第一篇:高中英語寫作中如何造句
高中英語寫作中如何造句、謀篇
普通高中《英語課程新標準》明確指出,寫作教學的目的是通過對學生激活靈感,激發(fā)興趣,整理思路,組織素材,規(guī)劃結(jié)構(gòu),遣詞造句等基本寫作技能的培養(yǎng)使他們能表達事實,觀點,情感,想象力,交流信息,培養(yǎng)規(guī)范的寫作習慣等。新課程標準規(guī)定的寫作要求更加突出了對謀篇布局,遣詞造句,情感表達的要求。所以在教學中可以從造句,謀篇兩個方面培養(yǎng)來提高學生的寫作能力。
一、造句
句子是表達一個完整意思的最小單位,所以造句能力在英文寫作中是非常重要的。好的英語句子能夠生動,形象,準確的表達內(nèi)容。所以要想寫出漂亮的書面表達,必須從寫好句子開始。要使學生能造出完整的句子,系統(tǒng)的句型教學是關(guān)鍵。簡單、直觀的句型教學,學生易于接受,也能減輕學生學習英語的焦慮心理。此外,句型教學還起著化繁為簡的作用。將句型作為一個基點,可以把語法規(guī)則、詞匯搭配、課文重點都融入其中,反復操練后,使原來各成系統(tǒng)的語法、詞匯、課文真正達到相互結(jié)合使用,讓學生達到出口成句,運用自如的功效。句型的操練方法多種多樣,可以用替換式操練、改寫式操練、聯(lián)結(jié)式操練或者漢譯英等形式。以下幾種手段是增加句子復雜性的常見方法,也是得高分的“亮點”。
(1)改變句子的開頭方式。不是一味地都是主語開頭,接著是謂語、賓語,最后再加一個狀語??梢园褷钫Z置于句首,或用分詞作狀語等。試比較:
(原文)My brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle the other day.(修正)The other day my brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle.(原文)The young man couldn’t help crying when he heard the bad news.(修正)Hearing the bad news, the young man couldn’t help crying.(2.)在整篇文章中,避免只使用一兩個句式。要靈活運用諸如強調(diào)句、主從復合句、分詞短語、倒裝句、省略句等。例如:
A.強調(diào)句
(原文)The dog has saved my little sister bravely.(修正)It is the dog that has saved my little sister bravely.B主從復合句
(原文)We had to stand there to catch the offender.(修正)What we had to do was to stand there, trying to catch the offender.C分詞短語、由with或without引導的短語
(原文)The driver escaped and didn’t stop, he left the old man lying on the
road.(修正)The driver escaped without stopping, leaving the old man lying on
the road.D倒裝句
(原文)I went to bed at 11:30.(修正)Not until 11:30 did I go to bed.E省略句(原文)While you are crossing the street, you should be
careful.(修正)While crossing the street, you should be careful.F、通過分句和合句,增強句子的連貫性和表現(xiàn)力。例如:
(原文)He stopped us an hour ago.He made us catch the next offender
(修正)He stopped us half an hour ago and made us catch the next
offender.(原文)We had a short rest.Then we began to play happily.We sang and
danced.(修正)After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing
二、謀篇
(1)注意連接詞的使用
滿分作文都有個共性就是有效地使用了語句間的連接成分,使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。
文章的連貫性和緊湊感是很重要的。因此練習正確使用連接詞是提高寫作能力的有效方法。在教學中應該注意總結(jié)表達不同關(guān)系的連接詞。
表并列補充關(guān)系的: what is more, besides, also, as well, moreover, furthermore, in addition
表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系的: but, however, yet, instead, on the other hand, on the contrary,although in spite of, unlike, nevertheless, not only…but also, on the one hand…on the
other hand, some…others
表因果關(guān)系的: since, as, because(of), for, so, thus, therefore, as a result, so that
表條件關(guān)系的: if, on the condition(that), as long as, unless, or else
表時間關(guān)系的: when, after, before, until, as soon as, later, soon, lately, recently,since, from then on, eventually, in the meantime, then, suddenly, at the same time, next,early this morning/year/century, now, after, finally, at last, all of a sudden
表特定的順序關(guān)系: above all, first of all, firstly, first, secondly, next, finally, at last表換一種方式表達: in other words, that is to say,表進行舉例說明: for instance, for example, like, such as,表陳述事實: in fact, actually, as a matter of fact, to tell you the truth
表總結(jié): on the whole, in short, all in all, in a word, in conclusion, in general.(2).聯(lián)句成段、篇的訓練:
學生掌握了一定的句型,并能較為自如地造句時,應該引導學生作進一步訓練,把句與句聯(lián)成段或篇。注意連接詞與句子的運用。以2001年高考作文為例,在信的開頭,可加上“You want to know something about what is going on in schools in China?”這句話起承上啟下的作用,使文章過渡自然;再如,用“What was worse?”引出減負前,晚上還要做作業(yè),就寢時間11:30等要點。又如,“Now I have more free time...” 可引出減負后的情況。另外,在信的結(jié)尾,可用“How about you? I’m looking forward to hearing from you.”來自然地結(jié)束這封信。
(3).使用過渡詞語:
寫好了每個句子,并不一定就是一篇好文章,因為作為一篇文章,還必須行文連貫。那么,如何使文章行文連貫呢?這就要求我們在組成篇章時,要用好過渡性詞語,過渡性詞語就像是我們組裝機械時使用的潤滑劑一樣,起著潤滑的作用。
要提高學生書面表達能力絕不是一兩堂課能解決好的問題,它需要長時間系統(tǒng)學習和訓練,但恰到好處的指導與訓練,可以起到事半功倍的效果。每個老師要根據(jù)自己學生實際情況,幫助學生運用技巧,寫出“亮”點,漂亮“作”文,堅持不懈,持之以恒,一定會有所收獲。
第二篇:高中英語寫作
一、圖表作文框架
As is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in 作文題目的議題 the table(graph/picture/pie/chart), has been on rise/ decrease(goesup/increases/drops/decreases), significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from______ in _______ to ______ in _____.From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that ________.There are at least two the good one due reasons accounting for _____.On the other hand, hand, ______.On to the fact that ______ is ________._______.to that In addition, _______ is Maybe there But are it some responsible for other reasons show ________.the is generally believed reasons are commonly above mentioned convincing.As far as I am concerned, am sure I hold the point of is both view that _______.I sound and my opinion well-grounded.二、書信作文模板
Your address
Month,Date,year
Receiver's address
Dear …,I am extremely pleased to hear from you.And I would like to write a letter to tell you that_____.…… I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience/I am looking f0rward to your replies at your earliest convenience.Best regards for your health and success.Sincerely yours,XXX
三、話題作文
Nowadays,there are more and more __ _ in __ _.It is estimated that ___.Why have there been so many ____? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is ______.Besides,_____.The third one is _____.To sum up,the main cause of it is due to _____.It is high time that something were done upon it.For one thing,_____.For another thing,_____.All these measures will certainly reduce the number of _____.四、對比觀點作文
(1)要求論述兩個對立的觀點并給出自己的看法。
1.有一些人認為。。
2.另一些人認為。。
3.我的看法。。
The topic of ①-----------------(主題)is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions about it.Some people say A is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------(支持 A 的理由一)What is more, ③-------------理由二).Moreover, ④---------------(理由 三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,-----------------(支持 B 的理由 一).Secondly(besides),⑥------------------(理由二).Thirdly(finally),⑦------------------(理由三).From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------(我的觀點).The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因).As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me, the former is surely a wise choice.(2)給出一個觀點,要求考生反對這一觀點
Some people believe that ①----------------(觀點一).For example, they think ② 1
-----------------(舉例說明).And it will bring them ③-----------------(為他們帶來的好處).In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point.For one thing,④-------------(我不同意該看法的理由一).For another thing, ⑤-----------------(反對的理由之二).Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥------------------(我對文章所討論主題的看法)
五、闡述主題題型 要求從一句話或一個主題出發(fā),按照提綱的要求進行論述.1.闡述名言或主題所蘊涵的意義.2.分析并舉例使其更充實.The good old proverb----------------(名言或諺語)reminds us that----------------(釋義).Indeed, we can learn many things form it.First of all,-----------------(理由一).For example,-------------------(舉例說明).Secondly,----------------(理由二).Another case is that---------------(舉例說明).Furthermore ,------------------(理由三).六、解決方法題型 要求考生列舉出解決問題的多種途徑 1.問題現(xiàn)狀 2.怎樣解決(解決方案的優(yōu)缺點)In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious.First,------------(說明 A 的 現(xiàn)狀).Second,---------------(舉例進一步說明現(xiàn)狀)Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing,---------------(解決方法一).For another-------------(解決方法二).Finally,--------------(解決方法三).Personally, I believe that-------------(我的解決方法).Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because--------------(帶來的好處).七、說明利弊題型 這種題型往往要求先說明一下現(xiàn)狀,再對比事物本身的利 弊,有時也會單從一個角度(利或弊)出發(fā),最后往往要求考生 表明自己的態(tài)度(或?qū)κ挛锴熬疤岢鲱A測)1.說明事物現(xiàn)狀 2.事物本身的優(yōu)缺點(或一方面)3.你對現(xiàn)狀(或前景)的看法 Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.First----------------(A 的優(yōu)點之一).Besides-------------------(A 的優(yōu)點之二).But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that----------------(A 的第一個缺點).To make matters worse,------------------(A 的第二個缺點).Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.Therefore, I would like to---------------(我的看法).(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in.Only by this way,---------------(對前景的預測).)
八、現(xiàn)象說明文 Recently _______,what amazes us most is______________,it is ture that__________.There are many reasons explaining__________________________.The main reason is____________________.what is more_________________________.thirdly_____________ _____________.As
result_______________.Considering all there,________________________.For a one thing_____________________,for another________ ____.In Conclusion____________________.一種事物或現(xiàn)象(負面意義傾向)關(guān)于 A 的話題,早已引起了廣泛的社會關(guān)注。如今在電視、報紙、日常生活的很多角落,都有越來越多的關(guān)于 A 的議論。給 A 一個精確恒定的定義并非易事,因為它的概念涉及了 科學、人性、思想、經(jīng)濟、社會、自然等廣闊的領(lǐng)域。一般而 言,我們可以這樣描述 A… A 能成為公眾關(guān)注的焦點,主要是由于它對個人、集體乃 至整個世界都有著不容忽視的不良影響。認真分析后我們可以看到,A 對社會/世界 /健康的不利有 很多。首先,從最直觀的角度來看,A 的出現(xiàn)直接損害了(這里 加入一句針對性的話,如人類的身體健康和環(huán)境的平衡)。(舉 例)。其次,從更深一層次上講,它為人類的精神文明蒙上了 一層陰影。更可怕的是,由于 A 所產(chǎn)生微小利益,卻促成了許 多可悲的人們?yōu)槠渫跛?,破壞了人類生存的法則和空間。事實上,A 的出現(xiàn)是社會發(fā)展和人類進步的產(chǎn)物,A 所帶 來的危害是人類進化過程中付出的代價。同時,A 的產(chǎn)生來源 于部分人們的自私和趨利性,他們看到的是膚淺和片面的利 益,而從未從整個全局和人類整
體的利益出發(fā)去認識和分析 它。這使得 A 始終揮之不去。對此,我奉勸他們,跳出狹小的 角落,用長遠和全局的眼光去重新審視 A。而如今,我們已深受其害,要想消除它的危害,我們必須 從根源上杜絕它的產(chǎn)生,我們每一個人都應給予 A 高度的重 視,用系統(tǒng)的和科學的方法去解決,唯有這樣,避免它帶來更 多損失,我們?nèi)祟惽斑M的腳步才會更加平穩(wěn),更加歡快的邁向 輝煌的明天。One object or phenomenon(negative significance inclination.)A has attracted extensive attention of the society.Nowadays, increasingly more argumentations about A can be found in TV programs, newspapers, ugogo and marry aspects of our everyday life.Since its concept covers vast fields, such as science, humanity, ideology, economy, society and nature, A is difficult to be defined, precisely and fixedly.Generally speaking ,we can describe A as follows:…….A’s status as the focus of public concern mainly results from its in negligible but harmful influence on individuals, collective, and even the whole world.It seems to have a strange power to drive some individuals or organizations to act wrongly.The essence of these wrong actions is:(1)to gain personal, short-term and partial individual interest at the expense of damaging others’ long-term and overall interest;(2)to adopt improper means to win more rewards with less input.Situating under the shadow of A, individuals /organizations and violate natural law merely to obtain temporary, or even illusory interests.However, the result may turn out to be loss of really important and valuable resource or ability.We must keep highly alert of the problems evoked by A, because once the harmful influence accumulates to a certain degree and then spread, it will surely threaten the development of the whole society.Though with various reasons and forms, from the perspective of the essence, the problems brought by A originates from the fundamental principle of human ideology and material production.Thus, we should seek the solutions through setting foot on this principle.Due to the depth and width of A’s harmful influence, we should draft our solutiogogotematically on the basis of deep analysis of A problem.We must acquire our power from technology, management, law and culture terrorm, effectively elimin.九、議論文的框架
(1)不同觀點列舉型(選擇型)There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作 文題目_____.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that _ 觀點一________.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____.So it goes without saying that ___觀點一_____.People, this matter.however, Some differ in their opinions on people hold the idea that ___觀點二 _______.In their point of view, on the one hand,___原因一 _______.On the other hand, ____原因二_____.Therefore, there is no doubt that ___觀點二______.firmly support It the As far as I am concerned, I view that __觀點一或二______.is not only because ________, but also because _________.The more _______, the more ________.(2)利弊型的議論文 Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)___作文題目______.In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __題目議題_____.Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly, ___優(yōu)點一______.And secondly ___優(yōu)點二_____.Just As a popular saying goes, “every coin has two sides”, __討論議題______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects.To begin with, ___缺點一 ______.In addition, ____缺點二______.To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __ 討論議題____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____討論議題
___.(3)答題性議論文 Currently, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)__作文題目_______.It is really an important concern to every one of us.As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem.First of all, __途徑一______.In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving problem is ___途徑二_____.Above all, to solve the problem of ___作文題目______, we should find a number of various ways.But as far as I am concerned, I would prefer to solve the problem in this way, that is to say, ____方法_____.(4)諺語警句性議論文 It is well know to us that the proverb: “ ___諺語_______” has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study.It means ____諺語的含義_______.The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows.(also theoretically)A case in point is ___例子一______.Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb ____諺語_____.With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: ____諺語 _____.The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job..ate the shadow of A, and ensures ourselves a bright future.十、實用性寫作(申請信)
Your address(自己的地址,由小到大)Month, Date, year(書信時間)Receiver's address(收信人地址,由小到大)Dear..., I am extremely pleased to hear from you./ to see your advertisement for the position in....And I would like to write a letter to tell you that.../ I am confident that I am suitable for the kind of the job you are advertising..../ I feel I am competent to meet the requirements you have listed.On the one hand,....On the other hand,....I am enclosing my resume for your kind consideration and reference.I shall be much obliged if you will offer me a precious opportunity to an interview.I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience/ I am looking forward to your replies at your earliest convenience.Best regards for your health and success.Sincerely yours,
第三篇:高中英語寫作
高中英語寫作模板
模板一:直陳觀點,以例佐證
觀點:More haste, less speed.Before moving to the next step, one needs a practical consideration on what he has already achieved.(欲速則不達)preparation.in one day, it takes one years’ practice to have a good command of the language.If we do not learn from spelling correct words and writing acceptable sentences, we are never able to write a good composition.And without practicing oral English a lot, we can never speak English fluently.If we don’t read and listen a lot and do a lot of efficient exercises, we can not pass English tests.In short, we should have a good foundation if we want to make great achievements in our studies and work or in other things as well.觀點:欲速則不達。移動到下一個步驟之前,需要一個實際的考慮他已經(jīng)實現(xiàn)了欲速則不達。
從我的觀點來看,我們應做的每一步一步來。人們經(jīng)常失敗沒有充分的準備。
比如把英語學習。正如羅馬不是一天造成的,它需要一個多年的實踐,有良好的語言。如果我們不學習拼寫正確的單詞和句子寫接受,我們將無法再寫一篇好的文章。練習口語,而很多,我們永遠不能流利地說英語。如果我們不讀,聽了不少,但做大量的練習,我們不能通過英語測試。
簡而言之,我們應該有一個好的基礎,如果我們想讓偉大的成就在我們的學習和工作,或者在其他事情。
模板二:呈現(xiàn)看法,分說原由
觀點:Honesty is the best policy.(誠實為上)
It is true that most of us value honesty highly.Personally I agree that honesty is the best policy.As we know, if one is honest, other people will deeply respect him or her, and are willing to make friends with him or her.In addition, being honest can make people’s life easier and more harmonious(和諧的).There are a lot of examples to support the argument.consumers will not be afraid of being overcharged if dealers are Singapore is a trustworthy society and has a very low criminal rate.There is no doubt that being honest is of benefit to both the state and the individual.We should have the spirit of honesty.這是真的,我們當中的大多數(shù)人的價值誠實。就我個人而言,我認為誠實是上策。
正如我們所知道的,如果一個人誠實,別人會非常尊重他或她,并愿意廣交朋友,與他或她。此外,誠實,可以使人們的生活更輕松、更和諧(和諧的)。有很多例子來支持這個論點。舉例來說,消費者不會害怕被索要如果經(jīng)銷商是誠實的。再比如,新加坡是一個值得信賴的社會,有一個很低的犯罪率。
毫無疑問,誠信雙贏的國家和個人。我們應該本著誠信。
模板三:先抑后揚,肯定觀點
現(xiàn)象:Should the students have the sense of competition?(是否應該培養(yǎng)學生的競爭意識)will do harm to the relationship between people.Besides, don’t want to try hard to succeed so that they can find an excuse of their failure.From my point of view, we should try to encourage students to have the sense of competition because there exists great competition in our modern world.Having the sense of it will certainly be important for students to develop after they leave school.However, we should guide our students to have a correct sense of it, getting them to know that they only have opponents but not enemies.We should also teach our students not to be afraid of failure because everyone may meet it more or less.Instead, try to face to and overcome it.有兩種相反的意見的競爭。有些人認為小,相信它會傷害到人與人之間的關(guān)系。除此之外,一些人不想努力成功,以便他們能找到他們的失敗的借口。
從我的觀點來看,我們應該鼓勵學生有強烈的競爭,因為存在著巨大的競爭在現(xiàn)代世界。在這個意義上,這肯定會是重要的,因為學生離開學校后。
然而,我們應該引導學生有一個正確的感覺,讓他們知道他們的對手,但不是敵人只。我們也應該教我們的學生不要害怕失敗,因為大家都可以見到這或多或少。相反,試著去面對和克服它。
模板四:先揚后抑,否定觀點
現(xiàn)象:Can “l(fā)ucky numbers” bring good luck?(吉祥數(shù)字能帶來好運嗎?)lucky numbers that they even spend a lot of money to buy lucky numbers.Many other people hold different ideas about lucky numbers.numbers at all.Numbers and luck are two different things.So far as I’m concerned, I agree with the latter.Obviously, such belief is only a kind of superstition.Perhaps it holds true for some cases, but often it does not.Numbers can never bring good luck to a person at all and our luck is in our own hands.Therefore, everyone can have good luck only if he tries his best.Let’s always remember
在一些人眼里,幸運數(shù)字能給他們帶來好運。他們認為這樣高的幸運數(shù)字,他們甚至花很多錢去買幸運數(shù)字。
很多人持有不同看法幸運數(shù)字。他們認為沒有幸運數(shù)字。編號和運氣是兩回事。到目前為止我個人而言,我贊同后者。顯然,這種信仰只是一種迷信。也許對有些案例,但是經(jīng)常,它不適合你。數(shù)字都無法帶來好運的人,我們的運氣是掌握在我們自己手里。
因此,每個人都能有好的運氣,只有當他試著自己的最佳狀態(tài)。讓我們永遠記住”的機會只有做好準備”和“一分耕耘,一分收獲。”
模板五:確定主題,分步解說
主題:Reduce waste on campus(減少校園浪費)It is certain that the problem of waste is becoming more and more serious on campus and it’s time for us to reduce it.For one reason, we have already wasted a lot of precious resources such as water and electricity.For another, our waste adds our parents and the society a burden.electricity as much as possible.we should not spend too much money.we should stop wasting water when we bath, or clean faces, or wash clothes or dishes.教師是確信無疑的廢物問題變得越來越嚴重的校園和它的時候,我們必須把價錢降低。因為某種原因,我們已經(jīng)浪費很多寶貴的資源,例如水和電力。對另一些人來說,我們的浪
費我們的父母和社會增加負擔。然而,有些人還不知道怎樣才能降低校園浪費。這里有一些建議。
首先,我們應該關(guān)燈,當我們離開宿舍或教室,以便節(jié)省電能當做很多當做可能的。其次,我們不應該花太多錢。第三,我們應該停止浪費水,當我們洗澡,或干凈的面孔,或洗衣服或盤子。
事實上,有不同的解決方法,根據(jù)不同的情況。因此,我堅信,我們能夠減少浪費在校園。
模板六:(名諺開篇,烘托觀點)
觀點:Failure is the mother of success.(失敗是成功之母)
People often say,the painter, the doctor and the scientist have failed time and again before they succeed in the end.helpful experiences from them and learn little by little what is the right way to our goal.It seems that failures are the steps in the mountain paths leading up to the peak where success lies.You have to climb the steps in order to reach the top.We should all take a positive attitude to failures and keep on working hard so as to meet with the final success in our studies and careers.人們常說:“失敗是成功之母?!睅缀鯖]有任何成功贏得了沒有失敗。一個畫家可以把許多失敗才使圖紙滿意。醫(yī)生可能會嘗試了很多次才找到有效的治療一種怪病。科學家可能使數(shù)以百計的實驗之前,他得到了他所需要的數(shù)據(jù)。換句話說,畫家,醫(yī)生和科學家都失敗了一次又一次地之前,他們成功。
從上面的例子中,我們可以得出這樣的結(jié)論:失敗是很常見的。我們可以得到一些有益的經(jīng)驗,學一點一點什么是合適的方式,是我們的目標。看來,失敗是一步一步的山路上山頂那里成功的謊言。你必須爬的步驟以達到頂峰。
我們都應該采取積極的態(tài)度去失敗,繼續(xù)努力,以滿足最終成功的在學習和職業(yè)。模板七:實證調(diào)研,數(shù)據(jù)為先
現(xiàn)象:Cell phones in China(手機在中國)
number of cell phones was 85,260,000;in 2002, the number was 180,000,000;in 2003, 206,600,000;in 2004, 269,000,000;while in 2005, the number went up to 315,000,000.From these numbers, we can see the increasing use of cell phones.There are many reasons for this development.Firstly, cell phones are very convenient to be carried everywhere.Secondly, cell phones can make us get news, play games, listen to music and chat through sending short messages.Thirdly, the drop of price, including the phone price and the communication price, has made it possible for an average person to buy one and make more use of it.作為一項調(diào)查顯示,手機在中國的普及程度越來越高。在2001年,這個數(shù)字手機是85,260,000;2002年,這個數(shù)字是18萬元;2003年,206,600,000;2004年,26萬9千人、在2005年,這個數(shù)字上升到31.5萬只。從這些數(shù)字,我們可以看到越來越多的手機。
這其中有很多理由發(fā)展。首先,手機是非常方便攜帶。其次,手機能使我們得到消息,玩游戲,聽音樂,發(fā)短信聊天。第三,價格下跌的價格,包括電話溝通的價格,已使得平均每人買一個,讓更多的使用它。
模板八: 正反觀點,各圓己見
話題:Wealth or health, which is the more important?(金錢與健康哪一個更重要?)Some think that wealth means everything.In their eyes, they can have everything done with enough money.Some of them take risky chances to make money only with the result that they get neither wealth nor health.Actually, health is more important than wealth.Health is the foundation of one’s success If one gets sick, it is nearly impossible for him to do his work well.On the other hand, a person suffering from illness, in fact, cannot get any wealth: has to spend a lot of money on the medical treatment;enjoy his wealth.Health is the source of energy and it’s the starting point where everything begins.Therefore, you should exercise every day with proper diet, forming good living habits and trying to avoid any minor disease.一些人認為財富意味著一切。在他們眼中,他們就可以得到每件事,有足夠的錢。他們中的一些人采取冒險的機會賺錢以致他們既不衛(wèi)生。財富,實際上,健康比財富更重要。健康的身體是事業(yè)成功的基礎。如果一個生病,這幾乎是不可能的,他要做自己的工作。另一方面,一個身患疾病,事實上,找不到任何的財富:首先,我來治好他的病,他不得不花大量的錢在醫(yī)療;可是對另一位媽媽來說,如果他病了,所以他不能真正享受他的財富。
所以,如果你想變得富有,保持身體健康。健康是能量的來源和它的出發(fā)點都開始了。因此,你應該每天鍛煉身體以適當?shù)娘嬍?形成良好的生活習慣,盡量避免任何次要的疾病。
附:常用英語諺語:
1.Time flies.--------------時間過得真快。
2.Kill two birds with one stone.--------------一舉兩得。
3.Where there is a will, there is a way.--------------世上無難事,只怕有心人。
4.Don’t put the cart before the horse.--------------不要本末倒置。
5.The early bird catches the worm.--------------早起的鳥兒有蟲吃。
6.Nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind to it.--------------世上無難事,只怕有心人。
7.A fox may grow gray, but never good.--------------江山易改,本性難移。
8.You cannot eat your cake and have it.--------------魚與熊掌,不可得兼。
第四篇:高中英語寫作
高中英語寫作
作文能力不強一直是同學們比較普遍的問題。其實歸結(jié)起來,一共有四類癥狀,深入地剖析這些癥狀,就能找到作文偏科的根本原因,同時寫作時適當?shù)靥子靡恍┠0?,給寫作能力不好的同學好好進補。癥狀一文體格式混亂
【表現(xiàn)】 讀了作文要求之后,提筆就寫——明明要求寫一封表達建議的書信,結(jié)果寫成了議論文;或者明明要求寫說明文,偏偏寫成了記敘文;或者總算文體沒有弄錯,結(jié)果寫通知誤用日記的格式,寫書信又誤用通知的格式。
【癥結(jié)】平時缺乏作文文體方面的針對性訓練,對英語作文的幾種常用文體及其相應的寫作格式不熟悉,拿到寫作材料習慣性地對寫作要求一掃而過,提筆就寫自己最熟悉的格式。
【突破之道】明確文體和對應格式
常用文體有記敘文、說明文、議論文還有應用文等。近幾年的高考書面表達多以應用文為主,提供的形式多以圖畫、提綱、表格出現(xiàn),書寫的格式大都是書信、通知。所以,同學們應該掌握書信的稱呼、開頭、正文、結(jié)尾、簽名等方面,另外,口頭通知和書面通知的不同要清楚??傊瑢W們應根據(jù)寫作提示分析材料,明確寫作文體和其相應的格式。
癥狀二 時態(tài)人稱混亂
【表現(xiàn)】 作文時,時態(tài)和人稱運用混亂——時態(tài)方面,要么整篇文章都是一種時態(tài)(以一般現(xiàn)在時、一般過去時居多),要么就是一段甚至一句話中出現(xiàn)三種以上的時態(tài);人稱方面,要么文章開頭是第一人稱,寫到文中甚至文末就成了第二、第三人稱,要么前面是單數(shù)人稱,寫著寫著就變成復數(shù)人稱。
【癥結(jié)】 英語基礎知識不牢固,對英語中時態(tài)和人稱所代表的含義及其運用掌握不足,因此無法根據(jù)文體來選擇正確的時態(tài)和人稱而濫用或者混用。
【突破之道】 明確時態(tài)和人稱
同學們要根據(jù)選好的文體和寫作內(nèi)容確定時態(tài)和人稱。一般來說,記人敘事多用一般過去時;發(fā)布通知多用一般將來時和祈使句式;發(fā)表議論大多用帶有情態(tài)動詞的一般現(xiàn)在時;人物介紹、現(xiàn)狀說明常用一般現(xiàn)在時和現(xiàn)在完成時。定準時態(tài)后接下來一定要知道各時態(tài)的構(gòu)成及用法要點,但要記住,寫作時時態(tài)并不唯一,要依據(jù)表達內(nèi)容而選定正確的時態(tài)。人稱方面則要注意前后統(tǒng)一,避免出現(xiàn)前后人稱屬性或者單復數(shù)不一致的情況。
癥狀三 詞匯運用混亂
【表現(xiàn)】 經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)亂用詞語的現(xiàn)象,同時使用一些較難的、較長的、用法不熟悉的單詞,或者明明用一些簡單的詞匯就能夠很清楚地表達意思,偏偏要選擇一些難度較大的、不常用的表達方式。
【癥結(jié)】 寫作時對文章的脈絡把握不足就匆匆下筆,對其中所需的詞匯和常用表達方式理解記憶不牢固。平時練習時,習慣性地忽略一些形式簡單但用途較廣泛的基本詞匯和表達方式,喜歡選擇復雜的詞匯和表達方式。
【突破之道】確定所需主要詞匯和所用表達結(jié)構(gòu)
應該根據(jù)文章體裁和內(nèi)容逐個確定寫作要點。對于圖畫和圖表可在草稿紙上用中文列出并理清要點,然后選詞造句,要注意語言的準確得當,力求用最簡潔的話表達準確的意思。同時,平時寫作要多進行發(fā)散思維,例如,是用verysorry還是terriblysorry,是surprised還astonished。同學們應學會盡可能避免使用較高級的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯,如非謂語動詞、復合句等,以免造成過失性失分.癥狀四語序句序混亂
【表現(xiàn)】 作文的語序、句序混亂,通常這里寫一點,跳過去又另起一點,這樣造成要么文章洋洋灑灑一大篇卻全是廢話,沒有中心和重點,什么都沒有表達清楚;要么通篇沒有適當?shù)倪^渡詞、句,整篇文章一“逗”到底,密密麻麻讓人找不著北。
【癥結(jié)】平時練習時不注意表達的連貫性,想到哪里就寫到哪里,寫作之前沒有列提綱的習慣,不去深入
思索怎樣表達才能達到最好的效果,從而造成整篇文章邏輯思維混亂,層次不清晰。
【突破之道】 整理成篇 行文連貫
同學們應該根據(jù)寫作內(nèi)容列好簡要提綱,分清文章的層次,確定詳略,寫好的單句要重新排列組合起來,使之前后連貫成一篇完整的文章。同時選用恰當?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞或句子使文章過渡自然,行文流暢。另外,該分段時要分段,這樣文章才能中心突出,一目了然,整篇作文才能如行云流水般整齊劃一
高中英語作文萬用模板-圖標作文
As is shown by the figure/percentage in the table/picture,____ has been on rise/ decrease, significantly/dramatically rising/decreasing from ____ in _____ to _____ in _____.From the sharp rise/decline in the chart, it goes without saying that _____.There are at least two good reasons accounting for _____.In one hand, ____.In the other hand, _____ is due to the fact that ______.In addition, ______ is responsible for _____.Maybe there are some other reasons to show ______.But itis generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______.I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.高中英語作文萬用模板-書信作文模板
Your address
Month, Date, year
Receiver's address
Dear...,I am extremely pleased to hear from you.And I would like to write a letter to tell you that_____.??
I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience/I am looking f0rward to your replies at your earliest convenience.Best regards for your health and success.Sincerely yours,高中英語作文萬用模板-話題作文
Nowadays, there are more and more __ _ in __ _.It is estimated that ___.Why have there been so many ____? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is ______.Besides,_____.The third one is _____.To sum up, the main cause of it is due to _____.It is high time that something were done upon it.For one thing,_____.For another thing, _____.All these measures will certainly reduce the number of _____.高中英語作文萬用模板-對比觀點作文
_____ is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions of it.Some people say ____ is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of ____.What is more,_____。Moreover,______.While others think that _____ is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,_____.Secondly(besides),______.Thirdly(finally),_____.From my point of view, I think _____.The reason is that _____.As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me, the former is surely a wise choice.最近,你校同學正在參加某英文報組織的一場討論。討論的主題是:公園要不要收門票?請你根據(jù)下表所提供的信息,客觀地介紹討論情況。
60%的同學認為40%的同學認為
1.不應該收門票1.應收門票,但票價不要太高
2公園是公眾休閑的地方2.支付園林工人工資
3如收門票,需建大門、圍墻,會影響城市形象3.購新花木
第五篇:高中英語寫作
高中英語寫作模板
模板一:直陳觀點,以例佐證
觀點:More haste, less speed.Before moving to the next step, one needs a practical consideration on what he has already achieved.(欲速則不達)preparation..Just as Rome was not built in one day, it takes one years’ practice to have a good command of the language.If we do not learn from spelling correct words and writing acceptable sentences, we are never able to write a good composition.And without practicing oral English a lot, we can never speak English fluently.If we don’t read and listen a lot and do a lot of efficient exercises, we can not pass English tests.studies and work or in other things as well.模板二:呈現(xiàn)看法,分說原由
觀點:Honesty is the best policy.(誠實為上)
As we know, if one is honest, other people will deeply respect him or her, and are willing to make friends with him or her.In addition, being honest can make people’s life easier and more harmonious(和諧的).There are a lot of examples to support the argument.consumers will not be afraid of being overcharged if dealers are Singapore is a trustworthy society and has a very low criminal rate.We should have the spirit of honesty.模板三:先抑后揚,肯定觀點
現(xiàn)象:Should the students have the sense of competition?(是否應該培養(yǎng)學生的競爭意識)
don’t want to try hard to succeed so that they can find an excuse of their failure.From my point of view, we should try to encourage students to have the sense of competition because there exists great competition in our modern world.Having the sense of it will certainly be important for students to develop after they leave school.of failure because everyone may meet it more or less.Instead, try to face to and overcome it.模板四:先揚后抑,否定觀點
現(xiàn)象:Can “l(fā)ucky numbers” bring good luck?(吉祥數(shù)字能帶來好運嗎?)lucky numbers that they even spend a lot of money to buy lucky numbers.Obviously, such belief is only a kind of superstition.Perhaps it holds true for some cases, but often it does not.Numbers can never bring good luck to a person at all and our luck is in our own hands.Therefore, everyone can have good luck only if he tries his best.Let’s always remember
模板五:確定主題,分步解說
主題:Reduce waste on campus(減少校園浪費)
water and electricity.our waste adds our parents and the society a burden.electricity as much as possible.we should not spend too much money.we
should stop wasting water when we bath, or clean faces, or wash clothes or dishes.模板六:(名諺開篇,烘托觀點)
觀點:Failure is the mother of success.(失敗是成功之母)
People often say,There is hardly any success won without the painter, the doctor and the scientist have failed time and again before they succeed in the end.helpful experiences from them and learn little by little what is the right way to our goal.It seems that failures are the steps in the mountain paths leading up to the peak where success lies.You have to climb the steps in order to reach the top.We should all take a positive attitude to failures and keep on working hard so as to meet with the final success in our studies and careers.模板七:實證調(diào)研,數(shù)據(jù)為先
現(xiàn)象:Cell phones in China(手機在中國)number of cell phones was 85,260,000;in 2002, the number was 180,000,000;in 2003, 206,600,000;in 2004, 269,000,000;while in 2005, the number went up to 315,000,000.From these numbers, we can see the increasing use of cell phones.communication price, has made it possible for an average person to buy one and make more use of it.模板八: 正反觀點,各圓己見
話題:Wealth or health, which is the more important?(金錢與健康哪一個更重要?)enough money.Some of them take risky chances to make money only with the result that they get neither wealth nor health.Health is the foundation of one’s success If one gets sick, it is nearly impossible for him to do his work well.person enjoy his wealth.Health is the source of energy and it’s the starting point where everything begins.Therefore, you should exercise every day with proper diet, forming good living habits and trying to avoid any minor disease.附:常用英語諺語:
1.Time flies.2.Kill two birds with one stone.3.Where there is a will, there is a way.4.Don’t put the cart before the horse.5.The early bird catches the worm.6.Nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind to it.7.A fox may grow gray, but never good.8.You cannot eat your cake and have it.