第一篇：dxecify雅思_寫(xiě)作官方高分

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雅思寫(xiě)作官方高分范文--含經(jīng)典點(diǎn)評(píng) When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills andways of life die out.It is pointless to try and keep them alive.Towhat extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

官方給出的高分答案

Overall, I disagree with the opinion expressed.（第一句話當(dāng)中，作者直接說(shuō)出了自己的觀點(diǎn)，這有點(diǎn)區(qū)別于我們中國(guó)學(xué)生通常所使用的背景開(kāi)頭方式，但是它在這個(gè)開(kāi)頭中也使用了兩個(gè)中 國(guó)學(xué)生不大使用的結(jié)構(gòu)，一個(gè)是overall，另外一個(gè)是過(guò)去分詞做后 置定語(yǔ)，既expressed）I would like to begin by pointing out that “traditional skills and ways of life” are not

automatically of one country, but of a culture or community.(作者在這個(gè)地方所提出的觀點(diǎn)非常的犀利，同時(shí)使用的結(jié)構(gòu)也很不錯(cuò)，我們現(xiàn)在來(lái)看一下，I would like to do 我想做...，這個(gè)結(jié)構(gòu)是中國(guó)學(xué)生都非常熟悉的，但是他隨后使用的by doing就比較的標(biāo)新 立異，隨后他又使用了一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句，這樣結(jié)構(gòu)就豐滿起來(lái)了。同時(shí)，作者對(duì)于標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)的使用也是非常具有特色的，這里面的符號(hào)確實(shí)起到了加強(qiáng)的作用，同學(xué) 們以后要注意對(duì)于標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)的使用。另外，這里面的連詞but雖然不是很難，但是卻是用的非常恰倒好處。希望大家可以借鑒這樣的一種寫(xiě)法。再者，這里面，考官?zèng)]有使belong to 這樣的結(jié)構(gòu)來(lái)表示屬于，而是很簡(jiǎn)潔的使用了be of，這說(shuō)明，簡(jiǎn)潔的表達(dá)受到了考官的關(guān)注。更為重要的是作者給出了一 個(gè)別人都不大容易想到的觀點(diǎn)，傳統(tǒng)的技能以及生活方式并不是自然的屬于某一個(gè)國(guó)家的，而是屬于某一種文化和區(qū)域)In many ways, the history of civilization is the history of

technology: from the discovery of fire to the invention of the wheelto the development of the Internet, we have been moving on from

previous ways of doing things.（這個(gè)句子是由40個(gè)單詞所組成的，其中含有的結(jié)構(gòu)都是中國(guó)學(xué)生耳熟能詳?shù)?，但是大家?要注意如下的3個(gè)特點(diǎn)：1，考官在這里所使用的開(kāi)頭句就非常具有震撼力，在很多方面來(lái)說(shuō)，文明史就是科技史，大家想想，你們?cè)趯?xiě)作文的時(shí)候有沒(méi)有這樣的 一種思維觀？2，考官再次顯示了標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)的重要性，大家在舉例的時(shí)候是不是比較喜歡使用for instance和for example？而考官在這里面就只使用了一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的“：”，另人很絕望??！

佩服的絕望，他的使用不僅最簡(jiǎn)單，而且最準(zhǔn)確。隨后它所舉的例子是Mars在 分析近期高分作文的時(shí)候經(jīng) 常發(fā)現(xiàn)的一種結(jié)構(gòu)，既排比，這種結(jié)構(gòu)現(xiàn)在在8分以及滿分作文中屢見(jiàn)不鮮，成方興未艾之勢(shì)，我想原因就在于它的一種力量性。大家應(yīng)該好好的把握這種結(jié)

構(gòu)。3，思想的連續(xù)性也在這句話中得到了充分的體現(xiàn)。作者開(kāi)頭說(shuō)的是文明史就是科技史記，隨后在舉出了例證之后，自然引導(dǎo)出了這樣的一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，我們的進(jìn) 步是以堅(jiān)持傳統(tǒng)方式為起點(diǎn)的。思想并證明著。大家應(yīng)該記得這樣的思路。）Some technologies, such as weapons of mass destruction, are of negative impact.Others, such as medical advances, positively help people to live better or longer, and so very much help traditional ways of life.（在這句話當(dāng)中，作者非常巧妙的使用了對(duì)比法，一開(kāi)始說(shuō)，很多科技，比如大規(guī) 模殺傷性武器，是存在負(fù)面作用的，而其它的科技，例如醫(yī)學(xué)進(jìn)步，則積極的促進(jìn)了人民生活水平的提高，延長(zhǎng)了人的壽命，從而極大的彌補(bǔ)了傳統(tǒng)生活方式的缺 陷！大家看到了沒(méi)有，作者在對(duì)比的同時(shí)還在舉例子，不厭其煩的舉例子。例子是多么的重要?。urely, few people would seek to preserve such traditions as living in caves!（作者在絲絲入扣的分析，旁征博引之后，忽然話鋒一轉(zhuǎn)，舉起了批判的板斧，砍將下去。一語(yǔ)雙關(guān)的說(shuō)道，當(dāng)人們還生活在洞穴當(dāng)中的時(shí)候，很少有 人會(huì)去保護(hù)這種傳統(tǒng)的！這個(gè)可以理解為，當(dāng)技術(shù)還沒(méi)有發(fā)展到一定程度的時(shí)候，文化還很落后的時(shí)候，人們是不可能想到保護(hù)文化的。同時(shí)人們住在洞穴中這句話 還可以理解為坐井觀天，說(shuō)狹隘的人怎么會(huì)想到保護(hù) 文化，非常之犀利）

Interestingly, technology can positively contribute to the keeping alive of traditional skills and ways of life.（作者在段首又開(kāi)始發(fā)彪了，又提出了一個(gè)具有建設(shè)性的觀點(diǎn)，說(shuō)有意思的是，科技可以在保持傳統(tǒng)技能與生活方式的生命力方面做出積極的貢獻(xiàn)）For example, the populations of some islands are too small to have normal schools.（他又開(kāi)始舉例子了，一個(gè)離開(kāi)例子就不能活的刀筆手。注：刀筆手指寫(xiě)文章很厲害的人，他可以用筆做刀，同時(shí)可以用刀把文章裁減成他想象的任何樣子，而且不 留痕跡，并且可以殺人于無(wú)形。高 手！這個(gè)例子初看比較奇怪，說(shuō)，很多島嶼中的人口太少，建立正規(guī)的學(xué)校是不可能的。這個(gè)和科技有什么關(guān)系?。?？但你看他后面說(shuō)的話）Rather than breaking up families by sending children to the mainland, education authorities have been able to use the Internet to deliver schooling online.（他在解剖這個(gè)例子，教育專家已經(jīng)能夠通過(guò)因特網(wǎng)將課程傳到網(wǎng)上，而不需要使孩子離開(kāi)家庭來(lái)到大陸。這個(gè)角度是不是很刁鉆？?。㊣n addition, the Internet, and modern refrigeration techniques, are being used to keep alive the traditional skills of producing salmons;it can now be ordered from and delivered to, anywhere in the world.（作者在這里面使用了一個(gè)比較詭異的寫(xiě)作方法，意識(shí)流??！居然是意識(shí)流??！當(dāng)初JAMES JOYCE（詹姆斯喬伊斯）就是靠這個(gè)寫(xiě)作技法獨(dú)步文壇。創(chuàng)作出了另世人驚奇的<尤利西斯>.本文中，考官通過(guò)島嶼孩子的例子說(shuō)明了因特網(wǎng)的 好處，同時(shí)又用因特網(wǎng)舉出了另外的一個(gè)例子。明白這個(gè) 寫(xiě)作思路嗎！A-B B-C C-D D-E，如果沒(méi)有篇幅的限制，他可以任意的導(dǎo)出。而且他這次的例子又是那么奇怪，居然說(shuō)的是因特網(wǎng)

以及現(xiàn)代的冷凍技術(shù)的應(yīng)用使得傳統(tǒng)的馬哈魚(yú)加工工藝保留 了下來(lái)?，F(xiàn)在，馬哈魚(yú)可以在全球達(dá)成定購(gòu)與收購(gòu)）。

In conclusion, without suggesting that all technology is necessarily good, I think it is by no means “pointless”, in any way, to try to keep traditions alive with technology.We should not ignore technology, because it can be our friend and support our way of life.（收尾段，考官寫(xiě)的很平易，比較厚道，但是也有鋒芒藏在其中。他先是使用了一個(gè)介詞結(jié)構(gòu)without

suggesting，表明他并不認(rèn)為所有的科技都 是好的，然后又說(shuō)，他認(rèn)為也不可以說(shuō)使用現(xiàn)代科技保護(hù)傳統(tǒng)是沒(méi)有意義的。最后的一句話有點(diǎn)作報(bào)告結(jié)束時(shí)候的感覺(jué)，我們不應(yīng)該忽略科技，因?yàn)樗梢猿蔀槲?們的朋友也可以對(duì)我們的生活方式起到支持作用。他傳統(tǒng)文化也要了，技術(shù)也沒(méi)扔，總之是完美結(jié)局。Star well, end well.）

第二篇：雅思寫(xiě)作高分

雅思寫(xiě)作大作文必看高分范文

TASK 2: 高分范文一

Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment;only governments and large companies can make a difference.To what

do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about environmental protection and regard it as one of the most important challenges.However, whether only governments and big firms have resources and powers to preserve our environment is a controversial issue.My view is that every single citizen could also make a huge difference.In the first place, it is clear that it is human activities that have the greatest impact throughout the history.Both environment contamination and conservation are the long-term process, and no single government or big company can meet this challenge alone.So whoever created the problem should be responsible for solving it;environment protection needs every one of us to continuously participate in.Moreover, the public’s wills and behaviors have critical influence on government’s policies and companies’ strategies.For example, if everyone says “no” to plastic shopping bags and paper cups, the companies that manufacture such products will switch to environmental-friendly substitutes in order to survive in the market.However, that is not to say that governments and large companies cannot positively contribute.Indeed, governments can enact laws and introduce programs to raise the public’s low-carbon awareness;companies can promote green products to change the public’s consuming habits.But they also need every citizen’s appreciation and support to bring good results.In sum, no effort is too small when we are protecting the environment.Meanwhile, local authorities and organizations must shoulder their responsibility to develop low-carbon economy at the macro level.Only by doing so can we assure that we could hand this beautiful planet to our next generation and the next generation after.TASK 2: 高分范文二-----Argumentation

The Internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades.Although some of these changes have been negative, the overall effect of this technology has been positive.What are your opinions on this?

The Internet has brought significant changes to our lives in recent years.However, there remains some disagreement as to whether the overall effect of this technology has been positive or negative.While there are certainly valid arguments to the contrary, I personally believe that the benefits of the Internet far outweigh its drawbacks and these benefits are twofold.First of all, it is an indisputable fact that the Internet has revolutionized the way we communicate.Despite the risk of social isolation-a problem occasionally seen in people who spend too much time at their computer terminal rather than relating to people in the real world-most of us have benefited greatly from e-mails and Internet chat programs like MSN Messenger.These incredibly useful and powerful tools of communication facilitate both contact with loved ones in faraway places and global trade.Moreover, the Internet has placed the entire world(and all of the information in it)at our fingertips.In earlier times, conducting research entailed long hours searching library shelves.Now, however, the same information can be accessed at the click of a button.Admittedly, not all of the information available on the Internet is reliable or helpful-there is a vast amount of material online that some would consider offensive or dangerous, ranging from pornography to instructions on how to make bombs.Nonetheless, I would contend that this free flow of information has generally been a very positive development.By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that the Internet has had a positive impact on modern life because of its influences on communication and the flow of information.TASK 2: 高分范文三-----Report

With divorce rates and family breakdowns increasing globally, it is generally accepted that families today are not close as they used to be.Discuss the causes of this problem and offer some possible solutions to it.Divorce and family breakdown were virtually unheard of just 100 years ago.Now, however, almost half of all marriages fail.This phenomenon is symptomatic of the growing distance between family members in modern society.In this essay, I intend to explore the sources of this problem along with some possible solutions to it.Chief among the causes of this problem is the modern lifestyle.Today’s parents have to work harder than those of previous generations to support their families.Traditionally, one parent assumed the role of breadwinner, while the other-typically the mother-acted as the homemaker.Recently, though, double income families have become the norm.Consequently, an increasing number of children now grow up in a parentless environment.Little wonder, then, that they feel alienated.Another contributing factor is the passive and solitary nature of many modern forms of entertainment.In order to solve this sense of alienation within families, I believe we must first address its root causes.Perhaps the most effective method of doing this would be for governments to offer financial incentives to parents who choose to remain at home and take care of their families.Admittedly, such incentives would probably not fully compensate couples for lost income;however, they would at least soften the hardship of living on a single income and provide an alternative for parents who would rather remain at home but are unable to do so because of financial constraints.One further measure would be to promote more interactive leisure activities in the community through public education campaigns.In conclusion, I believe that this is clearly a problem of such complexity that no solution is likely in the short term.However, I believe that the measures outlined above would constitute a good first step.Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions.Some people think this is fully justified while other think it is unfair.Discuss both these views and give your opinion.As a result of constant media attention, sports professionals in my country have become stars and celebrities, and those at the top are paid huge salaries.Just like movie stars, they live extravagant lifestyles with huge houses and cars.Many people find their rewards unfair, especially when comparing these super salaries with those of top surgeons or research scientists, or even leading politicians who have the responsibility of governing the country.However, sports salaries are not determined by considering the contribution to society a person makes, or the level of responsibility he or she holds.Instead, they reflect the public popularity of sport in general and the level of public support that successful stars can generate.So the notion of “fairness” is not the issue.While those who feel that sports stars’ salaries are justified might argue that the number of professionals with real talent are very few, and the money is a recognition of the skills and dedication a person needs to be successful.Competition is constant and a player is tested every time they perform in their relatively short career.The pressure from the media is intense and there is little privacy out of the spotlight.So all of these factors may justify the huge earnings.Personally, I think that the amount of money such sports stars make is more justified than the huge earnings of movie stars, but at the same time, it indicates that our society places more value on sport than on more essential professionals and achievements.In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing.Does this trend have more positive or negative effects on society?

In more and more developed countries we see the following trends: incomes rise, people get married later and have fewer kids.The result is the demographics change and the population ages.While having more old people sounds like a good thing(as they tend to be kind and warm-hearted), it can have a serious impact on economies and societies.Consider, for example, that in order for a country’s GDP to grow it needs to produce more goods and services each year.With an aging population and more people retiring, fewer are left to work, creating an economic hole.The result is that such countries have to rely on immigration to fill the gap and this is a less-than-desirable solution.Consider also, that as more people reach their twilight years they will face increasing health problems and this puts huge pressure on health care and other social programs.In most countries the government pays for at least some of the costs of health care, not to mention things like pensions, all of which means a big bill someone has to pay for.To be fair, however, we should be careful not to direct our anger towards old people themselves.Old people can still make contributions to society, whether it means helping look after grandchildren, working part time or even doing voluntary work.On an individual level, old people can be a real treasure.To sum up, governments should recognize the challenges of an aging society and take the appropriate action.But in addition to fixing the short-term impact of an older society, they should also look at the bigger picture and do their best so that in the future we have a better age balance.

第三篇：雅思寫(xiě)作高分

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第四篇：雅思高分寫(xiě)作范文

下面是三個(gè)雅思高分寫(xiě)作模板，都是關(guān)于選擇觀點(diǎn)類(lèi)型的。觀點(diǎn)選擇類(lèi)型的雅思寫(xiě)作話題在雅思寫(xiě)作考試中是最常見(jiàn)的一類(lèi)，對(duì)于這類(lèi)話題，大家一定要準(zhǔn)備一個(gè)適合自己的雅思寫(xiě)作模板，這樣在考試的時(shí)候，就可以有備無(wú)患的應(yīng)對(duì)了。下面是詳細(xì)內(nèi)容。

雅思寫(xiě)作觀點(diǎn)選擇類(lèi)型的題目：A or B ,which one do you agree with? Give specific reasons for your answer.(A,B 表示供選擇的兩種觀點(diǎn)。Do C 指題目中提及的某件事情。如：some people prefer A in order to Do C.雅思寫(xiě)作觀點(diǎn)選擇類(lèi)型的寫(xiě)作模板：

1、As for the question that which is better, A or B, different people have different opinions.A has its advantages, but at the mean time, it has many disadvantages.In my point of view, I would prefer B.First of all,(1)支持 B 的原因之一。For example,(2)舉例說(shuō)明支持 B 的原因之一。

Another reason is that(3)支持 B 的原因之二。

The third reason, however, goes this way:(4)支持 B 的原因之三。

So from what has been discussed, one can reach only this conclusion that(5)重申觀點(diǎn)。

2、Some people believe A, they point out the fact that(1)人們支持 A 的原因。However, other people believe B.They hold that(2)人們支持 B 的原因。

As far as I’m concerned, I prefer A.As we all know(3)我支持 A 的原因之一。I remember(4)舉例說(shuō)明。

In addition,(5)我支持 A 的原因之二。

On the other hand,(6)從反面論證 A 的優(yōu)勢(shì)。

Last but not least,(7)我支持 A 的原因之三。

As a matter of fact, there are also some disadvantages in A，such as(8)舉例說(shuō)明 A 的劣勢(shì)。But these can be compensated by its advantages.3、There are two different views on the matter of DOING C.Some people believe that(1)支持的觀點(diǎn) A.By this , they argue that(2)進(jìn)一步闡述觀點(diǎn) A.For example,(3)舉例說(shuō)明。

Others hold, on the other hand, that(4)反對(duì)的觀點(diǎn) B。

Furthermore,(5)進(jìn)一步闡述觀點(diǎn) B.For instance,(6)舉例說(shuō)明觀點(diǎn) B。

Considering the views on the two sides, I prefer to put weight to the pros rather than cons.personally,(7)我支持 A 的原因。

以上就是這三個(gè)雅思高分寫(xiě)作模板的全部?jī)?nèi)容，總體來(lái)講就是在雅思觀點(diǎn)選擇類(lèi)型的寫(xiě)作中，考生可以選擇一種觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行詳細(xì)的論述，但是一定不要忘記對(duì)兩種觀點(diǎn)都有所涉及，這樣才客觀，同時(shí)也增加的寫(xiě)作的字?jǐn)?shù)。

第五篇：雅思寫(xiě)作高分詞匯

雅思寫(xiě)作高分的取得并不是一件容易的事，大家需要掌握一定的寫(xiě)作技巧，詞匯的應(yīng)用就是最基礎(chǔ)的。下面為大家搜集整理了兩個(gè)關(guān)于詞匯應(yīng)用方面的雅思寫(xiě)作高分技巧，供大家在寫(xiě)作備考的過(guò)程中進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)膮⒖己徒梃b。

詞匯語(yǔ)序不準(zhǔn)確是導(dǎo)致大家不能拿到雅思寫(xiě)作高分的重要因素。

因?yàn)橹形暮陀⑽牡臄⑹龇绞降牟煌?，詞匯的搭配順序也有很大的區(qū)別，所以在雅思寫(xiě)作中，常常會(huì)造成一些中式英語(yǔ)的文章，也就是說(shuō)會(huì)寫(xiě)一些完全按照中文語(yǔ)序逐字翻譯的錯(cuò)句。這樣的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)會(huì)給考官閱讀帶來(lái)困難，會(huì)對(duì)句意理解出現(xiàn)分歧，如此一來(lái)，當(dāng)然會(huì)大大影響作文的得分。

例如：“競(jìng)爭(zhēng)合作意識(shí)”應(yīng)當(dāng)被翻成“the sense of competition and cooperation”。

許多考生在情急之下，往往會(huì)翻成“competition and cooperation sense”

這樣的表達(dá)一旦出現(xiàn)比例較高，便會(huì)給考官造成語(yǔ)言不地道的感覺(jué)，也就難以取得雅思寫(xiě)作高分。想要掌握正確的詞匯的表達(dá)順序這個(gè)雅思寫(xiě)作技巧，大家需要在備考雅思寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中接觸更多的英語(yǔ)讀物，形成英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作的思維。

書(shū)寫(xiě)上存在簡(jiǎn)寫(xiě)或縮寫(xiě)也是倒是大家不能拿到雅思寫(xiě)作高分的因素。

很多考生在備考雅思寫(xiě)作考試的時(shí)候，不能區(qū)分口語(yǔ)用詞和書(shū)面用詞的區(qū)別，以至于把一些不用在書(shū)面表達(dá)的方式用在了寫(xiě)作上?？谡Z(yǔ)與寫(xiě)作的最大區(qū)別便是口語(yǔ)較隨意，而寫(xiě)作比較嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)。為了凸顯作文的書(shū)面感，建議考生應(yīng)盡量避免明顯的或者大量的簡(jiǎn)寫(xiě)和縮寫(xiě)形式。一來(lái)可以讓卷面看起來(lái)更加清爽，二來(lái)也可以給考官留下認(rèn)真嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)?shù)暮糜∠蟆?/p>

典型的易寫(xiě)縮寫(xiě)的表達(dá)有：

It’s 應(yīng)該寫(xiě)成it is

What’s more應(yīng)該寫(xiě)成what is more,Can’t應(yīng)該寫(xiě)成cannot

以上就是這兩個(gè)雅思寫(xiě)作高分技巧的全部?jī)?nèi)容，包括了詞匯的語(yǔ)序和詞匯的簡(jiǎn)寫(xiě)和縮寫(xiě)兩個(gè)部分。大家在自己的雅思寫(xiě)作備考的過(guò)程中，一定要注意這兩個(gè)方面，只要不按照自己思考中文的思維方式來(lái)寫(xiě)作，就能大大減少這些可能性了。