第一篇：公共英語四級(jí)寫作（范文模版）

公共英語四級(jí)寫作與翻譯部分

一、寫作要領(lǐng)

考生無論遇到哪一類試題，都要仔細(xì)審題，根據(jù)題目的要求確定文章的類型和中心內(nèi)容，并對(duì)你自己熟悉的、可寫的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行篩選、整理、規(guī)劃、列出提綱，這是很重要的一步。提綱列好后，要圍繞提綱內(nèi)容展開說明自己的觀點(diǎn)和結(jié)論，不要在寫作時(shí)拋開提綱。一篇好的作文應(yīng)該具備以下5個(gè)方面：

(1)內(nèi)容切題，主題鮮明。

(2)表達(dá)清楚準(zhǔn)確，條理清晰。

(3)結(jié)構(gòu)完整，銜接流暢自然。

(4)句法正確多樣。

(5)用詞恰當(dāng)豐富。

二、方法與步驟

1.提綱

提綱是寫作一篇文章的詳細(xì)計(jì)劃、安排。提綱準(zhǔn)備的目的是：

(1)計(jì)劃要寫什么。

(2)文章的思想的表達(dá)順序。

(3)如何安排段落。

(4)使寫作從頭到尾圍繞主題進(jìn)行。內(nèi)容一般用短語和詞。主題、副題表達(dá)先后順序，要用數(shù)字標(biāo)明。提綱內(nèi)容的安排是寫作一篇好文章的關(guān)鍵。

2.依據(jù)提綱寫作

(1)初稿

在完成提綱安排后，動(dòng)筆寫作的第一步是打初稿，在寫初稿時(shí)要爭(zhēng)取做到心中有數(shù)，胸有成竹，經(jīng)過反復(fù)練習(xí)后，能夠按照提綱安排落筆成文，一氣呵成。如果突發(fā)奇想，也可修改提綱，順理成章，但切忌偏離正題。在初稿寫作時(shí)要有意識(shí)加大行距，為文章的修改留有余地。

(2)定稿及修改方法

在完成初稿后，修改是必不可少的過程。修改文章要注意以下幾點(diǎn)：

①內(nèi)容是否切題，論點(diǎn)是否鮮明，論證是否合理、嚴(yán)密。

②段落銜接時(shí)過渡使用是否合理，語句是否通順、有沒有語法錯(cuò)誤，用詞是否恰當(dāng)。③拼寫是否正確，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)、大小寫是否有錯(cuò)誤，有無其他筆誤。

PETS-4寫作部分考察考生的書面表達(dá)能力。全國(guó)英語等級(jí)考試第四級(jí)大綱對(duì)考試技能的要求是：PETS第四級(jí)考生應(yīng)能寫出多種類型的文章，包括私人和正式信函、備忘錄、小結(jié)和報(bào)告。同時(shí)也能寫一般描述性，敘述性和說明性的文章。

三:寫作華龍點(diǎn)睛

考生根據(jù)提示信息（中/英文）寫出一篇160-200詞（標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不計(jì)算在內(nèi)）的短文。提示信息的形式有主題句、寫作提綱、規(guī)定情景、圖、表等。

該部分的考試時(shí)間為35分鐘。滿分為20分，所占權(quán)重為25%?？忌诖痤}卡2上做答。

（一）命題規(guī)律

規(guī)律一：

從命題體裁來看，PETS-4寫作部分出題體裁大體可劃分成兩類：一種是給出提綱或者開頭句的命題寫作（writing based on the given outlines or opening sentences），一種是給出提綱的圖畫或圖表寫作(writings based on the visual information or pictures or graphics)。

規(guī)律二：

從命題范圍來看，PETS-4寫作大多為社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)問題和人們最為關(guān)注的問題。這種各樣家庭，環(huán)境，社會(huì)普遍現(xiàn)象為話題的寫作成為考察重點(diǎn)。反映了命題人希望考生能夠?qū)Ξ?dāng)今社會(huì)熱門話題有所關(guān)注和思考的愿望。

規(guī)律三：

從出題形式本身來看，命題本身不會(huì)給考生制造理解障礙。寫作題目易于理解，無論以文字的形式還是以圖表，圖畫的形式出現(xiàn)都淺顯易懂。命題不會(huì)讓考生因?yàn)轭}目中出現(xiàn)的生詞或者難以理解的短語而影響正常發(fā)揮。

（二）高分對(duì)策

英語寫作是語言應(yīng)用的一個(gè)重要方面，也是語言能力測(cè)定的重要手段，衡量寫作水平的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)便是看其是否能用學(xué)過的語言材料，語法知識(shí)等用文字的形式來表達(dá)描述。

書面語言表達(dá)一般分為三個(gè)過程：思維、組織、表達(dá)。先是思維，把要寫的東西在腦中思考，這往往是個(gè)別的，孤立的一些素材，很凌亂瑣碎；因此要對(duì)此進(jìn)行組織，把這些思維作出整理，使其條理、系統(tǒng)化，但這還是較粗糙的，可能還有一些用詞不當(dāng)或語言錯(cuò)誤；最后才是表達(dá)，把組織過的材料仔細(xì)推敲，確無問題了再落筆成文。在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等，這就是寫作。上述的三個(gè)過程，最難的就是第三個(gè)過程，這需要我們有較好的語法知識(shí)，掌握一定數(shù)量的句型，習(xí)慣用語，熟練的寫作技巧，這樣才能寫出通順生動(dòng)的文章來。

總之，要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧。

（三）建議總結(jié)

1.閱讀優(yōu)秀范文

首先要搞好閱讀。閱讀是寫作的基礎(chǔ)，在閱讀方面下的功夫越深，駕馭語言的能力也就越強(qiáng)。所以要寫好英語先要讀好英語，在語言學(xué)習(xí)方面狠下苦功，教科書要讀透，因?yàn)榻炭茣械奈恼露际且恍┖芎玫姆段模墓P流暢，語言規(guī)范，精彩的一些課文段落要背誦。再就是要進(jìn)行大量課外閱讀，并記住一些好文章的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)。

2.加強(qiáng)練詞造句訓(xùn)練

其次，要加強(qiáng)練詞造句的訓(xùn)練。詞句對(duì)作文相當(dāng)于造房的材料，無好材料就造不出好房子。平時(shí)在學(xué)習(xí)閱讀時(shí)要注意收集積累，把好的詞語、短語、句型做好筆記。平時(shí)在練習(xí)中的錯(cuò)誤也要做好記錄，再對(duì)照正確句子，使地道的英語句子如同條件反射，落筆就對(duì)。

了解英語寫作格式還有，要了解英語寫作的不同體裁與格式?？梢韵瓤匆槐窘榻B英語寫作入門的書，對(duì)英語寫作有一個(gè)初步的概念，如怎么寫議論文，如何提出論據(jù)，如何展開，如何確定中心句；又如，英語信的格式，如何根據(jù)不同身份寫不同結(jié)束語等，然后根據(jù)不同的體裁進(jìn)行寫作練習(xí)。

3.用英語寫日記 考試大論壇

要養(yǎng)成記英語日記勤練筆的好習(xí)慣。經(jīng)常用英語記日記，等于天天在練筆，這無疑是提高英語協(xié)作的行之有效的好辦法。在記日記時(shí)，不要總是用簡(jiǎn)單句，要有意識(shí)地用一些好的詞組、句型、關(guān)聯(lián)詞和復(fù)合句等，使文句更優(yōu)美生動(dòng)。還有要按照題目或所給情景寫文章練筆。寫好后對(duì)照范文，找出差距，然后再練習(xí)，這對(duì)提高英語作文也很有幫助，在游泳中學(xué)會(huì)游泳，只有多練習(xí)才能練好。

總之，平時(shí)學(xué)習(xí)語言素材積累多了，體裁格式記住了又經(jīng)常練習(xí)不斷提高，到作文下筆時(shí)就會(huì)得心應(yīng)手，水到渠成。

4.注意比較中英文表達(dá)的區(qū)別，使語言更加地道。

由于語言不通，中英文的思維方式也有很大不同，表現(xiàn)在被動(dòng)語態(tài)，對(duì)時(shí)間空間概念的描述等各方面。因此，英文寫作的一大技巧就是使用更加符合英美人思維方式的表達(dá)方式。在此，我們?yōu)榭忌x了10個(gè)句子，考生注意仔細(xì)體會(huì)中英文表達(dá)法的區(qū)別。

第二篇：公共英語四級(jí)寫作(可套用的格式)

1.社會(huì)問題

Nowadays, _______.It has become such a serious problem that it has aroused the concer from the whole society.To put an end to such a serious problem, in my mind,it calls for the efforts from all sides.First of all, ______.Moreover, ________.Last but not least, _______.How can anybody expect to lead a meaningful life until he is far from _______? Only when all of us join the efforts of ______ at all levels can we expect to have ______ a more beautiful future.原因+辦法

Most people have realized that ______ has long been a serious social problem, but they aredivided on whether it can ever be _______.The reasons why such phenomenon arises are three-fold.First, _____.Second, ______.Third,_______.Consequently it is important that we take three measures to solve this problem.First of all, ______.In the second place, _______.Last but by no means least, ________.It is beyond doubt that ______ is a serious problem to any nation at any time.Nevertheless, in such a nation as we have, I firmly believe if all of us shoulder the responsibility, we can deal with this problem successfully

對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)

Nowadays, ________ is playing a more and more important role in people’s daily life.However, people’s opinions are still divided on this point.Those who are in favor ______ claim that it has a lot of advantages.Firstly, _______.Secondly, _______.Last but not least, _______.Those who are opposed to _______ hold that disadvantages are many.In the first place, ______.In the second place, _______.Finally, _________.All in all, we can safely come to the conclusion that the pros outweigh the cons.The past twenty years witnessed the fast development of _______ along with _______.A brighter future is awaiting us if we make good use of _______.事物性質(zhì)

Like anything else, ________ has both advantages and disadvantages.The main benefits of _______ are as follows.First, _________.In the second place, ________.Last but by no means the least, _______.However, the negative effects are also obvious.To begin with, _______.Second, ________.Finally, ______.In conclusion, the advantages of ______ out weigh its disadvantages._______________.批駁作法

A.Today more and more people ________.They argue this practice has several advantages.First, ________.Second, _________.For example, ________.I am afraid I cannot agree with their opinion.To begin with, although you may feel _______, it doesn’t mean ________.In the second place, _________.Finally, as to ________,________.From the above analysis, we may arrive at the conclusion that _______ is not a wise choice.觀點(diǎn)批駁+方法

Nowadays there is a commonly held belief that _______.Actually, it is not that real case.On the one hand, _______.On the other hand, ________.Most important of all, ______.We need to carry out several measures to promote _______.First, we should_______.Second, we should _______.部分贊同

When we talk of the famous proverb ________, we should not simply label it as right or wrong, but explore it in depth.This proverb is especially true under several situations.First, _______.Second, _______.Third,______.Nevertheless, there are also some exceptions._________________.In a word, we can draw the conclusion that in most cases ________, but in certain circumstances, __________ the right choice.原因+辦法

Whenever asked about the career I pursue, I will not hesitate a moment to say that ______The reasons why _______ are as follows.First,________.Second,________.Third,_______.To turn my dream into reality, I have made the following preparations.First,________.Second,________.Third,_______.I believe as long as I work hard in this direction, my dream will become true one day.解釋現(xiàn)象

For a number of years, there has been a steady rise in the number of _______.Three reasons, in my mind, can account for this social phenomenon.First and foremost, ______.In the second place, ________.Last but not least, ________.I firmly believe that if we try our best to ________, __________.私人信函

__________,I was most happy to receive your June 16th and heard that ________._____________________________________________________________________.I advise you to _________.Remember to ___________.And I will _________.I am looking forward to your reply and wish you a good journey.Best regards.求職信

_________,I am writing you this letter to show my keen interest in the post of ___________.______________________________________________________________________I would like to meet you at your earliest convenience and discuss the possibility of working with your company.Or, if you are too busy these days, you can contact me for ________ for further information.Thank you for your favorable consideration.Best wishes.投訴信

________,I am writing to inform you of my unhappy experience lately.On June 5th, I _________.Unfortunately, when I went home, I was astonished to find that _________.To resolve the problem, I ________.I made great efforts to ________, only to be told ______.Up to now, I have been thinking of this happening.I believe that it is more than necessary for ________ to _______.Only when _________ can ________.With best regards.________

圖表分析

From the chart, we can see clearly that ________declined from _________to _________ and then to ________, while ________rose from ________to ________ and then to _________ during the same period.Two reasons, in my mind, can account for the fundamental changes _________.On the one hand, __________.On the other hand, _________.Such changes have a significant impact on both individuals and the whole society.For one thing, ________.For another, ____________.In a word, the __________ is beneficial to both individuals and the whole society.四級(jí)寫作的常用詞匯

? 1.獨(dú)立結(jié)構(gòu)的比較用語:

? As compared to /In comparison /By comparing…/Compared with…

? Similarly/likewise

? In contrast/While /whereas

? 2)連詞

? 結(jié)果：so, therefore, thus, accordingly

? 轉(zhuǎn)折：but, however, on the contrary, nevertheless 讓步：despite, in spite of, although/though 遞進(jìn)：what’s more ,moreover, furthermore附加：also, besides, in addition, additionally對(duì)比否定：instead of3)歸納用語 above all, all in all, worst of allin conclusion, in general, in summary , in brief, in a wordconsequently ,finally, generally ,most importantly ,briefly, eventuallyto sum up, to end with as a result 4)表示順序用語 For one thing/for another;on one hand/on the other handFirst/second/third/fourth Firstly/secondly/thirdly/fourthly In the first/second/third placeFirst of all/to start with/to begin with then/next lastly, last but not least, last, to conclude/to end with 5)表示個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)用語 I think/believe/consider/maintain/hold the opinion that … in my opinion, in my point of view, To my knowledge, to my understanding,As I see it, As for me, As far as I am concerned,Personally I agree/disagree… My feeling is that6)表示理由用語 Because…/because of…/As…/since…/due to…/Owing to… …for the simple reason that… That’s why… The point is that… The reason is that…7)預(yù)測(cè)用語 According to the estimate/prediction… Based on the estimate/prediction… It is estimated that… It is expected that … It is predicted that … It is supposedto be…/it is assumed that… It can be imagined that… I can foresee that… In the long run,如何寫好英語作文

文章開頭句型

1-1 對(duì)立法 : 先引出其他人的不同看法,然后提出自己的看法或者偏向于某一看法, 適用于有爭(zhēng)議性的主題.例如:

[1].When asked about....., the vast/overwhelming majority of people say that.......But I think/view a bit differently.[2].When it comes to...., some people believe that.......Others argue/claim that the opposite/reverse is true.There is probably some truth in both arguments/statements , but(I tend to the former/latter...)

[3].Now, it is commonly/generally/widely believed/believed/held/acknowledged that....They claim/believe/argue that...But I wonder/doubt whether.....1-2 現(xiàn)象法 引出要剖析的現(xiàn)象或者問題, 然后評(píng)論.e.g

[1].Recently the rise in problem of/(phenomenon of)...has caused/aroused public/popular/wide/worldwide concern.[2].Recently the issue of the problem of/the phenomenon of...has been brought into focus.(has been brought to public attention)

[3].Inflation/Corruption/Social inequality...is yet another of the new and bitter truth we have to learn to face now/constantly.1-3 觀點(diǎn)法----開門見山, 直接了當(dāng)?shù)靥岢鲎约簩?duì)要討論的問題的看法.e..g:

[1].Never in history has the change of..been as evident as...Nowhere in the world/China has the issue/idea of..been more visible/ popular than...[2].Now people in growing/significant numbers are beginning/ coming to realize/accept/(be aware)that...[3].Now there is a growing awareness/recognition of the necessity to......Now people become increasingly aware/conscious of the importance of......[4].Perhaps it is time to have a fresh look at the attitude/idea that.......1-4 引用法-----先引出名人名言或者有代表性的看法, 來引出文章要展開論述的觀點(diǎn)!e.g:

[1].“Knowledge is power.” such is the remark made by Bacon.This remark has been shared by more and more people.“Education is not complete with graduation.” Such is the opinion of a great American philosopher.Now more and more people share his opinion.[2].“.........” How often we hear such statements/words like theses /this.In our own days we are used to hearing such traditional complains as this “......”.1-5 比較法----通過對(duì)過去,現(xiàn)在 兩種不同的傾向,觀點(diǎn)的比較 , 引出文章要討論的觀點(diǎn).[1].For years,...had been viewed as...But people are taking a fresh look now.With the growing..., people........[2].People used to think that...(In the past,....)But people now share this new.1-6 故事法----先講一個(gè)較短的故事來引發(fā)讀者的興趣, 引出文章的主題.[1].Once in(a newspaper), I read of/learnt....The phenomenon of...has aroused public concern.[2] I have a friend who...Should he.? Such a dilemma we are often confronted with in our daily life.[3].Once upon a time , there lived a man who...This story may be(unbelievable), but it still has

a realistic significance now.文章結(jié)尾形式

2-1 結(jié)論性---------通過對(duì)文章前面的討論 ,引出或重申文章的中心思想及觀點(diǎn).e.g:

[1].From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that.....[2].In summary/In a word , it is more valuable.......2-2 后果性------揭示所討論的問題若不解決, 將產(chǎn)生的嚴(yán)重后果.e.g:

[1].We must call for an immediate method , because the current phenomenon of..., if allowed to proceed, will surely lead to the heavy cost of.......[2].Obviously , if we ignore/are blind to the problem , there is every chance that..will be put in danger

2-3 號(hào)召性--------呼吁讀者行動(dòng)起來, 采取行動(dòng)或提請(qǐng)注意.e.g:

[1].It is time that we urged an immediate end to the undesirable tendency of......[2].It is essential that effective measures should be taken to correct the tendency.2-4 建議性-----對(duì)所討論的問題提出建議性的意見, 包括建議和具體的解決問題的方法.[1].While it cannot be solved immediately, still there are ways.The most popular is....Another method is...Still another one is.....[2].Awareness/Recognition of the problem is the first step toward the situation.2-5 方向性的結(jié)尾方式----其與建議性的唯一差別就是對(duì)問題解決提出總的, 大體的方向或者指明前景.e.g:

[1].Many solutions are being offered here , all of them make some sense, but none is adequate enough.The problem should be recognized in a wide way.[2].There is no quick method to the issue of.., but..might be helpful/beneficial.2--6 意義性的結(jié)尾方式--------> 文章結(jié)尾的時(shí)候,從更高的更新的角度指出所討論的問題的重要性以及其深遠(yuǎn)的意義!e.g:

[1].Following these suggestions may not guarantee the success, but the pay off might be worth the effort.It will not only benefit but also benefit.....[2].In any case, whether it is positive or negative, one thing is certain that it will undoubtedly......

第三篇：公共英語四級(jí)考試歷年寫作真題回顧

公共英語四級(jí)考試歷年寫作真題回顧 公共英語考試網(wǎng) 更新：2010-7-20 編輯：小優(yōu)

1992年

My View on Reading Extensively

1993年

My Idea of Becoming a Teaching in the Future

1994年

TV: a good thing or a bad thing?

1995年

Nowadays it has become fashionable for college students to take a part-time job in their spare time.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.1996年

Every college student would agree that life in college is not the same as it was in the middle school.Now, you have been asked by the Student’s Union to write a passage entitled:

The Main Difference Between My College Life And My Middle School Life

1997年

Some of your classmates think that more pressure from academic studies is not beneficial to students.You either agree or disagree with them:

More pressure from academic studies does(does not)good to us

1998年

It is now generally accepted that vehicles(cars, trucks, etc.)are a major source of air pollution in cities.Your are to suggest only ONE way to solve the problem.One way to solve the problem

1999年

We see advertisements on television everyday.Some people think that TV advertising brings as benefits, but others don’t think so.What is your opinion?

A major advantage/disadvantage of advertising on television

2000年

College life should be varied and colorful.And extracurricular activities are an important aspect of it.However, at present, there is much room for improvement in this regard.Write an article to the university radio entitled:The importance of extracurricular activities

2001年

Travel has become part of our life.And more and more of us have come to know the significance of travel through our own experience:

Travel broadens the mind

2002年

Nowadays people are becoming increasingly aware of the importance of health.And they have different ways to stay healthy.For example, some exercise every day;others try to keep a balanced diet.What do you think is the best way to stay healthy?

The Best Way to Stay Healthy.

第四篇：四級(jí)寫作

一.對(duì)比觀點(diǎn)題型

(1)要求論述兩個(gè)對(duì)立的觀點(diǎn)并給出自己的看法。

1.有一些人認(rèn)為……

累了,休息下,去考試大在線網(wǎng)上輔導(dǎo)逛逛

2.另一些人認(rèn)為……

3.我的看法……

The topic of ①________(主題)is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions of it.Some people say A is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of ②________(支持A的理由一)What is more, ③________(理由二).Moreover, ④________(理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,________(支持B的理由一).Secondly(besides),⑥____________(理由二).Thirdly(finally),⑦_(dá)___________(理由三).From my point of view, I think ⑧________(我的觀點(diǎn)).The reason is that ⑨____________(原因).As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me, the former is surely a wise choice.(2)給出一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，要求考生反對(duì)這一觀點(diǎn)Some people believe that ①________(觀點(diǎn)一).For example, they think ②________(舉例說明).And it will bring them ③________(為他們帶來的好處).In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point.For one thing,④____(我不同意該看法的理由一).For another thing, ⑤____(反對(duì)的理由之二).Form all what I have said,I agree to the thought that ⑥____(我對(duì)文章所討論主題的看法).英語六級(jí)考試寫作技巧

二.闡述主題題型

要求從一句話或一個(gè)主題出發(fā)，按照提綱的要求進(jìn)行論述.1.闡述名言或主題所蘊(yùn)涵的意義.2.分析并舉例使其更充實(shí).The good old proverb ________(名言或諺語)reminds us that ________(釋義).Indeed, we can learn many things form it.First of all,________(理由一).For example, ____________(舉例說明).Secondly,________(理由二).Another case is that ________(舉例說明).Furthermore , ____________(理由三).英語四級(jí)英譯漢的目的,要求和評(píng)分

In my opinion, ________(我的觀點(diǎn)).In short, whatever you do, please remember the say____A.If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you”ll necessarily benefit a lot from it.三.解決方法題型

要求考生列舉出解決問題的多種途徑

1.問題現(xiàn)狀英語四級(jí)英譯漢的目的,要求和評(píng)分

2.怎樣解決(解決方案的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn))

In recent days, we have to face I problem——A, which is becoming more and more serious.First, ________(說明A的現(xiàn)狀).Second, ________(舉例進(jìn)一步說明現(xiàn)狀)Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing, ________(解決方法一).For another ________(解決方法二).Finally, ________(解決方法三).Personally, I believe that ________(我的解決方法).Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because ________(帶來的好處).四.說明利弊題型

這種題型往往要求先說明一下現(xiàn)狀，再對(duì)比事物本身的利弊，有時(shí)也會(huì)單從一個(gè)角度(利或弊)出發(fā)，最后往往要求考生表明自己的態(tài)度(或?qū)κ挛锴熬疤岢鲱A(yù)測(cè))

1.說明事物現(xiàn)狀

2.事物本身的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)(或一方面)

3.你對(duì)現(xiàn)狀(或前景)的看法

Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.First ________(A的優(yōu)點(diǎn)之一).Besides ____________(A的優(yōu)點(diǎn)之二).But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that ________(A的第一個(gè)缺點(diǎn)).To make matters worse,____________(A的第二個(gè)缺點(diǎn)).Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.Therefore, I would like to ________(我的看法).(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in.Only by this way, ________(對(duì)前景的預(yù)測(cè)).五.議論文的框架

(1)不同觀點(diǎn)列舉型(選擇型)

There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文題目_____.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that _ 觀點(diǎn)一________.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____.So it goes without saying

that ___觀點(diǎn)一_____.People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that ___觀點(diǎn)二_______.In their point of view, on the one hand，___原因一_______.On the other hand, ____原因二_____.Therefore, there is no doubt that ___觀點(diǎn)二______.As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __觀點(diǎn)一或二______.It is not only because ________, but also because _________.The more _______, the more ________.(2)利弊型的議論文

Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)___作文題目______.In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __題目議題_____.Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly, ___優(yōu)點(diǎn)一______.And secondly ___優(yōu)點(diǎn)二_____.Just As a popular saying goes, “every coin has two sides”, __討論議題______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects.To begin with, ___缺點(diǎn)一______.In addition, ____ 缺點(diǎn)二______.To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __討論議題____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____討論議題___.(3)答題性議論文

Currently, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)__作文題目_______.It is really an important concern to every one of us.As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.英語四級(jí)英譯漢的目的,要求和評(píng)分

As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem.First of all, __途徑一______.In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving problem is ___途徑二_____.Above all, to solve the problem of ___作文題目______, we should find a number of various ways.But as far as I am concerned, I would prefer to solve the problem in this way, that is to say, ____方法_____.(4)諺語警句性議論文

It is well know to us that the proverb: “ ___諺語_______” has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study.It means ____諺語的含義_______.The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows.(also theoretically)

A case in point is ___例子一______.Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb ____諺語_____.With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: ____諺語_____.The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job.as is indicated above......there is.....in the picture,it is obvious that,by diagramwe know that.for the reason if we realize that we firstly should,secondly we ,not only do webut, in the end it is essential that，,we make a conclusion that it is ,it isthat，,to our surprise ,the cartoon show us to sty.ina word ,we believe that

第五篇：四級(jí)寫作

四級(jí)寫作

孫子云：“知己知彼，百戰(zhàn)不殆”。想在寫作考試中獲得成功，就必須首先了解四級(jí)考試的要求和評(píng)分規(guī)則。由于新四級(jí)考試還沒有開始進(jìn)行，筆者就以一篇根據(jù)現(xiàn)行四級(jí)寫作題目“Do‘Lucky Numbers’Really Bring Good Luck?”寫成的學(xué)生作文為例來講述幾個(gè)最基本的道理。

例文1：

Some people think that certian(拼寫錯(cuò)誤)numbers will bring good luck to them.Numbers such as six, eight, sixteen and eighteen are regarded as lucky numbers.There are also people who think that their success is related to certain numbers.However, some other people think numbers have nothing to do with their luck.They believe in their own rather than“l(fā)ucky numbers”.They don't do things according to certain numbers.As far as I am concerned, I think it is a person's own business whether he believes in a certain number or not.The most important thing is that he has done the work by himself and has done it quite well.As to the belief in numbers, it is their(前后指代不一致，應(yīng)改為his)personal choice.該文章是當(dāng)年四級(jí)考試命題組印發(fā)給全國(guó)評(píng)卷老師的一篇例文，根據(jù)15分制的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，這篇例文被評(píng)為14分，供全國(guó)評(píng)卷老師作為評(píng)分參考。乍看起來，本文無論從遣詞造句還是思想深度，似乎都算不得一篇佳作；但它之所以能夠被評(píng)為14分，還是有其內(nèi)在深層次原因的，那就是經(jīng)常被考生們所忽視的議論文寫作常識(shí)。簡(jiǎn)要地講，可分為以下三個(gè)部分：

(一)英文議論文的結(jié)構(gòu)特點(diǎn)

漢語寫作對(duì)文章結(jié)構(gòu)的要求不是很高，如開頭段應(yīng)該包括什么、論題句應(yīng)該在什么時(shí)候出現(xiàn)、文章的結(jié)尾是否必須總結(jié)全文等等。而英語寫作要求文章結(jié)構(gòu)必須十分嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，文章各個(gè)部分的功能都要十分清晰，開頭、中間和結(jié)尾都有嚴(yán)格的要求。

簡(jiǎn)而言之，英語議論文共有三大特點(diǎn)：

1、觀點(diǎn)鮮明的開頭；

2、緊扣主題的結(jié)尾；

3、有主題句并且銜接自然的中間段落。

這三點(diǎn)當(dāng)中，第1、2點(diǎn)早已為絕大多數(shù)中國(guó)學(xué)生所熟知，因?yàn)殚_頭點(diǎn)題和結(jié)尾扣題同樣也是漢語文章的要求。但在長(zhǎng)時(shí)間的學(xué)習(xí)過程中，這樣的要求被很多學(xué)生以為是“老土”而得不到足夠的重視。如果將這種思想帶到英語議論文寫作當(dāng)中，直接的后果就是中心分散、觀點(diǎn)不明確，加上中國(guó)學(xué)生普遍英文表達(dá)能力不強(qiáng)，這些因素就為整篇文章的失敗埋下了隱患。

另外，英語文章和漢語不同的是段落的主題句一定要放在段首，而不能按照中文的寫作習(xí)慣放在段落的中間或者最后，在英文應(yīng)試寫作中更加如此。正因?yàn)闆]有“主題句”的思想，所以中國(guó)學(xué)生在寫英語文章時(shí)經(jīng)?！跋氲绞裁矗蛯懯裁础?，這在英語議論文中是不能接受的。例如，例文1中每一段的首句都簡(jiǎn)要地概括出了該段的主要內(nèi)容，換句話說，每段的內(nèi)容都是根據(jù)首句來展開的，其順序不能顛倒。

(關(guān)于段落的銜接，在后面的內(nèi)容中將詳細(xì)介紹。)(二)中心統(tǒng)一

在中心統(tǒng)一這個(gè)問題上，英語議論文和漢語議論文的概念也有所不同。中國(guó)人在寫議論文時(shí)常常遵循“中庸”的原則，其具體的表現(xiàn)就是認(rèn)為世界上沒有任何事情是絕對(duì)的。當(dāng)他們?cè)谖恼轮斜頁P(yáng)一件事物或一種現(xiàn)象的時(shí)候，總要指出其不足；同樣，在批評(píng)一件事物或一種現(xiàn)象的同時(shí)，也總不忘記指出其也有合理之處。這種做法從道理上來講并沒有什么不妥，但卻不符合英語議論文的寫作習(xí)慣，因?yàn)橛⒄Z作家在寫議論文時(shí)關(guān)注的是自己的辯論技巧和其結(jié)果對(duì)公眾的影響力。換句話說，如果作者告訴大家兩面都有道理也就等于說兩面都沒有道理，因?yàn)樽x者在讀了文章之后仍舊不知道作者的看法是什么，以及自己在這種情況下到底該怎么做。

所以，既然四級(jí)考試考的是英語文章，大家就應(yīng)該遵循英文議論文的寫作思路和習(xí)慣：表示支持則旗幟鮮明地支持；表示反對(duì)就徹徹底底地反對(duì)，而不能采取“墻頭草兩邊倒”的做法。以上面的例文1為例，如果作者的觀點(diǎn)是“幸運(yùn)數(shù)字是既有道理又無道理的”，這種觀點(diǎn)就無法讓人接受，因?yàn)樵谟⒄Z議論文中，這是典型的中心不統(tǒng)一

大學(xué)英語四級(jí)寫作常用經(jīng)典句型

1）主語從句

It is common knowledge that honesty is the best policy.It is well-known that…

It is self-evident/ conceivable / obvious / apparent that…

It goes without saying that… It is universally acknowledged that… It is / that 2）賓（表）語從句 We cannot understand why he was so cruel to his roommates.The problem is not who will go, but who will stay.3）定語從句（限定性和非限定性）

As is shown/ demonstrated/ illustrated/ depicted/ described…in the cartoon/ picture/ graph/ table…, There are many reasons why I want to study in your university.It is estimated that tens of billions of pounds spent on cigarettes every year in our country, which is a huge waste.4）狀語從句（時(shí)間，原因，地點(diǎn)，條件，讓步，轉(zhuǎn)折等）

When the man is enjoying the cigarette, the smoke becomes a monster（怪物）which will devour him.Whatever the reason, there are still some problems with student use of computers.5）分詞短語做定語或狀語

Prof.Kang came to our university, giving us a lecture on how to acquire English better.6）倒裝句

Only through these measures can we hope to solve the problem.Scattered around the globe are more than 100 small regions of isolated volcanic activity known to geologists as hot spots.7）被動(dòng)句

Some measures should be taken to deal with the problem.He is said to have accomplished a lot of great deeds.Many people believe that…（It is believed that…）8）設(shè)問句

Do you still remember the boy who cried wolf for several times so no one would trust him?

大學(xué)英語新四級(jí)考試寫作要求及高分策略(1)一.四級(jí)考試對(duì)寫作的要求

《大學(xué)英語教學(xué)大綱》和《大學(xué)英語課程教學(xué)基本要求》都對(duì)培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的英語寫作能力做了明確規(guī)定，即學(xué)生能在半小時(shí)內(nèi)完成120字左右的短文，包括書信等應(yīng)用問題寫作，要求文理基本通順，表達(dá)思想清楚，無重大語法錯(cuò)誤。通過分析歷年的真題，我們不難發(fā)現(xiàn)：英語作文考查的類型基本包括議論文(一般為三段論式的論說文字)，說明文(目前側(cè)重于這方面的寫作訓(xùn)練)，圖表作文(要求描述性的語言要貼近圖表信息，真實(shí)反映語言水平)和應(yīng)用文寫作(包括書信、便條、通知、海報(bào)等)。

二.四級(jí)改革和寫作變化

2005年1月的作文題目是要求學(xué)生以導(dǎo)游的身份寫一篇演講稿，不僅包含歡迎辭(表態(tài))行程安排，(說明)，而且包含安排的理由(說理)。2005年6月作文題目是校園文化旅游，要求學(xué)生就此闡述不同的觀點(diǎn)。2006年1月是個(gè)競(jìng)選演說，如果我當(dāng)選學(xué)生會(huì)主席，我會(huì)給大家做點(diǎn)什么事情(說明)。2006年6月17日的四級(jí)考試則是一個(gè)海報(bào)，要求考生構(gòu)想一個(gè)招募志愿者的海報(bào)，其中包括應(yīng)聘人必備的資歷和應(yīng)準(zhǔn)備的材料等(說明)。2006年6月24日新題型的作文是傳統(tǒng)的議論文形式，討論大學(xué)生選擇任課老師相關(guān)的問題。2007年1月作文也是傳統(tǒng)的議論文形式，探討對(duì)春節(jié)晚會(huì)所持的不同觀點(diǎn)。2007年6月份是歡迎同學(xué)加入俱樂部的海報(bào)(應(yīng)用文)。

從上面的題目變化趨勢(shì)看，描述現(xiàn)象、分析原因、個(gè)人看法仍是四、六級(jí)考試寫作部分主要考查的重點(diǎn)，在今后相當(dāng)長(zhǎng)的時(shí)間內(nèi)，英語寫作教學(xué)和輔導(dǎo)的主要突破口應(yīng)集中在說明文、議論文和應(yīng)用文上。

此外，仔細(xì)研究06年6月24日以后的四級(jí)試卷，我們還可發(fā)現(xiàn)，新四級(jí)的寫作題目與校園生活密切相關(guān)，學(xué)生普遍感覺親切，體裁包括兩篇議論文，一篇應(yīng)用文。不僅如此，新四級(jí)寫作題中提供的文章框架清晰，思路比較明確，絕大多數(shù)考生都能利用“經(jīng)典句型”或“萬能模板”寫出及格的作文。盡管新四級(jí)前兩次都考查了議論文，但這并不能說明寫作的重心有任何偏移。根據(jù)考試改革方案和課程教學(xué)要求的相關(guān)規(guī)定，應(yīng)用文寫作、說明文和議論文仍將是新四級(jí)作文的主攻方向。

三.四級(jí)寫作高分策略

新四級(jí)考試并沒有改變對(duì)寫作的測(cè)試標(biāo)準(zhǔn)和要求，但在出題順序上卻做了明顯的調(diào)整：寫作作為第一項(xiàng)考查的內(nèi)容，被提到新四級(jí)試卷的最開頭，這令許多考生感覺不適應(yīng)，部分網(wǎng)友甚至認(rèn)為這是在折騰考生。其實(shí)，提高寫作能力雖然較難，但寫作教學(xué)卻是一片大有可為的沃土。在過去十多年的英語寫作輔導(dǎo)中，筆者堅(jiān)持認(rèn)為：考生如果堅(jiān)持做到如下幾點(diǎn)，就不難在規(guī)定的時(shí)間內(nèi)寫出一篇成功的英語作文。

1.了解英語寫作的測(cè)試目的，準(zhǔn)確把握題目的要求

英語寫作測(cè)試，其實(shí)主要還是要考查學(xué)生組織英語語言的能力，和用英語表達(dá)思想的能力，體裁不外乎議論文，說明文和應(yīng)用文，主題也是在大學(xué)生熟知話題基礎(chǔ)上的翻新或擴(kuò)展。綜觀歷年的四級(jí)作文真題，變化趨勢(shì)是從三段論的議論文向?qū)嵱眯愿鼜?qiáng)的應(yīng)用文體，尤其是書信寫作方面傾斜?？忌綍r(shí)應(yīng)有意識(shí)地就他們感興趣的一些話題進(jìn)行思考和拓展，爭(zhēng)取在實(shí)踐中磨練敏銳的審題能力。2.迅速梳理寫作的思路，列出并借助提綱進(jìn)行寫作

到了大學(xué)階段，學(xué)生還是非常善于思考的，他們不僅想象力非常豐富，晚上做夢(mèng)，還經(jīng)常daydream, 各有獨(dú)特的思維和寫作思路。但是，如何將千頭萬緒的思路梳理清楚，學(xué)生則必須有真工夫。為此，在進(jìn)行四級(jí)寫作時(shí)，考生一定要首先形成自己的觀點(diǎn)，之后合理運(yùn)用一些手段，如常用的有四種：陳述理由、舉例說明、提供數(shù)據(jù)、下定義等，之后充分就此展開論說。這樣通過高效思考，嚴(yán)密組織，再輔以提綱形式的文章架構(gòu)，考生一定會(huì)寫出較符合規(guī)范的文章 3.擴(kuò)展寫作提綱，草擬文稿，表述主要觀點(diǎn)

在利用提綱展示個(gè)人寫作思路的基礎(chǔ)上，學(xué)生還應(yīng)充分利用現(xiàn)有的英語水平，按照一定的邏輯思路，充分表達(dá)個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)。寫作之初，學(xué)生不必字斟句酌，只要脈絡(luò)清楚，具備輪廓就可以了。草擬文章的過程實(shí)際是把思維結(jié)果外在化的過程，學(xué)生應(yīng)力爭(zhēng)使文章具有連貫性和流暢性。草擬過程的順利與否，在很大程度上取決于平時(shí)訓(xùn)練所達(dá)到的水平。許多考生畏懼作文，經(jīng)常懶于動(dòng)筆；還有一些考生認(rèn)為寫作很難提高，干脆放棄平時(shí)的訓(xùn)練。這些想法都是錯(cuò)誤的。為真正提高寫作水平，筆者建議大家從開始準(zhǔn)備四級(jí)的那天起，就應(yīng)有針對(duì)性地分體裁、分話題、分階段地進(jìn)行實(shí)戰(zhàn)模擬，強(qiáng)迫自己一氣呵成將文章寫完，不必追求完美，不必在乎自己的文稿到底語言有多么不地道或出現(xiàn)多少語法錯(cuò)誤。熟能生巧。只要堅(jiān)持多寫、多練，平時(shí)注意擴(kuò)大閱讀，寫作的水平自然就會(huì)提高。

2005年1月CET作文題目

四級(jí)作文題目：

A Campaign Speech 你認(rèn)為自己具備是什么條件（能力，性格，愛好）可以勝任學(xué)生會(huì)主席工作，如果當(dāng)選你將會(huì)為本校同學(xué)做什么？

范文：

Today I am very glad to run for the president of the students‘ union.I am junior in Chemical Department.Since I came into the university, I have always been the monitor of my class.I have done a very good job for my classmates, and my classmates and my tacher all give me a good praise.I am good at communication and organizing.And I like to help others.Moreover, I have a varity of hobbies,for example, basketball, football, pingpong, etc.I am sure that I am qualified for this position.If I become the president, I will try my best to do well.I will organize some siutable activities for you.I will do many things for you to reache your demands as well.I am sincerely hope you will give me a chance, and please believe me that I will be a good president.Thank you.六級(jí)作文題目：

1，對(duì)病人的簡(jiǎn)單介紹：目前的病情和家庭情況

2，目前的困難：無法繼續(xù)承擔(dān)醫(yī)療費(fèi)用，需要護(hù)理

3，希望捐助，聯(lián)系方式

Your Help Needed 范文： Dear friends，As some of you may know,Lucy,a lovely girl student,a junior from the Department of Fine Arts,has been seriously ill.In fact,she has been suffering from hepatitis, which is very dangerous.This 20-year-old girl comes from a small town in Shangdong province.Her family has tried every means to save her.Now Lucy is in urgent need of operation to her liver transplanted.However, her family is too poor to afford the expenses, which totaled 120,000 yuan.How can a poor family earning 1000 yuan per month afford such high expenses? But the time is limited.They cannot afford to wait to see the disease untouched.So you help is urgently needed.Let's do what we can to save our fellow student.The life of such a lovely girl is in your hand.Your love can save a life.You can contact 2335648 in the daytime and 2335658 at night.2005年6月CET作文題目

四級(jí)作文題目：

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay[ IN honour of teachers on the occasion of Teacher's Day].You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: 1,向老師表達(dá)節(jié)日祝賀

2,從一件小事來回憶老師的教誨和無私的奉獻(xiàn) 3,我如何回報(bào)老師的關(guān)愛 Teacher's Day 六級(jí)作文題目：

In this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Say No to Pirated Products.1.目前盜版的現(xiàn)象比較嚴(yán)重 2.造成這種現(xiàn)象的原因及危害 3.我們應(yīng)該怎么做？

參考單詞：盜版 piracy(n.)盜版產(chǎn)品 pirated products 知識(shí)產(chǎn)權(quán) intellectual property rights 侵犯版權(quán) infringe sb's copyright;copyright infringement，Say No to Pirated Products 內(nèi)容：

1、有些大學(xué)允許學(xué)生自由選擇某些課程的任課老師。

2、學(xué)生選擇老師時(shí)所考慮的主要因素是??

3、學(xué)生自選任課老師的益處及可能產(chǎn)生的問題。

As the proverb says, “Knowledge is power.” It is an undeniable fact that a large amount of students prefer to choose their own teachers for certain courses.In fact, some universities allow their students to do so.When choosing a teacher, some factors should be taken into consideration.On one hand, a learned teacher is preferred.After all, for a student, studying is given full priority.A teacher with plentiful knowledge can ease the burden of study for many students and provide them with many opportunities for enlarging their scope of knowledge, while at the same time realizing their potentials.On the other hand, a teacher with a clear and humorous teaching style is favorable.To a large extent, whether a lecture is welcomed by the students or not is depended on the way of delivering rather than its content.No one can deny that interesting interaction is far more enjoyable than monologue.There is a good side and a bad side to everything, including choosing teachers by students.It goes without saying that it can arouse students’ interest in study to the largest extent.Such phenomena as being absent from classes or paying no attention to the classes may vanish.Nevertheless, it cannot be denied that it can bring some side-effects.The management of classes may be in a disorder.Some teachers can be warmly welcomed so the number of the students may be too large while other courses may have few participants.We can conclude that allowing students to choose their own teachers has both positive and negative effects.What we must do is to make sure that the positive ones are encouraged and the negative ones are eliminated as far as possible.春節(jié)作文

寫春節(jié)作文前，我們可以先回憶下過春節(jié)是我們參加過的活動(dòng)，如貼倒福、分壓歲錢、吃餃子、撣揚(yáng)塵、貼年畫、貼剪紙、放鞭炮、守歲、給壓歲錢、掛千千結(jié)、貼春聯(lián)等，然后挑一個(gè)我們印象深刻的上網(wǎng)查些資料，可以到百度搜春節(jié)的八個(gè)習(xí)俗，春節(jié)的由來與傳說等，也可以上作文網(wǎng)作文素材頻道找到相關(guān)資料再進(jìn)行介紹。

作文題目可以自擬，如歡度春節(jié)，春節(jié)游文廟，除夕之夜，美麗的春節(jié)，春節(jié)花會(huì)

開頭部分：大致介紹一下春節(jié)，及春節(jié)的一些習(xí)俗，點(diǎn)明你所要介紹的習(xí)俗。（略寫）

第二部分：介紹這一習(xí)俗的來歷、象征意義等，像剪紙、年畫、千千結(jié)等還可以寫寫這些物品的種類、樣子等。（詳細(xì)）

第三部分：回憶自己參與這一活動(dòng)的情景。（詳細(xì)）結(jié)尾結(jié)尾部分：寫寫自己對(duì)這一習(xí)俗的感受。

每個(gè)部分舉例：

開頭部分：大致介紹一下春節(jié)，及春節(jié)的一些習(xí)俗，點(diǎn)明你所要介紹的習(xí)俗。（略寫）

例：元宵節(jié)是我國(guó)的四大節(jié)日之一，元宵節(jié)一過，春節(jié)也就算過完了，所以這一天是非常隆重和熱鬧的。過元宵節(jié)的節(jié)目豐富多彩，有充滿樂趣的看花燈猜燈謎，有喜氣洋洋的舞龍，還有熱鬧非凡的賽龍船。不過，最吸引我們小孩子的卻是那多姿多彩的煙花。

第二部分：介紹這一習(xí)俗的來歷、象征意義等，像剪紙、年畫、千千結(jié)等還可以寫寫這些物品的種類、樣子等。（詳細(xì)）

例：春聯(lián)代表著歡樂祥和。在我們中國(guó)，每逢春節(jié)，無論城市還是農(nóng)村，家家戶戶都要精選一副大紅春聯(lián)貼在門上，為節(jié)日增加喜慶的氣氛。一幅幅春聯(lián)不僅帶來了吉祥和祝福，還帶來了中國(guó)古老的濃濃的文化氣息。瞧！“大地春光好，長(zhǎng)天曉日紅”、“歲歲皆如意，年年盡平安”、“江山萬里如畫，神州四時(shí)皆春”、“春風(fēng)送春處處***美，喜鵲報(bào)喜家家喜事多”…… 幅幅春聯(lián)讓千家萬戶喜氣盈門。春聯(lián)的種類比較多。按照使用場(chǎng)所，可分為門心、框?qū)?、橫批、春條、斗方等。因此，貼的位置也不同，如“門心”貼在門板上端中心部位；“橫批”貼在門楣的橫木上。

第三部分：回憶自己參與這一活動(dòng)的情景。（詳細(xì)）

例：記得去年元宵節(jié)的晚上爸爸媽媽帶我去工人體育館看煙花。八點(diǎn)整，只聽見幾聲沉悶的聲音，一個(gè)個(gè)煙花帶著紅紅的火星竄上了天空，幾聲脆響，夜空綻放出幾朵美麗的花朵。它們的形狀和顏色各不相同，有五顏六色的滿天星，金黃色的蒲公英，紫色的牽牛花，火紅的玫瑰花，粉紅的月季、銀色的百合，真是絢麗多彩。隨著一聲聲的炮響，人們?cè)隗@呼，在贊嘆，夜色中，人們微微揚(yáng)起的臉上也變幻著多姿的色彩，露出了幸福的笑容……

結(jié)尾結(jié)尾部分：寫寫自己對(duì)這一習(xí)俗的感受。

例：我看著那散發(fā)著傳統(tǒng)文化芳香的中華結(jié)，仿佛品味到了中華民族遠(yuǎn)古的神秘和東方的靈秀。它的古香古色，它的千變?nèi)f化，讓我神往，讓我遐想…… 《春節(jié)的街頭》

今天，是中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日——春節(jié)。早晨我還沒醒，就聽到了鞭炮的聲音。平靜的社區(qū)，今日顯得熱鬧非凡。這熱鬧的喧囂，把我的睡意一股腦的全都打撒開來。于是，起床穿上了新衣服連早飯都來不及吃就沖到門外，看著各家各戶的炮竹，煙花。接著就是跟爸爸媽媽一起去走街串巷——拜年！

“李伯伯，新年快樂”“王阿姨，工作順了”“劉奶奶，身體健康”〃〃〃跟所有的長(zhǎng)輩們拜過年之后，媽媽提議說：一會(huì)，去街上看看，感受下新年的氣氛。

一上街，街上可就更熱鬧了。人們手里有提著大袋大袋的菜，身邊的孩子手上握著一大把小花炮，蹦蹦跳跳地跑著?？矗∥易筮叺囊晃凰?、五歲左右的小女孩，跑到前面去。一下子又轉(zhuǎn)過頭對(duì)一位滿手是鼓鼓的袋子的大人喊著：“爸爸，快點(diǎn)！我要回去放炮玩呢！”。有拿著那邊超市發(fā)的小氣球的，紅的，黃的，綠的，還有藍(lán)的。也有三五成群，手挽著手說說笑笑的姑娘們，小伙子們，忙綠了一年，辛苦了一年，我想這個(gè)時(shí)候應(yīng)該是大家最放松，最高興的時(shí)候。你看，路燈上還掛著兩個(gè)小紅燈，喜氣洋洋的。就像在說，“我們也要過新年，我們也要過新年”。

一進(jìn)菜市場(chǎng)，那才更熱鬧呢！人流竄動(dòng)，一眼望去，什么也看不見，全是人。還有那翠綠的黃瓜，可真新鮮哪，你看，那金黃色的小花在太陽的照射下顯得多么的生機(jī)勃勃啊。那鯽魚，鰱魚，青魚，草魚等等在水里游來游去，真是印證了我們中國(guó)的老話：年年有魚（余）！黃的韭菜，紅的番茄，黑的木耳，白的蘿卜〃〃〃真是要什么有什么呀?！鞍眩】烧鎵驍D的。”我嘀咕了一句。跟著媽媽買了幾個(gè)我愛吃的菜，結(jié)完帳就走出了菜場(chǎng)。超市里的收銀臺(tái)前也早已排起了長(zhǎng)龍。

傍晚時(shí)分，街上，又漸漸安靜下來。店主們把店子關(guān)了，超市也比往常早了些許關(guān)門。大家都提著東西回家過年去了。

到了晚上6點(diǎn)左右，社區(qū)漸漸安靜，孩子們都回家吃團(tuán)圓飯去了。吃完團(tuán)圓飯7、8點(diǎn)的樣子社區(qū)又重新熱鬧起來。孩子們?nèi)汲鰜矸呕ㄅ诹?。這個(gè)放個(gè)“降落傘，”那個(gè)又放個(gè)“天女撒花”〃〃〃〃各式各樣的花炮全有。每放完一個(gè)都會(huì)聚集好幾個(gè)孩子，他們?cè)谟懻撜l的花炮最美麗，誰的花炮顏色最多，之后又是陣陣歡笑。大人們或幾個(gè)坐在一起打牌，打麻將；或幾個(gè)坐在一起嗑瓜子，剝花生；或看著自己的孩子放花炮，偶爾還要幫他們一下。大多數(shù)的孩子，都是自己獨(dú)立操作完成。

夜，更深了。人們陸陸續(xù)續(xù)的回家了，有些不肯回家的孩子也在父母的勸說下，不情愿的回了家，一天的熱鬧景象漸漸被夜幕包圍。我不禁感嘆又是一年到，時(shí)間過得可真快呀！

春節(jié)見聞 “當(dāng)、當(dāng)、當(dāng)”新年的鐘聲敲響了，家家戶戶的門上早已貼上了或火紅或金黃的對(duì)聯(lián)，每一家的老老少少都樂得合不攏嘴。興奮的孩子們有的目不轉(zhuǎn)睛地盯著電視，品嘗著一年一度的晚會(huì)大餐――春節(jié)晚會(huì)；有的急著給自己的長(zhǎng)輩拜年，發(fā)短信，打電話，所有新年的祝福話語仿佛怎么也說不完；調(diào)皮的孩子正在向自己的父輩們 “討要”壓歲錢；屋外的鞭炮聲此起彼伏，炸開了鍋，五彩的煙花更是把這個(gè)特殊的夜晚點(diǎn)綴得絢麗多姿。

正月初一，農(nóng)歷新年的第一天迎著人們的喜悅祥和而來。我這個(gè)平時(shí)最賴床的懶漢，今天卻起了個(gè)大早，因?yàn)槲覙O想穿上我那美麗的新衣，出去好好炫耀一翻。我要去走親訪友拜新年了，這無疑也是一件高興的事。我們小孩子走在拜年隊(duì)伍的前面，見到長(zhǎng)輩們拜個(gè)年，說幾句吉利話，就可以收獲一大把的壓歲錢，然后拿到街上去買自己喜愛的東西――玩具、零食、鞭炮……，家長(zhǎng)好像變了個(gè)人似的，對(duì)我們的放縱是那么的寬容，一切都有了！這就是過年的感覺。

“放鞭炮嘍！”不知是誰喊了一聲，小孩子們很快都聚在了一起。一串串鞭炮在人們手中點(diǎn)燃，響聲震天，四處飛濺，仿佛要把一個(gè)個(gè)美好的愿望送到千家萬戶。一陣陣炮竹聲接連不斷，熱鬧非凡。

到了吃飯的時(shí)候，望著滿桌子平時(shí)最愛吃的菜肴，我們小孩子卻一點(diǎn)兒也不覺得餓。大人們?cè)谕票瓝Q盞之間，談?wù)撟疃嗍牵航穹俏舯劝。〗裉斓男腋Ｉ顝牟妥郎献钅苷f明問題，現(xiàn)在人們生活好了，天天就像在過年！

奔波在走親訪友的路途上，我見到了春意盎然的田間大地，一條條新修的高速公路縮短了我們的行程，通往鄉(xiāng)村的泥巴路也被“村村通”的水泥路所覆蓋，城市高樓大廈像雨后春筍，一年一個(gè)變化……

春節(jié)對(duì)于我們小孩子來說，那就是一切都在變化，一切都是新的！