第一篇：考研英語大作文修改范例

考研英語大作文修改范例

原文：

From this picture, we can see a farmer planting the corn, he works hard and then he could drink a drop of water.Life is also like this.Our life is just like drinking a cup of tea, you feel the bitterness, and then sweet after taste could be get after bitterness.Life is not always so smooth, you might come across frustration and sadness, failure and even disaster, but you must be brave and stick on your dream.If you worked hard on your dream and tried your best to make it come true, you must get the sweet after bitterness.Therefore, once you have a dream or when you do something, please don’t give up, stick it on and you would be successful after that.修改以后的文章：

As is vividly depicted in the picture, we can see a farmer planting the corn.He should work hard so that he could drink a drop of water.Life has something common with this phenomenon.Our life is just like drinking a cup of tea, you may feel the bitterness at the first sip, and then the sweetness.We should believe sweetness can be got after bitterness.Life is not always smooth;therefore, you may come across frustration and sadness, failure and even disaster.If you can hold out, stick to your dream and continue to strive for it, you will definitely get a bright future and an upgraded life.In addition, once you have a dream or feel like doing something important to you, please don’t give up when there are some difficulties or obstacles on your way to success.As the old saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” If you try to avoid the arduous course of realizing your ideal and make hardly any efforts, you will never enjoy the feeling of being successful.

第二篇：2012年最新新東方考研英語修改1

2012、西醫(yī)綜合、數(shù)學(xué)全程輔導(dǎo)視頻（50元/門），真題講解，2010執(zhí)業(yè)醫(yī)師輔導(dǎo)視頻，2011新東方英語四六級輔導(dǎo)視頻，（25元/門）聯(lián)系電話：***（入）2012、西醫(yī)綜合、數(shù)學(xué)全程輔導(dǎo)視頻（50元/門），真題講解，2010執(zhí)業(yè)醫(yī)師輔導(dǎo)視頻，2011新東方英語四六級輔導(dǎo)視頻，（25元/門）聯(lián)系電話：***（入）2012、西醫(yī)綜合、數(shù)學(xué)全程輔導(dǎo)視頻（50元/門），真題講解，2010執(zhí)業(yè)醫(yī)師輔導(dǎo)視頻，2011新東方英語四六級輔導(dǎo)視頻，（25元/門）聯(lián)系電話：***（入）2012、西醫(yī)綜合、數(shù)學(xué)全程輔導(dǎo)視頻（50元/門），真題講解，2010執(zhí)業(yè)醫(yī)師輔導(dǎo)視頻，2011新東方英語四六級輔導(dǎo)視頻，（25元/門）聯(lián)系電話：***（入）2012、西醫(yī)綜合、數(shù)學(xué)全程輔導(dǎo)視頻（50元/門），真題講解，2010執(zhí)業(yè)醫(yī)師輔導(dǎo)視頻，2011新東方英語四六級輔導(dǎo)視頻，（25元/門）聯(lián)系電話：***（入）2012、西醫(yī)綜合、數(shù)學(xué)全程輔導(dǎo)視頻（50元/門），真題講解，2010執(zhí)業(yè)醫(yī)師輔導(dǎo)視頻，2011新東方英語四六級輔導(dǎo)視頻，（25元/門）聯(lián)系電話：***（入）2012、西醫(yī)綜合、數(shù)學(xué)全程輔導(dǎo)視頻（50元/門），真題講解，2010執(zhí)業(yè)醫(yī)師輔導(dǎo)視頻，2011新東方英語四六級輔導(dǎo)視頻，（25元/門）聯(lián)系電話：***（入）2012、西醫(yī)綜合、數(shù)學(xué)全程輔導(dǎo)視頻（50元/門），真題講解，2010執(zhí)業(yè)醫(yī)師輔導(dǎo)視頻，2011新東方英語四六級輔導(dǎo)視頻，（25元/門）聯(lián)系電話：***（入）2012、西醫(yī)綜合、數(shù)學(xué)全程輔導(dǎo)視頻（50元/門），真題講解，2010執(zhí)業(yè)醫(yī)師輔導(dǎo)視頻，2011新東方英語四六級輔導(dǎo)視頻，（25元/門）聯(lián)系電話：***（入）2012、西醫(yī)綜合、數(shù)學(xué)全程輔導(dǎo)視頻（50元/門），真題講解，2010執(zhí)業(yè)醫(yī)師輔導(dǎo)視頻，2011新東方英語四六級輔導(dǎo)視頻，（25元/門）聯(lián)系電話：***（入）2012、西醫(yī)綜合、數(shù)學(xué)全程輔導(dǎo)視頻（50元/門），真題講解，2010執(zhí)業(yè)醫(yī)師輔導(dǎo)視頻，2011新東方英語四六級輔導(dǎo)視頻，（25元/門）聯(lián)系電話：***（入）2012、西醫(yī)綜合、數(shù)學(xué)全程輔導(dǎo)視頻（50元/門），真題講解，2010執(zhí)業(yè)醫(yī)師輔導(dǎo)視頻，2011新東方英語四六級輔導(dǎo)視頻，（25元/門）聯(lián)系電話：***（入）2012、西醫(yī)綜合、數(shù)學(xué)全程輔導(dǎo)視頻（50元/門），真題講解，2010執(zhí)業(yè)醫(yī)師輔導(dǎo)視頻，2011新東方英語四六級輔導(dǎo)視頻，（25元/門）聯(lián)系電話：***（入）2012、西醫(yī)綜合、數(shù)學(xué)全程輔導(dǎo)視頻（50元/門），真題講解，2010執(zhí)業(yè)醫(yī)師輔導(dǎo)視頻，2011新東方英語四六級輔導(dǎo)視頻，（25元/門）聯(lián)系電話：***（入）2012、西醫(yī)綜合、數(shù)學(xué)全程輔導(dǎo)視頻（50元/門），真題講解，2010執(zhí)業(yè)醫(yī)師輔導(dǎo)視頻，2011新東方英語四六級輔導(dǎo)視頻，（25元/門）聯(lián)系電話：***（入）2012、西醫(yī)綜合、數(shù)學(xué)全程輔導(dǎo)視頻（50元/門），真題講解，2010執(zhí)業(yè)醫(yī)師輔導(dǎo)視頻，2011新東方英語四六級輔導(dǎo)視頻，（25元/門）聯(lián)系電話：***（入）2012、西醫(yī)綜合、數(shù)學(xué)全程輔導(dǎo)視頻（50元/門），真題講解，2010執(zhí)業(yè)醫(yī)師輔導(dǎo)視頻，2011新東方英語四六級輔導(dǎo)視頻，（25元/門）聯(lián)系電話：***（入）

第三篇：英語作文修改

A Trip to the Zoo孩子的原稿：

Yesterday way Sunday and it was a fine day.So I take a trip to the zoo.I went there by bus, I get there at 8:00 am.There are many people.and some people watched the tigers ,some watched the monkeys, Others watched the bids,I saw many animals and I tool many phtos.That’s a interesting trip.I’ll never forget it.That’smy trip.修改后：

It was a sunny SundayAfter a quick breakfast , I couldn’t wait to get on the bus.This is my first time to enjoy a trip alone.Varions lovebal animals are waiting in the zoo!

As soon as I got there,I was attracted at once.Monkeys were climbing in the tree happily.Sometimes they even came to fetch the bananas in visitors’hands.How naughty they were!What’s more, I was also intersted in the tigers.They are called “the king of animals”,but at this moment they were lying quetly ,maybe they were sleepy.Animals ,humanbeings ,we live in a world.we are family.I t came to my mind immiediatly.Anyway, I had an interesting trip today.It gave me a deep impression, I’ll never forget it.My favourite season

孩子的原稿：

There are four seasons in a year.And my favourite season is summer.Although it’s very hot.I still love it.Because I can swim in the sea.And lie in sun.That’s very comfortable.And I also can eat some Icecreams.they are delicious so there’re lots of thingd to do in summer.That’svery intersting.So I love summer.That’s my favourite season.修改后

My favourite season

As is all know , there are four seasons.Speaking of my favourite , summer comes first although it is hot.Many things can be done in summer such as swimming in the sea, Lying on the beach… How comfortable!More importantlyI can eat delicious Icecream.Of course, we also enjoy beautiful views outside.And I’m always looking forward to going fishing with my father.In a word ,summer is my favourite season because it brings me a lot of happiness.

第四篇：2015考研規(guī)劃—修改

2015年考研計劃

一、考研專業(yè)：100701藥物化學(xué)

二、考研科目：?初試：201英語一；101政治理論；701藥學(xué)類綜合(儀器分析、基礎(chǔ)藥理學(xué)，各占50%)?復(fù)試：天然藥物化學(xué)（備注：一定要找清楚自己所報考學(xué)校儀器分析、基礎(chǔ)藥理學(xué)具體版本和主編人，避免復(fù)習(xí)時因版本錯誤而浪費時間）

三、復(fù)習(xí)計劃：（一般分為三輪復(fù)習(xí)）

第一輪復(fù)習(xí)（基礎(chǔ)階段）：5月—7月

建議：該階段主要以復(fù)習(xí)英語和綜合為主。

第二輪復(fù)習(xí)：7月—10月

第三輪復(fù)習(xí)：沖刺階段，11、12月 初試一般在1月初，考試要持續(xù)2天，進(jìn)行3門考試。注：

1、報名9月在校生網(wǎng)上預(yù)報名，10月網(wǎng)上報名，11月現(xiàn)場確認(rèn)，11月底繳費，電子銀行轉(zhuǎn)賬2、11月底 專業(yè)課命題完畢3、12月，公共課命題完畢 考前兩周——考試當(dāng)天

1.政治、專業(yè)課從頭到尾看3遍 2.英語，背四篇作文板塊

（建議：該階段就主要調(diào)整心態(tài)為主、保持一顆良好的心態(tài)非常重要。）學(xué)習(xí)資料

（一）、政治理論（考試大綱、大綱解析、真題解析、習(xí)題集、沖刺卷）

（二）、英語

單詞：手機(jī)軟件-滬江開心詞場.資料-新東方 真題試卷：真題真練 新東方

（三）專業(yè)課：參考教材（參考2014年）

《儀器分析》，（《分析化學(xué)》教材第 5 版，第十章～第二十二章，李發(fā)美主編，全國高等醫(yī)藥教材建設(shè)研究會規(guī)劃教材，人民衛(wèi)生出版社，2003 年 7 月第 5 版）?！痘A(chǔ)藥理學(xué)》，（《藥理學(xué)》全國普通高等教育中醫(yī)藥類精編教材，王乃平主編，上海科技出版社，2006 年 6 月第一版）。

關(guān)于每個階段英語、政治相關(guān)推薦書目：（2014年考研某位同學(xué)提供：政治：78分英語：68分）

（1）第一輪復(fù)習(xí)： 英語是重點，推薦書目：黃皮書基礎(chǔ)閱讀150篇、黃皮書考研單詞等。專業(yè)課開始看第一遍課本并做好筆記（重要）。

（2）第二輪復(fù)習(xí)：英語反復(fù)背誦考研真題長難句（新東方版）、做英語真題，推薦書目：黃皮書2005年起真題（試卷版）。政治開始打基礎(chǔ)，看新東方強(qiáng)化班視頻，并配套練習(xí)。推薦書目：新東方強(qiáng)化班講義、紅寶書配套習(xí)題庫（徐之明）、肖秀榮1000題。專業(yè)課課本第二遍復(fù)習(xí)，結(jié)合真題（或?qū)W習(xí)指導(dǎo)）標(biāo)記考試重點。

（3）第三輪復(fù)習(xí)：作文練習(xí)，推薦書目：黃皮書熱點作文（一天兩篇）。政治看紅寶書（考綱，一般九月份出版）、新東方?jīng)_刺班視

頻，并配套練習(xí)（重復(fù)客觀題練習(xí)）。推薦書目：政治紅寶書、新東方?jīng)_刺班講義。專業(yè)課開始做真題，確定客觀題答案，背誦主觀題答案。

（4）沖刺復(fù)習(xí)：英語真題錯題重做，做模擬題，推薦書目：新東方考研英語權(quán)威預(yù)測8套、最后沖刺5套。政治背誦主觀題，推薦書目:新東方點睛班講義、肖秀榮最后8套、任汝芬最后4套。

具體結(jié)合自己的情況，用什么書一定要選好，適合自己的才是最好的。

第五篇：2014考研英語作文

第一段結(jié)構(gòu)： 萬能句+圖畫描述句+過渡句+中心句 萬能句：

1.There have been a heated discussion about a picture(a set of pictures)in the newspaper at present.2.It is universally acknowledged that 主題+is a hot topic discussed by people in all walks of lie and that is true not only in China,but also in other country.3.（正面或負(fù)面）At present 主題 has become a matter of public concern especially for the people who are confronted for the problem.4.（精神類）At present 精神 has become a matter of public concern especially for the people who lack the spirit.圖畫描述句：

As is depicted(illustrated/displayed/)，+ 一個主語+2個動作（使用分句）。

According to the vivid description in the picture, + 一個主語+2個動作（使用分句）。過渡句：(使用到裝)Simple（Ridigulous/Funny）as the picture is ,it makes great significance.Simple（Ridigulous/Funny）as the picture is ,its meaning is far reaching.或者(圖表類)Isolated as these figures seem to be,as a matter of fact,they are connected with each other closely.中心思想句：

第一種：As the caption in the picture reads,+(圖畫中文字說的主題)第二種：There is no doubt that +(正面)china is encountered with a serious opportunity of++現(xiàn)象.(負(fù)面)china is encountered with a serious problem of ++現(xiàn)象。（精神）精神is exetremly crucial to human beings.第二段 深層涵義闡釋段

結(jié)構(gòu)：中心思想句(如果寫在第一段，這個可以省略)+預(yù)測趨勢段+原因闡釋段+科學(xué)論據(jù)+例證+虛擬語氣 1.象征意義解釋：

Symbolically,主語 is associated with……

某某可以和 某某聯(lián)系起來。Stand for 象征 Refer to 指代

Be an excellent mataphor for sth.是……的完美比喻。2.科學(xué)論據(jù)法

According to a surver /an investigation /research/,+ 數(shù)據(jù)+ 定語從句

According to a surver /an investigation /research/, Money spent on pets by Frenchmen in the city of Paris is as much as one million dollars which can feed the Japanese for a whole year.3.例證法=引出句+例子+總結(jié)句 引出句：

大事：Our human history has been filled with a various of examples,with the following one being the foremost.以下面這個最重要。然后寫例子。

小事：Among all the examples that I have heard,withnessed and experienced,the most impressive one is that ………….名人：The story of(人名)can best illustrate my perspective /point.總結(jié)句：In this case,we can see that 重申觀點。4.虛擬語氣法：Were it not for sth,主+ would+…… 5.因果論證法=引出句+解釋原因 1.引出句

A great number of complex reasons give rise to /contribute to this phenomenon.或

I can think of no better reasons other than the following one.2.解釋2個原因

The frist reason ,as far as I am concerned, is that …………

In addition/Moreover,We can’t have failed to have awareness of another potential reason that ……

6.預(yù)測趨勢法：未來上升或下降

Giving all informations mentioned above a consideration,I can predict that there will be a sharp increase /decline in ……

考慮以上因素，我預(yù)測……將有一個上升/下降。

第三段：個人評價段=呼吁+措施+萬能總結(jié)句 1.負(fù)面現(xiàn)象呼吁：

The situation being so urgent,It is high time that we took some effective steps to solve the problem.措施=法律+個人

On one hand,it is essential that some laws and regulations should be worked out by the authorities.On the other,individuals should be educated to be cautious of dreadful consequence of the problem..萬能總結(jié)句：

with a proper law and an alert public,it will only be a matter of time before the problem becomes a matter of the past.伴隨著法律和警覺的民眾，問題遲早會解決。2.正面現(xiàn)象

The situation being so perfect,it is high time that we took this opportunity to develop our society and economy.措施: On one hand, it is essential that some laws and regulations should be worked out by the authorities to put an end to promote the situation.On the other, individuals should be educated to be cautious of the beneficial consequence of the phenomenon.萬能總結(jié)句：

With ……,we can’t have failed to witness a prosperous future.精神類：

There is no doubt that in do things,no matter great or slight,there are more or less some hardships and frustrations.用諺語結(jié)束：

Just as old Chinese proverb says,……is the key point to success.(the foundation of 基石/the shortcut to 捷徑)

Having captured our attention,the picture vividly betrays the fact that [描述圖片內(nèi)容].Simple as it is,the drawing set us sinking in awfully.Accordingly,what this far-reaching picture depicts witnesses a common phenomenon in today's society:[圖片所反映的現(xiàn)實（寓意）].It goes without saying that its symbolic message that [主旨句子],has gone beyond the picture itself.Why do we lay much emphasis upon this?Several points analyzed below might equip us with the deeper understanding of what we head for.For one thing,[第一個理由].For another,[第二個理由].And above all,[第三個理由（這個理由可以寫可以不寫）].Consequently,no issue stands as critical to [A內(nèi)容] as [B內(nèi)容].{說明：no issue stands as critical to A as B.再沒有比B對A更為關(guān)鍵的了。} Judging from what has been argued above,we have come to recognize that the harms arising from [寫圖片反映出的問題] has been,like the pandora's box,the crippling force of [寫對什么的阻礙力].{說明：like the pandora's box 比喻一系列惡果之源} It is,therefore,imperative that effective steps should be made to [點主旨句子].On one hand,[措施一].On the other hand,[措施二].Only by undergoing these measures,can we [寫通過措施達(dá)到的效果].Also,I do reckon that we human beings can solve this problem,and we will have a bright future.銷售：

Last year we achieved a 15% increase in the sales of our.we believe that this happy state of affairs can be attributed to two causes.First，we managed to avoid passing on any part of our increased manufacturing costs to our majestic clients.Second，we believe our designs and colors are the most attractive that we have ever produced.And so we are happy to be able to tell you that our new season‘s are，if anything，more attractive than last year’s and our prices will compare very favorably with those of any of our competitors.We believe that you will agree that our samples prove the truth of our claims.We look forward for you to favor us an order.訂購：

Could you give us some idea about your price？

Full information as to prices，quality，quantity available and other relative particulars would be highly appreciated.It will be greatly appreciated if you will kindly send us your samples.However，we find that we can obtain a price less by 30% than yours with local firm.投訴信：

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1，說明來信目的 2，具體闡述投訴理由 3，期待的解決方式

Dear Sir or Madam，I，the undersigned，am a job applicant who had participated in the interview held by your company last Wednesday.I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about this jod-striving experience.The reason for my dissatisfaction has nothing to do with the outcome but the tone of your interviewer，Mr Wang.First，when I was about to illuminating my deep thought，he began to blame on my so-called nonsense according to his perspective.Additionally，his

cynical eyesight always made me feel that I am a reject，after all，I am a novice who has stepped into this ruthless carrer world for the first time.I appreciate it very much if you could take my letter into consideration，what I really want is just an apology delivered from him，and I would like to have this matter settled by this Friday.