第一篇:2014考研英語(yǔ)作文預(yù)測(cè)之低碳與環(huán)保
2014考研英語(yǔ)作文預(yù)測(cè)之低碳與環(huán)保!
【參考范文】
As is vividly depicted by the drawing above, a boy is sleeping soundly and comfortably in the sofa, with the television on, when his mother comes and turns off the television for him, blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again。
This phenomenon can easily be found anywhere in our daily life.Many people are used to doingeverything with the television on, not actually watching it at all.Such a habit can cause waste of much electricity and energy, and result in the emission of carbon.This deviates from the popular concept of “l(fā)ow carbon life” — to reduce the emission of carbon, especially carbon dioxide, to protect our environment and realize sustainable development.According to statistics, if we can decrease the time for having the television on by one hour each day, we can deduce the amount of carbon emission by 4.71 kilogram each month。
To serve as responsible stewards of the planet, we must promote and popularize a low carbon life among the public from every detail in our daily life.We must change the past practice of sacrificing long-term environmental health for short-term rapid economic development, and shift to developing green economy, circular economy and low carbon economy.All these effective measures can help us to reach harmony between development of the society and health of the nature。
【寫作點(diǎn)撥】
圖片中一個(gè)小男孩,早已進(jìn)入甜蜜的夢(mèng)鄉(xiāng),電視卻依然在播放,這時(shí)候媽媽走過(guò)來(lái)幫他關(guān)了電視,還責(zé)備他為什么總是忘記關(guān)電視。顯然,直觀看來(lái),這幅圖是在告訴我們要節(jié)約用電。但是,我們?nèi)绻麖母暧^,更深層次的角度去思考,這幅圖正是在告訴我們一個(gè)流行的生活理念:低碳生活。所以本文旨在倡導(dǎo)一種低碳環(huán)保的生活方式。因此本文的內(nèi)容和結(jié)構(gòu)可如下:
第一段:描述圖畫;第二段:列舉現(xiàn)象,分析影響;第三段:建議措施,展望未來(lái)
第二篇:作文系列之低碳環(huán)保(寫寫幫推薦)
金山區(qū)模擬考試作文
I want to be an environment protector What are the problems of our environment? Why do you want to be an environment protector? What will you do to protect the environment? There is no doubt that global warming has become one of the biggest problems we have for now.So it’s very important for us to protect our environment.As middle school students, what can we do? First of all, try to take bicycles and public transportation to school instead of cars because it will make less CO2.It can not only be good for our health, but also make it possible for us to get closer to nature.Then, it’s necessary to pick up trash and put them into the dustbin.Planting more trees can also help a lot.However, we should never forget to turn off the lights when we leave the classroom.Besides, why not reuse water and paper to live a low-carbon life?
I think it’s everyone’s duty to help our Earth.And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment.So don’t put it off!Let’s do what we can to protect our home.I believe we will make our world more and more beautiful.低碳生活
1.低碳生活受到人們的普遍歡迎 2.低碳生活方式非常有好處 3.我們應(yīng)該如何去做
Low-carbon life As is known to us all,our environment is getting worse and worse,and a low carbon life is becoming more and more popular among people.I am definitely part of it.A low carbon life can be of great use for us.It can reduce the amount of carbon dioxide that is the main cause of greenhouse effect, and can help keep our environment beautiful and clean.Therefore, we should live a low carbon life.Instead of taking a car, I always ride a bike to school.Besides, using a fan in summer is a better choice for me than using the air conditioner.Also, I’ve never forgotten to turn off the lights when I leave.I feel proud of myself for what I’ve done.I’ve made up my mind to do more in the future, like reusing my textbooks as long as possible.I strongly believe that if everyone makes an effort to save energy, it will make a real difference to our environment.In brief, low-carbon lifestyle is nothing but the best choice for us and only in this way can we form a harmonious relationship with the environment.相關(guān)主題:
1.Better environment,better city 2.water shortage 3.I want to be an environment protector 4.My ideal city life
To be a green consumer It's a common knowledge that our earth is polluted by us every day.The environment around us is very terrible.There are water pollution,land pollution and so on.Reasons for pollution are various.For one thing,we always pump the dirty water into the rivers.For another,we use too many chemicals and release them into the air.The third facor is we throw massive mountains of rubvish every day.To solve these problems,we should be green consumers.(過(guò)渡句)We cann't only persuade others not to throw rubbish into the rivers,but also plant more trees in order to make the air clear.More importantly,we can use paper or basket bags instead of plastics bags when we go shopping.We can also use public transportation instead of private cars.If all of us become green consumers,life will be better.How to protect/save our environment/world? The environment pollution is more and more serious today.We have no clean water to drink because of water pollution.And when trees are cut down,some animals disappear.There is more and more dirty smoke in the air.People's health has been greatly affected by air,noise and water pollution.Many people died of diseases caused by pollution.In order to live a better life,it's time for us to protect our world.Firstly,we shouldn't throw away rubbish everywhere.And we should recycle and reuse things,for this saves money and reduces pollution.Use things for as long as possible.Don't use plastic bags.Also, we must plant more trees and stop people cutting them.We hope our world will be more and more beautiful.2.為了節(jié)約環(huán)境,節(jié)約能源,中國(guó)政府出臺(tái)了一條禁令:從2008年6月1日起,禁止在超市和商店中使用免費(fèi)塑料袋。請(qǐng)對(duì)此發(fā)表自己的看法。
hello,everyone!China has put a ban on the use of free plastic bags starting on June1,2008.The ban stops the supermarket and shops from providing free plastic bags.People should pay for every plastic bag if they need it.I think this ban is very helpful to us.It helps to protect our environment.In my opinion,plastic bags can cause“white”popution and they can also pollute soil and water.They are harmful to our health.What's more,producing plastic bags can waste a lot of energy,too.So we should carry out this ban in order to improve our environment.What should we do?I think we should encourage our family members to carry cloth bags or baskets when they go shopping.In the school,we mustn't throw the rubbish everywhere.We should reduce the waste,reuse some bags and recycle plastic bottles,soft drink cans,waste paper and so on.If every one of us does like this,our enviroment will be better and better.
第三篇:高三英語(yǔ)作文之低碳生活live_a_Low_carbon_life
2011高三二模崇明縣英語(yǔ)作文(低碳生活)范文:
1.低碳生活受到人們的普遍歡迎
2.低碳生活方式非常有好處
3.我們應(yīng)該如何去做
Low-carbon has become a quite fashionable word which can be seen and heard frequently from everywhere because people come to realize the seriousness of the green house effect.As to me, I do appreciate that travelling by public transportation such as the underground or going to school by bicycle, which is an easy but effective way to reduce the release of the wastes.What’s more, the healthy life style enables me to take more physical exercise, enjoy the fresh air and thus relieve the stress.Besides, using electricity saving lamps is also another good measure I take to save the limited energy, which may benefit my future generation.Each time I do shopping with my mum, I will never forget to take a reusable bag instead of a plastic bag.Such is some of my low-carbon life.What about yours? Have you already started a low-carbon life? If not, please take action, my dear friends!
Let’s start it with ourselves
/ from ourselves and from small things!The natural and green life style must improve the urban environment, reduce
Live a Low-carbon Life
As is known to us all, our environment is getting worse and worse, and a low carbon life is becoming more and more popular among people.A low carbon life can for us.It can help save energy and can environment beautiful and clean.Therefore, we should live a low carbon life.First of all, when we go out, we should take a bus or ride a bike instead of driving a car.Cars not only but also
waste energy.Second, we had best not use can.Third, it's of great use to plant trees.we should.Therefore, as students, we ought to turn out the lights the moment we leave, turn off the tap in time, and reuse our textbooks and so on.Nowadays, there are a considerable number of individuals who prefer to lead a low-carbon lifestyle which find expression in the fact that more and more commuters are using public transportation system in their daily life.Low carbon lifestyle can endow us and our society with numerous benefits.Firstly, it goes beyond doubt that low carbon lifestyle contributes a lot to the environmental protection and it is a favorable way to slow down the rate of climate change of our earth, which also means a lot to our health.We are supposed to undertake the responsibility to lead a low-carbon lifestyle, which is of great significance.And there is a diversity of measures we can take so as to lead such an environmental-friendly life.For one thing, we are expected to minimize the use of private cars, which emit a large amount of greenhouse gases.For another, we are supposed to cultivate the public awareness of energy conservation for energy in the world today is decreasing rapidly.For instance, we can turn off electrical appliances if not necessary as well as using renewable materials.Furthermore, at our leisure, we can seek opportunities to plant more trees which can absorb carbon-dioxide.In brief, low-carbon lifestyle is nothing but the best choice for us and only in this way can we form a harmonious relationship with the environment.
第四篇:2018考研英語(yǔ)大作文預(yù)測(cè)
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2018考研英語(yǔ)大作文預(yù)測(cè)
中華傳統(tǒng)美德
Directions:
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following pictures.In your essay , you should
1)describe the pictures briefly,2)interpret the meaning , and
3)give your comments.You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET II.范文:
The simple but educational photovividly depicts that an elderly mother received a telephone call, which successfully attracts our attention.After a closer watch, we can find that the so-called “celebrating Mother’s Day” is something so formal because her
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children tell her to prepare the dinner for them.Obviously, what the drawing has subtly conveyed should be given more concern.Filial piety has always been the traditional virtue of Chinese culture for thousands of years.Respectingour parents is the first priority.However, ridiculous as it is, the phenomenon in the picture is not infrequent in today’s society.For one thing, enormous economic development brings not only wealth, but also public’s obsession for material possessions.They only care about individual gain and loss, which undermine the once sacred bond between parents and children.For another, people seem to be fond of boasting of how they abide by traditions through holding grand meals for their parents.As a matter of fact, some even compete about the extravagance of the event.I argue that those who behave as the picture miss the essence and profound values of our traditions.Filial piety should not be expressed by means of superficial “performance”, but by ways of children’s genuine care and love for their parents.Thinking about how parents took care of us when we were babies in cradles, we should realize that they all need due attention when aging.Piety is the foundation of all virtues.中外文化交流
Directions:
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following pictures.In your essay, you should
1)describe the picture briefly,2)interpret its meaning, and
3)give your comments.You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET II.范文:
As is vividly depicted in the simple but educational photo, two foreigners humbly ask if they can be the students of the Confucius, which successfully captures our eyes.If we give it a closer watch, it is not difficult to find that they are very interested in traditional Chinese culture.Obviously, what the drawing has subtly conveyed should be given more enlightening.http://kaoyan.wendu.com/
The reason why increasingly more foreigners begin to learn Chinese culture is varied.To begin with, the long history and effulgent culture of the Chinese nation contribute to the improvement of human beings, which account to the current enthusiasm of Chinese in the world.What is more, due to the practice of reforming and opening-up policy,our national strengthhas improved the comprehensive national power.So more and more countries, international organizations and people become interested in Chinese culture and come into contact with China.Then studying Chinese is the only road for them to understand China better.According to the above analysis, it is my view that national culture is a priceless spiritual treasure that should be preserved and cherished.Only in this way can we promote cultural development positively and make our society colorful and vigorous.堅(jiān)定信念(Ⅰ)
Directions:
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following pictures.In your essay, you should
1)describe the picture briefly,2)interpret its meaning, and
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3)give your comments.You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET.范文:
As is vividly depicted in the simple but educational photo, the elderly man in the picture makes every effort to remove the mountain with an unbreakable faith that only by continuous endeavor can people achieve what they want, which successfully captures our eyes.And the other man with two extremely heavy burdens of ideals on his shoulders assists the elderly to remove the mountains.Obviously, what the drawing has subtly conveyed should be given more enlightening.Theoretically, several reasons may cause the phenomenon conveyed in the picture, but for my part, the following two are of utmost importance.On the top of the list is that both of them adhere to their primal ideals and beliefs, that is, people should never forget why they started, and their mission can be accomplished.This founding aspiration is what inspires them to advance.In addition, there is the other point that no one can ignore.It is universally admitted that people with great determination and courage will succeed eventually, especially when they encounter difficulties.According to the above analysis, it is advisable for us to take steps to reverse this evil trend.Of all the steps, mass media tend to function essentially in the job.Only in this way can we resolve this problem and embrace a bright future.堅(jiān)定信念(Ⅱ)
Directions:
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following pictures.In your essay, you should
1)describe the picture briefly,2)interpret its meaning, and
3)give your comments.http://kaoyan.wendu.com/
You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET.范文:
Here are two pictures, interesting and provoking.In the first picture, the man, at the very beginning, makes every effort to dig diamonds with an unbreakable faith that only by continuous endeavor can people achieve what they want.By contrast, the second picture describes that, one year later, he doesn’t persist in his initial unswerving faith, and abandons his original ideas completely.Obviously, what the drawing has subtly conveyed should be given more concern.Theoretically, several reasons may trigger the problem conveyed in the picture, but for my part, the following two are of utmost importance.On the top of the list is that he does not adhere to his primal ideals and beliefs, that is, people should never forget why they started, and their mission can be accomplished.This founding aspiration is what inspires them to advance.In addition, there is the other point that no one can ignore.It is universally admitted that the last leg of a journey marks the halfway point and our initial motivation will inspire us to finish the last leg.According to the above analysis, it is advisable for us to take steps to reverse this evil trend.Of all the steps, mass media tend to function essentially in the job.Only in this way can we resolve this problem and embrace a bright future.
第五篇:2011考研英語(yǔ)作文預(yù)測(cè)及
2011考研英語(yǔ)作文預(yù)測(cè)及范文:相互推卸責(zé)任。
2.漫畫“相互推卸責(zé)任”---影射食品安全事件中的社會(huì)責(zé)任感和道德感缺失。
重點(diǎn)推薦: the lack of responsibility
范文演示:When the issue of poisonous milk powder gains an overwhelming focus from the public,what are these malefactors doing? As we can see from the depiction,enterprise,milk station,milch cow and even grass are trying to find someone scapegoating for this credit crisis,in my view point,that’s nothing to do with the credit but the problem of responsibility.Responsibility is a keyword that we should never disregard,defined not only as the courage to face every foreseeable risk,but as the braveness to entail every malpractice when it really takes place as well.The causes of the shortage of responsibility or even conscience may be as follows.Firstly,inner cause ascribing probably to the destructive influence emanating from the decay of morality may result in the over-materialism.Furthermore,outerly,deficient supervisal gives rise to the fearless adventurer who is at the risk of anything,not to say to deviate from his own liability,to pursue as many as profits.A case in point is the Melamine-laced Milk Incident which almost destroyed the whole of China’s milk industry.It is imperative that drastic measures should be taken to end this thorny situation,such as enacting related law to reinforce our supervisal mechanism to avoid the behavior of kicking the ball when something bad happen and promoting social entities to regain one of Chinese traditional virtues,which is called “who would enter the hell if I wouldn’t”,that means,undoubtedly,to learn to be responsible for the blunder means sensible unflinchingness.2011考研英語(yǔ)作文預(yù)測(cè)及范文:瞎子摸到了真象
1.漫畫“瞎子摸到了真象”---影射國(guó)際對(duì)于中國(guó)認(rèn)識(shí)的前后變化。范文演示:Introduced as a widely known Chinese fable “Blind men and an Elephant”,it tells us never to draw a conclusion from incomplete data.For tremendous years,people outside China could only get narrow and unilateral knowledge about China,leaving a real China far from being unveiled.Nevertheless,the past 2008 Beijing Olympics was the very and perfect time to lift the curse.For most people who are non-Chinese,they tend to have a picture of Chinese who are just Confucius-like,living in a highly polluted place or even having no freedom to speak in public,etc.Reasons behind are usually the following two: one is that westerners are not so eager to learn about China just as our Chinese do about them,the limited information that reached them are mostly outdated or biased one which were more often than not stipulated by a third party with a special interest;the other is that Chinese government were not so open as the one today and did inadequate publicity about its country,thus the image of China is always kind of mysterious to outsiders,then the image depicted above about China,though misleading,is understandable.However,the grand Olympic Games provide an golden opportunity for people around the world to see a complete and “brand-new”China.Therefore,a better world characterized by harmony between China and all the other countries is to come.附件三:2011年考研英語(yǔ)大作文權(quán)威預(yù)測(cè)三
背景介紹:山寨現(xiàn)象
“山寨”一詞源于廣東話,是“小型、小規(guī)?!鄙踔劣悬c(diǎn)“地下工廠”的意思,其主要特點(diǎn)為仿造性、快速化、平民化。如今,網(wǎng)絡(luò)上各種各樣的東西都有山寨版,山寨版明星、山寨版“神七”,山寨版“鳥巢”,山寨版的《紅樓夢(mèng)》甚至火過(guò)新版《紅樓夢(mèng)》。
從2003年開始出現(xiàn)山寨手機(jī)到各種山寨產(chǎn)品,“山寨”一詞從經(jīng)濟(jì)行為逐漸演變?yōu)橐环N社會(huì)文化現(xiàn)象。如今“山寨相機(jī)”、“山寨電影”、“山寨明星”甚至“山寨版的春晚”等諸多帶有模仿性質(zhì)的“山寨現(xiàn)象”層出不窮,形成了獨(dú)有的“山寨文化”。
KEYWORDS: “Shanzhai” or “copycat”(山寨)
MODEL ESSAY:
As is indicated in the illustration given above, one well-known historical notability named Li Kui is being astonished by his another-self, who is standing in the opposite side, with a disgraceful note in his hand announcing “giving you the parallel experience as the original edition could pay”.So, paid for what? Definitely, he would be paid for his special reputation as a so-called “Copycat Big Star” or “Shanzhai Superstar” which is rampant in today’s China.The trend of the variety of human culture is unchangeable even without the action delivered by human beings ascribing to the various individualities themselves, so is this round of culture revolution.The novelties emanating from the “Copycat Culture”---“Shanzhai Movie”, “Shanzhai Camera” and even “Shanzhai Celebration of Spring Festival” have brought a lot of entertainment to the public to some extent, but what we should never be blind to is their negative influence if they go to extremes hypothetically.Just as the exemplification demonstrated in the cartoon goes, “Shanzhai Star” is taking advantage of the fame or profitable value generating from the true superstar, sometimes this kind of behavior is a typical infringement to the intellectual property indeed, which we can never fail to recognize from TV programs or newspapers always.Then, the question goes to another orientation, that is, whether or not should we admit the existence of “Copycat Culture” or to what extent could we make efforts to protect the rights of original authority? It goes with no denying that the engine of the development of a country is subject to the nation’s creative power, which needs the much strongest protection from no matter government or civilian to fight with any behavior ravaging this kind of ecological balance.Fortunately, the first good news has been coming in---“a unique 15-digit code, the International Mobile Equipment Identity(IMEI), is being applied to China’s more than 200 types of registered mobile phones.The effort will combat “Shanzhai” mobile phones, or copycat phones, the Ministry of Industry and Information Technology said recently.”
特別提醒:2011年必背小作文三篇
訂購(gòu)及銷售信
銷售:
Last year we achieved a 15% increase in the sales of our.we believe that this happy state of affairs can be attributed to two causes.First, we managed to avoid passing on any part of our increased manufacturing costs to our majestic clients.Second, we believe our designs and colors are the most attractive that we have ever produced.And so we are happy to be able to tell you that our new season’s are, if anything, more attractive than last year’s and our prices will compare very favorably with those of any of our competitors.We believe that you will agree that our samples prove the truth of our claims.We look forward for you to favor us an order.訂購(gòu):
Could you give us some idea about your price?
Full information as to prices, quality, quantity available and other relative particulars would be highly appreciated.It will be greatly appreciated if you will kindly send us your samples.However, we find that we can obtain a price less by 30% than yours with local firm.投訴信:
你參加了一個(gè)公司的面試,結(jié)果在面試過(guò)程中考官把你批的顏面全無(wú),根本不顧及你的感受,請(qǐng)寫信給這個(gè)公司的領(lǐng)導(dǎo)投訴。
1,說(shuō)明來(lái)信目的 2,具體闡述投訴理由
3,期待的解決方式
點(diǎn)評(píng):這是一封典型的combination(合體式)作文,它既涉及找工作面試用語(yǔ),又涉及投訴信,代表了考研應(yīng)用文命題的典型思路。
MODEL ESSAY:
Dear Sir or Madam,I, the undersigned, am a job applicant who had participated in the interview held by your company last Wednesday.I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about this jod-striving experience.The reason for my dissatisfaction has nothing to do with the outcome but the tone of your interviewer, Mr Wang.First, when I was about to illuminating my deep thought, he began to blame on my so-called nonsense according to his perspective.Additionally, his cynical eyesight always made me feel that I am a reject , after all, I am a novice who has stepped into this ruthless carrer world for the first time.I appreciate it very much if you could take my letter into consideration, what I really want is just an apology delivered from him,and I would like to have this matter settled by this Friday.Yours,Li Ming
(二)2011年考研英語(yǔ)大作文命題方向前瞻
考研英語(yǔ)大作文的命題范圍雖每年千奇百變,但基于中國(guó)國(guó)情的基本事實(shí)和命題規(guī)律卻從來(lái)沒(méi)有改變過(guò),因此命題的方向把握相對(duì)就不是太難的事,具體來(lái)說(shuō),從宏觀角度符合以下兩點(diǎn):
(1)高舉和諧社會(huì)大旗(Harmonious Society)
從1998年考研英語(yǔ)大作文命題至今,考題基本鎖定和諧社會(huì)的大旗,反復(fù)變換切入點(diǎn),而命題方式,除了1999年的圖表題之外,已經(jīng)基本鎖定在圖畫題,這個(gè)規(guī)律已經(jīng)延續(xù)11年未變,具體來(lái)看,1998年的誠(chéng)信(credit)話題,1999年以及2000年連續(xù)兩年的人與自然和諧共處的話題(nature),2001年愛心話題(love),2002年的世界文化融合話題(culture),2003年的個(gè)人、企業(yè)獨(dú)立成長(zhǎng)話題(self-independence),2004年的人生奮斗無(wú)止境話題(it ends today but starts tomorrow),2005年的撫養(yǎng)老人話題(to respect elders),2006年的偶像崇拜話題(idol worship),2007年的自信話題(confidence),2008年的殘疾人合作奮斗自強(qiáng)不息話題(never give up),2009年的網(wǎng)絡(luò)對(duì)于人類交流親疏遠(yuǎn)近之影響(interpersonal relationship immersed in Internet era)以及2010年再次重現(xiàn)的中西文化大融合話題。從這些歷年真題中無(wú)不察覺(jué)出命題者的良苦用心,即完善人格,關(guān)注生活,關(guān)心他人,最終實(shí)現(xiàn)人與人的和諧,個(gè)人自身的和諧以及人與自然的和諧。一旦把握此命題思路,在平時(shí)的訓(xùn)練時(shí)就能真正做到有的放矢,例如,一些陰暗的,過(guò)于政治化的話題,就不會(huì)成為應(yīng)試范圍,而尚未考察過(guò)的一些和諧話題,例如社會(huì)責(zé)任(responsibility),樂(lè)觀心態(tài)(optimism)亦或平心做人、腳踏實(shí)地(to try to grasp your aspiration step by step)等,就應(yīng)該在平時(shí)適當(dāng)進(jìn)行練習(xí),這樣在走進(jìn)考場(chǎng)那一刻才能真正實(shí)現(xiàn)胸有成足,寫作時(shí)的素材才會(huì)有信手拈來(lái)的感覺(jué)。
(一)2011年小作文寫作前瞻
縱觀往年考研小作文(應(yīng)用文)命題,個(gè)人認(rèn)為規(guī)律性非常明顯。大綱規(guī)定的應(yīng)用文類型,也就那么幾種,幾乎是一年考一種。我們來(lái)看看真題:
2004年大綱第一次增加小作文,所考的第一篇作文來(lái)自于2005年1月的辭職信。當(dāng)年這篇作文令很多業(yè)界所謂的預(yù)測(cè)大師們感到非常意外,因?yàn)榘凑粘@恚髮W(xué)生寫的第一封職業(yè)類郵件應(yīng)該是求職信,考研學(xué)子大多數(shù)都是應(yīng)屆生,還沒(méi)學(xué)會(huì)寫求職信就先寫辭職信,總感覺(jué)不大厚道。結(jié)果,不厚道的事情就是發(fā)生了,隨之而來(lái)的就是網(wǎng)上所羅列的大量預(yù)測(cè)模板徹底失效,甚至當(dāng)年有人叫囂絕對(duì)不可能考辭職信;
緊接著2006年,考了咨詢信,如何向希望工程捐款,此封信考的很常規(guī),只需在考前做過(guò)適當(dāng)準(zhǔn)備即可;
2007年,考查的是主動(dòng)建議信,再次把考生放在了非常主動(dòng)的地位上,沒(méi)人問(wèn)你意見,你自己跳出來(lái)對(duì)母校的大學(xué)圖書館管理提建議。這封郵件再次使網(wǎng)絡(luò)上以及很多培訓(xùn)機(jī)構(gòu)的預(yù)測(cè)失效,因?yàn)樗麄優(yōu)橥瑢W(xué)們準(zhǔn)備的范文多半是類似于你有一個(gè)同學(xué),要去美國(guó)讀書,寫信問(wèn)你到底是讀歷史還是計(jì)算機(jī)。實(shí)質(zhì)上,這屬于回復(fù)建議信,它的文章開頭多半是In respond to your question about whether to ? , I would like to present the following recommendations.而主動(dòng)建議信的開頭卻截然不同,因?yàn)槭侵鲃?dòng),所以收信人多半會(huì)感覺(jué)比較突然,因此需要寫信人在開頭稍作自我介紹,并不是介紹自己的姓名,而是稍微說(shuō)明下自己主動(dòng)提建議的初衷是為對(duì)方好,首先取得對(duì)方的理解,這才是一封主動(dòng)建議信所必須具備的,基于此,開頭往往會(huì)設(shè)計(jì)為,As a warm-hearted and attentiveness-full 的人,I have spent a lot of time caring about the development of
so that I write this letter to display some of my recommendations with regard to
as follows.因此,如果不能準(zhǔn)確使用,則后果會(huì)很嚴(yán)重,從第一句話就會(huì)暴露你根本沒(méi)有審題,得分也就可想而知;
2008年考察的非常巧妙,雜交了兩種類型的郵件:道歉加失物歸還。出國(guó)旅行,把國(guó)外朋友借給你聽的CD機(jī)一不小心帶回國(guó)了。這封郵件再次使很多死板的失物招領(lǐng)信或?qū)の飭⑹滦拍0鍩o(wú)用武之地;
2009年,倡議信,倡議大家不要再使用一次性塑料袋,這封信比較常規(guī);
到了最近一次2010年,很多同學(xué)都在驚訝于怎么考了一篇招聘通知,難道郵件時(shí)代就此終結(jié)?我認(rèn)為,實(shí)則不然。首先,通知和郵件的格式并無(wú)實(shí)質(zhì)差別,考研小作文的注意力從來(lái)就不應(yīng)該是放在格式上;其次,2009年上課我反復(fù)給大家講過(guò)求職信怎么寫,尤其是得分的關(guān)鍵---第二段,你必須說(shuō)明自己適合這份工作,因此我給大家設(shè)計(jì)了三大自證理由,英文(證書)水準(zhǔn),著名企業(yè)實(shí)習(xí)經(jīng)驗(yàn),適合團(tuán)隊(duì)協(xié)作的性格等,而學(xué)習(xí)主動(dòng)性稍微強(qiáng)一些的同學(xué)只要?jiǎng)狱c(diǎn)腦筋,就會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)其實(shí)只要把這三點(diǎn)反過(guò)來(lái),變成招聘要求,這篇通知就會(huì)迎刃而解。這就是為什么當(dāng)年考完試當(dāng)天就有很多同學(xué)自信的跟我說(shuō)考得不錯(cuò)的原因,因?yàn)樗麄冊(cè)敢馑伎?,臨門一腳還得靠大家自己!
好了,分析了這么多,也就是為了預(yù)測(cè)未來(lái)。綜上所述,小作文考察的特點(diǎn)主要有:第一,希望把學(xué)生放在一個(gè)主動(dòng)的地位上,比如辭職,主動(dòng)建議等,都把大家放在了主動(dòng)方,而這恰恰與很多同學(xué)平時(shí)訓(xùn)練應(yīng)用文時(shí)喜歡把自己放在被動(dòng)方的思維相悖,也是大家為什么感覺(jué)總押不到題的根源。第二,考研的考察方向依舊是以郵件為主,換句話說(shuō),只要把郵件寫好了,即使考別的應(yīng)用文類型,那也不怕!因此,經(jīng)過(guò)對(duì)2011年考研新大綱的考量,本人有七成把握今年考研會(huì)考訂購(gòu)信(或出售信,一正一反,都要會(huì)寫)和投訴信(或回復(fù)投訴信)。
(2)影射當(dāng)年熱點(diǎn)話題(hot spot)
2008年1月19日下午,正值08年考研第一天,我的手機(jī)從當(dāng)天的研究生入學(xué)英語(yǔ)考試結(jié)束之時(shí)起就一直響到當(dāng)天晚上21時(shí)許,大多數(shù)是來(lái)自學(xué)員和同事的祝賀以及感謝,說(shuō)我押中了08年的考研大作文題。其實(shí),對(duì)于押題這個(gè)字眼,我內(nèi)心從來(lái)都是不太感冒的,因?yàn)橐粋€(gè)好的考研者,英文復(fù)習(xí)的重心絕對(duì)不應(yīng)該放在押題中,一個(gè)好的師者,也不應(yīng)給學(xué)員傳達(dá)押題這樣的信息,而是應(yīng)該幫助學(xué)員實(shí)實(shí)在在找到方向,真正提高寫作水平。但押終歸押到了,雖有些許驚詫,但也很欣慰的發(fā)現(xiàn),自己一直以來(lái)對(duì)于考研命題的思路探析沒(méi)有出錯(cuò),起碼與命題組的專家們算是有些契合了!其實(shí)用心觀察的人都會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn),近些年尤其是近5年來(lái)考研的命題,除了把握和諧社會(huì)這個(gè)大方向不變之外,影射當(dāng)年熱點(diǎn)就是另一個(gè)最直接有效切中命題的捷徑。讓我們來(lái)看看吧,2003年1月考研,正值中國(guó)加入WTO第一年,實(shí)為2002年經(jīng)濟(jì)界的一個(gè)熱點(diǎn)話題,因此圖畫選擇了“溫室里的花朵經(jīng)不起風(fēng)雨”,影射中國(guó)企業(yè)成長(zhǎng)繼而引申到個(gè)人成長(zhǎng)都需要自主獨(dú)立;2005年1月考研,“養(yǎng)老足球賽”,大家查閱2004年全年BBC評(píng)選的中國(guó)大事記,把當(dāng)年命名為中國(guó)的“司法聚焦年”,因此贍養(yǎng)父母這個(gè)小的切入點(diǎn)影射的實(shí)為中國(guó)當(dāng)年的人際全局面貌;2006年1月考研,“偶像崇拜話題”,更是明顯不過(guò),2005年全年的超級(jí)女聲幾乎撼動(dòng)了整個(gè)中國(guó)娛樂(lè)界;2007年1月的“自信話題”,漫畫中一個(gè)守門員,一個(gè)射手,正在面臨點(diǎn)球大戰(zhàn)前的心理波動(dòng),回應(yīng)的的正是2006年沸騰全球的德國(guó)世界杯;再到2008年1月,充分顯示了命題者的智慧,中國(guó)正式進(jìn)入奧運(yùn)年,奧運(yùn)所體現(xiàn)的一切精神就是永不放棄,自強(qiáng)不息,但如果直接選擇一幅漫畫就是關(guān)于奧運(yùn),又太過(guò)明顯,因此,我當(dāng)時(shí)在2007年5月17號(hào)的一次考研講座現(xiàn)場(chǎng)就第一次提出了了08年考研的展望,即奧運(yùn)這個(gè)熱點(diǎn)過(guò)于強(qiáng)大,所以不可能避開,那怎么隱藏??所以只能選擇打“擦邊球”,通過(guò)殘奧,影射殘疾人不屈不撓奮斗之話題,因?yàn)槊恳粋€(gè)觀看過(guò)哪怕任何一場(chǎng)殘疾人運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)的人都會(huì)為這個(gè)特殊群體的精神所震撼,果不其然,最終的結(jié)果如我所料!因此,我們可以大膽的推測(cè),即將到來(lái)的11年考研,這個(gè)大規(guī)律依舊有很大的可能得到延續(xù)。
(三)2011年考研英語(yǔ)預(yù)測(cè)
以下六大話題搜集,是在充分研究2011年全年大事記的前提下,嚴(yán)格遵守以上兩大命題思路所作出的預(yù)測(cè),具體的范文會(huì)陸續(xù)在我的元旦押題班中發(fā)布,請(qǐng)大家引起足夠重視!
1.漫畫“瞎子摸到了真象”---影射國(guó)際對(duì)于中國(guó)認(rèn)識(shí)的前后變化。
2.漫畫“相互推卸責(zé)任”---影射食品安全事件中的社會(huì)責(zé)任感和道德感缺失。
3.漫畫“股市大跌”---影射投機(jī)心態(tài)不可有,腳踏實(shí)地才是出路。
4.漫畫“地震中用自己身軀保護(hù)學(xué)生的好老師”---影射災(zāi)難事件中人性的光輝。關(guān)于災(zāi)難,此命題切入點(diǎn)還有可能為保持樂(lè)觀心態(tài)。
5.漫畫“把我整成**明星的樣子”---影射整容現(xiàn)象以及山寨現(xiàn)象
最后,衷心祝愿所有參加2011年的考研的學(xué)子都能經(jīng)過(guò)自己的努力獲得成功,其實(shí),準(zhǔn)備考研的過(guò)程所懂得的諸多寶貴品質(zhì),本身就是一筆巨大的財(cái)富。
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朱偉簡(jiǎn)介:朱偉,英文名Jerry,新東方教育科技集團(tuán)09優(yōu)秀教師,南昌新東方學(xué)校考試部名師,國(guó)內(nèi)考試項(xiàng)目主管,主授課程:詞匯8000,詞匯5500,四六級(jí)閱讀,考研寫作,雅思詞匯,BEC高級(jí)寫作,大學(xué)預(yù)科閱讀、詞匯、考研及四、六級(jí)閱讀、寫作、詞匯專家。民商法學(xué)碩士研究生,研究生入學(xué)考試政治,英語(yǔ),各專業(yè)課以及總分均為當(dāng)年第一名。大學(xué)生繽紛藝術(shù)節(jié)歌唱比賽冠軍,百事新星大賽南區(qū)亞軍,“江南之星”十強(qiáng),在大學(xué)畢業(yè)時(shí)成功舉辦個(gè)人演唱會(huì)。大學(xué)期間獲各類歌唱比賽及英文競(jìng)賽大獎(jiǎng),并曾在同一首歌及周華健演唱會(huì)擔(dān)任嘉賓歌手,被考生譽(yù)為”全能天才偶像教師”。授課內(nèi)容豐富全面,對(duì)歷年考試命題規(guī)律的研究深入透徹,是新東方集團(tuán)新一代青年教師的優(yōu)秀代表。