第一篇:高考英語(yǔ)作文寫作基礎(chǔ)—話題寫作練習(xí)
高考英語(yǔ)寫作……話題寫作練習(xí)
一.教學(xué)內(nèi)容:
話題寫作練習(xí)
A 人物介紹
參考篇目:Unit 1.Hawking.Einstein
注意:1.表格變?yōu)槎温?/p>
2.按時(shí)間順序
3.根據(jù)邏輯關(guān)系加上連接詞
常用短語(yǔ)和詞匯:
be bornwhen he/she was ……years old /at the age of
laterbegin tograduate from
spend time doingdiscover
評(píng)價(jià):be considered to be / be regarded as
be rewarded……contribute
devoted oneself to sth.根據(jù)以下素材寫一篇介紹愛因斯坦的短文
Date of birth: March 14th, 1879Place of birth: Germany
Childhood: curious, slowing in learning
Education background:
1886 : study in Munich, mathematics, religion
1896 : graduated from high school
1900 : become a maths teacher
1905 : receive a doctor’s degree
Achievement:develop the Theory of Relativity by 1915
prove light is bent when passing the sun
won the Nobel Prize for Physics in 1922
Evaluation: one of the greatest scientists in the 20th century
Albert Einstein
Albert Einstein was born on March 14th,1879 in Germany.When he was a child,he was curious about everything, but he was considered to be slow at learning.In 1886, he began to study in Munich.He studied mathematics as well as religion.In 1896,Einstein graduated from high school at the age of 17.Four years later, Einstein became a maths teacher.In 1905, he received a doctor’s degree.By the year 1915, he had developed the famous Theory of Relativity and became famous in the world.He proved that light is bent as it passes the sun.Because of his great achievement, he won the Nobel Prize for Physics in 1922.Einstein was one of the greatest scientists in the 20th century.Some people say that he was a genius.But I think the main reason why he was so successful was his hard work.B.說明文
參考篇目:Unit2.News Media 不同觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比。闡述自己觀點(diǎn)。
常用短語(yǔ)和詞匯:
對(duì)比:while, but, however, on the contrary, on the other hand,類比:as well, besides, also, too,表達(dá)觀點(diǎn):I think, in my opinion, it seems to me……
1.適當(dāng)增加與要點(diǎn)有關(guān)的語(yǔ)句加以說明;
2.主要陳述自己觀點(diǎn),對(duì)對(duì)方觀點(diǎn)要提及并加以駁斥;
3.在結(jié)尾處重申自己的觀點(diǎn)
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你們班上在討論城市里博物館的作用。根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容,寫一篇120字左右的短文,陳述你自己的觀點(diǎn)。開頭已給出。
Side A
1.Museums can help understand what happened in the past
2.Museums can educate people
3.Museums are centers for research.4.Museums can attract tourists to the city
Side B
1.Museums use up a great sum of money
2.Museums are usually in old buildings, so they need protection
Most cities have at least one museum, but how important are museums to people living in the 21st century?
Some people think that museums use up the money which could be spent on other things.Besides, museums are usually in old buildings, so they often need protection.In my opinion, museums can help people understand what happened in the past.If we have a better understanding of the past, we may improve our life in the future.Museums play an important role in educating people and they are centers for research.Also, museums are very important for tourism.They attract a lot of tourists to the city each year.To sum up, it seems to me that museums are an important part of our life.They are worth visiting and protecting.C.Safety Rules
參考篇目:Unit8 First Aid
Useful expressions:
You should always…Please don’t ….You ought to …
You should not….You must….Never…..Make sure that ….You must never….Always remember to ….*********
Use the lists of dos and don’ts below to write a passage about safety rules in the chemistry lab.Dos
?wash your hands before & after the experiment
?keep the air fresh
?put on gloves when doing experiments
?be careful with fire and dangerous chemicals
Don’ts
?taste chemicals
?eat anything
?touch anything without teacher’s permission
?run about in the lab
An emergency may happen every day.But if we are careful and follow some safety rules, some can be avoided.Let’s take chemistry lab as an example.First of all, you should wash your hands before and after the experiment.And you should keep the air in the lab fresh.You’d better put on the gloves when doing the experiment.Be careful with fire and dangerous medicine.Never taste chemicals or eat anything in the lab.Always remember not to touch anything without teacher’s permission.You shouldn’t run about in the lab.Only in this way can you keep yourself safe in the lab.D.記敘文
參考篇目:Unit 7 Living with disease / Diagnosed with Cancer
時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件、因果關(guān)系交待清。
時(shí)態(tài):過去時(shí)
表示時(shí)間的短語(yǔ):one day, while, when, then, a moment later, as soon as…
因果關(guān)系:so, as, as a result……
圖示提示要先審圖,記要點(diǎn),列出所需詞匯和短語(yǔ)。
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根據(jù)以下圖示(圖略),以Naughty Tommy為題,寫一篇短文,描述在公園里所發(fā)生的事。
Tommy was a naughty boy.One day he saw a girl playing happily under a tree.He decided to play a trick on her.So he picked up a stone and hid himself behind the tree.Then he threw the stone at the girl.Hit on the back, the girl began to cry.Tommy was very happy and went away with a smile.A moment later, he saw a dog sleeping on a bench.He picked up a stone again
and hit the dog.The dog woke up and jumped at him.Tommy was so frightened that
he ran away as fast as he could.E.過程描寫
Useful expressions:
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? ?
? ?
? ?While…..as soon as be about to do….when….just as….? ?suddenly / all of a suddenly
? ?happen to do…/ It happened that…
Tips:
How to write a process paragraph?
1.審題: 文字,圖表
2.文體
3.人稱
4.時(shí)態(tài)
5.內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)
a)時(shí)間
b)地點(diǎn)
c)人物
d)事件經(jīng)過
6.所需詞匯及句型:
Practical writing:
NMET 2000
假設(shè)你是李華,在美國(guó)探親。2000年2月8日清晨,你目擊一起交通事故。警察局讓你寫一份材料,報(bào)告當(dāng)時(shí)所見情況。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列圖畫寫出報(bào)告。
注意:1 目擊者應(yīng)該準(zhǔn)確報(bào)告事實(shí);詞數(shù)100左右;結(jié)尾已為你寫好。
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_____________________________________________________________________After two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.Possible version:
It was 7:15 on the morning of February 8, 2000.I was walking along Park Road towards the east when an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street.Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and make a right turn into Park Road.Suddenly the car hit the man while he was crossing the road.He fell with a cry.The car didn’t stop but drove off at great speed heading west.I noticed the driver was a young woman and the plate number was AC864.About two
minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.學(xué)生習(xí)作
(A)
At 7:15 on the morning of Feb,8th ,2000, I was heading east on the south side of the Park Road, taking my morning walk as usual.I saw an old man on the other side of the road outside the gate of the City Park.He was just crossing the street when a car on the 3rd Street made a sudden right turn at the crossing.The car was so fast that the old man even didn’t have time to dodge and the car hit the elderly hard.I thought the driver would stop to help but she didn’t.Instead, she just drove off, leaving the old man still lying on the ground in pain.Fortunately, I noted down the details: it was a yellow car, the plate number of which was AC864, and the driver was a young lady.After that I went over to check out the old man.(B)
It was 7:15 on the morning of Feb,8,2000.I was walking along the southern side of Park Road.I noticed that an old man coming out of City Park was going to cross the road.There was no car at the moment, so the old man started to cross the road.What happened next really surprised me.A yellow car roared down the 3rd Street, made a right turn and knocked the old man down.It happened in such a short time that the old man had no time to react.Seeing this, I rushed to the place where the old man was hit just in time to see the plate number of the yellow car.It was AC864.F.地點(diǎn)描寫
參考篇目:Unit 5 The British Isles
Useful expressions:
be located in / lie in / be situated in
in the west of, to the west of
off the east coast of
cover an area of …… square kilometers
be made up of / consist of
be separated from
be surrounded by
has a population of
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Location: north-west of Beijing Area: 3.5 square kilometers
History: built in Qing Dynasty, 150 years of construction
in 1860, Anglo-French Forces invaded Beijing, set fire,took away treasures, ruins,new China, protected, part of it, rebuilt in 1980’s,Yuanmingyuan Park
Yuanmingyuan , which is a ruined park, is located in the north-west of Beijing.It covers an area of
3.5 square kilometers.It was built during the Qing Dynasty.After 150 years of construction, it
became one of the most famous palaces in China as well as in the world.However, when Anglo-French forces invaded Beijing in 1860, the whole palace was set on fire.Treasures were taken away and stones lay in ruins.It was not until the founding of New China that it began to be protected.Part of it was rebuilt in 1980’s.The stones take on a golden color at the sunset, as if they were telling the story of yesterday.文章的檢查
時(shí)態(tài),詞形,人稱,數(shù),邏輯關(guān)系
It was 7:15 in the morning of February 8,2000.1._________
I was walking along Park Road towards to the east2.________
when a old man came out of the park on the other3.________
side of the street.Then I saw a yellow car drive up 4.________
Third Street and made a right turn into Park Road.5.________
The next moment the car hit a man while he6.________
was acrossing the road.He fell with a cry.The7.________
car not stop but drove off at great speed heading8.________
west.I notice the driver was a young woman,9.________
the plate number was AC 864.About two minutes10._______
later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to
the nearest hospital.1.in→on2.to去掉3.a 改為an4.正確5.made改為make6.a 改為an7.acrossing應(yīng)為crossing8.not前加did9.notice→noticed10.the plate number前加and
第二篇:高考英語(yǔ)基礎(chǔ)寫作網(wǎng)絡(luò)時(shí)代話題作文
網(wǎng)絡(luò)時(shí)代話題作文
第一項(xiàng) 話題預(yù)測(cè)
網(wǎng)絡(luò)話題貫穿于整個(gè)高考試題當(dāng)中,不論是語(yǔ)言知識(shí)及應(yīng)用、閱讀,還是寫作,網(wǎng)絡(luò)考題常常盡顯其中。寫作命題通常圍繞網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物、網(wǎng)上交友、網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲、網(wǎng)絡(luò)學(xué)習(xí)、電子賀卡、網(wǎng)絡(luò)與紙質(zhì)媒體等話題設(shè)題。因此,寫作命題材料緊扣時(shí)代發(fā)展變化的步伐,從報(bào)刊或網(wǎng)絡(luò)上提取與中學(xué)生息息相關(guān)的學(xué)習(xí)和生活方面的網(wǎng)絡(luò)原材料,按照高考試題的命題原則篩選、重組、編輯,以此來命制寫作試題。
話題預(yù)測(cè):電子賀卡的優(yōu)越性、因特網(wǎng)的主要用途、建網(wǎng)絡(luò)學(xué)校、網(wǎng)上購(gòu)書、報(bào)紙與網(wǎng)絡(luò)的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)、網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲的危害性、迷戀電腦游戲的成因、中學(xué)生上網(wǎng)討論、高三學(xué)生能不能上網(wǎng)、中學(xué)生上網(wǎng)的目的、學(xué)生上網(wǎng)交友等。
第二項(xiàng) 寫作語(yǔ)匯
一、常用單詞
1.網(wǎng)絡(luò)術(shù)語(yǔ)
World Wide Web / 004km.cnmerce 電子商務(wù)e-book 電子圖書cyber language 網(wǎng)絡(luò)語(yǔ)言cybersurf 網(wǎng)絡(luò)漫游cyberculture 電腦化文明 cyberworld 網(wǎng)絡(luò)世界cybernaut 網(wǎng)友communication 通訊in-box 收件箱Shareware 共享軟件telecom 電信homepage 主頁(yè)smart school 智能學(xué)校E-banking 電子銀行freeware 免費(fèi)軟件Internet bar 網(wǎng)吧Internet customer 網(wǎng)上客戶 cyber citizen 網(wǎng)民Internet search servive 互聯(lián)網(wǎng)查詢服務(wù)
2.上網(wǎng)名稱
usename 用戶名ID 用戶名account 賬戶
address 地址phone number 電話號(hào)碼click 點(diǎn)擊
register 注冊(cè)password 密碼resend 重發(fā)(密碼)lost password 遺失密碼 payment 付款cancel 取消
login 登陸purchase 購(gòu)買update 更新
online 在線
3.網(wǎng)上活動(dòng)
medicine on the Internet 網(wǎng)上醫(yī)療Internet Radio 網(wǎng)絡(luò)廣播
reservation on the Internet 網(wǎng)上預(yù)訂employment market on the Internet網(wǎng)上人才市場(chǎng)information feedback 信息反饋onlinegame 網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲
software development 軟件開發(fā)cyber city 虛擬城市
cyber crime 網(wǎng)絡(luò)犯罪cyber economy網(wǎng)絡(luò)經(jīng)濟(jì)
virtual space 虛擬空間virtual reality虛擬現(xiàn)實(shí)
informationalize信息化literature on the Internet網(wǎng)絡(luò)文學(xué)
二、參考短語(yǔ)
1.go online = surf the Internet, surf the Net 瀏覽因特網(wǎng),上網(wǎng)
2.on the Internet 在網(wǎng)上
3.kill time in a bar 泡吧
4.communicate with sb.與…交際
5.chat on the Internet 網(wǎng)上聊天
6.play a computer game 玩電腦游戲
7.use a computer 使用電腦
8.shop online 網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物
三、參考語(yǔ)句
1.Search engines have become one of the most important tools for 004km.cnputer and other machines have become an indispensable
part of our society, which make our life and work more comfortable and less laborious.人們普遍認(rèn)為計(jì)算機(jī)和其他機(jī)器已經(jīng)成為我們社會(huì)必不可少的一部分。它們使我們的生活更舒適,減少了大量勞動(dòng)。
3.People believe that computer skills will enhance their job opportunities or promotion
opportunities.人們相信擁有計(jì)算機(jī)技術(shù)可以獲得更多工作或提升的機(jī)會(huì)。
4.It is commonly thought that our society has dramatically changed by modern science and technology, and human has made extraordinary progress in knowledge and technology over the recent decades.人們普遍認(rèn)為我們的現(xiàn)代化科技使我們的社會(huì)發(fā)生了巨大的變化,近幾十年人類在科技方面取得了驚人進(jìn)步。
5.“E-mail,” “surfing”, “004km.cne the hoursehold words through the world.“電子郵件”、“沖浪”、“萬(wàn)維網(wǎng)”已成為家喻戶曉的詞匯。
第三項(xiàng) 寫作實(shí)踐演練
第1 篇
下周有外賓來訪你校,請(qǐng)根據(jù)如下提綱所示,用英語(yǔ)向外賓介紹你校新建網(wǎng)絡(luò)學(xué)校(net-school)的應(yīng)用情況。
【寫作內(nèi)容】
1.使教與學(xué)更方便,更有趣,能在課堂上獲取更多信息,學(xué)到更多知識(shí)。
2.向師生開放,可向世界各地發(fā)送電子郵件。
3.只要家中有電腦,任何人都可以學(xué)習(xí)本校課程。
4.有助于改善學(xué)校管理,滿足現(xiàn)代化學(xué)校的需要。
【寫作要求】
1.只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容;
2.開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)入總句數(shù)。
Ladies and Gentlemen,Very nice to see you here in our school.Now I’d like to tell you something about the net-school we have set up.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’s all.Thank you
范文
Ladies and Gentlemen,Very nice to see you here in our school.Now I’d like to tell you something about the net-school we have set up.Our net-school is very helpful in many ways.First of all, it can make teaching and learning easier with great interest and so we students can get more information and knowledge in class.We can send e-mails to other parts of the world at any time and get the latest information through the Internet, which is open to both teachers and students.So long as the student has a computer , he can study at home.The net also helps to improve our school management and meets the needs of building up our school into a modern one.That’s all.Thank you
第 2 篇
假如你是校報(bào)負(fù)責(zé)人,需要在校內(nèi)急聘一位同學(xué)任英文版的編輯。請(qǐng)你以 “An English Editor Wanted” 為題目,根據(jù)如下提綱所示寫一則英文招聘啟事。
【寫作內(nèi)容】
1.編輯的主要工作包括:
(1)從英文報(bào)刊雜志及互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上選擇適合學(xué)生閱讀的文章;
(2)篩選和編輯同學(xué)的來稿。
2.招聘所需要滿足的要求:
(1)樂意奉獻(xiàn)出一些業(yè)余時(shí)間為同學(xué)們服務(wù);
(2)英文與美術(shù)皆好,能熟練使用電腦;
(3)感興趣的同學(xué)請(qǐng)?jiān)诒局軆?nèi)與學(xué)生會(huì)聯(lián)系。
【寫作要求】
只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容。
An English Editor Wanted
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Students’ Union
范文
An English Editor Wanted
Our school newspaper is looking for an editor for its English edition.The job mainly includes two parts: one is to choose proper English articles from other newspapers, magaziens or the Internet for us students, and the other is to pick out articles from students in our school and edit them for use.We hope that an English editor wanted could meet the following requirements: first, he or she is willing to devote some of the spare time to serving the others;second, it’s necessary for him or her to be good at both English and fine art.Needless to say, the ability to use the computer is important as well.Those who are interested in the job, please get in touch with the Students’ Union this week.Students’ Union
第三篇:話題作文寫作練習(xí)
高二作文話題作文寫作練習(xí)
(一)新人教版
【本講教育信息】
一.教學(xué)內(nèi)容:
話題作文寫作訓(xùn)練
(一)【題目設(shè)計(jì)】
在我們生活中,令我們感動(dòng)的事例很多很多。有時(shí)是一種聲音,有時(shí)是一種色彩,有時(shí)是一種狀態(tài),有時(shí)是一種場(chǎng)景??
生活中你一定經(jīng)歷、體驗(yàn)過許多令你感動(dòng)的事情。請(qǐng)以“感動(dòng)”為話題寫一篇作文??梢詳⑹鼋?jīng)歷,抒發(fā)感受;可以發(fā)表議論,評(píng)述世態(tài),等等。
注意:
1.立意自定。2.文體自選。3.題目自擬。4.不少于800字。
【寫作指導(dǎo)】
人的情感、情緒總要受到客觀環(huán)境的影響,并受到偶發(fā)事件的牽動(dòng)和制約。感動(dòng)之于人即是如此。明白這一點(diǎn),我們以“感動(dòng)”為話題寫作文,就要首先調(diào)動(dòng)生活積累,回憶起曾經(jīng)讓我們感動(dòng)的人或事,情或景,并選取其中內(nèi)蘊(yùn)豐富,值得反復(fù)咀嚼、玩味的材料組織到文章里來。寫這樣的話題作文,當(dāng)然可以抒情,可以議論,但是組織上述材料作為文章的主體框架卻是抒情、議論的基礎(chǔ)。否則,所抒之情,所議之論就成了無(wú)源之水,無(wú)本之木,不但不能起到感染讀者的作用,還會(huì)使讀者望而生厭、敬而遠(yuǎn)之。這是寫這類話題作文務(wù)必引起注意的地方。
從內(nèi)容上說,既可寫偉人壯舉,也可寫凡人小事,也可寫造化奇觀,鬼斧神工。但有一點(diǎn),即所寫絕對(duì)是令你感動(dòng),也能令讀者感動(dòng)的事情。
說到讓人感動(dòng)的事,決不是讓你去瞎虛構(gòu),胡編亂造。想起1999年高考題“堅(jiān)韌——我所追求的品格/戰(zhàn)勝脆弱”,有很多考生寫自己的父母死去,寫自己遭到車禍等等。以此來說明自己是如何如何的堅(jiān)韌、堅(jiān)強(qiáng)。所寫事情令人感動(dòng)嗎?能夠賺得閱卷老師的一把同情淚水嗎?答案是不言而喻的。所以,寫這類文章,一定要采擷生活中足以令人感動(dòng)的事,用樸實(shí)率真的文字加以表現(xiàn)即可。
自然,上述材料在一篇文章里如何安排、如何使用,完全可以因文而異。以記敘為主,將上述材料寫成文章的主體部分,然后引發(fā)必要的抒情或議論,是一種寫法;依據(jù)行文需要,將上述材料加以梳理,穿插在文章的各個(gè)部分,寫成“形散神凝”的散文,也是一種寫法;甚至只有敘事,沒有抒情或議論,將感情融入敘事當(dāng)中,含蓄地表達(dá)自己的情感,讓讀者自己去揣摩,去把玩,也未嘗不可。文無(wú)定法,只要文章內(nèi)容能夠圍繞話題,闡發(fā)“感動(dòng)”的深厚內(nèi)涵,表現(xiàn)積極的價(jià)值取向,應(yīng)該說,就都合乎題意要求。
【范文分析】
感動(dòng)
翻書的時(shí)候,一片銀杏葉悄然滑落。
我彎腰,拾起,驚覺這是初中畢業(yè)時(shí)同桌送給我的,背面上寫著“珍重,朋友!”不記得當(dāng)時(shí)是否有種想哭的沖動(dòng),只是現(xiàn)在,枯黃的葉片上早已是滴滴淚痕。想起,這世上還有一種心情叫感動(dòng)。
很長(zhǎng)一段時(shí)間,我似乎已經(jīng)忘了感動(dòng)的滋味,是我的心已冷漠,還是我的心被一些無(wú)關(guān)緊要的東西充斥得沒有了空間?
曾有朋友寫給我這樣一句話:“我們之所以會(huì)擦肩而過,不是因?yàn)闊o(wú)緣,而是我們的生活中少了兩個(gè)字——感動(dòng)?!钡拇_,我們的心因此不再敏感,我們不再用心收藏起身邊的一絲一毫感動(dòng),當(dāng)我們錯(cuò)過它,只有再回首時(shí),才發(fā)現(xiàn)原來我們真的失去了很多。
總有人抱怨這世上可感動(dòng)的事情越來越少??墒牵灰覀冹o下心來想一想,你就會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn),其實(shí)感動(dòng)無(wú)時(shí)不在,無(wú)處不在。
讀書累了,父母為我們削個(gè)蘋果,是感動(dòng);口渴了,朋友幫你打回一杯水,是感動(dòng);沮喪時(shí),得到一句寬慰的話,是感動(dòng);高興時(shí),有朋友與你一起分享快樂,是感動(dòng);平凡的日子,收到一份小小的祝福,哪怕只是一片花瓣,一片樹葉,也是感動(dòng)??
人啊,每天被多少平凡的事情感動(dòng)著!或許,有時(shí)正是由于它們的平凡才讓我們視而不見。有這樣一句話:“人之所以會(huì)感動(dòng),是因?yàn)樗钤趷壑??!奔t塵有愛,人間有情,我們又有什么理由要讓庸碌蒙住我們的眼睛而無(wú)法感受感動(dòng)的滋味呢?
感動(dòng)是什么?一千個(gè)人有一千種答案。但,無(wú)論是誰(shuí),都無(wú)法對(duì)一個(gè)毫無(wú)感情的人說出感動(dòng)究竟是什么。因?yàn)楦袆?dòng)不是用嘴說出來的,而是用心品出來的。
感動(dòng),如沁人心脾的甘泉。暢飲甘泉,我們的內(nèi)心變得澄澈而又明亮。
感動(dòng),如熏人欲醉的海風(fēng)。感受海風(fēng),我們的內(nèi)心變得純凈而又寬敞。
感動(dòng),如令人心折的白雪。領(lǐng)略白雪,我們的內(nèi)心變得安靜而又平和。
當(dāng)這個(gè)世上已無(wú)感動(dòng)的足跡的時(shí)候,那它也就隨之成了一個(gè)冰封的天地。冷酷,亦無(wú)情。
朋友,請(qǐng)把心從泥沼中拔出來吧!請(qǐng)騰出一點(diǎn)小小的空間來承載這足以讓我們回味一生的感動(dòng)吧!【評(píng)語(yǔ)】
這是一篇人生感悟之文。文章從細(xì)膩處落筆:畢業(yè)時(shí)同桌送“我”的一片銀杏葉書簽而今已經(jīng)變得枯黃,拾起它,讓“我”感動(dòng)。于是,作者由此引發(fā)出一通感慨:我們常常被一些無(wú)關(guān)緊要的東西所糾纏,卻似乎已經(jīng)冷落了感動(dòng),變得冷漠、麻木起來。其實(shí),“感動(dòng)無(wú)時(shí)不在,無(wú)處不在”。文章列舉令我們感動(dòng)的諸多事例之后,筆鋒一轉(zhuǎn),提出“感動(dòng)是什么”的設(shè)問,并在文章結(jié)尾處用一組排比句從正面做了回答。統(tǒng)觀全文,脈絡(luò)清晰,銜接緊湊,語(yǔ)言暢達(dá),內(nèi)蘊(yùn)深厚。
【題目設(shè)計(jì)】
面對(duì)紛繁的生活,我們常常有許多感悟:當(dāng)我們看見一輪紅日冉冉升起時(shí),我們也許會(huì)感悟到青年人的朝氣蓬勃與旺盛的生命力,當(dāng)我們看見葉子從樹上落下時(shí),我們也許會(huì)感悟到生命的短暫,而應(yīng)該珍惜時(shí)光發(fā)奮進(jìn)取??
朋友,你對(duì)生活有什么感悟呢?請(qǐng)以“感悟__________”為題寫一篇文章。要求:
1、在“感悟__________”后面的空白處填一個(gè)詞或短語(yǔ)。
2、除詩(shī)歌外文體不限。
3、書寫清楚,800字左右。
【寫作指導(dǎo)】
“感悟__________”后面所填詞語(yǔ)可以是動(dòng)詞(動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)),寫對(duì)某一種活動(dòng)的感悟,如“感悟踢球”;也可以是名詞(名詞短語(yǔ)),寫對(duì)某一種事物的感悟,如“感悟飛瀑”,或?qū)δ骋欢螘r(shí)光的感悟,如“感悟高三”;甚至于可以是形容詞,寫對(duì)事物屬性的感悟,如“感悟美麗”,敘寫自己對(duì)美麗的感覺、感受與領(lǐng)悟,闡明什么是真正的美麗??梢娺@道題的寫作視角是相當(dāng)寬泛的,只要你能從心靈深處提取動(dòng)人的“生活切片”,對(duì)題材進(jìn)行深刻挖掘,就能寫好這篇作文。
題目要求“除詩(shī)歌外不限文體”,但從“感悟”一詞來看,顯然不適合寫說明文,而議論文、抒情散文,記敘散文、小小說都是可以寫的。下面幾種構(gòu)思及點(diǎn)撥可作參考:
一、寫議論文必須以具體形象為出發(fā)點(diǎn),以對(duì)某一形象的感悟、闡發(fā)為主要內(nèi)容。比如《感悟花芽》,可以寫自己面對(duì)花芽時(shí)產(chǎn)生的聯(lián)想,表達(dá)自己“愿做小小的花芽,讓風(fēng)雨的洗禮催開成功的花朵”的觀點(diǎn),然后以別人看來“花芽太小,”、“花芽太嫩”、“花芽太弱”三句話,分別引出若干事例——有志不在年高的事例、少年身殘志堅(jiān)的事例、年少位卑也敢為國(guó)爭(zhēng)光的事例,論證“花芽”雖小、嫩、弱,但歷經(jīng)奮斗磨煉,定能催開成功的花朵的道理。
二、寫抒情散文必須讓自己的情感與具體形象(細(xì)節(jié))水乳交融。比如寫《感悟高三》,構(gòu)思時(shí)高三學(xué)習(xí)生活中的一幕幕情景會(huì)紛至沓來,浮現(xiàn)在眼前。寫什么?高三生活最大的特點(diǎn)是什么?然后根據(jù)高三生活的一些特點(diǎn),選取典型細(xì)節(jié),在夾敘夾議中抒發(fā)感情。值得注意的是,抒情散文寫作前醞釀感情極為重要。感情充沛,才能思如泉涌。
三、寫記敘散文或小小說必須設(shè)置情節(jié),安排人物。人物可以是“我”,也可以是“他(她)”,情節(jié)(或者說人物的命運(yùn))是文章的“感點(diǎn)”,人物的“感悟”一般在結(jié)尾“畫龍點(diǎn)睛”,但高明的寫法可以讓人物的“感悟”貫串整個(gè)情節(jié),在激烈的矛盾沖突中展現(xiàn)人物的性格特點(diǎn)。
【范文分析】
感悟生命
灰蒙蒙的天不知為何在偷偷地陰笑著,我一屁股跌坐在灑滿陽(yáng)光的嫩綠的草坪上,手里擺弄著一棵剛剛扯下還沒來得及枯死的太陽(yáng)草,還是那個(gè)熟悉的四邊形,我知道明天又是個(gè)好天。
有光的地方就有影,我坐在一棵枝繁葉茂的樹下,身上滿是從樹葉的空隙間漏下來的一點(diǎn)一點(diǎn)斑駁的黑影,把我映得活像只金錢豹,我倒覺得當(dāng)只豹子也不錯(cuò),每日為了生存奔波,不必去想那許許多多的人情冷暖,世態(tài)炎涼。什么成功與失敗,活下來就是成功,餓死了就得認(rèn)命。
我面前是一條日夜奔流的大河,足以讓孔子再感嘆一次“逝者如斯夫”。但就是這樣的大河也擺脫不了冬日里斷流的悲慘命運(yùn)。我其實(shí)不想選擇這條河,因?yàn)槎绽飼?huì)讓尸骨重見天日,我想選一條不會(huì)斷流的河去作我一生中最壯觀的一次實(shí)驗(yàn),但沒辦法,在我的城市里它是唯一的。誰(shuí)叫物以稀為貴呢?
現(xiàn)在不過早晨八九點(diǎn)鐘,我還想再坐會(huì)兒,沒有人的地方總是顯得好美。
在我的周圍有好多蒲公英呢,它們繞著我飛舞,仿佛我是這個(gè)世界的花的頭兒??梢韵硎苓@個(gè)有風(fēng)的早晨而不必有一丁點(diǎn)兒的付出。
蒲公英!我突然想起媽媽曾經(jīng)說過的話,每個(gè)蒲公英都帶著一個(gè)小小的種子,到了合適的地方就會(huì)生根,但如果環(huán)境不合適,如果過干或者過濕,如果過熱或者過冷,它都不會(huì)長(zhǎng)大。天!那么多如果,蒲公英還沒絕種么?
我環(huán)顧四周,發(fā)現(xiàn)目所能及的地方都能看見它們,在微風(fēng)中輕擺,像母親送著自己的孩子去遠(yuǎn)征。那么纖細(xì),那么堅(jiān)強(qiáng)。
原來,生命并不是脆弱的。原來,生命可以直面挫折。??
現(xiàn)在十點(diǎn),我想我該回家了?!驹u(píng)語(yǔ)】
這篇小小說語(yǔ)言含蓄,筆法較老練。文章寫“我”遇到生活中的挫折后,來到河邊想作
“一生中最壯觀的一次實(shí)驗(yàn)”。到底是什么使之輕生呢?作者沒有點(diǎn)明,只在當(dāng)身上滿是樹葉的斑駁黑影,把我映得活像只金錢豹時(shí)說過,“我倒覺得當(dāng)只豹子也不錯(cuò)”,“不必去想那許許多多的人情冷暖,世態(tài)炎涼。什么成功與失敗”。這種現(xiàn)象是具有生活的真實(shí)性的,可以讓人去想象。“我”的思想發(fā)生轉(zhuǎn)折的契機(jī),是面對(duì)蒲公英時(shí)的一番遐想,先由感覺產(chǎn)生感受,進(jìn)而融入感情,直至升華為感悟:“生命并不是脆弱的”,“生命可以直面挫折”。全文情節(jié)以“我”對(duì)生命遇到挫折時(shí)的激烈心理沖突而展開,以“我”對(duì)生命的正確感悟而收束,準(zhǔn)確地體現(xiàn)了題意。
【題目設(shè)計(jì)】
閱讀下面一則寓言,根據(jù)要求作文。
太陽(yáng)和風(fēng)在爭(zhēng)論誰(shuí)更有威力,風(fēng)說:“我來證明我比你行。你看到那個(gè)穿大衣的老頭了嗎?我打賭我能比你更快地使他脫掉大衣?!?/p>
于是太陽(yáng)躲到云后,風(fēng)就開始吹起來,愈吹愈大,大到成了一場(chǎng)颶風(fēng),但是風(fēng)吹得愈急,老人把大衣裹得愈緊。
終于,風(fēng)放棄了。然后太陽(yáng)從云后走出來,對(duì)老人露出了燦爛的微笑。不久,老人開始擦汗,然后脫掉大衣。太陽(yáng)對(duì)風(fēng)說:“你看,還是溫和與友善比憤怒和暴力有威力?!?/p>
閱讀材料后,請(qǐng)以“友善”為話題寫一篇文章,可以寫你的經(jīng)歷、體驗(yàn)、感受和看法,也可以編寫故事。注意:
1、立意自定。
2、文體自選。
3、不少于800字。
【寫作指導(dǎo)】
本題應(yīng)注意以下幾點(diǎn):
1、準(zhǔn)確領(lǐng)會(huì)話題的精神。話題材料以寓言的形式,通過風(fēng)與太陽(yáng)的對(duì)比,揭示了“溫和與友善比憤怒和暴力有威力”的道理,寫作中最好也能體現(xiàn)出這樣一組對(duì)比,即不僅要詮釋“友善”待人的重要性,還要拿它與“憤怒、暴力”等作比較。
2、既可以從大處著眼,談國(guó)與國(guó)之間、民族與民族之間需友善相待;也可以從小處落筆,談善待身邊的人,促進(jìn)人際關(guān)系的和諧、融洽;還可以換個(gè)切入點(diǎn),寫人類應(yīng)善待自然、保護(hù)環(huán)境。
3、話題作文文體不限,除了寫成一般的記敘文、議論文外,還可以采用書信、日記、演講稿等應(yīng)用文體,或發(fā)揮想象,編寫童話、寓言、小劇本等。
【范文分析】
友善待人
記得幾年前,語(yǔ)文老師給我們讀過一篇題為《好言一句三冬暖》的文章,其中有一個(gè)片段,至今記憶猶新。
美國(guó)著名的試飛駕駛員胡佛,有一次飛回洛杉磯,在距地面九十多米高的空中,剛好有兩個(gè)引擎同時(shí)失靈,幸虧他技術(shù)高超,飛機(jī)才奇跡般地著陸。胡佛立即檢查飛機(jī)用油,正如他所預(yù)料的,他駕駛的那架螺旋槳飛機(jī),裝的卻是噴氣機(jī)用油。當(dāng)他召見那個(gè)負(fù)責(zé)保養(yǎng)的機(jī)械工時(shí),對(duì)方已嚇得直哭。這時(shí),胡佛并沒有像大家預(yù)想的那樣大發(fā)雷霆,而是伸出手臂,抱住維修工的肩膀,信心十足地說:“為了證明你能干得好,我想請(qǐng)你明天幫我的飛機(jī)做維修工作?!睆拇?,胡佛的飛機(jī)再也沒有出過差錯(cuò),那位馬馬虎虎的維修工也變得兢兢業(yè)業(yè),一絲不茍了。
這個(gè)故事令人感動(dòng)。雖然維修工的過失險(xiǎn)些使自己?jiǎn)拭?,但心地善良的胡佛深深懂得有過失者的心理。當(dāng)對(duì)方因出了嚴(yán)重差錯(cuò)而痛苦不堪時(shí),善解人意,自我克制,出人意料地給予寬慰,使其恢復(fù)自信和自尊。這,就是友善的巨大力量。試想,如果胡佛憤怒斥責(zé)這位維修工,甚至不依不饒地追究他的責(zé)任,那么很可能會(huì)徹底地毀了他。可見,面對(duì)同一件事,以兩種不同的態(tài)度來對(duì)待,就會(huì)有迥異的結(jié)局。友善,可以使大事化小,小事化了,不僅善
待了他人,也能使自己得益——胡佛的飛機(jī)不是從此就沒出過任何差錯(cuò)嗎?而以憤怒乃至暴力來應(yīng)對(duì),結(jié)果往往是有百害而無(wú)一利。
能否以友善的態(tài)度為人處世,不但體現(xiàn)著一個(gè)人的道德水平,有時(shí)甚至是一個(gè)民族素質(zhì)高低的反映。有一則報(bào)道說:同樣一起交通事故,在加拿大,可以不到2分鐘就順利解決,司機(jī)會(huì)很快下車,視事故的實(shí)際情況,以一種友善的態(tài)度來協(xié)商解決,雙方都會(huì)向?qū)Ψ秸J(rèn)錯(cuò)、道歉,于是不到2分鐘,便各自開著車離開了。而在中國(guó),不花上一個(gè)小時(shí)是很難解決爭(zhēng)端的。原因很簡(jiǎn)單,一旦撞車,司機(jī)就放下車窗,不管自己是否有錯(cuò),便破口大罵,在車內(nèi)罵得不爽,又走下車互相指責(zé)。于是后面的車輛不能前行,司機(jī)們一個(gè)個(gè)在車內(nèi)使勁地按喇叭。直至交警出面,分析事故雙方的責(zé)任,一場(chǎng)**才會(huì)作罷,但當(dāng)事人常常還要互罵上幾句,以泄心頭之恨。如此一來,不耗費(fèi)一兩個(gè)鐘點(diǎn)才怪呢。有位資深研究人士曾撰文指出:“在21世紀(jì)的競(jìng)爭(zhēng)中,我們?cè)谏a(chǎn)、經(jīng)濟(jì)方面碰到的困難還是能克服的,也是可以趕上去的,??但國(guó)民素質(zhì)不用說與發(fā)達(dá)國(guó)家比,就是與一些發(fā)展中國(guó)家相比也是不容樂觀的?!蔽矣X得,不能溫和待人、自我省察和友善相處,正是我們國(guó)民素質(zhì)不高的一個(gè)具體方面。
生活是一面鏡子。當(dāng)你面帶友善走向鏡子時(shí),你會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn),鏡中的那個(gè)人也正滿懷善意地向你微笑;當(dāng)你以粗暴的態(tài)度面對(duì)它時(shí),你會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn),鏡中的那人也正向你揮舞拳頭。人生在世,請(qǐng)擁有一顆友愛之心,保留一份友善之情吧!【評(píng)語(yǔ)】
這篇文章吃透了話題材料的內(nèi)涵,立意上有一定的深度,而且用例典型,對(duì)比鮮明,剖析得當(dāng),讀來令人信服。
第四篇:高考英語(yǔ)作文(話題寫作)
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(一)有關(guān)“信心與希望”話題
例:
1、生活中困難不可避免,面對(duì)困難需要信心…
2、試舉一例說明信心在學(xué)習(xí)(考試、生活等)方面的作用…
3、你對(duì)困難的態(tài)度…
It is well-known that we exist in a dynamic world with various difficulties.When we are faced with them, nothing is more important than hope and self-confidence.With confidence, we can find sometimes the question is not as “huge”as we imagine.Take most of us for example, the entrance exam to college seems to be a horrible monster.Accordingly, some people give up, some persist.In my eyes, with confidence, right assessment of the difficulties, as well as full preparation, try and exert your strength, and then we will overcome all problems and challenges.On the whole, I believe we youngsters should face the difficulties in right manner.And nothing is impossible, brave it out and just do it!
(二)有關(guān)“誠(chéng)實(shí)、誠(chéng)信”話題
例:
1、生活中確實(shí)存在不講誠(chéng)信的現(xiàn)象…
2、舉一例說明(如,有毒奶粉、冒名頂替上大學(xué)、考試作弊等)…
3、講求誠(chéng)信的意義…
Almost all of us heard the story “Here Comes the Wolf” when we were little kids.What we can learn from the story is that we must be honest.However, there’re lots of phenomena of dishonesty nowadays.Being dishonest does great harm not only to other people but also to yourself.Take the case of fake milk powder for example.After drinking this kind of milk, the babies had big heads while their legs and arms were still thin, which badly affected their health.To our great relief, the producers got accused and punished for all the serious consequences in the end.Having the reputation of being honest and reliable will make other people trust you, which will provide you many benefits and give you opportunities that others may not get.Being honest, you will find it easier to cooperate with others and people will be friendly to you and support you.In a sense, if life is a longjourney, honesty will be the backpack that should be taken along all the way.Let’s pick up our “backpack”—honesty, and start the wonderful journey!高考直通車網(wǎng)站:http://004km.cn/ 歡迎關(guān)注@高考直通車 微博:http://weibo.com/gaokao96040
(三)有關(guān)“志愿者”話題
例1:假設(shè)你是健康俱樂部的一位志愿者,根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn),寫一篇短文,幫助廣大市民更好地了解和預(yù)防H1N1流感:(1)該流感已在許多國(guó)家爆發(fā),病例每天持續(xù)增多;
(2)該流感與其他季節(jié)性流感傳播方式一樣,通過咳嗽、噴嚏等在人群中傳播;
(3)建議:不隨便當(dāng)眾咳嗽、打噴嚏,經(jīng)常洗手,生病時(shí)在家休息……
As we know, a growing outbreak of H1N1 flu has been sparked in many countries.An increasing number of cases are being reported every day。
It’s thought that H1N1 flu spreads in the same way that regular seasonal influenza viruses do, that is, spreading from person-to-person, mainly through the coughs and sneezes of people who are sick with the virus。
Faced with this severe disease, here are some everyday measures we should take to stay healthy.First, cover your nose and mouth with a tissue when you cough or sneeze.Wash your hands often with soap and water, especially after you cough or sneeze.Avoid touching your eyes, nose or mouth.Germs spread that way.If you get sick, stay home from work or school and limit contact with others to keep from infecting them。
Finally, H1N1 flu is not a terribly deadly disease, which is curable.So, don’t be nervous and just keep calm as usual。
例2:
你所在的城市即將舉辦國(guó)際貿(mào)易博覽會(huì)。有關(guān)部門現(xiàn)向全社會(huì)招聘志愿者。要求:
(1)具有為國(guó)際友人服務(wù)的熱情;
(2)掌握豐富的文化知識(shí),既是服務(wù)人員,也是文化的使者;
(3)具有流利的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)能力,能做好溝通工作。
假如你叫李華,請(qǐng)根據(jù)以上要求,寫一封想作博覽會(huì)志愿者的申請(qǐng)信。
要求:字跡工整,100詞左右。開頭已寫好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
生詞:國(guó)際貿(mào)易博覽會(huì) the International Trade Exposition
Dear Sir or Madam:
Thank you for taking your time to read my letter.As the coming of the International Trade Exposition, I’d like very much to be a volunteer。
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All our citizens are hosts for this special event.Above all, I promise I should endeavor to serve with enthusiasm our distinguished guests from all over the world.Besides, I have a rich knowledge about Chinese history, so I will be not only a servant but also a carrier for our splendid culture.What’s more, as we all know, English as an international language, will play an important role in communication during the Exposition, and I am good at it.I can express myself fluently and clearly in English。
To sum up, I believe I can be a qualified volunteer.I will value it and do all I can if I could be accepted to be one。
Yours,Li Hua(四)有關(guān)“跨文化”話題
例:假設(shè)你叫李華,你的外國(guó)朋友John想了解中國(guó)的春節(jié),請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提綱,給他寫一封短信:
1、春節(jié)在中國(guó)人中的地位
2、春節(jié)前,人們……
3、春節(jié)期間,人們……
參考詞匯:對(duì)聯(lián)couplet 爆竹firecracker
Dear John,How time flies!Four moths have passed since we saw each other last time.I cannot helpbut miss you.You asked me about Chinese Spring Festival.Now I would like to tell yousomething about it.The Spring Festival is a Chinese traditional festival.It is the most important and enjoyable one.A few days before the festival, houses are cleaned and red couplets are put up on the doors of every household.They are said to frighten away the ghosts.On that day, people are dressed up.Firecrackers ring out in the air, which adds to the atmosphere of the festival.People after a year’s hard work begin to relax and visit one another.Presents and dinners are given to celebrate the happy reunion of friends and relatives.Families get together.They have jiaozi and enjoy the New Year TV show.Customs may vary from place to place, but the same happy atmosphere is to be found everywhere in the country.Now, I hope you have some idea of Chinese Spring Festival.Best wishes,Yours, 高考直通車網(wǎng)站:http://004km.cn/ 歡迎關(guān)注@高考直通車 微博:http://weibo.com/gaokao96040
Li Hua(五)有關(guān)“財(cái)富、健康、幸?!痹掝}
例1: 根據(jù)下面提示,寫一篇《財(cái)富與快樂》的短文。
(1)一些人認(rèn)為財(cái)富能帶來快樂。
(2)另一些人認(rèn)為錢多了不是一件好事。
(3)提出自己的看法。
注意:?jiǎn)卧~數(shù)120個(gè)左右。
Wealth and Happiness
Some people think wealth can bring happiness to them.It is true that most of them try to acquire wealth by means of honest labor.They work hard and overcome many difficulties.After doing this, they feel very happy and pleased.Even their spending money is a kind of happiness。
But some people believe wealth can’t bring them happiness.For example, when one gets a fortune, the family members will come from different parts of the country and try to share the wealth with him.And afterwards, they will quarrel with one another, trying to share more.And sometimes even appear bloody fight and killing.What a terrible result!
In my opinion, I think there is no doubt that wealth brings happiness, especially in the modern society.If you have money you can lead a comfortable and colorful life.But we should take a proper attitude towards wealth.Remember: money is not everything。
例2:
最近,你班同學(xué)展開了一場(chǎng)討論,主題是:Wealth & Health。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表提供的信息,寫一篇100詞左右的文章,介紹一下你們討論的情況。
一些人認(rèn)為財(cái)富更重要
一些人認(rèn)為健康更重要
1.沒有錢萬(wàn)萬(wàn)不行
2.想辦法多掙錢
1.健康是本錢
2.要愛惜身體
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個(gè)人看法:更看重健康。身體不好,錢再多也無(wú)濟(jì)于事。
Wealth & Health
Which is more important, wealth or health? Different people have different opinions.Some people prefer wealth, holding that money can not bring everything, but without it, one can do nothing.In order to accumulate more money they can do anything.However, other people regard health as more important.Once health is lost, it is no use having a lot of money.As far as I am concerned, I love wealth, but I value health more.Everybody wants to live a happy life.So they try their best to earn money which can ensure they lead a comfortable life, but if happiness and comfort are achieved at the cost of their health, how can they be happy? Without health money becomes meaningless.In my opinion, no one agrees that a wealthy person without good health can be happy.So, just do our best to keep healthy.(六)有關(guān)“教育、校園類”話題
例1:你班李明和王英同學(xué)在高三階段有不同的學(xué)習(xí)方法。請(qǐng)描述下列各圖,適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)使文章連貫,并談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?/p>
Li Ming and Wang Ying are two students of Senior Three.They both work hard and but they have different learning methods.Li Ming often sleeps in class instead of listening to the teacher.As a result, he misses lots of points that the teacher makes and it usually takes him more time to finish his homework.So he has to stay up late and doesn’t get enough sleep.However, Wang Ying has quite a different way of learning.She listens attentively and tries to catch everything that the teacher says in class.Because of this, she spends less time doing her homework, which makes it possible for her to go to bed early.In my opinion, Wang Ying learns more effectively in class and has more free time to enjoy herself, so I prefer her learning method.例2:假設(shè)你叫李華,你將作為高三畢業(yè)生代表,根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)在畢業(yè)晚會(huì)上用
英文作一簡(jiǎn)短的告別演講:
1、對(duì)三年高中生活的懷念;高考直通車網(wǎng)站:http://004km.cn/ 歡迎關(guān)注@高考直通車 微博:http://weibo.com/gaokao96040
2、對(duì)老師的感謝;
3、對(duì)母校的祝福。
My teachers and fellow students,In a couple of weeks, we’ll say goodbye to our mother school.How time flies!Now It’s really hard for me to put my feelings into words.The past three years has been really a wonderful journey with you guys, full of laughter and tears.To make the journey safe and fruitful, our great teachers contributed their time, energy, love and the whole heart.Here, we are extremely grateful for all that you, dear teachers, have done for us.It’ll soon be the time for us to depart, though unwillingly.But it is not the end.It just means that we’re going to begin a new journey.Finally, on behalf of all the graduates present here, let me extend our sincere wishes for our mother school and respectable teachers.Thank you!
例3:假如你是李華,是華文中學(xué)的學(xué)生會(huì)主席,為了豐富同學(xué)們的業(yè)余生活,提高同學(xué)們的英語(yǔ)水平,學(xué)生會(huì)組織了一個(gè)English club,請(qǐng)你寫封邀請(qǐng)信,邀請(qǐng)同學(xué)們參加,內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括:
1.English club設(shè)立的目的 2.English club 要開展的活動(dòng)
3.邀請(qǐng)大家參加 English club
注意:開頭、結(jié)尾已給出;
字?jǐn)?shù)80-120;auditorium 禮堂
Boys and girls,I’m the chairman of Student Union, Li Hua, and I have big news for you.To enrich our life on campus and improve our English, we, Student Union, set up an English club.Obviously, besides study, there are also other things beneficial to us.It is believed that the club can make our campus life colorful and rewarding.There goes the plan.It is arranged that we will see English films in the auditorium on Tuesday evening.Apart from that, there is going to be an English debate or discussion on Saturday evening;yet, the specific topics haven’t been settled.If you have wonderful ideas and suggestions, please let us know.高考直通車網(wǎng)站:http://004km.cn/ 歡迎關(guān)注@高考直通車 微博:http://weibo.com/gaokao96040
I’ll highly appreciate it if you are actively involved in the club.You will never regret joining us.So, just do it.Student Union
例4:目前,有不少中學(xué)生不做家務(wù),一些父母認(rèn)為:中學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)負(fù)擔(dān)重,首要任務(wù)是學(xué)習(xí)。再者,中學(xué)生也不知道怎樣做家務(wù)。請(qǐng)你就此用英文給一家報(bào)社寫一篇短文,闡述你的觀點(diǎn)和看法。
注意:
1.詞數(shù):100左右;
2.可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),使行文連貫。
Nowadays, some students don’t help their parents do housework at home.Some parents love their children too much and don’t let them work at home.On one hand, they think that their children are too busy with their studies and expect them to do well in their lessons only.On the other hand, they think their children don’t know how to do the housework.However, I think students should help their parents do housework at home.First, that can develop their love for work.Next, that can help them understand their parents better.Last and the most important, that can help them cultivate their ability to live.(七)有關(guān)“環(huán)境友好型、資源節(jié)約型社會(huì)”話題
例1:近日你所在的學(xué)校開展了“為建設(shè)節(jié)約型社會(huì)獻(xiàn)一計(jì)”主題活動(dòng),同學(xué)們提出了許多建議。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn),用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文向English Horizons雜志編輯部投稿:
有人建議
你的建議
1、不浪費(fèi)糧食和紙張
2、盡量不使用方便筷、塑料袋
3、畢業(yè)生將書贈(zèng)給低年級(jí)同學(xué)循環(huán)使用?
注意:
1、不要逐字翻譯,可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié);高考直通車網(wǎng)站:http://004km.cn/ 歡迎關(guān)注@高考直通車 微博:http://weibo.com/gaokao96040
2、詞數(shù):120字左右,開頭已經(jīng)為你寫好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);
3、參考詞匯:方便筷disposable chopsticks
Recently,there has been an activity of “doing your bit for an energy-saving society” in our school.Our schoolmates are highly concerned about the increasing lack of energy and provide their own suggestions.Some students suggest that we shouldn’t waste any food or paper, though they appear very easy to get.Meanwhile, some other students think it advisable to refuse to use disposable chopsticks and plastic bags.Besides, it is also strongly recommended that those used textbooks as well as reference books of graduates, which are still in good condition, not be thrown but recycled.Actually, there are still quite a lot that we can easily do: say, try to take buses or ride bicycles instead of driving cars, etc.All of these will definitely help to build an energy-saving society.例2:假如你上周末參加了某旅行社組織的所謂生態(tài)游,你覺得名不副實(shí)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容把自己經(jīng)歷的這次生態(tài)游和對(duì)真正生態(tài)游的看法寫出來。
所謂的生態(tài)游
欣賞風(fēng)景,享受新鮮空氣
有人摘花、捉鳥、亂扔垃圾
真正的生態(tài)游
享受自然,同時(shí)也是一種責(zé)任
要保護(hù)自然,保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物
帶走美好回憶,留下青山綠水
Last weekend I went on an eco-travel with a travel agency.All the way we enjoyed the beautiful scenery and fresh air.But a few of us picked flowers as while going sightseeing..Some even tried to catch the birds they saw.What was worse, many tourists threw rubbish here and there.The rubbish may do harm to wildlife there.I don’t think this is a true eco-travel.A true eco-travel is a tour that not only allows us to express our love for nature, but needs our responsibility as well.As we enjoy the beauty of nature, we should try our best to protect it.And we should also try to protect wildlife.A true eco-travel should be like this: take nothing away but your good memory;leave nothing behind but all the green trees and the clean water
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第五篇:2017高考英語(yǔ)作文寫作基礎(chǔ)—描述性寫作.doc
高考英語(yǔ)寫作……描述性寫作
一.教學(xué)內(nèi)容:
描述性寫作
二.重點(diǎn)、難點(diǎn): I.特點(diǎn)及常用結(jié)構(gòu)
1.描述性文章是把人物、事件、景觀、地點(diǎn)、環(huán)境等用生動(dòng)的語(yǔ)言,形象地描繪出來。
2.描述性文章的結(jié)構(gòu)
(1)人物:
開頭應(yīng)有簡(jiǎn)明的介紹
文章的主體部分可按時(shí)間或事件的主次進(jìn)行描述
結(jié)尾進(jìn)行評(píng)論或談感受
(2)地點(diǎn):
要學(xué)會(huì)準(zhǔn)確地表示方位的詞或短語(yǔ)
描述地點(diǎn)的位置通常由上至下,從里到外,從左至右,從遠(yuǎn)到近。
總之,無(wú)論是描述人物,還是地點(diǎn)、環(huán)境,都要詳略得當(dāng),重點(diǎn)突出。
3.學(xué)習(xí)并牢記下面的短語(yǔ)和句型
表空間順序
in front of, in the front of, at the back of,on the right(left)side
close to , next to, opposite, across,inside, outside
in(to)the south / east / west / north
on one side …, on the other side(of)
常用短語(yǔ)和句型:
方位
1.There is a tall shelf on the left of my room.(on the right of, in the front of, near the window,)
2.Above the bed, there is a large painting of the blue sea.(On the right of the room,)
3.Next to it is a bed.(In front of it, At the back of, In the middle of, To the right of)
4.They are opposite the door.(on the left / right of the room.)
5.The office building is in the east of the campus.(in the south of, to the west of, in front of, behind, at the back of,)
6.The monument, which was built in 1894, stands in the center of the square.描述國(guó)家,城市等
7.China is located in Asia.(be situated…be surrounded by, lie to the east of)
8.It covers a huge area of 9,600 000 square kilometers.9.The population of this city is 100,000.路線
10.When you come out of …(get to …reach…)
11.Cross the street(river)(keep walking along… walk down…)
12.Turn right at the end of Bridge Street into Riverside Road.(the second traffic lights, the first crossing,)
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13.Take the first turning on your left.(take the path which crosses the river.))
14.Go straight on to the traffic light and then turn right.15.You’ll see(find)it
人物
16.My grandpa, kind and patient, enjoys talking with kids.17.He is about 5 feet and 7inches tall.18.She has a round face with two big eyes.描述物品
19.This rope is 100 meters long.= The length of this rope is 100 meters.= This rope is 100 meters in length.(in weight, in width, in height, in size, in color, in shape)
20.It is a round yellow hat with pink flowers on it.It’s made of straw.21.There are three books in the her drawer.II.范文講解
1.1999年NMET書面表達(dá)
假設(shè)你是李華,在一所中學(xué)讀書。最近收到美國(guó)朋友Smith先生的來信。他三年前參觀過你校,聽說現(xiàn)在變化很大,希望了解有關(guān)情況。參照下圖,給他寫一封回信,介紹你校的變化。
注意:
(1)回信須包括圖畫的主要內(nèi)容,可適當(dāng)增減細(xì)節(jié),使內(nèi)容連貫。
(2)詞數(shù)100字左右。
A.審題:
(1)一封信(體裁)
(2)談學(xué)校的變化(三年前圖1,三年后圖2)
(3)重點(diǎn)在三年后的描述
B.題綱及常用結(jié)構(gòu)
(1)開頭語(yǔ):收到來信hear from sb./ get(receive)your letter …
(2)學(xué)校的變化:
新教學(xué)樓:a new school building
圖書館:our new library
新操場(chǎng):the new playground
樹木環(huán)繞:lots of trees
(3)表述方位的詞:
on one side(on the other side)
on the right(left)
There be …,in front of, in and around
C.將以上要點(diǎn)擴(kuò)展成句并連文,注意句與句之間的過渡。Dear Mr.Smith,I was so pleased to hear from you and I am writing to tell you something about my school.You are right, Quite a few changes have taken place.On one side of the road there is a new classroom building.On the other side, where the playground used to be now stands another new building our library.In it there are all kinds of books, newspapers and magazines.The playground
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專心 is now in front of the school.We have also planted a lot of trees in and around the school.I hope you come and see for yourself some day.Best wishes.Yours, Li Hua
2.假如你叫Alice,你本應(yīng)去機(jī)場(chǎng)接Danial,但你不得不去醫(yī)院接你的母親回家,你的朋友Mary主動(dòng)提出替你去機(jī)場(chǎng)接Danial,你給Danial寫信說明上述情況,并描述Mary的外表。
Something About Miss Mary Age
in her twenties Looks
slim, of medium height, wavy hair, with glasses Clothes a T-shirt Shoes
high-heeled shoes Personality kind and cheerful
A.審題:
(1)描述性文字的信。
(2)重點(diǎn)描述人物的特點(diǎn)和外貌
B.題綱:
(1)開頭:表明不能去的原因及解決辦法。
(2)中間:描述Mary的外貌及特點(diǎn)。
利用表中的key-word
(3)信的結(jié)尾:I’m looking forward to seeing you.1.Dear Danial,I’m very sorry I can’t come to meet you at the airport since I have to take my mother home from hospital.My friend Mary has kindly offered to meet you and bring you home.As you have never met her before.I’ll describe her to you.Miss Mary is a young lady in her twenties with glasses.She is of medium height.She has a round face with wavy hair.She likes wearing high-h(huán)eeled shoes.It is easy to recognize her because she is usually dressed in T-shirt and a skirt.She is always cheerful.I do hope you manage to recognize my friend Mary without any difficulty.I’m looking forward to seeing you.Your sincerely, Alice 【模擬試題】
1.假設(shè)你是李華,你的美國(guó)朋友Mike將于6月底到北京作短暫停留,請(qǐng)你幫他安排一天的活動(dòng)。要求用所給的示意圖寫一封信向他提出建議并對(duì)各地點(diǎn)加以簡(jiǎn)單的介紹。
2.假如你昨天參觀了一所高中示范校。請(qǐng)按照?qǐng)D中規(guī)定的順序(從主樓出發(fā)),根據(jù)以下圖表和中文提示,向你班里的其他同學(xué)用英文講述你參觀該校時(shí)的所見所聞。
注意:
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(1)詞數(shù)100左右;
(2)開頭與結(jié)尾已為你寫好。
生詞:噴泉fountain
參觀地點(diǎn) 學(xué)生活動(dòng) 實(shí)驗(yàn)樓
做實(shí)驗(yàn) 藝術(shù)中心 練樂器 報(bào)告廳
聽報(bào)告 操場(chǎng)
足球賽
【試題答案】
1.Dear Mike,I’m glad to hear you are coming soon.I’ve planned a one-day trip for you in Beijing.In the morning you can first go to the Summer Palace, which is one of the most beautiful parks in Beijing.There you can go boating and climbing.It’s also a nice place for taking pictures.Then in the middle of the day you can enjoy a Chinese lunch in a restaurant.In the afternoon, I suggest you visit Beijing University.As you know, it is famous both in China and in the world.Before you go back to your hotel, you can drop in the Book Town.There are not only different kinds books but also many Chinese paintings.I hope you’ll have a good time.Best wishes, Yours,Li Hua
2.Yesterday I paid a visit to a model high school, together with my friend.It’s very big with a beautiful fountain in the center of the schoolyard.We started our visit from the main building.First we went to the lab building where some students were doing experiments.Then we entered the lecture hall behind the lab building and saw many students listening to a lecture given by a professor.Opposite to the lecture hall was the art center.There we watched groups of students playing musical instruments.Finally we arrived at the playground at the far back of the school.Some boys were having a football game, which was so exciting that we couldn’t help cheering for them.It was really an impressive visit.用心
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