第一篇：中國學生怎樣寫申請函才能贏得美國教授的心？附申請函樣稿簡評和美國大學教授的評語(值得思考)

Dear Prof.Das,I am applying to KSU(amongst other places)for a Ph.D., and I am very interested in your research areas.I would like to explore the possibility of doing my research with you, with financial support.（這個自薦信開門見三，沒有一句廢話，沒有一個廢字；寫這封信的目的，理由，希望得到的幫組，中國學生寫的東西總是拐彎抹角，不知所云。、、、、下面需要對你申請進行解釋，）One possible area that would interest me a lot is in applying Tikhonov regularization to your problem in computational neuroscience, since I

understand that neural data can be very noisy, and yet sparse.Alternately, I am also interested in applying evolutionary algorithms to your genetic neural network parameter estimation.（申請函始終邏輯相通，上下文關系緊密：One possible area。。Alternately。。。your problem in computational neuroscience。。。your genetic neural network parameter estimation.另外作者很清楚他說話的對象是誰）

One of my other interests is in parallel processing.Are you considering

parallel implementations for any of your optimization/estimation algorithms?（中國學生在寫申請函件時候最不喜歡使用的修辭，反問是一個學生帶著思考來探求問題，是一個學生睿智的表現(xiàn)，而且這個反問和前面的Parallel processing緊密）

Considering that the projects that you list in your web site would probably be very computationally intensive, that may be a worthwhile strategy to pursue.I presented a paper entitled “Hybrid Gradient Descent Based Training ofProbabilistic Recurrent Networks” in the International Conference on Neural Networks and Image Processing, Bangalore, last year.It is a reviewed publication.（重要的研究成果，話不在多，在于精，精、精）

If you have available funds, and are interested in my application pleaselet me know soon.（直截了當管人家要錢，美國人不會覺得你丟人的，你左拐右拐還是管人家要錢，會引起反感，但是他用了一個條件句，使得語氣變得柔和，更讓人可信）Best Regards

以下是美國大學教授對這封信的評論

My comments: This is a straightforward letter from someone with a

genuine interest in my area.He is an exceptional candidate.He has evinced a keen desire to learn, and already has considerable mastery over my area of research.If I have any funding available, I would definitely try my very BEST to get this person.This person may have an MS degree, while many applicants have only a BS degree.

第二篇：中國學生怎樣寫申請函才能贏得美國教授的心

中國學生怎樣寫申請函才能贏得美國教授的心？附申請函樣稿簡評和美國大學教授的評語（值得思考）

Dear Prof.Das，I am applying to KSU(amongst other places)for a Ph.D., and I am very interested in your research areas.I would like to explore the possibility of doing my research with you, with financial support.（這個自薦信開門見三，沒有一句廢話，沒有一個廢字；寫這封信的目的，理由，希望得到的幫組，中國學生寫的東西總是拐彎抹角，不知所云。、、、、下面需要對你申請進行解釋，）

One possible area that would interest me a lot is in applying Tikhonov regularization to your problem in computational neuroscience, since I understand that neural data can be very noisy, and yet sparse.Alternately, I am also interested in applying evolutionary algorithms to your genetic neural network parameter estimation.（申請函始終邏輯相通，上下文關系緊密：One possible area。。Alternately。。。your problem in computational neuroscience。。。your genetic neural network parameter estimation.另外作者很清楚他說話的對象是誰）

One of my other interests is in parallel processing.Are you considering parallel implementations for any of your optimization/estimation algorithms?（中國學生在寫申請函件時候最不喜歡使用的修辭，反問是一個學生帶著思考來探求問題，是一個學生睿智的表現(xiàn)，而且這個反問和前面的Parallel processing緊密）Considering that the projects that you list in your web site would probably be very computationally intensive, that may be a worthwhile strategy to pursue.I presented a paper entitled “Hybrid Gradient Descent Based Training of Probabilistic Recurrent Networks” in the International Conference on Neural Networks and Image Processing, Bangalore, last year.It is a reviewed publication.（重要的研究成果，話不在多，在于精，精、精）

If you have available funds, and are interested in my application please let me know soon.（直截了當管人家要錢，美國人不會覺得你丟人的，你左拐右拐還是管人家要錢，會引起反感，但是他用了一個條件句，使得語氣變得柔和，更讓人可信）

Best Regards

以下是美國大學教授對這封信的評論

My comments: This is a straightforward letter from someone with a genuine interest in my area.He is an exceptional candidate.He has evinced a keen desire to learn, and already has considerable mastery over my area of research.If I have any funding available, I would definitely try my very BEST to get this person.This person may have an MS degree, while many applicants have only a BS degree.

第三篇：怎樣寫申請函才能贏得美國教授的心[小編推薦]

怎樣寫申請函才能贏得美國教授的心

創(chuàng)建時間：2010年9月23日(星期四)

怎樣寫申請函才能贏得美國教授的心

Dear Prof.Das,I am applying to KSU(amongst other places)for a Ph.D., and I am very interested in your research areas.I would like to explore the possibility of doing my research with you, with financial support.（這個自薦信開門見三，沒有一句廢話，沒有一個廢字；寫這封信的目的，理由，希望得到的幫組，中國學生寫的東西總是拐彎抹角，不知所云。、、、、下面需要對你申請進行解釋，）

One possible area that would interest me a lot is in applying Tikhonov regularization to your problem in computational neuroscience, since I

understand that neural data can be very noisy, and yet sparse.Alternately, I am also interested in applying evolutionary algorithms to your genetic neural network parameter estimation.（申請函始終邏輯相通，上下文關系緊密：One possible area。。Alternately。。。your problem in computational neuroscience。。。your genetic neural network parameter estimation.另外作者很清楚他說話的對象是誰）

One of my other interests is in parallel processing.Are you considering parallel implementations for any of your optimization/estimation algorithms?（中國學生在寫申請函件時候最不喜歡使用的修辭，反問是一個學生帶著思考來探求問題，是一個學生睿智的表現(xiàn)，而且這個反問和前面的Parallel processing緊密）

Considering that the projects that you list in your web site would probably be very computationally intensive, that may be a worthwhile strategy to pursue.I presented a paper entitled “Hybrid Gradient Descent Based Training ofProbabilistic Recurrent Networks” in the International Conference on Neural Networks and Image Processing, Bangalore, last year.It is a reviewed publication.（重要的研究成果，話不在多，在于精，精、精）

If you have available funds, and are interested in my application pleaselet me know soon.（直截了當管人家要錢，美國人不會覺得你丟人的，你左拐右拐還是管人家要錢，會引起反感，但是他用了一個條件句，使得語氣變得柔和，更讓人可信）

Best Regards

以下是美國大學教授對這封信的評論

My comments: This is a straightforward letter from someone with a

genuine interest in my area.He is an exceptional candidate.He has evinced a keen desire to learn, and already has considerable mastery over my area of research.If I have any funding available, I would definitely try my very BEST to get this person.This person may have an MS degree, while many applicants have only a BS degree.本主題由 kellyzqc 于 2010-6-8 03:02 設置高亮