第一篇：談如何指導(dǎo)高中生提高英語書面表達(dá)

談如何指導(dǎo)高中生提高英語書面表達(dá)

談如何指導(dǎo)高中生提高英語書面表達(dá)

編輯: admin|作者:平和一中:曾素美|發(fā)布日期: 2008-10-23 7:09:24

全國高考統(tǒng)考英語試題首先于1988年采用了書面表達(dá)題型，至今已連續(xù)采用了17個年頭，其分值也經(jīng)歷了三個階段：88年至93年計分為15分，占全卷分?jǐn)?shù)的15%；94年至95年計分為25分，占全卷分?jǐn)?shù)的16.7%；96年到2000年計分為30分，占全卷分?jǐn)?shù)的20%。且2001—2005年高考書面表達(dá)，分值為25分。由此可見，書面表達(dá)的分值比重大，它是英語高考的重要組成部分。

《全日制高級中學(xué)英語教學(xué)大綱》明確地規(guī)定：“高級中學(xué)英語教學(xué)的目的，是在義務(wù)教育初中英語教學(xué)的基礎(chǔ)上，鞏固擴(kuò)大學(xué)生的基礎(chǔ)知識，發(fā)展聽、說、讀、寫的基本技能，培養(yǎng)學(xué)生在口頭上和書面上初步運用英語進(jìn)行交際能力，……”書面表達(dá)就是在卷面上體現(xiàn)語言交際能力的一種重要形式。因此，在高中一年級就應(yīng)該開展書面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練，而不是為了應(yīng)付高考，在高三時才開展書面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練，到那時會有一種“為時太晚，力不從心”的感覺了。

新編高中教材編寫的體系幫助我們擺脫了以往的困境，大大有利于全面培養(yǎng)學(xué)生聽、說、讀、寫英語的四種技能。新教材從第一冊開始就編排了大量的書面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練，這些訓(xùn)練由淺入深分層次推進(jìn)，形成了一種“由易到難，由簡到繁，循序漸進(jìn)”的訓(xùn)練模式。但是由于高中新教材內(nèi)容多，難度大，抽象概念增多，形象思維載體減少，語法現(xiàn)象復(fù)雜，這給剛邁進(jìn)高中校門的學(xué)生又帶來了一定的困難。這就要求教師要幫助學(xué)生了解高中教材的特點，指導(dǎo)學(xué)生掌握學(xué)習(xí)方法，培養(yǎng)學(xué)生歸納概括與邏輯思維能力，加強(qiáng)訓(xùn)練，使學(xué)生順利完成初中、高中銜接的過渡。

然而在英語教學(xué)中，培養(yǎng)學(xué)生聽、說、讀、寫的能力是相輔相成的，經(jīng)常練習(xí)寫作可以鞏固和發(fā)展聽說能力，還可以促進(jìn)閱讀能力的提高。寫作還能促進(jìn)學(xué)生勤復(fù)習(xí)、多思考，對一詞一句反復(fù)推敲，因而有利于提高使用語言的準(zhǔn)確性，同時有助于培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的英語思維能力。因而我從高一就開始采用以下幾種方法指導(dǎo)學(xué)生寫作：

一、用英語解釋生詞，為學(xué)生打好寫作基礎(chǔ)。

在教每課的單詞和詞組時，盡量用學(xué)生學(xué)過的單詞、詞組進(jìn)行解釋。例如：

continue —go on(doing)

artist —a person who draws, paints or takes photos

heat —make something warm or hot

剛開始時，是由我用英語解釋生詞，后來讓學(xué)生看著漢語意思用自己學(xué)過的單詞、詞組來解釋英語生詞。這樣，經(jīng)過一段時間的訓(xùn)練，學(xué)生的英語思維能有所提高，為英語寫作打下一定的基礎(chǔ)。而且有的學(xué)生在英語寫作中遇到寫不來的單詞時，能用這個單詞的英語釋義代替它，使英語寫作更為順利。例如：有的學(xué)生在寫作中不知道“裁縫”英語怎么說，就用“a person who makes clothes”來代替“tailor”。

當(dāng)然，這種說法是不符合英語語言習(xí)慣的，但對初學(xué)者來說，還是值得鼓勵的。

二、通過改寫對話。以第一人稱或第三人稱的口氣講述并寫下每單元第一課的對話內(nèi)容。例如：SEFC B Ⅰ A Lesson 13Jane and Betty are going on holidays in a few day’s time.Betty is going off to Guangzhou by plane next Thursday evening.She is staying with her friend Kate Klarke.Jane is going to Xi’an.She’s leaving on Friday.She’s going with her parents.She’s going by plane, too.在這篇改寫的短文里，只要在理解原對話的基礎(chǔ)上，給主要句子換上一個主語即可。隨著學(xué)習(xí)知識內(nèi)容的增加和循序漸進(jìn)的寫作訓(xùn)練，理解主題，抓住要點的閱讀能力就會逐漸增強(qiáng)，詞語、句型的運用能力也會大大提高。

三、通過縮寫課文，培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的英語概括能力。

新教材所選的課文題材廣泛、體裁豐富，我們要好好利用這些有利的因素與條件進(jìn)行寫作訓(xùn)練。具體做法：先對課文做好充分預(yù)習(xí)并根據(jù)關(guān)鍵詞來復(fù)述課文，最后把復(fù)述的內(nèi)容寫下來。

例如：BⅠB Lesson 82

Karl Marx was born in Germany.German was his native language.When he was young, he was force to leave his homeland for political reasons.He had to move from one country to another.In 1949, he went to England and lived there.Then he started working hard to improve his English.Before long, he could write articles in English for an American newspaper.Later, he was able to write the book 《The civil war in France》in English.Marx began to learn Russian in his fifties.At the end of six months, he had learned enough Russian to read articles and reports in Russian.Marx set us a good example in learning foreign languages.有的課文是短劇，如高一Unit 18 Lesson 70 “The necklace”，我就讓學(xué)生在班上表演，然后再把課文改為故事。

四、用命題方式讓學(xué)生寫自己熟悉、易于表達(dá)的題材

談如何指導(dǎo)高中生提高英語書面表達(dá)

經(jīng)過一段時間的縮寫和改定的筆頭訓(xùn)練之后，學(xué)生對寫作有一定的基礎(chǔ)和興趣，我就開始讓他們寫一些自己熟悉、易于表達(dá)的題材。如：“My family”，“My school”，“A letter to a friend”，etc.五、通過講評幫助學(xué)生逐步掌握寫作要領(lǐng)。

每次作文批閱后，我都抽時間在班上講評，把寫得好的作文念給學(xué)生聽，并分析學(xué)生中常出現(xiàn)的典型錯誤。許多學(xué)生受漢語的影響，作文常出現(xiàn)中國式的英語，對這種錯誤應(yīng)及時糾正。例如有一位學(xué)生在作文中寫道：

She shook her head and then said “No”.我將此句寫在黑板上，指出錯在哪里，怎樣糾正，使學(xué)生從中學(xué)會正確的表達(dá)方法。

經(jīng)過一年多的書面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練，大多數(shù)學(xué)生都能在規(guī)定的時間內(nèi)寫出比較通順的英語作文。事實證明：只要正確認(rèn)識，指導(dǎo)得法，持之以恒，加強(qiáng)訓(xùn)練，提高高一年起始年級學(xué)生寫作能力，從而三年后達(dá)到高考要求是完全可能的。多年的高中英語教學(xué)實踐中，現(xiàn)就如何切實提高學(xué)生的書面表達(dá)能力，探索解題對策，減少失誤，提高學(xué)生的應(yīng)變能力等有以下兩方面的做法：一是從高一起抓好扎實的同步訓(xùn)練；二是高考總復(fù)習(xí)階段加強(qiáng)書面表達(dá)題的指導(dǎo)和強(qiáng)化訓(xùn)練。

綜上所述，英語書面表達(dá)能力的提高與學(xué)生的詞匯、句型、語法等基本知識密切相關(guān)，更有賴于平時通過全方位的訓(xùn)練將學(xué)生的知識轉(zhuǎn)化為能力，在學(xué)生已基本掌握行文技巧的基礎(chǔ)上，教師還必須認(rèn)真對待高考總復(fù)習(xí)中對書面表達(dá)的應(yīng)考指導(dǎo)，重點在以下幾個方面：

（一）審題。審題要抓住兩個要素：一是內(nèi)容，二是形式。既要通過題目所提供的信息找出書面表達(dá)的內(nèi)容要點，又要根據(jù)題目的要求確定表達(dá)的形式。按照高考書面表達(dá)題評分要求，要點不能遺漏，格式不符合要求（如書信格式）也會失分。下面以93年高考書面表達(dá)題（看圖作文）為例指導(dǎo)學(xué)生。通過仔細(xì)觀察所給的六幅圖畫，啟發(fā)學(xué)生找出以下要點：①父母住在農(nóng)村②家里有一條狗，名叫“阿?！雹鄹改溉ヌ镩g勞動，帶上妹妹和阿福④妹妹去河邊，阿福跟隨⑤妹妹摘花，不慎落水⑥阿福邊叫邊跳下河⑦父母跑過來，看見阿福救妹妹⑧妹妹得救，阿福受到稱贊。完成看圖搜尋內(nèi)容要點之后，讓學(xué)生裝按以上要點寫出自己的書面表達(dá)，最后把試題答案發(fā)給學(xué)生對照，教師收取部分學(xué)生的答案進(jìn)行分析、講評，肯定成績，找出差距，必要時選取學(xué)生中的優(yōu)秀短文作為示范，鼓勵學(xué)生互相學(xué)習(xí)，繼續(xù)努力。

（二）指導(dǎo)學(xué)生學(xué)會列提綱。經(jīng)過審題，明確了書面表達(dá)要涵蓋的內(nèi)容要點之后，必須先以各個要點為基礎(chǔ)，擬出提綱，告誡學(xué)生不在擬出提綱之前就急于動筆，否則會影響短文的質(zhì)量。提綱是文章的支架，有了它文章寫起來即緊扣主題又層次分明，要點不會遺漏。

（三）重視“行文連貫”。行文連貫是書面表達(dá)評分最高要求的一項重要內(nèi)容。因此，隊了依據(jù)提綱進(jìn)行表達(dá)、文句不出語言形式錯誤外，還必須注重行文的連貫性。為此，可告訴學(xué)生視不同情況，分別采用以下幾種方法：

1、依照內(nèi)容提示中提供的時間先后順序?qū)懗鑫恼?。這種方法寫出的文章平鋪直敘，過程清楚，明白易懂。它常涉及以下表示時間的單詞和詞組。如：after, before long, afterwards, earlier, in the beginning, at last, in the end, …etc..2、按照空間位置（上下、內(nèi)外或前后）的變換順序?qū)懗鑫恼?。幫助學(xué)生歸納出以下表示空間位置的詞或詞組：above、in the middle of、beside、next to、between、off、towards、under、beyond、on the right（left）、outside、inside、over、behind，…etc.。

3、按照事物的重要性為序進(jìn)行表達(dá)。可先輕后重，亦可先重后輕，均可取得良好效果。已學(xué)過有關(guān)常用詞和詞組有：best of all、worst of all、more important、most important、above all、moreover、in the first place（首先），etc.。

4、用比較對照法寫出書面表達(dá).例如A與B進(jìn)行比較對照,可將A、B的情況特征分述比較，也可將A與B的情況分項交叉進(jìn)行對照。對比、襯托能突出表現(xiàn)某一事物的優(yōu)劣、高低或強(qiáng)弱等品質(zhì)，強(qiáng)化描述效果。這種方法常用到以下單詞和詞組：and、both、in the same way、the same、similar、similarly、dissmilar、different.（四）帶領(lǐng)學(xué)生共同研究高考評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。高考書店面表達(dá)題按七個檔次評分的做法及要求已經(jīng)數(shù)年穩(wěn)定不變，其中第七檔要求是：能寫明全部或絕大部分要點，語言基本無誤，行文連貫，表達(dá)清楚。這是最高要求，達(dá)到者得20—24分。這些要求指明了師生努力的方向。強(qiáng)化訓(xùn)練過程中務(wù)必提醒學(xué)生：抓住內(nèi)容要點是書面表達(dá)的基礎(chǔ)，不使用自己沒有把握的詞匯和句型可避免出現(xiàn)語言錯誤，但為了“行文連貫”就不能一味強(qiáng)調(diào)“盡量使用簡單句”，必要時使用復(fù)合句會使得文章得體、通順，同時顯示出答題者較高的遣詞造句能力和較深厚的功底。提醒學(xué)生在書面表達(dá)寫完之后，要反復(fù)閱讀幾遍，查看內(nèi)容、語言、語體三者是否都得到兼顧，是否把問題說清楚了。

（五）高考總復(fù)習(xí)中向?qū)W生提供一定數(shù)量按題材分類的常用典型的書面表達(dá)句式作為語言素材，讓學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)并加以記憶，以進(jìn)一步豐富他們的語言素材和表達(dá)方式。

事實證明，圍繞書面表達(dá)所進(jìn)行的各項教學(xué)工作和活動，有效地提高了學(xué)生們的語言總體水平和能力。

第二篇：泰州中考英語書面表達(dá)指導(dǎo)

中考英語“書面表達(dá)”指導(dǎo)

中考英語“書面表達(dá)”通常含有四個方面的要求：內(nèi)容、語言、形式和自己的觀點。內(nèi)容是按照題目的要點和指令去寫，不得遺漏任何一個要點；不能隨意發(fā)揮去寫一些與主題無關(guān)的話。語言的要求是正確、恰當(dāng)、清楚、連貫，最好要有幾個復(fù)雜句句式。在形式上首先要體裁格式正確，單詞的大小寫正確、標(biāo)點符號正確以及詞數(shù)在100個詞左右。自己的觀點要符合題目要求，要與學(xué)習(xí)和生活實際相符。

中考英語作文是考查學(xué)生綜合運用英語能力的一種重要形式，中考英語作文在中考英語試卷中占據(jù)20分，在中考英語中起著舉足輕重的作用。作文質(zhì)量的好與差，得分懸殊很大，將對考生中考總成績帶來很大影響。應(yīng)對策略：2步思路、再加3步驟 思路： 1.審好題

仔細(xì)審查所給的內(nèi)容提示(包括文字和圖表等)，明確要寫的內(nèi)容，確定文章的體裁、人稱、時態(tài)等，理順?biāo)悸?，確定主旨。

2.看要點，寫片段

對于易于表達(dá)的內(nèi)容要點，一次成句；對于一時難于表達(dá)的內(nèi)容要點，寫出詞組。此時，既注意不遺漏內(nèi)容要點，也不要隨意添加任何內(nèi)容。步驟：

1.定句型，連詞成句

這個環(huán)節(jié)是成文的關(guān)鍵，一定要注意做到：

(1)選用比較有把握的詞匯，用恰當(dāng)?shù)木湫蛯懗龃_切反映內(nèi)容要求的句子。在熟悉的基礎(chǔ)上，鼓勵多用高級詞匯和結(jié)構(gòu)復(fù)雜的復(fù)雜句。如表達(dá)“為了??”時，可用in order to do 或 so as to do.也可用so that引導(dǎo)目的狀語從句。(2)寫出的句子要達(dá)意，完整，語法正確，合乎習(xí)慣，特別是句式、謂語動詞形式要有根有據(jù)。

(3)表達(dá)限定的內(nèi)容有困難時，就要想到“All roads lead to Rome.”這句話，用變通的方法，以達(dá)到“曲徑通幽”。如要譯“他表哥外強(qiáng)中干”這樣一句話，表達(dá)起來似乎很難，但我們完全可以通過學(xué)過的東西將這句話明白貼切地表達(dá)出來：His cousin looks strong but in fact ,he is rather weak.(4)盡量避免使用漢語式的英語。例如要表達(dá)“她睡得很遲”，不可寫成：She slept very late.應(yīng)該寫成：She went to bed very late.因為“sleep late”表示“睡懶覺”。又如要表達(dá)“他一點都不擔(dān)心他的英語”，不可寫成：He is not a little worried about his English.實際上意思完全相反，表達(dá)成“他非常擔(dān)心他的英語”了。應(yīng)該是：He is not a bit worried about his English.或：He is not worried about his English at all.2.連詞成句，添減相宜

單句寫出后，根據(jù)短文的內(nèi)容要求，確定先寫什么，后寫什么，按照表述內(nèi)容的情節(jié)發(fā)展和實際需要，重新排列組合已寫成的句子，劃分必要的段落，一般分成三段。

即：文章的開頭(Introduction)、文章的主體(Mainbody)和文章的結(jié)尾(Conclusion).這樣寫成文章的初稿。在連詞成句的過程中，還要注意以下幾點：

(1)句子或段落間的連接不僅僅是個語言問題，也是個邏輯思維方面的問題，這兩者是不能分開的。能注意到這一點，你的文章就能達(dá)到條理清楚、層次分明的境界。

(2)為了使句子或段落語義連貫，表達(dá)合理準(zhǔn)確，可以適當(dāng)加入一些連接詞語。如表達(dá)轉(zhuǎn)折可用but ,however ,otherwise等，表達(dá)遞進(jìn)可用and ,also ,besides ,What’s more等，表達(dá)因果so ,therefore ,as a result等，表達(dá)對比可用at the same time ,meanwhile，while等，表達(dá)讓步可用though ,although ,even if等。有時還需要加入一些必要的過渡句子以達(dá)到承上啟下的效果。

(3)仔細(xì)推敲在文章的哪些地方可用復(fù)雜句。切忌生搬硬套，給人一種為了用復(fù)雜句而用復(fù)雜句的感覺。要用得自然、得體。要順應(yīng)行文的需要，與整個文章渾然一體。盡量使用我們熟悉的賓語從句、狀語從句。3.檢查，修改，定稿，謄寫

檢查修改是進(jìn)一步減少疏漏提高質(zhì)量的最后程序，這時要對照題目要求，認(rèn)真檢查以下幾點：(1)內(nèi)容要點有無遺漏或誤詞，必須一一對應(yīng)檢查。(2)體裁格式對不對。

(3)句子是否有語法結(jié)構(gòu)錯誤，特別要檢查句子中的冠詞、代詞、名詞復(fù)數(shù)、動詞的時態(tài)、語態(tài)、主謂一致等方面是否有錯誤。

(4)句子是否合乎英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣，是否達(dá)意。

(5)書寫字跡和標(biāo)點符號是否規(guī)范清晰，詞數(shù)是否基本上符合要求。經(jīng)過認(rèn)真修改潤色的短文，即可認(rèn)真工整地謄寫在指定的卷面上。抄好后再速讀一遍，力求完美。經(jīng)典題例

下面以一作文為例，談?wù)剬懼锌加⒄Z作文的具體步驟和應(yīng)注意的事項。原題介紹

目前，泰州正在創(chuàng)建(create)全國文明城市(National Civilization City)。作為一個中學(xué)生，我們在學(xué)校、在家里、在公共場合等等應(yīng)該做到哪些才能稱得上是一個文明的(civilized)人呢？我們又如何為這個活動作貢獻(xiàn)(make contribution to)呢？請你就此寫一篇100字左右的短文。

Nowadays, ______________________________________________________________ 解題步驟

第一步：認(rèn)真審題，明確寫作體裁、提示要點、文章的時態(tài)、人稱和詞數(shù)。分析：

這篇作文的體裁是倡議書。文章主要有5大提示要點，考生可以用筆將這些要點圈出來。1.泰州正在創(chuàng)建全國文明城市。2.作為一個中學(xué)生在學(xué)校怎么做才能稱得上是一個文明的人？3.作為一個中學(xué)生在家怎么做？4.作為一個中學(xué)生在公共場所怎么做？5.我們又如何為這個活動作貢獻(xiàn)呢？

這篇文章時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。人稱用第一人稱。詞數(shù)100個左右。第二步：分析提示要點,用簡明的英語寫出要點。

分析：五大提示要點只有第一要點是限定的，考生可以直接翻譯。其余四大要點都是半限定的、半開放性的?？忌枰鶕?jù)文章主題的需要聯(lián)系實際生活進(jìn)行適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。不同的考生會有不同的答案。這部分既是寫作的重點也是難點?？忌捎煤喢鞯挠⒄Z寫出要點。如: At school: keep the classroom clean and tidy.At home : help parents do some housework.In public places: obey the traffic rules，don’t make too much noise.make a contribution to this event: give out leaflets to make people understand the importance of this activity.第三步：列出寫作提綱，并將要點擴(kuò)展成句。

開頭(Introduction)：Taizhou is creating a National Civilization City.As middle school students ,we should try our best to become civilized persons.正文(Mainbody):

At school, we should keep our classroom clean and tidy every day.We shouldn’t throw about rubbish.At home, we should help our parents do some housework.In public places, we shouldn’t make much noise in public places.We mustn’t cross the road until the traffic lights turn green.We can make a contribution to this event by giving out leaflets to the citizens to make them understand the importance of this event and take part in it.結(jié)尾(conclusion):I am sure Taizhou will become a National Civilization City soon.第四步：組句成文。

分析：根據(jù)文章內(nèi)容和要求，可以適當(dāng)調(diào)整以上句子的先后順序。為了使文章連貫自然，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，適當(dāng)加一些表達(dá)并列、遞進(jìn)、因果、轉(zhuǎn)折等關(guān)系的連詞，然后組成文章，這時如果發(fā)現(xiàn)文章詞數(shù)不夠，可把短語變成句子，也可增添一些與表達(dá)內(nèi)容有關(guān)的短語或句子。如：表達(dá)“在家”,不用“at home”.而用“When we are at home.”如果發(fā)現(xiàn)文章詞數(shù)超過要求，可以將句子變成短語或兩句并一句。第五步：計劃時間，認(rèn)真檢查、修改。分析：

中考英語作文一般要求在20分鐘內(nèi)完成。因此，考試時間有限，必須合理安排。成文后必須認(rèn)真檢查修改。特別注意以下幾點：

1．內(nèi)容是否符合要求，要點有無遺漏或誤解。2．句子是否符合英語習(xí)慣，句型是否正確。

3．是否有語法錯誤。特別是冠詞、名詞的復(fù)數(shù)、代詞、主謂一致、時態(tài)、語態(tài)等方面。4．是否有拼寫錯誤。

5．書寫是否有不清楚或不易辨認(rèn)之處。6．大小寫和標(biāo)點符號是否使用得當(dāng)。7．詞數(shù)是否符合要求。第六步：認(rèn)真謄寫。

分析：注意書寫清楚、規(guī)范，卷面整潔。中考20分作文，有兩分卷面整潔分。下面是修改過的作文:

Taizhou is creating a National Civilization City.As middle school students, we should try our best to become civilized persons.First, when we are at school, we should keep our classroom clean and tidy.And we shouldn’t throw about rubbish.Second , we should help our parents do some housework At home.Third , we shouldn’t make much noise in public places.Besides ,we mustn’t cross the road until the traffic lights turn green.What’s more , we can give out leaflets to the citizens in order to make them understand the importance of this event and take part in it.If everyone makes a contribution to this event ,Taizhou will become a National Civilization City soon.

第三篇：英語書面表達(dá)

寒假作業(yè)Chinese Young People’s Life Goals Today

A recent survey shows that in today’s society, Chinese young people’s life goals have become more diversified than before.When young people are asked what they will struggle for, more than half of the respondents choose to earn enough money to buy a house and a car for themselves.In addition to this practical goal, some people, about 44%, pick up their life goal as improving their life quality or to be rich while 23.9% of the respondents are simply satisfied to have a good job.As for how to achieve their life goals, most of them prefer struggling to realize their dreams.The survey shows that the society is making progress and people’s life goals have become more practical.A recent investigation shows that nowadays the young in China have more diversified goals than ever before.More than half of the respondents aim at making more money to buy themselves a car and a house.44% of them want to improve their living standard while 43.3% of them hope to become rich.Besides, about a quarter of them wish to get a good job in the future.To achieve their goals, 71.9% of these young people said that they would struggle to overcome difficulties on their ways to success.Keeping optimistic

We can know from the passage if we are optimistic we can conquer different kinds of difficulties in life when we meet them, and we will succeed in the end.In my study, I will get discourage when I fail in an exam.I think I’m hopeless and can’t go to my ideal university.Whenever I am in bad mood, my teachers, especially my homeroom teacher, encourages me to be optimistic by saying the proverb “Nothing is too difficult if you put your heart into it.” They also tell me to study harder and give me good advice on my study.I’m grateful to them and agree with them.From now on, I’ll no longer feel frustrated when I fail in an exam.On the contrary, I will still keep optimistic and study harder because I know failure is the mother of success.As long as I don’t loose heart and work hard, I’m sure I’ll succeed in the end.第三周：基礎(chǔ)寫作：

上周六下午，你們宿舍幾個同學(xué)去森林公園野炊，回來途中淋了雨。晚上李華頭疼得厲害。你給她量體溫，發(fā)現(xiàn)她發(fā)高燒。你馬上帶她去看醫(yī)生。醫(yī)生說她得了重感冒，要臥床休息三天。請你代她給劉老師寫一張請假條說明情況，并幫她請假兩天（周一、周二），因此她不能參加周二的羽毛球比賽了。

Last Saturday afternoon, I went to Forest Park for a picnic with my roommates.Unfortunately we were caught in the rain on our way home and Li Hua got a dreadful headache.I took her temperature, finding that she was having a fever.So I took her to see the doctor right now and she was advised to be in bed for 3 days.Now I’d like to ask for two days’ sick leave for her, including Monday and Tuesday, and therefore she cannot take part in the badminton game on Tuesday

任務(wù)型寫作

總結(jié)：The writer tried to tell us the importance of setting goals through a beaver’s story.After it built a house for the winter, it set another goal for the spring—to chew down a big tree and succeeded by working hard.你認(rèn)為制訂目標(biāo)很重要嗎？The quest for success always begins with a target.Goal setting is the focus of will to move in a certain direction.Without goals, one will never know what he’s doing, neither will he try his best to do it.你認(rèn)為制訂目標(biāo)后怎樣才能成功？There goes the saying, “Hard work leads to success.” If we want to achieveour goals, we must work hard.Also, we should stick to our goals and never give up when we are faced with setbacks.舉例:Last year I took part in an English speech contest.At the beginning I made up my mind to perform best though my English was not good enough.I tried every means and even stood in front of the mirror to practise again and again.Finally I succeeded and become one of the 10 students in the final competition.第四周：基礎(chǔ)寫作

社會實踐是學(xué)校教育的一個重要組成部分；書本知識有限；社會實踐有諸多好處，能用所學(xué)的知識解決實際問題，獲取經(jīng)驗，了解社會，端正學(xué)習(xí)態(tài)度，激勵學(xué)習(xí)。

Most of the students think that social practice is not important.In fact social practice is an important part of school education.After all the knowledge we obtain from books is limited.Participation in social practice does a lot of good to us.For example, We can apply what we’ve learned to practical problems, from which we can get more

experience and have more knowledge about our society.Thus we will take correct attitude towards our studies and work harder.任務(wù)型寫作

總結(jié)：From this passage,we know sometimes difficult conditions can really make a man strong, so parents should let their children eat bitter foods, do hard work and experience a hard life.描述你的童年生活 I grew up in an ordinary family, which is notso well off.I could understand the hardshipsmy parents were bearing at that time.Therefore, I work very hard now in the hopeof entering the university and changing thesituation of my family and me.你對童年生活的認(rèn)識 我認(rèn)為從某種意義上來說，艱苦的環(huán)境可以激發(fā)一個人的潛能，為他的成功鋪平道路。I think that in a certain sense, difficult situations can stimulate a person’s potential and pave the way for him to succeed.一個人在經(jīng)歷了磨難之后可以變得堅強(qiáng)，勇敢和忠實可靠。One can be strong, brave and faithful after all the hardships he has gone through.總而言之，我認(rèn)為溫室里的花朵經(jīng)受不起風(fēng)暴的洗禮，艱苦的生活對孩子來說是有好處的。All in all, I think that flowers from a greenhouse can never withstand a storm and that a hard life is good for children.第四周周六下午

熱愛社會工作，性格樂觀，富有愛心和責(zé)任心；英語口語流利，具有相關(guān)的教學(xué)經(jīng)驗；工作時間：周六和周日，按每小時5元付費；這份工作給自己在經(jīng)濟(jì)和人際關(guān)系方面的好處；:表達(dá)自己做好工作的決心：把快樂和舒適帶給自己工作的對象。

Dear Sir or Madam

I cannot wait to join in the social workers team in our neighborhood.Being optimistic, caring and responsible, I develop a passion for social work.Besides, I am so fluent in spoken English that I was once invited to teach a group of young kids English last summer.What’s more, I have no class on both Saturday and Sundays.If I’m lucky to get the position, It not only provides me a regular source of income by paying me 5 yuan by the hour but also does a lot to improve my skills in interpersonal relationships.It is certain that I will do what I can to bring joy and comfort to whomever I work for.I’m looking forward to your reply very soon.Sincerely yours

Ling ming

就學(xué)校取消高三音樂課這一事件給校長寫一封信

Dear principal ,I am writing in answer to the decision the school made several days ago.It reminds me of the British school where music plays a big part.In Britain,pupils can study an instrument like the piano or violin or the guitar.They also play music together as a class and have fun, even take part in concerts and organize bands.同學(xué)們對學(xué)校取消音樂課意見不一Therefore, no sooner had the school announced not to offer music lessons to Senior Two and Three students than we held a heated discussion about its advantages and disadvantages.So far, there has been no consensus on it.你對此決定贊成或反對？Personally, I am among those who argue against the decision largely because music lesson provide us with an opportunity to relieve our heavy academic pressure and promote the mutual understanding between students.（理由)以你自己或他人的感受來說明開設(shè)音樂課的利或弊。Actually, nothing please me than music lessons, for I am completely relaxed, not caring about study for a while.Also, I am ready to bear my heart to my classmates and feel close to each other.It is the charm of music that brings all of us a realization that there is still joy in our dull life.So it is better to continue music lessons

汕頭一模

1.為何與人合作：現(xiàn)代社會必備；可省時間和精力；更多互相學(xué)習(xí)的機(jī)會

2.與誰合作：A與喜歡的人合作：心情愉快，同甘共苦B與不喜歡的人合作：學(xué)會容忍，學(xué)會挖

掘其優(yōu)點

3.你的看法：傾聽別人意見，不把你的觀點強(qiáng)加給別人，有禮貌地指出別人的錯誤

Good afternoon,everyone!the topic of my speech today is “being a good parner.”In this busy ,modern world ,if we want to complete our work more efficiently ,we must all learn to cooperate with others ,because not only can cooperation save us a lot of time and energy ,but also we can learn much each other.We`ll be lucky enough to find someone we like to cooperate with due to the fact that we can share our joy and sadness with him.however ,it can be difficult to cooperate with someone we dislike.In this case ,we`ll have to put up with some of his shortcomings and try to discover his advantages.In my opinion ,to be a good partner ,we should try to listen to others`opinions ,never force our ideas on others and if he makes mistakes ,try to point out in a polite way.Thank you for your listening!

失敗是件壞事嗎？

概括短文要點Failure is a commom thing in life.But there are different attitudes towards failure.Whoever draws a lesson from every failure becomes experienced and succeeds.失敗并非壞事，但從失敗中站起來并非易事So failure has a different effect on anyone who has a different attitude.As for me ,I like success.Meanwhile I don`t mind failure because it isn`t a bad matter ,and we cen stand up in the failure ,which isn`t indeed an easy matter.失敗對勝利者是必修課，重要的基本功As is known ,the defeat to a victor is actually an important basic skill and the required course.你對失敗的看法和態(tài)度(1)In my opinion ,we should take a positive attitude towards failure.As a matter of fact ,I think failure can stimulate our potential and from it we can learn a lot ,with which we can achieve success.Just as the saying goes ,”Failure is the mother of success.”

(2)In my opinion ,we should take an active attitude towards failure ,because most of us experience the failure thongh few of us are so lucky as to succeed.Failure tells us such things as why we failed and what should we do to correct the mistakes.Failure also tells us how to approach our goals and ensures us failure is the mother of success.廣州一模

基礎(chǔ)寫作簡介學(xué)校的植物園

1.概況：位于校園西南角，面積1000平方米 2.歷史：20年的歷史，2008年重建 3.特色：各種花卉、樹木、藥用植物 4.功能：美化校園、研究植物場所、休閑之地 5.其他：觀賞至少許一小時

Located at the south-west corner of our school, the botanical garden is spread over an area of approximately 1000 square meters.The garden is over 20 years old and was rebuilt in 2008.as you walk through the garden, you can see various kinds of beautiful flowers, trees and herbs.If you’re planning to explore the garden, set aside at least one hour.The garden makes our schoool more beautiful and it’s a fantastic place for students to study and learn more about plants or simply to relax for a while.讀寫任務(wù)就學(xué)生違紀(jì)的處理方式寫一篇簡評

(1)Should Schools Suspend Troublesone Students?

概括要點：校長的做法、想法、結(jié)果I recentl I recently read a news story about a school in Egland whose headmaster often suspends misbehaving students.The headmster believes that strong discipline improves hoth students’ behaviour and academic performance.His school’s exam results have greatly improved during his time in charge.你是否支持該校長的做法，理由While I congratulate the headmaster on his success I do not agree with the methods he uses to achieve it.Suspending students should be the final type of punishment used for misbehaving students, not the first.Quickly removing such students from the school may be of some benefit to the remaining students but it doesn’t solve the problem of poor behaviour.It only shifts the problem from the school to the community.If these naughty students are not in school then they will only be making trouble out of school.Moreover, as the parents of many of these students are working, the students are unsupervised and thus are in danger of falling in with local criminals who will only encourage such bad behaviour and even teach them worse things.假設(shè)你是校長，你會如何處理違紀(jì)學(xué)生？If I was in charge of his school I would place the naughty students in a class of their own, this way the other students could study in peace but the naughty studetns could remain under the supervision of the school and its teachers.The teachers in the naughty class would also have more time to focus on correcting the actions of these misbehaving students.（2）Should Schools Suspend Troublesone Students?

I recently read a news story about a school in Egland whose headmaster often suspends misbehaving students.The headmster believes that strong discipline improves hoth students’ behaviour and academic performance.His school’s exam results have greatly improved during his time in charge.I believe the headmaster is correct to take this action.If a few students are always behaving poorly in class then it will negatively affect other students’ learning.As a result, many innocent studetns will suffer and they will fail to achieve their full potential.If the naughty students are removed from the class then the others can learn in peace.Hopefully the misbehaving students will learn their lessons and when they return their behaviour will be better.If I was in charge of a school I would also be very strict with students who don’t behave well.I would first warn and then suspend students who interrupt the learning of others or disrespect their teachers.But I would also visit the poor student’s home and discuss the problem with his paents so we could find a solution.梅州一模寫一篇短文介紹大豆的生長過程

1.發(fā)芽的條件：水分充足，溫度適宜，種子就開始發(fā)芽了 2.第一步：出現(xiàn)幼根，并朝下生長 3.第二步：幼苗出現(xiàn)，并朝上生長，直至變成綠色 4.第三步：主根、旁根、枝葉出現(xiàn) 5.第四步：數(shù)月后開花結(jié)果

Where there is enough water and the temperature is right, the bean seed begins to grow.In the first stage , a small root comes out and begins to grow downwards.Then a small shoot begins to grow upswards, getting longer and longer until it turns green.At the same time the root continues to grow downward, becoming the main root together with side roots developing around it while the shoot develops leaves all around.It takes only a few months before the plant flowers and bears fruit.經(jīng)濟(jì)危機(jī)，大學(xué)生就業(yè)難

概括材料主要內(nèi)容This passage mainly tells us…;The story is mainly about…

Increasing unemployment would the biggest challenge for China this year with great numbers of rural and urban workers laid off.The government has launched a stimulus package of 4 trillion yuan to stimulate the country’s economy.現(xiàn)狀：經(jīng)濟(jì)危機(jī)影響全球，就業(yè)機(jī)會少，工人工資低As it is known to all, nearly all countries in the world have been hit by the global economic crisis, leaving few job chances and lower wages and salaries for ordinary people.建議：樹立正確的擇業(yè)觀，降低預(yù)期工資，先就業(yè)再擇業(yè)，自己創(chuàng)業(yè)，開公司，展示自己的才華Under this circumstance, university graduates should have a proper attitude towards their future jobs.It is my suggestion that they should lower their expectation of their future wages or salaries.It’s a good idea for them to take up a job before considering which job to take.To make good advantage of tehir knowledge, they may set up their own business so as to show off their own talent.政府提供各種優(yōu)惠政策，免除各種稅費，提供一定數(shù)量的無息貸款I(lǐng)n order to help those new graduates, the government has offered many favorable policies such as freeing all kinds of taxes.Supplying certain amount of loans without interest.I’m sure they will succeed and can have a bright future with the help of the government.

第四篇：英語書面表達(dá)

2014年濟(jì)寧市中考英語書面表達(dá)

假設(shè)你是李華，已報名參加暑期英語夏令營，根據(jù)夏令營之活動安排，你需要準(zhǔn)備一份關(guān)于英語夏令營英語閱讀方面的發(fā)言稿，具體要求如下：

1.對英語閱讀重要性的認(rèn)識；

2.個人開展英語閱讀的情況（1-2點具體做法）及感悟；

3.將來的打算。

參考詞匯：play an important part;in the past;borrow books;at the beginning;something easy and interesting, in the future, form a good habit of;read everyday;be helpful for.要求：1.詞數(shù)，100詞左右；（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；）

2.可根據(jù)具體要求及參考詞匯適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名。

Good morning, everybody,I’m pleased to be here to talk about my English reading.As we know, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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Thanks for your listening.

第五篇：英語書面表達(dá)

Dear Andy,I‘m so glad that you‘ll be here with me and my family for the summer holiday.I‘m writing to express our warm welcome and introduce the activities during your stay here.In the morning ,some activities at school will be arranged.You‘ll visit our classrooms, reading rooms, labs, and so on.We‘ll take this opportunity to exchange our views, talking about school life, and so on.In the afternoon, you can tour around the city.And I‘ll act as your tour guide.Our city has changed a lot and takes on a new look.You can see what is our city like with your own eyes.At night , we can watch TV, play games and talk about what we‘re interested in.I‘m sure you‘ll enjoy yourself.I‘m looking forward to your coming.Yours sincerely, Li hua [名師點評]

本文行文自然流暢，文章要點齊全，意思表達(dá)真切。詳略得當(dāng)，重點突出。從語言使用的角度來說，不但使用了一些生動的動詞，準(zhǔn)確的名詞，同時為了使本文串聯(lián)自然，又使用了時間狀語為連接詞，將文章按照時間順序敘述完整。