第一篇：大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)考試作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)考試作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

一、評(píng)分原則

1． CET檢查考生是否達(dá)到大學(xué)英語(yǔ)教學(xué)大綱規(guī)定的四級(jí)和六級(jí)教學(xué)要求，對(duì)作文的評(píng)判應(yīng)以此要求為準(zhǔn)則。2．CET作文題采用總體評(píng)分(Global Scoring)方法。閱卷人員就總的印象給出獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)分(Award Scores)，而不是按語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)的錯(cuò)誤數(shù)目扣分。

3．從內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言?xún)蓚€(gè)方面對(duì)作文進(jìn)行綜合評(píng)判。內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言是一個(gè)統(tǒng)一體。作文應(yīng)表達(dá)題目所規(guī)定的內(nèi)容，而內(nèi)容要通過(guò)語(yǔ)言來(lái)表達(dá)。要考慮作文是否切題，是否充分表達(dá)思想，也要考慮是否用英語(yǔ)清楚而合適地表達(dá)思想，也就是要考慮語(yǔ)言上的錯(cuò)誤是否造成理解上的障礙。

4．避免趨中傾向。該給高分的給高分，包括滿(mǎn)分；該給低分給低分，包括零分。一名閱卷人員在所評(píng)閱的全部作文卷中不應(yīng)只給中間的幾種分?jǐn)?shù)。

5．所發(fā)樣卷一律不得翻印，嚴(yán)禁出版，一經(jīng)發(fā)現(xiàn)，必予追究。

二、評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 1．本題滿(mǎn)分為15分

2．閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)共分五等：2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。各有標(biāo)準(zhǔn)樣卷一份。

3．閱卷人員根據(jù)閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，對(duì)照樣卷評(píng)分，若認(rèn)為與某一分?jǐn)?shù)(如 8分)相似，即定為 該分?jǐn)?shù)(即8分)；若認(rèn)為稍?xún)?yōu)或稍劣于該分?jǐn)?shù)則可加一分(即9分)或減一分(即7分)。但不得加或減半分。

4．評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

2分 — 條理不清，思路紊亂，語(yǔ)言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯(cuò)誤，且多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。

5分 — 基本切題。表達(dá)思想不清楚，連貫性差。有較多的嚴(yán)重語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。

8分 — 基本切題。有些地方表達(dá)思想不夠清楚，文字勉強(qiáng)連貫；語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤相當(dāng)多，其中有一些是嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。11分— 切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。

14分— 切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字通順，連貫性較好，基本上無(wú)語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，僅有個(gè)別小錯(cuò)。

[注：白卷，作文與題目毫不相關(guān)，或只有幾個(gè)孤立的詞而無(wú)法表達(dá)思想，則給0分。] 5．字?jǐn)?shù)不足應(yīng)酌情扣分：

累計(jì)字?jǐn)?shù) CET-4 110-119 100-109 90-99 80-89 70-79 60-69 50-59 <49 CET-6 140-149 130-139 120-129 110-119 100-109 90-99 80-89 <79 扣 分 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 9 [注：1．如題目中給出主題句、起始句、結(jié)束句，均不得計(jì)入所寫(xiě)字?jǐn)?shù)。

2．規(guī)定的內(nèi)容未寫(xiě)全者，按比例扣分。3．如果扣為0分，要慎重處理。]

第二篇：大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)作文評(píng)分原則及標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

一、評(píng)分原則

1.CET是檢查考生是否達(dá)到大學(xué)英語(yǔ)教學(xué)大綱規(guī)定的四級(jí)和六級(jí)教學(xué)要求，對(duì)作文的評(píng)判應(yīng)以此為準(zhǔn)則。

2.CET作文題采用總體評(píng)分(Global Scoring)方法。閱卷人員就總的印象給出獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)分(Reward Scores)，而不是按語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)的錯(cuò)誤數(shù)目扣分。

3.從內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言?xún)蓚€(gè)方面對(duì)作文進(jìn)行綜合評(píng)判。內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言是一個(gè)統(tǒng)一體。作文應(yīng)表達(dá)題目所規(guī)定的內(nèi)容，而內(nèi)容要通過(guò)語(yǔ)言來(lái)表達(dá)。要考慮作文是否切題，是否充分表達(dá)思想，也要考慮是否用英語(yǔ)清楚而和合適地表達(dá)思想，也就是要考慮語(yǔ)言上的錯(cuò)誤是否造成理解上的障礙。

4.避免趨中傾向。該給高分給高分，包括滿(mǎn)分;該給低分給低分，包括零分。一名閱卷人員在所評(píng)閱的全部作文卷中不應(yīng)只給中間的幾種分?jǐn)?shù)。

5.所發(fā)樣卷一律不得翻印，嚴(yán)禁出版，一經(jīng)發(fā)現(xiàn)，必予追究。

二、評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

1.本題滿(mǎn)分為15分

2.閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)共分五等：2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。各有標(biāo)準(zhǔn)樣卷一至二份。

3.閱卷人員根據(jù)閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，對(duì)照樣卷評(píng)分，若認(rèn)為所閱文章與某一分?jǐn)?shù)(如8分)相似，即定為該分?jǐn)?shù)(即8分);若認(rèn)為所閱文章稍?xún)?yōu)或稍劣于該分?jǐn)?shù)則可加一分(即9分)或減一分(即7分)。但不得加或減半分。

4.評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

5.2分——條理不清，思路紊亂，語(yǔ)言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯(cuò)誤，且多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。

5分——基本切題。表達(dá)思想不清楚，連貫性差。有較多的嚴(yán)重語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。

8分——基本切題。有些地方表達(dá)思想不夠清楚，文字勉強(qiáng)連貫;語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤相當(dāng)多，其中有一些是嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。

11分——切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。

14分——切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字通順、連貫，基本上無(wú)語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，僅有個(gè)別小錯(cuò)。

[注：白卷，作文與題目毫不相關(guān)，或只有幾個(gè)孤立的詞而無(wú)法表達(dá)思想，則給0分。]

5.字?jǐn)?shù)不足應(yīng)酌情扣分：

字?jǐn)?shù)與分?jǐn)?shù)扣分比例

[注：1.如題目中給出主題句，起始句，結(jié)束句，均不得計(jì)入所寫(xiě)字?jǐn)?shù)。

2.規(guī)定的內(nèi)容未寫(xiě)全者，按比例扣分。

3.如要判為0分，需慎重處理。

6.為了便于閱卷人員掌握評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，現(xiàn)將各檔作文分相當(dāng)于百分制的得分，列表如下，稱(chēng)為得分率。其中9分的得分率為60分(相當(dāng)于百分制的60分)。

作文分 15 14 13 12 11 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1

得分率 100 94 87 80 74 67 60 54 47 40 34 27 20 14 7

These days many parents tend to make all decisions for their children for fear that they might do something wrong.The parents’ purpose is quite clear: to protect their kids from possible failures.But this practice turns out to make their children increasingly dependent on them。

For their children’s future development, parents should help them to be independent.The earlier they take measures to do so, the more benefit their children will get.Parents should first teach their children how to make plan, an indispensable skill for their future survival.Parents should also give their children more freedom, a must to children’s independence.If the children only follow rules set by their parents, they will never gain the sense of independence.Most importantly, parents should be open to different ideas from their children.If children feel that their ideas are well listened to and respected, they will become more confident。

To sum up, parents should provide their children with plan-making skill, freedom and respect.In this way, children will grow more independent。

11分

Nowadays, many parents do everything for their children.They cook meals and wash clothes for their children.And they even make all the choices for their children.Everything has done by the parents and the children will do nothing but following the parents’ decisions。

In order to help children to be independent, parents should follow the suggestions given below.First, let children do some housework, such as washing dishes and cleaning rooms.These works will not take too much time, but they are suitable for children to learn to live independently.Second, give the chance to manage the family to children.As a family member, child should know how to manage the family.And the parents should teach them this kind of skills.In this way, children can learn the necessary abilities to live on their own.And most

important, give freedom to children and let them make their own choice.Only in this way can children grow up healthily。

8分

Nowdays, many parents do everything for their children.There are many reasons for parents to do that.The first one is that they love their children and want them live better.All these things makes the children don’t know how to live without parents.They don’t know how to be independent。

What the parents do have a really bad effect to their children.So they should try another way.They should teach their children how to do things instead of doing things for them.Then, they should let the children know that they would leave one day and children must live by themselves.So the children have to learn to live alone when it is not too late.Next, parents should put it into practice.They may creat more chance for children to live alone when children are young。

If parents do well in these ways, their children will surely know how to be independent。

5分

Recent years, a topic of how should parents help children to be independent, which has aroused widely public attention.As far as I am concerned that is right in a sense, which parents do every thing for their children.Because of the children is parents’s all things.However, I am favor of parents should help children to be independent as soon as possible。

How should parents help children to be independent.In my opinion, parents should believe their children first.Parents should be certain with their children can recognize the true or fault and right or wrong of something.Secondly, parents had best to let their children to relize the responsity of himself and the family.In addition, parents also need to connect with their children and know about what children is doing recently。

By doing so, children may make mistake even lost their way and so on.However, don’t worried, parents.Your children must be succeed from their experience。

2分

In the world, how many people is very happy? Because they are has parents, friends, teachers and so on.They are takes much love for them.So they are very happy。

In present, parents are doing much more anything for their childrens.Including anything in the home.For example, their clothes, their dinner, their friends and so on.In the school, their parents takes them for school by car, by bike and on foot.For their children safe.Today’s children don’t do anything except their parents。

For children alone in the world.For children doing anything alone in the world.Parents makes do exchange themselves。

Parents aren’t do anything for their children.They can do something by themselves.They can with their friends to go to school, to buy something in the story and so on parents should not upset.Allow their children doing themself.Parents should do anything for their childrens, but doesn’t do all the things for their childrens.

第三篇：2016改革大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)、六級(jí)考試評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

2016大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)、六級(jí)考試評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)考試得分換算表

一、寫(xiě)作的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

說(shuō)明：寫(xiě)作部分占整套試卷的15%

作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

~33~分： 條理不清，思路紊亂，語(yǔ)言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯(cuò)誤，且多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。

~39~分： 基本切題，表達(dá)思想不清楚連貫性差，有較多嚴(yán)重的語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。

~45~分： 基本切題，有些地方表達(dá)思想不清楚，文字勉強(qiáng)連貫；語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤相當(dāng)多，其中有一些事嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。

~57分~：切題，表達(dá)思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。~67分~：切題，表達(dá)思想清楚，文字通順，連貫性較好，基本上無(wú)語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，僅有個(gè)別小錯(cuò)

二、聽(tīng)力部分的評(píng)分換算法

說(shuō)明：1)聽(tīng)力部分占整套試題的35%，最高分71分，最低分29分。2)其中短對(duì)話~短文聽(tīng)力，每題算一題，共計(jì)25個(gè)題;短文聽(tīng)寫(xiě)（聽(tīng)寫(xiě)單詞、詞組）每題算一個(gè)題，共計(jì)10個(gè)題。

三、閱讀部分的評(píng)分換算法

說(shuō)明：1)閱讀部分占整套試題的35%，最高分71分，最低分29分。2)其中長(zhǎng)篇閱讀（匹配），每題算一題，共10個(gè);15選10，每?jī)蓚€(gè)空算一個(gè)題，共5個(gè);篇章精讀，每題算兩個(gè)題，共20個(gè).四、綜合測(cè)試（段落翻譯）部分的評(píng)分換算法

說(shuō)明：1)綜合能力測(cè)試（段落翻譯，漢譯英）占整套試題的15%。

翻譯評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

~33~分： 條理不清，思路紊亂，語(yǔ)言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯(cuò)誤，且多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。

~39~分： 基本切題，表達(dá)思想不清楚連貫性差，有較多嚴(yán)重的語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。

~45~分： 基本切題，有些地方表達(dá)思想不清楚，文字勉強(qiáng)連貫；語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤相當(dāng)多，其中有一些事嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。

~57分~：切題，表達(dá)思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。~67分~：切題，表達(dá)思想清楚，文字通順，連貫性較好，基本上無(wú)語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，僅有個(gè)別小錯(cuò)

第四篇：大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)寫(xiě)作評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)（范文模版）

大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)寫(xiě)作評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

考生在考試時(shí)應(yīng)該明確作文的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，根據(jù)大綱規(guī)定，作文的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)是：

1．正確表達(dá)思想；

2．意義連貫；

3．無(wú)重大語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。

這三者是互補(bǔ)的，但又各有側(cè)重。為評(píng)分的方便，國(guó)家考題組又將評(píng)分原則歸納為八個(gè)字，即“總體評(píng)分”和“綜合評(píng)判”，并作了相應(yīng)的解釋。前者指的是“閱卷人員就總的印象給出獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)分，而不是按語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)的錯(cuò)誤數(shù)目扣分”。后者指的是“要考慮作文是否切題，是否充分表達(dá)思想，也要考慮是否用英語(yǔ)清楚而確切地表達(dá)思想，也就是要考慮語(yǔ)言上的錯(cuò)誤是否造成理解上的障礙，用詞和造句是否清楚確切地表達(dá)思想”。根據(jù)這八個(gè)字，將閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)分為五等：2分，5分，8分，11分及14分，每一等都可上下浮動(dòng)一分，各等的具體標(biāo)準(zhǔn)如下：

2分--條理不清，思路紊亂，語(yǔ)言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯(cuò)誤，且多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。

5分--基本切題。表達(dá)思想不夠清楚，連貫性差。有較多的嚴(yán)重語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。8分--基本切題。表達(dá)思想比較清楚，文字尚連貫；但語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤較多，其中有少量的嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。

11分--切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。

14分--切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字通順，連貫性較好?；緹o(wú)語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。

除了以上五個(gè)主要標(biāo)準(zhǔn)之外，評(píng)分時(shí)還考慮以下三個(gè)因素：

l．白卷，作文與題目毫不相關(guān)，或只有幾個(gè)孤立的詞而無(wú)法表達(dá)思想，則給零分。

2.字?jǐn)?shù)不足者酌情扣分(81-89個(gè)詞扣1分，7l-80個(gè)詞扣2分，61-70個(gè)詞扣3分，51一60個(gè)詞扣4分，不足50個(gè)詞最多只給5分)。所計(jì)字?jǐn)?shù)不包括卷面上已給主題句。

3．只寫(xiě)一段者0-4分，只寫(xiě)兩段者0-9分。

第五篇：大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)考試作文

大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)考試作文（附范文）1．書(shū)信 例1：感謝信

（1）給小何寫(xiě)信感謝他接待你在云南旅游（2）回憶美好的旅行經(jīng)歷（3）邀請(qǐng)小何來(lái)你的家鄉(xiāng)做客 June 17th , 2006 Dear Xiao He, Thank you ever so much for having invited me for the tour of Yunnan, your home province.I had a fantastic time with you and your family.Your great hospitality will be unforgettable throughout my life.When I think of those gorgeous places of scenic beauty you showed me around, I couldn?t be more delighted.And the pineapple pie Grandma prepared for me is out of this world.I had never had so delicious food!Indeed, I am still missing your snug log-cabin, small and cozy, which was turned into my dream house in fairy land those nights.Would you come to Harbin, my home town, some time this summer vacation? Harbin, a beautiful place frequently referred to as Oriental Paris, offers a picture of another kind.I can assure you another pleasant tour.My family and I cannot wait to see you here.Yours，Li Ming 例2：投訴信

（1）陳述你對(duì)學(xué)校圖書(shū)館的不滿(mǎn)（2）列舉圖書(shū)館存在的問(wèn)題（3）希望能夠得到改進(jìn) September, 11 Dear President, I am a sophomore with the Department of Law.My name is Wang Ming.I am writing to you today to intimate you with something undesirable that I have found in the University Library.You may or may not realize how much our library, the landmark of our university or even of our town, weighs in our minds.It is a place we are most proud of and where we like to spend most of our time.In such an honorable place we have noticed recently some phenomena which hurt our eye.Some seats in the reading rooms are ?permanently reserved vacant seats?, that is, some students “occupy” some seats they never come to use.What a terrible waste of valuable resource!Some other students are too noisy, talking among themselves, leaving mobile phone beeping anytime.And some library staff is ill-mannered and rude and not helpful most of time.These and other undesirable things have already done damage to the fame of our university and caused a lot of inconvenience to the users.Dear President, we hope that something can be done to change and reverse the current situation.Let our cozy, comfortable, quiet, effective library come back.Best wishes

Yours sincerely，2．記敘文 例：A Welcome Back Celebration 1.楊玲生病，情緒低落.2.班上同學(xué)準(zhǔn)備cheer her up.3.舉辦一場(chǎng)歡迎party.Yang Ling is my fellow classmate and friend.Recently she had a terrible condition and has been hospitalized for over a month.She was depressed, sad and downhearted.She told us so many things are working against her, and she didn?t know how to change and redirect herself.The day before she was released from hospital, we, some of her friends decided to give a surprise to cheer her up the next day.That night, she came back, shoulders bent and head fallen.She was so deep in her bad mood that she didn?t realize that her dorm is the only one in the building that is dark.She turned the key in the lock and opened the door when the room was suddenly lit like a bright day.Her eyes sparkled with delight and surprise.She saw all her classmates crowded in this tiny room.Everyone was holding something in his hand, flowers, fruits, cards, cheering, “Welcome back!” She was so moved that she burst into tears.And smile returned to her pretty face.She said “Thank you all.” heartedly.Ever since that day, happiness and delight have stayed with her.Life is so wonderful.3．論說(shuō)文

例：Buying or Borrowing Books?（1）有些人認(rèn)為書(shū)應(yīng)該借來(lái)看（2）有些人認(rèn)為書(shū)應(yīng)該買(mǎi)來(lái)看（3）你的選擇？

Buying or Borrowing Books?

Books can arm us with knowledge and information we need to make success of life.There are generally two ways in which we can have access to books: borrowing or buying.While millions are borrowing books, I still think buying them best suits me and gives me the greatest pleasure.Many people choose to borrow books.For one thing, borrowing books can save us huge amounts of money.For another, if we borrow books from the library or friends, we normally have deadline to finish them.And consequently we can read more books in a limited time, just as a famous Chinese saying goes, “books can not be read unless borrowed.”

I believe that advantages for buying books are more obvious and compelling.Firstly, we can keep the books as long as we wish.Secondly, we can take whatever notes on the margin of the pages of the books.Finally, the process of selecting and keeping books can be a great fun.4．口語(yǔ)作文 例：工作總結(jié)演講

1.簡(jiǎn)述上周五系學(xué)生會(huì)搞的一次以環(huán)保為主題的到某一湖區(qū)拾trash的活動(dòng)。2.上述活動(dòng)的效果及存在的問(wèn)題。3.你的建議。My fellow students, Last Friday, the Students? Union of our Department organized a clean-up project to Zhongshan Lake.The purpose of this project is to enhance(加強(qiáng))the environment awareness of general public.Late in the afternoon around 4, a group of 35 volunteers went to the park where we pick up the trash(垃圾)left by some tourists.As head of the group, I would like to report to you on the event.Actually, we did a wonderful job.When we were collecting the trash near the lake, many people paused to watch and then came to our help, showing considerable appreciation and support.But our work still left some to be desired.For one thing, since our project started late in the afternoon, hours were not long enough to attract enough people as we had predicted.For the other, lots of people passed by apparently not knowing what we were doing.But for these two drawbacks, our project could have been much better and more effective.So, following are two of my suggestions: next time we have similar activities, try to start earlier, say in the morning.In this case we can put in more hours.And also, as we are getting along, we can put up some posters to tell people what we are doing and call their attention to environment protection.Thank you.5．圖表作文

A： staying at home B: traveling C: doing social investigation D: other ways

From the two charts, we can see that in the past ten years the students who go traveling and do social investigations during vacations have increased greatly while those who stay at home have decreased a lot.There are several reasons for the changes.Firstly, with the development of economy, many people have become better off.Students can get financial support from their parents for traveling.Secondly, tourism has greatly developed over the past ten years.Many new scenic spots have been built and exploited.In addition, the students today are expected and encouraged to participate in facing the real world.In this way they can obtain the necessary experiences required when they go job-hunting upon graduation.From the changes in the charts, we can predict that more and more college students will make their vacations interesting and worthwhile by going to the outside world instead of staying at home.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Studying Abroad.You should write at least

words following the outline given bellow:

1.近幾年來(lái)越來(lái)越多的學(xué)生選擇留學(xué)

2.出現(xiàn)這種現(xiàn)象的原因

3.這種現(xiàn)象可能帶來(lái)的影響

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Recent years have witnessed a phenomenon that more and more students swarm into foreign countries to finish their education.They have not considered our homeland as the unique place to enrich their knowledge any more.Instead, some excellent boys and girls whose financial condition is fine simultaneously began to pay their attention on some oversea prestigious colleges and institutions and dream to get degrees there.There are several reasons to cause this change.First of all, with the globalization and much more frequent communications with developed countries, most of the people in China get to realize the wide gaps in many fields, especially in science and technology,between China and western countries.They thirst for studying aboard to get ready better for the fierce competition in the job-hunting market.Moreover, the life in foreign countries is usually attractive to young people and studying aboard may satisfy their curiosity.Besides, the rapid development of our mother country and the remarkable growth in our income make going abroad to study available, which is almost impossible to average Chinese students in the past.The move-out of our students changes our society a lot.On one hand, being students in foreign universities will widen their view and offer them more possibility to get favorite jobs.And consequently their success will draw more latecomers to do the same thing.On the other hand, if the majority of them will not go back to China to work in the future, our fatherland will probably suffer a significant loss which may be difficult to be estimated by money.畢業(yè)的問(wèn)題

1、Studying Abroad or Home

(1)現(xiàn)在有越來(lái)越多的人想出國(guó)留學(xué)。

(2)出國(guó)留學(xué)與在國(guó)內(nèi)學(xué)習(xí)的對(duì)比。

(3)你的觀點(diǎn)。

Nowadays, with the development of science and technology, more?and?more?people want to study abroad.There are students from colleges and universities, from the middle schools, from the primary schools, and people from all walks of life.What difference does it make?between studying abroad and studying home ?

Though many students are crazy about going abroad to pursue their higher education, I think studying home is preferable.For one thing, you don?t have to take foreign language tests such as TOEFL and GRE.This can save you a tremendous amount of time, money and effort, allowing much of your energy to be devoted to your academic foals.In addition, if you study home ,you can stay with your family and old friends.Meanwhile , while studying home ,you can enjoy the kind of intimate friendship and comfortable family atmosphere which you can only dream of in a foreign university , where you will be accompanied by your own shadow most of the time.For these reasons, pursuing one?s higher education at home is a more realistic and sensible choice.In a word, I prefer to study home.The Intensified Postgraduate Entrance Examination

It can be seen from the graph that there are more and more students attending the postgraduate entrance examination year by year.Compared with before, the rate of the student taking part in the postgraduate entrance examination becomes higher and higher.In the meanwhile, the admittance rate is also rising.What are the reasons for this and the possible consequences? On the one hand, there are three reasons for this.First, the job market becomes more and more competitive.As a result, most people want to find or exchange for a better job by obtaining a high degree.Second, most college students want to pursue their study after their graduation from the undergraduate.Third, with the development the science and technology, what has been learned at college is not enough to meet the need of the society.On the other hand, there are some possible consequences of this.For one thing, most people will be force to pay more attention to the examination than to the improvement of their true ability.For another, it will have a negative effect not only on the individual but also on the society in the long run.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a Letter of Apology.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

1.表達(dá)自己對(duì)晚交論文一事的歉意。

2.說(shuō)明未能按時(shí)交論文的原因。

3.表示自己將盡快把論文補(bǔ)交上并表示以后將按時(shí)交作業(yè)。

這是一封道歉信，寫(xiě)的時(shí)候要遵循道歉信的一般模式：開(kāi)篇直奔主題，然后說(shuō)明原因，最后提出可能的補(bǔ)救措施。第一段，對(duì)晚交論文及對(duì)此造成的后果表示歉意；第二段，說(shuō)明理由（可信的理由，而不是隨便應(yīng)付老師的借口）；第三段，表示盡快完成論文。

【范文】A Letter of Apology

Dear Mr.Wang，①I(mǎi) am writing to apologize for my late homework.The paper which you have ②assigned to us last Monday was ③due this Friday, but to my regret, I haven?t even started it yet.I feel really sorry for not handing in the paper on time and ④for the inconvenience it would bring to you.I have caught a serious cold last week and the doctor asked me to stay in bed for a week since I was very weak and the weather was very cold these days.Therefore, I couldn?t go to the library to get the necessary ①referential information which was needed for my paper.As a result of this, I have not started writing the paper yet and could not hand it in on time.Fortunately I have finally fully recovered.I will finish the paper as soon as I can and ①try my best to hand in homework on time in the future.Sincerely yours，Li Ming

◇第一段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：

表明歉意

◇語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)提示：

① I am writing to apologize(say sorry)for :道歉信的常用開(kāi)頭句式

② assign: 分配，指定，布置

③ due；到期的，預(yù)期的

④ I?m sorry for the inconvenience it would bring to you: 另一句常用句式

◇第二段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：

解釋原因，雖然不是真的給人道歉，但是理由還是要充分的好。

◇語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)提示：

① referential: 用作參考的

◇第三段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：

表明盡快完成論文，并表示以后會(huì)按時(shí)交論文

◇語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)提示：

① try my best to…..in the future: 道歉信常用結(jié)尾

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of

Income Gap.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

1.有些人認(rèn)為收入差距的存在是合理的；

2.有些人認(rèn)為收入差距的存在是不合理的

3.收入差距對(duì)社會(huì)的影響

議論文，根據(jù)題目要求文章可分為三點(diǎn)：收入差距的合理性；收入差距的不合理性；對(duì)社會(huì)的影響。在敘述第一、二點(diǎn)時(shí)，可適當(dāng)?shù)氐恼归_(kāi)一兩個(gè)小點(diǎn)。注意各點(diǎn)之間的銜接，以及論證的邏輯。

● 范文●?Income Gap

1There has been a heated discussion over the growing income gap now.Some people hold that the gap is natural because it 2reflects different contributions that different people make in their work.3In their view, those people with high income work hard and long.Besides, these people bring high 4efficiency, and create more wealth.Accordingly, they deserve high pay.1On the other hand, there are always some people who view this gap negatively.They believe that a lot of crimes happen as a result of this income gap.Some people make so little from their work that they 2risk taking criminal acts to get rich.In fact, experts have long found out that most cases of crime are directly related to low income.There is 3another point to 4back up a negative view against income gap.For most people, income gap may destroy the satisfaction

that they obtain from work.1As anything has two sides, so has the problem of income gap.Personally, I believe that this gap may 2motivate people to compete better in job market.When this gap is growing too wide, however, our government should make some policies to 3get rid of its negative consequences.◇第一段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：收入差距的合理性

◇語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)提示： There has been a heated discussion over the growing income gap: 直接點(diǎn)題 reflect 意為“反映” in one?s view 意為“在某人看來(lái)”（分析觀點(diǎn)時(shí)常用詞組）efficiency 意為“效率”

◇第二段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：收入差距的不合理性

◇語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)提示

1On the other hand：意為“另一點(diǎn)、另一方面”（提出相反觀點(diǎn)，與上文銜接）

2risk doing something 意為“冒險(xiǎn)做某事”

3another point: 提出另一小點(diǎn)

4back up 意為“支持”

◇第三段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：收入差距的影響

◇語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)提示

1As anything has two sides, so…...議論文常用句式 四級(jí)作文