的不足,比如邏輯性、論證能力、描述能力等;
4.思路有時(shí)反而放得太開,不了解四六級(jí)考試作文部分真正的要求; 5.對(duì)英語國(guó)家文化層面的內(nèi)容缺乏較基本的了解。同時(shí),這批同學(xué)也有值得欣賞的亮點(diǎn):
1.由于考試過關(guān)的壓力,學(xué)習(xí)目的性很強(qiáng),如果善于引導(dǎo),可以較好的激發(fā)他們的學(xué)習(xí)熱情;
2.該層次的學(xué)員性格相對(duì)要張揚(yáng)一些,對(duì)時(shí)尚、流行的東西也更為敏感,如果調(diào)整得當(dāng),可以贏得輕松融洽的課堂氣氛。
下面,我結(jié)合授課及作業(yè)批改過程中所做的收集,給各位同學(xué)提供一些例子:
一、基本語法層面的問題:
1.關(guān)于時(shí)態(tài):時(shí)態(tài)是四級(jí)長(zhǎng)期提高的同學(xué)們最普遍的難關(guān),主要表現(xiàn)為:
a.無法保持時(shí)態(tài)在全文的一致:這一現(xiàn)象很普遍,往往是緊接的兩句,而且是沒有任何時(shí)間狀語的情況之下,就出現(xiàn)了時(shí)態(tài)的不一致,例:I saw an English man.He have a big bag.b.時(shí)態(tài)的基本用法錯(cuò)誤
I.現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)不加ing,例:Many people are learn English.II.一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)第三人稱單數(shù)問題:It become(s)more and more useful./ some people thinks III.情態(tài)動(dòng)詞之后,動(dòng)詞反而不用原形:it can brings(去掉s,前面是can,這里用動(dòng)詞原形)us more challenge and experiences.c.過去式中不規(guī)則動(dòng)詞掌握得不好:Some people think Spoken English is even more important than writen(拼寫錯(cuò)誤:written)English.d.過去時(shí)的不恰當(dāng)使用:Many people thought….while others thought… but I thought…同學(xué)們不了解think用過去時(shí)往往代表現(xiàn)在我們不這么認(rèn)為; 2.關(guān)于被動(dòng)態(tài):很難體會(huì)好動(dòng)詞使用過程中ing與ed之間的區(qū)別:例: I am exciting about the news.test of speaking(而不是spoken)English, English spoken(而不是speaking)ability 3.關(guān)于詞性:最普遍的問題是名詞被濫用為動(dòng)詞或者形容詞 a.benefit的用法問題很大:I think it is benefit to our English study.b.trouble與troublesome: When we have something trouble c.及物動(dòng)詞及不及物動(dòng)詞的混亂:I got enough ability to compete the chairman of Student Union./I will take place some lecture d.many people feel fear about pressures.4.關(guān)于句法:
e.動(dòng)詞原形不加變化,直接用作主語或賓語等句子成份:I think speak English and make friends are happy things./ Others spend it on entertainment, for example, go(ing)to a cinema, dance(ing), take(ing)part in sports, and so on.f.從句的用法混亂:I think students do he like things, ? I think when students do the things he likes g.主語與形容詞:This will harmful…
h.不了解due to的用法:Due to they have to go to school from Monday to Friday ? Due to the fact that ….二、基本的詞匯表達(dá)能力有限,辭不達(dá)意
同學(xué)們?cè)趯懽鞯倪^程中,出于自己有限的詞匯水平,想要表達(dá)的意思卻說不清,最終的結(jié)果是生硬的將中文表達(dá)中的詞匯翻成英語。舉幾個(gè)例子:
例一:學(xué)生想說明英語口語的重要性,I saw an English man.He have(保持時(shí)態(tài)一致,用had)a big bag.He looked for(這樣說有可能產(chǎn)生讀者的誤解,He looked for a map 可以理解為“他在找一張地圖”,建議改為“He was looking for a place on a map.”)a map.He got lost.例二:想說明“考試只是一種形式”,test is only a form, 同學(xué)并不了解,其實(shí)有“test is only a test”這樣的用法。
例三:想說明口語的重要性。“在國(guó)外,我可以不會(huì)寫英語,但不能不會(huì)說英語”,I can can’t write, but I can’t can’t speak.三、缺乏邏輯性、論證能力、描述能力等
有一次,我的作文題目是“A Campaign Speech”,為競(jìng)選學(xué)生會(huì)主席而進(jìn)行演講。有一位同學(xué)的作文比較有趣,他通篇說,如果我當(dāng)選學(xué)生會(huì)主席,這將有助于提高我自己的組織能力、思維能力、交往能力,等等。我當(dāng)時(shí)對(duì)他的作文的評(píng)價(jià)是:“設(shè)想你是一個(gè)學(xué)生,你會(huì)選一個(gè)只想著利用這個(gè)機(jī)會(huì)來提高自己的人作學(xué)生會(huì)主席嗎?”
另一次,我布置的作文是“Is Pressure a Bad Thing”? 結(jié)果就有同學(xué)大談How should we face the pressure,其實(shí)他的論述跳過了一步,先要論證pressure是否有積極的意義,然后才談得上如何去面對(duì)它。
四、不了解四六級(jí)考試作文部分真正的要求
有兩篇作文我印象比較深刻。我出的題目是“口語考試是否應(yīng)該成為四六級(jí)考試的一部分”,要求從正、反兩方面論述。結(jié)果一位同學(xué)交上來的作文,第一節(jié),I think spoken English test is not necessary,然后洋洋灑灑寫了一通,第二節(jié),卻又變成I think spoken English test is necessary,然后同樣洋洋灑灑寫了一些論點(diǎn)。他沒有真正理解“正、反兩方面論述”這個(gè)要求的含義,結(jié)果寫了一篇自相矛盾的文章。
有一次我的題目是一個(gè)圖表題,展示的是大學(xué)生1990、1995、2000這三年中,平均每周用在計(jì)算機(jī)上的時(shí)間。圖表題的要求一般是第一小節(jié)描述變化趨勢(shì),即圖表的數(shù)據(jù)分析,第二小節(jié)解釋變化的原因,第三小節(jié)展望未來趨勢(shì)或分析一些相關(guān)的問題。
結(jié)果這位同學(xué)非常辛苦地寫了一篇很長(zhǎng)的文字。第一小節(jié),回顧1990年,當(dāng)時(shí)家里也很窮,父母都舍不得坐比較貴的空調(diào)車之類,描述一番當(dāng)時(shí)的貧困生活,自然,也就沒有辦法購置計(jì)算機(jī)了。第二小節(jié),到了1995年,生活好轉(zhuǎn)了,同時(shí)微軟公司推出了“Windows”操作系統(tǒng),計(jì)算機(jī)的使用也變得方便了,所以每小時(shí)的使用時(shí)間增加了。第三小節(jié),到了2000年,Intel公司推出了“奔騰”芯片,計(jì)算機(jī)的速度大大提高,于是計(jì)算機(jī)的使用時(shí)間大大增加。
憑心而論,排除一些語法和用詞的錯(cuò)誤,這篇作文寫得還是不錯(cuò)的。只是他有兩個(gè)問題: 第一、在第一小節(jié)中,將個(gè)人的經(jīng)歷用于解釋普遍的大學(xué)生1990年計(jì)算機(jī)使用時(shí)間較短這一現(xiàn)象,這是“以偏概全”;第二、這樣分布三個(gè)小節(jié)的內(nèi)容,比較冒險(xiǎn),因?yàn)樵}中提示的三點(diǎn),其實(shí)就是讓我們?cè)谖恼轮凶匀恍纬上鄳?yīng)三個(gè)小節(jié),四六級(jí)寫作考試是比較“八股文”的。
五、對(duì)英語國(guó)家文化層面的內(nèi)容缺乏較基本的了解
一個(gè)常見的現(xiàn)象就是輕率地對(duì)英美國(guó)家的人士作結(jié)論性的描述,類似:Americans all like pressures。另外就是語言的夸大其辭。典型例子出自一位同學(xué)寫的競(jìng)選學(xué)生會(huì)主席的演講,When students have some troubles, they all come to me.I talk to them, then they feel happy, and I feel happy too,這簡(jiǎn)直是把自己描述成為“上帝”或者“邪教領(lǐng)袖”了。英語作文多多練習(xí),多多犯錯(cuò),才會(huì)更好成長(zhǎng)。
第四篇:英語四級(jí)寫作萬能
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1.關(guān)于……人們有不同的觀點(diǎn)。一些人認(rèn)為……
There are different opinions among people as to ____.Some people suggest that ____.2.俗話說(常言道)……,它是我們前輩的經(jīng)歷,但是,即使在今天,它在許多場(chǎng)合仍然適用。
There is an old saying______.It"s the experience of our forefathers,however,it is correct in many cases even today.3.現(xiàn)在,……,它們給我們的日常生活帶來了許多危害。首先,……;其次,……。更為糟糕的是……。
Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life.First, ____ Second,____.What makes things worse is that______.【外語教育&網(wǎng)】
4.現(xiàn)在,……很普遍,許多人喜歡……,因?yàn)椤?,另外(而且)……?/p>
Nowadays,it is common to ______.Many people like ______ because ______.Besides,______.5.任何事物都是有兩面性,……也不例外。它既有有利的一面,也有不利的一面。Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception,it has both advantages and disadvantages.6.關(guān)于……人們的觀點(diǎn)各不相同,一些人認(rèn)為(說)……,在他們看來,……
People's opinions about ______ vary from person to person.Some people say that ______.To them,_____.7.人類正面臨著一個(gè)嚴(yán)重的問題……,這個(gè)問題變得越來越嚴(yán)重。
Man is now facing a big problem ______ which is becoming more and more serious.8.……已成為人的關(guān)注的熱門話題,特別是在年青人當(dāng)中,將引發(fā)激烈的辯論。
______ has become a hot topic among people,especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.9.……在我們的日常生活中起著越來越重要的作用,它給我們帶來了許多好處,但同時(shí)也引發(fā)一些嚴(yán)重的問題。
______ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.10.根據(jù)圖表/數(shù)字/統(tǒng)計(jì)數(shù)字/表格中的百分比/圖表/條形圖/成形圖可以看出……。很顯然……,但是為什么呢?
According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph,it can be seen that______ while.Obviously,______,but why? 新東方英語四級(jí):http://edu.21cn.com/kcnet1820/ 英語四級(jí)一對(duì)一咨詢qq:1613508081
第五篇:四級(jí)英語寫作
說明原因型模板
(一)Currently, XX has been the order of the day.This does demonstrate the theory —— nothing is more valuable than XX It is clear that(1).If you(2), as a result, your dreams will come true.On the contrary, if you(3).Failure will be following with you.It turns out that all your plan falls through.No one can deny another fact that(4).You don't have to look very far to find out the truth, in respect that we all know(5).It will exert a profound influence upon(6).With reference to my standpoint, I think(7).注釋:
1、XX的第一個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)
2、支持XX的做法來源:恒星英語學(xué)習(xí)網(wǎng)
3、不支持XX的做法
4、XX的第二個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)
5、舉例證明優(yōu)點(diǎn)二
相應(yīng)作文:The importance of self-confidence Currently, self-confidence has been the order of the day.This does demonstrate the theory —— nothing is more valuable than self-confidence.It is clear that(self-confidence means trust in one's abilities).If you(are full of self-confidence, it will bring your creative power to play, arouse your enthusiasm for work, and help you overcome difficulties), as a result, your dreams will come true.On the contrary, if you(have no confidence in yourself, there is little possibility that you would ever achieve anything).Failure will be following with you。It turns out that all your plan falls through.No one can deny another fact that(self-confidence gives you light when you are in dark and encouragement when you are dismayed).You don't have to look very far to find out the truth, in respect that we all know(the secret of MMe.Curie lies in perseverance and self-confidence, the latter in particular).It will exert a profound influence upon(the achievement of one's ambitions).With reference to my standpoint, I think(he that can have self-confidence can have what he will).說明原因型模板
(二)In recent years, XX has caused a heated debate on(1).The factors for(2).First of all,(3).Then, there comes a case that(4).Moreover,(5).Especially when(6).Indeed, these unique points can be collected the remind people that(7).In this way, we should behave just like(8).相應(yīng)作文: The impact of Television In recent years, with the development of science and technology, 80 percent of all homes in China have satellite TV, offering as many as 50 channels.It has caused a heated debate on(the impact of television on children).Many parents are worried about the impact of so much television on children.The factors for(parents' worry is that children are indulge in television and spend too much time on it.).First of all,(with so many programs to choose from, children are not getting as much exercise as they should).Then, there comes a case that(some studies have show that excessive watching of television by millions of children has lowered their ability to achieve in school).Moreover,(the effect on children's minds are more serious than the effect on children's bodies).Especially when(the children are too small to judge what programs are suit to them).Indeed, these unique points can be connected to remind parents that(they should pay close attention to and responsibilities for supervising their children's TV viewing).In this way, children will not be influenced too deeply.說明原因型模板
(三)For most of us today,(1).From above, we can find that the reasons why(2)are as follows.The primary reason, I think, is(3).Second,(4).The third reason, actually, is(5).The
significance for(6).Therefore,(7).注釋:
1、人們針對(duì)XX的態(tài)度和舉措
2、歸納現(xiàn)狀
3、第一個(gè)原因
4、第二個(gè)原因
5、第三個(gè)原因
6、重申造成現(xiàn)狀的最重要原因
相應(yīng)作文:Pollution Most of us today(recognize that environmental pollution has been a greatly serious problem.lots of plants trees corps are destroyed by bad air.many fish die of poisonous water.thousands of people die from eating poisoned fish or breathing in gas.therefore, environmental pollution should be responsible for these diseases that are disabling, or bringing death not only to human beings, but also to wild life.)From above, we can find that the reasons why(environment are polluted more and more seriously)are as follows.the primary reason, I think, is(the reason of harmful substances into environment.for example, to prevent insects, farmers make use of great amounts of insecticides, so as to have bumper harvests.however, they pollute air, water and land).Second,(the gas coming from the car engines and factories also make environment polluted badly).the third reason actually is(the result of a growing population in the world.everyday, so much litter and waste are poured out from houses, also pollute the environment).The significance for(controlling pollution)noted that it's high time that more effective measures should be taken.Therefore,(new laws should be passed to limit the amount of pollutants from factories.moreover, in the households, there is an obvious need to reduce litter and waste.let's make our good efforts, and the world will be a safer place to live for us).說明原因型模塊
(四)These days we often hear that(1).It is common that(2).Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social protects? For one thing,(3).For another,(4).What is more, since
(5),it is natural that(6).To solve the problem is not easy at all, but is worth trying.We should do something such as(7)to improve he present situation, and I do believe everything will be better in the future.注釋:
1、提出論題
2、說明現(xiàn)狀
3、理由一
4、理由二
5、理由三
6、理由三引起的后果
7、解決方法
相應(yīng)作文:Pollution of environment These days we often hear that(our living conditions are getting more and more serious because of the destruction of our environment).It is common that(many trees and animals are near extinction, and the all-important food chain has been destroyed.).Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social protects? For one thing,(the population of the world is increasing so rapidly that the world has been so crowded.).For another,(the overuse of natural resources has influenced the balance of natural ecology).What is more, since(the industrial revolution),it is natural that(a great number of factories have been
springing up like mushrooms.The smoke and harmful chemicals released from factories also pollute the environment).To solve the problem is not easy at all, but is worth.We should do something such as(planting more trees, equipping cars with pollution-control devices and learning to recycling natural resources)to improve the present situation, and I do believe everything will be better in the future.圖表式作文寫作模板
It is obvious in the graphic/table that the rate/number/amount of Y has undergone dramatic changes.It has gone up/grown/fallen/dropped considerably in recent years(as X varies).At the point of X1, Y reaches its peak value of……(多少).What is the reason for this change? Mainly there are……(多少)reasons behind the situation reflected in the graphic/table.First of all,……(第一個(gè)原因).More importantly,……(第二個(gè)原因).Most important of all,……(第三個(gè)原因).From the above discussions, we have enough reason to predict what will happen in the near future.The trend described in the graphic/table will continue for quite a long time(if necessary measures are not taken括號(hào)里的使用于那些不太好的變化趨勢(shì)).提綱式作文寫作模板
1、對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)式
A.有人認(rèn)為X 是好事,贊成X,為什么?
B.有人認(rèn)為X 是壞事,反對(duì)X,為什么?
C.我的看法。
Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X.They point out the fact that 支持X 的第一個(gè)原因。They also argue that 支持X 的另一個(gè)原因。However, other people stand on a different ground.They consider it harmful to do X.They firmly point out that 反對(duì)X 的第一個(gè)理由。An example can give the details of this argument: There is some truth in both arguments.But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages.In addition to the above-mentioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X 的有一個(gè)壞處。
2、批駁觀點(diǎn)式
A.一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤觀點(diǎn)。
B.我不同意。Many people argue that 錯(cuò)誤觀點(diǎn)。By saying that, they mean 對(duì)這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)的進(jìn)一步解釋。An example they have presented is that 一個(gè)例子。(According to a survey performed by X on a group of Y, almost 80% of them 贊成這個(gè)錯(cuò)誤觀點(diǎn)或者受到這個(gè)錯(cuò)誤觀點(diǎn)的影響)。There might be some element of truth in these people's belief.But if we consider it in depth, we will feel no reservation to conclude that 與錯(cuò)誤觀點(diǎn)相反的觀點(diǎn)。There are a number of reasons behind my belief.(以下參照辯論文的議論文寫法)。
3、社會(huì)問題(現(xiàn)象)式
A.一個(gè)社會(huì)問題或者現(xiàn)象
B.產(chǎn)生的原因
C.對(duì)社會(huì)和我們生活的影響
D.如何杜絕。(如果是問題的話)
E.前景的預(yù)測(cè)。
Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental problem.(X has increasingly become a common concern of the public).According to a survey, 調(diào)查內(nèi)容說明這種現(xiàn)象的情況。(或者是一個(gè)例子)。There are a couple of reasons booming this problem/phenomenon.下面參照辯論式議論文寫法。X has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life, which has been articulated in the following aspects.參照辯論式議論
文的寫法。A dozen of measures are supposed to take to prevent X from bringing us more harm.同上Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people will……
辯論式議論文模版
(一)Some people believe(argue, recognize, think)that
觀點(diǎn)1.But other people take an opposite side.They firmly believe that
觀點(diǎn)2.As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea.There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief.First of all,論據(jù)1.More importantly,論據(jù)2.Most important of all,論據(jù)3.In summary, 總結(jié)觀點(diǎn)。As a college student, I am supposed to 表決心?;騀rom above, we can predict that 預(yù)測(cè)。
辯論式議論文模版
(二)People hold different views about X.Some people are of the opinion that
觀點(diǎn)1.While others point out that
觀點(diǎn)2.As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight.For one thing,論據(jù)1.For another,論據(jù)2.Last but not the least,論據(jù)3.To conclude, 總結(jié)觀點(diǎn).As a college student, I am supposed to 表決心?;騀rom above, we can predict that 預(yù)測(cè)。
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(三)There is no consensus of opinions among people about X(爭(zhēng)論的焦點(diǎn))。Some people are of the view that
觀點(diǎn)1.While others take an opposite side, firmly believing that
觀點(diǎn)2.As far as I am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses.The reasons are obvious.First of all,論據(jù)1.Furthermore,來源:恒星英語學(xué)習(xí)網(wǎng)
論據(jù)2.Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest.That is,論據(jù)3.A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that 總結(jié)觀點(diǎn)。As a college student, I am supposed to 表決心?;?From above, we can predict that 預(yù)測(cè)。
展現(xiàn)問題篇
問題的常用詞:question, problem, issue
Recently, the issue of......has been brought into public focus.近來,_______的問題引起了社會(huì)的廣泛關(guān)注。
Now we are entering a brand new era full of opportunities and innovations, and great changes
have taken place in people's attitude towards some traditional practice.現(xiàn)在我們進(jìn)入了一個(gè)充滿機(jī)遇和創(chuàng)新的嶄新時(shí)代,很多人對(duì)某些傳統(tǒng)的看法也發(fā)生了很
大改變。
Recently the issue of whether or not...has been in the limelight and has aroused wide
concern in the public.近來,是否_______的問題已經(jīng)非常明確而且引起了社會(huì)的廣泛關(guān)注。
The issue whether it is good or not to....has aroused a heated discussion all over the country.______的利與弊已在全國(guó)范圍內(nèi)引起熱烈的討論。
At present, some people think....while others claim...Both sides have their merits.目前,一些人認(rèn)為_______而另一些人則認(rèn)為_______。其實(shí),兩種觀點(diǎn)都其可取之處。People rarely reach an absolute consensus on such a controversial issue.對(duì)于這種極具爭(zhēng)議的話題,我們很難作出絕對(duì)的回答。People from different backgrounds would put different interpretations on the same case.不同行業(yè)的人對(duì)同一種問題的解釋不盡相同。The controversial issue is often brought into public focus.People from different backgrounds hold different attitudes towards the issue.這中極具爭(zhēng)議性的話題往往很受社會(huì)的關(guān)注。不同的人對(duì)此問題的看法也不盡相同。When asked..., some people think.....while some prefer...說到______,有人認(rèn)為________,而另一些人則認(rèn)為__________。Just as the saying goes: “so many people, so many minds”.It is quite understandable that views on this issue vary from person to person.俗話說:不同的人對(duì)此有不同的看法是可以理解的。To this issue, different people come up with various attitudes.對(duì)于這個(gè)問題,不同的人持不同的觀點(diǎn)。There is a good side and a bad side to everything, it goes without saying that...萬事萬物都有其兩面性,所以,勿庸置疑,____________。When it comes to..., most people believe that..., but other people regard...as....提到_________問題,很多人認(rèn)為_________,不過,一些人則認(rèn)為______是____.When faced with...., quite a few people claim that...., but other people think as...提到_________問題,僅少數(shù)人認(rèn)為________,但另一些人則認(rèn)為_________。There is a public controversy nowadays over the issue of....There who criticize...argue hat...., they believe that...,but people who favor.., on the other hand, argue that...目前,_______問題爭(zhēng)議較大。批判_______的人認(rèn)為_______,他們認(rèn)為_______,不過,另一方面,贊同_______的人則認(rèn)為_________。Some people are of the opinion that..有些人認(rèn)為_____________。Many people claim that...很多人認(rèn)為_____________。A majority of 絕大多數(shù) A large number of 很多人 Some people contend that...has proved to bring many advantages(disadvantages)有些人認(rèn)為________有很多有利之處(不利之處)。Those who argue for...say that...economic development of the cities.覺得_____的人認(rèn)為,______ 城市的經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展。Some people advocate that....有些人在堅(jiān)持認(rèn)為_________。They hold that...他們認(rèn)為_________。People, who advocate that..., have their sound reasons(grounds)堅(jiān)持認(rèn)為______的人也有其說法(依據(jù))。Those who have already benefited from practicing it sing high praise of it.那些從中受益的人對(duì)此大家褒獎(jiǎng)。Those who strongly approve of...have cogent reasons for it.強(qiáng)烈認(rèn)同_______的人有很多原因。
Many people would claim that...有人會(huì)認(rèn)為___________。來源:恒星英語學(xué)習(xí)網(wǎng) People who support...give some or all of the following reasons.那些支持_________觀點(diǎn)的人列出了如下原因:________。But others hold the view that...但是,另外一些人則認(rèn)為_______。觀點(diǎn)的用詞:Attitude, opinion, 與其搭配的動(dòng)詞以及詞組:Take, have, come up with,set orth, put forward等。But on the other hand, there are also quite a few people who strongly advocate that..,.不過,另一方面,也有少部分人堅(jiān)持認(rèn)為_______________。But people who are..., on the other hand , maintain that...不過,另一方面,________的人認(rèn)為__________。However, there are a large number of people who hold a different view concerning this case.然而,很多人對(duì)此有不同的看法。
綜合篇
Along with the advance of the society more and more problems are brought to our attention,one of which is that....隨著社會(huì)的不斷發(fā)展,出現(xiàn)了越來越多的問題,其中之一便是____________。As to whether it is a blessing or a curse, however, people take different attitudes.然而,對(duì)于此類問題,人們持不同的看法。(Hold different attitudes 持不同的看;Come up
with different attitudes 有不同的看法)
As society develops, people are attaching much importance to....隨著社會(huì)的發(fā)展,人們開始關(guān)注.....來源:恒星英語學(xué)習(xí)網(wǎng)
People are attaching more and more importance to the interview during job hunting求職的過程中,人們慢慢意識(shí)到面試的重要性。
As to whether it is worthwhile....., there is a long-running controversial debate.It is quite
natural that people from different backgrounds may have divergent attitudes towards it.關(guān)于是否值得___________的問題,一直以來爭(zhēng)論不休。當(dāng)然,不同的人對(duì)此可能持不
同的觀點(diǎn)。
In the process of modern urban development, we often find ourselves in a dilemma.在都市的發(fā)展中,我們往往會(huì)陷入困境。
Recently the phenomenon has aroused wide concern, some people are in alarm that....最近,這種現(xiàn)象引起了人們的廣泛關(guān)注,有人開始擔(dān)心______________。
The human race has entered a completely new stage in its history, with the increasingly rapid
economic globalization and urbanization, more problems are brought to our attention.人類進(jìn)入了一個(gè)歷史的嶄新的階段,經(jīng)濟(jì)全球化、都市化的速度不斷加快,隨之給我們
帶來了很多問題。
......plays such an important role that it undeniably becomes the biggest concern of the
present world, there comes a question, is it a blessing or a curse?“
_______顯得非常重要而成為當(dāng)今世界所關(guān)注的最大的問題,這是無可厚非的。不過,問題是:”我們?cè)撊绾尉駬?"
Now we are entering a new era, full of opportunities and challenges,現(xiàn)在我們正在進(jìn)入一個(gè)充滿機(jī)會(huì)和挑戰(zhàn)的新時(shí)代。