第一篇:整理精品英語寫作之議論文
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英語寫作范文之議論文
以下是朱泰祺老師在研究生英語入學(xué)考試寫作專題講座中的講義,希望能給各位以些微幫助,同時(shí)起個(gè)拋磚引玉的功能,到時(shí)候能見到各位更多的一些自己認(rèn)為比較不錯(cuò)的筆記和摘錄.議論文
As is known to all, it is importanet to be/do...I think there are at least two reasons for...For one thing,....For another,...Let's take...for example...Form waht I have mentioned above we can see that without...We cannot...It is clear that,...plays an important part in.....Different people ,however,have different opinions on this matter.Some people think that....According to them,all of us should...Others argue that....In their poinion,nobody can....without....Compared with...,...has a lot of advantages over....There is no doubt that...As a consequence,...In short,I firmly support the view that...It is because...So my conclusion is that...英語寫作范文之圖表作文
圖表作文
As is shown in the table(or in the picture),...dropped from...in 1994 to...in 1996.According to the figures given in the table,...has great incresed(or decreased)in the past...years(ordecades),reaching...in 1996.From the table we can also see that there has been a sharp decline(or rise)in...It is clear that....There are at least two good reasons for...On the one hand,...Let's have an example to illustrate the great increase in....On the other hand,...is due to the fact that...In addition,...is responsible for...Maybe there are some other reasons to show...But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly acceptable.As far as I am concernd,...So my conclusion is that...I am sure my opinion is both sound and well grounded.英語寫作范文之感謝信
感謝信(Letter of Thanks)是外國政府機(jī)構(gòu)或個(gè)人的關(guān)心、支持、幫助或熱情款待表示感謝的對(duì)外函件。其具體格式和要求與邀請(qǐng)函相同。例文
Date and Place Mr.____ Minister of _____(Address)Beijing,China Dear Minister,I am writing this letter to thank you for you warm hospitality accorded to me and my delegation during our recent visit to your beautiful country.I would also like to thank you for your interesting discussion with me which I have found very informative and useful.During the entire visit, my delegation and I were overwhelmed by the enthusiasm expressed by your business representatives on cooperation with China.I sincerely hope we could have more exchanges like this one when we would be able to continue our interesting discussion on possible ways to expand our bilateral ecomomic and trade relations and bring our business people together.I am lookingforward to your early visit to China when I will be able to pay back some of the hospitality I received during my memorable stay in yur beautiful country.With kind personal regards,F(xiàn)aithfully yours,(Signed)Mr.___ Minister of Economic Cooperation PLACE
英語寫作范文之公文寫作--啟事
啟事是一種公告性的應(yīng)用文。機(jī)關(guān)、團(tuán)體或個(gè)人如有什么事情向他人公開說明某事或請(qǐng)求幫助,或?qū)θ罕娪惺裁匆?,可把要說的意思簡要地寫成啟事。啟事有多種,象尋人啟事、尋物啟事、征婚啟事、開業(yè)啟事等等。
1、尋物啟事
A Jacket Lost In the playground, May12, a Jacket, green in colour and with a zipper in the collar lost, finder please return it to the owner, Krutch.Room 203, Dormitory 9.尋茄克衫
5月12日本人不慎在操場丟失一件綠色,領(lǐng)口有拉鏈的茄克衫。拾到者請(qǐng)把茄克衫還給失主克魯奇。地點(diǎn)九號(hào)宿舍樓203房間。
2:訂婚啟事
NOTICE OF ENGAGEMENT Mr.and Mrs.Holand Walshman have the honour to announce the engagement of their daughter, Miss Lucy, to Mr.Samual Russell on Saturday, August 11, 1997.訂婚啟事 荷蘭德·沃爾什曼先生及夫人榮幸地宣布,他們的小女露西與塞穆爾·羅素先生于一九九七年八月十一日(星期六)訂婚,茲特敬告親友。
英語寫作范文之自傳
英文自傳是應(yīng)聘外資公司時(shí)又一道必不可少的程序。它是指求職者自述本人生平經(jīng)歷的書面材料,也是對(duì)求職者個(gè)人簡歷的一種補(bǔ)充.自傳的寫作內(nèi)容除姓名,性別,年齡,出生地,家庭情況,學(xué)歷之外,工作經(jīng)歷,工作業(yè)績,科研成果,求職目的,獎(jiǎng)懲情況等內(nèi)容尤為重要。自傳的內(nèi)容決定了它可以帶有一些個(gè)人化的語言和充滿感情的表述,與公事公辦的簡歷,求職信不盡相同,因此往往大型的外國公司和機(jī)構(gòu)非??粗?。申請(qǐng)出國留學(xué)時(shí),自傳(personal statement)的質(zhì)量和內(nèi)容也是成功的關(guān)鍵。撰寫英文自傳時(shí),不要一味說空話套話,有時(shí)一個(gè)日常生活中的小例子遠(yuǎn)勝于長篇累牘的流水帳。還要特別注意:既不能自吹自擂,也不必過于謙虛,應(yīng)該本著實(shí)事求是,不卑不亢的原則。下附一例,以作說明:
Personal Statement/Autobiography My name is Fang Yan.I am 24 years old and male.I was born in Taiyuan, Shanxi Province.There are three people in my family including me, and I am the only son.My father is an electronic engineer and my mother is a teacher of English.I completed elementary, junior and senior high school in Taiyuan.In 1993, I entered Shanghai Jiaotong University and graduated in 1997 with a bachelor's degree in computer science.Since then I have been working as a computer programmer in Shanghai Wanda Company.Influenced by my father, I've been interested in electronics since I was quite young.I love breaking down and reassembling little gadgets in spare time as well.I still remember that I made a portable transistor radio by myself in junior high school.And I made it a part-time job repairing TV sets and radios for neighbours in senior high.Since childhood, I've been taught by my parents to make friends with people around and always keep good manners in public.Besides, I learn the importance of helping people out when they need it most by doing my part-time job.Besides, I like sports very much and I am physically well.Of course I do admit that I have some shortcomings.I can be shy when speaking in the presence of large crowds of people.Sometimes I am hesitant in making quick decisions.But I'm sure I will be able to overcome them.Now I'm applying for a position in your company.I believe a whole new working environment will surely provide better chances for me to build up future career and personal characters.Thank you very much.英語寫作范文之:如何初次建立聯(lián)系
ATTN TO:slurry lian.Dear Madam:
Compliment of the season to you.I know that this letter will come to you as a surprise, with the full hope that you will bear with us to assist me in this mutual transaction that will extend our both families I got your contact from the Cote d' Ivoire directory.I am madam Sussan Toure from Abidjan in Republique of Cote d Ivoire.my late husband Chief Ahmed Toure.who was into cocoa/Cotton export, died last year after a brief illness.before his died he deposited two big trunk boxes containing us$ 22.4 million with other family valuables with security company in Spain Europe registered it as art work belonging to his foreign partner who will be coming for the release and export to his/her conutry.Please, I want you to focus your mind in this transaction for this is risk free , legal an Genuine business.I ask for your assistance and permission to submit your name as my late husband foreign partner for release of this consignment and transfer/export to your cuntry for safe keeping and investment.I humbly ask for you to response to this email immediately with your Tel/Fax numbers to enable me forward to you the the neccessary documents concerning this deposit.So as to conclude this transaction under 15 good working days.my son and I have conclude to give you 10 % of the total money after the release of this consignment for your noble assistance.and note that this is the only hope of my son and me therefore try to keep it confidential for the security of this money and our dear life.waiting for your urgent response.Best regards.I AM Madam Sussan Toure.英語寫作范文之英文E-mail
隨著電腦走進(jìn)千家萬戶,一張無形的巨網(wǎng)也悄然織起。這就是Internet(因特網(wǎng),國際互聯(lián)網(wǎng))。一旦連接了Internet,信息傳遞就成為一件非常輕松愜意的事情。在網(wǎng)上最常使用的服務(wù)就是E-mail(電子郵件,electronic mail,常縮略為E-mail,e-mail 或email),這是因?yàn)殡娮余]件不但使用方便、傳播快捷、可以一信多發(fā),而且價(jià)格十分低廉,特別適合國際間的交流。
那么e-mail有什么寫作要領(lǐng)呢?
首先,必須要標(biāo)題(Heading)欄的'收件人(To)'框中輸入收信人的E-mail 地址。'主題(Subject)'框的內(nèi)容應(yīng)簡明地概括信的內(nèi)容,短的可以是一個(gè)單詞,如greetings;長的可以是一個(gè)名詞性短語,也可以是完整句,但長度一般不超過35個(gè)字母。'主題'框的內(nèi)容切忌含糊不清。像News about the meeting 這樣的表達(dá),應(yīng)改為Tomorrow's meeting canceled。一般來說,只要將位于句首的單詞和專有名詞的首字母大寫即可。另外一種較為正規(guī)的格式可將除了少于5個(gè)字母的介詞、連接詞或冠詞之外的每一個(gè)單詞的首字母大寫,如:New E-mail Address Notification。視信的內(nèi)容是否重要,還可以開頭加上URGENT或者FYI(For Your Information,供參考),如:URGENT:Submit your report today!
第二,E-mail一般使用非正式的文體,因此正文(Body)前的稱呼(Salutation)通常無須使用諸如'Dear Mr.John'之類的表達(dá)。在同輩的親朋好友或同事間可以直呼其名,但對(duì)長輩或上級(jí)最好使用頭銜加上姓。如:Tommy,或者M(jìn)r.Smith。
第三,E-mail文體的另外一個(gè)特點(diǎn)是簡單明了,便于閱讀,太長的內(nèi)容可以以附件的方式發(fā)出。一個(gè)段落大多僅由一到三個(gè)句子組成。信尾客套話(Complimentary close)通常也很簡明。常常只須一個(gè)詞,如:'Thanks','Best','Cheers',不需要用一般信函中的'Sincerely yours'或'Best regards'。稱呼和正文之間,段落之間,正文和信尾客套話之間一般空一行,開頭無須空格。如:
Jimmy,I received your memo and will discuss it with Eric on Wednesday.Best, David
在電子郵件的使用者中還流行使用一些由首字母或讀音組成的縮略詞,如:
d u wnt 2 go out 2nite:Do you want to go out tonight?
lol:Laughing out loud
oic:Oh, I see.mte:My thoughts exactly.brb:I'll be right back.c u 2morrow:See you tomorrow.fanx 4 ur elp:Thanks for your help.gr8:great
btw:By the way
imho:In my humble opinion
asap:As soon as possible.另外,網(wǎng)友們?yōu)榱私o枯燥的文字加入感情色彩,還創(chuàng)造了一種表示感情的小符號(hào),英語叫smiley.如: :-)代表'I'm smiling at this',:-(代表'I'm sad about this'。
上述縮略詞和小符號(hào)要視具體情況而定,不宜濫用。
E-mail的非正式的文體特點(diǎn)并不意味它的撰寫可以馬虎行事,特別是給長輩或上級(jí)寫信,或者撰寫業(yè)務(wù)信函更是如此。寫完信后,一定要認(rèn)真檢查有無拼寫、語法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)的誤。當(dāng)然Outlook Express等軟件的'拼寫檢查'功能可以助你一臂之力。
英語寫作范文之推薦信用詞
留學(xué)申請(qǐng)時(shí),推薦信的作用很重要,好的推薦信對(duì)申請(qǐng)人來說能夠起到事半功倍的作用。在寫推薦信時(shí),必然會(huì)提及被推薦人的品性(Characters)。介紹每個(gè)人獨(dú)特的個(gè)性用詞也十分講究,下列Characters是國外大學(xué)所欣賞的形容詞,請(qǐng)各位讀者參考。列舉該類詞匯的目的并非要各位將之奉為圭臬,而是希望在大家頭痛腳痛渾身都痛的時(shí)候有個(gè)參考。請(qǐng)別忘了你的獨(dú)特性,還請(qǐng)別忘了別人同你一樣看過這個(gè)表格。
(1)Scholastic aptitude(學(xué)習(xí)方面的才能)a. Native intellectual ability(天賦)
b. Imagination(想象力)
c. Creativity(創(chuàng)造力)
d. Capacity for analytical thinking(分析思考能力)
e. Intellectual curiosity;spirit of inquiry(好奇心)f. Ability to work independently(獨(dú)立學(xué)習(xí)工作的能力)g. Memory(記憶力)
h. Accuracy(準(zhǔn)確性)
i. Methodology(研究方法)
j. Capability for abstract reasoning(抽象推理的能力)k. Potential as a researcher(研究的潛力)
1. Potential as a teacher(教學(xué)的潛力)
m. Ability to express his ideas orally and in writing(口頭或文字的表達(dá)能力)
n. Capacity, desire and determination for good quality graduate work(獲得學(xué)業(yè)成功的能力、愿望與決心)
o. Probable success as a graduate student(作為研究生成功的可能性)
(2)Academic performance(學(xué)業(yè)上的表現(xiàn))
a. Breadth of general knowledge(知識(shí)豐富)
b. Knowledge of literature in his field(本專業(yè)領(lǐng)域知識(shí))
c. Grade or achievement(成績或成就)
d. Industry, diligence(勤勉)
e. Participation in discussion(討論積極)
f. Academic maturity(學(xué)業(yè)上的成熟)
(3)Languages(語言能力)
a. Ability to speak, understand, read and write the English(聽、說、讀、寫英文的能力)
b. Ability to read significant literature in other languages English(英語以外的語言閱讀能力)
(4)Character(品行)
a. Honesty;integrity(誠實(shí))
b. Sincerity(誠懇)
c. Sense of responsibility(責(zé)任感)
d. Cooperation(合作)
e. Enthusiasm(熱誠)
f. Conscientiousness(自覺性)
g. Ethical and moral standards(倫理與道德標(biāo)準(zhǔn))
h. Reliability;dependability(可靠性)
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英語寫作范文之應(yīng)用文的常用句型
一、邀請(qǐng)信
1、I“d like...to come to dinner
非常希望...共進(jìn)晚餐
2、request the pleasure of 恭請(qǐng)...3、The favor of a reply is requested 敬賜復(fù)函
4、May I have the honour of your company at dinner? 敬備菲酌,恭請(qǐng)光臨
5、Thank you for inviting us to dinner 謝謝您邀請(qǐng)我們共進(jìn)晚餐
6、I hope you”re not too busy to come.我期望您會(huì)在百忙中光臨
7、The reception will be held in...,on...招待會(huì)定于...在...舉行
8、We sincerely hope you can attend 我們期待您的光臨
9、We are looking forward to...我們期待著....10、We have decided to have a party in honor of the occasion 為此我們決定舉辦一次晚會(huì)
11、Please confirm your participation at your earliest convenience 是否參加,請(qǐng)?jiān)缛崭嬷?/p>
二、感謝信
1、Thank you very much for....十分感謝...2、Many thanks for your...非常感謝您...3、Please accept my sincere appreciation for...請(qǐng)接受我對(duì)...真摯的感謝
4、I am truly grateful to you for...為了...,我真心感激您
5、It was good(thoughtful)of you...承蒙好意(關(guān)心)...6、You were so kind to send...承蒙好意送來...7、Thank you again for your wonderful hospitality and I am looking forward to seeing you soon.再次感謝您的盛情款待,并期待不久見到您
8、I find an ordinary “thank-you” entirely inadequate to tell you how much...我覺得一般的感謝的字眼完全不足以表達(dá)我對(duì)您多么地...9、I sincerely appreciate...我衷心地感謝...10、I wish to express my profound appreciation for...我對(duì)..深表謝意
11、Many thanks for you generous cooperation
謝謝貴方的真誠合作
英語寫作范文之簡歷中不該出現(xiàn)的話
致命的大錯(cuò):
1、“Finished 8th in my high school graduating class of 10.”
2、“Qualifications: No education or experience.”
3、“I am relatively intelligent, obedient and loyal as a puppy.”
4、“My compensation should be at least equal to my age.”
5、“Reason for Leaving: It had to do with the IRS, FBI and SEC.”
6、“Fired because I fought for lower pay.”
7、“Size of employer: Very tall, probably over 6”5“.8、” “Please disregard the enclosed resume-it is terribly out of date.”
9、“Reason for Leaving: My boss said the end of the world is near.”
10、“Reason for Leaving: The owner gave new meaning to the word ”paranoia.“ I prefer to elaborate privately.” 打字錯(cuò)誤與語法錯(cuò)誤
1、“Here are my qualifications for you to overlook.”
2、“Strengths: Ability to meet deadlines while maintaining composer.”
3、“I am a rabid typist.”
4、“Work History: Performed brain wave tests,1879-1981.”
5、“After receiving advice from several different angels, I have decided to pursue a new line of work.”
6、“Accounting cleric.”
7、“As indicted, I have over five years of experience analyzing investments.”
8、“Suspected to graduate early next year.”
9、“Disposed of $2.5 billion in assets.”
10、“Proven ability to track down and correct erors.”
11、“Accomplishments: Oversight of entire department.”
12、“Am a perfectionist and rarely if if ever forget details.”
13、“Accomplishments: Completed 11 years of high school.”
不應(yīng)有的幽默
1、“Note: Keep this resume on top of the stack.Use all others to heat your house.”
2、“Assisted in daily preparation of large quantities of consumable items in a fast-paced setting.”(Translation: Short-order cook.)
3、“But wait...there”s more.You get all this business knowledge plus a grasp of marketing that is second nature.“
4、”I have an excellent track record, although I am not a horse.“
5、”My fortune cookie said, “Your next interview will result in a job”-and I like your company in particular.“
6、”Title: Another resume from the “Profiles in Excellence” series.“
7、”Also Known As: Mr.Productivity, Mr.Clever, Mr.Fix-it.“
8、”Trustworthy references available upon request-if I give them a few bucks.“
9、”Let“s meet so you can ”ooh“ and ”ahh“ over my experience.”
英語寫作范文之學(xué)術(shù)文章寫作注意要點(diǎn)
以我在美求學(xué)的經(jīng)驗(yàn),向大家提一些盡量可以避免的寫作常識(shí)問題,希望對(duì)大家的考試,乃至以后赴美求學(xué)的漫漫征程有所裨益。時(shí)間所限,不可能寫全,但是我會(huì)不斷補(bǔ)充的。還有在文章中引用的那些片斷,并沒有攻擊作者的意思,只不過拿出來和大家探討一下。
1、避免使用反問句、設(shè)問句。特別是作者也沒有答案的問題。
例如: What’s the objective of the information? Is it to make people more confused and astray? I partly agree with the author’s contention that the enormous and otiose information sometimes render people lose their way and fail to consider question penetratingly and originally.在作文的開頭就扔出兩個(gè)問題,然后接下來的陳述卻與問題基本毫無干系。作為讀者,首先要考慮那兩個(gè)問題的答案到底是什么,然后才能往下讀。這些在中文里可能會(huì)被評(píng)作“引人入勝”的好詞好句,在英語的論文寫作里面,可以說是最大的敗筆之一。如果你一定要問問題的話,那就改成陳述句式,例如:Whether this issue is right or wrong? 可以改成:It has been a controversial issue that.....2、避免集中使用“Be”動(dòng)詞,包括is, are, has been, have been, etc.即使GRE考題statement里面有很多“Be”動(dòng)詞,你也要避免照抄,因?yàn)閟tatement是淺顯地告訴你一個(gè)idea,而不是向你展示writing。
例如:What is the purpose of education? Some people may say that the purpose of education should be to create a totally academic environment that separates from the outside world, for, they think, this situation allows students to focus on their academic research work without being disturbed by practical concerns.In fact, this suggestion is harmful to the scientific research work.這是某一篇文章的開頭。我們現(xiàn)在只是分析語法問題。作者除了要注意不要使用疑問句以外,還有很重要的一點(diǎn):總共兩三句話,出現(xiàn)4個(gè)“Be”動(dòng)詞。這種寫法,在英語里面被稱作“non-act”的動(dòng)詞?!癇e” 僅僅表示一種狀態(tài),例如:“i am here”, “you are there”.對(duì)于母語者來說,“Be”動(dòng)詞其實(shí)就是寫在紙上,而沒有任何感情色彩。所以應(yīng)該盡量避免成篇累牘地使用。我們的例子可以改為:
Some people argue that the purpose of education lies in its strength in creating a totally academic environment separated from the outside world.They think this situation allows students to focus on academic research by excluding outside disturbance from practical concerns.However, this suggestion in fact does harm to the scientific research work.我們可以看到,使用了lie in, exclude, do harm to以后,句子更有色彩了。
3、盡量避免重復(fù)使用單詞或者詞組。特別是近距離集中在某一兩句話里使用。
例如:The author argues that to understand one’s own culture, one must know about at least one another culture which is distinctly different from one’s own culture.While as I am concerned, I can’t agree with the author’s assertion.這一個(gè)開頭,總共兩行字,卻連續(xù)出現(xiàn)了4個(gè)One,3個(gè)culture。如果你把這段話大聲朗讀一下,就會(huì)覺得別扭、好笑了。連續(xù)使用相同的單詞或者詞組(包括短句),體現(xiàn)的是作者詞匯量匱乏,寫作風(fēng)格較差,遣詞造句能力不強(qiáng)。給讀者的感覺就是昏昏欲睡。
很容易的我們就可以改正:The author argues that the knowledge of another distinctly different culture helps us to truly understand our own.However, I disagree with this assertion.這句話把原來的三句分句合成了并無冗長感覺的一句。精簡的同時(shí),也恰當(dāng)?shù)乇苊饬酥貜?fù)多次使用culture,one的問題。用了“this assertion”,也避免了在近距離使用兩個(gè)“author”。
4、避免使用從句套從句的超長句子。
學(xué)術(shù)性的文章,應(yīng)當(dāng)避免追求華麗詞藻和句型。作為非母語者,我們?cè)谡Z感上面已經(jīng)處于劣勢。為了避免缺乏語感而造成的很多語法上面、句子結(jié)構(gòu)上面的小失誤,我們更應(yīng)該盡量避免使用長句??戳撕芏嘧髡叩奈恼?,長句造成的后果通常有:單復(fù)數(shù)混淆,it、that指代不清,從句兩頭時(shí)態(tài)不符,連接介詞錯(cuò)誤,等。
例如:Things happened in the past, known as history, is great treasure for us huan beings, through and only through studying the past can we gain valuable experience which serves as a means of guiding our development of the society.例子中作者用了3處逗號(hào),而事實(shí)上面,從句間關(guān)系并非密不可分。我們可以很輕松的分成三句話,作者寫得安心,讀者讀得舒心,做到真正的言必達(dá)意。
History consists of the things happened in the past and it is a great treasure to human beings.Through and only through studying the past thoroughly can we gain valuable experience from history.The historical experience serves as a means of guidance for the new development in the society.5、避免陳詞濫調(diào)等廢話
例如:For getting a satisfying score, students have to prepare for and review their texts frequently, remember all the knowledge they have learned deep in mind, enlarge their learning if it is possible and so on, especially when examinations are coming.All these efforts, no matter what their aims are, will surely lead to a corresponding paying back.段中的這一句“no matter what their aims are”,在整個(gè)上下文表達(dá)上面沒有任何實(shí)質(zhì)性的意 義,完完全全是句廢話。
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(一)1.A letter of application(申請(qǐng)信)Dear Sir or Madam, I'm writing to you to inquire if there would be any position available for me to work as an English teacher in your department.Please allow me to give you my brief reference........I'm looking forward to your kind early reply.(or Your kind early reply would be very much appreciated.)If you need any further information,please fell free to ask.Many thanks.Yours sincerely, Wang Ming
2.A letter of complaint(投訴信)Oct.26.2001 Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you to complain of the X Chemical Works, which seriously pollutes the city environment.The major problems are as follows.In the first place,...Secondly,...Finally,...As a result,..I think several urgent measures should be taken to solve the problems.On the one hand,...On the other hand,...It is my sincere hope that the pollution problems caused by the works will be looked into thoroughly and solved as soon as possible.I'm looking forward to your early reply.Thanks.Yours truly, Wang Ming
英語寫作范文之應(yīng)用文格式
(二)3、介紹信 Letters of Introduction
實(shí)例之一:
Dear Mr./ Ms.,This is to introduce Mr.Frank Jones, our new marketing specialist who will be in London from April 5 to mid April on business.We shall appreciate any help you can give Mr.Jones and will always be happy to reciprocate.Yours faithfully
尊敬的先生/小姐,現(xiàn)向您推薦我們的市場專家弗蘭克·瓊斯先生。他將因公務(wù)在四月15日到四月中旬期間停留倫敦。
我們將非常感謝您向瓊斯先生提供的任何幫助,并非常高興施以回報(bào)。
您誠摯的實(shí)例之二:
Dear Mr./ Ms,We are pleased to introduce Mr.Wang You, our import manager of Textiles Department.Mr.Wang is spending three weeks in your city to develop our business with chief manufactures and to make purchases of decorative fabrics for the coming season.We shall be most grateful if you will introduce him to reliable manufacturers and give him any help or advice he may need.Yours faithfully
尊敬的先生/小姐,我們非常高興向您介紹我們紡織部的進(jìn)口經(jīng)理王有先生。王先生將在你市度過三周,他要與主要的生產(chǎn)廠家拓展商務(wù)并為下一季度采購裝飾織品。
如能介紹他給可靠的生產(chǎn)廠家,向他提供所需的任何幫助或建議,我們將不勝感謝。
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(三)4、約定 Appointments
實(shí)例之一:
Dear Mr./Ms,Mr.John Green, our General Manager, will be in Paris from June 2 to 7 and would like to come and see you, say, on June 3 at 2.00 p.m.about the opening of a sample room there.Please let us know if the time is convenient for you.If not, what time you would suggest.Yours faithfully,尊敬的先生/小姐
我們的總經(jīng)理約翰格林將于六月2日到7日在巴黎,有關(guān)在那開樣品房的事宜,他會(huì)于 六月3日下午2:00點(diǎn)拜訪您。請(qǐng)告知這個(gè)時(shí)間對(duì)您是否方便。如不方便,請(qǐng)建議具體時(shí)間。
您誠摯的< 以下為回信范文 > Dear Mr./ Ms,Thank you for your letter informing us of Mr.Green’s visit during June 2-7.Unfortunately, Mr.Edwards, our manager, is now in Cairo and will not be back until the second half of June.He would, however, be pleased to see Mr.Green any time after his return.We look forward to hearing from you.Yours faithfully,尊敬的先生/小姐
謝謝來函告知我方六月2-7日格林先生的來訪。不巧,我們的總經(jīng)理艾得華先生現(xiàn)正在巴黎,到六月中旬才能回來。但他回來后愿意在任何時(shí)間會(huì)見格林先生。
希望收到您的來信。
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實(shí)例之二:
Dear Mr/Ms,I represent the W/P Electronics Company in Dallas, and will be in Kunming from next Monday to Friday,(October 5-9).I should like to call on you to discuss our new monitor.Would 0930 hours on Tuesday, October 6 be convenient?
I shall be in Beijing, at the Great Wall Hotel, from Tuesday, September 29, until Sunday, October 4, where a message will reach me.If the day is not convenient, will you please suggest another.Yours faithfully
尊敬的先生/小姐
我是達(dá)拉斯W/P電子公司的代表,將于下周一到周五(10月5-9日)住留昆明。我樂于請(qǐng)您商討我們新的顯示器。星期二即10月6日上午09:30是否方便?
從周二,即9月29日,我將住在北京的長城賓館,直到周六,即10月4日,在那會(huì)有通知給我。如商討日期不方便,請(qǐng)另外建議。
< 以下為回信范文 >
Dear Mr/Ms,Thank you for your letter of September 26.We shall be very pleased to see you and discuss your new monitor, but October 6 is not suitable.We will be happy to meet with you at 9:30 a.m.on Wednesday, October 7, if the time is convenient for you.We look forward to meeting you.Yours faithfully
尊敬的先生/小姐
我們將很高興與您會(huì)面并與您商談新的顯示器,但10月6日不太合適。如方便的話,我們?cè)冈?0月7日與您會(huì)面。
期待與您見面。
您誠摯的
實(shí)例之三: Dear Mr./ Ms,I am at present in Hamburg visiting the harbour with a view to making known our new type of container for use in Europe.I shall be in Antwerp on Wednesday, 4th June, and should like to call on you at 2.00 p.m.on that day.If I do not hear from you to the contrary, I shall assume that it will be convenient for me to call at that time.Yours faithfully
尊敬的先生/小姐
我現(xiàn)正在漢堡參觀港口,以讓歐洲了解并使用我們的新型集裝箱。
星期三即六月4日,我將到安特衛(wèi)普,我會(huì)于當(dāng)天下午2:00打電話給你。
對(duì)此約定如不來信,我將認(rèn)為于這個(gè)時(shí)間打電話是方便的。
您誠摯的Back to Top
實(shí)例之四: Dear Mr./ Ms,Mr.Jack Baron, our personnel director, has asked me to acknowledge your application for the post of accountant and to ask you to come to see him on Friday afternoon, 5th July, at half past two.I will appreciate your letting me know whether you will be able to come.Yours faithfully
尊敬的先生/小姐
杰克巴倫先生,我們的人事主任,讓我向你申請(qǐng)會(huì)計(jì)職位表示感謝,并請(qǐng)你于7月5日星期五的下午兩點(diǎn)半來見他。
是否能來,請(qǐng)告知,多謝。
您誠摯的Back to Top
< 以下為回信范文 > Dear Mr./ Ms,Thank you for your letter of yesterday inviting me to come for an interview on Friday afternoon, 5th July, at 2:30.I shall be happy to be there as requested and will bring my diploma and other papers with me.Yours faithfully
尊敬的先生/小姐
謝謝昨日來信通知我面試,我將于要求的7月5日,周五下午兩點(diǎn)半到達(dá),并帶去我的證書及其它書面材料。
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英語寫作范文之應(yīng)用文格式
(四)5、通知與確認(rèn)Acknowledgments & Confirmations
1)通知對(duì)方接到來信Acknowledging receipt of letters
Dear Mr./ Ms,hank you for your letter No.A-3 of 6th May, offering us 6 UI-4 Viewdatas.We have passed it on to our Technical Department for their consideration.We shall reply as soon as possible.Yours faithfully
尊敬的先生/小姐
謝謝您五月六日標(biāo)號(hào)為A-3的來信,該信向我們提供6 UI-4 圖像數(shù)據(jù)。我們已把該信轉(zhuǎn)給了技術(shù)部,備他們考慮。
我們將盡快回信
你誠摯的Back to Top 2.Dear Mr/Ms,We have today received with thanks information concerning transactions on the New York Wheat Exchange which will be made full use of by our research department.We look forward to further cooperation with you.Yours faithfully
尊敬的先生/小姐
我們今天收到了有關(guān)紐約小麥交易所的業(yè)務(wù)信息,非常感謝,我們的研究部門將充分利用這些信息。
期待與你進(jìn)一步合作。
你誠摯的2)確認(rèn)達(dá)成的協(xié)議 Confirming agreements reached 實(shí)例之一
Dear Mr./ Ms,Last Friday, when we were discussing the problems of defective containers.You suggested that I simply mail you a report each month on the number of return by customers rather than send the defective containers to you.I plan to put this into effect at once.But, I first want to make sure that I understand you correctly.If I don’t hear from you within the coming week, I’ll assume that you approve.Yours faithfully
尊敬的先生/小姐
上周五,我們討論了次品集裝箱的問題,你建議我只需把顧客每月退回的次品集裝箱的數(shù)量寫個(gè)報(bào)告給你,而不是直接退集裝箱。
我計(jì)劃立即付諸現(xiàn)實(shí)。但我想確認(rèn)我理解正確,到下周為止,如我不能收到你的來信,我即認(rèn)為 你沒有異議。
你誠摯的實(shí)例之二:
Dear Mr/Ms,We write to confirm our agreement reached during our conversation on 9th June about special discounts on M-S Acoustical Partitions as described on page 8 of our catalogue.These prices will prevail through 30 June.Partition dimension Regular Price Each Special price Each(12 or more)
4X4’ US$ 112.75FOB Bern US$98.20 FOB Bern
4x5’ US$132 115.50
5x5’ US$152.75 129.85
We will be happy to receive your order
Yours sincerely
尊敬的先生/小姐
我們寫信想確認(rèn)六月九日談話中就M-S聲音隔板特別折扣達(dá)成的協(xié)議。這些隔板在我們目錄泊第八頁有描述。下列價(jià)格六月三十日前有效:
聲音隔板規(guī)格 每只常規(guī)價(jià) 每只特別價(jià)(12及以上)
4X4’ US$ 112.75FOB 波恩 US$98.20 FOB 波恩
4x5’ 132 115.50
5x5’ 152.75 129.85
我們將很榮幸收到你的定單
你誠摯的實(shí)例之三: Dear Mr/Ms,As our telephone negotiation this morning was very brief and proceeded so smoothly, I thought it might be advisable to summarize the agreement:
I offered US$56/kg CIF EMP
You asked for US$60
I countered US$58/kg
You accepted the figure
I look forward to signing the contract when we meet next week.Yours faithfully
尊敬的先生/小姐
今天上午我們的電話協(xié)商簡短而融洽,我想簡單總結(jié)一下協(xié)議:
我報(bào)價(jià)為:US$56/kg CIF EMP,你還價(jià)為US$60,我讓價(jià)為US$58/kg
你同意這個(gè)價(jià)格。下周見面時(shí)我期待能簽定合同。
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英語寫作范文之應(yīng)用文格式
(五)6、告示 Announcements
1)開業(yè) Opening of new business
Dear Mr./ Ms,We have opened at the above address a sales office for our products here in New York.We employ a staff of consultants and a well-trained service department which makes routine checks on all equipment purchased from us.We would be pleased if you would take full advantage of our services and favourable shopping conditions.We fully guarantee the quality of our products.Yours faithfully
尊敬的先生/小姐,我們已在紐約上述地址為我們的產(chǎn)品開設(shè)了一家辦事處。我們雇有一個(gè)諮詢?nèi)藛T和一支受過良好訓(xùn)練的服務(wù)隊(duì)伍,可以為從我處購買的設(shè)備進(jìn)行日常檢查。
如果你能充分利用我們的服務(wù)和良好的購物環(huán)境,我們會(huì)很高興。我們?nèi)姹WC產(chǎn)品的質(zhì)量。
你誠摯的2)建立辦事處 Establishment of new branch Dear Mr./ Ms,Owing to the large increase in the volume of our trade with this country we have decided to open a branch here, with Mr.Wang Lo as manager.The new branch will open on 1st March and from that date all orders and inquiries should be sent to Mr.Wang Lo at the above address, instead of to our London office.We take this opportunity to express our thanks for your cooperation in the past.We hope the new arrangements will lead to even better results.Yours faithfully
尊敬的先生/小姐,因在該國貿(mào)易額大量增加,我們決定在這里開設(shè)一家分支,由王洛先生任經(jīng)理。新辦事處將于三月一日開業(yè),今后所有的訂單和詢價(jià)請(qǐng)按上述地址送到王洛先生那,而不是倫敦辦公室。
我們籍此機(jī)會(huì)向您過會(huì)與我們的合作表示感謝,我們希望新的安排能產(chǎn)生好的結(jié)果。
你誠摯的3): 歇業(yè) Discontinuation of business Dear Mr/Ms,With the demolition of our premises at the above address under a redevelopment scheme, the part of our business carried on there will be discontinued after the end of October.On Monday, 1st October, we are holding a closing-out sale.Stock on hand will be cleared regardless of cost.There will be substantial reductions in all departments and
in some cases, prices will be marked down by as much as one half.Stock to be cleared is unrivaled in both variety and quality.As the sale is likely to be well attended, we hope you make a point of visiting the store as early as possible during the opening days.Yours faithfully
尊敬的先生/小姐,隨著在經(jīng)營重組計(jì)劃下而取消的上述經(jīng)營場所,該處的業(yè)務(wù)將于十月底后停止。在十月一日,星期一,我們將組織一次清倉銷售,現(xiàn)有庫存不論成本都將清售。所有部門都將大幅消價(jià),有的商品折價(jià)會(huì)達(dá)一半。
清倉商品無論種類還是質(zhì)量都無可挑剔。因此次銷售參加人員可能較多,我們希望您在清倉銷售期間盡早來。
你誠摯的4)更改名稱和地址 Change of name and address Dear Mr./ Ms,At our company meeting on 4 September, it was decided that the name of our company would be changed to CNMIEC Lee Co.At the same time, it was decided to move the company from the above address to No3-6 Broadway Street.We will appreciate your informing the appropriate departments of these changes.Yours faithfully
尊敬的先生/小姐,在公司九月四日的會(huì)議上,我們公司的名稱已決定改為CNMIEC李氏公司。同時(shí)公司由現(xiàn)在地址移到百老匯街3-6號(hào)。
如能把這些變化通知相關(guān)部門,我們將不勝感激。
你誠摯的5)新的任命 New appointment Dear Mr./ Ms,We wish to notify you that Mr.Robert Smart, who has been our representative in Southwest England for the past seven years has left our service and therefore no longer has authority to take orders or collect accounts on our behalf.We have appointed Mr.Fred Peterson in his place.Mr.Peterson has for many years been on our sales force and is thoroughly familiar with the needs of customers in your area.We trust you will have good cooperation from him.Yours faithfully
尊敬的先生/小姐,我們?cè)诖送ㄖ^去七年在英格蘭西南任我們代表的羅伯特斯馬特先生已離開我們公司,他不再代表公司接受訂單收款。
我們已任命弗萊德彼特森代替他的位置。彼特森先生已在我們的銷售部門任職多年,完全熟悉你地區(qū)顧客的需要。我們相信您和他能有好的合作。
您誠摯的6)公司的建立與重組
Establishment or reorganization of company Dear Mr./ Ms,We are pleased to announce that as of 1st June our firm will merge with D & W Co.of this town to form the new firm of CN/CW Co.The new firm will carry on business at 6 Rue de Toqueville, Tripoli, to which address please send all communications after 31st May.We appreciate the confidence you have placed in us in the past and look forward to continued dealings with you.Yours faithfully
尊敬的先生/小姐,我們高興的宣布,由于六月一日我們公司將于該鎮(zhèn)的D&W公司合并,成立新的CN/CM公司。新公司將在Tripoli的 Rue de Toqueville六號(hào)辦公,五月三十一日后所有信息請(qǐng)寄新地址。
我們感謝您過去對(duì)我的信任并希望繼續(xù)與您來往。
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(六)7、詢問信息 Consultation
Dear Mr./ Ms,We are much concerned that your sales in recent months have fallen considerably.At first we thought this might be due to a slack market, but on looking into the matter more closely, we find that the general trend of trade during this period has been upwards.It is possible that you are facing difficulties of which we are not aware.If so, we would like to know what we can do to help.We, therefore, look forward to receiving
from you a detailed report on the situation and suggestions as to how we may help in restoring our sales to their former level.Yours faithfully
尊敬的先生/小姐,我們非常關(guān)心你方銷售近幾個(gè)月大幅度下降。開始我們以為是市場疲軟,但仔細(xì)研究問題,我們發(fā)現(xiàn)過去這段時(shí)間貿(mào)易的總趨勢是上升的。有可能你方面臨我方還不知道的困難,如是這樣,我方想知道是否能幫助什么。我們期望收到關(guān)于問題的詳細(xì)報(bào)告,及建議我們?cè)鯓訋椭拍馨唁N售恢復(fù)到原來的水平。
您誠摯的
8、道歉與解釋Appology & Explanation
實(shí)例之一:
Dear Mr./ Ms,We are sorry we cannot send you immediately the catalogue and price list for which you asked in your letter of March 10.Supplies are expected from the printers in two weeks and as soon as we receive them, we will send you a copy.Yours faithfully
尊敬的先生/小姐,對(duì)三月十日來信所要目錄和價(jià)格單,很抱歉不能馬上寄去。印刷商兩周后供貨,一旦收到,我們將給您寄去一份。
您誠摯的實(shí)例之二: Dear Mr./ Ms,I was very concerned when I received your letter of yesterday complaining that the central heating system in your new house had not been completed by the date promised.On referring to our earlier correspondence,I find that I had mistaken the date for completion.The fault is entirely mine and I deeply regret that it should have occurred.I realize the inconvenience our oversight must be causing you and will do everything possible to avoid any further delay.I have already given instructions for the work to have priority and the engineers working on the job to be placed on overtime.These arrangements should see the installation completed by next weekend.Yours faithfully
尊敬的先生/小姐,昨天收到你的來信,抱怨你新家的中央加熱系統(tǒng)未按規(guī)定時(shí)間裝好,對(duì)此我非常關(guān)心。參考較早的通信,我發(fā)現(xiàn)我搞錯(cuò)了完成日期。錯(cuò)誤完全是我的,對(duì)此我非常抱歉。
認(rèn)識(shí)到我們的疏忽給你造成的不便,我們將竭盡全力避免再耽擱。我已指示這項(xiàng)工作優(yōu)先做并讓工程人員加班。這樣安排會(huì)于下周完成安裝。
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英語寫作范文之應(yīng)用文格式
(七)9、提示Attention
Dear Mr./ Ms,On 14 November I submitted a bill for services rendered to your office at the Lille International Exposition.More than a month has now elapsed without payment or acknowledgment of my bill.Please check this oversight,and remit payment at your earliest convenience.I look forward to future services to your corporation.Thank you for your prompt attention to this matter.Yours faithfully
尊敬的先生/小姐,十一月十四日我向你辦公室在Lille國際博覽會(huì)上提供的服務(wù)提交了帳單。一個(gè)月過去了你既沒有付款也沒有認(rèn)可帳單。請(qǐng)檢查這一疏忽并在最方便的時(shí)候付款。期望以后還為你公司服務(wù)。
謝謝您能對(duì)此事盡快重視起來。
你誠摯的10、感謝信 Thank-You Letter
實(shí)例之一:
Dear Mr./ Ms,Thank you for your letter of June 4, enclosing an account of the organization and work of your Chamber of Commerce and Industry.We are very grateful for such a detailed account of your activities.This information is certain to help increase our future cooperation.Yours faithfully
尊敬的先生/小姐,謝謝您六月四日的來信及隨信附上的說明書,該說明書描述了你們工商總會(huì)的工作與組織結(jié)構(gòu)。對(duì)給我們一個(gè)你們活動(dòng)如此詳細(xì)的描述,我們表示非常感謝。這一信息一定能幫助促進(jìn)我們未來的合作。
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英語寫作范文之應(yīng)用文格式
(八)11、祝賀信 Congratulation Letter
實(shí)例之一:
Dear Mr./ Ms,On the occasion of the 35th anniversary of your National Day, please accept our heartiest congratulations.May the trade connections between our countries continue to develop with each passing day!
Yours faithfully
尊敬的先生/小姐,值此國慶三十五周年之際,請(qǐng)接受我們最真誠的祝賀。愿我們兩國之間的貿(mào)易聯(lián)系持續(xù)發(fā)展。
你誠摯的
實(shí)例之二:
Dear Mr.Minister
Allow me to convey my congratulations on your promotion to Minister of Trade.I am delighted that many years service you have given to your country should have been recognized and appreciated.We wish you success in your new post and look forward to closer cooperation with you in the development of trade between our two countries.Sincerely
尊敬的部長先生,請(qǐng)?jiān)试S我向您升任貿(mào)易部長表示祝賀。多年來你對(duì)國家的貢獻(xiàn)被認(rèn)可,欣賞,我非常高興。我們祝愿您在新的職位取得成功,期待我們兩國在貿(mào)易發(fā)展上進(jìn)一步合作。
誠摯的
(以下為回信范文)Dear Mr./ Ms, Thank you for your letter conveying congratulations on my appointment.I wish also to thank you for the assistance you have given me in my work and look forward to better cooperation in the future.Sincerely
尊敬的先生/小姐,感謝你來信對(duì)我的任命表達(dá)的祝賀。我也感謝您對(duì)我的工作給予的支持,并期望未來能有更好的合作。
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英語寫作范文之應(yīng)用文格式
(九)12、邀請(qǐng)與答復(fù)Invitation and Reply
實(shí)例之一:
Dear Mr./ Ms,We should like to invite your Corporation to attend the 1997 International Fair which will be held from April 29 to May 4 at the above address.Full details on the Fair will be sent in a week.We look forward to hearing from you soon, and hope that you will be able to attend.Yours faithfully
尊敬的先生/小姐,在上述地址,我們想請(qǐng)貴公司參加于四月二十九日到五月四日舉辦的1997國際商品交易會(huì),關(guān)于交易會(huì)的詳情我們一周內(nèi)將寄給你。希望不久能收到你的來信,并能來參加。
您誠摯的如果是肯定答復(fù)的話,可以參照下列寫法: Dear Mr./ Ms,Thank you for your letter of March 20 inviting our corporation to participate in the 1997 International Fair.We are very pleased to accept and will plan to display our electrical appliances as we did in previous years.Mr.Li will be in your city from April 2 to 7 to make specific arrangements and would very much appreciate your assistance.Yours faithfully
尊敬的先生/小姐,感謝三月二十八日來信邀請(qǐng)我們公司參加1997國際商品交易會(huì)。我們樂于參加并計(jì)劃展示我們前幾年生產(chǎn)的電子設(shè)備。李先生將于四月二日至七日去你市做具體安排,非常感謝你的協(xié)助。
你誠摯的如果是否定答復(fù)的話,可以參照下列寫法: Dear Mr./ Ms,Thank you very much for your invitation to attend the 1997 International Fair.As we are going to open a repair shop in your city at that time, we are sorry that we shall not be able to come.We hope to see you on some future occasion.Yours faithfully
尊敬的先生/小姐,非常感謝您邀請(qǐng)我們參加1997國際商品交易會(huì)。由于我們將于同一時(shí)間到你市新開一家維修店,非常抱歉我們不能前去。
希望以后在某些場合見到您。
您誠摯的
英語寫作范文之應(yīng)用文格式
(十)13、宣布訪問Declaring A Visit
實(shí)例之一:
Dear Mr./ Ms,Mr.William Taylor, President of our Corporation and Mr.James Rogers, Marketing Manager, would like to visit Beijing to continue our discussions on a joint venture.They plan to leave in the second half of April and stay in China about a week.Please let us know if the planned visit is convenient for you and what itinerary you would suggest.If the time of their visit is agreeable, will you kindly request your Embassy here to issue the necessary visa?
Yours faithfully
尊敬的先生/小姐,我們公司的總裁威廉·泰勒先生和營銷部經(jīng)理珍姆士·羅杰斯先生,想拜訪北京繼續(xù)商討合資企業(yè)之事。他們計(jì)劃四月下半月出發(fā)并在中國停留一周。請(qǐng)告知我方該訪問計(jì)劃對(duì)你方是否方便或您要建議什么行程計(jì)劃。如對(duì)他們的訪問時(shí)間無異議的話,可否要求使館簽發(fā)所需簽證。
您誠摯的
14、活動(dòng)安排Activity Arrangement
Dear Mr./ Ms,We are very pleased to welcome President William Taylor and Manager James Rogers to Beijing and Shanghai in thesecond half of April for about a week.As requested,we propose the following itinerary for your consideration.Monday, April 18
4.00 p.m.Arrive in Beijing by Flt.xx, to be met at the airport by Mr.President
of Asia Trading Co.4.15 Leave for Great Wall Hotel
7.30 Dinner given by President x
Tuesday, April 19
9:30 a.m.Discussion at Asia Trading Co.Building
2:00 p.m.Group discussion
8:00 p.m.Cocktail reception given by the British Commercial Counselor in Beijing
Wednesday, April 20
9:00 a.m.Discussion
12:00 noon Sign the Letter of Intent
1:30 p.m.Peking Duck Dinner
3:30 p.m.visit the Summer palace
6:00 Departure for Shanghai
Would you please confirm by fax so that we can make arrangements accordingly.Yours faithfully
尊敬的先生/小姐,我們非常高興威廉·泰勒總裁和珍姆斯·羅杰斯經(jīng)理能于四月下半月到北京,上海訪問一周,根據(jù)要求我們提出下列活動(dòng)安排供參考:
星期一,四月十八日
下午4:00 乘航班XX到達(dá)北京,由亞洲貿(mào)易公司的總裁X先生
到機(jī)場迎接
4:15 乘車去長城賓館
7:30 總裁X先生舉行晚晏
上午 9:30 a.m.在亞洲貿(mào)易公司討論
2:00 p.m.小組討論
8:00 p.m.英國住北京商務(wù)領(lǐng)事舉行雞尾酒招待會(huì)
上午9:00 討論
中午12:00 簽訂意向書
下午1:30 吃北京烤鴨
3:30 參觀故宮
6:00 乘機(jī)去上海
請(qǐng)傳真確認(rèn),以便我們做相應(yīng)的安排。
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第二篇:英語議論文寫作模版
議論文作文模板
1.正反觀點(diǎn)式議論文模板
導(dǎo)入:
第1段:Recently we've had a discussion about whether we should...(導(dǎo)入話題)
Our opinions are divided on this topic.(觀點(diǎn)有分歧)
正文:
第2段:Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方觀點(diǎn))The reasons are listed as follows.First...Second...Finally...(列出2~3個(gè)贊成的理由)
第3段:However, the others are strongly against it.(反方觀點(diǎn))
Here are the reasons.In the first place...What's more...In addition...(列出2~3個(gè)反對(duì)的理由)
結(jié)論:
第4段:Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(個(gè)人觀點(diǎn))オ 2.“A或者B”類議論文模板:
導(dǎo)入:
第1段:Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways.Others, however, argue that B is much better.Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.正文:
第2段:There are many reasons why I prefer A.The main reason is that...Another reason is that...(贊同A的原因)
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent...(列出1~2個(gè)B的優(yōu)勢)結(jié)論:
第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B.From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that...(得出結(jié)論)オ
3.觀點(diǎn)論述類議論文模板:
導(dǎo)入:
第1段:提出一種現(xiàn)象或某個(gè)決定作為議論的話題
As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision.(亮明自己的觀點(diǎn)是贊成還是反對(duì))The reasons for this may be listed as follows.(過渡句,承上啟下)
正文:
第2段:First of all...Secondly...Besides...(列出2~3個(gè)贊成或反對(duì)的理由)
結(jié)論:
第3段:In conclusion, I believe that...(照應(yīng)第1段,構(gòu)成“總-分-總”結(jié)構(gòu))
4.“How to”類議論文模板:
導(dǎo)入:
第1段:提出一種現(xiàn)象或某種困難作為議論的話題
正文:
第2段:Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective.First of all...Another way to solve the problem is...Finally...(列出2~3個(gè)解決此類問題的辦法)
結(jié)論:
第3段:These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take.But it should be noted that we should take action to...(強(qiáng)調(diào)解決此類問題的根本方法)
實(shí)用文體寫作模板 高考英語作文經(jīng)典范文
名人名言
No one can degrade us except ourselves;that if we are worthy, no influence can defeat us.(B.T.Washington, American educator)除了我們自己以外,沒有人能貶低我們。如果我們堅(jiān)強(qiáng),就沒有什么不良影響能夠打敗我們。
為了大家能更多的得到寫作部分的25分,我們特精選了以下范文,希望同學(xué)們務(wù)必研讀背誦!(尤其注意:文中劃線部分為該體裁的套話;黑體部分為寫作中的經(jīng)典表達(dá)。)
May you succeed in the coming college entrance examination.一、與報(bào)社等討論稿(帶手機(jī)利弊)
Dear Editor:
[引出話題] I’m a senior three student.I’m writing to tell you my opinion on whethermiddle school students can go to school with mobile phones.[贊成]I think they can do that.Because students can keep in touch with their friends and family wherever they are.Besides, the mobile phone is a way to have fun.[反對(duì)] However, every coin has 2 sides.There are some problems with using mobile phones.The ring of phones can disturb teachers and students in the classroom.Another students is that some students can spend too much time and money on phone calls and sending messages.[個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)] In conclusion, I suggest students not use phones in the classroom.Also, as it is expensive, the owner should take good care of it.Yours sincerely,Li Hua
二、看對(duì)照表格寫調(diào)查報(bào)告(孩子出國利弊)
[調(diào)查內(nèi)容] A survey is taken onpublic opinions of the fact that many parents spend a large amount of money sending their children to study abroad, some of whom are middle school students.[調(diào)查結(jié)果]From it we can see that 38 percent of those surveyed think it is worth the money letting children study abroad to get a better education so that they can get pay in return in the future However, not all are for it / some are against it.62% of them hold the view that it is difficult for young people to live and study in a foreign country.It’s easy for them to fall / get into some bad habits and the cost of education in another country is ten times as much as that at home.[解決措施]The survey shows thatthe government should set up different kinds of schools to meet the demands of different children.(句型do something /take measures / steps about sth.to do sth)
三、讀柱狀圖表寫調(diào)查報(bào)告 [注意句式變換] Middle school students have some ideas about their future jobs.The most striking contrast isin teaching: 30percent of the girls would like to become teachers while only 5percent of the boys want to do the job.20 percent of the boys want to do business and another 20 percent want to become lawyers, while girls make up 15 percent in these two fields.What boys like to do most is to become managers and the second largest group would like to be scientists.Besides teaching, the second choice for girlsisto be scientists and managers.The number is not small.Girls also expect to show their abilities in these two fields.四、寫信(過去/現(xiàn)在對(duì)比)
Dear editor,I’m a middle school student.I once had a very happy family, but everything has changed because of my father.He used to be a very good doctor and was often praised by his patients.He took good care of the family and shared the housework with my mother everyday.However, he is now quite a different person.He plays mahjong all night and often quarrels with my mother.I just can’t concentrate on my studies and my grades are coming down.I’m very much worried and I’m afraid it will destroy my family as well as my father
Could you help me what to do? I’m looking forward to your reply.Thank you very much.Li Hua
英語作文寫作框架
英語作文的框機(jī)架
對(duì)比觀點(diǎn)題型
(1)要求論述兩個(gè)對(duì)立的觀點(diǎn)并給出自己的看法。
1.有一些人認(rèn)為……
2.另一些人認(rèn)為……
3.我的看法……
The topic of ①-----------------(主題)is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions about it.Some people say A is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------(支持A的理由一)What is more, ③-------------理由二).Moreover, ④---------------(理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一).Secondly(besides),⑥------------------(理由二).Thirdly(finally),⑦------------------(理由三).From my point of view,I think ⑧----------------(我的觀點(diǎn)).The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因).As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me, the former is surely a wise choice.(2)給出一個(gè)觀點(diǎn),要求考生反對(duì)這一觀點(diǎn)
Some people believe that ①----------------(觀點(diǎn)一).For example, they think ②-----------------(舉例說明).And it will bring them ③---------------(為他們帶來的好處).In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point.For one thing,④-------------(我不同意該看法的理由一).For another thing, ⑤---------(反對(duì)的理由之二).
Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥-----(我對(duì)文章所討論主題的看法). 闡述主題題型
要求從一句話或一個(gè)主題出發(fā),按照提綱的要求進(jìn)行論述.
1.闡述名言或主題所蘊(yùn)涵的意義.
2.分析并舉例使其更充實(shí).
The good old proverb----------------(名言或諺語)reminds us that----------------(釋義).Indeed, we can learn many things form it.First of all,-----------------(理由一).For example,-------------------(舉例說明).Secondly,----------------(理由二).Another case is that---------------(舉例說明).Furthermore ,------------------(理由三).
In my opinion,----------------(我的觀點(diǎn)).In short, whatever you do, please remember the say------A.If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you’ll necessarily benefit a lot from it.解決方法題型
要求考生列舉出解決問題的多種途徑
1.問題現(xiàn)狀
2.怎樣解決(解決方案的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn))
In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious.First,------------(說明A的現(xiàn)狀).Second,----------(舉例進(jìn)一步說明現(xiàn)狀)Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing,---------------(解決方法一).For another-------------(解決方法二).Finally,--------------(解決方法三).Personally, I believe that-------------(我的解決方法).Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because--------------(帶來的好處).說明利弊題型
這種題型往往要求先說明一下現(xiàn)狀,再對(duì)比事物本身的利弊,有時(shí)也會(huì)單從一個(gè)角度(利或弊)出發(fā),最后往往要求考生表明自己的態(tài)度(或?qū)κ挛锴熬疤岢鲱A(yù)測)
1.說明事物現(xiàn)狀
2.事物本身的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)(或一方面)
3.你對(duì)現(xiàn)狀(或前景)的看法
Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.First----------------(A的優(yōu)點(diǎn)之一).Besides-------------------(A的優(yōu)點(diǎn)之二).But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that----------------(A的第一個(gè)缺點(diǎn)).To make matters worse,------------------(A的第二個(gè)缺點(diǎn)).
Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.Therefore, I would like to---------------(我的看法).
(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in.Only by this way,---------------(對(duì)前景的預(yù)測).)
議論文的框架
(1)不同觀點(diǎn)列舉型(選擇型)
There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文題目.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that _ 觀點(diǎn)一________.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____.So it goes without saying that ___觀點(diǎn)一_____.People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.Some peoplehold the idea that_觀二_____.In their point of view, on the one hand, ___原因一_______.On the other hand, ____原因二_____.Therefore, there is no doubt that ___觀點(diǎn)二______.As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __觀點(diǎn)一或二_.Itis not only because ________, but also because _________.The more _______, the more ________.(2)利弊型的議論文
Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)___作文題目______.In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __題目議題_____.Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly, ___優(yōu)點(diǎn)一______.And secondly ___優(yōu)點(diǎn)二_____.Just As a popular saying goes, “every coin has two sides”,討論議題is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects.To begin with,缺 點(diǎn) 一.In addition, 缺點(diǎn)二.To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of 討論議題into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____討論議題___.(3)答題性議論文
Currently, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)作文題目_______.It is really an important concern to every one of us.As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem.First of all, __途徑一______.In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving problem is ___途徑二_____.Above all, to solve the problem of ___作文題目______, we should find a number of various ways.But as far as I am concerned, I would prefer to solve the problem in this way, that is to say, ____方法_____.(4)諺語警句性議論文
It is well know to us that the proverb: "___諺語 has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study.It means ____諺語的含義______.The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows.(also theoretically)
A case in point is ___例子一______.Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb ____諺語_____.With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: ____諺語_____.The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job..圖表作文的框架
As is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the table(graph/picture/pie/chart), ___作文題目的議題_____ has been on rise/ decrease(goesup/increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from______ in _______ to ______ in _____.From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that ________.There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______.On the one hand, ________.On the other hand, _______ is due to the fact that ________.In addition, ________ is responsible for _______.Maybe there are some other reasons to show ________.But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______.I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.
第三篇:英語議論文寫作
英語議論文寫作范文
1.利弊議論文
Model 1:
It is a new thing that_____.Many people welcome this new development while others have expressed their concern about this.Those who take sides against this new trend believe that _____ because_____.One common argument, however, for ____ is that_____.Of the two views discussed above, I am in favor of the _____.My reason is that____.Model 2:
As is known to all, there has been a wave of ____.There are many advantages / disadvantages of this modern way.First of all, _____.In the second place, _____.Lastly, _____.In a word, ____.Model 3:
When asked about ____, different people will offer different opinions.Some people take it for granted that _____.In their mind, ____.Besides, ______.However, others hold that ____.They maintain that ____.1
Weighting up these two arguments, I am for the first one.For one thing, ____.For another, _____.Therefore, as stated above, ____.Model 4:
____ is becoming more popular in ____, especially among ____.Today, it’s certainly difficult to think of ____.There are several reasons for its popularity.First, ____.Second, ____.However, in terms of _____.2.個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)議論文
Model(1)
Nowadays more and more people pay more attention to _____.Some people argue that ____ while others firmly hold that _____.In my opinion, I think this question should be probed in depth.On one hand, the first group is not totally correct because ____.On the other hand, the second group seems ____ because ____.In a word, we can see clearly that the key lies in ____.Otherwise _____.Model(2)
It becomes a common tendency these days for people to ____.Many people are opposed to ____ because they think_____.They also argue that ____.In my mind, however, I can’t agree with ____.At the same time, _____.In addition, ______.In conclusion, ______.Model(3)
____ has been one medium of communication that has connected all the people around world.More and more people tend to concern the ____, because it is so _____ that _____.The advantages of ____ are obvious to some people.For one thing, in terms of ____, For another thing, _____._____.As a result, _____./Consequently, _____.Personally, I side with the former opinion.Because _____.However, _____.Model(4)
Presently, one phenomenon calls for people’ s attention that ____.In general, ______.For one thing, _____.(For example, _____.)For another, _____.As far as I am concerned, _____.To sum up, _____.3.解決方法類議論文
Model(1)
If you ____, what will you feel? Of course, you will feel ___ because _____.Besides this, ____.For one thing, ____, For another, _____.No easy solution can be taken to cope with the problem of ____, but ____.Therefore, my viewpoint is that _____.There is no doubt that ____.Model(2)
Most of us today recognize that ____ has been a greatly serious problem.Therefore, _____.From above, we can find that the reasons why ____, are as follows, the primary reason, I think, _____.For example, _____.However, ____.Second, _____.The third reason actually is the result of ____.Therefore, _____.Moreover, _____.Let’s make our good efforts, and _____.
第四篇:經(jīng)典英語之議論文
觀點(diǎn)議論文
關(guān)于健康
About Doing Physical Exercise 關(guān)于體育運(yùn)動(dòng)
Physical exercise is very important to a happy life.There is a famous saying: “Life lies on exercise.” Although you will not necessarily die without regular physical exercises, they' II certainly help you live longer and more healthily.Exercise is good for us to build up our bodies and improve our health.It lets the heart beat faster than usual, and then helps enlarge the blood vessels to protect us from heart attacks.Exercise can also contribute to the development of our ability to response quickly.For example, playing table-tennis can make you respond faster.In a word, exercise is helpful, important and necessary.How to Keep Healthy 如何保持健康
例1
The desire for good health is universal.Especially nowadays, the possession of good health is regarded by nearly everyone as vital to a happy and successful life.Only if you are in good shape can you expect to live comfortably or work efficiently.Then, how to keep healthy? First, enough time should be set aside for sleep, rest and doing exercises.Secondly, you must break bad habits that damage your health, such as smoking and drinking too much alcohol.Finally, be sure to have your physical check-up regularly.As for me, I have always been taking care to have proper sleep and relaxation.In my spare time I like running, swimming, and playing table tennis.So, I can keep fit and have a good life.例2 Nowadays, more and more people know the importance of keeping healthy.Without a healthy body, we can do nothing.For me , there are three main ways to keep healthy.First, it is necessary to keep a balanced diet, which is the basic of good health.It is better for us to have more fruit and vegetable every day.Secondly, it is important to take regular exercise, such as swimming, jogging and so on.Last but not least, it is essential to keep in a good mood.Relaxation and entertainment are ways to renew our spirits and release our stress.When we make healthy habits a part of our everyday life, we are bound to keep healthy.Wealth and Health 財(cái)富與健康
As a joke goes, the young try to accumulate wealth by sacrificing their health while the old are desperate to restore health by wealth they have owned.The fast-paced modern society places its members in a dilemma: if one wants to possess great wealth, he will have to keep busy all the time, which would always endanger his health.Wealth seems to be too attractive to resist, for the industrialized society prices almost everything that one needs to survive.Health, however, cannot be earned in the way wealth is obtained but can only be consumed.Once health is neglected, it can be hardly regained in the future.Therefore, the question of wealth and health should attract great attention from the public so that they might make the balance.Is Stress a Bad Thing? 有壓力是壞事嗎
Are you afraid of stress? Today I want to talk about stress.Let me share my opinion with you.Some people regard stress as a monster.They are terrified of stress.But other people think stress is a good thing for them.In my eyes, although much pressure is put on me, I’ll receive them as a gift.At first, stress encourages me a lot.It seems to tell me I have to work hard.Being lazy will let me get low marks.Secondly, proper stress develops my self-confidence.I still believe I’ll do better than others.Finally, if someone gives me a lot of stress, it shows he cares for me.I’ll work harder to make him happy.I always have much stress on studying.Well, I’ll have many ways to deal with it.If I feel tired, I’ll take a deep breath, play the piano for a while or walk my dog.Doing these things makes me relaxed.At last, I want to say if you have so much pressure, finding proper ways to deal with it is the most important.Don’t be nervous.Don’t be afraid of it!Believe yourself!
Then you will find everything is very easy.Smoking Is Harmful 吸煙有害
It has been estimated that smokers have made up half of the population in China.And the smokers are becoming younger and younger, even including some middle school students.Nowadays more and more people have realized smoking can do harm to people’s health.However, some people still enjoy smoking.Why? Because some of them think it is a kind of fashion;some think it is of great fun and some others think that smoking can refresh themselves.In fact, smoking is a bad habit.It can cause a lot of diseases.Meanwhile smoking is a waste of money.Besides, careless smokers may cause dangerous fires.Smoking is harmful and it is not only bad for smokers themselves, but also bad for non-smokers.Therefore, I hope all the smokers can give up smoking for themselves and also for the people around them.Health and Eating Habit 健康與飲食習(xí)慣
As we all know, we are what we eat.Therefore, it’s very important for us to develop healthy eating habits.However, bad eating habits are still very common among us students.Some of us often go to school without breakfast;some like to have snacks;some others are particular about food and still some eat or drink too much.All these bad habits will surely do harm to our health.To keep fit, we should have various healthy diets, which generally include proper amounts of fish, meat, vegetables, fruit as well as main food.Besides, we’d better have meals regularly.In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong body.Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.關(guān)于環(huán)境
Water Pollution 水污染
例1 Today, I read a piece of news about water pollution in Taihu Lake in a newspaper.But water pollution exists not only in Taihu Lake but also in some other rivers, lakes and seas in our country.Without any doubt, water pollution is a serious problem today.Rivers, lakes and even oceans all over the world are being polluted by garbage and dangerous chemicals.Oil and other chemicals can kill fish and make water unsafe for drinking.More and more people have realized how serious the problem is.Our government is doing its best to take measures to fight against pollution.We've done a good deal of work, but there's still a long way to go.We must keep on fighting until we find ways to protect the environment from being polluted, and do away with pollution.We are sure that we'll win the battle.Goodbye, water pollution!例2 Water pollution has been a serious problem.With the development of industry, water pollution is becoming more serious now.The polluted water not only kills fish, it is also harmful to our health.Many people get sick because they drink the polluted water.In some rivers the water is so dirty that they can even kill plants.People can't live without water so we should fight against the pollution.Our government has taken measures to protect the rivers against pollution.People also realize the seriousness of the pollution.We should stop using harmful things and keep the water clean.I wish it is not a dream that in the near future we can have clean rivers again.Plant More Trees 種更多的樹
1.樹是一種重要的自然資源;
2.樹有利于環(huán)境的改善;
3.讓我們多種樹。
Trees are important resources.They provide us with wood, which is not only an important building material, but also indispensable in making paper, furniture, matches and many other useful things.Without tress, we would perhaps still be living in caves, and our life would be very miserable.Trees also do good to our environment.They not only make our world greener and more beautiful but also produce oxygen which makes the air we breathe fresher and better for our health.What’s more, trees help maintain ecological balance, which is very important to our survival.Fortunately, trees, unlike other resources, can be “reproduced”.While coal and oil can be burnt up and exhausted, trees will never be used up because we can always plant new ones.And when we plant trees, we know that we are helping make our world richer, pleasanter, and more beautiful to live in.So let’s plant more trees.關(guān)于成功
The Way to Success 內(nèi)容需包括以下方面:
1.每個(gè)人都試圖在事業(yè)上獲得成功;2.獲得成功的要索;3.我堅(jiān)信…
Everyone tries to achieve success in his/her career.But some finally attain their aims while others fail.Why? Some continue their cause to the end through long period of hard struggles, but others are easily disappointed and stop halfway.Strong will, perseverance and diligence are the three essentials of success.A man of strong will and perseverance always has an inflexible spirit.He sticks to his cause no matter how tough it might be.Life is short and we have too much to do.Without diligence no one can achieve anything.I believe that where there is a will there is a way, and that success belongs to those who can make constant efforts.Don't be afraid of life.Believe that life is worth living, and your belief will help create the fact.Failure Is the Mother of Success(失敗乃成功之母)
Everyone may fail in his life.But different people treat failure differently.Some are afraid of failure, while others welcome it.I think failure is a good thing.Failure can be a good teacher.It can reveal that where we need improvement.So we know where we should invest more time and energy, and what strategy to take.In this way, failure teaches us to be better the second time around.As they say,“ The more you try, the more you'll succeed.” No one can keep from failure.If we can turn failure to our advantages, we will succeed sooner or later.My View on luck 1.一些人把成功歸于運(yùn)氣;
2.另一些人把運(yùn)氣看作是成功的結(jié)果;
3.我的看法。
When talking about one's fate, some people think that luck is one of the important factors that determine one's success.When one manages to do something, people would say, “You have good luck.”While one fails, people would say, “You are unlucky”.But some people hold a different views, they believe that nothing but diligence is the mother of good luck.People can gain success only by their hard work and efforts.On the other hand, good luck doesn't occur all the time.To my mind, I believe that success comes from diligence and hard work.關(guān)于金錢
On Money/ Money is Not Everything Money is regarded by some people as the most important thing in life.It is even regarded as the symbol of wealth and social position.For example, with plenty of money a man can do whatever he wants to.He can afford expensive cars and luxurious houses, and he can travel around the world and visit as many interesting places as he wants to.In their eyes, money is everything in life.In my opinion, money is not everything.Money can both benefit people and do harm to them.On the one hand, we can't deny that money is useful.We need money to buy food or a house or pay our education cost.Money can make us live more comfortably.For example, with more money, we can help others and take part in more social activities and receive a good education, thus increasing our knowledge and developing our skills.On the other hand, some people try to get money by dishonest means, for example, they often cheat and gamble, even rob and kill people.Sooner or later, they will be punished by the law.Money can bring them nothing but misery.城市和鄉(xiāng)村
Living in a Big City Recently, thousands of people are rushing into big cities to settle down.I think that people who move to big cities must enjoy the advantages of city life.I am certainly a supporter among them.If you live in a big city, shopping centers, restaurants and recreation centers are always within easy reach.Therefore, it's very convenient to buy various goods.In addition, people in big cities can participate in different activities more often than those living in the country.However, crowded big cites are being faced with many problems.The most serious ones are “Traffic jam”, “housing condition”, and “pollution”.So we should pay more attention to the environment and public facilities.Only in this way can we live in great comfort.My View of the Country Life and Town life/ City Life and
Suburban Life 我對(duì)城市和鄉(xiāng)村生活的看法/ 城市生活和郊區(qū)生活
內(nèi)容需包括以下方面:
1.有一種觀點(diǎn)認(rèn)為:城市生活比鄉(xiāng)村生活好;2.你對(duì)這種觀點(diǎn)的看法;3.你的結(jié)論。
Some people believe that town life is better than country life.I don’t agree with this.Town life can be convenient to us in many aspects.For example, you can move around easily, shopping can be more fun in a big shopping mall and you can enjoy a more colorful nightlife.But there are also many disadvantages.It is much nosier than in the country.Air pollution is more serious.It is not easy to park your car.It costs more to live in town.To name but a few is enough.Therefore, I prefer country life.Where to Live 1.有人喜歡住在城市 2.有人喜歡住在農(nóng)村 3.我的看法
Where to Live 例1 Some people prefer to live in the big cities.Life in the city enjoys many advantages.Take education for example, usually schools in the city have better facilities and teachers.Secondly, life in the city is very convenient because shopping centers, restaurants, cinemas and supermarkets are always within easy reach.But some other people prefer to live in the countryside.Compared with the life in the city, life in the countryside is simpler, more peaceful and with slower pace.People can get closer to the nature and enjoy the beauty of nature.From my point of view, as far as I’m still studying and working, I think life in the city is more suitable for me because I can have more opportunities in the city.Furthermore, I want to make use of the better facilities in the city to enrich my life.After I retire, I’ll consider moving to the countryside to live a healthier and simpler life.例2 Living in the city or in the country is really a problem for some people because both of them have strengths and weaknesses.Living in the city, undoubtedly, will have more convenience than living in the country.There are good infrastructures, convenient traffic, completely health service, different kinds of shops that meet your different needs and various means of entertainment.You could live in a modern flat and enjoy a cozy life.However, there also exist some common problems, such as, pollution, noises, traffic jams.Compared with living in the city, living in the country may avoid above problems.Besides, usually, the environment in the country is much better.But another problem appears.What seem to be the advantages for living in the city have become the disadvantages for living in the country.Inconvenience is the biggest one among all of these.So people who face to make a decision must have a good balance of both sides.To me, according to the situation of China, I prefer to live in the city.An important reason is that the development of city is far beyond that of country.Some countries, especially in remote areas, are still very poor and backward.The life there is still very tough and difficult.Nevertheless, nothing is absolutely, some people still would rather choose live in the country, it is really up to yourself.Remember, happy and comfortable are the purposes.選擇住在城市還是鄉(xiāng)村對(duì)于某些人來說是一個(gè)真正的問題。因?yàn)椴还茏∧睦锔髯远加欣斜住?/p>
住在城市,毫無疑問,肯定比住在鄉(xiāng)村要便捷的多。城市有好的公共設(shè)施,方便的交通,完善的健康服務(wù)體系,各種各樣的商場來滿肚你不同的需要和各種娛樂設(shè)施。你可以住在一個(gè)現(xiàn)代的公寓里享受著舒適的生活。然而,住在城市也有些共同的問題,比如:污染,噪音和交通堵塞。
相比住在城市,住在鄉(xiāng)村可以避免以上的問題。而且,通常,住在鄉(xiāng)村的環(huán)境要比城市好很多。但是其他問題又出現(xiàn)了。似乎住在城市的優(yōu)點(diǎn)成了住在鄉(xiāng)村的缺點(diǎn)。其中不便捷就是眾多問題中最大的一個(gè)。因此,人們面對(duì)選擇時(shí),必須要考慮雙方的平衡。
對(duì)我而言,根據(jù)中國的現(xiàn)狀,我寧愿選擇住在城市。最重要的一個(gè)原因是城市的發(fā)展要遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)比鄉(xiāng)村的發(fā)展發(fā)達(dá)。有些鄉(xiāng)村,尤其是偏遠(yuǎn)農(nóng)村地區(qū),是非常貧窮和落后的。那里的生活非常的艱苦和困難。然而,任何事情都沒有絕對(duì)的,有些人寧愿選擇鄉(xiāng)村,這完全取決于你自己。只要記住,快樂和舒適是其目的就好。
Instructions: 建議你在30分鐘內(nèi),根據(jù)下面所給的題目用英語寫出一篇不少于80詞的短文。
City Life and Suburban Life In recent years more and more homes are being pushed outwards as the activities of business, government and pleasure tend to be concentrated in the centers of the cities.Although most people are reluctant to move to the outskirts of the cities, I feel like living in the suburbs.It is true that the city can provide much convenience and entertainment, the very reason why people can't bear to part with city life.But the cost for the privilege of living in the city is also high.What's more, there is more gas and noise pollution in the city, which is full of petrol fumes and toxic gases, torn by the roar of buses and taxies, and thronged ceaselessly by great crowds.In contrast, living near the countryside one can enjoy the clean atmosphere, the closeness to nature and the quiet, peaceful surroundings-the essentials of a healthy life.Although living in the suburbs one may suffer a little discomfort brought about by the necessity of traveling miles to work every day, it means nearly nothing when thinking of the high cost and heavily polluted environment of the city.The new suburban life is fast becoming a predominant pattern of living in most cities;and with the improvement of traffic and the perfection of services, it will prove to hold great superiority over city life.城市生活和郊區(qū)生活
近年來越來越多的家庭因?yàn)樯虡I(yè)活動(dòng)的發(fā)展而被推到城市的外圍。政府和娛樂中心占據(jù)著城市的中心。盡管大多數(shù)人不情愿搬到城市的郊區(qū)地帶,而我感覺住在郊區(qū)其實(shí)也挺好。
城市可以提供更多的便捷和娛樂,這也是為什么很多人無法忍受沒有這些的生活。但是住在城市的生活成本也是很高。而且,城市里人口擁擠,公共汽車、出租車汽油燃燒后的有毒廢氣和噪音的污染更加嚴(yán)重。相比之下,住在郊區(qū)既可以享受清潔的大氣,接近自然地寧靜環(huán)境-這些事健康生活的本質(zhì)。盡管住在郊區(qū)可能遭受每天乘車往返中旅途的一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)不舒適,但是考慮到生活成本和城市環(huán)境的嚴(yán)重污染,這點(diǎn)不舒適就不算什么了。
新的郊區(qū)生活將很快成為大多數(shù)城市的主流生活方式。隨著交通服務(wù)設(shè)施的完善提高,住在郊區(qū)將有著城市生活得優(yōu)勢。
Instructions: 建議你在30分鐘內(nèi),根據(jù)下面所給的題目用英語寫出一篇不少于80詞的短文。Where to Live 1.有人喜歡住在城市 2.有人喜歡住在農(nóng)村 3.我的看法。
談你喜歡的城市交通方式 內(nèi)容需包括以下方面:1.哪一種是你最喜歡的交通方式;2.闡述你的理由;3.作出結(jié)論。
Which means of transportation do you prefer? In a modern city, there are many means of transportation, such as subway, taxi, bus and so on.But my favorite means of transportation is by bike.First, riding a bike is good for keeping healthy.I spend one hour riding a bike to my office on my working day, and I think it is a good form of physical exercise.Secondly, it is money-saving.Recently, the private car drivers always complain the price of gas is higher and higher, but if you ride a bike, it will cost you nothing.Thirdly, it is beneficial for protecting the environment, so it is a “green” form of transportation.Therefore, although it has some disadvantages, I like riding a bike best.最……的
Interest Is the Best Teacher 興趣是最好的老師
例1 I was not able to get high marks when I was in primary school.Teachers didn’t like me because I was not a good student.Mother considered me as a bad kid.They hurt me by thinking I am a retarded child.But I am no fool.Almost all of my paintings were showed in public.Many famous artists had praised me for my paintings.They called me “l(fā)ittle genius”.And dad was on my side too.He encouraged me to do what I liked and what I thought was proper.He told me that interest is the best teacher;Dad did what he could to develop my talent fully.I believe that interest together with hard work will make me a successful artist in the near future.例2 In our life the best teacher is our interest.If we do something with great interest, we can not only save a lot of time and energy but also do a much better job.On the contrary, if we start doing something without any interest, we may feel bored very soon, let alone do a satisfactory job finally.Since interest is of great importance in our study, work as well as our daily life, it is very necessary for us to arouse our interest in things.We are expected to discover the interesting sides while doing something before we develop our interest gradually in it.If we have had great interest in doing something, we need to make a good use of it and exploit its advantages to the full.In conclusion, all of us need to be directed by our best teacher—interest.我們生活中最好的老師是興趣。如果我們做一些事情有很大興趣,那么我們不僅可以節(jié)約大量的時(shí)間和精力,還能干得很好。相反,如果我們開始做一件事便沒什么興趣,我們很快便會(huì)感覺非常無聊,更不必說最后能把事情做好了。
由于興趣對(duì)我們的學(xué)習(xí)、工作和日常生活有著重要意義,我們有必要激發(fā)我們的興趣。我們?cè)诟墒虑榈倪^程中就應(yīng)該發(fā)現(xiàn)事情有趣的一面,逐漸培養(yǎng)我們的興趣。如果我們本來就對(duì)干一件事有很大興趣,我們則需要好好利用我們的興趣。
總之,我們每一個(gè)人都需要受到我們最好的老師—興趣的指導(dǎo)。
Parents Are the Best Teachers 父母是最好的老師
內(nèi)容需包括以下方面: 1.父母是最好的老師; 2.解釋其中的原因; 3.重申觀點(diǎn)。
We will all have many teachers in our lives.They include not only our teachers in school, but our classmates and friends, our colleagues and our bosses and, most importantly, our parents.Our parents are our first and best teachers because they teach us the most important things in life, teach us continually and always have our best interests at heart.First, our parents begin teaching us the moment we are born, and what they teach us in those early years are the most important things we can learn.They teach us how to get along with other people.In addition, they teach us how to be independent and how to learn.Of course, they also teach us language and many other practical skills.Second, our parents are always teaching us whether we realize it or not.They teach both in words and by example.Finally, our parents are devoted teachers who always want the best for us.Their purpose for teaching us is to prepare us for a good life in the future.Throughout our lives we will learn from many people, for there is something that we can learn from everyone we meet.However, no teacher can take the place of our parents because they are our most devoted and best teachers.Honesty Is the Best Policy 誠實(shí)乃上策
There is an English proverb which says(saying)“Honesty is the best policy.”It signifies the importance of honesty.What are the benefits of honesty?If you are honest to others,they will be honest to you in return.When you are sad,they will comfort you.When you are in trouble,they will help you.There is no enumerating the evils of dishonesty here.In a word,a dishonest man will be looked down upon by others and(be)regarded as a public enemy.Honesty is better than dishonesty.Firstly, honesty is one of traditional virtues of China.We should regard it as our motto.Secondly, honesty will bring not only happiness but also respect to you.On the contrary, dishonesty will cause many serious results.On one hand, your d ishonesty will make other people distrust you.People begin to doubt your words and actions.It is a punishment to you.On the other hand, dishonesty dose harm to other people, even our country.In a word, honesty is the best policy.With the development of society, credit system will be founded.People will get benefit from their honesty.The society without honesty can’t develop stably and rapidly.We should abide our social law and regulation and contribute to our country.East or west, home is best.金窩銀窩不如自家的狗窩
What’s the best place in your heart? If I ask you where the best place is in your heart, perhaps you may say it’s Zhongnanhai, the White House or the Kremlin Palace.But I’ll tell you that it’s home rather than any one of them.Because a proverb says well that “East or west, home is best.”
That’s why? Because home is the port of our soul and the only one place that we are looking forward to going for the whole life.Because I think home means all to me and anybody else.It’s home where we can go whenever we are hurt or tired.It is also home where we can enjoy the feelings of parents, brothers and sisters.It’s home that that fights against wind or rain whether in the day time or at night.In a word, whatever we do and wherever we go, home is the best place that we can go forever.Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists?
大學(xué)應(yīng)向游客開放嗎
內(nèi)容提示:
1.校園是否應(yīng)對(duì)游客開放,人們看法不同。你的觀點(diǎn); 2.闡述你的理由; 3.結(jié)論,重申觀點(diǎn)。
It is true that many university campuses, especially those of the famous ones, have recently become the new tourist attractions.Some people are quite in favor of the campus’ opening to tourists while others are opposed to it.The opening of campus will stimulate the tourist industry, but the easier access to campus will lead to some accidents or safety problems which will interfere in students’ life.In my opinion, campuses can be open to tourists once a week, say, on Saturday or Sunday.This suggestion, I believe, is quite workable because it could kill two birds with one stone.For one thing, campuses could attract many tourists on weekends, thus boosting the tourism.For another, restricted opening of campus will beneficially narrow the gap between campuses and the outside world.Furthermore, this will also attract more public attention and build a great reputation for the university.Failure is the Mother of Success.失敗乃成功之母 1.你對(duì)“失敗乃成功之母”的看法; 2.舉例說明你的看法。
All of us experience failure every now and then.A merchant may fail in his business and a student may fail in his examination.Some people will avoid failure at all costs.For me, failure can be a good teacher.There is some wisdom to be learned from failure.If we can learn to turn a failure to our advantage, we will have learned another secret to success.For example, when we fail in our exams, it’s time for us to ask why we failed.Is it because of our inattention in class or our laziness after class or unclear explanation of the teacher or our poor learning style? If we can find the key, I am sure we will succeed in our exams.That’s how I overcome my difficulties in my study.Failure is the mother of success and success that comes after failure is so sweet.Advantages and Disadvantages of the Mobile Phone 1.手機(jī)的好處; 2.手機(jī)帶來的問題。
Being a product of high-technology, mobile phones are being more and more widely used.It's small in size, light in weight and easy to carry, offering fast and convenient service for communication.It's of multi-function.The users use it for calling, sending short messages and internet-surfing.In spite of the advantage mentioned above, student users often waste a lot of time chatting over the phone in their spare time, some even use them to cheat in exams.In addition, mobile phone bill is also a heavy burden on students' families.What’s more, it’s reported that mobile phone can do harm to our health.Maybe we should learn to use mobile phone reasonably.
第五篇:議論文寫作之教師版
議論文寫作之會(huì)分析才有硬道理【教師版】
劉序偉設(shè)計(jì)
【展示目標(biāo)】
1.掌握議論文常見的四種分析方法,在寫作實(shí)踐中靈活運(yùn)用。
2.學(xué)會(huì)有理有據(jù)地陳述自己的觀點(diǎn),以理服人。
【學(xué)習(xí)指導(dǎo)】議論文是以議論說理為主的文章,一篇以理服人、以理取勝、推理邏輯性強(qiáng)的議論文往往在高考中更能獲得高分。為了達(dá)到目的,就要在觀點(diǎn)與材料間搭一座理性的橋梁。
1.強(qiáng)化論據(jù)要緊扣論點(diǎn)的意識(shí)。
2.學(xué)會(huì) “就例說理”。在分析問題能力有限的情況下,根據(jù)說理的幾種語言表達(dá)形式或套子,先學(xué)會(huì)模仿,在思維水平發(fā)展到一定階段后,再隨心所欲,靈活運(yùn)用,提高說理能力。
【自主學(xué)習(xí)】
導(dǎo)入:這節(jié)課,我們進(jìn)一步學(xué)習(xí)議論文中常見的四種分析方法,讓我們的論據(jù)更有說服力。(展示課題“會(huì)分析才有硬道理”)
1.目標(biāo)要求: 強(qiáng)化論據(jù)要緊扣論點(diǎn)的意識(shí);學(xué)會(huì) “就例說理”。
2.典例感悟
例一:不輕易說“不”,這是一種智慧。(論點(diǎn))
十幾年前,互聯(lián)網(wǎng)在中國還沒有造成重大影響。一個(gè)外國記者采訪某外資企業(yè)老板時(shí)問:“您以為互聯(lián)網(wǎng)在中國有市場嗎?”那位老板幾乎不假思索地說:“不,那不可能,中國技術(shù)太落后,經(jīng)濟(jì)也不行?!钡@句話卻啟發(fā)了當(dāng)時(shí)正從事翻譯工作的馬云。他仔細(xì)地分析,中國有十幾億人口,且隨著改革開放,經(jīng)濟(jì)也逐漸發(fā)展,如果利用互聯(lián)網(wǎng)發(fā)展貿(mào)易,不是有很大的市場嗎?于是他敏銳地從別人說“不”的事業(yè)里看到了商機(jī)。馬云也成為了著名網(wǎng)站“阿里巴巴”的總裁,他的智慧也為人稱道。(論據(jù))
如果當(dāng)時(shí)馬云只看到困難,就輕易地說“不”,那么現(xiàn)在還哪有功成名就可言?由此可見,有些看似不可能的事,請(qǐng)不要輕易對(duì)它們說“不”。有時(shí)候經(jīng)過仔細(xì)分析,認(rèn)真思考,所謂的不可能也是有可能的。(假設(shè)分析)
——08高考優(yōu)秀作文《不要輕易說“不”》
例二:將個(gè)人利益與國家利益相連才能為國爭光(論點(diǎn))
2004年雅典奧運(yùn)會(huì)后,已是奧運(yùn)冠軍的冼東妹光榮退役,開始了新的生活,但是2007年初,國家需要她再拼搏一次時(shí),她毫不猶豫,不顧自己已經(jīng)是32歲的高齡,狠心給僅僅5個(gè)月大的女兒斷奶,犧牲和諧幸福的家庭生活,毅然重返柔道訓(xùn)練館,踏上艱辛的復(fù)出之路。在布滿荊棘的衛(wèi)冕之路上,冼東妹克服了無數(shù)困難,最終在北京奧運(yùn)會(huì)上勇奪金牌,再次為祖國贏得榮譽(yù)。(論據(jù))
假如07年冼東妹只顧享受和諧幸福的家庭生活,以自己的體育年齡已大、女兒未斷奶為由,拒絕重返體壇;假如冼東妹承受不了復(fù)出的壓力,懼怕訓(xùn)練過程遇到的困難;假如冼東妹只顧個(gè)人的利益,不顧國家的利益……那么08奧運(yùn)的獎(jiǎng)牌榜上中國將少了一塊熠熠生輝的金牌??梢?,只有將個(gè)人利益與國家利益相連才能為國爭光。(假設(shè)分析)點(diǎn)撥:簡言之,正例反說,反例正說。這就是最簡單易行的說理方法——假設(shè)分析法。標(biāo)志性詞語:如果……,那么……假如……,怎能……試想、倘若
【自我檢測】、運(yùn)用假設(shè)分析法緊扣論點(diǎn)對(duì)下列論據(jù)進(jìn)行分析
立志是非常重要的。(論點(diǎn))
王羲之九歲就開始練字,立志要做書法家,無論酷暑嚴(yán)寒,還是刮風(fēng)下雨,從不間斷。他在紹興蘭亭的一個(gè)水池邊練字,池水都被他洗筆硯染黑了,那俊秀飄逸的字體,千百年來被人們奉為瑰寶,古人詩贊云:‘古硯池中起墨波,右軍書法妙如何?(論據(jù))
假如王羲之根本沒想過要當(dāng)什么書法家,只是平庸過日子,那他絕不可能有這么堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的意志去練字。那么,王羲之其人也不為我們后人所知,正因?yàn)樗麖男【土⑾赂哌h(yuǎn)的志向,才會(huì)有堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的意志去苦練書法,才會(huì)成就一代書法家。(假設(shè)分析)
【自主學(xué)習(xí)】靠奮斗沖破“埋沒”的壓力。(論點(diǎn))
古今中外,許多取得了重大成就的人,很多都遭受過“埋沒”的命運(yùn)。愛因斯坦就曾被
埋沒在一個(gè)專利局中,充當(dāng)小職員的平凡角色。但他沒有灰心,抓緊一切機(jī)會(huì)進(jìn)行研究,終于開創(chuàng)了物理學(xué)的新天地。華羅庚曾“埋沒”在小店鋪里,但他沒有消沉,每天在做好營業(yè)工作后,抓緊一分一秒的時(shí)間,晝夜不停,寒暑不辨,刻苦自學(xué),潛心鉆研數(shù)學(xué),終成著名的數(shù)學(xué)家。(論據(jù))
他們?yōu)槭裁礇]有因埋沒而窒息,并且能有建樹呢?因?yàn)樗麄兪巧畹膹?qiáng)者,他們不甘心
忍受被“埋沒”的命運(yùn);因?yàn)樗麄冊(cè)凇奥駴]”的情況下,不是怨天尤人,而是努力拼搏奮斗,終于沖破“埋沒”脫穎而出。(因果分析)
例四:必須重整全民道德觀念(論點(diǎn))奶粉添加三聚氰胺事件,再次引爆中國的食品安全問題。令我們更為憂心的是事件透露出
來的中國的道德危機(jī)。聯(lián)想到其他的造假,不能不問,中國商人的道德丟到哪里了?過去幾年,中國問題食品頻生,從蘇丹紅一號(hào)、劣質(zhì)奶粉、有毒大米、孔雀石綠,到去年的毒豆奶、毒餃子和近期的毒奶粉事件。(論據(jù))
為什么中國的問題食品屢禁不止?這顯然是內(nèi)地商人的商德、地方政府包庇、法律和監(jiān)管
質(zhì)檢等方面都出現(xiàn)問題。究其原因,在商品經(jīng)濟(jì)的大潮的沖擊下,金錢至上,拜金主義,滲透了相當(dāng)多人的靈魂之中?,F(xiàn)在,為了利潤,為了賺錢,連孩子的健康也不顧了,這不可怕嗎?所以,所有有影響的人士,都必須為重整全民道德觀念鼓與呼。道德低下了,經(jīng)濟(jì)上去了最終還是要垮下來。(因果分析)
【講解提高】
在列舉事例的基礎(chǔ)上,從因果關(guān)系上把論點(diǎn)與論據(jù)聯(lián)系起來。具體說,就是對(duì)事例中的行為,沿著“為什么”這條思路,探求其根源,由果索因,使內(nèi)容逐步深化。這就叫“探因分析法”。標(biāo)志性詞語:為什么……,是因?yàn)椤?; 正因?yàn)椤?,所以…?;之所以……,是因?yàn)椤?;究其原因…?/p>
【自我檢測】運(yùn)用探因分析法緊扣論點(diǎn)對(duì)下列論據(jù)進(jìn)行分析
換一種角度思考,將有另一種收獲(論點(diǎn))
相信大家對(duì)“牛仔大王”李維斯并不感到陌生,對(duì)他的發(fā)跡史也略有所聞:他一開始是想
到西部淘金,在此過程中他遇到了和其他所有的淘金者相同的困難。面對(duì)擋住淘金者西行去路的大河這一障礙,他想到了利用替淘金者擺渡賺錢;面對(duì)西部缺水的困境,他想到了賣水給淘金者賺錢;面對(duì)到西部淘金的人褲子極易磨破的現(xiàn)實(shí),他想到了用破帳篷來制造褲子買給淘金者賺錢。后來,他還發(fā)明了世界上第一條牛仔褲,賺了人生的第一桶金。(論據(jù))
參考答案:為什么在別人眼里是障礙,是困難,在李維斯眼中卻是致富的商機(jī)呢?就是因
為他并沒有像其他淘金者那樣怨天尤人或知難而退,而是懂得換一種角度思考。他明白到只要能賺錢不一定要到西部去淘金。大河擋住了他的去路,但是換一種角度思考的智慧卻使他開辟了多條財(cái)路。所以說,換一種角度思考,將有另一種收獲。(因果分析)
【自主學(xué)習(xí)】
歸納分析法:在列舉多個(gè)典型論據(jù)之后,對(duì)這些論據(jù)比較分析,歸納總結(jié)出它們的共同點(diǎn),扣在要證明的論點(diǎn)上,這種分析法就是“歸納分析法”。
例五:樂觀是成功的保證(觀點(diǎn))
牛頓發(fā)明地心引力學(xué)說的時(shí)候,全世界人反對(duì)他;哈費(fèi)發(fā)明血液循環(huán)學(xué)說的時(shí)候,全世界
人反對(duì)他;達(dá)爾文宣布進(jìn)化論的時(shí)候,全世人反對(duì)他;貝爾第一次造電話的時(shí)候,全世界人
譏笑他;萊特初用苦功于制造飛機(jī)的時(shí)候,全世界人譏笑他。講到孫中山先生,最初在南洋演講革命救國的時(shí)候,有一次聽的人只有三個(gè)。(論據(jù))
但這許多人都因抱著樂觀主義的精神,而為后世所稱道。也正因有了極強(qiáng)烈而有效的樂觀主義精神,他們才戰(zhàn)勝各種艱難險(xiǎn)阻取得勝利,獲得了成功。(歸納分析)
例六:貧困越激勵(lì)人奮發(fā)上進(jìn),這何嘗又不是一筆財(cái)富呢?
古人云“自古才子出寒門”。(觀點(diǎn))
古今中外成才者,大多出自寒家。范仲淹兩歲喪父,隨母改嫁,幼時(shí)讀書連稠一點(diǎn)的粥都難以吃到;司馬光亦出身貧寒;明代大學(xué)士宋濂家中一貧如洗;蘇聯(lián)偉大作家高爾基曾經(jīng)是個(gè)流浪兒;荷蘭畫家梵高也曾窮困潦倒,一文不名,生活上??康艿芙訚?jì);居里夫人剛滿十歲,就去打工,還供姐姐讀書……。(論據(jù))
這都是幼時(shí)曾貧困而后來成為才子的非常之人。寒門是他們植根的土壤,也就是這塊貧瘠的土壤使他們不斷地發(fā)育不斷地成熟,塑造自我,完善自我,最終成為參天大樹,開出燦爛之花。由此看來,窮并不可怕,可怕的是喪失擺脫貧窮的信心和斗志。窮則思變,就要奮發(fā)圖強(qiáng),越是貧困越激勵(lì)人奮發(fā)上進(jìn),這何嘗又不是一筆財(cái)富呢?(歸納分析)
【自我檢測】運(yùn)用歸納分析法緊扣論點(diǎn)對(duì)下列論據(jù)進(jìn)行分析
只有付出,才有收獲(觀點(diǎn))
左思為寫《三都賦》閉門謝客,數(shù)載耕耘。三九嚴(yán)冬,筆耕不輟;三伏酷暑,意興猶酣。多少白日,三餐忘食;多少夜晚,獨(dú)對(duì)孤燈?!耙聨u寬終不悔”的執(zhí)著,換來了豐碩的成果,《三都賦》轟動(dòng)全城,一時(shí)洛陽紙貴。英國物理學(xué)家法拉第,為了揭示電和磁的奧秘整整奮斗了十年,十年中,他不懈地努力,卻不斷地失敗;不斷地失敗,卻又不懈地努力。十年之后,他成為揭示電磁奧秘的第一人。(論據(jù))
左思和法拉第雖然所處的時(shí)代不同,國籍不同,從事的研究領(lǐng)域不同,但他們成功的道路卻是相同的——付出,無悔地付出。付出心血和汗水,付出精力和智慧。(歸納分析)
【自主學(xué)習(xí)】
正反對(duì)比法:舉一個(gè)正面的例子、一個(gè)反面的例子,然后,對(duì)這兩個(gè)例子還要進(jìn)一步從正反兩個(gè)方面進(jìn)行分析以證明論點(diǎn)。
例七:藺相如摒棄一切世俗,以一顆寬容之心來對(duì)待廉頗,他創(chuàng)造出了流芳百世的“將相和”。包容可以使我們變得更加受人愛戴。但是還是存在很多人并不理解包容的奧妙,總是因?yàn)橐恍┬∈露锝锝镉?jì)較。曹丕因?yàn)椴荒苋萑痰艿艿牟湃A,而最終留下了“煮豆燃豆萁”的千古罵名。當(dāng)以上事實(shí)擺在眼前,你難道還會(huì)不愿意去選包容嗎?
例八:勤能補(bǔ)拙(觀點(diǎn))
就拿我國明代的張溥來說,他小時(shí)候很“笨”,別人讀一會(huì)兒就能背下來的東西,他往往要讀幾十遍才能背下來。但是,他并沒有灰心,每拿到一篇文章,先認(rèn)真抄一遍,校正好,再大聲朗讀一遍,然后燒掉,接著再抄。這樣,一篇文章往往要抄六七遍。后來,他逐漸變得文思敏捷,出口成章。26歲寫下了名揚(yáng)天下的《五人墓碑記》。(正面論據(jù))
相反,仲永5歲就能賦詩,可謂天賦出眾。憑著聰明,他父親帶他四處作詩炫耀。仲永再也不思進(jìn)取,長大以后,他變得庸庸碌碌,“泯然眾人矣”!(反面論據(jù))
不難看出,張溥雖然很“笨”,但他肯勤學(xué)苦練,正是勤學(xué)苦練才使他的文思變得逐漸敏捷起來,26歲就寫下了名揚(yáng)天下的《五人墓碑記》;而仲永雖然天賦出眾,但他后來不思進(jìn)取,不能做到勤學(xué)苦練,因此,長大以后他變得庸庸碌碌,“泯然眾人矣”!由此可見,盡管先天智力因素的差異不可否認(rèn),但后天的勤奮則能彌補(bǔ)先天智力上的不足。(對(duì)比分析)
【自我檢測】運(yùn)用對(duì)比分析法緊扣論點(diǎn)對(duì)下列論據(jù)進(jìn)行分析
好集體不會(huì)埋沒人才(觀點(diǎn))
孫臏與龐涓同出于鬼谷子門下。他們二人精于謀略,都是不可多得的人才。但是當(dāng)孫臏來到龐涓任職的魏國時(shí),龐涓嫉妒他的才能,表面恭敬,內(nèi)心狠毒,多次向魏王進(jìn)讒言,以致使孫臏被挖去膝蓋骨,不得施展其才能。(反面論據(jù))而齊王聽說孫臏之才,不惜費(fèi)盡心
力,將孫臏請(qǐng)到齊國,委以重任。齊軍才有了馬陵道之勝。(正面論據(jù))
同是孫臏,為何落得兩種境遇呢?就是因?yàn)樗谟趦?yōu)劣不同的兩個(gè)統(tǒng)治集團(tuán)。在魏國,龐涓只為私利,妒賢嫉能,魏王昏庸,偏聽偏信,而且缺乏識(shí)別千里馬的伯樂眼光。孫臏在這樣一個(gè)集體中,如何施展大志呢?而齊王任賢用能,身邊的臣子也不像龐涓那樣謀私,因而上下齊心,孫臏在此,正得以充分發(fā)揮作用。可見,好集體不會(huì)埋沒人才。(對(duì)比分析)
【自查反饋】下面這段說理綜合使用了哪些方法?
不要輕易說“不”,還因?yàn)樗枰覀兏冻龃鷥r(jià),有時(shí)候,甚至是血的代價(jià),生命的代價(jià)。敗兵垓下的項(xiàng)羽對(duì)烏江亭長說“不”,放棄東山再起的機(jī)會(huì),自刎烏江,從此霸王別姬成為一曲絕唱,而韓信,不對(duì)漂母說“不”,不拒絕她的幫助,忍辱負(fù)重,終成一代名將。究其原因項(xiàng)羽太在乎他的英雄氣概,殊不知大丈夫能屈能伸,像韓信。假如項(xiàng)羽不輕易說“不”,那歷史恐怕就要改寫,項(xiàng)羽或許就不僅僅是一個(gè)悲劇英雄了?!恫灰p易說“不”》
6.小結(jié):議論文常見的的四種分析方法是假設(shè)分析法、探因分析法、歸納分析法、對(duì)比分析法。同一論據(jù),可以采用多種分析的方法,到底用哪一種,要視具體情況而定。
【課外鞏固】
選用下面的一則或三則論據(jù)續(xù)寫一段分析。要求:
1、緊扣論點(diǎn)。
2、選擇運(yùn)用議論文常見的四種分析法中的一種或綜合運(yùn)用四種方法
換一種角度思考,將有另一種收獲(論點(diǎn))
在十九世紀(jì)三十年代的歐洲大陸,一種方便、價(jià)廉的圓珠筆開始在書記員,銀行職員甚至是富商中流行起來。不久人們卻發(fā)現(xiàn)圓珠筆前端的鋼珠在長時(shí)間的書寫后,因摩擦而變小繼而脫落導(dǎo)致筆筒內(nèi)的油泄露出來,弄得滿紙油漬,給書寫工作帶來了極大的不便。這時(shí)一個(gè)叫馬塞爾?比希的人想到:既然不能將圓珠筆的壽命很好的延長,那為什么不主動(dòng)的控制圓珠筆的壽命呢?于是,他在實(shí)驗(yàn)中找到一顆“鋼珠”所能完成書寫的“最大用油量”。然后每支筆所裝的“油”都不超過這個(gè)“最大用油量”。這樣,方便、價(jià)廉又“衛(wèi)生”的圓珠筆又成了人們最喜愛的書寫工具之一。(論據(jù)1)
海爾公司曾低價(jià)出售一批洗衣機(jī)給某貧困地區(qū),后來該地區(qū)農(nóng)民反映洗衣機(jī)存在質(zhì)量問題,用了沒幾年便壞了,一時(shí)海爾的聲譽(yù)大跌。海爾公司派專家去調(diào)查此事,結(jié)果專家們發(fā)現(xiàn)當(dāng)?shù)剞r(nóng)民用洗衣機(jī)去洗土豆,導(dǎo)致排水管堵塞不能再用,調(diào)查結(jié)果傳回了公司,這本是一件令人捧腹的笑事,而海爾公司卻認(rèn)真對(duì)待此事,最后竟研制出一種既能洗衣服又能洗土豆的新型洗衣機(jī),并迅速占領(lǐng)了當(dāng)?shù)厥袌觥#ㄕ摀?jù)2)
洛克菲勒在一家石油公司里謀到一份工作,任務(wù)是檢查石油罐改是否焊接好。他仔細(xì)觀察焊接的全過程,發(fā)現(xiàn)按照常規(guī),焊接好一個(gè)石油罐蓋,共用39滴焊接劑。為什么一定要用39滴呢?少用一滴行不行?他認(rèn)真測算試驗(yàn),結(jié)果發(fā)現(xiàn),焊接好一個(gè)石油罐蓋,只需38滴焊接劑就足夠了。使用這種新型焊接機(jī),每焊接一個(gè)罐蓋可節(jié)省一滴焊接劑。積少成多,一年下來,他竟為公司節(jié)省開支5萬美元。許多年后,他成為世界石油大王。(論據(jù)3)(分析)
海爾公司面對(duì)突如其來的困難,以一種新的角度來審視自己的產(chǎn)品,最后不但挽回了公司的名聲,而且還給公司帶來了巨大的利潤.以另類的眼光看困難,困難反而成了海爾進(jìn)一步騰飛的契機(jī).