第一篇:經(jīng)典小短文
第一節(jié)
這次我請(qǐng)客
Thank you for inviting me to eat.It?s my treat this time.Please let me pay the bill.You can treat me next time we eat.It has been my dream to meet you.I really enjoyed this meal.I really enjoyed speaking with you.Thank you for your time.We should meet every week and eat dinner together.第二節(jié)
英語(yǔ)和漢語(yǔ)
Ladies and gentlemen, today I want to talk about the differences between English and Chinese.English is very different from Chinese.The sounds are different, the grammar is different, and the writing is totally different.It?s very difficult to speak English well.If you want to speak English well, you must forget about the differences.Just practice correct sentences until you are used to them.The more sentences you can blurt out, the better you can express yourself.If you believe in yourself and practice crazily every day, you will make it.You will conquer English.Chinese is the most difficult language in the world.If you can speak Chinese, you can speak English.第三節(jié)
如何記單詞
Many people tell me that it is very hard to remember new words.They complain that no matter how hard they try to memorize new words, they always forget them.The best way to remember new words is to practice them every day.Practice them in sentences and paragraphs.Listen to tapes and read along every day.Otherwise you will forget easily.If you need my help, please call me.We?re friends;friends help each other.Let?s conquer new words together.第四節(jié)
我的一家人
Ladies and gentlemen, let me tell you a little bit about my family.I have a very happy family.My dad is a great man.He has a fantastic job.My mom is a wonderful woman.She has many outstanding talents.My family loves me.My family supports me in good times and bad times.They help me form many good habits.My mom and dad always tell me: If I want to succeed, I need to have good habits.We practice speaking English together every morning.We have dinner together every night.We talk about our problems.We share our joys.We exercise together.We relax together.The atmosphere in my family is fantastic.第五節(jié)
我成功的秘訣
Ladies and Gentlemen, today I want to sum up some of my secrets of success.The reasons why I?m so successful are: I love my family.I love my job.I love my company.I love speaking English.I love challenges.I love to help others.I love life.I love the world.I?m very lucky.I?m a great person.My advice to you is: Study and get ready.Someday your chance will come.第六節(jié)
我的首次美國(guó)之行
Ladies and Gentlemen, I just got back from America yesterday.This was my first visit to America.I?d like to say a few words about my first trip.Everything were new and fresh.I got up early to exercise in the park.I visited many interesting places.I met a lot of interesting people.I felt a little nervous, but I still talked to people.They were very friendly and helpful.I had a great first impression of American people.This trip was the first time I had to use English in real life.My English was not perfect, but I survived.The more I used English, the easier it became.I?m still
working very hard on my English.You know, practice makes perfect.Next time I go to America, I won?t feel nervous at all.第七節(jié)
母親節(jié)快樂(lè)
Ladies and Gentlemen, fathers and mothers have different roles.Here is a funny joke to wish you a happy Mother?s Day.Forget about the cooking, forget about the cleaning, forget about the laundry…Just pretend you?re Dad!Happy Mother?s day!第八節(jié)
中美關(guān)系
Ladies and Gentlemen, America is a great country.China is a great country.China and America have a long history together.Now is the right time to build an even closer and stronger relationship.China is inviting more and more experts from America to share their knowledge.At the same time, America is welcoming more and more talented Chinese to study and work in America.Both countries can gain a great deal from each other.America and China should keep working together to build a peaceful and bright future.Thank you.第九節(jié)
迎接問(wèn)題和挑戰(zhàn)
Ladies and Gentlemen, I?m honored to have this opportunity to talk to you.Solving problems is the top priority for government officials.We?re not afraid of problems.We consider problems to be challenge.We have lots of confidence in our ability to solve any problem.With your support and understanding, we can do a great job together.Thank you for your cooperation.If you have any problems, stop by our office 第十節(jié)
我要改變我的生活
I work extremely hard every day, but I?m very tired.I need to work smarter, not harder.I must find better ways to do my job.I must find more time to enjoy life.I know hard work is a part of everyone?s life.But I work too hard.My hard work goes too far.My hard work is ruining my health.My hard work is killing me.Other people have time for fun, going to bars and going to parents.All I do is get in my car and go to work every day.This life is too hard.I need to make a fresh start.第十一節(jié)
如何負(fù)責(zé)任
Ladies and Gentlemen, tonight I am going to talk about taking responsibility.It?s always hard to admit something is your fault.In fact, people rarely say, “It?s all my fault.” People always make excuses or say it is somebody else?s fault.It is hard to solve problems because people like to blame others.The next time you make a mistake, take responsibility!Four little words can make a big diffidence.Try saying, “It?s all my fault.”
第十二節(jié)
世界正變得越來(lái)越小
Ladies and Gentlemen, more and more foreigners are coming to China.More and more people around the world are starting to learn Chinese.More and more Chinese are starting to do business and travel around the world.The world is becoming smaller and smaller.That?s why English is becoming more and more important in China.If we want to ensure a great future for China, we must practice English harder than ever before.第十三節(jié)
好書(shū)就是好朋友
Ladies and Gentlemen, today I?d like to talk about books.A good book is like a good
friend.You should read as many books as you possibly can.You shouldn?t just take a quick look at a book.You should read it carefully, again and again.There is a famous quote,” A man who doesn?t read books is far worse off than a man who can?t read books.” Make books your friends and let books take you around the world.Get a book now and dive into it.Let the wisdom contained in books guide you through your life.第十四節(jié)
是腳還是食物
Ladies and Gentlemen, today I?d like to talk about two words, foot and food.I?ll never forget how shocked I was the first time I come to China and my host asked me, “Do you like Chinese foot?” I was told that Chinese people like to eat all kinds of unusual food, but I never imagined that they ate their own people?s feet!Of course I replied, “No!I don?t like it!” But my host insisted that “Chinese foot” is so delicious!You must at least try “Chinese foot”.I told him that I would be glad to try Chinese pig?s foot, but not Chinese foot!My host realized his mistake and we both had a great laugh.I was so relieved that the problem was not a culture difference, merely a case of bad pronunciation.Please take my advice and practice correct pronunciation of “food” and “foot” until you are sure this embarrassing situation could never happen to you.第十五節(jié)
如何說(shuō)一口流利的英語(yǔ)
Ladies and Gentlemen, I believe you all want to speak good English.Now let me give you some advice.Don?t be afraid of losing face.Don?t be afraid of making mistakes.Don?t be afraid of practicing your English.Don?t be ashamed of speaking poor English.Don?t be ashamed of being laughed at.Don?t ashamed of being stared at.The only real shame is that you never open your mouth.The only way to learn English is to never be afraid and never be ashamed.It?s never too late to make a change in your life.Don?t be afraid.No pain, No gain.You can make it.You?re great.第十六節(jié)
微笑的重要性
Ladies and Gentlemen, today I?d like to take about the important of smiling and kindness.Life is like a mirror.When you smile, people will smile back.When you treat other people kindly, they will treat you kindly in return.Try to spend one day smiling and being kind to everyone you meet.You will see a big difference in your life.If you keep on smiling and being kind, smiling and kindness will become your habits.If everyone tried to do this, the world would be a kinder, brighter, and happier place.Start smiling right away.第十七節(jié)
選擇的重要性
Ladies and Gentlemen, I want tell you something very important today.I want to tell you that life is about choices.You can choose to be miserable or you can choose to enjoy life.You can choose to improve your health or you can choose to destroy it.I hope you will make correct choices.I hope you will choose to enjoy your family, enjoy your friends, enjoy your work, and enjoy your everyday life.Life is a gift and we really should enjoy every minutes of it.Join the group of people who make good
choices.Enjoy your life.第十八節(jié)
吸煙的危害
Ladies and Gentlemen ,today I ? d like to talk about smoking.Smoking not only makes you smell terrible,it is also terrible for your health.If you smoke, everyone in your home is breathing in your second-hand smoke.Smoke makes your throat hurt, your teeth yellow, and your lungs black.Smoking is also like throwing money away.Each pack of cigarettes you smoke is really money going up in smoke.You are burning money with nothing to show for it.If you smoke, I hope you will try to give up this destructive habit.You owe it to yourself and your family to live a healthier life.第十九節(jié)
如何把單詞讀準(zhǔn)
Ladies and Gentlemen, today I?d like to talk about how to pronounce English words correctly.First, spell the word aloud.Then read the word aloud according to the tape.Carefully imitate each sound.Then shout out the word as loudly as possible.Lastly, find a good sentence to use this word.Think about what the word means in this sentence.If you follow these steps, you will soon be proud of how well you can pronounce English words.第二十節(jié)
如何有效溝通
Ladies and Gentlemen ,today I want to talk about the importance of clear communication.Clear communication means being able to really hear what someone is saying.You need to listen with your heart not only your ears.Remember you have two ears but only one mouth.That means you should listen more and speak less.Listening as well as speaking is absolutely necessary for clear communication.Good communication is not as easy as it appears.It takes hard work and years of practices.Thank you for being here and listening to my speech.I hope I made my message clear.I hope you will make it a goal this year to improve your communication.Thanks for your attention.第二十一節(jié)
關(guān)心讓世界更美好
Ladies and Gentlemen ,today I want to talk about care.The biggest problem facing the world today is a lack of care.People only care about themselves.They don?t care about other people.They don?t even care about their family.They don?t care about the environment.They don?t care about their community.Worst of all, they don?t care about their country.I am here to encourage you to start caring.We all want to be treated fairly.We all want to be loved.We all want to be taken care of.We all need clean air to breathe.We all need clean water to drink.We all need clean places to enjoy.We all share the same motherland.We all share the same emotions.Let?s do our best to start caring more.第二十二節(jié)
成功由你自己決定
Ladies and Gentlemen, if you want to be sure of success, you have to make sure that you study every day ,that you improve yourself every day, that you progress every day, and that you work hard every day.Your success depends on your commitment If you pour your heart and soul into what you do, you?re sure to be successful.第二十三節(jié)
如何做父母
Ladies and Gentlemen, mothers and fathers ,today I ?d like to talk about how to be a
good parent.Being a parent is the toughest job in the world.Parents should be patient.Parents should help their children grow.Parents should not push their children too much.Parents should always be proud of their children.Parents should love their children unconditionally.Remember, nobody is perfect If you want your child to grow up healthy and happy, please remember this important and practical advice.第二十四節(jié)
如何建立更加和諧的家庭
Ladies and Gentlemen, boys and girls, today I want to talk about building a better family.Everyone wants a better family.But most people don?t know how to create one.Here are some helpful tips.Boys and girls,you need to behave.You need to be kind.You need always try your best.You need to behave in yourself and believe in your parents.Your parents really want what is best for you.Mothers and fathers,you need to be patient.You need to buy fewer things for your children and give them more of your time.You need to read more books to learn about being good parents.If your child sees you reading books, he will love books too.You need to bring up your children by teaching them the value of hard work and by setting a good example.Children believe what they see more than what they are told.Be sure that your child is seeing the behavior that you want him to model.I believe that we can make our families better and stronger by working and learning together.第二十五節(jié) 珍惜時(shí)間
Ladies and Gentlemen, today I?m going to talk about time.Time is too precious to waste.Time is our greatest treasure.If you waste you time, you waste you life.Never waste one minute of you time or other people?s time.Get moving!Get excited!Take action!Do something to make your heart best faster every day.Make the most of you time.Make the best use of you time.Time is a gift.Don?t waste a single minute.第二十六節(jié) 如何過(guò)充實(shí)的生活
Ladies and Gentlemen: today I?m going to talk about how to live a productive life.Every day is a gift, even days that are difficult or days you feel down.Appreciate everyday.Learn something new every day.Do something to improve you every day.Don?t delay.Don?t let you dreams die.Don?t waste time Just do it.Life is too short to waste even one single day.If you live every day fully and productively, you?re bound to succeed.Remember, yesterday is a memory, tomorrow is a dream, live for today.第二十七節(jié) 說(shuō)一口流利英語(yǔ)的秘密
Ladies and Gentlemen: everyone wants to speak English well.Today I?m going to talk about the secrets of speaking good English.If you want to speak good English, there are several things you must do.You must keep on practicing.You must keep on working hard.You must keep on making mistakes.And you must keep on losing face.You know you speak only by speaking.So the most important key to speaking English well is speaking.Speak as loudly as possible, speak as clearly as possible, and speak as quickly as possible.The more you speak the batter your English will be.The more mistakes you make, the more progress you will make.These are the secrets of speak good English.Everyone can make it.Everyone can be an English-speaking genius.Thank you for coming.第二十八節(jié) 幸福的秘密
Ladies and Gentlemen: today I?m going to talk about happiness.Where does happiness come from? It doesn?t come from material things.It doesn?t come from having a lot of money and power.It doesn?t coming from being popular.It comes from giving love to other people.It comes from giving your best effort to everything you do.It comes from getting satisfaction from helping other people.It comes from growing smarter and wiser every day.The happiness you fell is equal to the love you give.The happiness you feel is equal to the love you give.The more you give, the happier you will be.第二十九節(jié) 我最喜歡的吃飯方式
My favorite food is fast food.It saves a lot of time.I don?t care for fancy dinners I think people should forget about wasting time and money on expensive food.It really doesn?t matter if you eat expensive food or fast food as long as the food is nutritious.第三十節(jié) 美麗的北京
Ladies and Gentlemen: I hope you will have a very nice time here in Beijing.There are many beautiful views, countless historical sites, and a variety of delicious foods for you to enjoy.Beijing is a great place to do business.Beijing is a wonderful place for vacation.I hope you will fall in love with Beijing.I believe Beijing is a fantastic place to visit and a marvelous place to live.If there is anything I can do for you, please let me know.I hope you will visit Beijing again and again.第三十一節(jié) 告別演說(shuō)——我將向年中國(guó)
Ladies and Gentlemen: I?m sad that this speech is my farewell speech.Happy times always pass too quickly.My two years? stay in china will come to an end soon.I will miss you.I will miss my students.I will miss all my friends.I will miss china.And of course, I will miss Chinese food.I will come back to china as soon as I can.Thank you for making my stay a wonderful experience.Think you for your hospitality.Most of all, thank you for your unparalleled friendship
第三十二節(jié)
鍛煉的重要性
Ladies and Gentlemen, today I?d like to talk about exercise.More and more people are starting to realize the benefit of exercise.Exercise is the only way to have a healthy body and healthy mind.Experience is the only way to lose weight.There are many kinds of exercise.It is easy to choose one that suits you.The important thing to remember is that exercise needs to be a part of your daily life.Please take care of your body and start an exercise program today.Physical health and mental health can both be improved with regular exercise.Seize the day.Seize the moment.Seize control of your health.Exercise for a longer, healthier life!Thanks for your attention.第三十三節(jié)
我的希望
Ladies and Gentlemen,I have many wish.People all over the world would love each other more.I wish people would stop wasting energy I wish people would be less selfish.I wish people would share happy feelings more freely and not keep their emotions shut up inside.I wish that people could find cures for cancer and AIDS.In short, I wish that the world could be a better place.Thank you for letting me shares all my wishes with you.第三十四節(jié)
電視的危害
Ladies and Gentlemen, today I want to talk about television and how dangerous it is for children.Children today watch too much television.Television is harmful to developing minds.Children usually watches far more television than their parents realize.Children should only watch television when there is an educational program showing or on special occasion.It is terrible habit to just casually turn on the television and leave it on for hours at a time.Remember, when you switch on the television, you are switching off your child?s mind.Make a wise decision and limit your child?s television time.第三十五節(jié)
人生的三條最重要的建議
Ladies and Gentlemen, there are three things I want to talk about today.The first thing is, think before you speak.Say positive things, don?t hurt other people with words.The second thing is treasure every breath.Life is precious.We shouldn?t take anything for granted.We must be thankful for every breath.The third thing is nothing is impossible.If you thank you can never doubt yourself you can do anything.These three things have hailed me throughout my life thank you.第三十六節(jié)
父母是孩子最要重的老師
Fathers and mothers are their children?s first teachers.What they say and what they do determine whether their children will be successful or not.Fathers and mothers should be neither too strict nor too indulgent.It?s hard to be a good parent.That?s why fathers and mothers should always study together the best way to raise a child.第三十七節(jié)
到底如何打招呼
Ladies and Gentlemen, today I want to help you learn some of the most common greetings in English.Of course, there is the basic Hello.There are also many questions, such as how are you? How are you doing? How?s everything? How?s it going? All of these greetings are informal and very common in American English.In British English it is more common to hear “HOW DO YOU DO “? If you are confused by all of this information, don?t worry!You can always just say,” Hi!A happy smile and a confident “Hi,” will win friends anywhere you go.Don?t worry, just open your mouth and practice you can master English!Have Fun.第三十八節(jié)
如何明辨是非
Ladies and Gentlemen, today I want to talk about the importance of knowing right thing form wrong.It is important to always do the right thing.Martin King said, “The tine is always do the right to do the right thing.”
These words are really true!You should always choose to do the right thing, even if it is harder than the wrong thing.You should also encourage everyone around you to do the right thing.Be honest.Be fair.Be kind.The right thing to do is always very simple to understand, but sometimes very hard to do.Let?s help each other, and encourage each other to do the right thing.第三十九節(jié)
偉大的祖國(guó)
Ladies and Gentlemen;I?m from China.I?m Chinese.I?m proud of my country, and I?m proud of being Chinese.China has changed tremendously in the past twenty years.China has become a member of the world community.China is changing every day
Chinese people are embracing change.Chinese people are also facing many challenges now.We are eager to learn form the world.I am here today to learn form you.I?m sure we will learn very much form each other Thank you very much for your attention.Thank you very much for giving me the chance to you tonight.第四十節(jié)
工作的重要性
Ladies and Gentlemen, today I?m going to talk about jobs.If you want to succeed, you must fall in love with your job!You must enjoy your job!If you don?t change your attitude and just think of your job as a important, no matter how small it may be.Every job can teach you something.Every job is worthy doing well.Every job is glorious.Every job can contribute to society.Be pound of your job.Does it well? Learn to enjoy your job, and you will enjoy much more.Remember: If you enjoy your job, you?ll never work a day in your life.第四十一節(jié)
什么比金錢(qián)更重要
Ladies and gentlemen, today I?d like to make a small speech about family.I have a question to ask all of you: what is the most important thing in your life? I know many of you will say, money is the most important.But I want to tell you, many things are more important than money in life.It?s a shame that most people don?t realize this.Family health, and happiness are much more important than money.Without family, health, and happiness, money means nothing.Make sure you remember this important lesson and spend time with your family.People who spend more time with their families are usually healthier and happier.Precious minutes of family time are worth more than money.Make your family your first priority.第四十二節(jié)
噪音污染
Ladies and gentlemen, today I?d like to talk about noise pollution.There is too much noise in our cities.In some cities, you can?t even hear someone speaking next to you.Noise is hurting our health and hearing.We need to do something to reduce noise.We need new laws to punish companies and individuals who make too much noise.Let?s work together to reduce noise and create a more peaceful environment.Thank you very much for your attention.第四十三節(jié) 如何學(xué)好英語(yǔ)
Ladies and gentlemen, today I am going to talk about learning English.There are many ways to learn English.You can learn English through singing.You can learn English through reading.You can learn English through listening and you can learn English through writing.But, the best way to learn English is through speaking and reciting as many sentences as possible.The more sentences you can blurt out, the better English you will speak.第四十四節(jié)
中國(guó)簡(jiǎn)介
Ladies and gentlemen, today I?d like to give you a short introduction about China.China has a large population, colorful people and vast land.China ?s land covers 9.6 million square kilometers.There are also many languages spoken in China.Chinese people love learning all kinds of things and are crazy about learning English.The future looks bright for China.Let?s conquer English to show our love for our motherland.Thank you for listening!第四十五節(jié)
歡迎入住我們酒店
Ladies and gentlemen, welcome to out hotel.I hope you?ll eat well, sleep well, and enjoy our service.Now let me tell you something about our hotel.Our hotel is the oldest in the city.It has a long history.Many famous people have stayed in our hotel.Although our hotel is old, it was recently remodeled.I?m sure you will agree our hotel is beautiful as well as comfortable.We warmly welcome you to come back again and again.Have a lovely stay here.第四十六節(jié)
保護(hù)我們美好的世界
Ladies and gentlemen, we need to take care of the world.We need to save water.We need to use less energy.We need to stop polluting.We need to watch our daily actions.We need to protect our environment heart and soul.We can?t keep wasting the world?s resources.We can?t keep abusing our environment.We need to change the way we live.We all need to work together to make our world a better place.第四十七節(jié)
為今天而奮斗
Ladies and gentlemen, I want to share an important quote with you, “yesterday is a memory, tomorrow is a dream, live for today!” I hope that you will try your best to use your unique talents to make today productive and fruitful.You cannot worry about your mistakes of yesterday.You should not waste your energy worrying about what will happen tomorrow.The only thing you can control is what you do today.Make the most of today and you will win everything.Thank you for your time and attention.第四十八節(jié)
學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的幾個(gè)小竅門(mén)
Ladies and gentlemen, today I?d like to share a few tricks for learning English with you.First, try to speak English as much as possible.This will train your tongue muscle.Second, trust your ability.Don?t be afraid to speak.Don?t be trapped by shyness.Third, don?t let grammar trouble you.Don?t be trapped by grammar rules.The more sentences you speak, the more natural the grammar rules will become.Actually, the truth is there are no tricks in learning English.You must try your very best to practice.Remember, what pains us trains us.Thanks for your kind attention.I hope you will try to speak English from today!第四十九節(jié)
喝水的重要性
Ladies and gentlemen, today I want to talk about how important it is to drink enough water.Doctors say everyone needs to drink at least eight glasses of water each day.If you are outside in warm weather or exercising, you need to drink even more.If your mouth and throat feel dry you are already dehydrated.Many headaches and other health problems are caused by not drinking enough water.If you want better health, you don?t need to do anything drastic.You can simply drink more water.Thank you for coming tonight and have a safe drive home.第五十節(jié)
語(yǔ)言的威力
Ladies and gentlemen, today I want to talk about power of words.Words can express your feelings.Words can influence people.Words can hurt people.Words can encourage people.Words can start wars and words can end wars.Words can help you become a successful speaker and a powerful leader.Words can help you win friends.That?s why I feel puzzled about why Chinese students hate words.Students should love words and learn how to use their power.Words are beautiful and words should be our friends.That?s why you should learn as many words as you can.Start learning and
using new words today.
第二篇:小短文
高爾基苦讀成才
高爾基是俄國(guó)著名的文學(xué)家。他的成才之路非常艱辛,由于家里很窮,不到十歲便到一個(gè)繪圖師家里做學(xué)徒,當(dāng)學(xué)徒十分辛苦。繪圖師家里有一個(gè)儲(chǔ)藏間,里面堆滿了書(shū)。這對(duì)好學(xué)的高爾基來(lái)說(shuō),無(wú)疑是發(fā)現(xiàn)了寶藏。他把書(shū)偷偷帶在身邊,不工作時(shí)就躲到角落里如饑似渴地讀書(shū)。晚上沒(méi)有燈,高爾基就打開(kāi)窗戶,借著月光讀書(shū)。繪圖師家的圣像前常年點(diǎn)著蠟燭,高爾基每天等到夜深人靜的時(shí)候,就悄悄地來(lái)到閣樓,在微弱的燭光下讀書(shū)。
有一次,高爾基太累,抱著書(shū)睡在了閣樓上。繪圖師的妻子拿著掃帚,一邊狠狠地打他,一邊罵道:“小偷,看我不打死你!”繪圖師問(wèn)明了原因,不但沒(méi)有生氣,反而拍著高爾基的頭說(shuō):“我看你是個(gè)用功的好孩子。你想看書(shū)就直接向我要吧!”從此,高爾基一心陶醉在書(shū)的海洋里。最后終于成為舉世聞名的大作家。
魯迅先生從小也很喜歡讀書(shū),學(xué)校獎(jiǎng)給他一枚金質(zhì)獎(jiǎng)?wù)?。他立即拿到南京鼓樓街頭賣掉,然后買(mǎi)了好幾本書(shū),又買(mǎi)了一串紅辣椒。每當(dāng)晚上寒冷時(shí),夜讀難耐,他便摘下一顆辣椒,放在嘴里嚼著,直辣得額頭冒汗。他就用這種辦法驅(qū)寒堅(jiān)持讀書(shū)。由于苦讀書(shū),后來(lái)終于成為我國(guó)著名的文學(xué)家。這兩位大文豪的成功,都告訴我們:“成功哪里得?貴在苦讀書(shū)!”
從這故事中,我們也可以認(rèn)識(shí)到,讀書(shū)和寫(xiě)作的關(guān)系非常密切,要寫(xiě)作文,你得先讀書(shū)。讀了許多書(shū),才有了寫(xiě)作的基礎(chǔ),高爾基和魯迅的成功不正是這樣嗎?“讀書(shū)破萬(wàn)卷,下筆如有神”。多多讀書(shū)吧,它是寫(xiě)好作文基礎(chǔ)。
閱讀聚材
寫(xiě)作是從閱讀開(kāi)始的,閱讀是學(xué)生積累寫(xiě)作素材的一個(gè)最重要的途徑。我們上語(yǔ)文課,學(xué)習(xí)別人的文章,就是一種閱讀。我們?cè)陂喿x時(shí)還應(yīng)該將讀課文與寫(xiě)作文相結(jié)合。由于課文與實(shí)際生活接近,寫(xiě)作的方法都對(duì)學(xué)生有一個(gè)規(guī)范化的引導(dǎo),有一些小經(jīng)歷可能都是學(xué)生親身經(jīng)歷過(guò)的,可以恰如其分地模仿課文內(nèi)容指導(dǎo)自己的寫(xiě)作實(shí)踐。當(dāng)然,課堂閱讀是有限的,所以課外還應(yīng)花一定的時(shí)間看些有益的書(shū)。多讀課外作品,積累優(yōu)美的語(yǔ)句。同時(shí)要與課堂閱讀結(jié)合起來(lái),仔細(xì)品位和借鑒經(jīng)典作品的謀篇布局。
1、偉人毛澤東的《講堂錄》
偉人毛澤東有一本《講堂錄》,是毛澤東學(xué)生時(shí)代留下的讀書(shū)筆記。共有47頁(yè),一萬(wàn)多字,字全部為毛澤東讀書(shū)時(shí)摘抄下來(lái)的精彩詞語(yǔ)句段,且用“蘭亭體”小楷字書(shū)寫(xiě)而成。他非常仰慕愛(ài)國(guó)詩(shī)人屈原,前面11頁(yè)全文抄錄了《離騷》、《九歌》,一絲不茍。后面36頁(yè)主要是國(guó)文和修身的聽(tīng)課筆記。涉及范圍很廣:先秦哲學(xué)、楚辭、漢賦、漢書(shū)、唐宋古文、宋明理學(xué)以及明末清初的思想家與文學(xué)家。這些議論多是做人和治學(xué)的隨感,卻含深刻哲理。
毛澤東很推崇徐特立老師“不動(dòng)筆墨不讀書(shū)”的學(xué)習(xí)方法。所謂“動(dòng)筆墨”,就是不只是讀前人的書(shū),而且要經(jīng)過(guò)認(rèn)真思考和消化,把自己的心得和看法寫(xiě)下
來(lái),其中包括對(duì)書(shū)中同意或不同意的地方。毛澤東每讀一本書(shū)都會(huì)有條理的記錄文中的名言警句,并寫(xiě)出自己的體會(huì)。有條理地記錄其中的典故,全文的要點(diǎn)和自己簡(jiǎn)短的議論。據(jù)不完全統(tǒng)計(jì),自新中國(guó)政府進(jìn)駐北京到1966年9月,毛澤東先后從北京圖書(shū)館、首都圖書(shū)館、北大圖書(shū)館、北師大圖書(shū)館等借閱圖書(shū)達(dá)2000余種,5000余冊(cè)。
毛澤東由于積累豐富,后來(lái)寫(xiě)出了許多優(yōu)秀文章,他究竟寫(xiě)了多少書(shū),真是的書(shū)多得數(shù)不過(guò)來(lái)。這么豐厚的成果和他學(xué)生時(shí)代及一生認(rèn)真讀書(shū),刻苦摘抄積累資料分不開(kāi)的。
同學(xué)們是怎樣讀書(shū)的?做到了像毛澤東青少年時(shí)代那樣認(rèn)真讀書(shū)了嗎?一邊讀書(shū),一邊批注、摘抄,寫(xiě)筆記,發(fā)議論,大量閱讀,日積月累。這樣既提高閱讀能力,又積累豐富知識(shí)。養(yǎng)成了閱讀的好習(xí)慣,你的倉(cāng)庫(kù)里存儲(chǔ)了各種材料,到寫(xiě)文章時(shí),還怕沒(méi)有東西可寫(xiě)嗎?
小文的習(xí)作訓(xùn)練
小文被學(xué)校評(píng)文“寫(xiě)作之星”,被報(bào)社評(píng)為“優(yōu)秀小記者”,他的成功與他爸爸的培養(yǎng)是分不開(kāi)的。他的爸爸在家第一件事就是和兒子一起學(xué)習(xí)。幾乎每天傍晚,爸爸都帶小文在樹(shù)林里跑步,一邊跑一邊看一看各種不同樹(shù)木生長(zhǎng)的情況,看著野薔薇漫出來(lái)了,會(huì)傷人的話,折一折。如果看到斜坡上面有小木棍的話,對(duì)于跑步的人是很危險(xiǎn)的,他們把它移開(kāi)。
跑到湖邊的時(shí)候,爸爸會(huì)跟孩子說(shuō):“你看一看這個(gè)水光,可以用哪些詞匯去形容,天光云影映在水里,又可以怎么樣形容。你看這些蓮花,蓮葉甜甜,用什么辦法去形容?!眱鹤痈职謱W(xué)習(xí),豐富詞匯是第一步。爸爸教小文一套訓(xùn)練的方法:你可以先想想人、地、事、物,可以隨便想一個(gè),在大樹(shù)下,兩個(gè)人聊天。爸爸讓孩子講,用“聊天”做題目,你怎么樣寫(xiě)?他從人的角度說(shuō):“是一位李先生和一位我不認(rèn)識(shí)的小姐,坐在樹(shù)陰下聊天?!比撕偷赜辛?,“我做作業(yè)的時(shí)候”,事和時(shí)也有了,他們?cè)诹氖裁茨兀磕憔涂梢赃@樣延伸下去,人、地、事、時(shí)、物是很重要的因素。這就是從記敘文的要素出發(fā)進(jìn)行練習(xí)。
另外可以用視覺(jué)來(lái)寫(xiě)。如《桃花源記》里,當(dāng)他看到桃花林,看到小洞就舍船從口入,“復(fù)行數(shù)十步,豁然開(kāi)朗”,是個(gè)大遠(yuǎn)景;“土地平曠”,漸漸到了中景;“桑竹之屬,阡陌交通,雞犬相聞”;往來(lái)男女衣著,男女分得出來(lái)了,“黃發(fā)垂髫”,發(fā)式看到了,怡然自樂(lè),還笑咪咪的,是大特寫(xiě)。這不是像電視、電影鏡頭一樣嗎?如果我們寫(xiě)作也用鏡頭的方式來(lái)寫(xiě),就很容易了。
小文告訴爸爸去學(xué)校出板報(bào)的事?!敖裉煜挛缫稽c(diǎn)鐘,我騎車來(lái)到學(xué)校的門(mén)口,伙伴已經(jīng)在那里等著,大概是怕我遲到吧”,地點(diǎn)講了,時(shí)間講了,人也講了,“跟著伙伴進(jìn)了學(xué)校,老師已準(zhǔn)備好出板報(bào)的資料在那兒等著了”,事件也有了。一個(gè)寫(xiě)作的人,如果你覺(jué)得難記住用一條線寫(xiě)。那就分條寫(xiě),如果寫(xiě)你的家庭,先不要寫(xiě)你的爸爸媽媽,先用單條線形容你的家。于是,可以從你的家門(mén)開(kāi)始寫(xiě),你可以怎么說(shuō)?
“遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)的我總是看著那一盞門(mén)燈在迎接我,推開(kāi)門(mén)的時(shí)候,這門(mén)已經(jīng)十多年了??”所以人、地、事、時(shí)、物,再加上視線,加上聲音,加上色彩,文章就漂亮起來(lái)了。小文就是這樣在爸爸的啟發(fā)指導(dǎo)下,積累詞匯,不斷練習(xí)作文的。
同學(xué)們,從小文的成績(jī)、成功中,我們可以感悟到,寫(xiě)作需要養(yǎng)成觀察、思考生活的良好習(xí)慣,并試著表述觀察到的東西,按照一定的方法進(jìn)行訓(xùn)練,使它變成素材在頭腦里存起來(lái),那才有收獲。席勒指出:“感受能力的培養(yǎng)是時(shí)代最急迫的需要,這不僅是因?yàn)樗且环N改善對(duì)人生洞察力的手段,而且因?yàn)樗旧頃?huì)喚起洞察力的改善?!?/p>
立志讀盡人間書(shū)
蘇軾出身于書(shū)香門(mén)第。在家庭影響和父母的熏陶下,蘇軾自幼聰敏好學(xué)。七歲知書(shū),十歲能寫(xiě)文章,常受到親友們的贊揚(yáng)。
在贊揚(yáng)聲中,少年蘇軾逐漸增長(zhǎng)了自滿情緒。他想,家里的藏書(shū)從先秦諸子百家著作,到西漢詩(shī)賦、唐代散文,我全都讀過(guò)了,可以稱得上“才高八斗,學(xué)富五車”。有一天,他在書(shū)房門(mén)口貼上這樣一副對(duì)聯(lián):“識(shí)遍天下字,讀盡人間書(shū)?!?/p>
說(shuō)來(lái)也巧,幾天后,有位白發(fā)蒼蒼的者人,上門(mén)向蘇軾求教。老人拿出一本古書(shū)請(qǐng)?zhí)K軾誦讀。蘇軾翻開(kāi)一看,別說(shuō)從未讀過(guò),就是連書(shū)上的字竟有許多不認(rèn)得。蘇軾頓覺(jué)羞愧難當(dāng)。他開(kāi)始重新認(rèn)識(shí)自己,看來(lái)真是天外有天,人外有人。自己距離“識(shí)遍天下字,讀盡人間書(shū)”還差得很遠(yuǎn)。老人走后,蘇軾暗下決心,要從頭學(xué)起,于是便在原來(lái)的對(duì)聯(lián)上面各加上兩個(gè)字,將對(duì)聯(lián)改為:“發(fā)憤識(shí)遍天下字,立志讀盡人間書(shū)?!?/p>
由于蘇軾具有“立志讀盡人間書(shū)”的宏大志向。學(xué)無(wú)止境是對(duì)一個(gè)人用心苦讀的最好鞭策,而像蘇軾這樣孜孜不倦的學(xué)習(xí)詩(shī)文的文學(xué)大家而言,讀盡人間書(shū)的志向僅僅是虛心好學(xué)的一個(gè)小小寫(xiě)照而已,但是他內(nèi)心真正的虛心向上的學(xué)習(xí)精神,卻是值得我們永遠(yuǎn)學(xué)習(xí)的。
蘇軾讀書(shū)還注重實(shí)踐。他從南方人天天和水打交道,十幾歲就熟悉水性的實(shí)例,悟解出實(shí)踐出真知的道理。為此,他好多的文章,就是通過(guò)親身的經(jīng)歷后有感而發(fā)的。他在二十一歲時(shí)候就考中了進(jìn)士。主考官歐陽(yáng)修讀完蘇軾的文章后,大為嘆服,他給梅堯臣寫(xiě)信說(shuō):“不覺(jué)汗出,快哉,快哉!老夫當(dāng)避路,放他出一頭地,可喜,可喜!”歐陽(yáng)修為發(fā)現(xiàn)一個(gè)杰出的人才而欣喜若狂,同時(shí)又感到后生可畏,他想避開(kāi),讓蘇軾出名。宋仁宗讀了蘇軾的文章,高興地說(shuō):“我今天為子孫又得到一個(gè)宰相了?!?/p>
蘇軾是具有多方面成就的作家。他的散文和詩(shī)、詞都很有名,在散文方面,他是“唐宋八大家”之一;在詞的方面,他和辛棄疾齊名,被稱為“豪放派”的代表人物;在書(shū)法方面,他自成一派,為世人所推崇。有《經(jīng)進(jìn)東坡文集事略》、《蘇詩(shī)編注集成》、《蘇詞補(bǔ)注》、《東坡詞》和《東坡樂(lè)府》等傳世。
蘇軾多才多藝是北宋文壇領(lǐng)袖之一,他之所以能取得這樣的光輝成就,是和他少年時(shí)孜孜不倦、刻苦讀書(shū)分不開(kāi)的。大凡文學(xué)上有成就的人,一生都是與書(shū)、讀書(shū)結(jié)下了不解之緣的。同學(xué)們,你們都喜歡讀書(shū)嗎?我想你們會(huì)的。
莫泊桑寫(xiě)小說(shuō)
法國(guó)作家莫泊桑,年輕時(shí)候就開(kāi)始從事寫(xiě)作,曾寫(xiě)了許多詩(shī)歌、小說(shuō)、散文、劇本。但投寄出去都是石沉大海,杳無(wú)音信。多次的失敗使莫泊桑對(duì)寫(xiě)作喪失了信心。
那時(shí),他正巧認(rèn)識(shí)了舅舅的同窗好友——大文學(xué)家福樓拜。福樓拜也很欣賞這個(gè)年輕人,決心把自己創(chuàng)作的經(jīng)驗(yàn)傳授給莫泊桑。莫泊桑非常尊重嚴(yán)師的教誨,每星期都要把自己寫(xiě)的習(xí)作送給福樓拜審閱。福樓拜一絲不茍地為他修改習(xí)作,對(duì)莫泊桑的不少作品表示贊賞,但還是勸他:不要急于發(fā)表。
福樓拜對(duì)莫泊桑的要求非常嚴(yán)格,首先要求他訓(xùn)練敏銳透徹地觀察事物的能力。莫泊桑遵從老師教誨,對(duì)自己進(jìn)行長(zhǎng)期嚴(yán)格的訓(xùn)練,逐漸養(yǎng)成了善于發(fā)現(xiàn)別人沒(méi)有發(fā)現(xiàn)過(guò)和沒(méi)有寫(xiě)過(guò)的特點(diǎn)。后來(lái),莫泊桑在談到作家應(yīng)該細(xì)致、敏銳的觀察事物時(shí)說(shuō):“大家要想寫(xiě)作,必須詳細(xì)地觀察你想要表達(dá)的一切東西,時(shí)間要長(zhǎng),而且要全神貫注,才能從其中發(fā)現(xiàn)至今還沒(méi)有人看到與說(shuō)過(guò)的那些方面。比如,為了描寫(xiě)燒得很旺的火或平地上的一棵樹(shù),我們就需要站在這堆火或這棵樹(shù)的面前,一直到我們覺(jué)得它們不再跟別的火焰和別的樹(shù)木一樣為止?!?/p>
福樓拜還建議莫泊桑,做這樣的鍛煉:騎馬出去跑一圈,一兩個(gè)鐘頭之后回來(lái),把自己所看到的一切記下來(lái)。莫泊桑按照這個(gè)辦法鍛煉自己的觀察力有一年之久。此外,福樓拜還讓莫泊桑,聽(tīng)街上的馬車聲來(lái)訓(xùn)練觀察力。莫泊桑遵照老師的教導(dǎo),從“抓特點(diǎn),認(rèn)真觀察”入手,終于寫(xiě)出了有新意,有獨(dú)特感受的作品。1880年,莫泊桑的作品《羊脂球》發(fā)表了,它使莫泊桑一鳴驚人。讀者稱莫泊桑是文壇上的一顆新星。從此,莫泊桑一躍登上了法國(guó)文壇。
我們學(xué)習(xí)寫(xiě)作,不妨也像莫泊桑那樣,多留心觀察自己身旁的人或事,景與物。還要進(jìn)行必要的訓(xùn)練,達(dá)到寫(xiě)出富有新意的,有獨(dú)特感受的文章來(lái)。那時(shí),我們一定也會(huì)享受到成功的快樂(lè)。
歐陽(yáng)修做文章
歐陽(yáng)修是宋朝時(shí)候杰出的文學(xué)家。他從小死了父親,家里很窮,生活得很苦。母親不得不帶著他離開(kāi)家鄉(xiāng),去投靠遠(yuǎn)方的叔叔。
叔叔家里也不富裕。歐陽(yáng)修到了上學(xué)的年齡,連買(mǎi)紙筆的錢(qián)也花不起。他的母親就用蘆稈當(dāng)筆,把沙土鋪在地上當(dāng)紙,教歐陽(yáng)修認(rèn)字。歐陽(yáng)修認(rèn)字很用心,到了十歲的時(shí)候,已經(jīng)有了自修的能力了。他常到有書(shū)的人家去借書(shū)讀。借來(lái)的書(shū)要按期歸還,他就把書(shū)背熟,再還給人家。他訂了一個(gè)背書(shū)計(jì)劃,每天背三百字。幾年以后,就把四書(shū)都背熟了。
他的叔父看他這樣用功,就把自己用剩下來(lái)的紙,裝訂成本子送給他。他高興極了,把這些本子一半用來(lái)抄書(shū),一半用來(lái)學(xué)習(xí)做文章。那個(gè)時(shí)候,人們寫(xiě)文章有一種壞風(fēng)氣,只講究辭句的華麗,不講究?jī)?nèi)容。歐陽(yáng)修覺(jué)得這種風(fēng)氣很不好,他想學(xué)習(xí)寫(xiě)另外一種文章。
有一次,他從一只破書(shū)箱里找到了幾本舊書(shū),是唐朝文學(xué)家韓愈寫(xiě)的。韓愈寫(xiě)的文章不光文字優(yōu)美,道理也說(shuō)得很透徹。歐陽(yáng)修越讀越覺(jué)得有味道,就把韓愈的文章當(dāng)作自己學(xué)習(xí)寫(xiě)文章的榜樣,進(jìn)行學(xué)習(xí)模仿。
歐陽(yáng)修寫(xiě)文章非常認(rèn)真,為了寫(xiě)一篇文章,他常常要讀很多書(shū)。每一篇文章的初稿寫(xiě)好,他就把它貼在墻上,有空就反復(fù)地念,反復(fù)地修改,直改到自己認(rèn)為滿意了才行。
他寫(xiě)的《醉翁亭記》,開(kāi)頭一段說(shuō)明滁州四周圍都是山。初稿用了幾十個(gè)字,寫(xiě)了東面有什么山,西面有什么山,南面有什么山,北面有什么山??傻鹊阶詈蠖ǜ宓臅r(shí)候,只用了五個(gè)字:“環(huán)滁皆山也”,就把意思表達(dá)出來(lái)了。
到了晚年,歐陽(yáng)修也可以說(shuō)是才華橫溢的文學(xué)家了,可他寫(xiě)文章還是一字一句地仔細(xì)推敲,一點(diǎn)也不馬虎。他的妻子既相勸又打趣說(shuō):“你已經(jīng)這么大年紀(jì)了,還怕老師罵嗎?”歐陽(yáng)修笑著回答說(shuō):“我不是怕老師罵,是怕后來(lái)的人笑呀!”
腹有詩(shī)書(shū)氣自華,讀書(shū)是積累,多讀精品文章,在讀書(shū)中感悟、提高,這是培養(yǎng)語(yǔ)文能力的有效途徑。歐陽(yáng)修這樣,我們也需要這樣。我們學(xué)寫(xiě)作要多讀好書(shū),熱愛(ài)生活,從生活和學(xué)習(xí)中鍛煉出敏銳的感悟能力,尤其注意從閱讀中去借鑒作家感悟生活的經(jīng)驗(yàn),歐陽(yáng)修就是以韓愈的文章作為自己寫(xiě)作榜樣的,并進(jìn)行科學(xué)的寫(xiě)作訓(xùn)練,認(rèn)真、一絲不茍的練寫(xiě),修改,直到晚年還是一樣。只有這樣,我們也一定會(huì)享受到從閱讀感悟到作文成功的喜悅的讀書(shū)是要讀出它好處
熊十力(1884——1968)是20世紀(jì)中國(guó)重要的哲學(xué)家。
20世紀(jì)40年代,有一個(gè)國(guó)民黨的陸軍少將,叫徐復(fù)觀,聽(tīng)到友人對(duì)熊十力的推崇和介紹,又在上司那里看到熊十力的著作《新唯識(shí)論》,大為佩服,就寫(xiě)了一封信,表示自己有志于做學(xué)問(wèn),希望得到他的指教。
熊十力回信,講了一番治學(xué)做人的道理。有一次,徐復(fù)觀穿著陸軍少將的軍服,去拜見(jiàn)熊十力,請(qǐng)教應(yīng)該讀什么書(shū)。熊十力叫他回去讀王船山的《讀通鑒論》。
徐復(fù)觀說(shuō)早年已經(jīng)讀過(guò)了。熊十力很不高興地說(shuō):“你并沒(méi)有讀懂,應(yīng)當(dāng)再讀?!边^(guò)了一些日子,徐復(fù)觀再去,告訴說(shuō):“《讀通鑒論》讀完了?!毙苁?wèn): “有點(diǎn)什么心得?”徐復(fù)觀覺(jué)得自己讀得很認(rèn)真很仔細(xì),不免有些得意,說(shuō),書(shū)里有很多他不同意的地方,接著就一條一條地說(shuō)起來(lái)。
熊十力越聽(tīng)越不是滋味,還沒(méi)等他說(shuō)完,就怒聲斥罵起來(lái):“你這個(gè)東西,怎么會(huì)讀得進(jìn)書(shū)!像你這樣讀書(shū),就是讀了百部千部,你會(huì)得到書(shū)的什么益處?讀書(shū)是要先看出它的好處,然后再批評(píng)它的壞處,這才像吃東西一樣,經(jīng)過(guò)消化而攝取了營(yíng)養(yǎng)。譬如《讀通鑒論》,這一段該是多么有意義;那一段理解得多么
深刻。這些你記得嗎?你懂得嗎?你這樣讀書(shū),真是太沒(méi)有出息!”這一頓罵,罵得陸軍少將目瞪口呆。
原來(lái),讀書(shū)是先要讀出書(shū)的好處!事后,徐復(fù)觀深情地說(shuō):“這對(duì)于我是起死回生的一罵??峙聦?duì)于一切聰明自負(fù),并沒(méi)有走進(jìn)學(xué)問(wèn)之門(mén)的人,都是起死回生的一罵。”
經(jīng)過(guò)這起死回生的一罵,徐復(fù)觀改變了讀書(shū)的方法,后來(lái)成為一個(gè)有名的學(xué)者,著書(shū)立說(shuō),為重新檢討和弘揚(yáng)中國(guó)文化,做了出色的貢獻(xiàn),特別在臺(tái)灣、香港等地產(chǎn)生了很大的影響。
故事里“讀書(shū),是先要讀出書(shū)的好處”這句話,大家明白了嗎?要抱著欣賞的心情,體會(huì)美在什么地方。同時(shí),拿到一篇文章,首先就要意識(shí)到,我的任務(wù)不單是瀏覽,而是要自覺(jué)地從幾個(gè)方面入手,去深入理解學(xué)習(xí),要讀有所得。概括起來(lái)就是:
一、解決“寫(xiě)了什么”的問(wèn)題;
二、解決“怎么寫(xiě)”的問(wèn)題;
三、記憶文章中的精彩語(yǔ)段和詞語(yǔ)。這三個(gè)方面其實(shí)就是:讀書(shū)要達(dá)到動(dòng)口動(dòng)腦動(dòng)手的問(wèn)題。在一篇文章的學(xué)習(xí)過(guò)程中,能夠有意識(shí)地去解決好這三個(gè)問(wèn)題,這才是真正的“讀”。也只有這樣,才可以提高自己的閱讀理解能力。
讀,也是一個(gè)積累語(yǔ)文基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)和作文素材的手段。涉獵廣泛,見(jiàn)多識(shí)廣,胸中自有“丘壑”。這樣,在作文的過(guò)程中,就可消除無(wú)話可說(shuō),寫(xiě)出來(lái)的文章也不會(huì)空洞干巴,而是洋洋灑灑,言之有物了。
第三篇:小短文
一個(gè)獨(dú)特的男孩子
我的名字叫湯若風(fēng)。一聽(tīng)這名字,不同的人就有不同的看法:像我爸媽那種酷愛(ài)看武俠小說(shuō)的人,會(huì)認(rèn)為這名字很大俠風(fēng)范;像我姨媽那種喜歡說(shuō)成語(yǔ)的人,認(rèn)為這名字跟“弱不禁風(fēng)”有聯(lián)系。但不管怎么說(shuō),聽(tīng)這名字就知道我是個(gè)男孩子。(由名字猜測(cè)個(gè)性風(fēng)采。)
我今年九歲,讀小學(xué)三年級(jí)了。我的模樣很普通:圓頭圓眼圓肚子,腳已大得超過(guò)媽媽了,通常的人都會(huì)把我看大兩歲以上。(點(diǎn)明身份,略寫(xiě)外貌。)
我的優(yōu)點(diǎn)是聰明。剛?cè)雽W(xué)時(shí),我就能解答老師出的數(shù)學(xué)題。每次考試下來(lái),我都能得A。我的缺點(diǎn)大于優(yōu)點(diǎn),老師常批評(píng)我上課不專心,下課愛(ài)打鬧,驕傲自滿;媽媽總嘮叨我學(xué)習(xí)不自覺(jué),不講文明。(列舉優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)。)
我的愛(ài)好眾多,男孩子喜歡的玩電腦、踢球、打架……我一個(gè)不落下。
這就是我,一個(gè)獨(dú)特的男孩子。我有信心早日改正自己的缺點(diǎn),長(zhǎng)大自己的優(yōu)點(diǎn),做一個(gè)超人!(結(jié)尾點(diǎn)題,暢想明天更美好。)
點(diǎn)評(píng):這篇習(xí)作的開(kāi)頭從名字寫(xiě)起,點(diǎn)出不同的人對(duì)名字的不同看法。小作者沒(méi)有具體描寫(xiě)自己的外貌,但是抓住了一個(gè)“大”字來(lái)選擇材料,這樣也比較生動(dòng)。緊接著介紹了自己的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn),一筆勾出了自己的愛(ài)好之多,最后來(lái)了個(gè)畫(huà)龍點(diǎn)睛式的結(jié)尾。
瞧,這假小子
瞧,鏡子里,一個(gè)活潑的小女孩呈現(xiàn)在眼前了,她中等個(gè)兒,不胖不瘦的身材,一張長(zhǎng)圓臉上,嵌著一雙小眼睛,她留著稍有些發(fā)黃的短發(fā),不是那么漂亮。你猜到她了吧!哈,遠(yuǎn)在天邊,近在眼前,她就是我──王小琳。(外貌描寫(xiě)比較細(xì)致。)
我是個(gè)開(kāi)朗的女孩子,什么事都一笑了之,同時(shí),我的性格酷似男孩,喜歡跟男孩子打成一片,因此,別人叫我“假小子”“花木蘭”等。不僅如此,我的愛(ài)好也相似于男孩,比如打籃球、踢足球、玩電腦、看漫畫(huà)書(shū)等等。在我身上發(fā)生的許多事情都非常有趣。雖然有趣,但有時(shí)也使我很尷尬。(性格開(kāi)朗,酷似男孩,有喜有憂。)
我不喜歡穿女孩衣服,尤其是裙子。一天,我穿了件白襯衣,一條藍(lán)牛仔褲,在小區(qū)的院子里散步,欣賞噴泉,正在我看得入神的時(shí)候,一個(gè)童稚的聲音傳進(jìn)我的耳朵:“大哥哥,請(qǐng)問(wèn)3號(hào)樓在哪里呀?”我以為她在叫別人,可是她拽了拽我的衣角說(shuō):“大哥哥,你知不知道3號(hào)樓在哪?”我轉(zhuǎn)過(guò)頭,眼睛注視著她,臉一陣紅,一陣青,一陣白,既驚訝又氣憤還好笑,我慌忙給她指了3號(hào)樓的方向,撒腿跑開(kāi)了。當(dāng)時(shí),我真是不知所措,特別的尷尬。你說(shuō),是不是很好笑呀??。ú幌矚g穿女孩衣服,卻帶來(lái)了尷尬。)
喏,這就是我,一個(gè)活潑開(kāi)朗的女孩,一個(gè)具有男孩性格的女孩兒。(結(jié)尾點(diǎn)明主題。)
點(diǎn)評(píng):小作者在習(xí)作中集中介紹了自己的性格特點(diǎn),自己是“一個(gè)活潑開(kāi)朗”“具有男孩性格的女孩?!痹诮榻B自己的特點(diǎn)時(shí),小作者選擇了自己的愛(ài)好、穿著的實(shí)例來(lái)表現(xiàn)自己“假小子”的特質(zhì),習(xí)作語(yǔ)言活潑,讀后對(duì)這個(gè)“假小子”確實(shí)留下深深的印象。
你是誰(shuí)?
“你是誰(shuí)?夏天像個(gè)非洲人,挺堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的,最能忍,什么都不怕?!保c(diǎn)出性格特征。)
“別夸我了,我可是個(gè)白字先生喲!只知道幾個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的字怎么寫(xiě)?!?/p>
“不要謙虛了,不會(huì)寫(xiě)字沒(méi)關(guān)系,你有嘴巴、有頭腦呀!睢,你不管到哪里都可以吟上幾句千古絕句;作文兩次上書(shū),現(xiàn)在還有一篇文章等著發(fā)表呢?!?/p>
“本來(lái)我的作文是可以多上好書(shū)的,就因?yàn)槔蠋熆床欢覍?xiě)的字而理解錯(cuò)了我精妙的思想,才沒(méi)上好書(shū)……”(能說(shuō)會(huì)寫(xiě)是優(yōu)點(diǎn),只因錯(cuò)別字讓作文受牽連。)
“我們不要說(shuō)寫(xiě)字了,你不還是個(gè)笛子高手嗎?你吹出的笛聲那么悠揚(yáng),顫音、長(zhǎng)音、短音……簡(jiǎn)直什么音都吹得好?!保〞?huì)吹笛子添信心。)
“謝謝你,給了我信心!”
點(diǎn)評(píng):瞧,小作者竟使用第二人稱,采用對(duì)話的形式來(lái)介紹自己的特點(diǎn),這樣的寫(xiě)法可真大膽呀!敢于創(chuàng)新,真棒!讀完習(xí)作,我們看出了小作者具有堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的個(gè)性,作文寫(xiě)得好,還會(huì)吹笛子呢。
我的自畫(huà)像
我,已是三年級(jí)的學(xué)生了。不過(guò)我才八歲,一米三的個(gè)子,短短的頭發(fā),胖胖的耳朵。一張白里透紅的臉上,一雙圓溜溜的大眼睛,顯得無(wú)比精神,小小的鼻子(可惜有點(diǎn)塌)下面,有著一張櫻桃小嘴。(點(diǎn)明身份,刻畫(huà)外貌。)
我的脾氣與眾不同。高興時(shí),我會(huì)很溫柔;可我要是生起氣來(lái),把腳一跺,兩手往腰上一叉,還真像個(gè)“驕傲的公主”呢。我還有個(gè)特點(diǎn)──嗓門(mén)大,吼起人來(lái)如爆竹筒子。為這,媽媽不知批評(píng)過(guò)我多少次了。(與眾不同的脾氣)
我的愛(ài)好很廣,電子琴、唱歌、跳舞、繪畫(huà)等方面我都能露一手。上周的班隊(duì)課上,我邊唱邊跳,出色的表演,贏得了在場(chǎng)老師和同學(xué)們的一致好評(píng)。在去年“慶六一”系列活動(dòng)中,我的電子琴演奏還獲得了縣一等獎(jiǎng)呢。我特別喜歡英語(yǔ),每當(dāng)看到電視里的大學(xué)生用英語(yǔ)和外國(guó)人談話時(shí),我羨慕極了。所以,這學(xué)期開(kāi)始學(xué)英語(yǔ)以來(lái),我非常認(rèn)真。我想長(zhǎng)大后用英語(yǔ)同外商談生意呢。(愛(ài)好很廣,特別喜歡英語(yǔ)。)
別看我才八歲,我還是媽媽的小幫手呢。我把自己的房間收拾得美麗整潔,從不要媽媽插手;吃完飯,我總是主動(dòng)幫忙收拾餐具。每次,媽媽總豎起大拇指對(duì)我說(shuō):“我的玲兒長(zhǎng)大了。”(媽媽的小幫手。)
我這個(gè)人嘛,還有點(diǎn)兒缺點(diǎn),就是做事太馬虎,喜歡躺在床上看書(shū)。(列舉缺點(diǎn)。)
這就是我的自畫(huà)像,你們對(duì)我有好感嗎?希望我們能成為好朋友。(結(jié)尾點(diǎn)題,期盼交友。)點(diǎn)評(píng):習(xí)作以充滿稚氣的語(yǔ)言介紹了自己的年齡、相貌、脾氣、愛(ài)好和自己的缺點(diǎn)?!鞍藲q上三年級(jí)”“愛(ài)好很廣”“幫媽媽干活”雖然寫(xiě)得簡(jiǎn)略,卻讓我們感到了小主人公的可愛(ài)。寫(xiě)人時(shí)比喻的運(yùn)用,使文章更加生動(dòng)了。
人小志氣高
缺點(diǎn)不少,貪玩、天天接嘴、偶爾發(fā)脾氣,臉皮厚、打“雷”不聽(tīng)、下“雨”才怕。優(yōu)點(diǎn)不多,聰明算一條。用家長(zhǎng)的話總評(píng):不是完人,而是“玩”人。
知道我為什么要叫雷雨嗎?因?yàn)?,我在家里初一心情不好要“打打雷”,十五考試不好又要“打打雷”(也就是拍拍桌椅板凳……制造點(diǎn)表示生氣的音響)。但我怎么也不敢下雨,因?yàn)槲业挠暝趺匆擦懿粶绨謰尩男苄芰一稹?/p>
我是一個(gè)男子漢,在鏡子前叉腰一站,野氣中帶點(diǎn)清秀:眉毛又濃又粗,活像抹上的兩撇墨汁,一雙老鼠耳讓我的聽(tīng)覺(jué)靈敏了幾分,臉被太陽(yáng)曬得紫紅發(fā)亮。我十分喜歡看書(shū),也許因?yàn)榭磿?shū)的姿勢(shì)不夠正確,所以在眼睛前又掛了一雙“眼睛”。
那就是我鏡子里有一個(gè)小男孩,長(zhǎng)著高高的個(gè)子,圓圓的臉蛋,大大的耳朵,白白的皮膚,還有一雙閃著金光會(huì)說(shuō)話的小眼睛。
他是個(gè)小書(shū)迷,最愛(ài)看那些《故事大王》、少年科技讀物等。拿起來(lái)就不肯放下,有時(shí)連吃飯都忘了。他還常常會(huì)被書(shū)中的人物或情節(jié)所感動(dòng)呢。
可是,他在班級(jí)里的學(xué)習(xí)不怎么樣。因?yàn)樗幸粋€(gè)壞毛病——粗心大意,每次考試很多題明明都是會(huì)做的,可是因?yàn)轳R虎,得不到滿分,不過(guò)他現(xiàn)在痛下決心要改掉這個(gè)壞毛病。
小朋友,你知道這個(gè)小男孩是誰(shuí)嗎?告訴你吧,那就是我。
第四篇:小短文
武術(shù)
武術(shù)在我國(guó)源遠(yuǎn)流長(zhǎng),是中華民族傳統(tǒng)文化的瑰寶。為了更好地推廣武術(shù)運(yùn)動(dòng),使其與奧運(yùn)項(xiàng)目接軌,中國(guó)武協(xié)和國(guó)際武聯(lián)做了大量艱苦卓絕的工作?,F(xiàn)在武術(shù)運(yùn)動(dòng)已被列為一種與保齡球和國(guó)際標(biāo)準(zhǔn)舞有同行地位的奧運(yùn)表演項(xiàng)目。武術(shù)的蓬勃發(fā)展,除得益于其自身的吸引力之外,早期移居海外的一代武術(shù) 大師功不可沒(méi)。老一代武術(shù)家在海外播種下了武術(shù)的種子,使武術(shù)這門(mén)既可以自衛(wèi)又可以健身的運(yùn)動(dòng)很快就在新的地土上扎下了根。今天高超的武術(shù)大師遍布世界各地,武術(shù)愛(ài)好者也與日俱增。
漢語(yǔ)
漢語(yǔ)常被認(rèn)為是一種非常古老的語(yǔ)言。人類所有的語(yǔ)言都可追溯到朦朧的史前時(shí)期。5000年前華夏祖先說(shuō)漢語(yǔ)的方法同說(shuō)英語(yǔ)人士說(shuō)英語(yǔ)的方式大致相似。然而,漢語(yǔ)確實(shí)也是一種很古老的語(yǔ)言。今天所存留下來(lái)的最早的漢字已有近4000年的歷史。這些文字均為甲骨雕文。大部分銘文為神諭圣旨,內(nèi)容大都與政治事件和宗教活動(dòng)有關(guān),有些則是關(guān)于天氣和戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)的記錄。漢語(yǔ)有豐富的古代文字作品,源遠(yuǎn)流長(zhǎng),遠(yuǎn)非其他一種語(yǔ)言的文字可與之媲美。一些最古老的文字屬形象文字。
比薩餅
比薩餅也許是當(dāng)今世界上最知名的食品了。它的演變與發(fā)展歷經(jīng)了好幾個(gè)世紀(jì)。比薩餅的雛形就是一般的面包。作為窮人最常吃的食物之一,面包在歷史上占有重要的地位,因?yàn)檫^(guò)去他們只能以谷物和大自然饋贈(zèng)的幾種農(nóng)作物為生。他們發(fā)揮想像力盡可能將其制成可口的東西。大麥?zhǔn)亲雒姘畛S玫脑?,最早的比薩狀面包也是用它制作的。人們將大麥碾成粉,和上水,在薄薄的平底鍋上攤平,然后用燒紅的石頭燒烤。后來(lái),小麥粉替代了其他谷物,成為比薩餅的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)原料。經(jīng)歷了幾個(gè)世紀(jì),比薩餅逐漸發(fā)展成為我們現(xiàn)在熟知的樣子。
電器發(fā)展
我們不必走出家門(mén)去看有什么變化。當(dāng)今美國(guó)家庭的娛樂(lè)方式是克立弗家無(wú)從想像的。30年前,家家戶戶每天晚上圍坐著聽(tīng)收音機(jī)。后來(lái)電視機(jī)取而代之。大多數(shù)家庭只有一臺(tái)電視機(jī),全家人一起收看。如今,電視機(jī)和電腦將多得令人目眩的娛樂(lè)活動(dòng)帶入家庭。有線電視播出的節(jié)目從有氧操到莎士比亞戲劇無(wú)所不有,錄像機(jī)更是擴(kuò)大了選擇性。要是網(wǎng)絡(luò)電視或有線電視沒(méi)有中意的節(jié)目,錄像制品商店可提供好萊塢制作的品質(zhì)迥異的各種節(jié)目:新近發(fā)行的電影、動(dòng)畫(huà)片、成人電影、體育鍛煉節(jié)目、旅游、運(yùn)動(dòng)以及入門(mén)指南錄像帶。讓收看人參與其中的電腦游戲也是提供了相當(dāng)?shù)拇碳?。游戲者能在奧運(yùn)會(huì)上施展身手,尋找外星人,或者在小小的屏幕上摧毀整個(gè)文明國(guó)家。
冰箱
冰箱被看成是必需品。從20世紀(jì)60年代就是這樣了,那時(shí)包裝好的食品上首次出現(xiàn)了“存放于冰箱”的標(biāo)簽。
我的童年是沒(méi)有冰箱的,50年代,我吃得既好又健康。牛奶工人每天都來(lái),雜貨商、肉商、面包師和賣冰激凌的人每周來(lái)兩到三次。星期天的肉可吃到星期三,剩下的面包和牛奶變成了各種各樣的蛋糕。什么也沒(méi)有浪費(fèi)。我們也從不為腐爛的食品發(fā)愁。送食物上門(mén)已經(jīng)停了30年,全國(guó)幾乎都找不到新鮮蔬菜了。冰箱的發(fā)明對(duì)食物的保存工藝幫助很小。早已經(jīng)有許多屢經(jīng)試驗(yàn)的儲(chǔ)存技術(shù)了——自然冷卻、風(fēng)干、熏制、鹽腌、糖漬、瓶裝。
地震
1994年洛杉磯發(fā)生了強(qiáng)烈地震之后,地震學(xué)家報(bào)告了一個(gè)可喜的消息:死傷人數(shù)本來(lái)會(huì)很高,而實(shí)際上卻相對(duì)較少。
在這場(chǎng)地震中死了60多人,相比之下,1988年美國(guó)那一次強(qiáng)度相當(dāng)?shù)牡卣鹬芯褂?5000人喪生。
在洛杉磯地震中,死傷人數(shù)之所以相對(duì)較小,是因?yàn)檫@場(chǎng)地震發(fā)生在一個(gè)假日的凌晨4點(diǎn)31分,當(dāng)時(shí)城里的公路上車輛不多。此外,在過(guò)去的20年中,對(duì)洛杉磯的建設(shè)規(guī)定所作的修改,加固了該城市的建筑和公路,使它們的抗震能力提高了。
盡管有這些好消息,城建工程師并沒(méi)有安于成果,止步不前。他們的繪圖板上正釘著提高搞震能力的建筑物藍(lán)圖。新的設(shè)計(jì)要能給常常發(fā)生地震的城市提供更大的安全保障。
水資源
在全世界可利用的水中,人類使用的還略少于一半。可是,缺水和旱災(zāi)多次發(fā)生,導(dǎo)致某些地區(qū)的饑荒和貧困,而工業(yè)、農(nóng)業(yè)廢渣、廢水還在污染著水源。由于世界人口預(yù)期在未來(lái)50年內(nèi)會(huì)翻一翻,許多專家認(rèn)為,我們已處于廣為擴(kuò)散的淡水危機(jī)邊緣?!?/p>
但是其結(jié)果未必就是如此。要是我們從現(xiàn)在開(kāi)始,比過(guò)去更為珍惜水資源,則世界不一定會(huì)為缺水所困擾。正如在20世紀(jì)70年代石油危機(jī)之后我們更為珍惜石油一樣,我們現(xiàn)在也必須以新的經(jīng)濟(jì)視角來(lái)看待水了。我們?cè)僖矝](méi)有足夠的水,能讓我們認(rèn)為水本來(lái)就是一種免費(fèi)的資源,我們想用多少就用多少,想怎樣用就怎樣用了。
大學(xué)
我知道我最終會(huì)令我父母開(kāi)心。他們兩人都是大學(xué)畢業(yè)生,因此也希望我能成為他們中的一員。多年來(lái)他們一直向我灌輸大學(xué)文憑比高中畢業(yè)證具有更大的優(yōu)勢(shì)。我至今仍能聽(tīng)到媽媽這樣勸說(shuō)我:“去上大學(xué)拿個(gè)學(xué)位吧。你現(xiàn)在需要一個(gè)學(xué)位。以后你會(huì)為此感到驕傲。”他們一直這么勸說(shuō),但并不強(qiáng)迫我。同時(shí),如果我有意愿,他們也愿意讓我自己去想清楚。
我回到學(xué)校的另一個(gè)原因是為了我自己。我希望在我展望未來(lái)的時(shí)候,自己更自信、更樂(lè)觀。我曾親眼目睹我的父母在撫養(yǎng)6個(gè)孩子的同時(shí)為獲取文憑而努力奮斗,也見(jiàn)證了他們通過(guò)努力,大大改善了我們家的生活。我如今他們起步時(shí)更年輕,也無(wú)后顧之憂,因此,我應(yīng)該好好利用現(xiàn)在的時(shí)光去創(chuàng)造更加美好的生活。
教書(shū)
我告訴一位朋友我不想謀求行政職務(wù)時(shí),他向我提出這樣一個(gè)問(wèn)題:你為什么要教書(shū)呢?美國(guó)人受的教育是長(zhǎng)大成人后應(yīng)該去追求金錢(qián)和權(quán)力,而我卻偏偏不朝這個(gè)方向“發(fā)展”,這使他大惑不解。
當(dāng)然,我之所以教書(shū)并不是因?yàn)樽鼋處熭p松。為了謀生,我做過(guò)各種各校的工作:機(jī)修工、木工、作家,可教書(shū)是最難的行業(yè)。就我而言,教書(shū)是個(gè)令人熬紅眼睛、手掌出汗、精神沮喪的職業(yè)。說(shuō)它是熬紅眼睛的職業(yè),是因?yàn)槲彝砩蠠o(wú)論備課到多晚,總覺(jué)得準(zhǔn)備的不夠充分;說(shuō)它是令人手掌出汗的職業(yè),是因?yàn)槲疫M(jìn)教室前總是緊張不已,認(rèn)為學(xué)生會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)我原來(lái)是個(gè)笨蛋;說(shuō)它是令人精神沮喪的職業(yè),是因?yàn)槲易叱鼋淌乙恍r(shí)后,仍覺(jué)得這堂課上得比平常還要平淡無(wú)味。
退休
很多老年人并不享受65歲之后的生活。停止工作后他們覺(jué)得自己毫無(wú)貢獻(xiàn),生活也失去了意義。此外,遠(yuǎn)離家人和以前工作的同事也讓他們覺(jué)得孤單。年紀(jì)漸長(zhǎng),他們?cè)絹?lái)越擔(dān)心自己的健康,居住在大城市的老年人還很擔(dān)心自己的安全問(wèn)題。不過(guò),也有一些老年人很享受這種生活,以前因?yàn)橐ぷ黟B(yǎng)家沒(méi)有時(shí)間做的事情現(xiàn)在可以做了,有足夠的時(shí)間去發(fā)展自己的愛(ài)好,還可以鍛煉身體和旅游。他們會(huì)和其他興趣相投,也同樣自由的老人來(lái)往。有些人過(guò)了退休年齡還繼續(xù)工作,很多人都在退休之后找到了新的事業(yè)發(fā)展機(jī)會(huì)。
電腦網(wǎng)絡(luò)
有了電腦網(wǎng)絡(luò),我們可以通過(guò)電子郵件與世界各地的人自由交流?;ㄉ蠋酌腌娍梢允瞻l(fā)信息,比常規(guī)郵件所需的成本要少得多。通過(guò)互聯(lián)網(wǎng)還可以獲取大量信息,只要雙擊鼠標(biāo),就會(huì)打開(kāi)一個(gè)嶄新的奇妙世界。但是,如果操作不當(dāng),電腦網(wǎng)絡(luò)也會(huì)帶來(lái)很多問(wèn)題。有時(shí)候我們不得不花費(fèi)大量時(shí)間清理堆塞在郵箱中的垃圾,一旦系統(tǒng)的日常運(yùn)作因病毒襲擊而中斷,就有可能泄露或丟失有價(jià)值的信息。因此,網(wǎng)絡(luò)安全成了公眾日益關(guān)注的問(wèn)題。
男女平等
婦女運(yùn)動(dòng)結(jié)束后,越來(lái)越多的女性走出家庭、步入職場(chǎng),而男生在家庭內(nèi)部則越來(lái)越活躍,開(kāi)始照顧小孩和分擔(dān)家務(wù)。除了家庭內(nèi)部的這些改變,一些過(guò)去普遍認(rèn)為只有女性才會(huì)擔(dān)任的工作,現(xiàn)在也有男性擔(dān)任。男護(hù)士和男性幼兒教師數(shù)量漸增。男性在職場(chǎng)上的女同事和女老板比以前多,他們也不得不適應(yīng)女性與男性迥然不同的溝通和管理方式。無(wú)論在工作中還是在家里,現(xiàn)代北美社會(huì)的男性與他們父輩所擔(dān)任的角色已大大不同。
模擬
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