第一篇：網(wǎng)絡(luò)英語(yǔ)作文

With the developing of the society,thepopularirity of the internet among the people increase rapidly.As a saying goes:“every coins has two sides”.So does the internet.It has it's advantages and disadvantages on people's life.As for the advantages

With the information it provides,we know the news all around the world.It also can offer us the articles involved with our study.Besides,it kept us informed of how the weather goes.It short the distance of the people far from you since you can communicating with every one of your friend on the internet.With the internet you can enjoy the music and play the games or anything else.Anyway it has it'sdisadvantages.Some children addicted in playing the games on the internet without study.Some of the people using the internet to do some illegal things which loses people's properties and hurt someone's feelings.But with the increasing perfect of the internet,it surely will do people good.and we hold that the good will goes deeper than the bad effect it brings.

第二篇：英語(yǔ)網(wǎng)絡(luò)作文

Will Computers Replace Us?

Nowadays the development of computer technology is beyond our imagination.Not only it is applied to production and economy but also it brings great convenience to our life.However it is so omnipotent that some people believe that it is just time problem for us to be replaced by computer.As for me, I firmly believe that there is no possibility that computers can replace human one day.Because computers are made by human and they have no choice but to carry out their instructions to the human.They can’t stand on their own because they are just machines which are made to help people solve complicate problems.All in all, computers are nothing but an extension of human brains.They can bring us a bright future but will never replace us.

第三篇：社交網(wǎng)絡(luò)英語(yǔ)作文

The Influence Of The Social Network Sites.With the popularization of computers and Internet, social network sites will become more and more popular with both the young and the old.Here people can acquire the convenient communication.However, recently the issue on whether the role of social network is positive or not has been aroused wide concern in public.Though when confronting such a dilemma, answers from various people may differ greatly it is conspicuous that there are two major controversies that can be made for the social network sites.For one thing, social network has provided us with grand convenience.For example, we can nearly pick up knowledge about all aspects and meet more people with only several keyboard commands and a few clicks of the mouse through search engines，such as Sina Weibo, the Chinese version of twitter has just celebrated its second birthday.In such short time, it has become the most popular social network in China.For another, it is widely held that we can expand our horizon as well as make us all-round development to form healthy personality when we search the extensive social network.Despite the advantages，it is necessary for us to distinguish the drawbacks of the network.On one hand, with explosive information on the network, it can be difficult to avoid Young Peoples' risky behavior on social network sites.For example, teenagers and adolescents may mistake the bad information as good, the result of which can be rather devastating.What is more, some dirty information on the network may exert negative impacts on them.On the other hand, Social network website is posing a challenge.For instance, fraud,porn and violence are easily found on social network websites.In one study, researchers have examined plenty of 18-year-olds from the United States.They found that 41 percent of the profiles chosen at random included information about alcohol or drug use.And14 percent included discussion of violence, which places them in potential danger.When it comes to my standpoint, it is crucial for us to take full advantages of the network to enhance our efficiency and save our time.However, effective steps should be taken to educate people to avoid and elude inappropriate and even harmful information.Only in this way can the network better serve for our life, study and work and we have a bright tomorrow

第四篇：網(wǎng)絡(luò)犯罪英語(yǔ)作文

Network crime to stop

With the popularization of Internet, cyber crimes have become a serious problem

facing us.Nowadays cyber criminals appear to be everywhere on the Internet.To illustrate, some commit fraud or lift intellectual property, others snatch passwords or disrupt

e-commerce, and still others unleash viruses to crash computers.As a result, these crimes destroy network security greatly and make computer users suffer great losses.However, we should not tolerate these cyber criminals any more.It's high time for us to take effective measures to fight against cyber crimes.First, we should reinforce the cyber laws to punish cyber criminals strictly.Moreover, we should develop high techniques as soon as possible to improve intrusion detection and prevent cyber crimes.Besides, more talented people should be trained and more effective firewalls should be built up so as to make the net immune to all kinds of viruses.As college students, we have responsibility to join the battle against cyber crimes.For one thing, we should not use others' computers unless we get permission.For another, we should be honest to others on the Internet and not release or spread unreal information.In a word, it takes our common efforts to defeat cyber crimes.

第五篇：英語(yǔ)作文網(wǎng)絡(luò)交流

Nowadays, Internet technology has more and more developed.It made our communicationmore and more convenience.young people incline tocommunicate with others on internet , and lack communication with people around them.First of all, I want to talk about it's benefits.There has a example, a Chinese girl talkedwith her father on internet at four clock p.m , and her father is in the America at ten clock p.m.If there has no internet,they would have a very long time for wait a letter, but the internet can make you have a communication at anytime and anywhere.It eliminates the barrier of distance,and very convenient for us.The second, It also have some bad influence.young people may spend hours chatting with friends through QQ or MSN, but rarely do they talk with other face to face.Some people say,they become more and more indifferent to each other in real life.Some netizens who are immersed in virtual world even have difficulty in making friends in reality.So,e-communication is a double-edged sword , We should strike a balance between them and make the best of the internet.1.1

Nowadays, Internet technology has more and more developed.? [教師點(diǎn)評(píng)][學(xué)習(xí)提示] 易混詞匯: technique, technology 均有“技術(shù)”之意。

: 多指具體的某種技術(shù)和技巧。

: 含義比technique廣泛，泛指生產(chǎn)工藝、科學(xué)技術(shù)。

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It made our communication more and more convenience.? [教師點(diǎn)評(píng)][學(xué)習(xí)提示] 易混詞匯: communication, traffic, transportation 均有“交通”之意。

: 指郵電、無(wú)線電、鐵路、公路等各種交通方式或媒介。

: 指來(lái)往的東西的情況，表示一種抽象概念的交通流動(dòng)量。

: 指將乘客或貨物從一處運(yùn)到另一處，也可指交通運(yùn)輸工具。

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young people incline to communicate with others on internet , and lack communication with people around them.?

? [教師點(diǎn)評(píng)][名詞錯(cuò)誤] on internet 冠詞缺失[句子錯(cuò)誤] 句首單詞請(qǐng)注意大寫好評(píng)報(bào)錯(cuò) [批改提示] develop近義表達(dá)有advance/ progress/ evolve/ thrive/ flourish[批改提示] technology表示“工藝，技術(shù)”。注意與technique的區(qū)別。詳情點(diǎn)擊好評(píng)報(bào)錯(cuò) 好評(píng)報(bào)錯(cuò)

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? [標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤] 標(biāo)點(diǎn)與其前面的單詞之間不應(yīng)該有空格，請(qǐng)檢查[搭配統(tǒng)計(jì)] 動(dòng)名搭配 lack...communication 在教材中出現(xiàn)過(guò)次好評(píng)報(bào)錯(cuò)

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? [學(xué)習(xí)提示] 易混詞匯: lack, need, want, require 均有“缺少，短少”之意。

: 指完全短缺或數(shù)量不足。

: 語(yǔ)氣較重，指需要必不可少的東西，強(qiáng)調(diào)急需。

: 側(cè)重缺少某種必需之物，或個(gè)人渴望得到的東西。

: 使用廣泛，語(yǔ)氣較輕。強(qiáng)調(diào)急需時(shí)可與need換用，但有時(shí)暗示所需的人或物是完成某一任務(wù)必不可少的。

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First of all, I want to talk about it's benefits.?

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? [教師點(diǎn)評(píng)][句子錯(cuò)誤] 本句語(yǔ)法，請(qǐng)檢查！[語(yǔ)法檢查] 建議把 about it's benefits 改成 about its benefits(Did you mean...)[標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤] 標(biāo)點(diǎn)與其前面的單詞之間不應(yīng)該有空格，請(qǐng)檢查好評(píng)報(bào)錯(cuò) 好評(píng)報(bào)錯(cuò)

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? [學(xué)習(xí)提示] 易混詞匯: advantage, benefit, interest, favour, profit, gain 均有“利益，好處”之意。

: 指因某方面占優(yōu)勢(shì)或利用某機(jī)會(huì)以及對(duì)方弱點(diǎn)而獲得利益與好處。

: 普通用詞，指通過(guò)正當(dāng)手段從物質(zhì)或精神方面得到的任何好處或利益。

: 作“利益”解時(shí)，多用復(fù)數(shù)形式，既可指集團(tuán)、群體的利益，又可指?jìng)€(gè)人的利益。

: 指在競(jìng)爭(zhēng)中獲得的advantage,也可指在狹隘的個(gè)人利益。

: 著重收益，尤指從物質(zhì)、錢財(cái)?shù)确矫娅@得的利益。

: 指獲得的物質(zhì)利益，也暗示不損壞他人利益而得的無(wú)形好處。

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There has a example, a Chinese girl talked with her father on internet at four clock p.m , and her father is in the America at ten clock p.m.?

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? [教師點(diǎn)評(píng)][句子錯(cuò)誤] 本句語(yǔ)法不規(guī)范，請(qǐng)檢查！[語(yǔ)法檢查] 建議把 There has a 改成 There is a(Revise...)[標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤] 標(biāo)點(diǎn)與其前面的單詞之間不應(yīng)該有空格，請(qǐng)檢查好評(píng)報(bào)錯(cuò) 好評(píng)報(bào)錯(cuò) [批改提示] want的近義表達(dá)有intend或tend。好評(píng)報(bào)錯(cuò)

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? [學(xué)習(xí)提示] 易混詞匯: example, instance, case, sample, illustration, specimen 均有“例子，事例”之意。

: 普通用詞，指能代表同類事物性質(zhì)或一般規(guī)律的典型例子。

: 多指用于說(shuō)明、支持或反證一般事實(shí)或理論的事例。

: 多指需要加以認(rèn)真研究的實(shí)例，如病例，案例等。

: 通常指樣品。

: 指用來(lái)說(shuō)明、解釋某種理論或看法而引用的例證。

: 可與sample換用，但常指人或物中選出的有代表性部分，或指供科研、化驗(yàn)或檢驗(yàn)用的標(biāo)本。

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? [批改提示] 注意區(qū)別。

Chinese用作名詞，表示“中國(guó)人”[a person born or living in China, a person of Chinese descent]時(shí)，是可數(shù)名詞，單復(fù)數(shù)同形；指中國(guó)人民或特指—個(gè)或數(shù)個(gè)中國(guó)人時(shí)，均加冠詞，泛指時(shí)不能加。好評(píng)報(bào)錯(cuò)

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If there has no internet, they would have a very long time for wait a letter, but the internet can make you have a communication at anytime and anywhere.?

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? [教師點(diǎn)評(píng)][句子錯(cuò)誤] 本句語(yǔ)法不規(guī)范，請(qǐng)檢查！[標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤] 標(biāo)點(diǎn)與其前面的單詞之間不應(yīng)該有空格，請(qǐng)檢查[批改提示] very的近義表達(dá)有extremely, exceedingly, remarkably, intensely。好評(píng)報(bào)錯(cuò) 好評(píng)報(bào)錯(cuò) Improperly implemented, dials can be extremely difficult to manipulate.如果設(shè)計(jì)不當(dāng)，刻度盤將會(huì)非常難于操作。

Between 1890 and 1930 the woman suffrage movement became exceedingly militant.一八九○年到一九三○年間婦女爭(zhēng)取選舉權(quán)運(yùn)動(dòng)變得非常激烈。

The surface of Mars is remarkablydiverse.火星的表面參差不齊。

He was so informed and intensely forceful.他是那么見(jiàn)多識(shí)廣，極了不起。

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It eliminates the barrier of distance, and very convenient for us.?

? [教師點(diǎn)評(píng)][句子錯(cuò)誤] 本句語(yǔ)法不規(guī)范，請(qǐng)檢查！[搭配統(tǒng)計(jì)] 動(dòng)名搭配 eliminate...barrier 在教材中出現(xiàn)過(guò)次好評(píng)報(bào)錯(cuò)

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? [學(xué)習(xí)提示] 易混詞匯: obstacle, barrier, obstruction, bar, hindrance 均含“障礙，障礙物”之意。

: 指在達(dá)到目的或前進(jìn)的過(guò)程中必須消除或繞過(guò)的障礙物，也指起阻礙作用等情況。

: 常指臨時(shí)的或者可能跨越的障礙。

: 常既指具體的障礙又可指抽象或喻意上的阻礙。

: 既可指阻止進(jìn)出或通過(guò)的柵欄一類的障礙物，也可用于抽象意義障礙。

: 指妨礙他人進(jìn)步或做事的人或物。

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? [批改提示] eliminate近義表達(dá)有do away with/ get rid of/ extinguish/

obliterate/ exterminate

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The second, It also have some bad influence.?

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? [教師點(diǎn)評(píng)][動(dòng)詞錯(cuò)誤] 主謂不一致，建議將it后的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞改為第三人稱單數(shù)形式。[標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤] 標(biāo)點(diǎn)與其前面的單詞之間不應(yīng)該有空格，請(qǐng)檢查[推薦詞匯] bad在寫作中使用的太泛，在某些語(yǔ)境下可考慮換為unfavorable/dreadful或好評(píng)報(bào)錯(cuò) 好評(píng)報(bào)錯(cuò) be less impressive等。

He had formed an unfavorable opinion of my work.他對(duì)我的工作已有了成見(jiàn)。

I' ve had a dreadful day everything seems to have gone wrong.我度過(guò)了很糟糕的一天，每件事好像都出了差錯(cuò)。

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young people may spend hours chatting with friends through QQ or MSN, but rarely do they talk with other face to face.?

? [教師點(diǎn)評(píng)][句子錯(cuò)誤] 句首單詞請(qǐng)注意大寫[低頻警示] hours chatting with friends through 在語(yǔ)料庫(kù)中無(wú)此用法，疑似中式英語(yǔ)好評(píng)報(bào)錯(cuò) [高分表達(dá)] 建議將bad改為negative/unfavorable更好一些。[批改提示] influence近義表達(dá)有act upon/ affect/ bear upon好評(píng)報(bào)錯(cuò) 好評(píng)報(bào)錯(cuò) 好評(píng)報(bào)錯(cuò)

? [學(xué)習(xí)提示] 易混詞匯: friend, mate, acquaintance, pal 都有“朋友”之意。

: 一般用詞，指某人喜愛(ài)并樂(lè)意與之相交往的人。

: 最普通用詞，既可指好友、同事，又可指合伙人，還可指配偶的一方。

: 指彼此相識(shí)，但交往不甚密切，相互間沒(méi)有深厚情感的人。

: 口語(yǔ)用詞，指十分要好的朋友。

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Some people say, they become more and more indifferent to each other in real life.? [教師點(diǎn)評(píng)][學(xué)習(xí)提示] 易混詞匯: genuine, authentic, actual, real, true, factual 均有“真的，真實(shí)的，實(shí)在的”之意。

: 普通常用詞，指真正的，貨真價(jià)實(shí)的，強(qiáng)調(diào)非人為或非虛假的。

: 常可與genuine換用，指與事實(shí)完全相符，強(qiáng)調(diào)準(zhǔn)確可靠。

: 指事物的實(shí)際存在，并非出自主觀臆造。

: 普通用詞，含義較廣，有時(shí)可與actual和genuine換用。指一切真實(shí)的或 表面看不出虛假的事物。: 指同實(shí)際情況或標(biāo)準(zhǔn)完全一致。口語(yǔ)中多用。

: 與actual同義，但更測(cè)重根據(jù)事實(shí)，不擴(kuò)大或縮小，不渲染。[批改提示] through的近義表達(dá)有in term of或via。好評(píng)報(bào)錯(cuò)

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Some netizens who are immersed in virtual world even have difficulty in making friends in reality.?

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So, e-communication is a double-edged sword , We should strike a balance between them and make the best of the internet.?

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? [教師點(diǎn)評(píng)][句子錯(cuò)誤] 本句語(yǔ)法不規(guī)范，請(qǐng)檢查！[標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤] 標(biāo)點(diǎn)與其前面的單詞之間不應(yīng)該有空格，請(qǐng)檢查[搭配統(tǒng)計(jì)] 動(dòng)名搭配 strike...balance 在教材中出現(xiàn)過(guò)次好評(píng)報(bào)錯(cuò) 好評(píng)報(bào)錯(cuò)

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? [學(xué)習(xí)提示] 易混詞匯: remainder, surplus, rest, remains, balance 均含“剩余部分”之意。: 含義較廣，可指數(shù)學(xué)運(yùn)算中的余數(shù)，也指從整體取走或用掉部分后的所余部分，或一群人走掉一部分剩下的人。

: 指超過(guò)需要數(shù)量之外的剩余。

: 最普通用詞與定冠詞連用，指任何指定數(shù)量的人或物等。

: 常指人或動(dòng)物死后的遺體或遺骨，也指古代文明的遺跡或去世作家尚未發(fā)表的遺稿。: 指支取存款的余額或減去各種開(kāi)支后的尾數(shù)。

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