第一篇：經(jīng)典英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作

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第一環(huán)節(jié)：提綱環(huán)節(jié)

兩面型 果因型 “How”型

開(kāi)頭段 提出雙方觀點(diǎn) 提出現(xiàn)象＋過(guò)渡句 提出問(wèn)題＋過(guò)渡句

自己觀點(diǎn)的原因1 原因1 方法1

自己觀點(diǎn)的原因2 原因2 方法2

自己觀點(diǎn)的原因3 原因3 方法3

結(jié)論段 雙方觀點(diǎn)結(jié)論 現(xiàn)象前景結(jié)論 方法前景結(jié)論

第一步：寫(xiě)出開(kāi)頭段

模塊1：兩面型提出觀點(diǎn)開(kāi)頭（轉(zhuǎn)折法開(kāi)頭）

模板：It is widely accepted that ___________（主題）,_____________（名擴(kuò)插入語(yǔ)，對(duì)這個(gè)主題進(jìn)行一些修飾）, 謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞+擴(kuò)展從句（有賓語(yǔ)可以使用定從，無(wú)賓語(yǔ)可以使用狀從）However, others argue that___________（主題的近義詞，避免與上一句重復(fù)）, more often than not（副詞做插入語(yǔ)）, is harmful to the people _________

例如：工作壓力是好事還是壞事？

It is widely accepted that pressure in work, forcefully imposed on the employees in this competitive world, can bring some positive results on the grounds that it can stimulate the staff immensely.However, others argue that stress, more often than not, is harmful to the people who cannot assume excessive pressure in their work.模塊2：果因型提出現(xiàn)象

Recently, one of the hottest(most controversial)topic/issue arousing general concern is that ___________（主題）,_____________（名擴(kuò)插入語(yǔ)，對(duì)這個(gè)主題進(jìn)行一些修飾），謂語(yǔ)＋賓語(yǔ)＋定從。In my opinion, there are several factors responsible for this(phenomenon, increase, situation, problem??.)

Recently, one of the hottest(most controversial)topic arousing general concern is that stress, more often that not, is harmful to the employees who cannot assume excessive pressure.It is no simply task to identify the negative effects of this phenomenon which involves several complicated factors./ In my opinion, there are several factors responsible for this problem.模塊3：

Nowadays, mounting attention has been turned to the___________（主題）, _____________（名擴(kuò)插入語(yǔ)，對(duì)這個(gè)主題進(jìn)行一些修飾Therefore it is high time that measures were taken to prevent this.Nowadays, mounting attention has been turned to the high pressure in work, invariably brought to everyone in this competitive world.The immediate consequence is the damage of individual employee’s health.The longer-range result can be a decline in physic for the whole workforce since this problem has become more evident in each working unit.Therefore it is high time that measures were taken to prevent ____________________________________________________________

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this.第二步：中間段的提綱

模塊4：兩面型中間段提綱

所要駁斥的觀點(diǎn)的原因 所支持的原因（復(fù)雜）

中間段 原因1（簡(jiǎn)短）原因1+例證

原因2（簡(jiǎn)短）原因2+強(qiáng)調(diào)句

原因3（簡(jiǎn)短）原因3

第三步：寫(xiě)出最后段

模塊5：兩面型結(jié)尾：

As the proverb says “No garden is without its weed”.________(形容詞)to some extent as ___________is（as的倒裝句）, I still advocate ______________(自己的觀點(diǎn)).例如：

Essential to some extent as work pressure is（as的倒裝句）, I still advocate reducing it by efforts.模塊6：因果型結(jié)尾

From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that __________(主題)。We must call for an immediate action, because the current situation of(主題)_____________, permitted to continue, will surely lead to the end/destruction/damage of/to ______./

或This situation/tendency will surely continue that it deserves more intensive research and public concern.模塊7：How型結(jié)尾

Following these suggestions may not guarantee the success/solution, but the pay-off might be worth the effort.It will help/benefit/contribute to_____________(效果)eventually.寫(xiě)作環(huán)節(jié)

模塊8：中間第2段

But according to me, I firmly hold that its negative effect overweighs its benefits for the following reasons或work strain is more devastating than beneficial.First, too much pressure can damage employee’s health.（簡(jiǎn)單句）It is the decline in health that in return produces a negative effect on the work.（強(qiáng)調(diào)句）For example, due to the high pressure in work, a prominent journalist died on his way to interview a scholar, which is a tragedy and loss of the whole country（例證句）.模塊9：中間第3段

Besides, the enthusiasm of the staff can be quenched if they are exposed to overwhelming stress.Virtually, only by the love of one’s career, rather than the external pressure, can the employee be driven to accomplish the tasks in work as ____________________________________________________________

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quickly and as well as possible.(倒裝句)

模塊10：中間第4段

Finally, a strained mind of the employee may reduce their efficiency in work, the most important factor to improve the output for each working unit.(n1,+ n2+名擴(kuò))

例文

例文1．安樂(lè)死問(wèn)題：

It is admitted that the practice of assisted suicide or euthanasia, a controversial issue in medical area, is to some extent positive on the grounds that it can help some dying patients to die painlessly under their requests.However, others argue that this kind of performance is inhumane for it may mercilessly deprive humans of their rights to live.The principal argument advanced by those advocators is that euthanasia, more often than not, can soothe the unbearable pain of the patients, ease the heavy financial burden of their family, and save the limited public resources, such as the hospital facilities, for those possible to recover from serious diseases.But according to me, the permission of euthanasia is more cruel than considerate.The immediate reason to prohibit it is that in many cases, a patient’s right to die has subtly become a duty to die.It is the pressure from the exhausted and impatient relatives that push them make the decision.For example, a woman, whose relatives gathered for her planned euthanasia from overseas, had last-minute doubts.But the family said, “You can’t let our relatives come all this way for nothing”.Instead of ensuring that the patient’s true wishes were observed, the doctor carried out euthanasia.Besides, vicious crimes often come with this kind of mercy killing.Not only can greedy relatives of the patients hasten their death as quickly as possible through euthanasia, but also some impatient doctors who intend to withdraw the treatment may perform it without the requests.Finally, assisted suicide or euthanasia, an easy but prompt way to end human life, may throw away the patient’s opportunities to wait for the near future when the doctors may possibly come up with a new treatment, the treatment effective to terminal illness at the moment.Humane to some degree as euthanasia is, any country cannot afford to permit its practice.If those approving of this measure can take into consideration of its serious consequences, euthanasia may seem unfair.例文2：對(duì)教師的評(píng)估

It is wildly accepted that students’ evaluating or criticizing their teachers, as a kind of feedback, is to some extent positive on the grounds that it can help to eliminate unqualified or irresponsible teachers so as to enhance the quality of education.However, others argue that this kind of performance will result in a loss of respect and discipline in the class.____________________________________________________________

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The principal argument advanced by those opposing it is that by adopting this “critical” method, students might be encouraged to be ready for arguing, to disagree and to criticize no matter the teachers are excellent or unqualified.The immediate consequence is that the contempt to teachers brings about the loss of discipline in the class.The longer-range result is the ruin of the teacher-student relationship, which will effect the student’s development, even to the rest of his life.But according to me, implementing evaluating system in school is an effective way to improve the quality of education.The most immediate reason is that it can bring about a benign competition among teachers so as to distinguish those unqualified or irresponsible teachers from the top ones.It is the motivation generated by this kind of rival-ship that makes a great progress in teaching.For example, New Oriental School, one of the first class language training centers, carries out the “evaluating system” on teachers from the beginning of its establishment, which infuses immense energy to the growth of its “fleet”.Besides, by this practice, students and teachers would have better communication with each other for students can voice their own opinions and teachers are able to obtain a better feedback about whether what they teach is grasped or not and whether the teaching methods are appropriate or not.Finally, this performance facilitates the students to have original ideas, gain a deeper understanding of their lessons and learn the art of disagreeing, the art essential for one’s career development.Critical or stressful to some extent as evaluating system is, it is indispensable in education area.If those who strongly oppose this practice can take into the consideration of the benefits it brings about, then evaluating and criticizing the teachers would not seem so unfair.例文3：playing a game is cheerful only when you win.Agree or disagree? It is stressed that playing a game, such as taking part in a relay race, is cheerful only when the competitors win on the ground that merely the final results can prove everything.However, others ague that this kind of attitude(mentality)is not correct, for it may make the contestants overemphasize the outcome while ignore the course.The principle argument advanced by those supporters of the notion is that plentiful people affirm that winning a game is the main purpose of attending it.Another reason is that consequence is the best evidence to demonstrate the best qualities or outstanding capabilities of the competitors involved.But according to me, the opinions mentioned above are more unreasonable than proper.The immediate reason to support my view is that in every match or game, winning is not the ultimate aim.It is the process of participation, more important than final result, that can reflect the values of the contestants.To illustrate, Waldne, a 40-year-old table tennis player, just ranked 4th in Athens Olympics games last year.But he fully demonstrated his spirit of persistence to the world through the excellent performance in the game.Besides, apart from the pleasure brought by a winning result, friendship, established between the competitors in the game, is also valuable.Not ____________________________________________________________

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only can it help the athletes underestimate the importance of the result, but also let them enjoy the game itself.Finally, the attitude of ignoring the final result can ease the nervous contestants who may play the game under pressure, the major barrier for players to fully exhibit their abilities.Practical as the notion—winning result is the fun for playing a game—is, I still insist on my view.If those approving of the attitude can take into consideration of the arguments I have proposed, it may seem unreasonable.例文4：How do people achieve happiness?

An ancient Greek pot once said, “Nothing is more indispensable than happiness in life”.In this competitive world, annoyance, worries and pressure, more often than not, disturb us.The immediate consequence is the decline of individual’s heath.The longer-range result can be the deterioration of life quality since this problem has become increasingly evident in our country.Therefore, it is high time that measures were taken to help people to achieve happiness.The first clue to feel enjoyable is to become satisfied with your present life and to make a realistic evolution of yourself.It is the main source of unhappiness if you are extremely critical about yourself and pursue an unrealistic life style beyond your means.For example, to buy a well-known brand car, your thirst for a luxurious life, can burden you with a large amount of debts, as a result of which you have to overwork exhaustedly to earn more money.Instead of enjoying the new life after owing a car, you may feel highly stressful and worn out.Secondly, we should learn to modify our attitudes on the source of happiness.It makes no difference to enjoy our lives no matter whether it rains or shines because happiness is not the absence of problems but our attitudes on how to deal with the problems, the ones that everyone must come across inevitably.Thirdly, we can enthusiastically participate in some interesting activities, such as watching films, going to operas or theatres.Only through enriching our culture life, can we enjoy our life more delightedly.To sum up, if only we can possess a content attitude, and if only we can take part in may instructive activities, I think, we can live and work happily.____________________________________________________________

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第二篇：英語(yǔ)、寫(xiě)作

Letters of Complaint)【例一】

Florence Trunkemeyer

College of Business

Ball State University

Muncie, IN 47300

November 15, 1998

General Computer Corporation

Engineering Department

P.O.Box 73219

Fort Worth, TX 76108

Dear Sir:

With reference to our order No.W 98, the 120 computer sets supplies to the above order were delivered the day before yesterday, but we regret that 20 sets were badly damaged.The packages containing the computer sets appeared to be in good condition and we accepted and signed for them without question.We unpacked the computer sets with care and can only assume that damage must be due to careless handling at some stage prior to packing.We shall be glad if you will replace all 20 sets as soon as possible.Meanwhile, we have put the damaged computer sets aside in case you need them to su（轉(zhuǎn)載自本網(wǎng)http://004km.cn，請(qǐng)保留此標(biāo)記。）pport a claim on your suppliers for compensation.Yours sincerely，(Signature)

【例二】

Sunny Company

Zhongcheng Road Jinlian Building

Shanghai

September 12, 2001

Sales manager

Elegance Clothing Company

West Street, Nanjing

Jiangsu Province

Dear Mr.Chang:

On September 10, our order for 280 womens cotton sweaters was duly received, but we regret to say that 40 cotton sweaters in white color were seriously soiled.We had the case investigated immediately, and the result shows the damage was due to improper packing, for which the suppliers are definitely responsible.Needless to say, we have suffered a great loss from this, as we cannot sell the sweaters in this condition to our customers.We ask you to conduct investigation at your end and reply to us.Sincerely yours，Sunny Lee

Manager

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1、投訴信

Directions: You live in a room in college which you share with another student.You find it very difficult to work there because your roommate always has friends visiting and has parties in the room.Write a letter to the Accommodation Officer at the college and ask for a new room next term.You would prefer a single room.Explain your reasons.Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express/air dissatisfaction/disappointment/concern regarding accommodation.I would prefer to move into a single room next semester, as I find the present sharing arrangement inconvenient.I must explain that the reason for my dissatisfaction is my roommate’s inconsiderate behavior.For one thing, his friends are constantly visiting him;for another, he regularly holds noisy parties.To solve this problem/surmount this difficulty/improve this situation/crack this hard nut, I hope to draw the attention of the authorities concerned.I am sure you will agree that the only solution for me is to move into a room of my own.Therefore, I would be grateful if you could find a single room for me, preferably not in the same building but as near to the college campus as possible.Yours sincerely, Li Ming

2、推薦信

Directions: One of your friends wants to apply for a job working with foreign teenagers.Write a letter to recommend him/her, describe his/her past experience, and explain the reasons.Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to recommend one of my best friends, Zhou Botong, for this post.With his outstanding leadership and cheerful personality, he was elected chairperson of the Student Union of Tsinghua University several times.Busy as he was, he completed his major, teenage psychology, with an outstanding school record.Upon graduation he was assigned to be a teacher in Tsinghua Middle School.What is more, he loves his job and enjoys working with children.This won him great popularity among his students.Therefore, I do not hesitate to recommend him as an ideal candidate for the post you advertised.I am sure you will make a wise decision in hiring him.Yours sincerely, Li Ming

3、感謝信

Directions: After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by Mr.Shakespeare.Write a special letter to express your thanks.Dear Mr.Shakespeare, I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude.I am referring to that unfortunate accident the other day, when I was knocked off my bike by a taxi.If it had not been for your timely assistance in giving me first aid, I fear that the consequences might have been much serious.Everyone agrees that it was your quick-witted response in that emergency that has led to this satisfactory outcome.Although nowadays people in mounting numbers talk about the need to be unselfish, we see very few people practice what they preach.If there were more people like you, this world would be a much nicer place.Yours sincerely, Li Ming

4、邀請(qǐng)信

Directions: You want to invite some friends to a party.Write an invitation letter to them individually, elaborating on the reason why such a party should be held, and what activities will be arranged for them.Dear Wangcai, I will hold a dinner party at my house on April 1, 2008 to celebrate Mr.Guo Jing’s marriage with Ms.Fujiwora.As you are a close friend of us, we would very much like you to participate in the celebration and share our joy.The occasion will start at seven o’clock in the evening, with the showing of their wedding ceremony.This will be followed by a dinner party.At around ten, we will hold a small musical soiree, at which a band will perform some works by Bach and Strauss.If you do not have any prior appointment on April 1, we look forward to the pleasure of your company.Yours sincerely, Li Ming

5、告示

Directions: The Students’ Union of your department is planning a Chinese Speaking Contest.Write an announcement which covers the following information: 1)the purpose of the contest, 2)time and place of the contest, 3)what is required of the candidates, 4)details of the judges and awards.You should write about 100 words.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use Department of Chinese Language and Literature at the end of the announcement.Chinese-Speaking Contest January 19, 2008 To improve students’ ability to speak Chinese and enrich after-class activities, the Students’ Union of Department of Chinese Language and Literature is organizing a school-wide Chinese-speaking contest to be held on Saturday next week(26 January)at the Students’ Auditorium.Those who are interested in taking part in it may sign up with the monitor of their classes before Tuesday next week.Five professors will be invited to be judges.The first six winners will be given awards.Everybody is welcome to be present at the contest.The Students’ Union Department of Chinese Language and Literature

6、交通問(wèn)題

Directions: Study the following pictures carefully and write an essay in which you should 1)describe the pictures briefly;2)interpret the social phenomenon reflected by them, and 3)give your point of view.The pictures vividly reveal that heavy traffic is becoming increasingly serious all over the world.In the first photo, there is traffic congestion on the road with numerous cars, trucks and buses.In the second picture, hundreds of people are waiting for a train.We can deduce from the pictures that the photographer is trying to attract our attention to the issue of heavy traffic.First of all, every year men and women crowd into cities in search of employment, a decent living, and the excitement and stimulation of urban life.As people in mounting numbers flood into cities, city services and facilities have been strained to a breaking point.In addition, since in a city with booming industry, land is precious and cannot be extravagantly used by traffic, traffic flows constantly rise to fill whatever scale of roads and highways are provided for them.It is imperative for us to improve this situation.For one thing, the number of private cars should be limited while more bus routes should be opened up because buses can accommodate more passengers.For another, more streets and roads should be constructed.Since neither of the suggestions can effectively solve the problem, there is an increased awareness that the two solutions may be combined with other possible solutions to produce the best effect.7、網(wǎng)絡(luò)問(wèn)題

Directions: Study the following pictures carefully and write an essay in which you should 1)describe the picture briefly;2)interpret the social phenomenon reflected by it, and 3)give your point of view.In recent years, people are developing an inseparable relationship with Internet.As is vividly depicted in the picture, it is convenient for us to click the mouse when surfing on line, either to entertain ourselves or to meet the work’s needs.Actually on-line visiting has become a routine activity in our everyday life.However, it seems rather ironic to use a chain instead of normal wire to connect with the mouse in this picture.The exaggerative and impressive portrayal has subtly revealed the duality of the relationship between man and Internet.Discussion on the duality has become very popular in newspapers or in people’s chats.On the one hand, no one denies that Internet is currently one of the most useful media in our daily life.People from all walks of life are benefiting considerably from its powerful function of information communication.But on the other hand, a great many people admit that they are too much addicted to Internet to maintain a regular and wholesome lifestyle.Cyber-living resembles the experience of looking constantly into a kaleidoscope which displays both colored patterns and illusions.Such a waste of time inevitably leads to their failure in their life and work.Accordingly, it is necessary for us to use Internet in a reasonable way and restrain from overindulgence.For one thing, college students in expanding numbers get on line every day to learn the news, to study English by registering for web courses, to exchange information through e-mails with their net friends and to download their favorite music, flash, film and pictures.Being veteran on-line shoppers, they frequently purchase books, CDs at much lower prices.For another, once indulged in the fictitious world, people can barely concentrate on real life.Consequently, many students just chat on line or play computer games immoderately everyday, skipping many essential classes.After all, Internet is invented to enrich our life, to connect you and me, and to improve the efficiency of our work rather than shackle us with a chain.8、環(huán)境問(wèn)題

Directions: Study the following pictures carefully and write an essay in which you should 1)describe the pictures briefly;2)interpret the social phenomenon reflected by them, and 3)give your point of view.The pictures symbolically illustrate pollution is becoming increasingly serious around the globe.In the first cartoon, a man is scorching the earth on a chimney.In the second one, a famous ancient Chinese poet, Wang Bo is astonished by the heavy smoke poured by chimneys into the air and dirty river polluted by a factory.We are informed that “the autumn river is the same color with the sky”.The drawer is sending a message about the significance of the need for everyone to fight against the danger of environmental pollution.There is no denying that the industry is indications of civilization, progress and development.Unfortunately, as industry develops, so will the number of factories, and the amount of industry pollutants.We are so development-oriented that we almost can sacrifice our blue sky and pure water in order to obtain a little material gain.As a consequence, it is imperative for us to take drastic actions.On the one hand, the factories should be equipped with devices which can dispose of waste gas and water so as to prevent them from polluting our planet.On the other hand, there should be an increasingly loud voice from the public for firm actions against poisonous gas sent off and unhealthy water polluted by factories.9、職業(yè)道德

Directions: Study the following pictures carefully and write an essay in which you should 1)describe the pictures briefly;2)interpret the social phenomenon reflected by them, and 3)give your point of view.The cartoons vividly depict people in expanding numbers are engaged in open and rampant cheating in business.In the first drawing, a boy has no courage to have dinner in front of delicious foods in that there may exist pesticide pollution or poisonous elements in the foods.In the second picture, the administrative office, salesmen, breeding families and forage shops are laughing at the hanging of a poisonous duck.Professional dishonesty has a very damaging effect.In the first place, since cheating in business reveals the moral deficiencies as well as the humanity weakness of those businessmen who engage in it, the dishonest practice will ultimately exerts a perverse influence on the whole society.In the second place, it not only puts honest businessmen at a competitive disadvantage, encouraging those who did not cheat to adopt similar practices later, but undermines the very foundation of professional ethics in business.It is often painful to impose sanctions in a specific case.But it is worthwhile.For one thing, to eliminate professional dishonesty thoroughly, serious forms of punishment for a willful offense—a suspension of the offender from business—should be applied.For another, since the incentives to engage in cheating in business are mainly due to a lack of adequate precautions, drastic actions should be taken to prevent one form of cheating or another

10、青少年問(wèn)題

Directions: Study the following cartoon carefully and write an essay in which you should 1)describe the cartoon briefly;2)interpret the social phenomenon reflected by it, and 3)give your point of view.The cartoon vividly illustrates a gang of youngsters, holding axes in their hands, are rushing to fight with others.The caption reads, “Juvenile delinquency is increasingly lower than normal age.”

Careful deliberation of this problem has given me several ideas as to why this should be so.To begin with, with the rising divorce rate, some children are not properly taken care of, and are easily led astray by evildoers.What is more, devoid of the nourishment of education and a school environment, the teenagers failing in various entrance examinations become full of resentment at a society which they feel has rejected them.Last but not least, inexperienced and gullible young people plunge into the illusory world of electric games, on-line chat or even pornography.Such alienation from proper social values is the slippery slope to crime.It is my view that, first of all, the whole of society should attach great importance to the sound growth of youngsters.Furthermore, proper guidance and protection of adults and schools are vital to teenagers.To sum up, if we exert every effort, the juvenile crime rate will undoubtedly be brought down and effectively controlled in a short while.

第三篇：英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作

Part V Writing(10%)

Direction: Write a Notice according to the information you have been provided.(10 points)

根據(jù)所給提示,用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一個(gè)通知。

學(xué)生會(huì)要組織一次英語(yǔ)講座。假如你是學(xué)生會(huì)干部,請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一則通知,通知時(shí)間為2012年6月12日，內(nèi)容如下:

1.2.3.4.5.講座題目:學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的重要性 演講者:北京大學(xué)懷特教授(ProfessorWhite)講座時(shí)間:6月15日, 星期五下午2:30-4:30 地點(diǎn):學(xué)校體育館 注意事項(xiàng):散會(huì)后回教室就報(bào)告內(nèi)容開(kāi)展討論,并制定出各自的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃。

Words for Reference: 體育館 stadium學(xué)生會(huì) students’ union

Part V Writing(10%)

Direction: Write a Notice according to the information you have been provided.(10 points)

假如你校學(xué)生會(huì)要舉辦一次英語(yǔ)演講比賽，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇書(shū)面通知，以便張貼到布告欄上。通知時(shí)間為2012年6月12日，通知須包括以下內(nèi)容：

1.比賽目的：提高學(xué)生的英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)水平

2.比賽時(shí)間：2012年6月15日下午4點(diǎn)

3.比賽地點(diǎn)：四樓階梯教室

4.評(píng)比辦法：由五位老師做評(píng)委其中包括Mr.Smith

5.獎(jiǎng)項(xiàng)設(shè)置：一等獎(jiǎng)1名，二等獎(jiǎng)3名，三等獎(jiǎng)5名

6.報(bào)名辦法：到各班班長(zhǎng)處報(bào)名

Words for Reference:學(xué)生會(huì) students’ union階梯教室 auditorium

比賽contest評(píng)委：judge一等獎(jiǎng) first prize

Part V Writing(10%)

Direction: Write a Letter of Appreciation according to the information you have been provided.(10 points)

假設(shè)你是李華，交換生Tracy剛剛結(jié)束在你們學(xué)校的學(xué)習(xí)生活，已經(jīng)返回英國(guó)。作為班長(zhǎng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一分感謝信，感謝她一學(xué)期以來(lái)帶給大家的美好回憶，寫(xiě)信時(shí)間為6月12日：

1.懷念與她相處的快樂(lè)時(shí)光；

2.感謝她對(duì)大家英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的幫助；

3.感謝她為班級(jí)捐贈(zèng)的英文書(shū)籍；

4.歡迎她有機(jī)會(huì)再來(lái)中國(guó)。

Words for Reference: 回憶 memory捐贈(zèng) donate

Part V Writing(10%)

Direction: Write a Letter of Appreciation according to the information you have been provided.(10 points)

以李明的名義給Mr.Foster寫(xiě)一封信。寫(xiě)信日期是2012年6月12日。

內(nèi)容：已收到他寄來(lái)的禮物（一件精美的雕塑），非常喜歡這禮物，把它們放在書(shū)架上正合適。得知他將來(lái)上海參加你的生日，十分高興。請(qǐng)他將航班告訴你。你將去機(jī)場(chǎng)接他。注意：必須包括對(duì)收件人的稱謂、寫(xiě)信日期、發(fā)信人的簽名等基本格式。

Words for reference: 雕塑：sculpture 航班：flight number 書(shū)架:book shelf

Part V Writing(10%)

Direction: Write a Letter of Application according to the information you have been provided.(10 points)

你校英語(yǔ)外籍教師Boris和Chris暑假期間準(zhǔn)備在本地開(kāi)一家西餐小店，要找若干名大學(xué)生為打工人員。下面是招聘啟事：

Wantedcollege students

Do service work and act as translators

Healthy and helpful

Small wages

Contact: bjpub@bc.com

假定你叫李華，愿意應(yīng)聘。請(qǐng)寫(xiě)封電子郵件，介紹自己，并說(shuō)明應(yīng)聘理由。

Part V Writing(10%)

Direction: Write a Letter of Application according to the information you have been provided.(10 points)

假設(shè)你是李華，得知China Daily報(bào)社招聘兼職記者，你有意應(yīng)聘，請(qǐng)按下列要求給報(bào)社寫(xiě)一封申請(qǐng)信。

1.表明自己感興趣。

2.說(shuō)明自己的優(yōu)勢(shì)：知識(shí)面、英語(yǔ)水平、人際關(guān)系、相關(guān)經(jīng)歷等。

3.希望得到回復(fù)。

Words for reference: 兼職：part-time job報(bào)社：agency記者： journalist

第四篇：英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作

1.英語(yǔ)文章段落結(jié)構(gòu)特點(diǎn)

英語(yǔ)文章段落結(jié)構(gòu)一般有三部分構(gòu)成：主題句+擴(kuò)展句+結(jié)尾句

(1)主題句：所謂主題句，就是英語(yǔ)文章段落的中心思想句。它是英語(yǔ)文章段落的靈魂，在英語(yǔ)文章段落中居于主導(dǎo)地位。我們都知道英語(yǔ)文章一般喜歡開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山，所以主題句一般位于英語(yǔ)文章段落的句首。其他句子都要圍繞它而展開(kāi)。

(2)擴(kuò)展句：所謂擴(kuò)展句就是為主題句起解釋說(shuō)明或論證的句子。通常我們寫(xiě)擴(kuò)展句所采用的方法是舉例子(for example, for instance, such as, a case in point is that---)、列數(shù)據(jù)(according to the recent study/survey,---)等。

(3)結(jié)尾句：所謂結(jié)尾句就是總結(jié)句。英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作也類似于漢語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作，最后再把自己本段落的寫(xiě)作目的陳述一下。但是在英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作中結(jié)尾句畢竟還是少數(shù)。因此我們通常看到英語(yǔ)的文章段落結(jié)構(gòu) 60%-70%都是由主題句+擴(kuò)展句構(gòu)成。

學(xué)會(huì)遣詞造句

1.遣詞：

(1)詞匯等級(jí)

所謂詞匯的等級(jí)就是，我們?cè)趯?xiě)作的過(guò)程中，如果想出一個(gè)基本詞匯來(lái)之后，能夠在這個(gè)基本詞匯的基礎(chǔ)上把它在提升一下，也就是我們一般寫(xiě)作所提倡的用“難詞”。比如，我們一提到“重要的”，大多數(shù)同學(xué)首先會(huì)想到“important”這個(gè)單詞，那么提升一下的話就可以想到它的如下同義詞：significant, vital, main, basilica, crucial, momentous etc

(2)詞匯準(zhǔn)確性

所謂詞匯的準(zhǔn)確性是指，我們?cè)谟幸粋€(gè)詞近而想到它的同義詞之后，要結(jié)合語(yǔ)境選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)挠迷~。在這里必須指明的是，并不是詞匯等級(jí)越高越好，必須還要考慮到適合于不同的語(yǔ)境。比如，眼睛大，這個(gè)“大的”形容詞，我們首先會(huì)想到big,近而想到great, large, huge, vast, titanic, enormous etc。那么是不是用后面的詞就可以了呢?或者說(shuō)用上enormous等詞更能博得閱卷人的好感呢?答案是否定的。在這里很明顯用后面的詞來(lái)修飾眼睛是不可以，只能用big，因?yàn)槲覀兟?tīng)過(guò)一首英文歌曲叫做“I am a big big girl, in a big big world.”big表示眼睛大而迷人可愛(ài)的。

造句：

(1)詞組

很多考生平時(shí)寫(xiě)作不太擅長(zhǎng)用詞組，對(duì)于他們而言最習(xí)慣的就是想到漢語(yǔ)，然后對(duì)應(yīng)漢語(yǔ)思維寫(xiě)出英語(yǔ)句子，這種寫(xiě)作只能是單詞的羅列組合，談不上什么技巧文采可言，因此，寫(xiě)出來(lái)的文章必然就是所謂平淡如流水，沒(méi)有英語(yǔ)的味道。如果我們能夠在單詞的基礎(chǔ)上，進(jìn)一步想到與之同義的詞組，那么文章就會(huì)顯得與眾不同，更具有英語(yǔ)的味道。比如上面所說(shuō)的“重要的”這個(gè)單詞，當(dāng)我們想到important的時(shí)候，如果從語(yǔ)法角度再稍加考慮一下，我們會(huì)想到“be of importance”。因?yàn)?，語(yǔ)法中規(guī)定：形容詞等于of加這個(gè)形容詞的名詞形式。如果再提升一步，我們還學(xué)過(guò)一個(gè)常用的詞組叫做“play an important role in---”。很多同學(xué)說(shuō)自己的文章湊不夠字?jǐn)?shù)或是沒(méi)有文采，那么采用詞組進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作是不是就可以解決以上問(wèn)題了呢?

(2)句式

除了采用詞組，要使文章更具英語(yǔ)的味道，我們還需要變換句式。沒(méi)有受過(guò)

正規(guī)作文訓(xùn)練的考生，通常采用的句式多為主謂賓、主系表。于是我們看到大多數(shù)的文章充斥著這樣的形式：I am a good boy, and I am a student.I study in Shandong University, and I have three years experience in Qilu Hotel.這樣流水帳式的文章顯然不能得到高分。

寫(xiě)作中閱卷人喜歡的句式有以下兩種：一是插入語(yǔ);二是倒裝。

第一，插入語(yǔ)。

所謂插入語(yǔ)，英語(yǔ)中有兩種形式。一種是有兩個(gè)逗號(hào)之間引起的成分稱之為插入語(yǔ);第二種是有兩個(gè)半破折號(hào)引起的成分稱之為插入語(yǔ)。如下所示(黑體劃線處)：

Jinan, the Spring City, is a famous tourist city.Other people may give us instrumental support—financial aid,material resources, and needed services—that reduces stress by helping us resolve and cope with our problems.插入語(yǔ)的作用主要有兩個(gè)，一個(gè)是突出主語(yǔ)，比如說(shuō)：He, who would like to play basketball, is a good student.第二個(gè)作用是解釋說(shuō)明，比如說(shuō)：People, especially students, should work hard.第二，倒裝

倒裝是我們寫(xiě)作中需要用到的。雖然略顯俗套，但是卻是很能滿足閱卷人的主觀感受的。常用的倒裝形式有以下幾種：

Only + 時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)

Only when all of us join in the efforts of eliminating cheating at all levels can we expect to have a cleaner society and a more beautiful future.Only + 介詞詞組

Only by planning his time care fully can he improve efficiency and make achievements.Only in this way can we master the writing skills step by steps.否定詞位于句首(hardly when;never;not only---,but also---;seldom)在我一生當(dāng)中很難遇到這樣的人

Seldom in my life have I met such a kind-hearted man.地點(diǎn)方位名詞位于句首

In no other place in the world can one find such enthusiasm for applying for hosting the 2008 Olympic Games.(3)修辭

無(wú)論是漢語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作還是英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作，修辭其實(shí)非常的重要。它是作者寫(xiě)作功底具體事例地展現(xiàn)。所謂修辭包括比喻、擬人、排比等等。英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作中的修辭問(wèn)題我已經(jīng)專門寫(xiě)過(guò)一篇文章(見(jiàn)《英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作幾種修辭手法》)。這里僅舉一個(gè)比喻例子，還是拿“重要的”來(lái)舉例。當(dāng)你用完詞組之后，如果你用上下面比如句子，則文章就會(huì)顯得神采飛揚(yáng)，試比較：

The bicycle is important for us.The bicycle is of importance for us.The bicycle plays an important role in our life.The bicycle, environmental friendliness vehicle, plays an important

role in our life.The bicycle is like the air, water, and sunshine and cannot be parted with a moment in our life.那么很明顯，最后一個(gè)句子是我們最終拿到考場(chǎng)上去搏擊高分的句子。第四，平時(shí)要注意積累

很多考生為了寫(xiě)好作文也作了好多工作，課下也付出了很多，包括背誦大量的文章等等，但是提筆寫(xiě)作時(shí)候，仍不見(jiàn)的有所改觀。問(wèn)題在哪里呢?高頻詞匯你就不需要了，其實(shí)就是四級(jí)的單詞...你覺(jué)得比較記住的就用用.....加油!

第五篇：英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作

英語(yǔ)作文模板

一、英語(yǔ)作文的框機(jī)架 對(duì)比觀點(diǎn)題型

（1）要求論述兩個(gè)對(duì)立的觀點(diǎn)并給出自己的看法。1.有一些人認(rèn)為……2．另一些人認(rèn)為……3．我的看法……

Nowadays，the topic of ①-----------------（主題）is becoming more and more popular.There are two sides of opinions about it.Some people say A is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------（支持A的理由一）What is more, ③-------------理由二).Moreover, ④---------------(理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一).Secondly(besides),⑥------------------（理由二）.Thirdly(finally),⑦----------------(理由三).From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------（我的觀點(diǎn)）.The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因).As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me, the former is surely a wise choice.（2）給出一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，要求考生反對(duì)這一觀點(diǎn)

Some people believe that ①----------------（觀點(diǎn)一）.For example, they think ②-----------------（舉例說(shuō)明）．And it will bring them ③---------------(為他們帶來(lái)的好處).In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point.For one thing,④-------------(我不同意該看法的理由一).For another thing, ⑤---------(反對(duì)的理由之二)． Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥-----(我對(duì)文章所討論主題的看法)． 解決方法題型

要求考生列舉出解決問(wèn)題的多種途徑

１．問(wèn)題現(xiàn)狀

２．怎樣解決(解決方案的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn))In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious.First,------------(說(shuō)明Ａ的現(xiàn)狀)．Second,----------(舉例進(jìn)一步說(shuō)明現(xiàn)狀)Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing,---------------(解決方法一).For another-------------(解決方法二).Finally,--------------(解決方法三).Personally, I believe that-------------(我的解決方法).Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because--------------(帶來(lái)的好處).說(shuō)明利弊題型

這種題型往往要求先說(shuō)明一下現(xiàn)狀，再對(duì)比事物本身的利弊，有時(shí)也會(huì)單從一個(gè)角度（利或弊）出發(fā)，最后往往要求考生表明自己的態(tài)度（或?qū)κ挛锴熬疤岢鲱A(yù)測(cè)）

１．說(shuō)明事物現(xiàn)狀 ２．事物本身的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn) ３．你對(duì)現(xiàn)狀（或前景）的看法 Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.First----------------(Ａ的優(yōu)點(diǎn)之一).Besides-------------------（Ａ的優(yōu)點(diǎn)之二）.But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that----------------(Ａ的第一個(gè)缺點(diǎn))．To make matters worse,------------------(Ａ的第二個(gè)缺點(diǎn))． Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.Therefore, I would like to---------------(我的看法)． 議論文的框架

(1)不同觀點(diǎn)列舉型（選擇型）

There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文題目.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that _ 觀點(diǎn)一________.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____.So it goes without saying that ___觀點(diǎn)一_____.People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that_觀二_____.In their point of view, on the one hand, ___原因一_______.On the other hand, ____原因二_____.Therefore, there is no doubt that ___觀點(diǎn)二______.As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __觀點(diǎn)一或二_.It is not only because ________, but also because _________.The more _______, the more ________.（2）利弊型的議論文

Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)___作文題目______.In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __題目議題_____.Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly, ___優(yōu)點(diǎn)一______.And secondly ___優(yōu)點(diǎn)二_____.Just As a popular saying goes, “every coin has two sides”,討論議題is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects.To begin with,缺 點(diǎn) 一.In addition, 缺 點(diǎn) 二.To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of 討論議題into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____討論議題___.經(jīng)典句式

（一）．．．．has both advantages and disadvantages．……既有利又有弊。1．Obviously television has both advantages and disadvantages． 2．Living in a city has both advantages and disadvantages．

3．Compared with cars，bikes have their advantages and disadvantages． 類似句式

1．Although computers bring people a lot of convenience，they have many disadvantages．

2．．．．has many advantages．For example，．．．However，just as every coin has two sides，．．．has its disadvantages ．（just as every coin has two sides也很值得背誦。）

（二）．．．．play（s）an important role ／part in．．．……在……中扮演重要角色／起重要作用。1．Computers play an important role in science and technology． 2．Computers play a more and more important role in our life．

Computers play an increasingly important role in our studies． 3．Education plays an important part in developing our mind． 類似句式

1．Advertisement plays an informative role in our daily life．

2．In the past，letters played a decisive role in long-distance communication．But now，telephone，email，fax have taken their place．

（三）I．With the development of．．．，隨著……的發(fā)展，1．With the development of our economy，many Chinese families can afford a car．

2．With the development of our economy and society，pollution is more and more serious．

3．With the rapid development of science and technology，people can get a college degree by taking online-courses at home． 類似句式

1．With the rapid increase of China's population，housing problem is becoming more and more serious．

（四）It is important for

It is important for everyone to learn English well in our rapidly developing world 類似句式：

It is important/（necessary, difficult, convenient, possible）for sb.to do sth

1、It is necessary to shake hands when you first meet someone

（五）The+比較級(jí)..., the+比較級(jí)...1，,The harder you work at it, the more progress you will make.類似句式

比較級(jí)+and+比較級(jí)（The world is getting smaller and smaller.）