第一篇：【雅思作文批改】G類雅思寫作真題——寫一封投訴信件

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【雅思作文批改】G類雅思寫作真題——寫一封投訴信件

雅思作文是雅思考試中比較難得分的部分，很多雅思考生在雅思作文上都很頭疼，怎么都拿不到好的雅思作文分數，所以大家掌握一些雅思作文模板、雅思作文技巧是非常重要的。為了讓大家快速的提高雅思寫作成績，這里跟大家分享關于“【匯總】晟睿教育原創(chuàng)板塊：雅思作文批改|雅思作文范文“的相關內容，希望大家耐心的復習，認真的準備，好好總結，到時你會發(fā)現，其實要取得雅思作文高分并沒有想象中的那么難！更多雅思作文批改請關注晟睿教育-雅思作文批改欄目!

雅思作文題目：G類雅思寫作真題

You bought a TV a week ago but when you got home you discovered it did not work properly.You called customer service to report the problem but you have not yet received any help.? introduce yourself ? explain the problem ? and state what action you would like from the company 考生原文

My name is Wang Xin, I live in China and I am 40 years old.Yesterday, the manager of ‘Pen-pal Online’ gave me your address, he said that you are open-minded, easy-going and willing to help others, so I am writing this letter to you to acquire some advices.After finished a huge project, database management program exactly, I want to have a vacation this summer.Some friends told me that your country, England, is a good choice.There are many scenery spots and a great variety of historical sites, the costals built in the 11th century is my favour.Although I have enjoy them thousands time via the TV or the internet, I want to touch them myself this time, breathe the fresh air and visit Stonehenge.How amazing it is!I have booked the airline ticket from Beijing to London on July 15th.If it is more convenient to you, I think we can meet each other during my vacation.I will stay in London for 2 days, so if you have time, please contact me at July 16th or 17th.Maybe we can talk about Shakespeare and have a dinner together.I am very happy to make a new pen-pal from England and eager for your reply.Best regards, Wang Xin 批改 by Angela令狐

本次批改嚴格按照IELTS小作文評分標準進行。IELTS小作文評分項：

TA(內容的完整性), CC(連貫性及一致性), GRA(語法范圍及精準度), LR(詞匯資源)。文末會進行總評及打分。004km.cn 004km.cn

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總評分6.0分（TA6.0 CC5.5 LR6.0 GRA6.0）

1.內容上相關且合理，但是注意抱怨信不要寫的太個人感情化，更加正式的語言更有力度。2.用詞良好，語法變化中從句的使用不多，但是可以看到非謂語動詞的痕跡了。3.可以注意文章中多余的細節(jié)，有些東西沒必要提到就不用提。

雅思寫作不同于學校中所學的英語寫作，雅思考試是一種針對全方位英語能力的水平考試。對于雅思寫作基礎薄弱的同學來說，想要靠自學考到雅思7.0真的需要很大的毅力，若是失敗的話，浪費時間，浪費報名費不說，還有可能錯過了入學最佳時機，小編在這能給你的建議就是：快快關注我們下方的微信公眾號吧，晟睿教育的老師們會時不時推送一些雅思作文模板給到大家的。對于雅思基礎不錯的同學來說，想要得到雅思寫作高分也是一個不小的挑戰(zhàn)，多看一些雅思作文批改|雅思作文范文對烤鴨們來說總是好的！

第二篇：雅思G類寫作信件（本站推薦）

1． 投訴信

題目：A night club just opened near where you live.You are very unhappy about the situation because it disturbs the peace of the neighborhood.Write a letter to your local government official.Say who you are and explain why you are unhappy and suggest what should be done about it.（投訴信）

范文：

Dear Sir or Madam，I'm writing to express my dissatisfaction with the horriblesituation I have been faced with recently.親愛的先生、女士：

我寫此信是要就我最近所面對的可怕狀況表達我的不滿。

I'm a resident of Rose Park on St.Johnson Street.I had been enjoying my life since I moved here five years ago.However, a nightclub recently opened right across the street from my apartment block has completelychanged everything.我是圣約翰遜大街玫瑰花園的居民。自我五年前搬到這里，我的生活一直很愉快。然而最近開在我們樓對面街道上的一家夜總會卻改變了一切。

To begin with, the club itself is very unsightly.It has blackened windows with sexually explicit pictures displayed on the outside, which I find extremely offensive.Also, the noise level during the early hours of the morning is so intense that it has really disturbedmy sleep.Consequently, I find that I am unable to concentrate fully on my job, as I am often too tired.首先，這家夜總會本身就很不堪入目。其窗戶搞得黑乎乎的，外面貼著相當淫穢的畫，這一點令我感到尤其難以忍受。此外，凌晨時刻的噪音太高，嚴重影響了我的睡眠，所造成的結果是由于太過疲倦，我無法全力專注于工作。

I work as a surgeon in the local hospital;therefore, I am sure you can see the gravity of my complaint.Indeed, the consequencesof my making any mistake due to my lack of sleep can be very serious indeed.我是本地醫(yī)院的外科醫(yī)生，因此，我相信您能夠看到我投訴的嚴重性。事實上，由于我缺乏睡眠而造成任何錯誤的后果將是十分嚴重的。

I understand that, as a member of the local government, you have the power to close the club down.Nevertheless, I know very clearly that people need to make a living and I would not like to be responsible for people losing their jobs.Hence, if you could please ensure that the offensive pictures are removed, and the noise level is kept to a minimumlevel, I would be more than satisfied.我深知，作為當地政府的一員，您有權關閉這家俱樂部。然而，我也很清楚：人們都需要謀生，而我也不愿意對他人失去工作而負任何責任，因此，如果您能確保那些令人難受的畫被撤掉、噪音控制在最低水平，我就將十分滿意了。

I look forward to your reply.Yours sincerely，Kenny Gao

期盼得到您的答復。

您真誠的

Kenny Gao

2． 投訴信

You have recently made a purchase from the local department store.However, when you arrived home, you found a fault with it.Write a letter to the manager, say what the product is, explain the problem and say what you’d like to be done about it.你最近剛從商店購買。然而，當你回家時，你發(fā)現了一個毛病。給經理寫一封信，說這個產品是什么，解釋這個問題，說什么你想做。

Dear Sir or Madam，I’m writing to complain about the recent purchase of a woolen sweater from your department store on Philip Street, on August 25, 2007.I recently washed the sweater in cool water, as per the instructions on the label.However, when I removed it from the machine, the garment was stretched out of shape and no longer fits.I phoned the store last Tuesday(June 21)and spoke to the department manager, a Mr.Morris, who was rather rude on the phone and informed me that I could not get a replacement sweater as it was purchased at a reduced price.I felt really upset, for I have been a loyal customer of your store for many years and until this incident, never have had any complaints.I, therefore, feel disappointed to be treated in such a manner.I would, however, be perfectly satisfied if you would kindly replace the sweater or refund my money, whichever is more convenient.I look forward to hearing from you soon.Yours truly，Kenny Gao 親愛的先生或女士，我寫信是想抱怨最近從百貨公司購買的一件羊毛衫在菲利普街,2007年8月25日。我最近在冷水洗毛衣,按照標簽上的說明。然而,當我將它從洗衣機里取出時,這件衣服伸出了,再也不合身了。我打電話給商店上周二(6月21日),部門經理說,莫里斯先生,他是相當粗魯的在電話里告訴我,我不能得到一個替代毛衣以降低的價格購買。我感到真的很心煩,因為我多年來一直是貴店的忠實顧客,在這一事件之前,從來沒有過任何投訴。因此,我對受到如此待遇深感失望。

然而,我會很滿意如果你想請?zhí)鎿Q毛衣或者退還我的錢,哪個更方便。我期待著很快收到你的來信。敬啟, 肯尼高 3． 問詢信

You wish to immigrate to a country but are not sure about the requirements and application procedure.Write a letter to the immigration officer of this country to ask about, say who you are and explain your qualifications and experience.你想移民到一個國家,但不確定需求和應用程序。寫一封信給這個國家的移民官詢問,說你是誰,解釋你的資歷和經驗。

Dear Sir or Madam，I would like to receive information regarding the immigration procedures to Canada.I am 34 years old and am currently working as senior mechanical engineer at ABC Tech Company in Shanghai.I hold a Bachelor’s and a Master’s degree from Shanghai Tongji University.I am married and my wife will be having our first child this coming autumn.I have been considering immigrating to Canada for quiet some time and would like to know if my qualifications and work experience make me eligible to apply.I have enclosed my resume as well as a bank statement of my current financial status and my English proficiency level.I’d also like to know if my wife and I can make one application, or whether we’ll have to apply separately.In addition, if you could send me information regarding permanent residence in Canada, I’d be most grateful.I look forward to receiving the information at your earliest convenience.Yours truly，Kenny Gao 親愛的先生或女士，我愿意接收有關加拿大移民程序的信息。

我34歲,我目前在美國廣播公司做高級機械工程師在上?？萍脊尽Ｎ页钟袑W士,上海同濟大學的碩士學位。我結婚了,我的妻子在今年秋天將有我們的第一個孩子。

我考慮移民加拿大已經安靜一段時間,想知道如果我的資歷和工作經驗使我有資格申請。我隨信附上了我的簡歷以及我目前經濟狀況的銀行聲明和我的英語等級證明。

我還想知道我和我的妻子可以使一個應用程序,或者我們是否需要單獨申請。此外,如果您能給我一些有關在加拿大永久居留的信息,我將不勝感激。我期盼早日收到您的信息。敬啟, 肯尼高 4． 問詢信

You are going to an overseas university to study.Write a letter to the university asking about accommodation and airport pickup.你要一個海外大學學習。大學寫信詢問住宿和機場皮卡。

Dear Ms.Morris，I’m writing to inquire about some information regarding accommodation at your university and the airport pickup issue.I’m a mature, female student and would prefer, as far as possible, to share some accommodation with other mature female students, preferably in a quiet location.However, I have no objection to living on campus as long as it is quiet enough for me to study.I’m also a non-smoker and would prefer to share with other non-smokers although this is a preference rather than a request.I will arrive in London on August 26 from Shanghai and would be very grateful if you could send someone to pick me up or, at the least, send me the details of how to get to the university by myself from London Heathrow Airport, as this will be my first time to the UK.I’m looking forward to receiving your reply and meeting you in person in September.Yours sincerely，Susan Gao 親愛的莫里斯女士，我寫信是想詢問一些信息關于你的大學住宿和機場接機的事宜。

我是一個成熟的女生,希望盡可能與其他成熟女生,最好是在安靜的位置。然而,我不反對住在校園里,只要我足夠安靜的學習。我也不吸煙,所以希望與其他不吸煙者合住,雖然這只是一個傾向而非要求。

我將于8月26日從上海抵達倫敦,將十分感激如果你能派人來接我,或者至少,送我的細節(jié)怎么去大學自己從倫敦希思羅機場,因為這將是我第一次來英國。我很期待收到你的回復,在九月見到你本人。你的真誠, 蘇珊高 5． 推薦信

Someone you know well is applying to a university abroad.Write a recommendation letter for him, say how you got to know him and why he is worth your recommendation.你認識的人是申請國外大學。為他寫一封推薦信,說明你認識了他,為什么他值得你的建議。

Dear Sir or Madam，I’m writing to recommend to you the outstanding personality and the super ability for learning of Mr.Robert Jiang.I got to know Mr.Jiang a few years ago while I was teaching British literature to a class of English majors in which he was a student.His excellent performances on several occasions such as group discussions and open debate really took me by great surprise.Never had I met a young student speaking English so fluently and accurately.His insight into British literature as a whole as well as the perspectives he cut into the analysis of characters in the literature aroused my great curiosity about his first-class and unique capability of doing research work.Later on, upon his completion of the Bachelor degree, he moved on to pursue his study for a Master’s degree in the same field of study and I was very lucky to be his supervisor.Mr.Jiang has always been an honest person.He is very friendly to people and is very easy-going.Many of his classmates have mentioned on different occasions about how helpful he was to them and to which I simply cannot agree more.Now Mr.Jiang is applying to your prestigious university for a chance to continue his Ph.D research.I hope you’ll find he is just as good as I’m now recommending him to be.And should you have any further questions, please feel free to contact me at the following e-mail address:……

Truly yours，Kenny Gao 親愛的先生或女士，我寫信是想向你推薦優(yōu)秀的個性和江先生羅伯特的超級能力的學習。

我必須知道江先生幾年前當我教英國文學一類,他是一個英語專業(yè)的學生。他的出色表現在比如分組討論和公開辯論數個場合真的帶我大驚喜。我從未遇到過英語講得如此流利、準確的年青學生。他了解英國文學作為一個整體的觀點他切成人物文學的分析引起了我極大的好奇心他一流的獨特研究能力的。后來,在他完成學士學位后,他繼續(xù)追求他攻讀碩士學位的研究領域和我很幸運成為他的上司。江先生一直是一個誠實的人。他對人很友善,很容易相處的人。他的許多同學在不同的場合提到過如何幫助他,我不能同意?，F在江先生是你的名牌大學申請一個機會繼續(xù)他的博士學位研究。我希望您會發(fā)現他正如我現在推薦他。,如果您有任何進一步問題,請隨時與我聯系,以下的電子郵件地址:…… 真正的你的, 肯尼高 6． 建議信

A hotel you stayed in recently asked guests to write to the manager and suggest ways in which they could improve their service.Write a letter to the manager, explain who you are, say what you liked about the hotel, and suggest ways in which they could be improved.你最近呆在酒店要求客人寫的經理和建議可以改善他們的服務方式。經理寫一封信,解釋你是誰,說你喜歡什么酒店,建議可以改進方式。

Dear Manager，I’m writing in response to your invitation to guests who have recently stayed at your hotel to suggest ways in which you could further improve your service.I was a guest at your hotel last month and I found that the level of customer service was excellent.Indeed, every member of your staff, from the manager to the room-cleaning maid, was, without exception, extremely polite and helpful.The standard of the rooms was far beyond what I had expected.However, I found that the hotel restaurant stopped serving breakfast at 8:30am.As I was on holiday, I would have liked to take my breakfast at around 9:30, thus I was unable to do so.I also spoke to several other guests who expressed the same disappointment.In addition, I feel that if you could supply newspapers in Chinese, the quality of stay for Chinese speakers, of whom the number has been on a steady rise in the past few years, would be considerably enhanced.I would be happy to know if my suggestions have turned out to be useful in your constant improvement of your overall service.Looking forward to your reply.Yours faithfully，Kenny Gao

親愛的經理，我寫在你的邀請的客人,最近住在你的酒店提出的方法可以進一步提高你的服務。上個月我是一個客人在你的酒店,我發(fā)現水平的客戶服務非常好。事實上,你們的每一名員工,從經理到房間打掃的女傭,無一例外,非常有禮貌和樂于助人。房間的標準遠遠超過了我的預期。

然而,我發(fā)現賓館的餐廳早上八點半便停止供應早餐了。當我度假的時候,我很想把我的早餐九點半左右,因此我無法這樣做。我也跟其他幾位客人談過,他們也表達了同樣的失望。另外,我覺得,如果你們能夠提供中文報紙,呆會說中文的的質量,其中數量一直在穩(wěn)步增長在過去的幾年里,將會大大增強。

我很高興知道我的建議被證明是有用的在你不斷提高你的整體服務。期待你的回復。你忠實的, 肯尼高 7． 建議信

You have a friend who is about to enter university and he wants you to advise him on which subject to specializein.He is very interested in history, but computer science offers better job prospects.Write a letter to give him some advices.你有一個朋友即將進入大學,他想要你服從specializein勸他。他對歷史很感興趣,但計算機科學提供了更好的就業(yè)前景。寫一封信給他一些建議

Dear Jack，You have asked me for my advice concerning whether you should study history or computer science at university and now I am trying to give you some useful suggestions.You must keep in mind that, above all, your university training is a preparation for your future career.Therefore, your first consideration should be to study a subject which will best equip you to earn a living.There is no doubt that the field of computer offers far wider job opportunities than history.Besides, we are now in the age of a Hi-tech revolution.In the foreseeable future, not only will it be necessary for everyone to be computer-literate, it will also be necessary for him to be equipped with computer skills merely to earn a living!History, I’m afraid, however fascinating it may be, offers few career prospects.Of course, you don’t have to devote all your time at university to studying computers and nothing else.On the contrary, I would recommend that you keep up your reading of history in your spare time.In that way, you will find that your leisure hours are enriched while you prepare yourself for a worthwhile career in computers.Hope you find these suggestions useful in helping you make your decision.Yours sincerely，Kenny Gao

親愛的杰克，你問我我的建議關于是否應該學習歷史或計算機科學大學,現在我想給你一些有用的建議。你必須記住,最重要的是,你的大學培訓是你的未來的職業(yè)生涯做好準備。因此,您要考慮的第一個問題應該是研究主題最好的裝備你謀生。毫無疑問,計算機領域提供遠比歷史更廣泛的就業(yè)機會。

此外,我們現在在高科技革命的時代。在可預見的未來,它不僅會使用電腦對每個人來說都是必要的,這對他也有必要將配備計算機技能僅僅是謀生!然而有趣的歷史,恐怕,它可能提供一些職業(yè)前景。

當然,你不必把你所有的時間在大學學習計算機。相反,我建議你保持你的閱讀歷史的在你的業(yè)余時間。這樣,你會發(fā)現你的閑暇時間是豐富而你準備自己在電腦的一個有價值的職業(yè)。

希望你會發(fā)現這些建議有用的在幫助你做決定。你的真誠, 肯尼高 8． 申請信

You have seen a job advertised in your local newspaper.Write a letter of application.Introduce yourself and give details of your experience and say why you’d like the job.你見過一份工作在你的當地報紙廣告。寫一封申請。介紹你自己,給你的經歷的細節(jié),說你為什么想要這份工作。

Dear Sir or Madam，I’m writing in response to the advertisement you placed in Chicago News daily for a librarian on Monday, Aug.23.I graduated with a Master’s degree in telecommunications in 1992 and began my career at California State University as a young teacher.In 2002, I was promoted to associate professor and DeputyDirector of the Department of Telecom Engineering.In the past ten years, I have been actively involved in academic researches and have published several articles in “Telecom Now”, “Engineering Research” and “Telecom Strategies”.I also teach marketing strategies on a part-time basis at the university.However, my husband has recently been relocated to Chicago by his company and I am, therefore, seeking a position in the same area in Chicago.I have enclosed my resume that outlines in detail my qualifications and experience as well as an open letter of recommendation from California State University.Please give me a feedback at your earliest convenience if my qualifications meet your requirements.I look forward to hearing from you soon.Yours sincerely，Sue Huang

親愛的先生或女士，我寫的廣告你放置在芝加哥每日新聞圖書館員周一,8月23日。

我畢業(yè)于碩士學位電信1992年加州州立大學,開始我的職業(yè)生涯作為一個年輕的老師。2002年,我被提升為副教授、DeputyDirector電信工程系。

在過去的十年里,我一直積極參與學術研究和發(fā)表了幾篇文章“電信”“工程研究”和“電信戰(zhàn)略”。我也教大學兼職基礎上的營銷策略。

然而,我丈夫最近被其公司搬遷到芝加哥,我,因此,尋求在芝加哥的一個位置在同一地區(qū)。我隨信附上了我的簡歷,詳細概述了我的資歷和經驗以及開放的加州州立大學的推薦信。在你方便的時候請給我一個反饋,如果我的條件符合你的要求。我期待著很快收到你的來信。你的真誠, 蘇黃 9． 請求信

You have lost your credit card.Write a letter to the bank manager, explain where and how you lost it and any other relevant details.Ask the manager to cancel the old card and send you a replacement one.你失去了你的信用卡。銀行經理寫一封信,解釋,和你如何失去了它和任何其他相關細節(jié)。問經理取消舊卡,寄給您一批替換品。

Dear Sir，I am writing to confirm the loss of my credit card.I telephoned your office earlier today.The details of my card are as follows.It is a Master-card in the name of Kenny Gao.The credit card number is 3241 3578 6688.I have had it since 1999.This card is valid from 1999 to 2008.I lost the card yesterday(September 8, 2006)at about 10:30 in the morning.The only time I used the card that day was to buy a pair of sports shoes at Carrifour on Jinqiao Road.By accident, I left the card at the cashier’s, but the shop assistants there could not find the card.Could you please cancel my card immediately and make the necessary arrangements to issue me with a replacement card? I can be contacted at the following address: Room 201, No.32, 555 Lane, Huashan Road.Should you ever wish to call me, here is my number: 123456789.Thank you for your assistance.I look forward to hearing from you.謝謝您的協助，期盼收到您的答復。

Yours faithfully，Kenny Gao

親愛的先生, 我寫這封信是為了確認我的信用卡的損失。今天早些時候我給你的辦公室打電話。我的名片的細節(jié)如下。這是一個高的名義萬事達卡肯尼。信用卡號碼是3241 3578 6688。我有它自1999年以來。這張卡有效期從1999年到2008年。

我是昨天(2006年9月8日)上午10:30。唯一一次我用卡片那天買一雙運動鞋在金橋路上的加樂福。無意間,我將卡留在了付款,但店里找不到卡。

請馬上取消我的卡,并請做出必要的安排發(fā)給我另一張卡嗎?我可以聯系以下地址:201房間,32號555巷,華山路。如果你想給我打電話,這是我的號碼:123456789。謝謝你的幫助。我期待著你的來信。謝謝您的協助,期盼收到您的答復。你忠實的, 肯尼高 10． 日常信

You are writing your first letter to a pen pal.Introduce yourself and tell her that you will be visiting her country during the summer vacation and suggest meeting her.你寫第一封筆友。介紹你自己,告訴她,你將在暑假期間訪問她的國家,建議遇見她。

Dear Sue，How are you? I obtained your name and address from Pen Pal International.I am very glad to write to you and we become pen pals.Let me first introduce myself.I’m currently working as an English teacher at Shanghai Only toya College.I graduated from Shanghai Foreign Languages University in 1988, majoring in English literature and linguistics.I got my Master’s degree in pragmatics in 1998.I like playing erhu(a kind of Chinese musical instrument)and listening to pop music.I am also very interested in traveling.Oh, yes, I am a great bar-goer!

This summer, I will be traveling to Australia.I will be attending a conference on behalfof my college in Sydney from July 10 to 16.After the conference, I plan to do some sightseeing in Australia, maybe five more days.If you are free, I would be very happy to meet you in person.Perhaps we could have lunch together.Well, let me finish here.I am already eagerly awaitingyour reply to this first letter.Please tell me all about yourself and your interests.I hope we can become good friends.Yours truly，Kenny Gao 親愛的蘇，你好嗎?我獲悉你們行名及地址從國際筆友。我很高興給你寫信,我們成為筆友。讓我先介紹一下我自己。我目前工作在上海只有托雅大學當英語老師。我1988年畢業(yè)于上海外國語大學,主修英語文學與語言學。1998年我有了語用學碩士學位。我喜歡拉二胡(一種中國樂器)和聽流行音樂。我也非常感興趣。哦,是的,我是一個偉大的bar-goer!今年夏天,我將去澳大利亞。我將參加一個會議代表我的大學在悉尼從7月10日到16日。會議結束后,我打算做一些觀光在澳大利亞,也許5天。如果你是免費的,我將很高興見到你。也許我們可以一起吃午飯。

好吧,我就寫到這里吧。我已經迫不及待地awaitingyour回復這首字母。請告訴我關于你自己和你的利益。我希望我們能成為好朋友。敬啟, 肯尼高 11． 日常信

A friend of yours is going to your home city for a conference.He will spend a few days there.He has written you a letter, asking for advice about things to see and to do while he is there.Write a letter to him and give him some advice.你的一位朋友將你的家鄉(xiāng)參加一個會議。他將在那里呆幾天。他寫了一封信,詢問看和做的事情,而他就在那里。寫一封信給他,給他一些建議

Dear Mr.More，Thank you for your letter dated August 23, 2006.I was very pleased to learn that you will be visiting Shanghai from September 25 to 30.I hope the following information will help you enjoy your stay in my hometown.First of all, Shanghai is a big and busy city.There are many international quality hotels and restaurants as well as shopping centers and entertainment places.However, I think you would like to see some interesting places that well represent the city.I know you are interested in art and history, so firstly, I suggest you visit Shanghai Museum, one of the biggest in China.Secondly, not far from the museum is the famous Bund, where you will also have a wonderful view of Pudong: the Oriental Pearl TV Tower, and Jinmao Tower—the third highest building in the world!You will see people from all over the world touring around the Bund.Other interesting places are Suzhou—a beautiful city that is famous for its gardens;Hangzhou, capital of Zhejiang Province, which is very famous for its West Lake.If you would like to see an old-fashioned village with the most distinctive features of the region of waters in the Changjiang River Delta, I will highly recommend Zhouzhuang, which is about a one-hour drive from Shanghai.I hope these suggestions will be helpful.As you only have a short stay in Shanghai, you probably will not be able to do much more sightseeing.But if I can help in any other way, please let me know.Looking forward to meeting you here in Shanghai!

Yours sincerely，Kenny Gao 親愛的先生，2006年8月23日,謝謝你的來信。我很高興得知你將于9月25日至30日訪問上海。我希望以下信息將幫助您在我的家鄉(xiāng)過得愉快。

首先,上海是個大而忙碌的城市。這里有很多國際標準的賓館和餐廳以及購物中心和娛樂場所。

然而,我認為你想參觀一些有趣的地方,代表著城市。我知道你有興趣在藝術和歷史,所以首先,我建議你參觀上海博物館,中國最大的一個。

其次,離博物館不遠的外灘,在那里您將可以飽覽浦東的景色:東方明珠電視塔、金茂大廈-世界第三高的建筑和世界!你會看到人們來自世界各地游覽外灘。

其它有趣的地方是:蘇州,一個美麗的城市,以園林而聞名;杭州,浙江省的省會,以西湖而聞名。如果你想看到一個老式的村莊的最具水鄉(xiāng)特色的長江三角洲,我會強烈推薦周莊,離上海約一小時的車程。我希望這些建議能夠對您有所幫助。當你只有一個短暫停留在上海,你可能將無法做更多的觀光。但是如果我可以幫助以任何其他方式,請讓我知道。期待在上海見到你!你的真誠, 肯尼高 12． 謝絕信

Your friend is getting married and he has invited you to his wedding.However, you can’t make it for a certain reason.Now write a letter to explain why.你的朋友結婚,他邀請你去他的婚禮。但是,你不能讓它因為某種原因?，F在寫一封信解釋為什么。

Dear Steve and Monica，Thank you very much for the invitation to your wedding.Unfortunately, I won’t be able to attend.The reason, I’m pleased to say, is that Wendy is pregnant and the baby is due more or less on the day of your wedding!Although she said it’d be all right for me to come over alone, I feel it’s the least I could do as husband, that is, to be by her side and to take of care her after the baby arrives.We’re both hoping it’ll be a girl and plan to name her Margaret, after her grandmother.But if it’s a boy, we plan to name him Fredrick.No particular reason except that we both like the name.Anyway, I would like to wish you both a long and happy life together and hope to come to see you as soon as Wendy is well enough.Have a wonderful day and don’t forget to send us some photographs.Cheers for now，Ken and Wendy 親愛的史蒂夫和莫妮卡, 非常感謝你的婚禮的邀請。不幸的是,我不能參加。

我很高興地說,原因是,溫迪懷孕了,孩子是由于或多或少你的婚禮當天!雖然她說這對我來說會好過來,我覺得這是我能做的最起碼的事作為丈夫,也就是說,在她身邊,在照顧她的嬰兒的到來。

我們都希望這將是一個女孩,并打算叫她瑪格麗特,她的祖母。但是如果是一個男孩,我們計劃的名字他弗雷德里克·。沒有特別的原因,除了我們都喜歡這個名字。

不管怎樣,我想祝你們健康長壽,幸福的生活在一起,希望盡快看到你溫迪很足夠。有一個愉快的一天,別忘了給我們寄一些照片。干杯, 肯和溫迪 13． 邀請信

You are arranging a dinner party.Write a letter to your friend to invite him or her to the party.Say why you are holding it and give the necessary details.你安排一個晚餐聚會。寫一封信給你的朋友邀請他/她參加晚會。說你為什么拿著它,給必要的細節(jié)。

Dear Bob，How are you? I haven’t seen you for a while.Hope all is well.Anyway, I’m writing because I’m inviting some friends over for dinner and I thought you might also like to join us.The dinner will be at my place, next Wednesday at 7 o’clock.Mary is doing the cooking, which I’m sure you’ll be pleased to learn.I’ll be taking care of the bar.I’ve enclosed a map of how to get to our new apartment.It’s a little out of the way, I’m afraid, but we’ve got a spare room and you’re welcome to stay for the night if you wish.In fact, there’s an exhibition on at the museum, so we can go and take a look on Thursday.One request, though: bring your majiang with you so that we can play after dinner.Anyway, do let me know if you can make it.My new number’s at the top of the page, so you can give me a call sometime.Take care and see you soon.Ken 親愛的鮑勃，你好嗎?我還沒見到你了。希望一切都好。不管怎樣,我寫因為我邀請一些朋友過來吃晚飯,我想也許你會喜歡加入我們。

晚餐將在我的地方,下周三晚上7點鐘。瑪麗是做飯,我保證你會喜歡學習。我將照顧酒吧。我附上的地圖怎么去我們的新公寓。這是一個小的,我害怕,但我們有多余的房間,歡迎你留下來過夜,如果你的愿望。事實上,有一個展覽在博物館,所以我們可以在周四去看一看。不過,一個請求:帶上你的打麻將,這樣我們可以在晚飯后玩。

無論如何,請讓我知道如果你能做到。我的新號碼的頂部的頁面,所以你可以給我打電話。照顧,很快見到你?？?14． 感謝信

After having been involved in an accident, you were looked after by another person.Write a special letter to express your thanks.參與事故后,你被另一個人照顧。寫一個特殊的信表達謝意

Dear Sue，I am writing to express my heart felt gratitude to you for your kindest help when I was involved in that terrible traffic accident.You saw how seriously I had been hurt when you rushed me to the hospital.I was hit from the back by a taxi and was thrown forward for at least three meters.Though I did not lose my consciousness, the sharp pain was really killing me.If it had not been for your timely assistance, giving me first aid and sent me to hospital right away, I fear that the consequences might have been much more serious.The doctor said that my wounds are healing quickly and that I would be able to stand up again in a week’s time.In addition, the taxi company has agreed to pay my hospital bills.Anyway, everyone agrees that it was your quick-witted response in this emergency that has led to this satisfactory result.I feel I owe you so much, so please accept my most sincere thanks.Best wishes，Ken 親愛的蘇，我寫這封信是為了表達我衷心的感謝你的親切的幫助當我遭遇那場可怕的交通事故。你看到我怎么嚴重受傷在你將我匆忙送往醫(yī)院。我被一輛出租車從背后撞上,向前拋出至少三米。雖然我沒有失去知覺,但那劇烈的疼痛確實殺死了我。如果不是你及時的協助,給我急救,馬上送我去醫(yī)院,我擔心其后果可能更嚴重。

醫(yī)生說我傷口愈合得很快,我能在一個星期的時間再次站起來。此外,出租汽車公司已同意支付我的醫(yī)療費用。

無論如何,每個人都認為這是你的機智靈敏的反應在這個緊急導致這令人滿意的結果。我覺得我欠你太多,因此,請接受我最真誠的謝意。最好的祝愿, 肯

第三篇：最新雅思G類閱讀真題

最新雅思G類閱讀真題

G類閱讀

一篇說 員工出差的報銷問題： 不確定能不能報銷的先找line manager(可能是其他人這個記不清了）；報銷要保存帳單；車票 和國內國際機票 國內機票只能經濟艙國際的可以其他； 住宿旅館要求 經常去的地區(qū)只能住單位聯系的酒店 有折扣 其他地區(qū)3星級或多少錢以下;其他文具啥的費用怎么樣忘了

另一篇 超市招聘長期員工，面試后給feedback，店內不讓查電子郵件，要提供有住址的帳單，其他不記得了

還有一篇說的幾個房屋廣告： 樓層高的那個不適合老人和殘疾人;天花板高的那個有儲物空間;附近有學校的適合家庭帶小孩;有一個房子下面有雙車庫，另一個外邊有雙車庫是迷惑項;有個房子internal需要 decorate，題目里說需要painting;另一個房子是房間已經update過了;還有一個房子是很小但是可以擴大，并且有風格特色，忘了是不是前面其中的一個。

第四篇大閱讀是鯨魚唱歌的題，只記得大概，第一部分是選擇1940年1950年一直到1980年都有什么成果，第二部分t/f/ng的前幾個西岸東岸魚群的弄得有點暈，后面選擇題，問鯨魚唱歌是小節(jié)重復還是主題重復啥的，還問了什么情況下變歌，還有同個海洋的鯨魚，地理位置近的歌聲相近之類的。

G類的作文

小作文向房屋中介介紹自己租房要求 到一個英語國家快開始工作了 全家要租房子

大作文 air travel 越來越便宜 有人說是positive 進步 有人反對，分析兩邊給出自己的觀點。

經驗分享如下：

雅思閱讀：速讀就是方法

聽力和閱讀我實在沒什么可以分享的,考前從來沒復習過,如果說技巧的, 可以介紹一個閱讀技巧,因為本人沒出來之前A類就考過閱讀8.5,所以

有點小經驗,大部分同學的問題是讀不完,我覺得最重要的千萬不要看不懂一句話,就沒完沒了的讀那句話,快速的向后看,通過后面的文章理解前面的，通過問題來猜測文章大意.先通讀問題,然后帶著問題速讀,注意一定要速讀原文??！雅思聽力：機經少看 聽力機井實在不建議大家看,對于要考7的同志門,最好的方法就是提高自己的實力,堅持聽新聞,每天10分鐘,就會有很明顯的提高,而且對口語很有幫助

如果實在要看機經,我建議大家就看看當中比較古怪的SECTION ,類似于什么大猩猩行為的,主要是對一些生詞熟悉。

雅思寫作提高：認真研究劍橋范文

我這幾次考試練習的很多,也找牛人改過作文,但是總覺得不得要領,后來問過一個考過的朋友,他說他沒有去練習,就是看劍橋后的原文。

這到提醒了我,我從來沒有好好看過例文,于是我把從1-7的 考官范文都找了出來,看一段,默寫一段,去體會他們的寫法,發(fā)現真的有很多平時我們很少用的句型,比如如果我想說“這個觀點很有價值” 我會說 This view is very valuable, 但是考官會寫This view is of infinite value。我發(fā)現他們超級喜歡用BE OF 句型。所以認真研究范文對改變我之前的寫作思路非常有幫助,所以最后一次到7, 是我唯一一次提前寫完了10分鐘~~~, 關于作文的長度,我建議大家,如果有時間,盡量要多寫,我的經驗是,觀點不用很多,但是要擴展的很充分,然后結尾其實很重要,如果結尾只是只簡單的重復一下觀點,分數不會很高。(個人感覺)澳洲雅思考試考場的選擇

關于考場的選擇,我覺得不用太在意,我之后又報了WOLLONGAN 的考試,但是因為這次已經過了,所以沒有機會去看看

雖然很多人都說ACL簡單,但是卻是我最低的一次~~,所以考場真的不是很重要,但是偏遠地區(qū)真的可能會好點

不過很多人的寫作都在NSW得了7 ,但是NSW的口語給的不高(謠傳而且,僅供參考)雅思口語：要重視第一部分的簡單問題

最后簡單說下口語，我對口語的準備不是很多,基本上是考前看看3G預測,準備一下特別的話題,類似于什么雕塑呀,極限運動什么的。然后就是看見考官別緊張,看著他的眼睛說,不要表現的很像背的...還有不要小看開始的簡單問題,非常影響他對你的印象。

好了,希望我的經驗對大家有用,能幫助大家盡快突破雅思大關！

不多說了，先介紹一下基本情況：考了三次雅思，閱讀分別為8，8，9。除了第一次準備的時候提前一個月開始做劍橋，第二次考得時候提前三天每天做一小時閱讀題，第三次，就看了一下所有的題型和注意事項就上場了，可以說后兩次閱讀基本沒復習。別打我，我不是炫耀而是要用事實說明一個道理：閱讀能力一旦上來，方法一旦掌握，你就能駕馭閱讀部分的考試了，科不科學我不知道反正個人經驗如此。個人感覺雅思閱讀考試最重要的兩個方面，一是閱讀考試技巧解題方法的掌握，二是你自己的閱讀能力泛讀能力預測能力還有閱讀純體力。（其實什么考試的閱讀都是一個道理）

從這兩個方面努力，兩手都要抓！兩手都要硬！他們之間的關系與其說是加法，不如說是乘法，技巧×能力，不管哪個方面的提高都會換回明顯的回報。

材料：因為去年差不多也是這個時候做了不少殺托題，中間隔了幾個月冬天開始烤鴨，因為之間沒在讀過英文材料，所以提前一個月開始復習時就選了劍橋的4-7，閱讀另外還買了一本詞匯書---劍橋雅思詞匯精選，藍皮的，胡敏編。還有一本劉洪波的雅思閱讀真經1&2。

下面說說怎么用這三本書：

1.劍橋雅思詞匯精選，呵呵老師推薦的詞匯書，不薄的一本啊，應付雅思考試足夠了。里面的詞不難，我是完完全全把這本詞匯書當做閱讀詞匯掌握的（閱讀詞匯：不用拼不用讀不用會用，看到了能反映出是什么意思，就算記不起確切意思，也有個詞性的概念，褒貶意，指人的還是指物的。有些詞我說不出來它到底是什么意思，但是有個感覺，腦子里有個大概的概念）這本書有五分之一生詞的人，可以先畫出來生詞，然后就主要看這些畫出來的。多于五分之一的生詞，大家可以用楊鵬的17天搞定GRE單詞里面的方法搞定雅思閱讀詞匯，這個比背GRE詞簡單不知道哪兒去了。

最后強調：掌握到閱讀詞匯的程度就好了，大家不需要在詞匯這里下太多功夫，雅思閱讀詞匯要求并不高，不用太過害怕擔心。

2.雅思閱讀真經1&2，這本是我一同學介紹給我的，大家要是看這本書的話，一定要注意了：千萬不要做題，這本書的題很詭異，不過文章都還不錯，覺得自己在泛讀方面需要提高的童鞋不要錯過，畢竟劍系列的題是有限的，大概只能做一個月，大家可以每天做套劍橋，再加上泛讀3篇這里的文章，不過癮的可以讀5篇每天呵呵，泛讀是很有趣的，不用弄懂每一句，就像在看科普文章。

最后強調：別做它的題，它的講解有些我也不很認同，真有讀不懂的文章也不用深究，畢竟劍橋系列才是最重要的，要知道所有的別的材料和考試真題都是有差距的，我們只能選擇貼近真題的材料練習。練泛讀到后來是要掐時間的，有意識的培養(yǎng)自己快速泛讀同時抓住重點的能力很重要。有興趣有時間的可以把不認識的專有名詞，沒有就算了，不重要。劍橋系列，絕對絕對是我們烤鴨過程中最最親密的好哥們啊，時間緊的人什么都不做也得看劍系列??！我以前一個老師說過，準備一個考試最好的材料就是真題，對烤鴨們來說，就是劍系列。4-7是比較適合現在的考試的，再往前的就有點“老”了。配套使用的有劍橋雅思考試全真試題解析，我手上有345的，看有沒有方法傳給大家。不過這套解析不是官方出版，而是一些中國老師的勞動結果，真有搞不明白的可也看看參考一下，里面也有每篇閱讀的譯文。

最后強調：真題是少而珍貴的，大家要計劃好，留出最后?？加玫?。做題方法最好也用劍題磨合，弄懂錯的原因，總結、想對策并避免下次再犯。劍橋題里的生詞是值得我們記憶的，我每次做完一套都會。用1個小時查出生詞抄到紙上（大家放心一開始可能有點多但是后來會越來越少）2 統計這三篇各題型的錯誤率，拿著正確答案想問什么這么做，畫出真是想不明白的去請教別人 過兩天再回過頭去看錯誤的題，再做一遍看是不是還錯

每做完一本劍橋，統計這一本各題型的錯誤率找出自己最薄弱的題型，統計總結錯誤原因找出努力方向（因為有生詞犯的錯誤、因為句子語法沒讀懂句子、根本沒找到答案在文中的位置、問題理解失誤等等等等），每個人犯的錯都不一樣，你知道了自己那里犯錯，下次一定要注意，該背單詞的背單詞，沒讀懂句子的分析語法成分讀懂它，沒找到答案的加強文章定位能力，思維邏輯差異的努力用老外的方式思考問題。

我的雅思閱讀方法與做題技巧：這個我不知道能不能發(fā)，我是完全按照教我的老師的方法來的。先讀題目，劃題目中的重點詞，看題目和副標題，讀第一段，讀完回去題目做出現在第一段的題目，讀第二段，讀完回去題目做出現在第二段的題目，讀第三段，讀完回去題目做出現在第三段的題目。我也看了看平行閱讀法，里面的方法也還不錯。重要的是大家選定了一個方法要不斷聯系并掌握，這才是考試技巧的意義所在。

雅思題目中的重點詞幫助你定位題目在文章中的位置，優(yōu)先劃名詞數字專有名詞限定時間等等。

雅思各題型的解法大家拿不準可以去看平行閱讀法那個講的還不錯，光靠說的我覺得我說不清楚，而且發(fā)出來不是道那個老師會不會生氣啊，畢竟人家的版權（咦，平時盜版書盜版碟的還沒什么感覺，現在總覺得不好，我去問問那個老師，她要是沒意見看我有時間會不會寫寫詳細的出來再）

我的個人雅思經驗：雅思閱讀時間很緊，要注意留出填答題紙的時間，我的解決方法是一加強泛讀能力閱讀速度，最直擊問題根本的結果方法。二做題時拿一個計時器放旁邊，讀完題目記下時間，讀完第一段記下時間，讀完第二段記下時間，這樣就知道自己到底在哪里費時間了，針對性的去改正。一般來說練到最后讀完題目是兩分半鐘，邊讀邊做題，到文章完成一半時大概是十分鐘左右，十八十九分鐘時大概能完成一篇文章。但是大家都知道，文章難易和話題熟悉度是會對做題速度有很大影響的，我最后一次考試時閱讀有一篇講撒謊和人的面目表情肌肉活動的關系，這不就是美劇lie to me嘛！太熟悉了，不看文章我都能給你掰上幾十分鐘，文章做得信手拈來，講得非常淺顯還沒lie to me深呢。那次我前兩篇文章滿打滿算每篇十五分鐘完成任務，用的后半個小時做了最后一篇，歇了半天。當然，我們不能指著自己遇到的就是熟悉話題，主要還是自己能力的提高和應試的熟練。

還有一點，我的一個老師曾提出“雅思閱讀純體力”的定義，有人可能感覺到，前兩篇文章狀態(tài)還挺好，做到第三篇開始“累了”，速度下降，理解力下降，題做得越來越不順。排除每篇文章的難易因素，有些人只能集中精力40分鐘，再往后思維開始渙散，狀態(tài)越來越不好。這就是為什么不做則已，一做我們就要連做三篇或者三的倍數的篇數?？绝喪莻€體力活，我們就是要練出“體力”，在考場上，以飽滿的精神狀態(tài)迎接每一篇文每一道題。

自信很重要，有人拿到卷子看到密密麻麻的字瞬間頭重腳輕手腳冰涼，汗出的滑的拿不住筆了，結果越急越讀不懂，越讀不懂越急，終于杯具了。雅思閱讀不難，永遠是會者不難，只要努力過練習過，一定有成效一定有結果。第三篇做不完也沒關系，就算蒙也要把答案都填上去。

聽力沒上8，不過推薦大家使用王陸老師的點聽法和復式聽寫法，練上一段時間效果明顯啊。

我的雅思寫作口語都一般，不說啥了。

我周圍考雅思的人，有總分7.5的7的。閱讀單項有8的，聽力有8的（我：哈哈我是第一個9分 眾人：抽打~~~你看誰像你似的考了這么多次 我：。。。。），這兩項都是短期能提高的，大家要有信心，努力了就會有進步！

祝廣大的烤鴨們，做題如有神助，遇到的算是自己熟悉的話題，通篇沒有一個生詞，變態(tài)題目一個沒有，童鞋們考試從頭笑到尾！

PS:我這里有平行閱讀法，劍橋雅思考試全真試題解析345，怎么給大家？ 請有問題的同學樓下發(fā)帖，我會不時回來看看，哇咔咔我的第一個經驗帖哦。

還是那句話，個人經驗，偶有錯誤，僅供參考，找到適合自己的方法才是最重要的。

第四篇：雅思寫作真題

雅思寫作真題范文賞析：滿分篇

滿分的雅思大作文到底有何神奇之處，因為作文要想得滿分那是幾率非常小的事，下面為大家分享的這篇雅思真題寫作范文，既然是滿分，那么一定有大家可借鑒之處了

原題再現：

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.Write about the following topic:

Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions.Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.Write at least 250 words.考官范文：

As a result of constant media attention, sports professionals in my country have become stars and celebrities, and those at the top are paid huge salaries.Just like movie stars, they live

extravagantlifestyles with huge houses and cars.Many people find their rewards unfair, especially when comparing these super salaries with those of top surgeons or research scientists, or even leading politicians who have the responsibilityof governing the country.However, sports salaries are not determined by considering the contribution to society a person makes, or the level of responsibility he or she holds.Instead, they reflect the public popularity of sport in general and the level of public support that successful stars can generate.So the notion of ‘fairness’ is not the issue.Those who feel that sports stars’ salaries are justified might argue that the number of professionals with real talent are very few, and the money is a recognition of the skills and dedication a person needs to be successful.Competition is constant and a player is tested every time they perform.in their relatively short career.The pressure from the media is intense and there is little privacy out of the spotlight.So all of thesefactors may justify the huge earnings.Personally, I think that the amount of money such sports stars make is more justified than the huge earnings of movie stars, but at the same time, it indicatesthat our society places more value on sport than on more essential professions and achievements.參考翻譯：

在媒體不斷地推波助瀾下，我國的許多職業(yè)運動員已成為了明星和名人。那些頂尖的運動員收入頗豐。像一些電影明星一樣，他（她）們也是香車豪宅，生活極為奢華。

許多人覺得與那些掙高薪的頂級外科醫(yī)生，從事研究的科學家或有管理國家責任的高官相比，他（她）們的回報極為不公。然而，運動員的薪水并不是由一個人對社會所做出的貢獻或者其責任水平所決定。相反，它們反映的是從整體上來說體育運動在大眾中的普及性以及那些成功的體育明星對促進公眾對運動的支持所做出的貢獻。所以，“公平”的概念并不是問題關鍵之所在。

那些認為體育明星拿高薪無可厚非的人爭辯說那些有天賦的體育運動員實屬鳳毛麟角，高薪是對他（她）們嫻熟技能和通往成功之路所付出努力的承認。競爭持續(xù)不斷，運動員在他（她）們相對較短的運動生涯中迎接每次檢驗。來自于媒體的壓力令人窒息，而且他（她）們必須生活在鎂光燈下，沒有隱私。這一切都證明了他（她）們高薪得之無愧。在我個人看來，比起電影明星的高薪，體育明星的高薪更受之無愧。但與此同時，該現象也顯得出我們的社會更關注體育而非其它一些更重要的領域和成就。

第五篇：上半年雅思G類寫作試題匯總

2012年上半年雅思G類寫作試題匯總

120107 task1——書信——辭職信

task2——Some people prefer to see live events(such as music and sports), but others think it is better to watch the events on television.Discuss both of the view and give your opinion.120209 task1——友情信

Your friend wants you to take care of her child in the weekend.Write a letter to the friend: 1.express your willingness to this request;2.give some suggestions when they come and leave;3.introduce the activities you have planed.task2——科技類——Nowadays more and more people have consumer goods, such as refrigerator or washing machines.Do you think this development has more advantages than its disadvantages?

120218 task1——友情信—— 朋友要來我這里度假，而我又要出去度假：1.告訴朋友房門鑰匙放在哪里；2.自己住的房子需要注意什么；3.建議一些旅游的去處。

task2——社會類——小孩在城市里長大好，還是在農村里長大好

120310 task1——求職信

Your friend is applying for a job at a hotel and asks you to write a letter to the hotel that contains the following information: 1.How did you meet your friend? 2.What work experience does your friend have? 3.Why is he suitable for this job? task2——社會——People prefer to go shopping in the supermarket rather than small shops and local markets.Why has this happened? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

120331 task1——建議信——拆除老建筑的建議信。task2——社會——父母總是出差，對孩子以及家里其他人的影響。

120421 task1——書信——complain purchased product do not match with the description.task2——教育—— Some people believe that children will have a promising future if they are always rewarded by their parents or teachers when they well-behave.However, other people argue that if the children misbehave, they should be punished so that they could be qualified citizens.Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.120512 Task 1--You got some advice for job interview from your friend and you got the job.Write a letter to thank her.Task 2--More and more pollution and waste are created these days.What do these problems cause to people? What should we do to reduce the pollution?