第一篇:大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四六級(jí)作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)及常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤
大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四六級(jí)作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)
(注:雖然現(xiàn)在作文不是15分滿(mǎn)分,但作文分值仍然占整卷的15%)
2分……條理不清,思路紊亂,語(yǔ)言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯(cuò)誤,且多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。
5分……基本切題。表達(dá)思想不清楚,連貫性差。有較多的嚴(yán)重語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。
8分……基本切題。有些地方表達(dá)思想不夠清楚,文字勉強(qiáng)連貫;語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤相當(dāng)多,其中有一些是嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。
11分……切題。表達(dá)思想清楚,文字連貫,但有少量語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。14分……切題。表達(dá)思想清楚,文字通順,連貫性好?;旧蠠o(wú)語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤,僅有個(gè)別小錯(cuò)。(注: 白卷, 作文與題目毫不相關(guān), 或只有幾個(gè)孤立的詞而無(wú)法表達(dá)思想,則給0分。)常見(jiàn)寫(xiě)作錯(cuò)誤,檢查作文的時(shí)候要注意哦:
一、主語(yǔ)錯(cuò)誤 1.主語(yǔ)缺失
1)In our country feels very free.People feel free in our country.2)In my hometown aren’t very busy.People in my hometown are very busy.2.非名詞主語(yǔ)
1)Rich doesn’t ensure a happy life.Being rich doesn’t mean a happy life./ Wealth doesn’t ensure a happy life.2)Keep two full-time jobs is simply impossible.Keeping two full-time jobs is simply impossible.3.主謂錯(cuò)位
1)Reading books can acquire knowledge.People can acquire knowledge from books.2)Now people’s lives can’t leave TV.Now people can’t do without TV.二、謂語(yǔ)錯(cuò)誤 1.多重謂語(yǔ) 1)In our modern society, there are many examples around us show that many people are cheated.In our modern society, many examples around us show that many people are cheated./ A large number of people have fallen victim to various tricks.2)Poverty makes many people can’t study abroad.Poverty makes many people unable to study abroad./ Poverty makes it impossible for many people to study abroad./ Poverty prevents many people from studying abroad./ Many people can’t study abroad because of poverty.2.非動(dòng)詞謂語(yǔ)
1)Some people firmly agree, but others against it.Some people firmly agree, but others are against it.2)It is said that the place worths touring.It is said that the place is worth touring.3.主謂不一致
1)I have to visit the teacher who teach me College English.I have to visit the teacher who teaches me College English.2)I use a disk because it hold plenty of data.I use a disk because it holds plenty of data..4.誤用詞組
1)They insist on post-graduate study is very important for them.They insist that post-graduate study is very important for them.2)I am afraid of that it’s going to rain.I am afraid that it’s going to rain.三、冠詞錯(cuò)誤
1)In my opinion, the future of bicycle is very promising.In my opinion, the future of the bicycle is very promising.2)They suggest that we should choose only the good books to read and never touch the bad ones.They suggest that we should choose only good books to read and never touch bad ones.四、代詞錯(cuò)誤 1.偷梁換柱
1)An important thing for the student to remember is that when writing a paper, you should not plagiarize.An important thing for the student to remember is that when writing a paper, he should not plagiarize.2)If we cheat others, friends will never believe you and they will leave you alone.If we cheat others, friends will never believe us and they will leave us along./ If you cheat others, friends will never believe you and they will leave you alone.2.指代不明
1)He gave a reason for not attending the meeting, which nobody believed.He gave a reason, which nobody believed, for not attending the meeting./ He gave a reason for not attending the meeting, a reason which nobody believed.2)Sometimes teachers have to inform the students of the heavy burden they have to bear.Sometimes teachers have to inform the students of the heavy burden students have to bear.五、形容詞、副詞錯(cuò)誤
1)What is more, the change of the weather will make the place look differently.What is more, the change of the weather will make the place look different.2)Surprising enough, he faces the failure very bravely.Surprisingly enough, he faces the failure very bravely.六、分詞誤用
1)Comparing with other countries, China pays little attention to the energy problem.Compared with other countries, China pays little attention to the energy problem.2)Those spirits were just like an indispensable part of the whole picture when viewing through my camera.Those spirits were just like an indispensable part of the whole picture when viewed through my camera.七、修飾語(yǔ)誤置
1)Spoken English is an important part for learning English people.Spoken English is an important part for people learning English.2)To keep the air clean, we must move the factories which give off poisonous gases to the countryside.To keep the air clean, we must move to the countryside the factories which give off poisonous gases to the countryside.八、垂懸修飾語(yǔ)
1)Having carried out economic reforms in our country, people’s living standard has been greatly improved.Having carried out economic reforms in our country, people have greatly improved their living standard.2)To tell my friend the good news, the letter was posted at once.To tell my friend the good news, I posted the letter at once.九、平行錯(cuò)誤
1)While we reduce the number of vehicles, the speed of traffic can be increased.While we reduce the number of vehicles, we can increase the speed of traffic.2)Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me of the difficulty of the course and how long it lasted.Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me of the difficulty and length of the course./ Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me how difficult the course was and how long it lasted.十、搭配錯(cuò)誤
1)In the past the price of meat was so expensive that most families could not afford it.In the past the price of meat was so high that most families could not afford it.2)Crowded traffic in some large cities is a big problem for city dwellers.Heavy traffic in some large cities is a big problem for city dwellers.十一、破句
1)Nowadays, if you want to find a job.Then you must pass the job interview.Nowadays, if you want to find a job, you must pass the job interview.2)First you should show good manners.Because the first impression you leave on others is important.First you should show good manners, because the first impression you leave on others is important.
第二篇:英語(yǔ)四六級(jí)作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)及錯(cuò)誤總結(jié)
評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)
2分……條理不清,思路紊亂,語(yǔ)言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯(cuò)誤,且多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。
5分……基本切題。表達(dá)思想不清楚,連貫性差。有較多的嚴(yán)重語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。
8分……基本切題。有些地方表達(dá)思想不夠清楚,文字勉強(qiáng)連貫;語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤相當(dāng)多,其中有一些是嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。
11分……切題。表達(dá)思想清楚,文字連貫,但有少量語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。
14分……切題。表達(dá)思想清楚,文字通順,連貫性好?;旧蠠o(wú)語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤,僅有個(gè)別小錯(cuò)。(注: 白卷, 作文與題目毫不相關(guān), 或只有幾個(gè)孤立的詞而無(wú)法表達(dá)思想,則給0分。)
寫(xiě)作中要注意的問(wèn)題
1、最后十天應(yīng)該怎樣復(fù)習(xí)?
2、四級(jí)話(huà)題、六級(jí)話(huà)題:
把過(guò)去兩到三年的題再寫(xiě)寫(xiě),最好準(zhǔn)備出一套文章,對(duì)于任何題目都適用。四級(jí)偏向日常生活中的話(huà)題,六級(jí)關(guān)于環(huán)境或社會(huì)發(fā)展的方面??荚囋谟谡Z(yǔ)言,而不在于思維。
考場(chǎng)時(shí)間把握
1、前三分鐘不要?jiǎng)庸P,先想想這個(gè)題目可以有哪些句式套用,然后想想有哪些詞可以替換,變?cè)~越多,考官印象越好(eg.teacher->lecture->professor)
2、不建議用30分鐘寫(xiě),利用20-25分鐘即可
3、提前完成后做檢查并準(zhǔn)備快速閱讀
六級(jí)是否會(huì)出圖表作文
四六級(jí)均有可能,每年的6月份出圖表題的可能性大。
1、應(yīng)用文:
2、圖表:如果圖簡(jiǎn)單,數(shù)字越少越好。第一段描述(最大)變化在哪里,第二段講述變化后的原因是什么,第三段照提綱寫(xiě)或推測(cè)未來(lái)。若有提綱,以提綱為中心句。若沒(méi)有模板,先想三句開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾,考試時(shí)候用上去,50-70字就不用寫(xiě)了。四六級(jí)作文思路越簡(jiǎn)單越好
五大錯(cuò)誤不能犯
1、主謂一致
2、時(shí)態(tài)
3、單復(fù)數(shù)
4、簡(jiǎn)單詞的拼寫(xiě)
5、搭配 不是用句美才能及格,是不犯錯(cuò)誤。四六級(jí)是淘劣不選優(yōu)的考試。
三個(gè)應(yīng)該注意的問(wèn)題
(一)卷面整潔,書(shū)寫(xiě)清楚
1、齊頭式卷面:段與段之間空一行,全部向左邊靠。
2、寫(xiě)錯(cuò)的地方可以用透明膠帶粘干凈。
3、用黑筆做。
(二)構(gòu)思簡(jiǎn)單,少犯錯(cuò)誤 容易犯的兩個(gè)錯(cuò)誤:
1、名詞:?jiǎn)螖?shù)可數(shù)名詞前加a/an,復(fù)數(shù)加s。不知道的解決方法:所有名詞前面都加the。
2、主謂語(yǔ)錯(cuò)誤:從句出現(xiàn)多個(gè)謂語(yǔ)。注意主謂搭配得當(dāng)
(三)中心明確,層次分明
每段第一句都是中心句,從提綱變過(guò)來(lái)。下面加邏輯詞一、二、三。eg.除夕的春節(jié)聯(lián)歡晚會(huì)
如何拿高分?
變化式拿高分,而不是用詞用句難。eg.學(xué)生->年輕人->學(xué)習(xí)者
開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾各自背5-7句,用自己熟悉的語(yǔ)言。eg.名言:生存或者死亡,這是一個(gè)問(wèn)題。寧可錯(cuò)殺一千,不可錯(cuò)過(guò)一個(gè)!
寧可錯(cuò)殺一千個(gè)美麗的句子,也不要用一個(gè)錯(cuò)的句子。先證明是正確的,再去用。
常見(jiàn)寫(xiě)作錯(cuò)誤
一、主語(yǔ)錯(cuò)誤
1.主語(yǔ)缺失
1)In our country feels very free.People feel free in our country.2)In my hometown aren’t very busy.People in my hometown are very busy.2.非名詞主語(yǔ)
1)Rich doesn’t ensure a happy life.Being rich doesn’t mean a happy life./ Wealth doesn’t ensure a happy life.2)Keep two full-time jobs is simply impossible.Keeping two full-time jobs is simply impossible.3.主謂錯(cuò)位
1)Reading books can acquire knowledge.People can acquire knowledge from books.2)Now people’s lives can’t leave TV.Now people can’t do without TV.二、謂語(yǔ)錯(cuò)誤
1.多重謂語(yǔ)
1)In our modern society, there are many examples around us show that many people are cheated.In our modern society, many examples around us show that many people are cheated./ A large number of people have fallen victim to various tricks.2)Poverty makes many people can’t study abroad.Poverty makes many people unable to study abroad./ Poverty makes it impossible for many people to study abroad./ Poverty prevents many people from studying abroad./ Many people can’t study abroad because of poverty.2.非動(dòng)詞謂語(yǔ)
1)Some people firmly agree, but others against it.Some people firmly agree, but others are against it.2)It is said that the place worths touring.It is said that the place is worth touring.3.主謂不一致
1)I have to visit the teacher who teach me College English.I have to visit the teacher who teaches me College English.2)I use a disk because it hold plenty of data.I use a disk because it holds plenty of data..4.誤用詞組
1)They insist on post-graduate study is very important for them.They insist that post-graduate study is very important for them.2)I am afraid of that it’s going to rain.I am afraid that it’s going to rain.三、冠詞錯(cuò)誤
1)In my opinion, the future of bicycle is very promising.In my opinion, the future of the bicycle is very promising.2)They suggest that we should choose only the good books to read and never touch the bad ones.They suggest that we should choose only good books to read and never touch bad ones.四、代詞錯(cuò)誤
1.偷梁換柱
1)An important thing for the student to remember is that when writing a paper, you should not plagiarize.An important thing for the student to remember is that when writing a paper, he should not plagiarize.2)If we cheat others, friends will never believe you and they will leave you alone.If we cheat others, friends will never believe us and they will leave us along./ If you cheat others, friends will never believe you and they will leave you alone.2.指代不明
1)He gave a reason for not attending the meeting, which nobody believed.He gave a reason, which nobody believed, for not attending the meeting./ He gave a reason for not attending the meeting, a reason which nobody believed.2)Sometimes teachers have to inform the students of the heavy burden they have to bear.Sometimes teachers have to inform the students of the heavy burden students have to bear.五、形容詞、副詞錯(cuò)誤
1)What is more, the change of the weather will make the place look differently.What is more, the change of the weather will make the place look different.2)Surprising enough, he faces the failure very bravely.Surprisingly enough, he faces the failure very bravely.六、分詞誤用
1)Comparing with other countries, China pays little attention to the energy problem.Compared with other countries, China pays little attention to the energy problem.2)Those spirits were just like an indispensable part of the whole picture when viewing through my camera.Those spirits were just like an indispensable part of the whole picture when viewed through my camera.七、修飾語(yǔ)誤置
1)Spoken English is an important part for learning English people.Spoken English is an important part for people learning English.2)To keep the air clean, we must move the factories which give off poisonous gases to the countryside.To keep the air clean, we must move to the countryside the factories which give off poisonous gases to the countryside.八、垂懸修飾語(yǔ)
1)Having carried out economic reforms in our country, people’s living standard has been greatly improved.Having carried out economic reforms in our country, people have greatly improved their living standard.2)To tell my friend the good news, the letter was posted at once.To tell my friend the good news, I posted the letter at once.九、平行錯(cuò)誤
1)While we reduce the number of vehicles, the speed of traffic can be increased.While we reduce the number of vehicles, we can increase the speed of traffic.2)Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me of the difficulty of the course and how long it lasted.Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me of the difficulty and length of the course./ Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me how difficult the course was and how long it lasted.十、搭配錯(cuò)誤
1)In the past the price of meat was so expensive that most families could not afford it.In the past the price of meat was so high that most families could not afford it.2)Crowded traffic in some large cities is a big problem for city dwellers.Heavy traffic in some large cities is a big problem for city dwellers.十一、破句
1)Nowadays, if you want to find a job.Then you must pass the job interview.Nowadays, if you want to find a job, you must pass the job interview.2)First you should show good manners.Because the first impression you leave on others is important.
第三篇:大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四六級(jí)考試評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)
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第四篇:大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四六級(jí)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)及分?jǐn)?shù)換算表
大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四六級(jí)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)及分?jǐn)?shù)換算表
評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn):
大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四、六級(jí)考試的原始分?jǐn)?shù)在經(jīng)過(guò)加權(quán)、等值處理后,參照常模轉(zhuǎn)換為均值為500、標(biāo)準(zhǔn)差為70的常模正態(tài)分?jǐn)?shù)。同時(shí),四、六級(jí)考試不設(shè)及格線(xiàn),考試合格證書(shū)改為成績(jī)報(bào)告單。
四、六級(jí)考試單項(xiàng)分的報(bào)道分為四個(gè)部分,這四個(gè)部分以及各部分所占的分值比例分別為:聽(tīng)力(20%)、閱讀(40%)、綜合(25%)、作文(15%)。各單項(xiàng)報(bào)道分的滿(mǎn)分分別為:聽(tīng)力142分;閱讀284分;綜合178分;作文106分。各單項(xiàng)報(bào)道分相加之和等于報(bào)道總分。
四、六級(jí)的單項(xiàng)報(bào)道分也是常模正態(tài)分?jǐn)?shù),但參照的常模是相應(yīng)的單項(xiàng)常模。因此,單項(xiàng)報(bào)道分能夠報(bào)道考生在各單項(xiàng)常模群體中所處的百分位置。舉例如下: 大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)考試得分換算表
一、寫(xiě)作的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)
說(shuō)明:寫(xiě)作部分占整套試卷的15%
二、聽(tīng)力部分的評(píng)分換算法
說(shuō)明:
1)聽(tīng)力部分占整套試題的35%,最高分71分,最低分29分。
2)其中短對(duì)話(huà)~短文聽(tīng)力,每題算一題,共計(jì)25個(gè)題;
三、閱讀部分的評(píng)分換算法
說(shuō)明:
1)閱讀部分占整套試題的35%,最高分71分,最低分29分。
2)其中快速閱讀,每題算一題,共10個(gè);
15選10,每?jī)蓚€(gè)空算一個(gè)題,共5個(gè);
篇章精讀,每題算兩個(gè)題,共20個(gè)。
四、綜合測(cè)試部分的評(píng)分換算法
說(shuō)明:
1)綜合能力測(cè)試占整套試題的15% 2)其中完形填空每?jī)蓚€(gè)題算一個(gè)題,共計(jì)10個(gè)題 翻譯每個(gè)算一個(gè)題,共計(jì)5個(gè)題。
第五篇:大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四六級(jí)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)及分?jǐn)?shù)分布
四級(jí)分值分布
一、聽(tīng)力理解(35%,共249分);
二、閱讀理解(35%,共249分);
三、綜合測(cè)試(15%,共106分);
四、寫(xiě)作(15%,共106分);
其中,聽(tīng)力理解分為四小題,一、短對(duì)話(huà);
二、長(zhǎng)對(duì)話(huà);(都是選擇題)(共10%),三、短文理解:選擇題
四、復(fù)合聽(tīng)寫(xiě)(共20%)
閱讀理解分為三小部分,一、快速閱讀(10%)(是非+句子填空或其他),二、仔細(xì)閱讀,(25%)包括“篇章閱讀理解”:選擇題,“詞匯理解”:選詞填空
三、綜合測(cè)試包括:
(一)、完型填空或改錯(cuò):選擇題或改錯(cuò)(5%);篇章回答或句子翻譯:簡(jiǎn)短回答或中譯英(10%)官方正確分值:
作文:15%,合106.5分;
快速閱讀:10%合71分,每個(gè)7.1分;
聽(tīng)力客觀(guān)題(單選):25%合177.5分每個(gè)7.1分; 聽(tīng)力主觀(guān)題(復(fù)合式聽(tīng)寫(xiě)):10%合71分,前八個(gè)每個(gè)3.55分共28.4分,后三個(gè)每個(gè)14.2分,共42.6分;
篇章詞匯理解(選詞填空);10%合71分,每個(gè)7.1分; 仔細(xì)閱讀理解:15%合106.5分,共10個(gè)每個(gè)10.65分。完形填空或改錯(cuò):10%合71分,共20個(gè)每個(gè)3.55分。
句子翻譯或篇章問(wèn)答:5%合35.5分,共5個(gè),每個(gè)7.1分。加起來(lái)總計(jì):100%合710分。
注:完形填空或改錯(cuò)、句子翻譯或篇章問(wèn)答,每年從中各隨機(jī)抽選一種題型,請(qǐng)大家做好應(yīng)變準(zhǔn)備。四、六級(jí)考試作文是怎么評(píng)分的:
一、評(píng)分強(qiáng)調(diào)一致性 大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四、六級(jí)考試的作文部分不是自由作文,而是有規(guī)定命題的作文。對(duì)考生寫(xiě)什么內(nèi)容有比較明確的要求,用各種明確的方式如提綱、圖表、關(guān)鍵詞等加以限制,但提綱常用中文給出,以避免考生將提綱中的文字直接抄錄進(jìn)作文。采用有控制的作文也有利于提高評(píng)分的一致性。
對(duì)作文評(píng)分影響最大的是評(píng)分過(guò)程。同一篇作文,不同的閱卷員可能給出不同的分?jǐn)?shù)。只有保證評(píng)分的一致性,才能提高作文閱卷的信度。這個(gè)一致性包括閱卷員本人的一致性、閱卷員之間的一致性和閱卷點(diǎn)之間的一致性,要采取一定的質(zhì)量控制措施,盡量減少和濾除閱卷員評(píng)分的主觀(guān)性對(duì)分?jǐn)?shù)客觀(guān)性的影響。
二、作文題的評(píng)分通常有兩種方法
一種是綜合法,一種是分析法。分析法是把一篇作文分解為若干要點(diǎn),如內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)、文章連貫性、語(yǔ)法、詞匯等,不同的要點(diǎn)也可作不同的加權(quán)處理,各要點(diǎn)得分的總和即為全篇得分。綜合法是憑閱卷員通讀一遍的總體印象打分。綜合法的優(yōu)點(diǎn)是能從總體上把握全文,評(píng)卷速度比較快,效率高。
此外,為了提高閱卷的信度也有采用“兩讀”的方法,即每篇作文由兩名閱卷員各自獨(dú)立評(píng)分,若分?jǐn)?shù)差兩檔以上,由第三名閱卷員重判。考慮到大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四、六級(jí)考試規(guī)模太大,不可能進(jìn)行兩讀,因此,通常采用綜合法和“一讀”的評(píng)分方法,然后根據(jù)考生的客觀(guān)題得分進(jìn)行調(diào)整,盡量減少系統(tǒng)誤差。
《大學(xué)英語(yǔ)課程教學(xué)要求》中對(duì)于書(shū)面表達(dá)能力的一般要求為: 能用常見(jiàn)的應(yīng)用文體完成一般的寫(xiě)作任務(wù),能描述個(gè)人經(jīng)歷、事件、觀(guān)感、情感等,能就一般性話(huà)題或提綱在半小時(shí)內(nèi)寫(xiě)出120詞的短文,內(nèi)容基本完整、用詞恰當(dāng),語(yǔ)篇連貫。能在一般或應(yīng)用寫(xiě)作中使用恰當(dāng)?shù)膶?xiě)作技能。
改革后的大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)考試寫(xiě)作能力測(cè)試部分比例占總分的15%,體裁包括議論文、說(shuō)明文、應(yīng)用文等。
寫(xiě)作方法: 1.審題
把握題目的中心和范圍,確定文章的體裁和主題。
明確體裁(記敘文;說(shuō)明文——常用語(yǔ)說(shuō)明事實(shí)、情況和傳達(dá)信息,寫(xiě)作目的重在解釋、說(shuō)明;議論文——用以陳述各種理由,說(shuō)明文著重客觀(guān)陳述、解釋?zhuān)h論文著重發(fā)表自己的看法、勸說(shuō),論點(diǎn)明確,論據(jù)充分、有力,論證嚴(yán)密)
根據(jù)不同的體裁確定寫(xiě)作方法 2.確定主題句
3.三段十二句作文法
每段寫(xiě)四句話(huà),即主題句加兩三句擴(kuò)展句和一個(gè)結(jié)論句,全篇在十二句左右。每一句十多個(gè)字,這樣就是四級(jí)作文要求的120-150字。要滿(mǎn)足規(guī)定的字?jǐn)?shù)要求,又要注意不能寫(xiě)得太多,言多必失。同時(shí)要注意層次來(lái)展開(kāi)主題,不要寫(xiě)成流水賬。
4.修改完善
語(yǔ)篇水平上的檢查——全局檢查(文章的主題是否明確;觀(guān)點(diǎn)是否可靠;內(nèi)容是否切題;立論是否恰當(dāng);論證是否有力;推理是否合乎邏輯;文體風(fēng)格是否合適;結(jié)論是否與主題一致)
段落水平上的檢查——局部檢查(段落是否完整;段落的擴(kuò)展是否充分;細(xì)節(jié)安排是否合理;段內(nèi)各句的銜接是否緊湊;語(yǔ)義是否連貫)
句子水平上的檢查——語(yǔ)言檢查(行文是否簡(jiǎn)潔;用詞是否準(zhǔn)確;句子結(jié)構(gòu)是否完整;語(yǔ)句是否通順;有無(wú)重大語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤)
最后檢查標(biāo)點(diǎn),大小寫(xiě)是否符合寫(xiě)作規(guī)范。從以下幾個(gè)方面修改:
大小寫(xiě)及單詞的拼寫(xiě)是否正確;
動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、人稱(chēng)是否正確,主謂關(guān)系是否一致; 詞性是否正確;
名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)、代詞及指代關(guān)系是否一致; 句子是否完整; 標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是否正確。