第一篇：2008年6月大學(xué)英語四級考試作文

新東方學(xué)校四級作文教師 李艷華

Among various recipes one enjoys in his or her college life, recreational activities can by no means be ignored.It is numerous activities, such as spoken English competitions, sports events, and clubs and societies of different interests, that help to make campus life colorful and diversified.Facing so many interesting extracurricular activities, we college students have trouble to choose the proper ones.As freshmen, we are confused by all kinds of posters for students’ clubs to recruit new members.There are two opposite views about recreational activities.One says they exert positive influence on a student’s physical and mental development, for they can explore a student’s talent, develop a student's ability in communication, and teach them to be more independent.While, opposite voices can also be heard by asserting that recreational activities waste too much time, and therefore may hinder student from focusing on his or her study.As for me, I hold a belief that recreational activities do more good than harm, because I have always been of the impression that as a college student, he or she, besides the academic information, should pick up more practical skills to be better prepared for the career development.Recreational activities do give us a good chance.And, so long as one can arrange the time by reason, activities besides study will definitely provide more benefit for us.Recreational activity

In people’s daily life, there are various recreational activities apart from studying or working ranging from Karaoke or dancing to computer games or sports games.Such activities are beneficial as well as harmful to us if undertaken inappropriately.On one hand, recreational activities can help us to not only build our body and mind but also improve our communication and understanding with friends because most of these activities are done with others.On the other hand, if we spend too much time on singing, dancing or other games, we might fail to concentrate on our duties such as studying our working, which in turn may lead to further consequences.As far as I’m concerned, recreational activities should be done within a certain limit so that we can keep a proper balance between recreation and studying or working life.In the era of information and technology, there are all kinds of recreational activities.Some people think those recreational activities are great and necessary, because they can help people relax from the hard work and study.Some of the activities, such as hiking, jogging, can help people relax physically;while some of them, such as surfing the Internet, can help people relax mentally.However, some people think that so many kinds of recreational activities may have a bad effect on our lives.Some people may not resist some temptations from those activities, and indulge themselves in those activities.At last they are lured away from their study or their work.In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the advantages of various recreational activities and make the most of them.Meanwhile, we should learn how to use those activities positively, and make them a helpful tool for our development.分析：此次寫作題目與昨天我們預(yù)測的寫作題目之一The Internet重合度非常高，都屬于正反論證類，需要考生論述正反兩方的觀點，并最終表明自己的觀點。寫作中可用的句型和表達也與The Internet的范文達到高達70%的重合度。具體參加下面的預(yù)測范文。

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic The Internet.You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in hinese:

1.有人認(rèn)為網(wǎng)絡(luò)可以讓學(xué)習(xí)、工作更有效率

2.還有人認(rèn)為網(wǎng)絡(luò)讓青少年沉迷，進而影響學(xué)習(xí)

3.你對于網(wǎng)絡(luò)的看法

The Internet

In the era of information and technology, the Internet has played an improtant role in our society.With the Internet, it's easy to get the information we need, improving the efficiency of our study and work.We can't deny that it is impossible for lots of people to achieve great success in the modern society without the Internet.However, some people think that the Internet has a bad effect on the growth of the teenagers.The teenagers are too young to resist some temptations from the Internet.Some of them indulge themselves in the Internet and at last are lured away from the study.In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the advantages of the Internet and make the most of it.Meanwhile, we should teach the teenagers how to use the Internet positively, and make the Internet a tool for their healthy development.21st century has brought with it an unprecedented variety of recreational activities ranging from traditional outdoor activities such as playing ball games to all kinds of online ones, the latter of which is a great appeal to the young generation.So I’d like to narrow my topic down to online recreational activities.It goes without saying that various activities brought by modern technology have greatly broadened our horizon and brought much excitement to us.With access to the Internet, you can get to know people from any country in the world and you can talk with them, play games with them---a temptation very hard to resist, and even see them via web cam.The disadvantage, however, is that anyone who lacks self-control would very easily get lost and become addicted to the online world, which in turn might seriously affect their life, work and interpersonal relationships.As a college student, I think what really matters is to make better choice and exert more discipline.We’d better take advantage of good online recreational activities to enrich our lives and broaden the scope of knowledge.When it comes to those addictive, time-consuming and less meaningful activities, I think to stay away from them is a wise decision.Recreational Activities

With the development of living standard, people spend more time on various forms of recreational activities.People can do sports, singing karaoke, go dancing, go to the movies, play video games or online games, or surf the Internet.Recreational activities are good to people’s health, both physically and mentally.Sports and dancing can keep people fit.Singing karaoke, playing video games or online games can satisfy people’s imagination.Surfing the Internet can bring people a lot of information and knowledge.However, recreational activities might be harmful if people are addicted.Spending too much time on recreational activities will seriously influence people’s normal lives, especially work and study.Therefore, people will benefit from recreational activities only if they take part in them properly.此次作文難度適中，沿襲了往年的?？碱}型—argumentation型，討論某一主題的利弊。本

次題目recreational activities涵蓋面寬，因此考生需要注意把話題縮小到某一個范圍，對于大學(xué)生而言，對于網(wǎng)絡(luò)上的娛樂活動可能更有話可說，所以可以把這個很泛的話題限制在網(wǎng)絡(luò)娛樂活動。而對于網(wǎng)上活動的利弊想必同學(xué)們都可以說出一二，好處比如能夠開闊眼界、增長知識，弊端就是很容易上癮，影響學(xué)習(xí)生活；而個人的看法就是用其精華棄其糟粕，即利用其好處，對不好的地方避而遠之。這是個比較容易套用模板的題目，如果同學(xué)們在考前熟悉了這種體裁的寫作，拿到相對理想的分?jǐn)?shù)應(yīng)該不是難事。

附上該體裁寫作的模板，供同學(xué)們參考。

3．Argumentation型

1）some, others, I 型

（1）模版一

There is no consensus among the people as to the view of _________(主題).Some people hold the idea that _______________________(觀點A).A case in point is that _____________________________(支持觀點A的例子).On the other hand, others may have a quite different view.According to them, ______________(觀點B).The most typical example is that __________(支持觀點B的例子).Weighing the pros and cons of these arguments, I am inclined to agree with the latter.Admittedly, the former point of view seems reasonable in saying to some extent, but the latter is more convincing.（2）模版二

___________(主題)is a common occurrence in our lives.The attitudes toward this issue vary from person to person.Some people tend to ______________ when they are asked _________________(觀點A)because _______________________(支持觀點A的原因).The most typical example is that ____________________________(支持觀點A的例子).However, others argue that ________________________(觀點B).They point out that _______________________(重申觀點B)for the reason that _______________(支持觀點B的原因).As far as I am concerned, I will choose to __________________(你的觀點)because this choice fits my personality and my life-long belief.2）My View 型

（1）模版一

When asked about ______________(主題), some people hold the idea that _________________________(觀點A).As far as they are concerned, _________________________(展開觀點A).But I could not agree with them in several points.In my opinion, ______________________________(觀點B).The reasons for my choice are listed as follows.In the first place, ___________________________(支持觀點B的理由1).In the second place, ______________________________(支持觀點B的理由2).In the third place, _______________________________(支持觀點B的理由3).For the reasons mentioned above, I firmly believe ____________(重申觀點B).（2）模版二

Some people believe that __________________________(觀點A).For instance, they hold the idea that ______________________________(支持觀點A的例子).And it may bring them _____________________________(A帶給他們的好處).In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point.For one thing, _____________________________(我不同意的理由1).For another, _____________________________(我不同意的理由2).As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me, I agree to the thought that ______________________________(重申自己的觀點).3）利弊型

（1）模版一

Nowadays many people prefer __________(主題)because it plays a significant role in our daily life.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.On the one hand, ________________(主題的優(yōu)點1).On the other hand, ___________________(主題的優(yōu)點2).But everything can be divided into two.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that ___________________(主題的缺點1).To make matters worse, __________________________(主題的缺點2).Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects far outweigh its

negative aspects.Whatever effects it has, one thing is certain, ________(主題)itself is neither good nor bad.It is the uses to which it is put that determine its value to our society.（2）模版二

With the development of science and human civilization, many formerly unimaginable things come into reality.Some of them have positive effects on our life, but some are distasteful.The phenomenon of ___________(主題現(xiàn)象)is an example of the former / latter one.There are many factors that may account for it, and the following are the most conspicuous aspects.To start with, __________________(原因1).Furthermore, ______________________(原因2).Eventually, ________________________________(原因3).Good as ____________(主題現(xiàn)象)is, it has, unfortunately, its disadvantages.The apparent example is that ______________(缺點例子1).In addition, _____________________(缺點例子2).On the whole, the phenomenon is one of the results of the progress of the modern society.There is still a long way for us to improve / eliminate __________(主題現(xiàn)象)and make our life more comfortable.

第二篇：大學(xué)英語四級考試作文

大學(xué)英語四級考試作文（附范文）1．書信 例1：感謝信

（1）給小何寫信感謝他接待你在云南旅游（2）回憶美好的旅行經(jīng)歷（3）邀請小何來你的家鄉(xiāng)做客 June 17th , 2006 Dear Xiao He, Thank you ever so much for having invited me for the tour of Yunnan, your home province.I had a fantastic time with you and your family.Your great hospitality will be unforgettable throughout my life.When I think of those gorgeous places of scenic beauty you showed me around, I couldn?t be more delighted.And the pineapple pie Grandma prepared for me is out of this world.I had never had so delicious food!Indeed, I am still missing your snug log-cabin, small and cozy, which was turned into my dream house in fairy land those nights.Would you come to Harbin, my home town, some time this summer vacation? Harbin, a beautiful place frequently referred to as Oriental Paris, offers a picture of another kind.I can assure you another pleasant tour.My family and I cannot wait to see you here.Yours，Li Ming 例2：投訴信

（1）陳述你對學(xué)校圖書館的不滿（2）列舉圖書館存在的問題（3）希望能夠得到改進 September, 11 Dear President, I am a sophomore with the Department of Law.My name is Wang Ming.I am writing to you today to intimate you with something undesirable that I have found in the University Library.You may or may not realize how much our library, the landmark of our university or even of our town, weighs in our minds.It is a place we are most proud of and where we like to spend most of our time.In such an honorable place we have noticed recently some phenomena which hurt our eye.Some seats in the reading rooms are ?permanently reserved vacant seats?, that is, some students “occupy” some seats they never come to use.What a terrible waste of valuable resource!Some other students are too noisy, talking among themselves, leaving mobile phone beeping anytime.And some library staff is ill-mannered and rude and not helpful most of time.These and other undesirable things have already done damage to the fame of our university and caused a lot of inconvenience to the users.Dear President, we hope that something can be done to change and reverse the current situation.Let our cozy, comfortable, quiet, effective library come back.Best wishes

Yours sincerely，2．記敘文 例：A Welcome Back Celebration 1.楊玲生病，情緒低落.2.班上同學(xué)準(zhǔn)備cheer her up.3.舉辦一場歡迎party.Yang Ling is my fellow classmate and friend.Recently she had a terrible condition and has been hospitalized for over a month.She was depressed, sad and downhearted.She told us so many things are working against her, and she didn?t know how to change and redirect herself.The day before she was released from hospital, we, some of her friends decided to give a surprise to cheer her up the next day.That night, she came back, shoulders bent and head fallen.She was so deep in her bad mood that she didn?t realize that her dorm is the only one in the building that is dark.She turned the key in the lock and opened the door when the room was suddenly lit like a bright day.Her eyes sparkled with delight and surprise.She saw all her classmates crowded in this tiny room.Everyone was holding something in his hand, flowers, fruits, cards, cheering, “Welcome back!” She was so moved that she burst into tears.And smile returned to her pretty face.She said “Thank you all.” heartedly.Ever since that day, happiness and delight have stayed with her.Life is so wonderful.3．論說文

例：Buying or Borrowing Books?（1）有些人認(rèn)為書應(yīng)該借來看（2）有些人認(rèn)為書應(yīng)該買來看（3）你的選擇？

Buying or Borrowing Books?

Books can arm us with knowledge and information we need to make success of life.There are generally two ways in which we can have access to books: borrowing or buying.While millions are borrowing books, I still think buying them best suits me and gives me the greatest pleasure.Many people choose to borrow books.For one thing, borrowing books can save us huge amounts of money.For another, if we borrow books from the library or friends, we normally have deadline to finish them.And consequently we can read more books in a limited time, just as a famous Chinese saying goes, “books can not be read unless borrowed.”

I believe that advantages for buying books are more obvious and compelling.Firstly, we can keep the books as long as we wish.Secondly, we can take whatever notes on the margin of the pages of the books.Finally, the process of selecting and keeping books can be a great fun.4．口語作文 例：工作總結(jié)演講

1.簡述上周五系學(xué)生會搞的一次以環(huán)保為主題的到某一湖區(qū)拾trash的活動。2.上述活動的效果及存在的問題。3.你的建議。My fellow students, Last Friday, the Students? Union of our Department organized a clean-up project to Zhongshan Lake.The purpose of this project is to enhance(加強)the environment awareness of general public.Late in the afternoon around 4, a group of 35 volunteers went to the park where we pick up the trash(垃圾)left by some tourists.As head of the group, I would like to report to you on the event.Actually, we did a wonderful job.When we were collecting the trash near the lake, many people paused to watch and then came to our help, showing considerable appreciation and support.But our work still left some to be desired.For one thing, since our project started late in the afternoon, hours were not long enough to attract enough people as we had predicted.For the other, lots of people passed by apparently not knowing what we were doing.But for these two drawbacks, our project could have been much better and more effective.So, following are two of my suggestions: next time we have similar activities, try to start earlier, say in the morning.In this case we can put in more hours.And also, as we are getting along, we can put up some posters to tell people what we are doing and call their attention to environment protection.Thank you.5．圖表作文

A： staying at home B: traveling C: doing social investigation D: other ways

From the two charts, we can see that in the past ten years the students who go traveling and do social investigations during vacations have increased greatly while those who stay at home have decreased a lot.There are several reasons for the changes.Firstly, with the development of economy, many people have become better off.Students can get financial support from their parents for traveling.Secondly, tourism has greatly developed over the past ten years.Many new scenic spots have been built and exploited.In addition, the students today are expected and encouraged to participate in facing the real world.In this way they can obtain the necessary experiences required when they go job-hunting upon graduation.From the changes in the charts, we can predict that more and more college students will make their vacations interesting and worthwhile by going to the outside world instead of staying at home.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Studying Abroad.You should write at least

words following the outline given bellow:

1.近幾年來越來越多的學(xué)生選擇留學(xué)

2.出現(xiàn)這種現(xiàn)象的原因

3.這種現(xiàn)象可能帶來的影響

四級模考參考范文：

Recent years have witnessed a phenomenon that more and more students swarm into foreign countries to finish their education.They have not considered our homeland as the unique place to enrich their knowledge any more.Instead, some excellent boys and girls whose financial condition is fine simultaneously began to pay their attention on some oversea prestigious colleges and institutions and dream to get degrees there.There are several reasons to cause this change.First of all, with the globalization and much more frequent communications with developed countries, most of the people in China get to realize the wide gaps in many fields, especially in science and technology,between China and western countries.They thirst for studying aboard to get ready better for the fierce competition in the job-hunting market.Moreover, the life in foreign countries is usually attractive to young people and studying aboard may satisfy their curiosity.Besides, the rapid development of our mother country and the remarkable growth in our income make going abroad to study available, which is almost impossible to average Chinese students in the past.The move-out of our students changes our society a lot.On one hand, being students in foreign universities will widen their view and offer them more possibility to get favorite jobs.And consequently their success will draw more latecomers to do the same thing.On the other hand, if the majority of them will not go back to China to work in the future, our fatherland will probably suffer a significant loss which may be difficult to be estimated by money.畢業(yè)的問題

1、Studying Abroad or Home

(1)現(xiàn)在有越來越多的人想出國留學(xué)。

(2)出國留學(xué)與在國內(nèi)學(xué)習(xí)的對比。

(3)你的觀點。

Nowadays, with the development of science and technology, more?and?more?people want to study abroad.There are students from colleges and universities, from the middle schools, from the primary schools, and people from all walks of life.What difference does it make?between studying abroad and studying home ?

Though many students are crazy about going abroad to pursue their higher education, I think studying home is preferable.For one thing, you don?t have to take foreign language tests such as TOEFL and GRE.This can save you a tremendous amount of time, money and effort, allowing much of your energy to be devoted to your academic foals.In addition, if you study home ,you can stay with your family and old friends.Meanwhile , while studying home ,you can enjoy the kind of intimate friendship and comfortable family atmosphere which you can only dream of in a foreign university , where you will be accompanied by your own shadow most of the time.For these reasons, pursuing one?s higher education at home is a more realistic and sensible choice.In a word, I prefer to study home.The Intensified Postgraduate Entrance Examination

It can be seen from the graph that there are more and more students attending the postgraduate entrance examination year by year.Compared with before, the rate of the student taking part in the postgraduate entrance examination becomes higher and higher.In the meanwhile, the admittance rate is also rising.What are the reasons for this and the possible consequences? On the one hand, there are three reasons for this.First, the job market becomes more and more competitive.As a result, most people want to find or exchange for a better job by obtaining a high degree.Second, most college students want to pursue their study after their graduation from the undergraduate.Third, with the development the science and technology, what has been learned at college is not enough to meet the need of the society.On the other hand, there are some possible consequences of this.For one thing, most people will be force to pay more attention to the examination than to the improvement of their true ability.For another, it will have a negative effect not only on the individual but also on the society in the long run.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a Letter of Apology.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

1.表達自己對晚交論文一事的歉意。

2.說明未能按時交論文的原因。

3.表示自己將盡快把論文補交上并表示以后將按時交作業(yè)。

這是一封道歉信，寫的時候要遵循道歉信的一般模式：開篇直奔主題，然后說明原因，最后提出可能的補救措施。第一段，對晚交論文及對此造成的后果表示歉意；第二段，說明理由（可信的理由，而不是隨便應(yīng)付老師的借口）；第三段，表示盡快完成論文。

【范文】A Letter of Apology

Dear Mr.Wang，①I am writing to apologize for my late homework.The paper which you have ②assigned to us last Monday was ③due this Friday, but to my regret, I haven?t even started it yet.I feel really sorry for not handing in the paper on time and ④for the inconvenience it would bring to you.I have caught a serious cold last week and the doctor asked me to stay in bed for a week since I was very weak and the weather was very cold these days.Therefore, I couldn?t go to the library to get the necessary ①referential information which was needed for my paper.As a result of this, I have not started writing the paper yet and could not hand it in on time.Fortunately I have finally fully recovered.I will finish the paper as soon as I can and ①try my best to hand in homework on time in the future.Sincerely yours，Li Ming

◇第一段思路點評：

表明歉意

◇語言點提示：

① I am writing to apologize(say sorry)for :道歉信的常用開頭句式

② assign: 分配，指定，布置

③ due；到期的，預(yù)期的

④ I?m sorry for the inconvenience it would bring to you: 另一句常用句式

◇第二段思路點評：

解釋原因，雖然不是真的給人道歉，但是理由還是要充分的好。

◇語言點提示：

① referential: 用作參考的

◇第三段思路點評：

表明盡快完成論文，并表示以后會按時交論文

◇語言點提示：

① try my best to…..in the future: 道歉信常用結(jié)尾

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of

Income Gap.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

1.有些人認(rèn)為收入差距的存在是合理的；

2.有些人認(rèn)為收入差距的存在是不合理的

3.收入差距對社會的影響

議論文，根據(jù)題目要求文章可分為三點：收入差距的合理性；收入差距的不合理性；對社會的影響。在敘述第一、二點時，可適當(dāng)?shù)氐恼归_一兩個小點。注意各點之間的銜接，以及論證的邏輯。

● 范文●?Income Gap

1There has been a heated discussion over the growing income gap now.Some people hold that the gap is natural because it 2reflects different contributions that different people make in their work.3In their view, those people with high income work hard and long.Besides, these people bring high 4efficiency, and create more wealth.Accordingly, they deserve high pay.1On the other hand, there are always some people who view this gap negatively.They believe that a lot of crimes happen as a result of this income gap.Some people make so little from their work that they 2risk taking criminal acts to get rich.In fact, experts have long found out that most cases of crime are directly related to low income.There is 3another point to 4back up a negative view against income gap.For most people, income gap may destroy the satisfaction

that they obtain from work.1As anything has two sides, so has the problem of income gap.Personally, I believe that this gap may 2motivate people to compete better in job market.When this gap is growing too wide, however, our government should make some policies to 3get rid of its negative consequences.◇第一段思路點評：收入差距的合理性

◇語言點提示： There has been a heated discussion over the growing income gap: 直接點題 reflect 意為“反映” in one?s view 意為“在某人看來”（分析觀點時常用詞組）efficiency 意為“效率”

◇第二段思路點評：收入差距的不合理性

◇語言點提示

1On the other hand：意為“另一點、另一方面”（提出相反觀點，與上文銜接）

2risk doing something 意為“冒險做某事”

3another point: 提出另一小點

4back up 意為“支持”

◇第三段思路點評：收入差距的影響

◇語言點提示

1As anything has two sides, so…...議論文常用句式 四級作文

第三篇：大學(xué)英語四級優(yōu)秀作文

大學(xué)英語四級考試優(yōu)秀范文

Part 1:2010年12月

1.目前不少父母為孩子包辦一切2.為了讓孩子獨立，父母應(yīng)該……

How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent

①It is beyond reproach that children are always considered the apple of parents” eyes ,which is especially true in single-child families.②However ,many parents goso far as to take over everything for their life and study even to their future.③It is not unusual to witness that an increasing number of children are accompanied by parent on their first day in college.④I declare in no uncertain terms that it will end up with the children” s lack of independence.In such a world full of fierce competition ,being independent becomes essential for a would-be success.Thus ,⑤what should parents do ?

In my humble opinion, ⑥on the one hand ,parents should raise children in a free-ranging way instead of being “helicopter” parents, who always seem to hover over their children;⑦ on the other hand ,parents should teach children to be responsible for their own behaviors instead of monopolizing everything.⑧I cling to the belief that only when parents realize what is better for their children and care them in a right way ,can they help children develop independence.精彩點評：①引入話題：孩子是父母的掌上明珠。②自然過渡：但是，有些父母卻為孩子包辦一切。③引用生活中的實例，證實父母為孩子包辦并非空穴來風(fēng)。④分析包辦所帶來的后果。⑤提出問題：父母應(yīng)該如何做？⑥和⑦具體闡述解決問題的策略，層次分明。⑧簡要總結(jié)前文所提的具體側(cè)咧，是文章結(jié)尾不顯突兀。

加分亮點：beyond reproach 無可非議be accompanied by…有……陪同

declare in no uncertain terms 毫不諱言fierce competition 激烈的競爭

essential 至關(guān)重要的cling to the belief 堅信

Part 2:2010年6月

1.如今不少學(xué)生在英語學(xué)習(xí)中不重視拼寫

2.出現(xiàn)這種現(xiàn)象的原因是……

3.為了改變這種狀況，我認(rèn)為……

Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling

Nowadays,① an increasing number of students seem to attach less importance to spelling in English learning.②Thus ,numerous misspellings appear in their papers, ③and what ”s worse , a well-organized essay is therefore totally impossible.④There are various reasons responsible for this embarrassing situation.⑤For on thing ,much more students give priorities to oral English at the cost of dosing less spelling exercises ,let alone reflect on what they learned the other day.⑥For another ,many teachers put so much emphasis on communication and grammar in teaching that they seldom highlight spelling, and occasionally worse still, they themselves are caught in spelling.To change this situation, ⑦I hold to the belief that students and teachers should work together.⑧On the one hand ,students should stop complaining about spellings ,and they should realize correct spelling is a must in learning English.⑨On the other hand, teachers should pay more attention to spelling in teaching, for example, focusing on pronunciation and word formation.Only via joint effort can students gain much ground in spelling.精彩點評：

①開門見山，描述現(xiàn)象：很多學(xué)生不重視拼寫。②和③使用thus, and what” s worse 說明該現(xiàn)象造成的結(jié)果：拼寫錯誤連篇，文章結(jié)構(gòu)混亂。④本段分析造成上述結(jié)果的原因。⑤和⑥for on thing…for another…具體列舉不同的原因，層次分明。⑦概括提出解決問題的方法。⑧和⑨使用on the one hand …on the other hand …結(jié)構(gòu)，針對上述成因，提出兩種對應(yīng)的解決方案。最后結(jié)尾常用的倒裝句，總結(jié)前文。

加分亮點：embarrassing 令人為難的，尷尬的give priorities to 認(rèn)為優(yōu)先

Put emphasis on 強調(diào)

Part 3：2009年12月

1.建設(shè)綠色校園十分重要

2.綠色校園不僅是指綠色的環(huán)境……

3.為了建設(shè)綠色校園，我們應(yīng)該……

Creating a Green Campus

During recent years ,①the topic of a green campus ,which has aroused widely public attention, is becoming more and more popular.②Undoubtedly, a green campus, the indispensable part for the development of college students ,has a profound impact on both individuals and society, for its significance cannot be neglected

A green environment ,rather than anything else, plays a decisive role in the growth of college students.Meanwhile ,③it should also be mentioned that a preen campus includes not only the places where the students live, but also the mental environment.Without green surrounding ,the soul of students would be not as pure as we wish.In that case ,④in no place other than campus should we attempt to make a green atmosphere.Due to the seriousness of the situation, it is crucial for us to take effective measures to create a green campus.⑤In the first place, it” s essential that law and regulations should be worked out and enforced by the government and authorities.⑥Furthermore, it is high time that we enhanced the awareness of the students themselves.⑦ Only in this way can we get satisfactory results.With these measures taken ,it is reasonable for us to believe that a green campus will be achieved in the near future.精彩點評：①開門見山，提出綠色校園的話題已經(jīng)引起社會關(guān)注。②點名綠色校園的重要意義。③用not only..but also 句型介紹綠色校園的內(nèi)涵和外延。④半倒裝句的運用恰到好處，引出下文要闡述的內(nèi)容，即社會各界應(yīng)行動起來，推動綠色校園的建設(shè)。⑤和⑥結(jié)構(gòu)連接詞in the first place 和furthermore 的運用，使得論述清晰明了。⑦結(jié)尾常用的倒裝句，總結(jié)前文。

加分亮點：undoubtedly 毋庸置疑地indispensable必不可少的，必需的significance意義

Part4:2009年6月

1.越來越多的博物館現(xiàn)在免費向公眾開放，目的是……

2.有人認(rèn)為這樣做會帶來一些問題

3.在我看來…

Free Admissions to Museums?

①Recently ,more and more museums are open to the public free of charge.By doing so ,they can attract more visitors ,and offer the visitors more opportunities to explore and get easy access to the world of history ,culture and knowledge.②However, some people view that the practice also brings problems and concerns.They are right in a sense.③For one thing ,their main concern is that with more visitors ,it is possible that objects exhibited can get damaged more easily.④For another ,it becomes a huge economic burden for museums to run as usual without any profits from the visitors.⑤In my opinion, I am absolutely in favor of this practice.The reason lies in the fact that the government should provide more opportunities for citizens to explore and get access to the knowledge world.Moreover, kids and teenagers can acquire knowledge in a more vivid way in the museums.⑥I hope all the people can share the same national treasures in more free museums.精彩點評：①開門見山，提出論點。并說明這樣做的目的。②話題一轉(zhuǎn)，闡明這個舉措的弊端。③和④運用關(guān)聯(lián)詞For one thing …For another…,使文章層次分明。⑤利用in my opinion 銜接文章，引出自己的觀點。⑥最后提出希望，總結(jié)全文。

加分亮點：get access to 接觸in favor of 贊同vivid 生動的 鮮明的Part 5:2008年12月

1.一次性塑料袋曾廣為使用

2.由此帶來的問題

3.限制使用一次性塑料袋的意義

Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags

①Recently, limiting the use of disposable plastic bags has been brought to popular attention in China.No one would deny that it was a real convenience in our daily life.②However ,what would our society be like with the excessive use ?

The sharp increase in using plastic bags has given a rise to such problems as environmental pollution.It takes many years for plastic bags to be absorbed by soil, ③which blocks the drainage system and causes water pollution.④What ?s worse ,some bags are of poor-quality, and even harmful to public health.⑤Awareness of the matter in question is one thing ,but more important to us is the step of how to cope with it.From June 1st this year, using of disposable plastic bags in supermarkets is limited strictly.Consequently, people come to take environment-friendly cloth bags and the business cost in supermarkets is cut down as well.⑥Only in this way can we protect both the environment and our own health.精彩點評：①開門見山，提出議論點。②利用轉(zhuǎn)折，承接下文，提出問題。③使用非限制性定語從句，豐富句子結(jié)構(gòu)。④運用遞進結(jié)構(gòu)What? s worse …,使文章有層次感。⑤利用過渡句銜接文章。⑥使用倒裝句，總結(jié)全文。

加分亮點：sharp急劇的，大量的give rise to 引起，使發(fā)生 in question 正被討論 Consequently從此，因而

Part 6:2008年6月

1.娛樂活動多種多樣

2.娛樂活動可以使人們受益，也可能帶來危害

3.作為大學(xué)生，我認(rèn)為…….Recreational Activities

①Abundant recreational activities are available for people to release their strain and stress, ranging from sports to online activities.②There is a hot debate arguing whether they are good for the public or not, especially for college students.③As for such a question, different people hold different views.④ Some believe that recreation is helpful if we want to keep healthy physically and mentally.⑤ While there also sounds an opposite voice, which claims activities bring many problems meanwhile.For example, some young people are easily addicted to the virtual world online, which affects their study badly and may lead to worse consequences as well.⑥As for me ,I hold a belief that recreational activities do more good than harm.They do give us a good chance to relax and build good personal relationships with others, too.⑦As long as we can arrange our time reasonably, they will definitely provide more benefits for us.精彩點評：①開門見山，擺出事實。②提出討論的問題：社會對娛樂活動的爭論。③模板句引出兩種對立觀點。④和⑤運用對比結(jié)構(gòu)Some believe that…While…說明不同的觀點。⑥用模板句提出自己的觀點。⑦給出原因。

加分亮點：be available for 可供…之用…range from…to…從……到……

Be addicted to 沉溺于，熱愛

Part 7:2007年12月

1.各大學(xué)為大學(xué)生開設(shè)了多種多樣的選修課

2.學(xué)生出于各種原因選擇不同的選修課

3.以我自己為例……

What Electives to Choose

Nowadays, ①there exist a wide range of selective courses in college which are ready for the undergraduates to choose from.These courses make the students? college life more colorful.②However, as for the purpose of choosing electives, different students have different ideas.③Some students choose more electives just to get more knowledge, so that they could be well-prepared in the future job hunting.④Some students just want to extend their interests.⑤ Some students suppose the knowledge in the text book is limited.They should choose more courses in order that they could spend four more colorful school years.⑥Still, others have no definite aim and they just want to finish their study.⑦As far as I am concerned, I just want to learn more knowledge for my future life and job.I don?t care about the scores I have got.I just want to be a man having a sharp and imaginative mind with different knowledge which is beyond my major.⑧So I think the possession of much

more knowledge can make my future life easier and more interesting.精彩點評：①開門見山，說明大學(xué)里開設(shè)了很多選修課這一事實。②話鋒一轉(zhuǎn)，支出大家選擇選修課的目的各不相同。③④⑤⑥運用了Some…Some…Still others…的并列平行結(jié)構(gòu)，列舉不同學(xué)生的做法及目的。另外本段使用了so that, in order that 等結(jié)構(gòu)，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。⑦用模板句提出自己的觀點。⑧再次闡明觀點，回應(yīng)主題。

加分亮點：well-prepared 準(zhǔn)備好的sharp 銳利的，敏捷的imaginative 有想象力的Part 8:2007年6月

1.本社團的主要活動內(nèi)容

2.參加本社團的好處

3.如何加入本社團

Welcome to Our Club

Welcome to our club!① Our “Easy-to-Learn” English club aims at helping college students to study English in easier ways.There will be varieties of colorful activities almost every week in our club, such as② English Talk Show, English Corner, English Lectures, English Songs Competition, etc.If you are accepted by our club, you will find you have made a wise choice.③To begin with, you may practice and improve your English in our activities in a relaxed and comfortable way.④ In addition, you may make new friends in the activities, which will inevitably make your college life more enjoyable and meaningful.⑤ Last but not the least, you may participate in all the activities at a very low price or even free of charge.If you feel interested in our club, ⑥please don?t hesitate to join us.You just need to fill in the form and we will contact you as soon as possible.Our telephone number is 7788666, and if you have any problem, please call us.⑦Thanks for your attention and we are looking forward to your joining!

精彩點評：①開門見山，支出此社團的宗旨。②列舉豐富的活動，說服力強，更能吸引學(xué)生加入。③④⑤運用并列平行結(jié)構(gòu)To begin with…In addition… Last but not the least…列舉具體的活動。⑥語言口語化，鼓動性強。⑦再次表示“歡迎加入社團”，突出主題。

加分亮點：inevitably 不可避免地participate in 參加free of charge 免費

Part 9:2006年12月

1.許多人喜歡在除夕觀看春節(jié)聯(lián)歡晚會

2.有些人卻提出取消春節(jié)聯(lián)歡晚會

3.在我看來……

Spring Festival Gala on CCTV

①The CCTV Spring Festival Gala is one of China?s most popular annual television events, watched by millions of people on the eve of the lunar New Year.②However, in recent years, the 4-hour show is losing its appeal, especially to youngsters.③People in increasing numbers choose not to watch the show.They claim that the stereotyped Gala should give way to diverse modern celebrations.④However, some other people are faithful audience of it.They argue that the Evening Gala has ⑤somewhat become a tradition since it was initiated in the 1980s.⑥What?s more, watching the show is an indispensable part of the festival for them.⑦Though the Gala is no longer popular with young people, I enjoy watching the show with my family.⑧Yet to maintain the interest of the young generation, the organizing committee should develop a program more exciting, more colorful and more entertaining than the previous ones.⑨For example, it?s a good idea to invite some big names in China?s film and music industries to perform on the Gala stage.精彩點評“①開門見山，支出春節(jié)晚會的影響力。②話鋒一轉(zhuǎn)，提出問題。Show使主語表達簡介。③和④是分別引出爭議雙方觀點的結(jié)構(gòu)。⑤somewhat起緩和語氣的作用。⑥表遞進關(guān)系。⑦這一句型用于提出自己觀點。⑧不定式結(jié)構(gòu)表目的。⑨舉例說明。

加分亮點：lose one?s appeal 失去吸引力 stereotyped 老套的 give way to 讓路，讓步Initiate 開始indispensable 不可缺少的Part 10:2006年6月

1.有些大學(xué)允許學(xué)生自由選擇某些課程的科任老師

2.學(xué)生選擇教師時所考慮的主要因素

3.學(xué)生自選任課老師的益處和可能產(chǎn)生的問題

On Students Selecting Lecturers

①Nowadays students in some universities are entitled to the option on lecturers for some specific courses.This offers students a more flexible and more efficient way of learning.However, there are several factors for students to consider when choosing their ideal lecturers.②On the one hand, the lecturer?s academic background plays an important role in the decision.An ideal lecturer may give the students much knowledge in his specific field.③On the other hand, the students should take the lecturer?s character into account.Without good character, a lecturer can?t set a good example for the students.④What?s more, ⑤the ideal lecturer is one who has an interesting teaching style and a good reputation among the students.⑥Free choosing of lecturers may bring to the students many advantages, such as encouraging students to take an active part in classes and putting more pressure on lecturers to improve their teaching quality.⑦Nevertheless, it also brings along the terrible fact that some top lecturers will be ignored if they are not able to please the students.To conclude,⑧ further attention should be paid to this matter.精彩點評：①句首開門見山，直述主題。②③④為并列平行結(jié)構(gòu)，列舉學(xué)生需要考慮的因素。⑤定語從句使句式多變。⑥將“選課“這一動作轉(zhuǎn)換為名詞形式。⑦同位語從句使句式多變。⑧運用pay attention to “關(guān)注”的被動形式。

加分亮點：be entitled to 被賦予……option on 在…..方面的選擇權(quán) play a role 起作用Take into account 考慮在內(nèi)

第四篇：大學(xué)英語四級優(yōu)秀作文

范文1

1.現(xiàn)在大學(xué)校園里，遲到、早退、曠課是常見的現(xiàn)象

2.保證學(xué)生的出勤率對大學(xué)教育的重要性

3.作為一個大學(xué)生應(yīng)該怎樣做

Attend Your Classes Regularly

Nowadays it is a very common phenomenon that some university students are late for or even absent from classes.And still there are some students who slip out of the classroom before the class is over.Class attendance has become a thorny problem to both the students and teachers.In fact, it is very important for the students to attend their classes regularly.First, it will ensure you to catch up with the teachers in your learning.That is very helpful to you if you want to do a good job in your study.Second, attending classes regularly is a way of showing respect to your teachers ,too.Your teachers will feel bad if the students do not attend their classes, which, in turn, will affect their teaching and be no good for the students.Third, attending classes regularly will help to form a good habit of punctuality, which is of great importance for the students to do a good job in the future.Therefore, we university students should form the good habit of attending our classes regularly from now on.And some day we’ll benefit from it.點評：2008年元月三日，中山大學(xué)博士發(fā)帖稱遭導(dǎo)師虐待；2008年元月四日，中國政法大學(xué)爆“楊帆門”事件；近幾年，中小學(xué)老師或打?qū)W生或猥褻學(xué)生、體罰學(xué)生等各類新聞不斷曝光，進而引發(fā)了師生關(guān)系的大討論。本預(yù)測題為四級考試傳統(tǒng)的問題解決型的寫作，與校園生活密切相關(guān)。

范文2

1.宿舍生活有時會出現(xiàn)不和諧的情況;

2.一個和諧宿舍生活的必要性;

3.如何創(chuàng)造和諧的宿舍生活。

On a Harmonious Dormitory Life

Dormitory life is an indispensable part of college life.But sometimes the harmony in the dormitory be disturbed in one way or another.As is known to all, a harmonious dormitory life is important to college students and benefits all the members.On one hand, we can have a good rest and put our heart into study.On the other hand, we will have a good mood and enjoy being together.There are several ways to create and maintain a harmonious dormitory life.Firstly, you have to evaluate your life-style and try to get rid of your dirty habits, if there are any.Secondly, when an annoying situation arises, you’ll just have to learn to tolerate each other and co-exist.Thirdly, you’ll have to share with each other and make good friends.In conclusion, we should try our best to build a harmonious dormitory life for the sake of good study and good life.范文3

假設(shè)你是一名學(xué)生志愿者，要給來你們學(xué)校參觀的外國朋友介紹學(xué)校情況。內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括學(xué)校歷史、規(guī)模、教學(xué)現(xiàn)狀以及未來目標(biāo)等。

A Brief Introduction to the University

Distinguished guests,Welcome to our university.Before you start to look around, allow me to give you a brief account

of the school.Founded in 1927, our university is one of this city’s earliest universities of liberal arts.It is staffed with an excellent faculty, and has a total enrollment of over 10,000 students.In the past years, it has turned out numerous well-qualified students and found its graduates active in professions of all walks of life.Since its establishment, the university has always steered itself toward the objective that its students have an overall healthy development.Not only does it provide the students with basic academic courses, but it manages to expose them to the up-to-date knowledge.Besides, students are free to participate in colorful campus activities and social practice, which are intended for broadening their mind and developing their potential talent.Currently, both our faculty and students are making every effort to improve the quality of our education in the direction of a first-rate university.Thank you.范文4

假設(shè)你是李明, 你的一個朋友張偉準(zhǔn)備到你所在的城市來旅游，但你有事不能接待。寫封信給他，解釋你不能接待的原因，并說明你所做的安排。

A Letter to a Friend

Dear Zhang Wei,I’m glad to know that you are coming to my city during the summer vacation.However, I’m afraid there’s some bad news.I’m planning to take part in an international conference to be held in another city during the time of your visit.All the top scientists in my field will show up at the conference.More importantly, I’m lucky enough to have been selected to give a speech on behalf of my research team at the Conference.I really can’t miss it.I understand that it’ll be your first time to this city and I’m your only friend here.I’ve asked my roommate to meet you at the airport, and you can stay in my room.He is a very nice person and he will show you around the city.Hope you two will get on well and have a nice holiday!Yours,Li Ming

范文5

1． 有人認(rèn)為大學(xué)里應(yīng)獨自生活

2． 另一些認(rèn)為大學(xué)里應(yīng)與別人同住

3． 你的看法

Living alone or Living with Roommates

Nowadays, there has appeared a heated discussion among the college students as to whether they should live alone outside the campus or live together with other roommates in the students’ dormitory.Opinions are divided over the matter.Those who are in favor of Living alone maintain that it is very convenient to live by themselves.They can enjoy absolute freedom in a room of their own.They can have their own timetable without disturbing others.They are also free to equip the room with a personal computer so that they can have easy access to the Internet.But others argue that living with roommates has attractions of its own.With several students sharing the same room, each person’s experiences can be greatly enriched.They can learn a lot

from talking to one another.By learning to tolerate the differences between individuals, they can become more mature.As far as I’m concerned, I prefer to live with roommates because I love the feeling of belonging.Besides, it is a lot cheaper to live in a dorm than to rent a apartment outside the campus.

第五篇：大學(xué)英語四級考試

大學(xué)英語四級考試流程

8：50---9：00試音時間

9：00---9：10播放考場指令，發(fā)放作文考卷

9：10取下耳機，開始作文考試

9：35發(fā)放含有快速閱讀的試題冊（但9：40才允許開始做）

9：40---9：55做快速閱讀

9：55---10：00收答題卡一（即作文和快速閱讀）

9：55---10：00重新戴上耳機，試音尋臺，準(zhǔn)備聽力考試

10：00開始聽力考試，電臺開始放音

聽力結(jié)束后完成剩余考項。

11：20全部考試結(jié)束。

注釋:

1，標(biāo)準(zhǔn)分滿分710分=聽力248.5＋閱讀248.5＋綜合測試106.5＋寫作106.5。

2，從聽力、閱讀部分的換算表可以看出，錯前兩分的時候，標(biāo)準(zhǔn)分扣分嚴(yán)重，1分扣10.5分，錯到第3分的時候，標(biāo)準(zhǔn)分扣分有所降低-7分，扣到10分以后，標(biāo)準(zhǔn)分扣分就更低（3分），可見，標(biāo)準(zhǔn)分換算目的是把同學(xué)的成績檔次拉開，讓特別優(yōu)秀的同學(xué)脫穎而出，要想總分取得630分以上，必須保證很高的正確率，卷面扣的前幾分在標(biāo)準(zhǔn)分的權(quán)重相當(dāng)大。這也就解釋了為什么考630分以上的同學(xué)這么少！據(jù)換算，要考630分，閱讀和聽力部分卷面每部分扣分在3分左右。

3，綜合測試的分?jǐn)?shù)權(quán)重不大，卷面錯1分在標(biāo)準(zhǔn)分中扣的分也相對較少，而且完型填空題量大，得分率不高，在考場上建議大家不要把完型填空耗費掉太多的時間，得不償失！

4.當(dāng)你拿到成績單，上面寫著290，那么恭喜你，你的卷面成績?yōu)?分。如果425+，就算順利通過