第一篇：交換生的英語個(gè)人陳述(PS)

Personal Statement

I am XXX, a second-year undergraduate student of College of Material and Chemical Engineering, XX University, China.I major in Materials Science and Engineering.I now sincerely apply for an opportunity to study a one-year undergraduate courseinthe University of Utah /USA /materials science and engineering.My strong interest in chemistry started in my high school years.I was then very proud of knowing more chemical experiments and phenomena than my companions.I even had my own in-house laboratory for small experiments.I have been fortunate to be able to participate in the study of two research topics—i.e.the research into anti-pollution-and-damage bio-materials in oceans(led by Associate Professor TANG Min of the Biological Engineering program)since April, 2011, and the project to extract semi-cellulose from coconut husk(led by Professor CHEN Yong of the Materials Science and Engineering program)since September, 2011.Though it is time-consuming, this hands-on experience has been a happy daily work for me, in which I combine my theory learning with real practice.I have found myself more skillful with hands, knowing more about various

experiments and instruments.Apart from academic study, I also take part in various extracurricular activities.For instance, elected as the Director of Science and Technology forthe College Youth League on October, 2010, I am responsible for organizing all kinds of activitives in science and technology.At this post, I have developed different abilities and felt very happy.Although in the beginning I found it hard to coordinate people and get things organized, I gradually learned to classify my team members and assign tasks to them according to their characters.Through practice, I can now find the right man for the right task, for instance, the out-going for communication and coordination work, the assertive and innovative for preparing and designing work, and the people with foresight and attraction for making agenda and delegating.In the meantime, as a cadre of my college , I give a helping hand to my fellow students where I can when they meet with difficulties in study and other aspects.As a result, I have formed deep friendship with my classmates.Aside from the above, I am very interested in music, and I like to play the piano and clarinet in my spare time.After the one-year study in your university, I plan to come back to Hainan University to finish my last undergraduate year.I

believe that the rich teaching experience of your university and my own solid learning foundation will enable me to get well-prepared for my future postgraduate study.I am eager to contribution myself to the development of Materials Science of China.Thank you for considering my application.

第二篇：金融會(huì)計(jì)專業(yè)PS個(gè)人陳述

金融會(huì)計(jì)專業(yè)PS個(gè)人陳述（financial accounting）Since I was just a kid, I have shown a great admiration to those who carved out from scratch because I think that is the life I expected for with vigor and challenge.However, many of them failed at last mainly because of the financial accounting.It is very difficult for a company to change the resource into money without the professional financial management and an abundant financial professional knowledge.As the “batch product of the school”, I desire to become the “class A product” with abundant professional knowledge and good quality after two years study in the campus.Although I knew that the “investment risk” was ineluctable, I believe the future investment yield will be huge in the future.On the choice of investment project, I certainly chose my favorite accounting in he financial field and sincerely hope that the further study can presented me with a solid foundation and full preparations for the future work in the company financing.Cherishing this interest, I came into the University of International Business and Economics, where I learnt many subjects with the related English books such as “Theory and Application”(James L.Farrell, Jr.), “Investments”(ZviBodie), “Corporate Finance”(Ross)and “Options, futures, and other derivatives”(John Hull).Through years of study in college, I realized that the various economic actions of a company are just like the apparatus of a human body while the financial management works like the blood, which guarantees the normal working of the apparatus.Therefore, I became very interested in this field because of its importance in the society.【成績好】Pocketing this hot enthusiasm and taking advantage of my insistent efforts, I got the high scores in many subjects such as the financial accounting, financial management and economics etc.which ranked me into the top line in our class.Furthermore, I enjoyed an excellent score both in mathematics and English, which provided me a solid foundation to the financial and accounting work in the future.Through my study, I realized that the finance and accounting are the comprehensive subjects, which embrace many related subjects like mathematics and English.Therefore, in order to get an embedded

understanding in this field, I must improve my comprehensive ability.【實(shí)踐】Meanwhile, I knew that both the finance and accounting are the practical subjects coming from the practice instead of the textbooks.So I never stopped applying what I have learnt into practice.Thanks to my insistent efforts and clinging spirit, I was fortunate to get the opportunity to practise in the Liaoning Sub-branch Bank of Bank of China with an aim at cognizing the main work of the bank accountants and the related business flows of the bank through the practical operations.However, it was very difficult for me to complete my practical study because the Electronic Interbank System was widely adopted in the modern banks.Facing this difficulty, I looked up many books and related files such as “Accounting of Financial Corporation” and the magazine named “Study on the Liaoning Rural Finance”.In these books and magazines, I finally got the clear cognition of the difference between the bank accounting and the corporation accounting.However, they shared one essence with the same accounting factors, the basic preconditions and general principles.Therefore, I believe that the understanding of the work of the bank account is very helpful for my future work no matter what kind of accounting I get involved in because of the close associations between the corporations and bank.【稱贊表揚(yáng)】My sweats finally rewarded me with the high praise of my colleagues and the leaders of the bank and completed my practice perfectly and successfully.Therefore, I was known as the independent girl with strong ability, clinging spirit and creative ideas.Besides, I have participated in many academic activities like the Nobel Laureates Beijing Forum, in which I got the opportunity to contact with

many famous professors and experts in this field.【在美國學(xué)習(xí)】Meanwhile, through the study and practice these years, I realized that China is still far behind the advanced countries in the world in this field.So I decided to further my study in the United States, the leading university in this field.Through my study there, I planned to make my own achievements in this field.After a careful consideration and deep attracted by your nutritious academic atmosphere and many famous teachers and professors, I finally chose your esteemed university to achieve my dream in the future.Therefore, I would be very appreciated with your consideration of my application.

第三篇：個(gè)人陳述(PS)寫作要點(diǎn)

英國留學(xué)申請(qǐng)之個(gè)人陳述寫作最全教程

一、英國留學(xué)個(gè)人陳述(PS)的主旨

個(gè)人陳述PS在英國留學(xué)申請(qǐng)中之所以重要是因?yàn)楹芏嘤髮W(xué)無需面試申請(qǐng)人，所以他們唯一認(rèn)識(shí)你的地方就是網(wǎng)上申請(qǐng)表格。大部分表格涵蓋了你的個(gè)人信息，包括大學(xué)感興趣的你的學(xué)術(shù)/語言成績、推薦信以及PS(留學(xué)個(gè)人陳述)。

PS(留學(xué)個(gè)人陳述)是這些材料當(dāng)中唯一一個(gè)由你來控制的，所以這個(gè)是你給大學(xué)招生辦留下一個(gè)良好印象的機(jī)會(huì)，這個(gè)印象是用分?jǐn)?shù)無法反映出來的。尤其是當(dāng)你申請(qǐng)的學(xué)校競爭特別激烈，所有的申請(qǐng)者都有很好的成績的時(shí)候，PS就是唯一一種能凸顯你的與眾不同的材料，所以同志們，一定要盡可能地把PS做到盡善盡美。

大學(xué)招生辦和課程老師在看你的PS的時(shí)候，他們通常會(huì)問以下兩個(gè)問題：

1、我們是否想要這個(gè)學(xué)生來學(xué)習(xí)這門課程?

2、我們是否想要這個(gè)學(xué)生來我們的學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)?

這兩個(gè)問題可以分解為以下幾個(gè)小問題來解答：

1)這個(gè)學(xué)生是否適合他/她所申請(qǐng)的課程?

2)這個(gè)學(xué)生是否具備他/她所申請(qǐng)的課程需要的素質(zhì)?

3)這個(gè)學(xué)生是否有足夠的毅力、勤奮的品格以及不會(huì)輕易輟學(xué)?

4)這個(gè)學(xué)生是否會(huì)全力以赴地達(dá)到這門課程所要求的各項(xiàng)能力?

5)這個(gè)學(xué)生是否能在高壓底下工作?

6)這個(gè)學(xué)生是否能很快得調(diào)整好自己融入到大學(xué)的新環(huán)境?

7)他們的交際能力如何?

8)他們是否熱愛這個(gè)課程并且做了仔細(xì)的研究

9)他們對(duì)課程是否有真正的興趣并且渴望去做更深入的學(xué)習(xí)?

這些問題就是需要你在PS當(dāng)中去表述和解答，只不過你不能只是說YES和NO，你需要有足夠的事實(shí)依據(jù)去證明你的說法，讓你的觀點(diǎn)言之有物。不過，招生辦的老師們畢竟也是平凡人，他們有可能需要閱讀成百上千的PS，所以即便你覺得已經(jīng)對(duì)上述問題回答的很好了你還有可能被不幸地拒絕。

還有其他的一些技巧可以讓你的PS脫穎而出給老師們留下深刻印象，但要記住老師們也都因人而異他們對(duì)于申請(qǐng)者的期望也都不完全相同，怎么把握當(dāng)中玄機(jī)就看童鞋們自己拿捏了。

二、標(biāo)注自己的亮點(diǎn)

現(xiàn)在你還不需要開始思考文章框架和行文結(jié)構(gòu)，你只需要思考一些關(guān)于你的成長經(jīng)歷并做一些記錄。但也不是泛泛地記錄，最好的方式是使用一系列的標(biāo)題并在該標(biāo)題之下寫一些與之相關(guān)的亮點(diǎn)，以下是可供你思考的主題：(以下關(guān)乎主體寫作部分，就不做中文翻譯，用英文思考有助于PS寫作)

What you want to study at university and why?

Specific aspects of the courses that interest you

Examples of coursework you have completed

Practical work you have enjoyed

Things you have read related to the subject area

Work experience or voluntary work in this area

Conferences you have attended

Personal experiences which lead to the decision to take this subject

Where you hope a degree in this subject will lead

Experiences that show you are a reliable and responsible person

Part-time job

Business enterprise

Community and charity work

Sixth form committee

Helping out at school events and open days

Young Enterprise, World Challenge, Duke of Edinburgh award, Asdan Award Debating societies and what you've gained from these experiences.Your interests and skills

What you like to do in your free time

Sport and leisure activities

Subjects you study which are not examined

Musical instrument which you play

Languages which you speak

Prizes you have won or positions achieved in your interests

Gap year(這個(gè)主要針對(duì)local學(xué)生，英國當(dāng)?shù)氐暮⒆訒?huì)在大學(xué)畢業(yè)之后有個(gè)gap year，專門去環(huán)游世界體驗(yàn)人生)Why you're taking a Gap year(if you are)

Why you want to take a gap year

What you plan to do

How this may relate to your course

這樣的記錄下來，你就會(huì)有一系列的關(guān)于你自己的亮點(diǎn)，這些素材在你的PS寫作當(dāng)中都非常有價(jià)值。

上面清單提到的要點(diǎn)如果你都還沒有素材也不要擔(dān)心，只要仔細(xì)去思考你做過的哪些事情可以很好地表現(xiàn)你的優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)。最重要的是你需要有一個(gè)明確的足夠有說服力的理由去申請(qǐng)課程，就算那些理由現(xiàn)在聽起來有些愚蠢。

所有的招生辦老師都希望招收那些對(duì)自己申請(qǐng)的課程有足夠的熱情和激情的學(xué)生，只要熱火火得證明你確實(shí)是就可以!

如果你選擇這門課程僅僅是因?yàn)槟銢]有其他更好的選擇了，那你就要仔細(xì)考慮換一門你更喜歡的專業(yè)。

現(xiàn)在咱們有一些寫作的思路了，幾乎可以開始考慮怎么把它們寫進(jìn)PS中了。

三、你和你申請(qǐng)的課程

你可以有很驚人的學(xué)分、有很牛的課外活動(dòng)，而且有很高尚的人格，但如果招生老師認(rèn)為你與該課程不相符，你同樣會(huì)遭受拒絕。

還好剛剛的一些記錄已經(jīng)給了你很清晰的思路---關(guān)于怎么去證明你想要去學(xué)習(xí)這個(gè)課程。

如果沒有第二步的準(zhǔn)備你至少也要確定你的確想要學(xué)習(xí)這個(gè)課程，ps寫作是個(gè)浩大的工程，你也不想寫到最后忽然決定你想學(xué)習(xí)別的課程，所以在你更進(jìn)一步寫作之前一定要確定你選好了一個(gè)適合你的專業(yè)。

記住不要為了選專業(yè)而選專業(yè)，你需要對(duì)該課程所在的領(lǐng)域有一定的興趣并且有一個(gè)大致的了解，知道自己為什么要選擇這個(gè)課程，同時(shí)把你了解的情況表述出來去說服招生辦老師們。

仔細(xì)地思考一下為什么這個(gè)課程會(huì)吸引你，并且盡可能多地記錄下這些理由。當(dāng)然在草稿當(dāng)中你只能寫出一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)也沒有關(guān)系，之后正式寫作你可以再調(diào)整，關(guān)鍵的是你需要找出自己希望學(xué)習(xí)本課程的主要理由。

四、你的個(gè)人陳述(PS)原則是什么?

這里可以給大家羅列一些要點(diǎn)給你指導(dǎo)參考：

1、一定不要表現(xiàn)得自命不凡

2、盡量不要以“I”開頭展開句子描述

3、盡量用有趣的詞組做開頭和結(jié)尾

4、盡量不要引用報(bào)紙雜志書籍上的名言警句，感覺像是表示你多么地飽讀經(jīng)書然后故意秀出來一樣。

5、一定不要撒謊，要真實(shí)誠懇。

6、不要嘗試在ps里面故作滑稽開玩笑

7、不要談與你的申請(qǐng)無關(guān)的興趣愛好

8、不要用生僻詞匯

9、不要重復(fù)那些在大學(xué)申請(qǐng)表格上就有的內(nèi)容

10、不要提及任何政治立場

這些原則可以讓你知道該把焦點(diǎn)放在哪些事情上，不至于使你在看過大量范文之后迷失了自己。當(dāng)然如果你本人機(jī)智幽默，語言詼諧的話也不反對(duì)你在ps里巧妙地表現(xiàn)自己的這個(gè)風(fēng)格。

五、PS的語言表述

在英國留學(xué)PS寫作過程中，很多人都會(huì)先閱讀優(yōu)秀的PS范文。而在PS范文閱讀過程中，你可能會(huì)找到一些你喜歡的語言表述方式。首先記住，千萬不要簡單地復(fù)制粘貼，復(fù)制范文就是抄襲，如果招生辦老師發(fā)現(xiàn)了會(huì)馬上當(dāng)?shù)裟?(老外對(duì)中國學(xué)生的造假行為是非常敏感的)

就算有些句子是出自于你自己的深刻領(lǐng)會(huì)也千萬不要直接拷貝，你可以在他的句子之上適當(dāng)改造，使之成為適合你的素材。

你需要去用些漂亮的表達(dá)去讓你看起來對(duì)專業(yè)充滿熱情以及顯得你是個(gè)很有趣的人。

你可以通過看ps范文以及大學(xué)相關(guān)的課程申請(qǐng)要求來找到適合你的表達(dá)方式。

大學(xué)的申請(qǐng)要求(University prospectuses)描述是非常重要的需要去關(guān)注的地方，你上學(xué)校網(wǎng)站找到你要申請(qǐng)的課程，看看它的課程描述，同時(shí)比照一下你自己是否對(duì)其所提出的要求吻合，然后列下一些單詞和句子的清單，類似于這個(gè)：

to gain greater understanding of the world around you.sends a signal to prospective employers and graduate schools

students of economics become problem-solvers.the fact is economics affects our daily lives.a challenging and diverse discipline

develops analytical skills, quantative skills, research skills

It's interesting and relevant

千萬不要直接復(fù)制你看到的句子，把它們改造一下用你自己的語言運(yùn)用到你的ps當(dāng)中去。

六、PS的結(jié)構(gòu)

現(xiàn)在可以考試考慮PS的文章結(jié)構(gòu)了。

一種辦法就是將你前面做過的紀(jì)錄分為幾個(gè)類別然后每一個(gè)類別寫作一段，比如：

第1段：專業(yè)認(rèn)識(shí)，以及其中吸引你的部分，談?wù)劄槭裁础?/p>

第2段：在與這個(gè)專業(yè)相關(guān)的領(lǐng)域上我都做了什么。(在你的學(xué)校申請(qǐng)表格當(dāng)中還沒有提到的)

第3-4段：在校時(shí)期的工作經(jīng)歷。

第5段：我的業(yè)余愛好以及個(gè)人能力。

第6段：我期望上貴校的決心及全文總結(jié)。

再次聲明，這個(gè)僅僅是一個(gè)參考，怎么寫作還是要取決于你自己。

七、PS的正式寫作

個(gè)人陳述的重要性已經(jīng)人人皆知，在開始正式寫作PS前，有些注意事項(xiàng)需要銘記于心。

記住ps的目的---你需要向招生辦老師們展示為什么他們要在你申請(qǐng)的課程以及這個(gè)學(xué)校錄取你。

除了寫作內(nèi)容以外，語言表達(dá)風(fēng)格同樣會(huì)被作為判斷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。

記住你只有非常有限的字?jǐn)?shù)長度，太長了容易讓人疲倦，太短了如果你覺得難以再擴(kuò)展的話也不用擔(dān)心，短小精悍的ps總歸是要比又長又臭的ps討喜的。

寫作態(tài)度上盡量積極樂觀，如果有些事情是讓你都苦惱的就盡量用一種巧妙的方式去表達(dá)。

在你寫作之前，還要注意去看看學(xué)校網(wǎng)站上是否有對(duì)ps的相關(guān)要求，這些要求都是招生辦老師們寫的一定可以在如何寫作上給你打開思路。

現(xiàn)在你可以開始動(dòng)筆了，每一個(gè)點(diǎn)的描述都說說你做了什么，解釋你為什么這樣做，同時(shí)從中又收獲了什么，在這樣的寫作框架中你的ps就變得充實(shí)、有趣以及有價(jià)值!

比如像這樣：I currently have a part time job and this has taught me much about teamwork, responsibility and time management in the workplace.八、寫作完了之后干什么?

個(gè)人陳述的重要性已經(jīng)人人皆知，在開始正式寫作PS前，有些注意事項(xiàng)需要銘記于心。

記住ps的目的---你需要向招生辦老師們展示為什么他們要在你申請(qǐng)的課程以及這個(gè)學(xué)校錄取你。

除了寫作內(nèi)容以外，語言表達(dá)風(fēng)格同樣會(huì)被作為判斷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。

記住你只有非常有限的字?jǐn)?shù)長度，太長了容易讓人疲倦，太短了如果你覺得難以再擴(kuò)展的話也不用擔(dān)心，短小精悍的ps總歸是要比又長又臭的ps討喜的。

寫作態(tài)度上盡量積極樂觀，如果有些事情是讓你都苦惱的就盡量用一種巧妙的方式去表達(dá)。

在你寫作之前，還要注意去看看學(xué)校網(wǎng)站上是否有對(duì)ps的相關(guān)要求，這些要求都是招生辦老師們寫的一定可以在如何寫作上給你打開思路。

現(xiàn)在你可以開始動(dòng)筆了，每一個(gè)點(diǎn)的描述都說說你做了什么，解釋你為什么這樣做，同時(shí)從中又收獲了什么，在這樣的寫作框架中你的ps就變得充實(shí)、有趣以及有價(jià)值!

比如像這樣：I currently have a part time job and this has taught me much about teamwork, responsibility and time management in the workplace 寫作完了之后干什么?

首先仔細(xì)閱讀你的寫作成品并且嘗試換成別人的角度來看你的ps?？纯此欠裥形耐〞骋子陂喿x?所描述的內(nèi)容是否完全符合真實(shí)的你?如果你覺得自己閱讀的話容易沉醉其中的話最好找其他人去幫你看。

接下來，請(qǐng)別人幫你看，主要是你的家人、朋友、老師或者其他你覺得可以提出建設(shè)性意見的人。他們會(huì)幫你審閱里面的拼寫或者語法錯(cuò)誤，同時(shí)也會(huì)提醒你遺漏的部分。

再來，可以給你的學(xué)校領(lǐng)導(dǎo)或者職業(yè)咨詢師看，這些人看過很多ps，他們知道怎么去評(píng)判。

另外就是，你可以放到網(wǎng)上讓網(wǎng)友幫你參考，不過如果放在網(wǎng)上所有人都能看到的話，可能會(huì)讓別人偷了你的idea。

在給完一圈別人審閱之后，你的原作可能會(huì)有大量的修改，在做這些修改之前，最好原作版本也保存?zhèn)浞?。不斷修改、給人評(píng)判、再修改，一般一份ps完成下來，都是要10-20次的修改，所謂磨刀不誤砍柴工!

提醒一下大家，現(xiàn)在基本都是網(wǎng)上申請(qǐng)，最終完成的ps版本存檔之后，注意到網(wǎng)上提交時(shí)仔細(xì)檢查各個(gè)提交操作是否沒有疏漏，注意不要有多余的操作不小心讓你的ps提交時(shí)候清空了。

九、英國留學(xué)個(gè)人陳述(PS)常見問題解答

Q1： PS是否有字?jǐn)?shù)限制?

A1：每個(gè)學(xué)校的要求可能會(huì)有不同，這個(gè)要根據(jù)學(xué)校的要求來改，通常前期寫好的PS稿子都是要再做增加或刪減的，至少要在里面體現(xiàn)為什么要申請(qǐng)這所學(xué)校的原因。

一般來說500到800字?jǐn)?shù)的文章已經(jīng)很理想了。

Q2：什么時(shí)候開始寫合適?

A2：請(qǐng)仔細(xì)閱讀本帖教程一至九。

Q3：招生辦老師們都在尋找怎樣的學(xué)生? A3：請(qǐng)仔細(xì)閱讀本帖第二條，另外一定要仔細(xì)看學(xué)校網(wǎng)站對(duì)專業(yè)的招生要求，那里都會(huì)有非常仔細(xì)的描述。

Q4：如果我要申請(qǐng)雙學(xué)位怎么辦?

A4：你有兩種選擇可以讓你的PS去申請(qǐng)雙學(xué)位，一種選擇是你分別針對(duì)兩門課程寫兩封PS，一種是只寫一封PS但只提尼覺得最重要的那個(gè)專業(yè)不提另外一個(gè)。

第二種方式有個(gè)優(yōu)勢就是你可以在說明課程共有的屬性時(shí)，同時(shí)申請(qǐng)兩個(gè)雙學(xué)位。

如果你決定這么做你首先必須確保自己有足夠的能力去證明你同時(shí)也適合另一個(gè)專業(yè)。

Q5：如果我要申請(qǐng)兩個(gè)不同的專業(yè)怎么辦?

A5：一封PS來申請(qǐng)兩門不同的專業(yè)是很難的。

如果這兩個(gè)專業(yè)很相似，比如數(shù)學(xué)和統(tǒng)計(jì)、會(huì)計(jì)和商科你就可以只寫一封general一些的PS去分別申請(qǐng)兩門專業(yè)。

如果兩門專業(yè)是完全不相關(guān)的，用一封PS申請(qǐng)就是完全不可能的了。取而代之地，你需要選擇一封PS能夠讓你最大程度并錄取的。

比如說，如果你申請(qǐng)了四個(gè)不同學(xué)校的同一門課程，以及另外兩個(gè)學(xué)校的另外一個(gè)課程，你可能只需要寫一封你最想要申請(qǐng)的那門專業(yè)的PS，其他兩個(gè)學(xué)校的那門課程你甚至都可以完全不要去想，或者最好申請(qǐng)其他那兩個(gè)學(xué)校的同類型的課程。同時(shí)你還需要仔細(xì)看清楚你所申請(qǐng)的學(xué)校的入學(xué)成績標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，看看自己是否符合才做決定。

如果你還想申請(qǐng)兩個(gè)不同學(xué)校的三門完全不同的課程，那就奉勸你最好不要這么做，就算你這么做了，你最后還只是學(xué)習(xí)一門課程，因此盡量縮小你的選擇范圍在類似的課程上是比較明智的做法。

最后的總結(jié)

在與申請(qǐng)課程相關(guān)的事情上，寫出最獨(dú)特的自己!

仔細(xì)思考自己的特點(diǎn)有哪些?

最后記住這是你的個(gè)人陳述，你可以有技巧地暢所欲言。

指導(dǎo)只是幫助你打開思路，千萬不要盲從，遵循內(nèi)心的聲音寫出真實(shí)的自我才是PS絕佳的取勝之道!

第四篇：ps出國留學(xué)申請(qǐng)個(gè)人陳述

Personal Statement

I found my faithful love for finance quite early as my uncle, a financial accountant, began to teach me some simple financial knowledge when he provided me with additional coaching of mathematics since I was young.Then as I learned more academic knowledge in finance, E-Finance for example, in college, I gradually made up my mind to develop it as my future career.Thus I’m now applying to your programme of Accounting and Finance MSc to enrich me with more in-depth knowledge in finance.During undergraduate study, I’ve got a systematic learning in Microeconomics, E-Finance, E-Commerce, E-Marketing and Logistics Management of E-Commerce.In particular, I performed excellent in E-Finance as I scored 91, the highest mark in my class, and I became much more familiar with e-banking, online securities trading and the working processes of call center.In the final year of undergraduate study, I’m now learning Principle of Management, Case Study of the Security of E-Commerce, The Criteria and Law in E-Commerce, Customer Behavior and International Trade Affairs.In terms of quantitative courses, I have learned Advanced Mathematics, Linear Algebra and Probability Theory & Mathematical Statistics and in the last course I’ve mainly studied central limit theorem, the principal distributions, testing of statistical hypotheses, parameter estimation, linearity regression and equal analysis, and stochastic differential equations.With my great efforts, I got 85.66 for current overall average and 87.64 for the average of E-Commerce major specializations and ranked of 5/53 and 4/53 respectively in my class.In addition, I was awarded B-class scholarship and won the title of ‘Excellent Student’ as well in 2008.Besides focusing on professional study, I also pay a great attention to improving leadership.Shortly after I entered into the college, I joined in the Literature & Art Unit of the Student Union.In a year, I perfectly accomplished my work, such as field arranging and programme planning, etc., in holding the award ceremony of the Webpage Design Competition and the English Culture Festival.For my excellent leadership and organizing ability showed in the above activities, I was elected as the president of the Unit in September 2007.Thereafter, I successfully organized many ceremonies and festivals which were widely appreciated by students and teachers.When being active in extra-curriculum activities, I also grasped chances to develop my English capacity.I once participated in the shows of English Culture Festival---the English dramas Beauty and the Beast, and Titanic---in which my oral English was well practiced.Meanwhile, I also focused on cross-culture communication as I made friends with several oversea students from England, Finland, and France.I was quite fascinated with the European culture they introduced to me which impelled me to get my postgraduate study in UK.Through the above preparation, I’m sure that I’ve got ready to study in Manchester.I believe with a hard work I can have a deep insight in the accounting and financial courses you provide and what I would learn can greatly contribute to my career development---after graduation, I will work as a financial analyst in a key investment firm in China, and when being experienced with practical financial investment operations, I then plan to be a senior financial advisor in a world famous investment bank.

第五篇：申請(qǐng)留學(xué)的個(gè)人陳述PS

申請(qǐng)留學(xué)的個(gè)人陳述PS（NB）

極端裝B的PS，非大牛不能handle，作者同時(shí)被Harvard, Yale, Stanford, Columbia, NYU, Virginia, UCB Boalt, Georgetown, UCLA, BU, USC等錄取，所以吧，仰望為主。

全文692詞，以39句I...but排比一氣呵成。

I am a thinker, but not one to think out loud.I love myself, but am not in love with the sound of my own voice.I want to be loved, but not at the cost of not loving myself.I want to know everything, but realize that nothing can ever be known for sure.I believe that nothing is absolute, but I can absolutely defend my beliefs.I understand that chance is prevalent in all aspects of life, but never leave anything important to chance.I am skeptical about everything, but realistic in the face of my skepticism.I base everything on probability, but so does nature...probably.I believe that all our actions are determined, but feel completely free to do as I choose.I do not believe in anything resembling a God, but would never profess omniscience with regard to such issues.I have faith in nothing, but trust that my family and friends will always be faithful.I feel that religion is among the greatest problems in the world, but also understand that it is perhaps the ultimate solution.I recognize that many people derive their morals from religion, but I insist that religion is not the only fountainhead of morality.I respect the intimate connection between morality and law, but do not believe that either should unquestioningly respect the other.I want to study the law and become a lawyer, but I do not want to study the law just because I want to become a lawyer.I am aware that the law and economics cannot always be studied in conjunction, but I do not feel that either one can be properly studied without an awareness of the other.I recognize there is more to the law than efficiency, but believe the law should recognize the importance of efficiency more than it does.I love reading about law and philosophy, but not nearly as much as I love having a good conversation about

the two.I know that logic makes an argument sound, but also know that passion makes an argument sound logical.I have philosophical beliefs informed by economics and economic beliefs informed by philosophy, but I have lost track of which beliefs came first.I know it was the egg though.I always think very practically, but do not always like to think about the practical.I have wanted to be a scientist for a while now, but it took me two undergraduate years to figure out that being a scientist does not necessarily entail working in a laboratory.I play the saxophone almost every day, but feel most like an artist when deduction is my instrument.I spent one year at a college where I did not belong and two years taking classes irrelevant for my major, but I have no regrets about my undergraduate experience.I am incredibly passionate about my interests, but cannot imagine being interested in only one passion for an entire lifetime.I love the Yankees, but do not hate the Red Sox.I love sports, but hate the accompanying anti-intellectual culture.I may read the newspaper starting from the back, but I always make my way to the front eventually.I am liberal on some issues and conservative on others, but reasonable about all of them.I will always be politically active, but will never be a political activist.I think everything through completely, but I am never through thinking about anything.I can get along with almost anyone, but there are very few people without whom I could not get along.I am giving of my time, but not to the point of forgetting its value.I live for each moment, but not as much as I worry about the next.I consider ambition to be of the utmost importance, but realize that it is useless without the support of hard work.I am a very competitive person, but only when competing with myself.I have a million dreams, but I am more than just a dreamer.I am usually content, but never satisfied.I am a study in contradiction, but there is not an inconsistency to be found.