第一篇：aw-tvkk4-2008大學(xué)英語四級(jí)寫作真題與匯總
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②我們‖〔把敵人〕打〈敗〉了。
2004年-2008年大學(xué)英語四級(jí)歷年寫作真題與范文匯總
1.2008年12月20日大學(xué)英語(CET-4)真題作文 Part I Writing(30 minutes)注意：此部分試題在答題卡1上。
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Recreational Activities.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1.一次性塑料袋的使用
2.使用一次性塑料袋帶來的問題 3.限制使用一次性塑料袋的意義
Disposable Plastic Bags
Nowadays we may find ourselves surrounded by a sea of disposable plastics bags.And recently the problems of using disposable plastic bags have been brought into people's focus.First of all, the use of disposable plastic bags causes irreversible harm to our environment.As these bags are not biodegradable, they are blocking the drainage system and causing water pollution.What's more, customers using disposable plastic bags may think that they are of great convenience.But what they don't quite realize is that there will be remarkable negative impact on our health.And sometimes careless disposal of these bags may even poison some innocent animals.In view of the severity of this issue, effective measures have been taken in our country.There has been a strict limit on the using of disposable plastic bags in supermarkets, which not only enhances people's awareness on environmental protection but also cuts down the cost of the running of supermarkets.2.2008年6月21日大學(xué)英語(CET-4)真題作文 Part I Writing(30 minutes)注意：此部分試題在答題卡1上。
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled
Recreational Activities.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese: 1.娛樂活動(dòng)多種多樣
2.娛樂可能使人們收益，也可能有危害性 3.作為大學(xué)生，我的看法 范文：
Recreational activity Among various recipes one enjoys in his or her college life, recreational activities can by no means be ignored.It is numerous activities, such as spoken English competitions, sports events, and clubs and societies of different interests, which help to make campus life colorful and diversified.Facing so many interesting extracurricular activities, we college students have trouble to choose the proper ones.As freshmen, we are confused by all kinds of posters for students’ clubs to recruit new members.There are two opposite views about recreational activities.One says they exert positive influence on a student’s physical and mental development, for they can explore a student’s talent, develop a student's ability in communication, and teach them to be more independent.While, opposite voices can also be heard by asserting that recreational activities waste too much time, and therefore may hinder student from focusing on his or her study.As for me, I hold a belief that recreational activities do more good than harm, because I have always been of the impression that as a college student, he or she, besides the academic information, should pick up more practical skills to be better prepared for the career development.Recreational activities do give us a good chance.And, so long as one can arrange the time by reason, activities besides study will definitely provide more benefit for us.3.2007年12月22日大學(xué)英語四級(jí)(CET-4)真題作文 Part I Writing(30 minutes)注意：此部分試題在答題卡1上。
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of What Electives to Choose.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given bellow:
1、各大學(xué)開設(shè)了各種各樣的選修課
2、學(xué)生因?yàn)楦鞣N原因選擇了不同的選修課
3、以你自己為例……
范文：
What Electives to Choose Nowadays, there usually exists a wide selection of electives for college students to choose from.However, students have quite different plans
so they always end up learning courses based on their own ideas.Some students may choose to learn a certain course in order to obtain an extra certificate for their job hunting after graduation.Because they assume that some more knowledge could ensure more chances of winning in finding a good job.Others may have their choice made just for fun.They tend to hold the idea that college life could be more colorful if they could widen their knowledge through elective courses.As far as I’m concerned, I’m inclined to choose electives based on both the value of the courses and the interest of my own.4.2007年6月23日大學(xué)英語四級(jí)(CET-4)真題作文 Part I Writing(30 minutes)注意：此部分試題在答題卡1上。
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Welcome to our club.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given bellow: 歡迎辭，歡迎加入俱樂部。標(biāo)題：Welcome to our club 書寫提綱： 1.表達(dá)你的歡迎；
2.對(duì)你們俱樂部作一個(gè)簡要介紹。范文
Ladies and Gentlemen，F(xiàn)irst of all, please allow me to express the most heartfelt welcome to all of you on behalf of our English Club.We have been looking forward to seeing you for long.It is a wonderful day today.Now I would like to brief my club to you since I want to leave the most wonderful for you to discover.Our club, organizing various activities regularly catering for the needs of participants, is well-known among many English learners.If you want to meet native English speakers, please join us.If you want to speak English not only accurately but also fluently, please join us.If you want to discover the most attractive aspects in English, please join us.I do hope that you will enjoy your journey of English study with us.Thank you!
Sincerely Yours
Li Ming
5.2006年12月23日大學(xué)英語四級(jí)(CET-4)真題作文 Part I Writing(30 minutes)注意：此部分試題在答題卡1上。
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minute to write a short essay on the topic of students selecting their lectures.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given bellow: 1.許多人喜歡在除夕夜看春節(jié)晚會(huì) 2.但有些人提出取消春節(jié)晚會(huì) 3.我的看法 范文：
The approach of the Chinese Lunar New Year poses a national issue concerning the necessity of holding the CCTV Spring Festival Gala.Its established status is being challenged by a growing number of people, especially by younger generations.It is increasingly difficult to cater for all tastes.Some individuals deem that it should be canceled or replaced by other programs.These young people focus their attention on other forms of celebration instead of immersing themselves in TV.Despite that, the majority of mid-aged people and senior citizens uphold the importance of the traditional performance.The most striking feature of this gala is its traditionally close link with ordinary people's lives.Most of people view this gala as an annual staple on the traditional Chinese Spring Festival Eve.They all have a restless night and glue their eyes on the television.I am not supportive of the view that the grand gala should be abandoned.Undoubtedly, it plays a vital role in the celebration of Chinese New Year.To increase its appeal and meet young adults' need, the upcoming performance should invite some big names including super stars from Hong Kong and Taiwan.We are all eagerly anticipating this unforgettable evening show.6.2006年6月24日大學(xué)英語四級(jí)(CET-4)真題作文 Part I Writing(30 minute)注意：此部分試題在答題卡1上。
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minute to write a short essay on the topic of students selecting their lectures.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given bellow: 1.有些大學(xué)允許學(xué)生自由選擇某些課程的任課教師 2.學(xué)生選擇教師時(shí)所考慮的主要因素 3.學(xué)生自選任課教師的益處和可能產(chǎn)生的問題 范文：
On Students Selecting Lecturers In many foreign universities it is common for students to choose their professor.When students choose their courses for the year, a list of the professors’ names also is provided.When students are choosing a professor, the first thing to consider is if he / she is well known in their field.You might want to check if they have published many books or articles.You also might want to ask others if this lecturer is in a position to give you recommendations for work or graduate school.The benefit of selecting your own teacher is that it gives students a feeling of responsibility for their education.The drawback, however, is that sometimes students often base their choices on other students’ opinions.Teachers who give higher marks tend to be popular whereas those who have higher expectations, even if a better teacher, might not be well liked.7.2006年6月17日大學(xué)英語四級(jí)(CET-4)真題作文 題目：An announcement for a voluntary program 1.校學(xué)生會(huì)組織一次暑假志愿活動(dòng)，現(xiàn)招聘志愿者
2.本次活動(dòng)的目的、內(nèi)容及安排
3.報(bào)名條件和聯(lián)系方式
范文：
Attention, please!We are now recruiting volunteers to participate in(take part in / get involved in)a voluntary program held by the student union during the summer break.The details of our activity are listed as follows.First, this activity is aimed at cultivating(giving a boost to)your sense of responsibility, broadening your vision and sharpening your edge because, as our economy evolves at an incredible speed, it is becoming increasingly vital for young adults in the Ivory Tower to get in touch with the real world.Second, our activity begins at July 10th and ends at July 20th..Plus, the schedule involves blood donation, looking after senior citizens and conducting a survey on the city's traffic system to put forward our suggestions.Any full-time or part-time students in our college are welcomed to join our team.For further information, please call us at 135****** or send your email to studentunion@asp.edu.cn.8.2005 年12月大學(xué)英語四級(jí)(CET-4)真題作文 Part V Writing(30 minutes)Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists? You should write at Least 120 words following the outline given below: 1.名校校園正成為旅游新熱點(diǎn)
2.校園是否應(yīng)對(duì)游客開放，人們看法不同 3.我認(rèn)為…
Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourism? Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions.It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China.In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions.On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university.On the other hand, some people
hold a negative view about this phenomenon.In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing.The campus is mainly a place for study.With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.9.2005 年01月大學(xué)英語四級(jí)(CET-4)真題作文 Part V Writing(30 minutes)Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a campaign speech in support of your election to the post of chairman of the student union.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese: 1.你認(rèn)為自己具備了什么條件(能力、性格、愛好等)可以勝任學(xué)生會(huì)主席的工作 2.如果當(dāng)選，你將為本校同學(xué)做些什么 范文：
A Campaign Speech
Today I am very glad to run for the president of the students’ union.I am junior in Chemical Department.Since I came into the university, I have always been the monitor of my class.I have done a very good job for my classmates, and my classmates and my teachers all give me a good praise.I am good at communication and organizing.And I like to help others.Moreover, I have a variety of hobbies, for example, basketball, football, pingpong, etc.I am sure that I am qualified for this position.If I become the president, I will try my best to do well.I will organize some suitable activities for you.I will do many things for you to reach your demands as well.I am sincerely hope you will give me a chance, and please believe me that I will be a good president.Thank you.10.2004年6月大學(xué)英語四級(jí)(CET-4)真題作文
Part V Writing(30 minutes)Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition entitled A Brief Introduction to a Tourist Attraction.You should write at least 120 words according to the following guidelines:
Your role: a tour guide Your audience: a group of foreign tourists Your introduction should include: ? some welcoming words ? the schedule for the day
? a description of the place the tourists will be visiting(e.g.a scenic spot or a historical site, etc.)You should make the introduction interesting and the arrangements for the day clear to everybody.A Brief Introduction to a Tourist Attraction Good morning, ladies and gentleman, welcome to Beijing.To begin with, I would like to introduce myself: I am the tourist guide from China Travel Service and it’s great honor to stay here with all of you for a whole day.Just as the old saying goes, “It is always a pleasure to greet a friend from afar”, I wish all of you to enjoy yourselves during this trip.The following is schedule of the day.The first spot we are going to visit is the Great Wall, the grandest fortification in ancient China.The next sight to look around is the Ming Tombs, which is one of the best-preserved tombs for 13 emperors in Ming Dynasty more than one thousand years ago.In the afternoon, we will go for the Summer Palace, the royal park for Chinese ancient emperors.Currently we are on the way to the Great Wall.Dating back to the seven century B.C., the Great Wall is constructed by respective states for fortifying against invasion of neighboring states.By the reasons of long history and its length, it becomes one of the eight wonders in the world and represents the highest wisdom and crafts.From the top of the Great Wall，we can enjoy a magnificent view of continuous mountains, green trees and blooming wild flowers.It is no doubt that one says, “He who has never been to the Great Wall is not a true man”.Above is my introduction to the Great Wall.If any of you have questions, please feel free to ask。
第二篇：大學(xué)英語四級(jí)寫作歷年真題與
大學(xué)英語四級(jí)寫作歷年真題與范文
1999.1真題 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic.Don’t Be Afraid to Say“No”.You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:
1.別人請(qǐng)求幫助時(shí),在什么情況下我們會(huì)說“不”
2.為什么有些人在該說“不”的時(shí)候不說“不”
3.該說“不”時(shí),不說“不”的壞處
［范文］
Don’t Be Afraid to Say “No”
Sometimes we have to say “No” to others when they ask us for help.Why? One situation may be that we are not capable of doing the things they ask us to do.The other situation may be that we are unwilling to do what they ask us to do, because their requests may be unreasonable or even illegal.On both occasions we should say directly to them: “No”.But the case is not always the same in our daily life.Some people are afraid to say “No” when they should say so.On the one hand, they are afraid of losing their faces.On the other hand they don’t want to hurt others, such as their family members, relatives, friends or colleagues.To say “Yes” when you should say “No” will eventually do you some harm.If you say “Yes” but fail to help them in the end because of lack of the ability, they may think you are not worthy of trust.If you help them do something bad or illegal, you will be punished for what you have done.So, don’t be afraid to say “No” if necessary.1999.6真題
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Reading selectively or extensively? You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:
1.有人認(rèn)為讀書要有選擇
2.有人認(rèn)為應(yīng)當(dāng)博覽群書
3.我的看法
[范文]
Reading Selectively or Extensively?
Reading selectively or extensively? What is your choice? Perhaps each of us has our choice.Some people think we should read selectively, for there are so many books for us to read.Thousands of new books are published every day.How can we cover all these books in our limited time? Besides, not all the books are worth reading.Some people, on the contrary, choose to read extensively.They think that reading extensively can broaden their horizons.Through reading extensively they can learn something about their ancestors;through reading extensively they can get insight of great men.Reading extensively can also enable us to adapt to the fast developing society.Because we are living in a knowledgeexploding society, if we don’t read extensively, we can’t get enough information about the modern world, and we can’t keep pace with the society.In my opinion, we should read both selectively and extensively.By reading extensively, we can enrich our knowledge of aspects.By reading selectively, we can focus on and learn well the academic knowledge we’ll need in our future work.2000.1真題
Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How I Finance My College Education? You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:
1.上大學(xué)的費(fèi)用可以通過多種途徑解決
2.哪種途徑適合我(說明理由)
[范文]
How I Finance My College Education?
Every year, thousands of young men enter universities and colleges.It has been a problem for the students and their families how to finance their college education.In fact, the problem can be dealt with in many ways.The most common way is to get all the money from the parents.If their parents can’t produce the tuition and the fees, students can apply a loan from the bank.There is still another way.Students can finance their education by doing some parttime jobs in their spare time.As for me, my parents can pay the greater part of the tuition and fees for me.So, I won’t have a heavy financial burden, and I can put all my heart into study.I would like to pay the rest by doing a parttime job.Although my parents are able to pay all the tuition and fees for me, I just want to know more about the society by my own working experience.Therefore, I choose this way to finance my college education.2001.1真題
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Succeed in a Job Interview? You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:
1.面試在求職過程中的作用
2.取得面試成功的因素 [范文]
How to Succeed in a Job Interview?
Nowadays, students must seek jobs by themselves.Job interview is the first step leading to the success of their employment.It is clear that succeeding in a job interview is very important.There are some ways to ensure your success in a job interview.First, you should be well prepared for all the information about you, such as your diploma certification, you credit records, certification about your awards, publications, if there is any, and the last but not the least, a carefullydesigned resume, in both Chinese and English.Second, you must pay much attention to your appearance, including your dress and your behavior.You should dress properly.While talking with the interviewer, you should listen to him attentively, accompanied with proper eye contact and a timely nod of head.Third, you must be confident about yourself.Your smiling face is the best way to show your confidence and friendliness.You should be also honest, especially when talking about yourself.2001.6真題
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter.Suppose you are Zhang Ying.Write a letter to Xiao Wang, a schoolmate of yours who is going to visit you during the weeklong holiday.You should write at least 100 words according to the suggestions(given in Chinese)below:
1.表示歡迎
2.提出度假安排建議
3.提醒應(yīng)注意的事項(xiàng)
A Letter to A Schoolmate;June 23, 2001;Dear Xiao Wang;Yours, Zhang Ying
[范文]
A Letter to A Schoolmate
June 23, 2001 Dear Xiao Wang，I am glad to hear that you will come to see me during the week long holiday.It has been three years since we graduated from our university.I miss you very much.I even can’t wait to see you.I’ve made a plan for this holiday.As this is the first time you come to Beijing, I think we’d better have sightseeing around it.We can visit some famous scenic spots and historical sites, such as Summer Palace, The Forbidden City, The Great Wall, etc.We can do some shopping together.There are many splendid markets and plazas in Beijing.The State Library is also a good place for us to go.By the way, since lots of people will go traveling in this holiday, it must be crowded on the train.So you should take care of your luggage.Bring more clothes with you because Beijing is much colder than Kunming at this time.And don’t forget to tell me when you will arrive.I’ll pick you up at the airport.Miss you!
Yours，Zhang Ying
2002.1真題
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus.You should write at least 100 words ,and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below.假設(shè)你是李明，請(qǐng)你就本校食堂的狀況給校長寫一封信，內(nèi)容應(yīng)涉及食堂的飯菜質(zhì)量、價(jià)格、環(huán)境、服務(wù)等，可以是表揚(yáng)，可以是批評(píng)建議，也可以兼而有之。January 12th, 2002 Dear Mr.President，Li Ming
[范文]
A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus
January 12th, 2002 Dear Mr.President，I am a student of computer science in our university.I am writing this letter to you to show about the canteen service on campus on behalf of some students of our department.Firstly, we feel we need more varieties of foods served to the students, which means every student can get the food that he thinks suitable for his taste and his pocketmoney allowance.Secondly, we find it essential to prolong the opening hours of the canteen.A student from a class that ends at 12:00 noon may reach the canteen no sooner than 12:30.However, the fact is that the canteen is closed when he gets there.Thirdly, we are greatly concerned with the dining environment.We feel that student diners are entitled to a better dining environment than what they are having now.We do hope that the university authority will look into the problems and solve them.Yours Sincerely，Li Ming
2002.6真題
Directions: For this part you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Student Use of Computers.You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline given below:
1.上圖(圖略)所示為1990年、1995年、2002年某校大學(xué)生事業(yè)計(jì)算機(jī)的情況,請(qǐng)描述其變化
2.請(qǐng)說明發(fā)生這些變化的原因（可從計(jì)算機(jī)的用途、價(jià)格或社會(huì)發(fā)展等方面加以說明）
3.你認(rèn)為目前大學(xué)生在計(jì)算機(jī)使用中有什么困難或問題
[范文]
Student Use of Computers
Students tend to use computers more and more nowadays.Reading this chart, we can find that the average number of hours a student spends on the computer per week has increased sharply.In 1990, it has less than 2 hours;and in 1995, it increased to almost 4 hours, and in 2000, the number soared to 20 hours.Obviously computers are becoming more and more popular.There are several reasons for this.First, computers facilitate us in more aspects of life.Also, the fast developments of the Internet enlarges our demands for using computers.We can easily contact with friends in remote places through the Internet.Besides, the prices of computers are getting lower and lower, which enables more students to purchase them.However, there still exist some problems, such as, poor quality, out of date designs and so on.And how to balance the time between using computers and studying is also a serious problem.Anyhow, we will benefit a lot from computers as long as we use them properly.2002.12真題
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic：It Pays to Be Honest.You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
1.當(dāng)前社會(huì)上存在著許多不誠實(shí)的現(xiàn)象
2.誠實(shí)利人利己，做人應(yīng)該誠實(shí)
寫作指導(dǎo)：寫文章之前，應(yīng)該先花上一分鐘時(shí)間好好地審一下題。這是一篇
命題作文，題目是It Pays to Be Honest。其中 “pay to”意為 “有利、值得”。因此文章應(yīng)圍繞“做人誠實(shí)非常值得”這一主題展開。在指令中給了中文提綱，所以按照提綱，第一段應(yīng)介紹當(dāng)前社會(huì)存在著許多不誠實(shí)的現(xiàn)象，如商人賣假貨欺騙顧客，學(xué)生考試作弊欺騙老師等等，同時(shí)在這一段應(yīng)表明自己對(duì)這種現(xiàn)象的反感。
第二段提出觀點(diǎn)：誠實(shí)利人利己，做人應(yīng)該誠實(shí)。并用具體的例子來說明這一點(diǎn)，例子可以是正面的，也可以是反面的。如范文中用的就是“狼來了”的反面例子。最后，結(jié)尾應(yīng)強(qiáng)調(diào)做人應(yīng)該誠實(shí)，這是人的基本素質(zhì)。
[范文]
It Pays to Be Honest
From the mass media and also with our own eyes, we know much dishonest behavior existed in our society.For example, businessmen sell fake products to cheat their customers;students copy others’ homework or download illicit papers from Internet to cheat their teachers;and even worse, some people produce fake medicine that harm the patients.Seeing our society is filled with so many dishonest phenomena, I can’t help asking myself what’s wrong with us.When we were very young we were taught the importance of being honest.I am sure everyone must still remember that story “A wolf is coming”.In the story the child kept cheating other people that a wolf was coming, but when the wolf really come, nobody trusted his words and he finally suffered his own dishonesty.Also we have heard many stories that people benefit from their virtues of honesty.So since we have already known being honest benefit both ourselves and other people.Why are many of us still dishonest? I hope everyone must bear in mind that being honest is the basic quality of human beings and then we won’t be afraid of any “wolf”.2003.6真題
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write an eyewitness account of a traffic accident.You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
假設(shè)你在某日某時(shí)某地目擊一起車禍，就此寫下一分見證書。見證書必須包括以下幾點(diǎn)：
1.車禍發(fā)生的時(shí)間及地點(diǎn)
2.你所見到的車禍情況
3.你對(duì)車禍原因的分析
[范文]
An EyeWitness Account of a Traffic Accident
My name is Liming.I am studying at college.A week ago I saw a traffic accident, which is still vivid in my mind.It was at about 9:00 on Saturday morning, June 15th, when I went out of the university to visit a friend of mine at another university.I was walking leisurely on the sidewalk when I heard a loud crash of two vehicles just at the Tjunction about 10 metres away.Two taxis crashed together.It was a traffic accident.I went up and found that the two taxis were badly damaged.Both hoofs were out of shape.One door of a car was knocked off and lying on the road.One driver was bleeding and another was shut in the taxi.Some people were trying to help the driver get out of the damaged car.One man was calling the traffic policeman station.A lot of cars were jammed on the road.From the stopping track on the road, it is clear that the two taxis were driving too fast.But it is just one of the reasons.In my opinion, the taxi drivers are eager to take more passengers and make a little more money.On the other hand, both drivers don’t show concern for one another.Both of them wanted to run in front of another.Therefore, the accident is inevitable.So far, we should let the drivers keep it in their mind that a little slower, a little safer.Taking care of others’ lives means taking care of your own life.2003.9真題
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic The Day My Classmate Fell ILL(or Got Injured).You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
1.簡單敘述一下這位同學(xué)生病（或受傷）的情況
2.同學(xué)、老師和我是如何幫助他/她的
3.人與人之間的這種相互關(guān)愛給我的感受是??
The Day My Classmate Fell Ill
During the SARS period in this spring, the year of 2003, one of my classmates, Liming, was struck down by the virus and was immediately sent to hospital.The news spread quickly on campus.At first, we were terrified and wandered if we were infected too.However, through our government’s publicity on mass media, we gradually conquered the fear and set out to try our best to help her.Some teachers provided daily necessities while some students recorded the English class contents for him so that Liming could not be left behind.With our care and concern, Liming recovered quickly.Such an incident teaches us a good moral.Our society is full of love, warm and peaceful, in which people, from man to woman, from individual to individual, lend others a hand.Just like a famous song goes, “the world will turn into heaven only if everyone contributes a little.” And I do believe that it’s my great honor to live in this lovefilled paradise!
2003.12真題
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter in reply to a friend’s inquiry about applying for admission to your college or university.You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
1.建議報(bào)考的專業(yè)及理由
2.報(bào)考該專業(yè)的基本條件
3.應(yīng)當(dāng)如何備考
[范文]
A Letter in Reply to a Friend
December 27th, 2003 Dear，When it comes to which major you should choose, I propose that you apply for the major of English.To begin with, English is the most popular language in the world, which is widely used in all fields such as teaching, translation, and foreign trade and so on.What’s more, it goes without saying that English majors are more likely to find a good job in the tighter and tighter job market.In order to study at English Department, you have to meet the following requirements.In the first place, you have to spend a lot of time on it, just as the old saying goes, “Practice makes perfect”.In the second place, the basic skills of reading, listening and speaking are necessary, because they are the foundations for your future study.Last but not the least important, you need an intense interest in learning English since “interest is the best teacher.”
As far as the preparation work is concerned, you should first of all review all the required vocabulary.In addition, you’d better spend some time on reading and writing.Only through these measures can you hope to enroll in our university.Yours
2004.6真題
Part V Writing(30 minutes)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition entitled A Brief Introduction to a Tourist Attraction.You should write at least 120 words to the following guidelines:
Your role: a tour guide
Your audience: a group of foreign tourists
Your introduction should include:
1.some welcoming words
2.the schedule for the day
3.a description of the place the tourists will be visiting(e.g.a scenic spot or a historical site, etc.)
You should make the introduction and the arrangements for the day clear to everybody.[范文]
A Brief Introduction to a Tourist Attraction
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen, welcome to Beijing.To begin with, I would like to introduce myself: I am the tourist guide from China Travel Service and it’s great honor to stay here with all of you for a whole day.Just as the old saying goes, “It is always a pleasure to greet a friend from afar”.I wish all of you to enjoy yourselves during this trip.The following is a schedule of the day.The first spot we are going to visit is the Great Wall, the grandest fortification in ancient China.The next sight to look around is the Ming Tombs, which is one of the bestpreserved tombs for 13 emperors in Ming Dynasty more than three hundred years ago.In the afternoon, we will go for the Summer Palace, the royal park for Chinese ancient emperors.Currently we are on the way to the Great Wall.Dating back to the seven century B.C., the Great Wall is constructed by respective states for fortifying against invasion of neighboring states.By the reasons of long history and its length, it becomes one of the eight wonders in the world and represents the highest wisdom and crafts.From the top of the Great Wall, we can enjoy a magnificent view of continuous, green trees and blooming wild flowers.It is no doubt that one says, “He who has never been to the Great Wall is not a true man”.Above is my introduction to the Great Wall.If any of you have questions, please feel free to ask me at any time.2005.1真題
Part V Writing(30 minutes)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a Campaign Speech.You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:
1.你認(rèn)為自己具備了什么條件(能力、性格、愛好等)可以勝任學(xué)生會(huì)主席的工作
2.如果當(dāng)選,你將為本校同學(xué)做些什么
[范文]
A Campaign Speech
Today I am very glad to run for the president of the Students Union.I am junior in Chemical Department.Since I came into the university, I have always been the monitor of my class.I have done a very good job for my classmates, and my classmates and my teacher all give me a good praise.I am good at communication and organizing.And I like to help others.Moreover, I have a variety of hobbies, for example,playing basketball, playing football, playing table tennis, etc.I am sure that I am qualified for this position.If I become the president, I will try my best to do well.I will organize some suitable activities for you.I will do many things for you to reach your demands as well.I sincerely hope you will give me a chance, and please believe me that I will be a good president.Thank you.
第三篇：大學(xué)英語四級(jí)翻譯真題
2014年12月 大學(xué)英語四級(jí)考試真題（第一套）
大熊貓是一種溫順的動(dòng)物，長著獨(dú)特的黑白皮毛。因其數(shù)量極少，大熊貓已被列為瀕危物種。大熊貓對(duì)于世界自然基金會(huì)有著特殊意義。自1961年該基金會(huì)成立以來，大熊貓就一直是它的徽標(biāo)。大熊貓是熊科中最稀有的成員，主要生活在中國西南部的森林里。目前，世界上大約有1000只大熊貓。這些以竹為食的動(dòng)物正面臨許多威脅。因此，確保大熊貓的生存比以往更重要。
Panda is a kind of docile animal, with unique black and white fur.Because of its scarcity, panda has been listed as the endangered species.Panda has been playing a special role in WWF.Panda has been the logo of WWF since it was founded in 1961.It is the rarest member among the ursidae animals, living mainly in the forests of the China Southwest.Up to now there are about 1000 pandas all over the world.These animals which live on bamboo face many threats.So it is more important to protect them than before.2014年12月 大學(xué)英語四級(jí)考試真題（第二套）
越來越多的中國年輕人正在對(duì)旅游產(chǎn)生興趣，這是今年來的新趨勢(shì)。年輕游客數(shù)量的不斷增加，可以歸因于他們迅速提高的收入和探索外部世界的好奇心。隨著旅行多了，年輕人在大城市和著名景點(diǎn)花的時(shí)間少了，他們反而更為偏遠(yuǎn)的地方所吸引。有些人甚至選擇長途背包旅行。最近調(diào)查顯示，很多年輕人想要通過旅行體驗(yàn)不同的文化、豐富知識(shí)、擴(kuò)展視野。
Chinese young people in mounting numbers come to be interested in tourism, which is a new trend of this year.Rising number of young tourists, can be attributed to their rapidly increase income and the curiosity to explore the outside world.With the increase of traveling, the young spend less time in big cities and famous attractions;they are more attracted to remote locations.Some people even choose backpacking trip for long-distance.Recent survey indicates that many young people want to travel to experience different culture, enrich knowledge and broaden view.2014年12月 大學(xué)英語四級(jí)考試真題（第三套）
中國的互聯(lián)網(wǎng)社區(qū)是全世界發(fā)展最快的。2010年，中國約有4.2億網(wǎng)民（netizens），并且人數(shù)還在迅速增長?；ヂ?lián)網(wǎng)的日漸流行帶來了重大的社會(huì)變化。中國網(wǎng)民往往不同美國網(wǎng)民。美國網(wǎng)民更多的是受實(shí)際需要的驅(qū)使，用互聯(lián)網(wǎng)為工具發(fā)電子郵件、買賣商品、規(guī)劃旅程或付款。中國網(wǎng)民更多是出于社交原因使用互聯(lián)網(wǎng)，因而更廣泛地使用QQ、聊天室等。
China’s Internet community develops fastest all over the world.There were nearly 420 million netizens in China in 2010, and the number is still getting larger and larger.The increasing popularity of the Internet has created a significant social change.The Chinese netizens are different from the American netizens.American netizens are more driven by the real necessity, and they use the Internet to send emails, do some shopping, make a travel plan or make a payment.However, Chinese netizens use the Internet mainly out of the social intercourse , so the chat rooms and QQ are widely used by them.2014年6月 大學(xué)英語四級(jí)考試真題（第一套）
中國應(yīng)進(jìn)一步發(fā)展核能，因?yàn)楹穗娔壳爸徽计淇偘l(fā)電量的2%。該比例在所有核國家中居30位，幾乎是最低的。
2011年3月日本核電站事故后，中國的核能開發(fā)停了下來，中止審批新的核電站，并開展全國性的核安全檢查。到2012年10月，審批才又謹(jǐn)慎地恢復(fù)。
隨著技術(shù)和安全措施的改進(jìn)，發(fā)生核事故的可能性完全可以降到最低程度。換句話說，核能是可以安全開發(fā)和利用的。
China should further develop nuclear energy, because nuclear power currently accounts for only 2% of its total generating capacity.The proportion ranks the 30th among all countries possessing nuclear energy, which is almost the lowest.China’s nuclear power development stopped after the nuclear power station accident in Japan in March, 2011.The approval of new nuclear power plants was suspended, and the nationwide nuclear energy safety inspection started.It wasn’t until October, 2012 was examine and approval restored cautiously.With the improvement of technology and safety measures, the possibility of nuclear accidents can definitely be minimized.In other words, the nuclear energy can be exploited and utilized safely.2014年6月 大學(xué)英語四級(jí)考試真題（第二套）
中國教育工作者早就認(rèn)識(shí)到讀書對(duì)于國家的重要意義。有些教育工作者2003年就建議設(shè)立全民讀書日。他們強(qiáng)調(diào)，人們應(yīng)當(dāng)讀好書，尤其是經(jīng)典著作。通過閱讀，人們能更好地學(xué)會(huì)感恩、有責(zé)任心和與人合作，而教育的目的正是要培養(yǎng)這些基本素質(zhì)。閱讀對(duì)于中小學(xué)生尤為重要，假如他們沒有在這個(gè)關(guān)鍵時(shí)期培養(yǎng)閱讀的興趣，以后要養(yǎng)成閱讀的習(xí)慣就很難了。
Chinese educators have long known that reading is of great importance to a nation.Some of them even proposed to establish the National Reading Day in 2003.They emphasized that people should read good books, especially the classic ones.By reading, people can better learn to be grateful, responsible and cooperative, the very basic qualities education intends to foster.Reading is especially important for students in the primary school and middle school;if the interest of reading is not fostered at that critical period, it will be quite difficult to cultivate the habit of reading later.2014年6月 大學(xué)英語四級(jí)考試真題（第三套）
為了促進(jìn)教育公平，中國已投入360億元，用于改善農(nóng)村地區(qū)教育設(shè)施和加強(qiáng)中西部地區(qū)農(nóng)村義務(wù)教育（compulsory education）。這些資金用于改善教學(xué)設(shè)施、購買書籍，使16萬多所中小學(xué)受益。資金還用于購置音樂和繪畫器材?，F(xiàn)在農(nóng)村和山區(qū)的兒童可以和沿海城市的兒童一樣上音樂和繪畫課。一些為接受更好教育而轉(zhuǎn)往城市上學(xué)的學(xué)生如今又回到了本地農(nóng)村學(xué)校就讀。
In order to promote education equity, China has invested 36 billion yuan to improve the education facilities in rural areas and strengthen rural compulsory education in the central and western regions.The funds is used to better the school’s teaching facilities and purchase books, from which more than 160,000 middle and primary schools have gained benefits.The money is also spent on acquiring musical and painting instruments.Nowadays, children in rural and mountainous areas can have access to music and painting lessons just like children in coastal cities.Some students who had once transferred to urban schools for better education now return to the local rural schools.2013年12月 大學(xué)英語四級(jí)考試真題（第一套）
許多人喜歡中餐。在中國，烹飪不僅被視為一種技能，而且也被視為一種藝術(shù)。精心準(zhǔn)備的中餐既可口又好看。烹飪技藝和配料在中國各地差異很大。但好的烹飪都有一個(gè)共同點(diǎn)，總是要考慮到顏色、味道、口感和營養(yǎng)(nutrition)。由于食物對(duì)健康至關(guān)重要，好的廚師總是努力在谷物、肉類和蔬菜之間取得平衡，所以中餐既味美又健康。
Many people are fond of Chinese cuisine.In China, cooking is regarded not only as a craftsmanship, but also as an art.A well-prepared Chinese cuisine is both tasty and good-looking.Cooking skills and dish ingredients vary a lot in different regions of China.However, good Chinese cuisine always shares something in common, that is, the color, aroma, taste, and nutrition.As food is vital to one’s health, a good chef if always trying to strike a balance among grains, meat and vegetables.That’s why Chinese cuisine is tasty and healthy.2013年12月 大學(xué)英語四級(jí)考試真題（第二套）
中國結(jié)（the Chinese knot）最初是由手工藝人發(fā)明的，經(jīng)過數(shù)百年不斷的改進(jìn)，已經(jīng)成為一種優(yōu)雅多彩的藝術(shù)和工藝。在古代，人們用它來記錄事件，但現(xiàn)在主要用于裝飾的目的?！敖Y(jié)”在中文里意味著愛情、婚姻和團(tuán)聚。中國結(jié)常常作為禮物交換或用作飾品祈求好運(yùn)和避邪。這種形式的手工藝（handicraft）代代相傳，現(xiàn)在已經(jīng)在中國和世界各地越來越受歡迎。
The Chinese knot, originally invented by the craftsmen, has become an elegant and colorful art and craft over hundreds of years’ continuous improvement.In ancient times, it was used to record events, but nowadays it is mainly functioning as decoration.“knot” signifies love, marriage and reunion in Chinese.Often used as gifts exchange or decoration, Chinese knot is believed to bring good luck as well as ward off evil spirits.The handicraft has been passed down from one generation to another and now enjoys more and more popularity both at home and abroad.2013年12月 大學(xué)英語四級(jí)考試真題（第三套）
“你要茶還是咖啡？”是用餐人常被問到的問題。許多西方人會(huì)選咖啡，而中國人則會(huì)選茶。相傳，中國的一位帝王于五千多年前發(fā)現(xiàn)了茶，并用來治病。在明清（the Ming and Qing Dynasties）期間，茶館遍布全國。飲茶在6世紀(jì)傳到了日本，但直到17、18世紀(jì)才傳到歐美。如今，茶是世界上最流行的飲料(beverage)之一。茶是中國的民族飲品，也是中國傳統(tǒng)和文化的重要組成部分。
This is what diners are often asked, “Would you like tea or coffee?” Many Westerners favor coffee while the Chinese tend to choose tea.Tradition has it that an ancient Chinese emperor discovered the tea five thousand years ago and used it to treat illnesses.During the Ming and Qing Dynasties, teahouses spread all over the country.Tea drinking was introduced to Japan in the 16th century while it had not been introduced into Europe and America until the 17th and 18th centuries.Nowadays, tea is one of the most popular beverages in the world.It is not only a kind of Chinese national drink, but also an important part of Chinese tradition and culture.2013年6月 大學(xué)英語四級(jí)考試真題（第一套）
春節(jié)貼年畫（pasting New Year paintings）的風(fēng)俗源自于往房子外面的門上貼門神(Door Gods)的傳統(tǒng)。隨著木質(zhì)雕刻評(píng)（board carvings）的出現(xiàn)，年畫包含了更廣泛的主題，最出名的就是門神和三大神——福神、薪神和壽神(Three Gods of Blessing, Salary and Longevity)，寓意著莊家豐收、家畜興旺和慶祝春節(jié)。年畫的四大產(chǎn)地分別是蘇州桃花塢、天津楊柳青、河北武強(qiáng)和山東濰坊。現(xiàn)在中國農(nóng)村依然保持著年畫的傳統(tǒng)，而在城市里很少有人貼年畫。
The custom of pasting New Year paintings in the Spring Festival originated from the tradition of pasting Door Gods on the external doors of the houses.With the creation of board carvings, New Year paintings cover a wider range of subjects.The most famous ones are Door Gods and Three Gods of Blessing, Salary and Longevity, signifying the abundant harvest of crops, the prosperity of domestic animals and the celebration of the Spring Festival.Four producing areas of New Year paintings are Taohuawu of Suzhou, Yangliuqing of Tianjin, Wuqiang of Hebei and Weifang of Shangdong.Now the tradition of pasting New Year paintings is still kept in rural China, while it is seldom followed in cities.2013年6月 大學(xué)英語四級(jí)考試真題（第二套）
“春聯(lián)(The Spring Couplet)”也被稱為“對(duì)聯(lián)(couplet)”，在中國是一種特殊的文學(xué)形式。春聯(lián)是由貼在門口兩側(cè)兩組對(duì)立的句子(antithetical sentences)組成的。在門上面的橫批(horizontal scroll bearing an inscription)通常是一個(gè)吉祥的短語。貼在門右側(cè)的句子被稱作對(duì)聯(lián)的上聯(lián)(the first line of the couplet)，左側(cè)的為下聯(lián)。除夕那天，每家都會(huì)在門上貼上紅紙寫的春聯(lián)，傳遞出節(jié)日喜慶和熱鬧的(hilarious)氣氛。在過去，中國人通常用毛筆自己寫春聯(lián)或者請(qǐng)別人寫春聯(lián)，而現(xiàn)在，人們普遍在市場(chǎng)上買印刷好的春聯(lián)。
“The Spring Couplet”, also called “couplet”, is a special form of literature in China.The Spring Couplet is composed of two antithetical sentences on both sides of the door.Above the gate is a horizontal scroll bearing an inscription, usually an auspicious phrase.The sentence pasting on the right side of the door is called the fist line of the Couplet, and the left one is the second line.On the eve of the Spring Festival, every household will paste on doors a Spring Couplet written on red paper to give a happy and hilarious atmosphere of the Festival.In the past, the Chinese usually wrote their own Spring Couplet with a brush or asked others to do it for them, while nowadays, it is common for people to buy the printed Spring Couplet in the market.2013年6月 大學(xué)英語四級(jí)考試真題（第三套）
僅僅鼠標(biāo)一點(diǎn)，購物者就幾乎能在網(wǎng)上買到任何東西，從食品雜貨到汽車，從保險(xiǎn)單(insurance policies)到房貸。電子商務(wù)(electronic commerce)的世界使得消費(fèi)者無需離開舒適的家就能夠在數(shù)以千計(jì)的網(wǎng)店購物，并且完成付款。消費(fèi)者期望商家(merchants)不僅僅能夠在網(wǎng)上銷售產(chǎn)品，而且能夠讓支付過程變的簡單、安全。當(dāng)然，網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物者也需要謹(jǐn)慎小心以保證愉快、安全的網(wǎng)購經(jīng)歷。
With just a click of the mouse, shoppers can buy nearly any product online, from groceries to cars, from insurance policies to home loans.The world of electronic commerce enables consumers to shop at thousands of online stores and pay for their purchases without leaving the comfortable home.Consumers expect merchants not only to make their products available on the Web, but also to make payments a simple and secure process.Of course, online shoppers need to be cautious to make their online shopping experiences enjoyable and safe.2012年12月 大學(xué)英語四級(jí)考試真題
在中國，小孩兒的滿月酒(One-Month-Old Feast)和抓周(One-Year-Old Catch)儀式獨(dú)具特色。小孩兒出生滿一個(gè)月的那天，孩子的家人一般要邀請(qǐng)親朋摯友一起來慶祝孩子滿月。小孩兒滿周歲的那天，有抓周的儀式。按照中國的傳統(tǒng)，父母及他們不給予任何的引導(dǎo)或暗示，任孩子隨意挑選，看他先抓什么，后抓什么，并以此為依據(jù)來預(yù)測(cè)孩子可能存在的志趣和將來從事的職業(yè)以及前途。
In China, One-Month-Old Feast and One-Year-Old Catch of a baby are of unique Chinese characteristics.One the day when a baby is a month old, the family of the baby will invite their friends and relatives to a ceremony to celebrate the occasion.On the day when a baby is one year old, there is a ceremony of One-Year-Old Catch.According to Chinese traditional custom, nobody will give any instruction or cue to the baby so that it is left free to choose by itself.Watching the baby catch the articles it likes, the family can then make prediction about its potential interest, future career and development.
第四篇：最新大學(xué)英語四級(jí)真題作文
2012年6月四級(jí)作文
On Excessive Packaging
Nowadays the phenomena of excessive packaging of goods are prevailing in our society: clothes swathed in tissue paper, placed in cardboard box and finally wrapped in well-designed plastic bags, imported bottles of grape wine packed in wooden boxes, fruits put in hand-woven baskets, to name but a few.There are several causes of excessive packaging.The first reason is that a large number of companies believe that they can attract customers’ attention and stimulate their purchasing desire by over-packaging their goods, thus gaining more profits.On the other hand, quite a number of consumers mistakenly hold that the more delicate the package is, the better the quality will be, thus encouraging excessive packaging.In my point of view, excessive packaging has disastrous consequences, including the loss of precious resources, excessive consumption of water and energy, and unnecessary extraction of scarce land for landfill.To solve the problem, it’s necessary to take the following measures.First, laws and regulations must be made to restrict excessive packaging of companies.In addition, we need to raise consumer’s awareness that excessive packaging doesn’t equal to high quality and advocate packaging recycling.【解析】
本次作文的話題是“過度包裝”，話題不斷新，考生應(yīng)該都比較熟悉。寫好本篇作文的關(guān)鍵在于緊跟題目所列提綱：現(xiàn)象——原因——看法和建議，確定相應(yīng)的寫作結(jié)構(gòu)。重點(diǎn)分析產(chǎn)生此現(xiàn)象的原因有哪些，把最重要的兩三點(diǎn)羅列下來。最后，根據(jù)分析出的原因提供相應(yīng)的建議。
范文首段開門見山，首先一句話總結(jié)如今社會(huì)上過度包裝現(xiàn)象盛行，而后舉出一些實(shí)例補(bǔ)充說明。
第二段重點(diǎn)從公司和消費(fèi)者兩方面論述產(chǎn)生過度包裝的原因。公司方面是為了吸引顧客，刺激消費(fèi)，贏取更多的利潤；消費(fèi)者方面是認(rèn)為包裝越精美，質(zhì)量越好這種錯(cuò)誤的消費(fèi)意識(shí)。
接下來作者表明自己的看法，認(rèn)為過度包裝會(huì)導(dǎo)致很多問題：稀缺資源的流失；水，能源的過度消耗以及產(chǎn)生不必要的垃圾場(chǎng)等。
2011年12月四級(jí)作文
Directions: You're allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will by commenting on the humorous saying, “Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world.I’ve done it hundreds of time.”You'd write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.Outlines:
1.堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的意志是成功的重要保證。
2.意志堅(jiān)定的人才能完成偉大的使命，3.學(xué)生也是這樣，不刻苦學(xué)習(xí)，終究不會(huì)成為有用之才
Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will
With the coming of a brand new era full of opportunities and innovations, the issue of how to succeed has aroused growing concern in the public.Although there are thousands of ways to success, in my opinion, a strong will is the important guarantee of success, just as a proverb says, “Where there is a will there is a way”.The long history of human being has proved that only those who have a strong will can fulfill great mission and achieve success at last.Nothing succeeds without a strong will.Take Mao Zedong, one of the great founders of the People’s Republic of China, as an example.If without the strong will to save Chinese people from heavy disaster and build a prosperous, democratic and civilized new country, how could he drive Japanese out of China and become such a famous leader in the world?
If we as a student want to be successful in the future, the strong will on hardworking is the most important.Nowadays, we have been entering an information age with rapid update of knowledge.Who firstly seizes and keeps up with the development of advanced information can succeeds at last.Therefore, studying hard to get more knowledge and improve our ability to handle complicated problems as possible is the only way to lay the solid foundation of future success.Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will
“Where there is a will, there is way” is an old proverb which almost everyone knows, but not all understand it so well.Actually, it means that if you are really resolved to do something, no matter how difficult it might be, never give up.In fact, strong will is a kind of good quality which successful people should own.A great man is always one who has a firm resolution and an inflexible spirit.One will never succeed all his life without a firm will to get the final victory.As a rule, great tasks are accomplished by men of strong will.For example, Dr.Sun Yatsen, the founder of the Republic of China, set the Chinese people free from the Manchurian rule through a long period of hard struggle.Many of his attempts failed and many of his followers were killed, but he had an inflexible spirit and stuck to his cause.Finally, he made the revolution of 1911 a success.The same is true of men in all walks of life.It is quite obvious that there is nothing difficult in the world, if you make up your mind to do it, you will certainly accomplish your end.That stands to reason.So as for students like us, we should have a good attitude towards failure.Facing with difficulties and failures, keep heads up and never give up.Besides, we should make full preparation, though strong will help us overcome the difficulties, it is not for person who has no preparation.2011年6月大學(xué)英語四級(jí)考試
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Doing Shopping Online
With the development of the Internet, shopping is no longer a tiring thing.Just click your mouse to choose the articles you like, and the purchase is done.You don't even have to step out of the room.It seems all easy and quick.However, people's opinions vary on this trend.Some believe that on line shopping is time and money saving.With plentiful selection options, they can buy whatever they like at any time convenient.Still others insist that mis-purchasing alone is annoying enough, not to mention the credibility of the sellers and the safety of their accounts.In my opinion, the convenience and excitement of on line shopping is beyond all doubts.In the meantime, we must always bear in mind that certain traps do exist, so we'd better make sure the sellers are trustworthy before buying.In addition, we should also guard ourselves from the potential hackers who might steal our account information.文章點(diǎn)評(píng)：
這是一篇“中等偏上”的學(xué)生作文。本文先對(duì)網(wǎng)購熱潮進(jìn)行簡介，引出全篇；接著對(duì)網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物的正反兩方面進(jìn)行對(duì)比；最后提出自己的看法結(jié)束全篇。整體看思路清晰，邏輯嚴(yán)密，行文流暢，用語較為地道。
下面說一下這篇文章的有待提高之處：
1.文章結(jié)構(gòu)上，能看得出該同學(xué)試圖采用議論文的“三段式”（提出問題、分析問題、解決問題）。但是，以“With the development of the Internet”為開首語，有些落入俗套，有硬套模板的嫌疑。稍加注意，應(yīng)該能寫出更好的句子。
2.微觀語言點(diǎn)方面，有些語句稍顯啰嗦，比如With plentiful selection options? 簡化成With plentiful selections? 更好，意思沒有絲毫減損，表達(dá)力反而增強(qiáng)許多。
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With the help of the ever rapid development of internet technology, online shopping is coming into fashion in most of cities.Online shopping is welcomed by most people due to various reasons.From the perspective of consumer, it can save some time for people who don't have much spare time.Just click the mouse, they can get whatever they want while staying at home.For the retailers, it can cut some costs for those who don't have much circulating funds.They don't have to rent a house and spend money on employees compared with the traditional trade mode.However, there are still some defects in online shopping.First, lace of face to face deal makes online shopping less reliable and trustworthy.Second, people will lose the fun of bargain.It is undeniable that shopping on the internet has become an irresistible trend in modern society.It's of great urgency that we need to regulate the relative laws accordance with the rapid growth of online shopping.Only in this way can we enjoy the pleasure and convenience of online shopping without the concern of being treated.點(diǎn)評(píng)：
本次四級(jí)作文探討的是最近的熱點(diǎn)話題之一——互聯(lián)網(wǎng)網(wǎng)購。目前網(wǎng)購的風(fēng)靡程度是眾所周知，因此，考生對(duì)于該話題還是比較熟悉的。但是，比較特殊的是，題干所列出的要求的是考生從一個(gè)客觀的角度來闡述該話題，而不是簡單陳述自己的意見。所以，考生應(yīng)當(dāng)審清楚題，在寫作時(shí)不僅僅要列出網(wǎng)購的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，還必須給出相應(yīng)的缺點(diǎn)。
按照四級(jí)作文的要求，考生在第一段時(shí)應(yīng)該總述現(xiàn)象并引出話題；
第二段考生應(yīng)當(dāng)從正反兩方面來論述網(wǎng)購，分別鋪陳其優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)；關(guān)于優(yōu)點(diǎn)，網(wǎng)購的優(yōu)點(diǎn)很多，考生可擇其最突出顯著的方面來闡述，比如說網(wǎng)購可以節(jié)省很多時(shí)間；網(wǎng)購可以節(jié)省很多成本開支等；其次，缺點(diǎn)方面考生可以把重心放在誠信方面；為了不至于跟優(yōu)點(diǎn)相比，缺點(diǎn)方面太輕，考生可以考慮稍微提一下其他缺點(diǎn)，比如說與傳統(tǒng)購物相比，網(wǎng)購少去了很多砍價(jià)的樂趣；
第三點(diǎn)要求考生對(duì)于第二段列出的缺點(diǎn)給出自己的建議。此處我們可以根據(jù)第二段列出的缺點(diǎn)方面給出相應(yīng)的防范應(yīng)對(duì)措施。
整篇作文話題比較好展開，難度不大，只要考生審好題，列出相應(yīng)點(diǎn)，相信作文不會(huì)他是難題。
2010年12月大學(xué)英語四級(jí)考試
How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?
1.目前不少父母為孩子包辦一切
2.為了讓孩子獨(dú)立, 父母應(yīng)該……
Nowadays, an increasing number of families in China have only one child.Most parents love and care for children so much as to help children deal with every problem.Consequently, children get used to depending on their parents in everything and lack the ability to solve problems independently.There are some effective ways for parents to help their children to be independent.To start with, parents should give their children more chances to experience the world and life around them.Thus their children can enhance the capability to overcome the difficulties and handle problems independently.In addition, parents should offer enough assistance when their children need advice.In this way, they depend on their parents in a right way and can solve problems independently when they face the same one next time.Last but not least, parents should allow
their children to make decisions independently.From the above discussion, I strongly believe that parents should help their children to be independent by instructing them in a proper way rather than planning and considering everything for them.2010年6月大學(xué)英語四級(jí)考試
Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling
1.如今不少學(xué)生在英語(論壇)學(xué)習(xí)中不重視拼寫，2.出現(xiàn)這種現(xiàn)象的原因是…
3.為了改變這種狀況，我認(rèn)為….Nowadays, students attach little importance to the spelling of words in the process of English study.This phenomenon greatly influences students’ writing and brings on worries among teachers.There are possibly three reasons contributing to this phenomenon.First, exam-oriented education makes students pay little attention to spelling.Second, some teachers should also be responsible for it because they don’t emphasize the importance of spelling during teaching.Last but not least, some students are too lazy to recite words.Since spelling is one of the most important factors in English study, due attention should be given to it.As I see it, first, exams should be modified to add spelling into it.Then, schools should establish effective mechanisms to help teachers as well as students to realize the importance.Finally, students should be interested in word spelling.Only in this way, can we surely realize the importance of spelling and make improvement.2009年12月大學(xué)英語四級(jí)作文
Creating a Green Campus
1.建設(shè)綠色校園很重要 2.綠色校園不僅指綠色的環(huán)境3.建設(shè)綠色校園，我們應(yīng)該……
Recently, with the idea of making and maintaining “a green earth” being the focus of the society, “green campus” has become a more and more popular concept in universities or colleges, which, undoubtedly, will bring us an ever-lasting benefit to both our campus and our society.The concept of “green campus” does not only mean a green environment but also refers to an environmental sense in people’s mind.Campus plays a crucial role in educating the young generation and the consciousness of “green campus” will definitely produce a profound effect on students’ various environmental protection activities after their graduation.What’s more, the young generation is under the burden of severe environmental pollution and there are many problems waiting for them to solve.To make “green campus” come true, firstly, it is necessary to work out effective principles for the development of sustainable and recyclable campus.Secondly, it calls for people’s awareness of the serious pollution around us and actual action to reduce the waste.Last but not least, it is necessary to strengthen the ties between campus and society, so as to ensure that “green campus” can work smoothly with the co-effort of the whole society.2008年12月四級(jí)作文
Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags1、一次性塑料袋的使用。
2、一次性塑料袋帶來的問題。
3、限制一次性塑料袋的意義。
In our daily life, most people use disposable plastic bags for shopping and other purposes.However, the excessive use of disposable plastic bags has resulted in a great damage to our environment.The problems brought by disposable plastic bags are various, ranging from environment to people's health.In the first place, it takes years for the plastic products to decompose and be absorbed by the soil.Secondly, the use of disposable plastic bags will indirectly do harm to people's health.Sometimes people buy hot food packed into disposable plastic bags for saving time to wash their dining utensils.Yet they are not informed of the chemical material the bags release in high temperature.Therefore, they are also eating the poisonous stuff while enjoying the tasty food.It's enlightening and significant that our government has banned the use of disposable plastic bags officially, and people will be charged for the use of such bags.This action is reducing the consumption of bags to a great extent.It is a great measure for the sustainable development of our earth.滿分作文實(shí)錄
Education, which gets children ready for challenges in the future, is of vital importance to them.Nowadays, more and more parents tend to send their kids to art classes to make sure that they will maintain an advantageous position in the increasingly fierce competition, which has given rise to a wide range of controversy.Some people support this idea, arguing that it will give the children a well-rounded education.In contrast, those who criticize the idea contend that it will do harm to the children rather than benefit them.From my point of view, the above-mentioned issue should be approached through a thorough analysis of the specific situation at hand.On one handclasses.Firstly, art classes can provide the kids with an effective way to relax themselves after a whole day’s tedious study.By listening to music or drawing some pictures, they can relax themselvesand return to study with renewed vigor.Secondly, children will have more opportunities to learn a different kind of culture if they take art classes.By being exposed to art, they are able to broaden their horizons.As a matter of fact, many subjects are interrelated(at)such a tight level that the study of one subject may help that of another.For example, the practice of drawing pictures may promote children’s understanding of geometry and math.Thirdly, children will have more chance to make different kinds of friends by taking art classes, which is very important to their mental health.On the other hand, parents should never force their children to take art classes if they show no interest or talent in art.Children may feel depressed or even refuse to take other classes if they are forced to learn art lessons against their own will.Only when they are indeed interested in art can we
In conclusion, whether parents should send their children to art classes should be determined by children’s interests.If they like, we may let them take the classes.But if they have no interest, parents should respect their will.(368 words)
2009年6月大學(xué)英語四級(jí)考試作文
（1）現(xiàn)在越來越多的博物館向公眾開放（2）有人認(rèn)為會(huì)帶來很多問題。（3）我認(rèn)為…
Free Admission to Museums?
An increasing number of museums are open to the public for free in our daily life nowadays.However, no consensus is reached among the public on the influence it brings about on the museums and the visitors involved.Some people hold the opinion that free admission to museums will contribute to numerous problems ranging from the spoiling of the environment to the damage to the facilities of the museums.It is known that some visitors will throw away the garbage here and there, which will do great damage to the surroundings of the museums.What’s worse, it will take a lot of time and effort for the museums to fix the facilities destroyed by the little kids who come to the museum without company of their parents.However, there are different opinions on whether visitors should enjoy free admission or not.Some people maintain that visitors can acquire new knowledge and enrich their lives by visiting various museums.As far as I am concerned, just as every coin has two sides, it is true to the above phenomenon.Therefore, we are expected to take measures to educate the public to observe the rules and regulations when visiting the museums.Thus, more and more individuals will enjoy a favorable environment.2008年6月21日四級(jí)作文題目：
1.娛樂活動(dòng)多種多樣，2.娛樂活動(dòng)可以使人們受益，也可能帶來危害
3.作為大學(xué)生，我認(rèn)為
Recreational Activities
In people’s daily life, there are various recreational activities apart from studying or working, ranging from Karaoke or dancing to computer games or sports games.Such activities are beneficial as well as harmful to us.On one hand, they can help us not only build our body and mind but also improve our communication and understanding with friends because most of these activities are done with others.On the other hand, if we spend too much time on singing, dancing or other games, we might fail to concentrate on our duties such as studying or working, which in turn may lead to further consequences.As far as I’m concerned, recreational activities should be done within a certain limit so that we can keep a proper balance between recreation and studying or working life.
第五篇：大學(xué)英語四級(jí)寫作
Exercise
For this part, you are allowed 30minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling.You should write at least 120words following the outline given below:
1.如今不少學(xué)生在英語學(xué)習(xí)中不重視拼寫
2.出現(xiàn)這種現(xiàn)象的原因是……
3.為了改變這種狀況，我認(rèn)為……
Outline：
I.fewer and fewer students pay attention to their word-spelling
1.can only imitate the pronunciation of a word but be incapable of spelling it
II.There are some causes for it
1.fewer and fewer students need to write English essays
2.the goal of most students to learn English is to speak it and pass the examination
3.the wide use of electronic devices such as e-dictionaries and computers
III.Measures should be taken to solve the problem.1.we need to attach great importance to word-spelling.2.should write English as much as they can
3.the dictations should be reinforced in the class.滿分范文：
Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling
Nowadays, students attach less importance to the spelling of words in the process of English study.This phenomenon greatly influences students’ writing and brings on worries among teachers.There are possibly three reasons contributing to this phenomenon.First, exam-oriented education makes the students pay less attention to spelling.Second, some teachers should also be responsible for it because they don’t emphasize the importance of spelling during teaching.Last but not least, some students are too lazy to recite words.Since spelling is one of the most important factors in English study, due attention should be given to it.As for me, I think, first, exams should be modified to add some factors into it, which would help student pay more attention to spelling.Then, schools should also set effective mechanisms to help teachers as well as the students to realize the importance.Finally, for students themselves, they can, through other ways, make them be interested in word spelling.Only by these can we surly realize the importance of spelling and make improvement.大學(xué)生應(yīng)該學(xué)選擇什么書讀？
Reading regularly has long become a common part of people’s life.And reading preference has always aroused the greatest concern.What impresses us most is according to the table, the percentage of book circulation in an American university library, which shows that the circulation of popular fictions, general nonfictions, science/technology/education books and art/ literature/poetry books accounts for 65.9%,18.2%,10.8%and 5.1% respectively.The reasons for the phenomenon are varied.Among the various reasons, the appealing content of the popular fictions plays an important part.That is to say, thanks to its appealing plot, popular fictions attract more people than other
types of books do.What is more, science and art books which require readers’ knowledge on
relevant fields are highly demanding.For example, it’s hard for students majoring in chemistry to
understand Browning’s poems, and vice versa.When talking about my reading preference, I think I prefer to science books.On the one hand,in order to deepen what I’m specializing in, I need read more books relevant to my major.On the
other hand, these books can also broaden our horizons.In brief, college students should choose
books according to their interests and needs.2.對(duì)比選擇型作文模板
1.Different people have different views on——
2.Some people prefer,——.3.Others tend to, ——.4.As to me, I agree with /to ——
5.Of course,——.6.For example,——
7.But,——
8.The following reasons can account for my preference——
9.The main reason is ——.10.A good example to illustrate is ——
11.Fur another,——
12.From the foregoing（綜上所述）,——
1．開門見山直入主體，表明對(duì)某事人們的不同看法。(上述12點(diǎn)譯文)
2．表明一部分人的看法。
3．另一部分的看法。
4．作者的看法。
5．承認(rèn)自己不贊同的看法有一定的合理性。
6.舉例說明支持第五句。轉(zhuǎn)折指出這種觀點(diǎn)的不足。啟下句過度到下段具體闡述自己所支持的觀點(diǎn)的理由。
9.支持觀點(diǎn)的理由一。
10.舉例說明理由一。
11.理由二。
12.總結(jié)全文，從長遠(yuǎn)看來。
Is a test of spoken necessary?
A test of spoken English will be included as an optional component of the College English
Test(CET).Different people have different views on it.Some prefer to have such a test.Others
tend to decline any kind of test of spoken English.As to me, I agree with the first statement.Of course, a test of spoken English is very difficult to handle and the test time is not long
enough to fully display participants’ ability to spoken in English.For example, if a candidate
draws a topic which he or she is not familiar with, it’s hard to show his or her command of spoken
English.But without such a test, some people may not have motivation to practise spoken English.The following reasons can account for my preference.The main reason is that such a test enhances college students’ awareness of the importance
of spoken English.A good example to illustrate is that several years ago, college students only
stressed reading and writing skills, ignoring to building up listening and speaking ability.For
another, a certificate of such a test will make job-hunting easier.From the foregoing, I think a test
of spoken English is of necessity.3.問題解決型作文模板
1.Withthedevelopment/improvementof ——,——.2.It is necessary that——.3.On the one hand, ——.4.On the other hand, ——
5.Therefore, how to —— is worth paying attention.6.Firstly——7.Secondly——
8.For example,——9.Thirdly, ——.10.In other words,——
11.In fact, ways to —— are countless.12.It’s time that ——
1．空格一處鋪墊，空格二處填寫某一問題。
2．關(guān)注解決現(xiàn)象引出的問題很必要
3．解決問題很必要的理由一。
4．解決問題很必要的理由二。
5．承上啟下，填要解決的問題。
6.解決辦法一。解決辦法二。
8.舉例解釋解決辦法二。
9.解決辦法三。
10.闡明解決辦法三。
11.指出解決問題的辦法多種多樣。
12.強(qiáng)調(diào)解決問題時(shí)不可待。
Reduce Waste on Campus
With the improvement of living standard, waste on campus is increasingly serious.It is
necessary that something should be done to reduce waste on campus.On the one hand, our waste
has already caused a great loss of precious resources, such as water and electricity.On the other
hand, our waste adds our parents as well as our society a burden.Therefore, how to eliminate waste on campus is worth paying attention.Firstly, we should
turn off the light when we leave our dorms or classrooms so as to save electricity as much as
possible.Secondly, we should stop wasting water when we bath, or wash clothes and dishes.For
example, we should use a basin when we clean faces.Thirdly, we should be economical.In other
words, when go shopping, we should buy only what we really need.In fact, the ways to reduce waste on campus are countless.It’s time that we cultivate the
habit of thrift in every possible way.4.觀點(diǎn)論證型作文模板
1.It is true that——.2.However,——.3.I think——.4.—— can be listed as follow.5.First of all, ——
6.Secondly ——
7.For example——
8.Thirdly,——
9.A case in point is ——.10.It goes without saying that ——
11.There is no doubt that ——
12.In conclusion ——
1．提出普遍存在地觀點(diǎn)。
2．談不同地觀點(diǎn)。
3．自己地觀點(diǎn)，即文章地論點(diǎn)4．過度句，轉(zhuǎn)折到觀點(diǎn)地論證，由題目選擇具體的詞。5．論
證理由一
6．論證理由二。
7．舉例具體說明理由二。
8.論證理由三。
9.舉例說明理由三。
10.提出執(zhí)行該觀點(diǎn)時(shí)應(yīng)注意的事項(xiàng)。
11.得出結(jié)論。
12.總結(jié)全文。
It Pays to Be Honest
It is true that most of us value honesty highly.However, nowadays we often confront
confidence crisis such as cheating, overcharging, fake commodities, etc.I think that we should be
honest.The reasons can be listed as follows.Firstly, only honest people can be truly respected by the others and can make more friends
over a long period of time.Secondly, honesty, which is the traditional virtue of the Chinese people,can make our life easier and more harmonious.For example, consumers will not be afraid of being
overcharged if dealers are honest, and on the contrary dealers can win more customers.Thirdly,honesty can make our society more stable.A case in point is that Singapore which is a society of
trustworthiness and integrity has a comparatively low criminal rate.It goes without saying that being honesty is of benefit to both the collective and the
individual.There is no doubt that we should foster the spirit of honesty.In conclusion, laying
stress on honesty will become the public morals in our society.應(yīng)用文作文模板
建議信模板
Dear——
1.I am delighted to learn that——.2.It——.3.In my opinion,——.4.On the one hand,——.5.On the other hand, ——
6.As to the——, I suggest——.7.If ——
8.It is unnecessary for you to——
9.In addition,——.10.I am sure——
11.Please inform me ——
12.I am looking forward to ——
1．寫信的原因。
2．引出作者的建議。
3．表達(dá)建議內(nèi)容。
4．提出建議的理由一。
5．建議的理由二。
6．具體到某一方面的建議內(nèi)容。
7．供被建議人選擇的條件。
8．建議內(nèi)容的另一方面。
9．其它的建議。
10．對(duì)建議內(nèi)容的評(píng)價(jià)。
11.對(duì)建議內(nèi)容所做出的承諾。
12.表達(dá)個(gè)人的愿望。
Sincerel
Signature:(個(gè)人簽名)
A Letter to a Schoolmate
June 7th, 2010
Dear Wang,I am delighted to learn that you will visit me for a week during this national days.It has been
several years since we departed last time, and I am looking forward to your visit.In my opinion,Nanjing is your best choice for this holiday.On the one hand, there are many places of interest and
historical sites in Nanjing.On the other hand, Nanjing is a cultural center with various artistic and
musical performances.As to the famous sites, I suggest that you should visit the Confucius Temple and Dr.Sun
Yat-sen Mausoleum.If you are interested in parks, the XXX park will be your best choice.It is not
necessary for you to bring anything except your sweaters since it is a little chill in the evening.In
addition, as there will be many people at the railway station, you should not leave your belongings
unattended!I am sure you will enjoy your visit in Nanjing.Please inform me once you have made your decision.I am looking forward to seeing you
soon.，yours
Sincerely Yours,Zhang Ying
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