第一篇：英語寫作公式之感謝信+道歉信

感謝信+道歉信

Dear ______,第一段：

感謝：I am ___.I am writing this letter for the purpose of expressing my sincere gratitude to you for your kindness./ kind help during my stay in___.道歉：I am ____ and I am writing this letter for the purpose of expressing my sincere apology to for____.第二段

句1

感謝：（1）When I was being interviewed yesterday, I felt so nervous as to be at a loss for words,(2)The gift is exactly what I want that you presented to me as the New Year gift.(3)When I went to__for a tour, I found that the environment was so different from my hometown that I felt nervous, lonely and did not know what to do next.道歉： 寫緣由

句2

感謝：（1）Your timely ___and filled me enough confidence.(2)The gift is exactly what I want that you presented to me as the New Year gift.(3)fortunately, I met you in due course.道歉：表道歉I am feeling awfully sorry for it.句3

感謝：（1）Then I was ___and things ended up smoothly.(2)But I had hunted for it for several days in the supermarkets and did not obtain the ideal one.They were either too expensive or the style was not the right one I prefer.(3)it was your generous help that pulled me out from the shade and gave me a precious chance to know___ culture.道歉：竭力解決

句4

感謝：（1）But for your help, however, I might have been___.(2)It is so kind of you to give me the favorite gift and my life will be colored by your concern.(3)finally, I spent a joyful vacation smoothly.道歉：方案實施

第三段

建議：

感謝：Again please accept my heartfelt appreciation.I am eagerly expecting our next meeting.I am so proud of having such a generous friend as you.道歉：Please accept my heartfelt apology.I genuinely hope that you would forgive me for my carelessness.Yours sincerely,Zhang Wei

第二篇：英語寫作公式之求職信+辭職信

求職信+辭職信

Dear ______,第一段：

句1：

I am ____________________________.句2：

求職：I am writing this letter for the purpose of applying for a position of _____________.辭職：I am writing this letter for the purpose of telling you my decision to resign from my current position.第二段

句1

求職：My qualifications are as follow.辭職：After several years of work here, I find it inappropriate for me to stick to my position any longer.句2

求職：Firstly, in the past 4 academic years, I have proved myself to be a strraight-A student, awarded a series of scholarships.辭職：First of all, I intend to move to my hometown to live permanently with my family so that I can take good care of them.句3

求職：Besides, my English is particularly excellent, which will reach the requirements set by a foreign company like yours.辭職：In addition, I want to creat my own business, which is my long-cherished wish.句4

求職：Finally, I am a good team player, self-motivated and eager to learn.In short, I believe I deserve your consideration.辭職：In a word, I have made up my mind to resign from the job after much deliberation.第三段

建議：

求職：Thanks a lot for your due attention to this letter.I genuinely hope that you could schedule an interview with me at your earliest convenience.I am looking forward to your prompt reply.辭職：Thanks for having offered me the splendid opportunity to work with outstanding staff here.Please accept my heartfelt gratitude, as well as my regret for any inconvenience caused.Yours sincerely,Zhang Wei

第三篇：高三英語應用文寫作之道歉信

道歉信

道歉信是因為自己的過失或疏忽，給別人帶來了麻煩或損失，發(fā)覺后為了給對方賠禮道歉而寫的信件。

道歉信應該反映出自己具體的過失或疏忽，語言應該簡練誠懇，并且希望收信人能夠原諒自己的過失或疏忽。

道歉信通常在主段首句立即表示歉意，并解釋原因。在信結束前，可根據情況再次表達歉意。寫作模板 Dear ____, I am writing this letter to apologize to you for my failing to ____.The reason is that ____.I am sorry that I cannot finish ____ in time, but is it possible that I make up the loss by ____? If so, I will put everything else aside to ____.I do hope that you can understand my situation and accept my apology.Yours, Lihua

Dear ____, Much to my regret / I am terribly sorry that I am unable to ____.It is mainly because at that time I will be full occupied by ____ which is quite out of my expectation, and that conflicts with your ____.Therefore I am forced to adjust my schedule and cannot make my presence on your ____.I sincerely hope that you will enjoy a good time.By the way, can we have dinner together some time next week? I hope to see you soon.I am really sorry again and I trust that you will understand.Yours, Lihua

必備詞語

短語；

apologize v.道歉

forgive v.原諒

inconvenience n.不便

appointment n.約定

much to one’s regret 非常遺憾

apologize to sb.for sth./ make an apology to sb.for sth.因某事向某人道歉 say sorry to 向……說對不起

accept my apology 接受我的道歉 forgive sb.for sth.為某事原諒某人

make up for 彌補；賠償 have no intention to do sth.并非故意做某事 cause you much trouble 給你帶來許多麻煩 accept sb.’s sincere apology 接受某人真誠的道歉 miss the opportunity 錯過機會 fix another time for 安排另外一個時間 consider my situation 考慮我的情況

必備句型 【閃亮篇首句】

1.I am writing to apologize for … / I am writing to say sorry for … 我寫這封信是因為……向你道歉。2.I would like to give you my apology for … 對于……我向你道歉。

3.I express my regret at being unable to do … 對于未能做……，我表示遺憾。4.Much to my regret that I am unable to … 讓我感到極為遺憾的是自己不能……

5.I owe you an apology for the damage I have done to the flat.我為損壞房子這件事而向您道歉。

6.I am indeed very sorry for what I said / did, but believe I had no intention to … 對于我說的/做的事，我確實感到很抱歉。但請相信，我并非故意要…… 7.I’m terribly sorry I couldn’t reply to your email in time.十分抱歉我不能及時回復您的郵件。

8.I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of answering your letter in time.我十分抱歉沒有及時回信。

9.It is much to my regret that I missed the chance to get together.錯過了在一起的機會，我感到很遺憾?！境霾手衅洹?/p>

1.Please forgive me for a stupid choice of words.請原諒我說話欠妥。

2.Please accept my apologies for my oversight.請原諒我的疏忽。

3.I feel awfully sorry about it and want you to know what happened.為此我感到非常內疚，所以想告訴你實情。

4.I sincerely hope you can understand that I offended you unintentionally.我真心希望你能理解，我并非有意冒犯。5.And so I missed the appointed time.因此我錯過了約定的時間。

6.I’m awfully sorry for the sudden change of plan and feel it a great pity to miss the opportunity.對突然的改變我感到十分抱歉，對錯過這個機會感到很可惜。7.Anyhow, I sincerely hope that we can fix another time for...無論如何，我真心希望我們可以再找一個時間…… 【精彩篇尾句】

1.I will try my best to avoid the same accident happening again in the future.我將接近全力避免將來再發(fā)生同樣的事故。2.I will try to make up for my fault.我將盡力彌補我的過錯。

3.I sincerely hope you can understand my situation and accept my apology.真誠希望你能理解我的處境，并接受我的道歉。4.I hope that you will understand and forgive me.我希望您可以理解并原諒我。5.I shall be obliged if you … 如果您能……，我將非常感激。

6.I hope that the settlement of the matter will meet your wishes.我希望對此事的處理能滿足您的愿望。7.Please allow me to say sorry again.請允許我再次表示歉意。

8.I sincerely apologize again for my mistake.我再次為我的錯誤真誠地道歉。

9.Once again, please accept my sincere apology.請再次接受我真誠的道歉。

高考真題 2016年全國Ⅲ卷

【真題再現】

假定你是李華，與留學生朋友Bob約好一起去書店，因故不能赴約。請給他寫封郵件，內容包括：

1.表示歉意；

2.說明原因；

3.另約時間。【試題分析】

題目要求寫一封道歉信，因不能如約一起去書向Bob道歉，使用第一人稱和一般現在時進行寫作。【得分要點】

題目是常規(guī)的書信作文，要求寫一封道歉信，是應用文的一種。寫作的內容已經給出，表達歉意的同時，還要與對方另約時間。因此，不僅僅是一封道歉信。寫作時注意涵蓋所有要點，還要兼顧上下文的連貫性?！緟⒖挤段摹?Dear Bob, I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon.I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books.If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate.If not, let me know what time suits you best.I should be available any time after school next week.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua

Dear Bob, How are you doing? We planned to go to the bookstore this Saturday.Unfortunately, I can’t make it.So, I am writing to express my heartfelt apology to you.How I wish I could go with you!However, I am chosen to represent our school to take part in the English debate competition with an America high school, which, you know, is of great importance to me, for I have always been dreaming to have a chance like this to improve my spoken English.As a result, I have no choice but to say sorry to you.How about going to the bookshop this Sunday? Then both of us will be available and I can share my experience of the competition with you.Please.I am looking forward to your reply.Yours, Li Hua 2013山東卷 【真題再現】

假如你是新華中學的學生李華，你的美國朋友Tom一周前給你發(fā)電子郵件，詢問你暑假里的打算，但你因準備期末考試未能及時回復。請根據以下要點給他回封郵件：

1.未及時回信的原因；

2.你假期的打算（如做兼職、旅行、做志愿者等）。【經典套路】

第一段：問候+寫信背景+寫信目的 第二段：“道歉”部分(相當于“寫信背景”)第三段：“假期安排”部分 第四段：補充說明+客套話 【高分范文】 Dear Tom, How are you doing?(問候)You asked me in your last letter about my plan for the coming summer vacation.(寫信背景)I am sorry that I didn’t reply without delay.(寫信目的)How I wish I would read and reply your email as soon as I received it.However, I was busy preparing for my final exam at that time, which is vital for me.As a result, I had no choice but to completely focus on my study.I believe that if you were me, you would make the same choice.(第二段為道歉信常見套路)By the way, I have a busy schedule for my summer vacation.(主題句)First and foremost, I would do a part time job, so that my interpersonal skills would be improved.(拓展句1)Additionally, I will take a short trip to Beijing to take a summer course in the New Oriental School.(拓展句2)Last but not least, maybe I will work as a volunteer for the school as a teaching assistant.(拓展句3)These are my plan for the summer vacation.What’s yours? I am looking forward to your earliest reply.(以合理的客套話結尾)Best wishes!Yours, Li Hua

【滿分佳作】 Dear Tom, ①I’m terribly sorry I couldn’t reply to your email which you sent me a week ago immediately.②I was so occupied with the final exams.As for the coming summer holiday, I will first do a part time job in a fast-food restaurant.③Not only will I earn some money but I will also gain some social experience through it.④And then I will go on a trip to Sichuan, where there are a great number of places of interest.Finally, I’ll go to Ya’an to work as a volunteer.⑤There is no doubt that children there are badly in need of help.⑥I hope what I will do will make a great difference to them.Do you have anything for the summer? Please write to me and let me know.Best wishes.Yours sincerely, Li Hua

【滿分賞析】

①先用I’m terribly sorry…對未能及時回信道歉，terribly加強了道歉的語氣。②接著簡單講明原因；be occupied with sth./doing sth.(忙于某事/做某事)的運用體現了作者的語言功底，不是用簡單的詞匯busy，可給評卷老師留下好印象。

③Not only…but also… 連接并列句，屬于本書在“寫作基礎”部分訓練的句型。注意：not only在句首，謂語動詞要用倒裝形式；gain some social experience的運用也體現了作者平時注意積累語言素材。

④運用了where引導的定語從句修飾地點，使句式避免簡單化；places of interest(名勝古跡)也運用得當?？忌枳⒁夥e累，否則只能生造出中式英語。

⑤運用了There is no doubt that…(……毫無疑問)這樣的萬能句型；be badly in need of help(急需幫助)這一短語也使評卷老師眼前一亮。

⑥make a difference(起作用、產生不同)這一短語也是增分點。本篇句句高級、詞詞地道，怎能不拿滿分？ 【模擬題1】

假設你是李華，前天是你的外國朋友Anne的生日。你本答應要參加她的生日聚會，但你當時正忙著準備期末考試，忘了赴約。請寫封信向Anne表達你的歉意，說明原因，并提出補救的方法?！緟⒖挤段摹?Dear Anne，I am indeed very sorry that I didn't attend your birthday party the day before yesterday.It was nice of you to invite me to your birthday party.I should have come and celebrate the precious moment with you.But the final examinations are around the corner, so I was so busy preparing for the exams that I forgot the appointment.I hope you can understand my situation and forgive me.Is it possible for you and me to have a private meeting after the examinations? It is much to my regret that I missed the chance to get together.Once again, please accept my sincere apology.Yours truly, Li Hua 【模擬題2】

假如你是李華，好朋友Sarah邀請你去參加他的生日聚會，但由于弟弟突然生病，醫(yī)生說需要住院5天左右，請寫信給Sarah表達未能和老朋友一起給他慶祝生日的歉意，并請Sarah幫忙轉達對朋友們的問候?！緝?yōu)秀滿分范文】 Dear Sarah, I am terribly sorry to tell you that I am unable to attend your birthday party next Thursday evening.That is owing to（因為）the fact that（同位語從句）my younger brother suddenly fell ill and was taken to a hospital this morning.I have to go there immediately and take care of him.As told by the doctor in charge, it will take around five days for him to recover and I have asked my boss for a leave.I really regret that I cannot go to celebrate your birthday personally and would miss the perfect chance of enjoying myself with all our old friends.I have chosen a small gift for you and will send it to you tomorrow to show my best wishes.Besides, please give my regards to our friends when you meet them at the party.Cordially,（sincerely）Li Hua 【模擬題3】

假如你是新華中學的學生李華，上周在外教Mr.Jackson的口語課上使用手機被老師發(fā)現，手機被收走。請用英語給外教寫一封道歉信，內容應包括以下要點：

1．表示歉意；2．解釋上課使用手機的原因；3．提出自己的請求并適當表態(tài)?！緟⒖挤段摹?Dear Mr.Jackson, I’m really sorry about my using the mobile phone in your lecture last week.Please accept my heart-felt apology for being so rude a student.I know any word might sound a made-up excuse.But I did not use the mobile phone for no reason.I was trying to find a part-time job last weekend that day, I got a job offer and they needed my further information immediately.Therefore, I had no other choice but to try sending them a text message in class and that was exactly what I was doing when you discovered.Anyway, using a mobile phone in the classroom is not acceptable to any teacher.I swear it will not happen again.But I do need my phone back to keep in touch with others.Will you be so kind to give it back to me? Thanks a million!Best wishes!Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【模擬題3】

假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華，請給你的美國同學Jim 寫一封電子郵件，告知周末你不能參加他的生日聚會，希望他諒解。郵件的內容包括：

1.表達歉意；

2.說明理由； 3.告知已準備了生日禮物?！緟⒖挤段摹?Dear Jim, I’m terribly sorry that I can’t go to your birthday party this Saturday.My uncle will come to Beijing from America on Saturday afternoon.My parents want me to go to the airport with them to pick him up.So it’s a pity that I can’t have fun with you then.I wish you a happy birthday and hope everything will go well.By the way, I have bought the latest CD of Jay Chou for you as a birthday present and I will give it to you on Monday.Best wishes, Li Hua

第四篇：2014考研英語：應用文寫作之道歉信

2014考研英語寫作：應用文寫作之道歉信

應用文寫作不需要華麗的辭藻和多變的句式，只需要能夠用簡潔概括的語言將事情敘述清楚就能夠取得不錯的成績。應用文寫作作為考研英語中性價比比較高的題目，考生必須重視對其復習。應用文寫作可以充分借鑒模板，以達到更好的復習效果。下面，就為考生介紹一下道歉信的基本寫作方法。

道歉信是寫信人對未盡之事向收信人表示歉意，寫作的基本要求是：解釋的理由要真實而詳細，態(tài)度要誠懇、語言要誠摯，從而使收信人理解，并達到最終諒解。（詳細見寫作160篇137頁）

道歉信一般寫作步驟如下： 1)表達歉意的事由;2)解釋原因，并提出可行的補救措施;3)再次致歉，企求對方的諒解。道歉信的寫作要理由充分，態(tài)度誠懇，感情真摯，言語謙遜。道歉信常用套語有：

1表達歉意：There's no excuse for … I forgot to ….I am indeed very sorry for …, but believe I had no intention to…

Here is my deepest apology for...Please forgive me for …

2解釋苦衷：The fact is that I had …/ Unfortunately I … / I had a small accident …/ I have some urgent business to deal with My behavior yesterday was inexcusable, and I must tell you how …

3請求原諒提出補救方法：I want you to know how badly feel about… and to assure you that it will not happen again.I realize that particular… is irreplaceable, but I hope you will use the enclosed check to purchase a similar one.I hope this situation can be mended to everyone's satisfaction.I can only hope you will forgive … on my part.范例

Directions:

You have received a complaint letter from your customer for the mix-up of order #: 26429782.Write a letter to him to 1)express your apology 2)explain the reason 3)provide the solution and offer the compensation.Dear Mr.Bicman:

I apologize for the mix-up of order #: 26429782.We have just implemented a new packaging system that still has a few bugs to be worked out, but we did fix your order and sent it out this morning.For your trouble, we have enclosed a $25 gift certificate which can be used at any of our stores.Once again I would like to apologize for the mix-up in your order and any inconveniences this may have caused you.最后，希望考生都能夠掌握道歉信的寫作方法，進入理想的學府。祝大家考研成功！

第五篇：四六級英語寫作萬能公式

四六級英語寫作萬能公式

本文來自: 英文夢網 發(fā)布者: xidabaozi 日期: 2009-9-27 21:09 閱讀: 523 人 收藏

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這不是原創(chuàng)，但是針對我們八股文式的各種基礎級別考試，目前夠用了，希望對大家有幫助。

開頭萬能公式：

1． 開頭萬能公式一：名人名言

有人問了，“我沒有記住名言，怎么辦？尤其是英語名言？”，很好辦：編！

原理：我們看到的東西很多都是創(chuàng)造出來的，包括我們欣賞的文章也是，所以盡管編，但是一定要聽起來很有道理呦！而且沒準將來我們就是名人呢！對吧？ 經典句型：

A proverb says, “ You are only young once.”（適用于已記住的名言）It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.（適用于自編名言）更多經典句型：As everyone knows, No one can deny that? 2． 開頭萬能公式二：數字統(tǒng)計

原理：要想更有說服力，就應該用實際的數字來說明。

原則上在議論文當中十不應該出現虛假數字的，可是在考試的時候哪管那三七二十一，但編無妨，只要我有東西寫就萬事大吉了。所以不妨試用下面的句型：

According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.看起來這個數字文鄒鄒的，其實都是編造出來的，下面隨便幾個題目我們都可以這樣編造：Honesty 根據最近的一項統(tǒng)計調查顯示，大學生向老師請假的理由當中78%都是假的。Travel by Bike

結尾萬能公式：

1． 結尾萬能公式一：如此結論

說完了，畢竟要歸納一番，相信各位都有這樣的經歷，領導長篇大論，到最后終于冒出個“總而言之”之類的話，我們馬上停止開小差，等待領導說結束語。也就是說，開頭很好，也必然要有一個精彩的結尾，讓讀者眼前一亮，這樣，你就可以拿高分了！比如下面的例子：

Obviously（此為過渡短語）, we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.如果讀者很難“顯而見之”，但說無妨，就當讀者的眼光太淺罷了！

更多過渡短語： to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus 2． 結尾萬能公式二：如此建議

如果說“如此結論”是結尾最沒用的廢話，那么“如此建議”應該是最有價值的廢話了，因為這里雖然也是廢話，但是卻用了一個很經典的虛擬語氣的句型。拽！

Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.這里的虛擬語氣用得很經典，因為考官本來經?？歼@個句型，而如果我們自己寫出來，你說考官會怎么想呢？

寫作的“六項基本原則”：

一、長短句原則

工作還得一張一馳呢，老讓讀者讀長句，累死人！寫一個短小精辟的句子，相反，卻可以起到畫龍點睛的作用。而且如果我們把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主題： As a creature, I eat;as a man, I read.Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.如此可見，長短句結合，抑揚頓挫，豈不爽哉？牢記！

強烈建議：在文章第一段（開頭）用一長一短，且先長后短；在文章主體部分，要先用一個短句解釋主要意思，然后在闡述幾個要點的時候采用先短后長的句群形式，定會讓主體部分妙筆生輝！文章結尾一般用一長一短就可以了。

二、主題句原則

國有其君，家有其主，文章也要有其主。否則會給人造成“群龍無首”之感！相信各位讀過一些破爛文學，故意把主體隱藏在文章之內，結果造成我們稀里糊涂！不知所云！所以奉勸各位一定要寫一個主題句，放在文章的開頭（保險型）或者結尾，讓讀者一目了然，必會平安無事！

特別提示：隱藏主體句可是要冒險的！

To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam（主題句）.Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.三、一 二 三原則

領導講話總是第一部分、第一點、第二點、第三點、第二部分、第一點? 如此羅嗦?？僧吘惯€是條理清楚?？脊賯兛次恼乱脖厝灰ㄟ^這些關鍵性的“標簽”來判定你的文章是否結構清楚，條理自然。破解方法很簡單，只要把下面任何一組的詞匯加入到你的幾個要點前就清楚了。

1）first, second, third, last（不推薦，原因：俗）2）firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally（不推薦，原因：俗）3）the first, the second, the third, the last（不推薦，原因：俗）

4）in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly（不推薦，原因：俗）

5）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally（強烈推薦）6）to start with, next, in addition, finally（強烈推薦）7）first and foremost, besides, last but not least（強烈推薦）8）most important of all, moreover, finally 9）on the one hand, on the other hand（適用于兩點的情況）10）for one thing, for another thing（適用于兩點的情況）

四、短語優(yōu)先原則

寫作時，尤其是在考試時，如果使用短語，有兩個好處：其

一、用短語會使文章增加亮點，如果老師們看到你的文章太簡單，看不到一個自己不認識的短語，必然會看你低一等。相反，如果發(fā)現亮點—精彩的短語，那么你的文章定會得高分了。其

二、關鍵時刻思維短路，只有湊字數，怎么辦？用短語是一個辦法！比如：I cannot bear it.可以用短語表達：I cannot put up with it.I want it.可以用短語表達：I am looking forward to it.這樣字數明顯增加，表達也更準確。

五、多變句式原則

1）加法（串聯）

都希望寫下很長的句子，像個老外似的，可就是怕寫錯，怎么辦，最保險的寫長句的方法就是這些，可以在任何句子之間加and, 但最好是前后的句子有先后關系或者并列關系。比如說：

I enjoy music and he is fond of playing guitar.如果是二者并列的，我們可以用一個超級句式： Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.其它的短語可以用： besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover 2）轉折（拐彎抹角）

批評某人缺點的時候，我們總習慣先拐彎抹角說說他的優(yōu)點，然后轉入正題，再說缺點，這種方式雖然陰險了點，可畢竟還比較容易讓人接受。所以呢，我們說話的時候，只要在要點之前先來點廢話，注意二者之間用個專這次就夠了。The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.The coat was thin, but it was warm.更多的短語： despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding 3）因果（so, so, so）

昨天在街上我看到了一個女孩，然后我主動搭訕，然后我們去咖啡廳，然后我們認識了，然后我們成為了朋友?可見，講故事的時候我們總要追求先后順序，先什么，后什么，所以然后這個詞就變得很常見了。其實這個詞表示的是先后或因果關系！The snow began to fall, so we went home.更多短語： hen, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that 4）失衡句（頭重腳輕，或者頭輕腳重）Eden 認為“頭輕腳重”更符合英語表達習慣 有些人腦袋大，身體小，或者有些人腦袋小，身體大，雖然我們不希望長成這個樣子，可如果真的是這樣了，也就必然會吸引別人的注意力。文章中如果出現這樣的句子，就更會讓考官看到你的句子與眾不同。其實就是主語從句，表語從句，賓語從句的變形。舉例：This is what I can do.Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.同樣主語、賓語、表語可以改成如下的復雜成分： When to go, Why he goes away? 5）附加（多此一舉）

如果有了老婆，總會遇到這樣的情況，當你再講某個人的時候，她會插一句說，我昨天見過他；或者說，就是某某某，如果把老婆的話插入到我們的話里面，那就是定語從句和同位語從句或者是插入語。

The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.Mr.Liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.其實很簡單，同位語--要解釋的東西刪除后不影響整個句子的構成；定語從句—借用之前的關鍵詞并且用其重新組成一個句子插入其中，但是whom or that 關鍵詞必須要緊跟在先行詞之前。

6）排比（排山倒海句）

文學作品中最吸引人的地方莫過于此，如果非要讓你的文章更加精彩的話，那么我希望你引用一個個的排比句，一個個得對偶句，一個個的不定式，一個個地詞，一個個的短語，如此表達將會使文章有排山倒海之勢！

Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life.（氣勢恢宏）要想寫出如此氣勢恢宏的句子非用排比不可！

六、挑戰(zhàn)極限原則

既然是挑戰(zhàn)極限，必然是比較難的，但是并非不可攀！原理：在學生的文章中，很少發(fā)現諸如獨立主格的句子，其實也很簡單，只要花上5分鐘的時間看看就可以領會，它就是分詞的一種特殊形式，分詞要求主語一致，而獨立主格則不然。比如：

The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.如果您可以寫出這樣的句子，不得高分才怪！

文章主體段落三大殺手锏：

一、舉實例

思維短路，舉實例！提出一個觀點，舉實例！提出一個方案，舉實例！而且者也是我們揭示一個觀點最好的方式，任何情況下，只要我們無法繼續(xù)文章，不管三七二十一，盡管舉例子！

In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted every possible stimulated factor in making ads, such as sound, light, colors, cartoon films and human performance.For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fimehim or her.rast ? 更多句型：

To take ? as an example, One example is?, Another example is?, for example

二、做比較

方法：寫完一個要點，比較與之相似的；又寫完一個要點，再比較與之相反的； 世界上沒有同樣的指紋，沒有相同的樹葉，文章亦同，只有通過比較，你才會發(fā)現二者的相同點（through comparison）和不同點（through contrast）。下面是一些短語： 相似的比較：

in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner 相反的比較：

on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with ?, ? 這個對 compare and contrast 題型很有用

三、換言之

沒話說了，可以換一句話再說，讓你的文章在多一些字，或者文鄒鄒地說，是讓讀者更充分的理解你的觀點。

實際就是重復重復再重復！下面的句子實際上就三個字 I love you!I am enthusiastic about you.That is to say, I love you.I am wild about you.In other words, I have fallen in love with you.或者上面我們舉過的例子： I cannot bear it.可以用短語表達：I cannot put up with it.因此可以這樣說：I cannot bear it.That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it.更多短語：

namely, in simpler terms?

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