第一篇：2011年高考英語滿分作文及名師評析文檔

作文題目

假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國筆友Bob將于九月到你所在城市的建新華文學(xué)校學(xué)中文，來信請你在學(xué)校附近為他找一套住房。請根據(jù)圖畫提供的信息，寫信介紹住房的情況，并告知住房面積為25平方米，月租500元。

注意：

1．詞數(shù)：100左右：

2．參考詞匯：房租—Tent(n.).I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here.I have already found a fiat for you.It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School.Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School.The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen.There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month.Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs.If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.Hope you will come here soon!

All the best!

Yours, Li Hua

滿分理由

本文格式正確，意思表述完整，行文流暢自然。作者在寫作過程中注意長短句并用，還使用了以'which，’引導(dǎo)的非限定性定語從句，從而使文章層次分明，富于變化，不愧為考場佳作。

Dear Bob,Welcome to China!You wrote to me to find a place for you.I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese

School.It is on the third floor and there’re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom.There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom.The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.Also from this house you can get to your school easily.Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building.It is only one stop.At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I’U be able to meet you at the airport, see you.Best wishes!

Yours, Li Hua

滿分理由

本文格式正確，內(nèi)容完整，表述清楚，銜接緊密流暢，時態(tài)語態(tài)使用準確，特別是結(jié)尾末段適度的發(fā)揮，既充實了內(nèi)容，又符合邏輯，成為本文與眾不同的亮點。Dear Bob,How are you these days?

I’m so glad to know that you’ll come to our city to learn Chinese.You asked me to find a place for you.Now I’ve found one which I think is pretty good.The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop.It’s just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom.Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable.By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month.I hope you’ll like it.If not, I’ll try to find another place for you.Yours,Li Hua

滿分理由

本文內(nèi)在邏輯性很強，由遠及近。由外及內(nèi)，層次分明，錯落有致。同時讓步狀語從句運用得恰到好處，很出彩，再則結(jié)構(gòu)完整，從開頭的問候語到結(jié)尾都很完備。Dear Bob,I’m so glad that you are coming to learn Chinese here.I’ve already found you a house near our school.I’d like to tell you something about it.You may get on No.ll bus at Fang Cao Street and the next stop is just Jian Xin Chinese School.The house is near the school.It is about 25 square metres.In the bedroom, there is a bed, a sofa standing against the wall and a table near the window.You may find a light on the table and a chair next to it.There are two other rooms connecting the bedroom.The left one is a bathroom and the right one is a kitchen.So you may cook by yourself.The rent for the house is 500 yuan per month.Hope you’ll enjoy staying here!

Yours,Li Hua

滿分理由

本文內(nèi)容具體，詳略得當(dāng)，表述方式很有創(chuàng)造力和新意，長短句并用，語言結(jié)構(gòu)富于變化，錯落有致，順暢圓潤，尤其是情態(tài)動詞和分詞的運用很獨到，為文章增色不少。

Dear Bob,I’m glad to hear from you.Welcome to our city in september.I’ve found a suitable house for you.The house is on Fang Cao Street, not far from the Jianxin Chinese School.If you take the No.11 bus, it is just one stop.It is a flat on the third floor of a building.It has three rooms, a

living-room, a bathroom and a kitchen.You can cook yourself.The mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you.In the living-room, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with chair.The desk is next to the

window.It will be good for study.The total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month.Yours,Li Hua

第二篇：2007年高考英語滿分作文及名師評析

2007年高考英語滿分作文及名師評析

2007高考英語滿分作文

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一家賓館新開業(yè)，為吸引外國賓客，希望在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上進行宣傳。請你用英語為其 寫一篇文字介紹。主要內(nèi)容包括：

1.地點：距白山入口處500米;

2.房間及價格：單人間(共20間)，100元/天;雙人間(共15間)，150元/天;熱水淋浴;3.餐飲：餐廳(中、西餐)，咖啡廳(茶、咖啡);4.游泳池：全天免費開放;5.歡迎預(yù)定。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右，開頭語已為你寫好;2.可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!

Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides single?person room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double? person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day.It also provides hot water bath service.You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe.The swimming pool is open for free the whole day.All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable.So come to enjoy yourself!

Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.【名師點評】

本文開門見山，首先點明了主旨。本文最大的特點是應(yīng)用了很多比較復(fù)雜的句式，使文章比較出彩。開頭使用了獨立結(jié)構(gòu)交代賓館位置。which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句的使用也很正確?？偟貋碚f，文章句式精煉，是篇不錯的滿分作文。

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好詞 1.provide v.提供2.convenience n.便利

...好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and are

very enjoyable.所有這些服務(wù)都會給你帶來便利，并且非常的愉快。

評析：bring great convenience，帶來便利。

【安徽卷】

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假如你是李華，美國一所友好學(xué)校準備與你們學(xué)校共同創(chuàng)辦一份中學(xué)生英文刊物，該校格林先生來信詢問有關(guān)情況。請你給她寫封回信，假如你是李華，美國一所友好學(xué)校準備與你們學(xué)校共同創(chuàng)辦一份中學(xué)生英文刊物，該校格林先生來信詢問有關(guān)情況。請你給她寫封回信，主要內(nèi)容如下：

l 表示贊成。

l 提出你喜歡的欄目。

l 簡要說明理由。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右。

2.新的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好。

3.適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

4.參考欄目：欄目column

Dear Mr.Green，I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together.That sounds great!And I definitely agree with you on that.Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea.Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world.Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it's necessary to learn from each other.This will offer a wonderful chance.Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English.Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool!The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can't miss it!Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things....Well, I can't list more.I really can't wait to read that magazine!

Yours faithfully，Li Hua

【名師點評】

這是一篇滿分作文。由于這篇作文的出現(xiàn)，導(dǎo)致了安徽省今年的英語作文分數(shù)普遍偏低。仔細分析了這篇文章，寫的的確是好，很地道的美式英語，一些詞語的大膽使用，讓人不得不猜測此人或者是家人可能有過國外生活的經(jīng)歷，否則這么地道標準的英語，可不是一朝一夕所能寫出來的。

比如說：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大膽運用，list, can't wait to 簡直是perfect!況且文章中沒有一個錯誤，不管是書寫還是語法。英語能夠?qū)W到這種程度，不可謂不讓人佩服。

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【試題回放】2007年4月29日上午10點到11點，全國億萬學(xué)生陽光體育活動在各地大中小學(xué)校同時進行，江蘇省1，100萬學(xué)生積極參與了這項活動。

教育部倡導(dǎo)學(xué)生：

u 每天鍛煉一小時

u 健康工作五十年

u 幸福生活一輩子

請你根據(jù)以上提示，用英語準備一份發(fā)言稿，向同學(xué)們講述一下陽光體育活動的有關(guān)情況，并就高三學(xué)生是否需要每天花一小時鍛煉，談?wù)勀愕目捶袄碛伞?/p>

注意：

1、發(fā)言稿應(yīng)包括以上所有信息，要有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

2、詞數(shù)：120左右。發(fā)言稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

3、參考詞匯：陽光體育活動a national student sports program;

教育部the Ministry of Education

Good afternoon, everyone，...The national student sports program, waged by the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10：00a.m.~11:00a.m.on April 29，2007 in many primary and middle schools all over China.Almost 11 million students in Jiangsu province participated in this program.The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years.Our whole life will be very enjoyable.In my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is limited.Health is a basic condition for our study.If we did not do exercises, we wouldn't be able to get good study records.So every one of you, join the program now!

Thank you!

【名師點評】

本文的結(jié)構(gòu)十分明晰，同時句式使用得熟練而準確。本文分為三段，前兩段敘述，后一段發(fā)表觀點，典型的作文結(jié)構(gòu)。在句式使用上，作者用法多樣，使用了獨立結(jié)構(gòu)和虛擬語氣，十分出彩。復(fù)雜的句式是本文的特點之一。

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好詞1.wage v.發(fā)動2.aim v.瞄準3.advocate v.提倡

好句1.The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years.教育部提倡我們每天做一個小時的運動，能夠健康地活50年。

評析：advocate，其后接虛擬語氣，可以省略情態(tài)動詞。

2.If we did not do exercises, we wouldn't be able to get good study records.如果我們不進行運動，我們的學(xué)習(xí)成績就不會很好。

評析：虛擬語氣。

【重慶卷】

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...據(jù)報道，7歲的美國女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung cancer)后處于極度的痛苦之中，美國抗癌協(xié)會(ACS)決定，每當(dāng)Amy收到一封慰問信，就給她增加3美分的治療款。

假如你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，請你用英文給Amy寫一封慰問信，主要內(nèi)容包括：

自我介紹

得知的情況

表示鼓勵

打算為她做什么

祝她早日康復(fù)

注意：

1.信的格式已為你寫好

2.信中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實情況。

3.詞數(shù)100左右。

4.請在答題卡上作答。

Dear Amy，I'm Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of China.I'm sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brought you great pain.But you should realize that you are young and have a promising great future.So, stand up and fight against the disease!I'm sure you will win.It is reported that the America anti-cancer association will donate three cents upon every comfort letter you receive.So I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to you.In that way, you will get enough money for you to be cured.Hope you can be well soon.Yours，Li Hua

[名師點評]

...本文依照要求，涵蓋了所有要點。文章使用了高中常見的句式，如I?m sorry to hear that..., It is reported that...等，都比較好。作者對定語從句的使用恰到好處地修飾了文章，行文自然而通順，值得學(xué)習(xí)。

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好詞1.realize v.意識到2.promise v.允諾3.donate v.捐贈

好句1.I?m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brings you great pain.我很遺憾地得知你身患肺癌，給你帶來了巨大的痛苦。

好處：which引導(dǎo)限制性定語從句。

2.So, stand up and fight against the disease!

因此，堅強地與疾病做斗爭吧!

好處：擲地有聲，語言準確。

...

第三篇：2007年高考英語滿分作文及名師評析文檔

【全國卷II】

【試題回放】

一家賓館新開業(yè)，為吸引外國賓客，希望在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上進行宣傳。請你用英語為其 寫一篇文字介紹。主要內(nèi)容包括：

1.地點：距白山入口處500米;

2.房間及價格：單人間(共20間)，100元/天;雙人間(共15間)，150元/天;熱水淋浴;3.餐飲：餐廳(中、西餐)，咖啡廳(茶、咖啡);4.游泳池：全天免費開放;5.歡迎預(yù)定。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右，開頭語已為你寫好;2.可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!

Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides single person room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day.It also provides hot water bath service.You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the

restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe.The swimming pool is open for free the whole day.All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable.So come to enjoy yourself!

Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.【名師點評】

本文開門見山，首先點明了主旨。本文最大的特點是應(yīng)用了很多比較復(fù)雜的句式，使文章比較出彩。開頭使用了獨立結(jié)構(gòu)交代賓館位置。which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句的使用也很正確。總地來說，文章句式精煉，是篇不錯的滿分作文。

積累卡片英漢互譯

好詞1.provide v.提供2.convenience n.便利

好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and are

very enjoyable.所有這些服務(wù)都會給你帶來便利，并且非常的愉快。

評析：bring great convenience，帶來便利。

【安徽卷】

【試題回放】

假如你是李華，美國一所友好學(xué)校準備與你們學(xué)校共同創(chuàng)辦一份中學(xué)生英文刊物，該校格林先生來信詢問有關(guān)情況。請你給她寫封回信，假如你是李華，美國一所友好學(xué)校準備與你們學(xué)校共同創(chuàng)辦一份中學(xué)生英文刊物，該校格林先生來信詢問有關(guān)情況。請你給她寫封回信，主要內(nèi)容如下：

l 表示贊成。l 提出你喜歡的欄目。l 簡要說明理由。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右。2.新的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好。3.適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。4.參考欄目：欄目—column

Dear Mr.Green,I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together.That sounds great!And I definitely agree with you on that.Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea.Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world.Since

people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each other.This will offer a wonderful chance.Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English.Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool!The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can’t miss it!Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.Well, I can’t list more.I really can’t wait to read that magazine!

Yours faithfully,Li Hua

【名師點評】

這是一篇滿分作文。由于這篇作文的出現(xiàn)，導(dǎo)致了安徽省今年的英語作文分數(shù)普遍偏低。仔細分析了這篇文章，寫的的確是好，很地道的美式英語，一些詞語的大膽使用，讓人不得不猜測此人或者是家人可能有過國外生活的經(jīng)歷，否則這么地道標準的英語，可不是一朝一夕所能寫出來的。

比如說：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大膽運用，list, can't wait to 簡直是perfect!況且文章中沒有一個錯誤，不管是書寫還是語法。英語能夠?qū)W到這種程度，不可謂不讓人佩服。

【江蘇卷】

【試題回放】

2007年4月29日上午10點到11點，全國億萬學(xué)生陽光體育活動在各地大中小學(xué)校同時進行，江蘇省1，100萬學(xué)生積極參與了這項活動。

教育部倡導(dǎo)學(xué)生：

每天鍛煉一小時

健康工作五十年

幸福生活一輩子

請你根據(jù)以上提示，用英語準備一份發(fā)言稿，向同學(xué)們講述一下陽光體育活動的有關(guān)情況，并就高三學(xué)生是否需要每天花一小時鍛煉，談?wù)勀愕目捶袄碛伞?/p>

注意：

1、發(fā)言稿應(yīng)包括以上所有信息，要有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

2、詞數(shù)：120左右。發(fā)言稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

3、參考詞匯：陽光體育活動——a national student sports program;

教育部——the Ministry of Education

Good afternoon, everyone,The national student sports program, waged by the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10：00a.m.~11:00a.m.on April 29，2007 in many primary and middle schools all over China.Almost 11 million students in Jiangsu province participated in this program.The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years.Our whole life will be very enjoyable.In my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is limited.Health is a basic condition for our study.If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records.So every one of you, join the program now!

Thank you!

【名師點評】

本文的結(jié)構(gòu)十分明晰，同時句式使用得熟練而準確。本文分為三段，前兩段敘述，后一段發(fā)

表觀點，典型的作文結(jié)構(gòu)。在句式使用上，作者用法多樣，使用了獨立結(jié)構(gòu)和虛擬語氣，十分出彩。復(fù)雜的句式是本文的特點之一。

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好詞1.wage v.發(fā)動2.aim v.瞄準3.advocate v.提倡

好句1.The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years.教育部提倡我們每天做一個小時的運動，能夠健康地活50年。

評析：advocate，其后接虛擬語氣，可以省略情態(tài)動詞。

2.If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records.如果我們不進行運動，我們的學(xué)習(xí)成績就不會很好。

評析：虛擬語氣。

【重慶卷】

【試題回放】

據(jù)報道，7歲的美國女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung cancer)后處于極度的痛苦之中，美國抗癌協(xié)會(ACS)決定，每當(dāng)Amy收到一封慰問信，就給她增加3美分的治療款。假如你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，請你用英文給Amy寫一封慰問信，主要內(nèi)容包括： 自我介紹

得知的情況

表示鼓勵

打算為她做什么

祝她早日康復(fù)

注意：

1.信的格式已為你寫好

2.信中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實情況。

3.詞數(shù)100左右。

4.請在答題卡上作答。

Dear Amy,I’m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of China.I’m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brought you great pain.But you should realize that you are young and have a promising great future.So, stand up and fight against the disease!I’m sure you will win.It is reported that the America anti-cancer

association will donate three cents upon every comfort letter you receive.So I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to you.In that way, you will get enough money for you to be cured.Hope you can be well soon.Yours,Li Hua

[名師點評]

本文依照要求，涵蓋了所有要點。文章使用了高中常見的句式，如Im sorry to hear that..., It is reported that...等，都比較好。作者對定語從句的使用恰到好處地修飾了文章，行文自然而通順，值得學(xué)習(xí)。

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好詞1.realize v.意識到2.promise v.允諾3.donate v.捐贈

好句1.I am sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brings you great pain.我很遺憾地得知你身患肺癌，給你帶來了巨大的痛苦。

好處：which引導(dǎo)限制性定語從句。

2.So, stand up and fight against the disease!

因此，堅強地與疾病做斗爭吧!

好處：擲地有聲，語言準確。

第四篇：2006年高考英語滿分作文及名師評析

2006年高考英語滿分作文及名師評析

2006高考英語滿分作文

【全國卷I】

【試題回放】

假定你是李華，亞洲冬季運動會將在你居住的地方舉辦，現(xiàn)正在招募志愿者，你希望成為其中一員。請按要求用英文給組委會寫一封信。內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：1.個人情況：年齡，性別，學(xué)歷 2.個人條件：英語好，愛好體育，善于交際，樂于助人，熟悉本地情況 3.承諾：提供最佳服務(wù)

注意：詞數(shù)100左右，開頭語已為你寫好;可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫;生詞：申請apply(v.), application(n.)，志愿者volunteer

Dear Sir / Madam:

I was quite excited when I heard the Asian Winter Games will be held in the city I live.My name is Li Hua.I am an 18-year-old boy student in a senior middle school.And I want to be a volunteer for the games.I like English and sports very much.I like making friends and I am ready to help others.I can be a good interpreter in every sports during the time.Hope the games will be a great success.Hope I will be chosen to be one.Yours faithfully，Li Hua

[名師點評]

這篇文章寫得非常流暢，把握了所有要點，同時以“我”為中心，詳細說明了自己對志愿者工作的結(jié)合，以此來表達自己的決心。由于用詞恰當(dāng)，這種表現(xiàn)就比較充分，具備一定的說服力。詞匯和語句的運用也不錯。

[全國卷II]

【試題回放】

假定你是李華。應(yīng)英國朋友Bob的要求，寫一封短信介紹你校圖書館的基本情況。內(nèi)容須包括下面兩幅圖中的相關(guān)信息。

注意：

1、字數(shù)100左右

2、可以適當(dāng)增減細節(jié)，以使行文連貫

3、開頭語已為你寫好

Dear Bob，Thank you for your last letter asking about our library.Our library locates between the teaching building and our garden.The shape of it seems to be a book to welcome our students.it's open from Monday to Friday ,and we can borrow the books from 9:00a.m.to 7:00p.m.There are many books available in our library ,dealing with almost every subject.Not only the books, but also the magazines can be read here.You may borrow up to five books at a time, and keep them for at most ten days.Due to the library , we are offered a place to gain as much knowledge as we can.If you are interested in it, welcome to our school, and I'll show you around.Yours sincerely，Li hua

[名師點評]

本文最大的特點是描繪仔細而生動，意思表達十分契合。文章以短句為主，兼以長句讀起來輕快。文章的體系結(jié)構(gòu)也是常用的三段式，作者極力推薦自己的圖書館，這么好的圖書館怎么不打動他的外國朋友呢?

【安徽卷】

【試題回放】

假設(shè)你是李華，作為選派的交流學(xué)生在美國某中學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)了一年，寄住在Mr.Brown家里，剛回到國內(nèi)?；貒?，你發(fā)現(xiàn)自己的一本英語詞典遺忘在他家，因此給他寫了一封信，請他幫助寄回詞典。信的主要內(nèi)容如下：

感謝在美國期間他所提供的幫助

一本英語詞典忘記帶回

詞典是美國老師送的，非常珍貴

詞典很可能丟在臥室的書架上

郵資自己付

注意：

1、詞數(shù)100左右;信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好。

2、可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫

2、參考詞匯：郵資-postage

Dear Mr.Brown，I have been back, and write this letter to show my thanks.As the exchange student, you make me feel warm.Welcome to my country ,I'll show you around in turn.However , there exists a problem that I have left my dictionary at your home.I like it very much , for it was a precious gift from my teacher who comes from the U.S.I guess that my book may stay on your shelf in the bedroom.Do you mind if you send my dictionary to me? I will pay for the postage and I'll be very grateful if you show your warmness again.I'm eager to receive your reply.Yours，Li hua

[名師點評]

本文作為信件，首先其格式是正確的。既然是應(yīng)用文，那么文章的意圖就要明確表示出來，本文在表達作者寫作意圖的時候，情真意切，用詞委婉而合理。文章不但使用了定語從句，還采用了疑問句，讓句式變化而不呆板。

【重慶卷】

【試題回放】

加拿大高中生David在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)Internet上登出啟事notice，希望結(jié)識一位中國朋友，以便學(xué)習(xí)中國的語言，文化culture。

假設(shè)你是李華，請在看到這則啟事后，用英文給David發(fā)一封電子郵件，主要內(nèi)容包括：

你怎樣得知David的愿望

你愿意成為他的朋友

你打算如何幫助他

你盼望他的回復(fù)

注意：

1、電子郵件的格式已為你寫好

2、字數(shù)：100詞左右

3、在答題卡上作答

Dear David，I'm a student from China and have noticed your requirement on line.You would like to search for a Chinese friend to help you get to know China and its culture.Maybe I'm your good choice.China is a country that has a long history of 5,000 years.Not only our history ,but also our culture is the access to understand us better.There are so much that I want to know, if you are interested.I'll be looking forward to your reply.I'll show you around our great China if you come to China.Yours sincerely ，Li hua

[名師點評]

本文的語言非常流暢，我們可以看到，本文雖沒有華麗的辭藻，但是語言的組織和層次感很強。同時連詞的使用，如not only, but also ,讓文章的重點突出，同時也起到了強調(diào)和吸引注意的目的。

第五篇：高考英語滿分作文

假設(shè)你是李華，你在報上看到北京電視臺今年七月將舉辦外國人“學(xué)中文，唱中文歌”才藝大賽。你的美國朋友Peter正在北京一所大學(xué)學(xué)中文，你覺得他應(yīng)去試一試。請按以下要點給他寫信告知此事，并表示可以提供幫助。

比賽時間：7 月18日。報名時間：截止到6月30日。報名地點：北京電視臺

注意：1.詞數(shù)：100左右 2.可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫 3.參考詞匯：才藝大賽—talent show Dear Peter, I read in a newspaper today that a “Learn Chinese, Sing Chinese Songs” Foreigners’ Talent Show will be held in Beijing Television Station on July 18.I know you like singing, and you are in Beijing during that period.I think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent, and how well you’ve learned Chinese.If you would like to try, you have to go to the TV station to sign up before the end of June.If there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help.Yours, Li Hua

假定你是李華，正是英國牛津參加短期語言培訓(xùn)，計劃星期天去倫敦旅游?；ヂ?lián)網(wǎng)上一則廣告引起了你的注意，但一些具體信息不明確(箭頭所指內(nèi)容)。請給該旅行社發(fā)一封電子郵件，詢問有關(guān)情況。注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右，信的格式已為你寫好。2.可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。3.參考詞匯：牛津——Oxford 費用——fee Dear Sir/Madame, I’m writing for more information about the day tour to London.As a student at Oxford University, I’d like to know if you have any special price for students.As for the money you charge, does it cover the entrance fees for visiting the places listed? What about lunch? Is it included? Or do I need to bring along my own food? How long will the tour last? Since I need to prepare my lessons for the next day, I’d like to know the time to return.Besides, is there any time for shopping? I really want to have a look at the big stores in London.Yours, Li Hua

假定你是李華，亞洲冬季運動會將在你居住的地方舉辦，現(xiàn)正在招募志愿者，你希望成為其中一員。請按要求用英文給組委會寫一封信。內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：1.個人情況：年齡，性別，學(xué)歷 2.個人條件：英語好，愛好體育，善于交際，樂于助人，熟悉本地情況 3.承諾：提供最佳服務(wù)

注意：詞數(shù)100左右，開頭語已為你寫好;可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫;生詞：申請—apply(v.), application(n.)，志愿者—volunteer Dear Sir / Madam: I was quite excited when I heard the Asian Winter Games will be held in the city I live.My name is Li Hua.I am an 18-year-old boy student in a senior middle school.And I want to be a volunteer for the games.I like English and sports very much.I like making friends and I am ready to help others.I can be a good interpreter in every sports during the time.Hope the games will be a great success.Hope I will be chosen to be one.Yours faithfully, Li Hua

一家賓館新開業(yè)，為吸引外國賓客，希望在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上進行宣傳。請你用英語為其 寫一篇文字介紹。主要內(nèi)容包括： 1.地點：距白山入口處500米;2.房間及價格：單人間(共20間)，100元/天;雙人間(共15間)，150元/天;熱水淋浴;3.餐飲：餐廳(中、西餐)，咖啡廳(茶、咖啡);4.游泳池：全天免費開放;5.歡迎預(yù)定。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右，開頭語已為你寫好;2.可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides single person room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day.It also provides hot water bath service.You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe.The swimming pool is open for free the whole day.All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable.So come to enjoy yourself!Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.假定你是李華，從小喜愛大熊貓(panda),一直通過有關(guān)網(wǎng)站(website)關(guān)注三年前在美國圣迭哥動物園出生的大熊貓“蘇琳”和她的母親“白云”?，F(xiàn)在蘇琳即將三歲。請根據(jù)以下要點給動物園工作人員寫一封信：

1、自我介紹;

2、祝賀蘇琳生日;

3、感謝工作人員;

4、索取蘇琳三歲生日照。注意：

1、詞數(shù)100左右;

2、可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫;

3、開頭語已為你寫好。例文：

Dear Sir/Madam, Greetings from China!I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan.I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child.About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website,.Now she’s going to be three.I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.Yours truly, Li Hua

假定你是李華，正在英國接受英語培訓(xùn)，住在一戶英國人家里。今天你的房東Mrs.Wilson 不在家，你準備外出，請給Mrs.Wilson 寫一留言條，內(nèi)容包括： 1.外出購物 2.替房東還書

3.Tracy 來電話留言：1)咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)見面取消 2)此事已告知Susan 3)盡快回電 注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Mrs.Wilson, I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm.I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library.At about 1 o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to.She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting.She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home.She has already told Susan about this change.Yours, Li Hua

實現(xiàn)有效的溝通，建立良好的人際關(guān)系，不僅要善于言表，更要學(xué)會傾聽。請你根據(jù)下表中所提供的信息，寫一篇題為 “Being a Good Listener” 的英文演講稿。注意：

1、對所給要點，逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。

2、詞數(shù)150左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

3、演講稿中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校及本人姓名。Good afternoon, everyone.The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”.Good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship.Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap;teachers should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a good relationship with their students;students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others.Show your respect and never stop others till they finish their talk;show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile;be open-minded to different opinions even though you don’t like them.In a word, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other.Thank you for your listening!

假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國筆友Bob將于九月到你所在城市的建新華文學(xué)校學(xué)中文，來信請你在學(xué)校附近為他找一套住房。請根據(jù)圖畫提供的信息，寫信介紹住房的情況，并告知住房面積為25平方米，月租500元。注意：

1．詞數(shù)：100左右：

2．參考詞匯：房租—Tent(n.).I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here.I have already found a fiat for you.It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School.Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School.The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen.There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month.Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs.If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.Hope you will come here soon!All the best!Yours, Li Hua

描述你在學(xué)校的一次午餐，具體要求如下： 詳細描述用餐的情況 簡要表述你對這次午餐的感受

這是一篇簡單卻需要挖掘的文章，因為如果只是描述用餐情況，顯然缺乏深度，夸夸其談，流于表面。學(xué)生拿到這樣的題目需要仔細考慮用餐背后的東西。比較容易想到的話題是食物浪費、用餐衛(wèi)生、餐桌禮儀等。在創(chuàng)作范文中，筆者另辟蹊徑，通過大多數(shù)同齡人用餐時的匆忙來襯托“我”的悠然自得，凸顯出在緊張的高中學(xué)生生涯中，作者能夠留有一片心靈凈土，通過飲食來調(diào)節(jié)情緒，更好地面對挑戰(zhàn)，表現(xiàn)出樂觀的人生態(tài)度。此文結(jié)構(gòu)簡單，文筆清新，語言精準，并運用了高中階段常見的語法結(jié)構(gòu)，不失為一個很好的作文模板，供學(xué)生借鑒。范文：

The instant the bell indicating the endof the last class rang, out of theclassroompoured all students but one。Unlikemy peers, I was in no hurry tomake a run for the school canteen, to rush through lunch and to return to the classroomfor homework.I arrived at the canteenwhen amassive queue had formed.Waitingformy turn patiently, I smelled the aroma ofthe appetizing food.Greasy as some dishesmight be, thewide range of food preparedby the schoolwas superior in nutritional val-ue to that found elsewhere.The typical schedule of a highschooleris extraordinarily hectic and thus lunch breakis a rare timewhen overworked students canwind down and enjoy the pleasure providedby the flavorful food.Imake it a point topampermy taste buds by savoring every littlebit of taste in food.What I usually like todo over lunch is have amindless conversa-tionwith a couple of studentswho have alsolearnt to smell the roses along the bonebreaking journey through high school.Werounded off our lunch with a dessert, re-freshed and satisfied。Come to think of it, it is not the foodbutmy attitude towards life that affordsmepleasure and empowersme in facing up tovarious challenges.(219words