第一篇：2011英語四六級高分作文亮點(diǎn)詞匯總結(jié)

日志

返回日志列表

2011英語四六級高分作文亮點(diǎn)詞匯總結(jié)

英語四六級高分作文亮點(diǎn)心經(jīng)：

1、是否長短句交叉;

2、是否會(huì)使用插入語;

3、用詞是否多樣，準(zhǔn)確，形象，盡量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞;

4、關(guān)鍵詞是否換用，切勿老用重復(fù)詞;

5、句型使用是否準(zhǔn)確、地道。

下面給出寫好一篇作文的注意事項(xiàng)：

1.適當(dāng)用被動(dòng)替換主動(dòng)，這樣能更客觀的反映事實(shí)，句子開頭不要總是用we / I(比如寫結(jié)尾時(shí)不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to.)舉個(gè)經(jīng)典結(jié)尾2004年六月六級作文的最后一段：It is, therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that.By doing so, its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.2.善于使用插入語，比如說把副詞、連接詞等，作插入語放在中間，一般放在主語、動(dòng)詞或者助動(dòng)詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。

如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入語放在中間，一般放在動(dòng)詞，助動(dòng)詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。

比如說： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that ?

3.一定要學(xué)會(huì)換詞，換形象，具體的替換太寬泛的。(考試中一般不要出現(xiàn)good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable替換proper, approaches替換ways, implement替換carry out, sharpen one's competitive edge替換enhance one's competitiveness(提高某物競爭力)下面舉一篇南京工程學(xué)院某位同學(xué)寫的優(yōu)秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何運(yùn)用各類寫作技巧的。這位同學(xué)把老師上課講的各類寫作手法和精彩替換和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。

Computer and I(By Simmy)I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in goggling an army of useful information i had expected, and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music.That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.exceedingly 替換 very thrilling 替換 exciting sth.exert a tremendous fascination on sb.替換 sb.be interested in sth.google 替換 search

an army of 替換 a lot of The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers.Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals.It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一個(gè)精彩句型，用來描述在某個(gè)時(shí)期發(fā)生了什么事情;Increasing popularity 替換 more and more popular Coincident with ? 非常地道的句型，表達(dá)“與?一致”的意思，替換 With ?

Advancement 替換 development Pour into(flood into / swarm into)替換 enter into Current(currently)替換 now Appeal to sb.替換 sb.be interested in sth.Growing individuals 替換 more and more people It is no exaggeration to say 經(jīng)典句型，說某事是毫不夸張的

For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment.Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.For a start 替換 To begin with We can, freely, search 用了插入語的寫作手法

Our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.用了非常精彩的被動(dòng)

Additionally 替換 In addition / Besides Deliver 替換 send There is no denying that, however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,?, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quite a few net citizens to copying.There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 這個(gè)句子有三個(gè)精彩之處，首先There is no denying that這個(gè)句型，還有however作為插入語，function in the disservice of 替換 do harm to Emerging 替換 appearing(fading 替換 disappearing)Net citizen 網(wǎng)民，屬于精彩用詞

As a classic proverb goes that no garden has any weeds.Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts.We should, therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.No garden has no weeds 替換 Every coin has two sides Computers do play，do 強(qiáng)調(diào)

Positive 替換 important / good 等

A slice of 替換 a part of Unfavorable 替換 bad Impacts 替換 effects / influences We should, therefore, take advantage of ? 使用插入語

Fruits(而且fruits 用的非常形象，merits/ virtues)替換 advantage(defects 替換 disadvantage)Facet 替換 aspect

來源:http://

第二篇：英語四六級作文高分100詞

四六級英語作文高分100個(gè)同義詞替換精髓詞匯

100個(gè)同義詞替換精髓詞匯

1.important =crucial(extremely important),significant(amount or effect large enough to be important)2.common=universal, ubiquitous(if something is ubiquitous, it seems to be everywhere)3.abundant=ample(enough and usually extra), plentiful(enough for people's needs and wants)4.stick=adhere, cling(hold on something tightly)5.neglect=ignore.(difference: neglect means someone has not paid enough attention to something;ignore means no attention.)6.near=adjacent(twothings next to each other), adjoin(the same as adjacent)7.pursue=woo(man woos woman, old-fashioned), seek(if you seek sth, you try to obtain it.FORMAL)8.accurate=precise(precise is exact and accurate in all details), exact(correct in every detail)9.vague=obscure(unknown or known by only a few people)10.top=peak, summit 11.competitor=rival, opponent(especially in sports and politics)12.blame=condemn(if you condemn something, you say it is very bad and unacceptable)13.opinion=perspective, standpoint(means looking at an event or situation in a particular way)14.fame=prestige(describe those who are admired), reputation 15.build=erect(you can erect something as buildings, FORMAL), establish 16.insult=humiliate(do something or say something which makes people feel ashamed or stupid)17.complain=grumble(complain something in a bad-tempered way)18.primary=radical(very important and great in degree), fundamental 19.relieve=alleviate(alleviate means you make pain or sufferings less intense or severe)20.force=coerces into(coerce means you make someone do something s/he does not want to),compel 21.enlarge=magnify(magnify means make something larger than it really is)22.complex=intricate(if something is intricate, it often has many small parts and details)23.Lonely=solitary(if someone is solitary, there is no one near him/her 24.small=minuscule(very small), minute, 25.praise=extol(stronger than praise), compliment(polite and political)26.hard-working=assiduous(someone who is assiduous works hard or does things very thoroughly 27.difficult=arduous(if something is arduous, it is difficult and tiring, and involves a lot of efforts)28.poor(soil)=barren, infertile(used to describe the soil is so poor that plants cannot be planted on it)29.fragile=brittle, vulnerable(someone who is vulnerable is easily hurt emotionally or physically)30.show=demonstrate(to demonstrate a fact means tp make it clear to people.)31.big=massive(large in size, quantity, or extent), colossal(use this word, you emphasize something’s large), tremendous(INFORMAL)

32.avoid=shun(if someone shuns something, s/he deliberately avoid that something or keep away from it.)33.fair=impartial(someone who is impartial is able to give a fair opinion or decision on something.)34.attack=assault(physically attack someone), assail(attack violently 35.dislike=abhor(abhor means you hate something to a extreme extent for moral reasons), loathe(dislike very much)!36.ruin=devastate(it means damage something very badly, or utterly destroy it.)39.always=invariably(the same as always, but better than always)40.forever=perpetual(a perpetual state never changes), immutable(something immutable will never change or be changed)41.surprise=startle(it means surprise you slightly), astound(surprise you to a large degree),astonish(the same as astound)42.enthusiasm=zeal(a great enthusiasm), fervency(sincere and enthusiasm)# 43.quiet=tranquil(calm and peaceful), serene(calm and quiet)!44.expensive=exorbitant(it means too expensive that it should be)45.luxurious=lavish(impressive and very expensive), sumptuous(grand and very expensive 46.boring=tedious(if you describe something tedious, you mean it is boring and frustrating)47.respect=esteem(if you esteem someone, you respect and admire him/her.FORMAL)48.worry=fret(if you fret about something, you worry about it)49.cold=chilly(unpleasantly cold), icy(extremely cold)50.hot=boiling(very hot)51.dangerous=perilous(very dangerous, hazardous(dangerous, especially to people's safety and health)52.nowadays=currently 53.only=unique(the only one of its kind), distinctive;54.stop=cease(if something ceases, it stops happening or existing)55.part=component(the components of something are the parts that it is made of)(h 56.result=consequence(the results or effects of something)57.obvious=apparent, manifest 58.basedon=derived fromcan see or notice them very easily)60.quite=fairly 61.pathetic=lamentable(very uncomfortable and disappointing)62.field=domain(a particular field of thought, activities or interest)63.appear=emerge(come into existence)64.whole=entire(the whole of something)8 65.wet=moist(slightly wet), damp(slightly wet), humid(very damp and hot)!66.wrong=erroneous(incorrect or partly correct)67.difficult=formidable 68.change=convert(change into another form)69.typical=quintessential(this word means represent a typical example of something)70.careful=cautious(very careful in order to avoid danger), prudent(careful and sensible)71.ability=capacity, capability(the same as ability)72.strange=eccentric(if some one is eccentric, s/he behaves in a strange way, or his/her opinion is different from most people)73.rich=affluent(if you are affluent, you have a lot of money)74.use= utilize(the same as use)75.dubious=skeptical(if you are skeptical about something, you have doubts on it.)76.satisfy=gratify(if you are gratified by something, it gives you pleasure and satisfaction)77.short=fleeting, ephemeral(if something is ephemeral, it lasts a short time)78.scholarship=fellowship 79.angry=enraged(extremely angry)80.smelly=malodorous(used to describe an unpleasant smell)81.ugly=hideous(if something is hideous, it is very ugly or unattractive)# 82.attractive=appealing(pleasing and attractive), absorbing(something absorbing can attract you a great deal)83.diverse=miscellaneous(a miscellaneous groups consists of many different kinds of things)84.disorder=disarray, chaos 85.crazily=frantically(used to describe someone who behaves in a wild and uncontrolled way)86.rapid=meteoric(ATTENTION: meteoric is only used to describe someone achieves success quickly)87.ordinary=mundane(very ordinary and not at interesting or unusual)88.despite=notwithstanding(FORMAL)89.best=optimal(used to describe the best level something can achieve)/ 90.sharp=acute(severe and intense)91.unbelievable=inconceivable(ifyou deem something inconceivable, you think it very unlike to happen ^ 92.puzzle=perplex(something perplex someone means it confuses and worries him/her because he/she does not understand it)93.method=avenue(away of getting something done)94.famous=distinguished(used to describe people who are successful in their career)95.ancient=archaic(extremely old and extremely old-fashioned)96.decorate=embellish(embellish means make something look more attractive via decorating it with something else)/ 97.possible=feasible(if something is feasible, it can be done, made or achieved)98.so=consequently, accordingly 99.rare=infrequent(doesn’t happen often 100.greedy=rapacious(greedy and selfish)

第三篇：大學(xué)英語四六級高分作文

第一類：問題解決型，如環(huán)境污染，大學(xué)生是否該兼職，大量使用塑料袋等

1、提出問題

2、分析原因或說明弊端

3、解決問題（歸納總結(jié)，預(yù)測趨勢，建議措施）

第一段好一點(diǎn)的開頭語句：

Nowadaypeople’focusisattractedonthe issueof……

/Nowadaypeopleingrowingnumbersarebeginningrelizethat……/Nowadayit is widelyacknowledgedthat……

第二段好一點(diǎn)的開頭語句：

Thereason for this is not far toseek.First…….Second…….Third……/There are serveal reasons/elements/factors/causeseatedas follow…… 接下來寫原因或者好處如以下語句可以用

Oneof the benefits is that…….But it has a hamful effect on on……

/The significant benfit/harm is……（注：此句中significant就是important的意思，四六級寫作中禁用significant，因?yàn)槟莻€(gè)詞太低端的，沒有得分點(diǎn)。同理也禁用People）

第一段好三點(diǎn)的開頭語句：

Based on the above statements/From what we have discussed/Judging from the

above evidence.We can predict the tendency that……/We may safely draw a conclusion that……

建議結(jié)尾：

Evidenced, it is high time that we took measure toslove this issue /problem/Immediate measures must be taken before it getstoo serious/late

第二類：正反觀點(diǎn)型

第一段觀點(diǎn)A

When asked about……/When to comes ^/faced with…………many people believe

that ……,they think/hold/argue/claim/maintain/advocate………………

/When it comes to ^people’s opinions differ.Some hokd the opinion that……….There is ageneral discussion today about the issue of………….These who advocate…………argue that…………

第二段：

while others think /believe …………

三段：

Weighting the pros and cons of this arguments,I am inclined to agree the former/latter point of view that…………

/In my ipinion /To my mind /As for me.Ihold a balance view /a combination of the two is a better choice.…………

第四篇：考前沖刺：大學(xué)英語四六級高分作文亮點(diǎn)詞匯總結(jié)

考前沖刺：大學(xué)英語四六級高分作文亮點(diǎn)詞匯總結(jié)

大學(xué)英語四六級高分作文亮點(diǎn)心經(jīng)：

1、是否長短句交叉；

2、是否會(huì)使用插入語；

3、用詞是否多樣，切確，形象，盡量使用能夠吸引閱卷教員眼球的閃光詞；

4、關(guān)頭詞是否換用，切勿老用一再詞；

5、句型使用是否切確、地道。

下面給出寫好一篇作文的注重事項(xiàng)：

1.恰當(dāng)用被凍╂換自動(dòng)，這樣能更客不美觀的反映事實(shí)，句子開首不要老是用we / I（好比寫結(jié)尾時(shí)不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to.）舉個(gè)經(jīng)典結(jié)尾2004年六月六級作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that.By doing so, its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.2.長于使用插入語，好比說把副詞、毗連詞等，作插入語放在中心，一般放在趾笫覽ヒ幄動(dòng)詞或者助動(dòng)詞后，雙方分袂加上逗號(hào)。

如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入語放在中心，一般放在動(dòng)詞，助動(dòng)詞后，雙方分袂加上逗號(hào)。

好比說： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that ?

3.必然要學(xué)會(huì)換詞，換形象，具體的替代太寬泛的。（考試一一般不要呈現(xiàn)good, bad , many, thing, think，people, opinion 等等）好比膳縵沔例子中，applicable替代proper, approaches替代ways, implement替代carry out, sharpen one's competitive edge替代enhance one's competitiveness（提高某物競爭力）

下面舉一篇南京工程學(xué)院某位同窗寫的優(yōu)異作文（14分）的例子，看看他是若何運(yùn)用各類寫作技巧的。這位同窗把教員上課講的各類寫作手法和出色替代和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。

Computer and I（By Simmy）

I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music.That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.exceedingly 替代 very

thrilling 替代 exciting

sth.exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替代 sb.be interested in sth.google 替代 search

an army of 替代 a lot of

The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers.Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals.It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!

The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一個(gè)出色句型，用來描述在某個(gè)時(shí)代發(fā)生了什么工作;Increasing popularity 替代 more and more popular

Coincident with ? 很是地道的句型，表達(dá)“與?一致”的意思，替代 With ?

Advancement 替代 development

Pour into（flood into / swarm into）替代 enter into

Current（currently）替代 now

Appeal to sb.替代 sb.be interested in sth.Growing individuals 替代 more and more people

It is no exaggeration to say 經(jīng)典句型，說某事是毫不磕張的

For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment.Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.For a start 替代 To begin with

We can, freely, search 用了插入語的寫作手法

our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.用了很是出色的被動(dòng)

Additionally 替代 In addition / Besides

Deliver 替代 send

There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 這個(gè)句子有三個(gè)出色之處，首先There is no denying that這個(gè)句型，還有however作為插入語，function in the disservice of 替代 do harm to

Emerging 替代 appearing（fading 替代 disappearing）

Net citizen 網(wǎng)平易近，屬于出色用詞

As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds.Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts.We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.No garden has no weeds 替代 Every coin has two sides

Computers do play，do 強(qiáng)調(diào)

Positive 替代 important / good 等

A slice of 替代 a part of

Unfavorable 替代 bad

Impacts 替代 effects / influences

We should, therefore, take advantage of ? 使用插入語

Fruits（而且fruits 用的很是形象，merits/ virtues）替代 advantage（defects 替代 disadvantage）Facet 替代 aspect

以下是30個(gè)最經(jīng)典的替代詞，可以參考：

1.individuals,characters, folks替代（people ,persons）

2: positive, favorable, rosy（夸姣的）, promising（有但愿的）, perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替代good

3.dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill（有害的）替代bad

如不美觀bad做表語，可以有be less impressive替代

eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms.When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.4.（an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most）替代many.注：用many, if not most 必然要小心，many后必然要有詞。

Eg.Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that?.同理 用most, if not all ,替代most.5.a slice of, quiet a few , several替代some

6.harbor the idea that, take the attitude that，hold the view that, it is widely shared that，it is universally acknowledged that）替think

（因?yàn)槭菚嬲Z，所以要加that）

7.affair ,business ,matter 替代thing

8.shared 代 common

9.reap huge fruits 替代get many benefits）

10:for my part ,from my own perspective 替代 in my opinion

11:Increasing（ly）,growing 替代more and more（注重沒有g(shù)rowingly這種形式。所以當(dāng)潤色名詞時(shí)用increasing/growing.潤色形容詞，副詞用increasingly.Eg.sth has gained growing popularity.Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.12.little if anything, 或little or nothing替代hardly

13??beneficial, rewarding替代helpful，14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替代customer

15.exceedingly,extremely, intensely 替代very

16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable ?? 替代 unnecessary, avoidable

17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替代sb take interest in / sb.be interested in

18.capture one's attention替代attract one's attention.19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect

20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear

21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替代cause.22.There are several reasons behind sth 替代??reasons for sth

23.desire 替代want.24.pour attention into 替代pay attention to

25.bear in mind that 替代remember

26.enjoy, possess 替代have（注重process是過程的意思）

27.interaction替代communication

28.frown on sth替代 be against , disagree with sth

29.to name only a few, as an example替代 for example, for instance

30.next to / virtually impossible,替代nearly / almost impossible

第五篇：考前沖刺：大學(xué)英語四六級高分作文亮點(diǎn)詞匯總結(jié)2

為寫作增加亮點(diǎn)四六級作文常見精

彩開頭法

幾種常見的開頭法

(1)主題句法：the appeal of advertising to buying motives can have both negative and positive effects.(2)the biggest safety threat facing airlines today may not be a terrorist with a gun, but the man with the portable computer in business class.believe it or not, optical illusion(錯(cuò)覺)can cut highway crashes.(2)問題法：do you know how many people die from traffic accidents every 23 minutes?

why does cream go bad faster than butter?

(3)對比法：some pessimistic experts feel that the automobile is bound to fall into disuse.they see a day in the not-too-distant future when all autos will be abandoned and allowed to rust.other authorities, however, think the auto is here to stay.they hold that the car will remain a leading means of urban travel in the foreseeable future.(4)數(shù)據(jù)法：according to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.honesty:根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)統(tǒng)計(jì)調(diào)查顯示，大學(xué)生向老師請假的理由當(dāng)中78%都是假的。

living off campus:根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)統(tǒng)計(jì)調(diào)查顯示，35%的學(xué)生不住宿舍，而是在學(xué)校外面租房子住。

youth:根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)統(tǒng)計(jì)調(diào)查顯示，在某個(gè)大學(xué)，學(xué)生的課余時(shí)間的70%都是在休閑娛樂。

the latest statistics show that ?

(5)故事法：six o’clock yesterday(june 20th, friday)afternoon when i was walking along the riverbank of our school, an unbelievable scene caught my eyes.(6)引語法：a proverb says, “you are only young once.”(適用于記住的名言)

it goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.(自編名言)