第一篇：雅思寫(xiě)作小作文得分要素

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雅思寫(xiě)作小作文就不重要？很多考生覺(jué)得自己的雅思寫(xiě)作成績(jī)不理想，然后就把大作文部分定為了高分的突破點(diǎn)，而對(duì)雅思寫(xiě)作小作文不以為意，認(rèn)為就是一些固定句式組合并描述下圖表就可以獲得高分了，其實(shí)不然，中國(guó)考生整個(gè)寫(xiě)作部分來(lái)講，往往雅思寫(xiě)作小作文部分分?jǐn)?shù)更低。

雅思小作文占作文分?jǐn)?shù)的三分之一，大作文占三分之二，很多同學(xué)平時(shí)幾乎很少練習(xí)小作文(即圖表作文)，在考場(chǎng)上20分鐘內(nèi)往往寫(xiě)不完，結(jié)果擠占 了大作文的寫(xiě)作時(shí)間。還有一些同學(xué)考試時(shí)先寫(xiě)大作文后寫(xiě)小作文，因?yàn)樗麄冋J(rèn)為大作文更重要，并且在構(gòu)思上面花費(fèi)大量時(shí)間，所以大作文寫(xiě)超時(shí)了，最后，這些 同學(xué)其實(shí)是被小作文拖了后腿。

我們來(lái)對(duì)比一下下面兩個(gè)雅思作文的寫(xiě)作方案：

方案A：小作文5分，大作文6分，寫(xiě)作成績(jī)=5.5

方案B: 小作文6分，大作文5分，寫(xiě)作成績(jī)=5.5

兩個(gè)方案殊途同歸，顯然方案B比較容易實(shí)現(xiàn)。對(duì)于那些寫(xiě)作分?jǐn)?shù)目標(biāo)是5.5的同學(xué)，應(yīng)該重點(diǎn)提高小作文。

再看：

方案C：小作文6.5分，大作文5.5分，寫(xiě)作成績(jī)=6

方案D: 小作文5.5分，大作文6分，寫(xiě)作成績(jī)=6

這兩個(gè)是6分方案，也是殊途同歸?？忌梢愿鶕?jù)自己的實(shí)際情況來(lái)選擇適合自己的方案，然后進(jìn)行突破。

大家一定要重視雅思小作文的寫(xiě)作，因?yàn)樾∽魑暮痛笞魑耐瑯又匾?，小作文相?dāng)于一篇雅思閱讀文章后面的13-14個(gè)題目的份量，而且小作文比較容易準(zhǔn)備更容易拿到高分。雅思寫(xiě)作小作文的難點(diǎn)不在于句型，而是清晰的邏輯以及結(jié)構(gòu)，這是很多中國(guó)考生在面對(duì)雅思寫(xiě)作小作文的時(shí)候缺少的基本功，而就短期提高來(lái)講，往往也是雅思寫(xiě)作小作文的效率會(huì)高，所以千萬(wàn)不要帶著雅思寫(xiě)作小作文就不重要的“有色眼鏡”在備考。

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第二篇：雅思小作文寫(xiě)作萬(wàn)能（范文模版）

雅思小作文寫(xiě)作萬(wàn)能模板

1、According to the first graph, it can be seen that ______________, it can also be concluded from it that ______________.通過(guò)第一個(gè)曲線圖，我們可以知道____,也說(shuō)明了結(jié)果是___

2、There is an interesting and instructive picture which goes like this: __________.一張有趣、有教育意義的、(內(nèi)容)的圖片(這句模板在雅思小作文中的應(yīng)用非常的廣泛。)

3、Nowadays there is a growing concern over ______________.Many people like ______________, while others are inclined to ______________.當(dāng)前有一張涉及______的增長(zhǎng)曲線圖，許多人______，然而其他人傾向于___

4、Nowadays, it is common to ______________.Many people like______________ because ______________.Besides, ______________.目前，共同之處是_________,許多人喜歡______因?yàn)開(kāi)______除此之外還由于_____

5、Just like many other things, are preferred by ____________.While being attacked by the idea that ______________, some people consider ______________.They point that ______________.(圖表所示)_____，就像許多其他事物，被____更加喜愛(ài)，然而這一觀點(diǎn)正被________所抨擊，一些人認(rèn)為_(kāi)________，他們指出___________ ______________,6、Everything has two sides and ______________ is not an exception, it has both advantages and disadvantages.每種事物都有兩面性和________，是沒(méi)有異議的，包括利和弊

7、For years ______________ had been viewed as ______________.But people are taking a fresh look at it now._____作為_(kāi)____被觀察了許多年，但是人們現(xiàn)在像發(fā)現(xiàn)新大陸一樣注視著它

8、It has stipulated by the government that ______________.To this stipulation, many people respond actively because ______________.政府保證________，對(duì)于這份保證，大多數(shù)人做出了強(qiáng)烈地回應(yīng)，因?yàn)開(kāi)____

9、___________ is a common occurrence in our daily life.Whatever we do, ______________ can't be avoided._____出現(xiàn)在我們?nèi)粘Ｉ钪惺呛芷匠５?，無(wú)論我們做什么，______都是不可避免的10、___________ has become a hot topic among people, especially among the young, and heated debates are right on their way._____在人群中已經(jīng)成為熱門(mén)話題，特別是在年輕人中，激烈的爭(zhēng)論無(wú)休止

第三篇：雅思小作文寫(xiě)作

雅思小作文曲線圖寫(xiě)作步驟：

· 先根據(jù)橫軸分析變化，然后再進(jìn)行比較。

· 第一段介紹核心信息(e.g.時(shí)間地點(diǎn)研究對(duì)象);一句話即可

· 第二三段先分析第一個(gè)時(shí)間點(diǎn)，再分析后一個(gè)時(shí)間點(diǎn)。

雅思小作文曲線圖常用句型&短語(yǔ)：

Excel in something = have advantage in something

圖表描述:：The graph shows/illustrates/displays …

表曲線：

· 表程度：Fell dramatically/significantly/astonishingly/considerably/steadily to approximately 100 and 200 respectively;noticeable decrease

· Slightly/marginally more women than men …

· 表上升 The graph showed an upward trend/ something soars to…;Increase/ rise/ grow/ go up/ improve/ climb/ boom/ leap

· 表下降：decrease/fall/drop/dip/go down/decline/reduce

· Exceed/overtake/outnumber – e.g.Men with postgraduate diplomas clearly outnumbered their female counterparts.· 數(shù)值相同：Coal as a source for only 25 units of electricity in 1980, which was matched by natural gas

· 數(shù)值不方便時(shí)可用括號(hào)表述。E.g.The table illustrates the differences in agricultural consumption in some areas of the world by contrasting the amount of irrigated land in Brazil(26500 km2)with that in the D.R.C(100 km2).討論類：

· An intermediary position between both solutions is the perfect way to … · Can be a vehicle(=solution/way/method etc.)for reinvigorating(振興)…

·小作文寫(xiě)作模板

From a pragmatic point …

· Foresee certain cases of exemptions

· Make = yield(產(chǎn)出成果、效果、收益etc.)

提出自己觀點(diǎn)

· While I admit that…/I am convinced that…

其他

· Beyond our wildest expectations

· Inevitable = inescapable

· Underground railway systems = subway networks

· Genetic factors & environment / nature & nurture

以上就是雅思小作文曲線圖常用模板的全部?jī)?nèi)容，對(duì)曲線圖的寫(xiě)作步驟和常用的句型等都進(jìn)行了描述。大家可以適當(dāng)?shù)挠洃浐蛻?yīng)用一下。

第四篇：雅思寫(xiě)作-小作文-線圖

雅思作文范文：女性犯罪率高的原因

為幫助大家更好準(zhǔn)備雅思考試，現(xiàn)在陸續(xù)為大家提供雅思作文考試最新真題和范文，希望對(duì)大家有幫助！

［雅思題目］Some reports have discovered the incidence of violence for young women is increasing.Give possible reasons and recommendations to the situation.分析女性犯罪越來(lái)越高的原因

［雅思作文寫(xiě)作范文］It is reported that the proportion of young female criminal unfolds a steady increasing trend，and women crime，especially the young female's delinquency has become a serious social problem indeed.Young women，as the most peaceable parts of human，are always regarded as the last aim by the police office.Why they go astray is mainly due to the two following reasons： one is their own character peculiarity，the other is from social pressure.As far as the former，for one thing，the female is sensitive to the trifles and sentimental to the reins and loves.Sensitivity often puts them to the edge unnecessarily and forms extreme ideas，which frequently leads to direct criminal.Frangibility of sensibility makes them so depressed and despaired that they have a high probability to do the illegal behavior when they slip down in loves.As for the latter reason，the social pressure comes of traditionally sexual discrimination and survival competition.It is no denying the fact that the contemporary including the women are confronted with the more severe competition than their ancestors were，and in addition to this point，females still have to struggle with the deep-booted discrimination.When young women make their debut in the society，all kinds of crises，trouble and pressure lay them into flat，which compels them to avenge and relieve their feeling with lawless methods in unassisted situation.Ponderance of young female criminal reveals long-term negligence to the female's inner and outer circumstance.It is almost impossible to change female's nature，so the society should take more care of women，especially for the young women.For example，some psychological courses and the methods of solving problem are effective measures to adjust the mood of women.In the meantime，prejudice to women should be out of the social stage and fair，equal and friendly atmosphere should be set up，which can help women to take part in the formal and rational contention.Additionally，the society should approbate the female's indispensable position of community and encourage them to show their special aptitude and intelligence.Undisputablely，the rising criminal rate of young women has relation to both females themselves and irrational social phenomena.Care and equity are the best way to solve this increasing problem，after all，they are less aggressive.雅思范文推薦:關(guān)于博物館的描述

聲明：我們編發(fā)范文目的是為讓廣大考生熟悉雅思作文寫(xiě)作方法，切記不可以背誦，否則有可能得到非常低的分?jǐn)?shù)，甚至0分。

Introduction(44 words)

It is well known that a museum is a building to display a collection of artistic,historical,cultural or military objects.ndoubtedly museums can have a variety of purposes in the city;I think two roles the museums play can illustrate they areworth visiting.Body1(89 words)

Visiting museums is informative.(topic sentence)Once I visited a military museum的in Beijing,China, soon I learned that an ancient warrior might have outfought his enemies in combat if he had had great strength while a modern soldier should be armedwith sophisticated weapons.Therefore present soldiers should spend far much time on的studying modern technology instead of building up muscles.Likewise, If you visit other museums, you will have a better perception on a certain field, because you 的can witness some genuine objects which cannot be seen on books.Body2(65words)

In addition, a museum can function to cultivate one's sense of patriotism.(topic sentence)In china, schools often organize trips to some historical museums.When the students 的learn that many years ago, a number of countries invaded China robbing treasure and killing Chinese civilians, promptly they will establish a strong sense to defend the nation, revealing that only a strong motherland can give them pride and safety.Body3(74words)

Now we talk about how to fund a museum.A museum can never be considered as a financial burden to society.I suggest that the Government should invest a small amount of money on advertisements for the museums in the city.For example, ads of the museums should be forwarded on the travel brochures or maps of the city.Consequently tourists come and admission tickets are collected.Both reputation and funds are earned.Conclusion(23 words)In brief, museums should play a role as an instructive means of the city and incomes from admission can keep them running properly.

第五篇：雅思寫(xiě)作-小作文-柱狀圖

柱狀圖

C1T3 題目

The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain.The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods.Write a report a university lecturer describing the information shown below.The chart shows that high income earners consumed considerably more fast foods than the other income groups, spending more than twice as much on hamburgers(43 pence per person per week)than on fish and chips or pizza(both under 20 pence).Average income earners also favored hamburgers, spending 33 pence per person per week, followed by fish and chips at 24 pence, then pizza at 11 pence.Low income earners appear to spend less than other income groups on fast foods, though fish and chip remains their most popular fast food, followed by hamburgers and then pizza.From the graph we can see that in 1970, fish and chips were twice as popular as burgers, pizza being at that time the least popular fast food.The consumption of hamburgers and pizza has risen steadily over the 20 year period to 1990 while the consumption of fish and chips has been in decline over that same period with a slight increase in popularity since 1985.分析： 題目

The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain.The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods.兩句話，兩個(gè)圖

第一段

The chart shows that high income earners consumed considerably more fast foods than the other income groups, spending more than twice as much on hamburgers(43 pence per person per week)than on fish and chips or pizza(both under 20 pence).? 說(shuō)明了高收入人群的兩個(gè)特點(diǎn)，第一是消耗快餐最多，第二是人群中hamburger, fish and chips, pizza的特點(diǎn)

? spending more than twice as much on hamburgers than on fish and chip and chips or pizza 這是一句令人費(fèi)解的句子，含義應(yīng)為“消耗的漢堡是薯片或匹薩的兩倍多 ”，應(yīng)用的句型應(yīng)當(dāng)為典型的表示倍數(shù)關(guān)系的句型“n times as…as”,比如 ? This airplane flies two times as fast as that one.這家飛機(jī)的飛行速度是那架的兩倍。

? He has five times as many books as you.他擁有的書(shū)是你的五倍。

? 所以，這句話應(yīng)當(dāng)為 spending more than twice as much on hamburger as on fish and chips or pizza, 其中more than修飾twice, 表示比較句型為 twice as much…as

? 表示倍數(shù)比較的句型中還有一個(gè)重要的 n times more than, 也表示“是幾倍”，而非多幾倍，比如

? China is 22 times larger than Britain.中國(guó)是英國(guó)的22倍。

? fish and chips表示的一組東西“油煎魚(yú)價(jià)炸土豆片”，表示的是個(gè)不可數(shù)的概念 Average income earners also favored hamburgers, spending 33 pence per person per week, followed by fish and chips at 24 pence, then pizza at 11 pence.? 說(shuō)明了中收入人群的三類食品的消耗情況。

? 這句是典型的表示順序關(guān)系的表達(dá)，hamburgers, followed by fish and chips, then pizza, 其表達(dá)句型為 A, followed by B, then C，這種表達(dá)尤其在餅圖中應(yīng)用尤為廣泛

Low income earners appear to spend less than other income groups on fast foods, though fish and chips remains their most popular fast food, followed by hamburgers and then pizza.? 說(shuō)明了低收入人群的兩個(gè)特征，第一是該人群消耗的快餐數(shù)量最少，通過(guò)though這個(gè)從句說(shuō)明了第二個(gè)特征，那就是該人群消耗三類食品的情形。? 結(jié)合上句，來(lái)看看如何表達(dá)“最喜歡”，Average income earners favored hamburgers;Fish and chips remains their most popular fast food.第二段

From the graph we can see that in 1970, fish and chips were twice as popular as burgers, pizza being at that time the least popular fast food.? 說(shuō)明三類食品的起點(diǎn)（1970）情況，? N times as…as 句型說(shuō)明了fish and chips和burgers的關(guān)系

? pizza being the least popular fast food at that time 為“獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)”

The consumption of hamburgers and pizza has risen steadily over the 20 year period to 1990 while the consumption of fish and chips has been in decline over that same period with a slight increase in popularity since 1985.? 用一個(gè)表示對(duì)照的連詞while說(shuō)明上升趨勢(shì)的hamburgers和下降趨勢(shì)的fish and chips 注意上升和下降的表達(dá) ? 上升 has risen steadily ? 下降 has been in decline ? 表示段時(shí)間 over the 20 year period to 1990, over the same period ? with a slight increase in popularity用with 從句補(bǔ)充說(shuō)明大趨勢(shì)下的小變化

詞匯句型積累

重點(diǎn)和難點(diǎn)是表示倍數(shù)關(guān)系的比較句型 ? N times as+ 形容詞或副詞原級(jí)…as ? N times+ 形容詞或副詞的比較級(jí)…than

這兩者均表示“是幾倍”，并非“多出幾倍”，特別注意，很多參考書(shū)都寫(xiě)錯(cuò)了 表示三種的順序關(guān)系 A, followed by B, then C，這個(gè)表達(dá)在餅圖中很常用 表示變化趨勢(shì)

? 表示上升 rise, be in increase ? 表示下降 be in decline, drop

八分作文

柱狀圖顯示的是1970－1990二十年間英國(guó)人每周在快餐上花費(fèi)了多少錢(qián)；曲線圖展示的是這二十年間快餐消費(fèi)的趨勢(shì)。

The bar chart shows how much money was spent on fast foods per week in the UK over a span of 20 years from 1970 to 1990 while the graph reveals the trend of fast food consumption over the same period of time.從柱狀圖看，各收入階層在漢堡和魚(yú)煎薯?xiàng)l這兩種快餐上的支出相對(duì)高于在皮薩上的消費(fèi)；曲線圖反映出漢堡與皮薩的消費(fèi)呈現(xiàn)上升趨勢(shì)，魚(yú)煎薯?xiàng)l則呈現(xiàn)出波動(dòng)趨勢(shì)。As we can see from the chart, the weekly expenses of people of different income levels on hamburgers and fish and chips were relatively higher than that on pizza.The graph indicates that while hamburger and pizza consumption both revealed a general trend of increase, fish and chips showed a trend of fluctuation.首先，高收入階層和中等收入階層每周在漢堡上的平均消費(fèi)分別是每人42便士和33便士，比低收入階層的14便士搞出了很多。在魚(yú)煎薯?xiàng)l方面，高收入階層的支出略低，是17便士，但中等及低收入階層的支出都分別達(dá)到了25便士和18便士，相對(duì)于在皮薩方面支出的12便士和8便士高出了很多。值得一提的是高收入階層在皮薩上的消費(fèi)高于魚(yú)煎薯?xiàng)l2便士，為20便士。

First, the weekly average expenses of high-income people and middle-income people were 42 pence and 33 pence respectively, a lot higher than that of low-income people which was 14 pence.As for fish and chips, high-income people spent relatively less, only 17 pence, but the expenses of middle-income and low-income groups reached 25 pence and 18 pence, much higher than their expenses on pizza which stood at 12 pence and 8 pence respectively.What is worth mentioning is the amount of money spent on pizza by high-income people which showed only 20 pence, 2 pence more than their expense on fish and chips.第二，從1970年的每周平均85克開(kāi)始，人們?cè)跐h堡上的消費(fèi)緩步增長(zhǎng)到了1975年的100克，然后，消費(fèi)量加大增速，到1983年左右已經(jīng)達(dá)到了200多克。接下來(lái)，我們看到的是更強(qiáng)勢(shì)的增長(zhǎng)，到1990年達(dá)到了圖表上的最高峰550克。

Second, starting from averagely 85 grams per week in 1970, people’s consumption of hamburgers gradually grew to 100 grams in 1975 and was then followed by a faster growth, reaching more than 200 grams in around 1983.From then on, the growth gained a stronger momentum, hitting the peak across the board at 550 grams in 1990.第三，皮薩的消費(fèi)趨勢(shì)與漢堡相仿，也是很明顯的三個(gè)增長(zhǎng)階段，但是增幅沒(méi)有漢堡那么大。1970年至1980年，皮薩的消費(fèi)從平均每周40克慢慢增長(zhǎng)到80克；1980年至1985年，增長(zhǎng)加快，從80克增加到了130克；1985年至1990年，增幅加大，從130克快速增長(zhǎng)到了280克。

Third, the consumption of pizza revealed a similar trend of growth as that of hamburgers and could also be clearly cut into three periods, though the growth rate was not that fast.It rose slowly from 40 grams per week in 1970 to 80 grams in 1980 and then grew faster from 80 grams in 1980 to 130 grams in 1985.From 1985, the growth rate was even faster and we see a big increase from 130 grams to 280 grams.第四，魚(yú)煎薯?xiàng)l的消費(fèi)趨勢(shì)在波動(dòng)中呈現(xiàn)了三種狀態(tài)。1970年至1975年一直是緩慢的下降，從平均每周300克降至280克；之后，從1975年至1985年，下降速度稍有加快，從280克降至200克；自此，開(kāi)始逐漸回升，到1990年攀升到了240克。

Fourth, the consumption of fish and chips showed three changes in the general trend of fluctuation.From 1970 to 1975, it dropped slowly from the original 300 grams per week in 1970 to 280 grams in 1975.Later on, from 1975 to 1985, it dropped a little bit faster when it fell from 280 grams to 200 grams.From then on, it began to rise gradually and till 1990, it had climbed back to 240 grams.總之，英國(guó)人在上述所提及的三種快餐方面的消費(fèi)在圖表所標(biāo)識(shí)的二十年里都發(fā)生了或增或降的某些變化。

To sum up, the consumption of the three above mentioned fast foods in Britain showed certain rises and falls as illustrated in the chart and graph over the designated 20 years.C2T2 題目

The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.The chart shows the number of hours enjoyed by men and women in a typical week in 1998 – 9, according to gender and employment status.Among those employed full-time, men on average had fifty hours of leisure, whereas women had approximately thirty-seven hours.There were no figures given for male part-time workers, but female part-timers had forty hours of leisure time, only slightly more than women in full-time employment, perhaps reflecting their work in the home.In the unemployed and retired categories, leisure time showed an increase for both sexes, as might have been expected.Here too, men enjoyed more leisure time – over eight hours, compared with seventy hours for women, perhaps once again reflecting the fact that women spend more time working in the home than men.Lastly, housewives enjoyed approximately fifty-four hours of leisure, on average.There were no figures given for househusbands!Overall, the chart demonstrates that in the categories for which statistics on male leisure time were available, men enjoyed at least ten hours of extra leisure time.分析：

題目

The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.? 簡(jiǎn)單的題目，但是把文章的三個(gè)指標(biāo)都給談到了，時(shí)間 the amount of leisure time, 性別 by men and women，工作種類 of different employment status

第一段

The chart shows the number of hours enjoyed by men and women in a typical week in 1998 – 9, according to gender and employment status.? 典型的通過(guò)改寫(xiě)題目，提示圖表的內(nèi)容 ? 看作者是如何談?wù)撊齻€(gè)指標(biāo)的，時(shí)間the number of hours, 性別men and women, 工作種類according to gender and employment status（再次談到了性別），另外補(bǔ)充說(shuō)明了圖形標(biāo)題的一點(diǎn)內(nèi)容in a typical week in 1998 – 9.第二段

Among those employed full-time, men on average had fifty hours of leisure, whereas women had approximately thirty-seven hours.? 用一個(gè)whereas連詞，對(duì)比說(shuō)明了men和women的時(shí)間情形，? 工作組別信息：among those employed full-time ? 性別信息： men, women ? 時(shí)間信息： had fifty hours of leisure, had thirty-seven hours ? 表示平均 on average, 表示大約 approximately There were no figures given for male part-time workers, but female part-timers had forty hours of leisure time, only slightly more than women in full-time employment, perhaps reflecting their work in the home.? 這句話說(shuō)明了兩點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，第一是part-time workers的情況，第二是與full-time employment作了比較

? 工作組別和性別信息：for male part-time workers, female part-timers ? 時(shí)間信息：There were no figures given(表示缺失值)，had forty hours of leisure time ? 比較part-time和full-time婦女的休息時(shí)間（Female part-timers had）only slightly more than women in full-time ? employment, 注意短語(yǔ)的邏輯主語(yǔ)，還有必須注意part-time和full-time婦女的不同表示法

? 適度的評(píng)價(jià)，perhaps reflecting their work in the home, 這句其邏輯主語(yǔ)為前面那句only slight more than women ? in full-time employment，這句話的含義是“雖然為part-time females, 但是相應(yīng)的承擔(dān)了更多的家務(wù)，所以休息時(shí)間只 ? 是比f(wàn)ull-time females多那么一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)”

? 很多同學(xué)爭(zhēng)論需不需要發(fā)表議論，準(zhǔn)確的說(shuō)應(yīng)當(dāng)是就圖論圖，不作評(píng)價(jià)，但是這個(gè)原則也不是死的，根據(jù)圖形的特征，作一點(diǎn)適當(dāng)?shù)脑u(píng)論也是可以的，這里就是“適度評(píng)價(jià)”

第三段

In the unemployed and retired categories, leisure time showed an increase for both sexes, as might have been expected.? 這句將unemployed and retired categories這兩個(gè)組和其他組別比較的特征做了說(shuō)明，圖上也很明顯，這兩組人的leisure time非常多，as might have been expected, as為代詞，指代前面這句話內(nèi)容，意思為“正如”；這是個(gè)插入語(yǔ)，經(jīng)常用到

Here too, men enjoyed more leisure time – over eight hours, compared with seventy hours for women, perhaps once again reflecting the fact that women spend more time working in the home than men.? 說(shuō)明了men和women的比較，比較詞為compared with ?(Eight hours are)compared with seventy hours, 注意比較的成分應(yīng)當(dāng)是對(duì)等的，時(shí)間對(duì)應(yīng)時(shí)間，compare這個(gè)詞在

雅思寫(xiě)作中以被動(dòng)態(tài)比較常見(jiàn)，很少出現(xiàn)comparing with的形式，切記

第四段

Lastly, housewives enjoyed approximately fifty-four hours of leisure, on average.There were no figures given for househusbands!

? 說(shuō)明了housewives的leisure time，很明顯，househusbands為缺失值

Overall, the chart demonstrates that in the categories for which statistics on male leisure time were available, men enjoyed at least ten hours of extra leisure time.? Overall 代表是文章的總結(jié)句，但是作者從另外一個(gè)邏輯角度，即按照總體性別來(lái)看，men比women的leisure time要多，這就說(shuō)明了應(yīng)當(dāng)按照清晰的邏輯順序，把文章中各個(gè)信息都需要描述

詞匯句型積累

對(duì)比說(shuō)明

兩個(gè)事物的對(duì)比說(shuō)明，這是必考內(nèi)容之一，所采用的方法有 ? 采用連詞while, whereas ? 還可以用compared with過(guò)去分詞短語(yǔ)來(lái)補(bǔ)充說(shuō)明對(duì)比關(guān)系

? 還有一種就是用比較句型 more…than, n times as…as等句型來(lái)作直接比較 合并同類項(xiàng)

對(duì)一個(gè)變量含有較多的值，比如這里的工作種類就有5種，將其合并成為3項(xiàng)；還有多個(gè)種類的隨時(shí)間變化趨勢(shì)，我們也可以將其按照上升或下降的趨勢(shì)分類，當(dāng)然這個(gè)需要圖形本身的特征來(lái)考慮。? C2T4 題目

The table below shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.The table shows that the figures for imprisonment in the five countries mentioned indicate no overall pattern of increase of decrease.In fact there is considerable fluctuation from country to country.In Great Britain the numbers in prison have increased steadily from 30,000 in 1930 to 80,000 in 1980.On the other hand in Australia, and particularly in New Zealand, the numbers fell markedly from 1930 to 1940.Since then they have increased gradually, apart from in 1980 when the numbers in prison in New Zealand fell by about 30,000 from the 1970 total.Canada is the only in which the numbers in prison have decreased over the period 1930 to 1980, although there have been fluctuations in this trend.The figures for the United States indicate the greatest number of prisoners compared to the other four countries but population size needs to be taken into account in this analysis.The prison population in the United States increased rapidly from 1970 to 1980 and this must be worrying trend.分析： 題目

The table below shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980.?平凡無(wú)奇的題目，眼花繚亂的圖形

第一段

The table shows that the figures for imprisonment in the five countries mentioned indicate no overall pattern of increase or decrease.? The figures indicate no overall pattern of increase or decrease.一句話就將這個(gè)圖形的無(wú)明顯特征說(shuō)出來(lái)了。

第二段

In Great Britain the numbers in prison have increased steadily from 30,000 in 1930 to 80,000 in 1980.? 說(shuō)明英國(guó)的情況，上升趨勢(shì)

On the other hand in Australia, and particularly in New Zealand, the numbers fell markedly from 1930 to 1940.Since then they have increased gradually, apart from in 1980 when the numbers in prison in New Zealand fell by about 30,000 from the 1970 total.? on the other hand 引出了澳大利亞和新西蘭的情況，因?yàn)閮烧叩淖兓闆r類似，均是先降后升再降

? 表示時(shí)間的表達(dá)：from 1930 to 1940, since then, in 1980, from the 1970 total ? 表示升降關(guān)系的表達(dá)：fall markedly, increase gradually ? 注意將一個(gè)變化階段用介詞短語(yǔ)的形式表達(dá)，如apart from in 1980 when… 這樣就能夠?qū)⒕渥颖磉_(dá)復(fù)雜

Canada is the only in which the numbers in prison have decreased over the period 1930 to 1980, although there have been fluctuations in this trend.? 說(shuō)明加拿大的情況，整體上是下降，注意對(duì)有波動(dòng)的表達(dá) although there have been fluctuations in this trend.The figures for the United States indicate the greatest number of prisoners compared to the other four countries but population size needs to be taken into account in this analysis.? 說(shuō)明了美國(guó)犯罪率高位波動(dòng)的情形，注意compared to the other countries修飾的是the United States ? but population size needs to be taken into account in this analysis作者還做了一點(diǎn)小小的發(fā)揮

The prison population in the United States increased rapidly from 1970 to 1980 and this must be worrying trend.? 美國(guó)的變化也是波動(dòng)，但是作者只是談到了1970-1980的情況

詞匯句型積累

澳大利亞和新西蘭的變化趨勢(shì)的描述是一個(gè)典型的波動(dòng)詳細(xì)描述，波動(dòng)描述主要涉及到時(shí)間、趨勢(shì)和數(shù)量三個(gè)基本要素，而且需要注意的是，需要將某些波動(dòng)歸納在一起，形成一個(gè)復(fù)雜句，否則句子將顯得過(guò)于瑣碎。

? 變化1：The numbers fell markedly from 1930 to 1940.? 變化2：Since then they have increased gradually，since then(the year 1940)將這句和上面那句聯(lián)系起來(lái)

? 變化3：apart from in 1980 when the numbers fell from the 1970 total.一個(gè)apart from引出了第三階段變化，而且這個(gè)是先說(shuō)終點(diǎn)（in 1980），再說(shuō)起點(diǎn) from the 1970 total C3T3 題目

The charts below show the levels of participation in education and science in developing and industrialized countries in 1980 and 1990.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.These data shows the differences between developing country and industrialized countries’ participation in education and science.In terms of the number of years of schooling received, we see that the length of time people spent at school industrialize countries was much greater at 8.5 years in 1980, compared to 2.5 years in developing countries.The gap was increased further in 1980 when the figures rose to 10.5 years and 3.5 years respectively.We can see a similar pattern in the second graph, which shows that number of people working as scientists and technicians in industrialized countries increased from 55 to 1,000 people between 1980 and 1980, while the number in developing countries went from 12 to 20.Finally, the figures for spending on research and development show that industrialized countries more than doubled the spending, from $200bn to $400bn, whereas developing countries actually decreased theirs, from $75bn down to $25bn.Overall we can see that not only are there very large difference between the two economies but that these gaps are widening.分析： 題目

The charts below show the levels of participation in education and science in developing and industrialized countries in 1980 and 1990.? 雖然是多個(gè)圖，但都是圍繞著education and science進(jìn)行的 開(kāi)頭段

These data shows the differences between developing country and industrialized countries’ participation in education and science.? 典型的改寫(xiě)，當(dāng)然還可以將題目的名詞性短語(yǔ)改寫(xiě)成句子，如開(kāi)頭也可以寫(xiě)成

These data shows how the developing

and industrialized countries participated in science and education.這種改寫(xiě)的關(guān)鍵是將核心名詞participation改用 成謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞participated.主體一段

In terms of the number of years of schooling received, we see that the length of time people spent at school in industrialize countries was much greater at 8.5 years in 1980, compared to 2.5 years in developing countries.? 說(shuō)明了1980年developing and industrialized countries的情形 ? 用compared to表示比較，（8.5 years were）compared to 2.5 years, compared to為過(guò)去分詞短語(yǔ)作補(bǔ)充說(shuō)明，需要注意的是注意其邏輯主語(yǔ)

? in terms of/in respect of 就某個(gè)方面而言，這個(gè)表達(dá)在范文系列中出現(xiàn)很多次了 ? 注意同義表達(dá) the number of years of schooling received改寫(xiě)為the length of time people spent at school

The gap was increased further in 1980 when the figures rose to 10.5 years and 3.5 years respectively.? 說(shuō)明了兩點(diǎn)：第一是與1980對(duì)比，差距增大；第二是1990年兩者的數(shù)據(jù)

主體二段

We can see a similar pattern in the second graph, which shows that number of people working as scientists and technicians in industrialized countries increased from 55 to 1,000 people between 1980 and 1980, while the number in developing countries went from 12 to 20.? We can see a similar pattern in the second graph說(shuō)明圖一與圖二的關(guān)系

? which shows接的從句說(shuō)明了該圖的特征，while表示對(duì)比，連接了industrialized countries的變化情形和developing ? countries的變化情形

? 表示上升的表達(dá) increase from 55 to 1,000;go from 12 to 20 主體三段

Finally, the figures for spending on research and development show that industrialized countries more than doubled the spending, from $200bn to $400bn, whereas developing countries actually decreased theirs, from $75bn down to $25bn.? The figures show接從句表明圖三的特征，whereas表示比較，連接了industrialized countries和developing countries的變化情形

? 注意表示變化的主語(yǔ)是countries, 并非是主體二段中的numbers, 因此賓語(yǔ)也變成了spending, from…to…接具體數(shù)據(jù)補(bǔ)充說(shuō)明

結(jié)尾段

Overall we can see that not only are there very large difference between the two economies but that these gaps are widening.? Overall總結(jié)說(shuō)明，注意：雅思圖表的特征都是一些常識(shí)性的東西，不會(huì)出現(xiàn)一些雷人的發(fā)現(xiàn)

詞匯句型積累

表示數(shù)據(jù)的變化趨勢(shì)本文展示了兩種，? The number of people increased from 55 to 85.這句的主語(yǔ)為the number, 表示變化的不及物動(dòng)詞為increase，? Industrialized countries doubled their spending，from $200bn to $420bn.這句的主語(yǔ)為countries, 表示變化的及物動(dòng)詞為double，當(dāng)然也可以為及物動(dòng)詞increase, decrease(這些詞可以是及物動(dòng)詞，也可以是不及物動(dòng)詞)，賓語(yǔ)類似于上句的number 表示比較的句型

? compared to 過(guò)去分詞短語(yǔ)：The length of time people spend at school in industrialized countries was much greater at 8.5 years in 1980, compared to 2.5 years in developing countries.? than句型也可以;The length of time people spend at school in industrialized was more 6 years than that in developing countries(8.5 VS 2.5).