第一篇：英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)

2014年濟(jì)寧市中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)

假設(shè)你是李華，已報(bào)名參加暑期英語(yǔ)夏令營(yíng)，根據(jù)夏令營(yíng)之活動(dòng)安排，你需要準(zhǔn)備一份關(guān)于英語(yǔ)夏令營(yíng)英語(yǔ)閱讀方面的發(fā)言稿，具體要求如下：

1.對(duì)英語(yǔ)閱讀重要性的認(rèn)識(shí)；

2.個(gè)人開(kāi)展英語(yǔ)閱讀的情況（1-2點(diǎn)具體做法）及感悟；

3.將來(lái)的打算。

參考詞匯：play an important part;in the past;borrow books;at the beginning;something easy and interesting, in the future, form a good habit of;read everyday;be helpful for.要求：1.詞數(shù)，100詞左右；（開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；）

2.可根據(jù)具體要求及參考詞匯適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名。

Good morning, everybody,I’m pleased to be here to talk about my English reading.As we know, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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Thanks for your listening.

第二篇：英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)

寒假作業(yè)Chinese Young People’s Life Goals Today

A recent survey shows that in today’s society, Chinese young people’s life goals have become more diversified than before.When young people are asked what they will struggle for, more than half of the respondents choose to earn enough money to buy a house and a car for themselves.In addition to this practical goal, some people, about 44%, pick up their life goal as improving their life quality or to be rich while 23.9% of the respondents are simply satisfied to have a good job.As for how to achieve their life goals, most of them prefer struggling to realize their dreams.The survey shows that the society is making progress and people’s life goals have become more practical.A recent investigation shows that nowadays the young in China have more diversified goals than ever before.More than half of the respondents aim at making more money to buy themselves a car and a house.44% of them want to improve their living standard while 43.3% of them hope to become rich.Besides, about a quarter of them wish to get a good job in the future.To achieve their goals, 71.9% of these young people said that they would struggle to overcome difficulties on their ways to success.Keeping optimistic

We can know from the passage if we are optimistic we can conquer different kinds of difficulties in life when we meet them, and we will succeed in the end.In my study, I will get discourage when I fail in an exam.I think I’m hopeless and can’t go to my ideal university.Whenever I am in bad mood, my teachers, especially my homeroom teacher, encourages me to be optimistic by saying the proverb “Nothing is too difficult if you put your heart into it.” They also tell me to study harder and give me good advice on my study.I’m grateful to them and agree with them.From now on, I’ll no longer feel frustrated when I fail in an exam.On the contrary, I will still keep optimistic and study harder because I know failure is the mother of success.As long as I don’t loose heart and work hard, I’m sure I’ll succeed in the end.第三周：基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作：

上周六下午，你們宿舍幾個(gè)同學(xué)去森林公園野炊，回來(lái)途中淋了雨。晚上李華頭疼得厲害。你給她量體溫，發(fā)現(xiàn)她發(fā)高燒。你馬上帶她去看醫(yī)生。醫(yī)生說(shuō)她得了重感冒，要臥床休息三天。請(qǐng)你代她給劉老師寫(xiě)一張請(qǐng)假條說(shuō)明情況，并幫她請(qǐng)假兩天（周一、周二），因此她不能參加周二的羽毛球比賽了。

Last Saturday afternoon, I went to Forest Park for a picnic with my roommates.Unfortunately we were caught in the rain on our way home and Li Hua got a dreadful headache.I took her temperature, finding that she was having a fever.So I took her to see the doctor right now and she was advised to be in bed for 3 days.Now I’d like to ask for two days’ sick leave for her, including Monday and Tuesday, and therefore she cannot take part in the badminton game on Tuesday

任務(wù)型寫(xiě)作

總結(jié)：The writer tried to tell us the importance of setting goals through a beaver’s story.After it built a house for the winter, it set another goal for the spring—to chew down a big tree and succeeded by working hard.你認(rèn)為制訂目標(biāo)很重要嗎？The quest for success always begins with a target.Goal setting is the focus of will to move in a certain direction.Without goals, one will never know what he’s doing, neither will he try his best to do it.你認(rèn)為制訂目標(biāo)后怎樣才能成功？There goes the saying, “Hard work leads to success.” If we want to achieveour goals, we must work hard.Also, we should stick to our goals and never give up when we are faced with setbacks.舉例:Last year I took part in an English speech contest.At the beginning I made up my mind to perform best though my English was not good enough.I tried every means and even stood in front of the mirror to practise again and again.Finally I succeeded and become one of the 10 students in the final competition.第四周：基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作

社會(huì)實(shí)踐是學(xué)校教育的一個(gè)重要組成部分；書(shū)本知識(shí)有限；社會(huì)實(shí)踐有諸多好處，能用所學(xué)的知識(shí)解決實(shí)際問(wèn)題，獲取經(jīng)驗(yàn)，了解社會(huì)，端正學(xué)習(xí)態(tài)度，激勵(lì)學(xué)習(xí)。

Most of the students think that social practice is not important.In fact social practice is an important part of school education.After all the knowledge we obtain from books is limited.Participation in social practice does a lot of good to us.For example, We can apply what we’ve learned to practical problems, from which we can get more

experience and have more knowledge about our society.Thus we will take correct attitude towards our studies and work harder.任務(wù)型寫(xiě)作

總結(jié)：From this passage,we know sometimes difficult conditions can really make a man strong, so parents should let their children eat bitter foods, do hard work and experience a hard life.描述你的童年生活 I grew up in an ordinary family, which is notso well off.I could understand the hardshipsmy parents were bearing at that time.Therefore, I work very hard now in the hopeof entering the university and changing thesituation of my family and me.你對(duì)童年生活的認(rèn)識(shí) 我認(rèn)為從某種意義上來(lái)說(shuō)，艱苦的環(huán)境可以激發(fā)一個(gè)人的潛能，為他的成功鋪平道路。I think that in a certain sense, difficult situations can stimulate a person’s potential and pave the way for him to succeed.一個(gè)人在經(jīng)歷了磨難之后可以變得堅(jiān)強(qiáng)，勇敢和忠實(shí)可靠。One can be strong, brave and faithful after all the hardships he has gone through.總而言之，我認(rèn)為溫室里的花朵經(jīng)受不起風(fēng)暴的洗禮，艱苦的生活對(duì)孩子來(lái)說(shuō)是有好處的。All in all, I think that flowers from a greenhouse can never withstand a storm and that a hard life is good for children.第四周周六下午

熱愛(ài)社會(huì)工作，性格樂(lè)觀，富有愛(ài)心和責(zé)任心；英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)流利，具有相關(guān)的教學(xué)經(jīng)驗(yàn)；工作時(shí)間：周六和周日，按每小時(shí)5元付費(fèi)；這份工作給自己在經(jīng)濟(jì)和人際關(guān)系方面的好處；:表達(dá)自己做好工作的決心：把快樂(lè)和舒適帶給自己工作的對(duì)象。

Dear Sir or Madam

I cannot wait to join in the social workers team in our neighborhood.Being optimistic, caring and responsible, I develop a passion for social work.Besides, I am so fluent in spoken English that I was once invited to teach a group of young kids English last summer.What’s more, I have no class on both Saturday and Sundays.If I’m lucky to get the position, It not only provides me a regular source of income by paying me 5 yuan by the hour but also does a lot to improve my skills in interpersonal relationships.It is certain that I will do what I can to bring joy and comfort to whomever I work for.I’m looking forward to your reply very soon.Sincerely yours

Ling ming

就學(xué)校取消高三音樂(lè)課這一事件給校長(zhǎng)寫(xiě)一封信

Dear principal ,I am writing in answer to the decision the school made several days ago.It reminds me of the British school where music plays a big part.In Britain,pupils can study an instrument like the piano or violin or the guitar.They also play music together as a class and have fun, even take part in concerts and organize bands.同學(xué)們對(duì)學(xué)校取消音樂(lè)課意見(jiàn)不一Therefore, no sooner had the school announced not to offer music lessons to Senior Two and Three students than we held a heated discussion about its advantages and disadvantages.So far, there has been no consensus on it.你對(duì)此決定贊成或反對(duì)？Personally, I am among those who argue against the decision largely because music lesson provide us with an opportunity to relieve our heavy academic pressure and promote the mutual understanding between students.（理由)以你自己或他人的感受來(lái)說(shuō)明開(kāi)設(shè)音樂(lè)課的利或弊。Actually, nothing please me than music lessons, for I am completely relaxed, not caring about study for a while.Also, I am ready to bear my heart to my classmates and feel close to each other.It is the charm of music that brings all of us a realization that there is still joy in our dull life.So it is better to continue music lessons

汕頭一模

1.為何與人合作：現(xiàn)代社會(huì)必備；可省時(shí)間和精力；更多互相學(xué)習(xí)的機(jī)會(huì)

2.與誰(shuí)合作：A與喜歡的人合作：心情愉快，同甘共苦B與不喜歡的人合作：學(xué)會(huì)容忍，學(xué)會(huì)挖

掘其優(yōu)點(diǎn)

3.你的看法：傾聽(tīng)別人意見(jiàn)，不把你的觀點(diǎn)強(qiáng)加給別人，有禮貌地指出別人的錯(cuò)誤

Good afternoon,everyone!the topic of my speech today is “being a good parner.”In this busy ,modern world ,if we want to complete our work more efficiently ,we must all learn to cooperate with others ,because not only can cooperation save us a lot of time and energy ,but also we can learn much each other.We`ll be lucky enough to find someone we like to cooperate with due to the fact that we can share our joy and sadness with him.however ,it can be difficult to cooperate with someone we dislike.In this case ,we`ll have to put up with some of his shortcomings and try to discover his advantages.In my opinion ,to be a good partner ,we should try to listen to others`opinions ,never force our ideas on others and if he makes mistakes ,try to point out in a polite way.Thank you for your listening!

失敗是件壞事嗎？

概括短文要點(diǎn)Failure is a commom thing in life.But there are different attitudes towards failure.Whoever draws a lesson from every failure becomes experienced and succeeds.失敗并非壞事，但從失敗中站起來(lái)并非易事So failure has a different effect on anyone who has a different attitude.As for me ,I like success.Meanwhile I don`t mind failure because it isn`t a bad matter ,and we cen stand up in the failure ,which isn`t indeed an easy matter.失敗對(duì)勝利者是必修課，重要的基本功As is known ,the defeat to a victor is actually an important basic skill and the required course.你對(duì)失敗的看法和態(tài)度(1)In my opinion ,we should take a positive attitude towards failure.As a matter of fact ,I think failure can stimulate our potential and from it we can learn a lot ,with which we can achieve success.Just as the saying goes ,”Failure is the mother of success.”

(2)In my opinion ,we should take an active attitude towards failure ,because most of us experience the failure thongh few of us are so lucky as to succeed.Failure tells us such things as why we failed and what should we do to correct the mistakes.Failure also tells us how to approach our goals and ensures us failure is the mother of success.廣州一模

基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作簡(jiǎn)介學(xué)校的植物園

1.概況：位于校園西南角，面積1000平方米 2.歷史：20年的歷史，2008年重建 3.特色：各種花卉、樹(shù)木、藥用植物 4.功能：美化校園、研究植物場(chǎng)所、休閑之地 5.其他：觀賞至少許一小時(shí)

Located at the south-west corner of our school, the botanical garden is spread over an area of approximately 1000 square meters.The garden is over 20 years old and was rebuilt in 2008.as you walk through the garden, you can see various kinds of beautiful flowers, trees and herbs.If you’re planning to explore the garden, set aside at least one hour.The garden makes our schoool more beautiful and it’s a fantastic place for students to study and learn more about plants or simply to relax for a while.讀寫(xiě)任務(wù)就學(xué)生違紀(jì)的處理方式寫(xiě)一篇簡(jiǎn)評(píng)

(1)Should Schools Suspend Troublesone Students?

概括要點(diǎn)：校長(zhǎng)的做法、想法、結(jié)果I recentl I recently read a news story about a school in Egland whose headmaster often suspends misbehaving students.The headmster believes that strong discipline improves hoth students’ behaviour and academic performance.His school’s exam results have greatly improved during his time in charge.你是否支持該校長(zhǎng)的做法，理由While I congratulate the headmaster on his success I do not agree with the methods he uses to achieve it.Suspending students should be the final type of punishment used for misbehaving students, not the first.Quickly removing such students from the school may be of some benefit to the remaining students but it doesn’t solve the problem of poor behaviour.It only shifts the problem from the school to the community.If these naughty students are not in school then they will only be making trouble out of school.Moreover, as the parents of many of these students are working, the students are unsupervised and thus are in danger of falling in with local criminals who will only encourage such bad behaviour and even teach them worse things.假設(shè)你是校長(zhǎng)，你會(huì)如何處理違紀(jì)學(xué)生？If I was in charge of his school I would place the naughty students in a class of their own, this way the other students could study in peace but the naughty studetns could remain under the supervision of the school and its teachers.The teachers in the naughty class would also have more time to focus on correcting the actions of these misbehaving students.（2）Should Schools Suspend Troublesone Students?

I recently read a news story about a school in Egland whose headmaster often suspends misbehaving students.The headmster believes that strong discipline improves hoth students’ behaviour and academic performance.His school’s exam results have greatly improved during his time in charge.I believe the headmaster is correct to take this action.If a few students are always behaving poorly in class then it will negatively affect other students’ learning.As a result, many innocent studetns will suffer and they will fail to achieve their full potential.If the naughty students are removed from the class then the others can learn in peace.Hopefully the misbehaving students will learn their lessons and when they return their behaviour will be better.If I was in charge of a school I would also be very strict with students who don’t behave well.I would first warn and then suspend students who interrupt the learning of others or disrespect their teachers.But I would also visit the poor student’s home and discuss the problem with his paents so we could find a solution.梅州一模寫(xiě)一篇短文介紹大豆的生長(zhǎng)過(guò)程

1.發(fā)芽的條件：水分充足，溫度適宜，種子就開(kāi)始發(fā)芽了 2.第一步：出現(xiàn)幼根，并朝下生長(zhǎng) 3.第二步：幼苗出現(xiàn)，并朝上生長(zhǎng)，直至變成綠色 4.第三步：主根、旁根、枝葉出現(xiàn) 5.第四步：數(shù)月后開(kāi)花結(jié)果

Where there is enough water and the temperature is right, the bean seed begins to grow.In the first stage , a small root comes out and begins to grow downwards.Then a small shoot begins to grow upswards, getting longer and longer until it turns green.At the same time the root continues to grow downward, becoming the main root together with side roots developing around it while the shoot develops leaves all around.It takes only a few months before the plant flowers and bears fruit.經(jīng)濟(jì)危機(jī)，大學(xué)生就業(yè)難

概括材料主要內(nèi)容This passage mainly tells us…;The story is mainly about…

Increasing unemployment would the biggest challenge for China this year with great numbers of rural and urban workers laid off.The government has launched a stimulus package of 4 trillion yuan to stimulate the country’s economy.現(xiàn)狀：經(jīng)濟(jì)危機(jī)影響全球，就業(yè)機(jī)會(huì)少，工人工資低As it is known to all, nearly all countries in the world have been hit by the global economic crisis, leaving few job chances and lower wages and salaries for ordinary people.建議：樹(shù)立正確的擇業(yè)觀，降低預(yù)期工資，先就業(yè)再擇業(yè)，自己創(chuàng)業(yè)，開(kāi)公司，展示自己的才華Under this circumstance, university graduates should have a proper attitude towards their future jobs.It is my suggestion that they should lower their expectation of their future wages or salaries.It’s a good idea for them to take up a job before considering which job to take.To make good advantage of tehir knowledge, they may set up their own business so as to show off their own talent.政府提供各種優(yōu)惠政策，免除各種稅費(fèi)，提供一定數(shù)量的無(wú)息貸款I(lǐng)n order to help those new graduates, the government has offered many favorable policies such as freeing all kinds of taxes.Supplying certain amount of loans without interest.I’m sure they will succeed and can have a bright future with the help of the government.

第三篇：英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)

Dear Andy,I‘m so glad that you‘ll be here with me and my family for the summer holiday.I‘m writing to express our warm welcome and introduce the activities during your stay here.In the morning ,some activities at school will be arranged.You‘ll visit our classrooms, reading rooms, labs, and so on.We‘ll take this opportunity to exchange our views, talking about school life, and so on.In the afternoon, you can tour around the city.And I‘ll act as your tour guide.Our city has changed a lot and takes on a new look.You can see what is our city like with your own eyes.At night , we can watch TV, play games and talk about what we‘re interested in.I‘m sure you‘ll enjoy yourself.I‘m looking forward to your coming.Yours sincerely, Li hua [名師點(diǎn)評(píng)]

本文行文自然流暢，文章要點(diǎn)齊全，意思表達(dá)真切。詳略得當(dāng)，重點(diǎn)突出。從語(yǔ)言使用的角度來(lái)說(shuō)，不但使用了一些生動(dòng)的動(dòng)詞，準(zhǔn)確的名詞，同時(shí)為了使本文串聯(lián)自然，又使用了時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)為連接詞，將文章按照時(shí)間順序敘述完整。

第四篇：七年級(jí)英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)

七年級(jí)英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)練習(xí)（1）書(shū)面表達(dá)。（20分）（文中不得出現(xiàn)真名，詞數(shù)80詞以上）

假如你叫Henry，請(qǐng)給你的筆友Mike寫(xiě)封回信，介紹你自己。

提示：

1、我的名字，年齡，生日，電話，所在學(xué)校。

2、我的家庭與關(guān)系，家人的名字與喜好。

3、我的喜好：電影，食物，運(yùn)動(dòng)，樂(lè)器，你在學(xué)校和在家所做的事情。（這些可用形容詞寫(xiě)出原因或看法）Dear Mike：

Thanks for your letter.Yours,Henry

第五篇：書(shū)面表達(dá)

中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)的考點(diǎn)集匯、講解和訓(xùn)練

【考點(diǎn)掃描】

書(shū)面表達(dá)是每年中考必考題型，是考查學(xué)生交際能力的一個(gè)重要組成部分。書(shū)面表達(dá)通常有三種形式：

1、書(shū)信、日記、通知、留言、假條；

2、看圖作文；

3、根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)提示作文。

無(wú)論是那一種書(shū)面表達(dá)形式，考生所寫(xiě)的短文都要緊扣主題、文理通順，要素完整，語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確、得當(dāng)、格式正確、無(wú)大、小寫(xiě)和拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)正確，能達(dá)到交際目的。【名師解難】 一.訓(xùn)練方法

1.記。認(rèn)真系統(tǒng)復(fù)習(xí)和背誦基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)和優(yōu)美的句子、句型。中國(guó)有句古話，叫“熟讀唐詩(shī)三百首，不會(huì)吟詩(shī)也會(huì)作”。同樣，要使自己具有較強(qiáng)的寫(xiě)作能力，首先應(yīng)該熟讀和背誦一些句型和短文。許多同學(xué)寫(xiě)出來(lái)的語(yǔ)言根本不符合英語(yǔ)的語(yǔ)言習(xí)慣，相當(dāng)一部分人有對(duì)照中文逐字翻譯的不良習(xí)慣，不去理會(huì)中英文的差異。大量的背誦和閱讀是提高寫(xiě)作能力的有效辦法，同學(xué)們?nèi)粲写罅康默F(xiàn)成語(yǔ)言積累在腦海里，自己寫(xiě)起文段來(lái)，就可以做到脫口而出，或是模仿、套用，甚至發(fā)揮。

2.練。每練一篇書(shū)面表達(dá)題，都要真正學(xué)到一點(diǎn)東西，不可貪多而邊學(xué)邊忘。平時(shí)可以采用循序漸進(jìn)、靈活多樣的練習(xí)方式。從根據(jù)提示詞寫(xiě)單句開(kāi)始，到寫(xiě)單句，然后到寫(xiě)幾句話，最后到寫(xiě)流利的文段。盡量嘗試多種形式的寫(xiě)作，如短信、說(shuō)明、通知、便條、明信片、看圖寫(xiě)作、根據(jù)表格或記錄寫(xiě)短文等。

3.寫(xiě)。要進(jìn)行實(shí)戰(zhàn)寫(xiě)作。要求自己在20分鐘內(nèi)寫(xiě)出100個(gè)詞的短文，并且質(zhì)量高、1 內(nèi)容全、形式正確。這樣形成習(xí)慣，考試時(shí)就能得心應(yīng)手。二.應(yīng)試策略

1.審題目：要切中題意?！吨锌伎荚囌f(shuō)明》指出，書(shū)面表達(dá)要切中題意。怎樣才能切中題意？就是要認(rèn)真審題，看到考題后，先不要急于動(dòng)筆，要仔細(xì)看清題目要求的內(nèi)容。在自己的頭腦中構(gòu)思出一個(gè)框架或畫(huà)面，確定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下筆，看懂題意，根據(jù)圖畫(huà)、圖表、提綱或短文提供的資料和信息來(lái)審題。審題要審格式、體裁、人物關(guān)系、故事情節(jié)、主體時(shí)態(tài)、活動(dòng)時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)等。

2.圈要點(diǎn)：防止遺漏要點(diǎn)。要點(diǎn)是給分的一個(gè)重要因素。為了防止寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中遺漏要點(diǎn)，同學(xué)們要充分發(fā)揮自己的觀察力，把情景中給出的各個(gè)要點(diǎn)逐條列出。

3.列提綱：為寫(xiě)作做好準(zhǔn)備。根據(jù)文章要點(diǎn)短文的中心思想將主要句型、關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)記下，形成提綱。

4.定基調(diào)：定出時(shí)態(tài)、人稱(chēng)、順序、開(kāi)頭、結(jié)尾。5.寫(xiě)全文：寫(xiě)短文時(shí)要做到以下六個(gè)方面：

(1)避免使用漢語(yǔ)式英語(yǔ)，盡量使用自己熟悉的句型。幾種句型可交替使用，以避免重復(fù)和呆板。

(2)多用簡(jiǎn)單句型，記事、寫(xiě)人一般都不需要復(fù)雜的句型?？蛇m當(dāng)多使用陳述句、一般疑問(wèn)句、祈使句和感嘆句。不用或少用非謂語(yǔ)或情態(tài)動(dòng)詞等較復(fù)雜的句型。(3)注意語(yǔ)法、句法知識(shí)的靈活運(yùn)用。1）語(yǔ)態(tài)、時(shí)態(tài)要準(zhǔn)確無(wú)誤。

2）主謂語(yǔ)要一致，主語(yǔ)的人稱(chēng)和數(shù)要和謂語(yǔ)一致。3）注意人稱(chēng)代詞的賓格形式。

4）注意冠詞用法，例如： He is an honest student.中的an不能寫(xiě)成a。

5）注意拼寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)和大小寫(xiě)，例如：receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。

(4)描寫(xiě)人物時(shí)，要生動(dòng)具體，例如：

1）外表特征：tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。2）服飾顏色：red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。3）內(nèi)心境界：glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。4）感情描寫(xiě)：love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。5）動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)：come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。

(5)上下文要連貫。上下文的連貫性也是評(píng)分的一條原則，因此同學(xué)們應(yīng)把寫(xiě)好的句子，根據(jù)故事情節(jié)，事情發(fā)生的先后次序（時(shí)間或空間），使用一些表示并列、遞進(jìn)等過(guò)渡詞進(jìn)行加工整理，使文章連貫、自然、流暢。同學(xué)們應(yīng)注意下面過(guò)渡的用法： 1）表示并列關(guān)系的：and, as well as, or… 2）表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的：but, yet, however… 3）表示時(shí)間關(guān)系的：when, while, after, before, then, after that… 4）表示因果關(guān)系的：so, therefore ,as a result… 5）表示目的的：in order to, in order that , so as to, so that… 6）表示列舉的：for example , such as… 7）表示總結(jié)性的：in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking…

(6)不會(huì)表達(dá)，另辟蹊徑。中考作文給分是以要點(diǎn)和語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確度而定，不以文采打分。造句越簡(jiǎn)單準(zhǔn)確越好，造復(fù)合句容易出錯(cuò)，容易被扣分，閱卷場(chǎng)上有句話：“錯(cuò)誤面前人人平等，文采好不加分”。如遇到個(gè)別要點(diǎn)表達(dá)不出來(lái)或難以表達(dá)，可采用變通的辦法，化難為易，化繁為簡(jiǎn)?？傊炀渥右_、得體、符合英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣。(6)改病句：認(rèn)真檢查，改正錯(cuò)誤。中考作文時(shí)，由于時(shí)間緊、內(nèi)容多，同學(xué)們出錯(cuò)在所難免。因此，改錯(cuò)這一環(huán)節(jié)必不可少。中考作文評(píng)卷是根據(jù)要點(diǎn)、語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確性、上下 3 文的連貫性來(lái)給分，根據(jù)錯(cuò)誤多少來(lái)扣分。因此，中考時(shí)花幾分鐘時(shí)間用來(lái)檢查錯(cuò)誤顯得尤為重要。檢查錯(cuò)誤應(yīng)從以下幾個(gè)方面入手： 1）格式是否有錯(cuò)。2）拼寫(xiě)有無(wú)錯(cuò)誤。3）語(yǔ)言是否用錯(cuò)。4）時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤。5）標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。6）人稱(chēng)是否用錯(cuò)。三.注意事項(xiàng)

書(shū)面表達(dá)要特別注意書(shū)寫(xiě)工整，卷面整潔。每年閱卷老師在十來(lái)天的時(shí)間里要看十幾萬(wàn)考生的作文，工作量之大，時(shí)間之緊，可想而知。書(shū)寫(xiě)是否工整，卷面是否整潔與得分高低直接有關(guān)。【中考范例】

VII.書(shū)面表達(dá)（共1題，計(jì)10分）

假如你叫張強(qiáng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面美國(guó)朋友Bob的來(lái)信內(nèi)容，結(jié)合你自己的情況寫(xiě)一篇語(yǔ)言連慣、符合邏輯的英文回信。

要求：1.認(rèn)真閱讀來(lái)信的內(nèi)容，從中獲得你需要的信息。2.詞數(shù)：80左右?；匦诺拈_(kāi)頭、結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。注意：回信中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)地址和所在學(xué)校的名稱(chēng)。

Hello！I’m your new friend.My name is Bob.I’m fifteen.I’m American.I live in New York.4 I am a middle school student.I’m good at maths.It is very interesting.My favourite sport is basketball.And I am not only a basketball fan but also a good player.I like pop music.My friends and I often sing pop songs

After school, I am interested in getting on-line.I have known a lot about China from the Internet.Now I’m learning Chinese.I hope I will visit your country one day.Please write to me and tell me something about your life.I’m looking forward to hearing from you.Bob Dear Bob, _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ Yours，Zhang Qiang 【解析】根據(jù)前面提到第六個(gè)步驟，我們來(lái)寫(xiě)一下這篇書(shū)面表達(dá)。

1.審題目：通過(guò)審題目我們可以知道：本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)應(yīng)是寫(xiě)一封回信，寫(xiě)信人是張強(qiáng)，收信人是Bob，信的內(nèi)容應(yīng)是介紹張強(qiáng)自己的情況。

2.圈要點(diǎn)：根據(jù)來(lái)信判斷，寫(xiě)回信必須包括以下要點(diǎn)：

1、收到對(duì)方的來(lái)信；

2、愿意和對(duì)方交朋友；

3、自己的姓名、年齡和住址；

4、自己的身份、特長(zhǎng)和愛(ài)好；

5、自己的希望。

3、列提綱：1.got your letter 2.glad to be your friend 3.name, zhang Qiang, fifteen, live in Shanxi 4.a middle school student, like English, like sports, good at drawing, 5.hope we’ll meet in China

4、定基調(diào)：1.時(shí)態(tài)：收到來(lái)信用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，介紹情況用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，希望用一般將來(lái)時(shí)。2.人稱(chēng)用第一人稱(chēng)。3.可按提綱的順序來(lái)寫(xiě)。4.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾題目已經(jīng)給出。

5、寫(xiě)全文： Dear Bob, I got your letter yesterday.I’m very glad to be your pen friend.My name is Zhang Qiang.I’m fifteen years old, too.I live in Shaanxi.I’m a middle school student, too.I like English and physics very much.I also like sports, but I’m good at drawing.I know a little about America.Could you tell me something more about your country in your next letter? I hope we’ll meet in China some day.I’m sure we’ll have a good time together.Please write(to)me soon.Yours, Zhang Qiang 6

6、改病句：認(rèn)真復(fù)查一邊，如有錯(cuò)誤，加以改正?！緷M分演練】

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華山是中國(guó)名山之一。假設(shè)外國(guó)友人到你校參觀后，準(zhǔn)備去旅游。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)向外國(guó)友人簡(jiǎn)單介紹華山（the Hua Mountain）

1．位于陜西東部，是中國(guó)著名的旅游勝地，每年有大批中外游客前去旅游觀光。2．乘汽車(chē)去大約要花1個(gè)小時(shí)；也可以乘火車(chē)去。

3．登山便可領(lǐng)略其云海（the sea of clouds）、奇松（wondrous pines）、怪石（unique rocks）等秀麗的風(fēng)景及清晨美麗的日出。注意：

1．字?jǐn)?shù)：80詞左右。2．請(qǐng)不要逐字翻譯。（2）根據(jù)提示和要求完成下面短文

假如你（Li Lei）在去年夏令營(yíng)認(rèn)識(shí)的一個(gè)朋友Jim從英國(guó)給你寄來(lái)一件禮物—— 一件紅色的襯衫，并附有一封信。在信中他向你問(wèn)好，他想知道你近來(lái)在忙些什么。請(qǐng)你給他寫(xiě)一封回信（100個(gè)詞左右）表示感謝?；匦乓ㄒ韵聝?nèi)容： 1.向Jim問(wèn)好并對(duì)他表示感謝。

2.禮物是你最喜歡的顏色，尺寸很合適，你非常喜歡。

3.告訴Jim你近來(lái)很好，上周剛過(guò)完生日，生日聚會(huì)很熱鬧。詢問(wèn)Jim的近況，并表示希望他能來(lái)中國(guó)。

注意1.信的格式已經(jīng)給出。

2.信中不得使用真實(shí)的人名、地名。（3）

根據(jù)中文意思和英文提示詞語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)出意思連貫、符合邏輯的英文文段。所給英文提示詞語(yǔ)必須都用上，中文提示內(nèi)容不必逐句翻譯，每組英文提示所寫(xiě)出的句數(shù)不限。

今天是6月23日星期日，天氣晴朗。你和你的同學(xué)張宏參觀了西安市動(dòng)物園。那里的動(dòng)物十分有趣，人見(jiàn)人愛(ài)。當(dāng)你看到有位游客在向猴子投喂食物時(shí)，就上前阻止并說(shuō)……

請(qǐng)你用英文寫(xiě)一篇日記，記述今天的經(jīng)歷。（請(qǐng)注意日記格式）1．fine day, sun, bright 2．visit, Beijing Zoo 3．a(chǎn)nimal, so interesting, people, love 4．see, visitor, throw…to, stop, say（4）

根據(jù)中文設(shè)置的情景、英文提示詞語(yǔ)以及表格所提供的信息，寫(xiě)出語(yǔ)法正確、意思連貫、符合邏輯的英文文段。注意1.字?jǐn)?shù)60~80。

2.所給的英文提示詞語(yǔ)及表格所提供的信息必須都用上。（可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮）3.發(fā)言稿的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出。

假設(shè)你是張斌，今年暑假你將參加學(xué)校組織的赴加拿大“綠色之旅”夏令營(yíng)活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你準(zhǔn)備一篇在開(kāi)營(yíng)式上的自我介紹發(fā)言稿。

name, Zhang Bin, fifteen years old, live in Xi’an, favorite subject, biology…

Dear friends

I’m very glad to introduce myself to you._______________________ _________________________________________________________________________________

That’s all.Thank you for listening.（5）

根據(jù)中文提示和英文提示詞語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。

今年暑假，有一批美國(guó)中學(xué)生要來(lái)你們學(xué)校訪問(wèn)。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇有關(guān)西安的簡(jiǎn)介，以便和他們交流。

注意：1.字?jǐn)?shù)100左右；

2.必須使用所給英文提示。Capital of Shaanxi, Lie in the Northwest, many places of interest, autumn, best season 9（6）看圖寫(xiě)話。

根據(jù)以上四幅圖和提示詞語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)出一篇語(yǔ)法正確、意思連貫、語(yǔ)句通順、符合邏輯的短文，開(kāi)頭已給出。要求：1.敘述要用第三人稱(chēng)。2.詞數(shù)60~80個(gè)左右。3.要表達(dá)自己的看法或想法。

4.選用下列詞語(yǔ)：rush hour, cross, make sure, come over, traffic rules Last Monday, Tim got up at 7:40 in the morning.______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________（7）

請(qǐng)你參考圖文提示，寫(xiě)一篇60~80詞的短文。注意：1.語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)意完整，內(nèi)容豐富。2.表達(dá)符合圖意，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范。3.給出自己的觀點(diǎn)。4.文章的開(kāi)頭已給出。

參考詞：pollute, turn off the tap(水龍頭)，dry, save(節(jié)約 vt.), water resources(水資源)From the pictures we know that ______________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________（8）

請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面四幅圖，寫(xiě)一篇70個(gè)單詞左右的短文。文章開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不算入總詞匯數(shù)內(nèi)。

參考詞匯： on fire 著火firefighter n.消防員put out 滅火

Jack was woken up by the shouting “Fire!Help!Fire!Help!...”

__________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________（9）看圖寫(xiě)話。

要求：1.根據(jù)圖畫(huà)所提供的語(yǔ)境，寫(xiě)出意思連貫、語(yǔ)言流暢、語(yǔ)法準(zhǔn)確、符合邏輯的短文。2.至少使用兩種時(shí)態(tài)，70詞以上。不得使用真實(shí)姓名、地名、學(xué)校名。

3.標(biāo)題和第一句已給出，但不計(jì)入70詞之內(nèi)。

One day Lin Tao and Mei Mei were playing in the garden.___________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________（10）

根據(jù)所給圖畫(huà)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇約80詞的短文。

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假如你所在的學(xué)校要出一期英語(yǔ)壁報(bào)。你準(zhǔn)備就自己經(jīng)歷的一件事寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文向壁報(bào)投稿。下面五幅圖記錄了你上個(gè)星期六與老師和同學(xué)到南河邊參加植樹(shù)活動(dòng)的全過(guò)程。請(qǐng)你就以下五幅圖寫(xiě)一篇英文短文。

注意：1.短文內(nèi)容要包括所有圖畫(huà)中的主要內(nèi)容 2.詞數(shù)：70～90

3.生詞提示： 桶bucket鋤頭hoe

________________________________________________________________ 13 ____________________________________________________________________（12）

請(qǐng)按照下面6幅圖和表格的提示，寫(xiě)一篇題為“Changes in Our Hometown”的英語(yǔ)短文。（詞數(shù)：50~80，不包括已經(jīng)給出的單詞）

內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：

過(guò)去 現(xiàn)在 舊房 高樓 河水污濁 河水清澈 步行、騎自行車(chē) 乘公交車(chē)、小汽車(chē) Changes in Our Hometown

Over the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown.In the past 14 ________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________ 【練習(xí)答案】

(1)參考答案：

The Hua Mountain is one of the most famous mountains in China.It lies in the east of Shaanxi.Every year thousands of Chinese and foreigners pay a visit there.It’s not far from here.It takes you about one hour to get there by bus.You can also go there by train.When you are at the top of the mountain, you’ll find clouds, wondrous pines and unique rocks around you.In the early morning when the sun rises, the sky looks very beautiful.It’s really a nice place to visit.(2)參考答案：

Zhonghua street Xi;an, China June21st, 2004 Dear Jim：

How are you? Many thanks for the shirt!I’m very happy to hear from you again.I love the shirt very much, Jim, and red is my favourite colour!You remembered!It’s just my size.Every time I wear it, I will think of you.I’m fine here in China.Last week I had a birthday party.Many of my classmates came and my mother made us a lot of good food.We really had a wonderful time together.How are you doing in England, Jim? I miss you very much.I always miss the days we were together last summer.I hope you can come to China someday.Please write back soon.Your friend, Li Lei

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Sunday June 23rd

It was a fine day today and the sun was bright.I visited Xi’an Zoo with my classmate, Zhang Hong.The animals there were so interesting that all the people loved them.When I saw a visitor throwing food to the monkeys, I went/ran to stop him/her and said, “Animals are our friends and we must take good care of them.”

(4)參考答案： Dear friends，I’m very glad to introduce myself to you.My name is Zhang Bin.I’m fifteen years old.I live in Beijing.One of my favorite subjects is biology.I’m interested in drawing.In my free time, I often go camping, draw some pictures of plants, and enjoy the singing of birds in nature.I want to be a biologist when I grow up.I feel lucky to join you.I hope we can be good friends and do our best to make That’s all.Thank you for listening.(5)參考答案：

Xi’an is the capital of Shaanxi with a long history.There are many places of interest, such as the Dayan Pagoda, the Xiaoyan Pagoda, the Bell Tower and the Terra Cotta Warriors.Since it lies in the Northwest of China, the winter here is long and it sometimes snows.Autumn is the best season in Xi’an, for it’s neither too cold nor too hot.One of the most famous traditional foods is “Yangroupao”.(6)參考答案：

Last Monday, Tim got up at 7:40 in the morning.It was the rush hour.He rode his bike to school very fast.He was crossing the street when a car came at that moment.Tim’s bike hit the car and he fell to the ground heavily.The driver was very kind and stopped to make sure that Tim was all right.Then a policeman came over.He told Tim to ride more slowly next time and it was dangerous.Tim thanked him and went to school.All of the young men should obey the traffic rules.17(7)參考答案：

From the pictures we know that much water has been polluted.Some factories are pouring waste water into rivers and lakes.The water becomes dirty and lots of fish have died.Many people often waste water.For example, they often forget to turn off the taps.If we don’t have enough water, land will be dry and crops will die.We can’t live without water.So we should try our best and encourage everyone to protect water resources.We must save water and stop polluting it.If we do that, Things will be much better.(8)參考答案：

Jack was woken up by the shouting “Fire!Help!Fire!Help!...” What had happened? He looked out of the window.Wow!He found that his neighbour’s house was on fire.Jack jumped off the bed and rushed to the telephone.He made a call to the police.Then, he ran out and helped his neighbour(to)fight against the fire.Soon the fire fighters came and in a short time the fire was put out.And the house owner and fire fighters thanked Jack and his neighbours a lot.(9)參考答案：

TAKING CARE OF TREES

One day Lin Tao and Mei Mei were playing in the garden.They found

that a young tree there was dying.They thought they must save the young tree.Then they put a rope around the tree and watered it.Some days later the tree came back to life again.Their mother saw this and praised them, “You are good children!”

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Yesterday afternoon Li Ping and I were going to school.On the way we saw an old woman crossing the street.Suddenly a car passed by very fast.The old woman was frightened and fell down to the ground.The apples in her basket were all out on the street.Immediately, we ran to the old woman, helped her get up and picked up all the apples.Li Ping helped her carry the basket and I helped her cross the street.The old woman thanked us very much.（11）參考答案： 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：

（1）上星期五老師告訴我們“明天去南河邊植樹(shù)”。（2）上星期六（第二天）早上六點(diǎn)半我就起床了。（3）我?guī)е叭W(xué)校，同學(xué)們帶著桶、鋤頭在校門(mén)口等待。（4）到南河邊，我們開(kāi)始植樹(shù)。（也可描寫(xiě)動(dòng)場(chǎng)面。）（5）看著新種下的樹(shù)，我們都很高興。

Last Friday, our teacher told us that we would go to plant trees by the 19 South River the next day.On Saturday morning I got up at six thirty and went to school with a bucket.My classmates were waiting at the school gate with buckets and hoes.When we got to the South River, we began to plant trees on the river bank.(On the river bank, some students were digging holes, the others were planting or watering the young trees.)

After we finished our work, we were happy to see the young trees we planted on the river bank.（12）參考答案：

Over the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown.In the past, the houses in our hometown were very poor, but now many people have moved into tall buildings(there are many tall buildings here and there).The water in the rivers was very dirty, but now the rivers are clean and people can swim in them.People used to walk or ride bikes, but now they can take buses or drive their own cars to go to work.走到茶幾邊，我認(rèn)出了外婆的杯子，但是哪一個(gè)才是媽媽的杯子呢？突然之間，我覺(jué)得，自己真得太不了解父母了。當(dāng)媽媽為我倒水時(shí)，我卻不知她的杯子是什么樣的；當(dāng)媽媽為我?jiàn)A我喜歡吃的菜時(shí)，我卻沒(méi)想過(guò)他們是愛(ài)吃淡一點(diǎn)，還是濃一點(diǎn)。。。2009年到了，意味著過(guò)去一年的逝去和新的一年的到來(lái)。媽媽為我操勞了一整年，仔細(xì)想想，現(xiàn)在的我也應(yīng)該為她做一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)事了。

于是，我決定先將茶沏好再找杯子。學(xué)著爸爸平時(shí)沏茶的順序，我先從茶柜 里找出了一罐普洱茶，再往燒水的壺里加入水放在電茶爐上燒，接著，我將爸爸已經(jīng)掰好的普洱茶片拿了兩片放在蓋碗里，等了一會(huì)，水開(kāi)了，我小心地將水注入蓋碗，將蓋蓋上，把蓋碗里第一遍的茶水濾掉，然后再次注水，蓋上蓋，燜一會(huì)才兩手并用地將茶水倒入茶海里，因?yàn)榈谝淮巫约簞?dòng)手，蓋碗的燙手是我所沒(méi)想到的，手忙腳亂的我弄得茶幾上一片片的水漬。重復(fù)幾次這樣的程序后，我先幫外婆倒了一杯茶，因?yàn)橥馄盘貏e喜歡喝茶。當(dāng)外婆從廚房走出來(lái)的時(shí)候我已經(jīng)把茶都給倒好了，這時(shí)，外婆才告訴我哪一個(gè)是媽媽的杯子。

媽媽起床了，我雙手捧著水杯送到她的面前，就像捧著一顆溫?zé)岬男摹寢屢汇?，隨即臉上露出了微笑，她一手接過(guò)水杯，伸出另一只手將我拉進(jìn)了她的懷里，那手輕輕柔柔地在我的頭上撫摸著，接著媽媽在我的臉上深深地親了一口。雖然媽媽經(jīng)常親我，但這一刻的親吻卻最讓我感到幸福。我抬起頭對(duì)媽媽說(shuō)：“媽媽快喝吧，要不茶要涼了。”媽媽仰起了脖子，張著嘴巴，“咕咚，咕咚”地喝了幾大口?？此翘鹈勖鄣臉幼樱路鹞⒖嗟钠斩枰彩敲垡话闾?。

我記得在我小學(xué)的時(shí)侯，就讀過(guò)一首曹值的七步詩(shī)：“煮豆持作梗，轆轂以為汁；秸在釜下燃，豆在釜中泣；本是同根生，相煎何太急”。那時(shí)只知其大意，只知道曹操的長(zhǎng)子曹丕繼位，他在一些奸臣的影響下，擔(dān)心他的同胞弟弟曹值篡位，便逼迫曹值在七步之內(nèi)作出一首詩(shī)來(lái)，否則處死；結(jié)果他的弟弟就在七步之內(nèi)寫(xiě)出了流傳至今的“七步詩(shī)”。當(dāng)時(shí)這首詩(shī)對(duì)曹丕也是一種極大的潮諷。

幾個(gè)世紀(jì)過(guò)去了，社會(huì)和生活都發(fā)生了極大的變化；應(yīng)該說(shuō)人的素質(zhì)也應(yīng)有所提高；一個(gè)人生活在世上，是離不開(kāi)親情、友情和愛(ài)情的；有人說(shuō)：打架親兄弟，上陣父子兵，但是，兄弟姐妹的團(tuán)結(jié)并不是真對(duì)與他人打架斗毆，在生活上，21 事業(yè)上應(yīng)是不可或缺的照應(yīng)；俗話說(shuō)“一根筷子容易斷，十雙筷子斷就難”；可見(jiàn)，團(tuán)結(jié)是一種力量，只有團(tuán)結(jié)才有攻不破的堡壘。

然而，就在生活優(yōu)越的今天，兄弟姐妹往往因?yàn)橐稽c(diǎn)小事，一點(diǎn)利益而你爭(zhēng)我斗，反目成仇，甚而相殘；我和我的朋友在聊天時(shí)有時(shí)聊及這個(gè)問(wèn)題，有人這樣評(píng)論：一個(gè)人生活在世上，如果不顧親情，對(duì)兄弟姐妹甚至父母于不顧，那他在這個(gè)社會(huì)上和任何人都不要談“情”字，特別是友情。

樹(shù)大分枝，各自成立家庭后，在生活中一些小事是難免發(fā)生的，但要看你怎樣去對(duì)待，把金錢(qián)和利益看的太重，那麼，你就會(huì)值親情于不顧；看淡名利，注重親情才是做人的底線；爭(zhēng)則不足，讓則有余，在利益和金錢(qián)面前，我們何不禮讓一點(diǎn)，做一個(gè)有道德、有素質(zhì)、有親情的人呢？

家和萬(wàn)事興，團(tuán)結(jié)是一種力量，讓我們團(tuán)結(jié)友愛(ài)，和睦共處，為個(gè)人的事業(yè)、為家庭的生活、為國(guó)家的興盛而看重親情、友情、愛(ài)情；把金錢(qián)和利益看淡一些吧！人過(guò)留名，雁去留聲，希望在幾十年之后，當(dāng)你離開(kāi)這個(gè)世界的時(shí)侯，留給后人的不是唾泣，而是美愉。

今天是她父親的生日,她要回家和父親一起過(guò)生日.我很理解她的想法,更理解她的思念之情.是的,她父親已經(jīng)六十多歲了,為了子女的成長(zhǎng)與幸福,含辛茹苦,真的的不容易.話說(shuō)過(guò)來(lái),人一輩子真的很不容易.人年老時(shí)非常希望能夠和子女在一起,即使不能在一起,哪怕一個(gè)電話甚至一個(gè)短信,父母也已經(jīng)很知足了.我由于長(zhǎng)期在外,很想念爸爸媽媽.想起過(guò)去,心里真的很辛酸,父母親為了我們的成長(zhǎng)真的付出了很多,然而他們現(xiàn)在又生活得怎么樣呢?想起過(guò)去的一幕一幕,我心里很難受!我很希望做做子女的我們,踏踏實(shí)實(shí)地做好每一件事情,不讓父母擔(dān)憂,這是最基本的我們應(yīng)當(dāng)做的事情.22 談到這里我不由自主地想起一部電影《我的兄弟姐妹》,這是一部關(guān)于親情的影片,暫且不管故事的真實(shí)性,主要考究它的內(nèi)涵.主人公齊思甜和哥哥齊憶苦、妹妹奇妙、弟弟齊天生活在一個(gè)不富裕卻充滿溫馨和愛(ài)的家。然而在一個(gè)暴風(fēng)雪的夜晚，他們的母親舊病復(fù)發(fā)，咳得吐血了。父親背她去醫(yī)院，卻出了意外，他們倆都亡故了。次日，另一家人搬進(jìn)了四個(gè)孩子的家。性格剛強(qiáng)的哥哥無(wú)法忍受這個(gè)新家庭的種種，無(wú)奈地帶著弟弟妹妹離開(kāi)了家。他們開(kāi)始四處奔波，尋找落腳之處。當(dāng)實(shí)在沒(méi)有能力照顧弟弟妹妹的時(shí)候，他把妹妹齊思甜送給一對(duì)正要出國(guó)的夫婦；把弟弟送給他的舅媽一家；又把小妹妹帶到一對(duì)老人家中請(qǐng)他們收養(yǎng)。他自己和弟弟妹妹們便各奔東西……20年后，齊憶苦在北京當(dāng)上了出租車(chē)司機(jī)；齊思甜出國(guó)受到良好的教育，成了音樂(lè)家；齊天成為東北大學(xué)學(xué)生；齊妙卻當(dāng)上了舞廳小姐。在北京的音樂(lè)會(huì)上，思甜驀然回首的瞬間，音樂(lè)霎時(shí)凝固了。他們四人擁抱在一起，淚水順著另一支悠揚(yáng)的樂(lè)曲落下，聽(tīng)眾的掌聲久久不息……終于，他們有了一次永久的重逢。

齊思甜的父親是一個(gè)音樂(lè)教師，他們一家人都生活在音樂(lè)的天堂里，這也為后來(lái)思甜成為音樂(lè)家打好了基礎(chǔ)。父親說(shuō)：“人生路上有許多困難的事情，只要有音樂(lè)在，你的靈魂便不再寂寞?！边@位父親是偉大的，他樂(lè)觀開(kāi)朗，以身作則。盡管他和藹可親，但同時(shí)又是一個(gè)嚴(yán)厲的父親。有一回，齊憶苦偷鄰居家的雞蛋，是為了滿足妹妹小小的心愿。而他卻因此挨了父親的鞭子，還罰他站在雪地里很久。在父親被分配到別的地方邊勞動(dòng)邊教音樂(lè)時(shí)，他對(duì)這“莫須有的罪名”并沒(méi)有悲憤倒下，而是瞞著家人當(dāng)搬運(yùn)工挨家挨戶送木材，還干各種各樣的粗活。他也沒(méi)有一絲怨言，還對(duì)孩子說(shuō)：“我沒(méi)事?！倍碌暮⒆觽円材闷鹆斯ぞ?，幫父親干活。他哼著小調(diào)，陽(yáng)光幸福地灑在他們臉上。

可見(jiàn),這位父親是多么偉大，他以他的行動(dòng)告訴了孩子們音樂(lè)的重要性及如何面對(duì)生活的苦難。

那么，又是一種什么樣的力量，使后來(lái)的四個(gè)孩子重逢，使他們歡聚，使他們接受心靈的洗禮？

毋庸置疑，是親情。

寒冷的冬天，四個(gè)孩子依偎在車(chē)站。他們?cè)跒橄乱徊惋埗鴵?dān)心著?！案纾茵I?！?、“哥，我冷?！薄ⅰ案?，我想回家……”弟妹們的話刺痛了哥哥。他說(shuō)：“只要我還有一口氣，就不讓你們受委屈?！笔聦?shí)上他也這么做了。如果不是親情，他又何必活得如此累呢？他又怎能忘記，那一晚，父母臨走時(shí)對(duì)他的囑咐：“你是哥哥，要照顧好弟弟妹妹?！?/p>

生活改變了許多人和事，也改變了他們。但是，親情是始終不渝的。最小的妹妹齊妙長(zhǎng)大后竟成了舞廳小姐！她離開(kāi)原來(lái)的家后，養(yǎng)父母去世得早，加上無(wú)人看管，就開(kāi)始?jí)櫬湎氯チ恕Ｋ?0年后與齊思甜相遇時(shí)，大言不慚地對(duì)她說(shuō)她滿足于當(dāng)前腐朽昏暗的生活方式。但是自那以后，她回憶起以前的一點(diǎn)一滴，又不免傷感和懊悔。她發(fā)現(xiàn)自己對(duì)不起所有愛(ài)她的人，她的良心受到了譴責(zé)。于是，親情的歸來(lái)使她的精神方面的巨人復(fù)活了！她的靈魂才得以解放。

親情給人以新生，親情又猶如一支鎮(zhèn)心劑。

親情是心中的太陽(yáng)，照耀著我們；親情是溫柔的春風(fēng)，撫摸著我們；親情如綿綿的春雨，滋潤(rùn)著我們。

親情是雪，晶瑩剔透；親情也可以是雷，驚天撼地。

親情可以是燈，溫暖柔和；親情也可以是微弱的燭光，不亮卻很輝煌。不管怎么說(shuō)，親情一定是無(wú)價(jià)的寶藏。

沒(méi)有了親情，世界變得荒蕪、凄涼；沒(méi)有了親情，生命則無(wú)法繁衍后代；沒(méi)有了親情，生活就單調(diào)枯燥；沒(méi)有了親情，人間也成了地獄。

親情是溝通兩代之間思想交流的橋梁，是一條連結(jié)兩顆心的紐帶?！靶值芙忝迷翘焐系粝碌乃?，誰(shuí)也不認(rèn)得誰(shuí)。但落在地下后，結(jié)成一體，結(jié)成冰，化成水，就永遠(yuǎn)也分不開(kāi)了?！?/p>

“臨行密密封，意恐遲遲歸”，是親情?！拔以谶@頭，母親在那頭”，也是親情。

無(wú)價(jià)的親情呵，愿我們?cè)谀愕墓奈柘?，駛向美好燦爛的明天。關(guān)于親情的影片..我看這部影片時(shí),心情很沉重,流淚了.我想,不論一個(gè)人的出身是多么卑微,只要我們能夠記住親情的鼓舞與期待,只要我們我們?nèi)タ炭嗯?只要我們?cè)谛睦砩夏軌驊?zhàn)勝自己,那么我們就是生活的強(qiáng)者!