第一篇:凱文英語(yǔ)中心,凱文老師,李安 人定勝天,還是心存敬畏 《少年派的奇幻漂流》 中英文
李安 人定勝天,還是心存敬畏 《少年派的奇幻漂流》 2012年11月2日,李安在北京為媒體放映了新片《少年派的奇幻漂流》中20分鐘的片段,主要是壯觀悅目的場(chǎng)面戲,比如驚心動(dòng)魄的海上風(fēng)暴和沉船,或者成群飛魚穿梭劃過救生艇上的少年和老虎。
2009年10月,詹姆斯·卡梅隆的3D電影《阿凡達(dá)》離北美首映還不到兩個(gè)月,20世紀(jì)??怂闺娪肮驹谟捌倬W(wǎng)上發(fā)布了一條新預(yù)告片。同月,李安透露自己的新片是《少年派的奇幻漂流》。加拿大作家楊·馬特爾的同名小說原作2001年出版,2002年得了曼布克圖書獎(jiǎng),李安早就看過。??怂构举I下改編權(quán),接洽過M·奈特·沙馬蘭、阿方索·卡隆、讓-皮埃爾·熱內(nèi)等大導(dǎo)演,都沒有做下去。大約2009年2月,這項(xiàng)目到了李安手里。2010年4月,《阿凡達(dá)》的全球票房收得27億美元,創(chuàng)下了影史新紀(jì)錄。此時(shí)李安已在臺(tái)灣和印度為新片看景。他決定要用3D技術(shù)拍攝新片。
2011年3月,在臺(tái)中一個(gè)名叫水湳的廢棄機(jī)場(chǎng),《少年派的奇幻漂流》正式開拍。李安從卡梅隆的公司租用了卡梅隆參與開發(fā)設(shè)計(jì)的3D攝影機(jī)。這部電影的主角是半大孩子、動(dòng)物,還有大量的水上場(chǎng)景,這三樣是電影行里公認(rèn)最難拍的,導(dǎo)演沒事最好別自找麻煩。拿到項(xiàng)目時(shí)李安心想三樣最麻煩的都齊了,也就無所謂再多來一樣,這就是3D。
電影和小說的英文原名叫“Life of Pi”,派的一生,但中國(guó)人很容易拼成“屁的一生”。名字的確是片中主角背了一輩子的麻煩。少年生長(zhǎng)在印度法屬殖民地旁迪切里。父親第一個(gè)生意伙伴曾是南印度的游泳冠軍,1930年代在巴黎上過兩年學(xué),對(duì)巴黎從低端到高檔的泳池了如指掌。父親不會(huì)水,但最愛聽這個(gè)叔叔聊巴黎泳池,于是叔叔嘴里的天堂級(jí)泳池Piscine Molitor直接成了少年的名字。
Piscine是法語(yǔ)的“泳池”,但這個(gè)字的發(fā)音幾乎等于英語(yǔ)里進(jìn)行時(shí)態(tài)的“小便(Pissing)”,這自然成了學(xué)校同學(xué)對(duì)少年最脫口而出的奚落。少年于是給自己改名叫“派”,圓周率 父親經(jīng)營(yíng)動(dòng)物園。與世界上大多數(shù)人相比,少年派有著獨(dú)特的成長(zhǎng)環(huán)境,所以他對(duì)世界的認(rèn)知也不那么平常。
時(shí)世艱難,父親決定全家搬去加拿大,帶著部分動(dòng)物。貨船在風(fēng)暴里沉沒,上了救生艇的只有派、名叫理查·帕克的孟加拉虎、紅毛猩猩、鬣狗和一匹受傷的斑馬。沒幾天,小艇上只剩派和虎,他們?cè)诤I掀?77天。李安在臺(tái)灣的拍攝也持續(xù)了9個(gè)月。
所有的水上場(chǎng)面,在臺(tái)中舊機(jī)場(chǎng)搭建的龐大水槽拍攝。水槽長(zhǎng)75米,寬35米,一頭用12臺(tái)抽水機(jī)造浪,另一頭人工消浪,以免浪頭反射回水面影響浪的形狀。
老虎愛游泳,所以老虎游水的鏡頭是實(shí)拍的,但它不喜歡水面上漂浮的船,所以要把船放在一臺(tái)升降機(jī)上搖著拍,再用電腦特技做到海面上。拍完片子一共用了四只虎,戲還好說,拍不到的可以用電腦特效,麻煩的是動(dòng)物保護(hù)組織很厲害?!安恢故敲绹?guó)的團(tuán)體來看,臺(tái)灣也有兩個(gè)團(tuán)體隨時(shí)過來,都要寫報(bào)告?!崩畎哺嬖V記者,“后來印度也很緊張,因?yàn)橛袀€(gè)鏡頭我們做得太像,他們不相信是電腦動(dòng)畫,覺得是把老虎弄昏了,虐待它,我們要把每道制作工序發(fā)郵件給他們,讓他們了解是怎么做的。”
一些室內(nèi)戲在旁邊的舊機(jī)庫(kù)搭景拍攝。臺(tái)灣政府給了李安非常充分的支援?!昂?jiǎn)直是要什么給什么,常常還更多。”李安說,這部戲投資8000萬美元,只是十年前《綠巨人》的一半成本,如果在美國(guó),“肯定做不出來”。
少年派要跟老虎理查·帕克對(duì)峙,讓自己活下來;生存問題解決了,面對(duì)無止境的孤舟漂流,怎么能夠不發(fā)瘋,他需要精神力量。李安覺得電影里蠻感人的一個(gè)地方,是小船終于靠岸,老虎沒人性,不曾回頭看一眼少年,自顧從沙灘上走了。少年派倒一廂情愿地動(dòng)了很多情。“說萬物有情,其實(shí)都是人自己的心境。所以這電影不是講人際關(guān)系,而是講人跟自己的關(guān)系。這跟我過去的電影不太一樣?!?/p>
派活了下來,日本貨船的保險(xiǎn)公司派來兩個(gè)調(diào)查員,詳細(xì)詢問貨船沉沒的過程和他生存下來的經(jīng)過。派講了自己和老虎理查·帕克的故事,調(diào)查員根本不相信。于是派又講了另一個(gè)故事——原來逃上救生艇的并不是老虎、猩猩、鬣狗和斑馬,而是他自己、母親、法國(guó)廚子和中國(guó)海員,在海上漂流的277天里四個(gè)人之間當(dāng)然發(fā)生了很多殘酷的事。“你們喜歡哪個(gè)故事?”派問調(diào)查員。
原著吸引李安的正是這種寓言性?!捌酱蠛V竺鎸?duì)的是一個(gè)神,老天爺。信仰究竟是什么?靠你的聰明智慧、理解能力,靠科學(xué)能夠證實(shí)的東西,到一個(gè)層級(jí)就沒有了,下一步怎么辦?存在的意義是什么?它做這番探討,然后用很巧妙的比喻,就像派講故事,他問你喜歡哪一個(gè)——不是相信哪一個(gè)——不可置信的故事,還是完全可以相信但卻灰暗無趣的故事?”
這種黑暗的內(nèi)容很難在一部主流電影里找到合適的處理方式。所以3D再難拍,水和老虎再難拍,“最難弄的還是面對(duì)片廠。這個(gè)片子結(jié)尾是挺擰的,不好搞。”李安當(dāng)然不會(huì)透露電影究竟是怎么做的,只是說,“明眼人看的時(shí)候能感覺到情感不是很流暢,好像還有什么東西要講,還可以深思。我也算是蠻會(huì)拍電影的人,但真是難搞,有時(shí)候真的被它難到,就像拍3D一樣,也沒有人能給我指導(dǎo)?!?/p>
他希望那些奪目的3D奇觀足以讓大多數(shù)觀眾心滿意足。“雖然大眾看比較粗淺的東西,可是他們對(duì)心靈的追求也是有的,你怎樣引導(dǎo)他,在表面上讓他不要抗拒,能夠看得懂,能夠投入,我覺得這其實(shí)比拍藝術(shù)片還難?!崩畎舱f,“3D,觀眾現(xiàn)在還比較好奇,心路活了,可能接受力就比較強(qiáng)。所以我得想盡方法吸引他們的注意力,絲絲入扣一秒鐘都不能放松。文藝片愛怎么拍怎么拍,看不懂是你水準(zhǔn)不夠,我覺得還挺容易的。深入淺出、老少咸宜、各取所需,其實(shí)還真的難弄?!?/p>
從《臥虎藏龍》拍到自己的首部3D電影,李安也像是漂流過來?!杜P虎藏龍》全世界大賣,他覺得自己好像沒有什么不能做的,“比較沖一點(diǎn),利害還搞不清楚”,于是拍了昂貴的《綠巨人》。雖然沒賠,可口碑不好——電影公司把李安經(jīng)營(yíng)的沉重主題當(dāng)作“蜘蛛俠”那樣的片子去賣,觀眾心理預(yù)期有了落差。
他心里慪氣,想安靜一下,去拍了個(gè)“都沒有什么人會(huì)去看”的電影,成本很小,《斷背山》。沒想到拿了奧斯卡最佳導(dǎo)演。他就想做《色,戒》,“因?yàn)檫^去看過,一直在腦海里面,現(xiàn)在不拍可能以后沒有機(jī)會(huì)了”?!渡?,戒》拍得很“傷”,然后接了比較純真快樂的《制造伍德斯托克》,“那是美國(guó)最后一個(gè)純真年代,過了之后美國(guó)就變成現(xiàn)在的樣子。它打動(dòng)我,希望它能讓我快樂一點(diǎn)”。
《少年派的奇幻漂流》是10年前的暢銷書,中學(xué)老師都讓學(xué)生看后作各種討論。李安說,美國(guó)相信人是得天獨(dú)厚、世界獨(dú)強(qiáng),它又是個(gè)年輕國(guó)家,追尋自由,覺得什么都是人力可以克服的。主掌世界的好萊塢電影,劇情發(fā)展總是讓人看著舒服,天遂人愿成了主流電影理所當(dāng)然的思路?!翱晌矣X得時(shí)候也到了,像我們成長(zhǎng)在中國(guó),不太信這套,什么人定勝天——人對(duì)老天爺是要有敬畏的。這書正好是個(gè)機(jī)會(huì),讓我覺得在這方面可以有發(fā)揮。” 李安也愛上了3D這種全新媒介。與卡梅隆不一樣,他覺得3D尤其適合表現(xiàn)舞臺(tái),因?yàn)橛辛丝v深,3D拍攝的場(chǎng)面調(diào)度完全是舞臺(tái)式的?!爸灰X夠,我想拍下去。我有好奇心。2D可能從1960年代到現(xiàn)在沒什么新的東西,該知道的都知道了?!崩畎舱f。
《少年派的奇幻漂流》中兩個(gè)故事,你更喜歡哪個(gè)?奇幻那個(gè)是選擇,殘酷那個(gè)是事實(shí)。實(shí)際發(fā)生的是哪一個(gè)無法證實(shí),重要的是你相信哪一個(gè)。喜歡奇幻故事的,說明相信奇跡,傾向于認(rèn)為信仰與愛比事實(shí)更重要。很多人雖喜歡前一個(gè),卻不得不接受殘酷的那一個(gè),他們被認(rèn)為有功利的務(wù)實(shí)傾向。
《Life of Pi》的觀后感:1)哪個(gè)故事不重要,重要的如何和心中的老虎(欲望和恐懼)共存。智者會(huì)放棄馴服它,能避免被它吞噬,反而從它吸取生命力,2)哪個(gè)宗教不重要,重要的是在困境下保持信念和希望,相信你所有的遭遇,必有其道理,3)不能期待完美結(jié)局,甚至不必珍重告別,但是需要能夠放下。
IS there anything Ang Lee can't do?
The pithy answer might be: Large, angry, green men.Yes, Lee's “Hulk” was not well received.But in his incredibly varied filmography, Lee has steadily steered films that could very well have turned disastrous into box-office hits and Oscar bait.Combining martial arts with drama? “Crouching Tiger, Hidden Dragon” became the highest grossing foreign language film ever, more than double any previous foreign film.A film about gay cowboys?
“Brokeback Mountain” was nominated for eight Oscars, winning three, including best director.Few filmmakers have been so drawn to such delicate material where even slight shifts in tone or execution could mean the difference
between a hit or a flop.That couldn't be truer for Lee's new film, “Life of Pi,” a supreme balancing act for a filmmaker accustomed to working on tightropes.In an interview the day after “Life of Pi” premiered at the New York Film Festival, Lee sat down with obvious relief.Asked how he was doing, Lee exhaled: “Better than I thought.”
The first screening had gone well: the 3-D “Life of Pi” was greeted as a success and immediately added to the Oscar race.For even Lee,knowing which side of the sword a film of his will fall isn't clear until the first audience sees it.“I've been holding this anxiety for a long time.It's an expensive
movie,” said Lee.“It's really like the irrational number of pi.For a long time it felt that wayand matters of God and faith are far from typical blockbuster fodder.For those reasons and others, the project went through several directors, including Alfonso Cuaron, M Night Shyamalan and Jean-Pierre Jeunet.Lee, then, was a kind of savior, one of few directors capable of
corralling all the difficult elements of ”Life of Pi.“ His imprimatur helps carry it, given that the cast is one of unknowns(Sharma, only 17 when cast, hadn't previously acted), digital creations(a combination of real tigers and digital effects were used)and international actors(Irrfan Khan and Gerard Depardieu).Elizabeth Gabler, president of Fox 2000 Pictures, calls the filma huge gamble.”Why do I dare, a Chinese director, do Jane Austen when I still speak pidgin English?“ Lee said, referring to his 1995 film ”Sense and
Sensibility.“ ”It's still a leap of faith, you're taking a risk.Every movie is unknown.If it's known, then no studio would lose money.“
Lee was born and raised in Taiwan, where he initially pursued acting.Artistic endeavor in 1960s and 1970s Taiwan, he says, was considered a low profession, not the choice of his father.Lee emigrated from Taiwan to attend college at the University of Illinois at Urbana-Champaign and then film school at New York
University.The 58-year-old still lives in the New York area with his wife
and two sons.His first three films, all in Mandarin and revolving around Chinese families, were followed by ”Sense and Sensibility,“ his Hollywood arrival.But it was 1997's ”The Ice Storm,“ an adaptation of Rick Moody's novel about a Connecticut family's disaster in the swinging 1970s, that Lee says changed his perception of filmmaking.”A movie is really provocation,“ says Lee.”It's not a message, it's not a statement.“
”Life of Pi" was certainly full of lessons and trials.Lee spent a year making a 70-minute pre-visual animation of the middle chunk of the film set at sea to hone his skills.
第二篇:凱文英語(yǔ)中心,凱文老師,邵逸夫仙逝享年107歲
1月7日早晨6時(shí)55分,邵逸夫在香港家中安詳離世,享年107歲。邵逸夫祖籍浙江寧波。邵逸夫是TVB榮譽(yù)主席,邵氏兄弟電影公司的創(chuàng)辦人之一,香港上海商會(huì)成員,香港著名的電影制作者。多年來,邵逸夫捐助數(shù)以百億計(jì)款項(xiàng),為內(nèi)地、香港兩地建設(shè)教育醫(yī)療設(shè)施等。邵逸夫英文名“Run Run”的由來有不同版本。坊間一直認(rèn)為他當(dāng)年在南洋打拼,經(jīng)常抱著菲林奔走于各大戲院,故取此名,有跑腿的意思;但有指這傳聞出自周潤(rùn)發(fā)的一個(gè)玩笑,并不正確。根據(jù)黃霑的《數(shù)風(fēng)云人物》引述邵逸夫的解釋,英文名其實(shí)是利用他的本名“仁楞”的國(guó)語(yǔ)發(fā)音來拼成。
Run Run Shaw, one of the pioneers of 20th century Chinese film, died peacefully in the company of his family at his home on Tuesday morning.He was 107.His death was a profound loss for Hong Kong’s film and TV industry.Hong Kong SAR Chief Executive CY Leung commended his great contribution to the local entertainment industry and his charity work.“Run Run Shaw has for a long time promoted the entertainment industry in Hong Kong, his philanthropy also has spread from Hong Kong to the Chinese mainland and beyond.He is an elder that we very much respect.” Leung said.Shaw, born in 1907 in Zhejiang Province, entered the entertainment industry with his
brother in the 1920s.He created a media empire in Asia spanning movies to television.He co-founded the Shaw Brothers film studio, which churned out nearly 1,000 movies as it popularized the kung fu genre that would go on to have an impact on Hollywood.“Mr.Shaw’s company made many Chinese films.Because of him, the level of movie
production at that time had been improved a lot.” Ng See Yuen, chairman of Federation of Hong Kong Filmmakers, said.Shaw was also the founder of Hong Kong’s dominant TV station, Television Broadcasts, or TVB, which is still one of the major forces of content production and talent management in the region.Shaw was not only one of the most influential figures in Asia’s entertainment industry, but also a well-known philanthropist.Over the years, he has donated billions of Hong Kong
Dollars to charities, schools and hospitals.He established an international award, the Shaw Prize, for scientists in areas covering astronomy, mathematics, and life and medical science.The press called it the “Nobel Prize of the East”.Shaw’s funeral will be a private event, to be attended only by family members.Many will surely miss the man known for generosity and eye for entertainment.
第三篇:凱文英語(yǔ)中心,凱文老師,《變形金剛4》打破多項(xiàng)國(guó)內(nèi)票房記錄
【《變4》票房三天吸金6億】《變形金剛4:絕跡重生》6月27日中國(guó)內(nèi)地和北美同步上映,受到中國(guó)內(nèi)地觀眾熱烈追捧,助力其創(chuàng)多個(gè)內(nèi)地票房紀(jì)錄,接連刷新中國(guó)內(nèi)地影史首日、單日、首周票房紀(jì)錄,上映三天已經(jīng)瘋狂吸金6.13億元。以首周末3天報(bào)收6.3億的走勢(shì)來看,即使第二周7天僅收到6億,那么打破《阿凡達(dá)》在內(nèi)地盤桓近五年的13.78億紀(jì)錄也是指日可待。據(jù)悉,好萊塢電影為了開拓中國(guó)市場(chǎng),試圖在影片中加入大量的中國(guó)元素,2016年的《阿凡達(dá)2》、《變形金剛5》等片,預(yù)計(jì)都會(huì)把更多的注意力對(duì)準(zhǔn)中國(guó)市場(chǎng)。
Though well prepared, China's movie market watchers are still stunned by the
unprecedented opening of “Transformers: Age of Extinction”, estimated to have grossed some 200 million yuan(32.2 million U.S.dollars)on the first screening day.Michael Bay, who successfully directed the last three “ Transformers,” embraced a lot of Chinese characters this time.As well as mega cities like Hong Kong, Beijing and Guangzhou, the picturesque county of Wulong in southwest China’s Chongqing City serves as a location in the film.The blockbuster features several Chinese stars, including actress Li
Bingbing.Meanwhile, Chinese brands are also represented by the likes of dairy product company Yili and automaker Guangzhou Automobile Group.The movie's audience was 64 percent male and 58 percent were 25 years of age and over, who awarded it an A-CinemaScore.Only 17 percent of critics on Rotten Tomatoes, however, think highly of the film.The film features an entirely new cast of human characters and is the first in the series to feature the Dinobots.Returning Transformers include Optimus Prime, Bumblebee, Ratchet, Leadfoot, and Brains.The film was released on June 27, 2014, in IMAX and 3D.Since its release, the movie has received negative reviews from critics;criticizing the plot, script, direction and acting, but praising the action scenes and visual effects and Wahlberg and Tucci's performances.
第四篇:凱文英語(yǔ)中心,凱文老師,學(xué)生如何調(diào)整狀態(tài)快速適應(yīng)新學(xué)期?
開學(xué)第一周的時(shí)間,大部分孩子都還處在“娛樂模式”,很難進(jìn)入到學(xué)習(xí)狀態(tài)。教育心理專家研究表明,學(xué)生開學(xué)期間需要對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)環(huán)境、課程進(jìn)度和作息時(shí)間進(jìn)行適應(yīng),從“被學(xué)習(xí)”進(jìn)入到安心學(xué)習(xí)的時(shí)間少則兩三天,多則一兩周。因此凱文老師建議家長(zhǎng)應(yīng)在開學(xué)前一周,根據(jù)學(xué)校老師的教學(xué)安排和要求,結(jié)合孩子的實(shí)際情況,和孩子一起制定適合自己的學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃。
提前克服不良習(xí)慣早收心
在暑假許多孩子習(xí)慣了晚睡晚起,飲食和生活不規(guī)律,容易造成生物鐘紊亂。開學(xué)前一周,學(xué)生就應(yīng)該按照學(xué)校的作息時(shí)間安排自己的生活,做好體力儲(chǔ)備。暑假學(xué)生處于放松狀態(tài),如果突然施加過多壓力,很容易導(dǎo)致情緒低落、萎靡不振等現(xiàn)象,更有甚者出現(xiàn)抵觸情緒,對(duì)開學(xué)產(chǎn)生恐懼心理。因此凱文老師提醒同學(xué)們預(yù)習(xí)新知識(shí)是非常有必要的。
新學(xué)期,給老師留下新印象
許多學(xué)校都會(huì)一開學(xué)便舉辦入學(xué)考試,這是對(duì)孩子在暑期的學(xué)習(xí)狀態(tài)最好的檢查。對(duì)同學(xué)來說,這也是一次重新樹立形象的好機(jī)會(huì)。新的學(xué)期是新的開始,家長(zhǎng)應(yīng)該告訴孩子過去的優(yōu)秀與失敗都已經(jīng)翻篇。相信新的學(xué)期每個(gè)孩子都很想給新老師留下好印象,這是孩子改變自己很好的機(jī)會(huì)。
升學(xué)僅是人生一小步
與升學(xué)班的神秘感不同,畢業(yè)班的孩子面臨的將是更大的壓力。面對(duì)壓力,畢業(yè)班的孩子要調(diào)整好心態(tài),最好的辦法還是做好充分的準(zhǔn)備,在潛移默化中放松壓力。凱文老師認(rèn)為,調(diào)整畢業(yè)生的心態(tài)還需要從畢業(yè)班的特點(diǎn)開始,畢業(yè)班的知識(shí)是過去多年知識(shí)的總和,還要學(xué)習(xí)新的知識(shí)。升學(xué)僅是人生一小步,家長(zhǎng)更要注重的是孩子未來的發(fā)展。
2015年上海中小學(xué)寒假放假時(shí)間安排表
根據(jù)《上海市中小學(xué)2014學(xué)校歷》通知,2015年上海中小學(xué)寒假放假時(shí)間為:
一、第一學(xué)期。本市中小學(xué)統(tǒng)一于2014年9月1日開學(xué),2015年1月30日結(jié)束,全學(xué)期共22周。
寒假?gòu)?015年1月31日開始,2月26日結(jié)束。
二、第二學(xué)期。本市中小學(xué)統(tǒng)一于2015年2月27日開學(xué),6月30日結(jié)束,全學(xué)期共19周。暑假?gòu)?月1日開始,8月31日結(jié)束。
第五篇:凱文老師,2015年上海高考英語(yǔ)作文題目(作文解析和)
2015年上海高考英語(yǔ)作文解析,及,作文范文
II.Guided Writing(25分)
Directions: Write an English composition in 120–150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.學(xué)校即將舉辦“讀書節(jié)”,目前正廣泛征集“讀書節(jié)”宣傳冊(cè)圖片。假設(shè)你是該校學(xué)生潘陽(yáng),你已找到以下三幅圖片,決定給讀書節(jié)組委會(huì)寫一封信,推薦其中一幅,你的信須包括以下內(nèi)容:
1.簡(jiǎn)單描述你想推薦的那幅圖片;
2.闡述你用這幅圖片宣傳“讀書節(jié)”的理由。
作文解析:
今年的英語(yǔ)作文題目同樣重點(diǎn)考察了主觀理由型作文的寫作手法,這篇文章要求學(xué)生在三幅學(xué)校讀書節(jié)宣傳圖片當(dāng)中選出自己最喜歡的一幅,對(duì)圖片進(jìn)行描述并說明原因。這也是繼2013年和2014年連續(xù)兩年考察書信體與主觀理由型文章的結(jié)合體之后出現(xiàn)的第三篇主觀理由型文章。
整體來看,今年的作文題目似乎與往年沒有什么區(qū)別,但細(xì)細(xì)分析,我們會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)今年英語(yǔ)作文的難度,不管是在文章內(nèi)容、還是在形式上面,都有了大幅提升。因?yàn)榭忌枰瑫r(shí)兼顧三個(gè)難點(diǎn):
1、書信體正確的的書寫格式;
2、對(duì)圖片內(nèi)容進(jìn)行細(xì)節(jié)的描述;
3、找出恰當(dāng)?shù)睦碛?2-3點(diǎn))進(jìn)行論證,說理充分,同時(shí)注意論點(diǎn)和論據(jù)相結(jié)合,以及文章語(yǔ)句之間的邏輯嚴(yán)密性??梢哉f,近三年來英語(yǔ)作文雖然都在考察主觀理由這個(gè)大的方向,但是考察的難度確實(shí)是在逐年遞增。
對(duì)于考生來說,要想在短短的20分鐘之內(nèi)寫好這篇作文,首先需要拿捏好這篇文章的結(jié)構(gòu)。一般來說,文章第一段用來引出話題,第二段可以對(duì)所選擇的圖片進(jìn)行描寫,描寫時(shí)要格外注意的地方是對(duì)細(xì)節(jié)的詳細(xì)描述,基本內(nèi)容講清楚就可以開始第三段的理由闡述了。
寫好重頭戲理由之后,在尾段我們無需過多筆墨,基本上通過三句話就可以收尾了。也就是總結(jié)加升華,由于這是一篇征集建議的書信體文章,所以需要最后有一句客套話,考生可以通過Looking forward to your reply或者I will appreciate it very much if you can take my suggestions into consideration進(jìn)行文章自然收尾。這樣整篇文章便達(dá)到了內(nèi)容統(tǒng)一,結(jié)構(gòu)完整,說理充分了
作文范文:
Dear Sir/ Madam,Since the Reading Festival is around the corner, I’m writing to recommend a picture which can be used in the brochure to remind the students of the pleasure of reading.In the picture, three students are sitting at the table, discussing heatedly what they have just read.It seems that they have had a lot of fun through the discussion.Though it is admitted that reading is mostly a personal activity which needs quietness and concentration, as far as I’m concerned, it can also be a sharing experience when the same book is being appreciated.Just imagine that you have read a terrific detective story with fascinating and intricate plots.You are so amazed by the genius of the writer and you can’t help sharing it with your classmates or best friends, who turn out to have been deeply impressed as well.The moment you mention the book, the passion and enthusiam about the story will explode which can never be gained on your own.My ideal atmosphere of reading is just like that, through which you can not only appreciate the content by yourself, but also have the pleasure of sharing the plots or opinions with your peers, which will ultimately enhance your understanding of the book.To sum up, the reason of my recommendation is quite simple and apparent that reading, instead of being dull and isolating, can be full of particiation and common interest.I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestion into consideration and I’m looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Pan Yang