第一篇：四級(jí)寫作萬能句子公式

英語(yǔ)四級(jí)寫作萬能公式

． 開頭萬能公式 一：名人名言 有人問了，“我沒有記住名言，怎么辦？尤其是英語(yǔ)名言？”，很好辦：編！

原理：我們看到的東西很多都是創(chuàng)造出來的，包括我們欣賞的文章也是，所以盡管編，但是一定要聽起來很有道理呦！而且沒準(zhǔn)將來我們就是名人呢！對(duì)吧？ 經(jīng)典句型：

A proberb says, “ You are only young once.”（適用于已記住的名言）It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.（適用于自編名言）更多經(jīng)典句型：

As everyone knows, No one can deny that… 2． 開頭萬能公式 二：數(shù)字統(tǒng)計(jì)

原理：要想更有說服力，就應(yīng)該用實(shí)際的數(shù)字來說明。

原則上在議論文當(dāng)中十不應(yīng)該出現(xiàn)虛假數(shù)字的，可是在考試的時(shí)候哪管那三七二十一，但編無妨，只要我有東西寫就萬事大吉了。所以不妨試用下面的句型：

According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.看起來這個(gè)數(shù)字文鄒鄒的，其實(shí)都是編造出來的，下面隨便幾個(gè)題目我們都可以這樣編造： Honesty 根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)統(tǒng)計(jì)調(diào)查顯示，大學(xué)生向老師請(qǐng)假的理由當(dāng)中78%都是假的。

Travel by Bike 根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)統(tǒng)計(jì)調(diào)查顯示，85%的人在近距離旅行的時(shí)候首選的交通工具是自行車。Youth 根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)統(tǒng)計(jì)調(diào)查顯示，在某個(gè)大學(xué)，學(xué)生的課余時(shí)間的70%都是在休閑娛樂。Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work? 根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)統(tǒng)計(jì)調(diào)查顯示，98%的人同意每周五天工作日。更多句型：

A recent statistics shows that …

結(jié)尾萬能公式：

1． 結(jié)尾萬能公式一：如此結(jié)論

說完了，畢竟要?dú)w納一番，相信各位都有這樣的經(jīng)歷，領(lǐng)導(dǎo)長(zhǎng)篇大論，到最后終于冒出個(gè)“總而言之”之類的話，我們馬上停止開小差，等待領(lǐng)導(dǎo)說結(jié)束語(yǔ)。也就是說，開頭很好，也必然要有一個(gè)精彩的結(jié)尾，讓讀者眼前一亮，這樣，你就可以拿高分了！比如下面的例子： Obviously（此為過渡短語(yǔ)）, we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.如果讀者很難“顯而見之”，但說無妨，就當(dāng)讀者的眼光太淺罷了！更多過渡短語(yǔ)：

to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus 更多句型：

Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that… 2． 結(jié)尾萬能公式二：如此建議

如果說“如此結(jié)論”是結(jié)尾最沒用的廢話，那么“如此建議”應(yīng)該是最有價(jià)值的廢話了，因?yàn)檫@里雖然也是廢話，但是卻用了一個(gè)很經(jīng)典的虛擬語(yǔ)氣的句型。拽！Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.這里的虛擬語(yǔ)氣用得很經(jīng)典，因?yàn)榭脊俦緛斫?jīng)?？歼@個(gè)句型，而如果我們自己寫出來，你說考官會(huì)怎么想呢？ 更多句型：

Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.寫作的“七項(xiàng)基本原則”：

一、長(zhǎng) 短 句原則

工作還得一張一馳呢，老讓讀者讀長(zhǎng)句，累死人！寫一個(gè)短小精辟的句子，相反，卻可以起到畫龍點(diǎn)睛的作用。而且如果我們把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主題：

As a creature, I eat;as a man, I read.Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.如此可見，長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合，抑揚(yáng)頓挫，豈不爽哉？牢記！

強(qiáng)烈建議：在文章第一段（開頭）用一長(zhǎng)一短，且先長(zhǎng)后短；在文章主體部分，要先用一個(gè)短句解釋主要意思，然后在闡述幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)的時(shí)候采用先短后長(zhǎng)的句群形式，定會(huì)讓主體部分妙筆生輝！文章結(jié)尾一般用一長(zhǎng)一短就可以了。

二、主 題 句原則

國(guó)有其君，家有其主，文章也要有其主。否則會(huì)給人造成“群龍無首”之感！相信各位讀過一些破爛文學(xué)，故意把主體隱藏在文章之內(nèi)，結(jié)果造成我們稀里糊涂！不知所云！所以奉勸各位一定要寫一個(gè)主題句，放在文章的開頭（保險(xiǎn)型）或者結(jié)尾，讓讀者一目了然，必會(huì)平安無事！

特別提示：隱藏主體句可是要冒險(xiǎn)的！

To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam（主題句）.Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.三、一 二 三原則

領(lǐng)導(dǎo)講話總是第一部分、第一點(diǎn)、第二點(diǎn)、第三點(diǎn)、第二部分、第一點(diǎn)? 如此羅嗦?？僧吘惯€是條理清楚?？脊賯兛次恼乱脖厝灰ㄟ^這些關(guān)鍵性的“標(biāo)簽”來判定你的文章是否結(jié)構(gòu)清楚，條理自然。***方法很簡(jiǎn)單，只要把下面任何一組的詞匯加入到你的幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)前就清楚了。

1）first, second, third, last（不推薦，原因：俗）

2）firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally（不推薦，原因：俗）

3）the first, the second, the third, the last（不推薦，原因：俗）

4）in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly（不推薦，原因：俗）5）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally（強(qiáng)烈推薦）6）to start with, next, in addition, finally（強(qiáng)烈推薦）

7）first and foremost, besides, last but not least（強(qiáng)烈推薦）8）most important of all, moreover, finally 9）on the one hand, on the other hand（適用于兩點(diǎn)的情況）10）for one thing, for another thing（適用于兩點(diǎn)的情況）

建議：不僅僅在寫作中注意，平時(shí)說話的時(shí)候也應(yīng)該條理清楚！

四、短語(yǔ)優(yōu)先原則 寫作時(shí)，尤其是在考試時(shí)，如果使用短語(yǔ)，有兩個(gè)好處：其

一、用短語(yǔ)會(huì)使文章增加亮點(diǎn)，如果老師們看到你的文章太簡(jiǎn)單，看不到一個(gè)自己不認(rèn)識(shí)的短語(yǔ)，必然會(huì)看你低一等。相反，如果發(fā)現(xiàn)亮點(diǎn)—精彩的短語(yǔ)，那么你的文章定會(huì)得高分了。其

二、關(guān)鍵時(shí)刻思維短路，只有湊字?jǐn)?shù)，怎么辦？用短語(yǔ)是一個(gè)辦法！比如： I cannot bear it.可以用短語(yǔ)表達(dá)：I cannot put up with it.I want it.可以用短語(yǔ)表達(dá)：I am looking forward to it.這樣字?jǐn)?shù)明顯增加，表達(dá)也更準(zhǔn)確。

五、多實(shí)少虛原則

原因很簡(jiǎn)單，寫文章還是應(yīng)該寫一些實(shí)際的東西，不要空話連篇。這就要求一定要多用實(shí)詞，少用虛詞。我這里所說的虛詞就是指那些比較大的詞。比如我們說一個(gè)很好的時(shí)候，不應(yīng)該之說nice這樣空洞的詞，應(yīng)該使用一些諸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之類的形象詞。再比如： 走出房間，general的詞是：walk out of the room 但是小偷走出房間應(yīng)該說：slip out of the room 小姐走出房間應(yīng)該說：sail out of the room 小孩走出房間應(yīng)該說：dance out of the room 老人走出房間應(yīng)該說：stagger out of the room 所以多用實(shí)詞，少用虛詞，文章將會(huì)大放異彩！

六、多變句式原則

1）加法（串聯(lián)）

都希望寫下很長(zhǎng)的句子，像個(gè)老外似的，可就是怕寫錯(cuò)，怎么辦，最保險(xiǎn)的寫長(zhǎng)句的方法就是這些，可以在任何句子之間加and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后關(guān)系或者并列關(guān)系。比如說：

I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.如果是二者并列的，我們可以用一個(gè)超級(jí)句式：

Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.(not only…but also…)其它的短語(yǔ)可以用：

besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover 2）轉(zhuǎn)折（拐彎抹角）

批評(píng)某人缺點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，我們總習(xí)慣先拐彎抹角說說他的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，然后轉(zhuǎn)入正題，再說缺點(diǎn)，這種方式雖然陰險(xiǎn)了點(diǎn)，可畢竟還比較容易讓人接受。所以呢，我們說話的時(shí)候，只要在要點(diǎn)之前先來點(diǎn)廢話，注意二者之間用個(gè)轉(zhuǎn)折詞就夠了。The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.The coat was thin, but it was warm.更多的短語(yǔ)：

despite that, still仍, however然而, nevertheless然而, in spite of 不管, despite不管, notwithstanding.雖然

3）因果（so, so, so）

昨天在街上我看到了一個(gè)女孩，然后我主動(dòng)搭訕，然后我們?nèi)タХ葟d，然后我們認(rèn)識(shí)了，然后我們成為了朋友?可見，講故事的時(shí)候我們總要追求先后順序，先什么，后什么，所以然后這個(gè)詞就變得很常見了。其實(shí)這個(gè)詞表示的是先后或因果關(guān)系！The snow began to fall, so we went home.考試論壇2001碩士研究生入學(xué)統(tǒng)一考試政治試題(文科).2001考研政治試題(文科)收藏 分享 評(píng)分

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then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that 4）失衡句（頭重腳輕，或者頭輕腳重）

有些人腦袋大，身體小，或者有些人腦袋小，身體大，雖然我們不希望長(zhǎng)成這個(gè)樣子，可如果真的是這樣了，也就必然會(huì)吸引別人的注意力。文章中如果出現(xiàn)這樣的句子，就更會(huì)讓考官看到你的句子與眾不同。其實(shí)就是主語(yǔ)從句，表語(yǔ)從句，賓語(yǔ)從句的變形。舉例：This is what I can do.Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.同樣主語(yǔ)、賓語(yǔ)、表語(yǔ)可以改成如下的復(fù)雜成分：

When to go, Why he goes away… 5）附加（多此一舉）

如果有了老婆，總會(huì)遇到這樣的情況，當(dāng)你再講某個(gè)人的時(shí)候，她會(huì)插一句說，我昨天見過他；或者說，就是某某某，如果把老婆的話插入到我們的話里面，那就是定語(yǔ)從句和同位語(yǔ)從句或者是插入語(yǔ)。

The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.其實(shí)很簡(jiǎn)單，同位語(yǔ)--要解釋的東西刪除后不影響整個(gè)句子的構(gòu)成；定語(yǔ)從句—借用之前的關(guān)鍵詞并且用其重新組成一個(gè)句子插入其中，但是whom or that 關(guān)鍵詞必須要緊跟在先行詞之前。

6）排比（排山倒海句）

文學(xué)作品中最吸引人的地方莫過于此，如果非要讓你的文章更加精彩的話，那么我希望你引用一個(gè)個(gè)的排比句，一個(gè)個(gè)得對(duì)偶句，一個(gè)個(gè)的不定式，一個(gè)個(gè)地詞，一個(gè)個(gè)的短語(yǔ)，如此表達(dá)將會(huì)使文章有排山倒海之勢(shì)！

Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life.（氣勢(shì)恢宏）

要想寫出如此氣勢(shì)恢宏的句子非用排比不可！

七、挑戰(zhàn)極限原則

既然十挑戰(zhàn)極限，必然是比較難的，但是并非不可攀！

原理：在學(xué)生的文章中，很少發(fā)現(xiàn)諸如獨(dú)立主格的句子，其實(shí)也很簡(jiǎn)單，只要花上5分鐘的時(shí)間看看就可以領(lǐng)會(huì)，它就是分詞的一種特殊形式，分詞要求主語(yǔ)一致，而獨(dú)立主格則不然。比如：

The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.如果您可一些出這樣的句子，不得高分才怪！文章主體段落三大殺手锏：

一、舉實(shí)例

思維短路，舉實(shí)例！提出一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，舉實(shí)例！提出一個(gè)方案，舉實(shí)例！而且者也是我們揭示一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)最好的方式，任何情況下，只要我們無法繼續(xù)文章，不管三七二十一，盡管舉例子！In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted every possible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human perｆｒｏｍance.For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fime him or her.更多句型：

To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…, for example

二、做比較

方法：寫完一個(gè)要點(diǎn)，比較與之相似的；又寫完一個(gè)要點(diǎn)，再比較與之相反的；

世界上沒有同樣的指紋，沒有相同的樹葉，文章亦同，只有通過比較，你才會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)二者的相同點(diǎn)（through comparison）和不同點(diǎn)（through contrast）。下面是一些短語(yǔ)： 相似的比較：

in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner 相反的比較：

on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …, …

三、換言之

沒話說了，可以換一句話再說，讓你的文章在多一些字，或者文鄒鄒地說，是讓讀者更充分的理解你的觀點(diǎn)。

實(shí)際就是重復(fù)重復(fù)再重復(fù)！下面的句子實(shí)際上就三個(gè)字 I love you!I am enthusiastic about you.That is to say, I love you.I am wild about you.In other words, I have fallen in love with you.或者上面我們舉過的例子：

I cannot bear it.可以用短語(yǔ)表達(dá)：I cannot put up with it.因此可以這樣說：I cannot bear it.That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it.更多短語(yǔ)：

in more difficult language, in simpler words, put it more simply

“引言”段落中的常用句型：

1．?is a very popular topic which is much talked about not only by ?but also by ? 家庭人口多好還是家庭人口少好是一個(gè)非常通俗的主題，不僅是城里人，而且農(nóng)民都經(jīng)常談?wù)撨@個(gè)問題。

Weahter a large family is a good thing or not is a very popular topic which is often talked about not only by city residents but by farners as well.2.There is no denying the fact that…

無可否認(rèn)，空氣污染是一個(gè)極其嚴(yán)重的問題：城市當(dāng)局應(yīng)該采取有力措施來解決它。There is no denying the fact that air pollution is an extemerely serious problem:the city authorities should take strong measures to deal with it.3.As is known to all,…

眾所周知，假冒偽劣商品損害了消費(fèi)者的利益。

As is known to all,fake and inferior commodities harm the interests of consumers.(=do a lot of harm to the interests of comsumers)4.More and more people are realing the importance of … 現(xiàn)在越來越多的人認(rèn)識(shí)到法制教育的重要性。為了維護(hù)社會(huì)治安，我們每人都應(yīng)該接受法制教育。

Tody an increaasing number of people have realized that law education is of great importance.In order to keep law and order,very one of us is supposed to get(=receive)a law education.5.From what I have mentioned above we can see clearly that…

從上面我所提到的，我們可以清楚地看到，電視暴力對(duì)青少年的影響是極其深遠(yuǎn)的。From what I have mentoned above,we can see clearly that violence on TV has great influence on young adults’ behaviour.(或 teenagers’ behavior 或 youngsters’ behavior)“正文”段落中常用的句型：

1．There are some good reasons for?(分析原因)two possible 人民生活狀況的改善原因有兩點(diǎn)。首先，我們一直在貫徹執(zhí)行改革開放政策。其次，國(guó)民經(jīng)濟(jì)正在迅速發(fā)展，而且出生率已經(jīng)得到控制。There are two reasons for the improvement in people’s living conditions.In the first place,we have been carrying out the reｆｒｏｍ and opening-up policy.Secondly,there has been a rapid expansion of our national economy.Further-more,the birth rate has been put under control.2.My suggestions to deal with the problem are as follows.In the first place,… Secondly,…Finally… solve tackle relieve（提出建議）

我對(duì)解決這個(gè)問題的建議如下。首先，迫在眉睫的是建立自然保護(hù)區(qū)。其次，有些瀕臨滅絕的珍稀野生動(dòng)物應(yīng)該收捕、人工喂養(yǎng)并繁殖。最后，對(duì)于捕獵珍稀野生動(dòng)物的人必須嚴(yán)懲。My suggestions to deal with the problem are as follows.To begin with,it is urgent to create nature reserves.Secondly,certain rare wild animals that are going to be extinct should be collected,fed and reproduced artificially.Finally ,those who hunter them must be punished severely.3.Different people have different opinions on this question.Some people believe that … Others problem.matter.argue that? Still others assert that?（論述不同看法）

人們對(duì)失敗持有不同的態(tài)度。面對(duì)失敗，有人能夠經(jīng)得起考驗(yàn)，從失敗中汲取教訓(xùn)，并努力去完成他們下定決心要做的事情。然而，另一些人卻喪失信心并退卻了。

People differ in their attitudes towards failure.Faced with it ,some of them can stand up to it.draw useful lessons from it and try hard to fulfii what they are determined to do.Others,however,lose heart and give in.4.It is important(nessary, urgent, difficult, easy, expensive, desirable, abvisable, convenient, comfortable)for sb.to do sth.（發(fā)表意見）

人們希望建立更多的醫(yī)院、購(gòu)物中心、娛樂中心、電影院和其他公用設(shè)施來滿足人民日益增長(zhǎng)的需求。

It is desirable to build more hospitals,shopping centres,recreation centres,cinemas and other public facilities to meet the growing needs of people.5.As a popular saying goes “Everything has two sides.”(分析利弊)常言道：“事物總是一分為二的”。如今人們從科技發(fā)明中得到越來越多的好處。另一方面，科技進(jìn)步也給我們帶來了許多麻煩?，F(xiàn)在許多國(guó)家的人民飽嘗公害之苦。

As a popular saying goes, “Everything has two sides.” Now people(the public)are benefiting more and more from scientific and technological inventions.On the other hand,the progress of science and technology is bringing us a lot of trouble.People in many countries are srffering from public hazards.6.For example, ?（舉例闡述）For instance, …

Let’s take …for examlpe.就拿汽車為例。汽車不僅污染城市空氣，而且使城市擁擠不堪。此外，汽車造成許多交通事故。汽車所產(chǎn)生的噪音使居住在街道兩旁的居民日夜不得安寧。

Les’s take cars for example.They not only pollute the air in cities,but make them crowed.Furthermore,they carse a lot of traffic accidents.(…, they are responsible for a lot of traffic accidents.)The noise made by cars disturbs the residents living on both sides of streets all day and night.7.It is generally believed that … accepted（引證觀點(diǎn)）

thought held 普遍認(rèn)為，在發(fā)達(dá)國(guó)家人口增長(zhǎng)的主要原因與其說是出生率的上升，還不如說是由于醫(yī)療保健的改善的使死亡率下降了。

It is generally believed(=thought)that the chief reason for the increase in population in developed coutries is not so much the rise in birth rates as the decline in death rates as a result of the improvement in medical care.8.?causes(produces, brings about, leads to, results in ?)（因果關(guān)系）毫無疑問，需求的增長(zhǎng)導(dǎo)致了價(jià)格的上漲。

There is no doubt that the increase in demand causes(results in/leads to)the rise in prices.圖表概述或描述中常用的句型(朱泰祺)1.As is shown by the graph,?（概述圖表）in the table.正如曲線所示，最近54年來該國(guó)人口飛速增長(zhǎng)。As is shown by the graph,there has been a rapid increase in the population of the country in the past five years.2.It can be seen from the table that ?（得出結(jié)論）shown graph concluded figures estimated statistics A.從表中所給的統(tǒng)計(jì)數(shù)字可以看出，從1985年到1990年中國(guó)的人均收入迅速提高。From the statistics given in the table it can be seen that the average personal income of the Chinese people increased(grew、rose)rapidly from 1985 to 1990.B.從曲線圖可以得出結(jié)論，最近5年來中國(guó)人口的出生率已經(jīng)大大下降。

It can be concluded from the graph that there has been a great decline in birth rates in China in the past five years.3.? amount to ?（數(shù)量總計(jì)）add up to come to sum up to 全部費(fèi)用合計(jì)200美元。

All the expenses(costs)amount to(= add up to)$ 200.4.? increase from ? to ?（數(shù)量增減）decrease rise fall drop A.這個(gè)工廠生產(chǎn)的彩電已由1986年的5000臺(tái)增加到1990年的21000臺(tái)。

The number of colour TV sets produced by the factory increased(rose , grew , climbed)from 5000 in 1986 to 21000 in 1990.B.參加者的人數(shù)增加到30萬。

The number of paticipants grew up to 300000 persons = increased , reaching 300000 persons).C.這個(gè)學(xué)校的教職工人數(shù)已減少到700人。

The number of teaching staff members in this school has decreased to 700 persons.5.（be）three times as + 形容詞 + as 總產(chǎn)量 total output 鋼的年產(chǎn)量 the annual output of 上升17% rise by 17per cent steel 日產(chǎn)量 the daily output 導(dǎo)致產(chǎn)量下降 result in a diminished output

現(xiàn)在我們地區(qū)的糧食產(chǎn)量相當(dāng)于1970年的3倍。

The grain production(= output)in our area now is three times as great as that of 1970.6.Compared with … , … 與去年相比，今年13項(xiàng)主要產(chǎn)品的產(chǎn)量都有大幅度增長(zhǎng)。The factory has an output of 9 million cigarettes daily.Compared with that of last year,the output of 13 main products(= items)this year has increased to a great extent.7.There is(was)a rapid rise in … be on the rise has been sharp increase on the increase sudden decrease on the decline steady decline gradual fall slow drop slight 最近幾年來這個(gè)地區(qū)的棉花產(chǎn)量有了迅速增長(zhǎng)。

The cotton output in this area has increased rapidly in the past few years.——“結(jié)尾”段落中常用的句型：

1.In my opinion, … 2.Personally, I … 3.In short(= In brief), …

4.In conclusion, … 5.As far as I’m concerned, … 6.To conclude , it seems clear that …

至于說到我，我贊成前一種觀點(diǎn)。所以，我的結(jié)論是，只要我們堅(jiān)持正確的東西，改正錯(cuò)誤的東西，我們就一定能成功。

As far as I’m concerned ,I’m in favour of the ｆｒｏｍer view.Therefore,my conclusion is that we are certain to succeed as long as we stick to what is right and correct what is wrong.

第二篇：四級(jí)寫作

四級(jí)寫作

孫子云：“知己知彼，百戰(zhàn)不殆”。想在寫作考試中獲得成功，就必須首先了解四級(jí)考試的要求和評(píng)分規(guī)則。由于新四級(jí)考試還沒有開始進(jìn)行，筆者就以一篇根據(jù)現(xiàn)行四級(jí)寫作題目“Do‘Lucky Numbers’Really Bring Good Luck?”寫成的學(xué)生作文為例來講述幾個(gè)最基本的道理。

例文1：

Some people think that certian(拼寫錯(cuò)誤)numbers will bring good luck to them.Numbers such as six, eight, sixteen and eighteen are regarded as lucky numbers.There are also people who think that their success is related to certain numbers.However, some other people think numbers have nothing to do with their luck.They believe in their own rather than“l(fā)ucky numbers”.They don't do things according to certain numbers.As far as I am concerned, I think it is a person's own business whether he believes in a certain number or not.The most important thing is that he has done the work by himself and has done it quite well.As to the belief in numbers, it is their(前后指代不一致，應(yīng)改為his)personal choice.該文章是當(dāng)年四級(jí)考試命題組印發(fā)給全國(guó)評(píng)卷老師的一篇例文，根據(jù)15分制的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，這篇例文被評(píng)為14分，供全國(guó)評(píng)卷老師作為評(píng)分參考。乍看起來，本文無論從遣詞造句還是思想深度，似乎都算不得一篇佳作；但它之所以能夠被評(píng)為14分，還是有其內(nèi)在深層次原因的，那就是經(jīng)常被考生們所忽視的議論文寫作常識(shí)。簡(jiǎn)要地講，可分為以下三個(gè)部分：

(一)英文議論文的結(jié)構(gòu)特點(diǎn)

漢語(yǔ)寫作對(duì)文章結(jié)構(gòu)的要求不是很高，如開頭段應(yīng)該包括什么、論題句應(yīng)該在什么時(shí)候出現(xiàn)、文章的結(jié)尾是否必須總結(jié)全文等等。而英語(yǔ)寫作要求文章結(jié)構(gòu)必須十分嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，文章各個(gè)部分的功能都要十分清晰，開頭、中間和結(jié)尾都有嚴(yán)格的要求。

簡(jiǎn)而言之，英語(yǔ)議論文共有三大特點(diǎn)：

1、觀點(diǎn)鮮明的開頭；

2、緊扣主題的結(jié)尾；

3、有主題句并且銜接自然的中間段落。

這三點(diǎn)當(dāng)中，第1、2點(diǎn)早已為絕大多數(shù)中國(guó)學(xué)生所熟知，因?yàn)殚_頭點(diǎn)題和結(jié)尾扣題同樣也是漢語(yǔ)文章的要求。但在長(zhǎng)時(shí)間的學(xué)習(xí)過程中，這樣的要求被很多學(xué)生以為是“老土”而得不到足夠的重視。如果將這種思想帶到英語(yǔ)議論文寫作當(dāng)中，直接的后果就是中心分散、觀點(diǎn)不明確，加上中國(guó)學(xué)生普遍英文表達(dá)能力不強(qiáng)，這些因素就為整篇文章的失敗埋下了隱患。

另外，英語(yǔ)文章和漢語(yǔ)不同的是段落的主題句一定要放在段首，而不能按照中文的寫作習(xí)慣放在段落的中間或者最后，在英文應(yīng)試寫作中更加如此。正因?yàn)闆]有“主題句”的思想，所以中國(guó)學(xué)生在寫英語(yǔ)文章時(shí)經(jīng)?！跋氲绞裁?，就寫什么”，這在英語(yǔ)議論文中是不能接受的。例如，例文1中每一段的首句都簡(jiǎn)要地概括出了該段的主要內(nèi)容，換句話說，每段的內(nèi)容都是根據(jù)首句來展開的，其順序不能顛倒。

(關(guān)于段落的銜接，在后面的內(nèi)容中將詳細(xì)介紹。)(二)中心統(tǒng)一

在中心統(tǒng)一這個(gè)問題上，英語(yǔ)議論文和漢語(yǔ)議論文的概念也有所不同。中國(guó)人在寫議論文時(shí)常常遵循“中庸”的原則，其具體的表現(xiàn)就是認(rèn)為世界上沒有任何事情是絕對(duì)的。當(dāng)他們?cè)谖恼轮斜頁(yè)P(yáng)一件事物或一種現(xiàn)象的時(shí)候，總要指出其不足；同樣，在批評(píng)一件事物或一種現(xiàn)象的同時(shí)，也總不忘記指出其也有合理之處。這種做法從道理上來講并沒有什么不妥，但卻不符合英語(yǔ)議論文的寫作習(xí)慣，因?yàn)橛⒄Z(yǔ)作家在寫議論文時(shí)關(guān)注的是自己的辯論技巧和其結(jié)果對(duì)公眾的影響力。換句話說，如果作者告訴大家兩面都有道理也就等于說兩面都沒有道理，因?yàn)樽x者在讀了文章之后仍舊不知道作者的看法是什么，以及自己在這種情況下到底該怎么做。

所以，既然四級(jí)考試考的是英語(yǔ)文章，大家就應(yīng)該遵循英文議論文的寫作思路和習(xí)慣：表示支持則旗幟鮮明地支持；表示反對(duì)就徹徹底底地反對(duì)，而不能采取“墻頭草兩邊倒”的做法。以上面的例文1為例，如果作者的觀點(diǎn)是“幸運(yùn)數(shù)字是既有道理又無道理的”，這種觀點(diǎn)就無法讓人接受，因?yàn)樵谟⒄Z(yǔ)議論文中，這是典型的中心不統(tǒng)一

大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)寫作常用經(jīng)典句型

1）主語(yǔ)從句

It is common knowledge that honesty is the best policy.It is well-known that…

It is self-evident/ conceivable / obvious / apparent that…

It goes without saying that… It is universally acknowledged that… It is / that 2）賓（表）語(yǔ)從句 We cannot understand why he was so cruel to his roommates.The problem is not who will go, but who will stay.3）定語(yǔ)從句（限定性和非限定性）

As is shown/ demonstrated/ illustrated/ depicted/ described…in the cartoon/ picture/ graph/ table…, There are many reasons why I want to study in your university.It is estimated that tens of billions of pounds spent on cigarettes every year in our country, which is a huge waste.4）狀語(yǔ)從句（時(shí)間，原因，地點(diǎn)，條件，讓步，轉(zhuǎn)折等）

When the man is enjoying the cigarette, the smoke becomes a monster（怪物）which will devour him.Whatever the reason, there are still some problems with student use of computers.5）分詞短語(yǔ)做定語(yǔ)或狀語(yǔ)

Prof.Kang came to our university, giving us a lecture on how to acquire English better.6）倒裝句

Only through these measures can we hope to solve the problem.Scattered around the globe are more than 100 small regions of isolated volcanic activity known to geologists as hot spots.7）被動(dòng)句

Some measures should be taken to deal with the problem.He is said to have accomplished a lot of great deeds.Many people believe that…（It is believed that…）8）設(shè)問句

Do you still remember the boy who cried wolf for several times so no one would trust him?

大學(xué)英語(yǔ)新四級(jí)考試寫作要求及高分策略(1)一.四級(jí)考試對(duì)寫作的要求

《大學(xué)英語(yǔ)教學(xué)大綱》和《大學(xué)英語(yǔ)課程教學(xué)基本要求》都對(duì)培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的英語(yǔ)寫作能力做了明確規(guī)定，即學(xué)生能在半小時(shí)內(nèi)完成120字左右的短文，包括書信等應(yīng)用問題寫作，要求文理基本通順，表達(dá)思想清楚，無重大語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。通過分析歷年的真題，我們不難發(fā)現(xiàn)：英語(yǔ)作文考查的類型基本包括議論文(一般為三段論式的論說文字)，說明文(目前側(cè)重于這方面的寫作訓(xùn)練)，圖表作文(要求描述性的語(yǔ)言要貼近圖表信息，真實(shí)反映語(yǔ)言水平)和應(yīng)用文寫作(包括書信、便條、通知、海報(bào)等)。

二.四級(jí)改革和寫作變化

2005年1月的作文題目是要求學(xué)生以導(dǎo)游的身份寫一篇演講稿，不僅包含歡迎辭(表態(tài))行程安排，(說明)，而且包含安排的理由(說理)。2005年6月作文題目是校園文化旅游，要求學(xué)生就此闡述不同的觀點(diǎn)。2006年1月是個(gè)競(jìng)選演說，如果我當(dāng)選學(xué)生會(huì)主席，我會(huì)給大家做點(diǎn)什么事情(說明)。2006年6月17日的四級(jí)考試則是一個(gè)海報(bào)，要求考生構(gòu)想一個(gè)招募志愿者的海報(bào)，其中包括應(yīng)聘人必備的資歷和應(yīng)準(zhǔn)備的材料等(說明)。2006年6月24日新題型的作文是傳統(tǒng)的議論文形式，討論大學(xué)生選擇任課老師相關(guān)的問題。2007年1月作文也是傳統(tǒng)的議論文形式，探討對(duì)春節(jié)晚會(huì)所持的不同觀點(diǎn)。2007年6月份是歡迎同學(xué)加入俱樂部的海報(bào)(應(yīng)用文)。

從上面的題目變化趨勢(shì)看，描述現(xiàn)象、分析原因、個(gè)人看法仍是四、六級(jí)考試寫作部分主要考查的重點(diǎn)，在今后相當(dāng)長(zhǎng)的時(shí)間內(nèi)，英語(yǔ)寫作教學(xué)和輔導(dǎo)的主要突破口應(yīng)集中在說明文、議論文和應(yīng)用文上。

此外，仔細(xì)研究06年6月24日以后的四級(jí)試卷，我們還可發(fā)現(xiàn)，新四級(jí)的寫作題目與校園生活密切相關(guān)，學(xué)生普遍感覺親切，體裁包括兩篇議論文，一篇應(yīng)用文。不僅如此，新四級(jí)寫作題中提供的文章框架清晰，思路比較明確，絕大多數(shù)考生都能利用“經(jīng)典句型”或“萬能模板”寫出及格的作文。盡管新四級(jí)前兩次都考查了議論文，但這并不能說明寫作的重心有任何偏移。根據(jù)考試改革方案和課程教學(xué)要求的相關(guān)規(guī)定，應(yīng)用文寫作、說明文和議論文仍將是新四級(jí)作文的主攻方向。

三.四級(jí)寫作高分策略

新四級(jí)考試并沒有改變對(duì)寫作的測(cè)試標(biāo)準(zhǔn)和要求，但在出題順序上卻做了明顯的調(diào)整：寫作作為第一項(xiàng)考查的內(nèi)容，被提到新四級(jí)試卷的最開頭，這令許多考生感覺不適應(yīng)，部分網(wǎng)友甚至認(rèn)為這是在折騰考生。其實(shí)，提高寫作能力雖然較難，但寫作教學(xué)卻是一片大有可為的沃土。在過去十多年的英語(yǔ)寫作輔導(dǎo)中，筆者堅(jiān)持認(rèn)為：考生如果堅(jiān)持做到如下幾點(diǎn)，就不難在規(guī)定的時(shí)間內(nèi)寫出一篇成功的英語(yǔ)作文。

1.了解英語(yǔ)寫作的測(cè)試目的，準(zhǔn)確把握題目的要求

英語(yǔ)寫作測(cè)試，其實(shí)主要還是要考查學(xué)生組織英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言的能力，和用英語(yǔ)表達(dá)思想的能力，體裁不外乎議論文，說明文和應(yīng)用文，主題也是在大學(xué)生熟知話題基礎(chǔ)上的翻新或擴(kuò)展。綜觀歷年的四級(jí)作文真題，變化趨勢(shì)是從三段論的議論文向?qū)嵱眯愿鼜?qiáng)的應(yīng)用文體，尤其是書信寫作方面傾斜。考生平時(shí)應(yīng)有意識(shí)地就他們感興趣的一些話題進(jìn)行思考和拓展，爭(zhēng)取在實(shí)踐中磨練敏銳的審題能力。2.迅速梳理寫作的思路，列出并借助提綱進(jìn)行寫作

到了大學(xué)階段，學(xué)生還是非常善于思考的，他們不僅想象力非常豐富，晚上做夢(mèng)，還經(jīng)常daydream, 各有獨(dú)特的思維和寫作思路。但是，如何將千頭萬緒的思路梳理清楚，學(xué)生則必須有真工夫。為此，在進(jìn)行四級(jí)寫作時(shí)，考生一定要首先形成自己的觀點(diǎn)，之后合理運(yùn)用一些手段，如常用的有四種：陳述理由、舉例說明、提供數(shù)據(jù)、下定義等，之后充分就此展開論說。這樣通過高效思考，嚴(yán)密組織，再輔以提綱形式的文章架構(gòu)，考生一定會(huì)寫出較符合規(guī)范的文章 3.擴(kuò)展寫作提綱，草擬文稿，表述主要觀點(diǎn)

在利用提綱展示個(gè)人寫作思路的基礎(chǔ)上，學(xué)生還應(yīng)充分利用現(xiàn)有的英語(yǔ)水平，按照一定的邏輯思路，充分表達(dá)個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)。寫作之初，學(xué)生不必字斟句酌，只要脈絡(luò)清楚，具備輪廓就可以了。草擬文章的過程實(shí)際是把思維結(jié)果外在化的過程，學(xué)生應(yīng)力爭(zhēng)使文章具有連貫性和流暢性。草擬過程的順利與否，在很大程度上取決于平時(shí)訓(xùn)練所達(dá)到的水平。許多考生畏懼作文，經(jīng)常懶于動(dòng)筆；還有一些考生認(rèn)為寫作很難提高，干脆放棄平時(shí)的訓(xùn)練。這些想法都是錯(cuò)誤的。為真正提高寫作水平，筆者建議大家從開始準(zhǔn)備四級(jí)的那天起，就應(yīng)有針對(duì)性地分體裁、分話題、分階段地進(jìn)行實(shí)戰(zhàn)模擬，強(qiáng)迫自己一氣呵成將文章寫完，不必追求完美，不必在乎自己的文稿到底語(yǔ)言有多么不地道或出現(xiàn)多少語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。熟能生巧。只要堅(jiān)持多寫、多練，平時(shí)注意擴(kuò)大閱讀，寫作的水平自然就會(huì)提高。

2005年1月CET作文題目

四級(jí)作文題目：

A Campaign Speech 你認(rèn)為自己具備是什么條件（能力，性格，愛好）可以勝任學(xué)生會(huì)主席工作，如果當(dāng)選你將會(huì)為本校同學(xué)做什么？

范文：

Today I am very glad to run for the president of the students‘ union.I am junior in Chemical Department.Since I came into the university, I have always been the monitor of my class.I have done a very good job for my classmates, and my classmates and my tacher all give me a good praise.I am good at communication and organizing.And I like to help others.Moreover, I have a varity of hobbies,for example, basketball, football, pingpong, etc.I am sure that I am qualified for this position.If I become the president, I will try my best to do well.I will organize some siutable activities for you.I will do many things for you to reache your demands as well.I am sincerely hope you will give me a chance, and please believe me that I will be a good president.Thank you.六級(jí)作文題目：

1，對(duì)病人的簡(jiǎn)單介紹：目前的病情和家庭情況

2，目前的困難：無法繼續(xù)承擔(dān)醫(yī)療費(fèi)用，需要護(hù)理

3，希望捐助，聯(lián)系方式

Your Help Needed 范文： Dear friends，As some of you may know,Lucy,a lovely girl student,a junior from the Department of Fine Arts,has been seriously ill.In fact,she has been suffering from hepatitis, which is very dangerous.This 20-year-old girl comes from a small town in Shangdong province.Her family has tried every means to save her.Now Lucy is in urgent need of operation to her liver transplanted.However, her family is too poor to afford the expenses, which totaled 120,000 yuan.How can a poor family earning 1000 yuan per month afford such high expenses? But the time is limited.They cannot afford to wait to see the disease untouched.So you help is urgently needed.Let's do what we can to save our fellow student.The life of such a lovely girl is in your hand.Your love can save a life.You can contact 2335648 in the daytime and 2335658 at night.2005年6月CET作文題目

四級(jí)作文題目：

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay[ IN honour of teachers on the occasion of Teacher's Day].You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: 1,向老師表達(dá)節(jié)日祝賀

2,從一件小事來回憶老師的教誨和無私的奉獻(xiàn) 3,我如何回報(bào)老師的關(guān)愛 Teacher's Day 六級(jí)作文題目：

In this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Say No to Pirated Products.1.目前盜版的現(xiàn)象比較嚴(yán)重 2.造成這種現(xiàn)象的原因及危害 3.我們應(yīng)該怎么做？

參考單詞：盜版 piracy(n.)盜版產(chǎn)品 pirated products 知識(shí)產(chǎn)權(quán) intellectual property rights 侵犯版權(quán) infringe sb's copyright;copyright infringement，Say No to Pirated Products 內(nèi)容：

1、有些大學(xué)允許學(xué)生自由選擇某些課程的任課老師。

2、學(xué)生選擇老師時(shí)所考慮的主要因素是??

3、學(xué)生自選任課老師的益處及可能產(chǎn)生的問題。

As the proverb says, “Knowledge is power.” It is an undeniable fact that a large amount of students prefer to choose their own teachers for certain courses.In fact, some universities allow their students to do so.When choosing a teacher, some factors should be taken into consideration.On one hand, a learned teacher is preferred.After all, for a student, studying is given full priority.A teacher with plentiful knowledge can ease the burden of study for many students and provide them with many opportunities for enlarging their scope of knowledge, while at the same time realizing their potentials.On the other hand, a teacher with a clear and humorous teaching style is favorable.To a large extent, whether a lecture is welcomed by the students or not is depended on the way of delivering rather than its content.No one can deny that interesting interaction is far more enjoyable than monologue.There is a good side and a bad side to everything, including choosing teachers by students.It goes without saying that it can arouse students’ interest in study to the largest extent.Such phenomena as being absent from classes or paying no attention to the classes may vanish.Nevertheless, it cannot be denied that it can bring some side-effects.The management of classes may be in a disorder.Some teachers can be warmly welcomed so the number of the students may be too large while other courses may have few participants.We can conclude that allowing students to choose their own teachers has both positive and negative effects.What we must do is to make sure that the positive ones are encouraged and the negative ones are eliminated as far as possible.春節(jié)作文

寫春節(jié)作文前，我們可以先回憶下過春節(jié)是我們參加過的活動(dòng)，如貼倒福、分壓歲錢、吃餃子、撣揚(yáng)塵、貼年畫、貼剪紙、放鞭炮、守歲、給壓歲錢、掛千千結(jié)、貼春聯(lián)等，然后挑一個(gè)我們印象深刻的上網(wǎng)查些資料，可以到百度搜春節(jié)的八個(gè)習(xí)俗，春節(jié)的由來與傳說等，也可以上作文網(wǎng)作文素材頻道找到相關(guān)資料再進(jìn)行介紹。

作文題目可以自擬，如歡度春節(jié)，春節(jié)游文廟，除夕之夜，美麗的春節(jié)，春節(jié)花會(huì)

開頭部分：大致介紹一下春節(jié)，及春節(jié)的一些習(xí)俗，點(diǎn)明你所要介紹的習(xí)俗。（略寫）

第二部分：介紹這一習(xí)俗的來歷、象征意義等，像剪紙、年畫、千千結(jié)等還可以寫寫這些物品的種類、樣子等。（詳細(xì)）

第三部分：回憶自己參與這一活動(dòng)的情景。（詳細(xì)）結(jié)尾結(jié)尾部分：寫寫自己對(duì)這一習(xí)俗的感受。

每個(gè)部分舉例：

開頭部分：大致介紹一下春節(jié)，及春節(jié)的一些習(xí)俗，點(diǎn)明你所要介紹的習(xí)俗。（略寫）

例：元宵節(jié)是我國(guó)的四大節(jié)日之一，元宵節(jié)一過，春節(jié)也就算過完了，所以這一天是非常隆重和熱鬧的。過元宵節(jié)的節(jié)目豐富多彩，有充滿樂趣的看花燈猜燈謎，有喜氣洋洋的舞龍，還有熱鬧非凡的賽龍船。不過，最吸引我們小孩子的卻是那多姿多彩的煙花。

第二部分：介紹這一習(xí)俗的來歷、象征意義等，像剪紙、年畫、千千結(jié)等還可以寫寫這些物品的種類、樣子等。（詳細(xì)）

例：春聯(lián)代表著歡樂祥和。在我們中國(guó)，每逢春節(jié)，無論城市還是農(nóng)村，家家戶戶都要精選一副大紅春聯(lián)貼在門上，為節(jié)日增加喜慶的氣氛。一幅幅春聯(lián)不僅帶來了吉祥和祝福，還帶來了中國(guó)古老的濃濃的文化氣息。瞧！“大地春光好，長(zhǎng)天曉日紅”、“歲歲皆如意，年年盡平安”、“江山萬里如畫，神州四時(shí)皆春”、“春風(fēng)送春處處***美，喜鵲報(bào)喜家家喜事多”…… 幅幅春聯(lián)讓千家萬戶喜氣盈門。春聯(lián)的種類比較多。按照使用場(chǎng)所，可分為門心、框?qū)?、橫批、春條、斗方等。因此，貼的位置也不同，如“門心”貼在門板上端中心部位；“橫批”貼在門楣的橫木上。

第三部分：回憶自己參與這一活動(dòng)的情景。（詳細(xì)）

例：記得去年元宵節(jié)的晚上爸爸媽媽帶我去工人體育館看煙花。八點(diǎn)整，只聽見幾聲沉悶的聲音，一個(gè)個(gè)煙花帶著紅紅的火星竄上了天空，幾聲脆響，夜空綻放出幾朵美麗的花朵。它們的形狀和顏色各不相同，有五顏六色的滿天星，金黃色的蒲公英，紫色的牽?；?，火紅的玫瑰花，粉紅的月季、銀色的百合，真是絢麗多彩。隨著一聲聲的炮響，人們?cè)隗@呼，在贊嘆，夜色中，人們微微揚(yáng)起的臉上也變幻著多姿的色彩，露出了幸福的笑容……

結(jié)尾結(jié)尾部分：寫寫自己對(duì)這一習(xí)俗的感受。

例：我看著那散發(fā)著傳統(tǒng)文化芳香的中華結(jié)，仿佛品味到了中華民族遠(yuǎn)古的神秘和東方的靈秀。它的古香古色，它的千變?nèi)f化，讓我神往，讓我遐想…… 《春節(jié)的街頭》

今天，是中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日——春節(jié)。早晨我還沒醒，就聽到了鞭炮的聲音。平靜的社區(qū)，今日顯得熱鬧非凡。這熱鬧的喧囂，把我的睡意一股腦的全都打撒開來。于是，起床穿上了新衣服連早飯都來不及吃就沖到門外，看著各家各戶的炮竹，煙花。接著就是跟爸爸媽媽一起去走街串巷——拜年！

“李伯伯，新年快樂”“王阿姨，工作順了”“劉奶奶，身體健康”〃〃〃跟所有的長(zhǎng)輩們拜過年之后，媽媽提議說：一會(huì)，去街上看看，感受下新年的氣氛。

一上街，街上可就更熱鬧了。人們手里有提著大袋大袋的菜，身邊的孩子手上握著一大把小花炮，蹦蹦跳跳地跑著?？矗∥易筮叺囊晃凰?、五歲左右的小女孩，跑到前面去。一下子又轉(zhuǎn)過頭對(duì)一位滿手是鼓鼓的袋子的大人喊著：“爸爸，快點(diǎn)！我要回去放炮玩呢！”。有拿著那邊超市發(fā)的小氣球的，紅的，黃的，綠的，還有藍(lán)的。也有三五成群，手挽著手說說笑笑的姑娘們，小伙子們，忙綠了一年，辛苦了一年，我想這個(gè)時(shí)候應(yīng)該是大家最放松，最高興的時(shí)候。你看，路燈上還掛著兩個(gè)小紅燈，喜氣洋洋的。就像在說，“我們也要過新年，我們也要過新年”。

一進(jìn)菜市場(chǎng)，那才更熱鬧呢！人流竄動(dòng)，一眼望去，什么也看不見，全是人。還有那翠綠的黃瓜，可真新鮮哪，你看，那金黃色的小花在太陽(yáng)的照射下顯得多么的生機(jī)勃勃啊。那鯽魚，鰱魚，青魚，草魚等等在水里游來游去，真是印證了我們中國(guó)的老話：年年有魚（余）！黃的韭菜，紅的番茄，黑的木耳，白的蘿卜〃〃〃真是要什么有什么呀?！鞍?！可真夠擠的?！蔽亦止玖艘痪?。跟著媽媽買了幾個(gè)我愛吃的菜，結(jié)完帳就走出了菜場(chǎng)。超市里的收銀臺(tái)前也早已排起了長(zhǎng)龍。

傍晚時(shí)分，街上，又漸漸安靜下來。店主們把店子關(guān)了，超市也比往常早了些許關(guān)門。大家都提著東西回家過年去了。

到了晚上6點(diǎn)左右，社區(qū)漸漸安靜，孩子們都回家吃團(tuán)圓飯去了。吃完團(tuán)圓飯7、8點(diǎn)的樣子社區(qū)又重新熱鬧起來。孩子們?nèi)汲鰜矸呕ㄅ诹恕＿@個(gè)放個(gè)“降落傘，”那個(gè)又放個(gè)“天女撒花”〃〃〃〃各式各樣的花炮全有。每放完一個(gè)都會(huì)聚集好幾個(gè)孩子，他們?cè)谟懻撜l的花炮最美麗，誰的花炮顏色最多，之后又是陣陣歡笑。大人們或幾個(gè)坐在一起打牌，打麻將；或幾個(gè)坐在一起嗑瓜子，剝花生；或看著自己的孩子放花炮，偶爾還要幫他們一下。大多數(shù)的孩子，都是自己獨(dú)立操作完成。

夜，更深了。人們陸陸續(xù)續(xù)的回家了，有些不肯回家的孩子也在父母的勸說下，不情愿的回了家，一天的熱鬧景象漸漸被夜幕包圍。我不禁感嘆又是一年到，時(shí)間過得可真快呀！

春節(jié)見聞 “當(dāng)、當(dāng)、當(dāng)”新年的鐘聲敲響了，家家戶戶的門上早已貼上了或火紅或金黃的對(duì)聯(lián)，每一家的老老少少都樂得合不攏嘴。興奮的孩子們有的目不轉(zhuǎn)睛地盯著電視，品嘗著一年一度的晚會(huì)大餐――春節(jié)晚會(huì)；有的急著給自己的長(zhǎng)輩拜年，發(fā)短信，打電話，所有新年的祝福話語(yǔ)仿佛怎么也說不完；調(diào)皮的孩子正在向自己的父輩們 “討要”壓歲錢；屋外的鞭炮聲此起彼伏，炸開了鍋，五彩的煙花更是把這個(gè)特殊的夜晚點(diǎn)綴得絢麗多姿。

正月初一，農(nóng)歷新年的第一天迎著人們的喜悅祥和而來。我這個(gè)平時(shí)最賴床的懶漢，今天卻起了個(gè)大早，因?yàn)槲覙O想穿上我那美麗的新衣，出去好好炫耀一翻。我要去走親訪友拜新年了，這無疑也是一件高興的事。我們小孩子走在拜年隊(duì)伍的前面，見到長(zhǎng)輩們拜個(gè)年，說幾句吉利話，就可以收獲一大把的壓歲錢，然后拿到街上去買自己喜愛的東西――玩具、零食、鞭炮……，家長(zhǎng)好像變了個(gè)人似的，對(duì)我們的放縱是那么的寬容，一切都有了！這就是過年的感覺。

“放鞭炮嘍！”不知是誰喊了一聲，小孩子們很快都聚在了一起。一串串鞭炮在人們手中點(diǎn)燃，響聲震天，四處飛濺，仿佛要把一個(gè)個(gè)美好的愿望送到千家萬戶。一陣陣炮竹聲接連不斷，熱鬧非凡。

到了吃飯的時(shí)候，望著滿桌子平時(shí)最愛吃的菜肴，我們小孩子卻一點(diǎn)兒也不覺得餓。大人們?cè)谕票瓝Q盞之間，談?wù)撟疃嗍牵航穹俏舯劝。〗裉斓男腋Ｉ顝牟妥郎献钅苷f明問題，現(xiàn)在人們生活好了，天天就像在過年！

奔波在走親訪友的路途上，我見到了春意盎然的田間大地，一條條新修的高速公路縮短了我們的行程，通往鄉(xiāng)村的泥巴路也被“村村通”的水泥路所覆蓋，城市高樓大廈像雨后春筍，一年一個(gè)變化……

春節(jié)對(duì)于我們小孩子來說，那就是一切都在變化，一切都是新的！

第三篇：四級(jí)寫作

一.對(duì)比觀點(diǎn)題型

(1)要求論述兩個(gè)對(duì)立的觀點(diǎn)并給出自己的看法。

1.有一些人認(rèn)為……

累了,休息下,去考試大在線網(wǎng)上輔導(dǎo)逛逛

2.另一些人認(rèn)為……

3.我的看法……

The topic of ①________(主題)is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions of it.Some people say A is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of ②________(支持A的理由一)What is more, ③________(理由二).Moreover, ④________(理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,________(支持B的理由一).Secondly(besides),⑥____________(理由二).Thirdly(finally),⑦_(dá)___________(理由三).From my point of view, I think ⑧________(我的觀點(diǎn)).The reason is that ⑨____________(原因).As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me, the former is surely a wise choice.(2)給出一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，要求考生反對(duì)這一觀點(diǎn)Some people believe that ①________(觀點(diǎn)一).For example, they think ②________(舉例說明).And it will bring them ③________(為他們帶來的好處).In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point.For one thing,④____(我不同意該看法的理由一).For another thing, ⑤____(反對(duì)的理由之二).Form all what I have said,I agree to the thought that ⑥____(我對(duì)文章所討論主題的看法).英語(yǔ)六級(jí)考試寫作技巧

二.闡述主題題型

要求從一句話或一個(gè)主題出發(fā)，按照提綱的要求進(jìn)行論述.1.闡述名言或主題所蘊(yùn)涵的意義.2.分析并舉例使其更充實(shí).The good old proverb ________(名言或諺語(yǔ))reminds us that ________(釋義).Indeed, we can learn many things form it.First of all,________(理由一).For example, ____________(舉例說明).Secondly,________(理由二).Another case is that ________(舉例說明).Furthermore , ____________(理由三).英語(yǔ)四級(jí)英譯漢的目的,要求和評(píng)分

In my opinion, ________(我的觀點(diǎn)).In short, whatever you do, please remember the say____A.If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you”ll necessarily benefit a lot from it.三.解決方法題型

要求考生列舉出解決問題的多種途徑

1.問題現(xiàn)狀英語(yǔ)四級(jí)英譯漢的目的,要求和評(píng)分

2.怎樣解決(解決方案的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn))

In recent days, we have to face I problem——A, which is becoming more and more serious.First, ________(說明A的現(xiàn)狀).Second, ________(舉例進(jìn)一步說明現(xiàn)狀)Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing, ________(解決方法一).For another ________(解決方法二).Finally, ________(解決方法三).Personally, I believe that ________(我的解決方法).Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because ________(帶來的好處).四.說明利弊題型

這種題型往往要求先說明一下現(xiàn)狀，再對(duì)比事物本身的利弊，有時(shí)也會(huì)單從一個(gè)角度(利或弊)出發(fā)，最后往往要求考生表明自己的態(tài)度(或?qū)κ挛锴熬疤岢鲱A(yù)測(cè))

1.說明事物現(xiàn)狀

2.事物本身的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)(或一方面)

3.你對(duì)現(xiàn)狀(或前景)的看法

Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.First ________(A的優(yōu)點(diǎn)之一).Besides ____________(A的優(yōu)點(diǎn)之二).But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that ________(A的第一個(gè)缺點(diǎn)).To make matters worse,____________(A的第二個(gè)缺點(diǎn)).Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.Therefore, I would like to ________(我的看法).(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in.Only by this way, ________(對(duì)前景的預(yù)測(cè)).五.議論文的框架

(1)不同觀點(diǎn)列舉型(選擇型)

There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文題目_____.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that _ 觀點(diǎn)一________.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____.So it goes without saying

that ___觀點(diǎn)一_____.People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that ___觀點(diǎn)二_______.In their point of view, on the one hand，___原因一_______.On the other hand, ____原因二_____.Therefore, there is no doubt that ___觀點(diǎn)二______.As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __觀點(diǎn)一或二______.It is not only because ________, but also because _________.The more _______, the more ________.(2)利弊型的議論文

Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)___作文題目______.In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __題目議題_____.Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly, ___優(yōu)點(diǎn)一______.And secondly ___優(yōu)點(diǎn)二_____.Just As a popular saying goes, “every coin has two sides”, __討論議題______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects.To begin with, ___缺點(diǎn)一______.In addition, ____ 缺點(diǎn)二______.To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __討論議題____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____討論議題___.(3)答題性議論文

Currently, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)__作文題目_______.It is really an important concern to every one of us.As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.英語(yǔ)四級(jí)英譯漢的目的,要求和評(píng)分

As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem.First of all, __途徑一______.In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving problem is ___途徑二_____.Above all, to solve the problem of ___作文題目______, we should find a number of various ways.But as far as I am concerned, I would prefer to solve the problem in this way, that is to say, ____方法_____.(4)諺語(yǔ)警句性議論文

It is well know to us that the proverb: “ ___諺語(yǔ)_______” has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study.It means ____諺語(yǔ)的含義_______.The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows.(also theoretically)

A case in point is ___例子一______.Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb ____諺語(yǔ)_____.With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: ____諺語(yǔ)_____.The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job.as is indicated above......there is.....in the picture,it is obvious that,by diagramwe know that.for the reason if we realize that we firstly should,secondly we ,not only do webut, in the end it is essential that，,we make a conclusion that it is ,it isthat，,to our surprise ,the cartoon show us to sty.ina word ,we believe that

第四篇：四級(jí)寫作

1.大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)測(cè)試作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 2.四級(jí)作文命題規(guī)律 3.怎樣寫好四級(jí)作文 2.四級(jí)作文命題規(guī)律 2.1.歷年四級(jí)作文題目

1995.1 Can Money Buy Happiness? 1995.6 Advantages of a Job Interview 1996.1 The Two–Day Weekend 1996.6 Global Shortage of Fresh Water 1997.1 Practice Makes Perfect 1997.6 Getting to Know the World Outside Campus 1998.1 Harmfulness of Fake Commodities 1998.6 Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck? 1999.1 Don?t Hesitate to Say “No”

1999.6 Reading Selectively or Extensively? 2000.1 How I Finance My College Education 2000.6 Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary? 2001.1 How to Succeed in a Job Interview 2001.6 A Letter to a Schoolmate 2002.1 A Letter to the University President about

the Canteen Service on Campus 2002.6 Students? Use of Computers 2003.1 It Pays to Be Honest 2003.6 An Eye-Witness Account of a Traffic Accident.2003.9 The Day My Classmate Fell Ill(or Got Injured)2003.12 A Letter in Reply to a Friend 2004.6 An Introduction for Tourists 2005.1 A campaign speech 2005.6 In honor of Teachers On the Occasion of Teachers? Day 2005.12 Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists? 2006.6 An Announcement for a Voluntary Program 2.2.命題形式 4.2.1.提綱作文

提綱作文實(shí)質(zhì)上是議論文，其下可分為四種類型：

現(xiàn)象闡釋型 : 2003年1月四級(jí)作文考題 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic It Pays to Be Honest.You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese.1.當(dāng)前社會(huì)上存在許多不誠(chéng)實(shí)的現(xiàn)象；

2.誠(chéng)實(shí)利人利已，做人應(yīng)該誠(chéng)實(shí)。

.問題對(duì)策型：分析問題，找出成因，提出解決辦法，題目實(shí)例如下： 1997年6月四級(jí)英語(yǔ)作文真題

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Getting to Know the World Outside the Campus.You should write at least 100 words and you

should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1.大學(xué)生了解社會(huì)的必要性；

2.了解社會(huì)的途徑（大眾媒介、社會(huì)服務(wù)等）；

3.我打算怎么做。

觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比型：辨析兩種對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)，題目實(shí)例如下： 1995年1月四級(jí)作文真題

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Can Money Buy Happiness? You should write no less than 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below: 1.有人認(rèn)為金錢是幸福之本（source of happiness）2.也有人認(rèn)為金錢是萬惡之源（root of all evil）3.我的看法

論說反駁型：支持或駁斥一種觀點(diǎn)，題目實(shí)例如下： 1998年6月四級(jí)作文真題

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck? You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below: 1.有些人認(rèn)為某些數(shù)字會(huì)帶來好運(yùn)； 2.我認(rèn)為數(shù)字和運(yùn)氣無關(guān)，…… 2.2.2.圖表作文

近十年來圖表作文只考過一次柱狀圖

2.2.3.情景作文的實(shí)質(zhì)是記敘文，主要考過這幾種類型： A.書信

（1）告知信/ 建議信:2004年1月 四級(jí)作文真題

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter in reply to a friend's inquiry about applying for admission to your college or university.You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: 1.建議報(bào)考的專業(yè)及理由； 2.報(bào)考該專業(yè)的基本條件； 3.應(yīng)當(dāng)如何備考。（2）綜合信

2002年1月四級(jí)作文真題

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 假設(shè)你是李明，請(qǐng)你就本校食堂的狀況給校長(zhǎng)寫一封信，內(nèi)容應(yīng)涉及食堂的飯菜質(zhì)量、價(jià)格、環(huán)境、服務(wù)等，可以是表?yè)P(yáng)，可以是批評(píng)建議，也可以兼而有之。

B.演講致辭

2005年1月四級(jí)作文真題

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a campaign speech in support of your election to the post of chairman of the student union.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese.A Campaign Speech 1.你認(rèn)為自己具備是什么條件(能力，性格，愛好)可以勝任學(xué)生會(huì)主席工作，2.如果當(dāng)選你將會(huì)為本校同學(xué)做什么？ 議論文（共14題）現(xiàn)象闡釋型：

1995年6月，1996年1月，1997年1月，1998年1月，1999年1月, 2003年1月

問題對(duì)策型：

1996年6月，1997年6月，2000年1月，2001年1月，觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比型：1995年1月，1999年6月，2000年6月 論證反駁型：1998年6月 圖表作文（共1題）

柱狀圖：2002年6月 記敘文（共7題）

告知信/建議信：2001年6月，2004年1月

綜合信：2002年1月

綜合敘事：2003年6月，2003年9月

演講致辭：2004年6月，2005年1月，2005年6月 2.3.命題規(guī)律

1）新：對(duì)傳統(tǒng)的三段論式作文提出挑戰(zhàn)，新的題型層出不窮。特別是2003年以來，先后考過交通事故目擊證詞、導(dǎo)游詞等首次出現(xiàn)的題目，所以僅僅依靠背誦套句變得越來越行不通。需要同學(xué)們重視提高自己的真正寫作水平，以不變應(yīng)萬變。

2）綜合能力考核：純粹的記敘、說明或議論文的考核被同時(shí)考核三種能力的綜合性題目所代替，如2003年9月份的考題，就要求考生在第一段敘述你的classmate生病或受傷的過程，第二段要求說明一下各方面對(duì)他的關(guān)心，第三段要求你對(duì)這個(gè)事件展開討論。這要求我們要全面發(fā)展自己的寫作能力，不可偏廢。

3）實(shí)用：實(shí)用文體的寫作出現(xiàn)得越來越多，書信作文屢次出現(xiàn)，2004年6月還考了一篇導(dǎo)游詞。這體現(xiàn)了四級(jí)作文對(duì)學(xué)生實(shí)際運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)能力的關(guān)注，也是四級(jí)作文備考訓(xùn)練的重點(diǎn)之一。

2.4.四級(jí)作文可能會(huì)出現(xiàn)的題目

1）考試的命題作文大都是議論文結(jié)構(gòu)，一般來說題目?jī)?nèi)容應(yīng)該是考生所熟悉的，能夠有話可說的，如那些社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)問題就是經(jīng)常出的題目。

2）但不是所有的熱點(diǎn)問題都會(huì)成為考試題目?？荚囶}目還要和考試對(duì)象的文化背景，年齡特點(diǎn)相一致，所以有關(guān)大學(xué)生生活，學(xué)習(xí)，理想等的題目經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)。

3）作文題目會(huì)考慮到考生的語(yǔ)言水平，也就是說學(xué)生要求掌握的詞匯和結(jié)構(gòu)能否足夠表達(dá)所考的題目。

總的來說，根據(jù)學(xué)生要求掌握的詞匯，根據(jù)學(xué)生的知識(shí)結(jié)構(gòu)，年齡特點(diǎn)和文化背景，出題的范圍可大致如下：

科學(xué)技術(shù)：計(jì)算機(jī)，克隆，電視，小汽車等對(duì)社會(huì)和生活的影響 社會(huì)問題：如住房，交通，就業(yè)，犯罪，婚姻，環(huán)境，能源和廣告等

校園生活：如學(xué)習(xí)方式，考試，課余活動(dòng)，體育鍛煉，人際交往和興趣愛好等

青少年問題：如父子代溝，抽煙吸毒，個(gè)人思想，職業(yè)選擇，文化教育和成功失敗等 文化教育：閱讀，道德修養(yǎng)，出國(guó)留學(xué)，學(xué)生減負(fù)，教育與成長(zhǎng)等

3.怎樣寫好四級(jí)作文

3.1.如何開頭

(1)主題句法

The appeal of advertising to buying motives can have both negative and positive effects.(2)問題法

Do you know how many people die from traffic accidents every 23 minutes? Why does cream go bad faster than butter?

(3)對(duì)比法

When asked …., most of college students say that….But I think quite differently.I would prefer a career that will help realize my potentials.(4)數(shù)據(jù)法

According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.(5)故事法

Six o?clock yesterday(June 20th, Friday)afternoon when I was walking along the riverbank of our school, an unbelievable scene caught my eyes.(6)引語(yǔ)法

As the proverb goes, “You are only young once.”(適用于記住的名言)There is an increasing awareness/popularity among people that…..3.2.如何結(jié)尾

3.2.1．重復(fù)中心思想 回到文章開頭闡明的中心思想或主題句上，達(dá)到再次肯定和強(qiáng)調(diào)的效果。

With all these benefits, it is no wonder that sports and games have now become more popular with people than ever.3.2.2．作出結(jié)論 文章最后用幾句話概括全文內(nèi)容，并進(jìn)一步肯定文章的中心思想或作者的觀點(diǎn)。

In conclusion/to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, a good teacher-student relationship can be mutual beneficial.The students gain knowledge eagerly and enjoyably, and the teacher gains satisfaction from his job.3.2.3．應(yīng)用引語(yǔ) 用格言、諺語(yǔ)或習(xí)語(yǔ)總結(jié)全文，既言簡(jiǎn)意賅又有更強(qiáng)的說服力。

If you have anything to do, try to do it yourself, for that is the safest way to permanent success.Remember the famous saying.“God helps those who help themselves.“

3.2.4．用反問結(jié)尾 雖然形式是問句，但意義卻是肯定的，具有明顯的強(qiáng)調(diào)作用，引起讀者思考。

Therefore, listening skills must be consciously improved.Since it is such an important means of learning and communication, why shouldn?t we develop this ability as far as possible? 3.2.5．提出展望或期望 表示對(duì)將來的展望或期待讀者投入行動(dòng)。

I am sure that Chinese will become one of the most important languages in the world in the next century.As China will open further to the outside world，the language is sure to be spread world widely.From the discussion above, we may safely arrive at/come to/reach the conclusion that… 3.3.行文中間

3.3.1.用詞多樣豐富

think vs.hold the view that/maintain that… so vs.consequently

because vs.resulting from, on account of the fact that and so on

3.3.2.長(zhǎng)短句交錯(cuò)使用

When it comes to…, I hold the view that… I am for/ against the view that… There is no denying the fact that… There is no doubt that No wonder …

The reason why…is that… On no account can we…

Contrary to what is widely accepted, I maintain that… 3.3.3.通過遣詞造句使英語(yǔ)更加地道 遣詞

抽象名詞的使用是現(xiàn)代英語(yǔ)的一大特點(diǎn) Family life makes me feel happy.Family life is a source of happiness to me.Our parents always expect that we should make progress in school, and will ask why we fail to do so.Our parents always anticipate progress and question its absence.The mayor said he was very grateful because the construction workers were dedicated and competent.The mayor expressed his appreciation of the dedication and competence of the construction workers.The news made us no longer anxious but joyful.The news turned our initial anxiety into joy.If we don?t recognize the serious problem of growing population, we will make a big mistake.Failure to recognize the seriousness of growing population will lead to a big problem.造句

漢語(yǔ)句子信息密度高，而英語(yǔ)句子冗余度高 漢語(yǔ)句子按照時(shí)間和因果順序進(jìn)行線性排列，重心落在最后，而英語(yǔ)句子卻可以運(yùn)用各種虛詞著眼于空間的立體組合，把重心放在句首，不拘泥于時(shí)間發(fā)生的時(shí)間和因果次序，也不必?fù)?dān)心其邏輯關(guān)系上的混亂

When I first visited Shanghai, I could not find any trees and flowers in the streets.I was really surprised.I was really surprised at the absence of any trees and flowers in the streets when I first visited Shanghai.Some shows will have bad effect on children.But our parents fail to notice it, so they allow children to watch whatever program is on.Children are allowed to watch whatever program is on, with little thought on parents’ part of the bad effect that some shows will have on children.In summer vacation, I visited several places and met different kinds of people.I can tell you many wonderful stories about them.There are many wonderful stories to tell about places I visited and different kinds of people I met during the summer vacation.3.4．四級(jí)作文范例

06年12月英語(yǔ)四級(jí)作文點(diǎn)評(píng)及范文

Direction：

1.許多人喜歡在除夕夜觀看春節(jié)晚會(huì)

2.但有些人提出取消春節(jié)晚會(huì).3.我的看法.The approach of the Chinese Lunar New Year poses a national issue concerning the necessity of holding the CCTV Spring Festival Gala.Its established status is being challenged by a growing number of people, especially by younger generations.It is increasingly difficult to cater for all tastes.Some individuals deem that it should be canceled or replaced by other programs.These young people focus their attention on other forms of celebration instead of immersing themselves in TV.Despite that, the majority of mid-aged people and senior citizens uphold the importance of the traditional performance.The most striking feature of this gala is its traditionally close link with ordinary people's lives.Most of people view this gala as an annual staple on the traditional Chinese Spring Festival Eve.They all have a restless night and glue their eyes on the television.I am not supportive of the view that the grand gala should be abandoned.Undoubtedly, it plays a vital role in the celebration of Chinese New Year.To increase its appeal and meet young adults' need, the upcoming performance should invite some big names including super stars from Hongkong and Taiwan.We are all eagerly anticipating this unforgettable evening show 4.如何提高寫作能力 原則一：豐富詞匯 原則二：重視閱讀

一方面做大量的泛讀。作文和閱讀是相輔相成、互相促進(jìn)的。

另一方面做有意識(shí)的精讀。一要精讀一些內(nèi)容接近現(xiàn)實(shí)生活的例文。二要精讀優(yōu)秀范文?？吹臅r(shí)候要著眼于三個(gè)方面：范文是如何提出觀點(diǎn)并進(jìn)行論證的，運(yùn)用了哪些論證手法；范文是如何安排段落的，段落之間以及句子之間是怎樣銜接的；范文里有什么精彩的詞、詞組和句型是值得我們模仿的。如果考生能夠舉一反三，仔細(xì)思考并且適當(dāng)借鑒的話，定會(huì)獲益非淺。

原則三：加強(qiáng)背誦 原則四：收錄材料 原則五：勤于練習(xí)

練習(xí)四級(jí)真題。在練習(xí)的時(shí)候要注意應(yīng)該在規(guī)定時(shí)間內(nèi)完成。在練習(xí)頻率上，基本應(yīng)該保持兩天寫一篇以上。

在練習(xí)寫作的時(shí)候也不一定非得要寫完整的文章，有時(shí)候可以進(jìn)行段落論證的寫作。寫完之后對(duì)照范文，反思自己作文中存在的問題。英文里有句諺語(yǔ)：Practice makes perfect.（熟能生巧），只要堅(jiān)持，提高四級(jí)作文分?jǐn)?shù)指日可待。

提綱

1.大學(xué)英語(yǔ)作文新動(dòng)態(tài)分析 2.四級(jí)作文寫作步驟解析 3.四級(jí)作文?？碱}型分析

4.寫作對(duì)策

5.最新作文解析

6.寫作注意事項(xiàng)

1）.寫作時(shí)間沒有變，字?jǐn)?shù)要求有變化。

2）寫作提綱沒有了，出現(xiàn)了寫作情景或語(yǔ)境

2011年12月的作文沒有給出中文提綱而是設(shè)定了一個(gè)語(yǔ)境(context)。這與之前相比難度相對(duì)增加了，考生必須在30分鐘內(nèi)，首先用三至五分鐘，來給自己打個(gè)腹稿，確定全文的結(jié)構(gòu)或outline。

其次，也是從今往后的考試中最大的一個(gè)變化是，在寫作要求(instruction)里，會(huì)給你設(shè)定好一個(gè)情景(situation)或語(yǔ)境(context)。這就給考生提出了更大的挑戰(zhàn)。

考生必須要在文章中，以這個(gè)情景或語(yǔ)境為出發(fā)點(diǎn)，來展開對(duì)命題的探討。決不能脫離這個(gè)所給定的情景或語(yǔ)境，隨心所欲地大發(fā)議論，以免跑題。

基本形式：三段落式； 評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)及注意事項(xiàng)：

1.切題：根據(jù)該段所給的題目及情景或語(yǔ)境來寫相關(guān)內(nèi)容

2.語(yǔ)言：完整句子，減少語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤

3.連貫：運(yùn)用列舉法，使段落結(jié)構(gòu)清晰；

免俗 2.寫作步驟解析

（1）分析所給語(yǔ)境與題目之間的關(guān)系 1.審題列提綱：

（3 min)（2)確定三部分的寫作結(jié)構(gòu)和基本內(nèi)容 2.寫作（24 min)3.檢查（3min)3.四級(jí)作文?？碱}型分析 1）現(xiàn)象解釋型 2）觀點(diǎn)對(duì)立型 3）問題解決型

2008/06

Recreational Activities 2008/12

Limiting the Use of Disposal Bags 2009/06

Free Admission to Museums 2009/12

Create a Green Campus 2010/06

Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling 2010/12

How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent 2011/06

Online Shopping 2011/12

Nothing Succeeds without a Strong Will近四年來四級(jí)作文的題型歸類 1）現(xiàn)象解釋型

----2008/12 2）觀點(diǎn)對(duì)立型

----2008/06，2009/06, 2011/06 3）問題解決型

-----2009/12,2010/06,2010/12 4.寫作對(duì)策 1）、現(xiàn)象解釋型

a.闡述現(xiàn)象

b.分析原因或影響因素

c.存在的問題或作者的觀點(diǎn) 以2008/12的作文為例進(jìn)行分析 2008年12月的作文

Part I Writing(30 minutes)

注意：此部分試題在答題卡1上。

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Recreational Activities.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: Limiting the Use of Disposal Bags

1、一次性塑料袋曾經(jīng)廣泛使用

2、由此帶來的問題

3、限制一次性塑料袋的意義

寫作范文 寫作范文 寫作模板 A.Nowadays_________is a common phenomenon in society.For example, ________.People/prefer doing ________because______._________ do more(good)than(harm)to us.For one thing, _________.For another, ____________.B

Recently ________ has aroused public concern.It ______________________.People/prefer doing ________because______.___________ do both(good)and(harm)to us.On the one hand,________.On the other hand,________________.2)、觀點(diǎn)對(duì)立型

a.一些人對(duì)某一事物的 觀點(diǎn)是… …

b.另外一些人對(duì)該事物的 觀點(diǎn)是… …

c.我的看法… …

（以2011年6月的作文為例進(jìn)行分析）

2011年6月的作文

Part I Writing(30 minutes)

注意：此部分試題在答題卡1上。

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Recreational Activities.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: Online Shopping

1.現(xiàn)在網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物已成為一種時(shí)尚

2.網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物有很多好處，但也有不少問題

3.我的建議 觀點(diǎn)對(duì)立型模版

第一段提出問題模版：

1.There is a hot debate going on about____

2.Recently many people are involved in the heated discussion about_____近年來，…...引起了激烈的爭(zhēng)論.第二段 論述兩種不同的觀點(diǎn)模版

1.As for such a question, different people hold different views.Some believe______, While there is also an opposite voice,___.2.Some insist that _____.Others, however, are voicing quite a loud protest.They pointed out that___________.3.Some maintain that_________, others argue that__________.4.Most people take it for granted that________..However,others hold________.第三段 我的觀點(diǎn)模版

1.As for me, I hold that ______________.2.I firmly believe that_____________.3.As far as I?m concerned, ___________.4.For my part,it is______________.5.Personally, I believe the trend that____.6.From my perspective,____________.7.In my opinion__________________.練習(xí)：

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Credit Cards.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

1.越來越多的人使用信用卡，信用卡有哪些好處

2.信用卡的弊端

3.你自己的觀點(diǎn)

Credit Cards 3）問題解決型

a.闡述問題、解決問題 b.解決問題的辦法 c.我的看法

以2010/12的作文為例進(jìn)行分析 2010年12月的作文

Part I Writing(30 minutes)

注意：此部分試題在答題卡1上。

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Recreational Activities.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: How should parents help children to be independent?

1，目前不少父母為孩子包辦一切

2，為了讓孩子獨(dú)立，父母應(yīng)該..How should parents help children to be independent?

This is a thought-provoking social phenomenon that parents monopolize their children’s everything.From going to university, selecting majors to hunting for a job, parents make every crucial decision for their sons and daughters.No doubt, what the parents do leads to a most serious problem—children are badly dependent on parental help.Every morning the children wake up, but

they don’t know what they should do and how they could do.They lose the ability to take care of themselves, and in turn, lose the opportunity to succeed.Don’t keep on spoiling the children anymore, because they need independence.These are some suggestions for parents.Firstly, parents should create an independent climate for their children.Secondly, parents should try to help children maintain their independence.Finally, parents should always believe that their children have the ability to make their own decisions in their lives.寫作模板

A

Sometimes we find there are really many problems/difficulties in _______________.Then how can we manage to overcome all these? Step by step, first,________.Secondly, __________.Thirdly,__________.Last, _____.After a period of painstaking efforts, I feel that _______________________________.B

These days we often hear that___________.There are some possible reasons for that.In the first place,______________.In the second place, _________________.To solve the problem is not easy at all, but it is worth trying.We should do something such as _________ to improve the present situation, And I do believe everything will be better in the future.5、最新四級(jí)作文解析（2011年12月的作文）Part I Writing(30 minutes)

注意：此部分試題在答題卡1上。

”you're allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will by commenting on the humorous saying, “Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world.I 've done it hundreds of time.” You'd write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.” ? 從命題要求中，我們可以看到此次命題的考試內(nèi)容為勵(lì)志型話題，與學(xué)生的日常學(xué)習(xí)生活和人生觀有關(guān)。命題屬于依據(jù)材料來分析問題的文章體裁，對(duì)于這樣的話題，我們可以借用三段式這一模式，首先依據(jù)背景材料來提出問題，“從戒煙的問題引出做任何事情都需要堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的意志，需要堅(jiān)持到底，不可半途而廢?！敝蠓治鲞@一問題，可以正反論證，也可舉例論

證，此為主體段落，可以通過“人生要靠自己創(chuàng)造”、“人的潛力無窮”、“任何苦難和痛苦都是對(duì)自己的挑戰(zhàn)，其收獲到的經(jīng)驗(yàn)將是無窮的”。也可以引用名人名言，如“where there is a will, there is a way”。最后一段，可以總結(jié)來論證堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的意志對(duì)于成功的重大意義。提綱

（1）闡述現(xiàn)象“Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world.I ?ve done it hundreds of time.”，并進(jìn)行評(píng)論

（2）舉例證明Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will

（3）作者的觀點(diǎn)

Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will

Everyone tries to achieve success in his career.However, someone firmly attains his goal while another fails.Why? The one continues his cause to the end through long periods of hard struggling, but the other is easily disappointed or stops halfway.Strong will, perseverance and diligence are the three essentials of success.A man of strong will and perseverance always has an inflexible spirit.He sticks to his cause no matter how tough it might be.Dr.Sun Yat-sen was such a man.Many of his attempts failed, but he held to his purpose with firmness and finally succeeded in overthrowing the Qing Dynasty.Diligence means

steadiness in one's work and study.Su Qin stabbed himself in order to keep himself attentive to studies.Marx often worked 15 hours a day.Life is short and we have many things to do.Without diligence no one can achieve anything.I believe that where there is a will there is a way, and that success belongs to those who can suffer long years of patient toil and constant efforts.6、寫作的注意點(diǎn): 1.字跡一定要清晰工整

2.第一段不要出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤,如：nowadays的拼寫.3.不能出現(xiàn)的標(biāo)點(diǎn)(1)書名號(hào)(2)頓號(hào)

(3)6個(gè)點(diǎn)的省略號(hào)(4)中文形式的句號(hào)

第五篇：Спорт и здоровье 俄語(yǔ)四級(jí)寫作

——Спорт и здоровье 俄語(yǔ)四級(jí)寫作范文

寫作構(gòu)思： 寫作構(gòu)思：（1）3начение здоровья（2）Как укреплять здоровье？ Всем известно，что здоровье не купить.Оно приносит человеку，помогает ему быть сильным，бодрым，энергичным，жизнерадостным.По сравнению со слабым человеком здоровый редко болеет，способен па любую работу，и ему легче осуществлять свои мечты.А чтобы укреплять здоровье，надо постоянно，регулярно заниматься спортом，например，плавать，бегать，играть в волейбол или баскетбол，кататься на лыжах или коньках.Как доказано медициной，спорт да?т человек не только здоровье，но и силу воли，уверенность в себе.Он помогает нам повысить скорость реакции，сохранить молодость и бодрость духа на долгие годы，помогает человеку стать победителем в любых ситуациях.Спортздоровый дух》.Здоровье-всему голова.Укрепляйте здоровье，занимайтесь спортом！